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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Bahut hi sandar majedar update hai Bhai..
Nanu ka ehsas ho gya khirki PR koi hai. .
Rudra ki sis ko ek black says dikhai deta hai jisse SB bahne dar jati hai but rudra.nhidarta ..bail ka role explain nhi hua Avi tk..
Rudra ke maa ko ehsas hua koi hai Jo uske Ghar Mai dera jamana chahta hai.
Ab rudra Bina ruke bol skta hao awesome...
Dekhna dilcasp hoga wo saya Kon tha
Bahut hi sandar majedar update hai Bhai..
Nanu ka ehsas ho gya khirki PR koi hai. .
Rudra ki sis ko ek black says dikhai deta hai jisse SB bahne dar jati hai but rudra.nhidarta ..bail ka role explain nhi hua Avi tk..
Rudra ke maa ko ehsas hua koi hai Jo uske Ghar Mai dera jamana chahta hai.
Ab rudra Bina ruke bol skta hao awesome...
Dekhna dilcasp hoga wo saya Kon tha
Rudara apni behno ko bolta he pita ji bula rahe he . Teeno behno uske piche piche apne pita ke pass aati he. Varman ridhi ko dekhta he uska chehra uttra hua tha. Varman bolta he ridhi bitiya tum ghar me sab se badi ho samjhdar ho agar tum hi ase darogi to apne bhai behno ko kya khayal rakho hi. Ridhi boli he sorry pita ji aage se aisa nahi hoga. Varman bolta he jab tum log aaj nahi jaa rahe ho to mera ek kaam karoge . Sab haa me sar hila dete he. Varman bolta he baat ye he ki puja kuch dino me he. Or tumhare bhai ke liye pehle mane jungali janwar lane ka socha tha. Fir guru ji ne bola ki me kuch maveshi kharid kar ghar me rakhu. Jis se rudra ka man laga rahega. Is liye me gaye bhans bakari kharidane jaa raha hu.
Ab me jab janwar launga to unko ghar chahiye. Mane Sohan (jo ki gav me jjhopadiya banane ka ek acha karigar he ) ko bulaya he. Saman ke liye use paise de chuka hu. Or janwaro ke liye ek achi jhopadi banwani. Tum sab bas itna karo ghar ke sath me jo jagah he use saf kar do ghas fus sab ukhad do. Me or tumhare dada janwaro ki Mandi jaa rahe he. Ab sham tak hi aana hoga. Leela boli jab aap lekar aa hi rahe ho to bache wali hi gaye bhans kharidane. Kum se kum humare bete ko dudh pine ki kami to nahi hogi. Varman bola thi he bhagawan jesa tum kaho leela bacho ko fresh hone ka bol bahar dudh lene chali jati he. Teeno fresh hone chali jati he. Rudra papi ke sath ghar ke bahar tehlane lagta. Tabhi uski nazar bell par padti he jo betha use hi dekh raha tha.
Rudra bhi apne ghar ki chokhat par beth kar use dekhane lagta he. Tabhi ek admi badbadte huye jata he pata nahi kaha se aa gaya ye bell bach ke rehna hoga kahi mar war na de. Papi rudra ki pent pakad khichane lagta he. Jis se rudra khada ho jata he or papi ke piche piche chal padta he. Papi sidha bell ke pass ja ke khada ho jata he. Rudra bhi bell ke pass ja ke khada ho jata he . Rudra ko apne pass dekh bell bhi khada ho jata he 7 fut ka lumba chota bell ek dum Nandi ki tarah dikh raha tha uske bade bade sing bata rahe the mujhse punga liya na pichwade me hi gusaunga . Rudra uske pass jata he . Bell apna sar niche kar leta he. Jise dekh vo uske sar par hath ferta he. Papi bell ki puch ko pakadne ki nakam koshish karta he .
