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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 353 67.0%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 60 11.4%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 94 17.8%
  • Neha nirdosh hai

    Votes: 20 3.8%

  • Total voters
    527

neer

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You seems to be right.
It's a promise that your would definitely get remarks from me.
Thanks

Itna accha likhne ke liye dhanyawad aapko!
Aapne ekdum sahi estimate bataya ki 4-5 ghante araam se lag jaate hai, saath hi saath thread me readers ke reviews ka jawaab dena aur toh aur mere saath ek aur baat hai, wo ye ki mujhe pics aur gifs bhi daalne padte hai jo bilkul bhi saral kaam nahi hai.
Mera motivation fir se boost up karne ke liye dhanyawad!! Jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi updates de diya karunga mein ab.
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:lol1::lol1:
Abhi wo place dangerous nahi hui h bhai
Abhi toh yaha par Diwali chal rahi hai na...
Corona me time hai ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Bhai hamare yahan ((Hyderabad) me to Health Emergency Laga di gayi hai
 
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Kayi sare case ho gaye hai khas kar hotel ka khana khane wale to zyada hai hain
 
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bhai yaha to kuch anhoni hone wali hai aisa lagta hai.

sorry dear writer i an a silent reader but ab kur sailent nahiraha jata iskaran jo bhi kahani acchi lagti hai uspar baat jarur karta hu.
aapki story kafi acchi hai par abji jis moad par hai aisa lagta hai ki kuch galat hone wala hai ya yu kahi ki aisa andesha lag rha hai kahi master hamare hero ko apni tarah na banaye ya aisa kuch na maang le jisse hero ji jindaji me uthal puthal ho jaye .
waise intejar hai aage ke updates ka.
aasa hai aap aur bhi romanch laoge.
keep it up.
 

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bhai yaha to kuch anhoni hone wali hai aisa lagta hai.

sorry dear writer i an a silent reader but ab kur sailent nahiraha jata iskaran jo bhi kahani acchi lagti hai uspar baat jarur karta hu.
aapki story kafi acchi hai par abji jis moad par hai aisa lagta hai ki kuch galat hone wala hai ya yu kahi ki aisa andesha lag rha hai kahi master hamare hero ko apni tarah na banaye ya aisa kuch na maang le jisse hero ji jindaji me uthal puthal ho jaye .
waise intejar hai aage ke updates ka.
aasa hai aap aur bhi romanch laoge.
keep it up.
Boht boht dhanyawad bhai aapne aa kar itna accha review diya apna.
Sirf itna kahunga ki jald hi kahani ko naya mod milega. Aur uss mod ke baad jo updates aaenge wo boht hi emotional hone waale hai.
Shukriya!!
 

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Update - 56

Ab tak...


Master : mene tumhe jitna bhi abhi kuch sikhaaya hai usme mene tumhe kahi bhi koi bhi jaanleva move nahi sikhaaya. Par uss din tum ek ladke se chotil ho gaye the. Isliye ye sheher chorr ke jaane se pehle, inn 5-6 mahino me mein tumhe boht kuch sikhaane waala hu. Tum taiyaar ho?

Rahul : jii master!

Master : good! Ab baat aati hai guru dakshina ki. Toh woh mein tumse tab maangunga jab tum ye sheher chorr ke jaane lagoge.

Rahul : jii master...


Ab aage...

Rahul ko yu thodi derr khamosh paa kar master ne uski duwidha ke baare me pucha,
"Kya hua? Kya soch rahe ho?"

Rahul : mere mann me boht saare sawaal hai master. Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ye sab sunn kar. Aisa lag raha hai mein kisi film ki script sunn raha hu. Par ye sacchayi hai, aur isliye mera dimaag hil saa gaya hai.

Master : kese sawaal hai? Yadi mann me koi sawaal hai toh usse abhi puch lo.

Rahul : hmm! Master khushi ki maa yaani miss suzy jab iss duniya se chali gayi aur aap yaha aa gaye. Toh fir khushi ka kya? Usse toh bachpan se hi maa aur baap ka pyaar nahi mila hoga. Aapne aisa kyu kiya uske saath? Akeli hogi woh kitni...

Master rahul ki baat sunn thodi derr tak usse dekhte hai aur fir muskura dete hai,

Master (mann me) : mera nirnay sahi tha jo mene tumhe chuna.

