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Incest Anokha badla (Love me till the end)

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Thakur008

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Aur jo mere next update ka intazar kar rahe hai unka v dhanyawad ki aapko meri story acchhi lag rahi hai. Aur sare readers ko v dhanyawad.

main janta hu ki bahut sare readers aise v hai jo kahani padh lete hai aur unhe v acchhi lagti aur kuch ko nhi bas mera ye anurodh hai ki aap bas ek chota sa comment kar de story acchi ja rahi hai ya nhi. Isse mujhe pata chalega ki story ko next level pr le jane ki jarurat hai ya nhi. Isse mujhe pata hoga ki story ka content aur kitna accha karna hoga. Kyoki ye meri pahli story hai na mujhe koi experience hai nahi maine kabhi likhi hai, so it's a request please comment on story content
ki mujhe aur story acchhi karni chahiye ki nhi.
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Update-9
nancy- sorry bhai tab main nhi rah sakti.
waise v rent main thori na dungi woh toh tumhi ne kaha na company pay kkarengi kyo.
main- ( mann me ha ye accha rahega isse thore Paso ka aur bandobast ho jaayega) okk dii.

Abb aage.......

main-( mann me-waise v yahi sahi rahega dono dii ko tution nhi padhane dunga thora kam time v padhayegi toh chalega waise v papa ne kavi unhe dikkat nhi hone di. Kuch samajh nhi aa raha kabhi lagta hai sahi kar raha hu kabhi lagta hai galat kar raha hu unhe jayda sukh siwidha na dekar but majburi v haina ho sakta hai kisi ko pata chal jaye ohh god jo hoga dekha jayega )

Nancy- kaha kho gaye bhai.
main- nahi kahi nhi dii okk toh jab apka mann kare yaha shift ho jana samjhe aur jo maine bola hai wahi karna okk.
Nancy- okk bhai mai jaa rahi hu kal milte hai.
main- kaha jaa rahi ho avi app.
Nancy- are bhai hotel me ruki hu kal aa jaygi. waise v mai bahut thak gayi direct yahi aayi hu okk byee.
main- okk dhyan se jana kal aa jana aap.
aur waha se nancy chali ggayi.
MAin- toh uncle jii sara kam ho gaya na.
rajveer- haa beta all set aur haa aaj tumhara trainer v yaha aa gaya hai.
Main- trainer kis liye aur kyo.
Rajveer- wo isiliye kyo ki abb tum jo 18 saal hone ke baad karoge uska kya aise hi kar lloge. Tumhe kya lagta tm apne dushman se lad loge toh ho jayega. Wo hazaro ki sankhiya me aur unke pahunch international level pe hai toh socho wo hazar lakho ko turant jama kar sakta hai isiliye training most important.

main- okk uncle koi nii. Waise ye aaj nhi toh kal hona hi tha isiliye jab aap bolo tab se start.

RAjveer- tmhara trainer aa gaya hai aam ko milne chalte hai.

main- okk chalte hai.

phir hamlog andar aye sabko bat diya admission ho gaya kuch din me papers, admit card aur baaki chije aa gayengi.

rajveer-Aur beta tm log kisi game nahi kisi v extra activities me involve ho sakte ho.
RUhi- kyo uncle.
rajveer- isse tmlog ho sakta hai kisi ki najar me aajo.

rajveer-- tmlogo ke boards ke exam ya koi exam ho toh top v mat karn bas good student rahna na jyada ghulna milna nahi kuch means no dost nahi neighbour se dosti kuch v nhi.
tm logo ko mai yaha tv laga diya hai internet hai you have everything hai apna Focus padhai par hi kar do aab.
avi kuch salo tm logo ko jumnam ki jindgi jini hai isiliye aisa koi v kamm mat karna jisse highlight me aajao. Okk
aur soha u especially tm thora kam masti karna okk. Yeh mat samjhna ki yeh mai Hitler giri jhar raha hu it's only about your saftey. Tmlog duniya ki najar me mar chuke ho. Yadi kisi ne pahchan liya ho galti se v toh tumhe pata hai na tumhlogo pe hamla hi sakta hai isiliye yaadi tmlog apni jaan bahchana chahte ho toh jayda nhi bas karn jabtak collage me nhi chala jata tmlog chup ke rahna hoga matlab jabtak karn 18 ka nhi ho jata tab tak kisi ke najar me mat aana okk.
hamsab- okk uncle jaisa aap kahe.
rajveer- beta aisa mat samjhna ki tmlog yaha masti nhi kar sakte tm char log ho bahut kuch kar sakte ho aur piche bahut sandar jagah hai waha chale jana jab man na lage. Okk
HAmsab- okk.
abhay- okk aap chalna hame dikha dena.
rajveer- okk chalna main dikha dunga.
Uske baad hamne khana khaya aur chal diye aram karne uncle bolte gaye ki mujhe unke sath chalne hoga saam ko.

