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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Naughtyrishabh

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Mega Update - 96
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata chal
gaya hai,
Uski mom ko last time Chandigarh me dekha gaya tha,
Shayad pallavi bhi vahin par hai,



Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°′°°
Mere muh se "Oh My God" ki awaaz sunkar Raju or
Mariya ne ek sath meri taraf dekha, or unki ga*d phat
gayi, Mariya turant hi usse alag hui or ek chadar lekar
odh li, usne muh bhi chadar ke andar chhipa liya tha,
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Main - yarr Shaina baat ye hai ki meri friend kuchh dino
se lapata hai, main tujhe uski family detail send karta
hun, zara pata kar ki kahan par hai, vaise raju ne
bataya tha ki uski mom ko last time Chandigarh me
dekha gaya tha,


Shaina [Phoebe]-Ok, 2 ghante de main pata karti hun.
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Main - (Raju se phone par)- theek hai, kal college
me milte hain. Tujhse pallavi ke bare me bhi kuchh
puchhna hai, Chal ab phone rakh , bbye behench*d


Raju - sale, harami.....



(Isse pehle ki wo or gaaliyan sunata maine haste hue
phone kaat diya)
°°°°°°°°°°°°′°°°°°
Main ghar pohcha, in sab me sham ke 7 baj gaye the.
Sakshi ne door khola or mujhe dekhte hi, mere kaan
ke niche 2 dhar diye...



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Ab Aage -
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Main (apna gaal sehlate hue)- tumhare welcome
karne
ka tareeka unique hai janeman, haye kash! tumne
hathon ki jagah apne chuche isimal kiye hote 🤤
kasam se maza aa jata.



Meri baaton se achanak bohot sari hasne ki awazen
ek sath aayin, maine andar mundi ghusa kar dekha
sari ladkiyan door ke pichhe kadhi hokar has rahi thin.


Sakshi ne unko ghoor ke dekha sab ek dam shant ho
gayin,


Sakshi (mujhe ungli dikhate hue)- oye Mr. sari setting
maine kara ke di or shopping sirf in teeno ko?
(Usne Mansi, Priya or Sheetal ki taraf ishara karte hue
kaha)


Main (apna sar peette hue)- meri maa mujhe andar
to aane de.


Sakshi - nahin, bilkuk bhi nahin, pehle mujhe javaab
chachiye.


Maine use pakda or uske lips par smooch karne laga
Wo nakhre karne lagi, par main kahan chhodne vala tha,
Akhir wo meri bahon me pighalti chali gayi.


Main usko bahon me utha kar andar le aaya.
Or coutch par lita diya


Main (sakshi ke balon me ungliyan phirate hue)-
Tu bhi na ek dam pagal hai, bhala aisa kaise ho sakta
hai ke main sirf 3 ko shoping ke liye lekar jaun or
baaki ki 2 ko chhod dun.
(Main uska gaal chumte hue bola)


Sakshi ne smile karte hue mujhe dekha phir sheetal
ki shikayat karte hue boli-


Sakshi (sheetal ki taraf ghurte hue)- bhai is gudiya
ki bachchi ne september ke mahine me mera
aprail phool bana diya.


Uski baat se sab khil-khilakar hasne lage.


Main - shopping par to main le hi jaunga par ek shart par.


Sakshi - kya hai wo shart?


Main (shararti smile se) - mujhe dhoodh pilana padega.


Sakshi - are usme kya hai.... ek minute...ek minute...kya
kaha tumne....
Main haste hue bhagne laga.... or vo mere pichhe...


Phir ham thodi der aise hi masti karte rahe or fir aunty
ne aakar hame roka or khane ke liye bola
Leeza or aunty ne mikar dining table par dinner laga diya
Jise ham maze se khane lage.... Khana bada tasty bana
tha, ya shayad aaj ka din achchha tha isi liye kag raha tha.


Maine khane ki tareef karte hue uthkar Leeza ke
hath choom liye, jisse wo sharma gayi... Par meri
khushi ko dekhkar wo aaj bohot khush thi,
Uske chehre par ayi muskan sab bayan kar rahi thi.


Ham sabne milkar dinner finish kiya, or baaten karte hue
Apne - apne room me nikal gaye sone ke liye...


Room ka door close karte hi majne leeza ko bahon me
utha liya


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Wo khil- khikate hue hasne lagi.... Aaj wo bohot khush thi,
Is liye bhi ke suhagrat ke baad se achanak wo hadsa ho
gaya tha, tabh se ham close nahin aye the, main bas
Badle ki aag me jal raha tha, or sara parivar dukh ki aag
me, par ab jaise sab normal ho gaya tha.


Maine leeza ko bahon me utha kar kiss karna shuru kar
diya


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Wo bohot sharmili thi, isliye usne apni aakhen
band ki huin thin, Us ke baad jaise dheere - dheere
khul kar hawa me lehra rahe the,
Mere dono hath uski nazuk kamar ko sehla rahe the,
Main usko aise hi kiss karte hue chalta hua bed ke
paas pocha, or dhire se usko lita diya,
Ab main uske oopar tha or usko kiss kar raha tha,
Mere hath dheere - dheere uske chucho ko sehla
rahe the, or uske dono hath meri kamar or seene
par ghoom rahe the, uski aakhen jaise muskura
rahi thin, uske chehre par sukoon or khushi thi,
main us ke lips ko chumta hua us ke galon par
aa gaya, us ke fule hue gaal mere touch se
jasay jal uthe the,
Us ke galon par gulabi - gulabi lehren si doud rahi
thin, mai jalsi se usse alag hua or ek hi jhatke me
apne sare kapde utaar phaike... or uske bhi utarne
laga, usne ek pal ke liye to aakhen kholi thin, par
jaise hi maine uske kapde utarne shuru kiye, usne
sharmili muskan ke sath apni aakhen zor se band
kar lin, ab ham dono bilkul nange the,
main vapas uske gaal chusne laga, pata nahin bada
meetha - meetha sa swad aa raha tha, jaise unme
shehed bhara ho,
main uske gaal chumte chatte hue gardan ki taraf
badhne laga, jaise hi maine apne lips uski gardan par
rakhe, uski ek maze hi siski nikki.... Aahhhh!
main zabaan se unki gardan ko kabhi chumta to kabhi
chaat raha tha, wo halki - halki siskiyan lete hue jaise
mere jism ko apne jism se daba rahi thi,
Main thoda or niche ki or badhne laga,
Uske uske gol - matol bilkul safed mumme mere
samne aa gaye, jin oar 2 gulabi nipple dikhai de rahe
the,
Unhen dekhte hi mere muh me pani aa gaya,
or maine right vale mumme ko jitna ho sake muh
me bhar liya, or chusne laga,



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Wo to jaise machal kar reh gayi, ummmmm
ki awaaz ke sath usne apni gand 1 - 2 second
ke liye hava me uthai or phir niche rakh di,
main bade chaw se uska mumma pi raha tha
jab uska mumma chusne se surkh laal ho gaya,
to maine use chhodkar dusra mumma muh me
bhar liya, or usko chusne laga ...
Leeza (kamar utha - utha kar) - ummmm ahhhh
hmmm ummmmmm
ummmmmmmmm...ummmmmmmmmmm
wo apna jism mere jism se jaise ragadne ki
koshish kar rahi thi,


Uska dusra mumma laal karne ke baad main
Uske jism ke chatkare bharta hua nabhi par
aa gaya, or apni zaban uski nabhi me daal di,
Jisse wo ek baar tez se sisti..... Ahhhhhjh
Jannnnnn ummmmm sssssssssssss
Wo ajeeb - ajeeb si awaazen nikak rahi thi,



