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Fantasy AJNABEE (completed)

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Extraordinary story kuch Naya padhne ko Mila..
Aap part 2 wohi SE start krte jahn SE apne part 1 story end ki thi acha rhta...
 
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UPDATE 2
Kailash mansarovar
Aakash ki marzi to thi nahi lekin mummy ke samjhane bujhane par wo Kailash mansarovar ki yatra par nikal pada
Apne chacha ji ke saath.anand aur ankush saath me the
Aur saath me tha Varun Goel jo Vikrant goel ka beta tha
Aakash ke age ka tha Varun aur har waqt uska.mazak udata aur use neecha dikhata.uski nazar ragini par bohut dino se hai.kai baar indirectly chhed chuka hai aakash ke saamne.lekin aakash me na to himmat naam ki cheez thi.na hi dat kar khade rehne ki taqat

"Ye om parvat hai,iske ek chakkar lagayega to footi kismat jaag jayegi"varun aakash ke sar par chapat maarkar bola

Ha ha ha ha

Sab hasne lage

Aakash kuch nahi bola.chakkar lagane laga,baaki saare bhi chakkar lagane lage.aakash ne maa ka dil nahi dukhaya.yahan aane ki bilkul ichha nahi thi lekin maa ka dil rakhne ke liye usne haa kar di

Halka sa toofan shuru ho gaya tha.barfila toofan

"Are wo dekho ek gufa sa hai chalo waha chalte hai"anand ek gufa ki aur dekhkar kaha

Sab wahi chal pade.

Gufa me bilkul andhera nahi tha.balki mashaalein jal rahi thi.aur gufa ke diwaron par ajeeb se daanavon aur rakhsashon ke aakritiyan bani hui thi

Sunsaan sa wo gufa sabko halka sa dara raha tha.kaafi gehra bhi tha wo gufa.jaise ki ek shahar basta ho wahan.
Sab ke sab aage badhne lage.aakash ko bohut darr lag raha tha

Kareeb 3 kilometer chalne ke baad ek kaali si badi moorti ke saamne ek laal golakar jagah thi.wahan kuch ajeeb sa likha bhi hua tha.lekin kis bhasha me kuch samajh me nahi a raha tha

"A gaye hum sab"anand bola

"Aakash tum us golakar jagah par jao"ankush bola

"L lekin chacha ji.."aakash bola

"Bola na ja "bol varun ne dhakka dekar waha fenk diya

"Pyare bhatije,hum sab ka saath yahi tak tha.tum wapas jaakar kya karoge??wahi ghatiya si zindagi,logo ke taane sunna aur sar jhukakar jeena"ankush bola aur apna pistol nikal Liya

"P please mujhe mat maro chachaji.please mai.marna nahi chahta"haath jod kar rone laga aakash

Lekin kisi ko daya nahi aayi.ulta sab hasne lage

"Aur nahi to kya.yahi apna sharir tyag do jaise kai mahatmaon ne kiya tha is pavitra bhoomi par"anand haskar bola

"Please maine tum logo ka kya bigada hai chachaji??aur varun tu jo bolta hai wahi karta hoon na mai??"aakash rote hue bola

"Sorry loser,tera time yahi tak tha,tujh jaise loser ko zinda rehne ka koi haq nahi.dharti par bojh hai tu"bol varun ne bandook nikali aur

GHAI GHAI

anand aur ankush ne bhi goliyan chalayi

GHAI GHAI

aakash ka shareer ludak kar usi golakar me gir gaya.aur dheere dheere mashaalein bujhani shuru ho gayi

"Uff chalo wapas chalte hai,jaldi"anand bola

"Lekin itni jaldi kyun??"ankush ne poochha

"Guruji ne kaha tha isliye"bol bhagta gaya anand
Saath me ankush aur varun bhi bhaagne laga

Sab bhagate gaye lekin kisi ne ye nahi dekha ki andhera aakash ko poori tarah nigal raha tha
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POORE EK SAAL BAAD
MALHOTRA NIWAS
ghar me shanti chayi hui thi.sirf koi ro raha tha to ragini jo apne bed par lete hue adhmare mrs malhotra ko gale lagakar ro rahi thi

Aaj aakash ki barsi thi.us haadse ke baad mrs malhotra lagbhag adhmari si hokar bed me hi soti rehti hai
Sharir me koi jaan hi nahi hai.har waqt aankhon se aansu.aur raat ko achanak apne bete ka naam lekar cheekhna


"Mat ro maa, bhaiyya ke liye aur kitna aansu bahaogi??"ragini rote hue boli

Mrs malhotra kuch nahi boli.bas aakash nahi se aakar

"Maa"bol de Bas......