in evening.
Hall me sab bith ke chai/ coffee pi rahe the toh sabne bola chale piche ki ghumne ki jagah par ham sab waha gaye unhe dikha diya sath me nokar v tha.
uncle bole unhe aur mujhe sath jana kuch kam hai ye bol diya savi ko. Nakuur ko samjha diya jab sab ghum ke toh ghar chale jana.
fir ham log waha se car leke chal diye. Jab ham waha pahuche toh ek chota sa ghar tha do room ka garden bana hua tha aur lamba chaura fencing kiya hua ttha waha ek hata katta rakhas jaisa aadmi baitha hua tha .
( Mark- 6 feet 7 inch height body bilder hai sath me kai govt organization aur gunde ke liye v kaam karta samjh lijiye jo paise de uska kaam karta hai but imandari se. Iska iss duniya me koi nhi hhai. Gussa bahut jaldi aata hai isiliye kahi tikta nhi koi job par isiliye independent kaam karta hai) ( yaha jo v conversation hoga mark ke sath wo English me hoga main hamesha use hindi me likhunga)
rajveer- kiase hi mark.
mark- mai badhiya hu.
rajveer- okk toh milo apne student karn se.
mark- kya iss bacche ko train no never yeh maar jayega.
rajveer- tumne paise liye aur maine tumhe extra paise deke bulya hai tmhari fee se 10 guna jyada diya hai.
mark- okk okk main yeh nhi bol raha. Aap samajh nhi rahe yeh avi chota baccha hai.
rajveer- tm jo terrisoit camp me training liya tha kya umar thi tmhari.
mark- how do you know i mean yeh baat aaj tak koi nhi janta.
rajveer- koi aur mujme fark hhai. Maine pucha uska answer nhi diya.
mark - yahi age hogi ya isse v cchoti. Rajveer- toh aab kya bolte ho.
mark- okk ho jayega.
rajveer- tumhe pata hai na isse kitne ke barabar train karna hai.
mark- jaa mujhe pata hai but physical strength se aap kitno ko maar sakte ho 10 ya 20 ya bahut hua toh 100 But dimag hoga toh ek baar me hazar ko marega toh aap isse padhai equal time ye aaj kal ke Scholl wali kitab nhi main isse bata dunga woh sab kitabe yeh padhega aur bahut sare cases hai jisme ek akel aadmi 1000 ko ek baar me kaise maar sakta mai yeh saab ise provide kara dunga baad baki yeh jane.
rajveer- ho jayega. Karn kuch baat karni hai toh baat karlo.
mark mujhe samjha raha tha ki yeh training kitni difficult hai. Mujhe usse baat karne me thora daar lag raha tha jab maine terrisoit ke bare me suna wo sayad samjah gaya fir usne apni life ki kahani sunayi ki wo jab terrisoit camp me tha tab kuch secret logo ne waha hamla kar diya woh log kisi clan(kisi khas trah ke kom nasla) se the woh unhune bacho ke le gaye fir waha pe inki training hui fir uske baad wo kisi se pyar karta but us clan ka jo rajkumar tha wo bahut gira hua tha in logo ko gulam samjhta tha. Mark kisi se pyar karta tha woh usi clan se thi aam larki thi. Jab waha ka rajkumar jab us clan ka mukhya bana toh usne apna rang dikhana suru kiya ladkio ko roj bhogta aur jo sikayat karne ka bolti use maar deta. Ek din mark ke Suzi( jisse mark pyar karta tha) ko saadi ka prastaw rakha wi sadi ke liye maan gayi. Unki saadi ho v gayi. Ek din iske baare me us go hatiya rajkumar ko pata lag gaya aur wo ek gulam hoke bina puche apna faisla liya rajkumar ko accha nhi laga. Ek din aise hi Kabila ghumate hue uski najar Suzi par thar gayi usne apne chancho se pucha Suzi ke bare me. Toh chamcho ne sab ugal diya mark aur Suzi ke baare me. Aab toh rajkumar ko Suzi pasand aa gayi thi aur use badla sabak v sikhana tha toh mark ke ek mission pe bhej diya uske piche rajkumar ne Suzi ka rape kiye uss samay uska baccha tha pet me. Jab Suzi ne bola wo bata degi mark ko toh rajkumar ne maar diy maa aur bacche ko. Uske baad jab mark jab mark Kabila wapas aya toh use pata chala ki uski patni ki hatya hui thi aur bacha v mar gaya tha toh wo tut gaya. Sab aas pados aur rajkumar ne dhikawe ke liye samjhya aur sab apne apne ghar chale gaye. Jab mark thora sambhal gaya tab uske padosi aur dost ki Biwi ne bata diya sabkuch ki uss raat rajkumar ke aadmi aaye the aur uske ghar se le gaye the. Fir kiya tha mark ne apne kuch dosto ke mil ke sath rajkumar aur unke chapluso ko mara aur marwa diya planning karke. Wo Kabila chor ke wo army me bharti hi gya uske baad woh waha jyada din nhi tika fir private agent bana ye kaam me usse naam mila fir woh agency se alag ho gaya akele kam karne laga uske baad jindgi chal rahi. Aur avi woh mere samne kahar hai.
MArk ki story sun ke dukh hua aur sorry v kaha ki maine use terrisoit samjha.
usne iss bat ka bura nhi mana.
USke baad usne kaha ki mujhe subah char baje aur aana hai yar saam me v. Per day 8 ghanta practice karna hai.
fir main kaha 5 baje ke baad ata hu.
MArk ne okk kkaha. Uske baad mark ne uncle ko saman ki list kya lana hai kya arrangement karwna hai sab. Mark ki sabbse bari khasiyat ye hai ki wo aisi aisi jadi butiyo ke baade me janta jo bahut khatranak v hote aur bahut acche v. Woh clan me raha ne isiliye.
uske baad ham ghar aa gaye tabtak bhai aur dii v aa gayi thi. Woh log khane ki taiyari kar rahi thi. Mai upar gay aur fresh hua bed pe let ke soch raha tha dii se kaise mafi mangu kuch samjah v nhi aa raha . Maine socha dii se direct kari jaye. Yahi sochke niche aa gaya tabtak diii log dinner laga rahi thi sabne khana khaya aur sab apne apne room me.
main socha dii se baat kar lu but main time meri halat patli hi gayi aur main apne room me aa gaya. Mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa raha tha. Kuch der me dii dhudh le ke aaayi aur table per rakha. Dii samjah gayi ki subha ki wajah se main sarminda bhu isliye baat nhi kaar raha hu, phir v unhone pucha mujh se.
dii- kya hua mujhse koi galti hui jo mujhse aaj baat nhi kar raha hai.
main- ( iss baat aur sarminda ho gaya aur raundhi huii awaj me bola) nhii dii majhe maaf kardo wo subah ke liye aur main rone laga itna guilty feel ho rahi thi.
fir dii ne chup karaya.
dii- aab aur roya na babu mai v ro dungi.
tumhe pata hai na main tumse kitna pyar karti hu.
mai chup ho gaya fir
dii- tumne mujho wo.. wo. Kiss kyo kiya.
main- dii pata nhi kaise ho gya aur aap itni pyari lag rahi thi ki bas ho gaya isse jayda sach me nhi pata ki kaise ho gaya kiss .
dii- chalo koi baat nhi but promise karo aage se aise harkat nhi karoge.
main- promise dii nhi karunga.
dii - okk ab kabhi mat karna aisi galti mai nhi toh tumse baat nhi karungi. Okk
Main- okk baba nhi karunga
dii- chale sone.
Main fir dhud liya aur bed par dii ke sath sone laga. Fir nancy dii ke baare me yaad aya aur dii ko sab kuch bata diya
dii - fir wo nancy dii kaha rahengi.
main- yahi mere room me .
dii - aur tum.
main- are dii apko pata haina ki main hamesa apke pass hu sota hu aur mera room toh kahne ke liye hai aur waise v yaad nhi aaj se pahle kan main apne room me soya tha.
dii woh toh hai thik hai phir rakh lena apni nayi dii ko.
main- thanks dii. Waise mujhe kahi se jalne ki boo aa rahi hai.
Dii - kya mai jal rahi hu nancy dii se
main- maine aisa kab kaha.
dii- bacchu sab samajhti hu ssamjha.Waise v mujhe accha hai mujhe company mil jayegi ki kabhi kabhar kisi ka.
main- okk chalo sote hhai kal bahut kaam v hai.
dii- okk good night aur gaal pe kiss Kiya.
mai v gud night bola aur gaal pe kiss de ke si gaya.