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or main apni zabaan uski nabhi me gol - gol
ghuma raha tha, jisse wo apni gand utha - utha
kar machak rahi thi, or sath hi ek hath se mere
sar me ungliyan ghuma rahi thi,
Uska dusra hath uske left mumme par tha,
jisse wo dheere - dheere apna mumma daba
rahi thi. or masti me pata nahin kya budbuda rahi thi
Oh jann Ye kaisa jadu sa kar diya tumne ....
ahhhhhh jann ummm sssssssssssss ahhhhhhhhh
Usse control nahin ho raha tha,
Main dheere - dheere, chumta - chusta thoda or
niche badha, or jaise hi maine uski phuli hui chut ki
lakeer par Apni garam zaban phirai



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Jisse uska badan
Jhatke khane laga, wo or bardasht na kar payi....
Or apne dono hathon se mera muh apni chut par
daba diya,
Aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjh
Ek tez awaaz ke sath wo jhadne lagi,
uski chut se mitha - mitha sa pani nikalna laga,
jise main peeta chala gaya,
Mera lund poori ufaan par tha, or full hard ho chuka
tha,
wo mera sar chhod kar gehri - gehri sanse lene
lagi,
Thodi der rest ke baad main phir se uski chut chatne
lag gaya, or uski chut ke lips par apne lips rakh diye,



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Jisse wo ek baar phir josh me aane lagi,


Leeza - ohhh! Jannnnn aaj appp merii jaan nikalll karr
rahengeeeee ahhhh ssssssssssssss


Wo phir se siskariyan bharne lagi......
Jab wo full josh me aa gayi, to main uth kar baith gaya,
or uski doni tangen utha kar apne kandho par daal lin,
Phir apne lund ka topa uski phuli hui chut par rakh
kar chut ki line me phirane laga,



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Wo machalne lagi, or apni gand utha kar zor lagane lagi,
Isse bardasht nahin ho raha tha, oar sharam ke mare
wo kuchh keh nahin pa rahi thi, bas ssssssssss ummmm
ki awazen nikal rahi thi...
Maine apna lund uske chut ke chhed oar rakha or halka
Sa daba diya, jisse mera adha topa uski chut me ghus
gaya, ek maze ki siskari ham dono ke muh se nikli...
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Jab usse bardasht nahin hua to usne meri bahen pakad
kar apne oopar kheech liya,
Jisse Mera adha lund uski chut me ek baar me hi ghus
gaya,



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ye sab achanak hua tha, uski is harkat se jahan
mujhe halki hasi aa gayi, wahin wo dard se tadap si gayi,


Usne apni akhen khol kar mujhe dekha, mera hasta hua
chehra dekh kar use apni harkat yaad ayi, jisse usne
sharma kar apana chehra aone dono hathon me chhipa
sa liya,
main dheere - dheere utne hi lund ko aage pichhe karne
laga,
Ek bilkul hi anokha sa ehsaas tha.... duniya se bilkul pare,
Uski halki siskiyan phir shuru ho gayi thin,
Uski chut itni tight thi ki mere lund me bhi halka - halka
sa dard ho raha tha, or phir ek masti bhara ehsaas hua.
jab maine kuchh or kund uski chut me utaar diya,
Us ki ohir se halki dard bhari siski nikli - ahhhhhhhhhh
par maine uspar zyada dhiyan na dete hue pumping
shuru kar di, or uske mummo ke dane par jeebh
phirane laga, jisse uska maza badhne laga,
Maine baki bacha hua lund bhi uski chut me utaar diya,
Jisse use kafi dard hua par mere mummo par mehnat
karne se jaldi hi theek bhi ho gaya,
Main kabhi uske lips chusta to kabhi bari - bari se
Mumme .... Wo gand utha utha kar maza lene lagi,
Or dabhi hui siskariyan nikalne lagi-
Ssssssssssss ummmmmmmm ahhhhhh jannnnnn
Ummmmmmmmm
Uff! aisi garmi jaise andar jwalamukhi ubal raha ho,
Mujhe apna lund jalta hua mehsoos ho raha tha,
Uski chut jaise mere lund ko bhiche hue thi,
Mujhe apne lund oar ajeeb si garmi or ek mast sa
ehsaas mehsoos ho raha tha,
Ek hi position me chudai karte hue main or wo
Dono thak se gaye the,
Maine socha ab position badalni chahiye,
Main uske oooar se utha, or apna lund uski
chut se bahar nikaal liya,
Jisse usne aoni akhon par rakhe hath hata kar mujhe
aise dekha jaise maine uski pasandida cheez usse
chheen ki ho, main muskuraya or usko palat kar ghodi
bana diya,
O pichhe mudkar mujhe ajeeb nazron se dekhne lagi,



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Shayad ye sab uske liye naya tha,
Main muskuraya or uski gori gol gand par ek hath mara
"Sssssss$$$sss" uski siski nikal gayi,
Maine uski chut par apna lund set kiya,
or dheere - dheere andar dalne laga,
Wo ahhhhhhhhhh karke reh gayi,



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Main aakhen band karke usko khud me mehsoos
karne laga,
Or apni speed badha di, pat - pat ki avazen or
uski siskariyan poore room me goonjne lagin,
AhhhhhhhhhAhhhhhAhhhhhhhhhhhAhhhhh
Ssssssssss Ahhhhhhhh jannnnnn or zor se....
Jannn ummmmmmm ir zor se..... Ahhhhhhhh
I love u......jannnn i....loveeeee....youu....
.ummmmmmmmmm
Wo jaise pagal si ho gayi thi..... Or meri bhi yahi
hakat thi.... Uski siskariyan mera josh badha rahi thin....
Or main full speed me use chode ja raha tha....
Or ham apne charam ki or badhte ja rahe the.....
AhhhhahhhhAhhhhhAhhhhhAhhhhhhhh
UmmmmSsssssssssssssaAhhhhhhhh
Ek tez siskari ke sath wo jhadne lagi......
Or main bhi usi ke sath..... jhadne laga...
Main - ahhhhhh jannnnnnnnn ummmmmm
Or ham dono jhadte hue.....
Shant ho gaye..... Or wo pet ke bal pasar gayi....
. Mera lund pukk ki awaz ke sath bahar aa gaya,
Main uske oooar hi let sa gaya...


Thodi der hafne ke baad ham ek dusre ki bagal me
Sahi hokar let gaye,


Main (halka sa hafte hue)- maza aaya jann?


Leeza ne sharmakar apna chehra meri chhati me
Chhipa liya,


Main - jab to bol rahi thin, or zor se, or sb sharma rahi
ho,
"Ahhhhhhh!" usne ek mukka mete pet me jama diya,
or apna chehra chhipaye hasne lagi.
Maine uske lips par ek chhota sa kiss kiya or usko
bahon me bhar kar sone ki koshish karne laga,
Or mujhe neend aa gayi,


Subha, leeza ke kiss karne se meri aankh khuli,



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Meri aankh khulte hi usne kiss karna band kar diya,
Or sidhi hokar, uth kar jane lagi,
Maine uska hath pakd liya,


Leeza (kasmasate hue) - chhodiye na, aapke liye coffee
lani hai,


Main - hay! Coffee kis ko chahiye, mujhe to ek jaam
pila do apne garam hothon se,


Wo haste hue apna hath chhuda kar room se bahar
bhaag gayi,



Main utha or fresh hokar bahar aya,
or Leeza ke hath
Se coffee li, or pite hue, jaise hi maine apna phone dekha,
Mera matha thanak gaya 11 miss call
Oh shit!


To... Be... Continue...
Behad hi shanadar or hotttt update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Leeja ke sath masti bhari raat behad hi khoobsoorat rahi.
Jabardast update yaara.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Update - 97
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Meri aankh khulte hi Leeza kiss karna band kar diya,
Or sidhi hokar jane lagi,
Maine uska hath pakd liya,

Leeza (kasmasate hue) - chhodiye na, aapke liye coffee
lani hai,

Main - haye! Coffee kis ko chahiye, mujhe to ek jaam
pila do apne garam hothon se,

Wo haste hue apna hath chhuda kar room se bahar
bhaag gayi,

Main utha or fresh hokar bahar aya, or keeza ke hath
ki coffee li, jaise hi maine apna phone dekha,
Mera matha thanak gaya 11 miss call

Oh shit!