Fir rudra nanu ko bolta he ghalo ghar maa dudh degi humko. Nanu uske piche piche nanu ke piche bell . Teeno ghar ke jab pass pahuchta he to rudra mod ke dekhta he bell bhi uske piche piche aa raha he. Rudra bolta he tumko bhi dudh pina he jo humare sath aa rahe ho. Bell bas rudra ko dekh raha tha vo uski baat samjha ki nahi samjha vo hi Jane. Rudra fir chalne lagta he. Bell fir piche piche laga rehta he. Teeno ghar pahuch jate he. Rudra bolta he maa ko bulau bell fir kuch nhi karta. Rudra apni maa ke pass jata he. Leela bolti he bus 5 minutes beta dudh thoda garam ho jaye. Rudra bolta he koi aaya he. Leela sochti he kon subhah subhah aa gaya. Vo puchti he kon he beta. Rudra bolta he bell.
Leela rasoi ghar se bahar dekhti he to such me ek bell apni mundi ghar ke andar karke khada he uska chehra bata rahe the use kuch chahiye. Leela bolti he beta raat ki roti he or to kuch he nahi aisa kar tu ye rotiya bell ko daal aa . Haa beta dur se dalna kahi mar na de. Rudra rotiya uthata he . Tabhi vidhi aa jati he vidhi puchti he bhai kaha gaye the. Rudra bolta he bell ke pass. Vidhi ko kuch samjh nahi aaya vo fir se puchti he kon bell rudra use hath ke ishare se dikhata. Darwaje par bell dekh vo dar jati he. Rudra rotiya lekar bell ke pass aata he vo bolta he abhi yahi he. Khana he to sar hila warna nhi dunga. Bell haa me sar hila deta he. Vidhi ye sab dur se dekh rahi thi rudra ek ek roti use khila raha tha. Nanu uske pass betha use dekh raha tha.
Bell roti kha ke piche moda rudra ko laga vo jaa raha he par nahi vo ghar ke bahar hi Beth gaya. Leela ne ye dekha to bolti ye kya Nandi maharaj aap yahi par beth gaye jaiye kahi ghumkar aaiye. Tab tak taja khana bana khana bana kar rakhungi. Bell Jese leela ki baat samjh gaya ho vo utha vo aage bad gaya. Rudra bola ma ye bell he Nandi maharaj to pita ji bolte he khelash me rehte he. Leela rudra ke galo ko sehla kar bolti he ye sab bhi unka hi roop he beta. Rudra bell ko jate huye dekhta he. Vo bell uski akho se ojhal ho jata he. Leela bolti he ab use takana chor or chal dudh garam hokar thanda ho gaya hoga pi le mujhe khana bana he. Teri behne to aaj madad nhi karne wali or tere pita ji ne jo kaam bola he use karengi. Rudra maa ke sath rasoi me jata he or apne or nanu ke liye ek ek gilas dudh ka lekar bahar aata he.
Dono dudh pite pite ek dusre ko dekhte he. Rudra jab bhi nanu ko dekhta vo use dekh puch hilane lagta. Nanu ne apna dudh khatam kar liya or rudra ki taraf dekhne laga. Rudra bola me nhi dunga. Par nanu kaha manane wala tha vo uske aage piche kudane laga. Rudra bola bola na nhi dunga ye mera he. Tu jiyada chalak mat ban jaldi jaldi apna pi liya or mera mung raha he me nhi dunga uski awaj sun kar leela bahar aa jati he leela boli kya hua beta kiss se baat kar rahe ho .rudra bola maa dekho ye khud ko bahut chalak samjhta he apna dudh jaldi jaldi pi liya ab mera mung raha he me nahi dunga ise. Leela apne bete ke bhole pan par bolti he thik he me de deti hu . Leela andar se dudh laa kar deti he .nanu pine lagta he. Dudh pine ke baad rudra apne behno ke pass jata he.
Idhar sidhi ridhi vidhiya ghar ke sath ki jamin saf kar rahi hoti he. Bahut si ghas or jungali bel ug aai thi. Ridhi bolti he dhayan se jungali ghas he mane suna he aisi khas me kankhajure hote he or saap bichu bhi. To apna dhayan rakhana kuch bhi dekhna to turant bhag jana. Rudra bolta he me karu. Vidhi bolti he ha bhai aao. Fir charo ghas ukhad ukhad ke ek taraf rakhate he bahut hi jiyada ghas thi. Unke pasine nikal gaye the. Masum bacho ne kabhi aisi mehnat nahi ki thi or kuch jungali ghas ukhad hi nahi rahi thi. Tabhi unko bell aata hua dikhai diya ridhi boli sidhi vidhi bhai ko lekar bhag ye humari taraf aa raha he kahi mare naa. Rudra bola aap didi bahut darti ho. Ridhi boli kya baat he ek hi din me bahut bolne laga he kahi raat ka bhoot to nahi tere andar ghus gaya .
