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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Characters Introduction

Family Intro.


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Hero - Rocky (Sagar)
Age - 19
Hight - 5.10
Colour - Fair & Blue Eyes
Attractive body 6 pack abs with cute face athletes body sath me boxing champion bhi hai
{state level tak khela hai "Gold Medalist" hai boxing me}
Ladkiyan marti hain ispe
par ye kisi ko bhaw nahin deta keval apni family or friends se baat karta hai.
Agar koi ladki isko bina shirt ke dekh le to bas isme hi kho jaae.

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Aadat me Bilkul apne papa par gaya hai
Bohot hi nek or shareef.
BCA 1st year me hai
12th me district topper hai
Iski jaan apni behen me basti hai
Papa ka ladla hai.
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Sister - Mansi {Manu} pyar ka naam
Age - 18
Hight - 5.6
Figure - 32 - 28 - 32
Colour - Fair & blue eyes
Very cute girl & very modern
Zyadatar jeans top hi pehenti hai
12th me hai apni class ki topper
Bilkul apni maa par gayi hai
Apne bhai se bohot pyar karti hai.
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Father - Keshav Thakur
Age - 40 years
Hight - 5.10
Abhi bhi 30 saal ke lagte hain...
Or daily Yoga & Natural workout karte hain
Sheher me Computer parts ki
Import/ Export ki Company hai khud ki
Or sath me ek mall bhi hai jo inhone
Rockey ke naam kar rakha hai..
Apni patni or dono bete or beti se bohot pyar karte hain
Khaskar apne bete se ...
Kyonki vo ek nek or shareef ladka hai.
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Mother - Archna Devi
Age - 38
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with cute & Attractive face
Figure - 38 - 34 - 38
Ye house wife ( घरेलू महिला ) hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyar karti hain.

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Dada - Thakur Vishnupratap (विष्णुप्रताप) 70 years
Dadi - Koshalya Devi 65 years
Gaw ki haveli me apne bade bete Gajendra ke sath rehte hain
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Chacha - Thakur Gajendra Singh (गजेन्दर)
Age - 44 years
Vishnupratap ki gaw me pushteni zameen hai or ye kheton or mazdooron ka hisab kitab karte hain

Chachi - Meenakshi Devi
Age - 42 years
Gharelu mahila hain bohot sundar hain
Figure - 36 - 32 - 36

Sakshi - Gajendra or Meenakshi ki beti
Age - 20 years (BBA 2nd year)
Padhai me average hai
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Figure - 34 - 30 - 34
Hight - 5.5
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Bua - Rekha Thakur 34 years
Pratap Thakur - Rekha ke pati 36 years
Priya - Rekha or Pratap ki beti (12th class)
18 years , Cute face & sexy body
Figure- 30 - 28 - 32
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Nana - Birjesh Thakur (Died)
Nani - Neelima Devi (Died)
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Mama - Nagesh Thakur - 44 years
Mami - Chanda Devi - 41 years

Preeti - Nagesh or chanda ki beti
Age - 18 years (12th class)
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with Attractive face
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Mausa - Jitendra Thakur 50 years
Masi - Sulochna Devi 48 years
Vikas - beta 22 years
( Bank me job karta hai)
Nisha - beti (B.Tech 3rd Year CS)
Age - 20 years
Hight - 5.5
Colour - Fair with sexy body

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Friends intro.

1). Hans (हंस)
Age - 19
rocky ke sath hi 10th & 12th kiya tha
Or ab bhi sath me hi padhta hai
good looking or mastmola banda hai ... apne dost par jaan bhi dene ko tayyar rehta hai
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2). Raju
Age - 19
Rocky ka bachpan ka dost or best friend hai
Or nursery se college tak sath hi hain
Rocky or raju ke papa dost hain isliye Dono ki family bhi aapas me milti rehti hain har wedding party me... ya kisi bhi sukh dukh me
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3). Pallavi (College friend)
Age - 19
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Figure - 32 - 28 - 34
Eyes - light green { कंजी आँखें }
( chalta phirta sex bomb hai ) bohot ladke marte hain par ye kisi ko bhaw nahin deti sirf apne group se hi baaten karti hai or Rocky ke liye love feelings hain par aaj tak keh nahin payi


Vaishali - Pallavi's Mom
38 year's old
Dil ki ekdum saaf or House wife hain.
Eklouti beti hai Pallavi,
isi liye usse jaan se zyada pyaar karti hain.

Deepak - Pallavi's Father
40 year's old
Bikes ki agency hai khud ki
Sankarik aadmi hain.


Note- (Rocky ke Friends ke mummy papa or bhai behno ka intro unka wakht aane par hoga).
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Other character intro.

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Leeza - JinnLok ki rajkumaari
Menka - Leeza ki chhoti behen
Aghora - Leeza ke father & Jinnlok ke king
Avanti - Mother & Queen of Jinnlok
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Anjalika (Anju) - Pari
Rocky se bachpan se pyaar karti hai
Dil ki ekdum saaf or bohot pyaari hai.

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Rachna - College Teacher
(रचना)
Age- 26 years
Figure - 36-32-36
Bole to ek dam solid peace.
Shadi shuda hai par husband out of country job karta hai .)

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Shaitaan & Party intro - "Update - 58"
Note-
(Bhailog baki ke jitne characters add honge unka intro baad me hoga or yahan bhi update hota rehega).
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Update -- 1


Nainital sheher me 'Naini Jheel' ke
kinare bani hui hai ek pyari si
Villa Jiska naam uske bahar lage hue
Marble ke patthar par Golden colour se
likha hua hai.
"Thakur Villa"


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Bohot hi alishan villa hai

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Is villa ko banvane me ek baar ko to
Thakur Keshav bhi karze me aa gaye the..

Phir apne achchhe bussiness ke chalte jaldi hi recovery kar li.
Is villa me sabke apne separate rooms hain.

Or Rocky ne apne papa se kahkar neeche 1 private Gym bhi add karva rakha hai


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Jisme vo daily exercise karta hai

Ek Bada hall hai jahan dining table rakhi hui hai.


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Neeche bohot saare rooms hain
(Villa me Itne rooms to hote hi hain isliye couning nahin likhi)
1 room me Rocky ke mom - dad rehte
baki ke Guest rooms hain.
Sabhi rooms me Washroom attached hain.
(Par jab bhi Rocky ki koi bhi
cousin sisters aati hain vo
zyadatar sirf rocky na manu ke sath hi sona pasand karti hain.)
Hall me hi ek taraf kitchen hai.
Hall se hi Stairs hain first floor
par jane ke liye.


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Oopar 1st floor par bohot se rooms hain ek hamare hero Rocky ka hai

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Rocky ka room sabse unique hai
Matlab sabse zyada bada or zaroorat ki har cheez se bhara hua king size bed ke sath.
Barabar me hi doosra room
Is ghar ki sabse pyari & cute girl mansi ka hai


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Mansi ka room bhi kisi
rajkumari ke room se kam nahin hai...
Usne apne room ko is
tarhan sajaya hai ki dekhne vale ko yahi lagega ki ye ladki safai par kitna
dhiyan deti hai.
{Haan ye baat alag hai ki vo soti
zyadatar apne bhai ke room me hi hai.}
baki ke rooms band hain...
Sabhi rooms me Toilet & Bathroom attech hain
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(Ab Aate Hain Story Par)


Roz ki tarhan Rocky subha 5 baje sokar utha or
Fresh hokar apni daily exercise ke liye
Neeche chal diya
1 ghanta Exercise karne ke baad
kitchen me jakar 2 cup coffee
banakar chal diya apni gudiya ke room me
Room lock nahin tha ...
Rocky ne andar jakar dekha to mansi
So rahi thi ... sote hue badi
hi pyari lag rahi thi ...
Rocky ne pyar se uske sar
par hath phera uske baad
uske phoole phoole galo par kiss kiya ...
Jisse mansi kasmasane
lagi or uske chehre par
ek pyari si muskaan aa gayi.
Or smile karte hue boli
Mansi - Good Morning Sweetu Bhaiyya
Rocky - Good Morning sweety
Chalo uth jao school nahin jana kya

Mansi - Bhai sone do na... (masoom sa chehra banate hue)

Rocky (with smile)- chal notanki uth rahi hai ya neeche se mummy ko bheju..

