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Fantasy AJNABEE (completed)

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"excuse me??"ek awaz aayi aakash ke kaano me

Idhar udhar dekhne par usne dekha ki disha first bench se bula rahi hai

"M mai??"khud ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha aakash ko

"Haan,zara idhar aana"disha ne bulaya

Aakash jaise hi utha uska pen gir gaya,neeche jhuk kar pen jaise hi uthane gaya uska sar lag gaya bench se

"Ouch"apne sar ko pakadte hue disha ke paas gaya

Disha ko hasi a gayi,lekin khud ko control karte hue serious ho gayi

"Kyun ghoor Raha tha mujhe??"disha ne poochha

"N n n n nahi to"aakash ne zor zor se sar hilaya

"Kya nahi??badi badi aankhon se ghoor raha tha ,kyun??"disha ne fir poochha

Aakash ke paas koi jawab nahi tha,kaise kahega wo ki...

"Khair naam kya hai tera??"disha ne poochha

"A...kash"aakash disha ki sundarta ko dekhte hi reh gaya
Bade bade baalon ki jagah chote baal,wahi aankhen,wahi hont ,wahi smile wahi face ....

"Fir ghoor Raha hai...."disha gusse se boli

"N nahi mai wo..wo mai..."kambakht itna hakla kyun raha tha aakash pata nahi
Bade bade soormao ke saamne kabhi aisa nahi hua lekin aaj....

"Dekh mister ainda mere aaspaas bhi dikha ya ghoora ya kuch galat matlab dikha mujhe to teri khair nahi,ab wapas ja"disha boli

Aakash wapas chala gaya
Lekin disha dekhti reh gayi is ladke ko
Aaj tak kisi ki aankhon me itni sachhai nahi dekhi thi usne jo is aakash ki aankhon me dekha tha
Bachpan se hi sunti a rahi thi manhoos,karmjali aur pata nahi kya kya
Maa aur papa ke jaane ke baad apne mama ke paas reh rahi thi disha lekin din raat galiyan aur maar ke alava kuch bhi nahi mila use
Mama ke bete ke dost hawas ki nazron se dekhte rehte hai hamesha
Abhi tak apni izzat ko in khoonkhar darindo se bachati aayi hai disha lekin kab tak
Aur aaj is ladke ne.....kya is ladke se dosti karni chahiye???
Nahi nahi apne swarth ke liye is ladke ko apne zindagi me nahi aane degi
Jahan sirf andhera hi andhera hai

Aakash wapas apne seat par jaane laga

"Aakash??"peeche se simran ki awaz sunai di

"Haan??"aakash ne peecha mudkar dekha,simran khadi thi

"Meri bohut beizzati kar li tune,aur alicia ko bhi sharminda kiya,bada tees maar kha bana firta hai na??to chal aaj ho jaaye do do haath "simran boli

"Do do haath kisse??"aakash bola

"Wo tujhe cobra martial arts school me pata chalega,a jaana agar kigra hai to,warna fattu ka tag pehenkar poora school ggoom lena"simran boli

"Hmm agar mai jeeta to??"aakash ne poochha

"To jo tu kahega,sar jhuka kar karungi"simran boli

Aakash muskuraya aur disha ki aur dekha.disha thodi tension ne dikhi.lekin jaise hi aakash ne dekha usne apna chehra ghuma diya

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Guru ji bohut tension me lag rahe the

"C call aaya hai"ek chele ne guru ji ko mobile pakda diya

Guru ji ne kaampte haatho se mobile ko thaam liya

"Wo wahi hai na??"ek thartharati awaz ne poochha

"Abhi tak pata nahi"guru ji bole

"Pata karo,mujhe jald janna hai.aur agar wo wahi hua to dushmani mai khatam karunga,usne mera haath Kaat diya....mujhe lagbhag khatam hi kar diya tha."thartharati awaaz gusse se ubal padi

"Jald pata karke bolta hoon"guruji jald se jald chhutkara paana chahte the

"Hmm karo"bol phone kaat diya gaya doorsi aur se

"Koun tha wo guruji??"chele ne poochha

"Ek daanav,ek Jaanwar jiske rag rag me bas ek hi awaaz ghoom rahi hai"guruji bole

"Kya??"chele ne poochha

"Pratishodh, pratishodh, pratishodh"guruji bole
Bhai yah kia charas laga di chorne ko dil hi nahi kar raha hai. Zabardast ek ek kar ke naye character aane shuru ho gaye hain. Wow
 

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"excuse me.....please wait...."aakash ne door se Awaz lagayi

Disha ruk gayi,uff fir wahi ladka.baar baar mere saamne kyun a jaata hai,use pata nahi ki mai khud kitni majboor hoon.