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11 misscalls dekh kar meri fat gayi, ye shaina
to meri jaan le legi, kya karun, phone karun ya
nahin? Main abhi soch hi raha tha, ki uska phir
se phone aane laga,
or main phone uthate hue chhat (terrise) par
chal diya,

Main - hello,

Phoebe - hello ke bachche, ab time mila mera
phone uthane ka ? (Wo gussa karte hue boli)

Main - Sorry yarr, phone silent par tha.

Phoebe - achchha sun, ek buri khabar hai!

Mujhe to ye sunte hi pasina aane laga,
bure - bure khayal man me aane lage,

Main (ghabrate hue)- kya hua, kya buri khabar
hai?

Phoebe - jiska Bio-Data tumne mujhe bheja tha
kya naam tha uska , haan! Pallavi, uske pita ji
Deepak ne un dono maa beti ko dhokha diya,

Main - what? Ye kaise ho sakta hai? Uncle to
Cancer patient hain, unko to main khud hospital
me bharti karva kar aya tha.

Phoebe - sabse pehli baat, deepak ko 1st stage
cancer start hua tha, jiska ilaaj 1 mahine me hi ho
gaya tha,
or dusri baat, wo ghar aa gaya, uske 1 hafte ke baad
pallavi ke account se croron rupees ka tranjection hua
Mujhe bank se pata chala,
pallavi ke account me jitne bhi paise the, Deepak ne
Dhokhe se ya majboor karke sab apne Account me
transfer karva liye, or apna ghar or bike agency bechkar,
un dono ko sath lekar chandigarh chala gaya, vahan
par unko chhodkar farar ho gaya, uska abhi tak koi
pata nahin chala hai, par jaldi hi main pata laga lungi.

Ye sab sunkar meri akhon se ansu beh rahe the,
Chehra ekdam sapat ho gaya tha, gusse se akhon
me angare dahek rahe the.

Main (halki awaz me)- pallavi or aunty kahan hain is
wakht? Or kaisi hain?

Phoebe (ek gehri sans chhodte hue) - Pallavi or uski
maa abhi sath hi hain ******* naam ki dhram-shala
me tehri hui hain. Or pallavi ka ilaaj ***** naam ke ek
sarkari hospital me chal raha hai.

Main (ghabrate hue)- kya hua use?

Phoebe - wo ye sadma bardasht nahin kar payi hai,
wo ye manne ko tayyar nahin hai ke uske papa ne
uske or uski maa ke sath cheat kiya hai.

Main - theek hai, main kuchh karta hun, tu ek kaam
kar bas deepak ka pata laga, kisi kone me to chhipa
hoga haramzada, main usko aisi saza dunga ke wo
roz hazaron mout marega.

Phoebe - relax yarr, sun tu jaldi me kuchh bhi mat
karna, kyonki deepak kahin bhi chhipa ho, par uski
nazar apni biwi or beti par zaroor hogi,
to jo bhi karna soch samajh kar karna, aage tum
khud samajhdar ho.

Main (ek thandi sans chhodte hue)- theek hai,
main dhyan rakhunga.

Phoebe - chal rakhti hun phone, or jaldi hi tujhe
khushkhabri deti hun.

Main - ok bbye!
Phoebe - bye.

Maine phone cut kiya or apne aansu saaf karke
Chat par lage hue washbasen par apna muh
dhokar, chhat par hi ghumte hue aage ka plan
banane laga.

Main (apne man me)- haan ye theek rahega.
or man hi man kuchh decide karke niche ki taraf chal
diya.

Niche aya to sab dining dable par mera hi intzaar kar
rahe the, maine sab ko Good Morning wish kiya,
or apne sochon me gum sheetal ki bagal me ja
baitha, or breakfast ek plate me nikal kar khane
laga, jab maine nigah uthakar dekha to sab meri taraf
hi dekh rahe the.

Main - what?

Sakshi - ye to hame puchhna chahiye, kya hua hai
apko?

Mansi - lagta hai bhai aaj jeb khali hone ke dar se
dar gaye hain. (Usne shopping ke liye yaad dilaya)

Sheetal (kuchh sochte hue)- nahin kal actully, sakshi
didi ne bhai ko dudh nahin pilaya tha, or lagta hai
leeza didi ne bhi mana kar diya hoga.

Sab uski baton se khilkhilate hue hasne lagin, vahin
Leeza to sharam se gadhi ja rahi thi, usko shayad
raat yaad aa gayi hogi.

Aunty - are ye bhi koi hasne vali baat hui, ja sheetal
Dudh lekar aa or apne bhai ko pila de.

Aunty ki baat sunkar baki sab muh niche ko karke
hasne lagin, vahin sheetal ne apna sar peet liya.

Usko baton se mera mood bhi achchha ho gaya tha

Main (sab se)- aaj college se ghar aane ke baad,
sab milkar shopping par chalenge.

Sab meri baat se khush ho gayin. or ham breakfast
karke nikle apne school/college.

Maine sakshi ko college drop kiya or raju ko phone
karke bula liya. Wo canteen me hi tha.
Abhi 8 : 30 hue the.
Sakshi - bhai aap class nahin aa rahe kya?

Main - mujhe kuchh zaruri kam hai, tum jao main
half time par milta hun.

Wo OK kehkar cahi gayi, or raju bhi aa gaya,
Maine Raju ko gadi me baithne ke liye bola,
or gadi chalane laga.

In Car
••••••••••

Main - Raju, Pallavi musibat me hai,

Raju - kya?......

Main - beech me mat bol, or dhiyan se meri baar sun.
{isne haam me sar hilaya}

Main - tu ye pata kar pallavi kar ghar kisne kharida hai,
or usko kisi bhi keemat par vapas uske naam kara.
Ye ke blank check.
(Main usko ek check par sign karta hua bola)
or check usko de diya.

Main - main ja raha hun pallavi ko vapas lane jahan
bhi wo hai, tu ye kaam pura kar, or jo cheez jaisi
thi vapas vaisa hi kar de, or paise chahiyen to mang
lena.

Raju - Theek hai bhai, tu apna kaam kar main apna
karta hun.

Maine usko pallavi ke ghar ke bahar utaar diya,
vahan par abhi bhi lock kaga hua tha,

Raju - yahan to lock laga hai.

Main - yahan aas - paas malum kar koi na koi bata
dega.
Ye bolkar main vahan se nikla, or raste me se hi
phupa ji ko phone laga diya.

Phupa ji - Hello, haan beta bol.

Main - phupa ji, mujhe abhi urgent helecopter
chahiye rent par, main ***** maidaan me hun.

Phupa ji - theek hai beta 10 minute wait karo
main bhejta hun.

Main - Ok, or is bare me kisi ko pata batana mat.

Phir maine ek bande ko phone lagaya, or usko bhi
vahin bula liya. Or gadi ek maidaan me park kar di.
Ab main helecopter kar intzaar karne laga.

15 minute me hi heleCopter aata hua dikhai diya

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Or ek Black Scorpio aakar ruki
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jisme se 4 bande
utre jo black kapde pehne hue the, or hathiyaton se less the.

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maine unko helecopter me bithaya.

Unme se jo unka leader tha 'Billa' wo bola-

Billa - bhai kya kaam aa gaya jo urgent bula liya.

Main - meri ek friend musibat me hai, main usko
lene ja raha hun, tum bas sath rehna or jispar
bhi shak ho usko uda dena, baaki sab main dekh
lunga. Matlab tumhen full security deni hai.

Billa - bhai aap tension mat lo, ham dekh lenge.

Main - kaam ho gaya to 20 lakh dunga.