Master : aisa isliye kyuki mere bhi kayi dushman hai aur mein nahi chaahta wo sab meri beti ko target kare, isliye mene usse inn sab se door rakha hai. Yaha tak ki school me bhi wo meri beti hai ye nahi bataati. Saara kaam Mike sambhaalta hai, aur mike ko hi uska pita bataate hai.

Rahul : accha! Par aapne kaha ki 18 saal ke hote hi khushi ko aap yaha le aaoege. Tab uski jaan ko khatra nahi hoga?

Master (mann me) : isliye toh tumhe chuna hai rahul.

Master : wo baad ki baad me dekhenge. Ab tum jao, monica tumhara boht derr se intezaar kar rahi hai.

Rahul : j...jii master

Master : aur suno... Wo... Wo richa kesi hai ab?

Rahul : hmm? Richa? Wo thik hai master.

Master : hmm! Ab bhi tumhari gf hai?

Rahul (blush) : umm haa...

Master : thik hai! Jao ab.

Neeche aate hi monica rahul pe toot padti hai aur apna surprise maangne lagti hai.

Monica : kaha hai mera surprise? Do jaldi.

"Baap re! Miss monica toh peeche hi pad gayi. Ab inhe kaha se surprise du? Kya du? Inke paas toh wese bhi paisa boht hai. Toh bhala mein kya gift de sakta hu inko? Hmm!... Aree haa! Chalo yahi karta hu. Yadi wo khush nahi hui toh maafi maang lunga" rahul ne mann me socha.

Rahul : aap chaliye! Ready ho jaiye. Hum baahar chal rahe hai.

Monica : kaha?

Rahul : aap ready toh ho jaiye pehle.

Jab tak monica ready ho rahi thi tab tak rahul bungalow ke peeche jaakar uss buzurg aur uski poti se bhi milta hai.
Thodi hi derr me monica ready hoke aa jaati hai aur jo dress usne pehni thi wo uspe boht hi khubsoorat lag rahi thi
Monica ko dekh rahul ki aankhein hi chaundhiya jaati hai

Rahul (mann me) : yes. She's definitely out of my league. I wonder kon wo Lucky husband hoga jo inse shaadi karega

Monica : kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Rahul : aap ...aap boht hi khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Monica (blush) : chal abhi mere saath flirting nahi...okay?

Rahul : mene sirf sach kaha.

Monica (blush) : o...ok. thank you.

Fir rahul apni bike pe monica ko baitha ke le jaata hai, raaste bhar rahul ko uski peeth par do anmol ratno ka ehsaas hota raha jiske maze usne bharpoor liye bike ko baar baar brake laga kar aur aise karte karte wo apni manzil pohuch hi gaye.

Monica : sun city?

Rahul : jii haa! Aap aayi ho yaha?

Monica : haa! Sirf ek baar.

Rahul (surprised) : sirf ek baar?

Monica : haa! Kabhi samay hi nahi milta

Rahul : chaliye aap mere saath

Rahul monica ko pakad ke roller coaster ride ke paas le jaata hai, jisse dekh monica ko thoda darr lagne lagta hai.

Monica : tum ye mat kehna ki hum isme baithne waale hai!?

Rahul : aur nahi toh kya!? Toh kya mein aapko sirf yaha dikhaane laaya hu kya?
Ab chaliye

Monica : nooooooo wait!!! Rahul! Mujhe mujhe heights se boht darr lagta hai. Ye ride nahi karte hai na... Kahi aur chalte hai.

Rahul : aaj aapka darr bhi nikaal dunga aur aapko enjoy bhi karwaunga.

Monica ke kayi baar mana karne ke baad bhi rahul ne uski ek na suni aur uske haath ko pakad ke kheech ke le gaya. Thik wese hi jese ek chota baccha school ke pehle din na jaane ke liye virodh karta hai, wese hi abhi monica virodh kar rahi thi.

Ant me dono roller coaster par sawaar the aur monica ka dil zoro se dhadak raha tha. Usne aaj se pehle kabhi kisi ride ki sawari nahi ki thi, pehli baat usse darr lagta tha, dusri baat uske paas inn sab ke liye time hi nahi rehta tha aur teesri baat yadi aati bhi toh kiske saath? Master aur bheema ke alaawa uske saare contacts business se hi related the. No friends, no best friends, no lover, no family. Kaafi akeli thi. Aur master aur bheema ke saath ride lene toh aa nahi sakti thi. Usse ek friend ki zaroorat thi, ye baat uska dil jaanta tha par dimaag nahi.