"Kya hai??"rookhapan ke saath disha ne poochha

"Wo....agar .....tum ..nahi aap...haan ..nahi ...tum...aap...."aakash ko samajh nahi a raha tha ki wo khud kya keh raha tha

Disha apni hasi ko badi mushkil se control kar rahi thi.

"Hamesha se aise hi haklata hai kya??"disha ne poochha

"N nahi ...mai to...bas poochh raha tha ki agar aap free hai to mere saath lunch karengi??"aakash ne poochha

"Sorry fir kabhi"bol disha aage nikal gayi

Aakash ne bujhe man se golu ki aur dekha

"Huh,jab ladki ne last maari tab aaya na mere paas??"golu bola aur aakash ke saath lunch share karne laga

"Waise ye baat kya sahi hai aakash ki tu aaj cobra martial arts ke school me jayega??"golu ne poochha

"Hmm"casually sa jawab diya aakash ne uska saara dhyan disha ki taraf tha

"Are wo bohut khatarnaak hai aakash,wo martial arts gundagardi karti hai,aur kai galat kaam me unka haath rehta hai,mat pange le unse.waha ke saare student kaafi taqatwar hai"golu bola
Lekin aakash ke kaan me kuch gaya hi nahi.wo sirf disha ke us rawaiyye ke baare me soch raha tha
Ek waqt tha jab....lekin aaj.....

School ke baad aakash ko ko ek taraf jaate dekh Disha ne class ki ek ladki se poochha
"Kaha ja raha hai aakash??"

"Tujhe pata nahi simran aur alicia ne challenge kiya hai aakash ko.agar aakash haar gaya to uske saath bohut bura karegi simran"ladki boli

"Aur aakash bewkoof maan gaya"disha ne poochha

"Haan,lekin hume kya??bas entertainment ke liye chal rahe hai,tu bhi aaja.maza aayega"ladki boli

"Haan....ab...mujhe kya chal dekhte hai",dhadakte dil ke saath disha bhi chal di cobra martial arts school

COBRA MARTIAL ARTS SCHOOL
Aakash ko saamne varun dikha,wahi varun jisne us nihatye aur Masoom aakash par torcher kiya tha

"Swagatam"cobra martial school ke trainer se swagat kiya muskurate hue

"Mujhe bataya gaya ki tum hamare martial arts student ko challenge karna chahte ho,waise aaj tak to kisi ki himmat nahi hui,lekin mujhe badi asha thi ki aisa kab hoga,tumhare wajah se wo bhi mumkin hua"trainer bola

"Waise mujhe us ladke se ladna hai"aakash ne pin point kiya varun ki aur iske saath hi varun ki aankhen chamak gayi
Aakash ke class ke lagbhag saare students aaye hue the
Disha bhi bade Gour se dekh rahi thi aur halke se tension me thi.golu bhi haath jodkar bhagwan se duaen maang raha tha

"Aaj to tu gaya aakash malhotra, hospital me bed reserve karwa le"varun apna haath malte hue bola

Charo aur varun varun ki dhwani sunai de rahi thi,jaise varun ko dekhne ke liye sab aaye hue the

Aakash ne koi reaction nahi diya

"To fight shuru karo"trainer ne ishara kiya

Aakash muskuraya aur varun ke saamne khada ho gaya

Varun ne vaar karne ke liye apna haath lehraya aur aakash ne beech me hi rok liya

KARRDDD

"MUMMY RE...."varun chillaya.uska haath toot chuka tha
Sab jo varun ka naam chilla rahe the chup ho gaye.sannata cha gaya charo aur

"Aaj tujhe aise todunga aise todunga.ki kabhi kisi majboor ki majboori ka fayda nahi utha payega"aakash ne dheere se varun se kaha

Varun halka sa shocked hua
"Tu gaya ab aakash ke bachhe tu gaya...hiyaaaa"uchal kar maarne ke liye hawa me lahraya varun ,lekin aakash ne ek laat maara pair me