Wo charo khush ho gaye, or usne 2 snipers ko
bhi phone karke bula liya, jo hame vahin milne
vale the.
or 2 ghante me hi ham chandigarh pohoch gaye.
Maine pehle hi ek car hire kar li thi.
Ham car me baithe or chal diye, phoebe ke diye
hue address par. Raste me se hamne dono
snipers ko bhi pick kar liya.
Vahan se ham sidhe dharm-shala pohche
par hame vahan koi bhi nahin mila.
Phir ham us hospital me pohche jahan pallavi
admit thi.
Hospital me receptionist ne bataya ki wo general
Ward me hai, maine apne sath aye logon ko ward
ke bahar hi khada kiya or khud andar chala gaya.
Andar pohochkar dekha to main dang reh gaya,

or mere aansu behne lage.


To... Be... Continue
Behad hi shanadar or dilchasp update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Pallavi ke sath dhokha....
Kya se kya ho gaya....
 

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Hospital me receptionist ne bataya ki Pallavi general
Ward me hai, maine apne sath aye logon ko ward
ke bahar hi khada kiya or khud andar chala gaya.
Andar pohochkar dekha to main dang reh gaya,
or mere aansu behne lage.


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Usko is halat me dekhkar mere aansu jhar - jhar karke
girne lage, mujhe uske baap par gussa aa raah tha,
Jo pallavi ki is halat ka zimmedar tha,

Paas me hi uski mummy baithi thin, mujhe dekhte hi
wo mujhse rote hue lipat gayin,

or phir mujhse alag hokar bolin -

Vaishali aunty (rote hue)- beta achchha hua tu aa gaya,
Dekh kya halat ho gayi hai iski, hasti khelti bachchi aaj
is halat me padi hai,

Main (apne aansu pochhte hue)- ab kaisi hai pallavi?

Aunty - kuchh samajh nahin aa raha beta, bas khud se
andar hi andar lad rahi hai.

Main - aunty aap pallavi ko lekar mere sath chalo.
Aap dono ko sahi salamat vapas pohcha dunga.

Abhi aunty kuchh bol patin, usse pehle hi mera phone
bajne laga, maine dekha phone phoebe ka tha.

Phoebe - hello, sun ek khushkhabri hai, Deepak
ka pata chal gaya hai, wo vahin chandigarh me hi hai,
********** is jagah milega.

Main - ye hui na baat, uske atteck karne se pehle ham
hi uspar attack kar denge.

Phoebe - rocky sambhal kar, wo ab security ke sath
rehta hai, 30+ log hain hathiyaron se less, in kuchh
dino me wo vahan ka jana - mana bussinessman
ban gaya hai.

Main - tu tension mat le main dekh lunga.
Chal aakar milta hun tujhse, bbye

Phoebe - OK, kuchh zarurat ho to phone karna, Bye

Aunty - kya hua beta kiska phone tha?

Main - meri ek informer ka tha, usne bataya hai ke,
Aapke pujniye patidev kahan par hain is wakht,

Aunty ye sunkar ek baar phir se bhavuk ho gayin.
Itme me hame pallavi ki awaz aayi-

Pallavi - kahan hain mere dad?


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Usko dekhkar ham uski taraf gaye, usne mera hath
tham liya, Aunty uske sar me hath phirane lagin.

Pallavi (mujhse)- kahan hain mere dad, main unse
milna chachti hun.
Pata hai rocky, ye mumma kya anap - shanap Bol
rahi thin, ye kehti hain ke dad hame dhokha dekar
bhag gaye, aisa thode hi kar sakte hain mere dad,
(wo rote hue boli)

Main - tum chinta mat karo, wo theek hain, jaldi hi
aa jayenge.

Pallavi - dekha mumma, maine bola tha na, wo
hame chhodkar nahin ja sakte.

Aunty - (apne aap ko rone se rokte hue)- haan beta.

Main (khade hote hue) - achchha, main chalta hun.

Pallavi ne mera hath or mazbuti se pakad liya, or meri
taraf apni bheegi aakhon se dekhte hue na me gardan
hilane lagi.

Main - are main tumhare dad ko lane ja raha hun pagal,
Abhi 1 ghante ke andar vapas aa jaunga.

Par meri baat ka uspar koi asar nahin ho raha tha,

Pallavi (ruhasi awaaz me)- nahin, jab bhi tum jate ho,
bohot din baad vapas aate ho, is baar main tumhen
nahin jane dungi, (uske aansu chhalak pade)

Main (uska matha chumkar)- bas 1 ghante ki hi to
baat hai jaan, Main bas yun gaya or yun aaya.

Mere jaan kehne se Wo rote hue bhi sharmane lagi,
uske galon par lali aa gayi,

Pallavi - pakka aa jaoge na

Main (uske laal hue gaal par kiss karke) - haan, pakka.

Wo mukurane lagi or mera hath chhod diya, aunty bhi
muskura rahi thin, ye shayad galat hota bhi, par pallavi
ko theek karne ke liye shayad ye zaruri tha,

Main vahan se bahar aaya, mere aadmi mere sath the,
Mere dimaag me ab kuchh or plan chal raha tha.
Main pallavi ke papa ko vapas lana chahta tha,
Maine phone lagaya sidha phupa ji ko, or unko sare
halaat samjhaye.

Main (phone par) - phupa ji, kuchh aisa karo ke deepak
barbaad ho jaye,
Aapke paas 1 ghante ka wakht hai, uske sare partners ko
Khareed lo, jitna paisa kharch hota hai kar do, par mujhe
Deepak bhikari vali halat me chahiye.

Phupa ji - beta main ye to nahin janta ke tumhari usse kya
Dushmani hai, par agar tum aisa hi chahte ho to theek hai,
Agle 1 ghnate me wo road par aa jayega.

Main - ThankYou phupa ji.

Phupa ji - Ok beta bye.

Pir unhone phone cut kar diya.

Main - Billa, is shaher me apne kitme aadmi hain?
Or kitni der me aa sakte hain.

Billa - bhai is shaher me takreeban 100 - 150 aadmi hain
apne, Or wo bas 15 minutes me aa sakte hain.

Main - 50 aadmiyon ko bukva lo, or unko ******* is
address par aane ko kaho, ham bhi vahin chal rahe hain.

Usne haan me sar hilaya, or kisi se phone par baat
karne laga, Phir usne thumbs up karke done ka ishara
kiya, or meri car ka Door khol diya, mere andar
baithte hi sab usme baithe or ham nikal gaye deepak
ke address par.
Jo yahan se adha ghante ki doori par tha.
Or theek wakht par ham vahan pohche,
Vahin bahar hamare admiyon ki gadiyan khadi thin.
Maine unhen apne paas bulaya or sab short me
samjha diya, ki kya or kaise karna hai.
Phir main 4 admiyon ke sath uske bunglow ke andar
ghusa, gate par hi security ke 4 aadmi khade the

Security offier - O hello, kahan ghuse chale aa rahe ho,
Kon ho tum? Kisse milna hai?

Main (bahar khade apne admiyon se) - are vahan kyon
Khade ho bhai, batao in bhaisahab ko.

Pichhe se mere 6 aadmi aa gaye or unke sar par gun
taan di, unke muh band karne ke baad, main aage badha
to bahar garden me deepak tehelta hua dikhai diya.
Jo bohot gusse me kisi se phone par baat kar raha tha,

Bunglow ke charon taraf kuchh 30 - 35 aadmi guns
Liye hue khade the,
Hamari taraf dekhte hi unhone hamari taraf gun taan
din, maine seeti bajai, or mere aadmiyon ne unki taraf
guns point kar din.


To Be Continue
Behad hi shanadar or dilchasp update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kafi nazuk mod par khadi hai ye kahani....
 

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Bunglow ke charon taraf kuchh 30 - 35 aadmi guns
Liye hue khade the,
Hamari taraf dekhte hi unhone hamari taraf gun taan
din, maine seeti bajai, or mere aadmiyon ne unki taraf

guns point kar din.