wahi dusri taraf aadmi 2 sabkuch chanbin karta but usse koi sakh nhi hota. Aur aadmi 3 ko sari baat batata hai but aadmi 3 ko kuch yakin nhi ho raha tha.
wahi dada aur chacha ne chanbin ki unhe v laga ki bomb blast me mare gaye aur mausi ko v. Mausi ko jab pata laga ki kuch aur log v unhe khoj rahe the toh unhone details nikalwayi unhe jayda toh pata nhi chala kuch gundo ke baare me pata chala toh maasi ne apne khas aadmi ko kaha unki gang me bharti ho jayo aur kabhi kuch pata chale toh batana.

Abb sabko yakin ho gaya tha ki hamlog mar chuke hai. Aur jab aahana ko pata chala ki mar gaya hai karn toh woh ekdam se gumsum sii rahne lagi bhale hi utni samjhadar na ho but wahi attachment had se jayda tha isiliye.
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Yeh log yaha se nikal ke sidha paradize hotel( yeh hotel pahle v aa chuka hai pahle ke update me) delhi me ruke. Jab tak yeh pahuche saam ho chuki thi toh inhone hotel me 2 room book kara kar . Fresh hoke khana kha ke aaram farmane lage.

Aab aage--

Sham ko karn jaga aur rajveer uncle se baat ki aur paradize hotel me aane ko kaha.

Sham ko aataku ke sath karn kahi nikal gaya.

Idhar sab soha aur ruhi uske bhai bhabi sab kuch pack karke ready ho gaye the nikalne ko. Unhe toh bass pass ke airport jana tha waha se sidha delhi. Dekhte hai inke bich me kya baate ho rahi hai.

Soha- aap aise ghabraiyi hui kyo hai.

Ruhi- na.... Na..nahi toh aisa kuch nhi hai( apne aap ko sambhalte hue.)

Soha- dekho dii aapko na jhut bolna nahi aata toh aap mat bola karo. Aab sach sach batao kya hua hai.

Ruhi - woh mera dil thoda ghabra raha pata nhi lagta hai kuch hone wala hai.

Soha- kya dii aap v. Sayad aap yaha se jaa rahi hai isiliye aisa ho raha ho. Dekho hamare sath dada ji, uncle hai, aur sabse badi baat bhai hai. Toh hame chinta nhi karni chahiye. Aap bas apne aap ko relax karo. Aur yeh sab achanak ho raha hai isiliye aisa ho raha ho.

Ruhi- haa sahyad tum sahi kah rahi ho.

Iske baad Ruhi khud ko comfortable karne me lag gayi.

Bhabhi- aap chinta me lag rahe hai kya baat hai.

Abhay- aaj ham sab ek sath hote hue v ek sath nhi hai.
Sab alag alag hai. Ruhi soha alag ham dono alag aur karn ka kuch pata hi nhi hai.(aankhon se aashu nikalte hue).