Isliye wo rahul se jab pehli baar mili thi toh uske saath flirting kiya karti, usse lagta ki rahul ke saath uska kuch relation toh hai kam se kam. Bhale hi rahul flirting ka jawaab nahi deta tha par dono me kam se kam baat toh hoti thi. Monica ye sab anjaane me hi karti thi ya yu kahe ki ye sab uska dil karwaata tha jo ki tanhaayi me kedd tha

Monica ne rahul ka haath kass ke thaam liya. Ek ladki hone ke bawajood uski pakad waqai boht mazboot thi. Rahul bhi surprised tha iss baat se. Wo mann me soch raha tha ki yadi monica ne kabhi kisi ko kass ke hug kiya ya kass ke kisi ko jakda tab uski haalat kya hoegi? Aisi pakad me uss insaan ko maza aaega ya fir usse dard hoega? Usne saare thoughts ko alag kiya, socha ki ye sab kya sochne laga wo yaha par?

Usne gehri saas lekar saara ka saara force jo monica uske haath ko bheech kar laga rahi thi usse hasste hue accept kiya aur fir chaalu hui ride.
Roller coaster ke aage badhte hi monica ki jese jaan nikal gayi ho. Usse yahi khayaal aa raha tha ki yadi galti se wo kahi neeche tapak gayi toh wo toh pakke se hamesha ke liye upar pohuch jaegi.

Monica (mann me) : paagal kahi ka... Kaha aa gayi mein iske saath. Uwaaaaaaa
*Cries* mein gayi... Mein gayi...

Upar roller coaster aate hi ekdum se dheere ho gaya. Aur ab baari thi sabse khatarnak pal ki. Aap sabhi toh jaante hi honge. Jab ride upar se ekdum se neeche aati hai.

Monica : slow ho gaya? Kya hua? Khatam ho gaya kya?

Rahul (hasste hue) : hahahahahaaa

Tabhi ekdum se ride seedhe neeche ki or tezzi se palat jaati hai aur full speed me neeche girne lagti hai,

Monica (chilaate hue) : waaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Jese tese ride khatam hui toh monica ki shaqal dekhne layak thi. Rahul ki hassi hi nahi rukk rahi thi. Monica ko aur tezz gussa aane lagta hai. Toh rahul uske liye kuch khaane ke liye snacks laa kar deta hai.

Monica : itna bekaar surprise dete hue tumhe sharam nahi aayi?

Rahul : abhi kaha bekaar? Abhi toh ek baar aur bacha hai

Monica (shocked) : whaaaaaaattttttt?

Rahul : haa! Tabhi toh aapka darr kam hoega. Warna aise toh aur badhega.

Aur monica ke firse kayi baar mana karne ke baad bhi rahul monica ko thaam ke ek baar aur ride karwa deta hai. Par hairaani waali baat ye thi ki waqai iss baar monica ko darr kam laga. Jis kaaran wo boht khush thi.

Fir rahul monica ko leke horror house ke saamne aa jaata hai. Ek baar fir monica saamne horror house ki entrance ko dekh ghabra jaati hai.

Aur laakh mana karne ke baad bhi rahul firse usse kheech kar le jaata hai. Monica rahul se kisi bel ki tarah lipat gayi thi. Uske uroj rahul ke badan se aise chipke the maano wo rahul ke hi shareer ka ang ho.

Harr jumpscare pe monica ucchal jaati aur rahul se chipak jaati, mann hi mann rahul apne idea ki tareef kar raha tha aur khud par usse bada proud ho raha tha. Itni khubsoorat ladki uske saath chipak ke chal rahi thi. Kayi log usse jalan bhari nazaro se dekh rahe the.

Rahul ne horror house me bhi do baar monica ko enter karwaaya jiske chalte monica ka wo darr bhi kam ho gaya. End me dono ne masti kii, jhule bhi jhoole aur khaana peena khaaya, totally enjoy kiya. Fir ek park me aake baith gaye.

Monica : toh ye tha tumhara surprise?

Rahul : jii!

