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Lagta hai aapka Ghar baste hue koi dekhna nahi chahta hai bhaiUsne kya likh diya bhai??? Ye story to DEVIL MAXIMUM likh raha hai, and you are replying to other person![]()
Jalte hai mujhse bhai, jalne do apne kyaLagta hai aapka Ghar baste hue koi dekhna nahi chahta hai bhai
Real life me log kam ke km chlne se pareshan hai usse jada yaha pareshan hai Q ki Chandni aapke sath hai![]()
अरे भाई ने तो पकड़ लिया, DEVIL MAXIMUMVery nice great going. I must say that your writing skill can be much better than other writers if you will write only with your mind but I think some one influence you. You know why have written this thing because you are giving space to some charector which is not required much. It's my suggestion only that if you will focus on your actual charectors and write with your own mind your story will go on another level. Think about it Thanks
So sorry Bhai