Mansi (jaldi se uth kar baithte hue)- uth rahi hun dara kyon rahe ho...

Rockey (haste hue)- dara nahin raha sweety jaldi uth jao aaj mera first day hai college me
Or main first day hi late nahin hona chahta.

Mansi (Khush hote hue)- Maain to bohot excited hun..
aaj jo bhi
College me ho aap vapas aakar zaroor batana
(Ye dono bachpan se hi har baat share karte hain)

Rocky - Achchha theek hai pehle tu fatafat fresh ho kar coffee pee varna thandi ho jaegi...

Mansi - Thanks bhai coffee ke liye..

Rocky - Chal pagal bhai ko Thanks bolti hai... Ye to meri roz ki duty hai... (Smile)

Mansi - Hahahahah O.K bhai...
Aap neeche chaliye main aati hun fresh hokar or coffee peekar .

Rocky - Jaldi aana neeche mummy papa wait kar rahe honge Dining table par
Kehte hue rocky neeche chala gaya
Neeche dining table par papa akhbar padhte hue chai ki chuskiyan le rahe the ...

Rocky - Good Morning dad

Dad - Good Morning beta aao - aao baitho.
To barkhudar Aaj to aapka college me first day hai

Rocky - Ji dad sahi kaha aapne.

Dad- Agar koi ragging kare to call kar dena

Rocky - Dad main sambhal lunga waise bhi main akela kahan ja raha hun sath me raju or hans to hain unhone bhi mere sath hi admission liya hai.

Dad - hmm theek hai... apni car le jana

Rocky - Dad aapko to pata hai na mujhe show off karna kitna bura lagta hai
Isse pehle ki dad kuchh javaab dete
(Mom kitchen se bahar aate hue)
Mom - Kyon subha - subha mere bete ko pareshan kar rahe ho

Dad - lo ji ab apne bete se pyar bhi nahin jata sakta

Mom (dad ko ghoorte hue)- Haan haan tum hi karte ho pyar ham to karte hi nahin..

Rocky - Good Morning mom

Mom - Good Morning beta... teri gudiya kahan hai ... uthi nahin abhi tak

Itne me mansi bhi seediyan utarti hui

Mansi - Good Morning everyone...

Sabhi - Good Morning...

Rocky - mom aaj breakfast me kya hai

Mom - beta aaj mansi ki pasand ka hai
Shahi Paneer, chhole & poori or Rayta.

Rocky - isme naya kya hai ... ye to roz hi hota hai.. mansi ki pasand ... kyon manu

Mansi - Thanks mom... jee bhai .. because, Mom love me so much...

Rocky - koi baat nahin mere papa hain na mujhe pyar karne ke liye...
Papa - haan ji bilkul...

Isi tarhan mazak masti ke sath bteakfast khatam hota hai...

Phir rocky apne room me jakar kapde change karta hai college jane ke liye.

To... Be... Continued
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EX --

Isi tarhan mazak masti ke sath bteakfast khatam hota hai...
Phir rocky apne room me jakar kapde change karta hai college jane ke liye.


NEXT --

Black Shirt , Black Pant , Or sath me Black Blazer or hath me Black watch pairo me Black Shoes.
Bole to ek dum "ALL BLACK"

Kapde change karke neeche aata hai aaj Rocky kuchh zyada hi smart lag raha tha...

ek to 18 ka dola or 6 pack abs or oopar se fitting ke kapde.

Mansi (Seeti bajate hue)- Aaj to ladkiyan gayin kaam se.

Jisse apna hero blush karne laga.

Mom ander se kajal ki dibbi lati hain or rockey ke kan ke peeche ek teeka lagati hain

Mom - Nazar na lage mere bete ko

Dad - Beta aaj college ja to raha hai sath me bahu mat le aana
Sabhi hasne lagte hain or rocky blush karne lagta hai...

Ye baat sunkar mansi thodi mayus si ho gayi thi par usne zahir nahin hone diya

Ab ye kyon hua ye to vo hi jane..

Or rockey or mansi sabko bye karke chal dete hain apne school/ college
Or papa apne Office apni car se
Manu apni scooty se or Rocky apni Bullet se

Abhi Rocky thodi door hi pohocha tha ki
Uske phone ki ghanti bajti hai...
Rocky bike side me laga kar
Phone pick kiya

Hans - Hello bhai kahan par hai
Rocky- Bhai college ke liye nikal gaya hun raste me hun

Hans - Theek hai .. college ki parking me mil ham dono bhi aa rahe hain.

Rocky - Ok ... phone rakh kar chal deta hai college ki taraf
Charecter intro - Hans

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(हंस)
Age - 19
rocky ke sath hi 10th & 12th kiya tha
Or ab bhi sath me hi padhta hai
good looking or mastmola banda hai ... apne dost par jaan bhi dene ko tayyar rehta hai
( Hans or Raju ka ghar paas me hi hai isliye dono shuru se college sath hi jaate hain... or Rocky ka ghar inse 2-3 km door hai...)

Rocky college ki parking me apni Bullet park karta hai or double stand laga kar uske oopar baithkar apne dono doston (Hans & Raju) ka intzaar karne lagta hai...

Kuchh hi der me dono dost bhi parking me pohochte hain..

Raju & Hans - Hii Rocky
(Rocky dono se gale milke) - Hii

Rocky- kaise hain dono kameene
Dono - Mastt hain bhai tu suna

Rocky - Mastt.. .. chalo chalte hain college ke andar...

(Or teeno chal dete hain college ke andar)
Charecter intro-
Raju

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(राजू)
(Rocky ka bachpan ka dost or best friend hai
Or nursery se college tak sath hi hain
Rocky or raju ke papa dost hain isliye Dono ki family bhi aapas me milti rehti hain har wedding party me... ya kisi bhi sukh dukh me
Teeno be college Gate se hero ki tarhan entry maari..)

Sabhi inki taraf dekhne lage ladkiyan to sirf Rocky ko dekhe ja rahi thin...

Or apna boyfriend banane ke khuwab dekh rahi thin..

Ladki 1 - Abe Kon hai ye handsome.

Ladki 2 - pata nahin yarr Fresher lagta hai... agar ye haan bol de to main iski GF ban jaaun...

Ladki 3 - Kya pata iski pehle se Girlfriend ho.. dekha nahin kitna hot hai

Ladki 1 - Pata karna padega...

Ye Teeno dost seedha pohochte hain Registrar office or vahan se apne I'D collect karte hain...

(I'D - colege card hota hai jisme name mention hota hai with photo & address or Library ka username bhi hota hai jisse koi bhi student Library se book issue karva sakta hai).

Raju - chal bhai class chalte hain
Hans- nahin yarr pehle apni favourite jagah chalte hain CANTEEN

Rocky (haste hue) chalo salo pehle canteen hi chalte hain...waise bhi abhi class shuru hone me 25 minute hain.

Or teeno chal dete hain canteen...
{Jahan ek musibat inka intzaar kar rahi thi}

Jaise hi canteen me ghuste hain vahan kuchh seniors freshers ki ragging le rahe the.

Un seniors me 2 ladkiyan or 3 ladke the.

Jo ek khoobsurat si ladki ki ragging le rahe the or ek ladke ko tablet par murga banaya hua tha...

Or ek senior us ladki se badtameezi kar raha tha..

(Senior ladke ko SL or senior girl ko SG likhunga)

SL 1- E ladki chal mujhe kiss kar
Wo ladki (rote hue) - plzz mujhe jane do.