Bhabi- aap chinta na kare wo wapas aayega. Maine uski aankhon me dekha tha, use itni jaldi kuch nhi hoga.

Abhay- aisa hi ho wo aa jaye aur mujhe kuch nhi chahiye.

Bhabhi- maine aap sab ko kitna samjhya tha ki karn aisa kuch nhi kar sakta but aap sabne nhi mana tha. Uski saja toh milni thi toh wahi hua.

Abhay- lekin iski suruat tumne ki thi.

Bhabhi- mujhe thodi na pata tha mujhe toh kuch hi samay hua tha aaye hue toh wo sab mere se ho gaya. But jab maine karn ko jana tab uske baare me pata chala. But aap sab toh hamesa se usi ke sath rahte the tab v aapne uspe sakh kiya.

Abhay- jo hua bas misunderstanding ki wajah se hua.

Bhabhi- aapko yeh misunderstanding lag rahi hai uski jindgi kaise gujar rahi hogi aapko pata v hai. Woh baccha tha us samay.

Abhay- aaj hamare liye kitna bada dinn hai but mere sath mera bhai nhi hai. ( Rote hue).

Bhabhi- chup ek dam sant jo v hua sab bhul jaaye aap toh use hi dundh rahe hai na mil jayega. Abb hame iss bare me soha aur Ruhi ko v bata dena chahiye.

Abhay- tumhara dimaag kharab hai kya bhul ke v iss bare me undono se baat mat karna samjhi. Jitna mai uske close tha usse kahi jayda soha thi aur sabse jayda Ruhi yadi unhe bhanak v lagi na iss bare me toh undono ko Sambhalana muskil ho jayega. Ek baar ko ham soha ke sambhal v le but Ruhi ko namumkin aisa ho hi nhi sakta.

Tumhe malum hai bachapan me jab karn pahli baar ghar aaya tha toh sabse pahle ruhi ke godi me diya gaya. Uske baad kisi ke paas but kuch din baad se Ruhi kisi ko v karn ke pass aane hi nhi deti thi yaha tak ki maa ko v nhi. Jab use feeding karana hota toh hi Ruhi usko maa ko deti thi. Uska yeh attachment badhta gaya. Aur din parti din badhta gaya. Mai toh samjah gaya but soha aur aahana nhi samjhi. Woh uske khelti thi pyar karti but dusre mode se.

Bhabhi- dusre mode se????

Abhay- ladai karke pareshan karke iss trah soha apna time karn ke sath spend karti. Wahi Ruhi ise dilo jaan se chahti. Tumne toh dekha hi tha kaise Ruhi aur karn ek sath sote the. Yeh bachpan se hi hai matlab karn ka sara kam uski dekhbhal har ek chij ki jimmedari Ruhi apne upar liya hua tha. Ek trah se Ruhi karn ki maa dost didi bahut kuch thi. Socho usne kaise faisla kara hoga karn ke khilaf. Tumne khud dekha na wo dono kaise ghar se chale gaye. Wo dono karn ke bina kuch nhi the. Mai avi v kah raha hu karn avi aa jaye woh dono khus ho jayengi pahle ki trah. Jab tak karn tha hamara ghar ek dam chahkta tha abb wahi gahr katne ko daurta hai. Woh bass kisi trah wapas aa jaye bas aur kuch nhi chahiye. Yeh paisa dolat uske samne kuch nhi hai.

Bhabhi- sant sant wo jarur aayega. Aap tention na lo.
Aise hi dono baat kar rahe the.

Udhar dusri gadi me.

Rajveer- usne delhi me paradize hotel me bulaya hai.

Dadaji- thik hai. Aap room book kara lo( Munim jee se). Raat tak pahuch hi jayenge.
Aise hi chalte hue pahuch gaye najdik ke airport. Jab savi ne waha plane dekha toh ek dam uchal gaye. Ek dam khatrnak lag raha tha royal type. Usme sab baith ke nikal gaye. Aaditya aur divyaa Mike ke sath the.

Idhar karn ek tute phute ghar ke samne tha. Aur kuch yaad karte hue aansu baha raha tha.

Aataku- yeh tumhara purana ghar hai na.

Mai- hmmm. Isime bomb blast hua tha. Isko phir se banana hai.

Aataku- fir se par kyo.

Mai- yaha sabse jayada apne maa pitaji ke sath samay gujara hai bass isilye. Aur kuch logo se wada v kiya tha. Chalo abb yaha se jab tak ham pahuchenge woh v pahuch jaayenge.

Uske baad sab aage piche hotel pahuch gaye. Lekin kuch logo ke dil aaj kuch jayda hi dharak rahe the kuch ko kuch jayda hi baichani ho rahi thi.
Fir karn ne rajveer uncle,dada ji aur mark ko room me bulaya.

Mark- bolo kyo bulaya.

Mai- kuch lenge aap log.

Dada ji- mujhe chai.

Mark- coffee.

Rajveer- chai.

Maine phone karke order kar diya aur apne liye milkshake.

Mark- avi v baccho wali harkate karta rahta hai.

Maine mike ko aankh dikha di.

Mark- haa haa sorry sorry. Abb bata kyo bulaya hai.

Mai- main soch raha tha main bhai ka bodyguard matlab rakshak banke rahu.

Dada ji- usse kya hoga.