Monica : toh? Tumhe pata kese chala ki mujhe bhooto se aur uchaayi se darr lagta hai?

Rahul : yaha aane se pehle master se pucha tha.

Monica : ohh! Mujhe toh laga tha tum mujhe kuch gift doge ya fir koi treat doge.

Rahul : wo bhi kar sakta tha. Par aapke paas toh wese bhi mujh se zyada paisa hai. Aap ko bhala mein kya gift de sakta tha? Mera gift koi sasta hi hota. Mujhe pata tha ki aap hamesha kaam me hi lagi rehti ho aur khud aap kabhi enjoy nahi karti. Mene toh kabhi nahi dekha aapko. Isliye mene socha, aapko yaha launga, aapka darr bhi kam ho jaega, aur aap enjoy bhi kar logi. Aap ko bhi apne kaam se thoda relaxation milega. Yadi aap ko nahi pasand aaya ho toh koi baat nahi, mein maafi maangta hu.

*Silence*

Thodi derr ki chuppi ke baad monica ki ankh me aasu aa jaate hai aur wo apna rumaal nikal usse pochne lagti hai.

Rahul : shayad aapko waqai pasand nahi aaya

Uske itna kehte hi monica usse baaho me jakad leti hai. Rahul ko iski umeed nahi thi. Kuch derr baad monica usse chorr ke uske gaalo ko pakadti hai aur fir aage badh ke rahul ke gaal ko chum leti hai.



Monica : tumne aisa soch bhi kese liya ki mujhe pasand nahi aaega? Aaj ka din meri zindagi ka sabse yaadgaar din rahega. Thanks for giving me such a beautiful surprise rahul.

Monica rahul ko pyaar bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi aur uske gaal sehla rahi thi. Aas paas baithe couples bhi rahul aur monica ko taad rahe the, ladke toh jalan bhari nazro se hi dekh rahe the. Wo sab yahi soch rahe the ki saala itni badi item iske pyaar me giri kese?

Rahul (blush) : wese aapne kabhi apni family ke baare me nahi bataya... Aapke mom dad kaha hai?

Monica : wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai. Mere pita jii underworld mafia me gerr kanooni kaam karte the. Par meri mom ko iski koi khabar nahi thi aur naa hi mujhe. Ek baar unhone kisi aise aadmi se panga le liya, jisne hamaara poora ghar ujaad diya. Uss waqt mein 20 saal ki thi. Mein bhi nahi bachti par shayad uparwaale ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha. Tab master ne hi mujhe bachaya tha. Aur aaj mein yaha tumhaare saamne hu.

Uski baat sunn rahul ekdum chaunk jaata hai.

Rahul (mann me) : matlab miss monica 6 saal se bina mom dad ke hai? Unka toh koi friend bhi nahi hai... Ek minute!! Matlab monica miss mere saath isliye flirting karti thi? Taaki wo mere saath friendship kar sake? Aur mein yaha unhe ignore maarta rehta tha ye sochke ki wo meri aukaat se baahar hai... Kitna bewakoof hu yaar mein. Unhe toh bas... Bas ek dost ki zaroorat thi. Aur mein.. unhe wo bhi na de saka. Par unhone direct mujhse kyu nahi kaha? Shayad yahi inka andaaz hai? Unhone mujhe hint karne ki koshish ki thi, jisse mein samajh na saka. Waqai...mein sach me boht hi naa samajh hu.

Monica (mann me) : nahi chorrungi uss haraam zaade ko... Apne mom dad ki maut ka badla mein leke rahungi.

Idhar rahul ke ghar se jaane ke baad vanshu roti hui rahul ke kamre me aayi aur bed par bilakhte hue rone lagi. Aaj ke pehle usse itni peeda kabhi nahi hui thi. Peeche peeche tanisha bhi uske peeche aayi kyuki rahul ne ishaara kiya tha usse, matlab ye tha ki vanshu ko manaana hai.

Tanisha ne pyaar se vanshu ke sar par haath fera toh vanshu ne sar utha ke dekha, tanisha ko saamne dekh ke uske dil ki peeda aur bhi badh gayi aur usne wapas se sar jhuka kar rona shuru kar diya.

Koi aa na jae aur ye na puchne lage ki vanshu kyu ro rahi hai isliye tanisha ne uth ke door ko andar se hi lock kar diya aur fir uske paas jaa kar baith gayi.

