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Bhai meri hansi nahi ruk rahi thi wo padhkar achh hua wo apply nahi kiya waran story super duper blockbuster ho jani thi lekin niche sedev61901 bhai sirf hasne se kam nahi chlega apni raay bhi dijiye itni mehnat se update likha hai maine bhai
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Or aap bhi friends
Shekhu69 , Iron Man , Samar_Singh , dhalchandarun , sonak , Tiger 786 , Mass , SANJU ( V. R. ) SIR
Uper die hue shot story ke bare me kya kehna chahege aap sab![]()
Bhai main aise chutiya logo ko raay dena jaroori nahi samjhta hoon ,jisko lagta hai story galat tareeke se likhi jaa rahi hai to usse Mai ek hi baat kahunga , wo apne se ek story ko likhe aur usme apna gyaan den jitna bhi uske pass gyaan hoHmmm mujhe lagta story ko mujhe kuch is terh se likhni chahey thi
Haveli ke ek kamre me Sandhya or Raman aapas me sex ker rahe the tabhi darvaje ke bahar se Abhay key hole se ye najara dekh raha tha ke achnak se Sandhya ne Raman ke land ko tod dia Q ki wo use satisfy nahi ker paya jise dekh Abhay ki gand fat gayee wo apna land pakad ke ghar se bhaag Gaya or 10 sall bad wapas aaya 15 inch ka land leke taki Sandhya ko satisfy ker sake
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I think ye story eeasi hone chahey kya sorry Riky007 bhai maine aapka idea nahi mana dekho kaise log pareshan ho rahe hai yaha per story ko leke[/FONT]
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[FONT=Caveat, cursive]Aapki kya raay hai isme[/FONT]
Raj_sharma bhai , Rekha rani ji , Yasasvi3 , ellysperry , Riky007
Are yar itne mehnat se maine update likha tha mujhe pata nahi bhai aapko pasand nahi aayga bechara dev61901 ko dekho pet pakad ke baitha hai rok nahi paa Raha hai hassee ko apniBhai main aise chutiya logo ko raay dena jaroori nahi samjhta hoon ,jisko lagta hai story galat tareeke se likhi jaa rahi hai to usse Mai ek hi baat kahunga , wo apne se ek story ko likhe aur usme apna gyaan den jitna bhi uske pass gyaan ho![]()
Bhai jitni bar bhi padhun meri hansi nahi ruk rahi kya tha wo or kyun tha woAre yar itne mehnat se maine update likha tha mujhe pata nahi bhai aapko pasand nahi aayga bechara dev61901 ko dekho pet pakad ke baitha hai rok nahi paa Raha hai hassee ko apni![]()
Ek bat chit chat ke time per Masti Masti me ye bat apne Riky007 bhai ne boli thi uske bad aaj un bhai saheb ke comment read kerke ke mujhe ye bat yaad aa gayeee socha dekho kya reaction milta hai sabseBhai jitni bar bhi padhun meri hansi nahi ruk rahi kya tha wo or kyun tha wo![]()
To tu ek kaam kr chandrkanta ki serial dekhle ... Hame story ko pura padhe ne de tu kya padhne aata hai hame isse koi matlab nahi hai or devil bhai aap kahani pe focus rakhe na ki aise kisi ke raay pe ......Erotica ke naam pe Chacha Chowdhari or Shabu ke kisse likhe ja rahe hai, enjection lagage captain amarica bana diya ab yehi backchodi 21 we update tak chalegi to bhai tumhi barbad karo iss story pe apna time.....iss story ki start kitni hot huyi thi jab Shandhay Raman ke sath rat bitati hai or Abhay inhe dekh leta hai but uske baad se kahani me bas bakchodi chal rahi hai.
Asli 19s to ye he jo tum support kar rahe ho, Main yaha erotica pardne ata hun Amar Chitra Katha nahi.