Mai- isse yeh hoga ki main family ke bich aram se ghus jaunga. Aur main bodyguard rahunga toh wo sab utni details me nhi ghusenge aur mai family me kisi ke v sath jaa sakunga kisi ko sakhh v nhi hoga. Sabse badi baat avi tak unlogo ko nhi malum chala hai ki ham sab aapke pota poti hai. Jab tak pata chalega tabtak rajtilak ho jayega. Sabse badi baat jab wo chhan binn karenge toh mere baare me missing report aayegi toh wo uss sab par dhyan denge hamare pass wahi samay hoga aapne dushman ko dhundne ka muskil se 5 ya 10 maximum 15 din lagenge unhe confirm karne me ki mai hi hu missing person yadi sach me unke pass jara sa v akal hui na toh wo sab ko max. 2 se 3 din me mujhe dundh lenge. Aap sabne jo plan ka phaluda banaya hai uska yeh thoda thik thak plan.

Tab tak hamara chai coffee v aa gaya hamne piya dada ji aur rajveer uncle chale gaye uske baad mai aur mark bache.

Mark- Real plan batao kya hai.

Mai- real plan???

Mark- mujhe chutiya samjh rakha hai kya tera asli plan kya hai. Itna ghatiya plan tu nhi bana sakta.

Mai- mere bhai yahi asli plan but kuch aisi chije hai samay aane par hi pata chale toh accha hai. Lekin tere ko mera ek kaam karna hai.

Mark- thik hai jaisa tu thik samjhe, abb bata kya karna hai.

Mai- fir maine mark ko kuch samjhaya. Aur kaam karane ko bola( aage pata chalega).

Mark- godown ka kya karna hai.

Mai- godown ke baare me bhul ke v avi mat sochna nhi toh ek alag kaand suru ho jayega. Bass saman manga lo. Saman best hona chahiye.

Mark- thik hai. Contact aur paise.

Mai- contact usi naam se hoga jisse pahle hota tha aur paise me arrange kar dunga. Tum baat karo. Tumhare team me kaise hai aadmi.

Mark- tum toh jaante ho tumhari personal team se behtar nhi hoga. But aur sab se accha hoga. Mai toh kahta hu team ko bula lo.

Main- nhi yaar abb wo pariwar wale ho gaye honge kya pata. Unhe apni jindagi jine do.

Mark- jaisa tum sahi samjho. Mere pass snipers kam hai.

Mai- hire kar lo.

Mark- yarr risk hai usme.

Mai- view points kitne hai mahal ke.

Mark- 8 ke ass pass.

Mai- andar se ki bahar se.

Mark- andar se.

Mai- bahar se.

Mark- 4

Mai- sabko bahar se hi nazar rakhne ko kahna aur sab sniper ke sath 1 extra admi bhejna. Jo bachega andar se rakhna aur andar se sabhi view point ki traf machine gun rakhwa dena. Teri problem solve.

Mark- ohh yarrr sari problem solve. But sniper ke sath ek extra addmii kuch samjha nhi.

Mai- yarr dusre snipers v bahar se hi andar dekhenge toh woh v unke ass pass hoga. Toh sniper ek dusre se ladenge ki apna kaam dekhenge.

Mai- sari baat samjh lena location par jaa ke. sabhi ko kal se sabhi jagah laga do aur bahar se full nazar rakhne ko bolo. Pure 5 km area ke ass pass ek parinda v parr mare toh pata lagna chahiye. Sare drons aur high-tech equipment kal tak chahiye aur saman baad me v deliver kare toh chalega yaad rahe jitna jaruri ho usse jayda hi le lena saman.

Mark- ho jayega. Aur equipment sab pahle hi aa gaya hai but drons time lagega.

Mai- jayda paisa de do koi dikkat nhi hai but saman kal chahiye.

Mark- thik hai aur dusre se baat karta hu.

Maine apne bag se ek paper nikala uss par sign karke mark ko de diya.

Mark- yeh paper.

Mai- jab tum wo naam use karoge toh kuch aadmi aayenge jarur. Tm yeh paper dekha dena nhi dikhaoge toh tumhe tapka denge. Yaad rahe unme se kisi se v bhidna mat bhul ke v nhi.

Mark- tum v kisi se darte ho???

Mai- nhi avi unse bhidne ka time nhi hai unka v time aayega bass tum kuch mat kahna wo comments karenge but paper dikha ke nikal jana. Nhi niklane de toh mujhe phone karna wo rukne ko kahe kuch kare but waha rukna mat.

Mark- thik hai dhyan rakhunga.( Mark v thoda darr gaya tha ki aisa kaun hai jo yeh v nhi bhidna chahta. Mark janta tha karn ek no. ka pagal hai. Woh kisi se nhi darta. Phir yeh kaun..)

Aise hi dono baat karte hai.

Dusri traf-

Soha- di aapko nind aa gayi kya.

Ruhi- nhi tujhe v nhi aa rahi hai kya.

Soha- nhi dii wo kuch Dil me kuch ajib sa ho raha hai kuch samjh nhi aa raha.

Ruhi- tuje v ho raha hai.

Soha- apko v.
.
Ruhi- nhi nhi aise galti se nikal gaya hoga. Tu bata kyo ho raha hai.

Soha- dekho di jhut mat bolo. Aap batao kya ho rha hai.

Ruhi- sacchiii me kuch nahi hua hai.

Soha- jaiye aap se baat nhi karti. Gusse se muh phula ke dusri traf ghum gyi.

Ruhi- accha baba thik hai batati hu.

Soha- jan buch kar nhi ghumti wo janti thi ki yeh golden chance hai nakhra karke sab kuch jaan jaungi.