KARRDDDDDD

"HAAHHHHHHH MAR GAYA"cheekha gala faadkar varun

Simran aur alicia ko yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha
Aakash ne dekh ki disha usi ki aur dekh rahi thi.lekin jaise hi disha ne aakash ko apni aur dekhte paaya usne muh ghuma liya

"Ye meri behen ko chhedne ke liye aur pehla vaar mujhe satane ke liye"aakash bola

Varun lachari se dekh raha tha aakash ko, aakash ke saamne aate hue varun peecha hatne lag gaya

"Door raho mujhse,door raho, please... please"varun darte hue bola

Aakash muskuraya

"Itna khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai ,tumhara agla opponent mai khud hoon"trainer saamne khada ho gaya
Aakash ke honto par ek muskurahat tair gayi
Kasam. Kia sahi toda hai varun ko. Ek flim ka dialogue yaad aa Gaya ki tode aisa todey ki phir koi na jodey
 

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Ragini der raat tak sochti rahi
Aisa kya tha jo usse din me takraya tha, bhaiyya ko bhi nahi bata pa rahi hai
Bechara abhi abhi wapas lauta hai kuch galat na ho jaye.wo ladki kya sachmuch thi ya bas ek bhram??

Raat ko aakash ko ragini ke awaz a rahi thi kamre se

HIYAA

WAAAIII

KACHAOOOO

"Mai ander a sakta hoon rags??"aakash ne muskurate hue kaha aur ander jhanke laga

"Are bhaiya a jao....dekho mai karate practice kar rahi hoon"ragini karate pose lete hue boli

Aakash hasne laga

"Isme hasne ki kya baat hai??chal tu bhi practice kar le"ragini apne baalon ko thik karte hue boli

Aakash ne mushkil se apni hasi rokte hue kaha
"Chal lekin seekh Kahan se rahe hai???"

"Tv dekhkar ab chal tujhe pose lena sikhati hoon"ragini boli

"Aise haath aage kar fir pair peecha"ragini sikhane lagi
Aur aakash waise hi karne laga

Door se khidki se ye sab dekh rahe the aakritiyan
"Y ye nahi ho sakta,mujhe drishti bhram ho raha hai"ek parchai boli

"Tu wahi dekh raha hai jo tu dekhna nahi chahta"doosri parchai ne kaha

"L lekin wo to khud ek shati hai,unke kya aan padi ek doodh peeti bachhi se nautanki seekhte ki??"pehla parchai bola

"Jazbaat aur pyaar"ek lambi saans lene ke baad doosra parchai bola

"Matlab??in sabse inhe kya???yaad nahi kitne kroor the ,aur saza ke taur par shrap se inki shaktiyan bandh gai"pehli parchai bola

"Ab ye wo nahi hai, aakash hai, aakash malhotra,ragini ka bada bhai aur amit aur usha malhotra ka beta,chal chalte hai"doosra parchai bola aur dono dheere dheere gayab hone lage
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Disha apne kamre me coffee pee rahi thi aur padhai kar rahi thi.
Apne baalon ko bun shape me kiya hua tha.black vest aur denim shorts pehne ekdum hot lag rahi thi
Lekin uske dimag se aakash ja hi nahi raha tha

Dikhta to ek number ka duffer type hai lekin.....
Kuch .....
Pata nahi....
Aur kyun itna kheenchi jati hai jab hi us idiot ka chehra dikhta hai
Kitne handsome ladke hai aas paas lekin fir kyun wo sirf aakash ke aas pas rehne par khush rehti hai

Uff....apne best friend ko call karna hi padega,lekin kya rags jaag rahi hogi???
Dhat call kar hi deti hoon

TRING TRING

"Hi dishu kya baat hai itni raat ko phone??"ragini ne poochha

"Haanf rahi hai,kya baat hai exercise ya yoga chal raha tha kya??"Disha ne poochha

"No re, bhaiyya ke saath martial arts practice kar rahi thi,tu bata itni raat ko call??"ragini ne poochha

"Wo..b baat ye hai ki....."disha ne thoda sakuchate hue kaha

"Bol na "ragini boli

"But babe promise me tere aur mere beech rahegi baat"disha ne apni condition rakhi

"Bindas bol daal"ragini ne uksaya

"Wo...ek ladka hai class me .."disha ne halke se bola

"Kya baat hai.love at first sight??"ragini haste hue boli

"Bakwas band karegi"disha ne chillate hue kaha

"Acha sorry sorry,ab bol"ragini boli

"Tujhe to pata hai.mama ji ne meri admission kaha karwai,wahi ek ladka mila mujhe .jo ek number ka stupid aur idiot dono hai"disha boli