Kya Devil bhai aap itna bhi nahi jante sabhi aapko support kaise kar sakte hain.Hmmm mujhe lagta story ko mujhe kuch is terh se likhni chahey thi
Haveli ke ek kamre me Sandhya or Raman aapas me sex ker rahe the tabhi darvaje ke bahar se Abhay key hole se ye najara dekh raha tha ke achnak se Sandhya ne Raman ke land ko tod dia Q ki wo use satisfy nahi ker paya jise dekh Abhay ki gand fat gayee wo apna land pakad ke ghar se bhaag Gaya or 10 sall bad wapas aaya 15 inch ka land leke taki Sandhya ko satisfy ker sake
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I think ye story eeasi hone chahey kya sorry Riky007 bhai maine aapka idea nahi mana dekho kaise log pareshan ho rahe hai yaha per story ko leke[/FONT]
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[FONT=Caveat, cursive]Aapki kya raay hai isme[/FONT]
Raj_sharma bhai , Rekha rani ji , Yasasvi3 , ellysperry , Riky007
Are mere bhai maine seariously leya he nahi hai abhi tak thoda Masti ka mood hua to ye likh dia tha sath me aap sab ko shamil ker leya socha thoda hasi majak enjoy ho jaay sath me busKya Devil bhai aap itna bhi nahi jante sabhi aapko support kaise kar sakte hain.
# Kucch yahan sirf sex scenes kaise aage badhti hai waise hi padhna chahte hain example dekh lo.
1. Badshah ~the tales of debauchery
2. Katha chodam pur ki
Dono hi bahut alag story hain.
Main katha chodam pur jaisi story nahi padhta jisme har update har line me sirf sex ho.
# umeed hai aapko meri baat samajh aa gayi hogi.
# Do what you want to do everyone has a unique style of story telling.
# isliye aap jaise likh rahe ho waise likhte rahe ok.
# aap sabhi ko khush nahi kar sakte ho ok.
Ha mujhe pata hai jab aapki story ke bare me ek koi bhi galat bolta hai na to thoda nahi bahut bura feel hota hai lekin meri baat ko yaad rakhe sabhi aapko support nahi kar sakte kuchh aapko yahan criticize bhi karenge just chill bhai aap apni story likhe yadi aapne ek bande ki baat ko bahut jayada seriously le liya to mujh jaise bande ka kya hoga jo story ko enjoy karte hain.
Aap story waisa hi likhe jaisa aapka dil kare lekin ek aur baat hai Sandhya pe focus jayada kare kyonki wahi is story ki central character hai.
Ok aapko mera answer mil gaya hoga.
Devil meximum ye aaj ke bachche hai jinko roj mal nikalne ka jugad chahiye kahani se koi matlab nhi rhta inko sirf sirf sex chahiye , inke anusar puri kahani me ek hero ho aur roj ek new ladki apni ma bahan chachi par chad jaye koi logic nhi sirf sexHmmm mujhe lagta story ko mujhe kuch is terh se likhni chahey thi
Haveli ke ek kamre me Sandhya or Raman aapas me sex ker rahe the tabhi darvaje ke bahar se Abhay key hole se ye najara dekh raha tha ke achnak se Sandhya ne Raman ke land ko tod dia Q ki wo use satisfy nahi ker paya jise dekh Abhay ki gand fat gayee wo apna land pakad ke ghar se bhaag Gaya or 10 sall bad wapas aaya 15 inch ka land leke taki Sandhya ko satisfy ker sake
[FONT=Caveat, cursive].
I think ye story eeasi hone chahey kya sorry Riky007 bhai maine aapka idea nahi mana dekho kaise log pareshan ho rahe hai yaha per story ko leke[/FONT]
[FONT=Caveat, cursive].[/FONT]
[FONT=Caveat, cursive]Aapki kya raay hai isme[/FONT]
Raj_sharma bhai , Rekha rani ji , Yasasvi3 , ellysperry , Riky007