Ruhi- sorry baba idhar ghum jaa choti jo puchegi sab bataungi.

Soha- pakka promise.

Ruhi- promise.

Soha- abb batao kya ho raha hai.

Ruhi- jab se mai hotel me enter hui na tab se bachani jaisa lag raha.Dil me kuch ho raha samjh hi nhi aa raha hai.
Soha- same to same mere sath ho raha hai.

Ruhi- chal jhuthi .

Soha- sacchiii. God promise.

Ruhi- okk okk.

Soha- dii ek baat puchu aap gussa nhi karogi na.

Ruhi- tu kuch v puch sakti hai. kabhi
v gussa kar sakti hu apni pyari bahna par.

Thodi der me room pura sant rahta hai.

Ruhi- puch v kya hua sant kyo ho gayi.

Soha- dii aap maaf kar dogi ussee( darte darte).

Ruhi- kisse maff karna hai bol toh sahi.

Soha- wo dii yaddi apna chotu wapas aa gya toh kya aap maaf kar dogi usse.

RUhi isss sawal se pahle wo sab hua ek baar fir se yaad aa jata hai aur uske chahra aur aankhe laal ho jatai hai.

soha- dii aap ne promise kara tha aap gussa nhi hogi. So calm down relax relax.

ruhi- accha abb so ja raat bahut ho gyi hai. Good night.

dono bahne apne hi khyal me khoi hui thi. Aise hi yeh raat aur ghani aur andheri honi lagti hai.

abb dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.




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Yeh log yaha se nikal ke sidha paradize hotel( yeh hotel pahle v aa chuka hai pahle ke update me) delhi me ruke. Jab tak yeh pahuche saam ho chuki thi toh inhone hotel me 2 room book kara kar . Fresh hoke khana kha ke aaram farmane lage.

Aab aage--

Sham ko karn jaga aur rajveer uncle se baat ki aur paradize hotel me aane ko kaha.

Sham ko aataku ke sath karn kahi nikal gaya.

Idhar sab soha aur ruhi uske bhai bhabi sab kuch pack karke ready ho gaye the nikalne ko. Unhe toh bass pass ke airport jana tha waha se sidha delhi. Dekhte hai inke bich me kya baate ho rahi hai.

Soha- aap aise ghabraiyi hui kyo hai.

Ruhi- na.... Na..nahi toh aisa kuch nhi hai( apne aap ko sambhalte hue.)

Soha- dekho dii aapko na jhut bolna nahi aata toh aap mat bola karo. Aab sach sach batao kya hua hai.

Ruhi - woh mera dil thoda ghabra raha pata nhi lagta hai kuch hone wala hai.

Soha- kya dii aap v. Sayad aap yaha se jaa rahi hai isiliye aisa ho raha ho. Dekho hamare sath dada ji, uncle hai, aur sabse badi baat bhai hai. Toh hame chinta nhi karni chahiye. Aap bas apne aap ko relax karo. Aur yeh sab achanak ho raha hai isiliye aisa ho raha ho.

Ruhi- haa sahyad tum sahi kah rahi ho.

Iske baad Ruhi khud ko comfortable karne me lag gayi.

Bhabhi- aap chinta me lag rahe hai kya baat hai.

Abhay- aaj ham sab ek sath hote hue v ek sath nhi hai.
Sab alag alag hai. Ruhi soha alag ham dono alag aur karn ka kuch pata hi nhi hai.(aankhon se aashu nikalte hue).

Bhabi- aap chinta na kare wo wapas aayega. Maine uski aankhon me dekha tha, use itni jaldi kuch nhi hoga.

Abhay- aisa hi ho wo aa jaye aur mujhe kuch nhi chahiye.

Bhabhi- maine aap sab ko kitna samjhya tha ki karn aisa kuch nhi kar sakta but aap sabne nhi mana tha. Uski saja toh milni thi toh wahi hua.

Abhay- lekin iski suruat tumne ki thi.

Bhabhi- mujhe thodi na pata tha mujhe toh kuch hi samay hua tha aaye hue toh wo sab mere se ho gaya. But jab maine karn ko jana tab uske baare me pata chala. But aap sab toh hamesa se usi ke sath rahte the tab v aapne uspe sakh kiya.

Abhay- jo hua bas misunderstanding ki wajah se hua.

Bhabhi- aapko yeh misunderstanding lag rahi hai uski jindgi kaise gujar rahi hogi aapko pata v hai. Woh baccha tha us samay.

Abhay- aaj hamare liye kitna bada dinn hai but mere sath mera bhai nhi hai. ( Rote hue).

Bhabhi- chup ek dam sant jo v hua sab bhul jaaye aap toh use hi dundh rahe hai na mil jayega. Abb hame iss bare me soha aur Ruhi ko v bata dena chahiye.

Abhay- tumhara dimaag kharab hai kya bhul ke v iss bare me undono se baat mat karna samjhi. Jitna mai uske close tha usse kahi jayda soha thi aur sabse jayda Ruhi yadi unhe bhanak v lagi na iss bare me toh undono ko Sambhalana muskil ho jayega. Ek baar ko ham soha ke sambhal v le but Ruhi ko namumkin aisa ho hi nhi sakta.