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Hamare kuchh bhi karne se pehle hi Deepak (Pallavi's Dad)
ne apne admiyon ko ishara kiya or sabne apni guns niche kar
lin.

Deepak - Welcome Mr. Rocky, kaise aana hua? Wo bhi is tarhan?

Main - behtar hai ke ham baithkar akele me kuchh baat karen.

Deepak - haan - haan kyon nahin.

Usne garden me padi hui chairs ki or ishara kiya,

To maine apne admiyon ko guns niche karne ka ishara kiya.
Or uske paas chair par baith gaya.

Main - kya main jaan sakta hun ke ye sab karne ki kya vajha hai?

Deepak - Paisa Mr. Rocky Paisa .... paise ke aage sab peeka hai.
Paisa hai to duniya hai varna kuchh nahin.

Main (apne man me)- sala gaa*d fate to fate par position na ghate.
Sale ke laude lage hue hain par aisa dikha raha hai jaise bohot bada rahees ho.

Isme ek baat or bhi hai, jo naya - naya maaldaar hota hai, usme ek alag sa attitude aa jata hai, wo kahavat to aapne suni hi hogi -
Aayi mouj fakeer ki, Diya jhopda phoonk .
Bas kuchh aisa hi yahan hua tha, deepak ke paas paisa aate hi,
Usne apni purani zindagi ko thokar maar di thi, yahan tak ki apne
parivar ko bhi bhool baitha tha.

Main (deepak se)- to kya paisa itna bada ho gaya ke tum ne apni bivi or beti ko bhi besahara kar diya.

Wo abhi meri baat ka kuchh javaab deta usse pehle hi ek kayamat
matakti hui aayi, jo ek jilli si lingerie pehne hue thi.


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"Any Problem Darling" ye kehte hue wo aakar deepak ki god me
baith gayi, meri to aakhen badi - badi ho gayin.

Deepak - Mr. Rocky meet my girlfriend Risha.
ab tumhen tumhare savaal ka javaab mil gaya na
(Wo battesi dikhate hue bola)

Mujhe to bada gussa aa raha tha, meri aakhon me surkhi aane lagi
thi, par main control kar raha tha.

Main (gusse me)- tujhe sharm nahin aayi, aisa behuda kaam karte
hue, apni bivi or beti ko chhodkar, beti ki umar ki ladki se ishq farma
raha hai,

Deepak - zyada bolne ki zarurat nahin hai, meri marzi main jo chahe
wo karun. Tumhen is baat se kya lena- dena.
ye mere ghar ka matter hai,
behtar hai tum isse door raho.

Ab mera dimaag garam ho gaya tha.

Main (gusse se)- Abe sale, jis paise par tu itna ud raha hai na, bhool mat wo
meri vajha se hi mile the Pallavi ko, or sale tu aaj yahan zinda baitha
hai na, wo bhi meri hi badolat hai, tera rom - rom mera karzdaar hai,
Agar main tujhpar daya nahin karta na to tu cancer se sad - sad kar mar raha
hota.

Deepak ne us ladki ko uthkar jane ka ishara kiya, or wo kayamat apni gand hilate hue andar chali gayi, uske jate hi Deepak ke tewar
badal gaye.

Deepak - oye ladke tu ab zyada bol raha hai, mere sath jo hua wo
Sab kismat ka khel tha, or ab tune mujhse awaaz unchi karke baat ki to........ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhUUnnnnnnnnnnn

Maine turant uski gardan daboch li, udhar, mere aadmiyon ne phir se
uske admiyon par guns taan din, or bache hue aadmiyon ne deepak
ke sar par guns point kar lin.

Main - Sale tujhe to main abhi jaan se maar deta, par sirf pallavi or aunty ki vajha se chhod raha hun, par tu tension mat le,
Bas ye soch jo bana sakta hai wo bigaad bhi sakta hai,
Jin paison par tu aish kar raha tha, wo ab nahin rahenge,
Aisa bandovast kiya hai tera, ke tu barbaad ho jayega,

Maine ek hath se uski gardan par halka dabaav daal rakha tha,
Or dusre hath se phone nikalkar phupa ji se phone par baat ki.
Or phone rakhkar uski or haste hue dekha,

Main (haste hue)- abe tune banks se loan le rakhe hain,
apne bussiness ke liye,
Or suna hai tere shares neelaam ho gaye, or uske paise se partners ka udhaar chuka diya, ab banks ka loan kaise chukayega.
hahahahaha tu to beta lamba hi jayega ( main uski gardan chhodte hue bola)
jisse wo apni gardan pakad kar thoda khansa phir bola-

Deepak - has le aaj mujhpar, par yaad rakhna har kutte ka din aata
hai, mera bhi aayega, or us din main teri wo halat karunga...
Abhi wo kuchh or bolta maine satttt satttt karke 2 jhapad laga diye,
Sale ka chehra bhi laal pad gaya.

Udhar mere jhapad lagate hi uske aadmi form me aa pate, usse
pehle hi mere aadmiyon ne dhayy dhayy karke firing shuru kar di,
or uske aadmiyon ke lashin ke dher lag gaye,
Or idhar mere wo aadmi jo deepak par gun point kiye hue the,
Ushone apni gund load kar lin,
Wo ye dekhkar khoufzada ho gaya, or kaapne laga.

Main - kya socha tha? Mujhe sirf bolna aata hai!,
sale agar tu meri
history jaan gaya to teri geography bigad jayegi.

Uska chehra aisa ho gaya tha jaise uske gale me tatte atak gaye
hon.

Deepak (dar se apna thook satakte hue)- mujhe maaf kar do,
Tum jo bologe vaisa hi karunga, mmm main sab chhod dunga.

Main (tez awaz me) - dekh meri baat dhiyan se sun, agar apni
zindagi ki salamti chahta hai, to abhi ja,
apni bivi or beti ke paas,
or unse maafi maang,
Or vapas lout ja usi sheher me, usi ghar me.
(Main ungli dikhate hue bola-)

Deepak - ttt theek hai bhai, ab apne admiyon ko bola na, guns nivche
karne ko

Maine apne admiyon ko ishara kiya to unhone guns niche kar lin.

Or main usko coller se pakad kar gadi me baithaya, phir ham vapas
Hospital aa gaye.

Main - ja andar or jo bola hai wo kar, or ye baat yaad rakhna,
Meri nazar hamesha tujhpar rahegi, agar tune aunty ya pallavi
ko zara bhi nuksan pohchane ki koshish bhi ki, to yaad rakhna
wo tera akhiri din hoga.

Wo bhagta hua andar chala gaya, or main bahar hi khada raha,
Phir maine ek 10 lakh ka check dekar sab ko vida kiya,
Wo bhi khushi - khushi chale gaye.
Ab bas mere sath billa or uske 3 admi bache the,

Main - billa, wo kaam hua?

Billa - haan bhai, wo sab sirf behosh hue the, maine unko hospital
pohochwa diya hai.

Main - Good! Or haan deepak ko unke bare me pata nahin chalna
chahiye, ki wo firing nakli thi,
unko warning dekar chhod do.

Billa - ji bhai, aisa hi hoga.
Or usne kahin par phone laga kar sab samjha diya.

Tabhi mera phone baja - phone phoebe ka tha.
Phone uthate hi wo boli -

Phoebe (khushi se) - Wah! Mere sher, na khoon na kharaba,
badi mast planning thi, tu to bada heavy driver nikla.

Main (haste hue)- are tune bhi to itni madad ki meri, thanks yarr.

Phoebe - chal ab zyada senti mat ho, kabhi koi kaam ho to batana.

Phir maine usse thodi baat karke phone cut kar diya,
or turant hi mere phone par raju ka call aane laga.

Main (phone pick karke)- haan, kaam hua ya nahin?

Raju - allmost done, tu bata.

Main - mera bhi done.

Raju - yarr wo ?

Main - kya hua? Khulkar bata?

