Fantasy Anokha Pyar
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Update 3
Hame thoda pichhe chalate hain jab Ranvanshi yani Raghu ke ghar me sab khana khakar apne apne kamaron me sone ja chuke the uske kuch der bad hi Raghav ko Simaran ka call aaya tha uske bad ki sari bate hamane update 1&2 me padhi, ye bus update 1 se thoda pahle ki bat hain kyoki haman Raghav ka kamara dekha fir waha se baithi Simar and mandali ka kamara dekha. Abhi bhi kuch log bache hain jinke kamare dekhna jaruri hain aayi chalate hain sabse pahle is ghar ke mukhiya yani Raghu aur Kavita ke bedroom me.
Dono apne apne night dress me bed ke sirhane se tek lagaye baithe the. Dono ke man me jaise koi jung chal rhi thi. Kisi bat ka sanshay dono ke dil me tha.
Dono ek dusare se bat karna chahate the kisi bat ko lekar lekin dono apne apne jado jahad me lage pade the lekin ant me Kavita ne chuppi thodi.
Kavita: aap bhi wo hi soch rhe ho jo main soch rhi hoon?
Raghu: mujhe nhi pta Kavita tum kya soch rhi ho magar main aane wale samay ke bare soch rha hoon us bhavishyvani ke bare me soch rha hoon jo hamare ghar chhodane kuch din pahle guru ji ne ki thi.
Kavita: kya ye mumkin hain aur kya wo bat sach nikalegi jo unhone kaha tha?
Raghu: Tum bachpan se hi apne ghar se bahar rhi shayad tum us samay apne sare rishtedaron ko nhi pahchanati magar main to kabhi ghar se bahar nhi rha hain. Mujhe sab pta hain isliye main ye dave ke sath kah sakta hoon ki guru ji ki bhavishyavani galat nhi hogi jo unhone kaha hain wo vaise hoga. Hamare samay ki bat kuch aur thi magar aaj ke samay me ye hona asan to hain magar is bat vishwas koun karega.
Kavita: lekin meri tension sirf yehi nhi hain.
Raghu: or kya hain?
Kavita: bachchon ko jab sab pta chalega tab kya hoga? Ham kaise unhe kahege ki hamane itani badi bat unse chhupayi hain.
Raghu: ye bat to tum sahi kah rhi ho iska hal to pahle sochna padega.
Kavita: maine soch rakha hain bus aaj aap se discus kare ke kal se bachchon ke aage rakhane ka plan hain.
Raghu: tumhe pta hain fir kya hoga?
Kavita: aap galat soch rhe hain, bhavishy me jo hone ka dar hain main wo batane ko nhi kah rhi balki main hamare bare me aur pariwar ke me batane ki soch rhi hoon jisme bhavishyvani ka jikar nhi hoga kyoki jo bhavishy me hona hain use bavishy pe chhod de to achchha hain.
Raghu: bat tumhari shi magar tumhe pta hain na Raghav ye sab jante hi sab kuch khojane nikal padega fir wo bat bhi nikal kar ayegi fir wo kya karega ?
Kavita: iska solution hain mere pas, uske 21 tak rok lene ka.
Raghu: kya solution hain?
Kavita: meri kasam jo wo kabhi nhi todega.
Raghu: thik hain jo tumhe sahi lage wo karo bus dhyan rakhna.
Kavita: thik hain ab sote kafi rat ho gayi hain.
Dono pati patni ek dusare ko bahon me bhar ke so gaye.
Hame thoda pichhe chalate hain jab Ranvanshi yani Raghu ke ghar me sab khana khakar apne apne kamaron me sone ja chuke the uske kuch der bad hi Raghav ko Simaran ka call aaya tha uske bad ki sari bate hamane update 1&2 me padhi, ye bus update 1 se thoda pahle ki bat hain kyoki haman Raghav ka kamara dekha fir waha se baithi Simar and mandali ka kamara dekha. Abhi bhi kuch log bache hain jinke kamare dekhna jaruri hain aayi chalate hain sabse pahle is ghar ke mukhiya yani Raghu aur Kavita ke bedroom me.