Tumhe malum hai bachapan me jab karn pahli baar ghar aaya tha toh sabse pahle ruhi ke godi me diya gaya. Uske baad kisi ke paas but kuch din baad se Ruhi kisi ko v karn ke pass aane hi nhi deti thi yaha tak ki maa ko v nhi. Jab use feeding karana hota toh hi Ruhi usko maa ko deti thi. Uska yeh attachment badhta gaya. Aur din parti din badhta gaya. Mai toh samjah gaya but soha aur aahana nhi samjhi. Woh uske khelti thi pyar karti but dusre mode se.

Bhabhi- dusre mode se????

Abhay- ladai karke pareshan karke iss trah soha apna time karn ke sath spend karti. Wahi Ruhi ise dilo jaan se chahti. Tumne toh dekha hi tha kaise Ruhi aur karn ek sath sote the. Yeh bachpan se hi hai matlab karn ka sara kam uski dekhbhal har ek chij ki jimmedari Ruhi apne upar liya hua tha. Ek trah se Ruhi karn ki maa dost didi bahut kuch thi. Socho usne kaise faisla kara hoga karn ke khilaf. Tumne khud dekha na wo dono kaise ghar se chale gaye. Wo dono karn ke bina kuch nhi the. Mai avi v kah raha hu karn avi aa jaye woh dono khus ho jayengi pahle ki trah. Jab tak karn tha hamara ghar ek dam chahkta tha abb wahi gahr katne ko daurta hai. Woh bass kisi trah wapas aa jaye bas aur kuch nhi chahiye. Yeh paisa dolat uske samne kuch nhi hai.

Bhabhi- sant sant wo jarur aayega. Aap tention na lo.
Aise hi dono baat kar rahe the.

Udhar dusri gadi me.

Rajveer- usne delhi me paradize hotel me bulaya hai.

Dadaji- thik hai. Aap room book kara lo( Munim jee se). Raat tak pahuch hi jayenge.
Aise hi chalte hue pahuch gaye najdik ke airport. Jab savi ne waha plane dekha toh ek dam uchal gaye. Ek dam khatrnak lag raha tha royal type. Usme sab baith ke nikal gaye. Aaditya aur divyaa Mike ke sath the.

Idhar karn ek tute phute ghar ke samne tha. Aur kuch yaad karte hue aansu baha raha tha.

Aataku- yeh tumhara purana ghar hai na.

Mai- hmmm. Isime bomb blast hua tha. Isko phir se banana hai.

Aataku- fir se par kyo.

Mai- yaha sabse jayada apne maa pitaji ke sath samay gujara hai bass isilye. Aur kuch logo se wada v kiya tha. Chalo abb yaha se jab tak ham pahuchenge woh v pahuch jaayenge.

Uske baad sab aage piche hotel pahuch gaye. Lekin kuch logo ke dil aaj kuch jayda hi dharak rahe the kuch ko kuch jayda hi baichani ho rahi thi.
Fir karn ne rajveer uncle,dada ji aur mark ko room me bulaya.

Mark- bolo kyo bulaya.

Mai- kuch lenge aap log.

Dada ji- mujhe chai.

Mark- coffee.

Rajveer- chai.

Maine phone karke order kar diya aur apne liye milkshake.

Mark- avi v baccho wali harkate karta rahta hai.

Maine mike ko aankh dikha di.

Mark- haa haa sorry sorry. Abb bata kyo bulaya hai.

Mai- main soch raha tha main bhai ka bodyguard matlab rakshak banke rahu.

Dada ji- usse kya hoga.

Mai- isse yeh hoga ki main family ke bich aram se ghus jaunga. Aur main bodyguard rahunga toh wo sab utni details me nhi ghusenge aur mai family me kisi ke v sath jaa sakunga kisi ko sakhh v nhi hoga. Sabse badi baat avi tak unlogo ko nhi malum chala hai ki ham sab aapke pota poti hai. Jab tak pata chalega tabtak rajtilak ho jayega. Sabse badi baat jab wo chhan binn karenge toh mere baare me missing report aayegi toh wo uss sab par dhyan denge hamare pass wahi samay hoga aapne dushman ko dhundne ka muskil se 5 ya 10 maximum 15 din lagenge unhe confirm karne me ki mai hi hu missing person yadi sach me unke pass jara sa v akal hui na toh wo sab ko max. 2 se 3 din me mujhe dundh lenge. Aap sabne jo plan ka phaluda banaya hai uska yeh thoda thik thak plan.

Tab tak hamara chai coffee v aa gaya hamne piya dada ji aur rajveer uncle chale gaye uske baad mai aur mark bache.

Mark- Real plan batao kya hai.

Mai- real plan???

Mark- mujhe chutiya samjh rakha hai kya tera asli plan kya hai. Itna ghatiya plan tu nhi bana sakta.

Mai- mere bhai yahi asli plan but kuch aisi chije hai samay aane par hi pata chale toh accha hai. Lekin tere ko mera ek kaam karna hai.

Mark- thik hai jaisa tu thik samjhe, abb bata kya karna hai.

Mai- fir maine mark ko kuch samjhaya. Aur kaam karane ko bola( aage pata chalega).

Mark- godown ka kya karna hai.

Mai- godown ke baare me bhul ke v avi mat sochna nhi toh ek alag kaand suru ho jayega. Bass saman manga lo. Saman best hona chahiye.

Mark- thik hai. Contact aur paise.

Mai- contact usi naam se hoga jisse pahle hota tha aur paise me arrange kar dunga. Tum baat karo. Tumhare team me kaise hai aadmi.

Mark- tum toh jaante ho tumhari personal team se behtar nhi hoga. But aur sab se accha hoga. Mai toh kahta hu team ko bula lo.

