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Shaks ne aakash ke upar hamla kar diya
Ek baar se aakash ke chehra pighal gaya.aur pighalte pighalte poora pighal gaya
Shaks khush hua.aaj khatam hua aakash uske apne haath se
KHACHHHHHHHHHHH
"YAHHHHHHHHHHRRFGGGGGGGG"shaks chillaya
Uska doosra haath katkar door ja gira tha
Aakash ke haath ne kaala sa talwar ka roop le liya tha
Isse pehle ki wo shaks kuch samajta aakash ke sharir se kai saare kaale bhale ya shaks ki aur badhe aur
KHACHHHHHHH
KHACHHHHHHH
POORE sharir ko khokhla kar diya
"Ha ha ha tu kya samjhta hai mujhe maarna itna aasan hai??"shaks bola
"Jaanta hoon"aakash bola
Aur isse pehle ki shaks kuch samajh paata
"Ye kya ho raha hai meri poori taqat kam rahi hai,sharir jal raha hai.nahi nahiii nahiiiiiiii"shaks ka sharir jalne laga tha
Shaks ke sharir me ghuse bhale aakash ke sharir me wapas samane lage
Andhera aur badh raha tha.poore area me raat ka vatavaran chane laga
Aakash ka sharir isi andhere me kho gaya
Aur hawa ki gati ke saath varun ke aade tak pohunch gaya
"Wash ustaad sahi time pe aaye ho"shouji bola
Aakash ke sharir se Kaali rekha shouji ki aur badhi
CUTTTTT
ek tez talwar ne use jaat diya
"Ninku ki talwar kuch bhi jaat sakti hai,kuch bhi"ninku bola
Aakash ne chutki bajai
Aur uske 157 ladaku khade ho gaye
"Dono Ko khatam karo"bol aakash badh gaya aage
Shouji aur ninku uljhe rahe un ladaku Yoddhaon ke saath aakash ki Kaali parchai varun ke paas jaane lagi
"Pavitra,shyam roko ise"Varun chillaya
Pavitra aur shayan ke kuch samajh paane se hi poora andhera ho gaya
Kisi ko kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha
"Ye meri duniya hai,aur meri duniya me tum sab ko mout milegi"ek awaz aayi
Kuch der baad andhera kam hua to pavitra aur shyam zameen me gire hue tha
Varun ladne ko taiyyar ho gaya lekin...uske sharir dheere dheere fatne lagi aur ret nikalne laga usse
"Teri saari akad khatam varun ab tu marega"aakash bola
Varun tadapne laga.disha daud kar aakash ki aur aayi
Lekin aakash ne ek baar kiya aur disha bhi zameen me gir gayi
"Ab poori duniya andhere me hogi,suraj kabhi nahi nikalega"aakash aankhen band ki.andhera badhne laga aur charo aur failne laga
"Bas"achanak aakash ke sar par ek haath laga.jisme thandak thi.apnapan tha
"Bas shaant"wahi vriddh jo itne dino se dikh rahe the
"Shaant ho jao"vriddh fir bole aur Kamaal ki baat hai ki aakash ki aankhen band ho gayi.sharir ka rang badalne laga.andhera charo aur kamne laga
Dheere dheere Aakash ka sharir bhi shaant hokar zameen me gir gaya
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"Kya ye sahi hai aakash??"amit malhotra bole
"Haan papa,yahi sabke liye sahi hoga"aakash bola
"Lekin beta mai tere bina..."mrs malhotra bed me lete hue boli
Pata hai maa lekin meri wajah se aap logo par wapas koi khatra na aaye isliye ye kadam utha raha hoon Maa.aakash ne soch samajhkar decision liya tha
"Aakash mai bhi saath jaana chahti hoon"disha boli
Aakash muskuraya aur disha ko isharo haan kar diya
Shlok wahi reh gaya.ragini ke saath lagav sa ho gaya tha
Shyam aur anju ne shaadi kar li thi.ab dono us dhabe ko ek acha sa restaurant bana chuke the
Kai baar ragini aur shlok jaate the waha
Golu shahar chor padhne delhi chala gaya
Pavitra ka koi ata pata nahi tha,aur aakash ki behen bhi gayab ho gayi thi
Varun ko bandi banake vriddh ne waise hi samander me daal diya tha ki kisi ko na maloom chale
Aakash ko ab nayi zimmedari nibhani thi kyunki uske papa ne apni kursi chor di thi.disha ke saath mansarovar rehne laga aakash.lekin kahan??kisi ko koi khabar nahi thi
Har mahine ek khat aata Tha malhotra parivar ko.jisme sab kuch likha rehta tha.haal chala bhi poocha jaata tha
Lekin aakash kabhi nahi aaya is shahar me.shayad uska beta hi aakar apne dada aur dadi ke saath reh payega
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Ek baar se aakash ke chehra pighal gaya.aur pighalte pighalte poora pighal gaya
Shaks khush hua.aaj khatam hua aakash uske apne haath se
KHACHHHHHHHHHHH
"YAHHHHHHHHHHRRFGGGGGGGG"shaks chillaya
Uska doosra haath katkar door ja gira tha
Aakash ke haath ne kaala sa talwar ka roop le liya tha
Isse pehle ki wo shaks kuch samajta aakash ke sharir se kai saare kaale bhale ya shaks ki aur badhe aur
