Incest Albela

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[Rudra Roy]

Bhai criticism lena sikho

 

[Rudra Roy]

Kya Devil bhai aap itna bhi nahi jante sabhi aapko support kaise kar sakte hain.

# Kucch yahan sirf sex scenes kaise aage badhti hai waise hi padhna chahte hain example dekh lo.

1. Badshah ~the tales of debauchery

2. Katha chodam pur ki

Dono hi bahut alag story hain.

Main katha chodam pur jaisi story nahi padhta jisme har update har line me sirf sex ho.

# umeed hai aapko meri baat samajh aa gayi hogi.

# Do what you want to do everyone has a unique style of story telling.

# isliye aap jaise likh rahe ho waise likhte rahe ok.

# aap sabhi ko khush nahi kar sakte ho ok.

Ha mujhe pata hai jab aapki story ke bare me ek koi bhi galat bolta hai na to thoda nahi bahut bura feel hota hai lekin meri baat ko yaad rakhe sabhi aapko support nahi kar sakte kuchh aapko yahan criticize bhi karenge just chill bhai aap apni story likhe yadi aapne ek bande ki baat ko bahut jayada seriously le liya to mujh jaise bande ka kya hoga jo story ko enjoy karte hain.

Aap story waisa hi likhe jaisa aapka dil kare lekin ek aur baat hai Sandhya pe focus jayada kare kyonki wahi is story ki central character hai.

Ok aapko mera answer mil gaya hoga.

Finally someone who can understand bhai mai ye nahi kahta ki har update me baas sex ho main to bas itna kahta hun ki sex ke towards build up ho or kahi kahi hot elements add karo jisse story me interest Bana rahe or keep the focus on main character and their relation build up.

Maine yaha bohot sare kamal ki long stories pardi hai but reference ke liye main ek story suggest karu to "Maharani Devrani" is one of the best stories jisme aap ko story build up and subplots sab kuchh milita hai time mile to ek bar pard ke dekho

 

[Samar_Singh]

Hmmm mujhe lagta story ko mujhe kuch is terh se likhni chahey thi

Haveli ke ek kamre me Sandhya or Raman aapas me sex ker rahe the tabhi darvaje ke bahar se Abhay key hole se ye najara dekh raha tha ke achnak se Sandhya ne Raman ke land ko tod dia Q ki wo use satisfy nahi ker paya jise dekh Abhay ki gand fat gayee wo apna land pakad ke ghar se bhaag Gaya or 10 sall bad wapas aaya 15 inch ka land leke taki Sandhya ko satisfy ker sake
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I think ye story eeasi hone chahey kya sorry Riky007 bhai maine aapka idea nahi mana dekho kaise log pareshan ho rahe hai yaha per story ko leke[/FONT]
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[FONT=Caveat, cursive]Aapki kya raay hai isme[/FONT]

Raj_sharma bhai , Rekha rani ji , Yasasvi3 , ellysperry , Riky007

Keep the size shorter

Sandhya ko satisfy karna hai, jaan se nahi marna

 

[dhalchandarun]

Finally someone who can understand bhai mai ye nahi kahta ki har update me baas sex ho main to bas itna kahta hun ki sex ke towards build up ho or kahi kahi hot elements add karo jisse story me interest Bana rahe or keep the focus on main character and their relation build up.

Maine yaha bohot sare kamal ki long stories pardi hai but reference ke liye main ek story suggest karu to "Maharani Devrani" is one of the best stories jisme aap ko story build up and subplots sab kuchh milita hai time mile to ek bar pard ke dekho

Maine padha hai wo story bahut achhi thi usme maa bete ki story hai baad me uska dost aur uski maa add hoti hai. Achhi story hai.

 

[Samar_Singh]

100% ,
Abhi kaam chalu hai
Oops devil wali id se bolna tha bc

Sirf ek ID pe supreme membership li.
DEVIL MAXIMUM ke liye nahi liya discount

 

[Neerav]

Bhai waiting for next one

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Bhai criticism lena sikho

Finally someone who can understand bhai mai ye nahi kahta ki har update me baas sex ho main to bas itna kahta hun ki sex ke towards build up ho or kahi kahi hot elements add karo jisse story me interest Bana rahe or keep the focus on main character and their relation build up.

Maine yaha bohot sare kamal ki long stories pardi hai but reference ke liye main ek story suggest karu to "Maharani Devrani" is one of the best stories jisme aap ko story build up and subplots sab kuchh milita hai time mile to ek bar pard ke dekho

Dekh bhai tu kya chahta hai or kya nahi chahta hai mujhe na pata or na jaane ka shauk
Lekin itna jaroor kahoga her bat kehne ka ek tarika hota hai baki aap khud samajdaar ho
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Kher meri story ki bat jab mujhe samj aayga tab scene daloga sex ka ho ya normal romance ho
Pasand aay read kro mai to or bhi story hai or Forum me

 

[Samar_Singh]

Erotica ke naam pe Chacha Chowdhari or Shabu ke kisse likhe ja rahe hai, enjection lagage captain amarica bana diya ab yehi backchodi 21 we update tak chalegi to bhai tumhi barbad karo iss story pe apna time.....iss story ki start kitni hot huyi thi jab Shandhay Raman ke sath rat bitati hai or Abhay inhe dekh leta hai but uske baad se kahani me bas bakchodi chal rahi hai.
Asli 19s to ye he jo tum support kar rahe ho, Main yaha erotica pardne ata hun Amar Chitra Katha nahi.

Who said it's erotica?

It has just incest prefix. Uske liye writer kisi aur ke bich bhi incest dikha dega to prefix justified ho jayega. It's upto writer what he wants to write or not.

Whether he want to show erotica or keep writing according to his idea. You shouldn't force it.

You can give suggestions or request something or critisize, but can't force your idea.

If you don't like the story, you can stop to read it.

There are many stories as you like to read. But every story can't be on your expectation.

So you better read them not this.

 

[Raj_sharma]

Bhai likha hai abhi aadha update koshish karta ho aaj ho gya to aaj nahi to kal try karta ho agar kam me na fasa kisi me to

Koi na kaam pehle

 

[Raj_sharma]

Who said it's erotica?

It has just incest prefix. Uske liye writer kisi aur ke bich bhi incest dikha dega to prefix justified ho jayega. It's upto writer what he wants to write or not.

Whether he want to show erotica or keep writing according to his idea. You shouldn't force it.

You can give suggestions or request something or critisize, but can't force your idea.

If you don't like the story, you can stop to read it.

There are many stories as you like to read. But every story can't be on your expectation.

So you better read them not this.

Shabaash samru Aashna h.. ke baad ju ka hi sahara hai essay ke liye