SL 3- are aise kaise jane den.

SG 1 (Haste hue) - ye ladki mujhe lasbi lagti hai isi liye ladke ko kiss karne se mana kar rahi hai...

{Is baat par pacho seniors hasne lagte hain}
Tabhi SL2 ki nazar teeno doston par padi jo kuchh hi duri par khade hue gusse me ye tamasha dekh rahe the.

SL2 ne Apne sathiyo ko hamari taraf ishara kiya.

Tabhi sab hamari or dekhne lage
Unme se ek bola FRESHER.

Raju - yes.

SG2 - to teeno idhar aao or apna naam batao

(Dono Senior girls Rocky ko dekhkar kaafi impressed thin)

Teeno aage badhe or un ke paas jakar khade ho gaye or apna intro. diya.

SG2- (SG1 ke kaan me) is ki aakhen dekh blue eyes vala gana to is par hi shoot karta hai.

SG1- (Sg2 ke kaan me)- Abe aakhen chhod body dekh ...

SL2 (zor se) ye tum dono kya khusar-phusar kar rahi ho... inki ragging lo...

SG1 (Hosh me aate hue)- hmmm (Rocky se) apni shirt utaro.

Teeno dost ek doosre ki shakal dekhne lage.

SL2 - suna nahin kya kaha... apni shirt utaro...
Rocky ne pehle apna blazer utara fir apni shirt utaar di...

Wahan baitha har shaks rocky ko aise dekhne laga jaise koi ajooba dekh liya ho...

18 ka dola, chaudi chhati, six pack abbs with masoom sa chehra..

(Jis ladki ki ragging li ja rahi thi uske aasu ruk gaye or vo kabhi Rocky ki body kabhi uske masoom chehre ko dekhne lagi).

Or dono senier ladko ki gaand hi phat ke chaar ho gayi...

SL1 (Apne aap ko sambhalte hue) O.k o.k ab tum ja sakte ho or apne doston ko bhi le jaao.

Rocky (Apne kapde pehente hue) - Aise kaise chale jaaen.. jin frashers ki tum log ragging le rahe ho usko bhi chhod do ... ragging is a crime in India.

To... Be... Continued
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Update -- 3


Ex-

Rocky (Apne kapde pehente hue) - Aise kaise chale jaaen.. jin frashers ki tum log ragging le rahe ho usko bhi chhod do ... ragging is a crime in India.


Next-

SL2 (Gusse me) hamne bola na jao yahan se...
(Ab tak canteen me kafi bheed ikatthi ho gayi thi)

Raju- (Rocky or hans ki taraf ishara karke) bolo bhai log.

Rocky ne bhi haan me gardan hila di..

Or shuru ho gayi teeno senior ladkon ki dhunai wo bhi 3 or ye bhi 3

Or dono senior ladkiyan dar ke maare ek kone me khadi ho gayin...

Par apne hero ne SL1 ke 1 panch mara muh pae... uska jabda tak hil gaya or muh se khoon aane laga.

(Aakhir boxer tha apna hero vo bhi gold medalist)

Baki dono ko hans or raju ne sambhal liya or rockey ne bhi madad ki, kuchh hi der me teeno senior ladke muh ke bal gire hue dhool chaat rahe the.

Rocky (Gusse me chillate hue) - Agar aaj ke baad kisi bhi frasher ko pareshan kiya to chalne ke liye pair, or dhone ke liye hath nahin bachega...

Phir (Dono senior Girls ki taraf dekhte hue) tumhen sharam nahin aati ye sab karte hue.

SG1 (Num aakhon se dari hui aawaz me)-
Hamare sath bhi to yahi hua tha...

Rockey (Gusse se ghoorte hue)- to tum log uska badka har frasher ko pareshan karke nikaloge.

(Itne teeno senior ladke apne kapde jhadte hue khade ho gaye the)
SL2- (Hath jodkar) - Sorry Bhai... ab kisi ko pareshan nahin karenge.


Phir sabhi seniors ne maafi maangi or chale gaye...

Canteen se bahar nikalne ke baad tewno ladko ne sath aayi ladkiyon ko bhej diya or khud field me jakar baith gaye..

SL1 - Sale ne jabda hila diya.

SL3- Abe tujhe jabde ki padi hai sala ne bhare canteen me sabhi students ke saamne insult kar di.

SL2- (Jo ab tak chup tha kuchh sochta hua bola)- isko takat se harana mushkil hai or paise se bhi isko to sirf dimaag se haraya ja sakta hai.

SL3-(Choukte hue) Paise se bhi ka kya matlab hai?

SL2- Mere papa hamesha ek baat kehte hain ki agar kisi ki aukaat ka pata lagana ho to uske pairo ki taraf dekho ki usne pairo me kya pehna hua hai

Or tum dono ne uske shoes or kapde dekhe
Buscemi 100 MM High Top Leather Sneakers in Guts - Red. Price- ₹ 36,741.77

SL1- Fu bada jaanta hai shoes or uske price ke bare me (smile)

SL2- Abe kyon ki mere papa ki shoes ki hi co. hai.

(Itne ye baat karke kuchh plan banaen chalte hain vapas canteen inke jane ke bd kya hua)

Vahan par sabhi student taliyan bajane lage.

(Vo Ladki or Ladka jinki ragging ho rahi thi)
Dono Rockey & Group ke paas aaye.

Ladka- ThankYou so much bhai

Raju - Its O.k .

Vo ladka teeno ko ThankYou bol kar hath milakar chala gaya...

Baki student bhi apni apni baato me mashgool ho chuke the...

Bachi vo kadki jiski ragging ho rahi thi
Ladki - Hi, Myself Pllavi.
New charecter intro. -
Pallavi (New College friend)

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(पल्लवी)
Age - 19
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Figure - 32 - 28 - 34
Eyes - light green { कंजी आँखें }
( chalta phirta sex bomb hai ) bohot ladke marte hain par ye kisi ko bhaw nahin deti

Rocky- Hi, I am Rocky or ye mere dost hain
Hans or Raju.

Ladki - Aapka bohot bohot shukriya aap ne wakht par aakar mujhe bacha liya.

Rocky- Are koi baat nahin It was my duty.

Raju (Mobile me time dekhte hue)- bhai 10 minute bache hain class ke...

Rocky- Jab yahan aa hi gaye hain to ek ek coffee to peekar hi jaenge.

Sabhi friends ek table par baith jate hain pallavi abhi bhi khadi thi.

Hans-( Pallave se ) - Aaiyye baithiye na
Pallavi (Rocky ke paas vali chair par baithte hue)- Thanks

Rocky (Pallavi ki taraf dekhte hue) - Waise aap yahan kyon aayin thin..

Pallavi (Rocky ki aakhon me dekhte hue) Ji aaj maine subha jaldi ke chakkar me breakfast nahin kiya tha socha canteen me kuchh kha lungi.. or jab yahan aayi tabh un seniors ne us ladke ko pakad rakha tha.. or uski ragging le rahe the .. main ye dekhkar ulte pair lautne ko hui to ek senior girl ki nazar mujh par pad gayi or usne mujhe bula liya...

Wo ladke mujhse badtameezi karne lage
Itne me aap aa gaye fir aage ka aap jante hi hain...
(Ye kehte hue pallavi ki aakhon se aasu chalak pade or vo sisakne lagi)

Rocky (Uske sar par hath pherkar uske aasu pochhte hue)- Ab sab theek hai..
ab rone ki zaroorat nahin
Unki coffee aa chuki thi charo coffee peene lage.

Rocky- kabhi bhi koi pareshani ho to mujhe bata dena "I will solve"

Pallavi - So, Can we make friends?

Rocky - Ya.. of course... Why not ?

Phir pallavi ne sabhi se hath milaya
Inke bhi class ka time ho chuka tha .

Sabhi chal diye class ki taraf.

