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Xabhi

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Update - 4A

Dosto aapne abtak Padha, Jagga ke sabhi sathi mare ja chuke the aur Jagga ko ab Shamsher, Bheema, aur Gunga Ghere hue the....
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Fars se Kisi trah Khade hote hue Jagga ne piche mudkar uspar Hamla karne wale ko dekha, 6 Feet ke do Hattekatte Shamsher aur Bheema aur Sath me hath me Chaku lie khade Gunga ko dekh ek pal ko vo Ghabra gya,

Jo Aurat Bistar par apni ijjat bachane ko sangrash kar rahi thi, vo bhi chadar khich kar apne fate kapde chupane ki koshish karti sehami khadi thi ek kone me,
Shamsher ne ek Najar us Aurat ki aur dekha aur apne hath ka ishara karte hue kaha, tumhe darne ki jarurat nahi hai, Hum Log aaj is Jagga ko Markar iske Atank se Logo ko Mukhti dene hi aaye hai...

Jese hi Jagga ne Ye suna to uski To Fat hi Gayi, usne haklate hue kaha, Tum jante nhi ho mujhe, Meri Jaan pehchaan bahut upar tak hai ek minute me abhi mere admi aaakar tum sabko Golio se bhun denge,
Kallu....Hariya....Mange...kaha mar Gaye sabke sab idhar aao jaldi....chillate hue usne awaj lagai,

Par koi Jinda hota tab wha aata, uski awaj sunkar Shamsher ke chehre par Ek bahur Crur Hasi ke Bhav aaye jise dekh ek baar ko Jagaa ka Peshab hi nikalne ko ho gya,
Ek dheemi lekin Garazbhari awaj me Shamsher bola....Mar Gaye Hai Sabke Sab

Jese hi Jagga ne ye suna uska Peshab hi nikal Gaya, jise dekh ek bar ko Vo aurat bhi has padi, Jise Gusse se Ghurte hue, Jagga chillaya, Sali Tune hi inhe bulaya hai lagta, tujhe to mai cho....abhi Itna hi vo bola tha ki Kabse shant khade Gunga ka Hath se ek Chaku nikal ke Jagga ke talu aur Jibh ko chirte hue hue uski Gardan me Ghus gya,

Shamsher ke ek Njar Gunga ki aur Dekha aur wapas Palat kar bahar nikalte hue kaha,
Isko itni taklif dekar maut mile ki iski Rooh bhi kaamp jaye,
Utna sunte hi Bhima ne Ne Jagga ko Pakad uske dono hath kandhe se jhatka de tod dale, Chilla bhi nhi sakta tha Jagga, muh me chaku jo ghusa tha,
Whi Gunga ne us aurat ko bahar jane ka ishara kia, aur apne chaku se Jagga ki puri body par kai jgah Barik cut maar die,
Gazab ka chakubaj tha ye, Jagga ke sharir se ris ris ke khun behne laga,

Fir Bheema ne uski Gardan ki haddi tod uska kaam tamam kia aur vo bhi bahar ki aur chal pade,
Bahar Shamsher ke admio ne do dher lagaye hue the ek sher drugs aur nashili Dwaio ka tha, to dusra, Gairkanuni taru se rkhe gaye Hathyar the, jinhe atankwadio aur Naksalio ko supply karta tha Jagga.

Shamsher ne apne admio se us sari Drugs ko jalane ko kaha, aur hathyaro ki unknown number se Suchna Najdeeki Thane ke SP ko di jo Rana Sahab ka Vishwashpatra tha.

Us Aurat ko uske bataye pate par pahuchne ko Bheema aur Gunga se usne kaha, aue hidayat di ki yha hui Ghatna kisi ko na bataye,

Kuch Admio ko usne Aas paas ki jgah check krke koi bhii saboot ho to use mita kar wapas Haweli jane ka adesh dia

Aur khud Shamsher apne kuch Admio ko lekar Sheru ki kholi ki aur chal pada,
Udhar Sheru abtak adhi bottle khtam karne me karib tha, use pura Yakin tha ki uski Dhamki se Darr kar Renu uske paas jarur ayegi aur Sapne Sajaye tha vo use Raudne ke,

Jese hi uske Gate par Ahat hui to use Laga ki Renu aagyi hai, usne whi peg bnate hue kaha ki sidha andar chali aa kitna intejar karwaya hai Sali, ab Tujhe itna hi aur jyda Ragduga,