Tanisha : baap re baap, itne saare mote mote aasu?? Aise bhi koi rota hai bhala? Poori aankhein aur naak bhi laal ho gayi hai tumhaari toh.

Vanshu (rote hue) : please aap jaiye yaha se. Mujhe akela chorr dijiye.

Tanisha : accha? Mein chali jau? Mujhe toh laga tha ki tum rahul se pyaar karti ho isliye mein tumhe ek khush khabri dene aayi thi. Par lagta hai tumhe meri baat hi nahi sunn na toh...
Thik hai chali jaati hu.

Tanisha uthne ko hui toh vanshu ne uska haath pakad liya. Chehra poora aasuo se bheega hua tha. Vanshu ki ye haalat dekh tanisha ko uspe bada hi taras aaya akhir wo bhi toh kabhi apni feelings ko dabaane ki koshish karti thi, wo bhi toh rahul ko bhai maanti thi. Tanisha samajh sakti thi ki ek bhai ko pyaar karne par kitni musibato ka saamna karna padta hai, aur vanshu toh cousin behan thi rahul ki. Apne pyaar ka izhaar kese kar sakti hai sabke saamne? Shayad usme abhi itni himmat nahi thi.

Vanshu : ke..kesi khush khabri?

Tanisha : toh tum sunn na chaahti ho?

Vanshu : *nods*

Tanisha (smiles) : khush khabri ye hai ki tum rahul se pyaar kar sakti ho.

Vanshu : ?????

Tanisha aage badh vanshu ko apne gale se laga leti hai aur fir kehna start karti hai,
"Mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi rahul se behad pyaar karti ho Vanshika. Jab hum mere clinic me pehli baar mile the. Uss waqt hi mujhe iss baat ka abhaas ho gaya tha. Balki yadi sach kahu, toh tumhaara haq uspe mujhse pehle hai. Mujhe pata hai tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho, rahul ne ye baat mujhe batayi hai pehle bhi. Toh isliye mein tumhe ye bataana chaahti hu ki... Meri taraf se koi bhi bandish nahi hai vanshika. Tum khul ke rahul se pyaar kar sakti ho. Mein tumhara poora support karungi. Aaj se tum meri chhoti behan jesi ho."

Tanisha ki baat sunn vanshu hairaani se usse dekhti hai.

Vanshu : toh...toh kya aap cutie se pyaar nahi karogi?

Tanisha : uske pyaar ke bina toh mein jee hi nahi sakti ab. Mein bhi usse pyaar karti hu. Mere kehne ka matlab ye hai ki hum teeno hi rahul se pyaar karenge aur hum teeno hi isme ek dusre ko support karenge.

Vanshu : teeno??

Tanisha : haa! Tum , mein aur richa.

Vanshu : ri...richa?

Fir tanisha vanshu ko saari baat samjhaati hai ki richa aur rahul ke beech ka relationship kya hai. Vanshu udaas zaroor thi par khush bhi thi kyuki usse rahul se pyaar karne ka mauqa jo mil gaya tha.

Tanisha : dekho! I know ki tum thodi possessive ho rahul ko lekar. Par tumhe ek baat abhi se apne dimaag me baithaani padegi vanshu. Wo ye ki hum sab rahul ki hai. Sirf rahul tumhara hai aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai. Tumhe ye baat mann se hataani padegi ki rahul sirf tumhaara hai samjhi? Tumhe bas ye soch ke chalna hai ki tum bhi rahul ki premika me se ek ho aur rahul sabko equally pyaar karega. Kisi se kam ya kisi se zyaada nahi. Okay!?

Tanisha ke acche se samjhaane par vanshu kaafi hadd tak samajh chuki thi ki wo rahul ko baandh kar apne paas nahi rakh sakti. Wo sab rahul ki hai aur rahul bhi sab ka hai. Kisi ek ka nahi.

Tanisha : wese!? Tumhe kab rahul se pyaar hua vanshu?

Vanshu : t..teen saal pehle didi.

Tanisha : ohhh! Aisa kya hua tha?

Vanshu ek nazar tanisha ki taraf ghumaati hai jo pyaar se uski taraf dekh rahi thi. Koi bhi chhal kapat waale bhaaw nahi the unn aankho me.