Raju - Mariya, tujhse milna chahti hai, wo bohot pareshan hai,
ro ro kar aakhen suja li hain.

Main (ek gehri saams chhodte hue)- theek hai, sham me milta hun.

Phir raju se 2 baat karke maine phone rakha.

Or hospital ke andar chal diya, or sidha pallavi ke ward me jakar ruka

andar unka rona - dhona maafi -talsfi karna poora ho chuka tha, wo sab baaton me
magan the,

Pallavi mujhe dekhte hi chehek uthi, or phir aunty or pallavi ne
mera shukriya ada kiya, ab pallavi kafi theek lag rahi thi.

Main ab jaldi ghar jana chahta tha, varna sari ladkiyan meri jaan kha jatin,

Maine unke vapas loutne ka intzaam kiya, or billa se kehkar 4 admi
nigrani par lagva diye, phir maine sab se vida mangi,
Pallavi to mujhe rokna chahti thi, par wo apne papa ke samne
kuchh bol nahin payi, uska sad face sab bayan kar raha tha.
Main usse jaldi hi milne ka vada karke sab se vida
lekar billa & team ke sath vapas ghar ko chal diya,
by helecopter.
Or 1.5 ghante me ham vahin khade the,
jahan car chhodkar gaye the.

Maine time dekha _ Shitt! 3 baj gaye, sab mera intzaar kar rahe
honge,

Maine car me baithte hue sakshi ko phone lagaya,
Usne pehli hi ring me pick kar liya, jaise mere hi call ka wait kar
rahi ho,

Main (muskurate hue)- kahan ho jaan, main college aa raha hun
tumhen lene.

Sakshi (halke gusse se)- koi zarurat nahin hai, main ghar pohoch
gayi hun.
Aap bhi sidhe se ghar aa jao.

(Wo karri awaaz se boli.)
Meri muskan to gayab hi ho gayi, sala ab kya naya natak hai.
Phir bhi main situation ko samjhne ki garaj se bola

Main - kya hua jaan, aise kyon baat kar rahi ho?

(Main mithi se awaaz me bola)

Sakshi - are apke liye surprise hai, bas aap jaldi aa jao.

Main (man me) - sala kya surprise hai, kahin inka mujhe marne ka
plan to nahin, ya koi purana kaand khul gaya, mere to dimaag ka
dahi hone laga.

Main (sakshi se)- achchha phone rakho main aata hun.
Ummmahhh love you jaan.

Usne bhi ek chumma dekar phone kaat diya,
Jisse mujhe itna to andaza ho gaya ki main to safe hun
baat kuchh or hai.

Maine driver ko car tez chakane ko kaha, or raste me Billa ko
check dekar vida kiya, wo bhi mera hath chumkar apni akhon se laga kar chala gaya,
Ye gunde badmashon ka tareeka hota hai, wo sirf apne godfather ko hi itni izzat dete hain,
Mera to sala seena chouda ho gaya, kyonki billa pure sheher ka
mana hua badmash tha, par iska concept alag tha,
Ye bigde hue ameero ko lutkar gareebon ki madad karta tha.
Or pure nainital ka Don tha.

Khair! Main ghar pohcha or vahan kuchh naye chehron ko dekhkar
Chounk gaya.


To Be Continue
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Laajwaab....Laajwaab....Laajwaab
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 

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Ye gunde badmashon ka tareeka hota hai, wo sirf apne godfather ko hi itni izzat dete hain,
Mera to sala seena chouda ho gaya, kyonki billa pure sheher ka
mana hua badmash tha, par iska concept alag tha,
Ye bigde hue ameero ko lutkar gareebon ki madad karta tha.
Or pure nainital ka Don tha.

Kahir! Main ghar pohcha or vahan kuchh naye chehron ko dekhkar

Chounk gaya.



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Maine door par jakar bell bajai, Leeza ne door open kiya,

Mujhe andar se kuchh anjan logon ki awazen aa rahi thin,
Maine isharon se leeza se puchha to usne kaha - khud hi
dekh lo.
Main bhi der na karte hue andar chala gaya,
Vahan dekha to sitting (baithne ki jagah - couch) me
1 aadmi roti hui Mansi ko dilasa de raha tha,
Uski akhon me bhi aansu the, sath me 1 aurat bhi thi, jo priya
ke sar par hath phirate hue usse baten kar rahi thi,
Or thodi doori par ek masoom si ladki baithi hui thi, jo idhar - udhar
dekh rahi thi,

Wo admi mujhe dekhte hi khada ho gaya, or lagbag bhagte hue mere paas aaya, or mujhe zor se gale laga liya.
pichhe se wo aurat bhi aayi, or mere sar par hath phirane lagi,
Thodi der ke baad unki pakad dheeli hui, to wo mujhse alag hokar khade ho gaye, main unhen hairat bhari nazron se dekh raha tha,
or pehchanne ki koshish kar raha tha,
Wo Nam aakhon se bole -

Admi - Beta, main tera mama hun.
Unke itna bolte hi maine unko dobara gale se laga liya,

Main (gale lagaye hue nam aakhon se) - Mama ji, kahan the aap
kahan - kahan nahin dhundha aapko.

Mama ji (mujhse alag hokar)- mere bachche, main bhi salon se
tum sab ko dhundh raha hun, wo to akhbar me didi or jija ji ki
khabar padhi tabh jakar tumhara pata chala.
(or wo rone lage)

Main unko chup karane laga, or unke sath dheere - dheere
chalte hue wapas sitting me baith gaye.

phir main mami ji se baat karne laga, mama - mami ne hame
Apni beti se introduce karaya.
Wo bohot masoom si thi, main usse gale lag kar mila.
Wo bhi bohot khush hui.

Intro Time -

Mama - Nagesh Thakur - 44 years
Mami - Chanda Devi - 41 years

Preeti - Nagesh or chanda ki beti
Age - 18 years (12th class)
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with Attractive face

ham baat-cheet karte rahe phir aunty or leeza ne lunch laga diya,
Phir sabhi ne sath me lunch kiya.
Lunch karke maine Mama ji ko aaram karne ko bola-
or khud sakshi ka hath pakad kar ek room me le gaya,
or usse bola. -

Main - sakshi, Mama - Mami ka dhiyan rakhna, or shopping
par kal chalenge, mujhe thoda urgent kaam aa gaya hai,
Raju se milne jana hai.

Sakshi (mujhe ghoorte hue)- ye kya khichdi pak rahi hai tum
dono ke bich, subha se tum raju bhaiya ke sath gayab the,
or ab phir jana hai, mujhe reason chahiye.

Main kuchh javaab deta usse pehle hi leeza or mansi bhi room
me aa gayin, to sakshi ne unhen sari baat namak - mirch laga
kar batai.

Mansi - tabhi main sochun ke ye hamme intrest kyon nahin le
rahe, ab samajh aaya, ke inka taste hi change ho gaya hai.

Leeza tukur tukur hamari taraf dekh rahi thi.
or mand - mand muskura rahi thi.

Main (haste hue)- tum pagal ho gayi ho kya, itni khubsurat
ladkiyon ko chhodkar main kya us ke pichhe jaunga.

Mansi - to hame poori baat batao, varna ham to aisa hi sochenge.

Main - achchha theek hai suno -

Maine unhen pallavi vala metter poora bata diya.
Tabh jakar unhen rahat mili, or main jaldi aane ka
bolkar raju se milne chal diya, mujhe mariya se milna tha.

Udhar Jinnlok me -

Jungal me bheeshan aag lagi hui thi,


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Or vahan se kuchh door adrishye (ek chhipi hui jagha)
[jo kisi ko dikhai nahin de sakti jabtak khud raja na chahe]

Ek Mahel



Jahan par jinnlok ke Raja Aghora ka parivar or kuchh khas log
Baithkar meeting kar rahe hain.