Tabhi gate me saamne ek shaks khada ho gaya

"Koun hai bhai aaj jao....aaj chote maali ki barsi h....."Bolte Bolte muh khula reh gaya watchman ka

Daudte hue ander gaya

"Sahab sahab b bhoot bhoot"watchman chillaya

Shaks ne gate khola aur ander aaya.saamne shiv ji ki moorti ke saamne ruk gaya
Ek muskaan tair gayi honto par

Fir dheere dheere malhotra niwas ke ander aaya

Sab chaunkate dekhne lage ar kanafoosi karne lage

"Ragini didi dekho kaun aaya hai jaldi aao"naukar ne ragini ko bulaya

Ragini apne aansu ponchte hue jaise hi seediyon se neeche aayi us shaks ko dekhkar shocked ho gayi

Fir daudkar uske gale lag gayi

"AAKASH BHAIYYA"bol zor zor se rone lagi
Akal mrutyu woh mare jo karm kare chandal ka kal bhi suka kya bigade jo bhakt ho mahakal ka....
 
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"excuse me.....please wait...."aakash ne door se Awaz lagayi

Disha ruk gayi,uff fir wahi ladka.baar baar mere saamne kyun a jaata hai,use pata nahi ki mai khud kitni majboor hoon.

"Kya hai??"rookhapan ke saath disha ne poochha

"Wo....agar .....tum ..nahi aap...haan ..nahi ...tum...aap...."aakash ko samajh nahi a raha tha ki wo khud kya keh raha tha

Disha apni hasi ko badi mushkil se control kar rahi thi.

"Hamesha se aise hi haklata hai kya??"disha ne poochha

"N nahi ...mai to...bas poochh raha tha ki agar aap free hai to mere saath lunch karengi??"aakash ne poochha

"Sorry fir kabhi"bol disha aage nikal gayi

Aakash ne bujhe man se golu ki aur dekha

"Huh,jab ladki ne last maari tab aaya na mere paas??"golu bola aur aakash ke saath lunch share karne laga

"Waise ye baat kya sahi hai aakash ki tu aaj cobra martial arts ke school me jayega??"golu ne poochha

"Hmm"casually sa jawab diya aakash ne uska saara dhyan disha ki taraf tha

"Are wo bohut khatarnaak hai aakash,wo martial arts gundagardi karti hai,aur kai galat kaam me unka haath rehta hai,mat pange le unse.waha ke saare student kaafi taqatwar hai"golu bola
Lekin aakash ke kaan me kuch gaya hi nahi.wo sirf disha ke us rawaiyye ke baare me soch raha tha
Ek waqt tha jab....lekin aaj.....

School ke baad aakash ko ko ek taraf jaate dekh Disha ne class ki ek ladki se poochha
"Kaha ja raha hai aakash??"

"Tujhe pata nahi simran aur alicia ne challenge kiya hai aakash ko.agar aakash haar gaya to uske saath bohut bura karegi simran"ladki boli

"Aur aakash bewkoof maan gaya"disha ne poochha

"Haan,lekin hume kya??bas entertainment ke liye chal rahe hai,tu bhi aaja.maza aayega"ladki boli

"Haan....ab...mujhe kya chal dekhte hai",dhadakte dil ke saath disha bhi chal di cobra martial arts school

COBRA MARTIAL ARTS SCHOOL
Aakash ko saamne varun dikha,wahi varun jisne us nihatye aur Masoom aakash par torcher kiya tha

"Swagatam"cobra martial school ke trainer se swagat kiya muskurate hue

"Mujhe bataya gaya ki tum hamare martial arts student ko challenge karna chahte ho,waise aaj tak to kisi ki himmat nahi hui,lekin mujhe badi asha thi ki aisa kab hoga,tumhare wajah se wo bhi mumkin hua"trainer bola

"Waise mujhe us ladke se ladna hai"aakash ne pin point kiya varun ki aur iske saath hi varun ki aankhen chamak gayi
Aakash ke class ke lagbhag saare students aaye hue the
Disha bhi bade Gour se dekh rahi thi aur halke se tension me thi.golu bhi haath jodkar bhagwan se duaen maang raha tha