Hans or raju aj chup hi the vajah baad me pata chalegi.

Rockey (Pallavi se) Which Course ?

Pallavi- BCA 1st year.
Rocky - Really ??

Pallavi - hmmm , Kyon kya hua

Rocky - Same course.

Pallavi khushi se ( phir to maza aaega).

Baate karte karte charo pohoch gaye class me.
MAY I GATE IN
(Rocky bola)


To.... Be... Continued
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Update- 4


Ex-

Pallavi khushi se ( phir to maza aaega).

Baate karte karte charo pohoch gaye class me.
MAY I GATE IN
(Rocky bola)


Next-

Baaki teeno uske peechhe khade the.

Andar ek saxy si madem padha rahi thi
Intro New charecter-
Madem - Rachna

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(रचना)
Age- 26 years
Figure - 36-32-36
Bole to ek dam solid peace.
Shadi shuda hai par husband out of country job karta hai .)

Yes, Come in
(Madem ne javaab diya)

Charo ne class me enter kiya ...
Class khacha-khach bari hui thi sirf peechhe ki 2 seat khali thin.

Madem (Rocky ki taraf dekhte hue) - Whay are you late?

Raju (tapak se)- Mam, 5 minute hi to late hain.

(Ab madem ko Rachna hi likhunga)

Rachna - No, Arguement in my class . Be panchual ... this is your first day.
So, I leave you. but, next time i will not accept any argue.

Charo - So sorry mam .

Rachna- Go to your seat and give me intro one by one.

Charo peechhe chal diye kyonki sirf vahin banch khali thin...

Jaise hi rocky 1 banch par baitha Pallavi turant hi uski barabar ne baith gayi.

Rocky ne ek baar uski taraf dekha phir apne doston ko ishare se apne peeche vali banch par baithne ke liye bol diya.

Vo dono bhi baith gaye.

(Class me kuchh ladke-ladkiyan vo bhi the jinke saamne canteen vala incident hua tha)

Sabhi student khusar-phusar karne lage.
Or ladkiyan to rocky ko dekh rahi thi..
Or Pallavi se jal rahi thin.

Tabhi ek kadakti hui aawaaz unke kaano me padi.

SILENCE
(Poori class me sannata chha gaya)

Ye rachna ki aawaaz thi.

Or tum charo maine tumhen baithne ke liye nahin bola pehle apna intro do. tabh baithna.

Teeno ne simple intro de diya uske baad no. Aaya apne hero ka

Rocky (khade hokar)-

Good Morning Respected mam and all of you.
I would like to introduce myself.
I am Rocky.
I am from *##*#* city.
I completed 12th **** College with 97.8% in this year.
I was a district topper.

(Poori class Rocky ki taraf hi dekh rahi thi jisme madem bhi shamil thi)
Rocky (bina ruke)-

I want to became a "Softwere Engineer".
My posative points is - I am honest, helpful and amicable.
My hobby is- I like Boxing from childhood.
and, i was a state champion in boxing at last year.

(Ek baar phir se poori class "Rocky" ko hi dekh rahi thi.)
Rocky ne jari rakha -
That's all about to myself.
ThankYou very much

Pallavi to pata nahin kin khayalo me kho chuki thi. Baki ladkiyon ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Poori class me clapping hone lagi.
Or Rachna Mam bhi bohot impress hui Rocky se vo to sirf uski aakhon ko dekh rahi thi

Rachna - You are the brilliant gye.
Hope, You become topper of this class.

Rocky- May be.

Sit down...

fir kuchh khas nahin hua teacher class me aate rahe or sabhi ka intro lete rahe ..
Or rocky se impress hote rahe.

Lunch charo ne Canteen me hi kiya..
Or pallavi poora din sirf rocky ko hi takti rahi.

Chhutti hone par sabhi bahar aaye ...
Or Pallavi apni scooty se sabko bye kehkar apne ghar ki or nikal gyi ...
kyonki uska ghar doosri taraf tha...

Pallavi ke jane ke baad

Rocky (Hans & Raju ki taraf dekhte hue) - Bhai subha se dekh raha hun tum dono ko.
aise chup chup kyon ho.

Raju (Halke gusse se)- Ye bata ! Ek aisa banda jiski zindagi beet gayi Sirf kitabo me.
jo zyada kisi se baat nahin karta.
wo achanak kisi ladki se baat karne lage
uske sath chipak ke baithne lage
to uska matlab ham kya nikalen.

Rocky- kis ki baat kar raha hai bhai

Hans - Pallavi or teri baat chal rahi hain..

Rocky- Yarr agar tumhen mera usse baat karna achchha nahin lagta to aaj ke baad main usse baat nahin karunga.

Raju-(Baukhlate hue)- Abe nahin bhai.. main to kab se chah raha tha ki tu (itna smart or pise vala hokar ek simple si zindagi jeeta hai)
tu apni real life me aaja.

Hans- Or ham ye nahin keh rahe ki tu isse bolna band kar de ..(Nam aakhon se) par yarr hame aise ignore mat kiya kar

Rocky - (Dono ko gale lagate hue)- Jaisa tum chahoge vaisa hi hoga...
Kal se Rocky tumhen vo rocky banke dikhaega
Ki sab dekhte reh jaenge...
Or baat rahi us ladki pallavi ki...
to main tumhen bata dun..ki vo ladki dil ki ek dam saaf hai...
Or bohot achchhi hai.
And plzz forgive me yaro.. maine tumhe jaan-boojhkar ignore nahin kiya..

Dono- Chal its OK.

Or teeno chal diye apne - apne ghar.

Vicky apni bullet par or Hans Raju ki bike pe.

Rocky ghar pohcha or door bell bajane ke liye
Jaise hi hath oopar kiya ye kya gate khul gaya...

Rocky- Maa Tumhen hamesha pata kaise chal jata hai ki main ghar aa gaya hun.

Mom (Rocky ko andar aane ka raasta dete hue)- Beta hai tu mera jab tu or manu ghar aate hain to automatically mera dil karne lagta hai gate kholne ke liye...

Rocky-(Andar aate hue)- Oh! My sweet mom.
Or mom ke gaal par kiss karta hua ghar ke andar enter karta hai.

Mom- Fresh ho kar aaja beta lunch karne or sath me apni ladli ko bhi lete aana .

Rocky-(oopar ki or apne room me jate hue )- jee mom.

Rocky apne room me pohochta hai
- Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai.

Mansi ek album nikaal ke baithi hui thi.
Or ek photo ki puppy le rahi thi.

Rocky ki aawaz sunkar ek dam boukhla gayi.
Or album peeche chupane ki koshish karne lagi.

Rocky ko janne ki chul uthi ki akhir kiski tasveer ko chuma ja raha hai.


To... Be... Continued
Jordaar update mitr
 

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Breakfast karke main raja ke sath mehel bahar bane park me aaya, kal guruji se hui baaten short me samjha din.
Jise raja ne bhi maan liya.
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Raja - sagar beta, ham aapko akele nahin jane denge,
Aapko sena ki ek tukdi apne sath le jani padegi.
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Main - theek hai, kintu main sena me se achchhe or taqatwar javaan chunkar ek team banana chahta hun.
Or kal savere hi shaitanlok jana chahta hun.
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Raja ne mujhe permission de di, or senapati ko turant hi bulava bheja,
Main senapati ke sath chal diya, sena ke javaan chhatne.


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Or vahan pohochkar maine har tukdi me se best sipahi apne liye choose kar liye or vapas mahel lout aaya,
Vahan aakar maine Mom- Dad or baaki sab ko apne jane ke bare me bataya.

Dad - Beta jane se pehle mujhe or apni mom ko
dharti-lok chhod aa.

Mom ne bhi unke haan me haan milayi,
To bahno ki toli bhi sath jane ko raazi ho gayi, jisme Anjalika or Liza bhi shamil thin,
Main - Dad aap log yahin surakshit ho, abhi aap kahin mat jaiyye,

Dad - Beta aise to meri company heavy loss me aa jayegi,
Isi liye mera jana Must hai.