"Kamal hai ek idiot mere class me bhi hai naya aaya hai"ragini boli

"Teri chor mujhe sun,wo ladka line maar raha hai yaar wo bhi behuda tarike se,kya karoon??"disha ne poochha

"Ummm.........hmmm sun mera bhai bhi tere school me tere hi class me padhta hai,usse help mang le "ragini boli

"Koun??"Disha ne poochha

"Aur koun aakash malhotra"ragini casually bol padi

"Phweeeeeewwww"coffee ka fawwara muh se nikal gaya disha ke

"Kya hua ab??"Ragini ne poochha

"K kuch nahi hua bade call karti hoon"bol disha ne phone last diya
Seriously???apne besty ka bhai hai wo....god aur kya kya jhelna padega

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Varun bohut pee chuka tha
Badi zor ki zillat mili thi use

Night club se nikalkar parking area me gaya varun ne packet se cigarette nikali
Aur jalane hi wala tha ki...

"Bohut zillat mili hai na aaj??"ek awaz aayi hawa me aur ret yani sand ka ek jhonka udne laga

"Kho kho.....koun hai??koun hai waha??"varun cheekha

"Ye ZAROORI nahi ki join hai,ye zaroori hai ki jisne zillat di,use maza nahi chakana chahoge??"awaz ne poochha

"H haan,lekin tum koun ho??aur kya chahte ho??"varun ne poochha

"Agar tum use maza chakhana chahte ho to jald se jald sahara desert aao,waha mai tumko wo taqat dunga jisse tum apna badla le sakte ho usse"awaz ne kaha

Varun ka josh badhne laga,akhirkar us aakash se badla lekar rahega wo

"L lekin tumhe pehchanunga kaise??koi nishani koi khas jagah??"varun ne poochha

"Tum bas wahan pohunch jao,tumhe khud dhund nikalunga mai"awaz boli aur ek ret ka jhonka udkar chala gaya

Varun ki aankhen chamakne lagi
Yani ke duamano ka pura gang ek ek kar ke sakriye ho raha hain.
 

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Sahara ke ret ka halka sa jhoka dheere dheere varun ko gherne laga

"Uff ye toofan,wo awaz kyun nahi sunai de rahi hai jisne mujhe yahan bulaya tha??"varun bola

Halki si toofan si mehsoos hone lagi varun ko.wo bachne ke liye bhaagne laga .

Lekin bhag nahi paaya,uske pair jad gaye the

"Ye .k.kya ho raha hai.m mere pair hil kyun nahi pa rahe hai aur ye saare ret mere sharir se chipak kyun rahe hai??"varun bola

Ret ka toofan dheere dheere varun ko apni agosh me lene laga
Varun ne bohut haath pair maare lekin...


AAHHHHH....AAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

varun ki cheekhein sahara ne goonjne lagi.lekin aadhi raat ko varun ki cheekhe sunne wala koi nahi tha
Dheere dheere cheekhein shant ho gayi

Varun ka sharir sthir ho gaya

"Aakhirkar mukti mil hi gayi ha ha ha ha ha ha"
Varun ki hasne ki awaz sahara me goonjne laga

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ankhen kholi disha ne
Saamne aakash khada tha

"Baap re hum to dar hi gaye the beta"disha ki mami boli

Disha jhat se uth gayi
"M mai k kaise ,mai to terrace par..."

"Tum aakash se baat karte hue gir gayi beta "mrs malhotra ne disha ke baalon par haath ferte hue kaha

Aakash door khada muskura raha tha
Disha kuch der tak tak dekhti rahi aakash ko fir muskura di
Yani sab Sapna tha,wo andhera,wo talwaarein
Dhat

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Doosre din school me

"Wah Wah tune to kamal kar diya,cobra gang ki band baja di jio beta"golu gala faad kar chillaya

"Shhh chup kar"aakash ne golu ka muh band karte hue bola

"Arr ruk ruk disha disha...idh idhar hi a rahi hai"golu bola

Disha sachmuch aakash ki aur hi a rahi thi

"Birthday present kahan hai mera???"disha ne kamar par haath rakhte hue kaha

Aakash tezi se apne pocket check karne laga
Shit purse ghar me hi bhool gaya

"W wo ammmm..kal le aaunga pakka promise,bhool gaya"aakash bola

"Relax mazak kar rahi thi, birthday ka gift to kal aunty ne de hi diya tha"disha haste hue boli

Aakash disha ki muskurahat me kho gaya.