"Aaj to tu gaya aakash malhotra, hospital me bed reserve karwa le"varun apna haath malte hue bola

Charo aur varun varun ki dhwani sunai de rahi thi,jaise varun ko dekhne ke liye sab aaye hue the

Aakash ne koi reaction nahi diya

"To fight shuru karo"trainer ne ishara kiya

Aakash muskuraya aur varun ke saamne khada ho gaya

Varun ne vaar karne ke liye apna haath lehraya aur aakash ne beech me hi rok liya

KARRDDD

"MUMMY RE...."varun chillaya.uska haath toot chuka tha
Sab jo varun ka naam chilla rahe the chup ho gaye.sannata cha gaya charo aur

"Aaj tujhe aise todunga aise todunga.ki kabhi kisi majboor ki majboori ka fayda nahi utha payega"aakash ne dheere se varun se kaha

Varun halka sa shocked hua
"Tu gaya ab aakash ke bachhe tu gaya...hiyaaaa"uchal kar maarne ke liye hawa me lahraya varun ,lekin aakash ne ek laat maara pair me

KARRDDDDDD

"HAAHHHHHHH MAR GAYA"cheekha gala faadkar varun

Simran aur alicia ko yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha
Aakash ne dekh ki disha usi ki aur dekh rahi thi.lekin jaise hi disha ne aakash ko apni aur dekhte paaya usne muh ghuma liya

"Ye meri behen ko chhedne ke liye aur pehla vaar mujhe satane ke liye"aakash bola

Varun lachari se dekh raha tha aakash ko, aakash ke saamne aate hue varun peecha hatne lag gaya

"Door raho mujhse,door raho, please... please"varun darte hue bola

Aakash muskuraya

"Itna khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai ,tumhara agla opponent mai khud hoon"trainer saamne khada ho gaya
Aakash ke honto par ek muskurahat tair gayi
Sala kon hain yeh hain
 

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Aakash ready hokar party me ghusane hi wala tha ki ..

"Oye kidhar ja raha hai??"ek awaz aayi

Aakash ne mudkar dekha ki teen char ladke saath khade the,Alicia bhi saath thi

"Yahi hai wo"alicia boli
Aur teen chaar ladke saamne aaye aur aakash ko gher liya

"Kya chahiye tum logo ko??"aakash bola

"Tu "bol ek ladke ne hawa me haath lehraya ghoosa marne ke liye

Lekin aakash hat gaya,lekin hatne ke baad ek doosre ladke ne ek spinning kick maari aakash ko
Lekin aakash fir hat gaya

Fir to char ladke hawa me haath paanv chalane lage

Aakash ko ache se pata tha ki ye saare Ladke cobra school ke ladke the
Lekin abhi uske paas time nahi tha

Usne do teen haath paanv chalaye aur saare chitt pade the,
Ye sab dekh kar alicia darr jaati hai

Aakash alicia ke paas jaate hi alicia ke chehre par ek mukka kasne wala hi hota hai ki...


Uska ateet

"Saare khatam ho gaye,ab teri baari hai"ek Masoom si ladki ki aankhon ki aansu ki parwah na karte hue bola tha usne

Aur us ladki ka gala pakadte hue aise hi mukka kasa tha usne
Poora haath kaale dhuen se bhar gaya tha uska

Ladki ne apne gale ki giraft na chudate hue bina aankhen band kar bola tha

"Darinda"

Samay ka pendulum wapas aakash ko present par le aaya

THAAK

ek flying kick se door ja gira aakash
Fir aakash par haath pair barsane lage cobra school ke ladke

"Hah kuch kismat thi jo itna hawa me udd raha tha,lekin aaj sabak seekh liya usne,ab chalo"bol alicia sab ladko ko lekar chali gayi

Aakash baitha raha parking area ke basement par
Aankhon me aansu liye

"PASCHATAP se badi koi saza nahi hoti"ek awaz ne aakash ko upar dekhne par majboor kar diya
Wahi vriddh

"Utho"bol us vriddh ne aakash ko uthaya aur apne bag se pani ka bottle nikal kar diya

Aakash ne vriddh ki aur dekha,shant aur ek ajeeb sa tej mehsoos kar Raha tha us vriddh ke chehre se