KHACHHHHHHH
KHACHHHHHHH
POORE sharir ko khokhla kar diya
"Ha ha ha tu kya samjhta hai mujhe maarna itna aasan hai??"shaks bola
"Jaanta hoon"aakash bola
Aur isse pehle ki shaks kuch samajh paata
"Ye kya ho raha hai meri poori taqat kam rahi hai,sharir jal raha hai.nahi nahiii nahiiiiiiii"shaks ka sharir jalne laga tha
Shaks ke sharir me ghuse bhale aakash ke sharir me wapas samane lage
Andhera aur badh raha tha.poore area me raat ka vatavaran chane laga
Aakash ka sharir isi andhere me kho gaya
Aur hawa ki gati ke saath varun ke aade tak pohunch gaya
"Wash ustaad sahi time pe aaye ho"shouji bola
Aakash ke sharir se Kaali rekha shouji ki aur badhi
CUTTTTT
ek tez talwar ne use jaat diya
"Ninku ki talwar kuch bhi jaat sakti hai,kuch bhi"ninku bola
Aakash ne chutki bajai
Aur uske 157 ladaku khade ho gaye
"Dono Ko khatam karo"bol aakash badh gaya aage
Shouji aur ninku uljhe rahe un ladaku Yoddhaon ke saath aakash ki Kaali parchai varun ke paas jaane lagi
"Pavitra,shyam roko ise"Varun chillaya
Pavitra aur shayan ke kuch samajh paane se hi poora andhera ho gaya
Kisi ko kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha
"Ye meri duniya hai,aur meri duniya me tum sab ko mout milegi"ek awaz aayi
Kuch der baad andhera kam hua to pavitra aur shyam zameen me gire hue tha
Varun ladne ko taiyyar ho gaya lekin...uske sharir dheere dheere fatne lagi aur ret nikalne laga usse
"Teri saari akad khatam varun ab tu marega"aakash bola
Varun tadapne laga.disha daud kar aakash ki aur aayi
Lekin aakash ne ek baar kiya aur disha bhi zameen me gir gayi
"Ab poori duniya andhere me hogi,suraj kabhi nahi nikalega"aakash aankhen band ki.andhera badhne laga aur charo aur failne laga
"Bas"achanak aakash ke sar par ek haath laga.jisme thandak thi.apnapan tha
"Bas shaant"wahi vriddh jo itne dino se dikh rahe the
"Shaant ho jao"vriddh fir bole aur Kamaal ki baat hai ki aakash ki aankhen band ho gayi.sharir ka rang badalne laga.andhera charo aur kamne laga
Dheere dheere Aakash ka sharir bhi shaant hokar zameen me gir gaya
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"Kya ye sahi hai aakash??"amit malhotra bole
"Haan papa,yahi sabke liye sahi hoga"aakash bola
"Lekin beta mai tere bina..."mrs malhotra bed me lete hue boli
Pata hai maa lekin meri wajah se aap logo par wapas koi khatra na aaye isliye ye kadam utha raha hoon Maa.aakash ne soch samajhkar decision liya tha
"Aakash mai bhi saath jaana chahti hoon"disha boli
Aakash muskuraya aur disha ko isharo haan kar diya
Shlok wahi reh gaya.ragini ke saath lagav sa ho gaya tha
Shyam aur anju ne shaadi kar li thi.ab dono us dhabe ko ek acha sa restaurant bana chuke the
Kai baar ragini aur shlok jaate the waha
Golu shahar chor padhne delhi chala gaya
Pavitra ka koi ata pata nahi tha,aur aakash ki behen bhi gayab ho gayi thi
Varun ko bandi banake vriddh ne waise hi samander me daal diya tha ki kisi ko na maloom chale
Aakash ko ab nayi zimmedari nibhani thi kyunki uske papa ne apni kursi chor di thi.disha ke saath mansarovar rehne laga aakash.lekin kahan??kisi ko koi khabar nahi thi
Har mahine ek khat aata Tha malhotra parivar ko.jisme sab kuch likha rehta tha.haal chala bhi poocha jaata tha
Lekin aakash kabhi nahi aaya is shahar me.shayad uska beta hi aakar apne dada aur dadi ke saath reh payega
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Shayad vriddh ko laga yahi sahi hai
Agar dekha jaay wahi is story KE asli hero the
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Thanks a lot bro story ko support karne ke liye
Beauty and the beast shuru ho chuki hai
Ek multi billionaire yash jiske paas paisa hai par dil nahi
Aur ek Masoom aur chulbuli Komalkya dono ki jodi ek ho payegi???
Padhte rahiye
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Bro mai story ko zyada nahi kheenchta agar ZAROORI nahi to story shayad ek do page par hi khatam ho jaaye
Agent jaise story bohut lambi hoti hai kyunki usme bohut element hota hai
Is story me aakash ke safar ki kahani thi.kab wo ek bad dimag ladke se ek aam zindagi jeene wala insan ban gaya
Lekin uske dushmano ke uksane par usne apna roop dikha diya.isse pehle ki sab khatam ho jaaye us vriddh ne sab sambhal liya
Lekin agar iska part 2 chahiye to zaroor comment kare