Nashe me Aankhe khol usne Darwaje ki Aur dekha to ek 6 feet ka insan use khada dikhayi dia, usne ankho ko mal ke dobara dekha to ab sath me char admi aur khade the,

Sheru ka Nasha pichwade me ghus gya aur vo apne takiye ke niche rkhi apni pistol ki aur aur hath le jane laga, tabhi ek Goli aakr uske kalai me Lagi aur dusri Daru ki bottle se jisse kanch tut uske ja dhasa,

Sheru dard se Chillaya aaahh maa dia Sale, harami kon hai tu pata bhi hai mai Jagga bhai ka Admi hu, teri lash bhi nhi milegi,
Itna vo bola hi tha tab tak Shamsher ne aage badh ke Uske muh par ek Laat jad di,

Sale Tu Jagga ka Admi hai aur vo Teri Aurat to sun Teri Aurat Jagga ka Game baja dia hai uske pure Gang ke sath, ab bas tu bacha hai, to khud soch ki Tu Jagga ka Admi hai ya Bas Ek Nali ka Kida.

Ye sab kehkar Shamsher ne use Gardan se pakad ke khich ke fars par Gira dia, aur apne Admio ko ishara kia, Ise Batao ki Kide ko kese masla jata hai,
Shamsher ke Admio ne Sheru ko Laat bajani jo chalu ki to Sheru bas dard se chillata rha Aahh maaa mar gya salo chor do aaahhh maaf kardo kon ho tum plz jane do,
Sara Nasha uska kafur ho chuka tha aur Lahuluhan pada tha vo Fars par Shamsher ne use Pakad ke uthane ko kaha, aur Charo admi se uske dono hath aur Pair tod dalne ko kaha,

Itna sunte hi charo Pehalwan type admio ne Sheru ke hath pair tod dale,
Aur fir Use Gadi me dal ke vo bhi Haweli ki aur Nikal chale...

Idhar Naam karan ki sab Tyari ho chuki thi,
Bachhe ko lekar Ajay aur Yashoda Hawan vedi ke paas bethe the,
Purohit ji ke guru khud sari Pooja vidhi kar rhe the apne shishyo ke sath,
Uske waqt Us Bachhe ke mukh par Ek mohak Muskan thi aur jiske prabhav se wha sthit har ek insan ke Man me Apar santosh tha,

Kitne aese the jinke Bigde hue Kaam us Pooja ka sakshi ban jane baad ban gaye the jese Seth viahambhar jinhe Kafi Nuksan ho rha tha karobar me,
Ab ek Videshi company se deal ko lekar kabse Pareshan the aur Wha Us Bachhe ko Mohak Muskan jese hi unpar Padi,
Unka Phone Ghanghana utha aur Suchna mili ki Company sath kaam karne ko tyar ho gyi hai, aur 50 Percent Rupee bhi advance dene ko tyar hai.

To kisi ko Koi Khoi hui Anmol chij wapas Mil jane ki suchna Prapt hui,
Sabhi ke sath kuch na kuch acha ho rha tha
Aur idhar Renu jo kabse Pareshan thi uski nhi hasi wapas Laut aayi thi,

Sab kuch us Bachhe ki Mohan muskan ka prabhav tha jisne har ek ke jiwan ki Negativity ko khatam karke usme Positivity bhar di thi...

Anmol tha ye pal mukhya sadhu ne pooja Samapan karte hue Apne ek shishya se Shuddh jal ka chidkav Pure ghar me karne ko kaha to,
Bachhe ki Bua Hema ne unke hath se vo jal lekar Pure Ghar me chidkav karne chali gayi,

To Purohit ji ke Guru ne Bachhe ke Mata Pita se use Apni God me lia, aur Aankhe Mund ke Man hi Man ishawar ko Naman kia,
Aapka ye Pota jiska Janam Vishesh Nakshtra me hua hai ek Anmol Vardan hai Ishwar ka,
Iska shubh Naam Rkhne se Pehle mai aapko Batana chahuga ki is Balak ko apne janam ke 18 Baras tak iske Shatruo se vishesh khatra hai, to iski Diksha siksha ke lie ise Himalayan ki wadio me sthitit Visheshwar Muni ke Gurukul me hi rehna hoga,

Ye sab sunke Mathe par Bal pad gaye Bhairav Rana ke,
Sath hi baki sabhi Log bhi pareshan ho uthe
ki Munivar ye kese sambhav hai, abhi to ye balak bahut chota hai, iska kon Shatru hai abhi to koi ise janta bhi nahi,

To Gurudev ne kaha ki Ye Balak ka janam abhi yha Prthvilok par hua hai lekin ye Balak ek shoorveer yodha hai jiska Janam Saikdo Sal Pehle bhi hua tha aur tab bhi is Balak par Mata Mahakali aur Prabhu Mahakal ki vishesh kripa thi, usi janam ke kai Shatru aese ab bhi hai jo is Balak ko nuksan Pahuchne ki koshish krege jinka Muqabla aap apni puri shakti ke sath bhi nahi kar sakte hai..