Maine haan kaha or sab log jane ke liye taiyar ho gaye,
Maine raja se ijazat li or main un sabka hath pakad kar teleport ho gaya.

Teleporting me hi mujhe kuchh logon ki parchhai dikhai di,
Or unhone kisi cheez se hamare oopar Laal rang ki roshni chhodi,
Ye vaar mere oopar nahin kiya gaya tha,
balki Mom - Dad ke oopar tha,
mera dil dhak se reh gaya,
T P ki speed itni tez thi ki main sahi se kuchh dekh bhi
nahin pa raha tha,
kuchh karne ki baat to or hai,

Ham ek dam se hamare ghar teleport hue, par mom - dad sidhe niche gir gaye,
Ham sab ek sath chilla pade, Mommmm - Daddddd,

Main mom - dad ko uthane ki koshish kar raha tha....
Par wo koi response nahin de rahe the....
Mere aakhon se jhar - jhar aansu beh rahe the,
Or baki behno ka bhi yahi haal tha,
Anjalika or Liza apni puri koshish kar rahi thin,
unko uthane ki,
Par sab koshishen nakam rahin,

Phir achanak mujhe guruji ki yaad ayi,
Maine khud ko sambhala, or unko chitkarte hue pukara,

Guruji 1 hi second me mere samne the,

Main (unko gale lagakar bola) - Gurudev dekhiye na Mom - Dad ko kya ho gaya hai, kuchh karo na gurudev

Guruji ne apne hathon se koi shakti chhodi or agle pal vo bhi vivash ho gaye, wo bole-

Guruji - Beta kali shaktiyon ka prabhav inke oopar
zyada pada hai, Or ye ye marr

Main (beech me chillate hue)- nahin guruji aisa mat kahiye,
Main to kahin ka bhi nahin rahunga,

Or udhar Mansi ye sunkar behosh ho gayi,
Baaki sab usko sambhalne me lag gaye,

Guruji - beta mujhe maaf kar do, par main koi madad nahin kar sakta,

Main to ye sunkar apne hosh hi kho baitha,
Or gash khakar gir pada,
Jab mujhe hosh aaya, tabh main apne room me tha,
priya mere paas baithkar sisak rahi thi,
Or bahar se rone peetne ki awazen aa rahi thin,
Main ek dam se uth kar baith gaya,
or rota hua bahar ki taraf bhaga,
Priya mujhe hosh aaya dekhkar mere pichhe bhagi,
Vahan mera poora parivar aa chuka tha,
Pata nahin main kab se behosh tha,
Mom - Dad ke antim sanskar ki tayyari ho rahi thi,
Or Mansi samhit sabhi behne vahin baithkar ro rahi thin,
Main unke paas jakar baith gaya,
or vo mujhse chipat - chipat kar rone lagin,
JinnLok, or Parilok ke Raja or Rani bhi insani bhes me aa chuke the,

Tabhi Dada ji mere paas aaye or hame gale lagakar rone lage....
Chacha ji or bua ji ki halat bhi theek nahin thi,
Kyonki un teeno behen - bhaiyon me bohot pyaar tha,

In sabke baad Mom - Dad ki antim yatra nikli,
or main unko agni dekar bhari kadmo se vapas ghar aa gaya,

Guruji - Putra, maine tumhen pehle hi kaha tha,
ki wo isi intzar me ghaat lagaye baithe hain, ki kab tum jinnlok se bahar niklo, or kab vo tumhen chot den,
Par tumne meri baat nahin maani,

Main (apne aansu pochhte hue) - Gurudev,
ab shaitan lok ka akhiri vakhat aa gaya hai,
ab koi nahin bachega, sab marenge ,
chahe vo khud shaitaan ho ya aam janta,
sabko mere gusse ki aag me jalna padega.

Guruji - putra, abhi tum gusse me ho,
pehle kuchh din apne aap ko shaant karo,
phir koi faisla lena.

Main chup - chap vahan se chala gaya,
kyonki ab main mazeed kisi ko koi bhi javaab
nahin dena chahta tha,

Main main hall me pohcha jahan par sabhi baithe hue the.
Mujhse Mansi ki halat dekhi nahin ja rahi thi,
uski aakhen suji hui thin, or vo bas roye ja rahi thi,
Main uske paas jakar baith gaya,

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or usko khud se chipta liya,
Or usko chup karane laga,

Main - Manu, main unme se kisi ko zinda nahin chhodunga,
main apna intakaam lekar rahunga, tu ro mat.

Mansi (Or zyada rote hue)- plzz bhai ab aap kahin mat jana,
hame koi badla nahin chahiye,
bhagwan ke liye kahin mat jana.

Main - Ye tu kya keh rahi hai?

Mansi - (Rote hue) - Or nahin to kya? Ab aapke siva
mera hai kon, Agar aap ko bhi kuchh ho gaya to
main khudkushi kar lungi,
Plzz mujhe vachan dijiye ki aap kisi ko nahin marenge.

Main usko rota hua chhodkar,
vahan se uthkar apne room me aa gaya,
Main kya karun kya na karun soch - soch kar

mera sar dard se phata ja raha tha.

To Be Continue......
Badi hi damdaar or khatarnaak wapsi ki h aapne bhai.
Mom - Dad ko hi nipta dala or uspar se mansi ki baten....

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

IIs baar tikne ki koshish karna bhai....

Aage ka intjaar.
 

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Mansi - (Rote hue) - Or nahin to kya? Ab aapke siva
mera hai hi kon, Agar aap ko bhi kuchh ho gaya to
main khud ko kuchh kar lungi,
Plzz mujhe vachan dijiye ki aap kisi ko nahin
marenge.
Main usko rota hua chhodkar,
vahan se uthkar apne room me aa gaya,
Main kya karun kya na karun soch - soch kar
mera sar dard se phata ja raha tha,


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Ek taraf Mom - Dad ka chehra baar - baar mere
saamne aa jata, jisse mere nathune phul jate,
shaitan Lok ka sarvanash karne ke liye,
Or dusri taraf Mansi vachan maang rahi thi ki
mom - dad ke katilon ko maaf kar dun,

Tabhi Anjalika room me enter hui, or rote hue
mere gale lag gayi,
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main uske balon me hath phirane laga,

Anjalika (mere gale lage hue)- ye sab meri
vajha se hua hai, Na main aapki zindagi me aati
na ye hota,

Main - Anju, ye sab kismat ka khel hai,
plzz apne aap ko dosh mat do.

Anjalika (mujhse alag hote hue)- nahin,
ye sab meri hi vajha se hua hai,
mujhe aapse door jana hoga, taki phir aisa na ho,

Main - kya tumhare jane se
mom - dad vapas aa jayenge?

Anjalika (sisakte hue)- Nahin, par aage se
aap par meri vajha se koi musibat nahin ayegi.

Main - mujhe chhodkar jaogi tum, mujhe..?

Anjalika - agar baat aapko bachane ki hai to haan,
Mujhe jana hi hoga.

Main - Anju, aisa mat karo,
varna main akela pad jaunga, Plzz maan jao.
(Main usko dobara gale se lagate hue bola)

Wo mujhse alag hui or na me sar hilane lagi,
mere phir se aansu chhalak pade,
usse door hone ke dar se.
Wo mere chehre par betahasha kiss karne lagi,
Or achanak hi gayab ho gayi,

Main uska naam pukarta reh gaya, par wo
vapas nahin aayi, or main vahin ghutno ke bal
baith kar rone laga,
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Tabhi sakshi andar aayi, uske pichhe - pichhe
priya bhi thi, wo aate hi boli,

Sakshi (mujhe uthate hue) - kya hua bhai,
aap aise kyon ro rahe hain?

Main (rote hue) - wo chali gayi, wo chali gayi......