"Aap koun hai please bataiye na"aakash ne poochha

"Pehle apne kapde thik kar lo,jisse milne ja rahe ho usne aise dekha to ??"vriddh ne muskurate hue bola

Aakash ko achanak yaad a gaya ki party hai aaj,bina kuch soche samjhe jhat se kapde thik karke bhaagne laga

Fir acahank ruk gaya,are wo vriddh koun hai???wapas dekhne par us vriddh ko nahi dekh paya wo
Khair aakash bhaga party ke liye

"Us bachhe ko agar apni manzil nahi mili to duniya ko suraj dekhna Naseeb nahi hoga"vriddh ne apne aankhen band ki
Soch samajhkar is ladke ko sambhalna hoga
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"L lekin ragini waha jaana sahi rahega??"shlok bola

"Are party hai,koi maiyyat nahi jo itna dar raha hai,chal jaldi chal"ragini bola

Ye kambakht party warty kya cheezo hai shlok ke maathe nahi pad raha tha
Upar se usko jo maksad diya gaya tha usse halka sa bhatak raha tha wo

"Ab chalega bhi"ragini ne kamar par haath rakhe

"H haan"bol shlok bhi chalne laga
Kuch hi mahine hue is shahar me aaye hue

Ajeeb log,ajeeb sa rehen sehen,jis devi ko dabate rahe hai pairon ke neeche usi devi ki Pooja karte hai saal me ek baar
Jis kutte ko raaste me maarte hai usi ki achi prajati ko ghar me pet ke roop me rakhte hai
Jis ganga ko POORE saal ganda karte hai usi ganga me dubki lagakar paap dhote hai.
Jin Mohammad ne bhaichare ka sandesh diya.usi bhaichare ki dhajjiyan udate hue katle aam karte hai log
Jin logo ke liye isa maseeh ne apni jaan di un logo ne hi unke naam se thagi,farebi aur jaalsazi shuru kar di
Buddha ji ne bodhisatv ke roop me apne bachav ke liye jin martial arts ko duniya ko sikhaya,logo ne usi martial arts se kamzoro ko dabaya
Hai re duniya


"Fir soch me doob gaye"ragini boli
Shlok apne khayalon se wapas aaya

Ragini,kitni bholi hai.na use us kamine haramkhor aakash ke baare me pata hai na hi shlok ke baare me
Jab pata chalega,tab kya shlok ko maaf kar payegi???
Shayad kar payegi,sab to ek jaise hi hai yahan.sochkar dil ko tasalli dene laga shlok

"Wo dekho ice cream??chalo na shlok please ek ek try karte hai"bol ragini

Shlok ne ice cream ke paise dene chahe to ragini ne rok diya

"Arey???kal pav bhaji khilayi thi na??aaj meri baari,dosti me 50-50"bol ragini ne paise chukaye

Shlok has pada,itna aasan nahi hoga ragini ko bhoolna apna maksad poora karne ke baad
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"Waise anju ji hum kahan ja rahe hai??"shyam ne poochha

"Bas halka ghoomna ke liye shyam by the way.....k kal ke liye dhanyavad"anju ne shyam ka haath thamte hue bola to shyam chaunk gaya

Anju ko eksaas hote hi usne jhat se apne haath hata liye
Do din pehle hi aaya hua shyam ne dhaba ki soorat badal di poori tarah se
Dhaba bada ho gaya,customers bhi aane lage,hafte lene wale gunde abhi nahi aate.lekin thoda ajeeb hai bas

Tabhi chalte hue shyam chaunk kar pathar sa ban gaya
Laga ki bhoot dekh liya

"Aise chaunk kyun rahe ho ??apne dost se introduce nahi karwaoge??choro mai khud hi kar leti hoon,mera naam pavitra hai"ek saamne se aati hui ladki ne muskurate hue bola

"Anju"muskurate hue bola tha anju ne .lekin shyam ko waha rukna pasand nahi tha

"Chaliye anju ji,hame der ho rahi hai"bol shyam ne anju ka haath thama aur chalta bana
Anju shyam ke apne haath thamane se itna chaunki ki kuch bolta nahi bana usse

Pavitra sirf gusse aur nam aankhon se shyam ko dekhti rahi ek ladki ka haath pakad kar jaate hue
samaj main nahi aata yaha sab apana kam pura karne aaye hain ya apani apani setting karne:):):)
 
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