Ye sab sun jha ek vishesh samman sabke Man me us Balak Ke lie ho aaya tha to whi chinta bhi thi,
Yashoda itne der se chup thi bol padi, lekin Mera Bachha dhudhmuya hai abhi mai ise kese Gurukul me chor sakti.
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Aage Jari Rahega
To jaggu bhai ka atank khatm kr diya rana ji ke aadmiyo ne vhi balak ke visay me guru ji se sun kr ek or jaha khushi Hui vhi ek anjana dar bhi utpann ho gya... Dekhte hai yashoda ji ke prasn ka kya jvab milta hai guru ji se... Superb update mam sandar jabarjast
 

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Second update English me send kar do na yar us ki wajh se read nai kar pa raha story ko Urvashi794
 
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Urvashi ji ummeed h aap theek hongi
Update ka intizar ker rehe h ham sab
 
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Naina

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Update - 1

Sheharo ki bhidbahd se koso dur Himalayan ki unchi Pahadiyo me maujood ek Gufa me kuch Sadhu Sanyasi Log aaj ek vishesh pooja kar rhe the,

Wese to Inka daily routine hi tha Pooja path karna lekin aaj ki Pooja vishesh islie thi ki aaj "Dusshera" ka Tyohar tha, aur aaj ka din Sabhi jante hai ki
Andhere par Ujale ki jeet, Adharm par Dharm ki jeet ke roop me manaya jata hai,

Mukhya Sadhu ne Mahakali aur Parad Shivling ki Pooja Archana ke lie unke sammukh bethe hue mantrocharan jese hi shuru kia, usi waqt Mausam achanak Badalne Laga, Badalo ne aakar aasman ko Gher lia aur Tej Hawa ke sath Barish Girne lagi.

Par abtak Ye pooja ho kislie rahi hai uska pata nhi chala, Khair pooja karte hue Jab Do ghante se jyda Ka samay Beet gaya to Un mukhya Sadhu ne Sabse pehle Mata Mahakali ko Apne Lahu ki bheth chadai aur Paare se Bane (Parad Shivling) ka Dhudh se Abhishek kia,
Aur fir Sabhi Sadhuon ne Hawan kund me Ahuti di.

Jese hi Pooja samapt hui Mahakali ki Ankho se ek prakash punj nikal kar Hawan kund me samane laga, aur Thik isi Tarah se Ek prakash punj Shivling se bhi nikal kar Hawan Kund me Samane Laga, aur wha jakar Vo dono praksh punj Ekroop ho gaye

Aur fir bahut tej Gati se vo pRakash punj Hawan kund se nikal ke chal pada, Akash se hota hua vo aese dikhayi de rha tha jese ki koi Tara Tuta ho, Milo ki duri Second me Paar karta hua vo Shivling *Mathura* shehar ke Ek Private Hospital ke labour ward me soi Ek aurat ke Garbh me utar gaya.

Is dauran Sabhi hospital ke log Kisi Aghyat adrisya shakti ke adheen hokar Nind me ja chuke the,
Aur jese hi Vo Prakash punj Us soi Hui Maa ke Garbh me samaya unki ankhe khul gayi aur apne pet par Hath rakh ke vo dard se karah uthi....

Unki awaj sunkar Nurse bhagte hue aayi aur patient ki khrab halat dekhte hue usne doctor ko turant suchna di, Doctor ne aakar checkup karne ke baad Patient ko delivery Room me turant le jane ka order dia.....
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Story will continue in Next update, which will be post very soon
Apne comments me meri Galtiya jarur btaye... 💗
Nayi kahani.... naye mod, naye pehlu.... ek freshness...
bahot hi behtareen suruwat huyi hai kahani ki... shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha..
lagta hai hero Akki :D ke paas asim shaktiya hogi, jo ushe burayi khilaaf ladne ke liye madad karne wali hai...
Aise hi likhti rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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