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Bhai lond story h mera ye puri sivay bakchodikkuch nhi h sorry writer shahb pr na isme sex h na mystry na suspense na thriller pta nhiky maksad ky h is story ka abhi tk clear nhi hua mera critic thoda rude jrur h pr ek dm sach h baaki tumko report krna h jo krna h kroo or agr isko sudhar lia toh apke lie hi accha h is story m ek hi chij acchi h wo h iska title bss
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