"Itne der se disha ko dekh raha hai ,bol kyun nahi deta ki tu uss..bbbb bbbb"golu ka.muh band kar diya tha aakash ne

"Kya ?? aakash mujhse??"disha ne poochha

"Kuch nahi wo mujhe kuch notes lene the,wahi ye golu ka bachha keh raha tha"aakash bola

Disha muskurayi

"Kya ho raha hai bhai??"peeche se ragini ki awaz aayi sabko

"Rags,"bol disha daudkar ragini ke gale lag gayi

Aakash muskuraya,lekin uski muskurahat ek jhatke me gayab ho gayi ek shaks ko dekhkar

"Uff dekho mai introduce karwana hi bhool gayi,this is shlok and shlok mere bhaiya,disha meri besty and golu bhaiyya"ragini boli

"Hey hey hey,ek minute mera nam gokul hai golu nahi"golu gusse se bola

"To kya,aap golu bhaiyya ho"

"N nahi gokul"

Baatein chal rahi thi lekin aakash aur shlok ek doosre ko dekh rahe the
Dekh nahi rahe the
Ghoor rahe the
Kai saare character aur sab ek se bad kar ek udhar akaash akela. Hai aur upar se. Uski shakti bhi sharp ke karan sheen. Hai kaisay karega woh yah sab.
Zabardast fantasy likhi hain boss ab is me. Bhi apne. Haath azma lo
 

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"batata Kyun nahi hai use??"golu bola

"Hun??kise??"aakash ne poochha

"Tujhe pata hai kiske baare me baat kar raha hoon"golu ne aakash ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kaha

Aakash chup raha
Abhi tak disha ko bata nahi paaya hai,lekin abhi uska dimag disha ki taraf nahi tha
Abhi shlok aur baaki logo ki taraf tha

"Chor tere se nahi hoga,mai chalta hoon.bye"golu chala gaya

Aakash jaane ke liye jaise hi apna pair aage badhaya use ek vriddh dikhai diya saamne

Aakash ruk gaya aur vriddh uske paas aaya

"Pareshan se lag rahe ho??"vriddh Bola

Aakash ne vriddh ki aur dekha ,koi 80 saal ka hoga,chehre par ek muskaan aur bohut shaant sa chehra
Jaise sab kuch chor chaar ke is duniya ke mayajal se bahar a gaya ho

"Bohut chinta ho rahi hai.hai na??"vriddh ne poochha

Aakash chup raha

"Jab kuch samajh me na aaye dil ki suno"vriddh bola aur jaane laga

"R rukiye ,aap logon hai vriddvar??"aakash ne poochha

Vriddh muskuraye aur jaane lage

"Aakash ??"peecha se disha ki awaz aayi

Aakash chaunkar peeche muda wahan koi nahi tha,fir vriddh ki aur dekha.lekin waha koi nahi tha
"Dil ki awaz.hmmm"aakash apne ghar ki aur jaane laga

"Wah pata nahi tha ki yahan milega tu??"varun bola

Aakash ke kuch samajhne se pehle hi varun ke haath ne mitti ka roop le liya aur ek vishalkay hathouda ban gaya
Isse pehle ki aakash kuch samajh paata

Varun ka haath lehraya hawa me aur

DHADDDDD.

ek zordar maar padi aakash ko,aur uska sharir chitak kar door ja gira
Lekin girte hi aakash bijli ki tezi se khada hua
Aur muskuraya

"Ha mout ke saamne muskura raha hai mai tujhe ai...."bol bhi nahi paaya poori baat varun kyunki jakad gaya tha uska sharir

"Teri parchai mere kabze me hai varun"aakash muskuraya
Lekin muskurahat zyada der tak nahi tiki

Varun ka poora sharir mano ret ki tarah toot raha Ho
Aur isse pehle ki kuch samajh paata varun ka sharir zameen me Kho gaya