Rudra bolta he mere andar bhoot thode he. Me nahi darta bhoot se vo darte he mujhse. Tabhi sidhi boli bada aaya darane wala school me bacho se darta he or bolta he me nahi darta. Rudra ka muh chota sa ho jata he. Tabhi bell rudra ke pass aa ke khada ho jata he. Rudra use bolta he. Kuch nahi he mere pass khane ko khana he to ye sari ghas kha maa kuch nahi degi abhi. Tabhi vo bell ghas khane laga. Charo use ghas charte huye dekh rahe the. Vo jungali ghas ko apne sing me fasa fasa ke ukhad raha tha naram ghas kha jata or moti ghas fek deta. Ye dil sila 2 ghante chala charo bhai behen use dekhte rahe . Bell ne sari khas ukhad di thi. Ab bas inko thodi bahut safai karni thi. Jisme jiyada waqt nhi lagne wala tha. Ridhi vidhi ko bolti he ghar me se tokariya lekar aao is ghas ko utha kar bagiche ki taraf fek dete he. Vidhi teen tokariya lekar aati he ridhi rudra ko bolti he bhai bas dal kar utha do hum fek aayenge.
Rudra vesa hi karta he 1 ghante me jagah khadi. Fir Sohan apne sathiyo ke sath aa jata he. Sohan apne sathiyo ko jamin samthal karne ko bolta he. Or khud lai hui chijo se kaam karne lagta he. 10 baj gaye the. Leela bacho ko bulati he. Charo apni maa ke pass jate he. Leela puchti he kaam khatam ho gaya. Ridhi bolti he haa maa aap ko kya laga hum se hoga nhi. Leela bolti jao hath muh dho lo khana ban gaya he dadi ko bhi bula lo khana kha le. Fir sab hath muh dho ke dadi ko bula lete he or khana khate he. Nanu rudra ke pass betha tha. Leela ne dudh me roti tod kar use bhi daal diya vo bhi khane laga. Rudra bolta he maa Nandi maharaj ne bhi ghas uthadane me madad ki he unko bhi roti do naa. leela bolti he tum log khao me unko bhi de dungi fir sab khana kha lete he. Leela Nandi maharaj ko bhi roti sabji daalne ke liye rudra ko de deti he.Rudra bell jo ki uske ghar ke pass hi betha hua tha uske pass gaya or bola ye lo kha lo vese to bahut khas kha li ab roti kha lo me maa se mung ke laya hu samjhe chup chap kha lena. Fir rudra waha se nanu ke sath ghar aa jata he. Or khelne lag jata he.
Ab me jab janwar launga to unko ghar chahiye. Mane Sohan (jo ki gav me jjhopadiya banane ka ek acha karigar he ) ko bulaya he. Saman ke liye use paise de chuka hu. Or janwaro ke liye ek achi jhopadi banwani. Tum sab bas itna karo ghar ke sath me jo jagah he use saf kar do ghas fus sab ukhad do. Me or tumhare dada janwaro ki Mandi jaa rahe he. Ab sham tak hi aana hoga. Leela boli jab aap lekar aa hi rahe ho to bache wali hi gaye bhans kharidane. Kum se kum humare bete ko dudh pine ki kami to nahi hogi. Varman bola thi he bhagawan jesa tum kaho leela bacho ko fresh hone ka bol bahar dudh lene chali jati he. Teeno fresh hone chali jati he. Rudra papi ke sath ghar ke bahar tehlane lagta. Tabhi uski nazar bell par padti he jo betha use hi dekh raha tha.