Dono apne apne night dress me bed ke sirhane se tek lagaye baithe the. Dono ke man me jaise koi jung chal rhi thi. Kisi bat ka sanshay dono ke dil me tha.
Dono ek dusare se bat karna chahate the kisi bat ko lekar lekin dono apne apne jado jahad me lage pade the lekin ant me Kavita ne chuppi thodi.
Kavita: aap bhi wo hi soch rhe ho jo main soch rhi hoon?
Raghu: mujhe nhi pta Kavita tum kya soch rhi ho magar main aane wale samay ke bare soch rha hoon us bhavishyvani ke bare me soch rha hoon jo hamare ghar chhodane kuch din pahle guru ji ne ki thi.
Kavita: kya ye mumkin hain aur kya wo bat sach nikalegi jo unhone kaha tha?
Raghu: Tum bachpan se hi apne ghar se bahar rhi shayad tum us samay apne sare rishtedaron ko nhi pahchanati magar main to kabhi ghar se bahar nhi rha hain. Mujhe sab pta hain isliye main ye dave ke sath kah sakta hoon ki guru ji ki bhavishyavani galat nhi hogi jo unhone kaha hain wo vaise hoga. Hamare samay ki bat kuch aur thi magar aaj ke samay me ye hona asan to hain magar is bat vishwas koun karega.
Kavita: lekin meri tension sirf yehi nhi hain.
Raghu: or kya hain?
Kavita: bachchon ko jab sab pta chalega tab kya hoga? Ham kaise unhe kahege ki hamane itani badi bat unse chhupayi hain.
Raghu: ye bat to tum sahi kah rhi ho iska hal to pahle sochna padega.
Kavita: maine soch rakha hain bus aaj aap se discus kare ke kal se bachchon ke aage rakhane ka plan hain.
Raghu: tumhe pta hain fir kya hoga?
Kavita: aap galat soch rhe hain, bhavishy me jo hone ka dar hain main wo batane ko nhi kah rhi balki main hamare bare me aur pariwar ke me batane ki soch rhi hoon jisme bhavishyvani ka jikar nhi hoga kyoki jo bhavishy me hona hain use bavishy pe chhod de to achchha hain.
Raghu: bat tumhari shi magar tumhe pta hain na Raghav ye sab jante hi sab kuch khojane nikal padega fir wo bat bhi nikal kar ayegi fir wo kya karega ?
Kavita: iska solution hain mere pas, uske 21 tak rok lene ka.
Raghu: kya solution hain?
Kavita: meri kasam jo wo kabhi nhi todega.
Raghu: thik hain jo tumhe sahi lage wo karo bus dhyan rakhna.
Kavita: thik hain ab sote kafi rat ho gayi hain.
Dono pati patni ek dusare ko bahon me bhar ke so gaye.
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Update 4
Ayiye ab chalate hain is ghar ek kamare jahan ek pyari si ladaki pet ke bel leti huyi apne hathon me wk photo liye huye usase batein kar rhi thi.
Ladki: main janti hoon jo mujhe hua hain ya jo main soch rhi hoon galat hain magar kya karu mujhe tumse kab pyar ho gaya mujhe pta hi nhi chala. Jis din sabko pta chalega us din kya hoga bhagwan hi jane magar tumhe pakar rahugi mujhe apna pyar chahiye iske mujhe khud ko badlna pda to bui badal lugi. Pyra me itna to kar sakti hoon. Tum kab meri jindagi ban gaye mujhe pta hi nhi chala aur jab tak tumhe apne dil ke halata samajha na doo mujhe chain bhi nhi padega. Tum itane achchhe kyo ki main dil har baithi pyar to kiya magar kisase jise kabhi pa na saku magar kya hua timhari meera ban ke rah loogi. I love you and good night.
ye bolkar ladki ne photo ko takiye ke niche rakha aur so gayi.
Abhi kahani me bahut log aane hain ye kahani kuch pramukh patr hi samane aaye hain, introduction sirf ek pariwar ka hua hain. Abhi to bahut kuch baki hain isliye jab sare kirdar ek bar nazar aa jayege tab ek itro update duga.