Rajkumari Menka (thoda ghabrai hui)- pitaji, hame lagta hai ab
apko Sagar ji ko vapas bulana padega, varna isi tarhan chalta raha
to wo din door nahin jab jinnlok tabahi ki kagaar par hoga.

Senapati - ham Rajkumari se sehmat hain maharaj, apne hi rajye
me hame chhipkar rehna pad raha hai, aisa kab tak chalega.

Raja Aghora - Main tum sab se sehmat hun, par wo ek insan hai,
Wo abhi apne oopar hue hamle se shayad dar gaya hai,
apne pariwar ko lekar wo bohot zyada Posasive hai.
Iska samadhan hame kisi or tareeke se karna hoga.

Rajkumari Menka - Pitaji, agar aap kahen to ham Leeza didi se,
madad maang sakte hain.

Aghora - Nahin rajkumari, ye ab hamari samasya hai,
ham isse khud hi nibtenge, jab tak pani sar se oopar na aa jaye.

Raja Aghora (senapati se)- Senapati, tum turant jao, or Rajguru
ko yahan par bulao, ab to vahi ekmatra resta hain.

Senapati (khade hote hue)- jo agya rajan.

Udhar ShaitaanLok Me


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Yahan dhol - nagade baj rahe the, kuchh khushi ka mahol tha,
Kyonki Shaitaan aadha jaag chuka tha,
or 2 din me poora jagne vala tha.
Yahan par aaj Shaitaan ka poora parivar mojood tha,
Or sab "Andhera Kayam Rahe" ke naare laga rahe the.

Shaitan ki beti (Marsie) ne apne hath dikha kar sab ko shant kiya

Marsie - 2 din baad pitaji (shaitan lok me malik) poori tarhan se
jaag jayenge, uske baad kuchh mahine me wo apni poori
shakti wapas ap lenge, or phir hoga sare lokon ka vinash
Or sab par hamara raaj.

Uski baat se ek baar phir poora planet naaro se gunj utha.
Or shaitan ke liye taza khoon ka bandovast karne ke liye
har lok se pakdi gayi kuwari ladkiyon ki bali ka intzam
kiya jane laga.

Idhar Dharti-Lok Me

Main sab baton se anjan, apni car Raju ke ghar ki taraf bhaga
raha tha. Or kuchh hi der me main raju ke ghar par pohoch gaya.
Door unki maid ne khola, mere puchhne par Raju ke room ki taraf
ishara karke wo chali gayi.
Main bhi chal diya raju se milne, par is baar maine room ka door

knock karna theek samjha.
To Be Continue
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Rocky ke mama - mami or unki beti ki entry or thodi si masti shandaar rahi.
Jinnlok ka haal bura h or shaitan lok ka jabardast.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 

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Main sab baton se anjan, apni car Raju ke ghar ki taraf bhaga
raha tha. Or kuchh hi der me main raju ke ghar par pohoch gaya.
Door unki maid ne khola, mere puchhne par Raju ke room ki taraf
ishara karke wo chali gayi.
Main bhi chal diya raju se milne, par is baar maine room ka door
knock karna theek samjha.



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Door knock karte hi Raju ne door khol diya,
Or mujhe andar ki or ishara karke wo bahar
nikal gaya,



Main andar chal diya, andar ka nazara dekh kar
mujhe shock sa laga, Mariya bed par baithi thi,
or ro rahi thi, mujhe dekhte hi wo apne aansu
saaf karne lagi.


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or gardan jhuka kar apradhiyon ki tarhan baith gayi,
Main uske paas jakar baith gaya, or uska chehra
oopar ko uthaya,
uski aakhen rone ki vajha se laal ho gayin thin,


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Wo badi masoom si lag rahi thi, maine uska matha
choom liya, or aisa karte hi wo zor se rote hue mere
gale lag gayi.
Main usko puchkarte hue uske sar par hath phirane
laga, or usko chup hone ke liye bolne laga.


Thodi der baad wo shant hui, par mujhse nazar nahin
mila rahi thi, bas sar niche karke baithi thi,


Main - Mariya, mujhe maaf kar de, main galat wakht
par bina knock kiye tumhare room me ghus aaya tha,
par main sach kehta hun, mera aisa janbujhkar nahin
kiya.


Mariya sharam se gardan jhukaye hi boli -


Mariya - Bhai, aap kis baat ki mafi maang rahe hain,
Paap to maine kiya hai, wo bhi apne hi sage bhai ke
sath....


Ye kehte - kehte wo phir se sisakne lagi.


Main - agar aisi hi baat hai to main to, duniya ka sabse
bada papi hun.
(Maine kuchh sochte hue use sach se avgat karaya)


Meri baat se wo ekdam se sar utha kar meri aakhon
me jhakne lagi, uska rone ko jsise break lag gaya tha.
jaise wo meri akhon me dekhna chah rahi ho ki main
apne aap ko papi kyon keh raha hun.


Mariya (dabe hue swar me)- ye aap mujhe behlane ke
liye bol rahe hain, kyonki mujhe aap par khud se
zyada vishvas hai bhai, aap kabhi paap nahin kar
sakte.


Main - Dekho Mariya, kya paap or kya punya ye main
nahin janta, or na hi janna chahta hun, par tumhen
ek raaz batana chahta hun, jo mere or mere pariwar
ke siva koi nahin janta, haan par use janne ke baad
shayad tumhare dil par badha hua bojh khatam ho
jayega.


Ye kehte hue main uski aakhon me dekh raha tha,
Uski aakhon me sab kuchh janne ki laalsa saaf dikhai
pad rahi thi,


Main - kya tum sunne ko tayyar ho?


Mariya ne dheere se apna sar haan me hilaya.


Main (uski aakhon me dekhte hue)- Main jo kuchh
bhi kahun wo apne tak hi rakhna
(usne meri baat se sar hila kar OK kaha)
Main Mansi se pyar karta hun, or wo bhi mujhse
bohot pyar karti hai.
Or bohot jald main usse shadi karne vala hun.
(Main ek hi saans me sab bol gaya)


Meri baat se Mariya bhochakki reh gayi, uski aakhen
bahar aane ko ho gayin.


Mariya (shock me)- ye aap kya bol rahe ho? Aapki
to priya se engagement ho chuki hai, jab usko pata
chalega to kya hoga.


Main (haste hue)- asal me Mansi ne hi priya ko apnane
ko kaha tha, priya mere or mansi ke bare me sab janti
thi, un dono ne ek dusre ko bohot pehle apna liya tha.


Meri baat sunkar unke dimag me visfot pe visfot ho
rahe the, use samajh nahin aa raha tha, ye kaise ho
sakta hai, 1 ladki, dusri ladki ko, kaise accept kar sakti
hai, wo bhi jab dusri ladki uske pati ki sagi behen ho.


Main uske chehre ke expression se sab samajh raha
tha ki iske man me kya chal raha hoga.
Aur uski bhavnao ko samjhte hue main aage bola-


Main - Mariya, pyar sab kuchh kara deta hai, pyar
kurbani chahta hai, or usko kurbani deni hi padti hai.
tabh jakar sachcha pyaar milta hai.


Mariya - or bhai is duniya or samaaj ka kya?
kya ye duniya samajh payegi, ek bhai or ek behen
ke pyaar ko?, kya ye samaaj is rishte ko accept karega?


Main - dekho mariya, ye rishte secret hote hain,
kisi ko bataye nahin jate, pata nahin duniya me
kitne bhai behen shadi karke ek sath reh rahe honge
or unke baare me koi nahin jaanta hoga,


Wo meri baat bade chaw se sun rahi thi.
Phir main use incest ke bare me samjhate hue bola-


Main - tumhen pata hai incest rishte zyada mazboot
kyon hote hain?
Isliye ke,' maan lo tumhari zindagi me koi or ladka
aata hai, to uspar vishvaas ya bharosa tumhen
ekdam se nahin hoga, tum uske bare me sab kuchh
janne ke baad or uske sath kam se kam 2 - 3 saal
relationship me rehne ke baad hi uspar vishvaas kar
paogi, or uske baad bhi pata nahin wo tumhare sath
kab vishvasghat kar de, kyonki ye duniya bure logon
se bhari padi hai,
Or dusri taraf, agar tumhen tumhare bhai se pyaar
ho gaya to tum us par khud se zyada bharosa kar
paogi, tumhen uspar itna to pakka vishvas rahega
ki wo tumhen kabhi dhokha nahin dega.