Sakshi & priya (ek sath) - kon chali gayi?

Main - Anju, Anju hame chhodkar hamesha ke
liye chali gayi, ab wo vapas nahin aayegi...

Priya - Kya? ye aap kya bol rahe hain?
Ye kaise ho sakta hai?

Main - (Maine un dono ko ruk- ruk kar saari
baat batai)
Jise sunkar wo dono bhi udaaas ho gayin.

Sakshi (halke se rote hue)- Hey Bhagwan!
ye kya ho raha hai
hamare sath, pehle hi itna dard diya hai, ab
ek or dard, ye itne mazboot nahin hain,
ke ek sath itne dard jhel payen, ham sabse
agar koi paap ho gaya hai to uska badla
hamse le, par inhen maaf kar de bhagwan!
Maaf kar de (wo bhi tez se rone lagi thi)

Maine un dono ko rota hua dekha, to apna
Dard bhool gaya, or un dono ko chup karane
laga.

Guruji (andar aate hue) - putra, neyti ka likha
koi nahin mita sakta, agar ishwar tumhen
Itni khushiyan or shaktiyan deta hai to uske
badle me insan ko kuchh to balidan karna hi
padta hai,
Is duniya me jitne bhi devtao ne avtar liye hain,
Sabko kuchh na kuchh balidan karna pada hai.

Main - gurudev, mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye,
Koi shakti,koi taqat nahin chahiye, bas meri
zindagi ko Pehle jaisa kar do.

Guruji - ye sab mere hath me nahin hai vats!
Sab brahamma ke hath me hai, insan chahe kitne
bhi pair patak le; hota vahi hai jo uski takdeer me
likha hua hai, or yahi neyti hai.
Ab tumhen apne aapko sambhalna hoga, or
Mazboot banna hoga, khud ke sath - sath apne
Parivar ki raksha bhi karni padegi, ye mat
Samajhna ki tumhare dushman itne me hi ruk
Jayenge , nahin , vo aage ka plan bana rahe hain,
Isi liye tum bhi satark ho jao,
Or jab bhi meri madad ki zarurat ho to kabhi bhi
Yaad kar lena ab main chalta hun,
(Ye kehkar guruji bhi vileen ho gaye)

Main is wakht apne aap ko bohot akela mehsoos
kar raha tha,

Tabhi Dadaji andar aaye, or mujhse bole-

Dadaji - sagar beta, tum sab mere sath gaw chalo,
Yahan par rehkar kya karoge, vahan ham sab hain.

Main - dadu abhi nahin, is ghar ko chhodne ka man
nahin hai, yahan Mom - Dad ki yaden hain, or abhi
Meri or Mansi ki padhai bhi to baaki hai,
ham zaroor ayenge par apni padhai poori karne ke
baad, haan agar mansi aapke sath jana chahati hai
to wo ja sakti hai.
(Main apni aakhen saaf karte hue bola)

Dadaji - theek hai jaisi tumhari marzi, par kya main
tumse kuchh puchh sakta hun?

Maine haam me sar hilaya

Dadaji - kisi ko bhi ye pata nahin hai ke Keshav or
Bahu ki mout kaise hui? Sab alag - alag kahani bana
rahe hain, kya main jaan sakta hun ke mere bete ke
sath hua kya tha?

Main - bas itna jaan lijiye ki ye sab meri vajha se hua
hai, meri hi galti thi,
(or phir se meri aakhon me aansu aa gaye)

Dadaji (mere aansu saaf karte hue)- beta khud ko
Dosh mat do or mujhe batao ke hua kya tha?

Main - aap sunna hi chahte hain to suniye.

Maine unko bed par baitha liya or shuru se end tak
Sab batata chala gaya.
Poori kahani sunne ke baad dadaji ne mujhe khud
se chipta liya.

Dadaji - mere bachche, main phir se kehta hun,
tu mere sath chal. yahan par rehna khatre se khali nahin.

Main - daadu, aap samajh nahin rahe hain, agar main
Aapke sath raha, to mere sath - sath poora parivar
Khatre me pad jayega, or ye main hargiz nahin hone
dunga, aap apne sath mansi ko le jaiyye, vo vahan par
Safe rahegi.

Dadu kuchh bol pate usse pehle hi door par khadi mansi
bol padi

Mansi (rote hue)- haan kyonki Mom - Dad ke jane ke
baad ab main Aap par bojh jo ban gayi hun,
Main yahan se kahin nahin ja rahi, jahan aap rahoge
Vahin main rahungi or ye final decision hai.

Ye bolkar vo vapas chali gayi,

Dadaji (ek lambi saans lekar) - theek hai beta,
jo theek lage karo, par agar kuchh bhi
pareshani ho to sidha gaw chake aana.

Or unhone khade hokar mujhe ek baar phir se gale
laga liya, or vo chacha - chachi ke gaw laut gaye.

Sabhi mehmaan mujhe samjha kar or samvatna dekar
Nikal gaye.

vahan par reh gaye sirf - Main, Mansi, Sakshi, Priya,
Sheetal or Leeza.

Leeza ne zabarzasti hame khana khilaya,
Ham sabne thoda - thoda kha liya, or jisko
jahan jagah mili vo vahin par so gaya.

Udhar ShaitaanLok me -
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[Remind]
Marsie - (Daughter of Shataan)
Keela. -. (Son of Shaitaan)
Nablees- (Senapati of Shaitaan)

Ek mahel jahan charon taraf andhera hai,
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Or bohot se logon ke baat karne ki awazen aa rahi hain

Tabhi ek shaitaan tez chaal chalte hue vahan aata hai,
Uske chehre par jeet ki khushi hai
Ye koi or nahin Senapati Nablees hai.

Nablees - Maharaj Keela ki jai ho.

Keela - kya khabar laye ho senapati?

Nablees - Maharaj, hamara plan kamyab raha.,
ham jante the ke uspar hamari kaali shaktiyon
ka koi asar nahin hoga, par uske maa - baap
to samanye insaan hi the, unpar to asar hona hi tha.
Dono mar gaye HaHaHaHaHa

Keela - (Apni jagah se khade hokar-
-uski peeth thapthapate hue) - Shabash! Senapati.
Ab samaye aa gaya hai dusre plan ko anjaam dene ka.

Nablees - Jo aagya maharaj.

(Or idhar Rocky ke ghar me)

Main achanak apne bed se uth kar baith gaya

Mooommm Dadddddd

Leeza ekdam se uth kar baith gayi, or mujhe gale
laga liya.

Leeza - kya hua aapko?

Main - kuchh nahin bura sapna tha... Or main uska
Matha chumkar

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usko bahon me bharke phir se sone
ki koshish karne laga
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To... Be... Continue
Bada hi sandehaspad update h bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya jo guzra h vo sapna tha ya hakikat tha....
 

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Keela - (Apni jagah se khade hokar-
-uski peeth thapthapate hue) - Shabash! Senapati.
Ab samaye aa gaya hai dusre plan ko anjaam dene ka.
Nablees - Jo aagya maharaj.
(Or idhar Rocky ke ghar me)
Main achanak apne bed se uth kar baith gaya
Mooommm Dadddddd
Leeza ekdam se uth kar baith gayi, or mujhe gale
laga liya.
Leeza - kya hua aapko?
Main - kuchh nahin bura sapna tha... Or main uska
Matha chumkar usko bahon me bharke phir se sone

ki koshish karne laga

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Ab Aage -
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Aaj Mom - Dad ko guzre hue pure 10 din ho
chuke hain,
Hamara poora bussiness Priya ke Dad yani
Phupha ji ne
Sambhal liya hai,
Sab kuchh sahi chalna shuru ho gaya hai,
par main mom -
Dad ko bohot miss karta hun,
Ham sabhi ne apne - apne school/ College
jana start kar diya hai.
Bas ek baat ajeeb hui hai, jis din se main vapas aaya hun,
Mujhe Pallavi dikhai nahin di, Na vo ek baar
bhi college aayi.
Uske ghar par bhi Tala latka hua tha,
uske bare me kisi ko kuchh bhi pata nahin
hai, Raju zyadatar mere sath hi rehta hai,
or Mariya (Raju's sister) gaw me hamne jo
nayi company start ki thi, wo uska kaam dekhti hai, vahin shift ho gayi hai,
bas phone par baaten ho jati hain.
Anjalika ne bhi koi baat nahin ki hai us din se,
na hi wo mujhe apne aas - paas kabhi mehsoos hui.

