Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

[Swaraj]

badhiya update bhaiya ji

Thanks bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Bahut he shandar update Swaraj bhai ...
???

Thanks a lot bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Awesome fabulous update
Ye sari mushibat ek sathbaani rahti h ab ye Monica ko dur Kyu rakhna chahte h
Keep posting

Thanks bro
Musibat to ek taraf hai lekin Monica ki nafrat us mask wale ke.liye ek taraf
Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Nice updt bhai...nischit hi aap bhi sarahna k patra he..kyuki aapke readrs bhi 1 lakh k upr he...aur ek writter bhi is samay logo ko ghar me roke rakh sakta he apni kalam k dam pr...gr8888

Thanks bro
Lekin ye sab sirf aapke pyar ke wajah se hai
Aap logo ne apne pyare reviews, suggestions aur criticism ek saath sahi.maahne me diye tabhi story ache se build ho paayi
Aise hi saath rahiye aur apna feedback dete rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Very nice, awesome, mindblowing update .................
Keep it up bro .............
Waiting for next update .................

Thanks a lot bro
Keep supporting

 

[Swaraj]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Thanks bro

 

[Swaraj]

Super update hai bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Oh ye ho Kia raha h mere sir k oper se guzr gaya

Monica ko kisi ne behkaya tha yug ke khilaf lekin yug ne ise jhoot bataya aur prrof bhi de diya ki wo picnic se bahar aaya hi nahi tha to wo mask wala kaise ho sakta hai
Yug ka promotion ho gaya
Red clan ke ninjas waha a gaye aur sabko madad karne lage
Aur aakhir me Monica ko koi dhamki de gaya
Shayad samajh me a gaya hoga bro
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

swaraj bhai............ monika khud kuchh bhi kare to koi bat nahin................. sirf 2 ansoo kafi hain.............aur 1 "I Love You"
yug bechare ko safai deni padti hai.............

is makkaar ladki ko bechari dikhane par kyon tul gaye ho

vaise to ye har baat mein hoshiyar dikhti hai......................
lekin bat iske boyfriend (wo ex to kabhi hua hi nahi...) ho to bechari kuchh jaanti nahi
jab baat iske rapist friends ki ho tab bhi ye nasamajh, bholi aur nadaan ban jati hai

lekin jab baat yug ki jasusi karne ki ho............. maskman ko lekar ho tab isse hoshiyar aur koi nahin

ise money laundring ki tarah..................... black se white karne ki bekar koshish mat karo.............
aur yug ko iske pyar mein bewkoof mat sabit karo

thoda monika ko apni galtiyan feel hone do................. ego hurt hone do.............. tab pachhtava ho
to maja ayega......................

aur ninja clans mein varchasv ki ladai to abhi bahut baki hai.............
yoshodo ko tabhi jhukaya ja sakega jab uske pas kuchh nahin bachega

Thanks bro
Aap ke is feedback ko samajh sakta hoon
Lekin Monica ki tarah bhi itni aasan nahi hogi
Balki yug se jude hue sabhi character ko torcher sehna padega
Monica ki musibat khatam nahi hui balki shuru hui hai
Most wanted aadmi se pyaar kar baithi wo
Abhi aur bhi ninja clans hai
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Kya kyu Bhai update ke bare me
Bhut he khubsurat mind-blowing update Diya Bhai,
Just Keep it a bit longer
Awaiting for more regular updates

Thanks bro
Update hamesha se bada karne ki koshish rehti hai meri
Jahir next update aur bada karne ki koshish karunga
Saath rahiye