Aakash idhar udhar dekhne laga

Tabhi peeche se khada hua varun
Aakash ke mudte hi

DHAMMMM

ek aur zordar takkar aur aakash fir door ja gira

Aakash uthkar khada ho gaya aur dheere dheere kaale dhuen me badalne laga

Isse pehle ki varun kuch samajh paata
Kaala dhuan dheere dheere varun ko gherne laga aur uske beech se hara dhuan chabuk ki tarah maarne laga varun ko

"Aahhh kaafi powerful ban gaya hai tu.par yaad rakh zald wapas aunga"bol varun gayab ho gaya

Kaala aur hara dhuan wapas aakash me badalne laga

"Hmmf ...hmmf. Kaafi kamzori lag rahi hai"bol pasine se bheegte ladkhadate hue wapas ghar chala gaya
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"Whoa,kya party thi"ek ladka night club se nikalte hue bola
Saath me 2 log aur the

"Abey dekh saamne ek paagal chand ko dekh raha hai"doosra ladka bola

Raat ke waqt ek aadmi sachmuch baithkar chand ko dekh raha tha

"Chandamama door ke,pue pakaye boor ke"chand ki aur dekh kar bol raha tha baar baar

"Abey paagal chand hai wo chanda mama nahi hai"teeno me ek ladka bola

"Shhhh chandamama ki bezzati mat karo"wo aadmi saamne mudkar apni ungli honto par rakhkar bola

"Duh ,Abey wo moon hai samjha"doosra ladka bola

"Aise nahi manega ye"bol teesra ladka us aadmi ke paas jaakar apne beer ki bottle uske sar par udel kar saara beer sar par daal diya

Ha ha ha,hasi ki awaazein aane lagi
Hasne me wo log ye nahi dekh rahe the ki ek SUV udkar unke sar ke upar hawa me ghoom rahi thi

"Hmm"

BHADAAAAAAAAAAAM

badi si suv car teeno ke upar gir gayi aur teeno ki kuchalkar wahi mout ho gayi

"Chandamama ki shakti, gurutvakarshan shakti"aadmi muskurate hue bola
Bhai itney kia kam thay jo ek yah aur aa gaye. Akaash akela hai aur woh bhi shaktiheen. Dekhna hoga kaisay paar pata hai sabke.
 

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"tumne us ladke par hamla kyun kiya pavitra??"guruji ne ladki se poochha

"Kyunki use abhi ke abhi nahi kuchla to mere maalik ko apna badla poora karne ka mauka nahi milega,uski jaan nahi loongi lekin adhmare karungi"pavitra naam ki ladki boli

"Uske saamne baar baar aana kya sahi hai??"guruji ne poochha

"Us raat ko itna shaktiheen hone ke bawjood wo mujhe hara hi deta,lekin mai bach gayi .us ladki ke birthday party me hi use harana chahti thi"pavitra fir boli

"Fir kal usse takrayi kyun wapas??"guruji ne poochha

"Yaad dilane ki ladai khatam nahi hui hai"pavitra boli aur chali gayi

Ye ladki mere kiye karaye par paani fer degi.kuch to karna hi hoga guruji sochne lage
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"Are tumhara naam hi nahi poochha tha kal,kya naam hai??"anju ne poochha

"Shyam bula sakti hai mujhe"raat ko bhook mitane ke baad anju ne us aadmi ko apne paas rakh liya tha staff ke roop me

"Waise shyam khana kaafi acha bana lete ho"anju kheer khate hue boli

"Waise aap bohut achi hai,warna bina jaane pehchane kisi ko yun rakh lena..."shyam bola

"Mera luck bhi kuch zyada acha nahi hai shyam,papa ke jaane ke baad maa.bhi chal basi.papa ka ye dhaba mai hi chala rahi hoon.aaye din gunde yahan se hafta le jaate hai aur baju wale dhaba ke maalik zabardasti yahan se customer le jaate hai,soch rahi hoon band kar doon,lekin papa ka ye dhaba unki jaan se bhi zyada pyari thi...isliye....."Bolte Bolte aankhen nam ho gayi anju ki

Shyam chup chap apna kaam karne laga

"Oye apni maalkin se bol paise nikale"bahar chillane ki awaz aayi

Anju daudkar gayi aur dekha ki uske staff ko gunde berahmi se pit rahe hai

"Are are kal hi to paise lekar gaye the ,fir aaj??"anju boli

"Arey birju??anju ji ko bol de wo kal tha,aur aaj naya din hai,hafta to dena hi padega"ek gunda bola

"Lekin mere paas paise nahi hai"anju boli

"Hmm"bol achanak birju ne anju ke baal pakad liye aur kare me le gaya.baaki gunde bhi wahi gaye

"Aaj sirf hamari pyaas bujha de bas.....baaki sab hafta maaf tera"birju bola aur anju ke kapdo ko nochne laga

Shyam sab dekh raha tha lekin kuch kar nahi raha tha
Ye uska kaam nahi hai
Iske liye wo aaya nahi tha
Lekin.....