Aayiye tab tak kuch jagah aur ho aate hain akhir rat ka samay bitana bhi to hain.
Is shahar dur kahin kisi jagah ek bahut badi haveli me jahan pure ghar ki light band ho chuki thi magar ek kamare ki light jal rhi thi jahan do bujurg dampati bister par let huye the.
Mahila: kya guru ji ki bat sach hogi?
Purush: kya kabhi unki bat galat huyi hain jo tum ye bat pooch rhi ho. Jab se dono gaye hain tab tum khud dekh lo sabko ladki hi paida huyi jaise koi shrap lag gaya ho dono gharo ko.
Mahila: lekin aesa huankyo agar dono pariwar sath hote to shayad ye noubat hi nhi aati lekin dono pariwaron pitaji alag kyo rakha.
Purush: maine poochha tha guru ji se kyoki pitaji unko hi karan bta ke gaye the. Jab maine guru ji poochha to unhone kahan ki pitaji ka karan tha ham dono bhai dur rahege aur ham menhod lagi rahegi to dono pariwar ek dusare ko footi ankh nhi suhayega tab un dono ka milna sambhav nhi hoga magar ho gaya.
Mahila: pitaji ye kaise bhool gaye niyati apna kam karwa leti hain kisi bhi tarah se wohi hua jo hona tha magar iska karan kya hain?
Purush: ye toujhe bhi nhi pta tumne shi kiya poochh kar kal jakar guruji se milta hoon fir pta chalega.
Mahila: un dono ka kuch pta chala, kyoki qkhir in sab se mukti tonunhi ke pas hain.
Purush: pta nhi pahle wo Lucknow gaye kuch sal waha rahe tab unhe ek ladki thi fir kaha gayab ho gaye kuch pta hi nhi chala maine har shahar khoj chukanjaise khud ko lahin chhupa kar baith gaye ho.
Mahila: khojate rahe pta to chale qo hua jiska intejar hain unhe to pta bhi nhi hain sab kuch ka.
Purush: unhe pta hain magar adha isliye unka milna aur bhi jaruri ho gaya hain lyoki wo jab ayega tab shapit kund khojega nhi dono rajy tabah ho jayege agar samay se pahle wo kund na khoja gaya to.
Mahila: sab prabhu ki ichachha chaliye sote kal guru dev se milane jana padega.
Wohi ye hall waha se kuch kilometer duri pe bane Haveli me bhi.
Mahila: aap ne bade bhaiya se bat ki ye sab kyo ho rha hai ?
Purush: naam bhi na lo unka unke chirag ne jo kiya hain.
Mahila: unka chirag akela kar sakta tha kya jab tak apki laksmi ka sath hota. Aap dekh nhi rahe hain shayad jab dono gaye hain dono ghar ke beto aie betiyo ke ghar sab ladkiya paida ho rhi hai aesa rha to sara vansh khatm ho jayega.
Purush: dekh rha hoon magar bhaiya se poochhane ki jagah kal guru dev se jakar bat karta hoon unki wo bhavishyvani kya thi aur ye sab kya ho rha hain.
Mahila: chalye ye badiya soch rahe hain aap ab so jate hain kal guru dev se bhi milane jana hain.
Ek kutiya baitha ek sadhu veshdhari vyakti sadhana me baithe baithuskura rha tha.
"Tum sab kya jano niyati ka khel niyati apna khel khelna shuru kar chuki hain"
Ayiye ab chalate hain is ghar ek kamare jahan ek pyari si ladaki pet ke bel leti huyi apne hathon me wk photo liye huye usase batein kar rhi thi.
Ladki: main janti hoon jo mujhe hua hain ya jo main soch rhi hoon galat hain magar kya karu mujhe tumse kab pyar ho gaya mujhe pta hi nhi chala. Jis din sabko pta chalega us din kya hoga bhagwan hi jane magar tumhe pakar rahugi mujhe apna pyar chahiye iske mujhe khud ko badlna pda to bui badal lugi. Pyra me itna to kar sakti hoon. Tum kab meri jindagi ban gaye mujhe pta hi nhi chala aur jab tak tumhe apne dil ke halata samajha na doo mujhe chain bhi nhi padega. Tum itane achchhe kyo ki main dil har baithi pyar to kiya magar kisase jise kabhi pa na saku magar kya hua timhari meera ban ke rah loogi. I love you and good night.
ye bolkar ladki ne photo ko takiye ke niche rakha aur so gayi.