Rudra bhi apne ghar ki chokhat par beth kar use dekhane lagta he. Tabhi ek admi badbadte huye jata he pata nahi kaha se aa gaya ye bell bach ke rehna hoga kahi mar war na de. Papi rudra ki pent pakad khichane lagta he. Jis se rudra khada ho jata he or papi ke piche piche chal padta he. Papi sidha bell ke pass ja ke khada ho jata he. Rudra bhi bell ke pass ja ke khada ho jata he . Rudra ko apne pass dekh bell bhi khada ho jata he 7 fut ka lumba chota bell ek dum Nandi ki tarah dikh raha tha uske bade bade sing bata rahe the mujhse punga liya na pichwade me hi gusaunga . Rudra uske pass jata he . Bell apna sar niche kar leta he. Jise dekh vo uske sar par hath ferta he. Papi bell ki puch ko pakadne ki nakam koshish karta he .
Fir rudra nanu ko bolta he ghalo ghar maa dudh degi humko. Nanu uske piche piche nanu ke piche bell . Teeno ghar ke jab pass pahuchta he to rudra mod ke dekhta he bell bhi uske piche piche aa raha he. Rudra bolta he tumko bhi dudh pina he jo humare sath aa rahe ho. Bell bas rudra ko dekh raha tha vo uski baat samjha ki nahi samjha vo hi Jane. Rudra fir chalne lagta he. Bell fir piche piche laga rehta he. Teeno ghar pahuch jate he. Rudra bolta he maa ko bulau bell fir kuch nhi karta. Rudra apni maa ke pass jata he. Leela bolti he bus 5 minutes beta dudh thoda garam ho jaye. Rudra bolta he koi aaya he. Leela sochti he kon subhah subhah aa gaya. Vo puchti he kon he beta. Rudra bolta he bell.
Leela rasoi ghar se bahar dekhti he to such me ek bell apni mundi ghar ke andar karke khada he uska chehra bata rahe the use kuch chahiye. Leela bolti he beta raat ki roti he or to kuch he nahi aisa kar tu ye rotiya bell ko daal aa . Haa beta dur se dalna kahi mar na de. Rudra rotiya uthata he . Tabhi vidhi aa jati he vidhi puchti he bhai kaha gaye the. Rudra bolta he bell ke pass. Vidhi ko kuch samjh nahi aaya vo fir se puchti he kon bell rudra use hath ke ishare se dikhata. Darwaje par bell dekh vo dar jati he. Rudra rotiya lekar bell ke pass aata he vo bolta he abhi yahi he. Khana he to sar hila warna nhi dunga. Bell haa me sar hila deta he. Vidhi ye sab dur se dekh rahi thi rudra ek ek roti use khila raha tha. Nanu uske pass betha use dekh raha tha.
Bell roti kha ke piche moda rudra ko laga vo jaa raha he par nahi vo ghar ke bahar hi Beth gaya. Leela ne ye dekha to bolti ye kya Nandi maharaj aap yahi par beth gaye jaiye kahi ghumkar aaiye. Tab tak taja khana bana khana bana kar rakhungi. Bell Jese leela ki baat samjh gaya ho vo utha vo aage bad gaya. Rudra bola ma ye bell he Nandi maharaj to pita ji bolte he khelash me rehte he. Leela rudra ke galo ko sehla kar bolti he ye sab bhi unka hi roop he beta. Rudra bell ko jate huye dekhta he. Vo bell uski akho se ojhal ho jata he. Leela bolti he ab use takana chor or chal dudh garam hokar thanda ho gaya hoga pi le mujhe khana bana he. Teri behne to aaj madad nhi karne wali or tere pita ji ne jo kaam bola he use karengi. Rudra maa ke sath rasoi me jata he or apne or nanu ke liye ek ek gilas dudh ka lekar bahar aata he.