Main- nhi yaar abb wo pariwar wale ho gaye honge kya pata. Unhe apni jindagi jine do.

Mark- jaisa tum sahi samjho. Mere pass snipers kam hai.

Mai- hire kar lo.

Mark- yarr risk hai usme.

Mai- view points kitne hai mahal ke.

Mark- 8 ke ass pass.

Mai- andar se ki bahar se.

Mark- andar se.

Mai- bahar se.

Mark- 4

Mai- sabko bahar se hi nazar rakhne ko kahna aur sab sniper ke sath 1 extra admi bhejna. Jo bachega andar se rakhna aur andar se sabhi view point ki traf machine gun rakhwa dena. Teri problem solve.

Mark- ohh yarrr sari problem solve. But sniper ke sath ek extra addmii kuch samjha nhi.

Mai- yarr dusre snipers v bahar se hi andar dekhenge toh woh v unke ass pass hoga. Toh sniper ek dusre se ladenge ki apna kaam dekhenge.

Mai- sari baat samjh lena location par jaa ke. sabhi ko kal se sabhi jagah laga do aur bahar se full nazar rakhne ko bolo. Pure 5 km area ke ass pass ek parinda v parr mare toh pata lagna chahiye. Sare drons aur high-tech equipment kal tak chahiye aur saman baad me v deliver kare toh chalega yaad rahe jitna jaruri ho usse jayda hi le lena saman.

Mark- ho jayega. Aur equipment sab pahle hi aa gaya hai but drons time lagega.

Mai- jayda paisa de do koi dikkat nhi hai but saman kal chahiye.

Mark- thik hai aur dusre se baat karta hu.

Maine apne bag se ek paper nikala uss par sign karke mark ko de diya.

Mark- yeh paper.

Mai- jab tum wo naam use karoge toh kuch aadmi aayenge jarur. Tm yeh paper dekha dena nhi dikhaoge toh tumhe tapka denge. Yaad rahe unme se kisi se v bhidna mat bhul ke v nhi.

Mark- tum v kisi se darte ho???

Mai- nhi avi unse bhidne ka time nhi hai unka v time aayega bass tum kuch mat kahna wo comments karenge but paper dikha ke nikal jana. Nhi niklane de toh mujhe phone karna wo rukne ko kahe kuch kare but waha rukna mat.

Mark- thik hai dhyan rakhunga.( Mark v thoda darr gaya tha ki aisa kaun hai jo yeh v nhi bhidna chahta. Mark janta tha karn ek no. ka pagal hai. Woh kisi se nhi darta. Phir yeh kaun..)

Aise hi dono baat karte hai.

Dusri traf-

Soha- di aapko nind aa gayi kya.

Ruhi- nhi tujhe v nhi aa rahi hai kya.

Soha- nhi dii wo kuch Dil me kuch ajib sa ho raha hai kuch samjh nhi aa raha.

Ruhi- tuje v ho raha hai.

Soha- apko v.
.
Ruhi- nhi nhi aise galti se nikal gaya hoga. Tu bata kyo ho raha hai.

Soha- dekho di jhut mat bolo. Aap batao kya ho rha hai.

Ruhi- sacchiii me kuch nahi hua hai.

Soha- jaiye aap se baat nhi karti. Gusse se muh phula ke dusri traf ghum gyi.

Ruhi- accha baba thik hai batati hu.

Soha- jan buch kar nhi ghumti wo janti thi ki yeh golden chance hai nakhra karke sab kuch jaan jaungi.

Ruhi- sorry baba idhar ghum jaa choti jo puchegi sab bataungi.

Soha- pakka promise.

Ruhi- promise.

Soha- abb batao kya ho raha hai.

Ruhi- jab se mai hotel me enter hui na tab se bachani jaisa lag raha.Dil me kuch ho raha samjh hi nhi aa raha hai.
Soha- same to same mere sath ho raha hai.

Ruhi- chal jhuthi .

Soha- sacchiii. God promise.

Ruhi- okk okk.

Soha- dii ek baat puchu aap gussa nhi karogi na.

Ruhi- tu kuch v puch sakti hai. kabhi
v gussa kar sakti hu apni pyari bahna par.

Thodi der me room pura sant rahta hai.

Ruhi- puch v kya hua sant kyo ho gayi.

Soha- dii aap maaf kar dogi ussee( darte darte).

Ruhi- kisse maff karna hai bol toh sahi.

Soha- wo dii yaddi apna chotu wapas aa gya toh kya aap maaf kar dogi usse.

RUhi isss sawal se pahle wo sab hua ek baar fir se yaad aa jata hai aur uske chahra aur aankhe laal ho jatai hai.

soha- dii aap ne promise kara tha aap gussa nhi hogi. So calm down relax relax.

ruhi- accha abb so ja raat bahut ho gyi hai. Good night.

dono bahne apne hi khyal me khoi hui thi. Aise hi yeh raat aur ghani aur andheri honi lagti hai.

abb dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.




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SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC FANTASTIC EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
 

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Wow story is superb,aaj last ke sab update ek saath padha maja aa gaya bhai....karn to apne Bachpan me hi jawan ho gaya :wink: aur uske saath parivar ka security ke jimmedari mili to thoda gambhir bhi ho gaya......divya is so cute and karn aur divya ke bich romance bahut bhadiya hai,karn aur uske doston ke sath comic timing bhi lajwab hai,aur woh dadaji wala action scene to ek dam phadu tha, overall the story is superb and waiting for next update:respekt:
 
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