Abhi kahani me bahut log aane hain ye kahani kuch pramukh patr hi samane aaye hain, introduction sirf ek pariwar ka hua hain. Abhi to bahut kuch baki hain isliye jab sare kirdar ek bar nazar aa jayege tab ek itro update duga.
Aayiye tab tak kuch jagah aur ho aate hain akhir rat ka samay bitana bhi to hain.
Is shahar dur kahin kisi jagah ek bahut badi haveli me jahan pure ghar ki light band ho chuki thi magar ek kamare ki light jal rhi thi jahan do bujurg dampati bister par let huye the.
Mahila: kya guru ji ki bat sach hogi?
Purush: kya kabhi unki bat galat huyi hain jo tum ye bat pooch rhi ho. Jab se dono gaye hain tab tum khud dekh lo sabko ladki hi paida huyi jaise koi shrap lag gaya ho dono gharo ko.
Mahila: lekin aesa huankyo agar dono pariwar sath hote to shayad ye noubat hi nhi aati lekin dono pariwaron pitaji alag kyo rakha.
Purush: maine poochha tha guru ji se kyoki pitaji unko hi karan bta ke gaye the. Jab maine guru ji poochha to unhone kahan ki pitaji ka karan tha ham dono bhai dur rahege aur ham menhod lagi rahegi to dono pariwar ek dusare ko footi ankh nhi suhayega tab un dono ka milna sambhav nhi hoga magar ho gaya.
Mahila: pitaji ye kaise bhool gaye niyati apna kam karwa leti hain kisi bhi tarah se wohi hua jo hona tha magar iska karan kya hain?
Purush: ye toujhe bhi nhi pta tumne shi kiya poochh kar kal jakar guruji se milta hoon fir pta chalega.
Mahila: un dono ka kuch pta chala, kyoki qkhir in sab se mukti tonunhi ke pas hain.
Purush: pta nhi pahle wo Lucknow gaye kuch sal waha rahe tab unhe ek ladki thi fir kaha gayab ho gaye kuch pta hi nhi chala maine har shahar khoj chukanjaise khud ko lahin chhupa kar baith gaye ho.
Mahila: khojate rahe pta to chale qo hua jiska intejar hain unhe to pta bhi nhi hain sab kuch ka.
Purush: unhe pta hain magar adha isliye unka milna aur bhi jaruri ho gaya hain lyoki wo jab ayega tab shapit kund khojega nhi dono rajy tabah ho jayege agar samay se pahle wo kund na khoja gaya to.
Mahila: sab prabhu ki ichachha chaliye sote kal guru dev se milane jana padega.
Wohi ye hall waha se kuch kilometer duri pe bane Haveli me bhi.
Mahila: aap ne bade bhaiya se bat ki ye sab kyo ho rha hai ?
Purush: naam bhi na lo unka unke chirag ne jo kiya hain.
Mahila: unka chirag akela kar sakta tha kya jab tak apki laksmi ka sath hota. Aap dekh nhi rahe hain shayad jab dono gaye hain dono ghar ke beto aie betiyo ke ghar sab ladkiya paida ho rhi hai aesa rha to sara vansh khatm ho jayega.
Purush: dekh rha hoon magar bhaiya se poochhane ki jagah kal guru dev se jakar bat karta hoon unki wo bhavishyvani kya thi aur ye sab kya ho rha hain.
Mahila: chalye ye badiya soch rahe hain aap ab so jate hain kal guru dev se bhi milane jana hain.
Ek kutiya baitha ek sadhu veshdhari vyakti sadhana me baithe baithuskura rha tha.
"Tum sab kya jano niyati ka khel niyati apna khel khelna shuru kar chuki hain"