Tanisha (smiles) : tum mujhse share kar sakti ho. Ab toh tum meri choti behan ho na?

Vanshu : mujhe androphobia tha.

Tanisha (shocked) : whaaaaaaattttttt?

{Androphobia ka matlab hai purusho se darr. Kisi bhi Male se atyant darrna. Unke paas aane se uncomfortable feel karna, unhe dekh ke darr jaana. Aap adhik jankaari ke liye google kar sakte hai}

Tanisha : toh fir?? Fir??

Vanshu : teen saal pehle mein sexual assault ka shikaar ho gayi thi, kuch darinde mere saath zabardasti karna chaahte the. Uss waqt cutie hi tha jisne mujhe bachaaya tha. Par uss dauraan cutie ko boht chot aayi thi aur usse admit bhi hona pada tha. Uska asar ye tha ki mujhe har ek aadmi se darr lagta, unse nafrat hone lagi thi. Bas cutie se hi mein thoda baat karti thi. Par darr mujhe uss se bhi lagta tha.

Tanisha : fir?

Vanshu : fir usne mere saath reh reh ke mujhe itne patience se sambhaala aur mujhe uss daldal se baahar nikaala. Mujhe MBA karne baahar jaana pada, mein jaana nahi chaahti thi par fir bhi gayi. Mene kese 3 saal guzaare hai ye mein hi jaanti hu. Usne sab kuch mere liye kiya tha. Mujhe... Mujhe uske saath ek special attachment sa feel hota hai. Mein chaahti hu ki sirf wahi mere paas rahe. Par mein ab samajh chuki hu...ki... Cutie hum sabka hai.

Tanisha vanshu ko baaho me bhar leti hai aur dono ek dusre se baatein kar aur bhi close hote jaate hai.

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Idhar jab tanisha aur vanshu andar thi toh nisha bhi apne room me aa chuki thi. Taniya aur neha tv dekhne me vyast thi par dono ka mann kahi aur tha.

Neha (mann me) : toh iski shaadi ye tanisha didi se hoegi? Hmph! Chalo accha hai, bechaari richa didi toh bach gayi iske changul se. Warna mujhe nikki ke liye bura lagta. Par uss din ki baat bhuli nahi hu mein. Uski himmat kese hui mera haath marodne ki?? Itni himmat usme kab se aa gayi?? Kehta hai mein uss se kabhi behtar nahi ho sakti? Abee mein dikhaungi tujhe ki better hona kise kehte hai... Iska kuch karna padega saala zyaada hawa me udne laga hai. Mom se chhup kar kuch karna padega.

Idhar nisha ke room me anshu enter karti hai jo apne perro par nail polish laga rahi thi

Nisha : anshu? Kya hua beta?

Andar aate hi anshu door ko andar se lock kar deti hai aur nisha ke paas aakar baith ti hai,

Anshu (mann me) : ab mere plan ka first step shuru karne ka sahi mauka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Shukriya!!
 

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Good one keep writing

Wow sandar mast update tha.. dekhte hai tanisha vanshu ko kaise samjhati hai aur pata na anshu kaisa plan bana rahi hai.. Taniya ko bhi rahul se pyar ho gaya hai.. neha ko chhod kar sab ke sab rahul ko apne sath rakhna chahti hai uske sath time bitana chahti hai.. but uske sath time bita nahi pa rahi hai.. aur nirash ho kar rah ja rahi hai.. and Monica ko kaisa gift dega rahul jabki wo kuchh to le kar gaya hi nahi hai.. and master rahul me bahut jyada dilchaspi le rahe hai.. unhe rahul me apna master li dikhte hai... and abb rahul martial arts fir se join karega.. bass neha se agar nisha jabardasti rahul ko tika karwati to aur maja aata.. and abb neha aur rahul me conversation hona chahiye chahe wo jhagda kare ya ek dusre ko tana mare.. anyways bro sandar update tha.. dekhte hai aage kya hoga...

Shandar update tha bhai .
Lagta hai age chalke gurudakshana
Me Master ki beti milegi shayad..
Waiting for the next one bhai...
Keep writing like this.

