Adultery AMMI NE DILAAI NOUKRI....(COMPLETE)

[Sadia Islam Mou]

wah! ekdom awesome! bahut h mazadar update!

 

[BadBoy117]

Mere khas mitra jo ki mere writting guru bhi hai, Mr. Shikari_golu ne pahle hi ek baat boli thi.

Ki jab tumhara likha hua logo ko mirchi lagane lage, tab samjh lena ki tum wo likh rahe ho, jise saamne wala feel karta hai, tabhi to mirchi lagti hai.

To tumhara comment dekh kar samjh aa gaya, ki main theek likh raha hu.

Aur rahi tumjari baat, ki lund dekha aur bahak gai, to dhyaan se padho, ye to wo scene hai jo dusron ne dekhe, koi suruwaat nhi, suruwaat jab aaygi, tab is baare me bahas bhi kar lege.

Baki tumhari marji, padho ya niklo, i dont care, but story to likhi jaygi, aise hi

Lekin in dono Ladko Ka kya roll hai ye aise he Dekhte rahenge Lavde ki trha
Aur is story M Hero Kon Hai Vaise

 

[Rajansharma]

bahut badhiya story! chamatkar likha, bahut acha

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Lekin in dono Ladko Ka kya roll hai ye aise he Dekhte rahenge Lavde ki trha
Aur is story M Hero Kon Hai Vaise

Ye hui kuch sahi baat, to un dono ladko ka roll bhi hai, par har kahani me ek sath sab nhi bata dete, thoda wait karo, sab khatm hone ke baad batana ki kya aur kyo, kaisa raha,

Aur hero bhi jaldi hi saamne aayga, wo abhi to sir ji hi hai, aur kyo hai, ye aage samjh aayga

 

[Cableguy]

What a story! Kia likhte hai aapne yaar, just jabardast aur lajawab kahaani!

 

[BlackandBlue]

kia ek gajam story hai yah! ekdom jabardast likhte hai aapne yaar, ekdom mind blowing writings!

 

[ZOMANJI]

Jabardast story! Terrific writings! bahut h mast faddu theme!

 

[WAARSHAW]

Really a very much interesting and pleasurable story! Great writings!

 

[pankaj1991]

update

 

[BadBoy117]

Ye hui kuch sahi baat, to un dono ladko ka roll bhi hai, par har kahani me ek sath sab nhi bata dete, thoda wait karo, sab khatm hone ke baad batana ki kya aur kyo, kaisa raha,

Aur hero bhi jaldi hi saamne aayga, wo abhi to sir ji hi hai, aur kyo hai, ye aage samjh aayga