Dada - dadi or chacha - chachi hamse roz baat karte hain,
Pata nahin Mansi ko kya hua hai
wo mujhse thoda kati - kati si
rehne lagi hai, par main sab kuchh jaldi hi theek kar dunga.
Sheetal or uski mummy ko maine request
karke apne sath hi shift karva liya hai,
or sakshi bhi ab hamare hi sath rehti hai.
or mere hi sath college jati hai.

Meri neend subha 6 baje khuli,
Leeza mere hi paas so rahi thi,
Sote time badi hi cute lagti thi, maine uske
fule - fule galon oar kis kiya, jisse vo
kasmasane lagi, mere chehre par
muskaan aa gayi,
Maine uski avaz dekar uthaya usne
dhire se apni aakhen kholin,
Maine uske mathe par kiss kar liya,
wo bhi muskurate hue uth kar baith gayi,

Main - Good Morning Jaan.

Leeza - Good Morning, Aaj bohot dino baad itni pyari subha hui hai,
pata nahin kab se miss kar rahi thi.
(Wo muskurate hue boli)

Main - achchha ab mujhe coffee nahin pilaogi.

Wo uth kar chali gayi, or mere liye coffee bana kar le ayi.
Maine coffee pee or fresh hone washroom
me chala gaya,
Bahar aaya to bed par kapde rakhe hue the,
Par leeza vahan par nahin thi,
shayad bakiyon ko uthane gayi hogi.
Main fatafat tayyar hua, or jaldi - jaldi me car lekar nikal gaya.

Raste me maine fresh flower khareede,
or pohoch gaya Mom - Dad ki samadhi par,
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Maine flowers unki samadhi par rakhe or bola -
Happy Anniversary Mom & Dad

Phir main vahin par baith gaya, or unse dheron baaten karne laga.
Waise to main yahan aata rehta tha,
par aaj kuchh special din tha,
Isi liye subha sabse pehle mom - dad ke paas aa gaya.

Kuchh time vahan bitane ke baad main
vapas ghar pohcha,
Sakshi tayyar baithi thi, college jane ke liye.

Maine sab ke sath breakfast kiya,
sabhi ne shanti se breakfast kiya,
Jab se mom dad hame chhodkar gaye the
tabh se sab kuchh change sa ho gaya tha,
pehle jaisi masti to ab khatam hi ho gayi thi,
Koi aapas me baat karta bhi tha wo bhi sirf
matlab ki baat hoti thi.

Khair breakfast khatam karke main or sakshi
college ke liye nikal pade,
(In Car)
Sakshi - Bhai or kitne din aisa chalta rahega ?

Main - to tu hi bata main kya karun?

Sakshi (ek gehri saans chhodkar) - aap ghar
ke ekloute mard ho,
Aap ko hi sab sambhalna padega. Sab se
baat karo, ghar ka mahol bigad chuka hai,
use apko hi sambhalna hoga, varna sab
barbad ho jayega.

Main - keh to tu theek rahi hai, chal main hi
kuchh sochta hun.

Baat karte - karte ham college pohoch gaye.
Maine car park ki or ham sidha apni - apni
class me chale gaye.

Main Raju ke paas jakar baith gaya, or usse
baaten karne laga,
Kyonki class start hone me abhi time tha.

College ke baad sakshi ke sath main ghar aa
gaya,
Mansi, Priya or sheetal ghar par aa chuki thin,
Liza to ghar par hi rehti thi.

Main fresh hokar dining table par pohcha, Liza ne khana serve kiya maine or sakshi ne
sath me lunch kiya. Baaki sab kha chuke the.

Lunch karke main Mansi se milne uske room
me chal diya.
Or uska door knock kiya.

Mansi (andar se) - kon hai?

Main - main hun.

Mansi - abhi main busy hun baad me aana.

Ye sunkar mera dil jalkar reh gaya,
par main aaj sab sahi karne ka sochkar
aaya tha.

Main door ko kholte hue andar chala gaya,

Wo ulti letakr Lapy me kuchh kar rahi thi.

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Usne mujhe gusse se ghoor kar dekha.

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Mansi (gusee se)- kya aapko manners nahin
hai,
is ghar me kya ab privacy bhi nahin bachi,

Mere kahon me aansu aa gaye, par main
usse behes karne nahin aya tha.

Main - (dheere se) - Tu to meri jaan hua karti
thi, mujhse pyar karti thi, phir aisa kya hua jo
mujhse nafrat karne lagi?

Mansi - aap mere room se abhi nikal jaiyye,
varna achchha nahin hoga.

Main - main javaab liye bagair nahin jaunga.

Mansi (uthkar baithte hue)- sunna hi chahte
ho to suno,
Mom Dad ki mout ke zimmedaar tum ho,
tumhari vajha se wo aaj hamare beech nahin
hain, bolo kya javaab hai iska apke paas?

(Uski aakhon se aansu Tap - Tap girne lage)

Main kuchh nahin bol pa raha tha,
mera sar niche jhuk gaya tha.,
Or aansu beh rahe the.

Mansi - or oopar se aap unse badla lena
chahte ho, ye kaise bhool gaye ki jin logon
ne ek hi vaar se mom - dad ko hamse chheen liya,
Wo hame bhi maar sakte hain.

Main - main aisa nahin hone dunga.

Mansi (zor se chilla kar) - Jab mom - dad par
unhone vaar kiya tha, tabh kya kar liya aapne,
tabh kahan gayin thin apki shaktiyan.

Main (uski taraf dekhte hue)- mujhe koi badla
nahin lena, jo tu bolegi waisa hi hoga,
mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye bas tu vapas aa ja,
Varna main seh nahin paunga. Main tujhse
bheekh mangta hun.
(Ye kehte hue main ghutno ke bal baith kar
rone laga)
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Mansi mere paas ayi or mukhe utha kar apne
gale se laga kar rone lagi, ham dono ke man
me ek gubbar sa tha, shayad vo ab nikal
raha tha.

Mansi (mujhse alag hokar)- mujhe vachan
dijiye, ke aap ab kisi shakti ka istimal nahin
karoge, or koi badla nahin loge.

Main - main tere sar ki kasam khakar bolta
hun, jo tu bolegi vaisa hi karunga.

Mansi (mere gaal par kiss karke ruhasi awaz
me)- mera janu bhai.

Main rote hue bhi hasne laga,
or uska chehra pakad kar har jagah paglon
ki tarhan se kiss karne laga.

Main - bohot miss kiya hai maine tujhe,
I love you jaan
(Main uske aansu saaf karte hue bola)
Ab in aankhon me ek bhi aansu nahin aana chahiye.

Mansi (apna chehra meri chhati se ragadte
hue)- hmmmm

Main - chal priya ke paas chalte hain,
wo bechari hamari vajha se udas hai.

Mansi - Bhai Sorry,

Main - wo kis liye?

Mansi - wo maine aapko mom - dad ki mout ka ......
(Ye kehte hue uske phir se aansu nikalne lage)

Main (usko tight hug karke) - Manu, maine
tujhe mana kiya tha na, ke ab ek bhi aansu
nahin nikalna chahiye, bhool ja wo sab ab
bas ham or hamari family.....

Mansi (apne aansu saaf karte hue) - chaliye
priya ke paas jana hai na,

Main muskurate hue uske sath priya ke room
ki taraf chal diya.