Dono dudh pite pite ek dusre ko dekhte he. Rudra jab bhi nanu ko dekhta vo use dekh puch hilane lagta. Nanu ne apna dudh khatam kar liya or rudra ki taraf dekhne laga. Rudra bola me nhi dunga. Par nanu kaha manane wala tha vo uske aage piche kudane laga. Rudra bola bola na nhi dunga ye mera he. Tu jiyada chalak mat ban jaldi jaldi apna pi liya or mera mung raha he me nhi dunga uski awaj sun kar leela bahar aa jati he leela boli kya hua beta kiss se baat kar rahe ho .rudra bola maa dekho ye khud ko bahut chalak samjhta he apna dudh jaldi jaldi pi liya ab mera mung raha he me nahi dunga ise. Leela apne bete ke bhole pan par bolti he thik he me de deti hu . Leela andar se dudh laa kar deti he .nanu pine lagta he. Dudh pine ke baad rudra apne behno ke pass jata he.
Idhar sidhi ridhi vidhiya ghar ke sath ki jamin saf kar rahi hoti he. Bahut si ghas or jungali bel ug aai thi. Ridhi bolti he dhayan se jungali ghas he mane suna he aisi khas me kankhajure hote he or saap bichu bhi. To apna dhayan rakhana kuch bhi dekhna to turant bhag jana. Rudra bolta he me karu. Vidhi bolti he ha bhai aao. Fir charo ghas ukhad ukhad ke ek taraf rakhate he bahut hi jiyada ghas thi. Unke pasine nikal gaye the. Masum bacho ne kabhi aisi mehnat nahi ki thi or kuch jungali ghas ukhad hi nahi rahi thi. Tabhi unko bell aata hua dikhai diya ridhi boli sidhi vidhi bhai ko lekar bhag ye humari taraf aa raha he kahi mare naa. Rudra bola aap didi bahut darti ho. Ridhi boli kya baat he ek hi din me bahut bolne laga he kahi raat ka bhoot to nahi tere andar ghus gaya .
Rudra bolta he mere andar bhoot thode he. Me nahi darta bhoot se vo darte he mujhse. Tabhi sidhi boli bada aaya darane wala school me bacho se darta he or bolta he me nahi darta. Rudra ka muh chota sa ho jata he. Tabhi bell rudra ke pass aa ke khada ho jata he. Rudra use bolta he. Kuch nahi he mere pass khane ko khana he to ye sari ghas kha maa kuch nahi degi abhi. Tabhi vo bell ghas khane laga. Charo use ghas charte huye dekh rahe the. Vo jungali ghas ko apne sing me fasa fasa ke ukhad raha tha naram ghas kha jata or moti ghas fek deta. Ye dil sila 2 ghante chala charo bhai behen use dekhte rahe . Bell ne sari khas ukhad di thi. Ab bas inko thodi bahut safai karni thi. Jisme jiyada waqt nhi lagne wala tha. Ridhi vidhi ko bolti he ghar me se tokariya lekar aao is ghas ko utha kar bagiche ki taraf fek dete he. Vidhi teen tokariya lekar aati he ridhi rudra ko bolti he bhai bas dal kar utha do hum fek aayenge.
Rudra vesa hi karta he 1 ghante me jagah khadi. Fir Sohan apne sathiyo ke sath aa jata he. Sohan apne sathiyo ko jamin samthal karne ko bolta he. Or khud lai hui chijo se kaam karne lagta he. 10 baj gaye the. Leela bacho ko bulati he. Charo apni maa ke pass jate he. Leela puchti he kaam khatam ho gaya. Ridhi bolti he haa maa aap ko kya laga hum se hoga nhi. Leela bolti jao hath muh dho lo khana ban gaya he dadi ko bhi bula lo khana kha le. Fir sab hath muh dho ke dadi ko bula lete he or khana khate he. Nanu rudra ke pass betha tha. Leela ne dudh me roti tod kar use bhi daal diya vo bhi khane laga. Rudra bolta he maa Nandi maharaj ne bhi ghas uthadane me madad ki he unko bhi roti do naa. leela bolti he tum log khao me unko bhi de dungi fir sab khana kha lete he. Leela Nandi maharaj ko bhi roti sabji daalne ke liye rudra ko de deti he.Rudra bell jo ki uske ghar ke pass hi betha hua tha uske pass gaya or bola ye lo kha lo vese to bahut khas kha li ab roti kha lo me maa se mung ke laya hu samjhe chup chap kha lena. Fir rudra waha se nanu ke sath ghar aa jata he. Or khelne lag jata he.
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