Us ladki ne bina soche samjhe vishwas kiya tha us par


Aur aaj

Jab wo musibat me hai tab ...

Shyam ne apna apron utar fenka aur ek laat se darwaza khola

"Tu koun hai be??bhag yahan se"birju bola aur anju ko waise hi thame raha

"Chor do ise"shyam ka sakht chehra pehli Baar anju ne dekha

"Teri to aise nahi maane Ga"bol ek gunde ne haath lehraya hawa me

Shyam hat gaya aur ek mukka maara us gunde ke pet me

DHAMMMMMM


"Akkk"gunde ki aankhen badi ho gayi.muh se paani nikalne laga
Aur wahi neeche gir gaya

Shyam ne apna gardan ghumaya aur aas paas dekha

Ek saath 6 gunde toot pade us par

DHAAMMM THADD. TAAD

saare gunde chitt the

"Anju ji abhi tak in logo ne kitna hafta liya tha???"shyam ne bhauchakki si dekh rahi anju se.poocha

Anju abhi bhi hairani se dekh rahi thi

"Anju ji"shyam.ne fir poochha

"D d dedh lakh"anju boli

"Sun,dedh aur baaki saman todne aur staff ko maarna ka ek lakh aur total dhai lakh nikal warna yahi marenge sab"shyam bola

"D d de de birju"main gunda bola

Aur fir sab paise lekar shyam bola

"10 hazar kam hai,ja jakar apne aaka ko bol de kaise pita yahan,agar wo yahan aaya to usse baaki ke paise le lunga,ja bhag"bol shyam ne bhaga diya sab ko

Anju dheere dheere baitha gayi zameen par
Aaj uske izzat par haath daala gaya tha
Apne aankhon ke aansu rok na paayi wo,bas behti hi ja rahi thi

Shyam paas aaya,use pata nahi tha ki aise me kya karna chahiye,seekha nahi tha usne
Achanak shyam.ke seene me apna chehra chupa kar rone lagi anju,bohut aansu baaki the uske

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Disha aaj POORE saj kar ja rahi thi
Aaj party me aakash bhi aayega

"Apne aap ko pehchano "ek awaz se ruk gayi disha

Saamne ek vriddh a rahe the saamne se

"A aap ne kuch kaha mujhse??"disha ne poochha

"Yahi ki apne aap ko pehchano"vriddh fir bole

"Aap koun??mai aapko jaanti hoon??"disha ne poochha

Vriddh muskuraye,disha ko cheenk a gayi

A A ATISHOOOOO

disha ne cheenkne ke baad saamne dekha ,koi nahi tha,yahan wahan dekha,koi nahi tha

Ye uska bhram tha ya....

Khair party time
Shaam. Ka. Character bhi badia hai lekin kis side abhi yah nahi pata. Bohat zabardast likhi hai. Bhai.
 
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"akele akele kya kar raha hai bhaiya??"ragini ne terrace par aakar poochha

"Bas tahal raha tha"aakash bola

"Darr nahi lag raha hai tujhe??pehle to andhere se darta tha"ragini boli

"Tujhe darr lagta hai ragini??"aakash ne poochha

"Haan andhere se to sabko dar lagta hai"ragini boli

"Aaj se tujhe kam se kam andhere se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai ragini"aakash ne muskurate hue bola

"Kyun ??tu bada gama pahalwan hai kya???"ragini ne kamar par haath rakhkar kaha

Ye sunkar aakash zor zor se hasne laga

"Gama pehelwan to nahi lekin andhere ka raj....mera matlab andhere se tujhe bacha sakta hoon"aakash bola

"Ok jaldi neeche a warna mummy daant lagayegi"ragini boli aur daudkar neeche chali gayi

Aakash bhi sone chala gaya
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Ragini jogging ke liye jab park gayi to hairan reh gayi
Aakash jogging kiye ja raha tha aur pasine se nahaya hua tha