Nice updates

Sandar update bhai super mind blowing updates bhai congratulations for 300 hundred pages on the story bhai

:budhabudhi:
Sandaar.....
Jabardast...
Aakhir master ka raaj khul hi gayaaaa...
Ab aate he family ki taraf...
Nisha ne sach me bomb hi fod diya..
Kya vanshu ko ye rishta bhayega ya nahi...??
Aage dekhte he.....

300 oages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan bhai....


Super. मे बस यही कहूंगा कि बढ़िया कहानी और एक बात आपने पिछले अपडेट मे मेरी मन कि एक इच्छा पूरी कि tanisa ko राहुल कि पत्नी बनाने की
लेकिन प्लीज vansu को मत जाने देना चाहो तो richa को जाने देना. लेकिन vansu को नहीं बाकि आपकी मर्जी., और अब जल्दी से अगला अपडेट देना इंतजार नहीं हो रहा कि राहुल vansu को कैसे संभालता है ?

Super bhai kiya update tha ab bhot kuch aamne ane waka he ab story bhot interesting hoti jha rahi he ab bhot maza ai ga aur ahe ka bhi intzar hoga rahul ki love life rahul ki family aur ab master apna giyan dega rahul ko jab age chal ker aur bhi maza ai ga

Shander update

Mast update kafi emotional or sadness thi master ki story me pr mera andaza hai (sirf andaza hai confirm nahi) ke shayad master guru dakshina me rahul ko unki beti se shadi karne keliye kahen jo sahi bhi rahega

Ye to cheating hai, must chal raha tha or update khatam ho gaye cheating hai ye to..

superb updates, waiting for next.

Master is rahasmayi

last update faltu h

Lg rha h Master gurudakshina m Khushi se shaadi krne ko na bol de.

Mast update bhai master chen ki kaphi dukhat bhari jindagi jiya hai ab rahul ko bodyguard ka naukri na karna pade master chen ki beti ki aur ab Monica ko kiya surprise degi dekhte hai

Waiting 4 next, tanisha ne vishu ko kaise manaya. Khushi ki entry abhi late h. After six month period.

Kahin aisa na ho, guru dakshina m khushi se shadi ki bat hi kare

Awsome Story Bhai

Mind blowing update bro

Mujhe laga raha ya master hero sa apni beti ki yan phir monica ki shadi karwana chahchahta ha

Super Bhai Abhi Ko Sare Part Katam kiye Bhai Super Story hai bhai mai bus itana kahana chatah hu bhai app ne suru me kaha tha ki ye realistic story hai to is plot se bahar jayi najar aarahi hai bhai koi ladaka kitani ladaki ke sath rah sakata hai Bhai ek ho jaye do ho jaye psr bhai app to sabhi ke sath us ki Marriage kara de rahe ho


Nice Updates. :perfect:

Nice update

Sandarrrr update bhai

Master ki beti se shadi

awesome update guru ji dekho kya mangte hai last me :D

Nice update bro aage ka anshu ka plan jaanne ka intezar rahega

Lone wolf भाई अपडेट कौन से दिन आएगा. इंतजार नहीं हो रहा है भाई. Tanisa वंसु का कन्वर्सेशन मे क्या होता है vansu का क्या रिएक्शन होता है tanisa क्या कहती है और मास्टर जी गुरु दक्षिणा मे क्या मांगते है?
Waiting for अपडेट sir जी

Waiting bhai

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai .
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar

Shaandar update

Waiting for the next update.......

India se China.....? Dangerous Place?


Fantastic update brother keep posting
Waiting for the next update
Thank you

Awesome update

Nice update

Zabardast update

You seems to be right.
It's a promise that your would definitely get remarks from me.
Thanks

Kayi sare case ho gaye hai khas kar hotel ka khana khane wale to zyada hai hain

bhai yaha to kuch anhoni hone wali hai aisa lagta hai.

sorry dear writer i an a silent reader but ab kur sailent nahiraha jata iskaran jo bhi kahani acchi lagti hai uspar baat jarur karta hu.
aapki story kafi acchi hai par abji jis moad par hai aisa lagta hai ki kuch galat hone wala hai ya yu kahi ki aisa andesha lag rha hai kahi master hamare hero ko apni tarah na banaye ya aisa kuch na maang le jisse hero ji jindaji me uthal puthal ho jaye .
waise intejar hai aage ke updates ka.
aasa hai aap aur bhi romanch laoge.
keep it up.
Update has been posted guys!!
 
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