Tabhi mere phone ki ghanti baji -

Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata
chal gaya.......##########№###### vahan
par hai###


Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.

To... Be... Continue
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
 

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Mansi - Bhai Sorry,

Main - wo kis liye?

Mansi - wo maine aapko mom - dad ki mout ka ......
(Ye kehte hue uske phir se aansu nikalne lage)

Main (usko tight hug karke) - Manu, maine tujhe
mana kiya tha na, ke ab ek bhi aansu nahin nikalna
chahiye, bhool ja wo sab ab bas ham or hamari family.....

Mansi (apne aansu saaf karte hue) - chaliye priya
ke paas jana hai na,

Main muskurate hue uske sath priya ke room
ki taraf chal diya.

Tabhi mere phone ki ghanti baji -

Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata chal gaya.......##########№###### vahan par hai###

Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.


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Ab Aage -
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Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata chal
gaya hai,
Uski mom ko last time Chandigarh me dekha gaya tha,
Shayad pallavi bhi vahin par hai,



Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.


Or main mansi ka hath pakde hue baten karta
hua priya ke room ke bahar pohcha, or door knock kiya.
Priya ne door khola or ham dono ko sath dekhkar shock
ho gayi, or muh phade hame dekhne lagi.

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Main (uske akhon ke aage hath hilate hue) - hello madem,
Ye sapna nahin hai.


Ye sunkar wo ham dono ke gale lag gayi,
Udhar sheetal jo usi ke room me thi, wo andar se boli-


Sheetal - priya didi kon hai, aap kuchh bol kyon
nahin rahin?


Ham teeno ek sath andar chale gaye.
Hame sath dekhkar sheetal-


Wah! Family get together' chal raha hai or hame pata
bhi nahin. Wo bhi ham dono se gale mili.


Main - achchha tum log baaten karo, main zara raju
se milkar aata hun, kuchh zaruri kaam hai.


Sheetal - Mansi di, mujhe to lagta hai ki bhai ka
Raju bhaiyya ke sath koi chakkar chal raha hai,
tabhi to itni hot - hot ladkiyon ko chhodkar zyadatar
unhi ke sath rehte hain.


Uski baat par sab hasne lage, main kuchh zyada hi
Tez se hasne laga, kyonki main khud ko raju ki ga*d
marte hue imagine kar raha tha.


Aaj itne dino baad kuchh achchha mehsoos hua tha,


Main - kal ham sab milkar kahin ghumne chalenge,
Or shopping bhi karenge. Kal ka din tum sabke naam.


Wo teeno to khush ho gayin, or sheetal to mera gaal
Chumkar baaki sab ko batane bahar bhaag gayi.


Main bhi hasta hua apni car lekar raju se milne nikal gaya.
Sham ke 4 baj rahe the, main raju ke ghar pohcha,
Aunty - uncle kahin gaye hue the, nokar se raju ka
puchh kar main sidha raju ke room me bina knock
kiye sidha andar ghus gaya.


"Oh My God" achanak mere muh se nikla.


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andar ka nazara hi kuchh aisa tha.


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Shock main is liye nahin hua tha, shock hone ki vajha
dusri thi, or vo ye ki Raju jiske sath sex kar raha tha
Wo koi or nahin balki usi ki sagi behen Mariya thi.


Mere muh se "Oh My God" ki awaaz sunkar un dono
ne ek sath meri taraf dekha, or unki ga*d phat gayi,
Mariya turant hi usse alag hui or ek chadar lekar
odh li, usme muh bhi chadar ke andar chhipa liya tha,
Raju bhi chadar ke andar ghus gaya, or mare dar ke
uski ga*d phati hui thi. Dono pasine me tar - ba-tar
ho gaye the, phir mujhe bhi hosh aaya. Or main bola


Main - lagta hai main galat wakht par aa gaya, sorry
Main chalta hun, tum kabhi bhi mujhse baat kar sakte
ho, or ye baat main kisi se bhi nahin kahunga, befikar
raho.


Ye kehkar main bina unki taraf dekhe or bina unka
Javab sune apni car lekar vahan se nikal gaya,
Mere dimag me bohot sare question the,
par abhi ke liye maine chup rehna behtar samjha,
socha ki raju mujhe khud bata dega.
main to pallavi ke bare me puchhne aaya tha,
waise to main apni shaktiyon se pallavi or raju
ke bare me, ek minute me sab pata kar sakta tha,
par main ab shaktiyon par depend nahin rehna
chahta tha, kyonki inhi Shaktiyon ki vajha se hi
maine mom - dad ko kho diya tha.


Tabhi mujhe ek ladki ki yaad ayi,
Wo mere sath school me padhti thi,
Meri senior thi, is ladki ki khas baat ye thi, ki isko
Shuru se hi jasoos banne ka bhoot savar tha,
Jasusi ki movies dekh - dekh kar.
James Bond ki fan thi.
Maine hi isko detective office kholne me madad ki thi.
naam tha shaina,

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apne aap ko phoebe ke naam se
famous kiya hua tha, maine turant hi usko phone laga
diya,


Main - hello, shaina


Phoebe - kon bol raha hai?


Main - are main hun, Rocky, badi jaldi bhool gayi.


Phoebe - Hey buddy, kya haal hain?
suna hai Aaj - kal "The Rock" bana fir raha hai.
(Wo haste hue boli)

Main - wah! mere bare me bohot kuchh janti hai.
Achchha sun mujhe tujhse ek kaam hai.

(Main sidha mudde par aate hue bola)

Phoebe - to hukum kar yarr, tere liye to
jaan bhi hazir hai.

Main - yarr baat ye hai ki meri friend kuchh dino
se lapata hai, main tujhe uski family detail send karta
hun, zara pata kar ki kahan par hai, vaise raju ne
bataya tha ki uski mom ko last time Chandigarh me
dekha gaya tha,


Phoebe - Ok, 2 ghante de main pata karti hun.


Main - Thanxz yarr.


Phoebe - chal ab zyada senti mat kar, pata karke
phone karti hun.


Phir usne phone kaat diya, maine dekha ke baat
karte hue main ghar se zyada aage aa gaya tha,
To maine U turn liya vapas jane ke liye,
Tabhi raju ka phone aa gaya.
Maine phone uthaya, wo mari si awaaz me bola


Raju - hellll hellll hellooow


Main - abe lakva maar gaya kya awaaz ko,


Raju - bhai wo wo.......


Main - abe chhod us baat ko, main mind nahin karta
Meri to khud ki hi engagement bua ki ladki se hui hai.
Isi liye main to khud incest me phasa hua hun
(Main haste hue bola)


Meri baat se shayad uska dar kam ho gaya tha.


Raju - yarr, mariya bohot tension me hai,
Uska ro - ro kar bura haal hai,


Main - ab bata isme main kya kar sakta hun,
Maun to bolkar aya tha ki main kisi se nahin kahunga.


Raju - yarr baat wo nahin hai,


Main (beech me) - to baat kya hai?


Raju (irritate hote hue) - kuchh nahin, kal milna mujhse
Phoir batata hun.


Main - theek hai, kal college me milte hain.
Tujhse pallavi ke bare me bhi kuchh puchhna hai,
Chak ab phone rakh , bbye behench*d


Raju - sale, harami.....


(Isse pehle ki wo or gaaliyan sunata maine haste hue
phone kaat diya)


Main ghar pohcha, in sab me sham ke 7 baj gaye the.
Sakshi ne door khola or mujhe dekhte hi, mere kaan
ke niche 2 dhar diye...


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To... Be... Continue
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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Raju bhi engaged h or vo bhi mariya ke sath.
Achha raha lekin use raju ke sath hi rakhna rocky ke sath mat scene create kariyega bhai.
Jasoos ke rup me shaina namak new character ki entry.
Ek laajwaab update tha yaara.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 
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