"Tu??aur jogging??Sapna no nahi dekh rahi hoon??"ragini boli

"Kyun na karu??"aakash apna haath strech karte hue bola

"Are wo baat nahi tu to kabhi in sab me rehta hi nahi tha na"ragini

"There's always first time"aakash ne aankh marte hue fir duadne laga
Ragini bhi peeche peecha ho li

"Baap re kitna bhagta hai,waise jahan tu tha wahan bhi aise hi jogging karta tha kya??isse mujhe yaad aaya bhaiyya.tune abhi tak bataya nahi kahan tha tu itne din??"ragini ne poochha

Aakash kuch batane ja hi raha tha ki usne dekha ki ek bheed ekattha ho gayi hai ek jagah par
Dono bhai behen wahan gaye

"Kya hua bhai sahab??"aakash ne poochha

"Dekho na ek saamp waha dikh gaya ,park me aise saampo ka paana achi baat nahi hai na ??
Kal hi society ke secretary ko bolkar iske baare me kuch kehna padega"aakash ke paas khada aadmi bola

"Jab tak hum unhen pareshan nahi karenge,ye aapko pareshan nahi karega"bol aakash ne zameen me jhukte hi jaise apne haath zameen par sparsh kiye,ek saamp waha se tezi se bhag gaya

"Are ye to wahi saamp hai"wahi aadmi bola

"Insano ne koun si jagah khali rakhi hai bhai sahab??insano ke liye jagah kam pad jaati hai ye to fir bhi bechare jeev hai"bol aakash ragini ko lekar aage badh gaya

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Jaise hi aakash aur ragini ghar aaye.ghar me sab chupchap mile

"Papa a gaye hai tour se"ragini ne dheere se bola
Aur dono bhai behen breakfast karne jaise hi baithe saamne amit malhotra paper par aankhen gadaye hue mile

"Ab tabiyat kaisi hai??"mr malhotra ne paper se aankhen bina hataye poocha

"Bas thik hoon"aakash bola

"Aaj tumhare birthday par hi loss karwa kar aaya hoon, Congratulations"mr malhotra ne paper table par rakhte hue kaha

"Isme bhaiyya ka kya dosh ki aapke shares ludak gaye??? malhotra industries ke shares se bhaiyya ka kya lena dena papa??"ragini boli

"Jab se usne janm liya tabse hi to lena dena shuru ho gaya tha"mr malhotra bole

"Malhotra shares kaise loss kar sakti hai,aadhe ghante pehle hi to 1.25 points upar aayi"aakash bola

"KYA??"mr malhotra aur ragini dono hairan hokar muh khol kar bole

Mr malhotra ne apna mobile nikala jhat se kuch fatafat dabaya aur....

"Y y ye to sach hai,lekin tumhe kaise....tum kab se...."mr malhotra ko apne share ke badhne par jitni hairani nahi ho rahi thi
Apne bete ko dekh usse zyada ho rahi thi

"Happy birthday beta"mrs malhota ne apne bete ke liye breakfast me hi duniya bhar ke pakwan se plate bhar diya

"Haan haan khilao is nalayak ko,hun ek tukka lag gaya to apne aap ko tees maar khan mat samajh lena"bol mr malhotra dining table se uthakar chale gaye

"Papa ki baaton ka bura na manna beta,unki zaban aisi hai,dil ke bohut ache hai"mrs malhotra boli

Aakash muskurate hue apne maa ke gale lag gaya

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GANDEN MONASTERY TIBBET
"Sensei sensei"ek boudh bhikshu daud kar aaya

Ek boodha boudh bhikshu pahadiyon ko dekh raha tha usi ke paas chillate hue aaya boudh bhikshu

"Wo ...wo...."boudh bhikshu bola

"Pata hai mujhe"vridh boudh bhikshu bola

"Lekin....lekin ye galat hai sensei"boudh bhikshu bola

"Aur jo tum logo ne 18 saal pehle kiya wo kahan tak sahi tha??abhi agar use uski priyasi nahi mili to poori duniya andhere me doob jayegi,koi suraj nahi uthega"vriddh bola
Aur aasman ki aur dekhne laga
Amazing story bhai,
jaise jaise kahani aage badh rahi hai suspence aur bhi badhata ja raha hai,
dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai
 
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Undoubtedly one of best and unique writer with unique writing skills.
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wonderfull story dear:applause:
 
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