Meri baat wo bade dhiyan se sun rahi thi, or meri
haan me haan mila rahi thi. Jaise meri har baat se
sehmat ho.


Mariya - bhai, kya hamara dharm is baat ki ijazat deta
hai? Kya ye paap nahin hai? Kya bhagwan hame iske
badle narak me nahin daal dega?


Main (muskurate hue)- bhagwan ne to sirf insaan
banaya tha, ye dharam, jati, kayde - kanoon
ye sab insano ki rachna hai,
Bhagwan ne to sirf achchhe or bure me farak
samjhaya tha,
Par jaise - jaise insaan ka dimag develop hota gaya
Waise - waise hi usne ye kayde kanoon bana dale.
Tum bas itna jaan lo ki sachche pyaar me hi swarg
hai, chahe wo pyar bahar mile ya ghar me.


Meri baaton ka uspar asar saaf dekha ja sakta tha,
Uske chehre par sharam ke sath - sath ek muskan
ki lakeer thi, jisse uska masoom chehra or zyada
damak raha tha.


Maine aage badhkar uske gulabi hue gaalon par
baari - baari kiss kiya or bola -


Main - ab tere dout clear ho gaye hain ya kuchh
or puchhna baaki hai?
(maine apni dono eyebrow uthate hue usse puchha)


Mariya ke galon par kiss karne se, uske gaal laal
tamatar se ho gaye the, or uske chehre par
ek tez sharmili muskan thi,


Mariya (muskurate hue)- mujhe apki or mansi didi
ki love story sunni hai.


Main (haste hue)- chal theek hai, par phir tujhe bhi
apni love story sunani padegi,


Is baat se wo sharam se laal pad gayi, or apne
chehre ko apne hathon me chhipa liya.


Main (haste hue) - Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya.


Wo zor se hasne lagi iska hasta hua chehra uske
hathon ke pichhe chhip sa gaya tha.


Phir maine usko apni, Mansi or Priya ki love story
sunai, jise wo bade chaw se maze le ke kar sunti
rahi. Or apni story poori karne ke baad main bola-


Main - dekh ab maine tujhe sab kuchh bata diya hai
chal ab bina natak ke apni story bata.


Mariya (sharmate hue)- kahan se shuru karun?


Main - shuru se bata or kuchh bhi chhipana mat.


Wo 2 minute sochti rahi phir usne bolna shuru kiya.


Mariya - jab main 8th class me thi, tabh sirf apni
padhai par focus karti thi, na main kisi ladke se baat
karti thi, na hi kisi ladke ki taraf dekhti thi,
Sirf apne kaam se kaam rakhti thi.
Par bhai ke sirf 2 hi dost the, ek aap or ek hans.
Isi liye main hans se bhi baat kar liya karti thi,
Par dheere - dheere hans mujhse close hota gaya,
Wo aap dono ki gair-mojudgi me bhi mujhse milne
aaya karta tha, wo valentine ka din tha, jab usne
mujhe propose kiya tha, pehle to main shock
ho gayi thi, kyonki main usko dosti ki nazar se dekhti
thi, par phir maine socha ki mere sabse zyada close
ek vahi hai, or us par mujhe bharosa bhi tha,
Kyonki wo aap dono ka friend tha. Isi liye maine uska
proposal accept kar liya, or ham relationship me aa
gaye, Hamare beech wo sab bhi ho chuka tha, jo ek
GF / BF ke beech me hota hai, 2 saal , poore 2 saal
wo mujhe bhogta raha, or phir dusri ladki milte hi
mujhe chhod diya.


Ye kehte hue wo zaro-kataar rone lagi, maine use apni
Bazuon me bhar liya, or uske sar par hath phirane laga.


Main (uske sar par hath phiraye hue)- tujhe maloom bhi
hai, usne meri behen ko jo takleef pohchai uski saza
usko kya mili?


Mariya aansu bhari aakhon se mujhse alag hokar mujhe
dekhne lagi, meri aakhon me aag ke shole umad rahe the
or aansu ki bunden meri aakhon me thehri hui thin.
Mare gusse ke, Aakhon me laali aa gayi thi
Meri aakhon ko dekhkar mariya ke aansu tham gaye the,
Or wo janna chahti thi ki aisa kya hua hans ke sath.


Main (halke aaye ansu saaf karte hue)- jab mujhe pata
chala ki usne tujhe dhokha diya hai, to main tilmila
utha, or usse badla lene ki firaak me tha, par usse pahle
hi mujhe pata chala ki wo mere dushmano ke sath mil
gaya hai, usne mujhpar or raju par janleva hamla kiya,
jisme maine raju ki jaan bacha li, or usko or uske sabhi
sathiyon ko mout ke ghaat utaar diya.


Main apni baat keh kar chup ho gaya, par is baat ka
mariya par bohot ghehra asar hua, wo mere sine me
muh chhipa kar rone lagi,
Ye aansu hans ke liye bilkul bhi nahin the, ye aansu
us dard ke the jo hans ne ham tino ko diya tha,
Jiska naam dhokh tha, wo aansu the us pyaar ke
liye jiske liye maine raju ko bachaya or mariya ka
badla liya tha, wo rote hue mere sine ko chum kar
apna pyaar dikha rahi thi, mere liye uska pyaar
ek sage bhai se bhi kahin badh kar tha, kyonki
main bachpan se hi uski har ichchha puri karta tha,
Jo wo mangti thi wo lakar deta tha, maine kabhi
usme or mansi me farak nahin kiya tha.


Mariya rote - rote chup ho gayi thi, par abhi bhi
ek bachche ki tarhan mujhse chipti hui thi.


Maine jaise taise khud ko sambhal kar mazboot
kiya or use khud se alag karte hue bola-


Main - chhodo kal ki baten, kal ki baat purani,
or ye bata ki raju or tere bich pyar ki shuwat
kaise hui ..... hihihihi
(Maine halke se haste hue, uska chehra, apne haton
me lete hue puchha)


Uska chehra sad tha, par maine baat is lehje me
kahi thi, ki wo ekdam se sab kuchh bhool kar
khilkhila gayi.


or thodi der hasne ke baad usne bolna shuru kiya


Mariya - uske baad , jab main bohot sad rehne lagi
kisi bhi kaam me mera dil nahin lagta tha,
Pyaar se vishvas uth chuka tha, or 2 - 3 salon tak
aisa hi chalta raha, par in salon me maine khud ko
study or ghar ke kamon me busy kar liya tha,
Phir aap se dobara milne ke baad jaise zindagi
phir se shuru ho gayi thi, aapne hi samjhaya tha,
ki har ladka ek jaisa nahin hota, ek baar kisi par
bharosa kar ke dekho, sab theek ho jayega.
Bachpan se hi aapne mera sath diya tha,
kabhi ek dost bankar, kabhi ek bhai bankar,
to kabhi ek baap ki tarhan, isi liye aapki baat mere
dil me ghar kar gayi, par mujhe kisi or par vishvas
nahin reh gaya tha, is beech jab aapne raju ko
mera khayal rakhne ko kaha, us wakht main chhip
kar apki baten sun rahi thi, tabhi se raju meri
care karne laga, mere har achchhe bure ka khayal
rakhne laga, yahan tak ki wo kabhi - kabhi mere
sath so bhi jaya karta tha, is baat se mujhe aap
par bada pyaar aa raha tha, aap ki vajha se meri
zindagi ek baar fir se colourful ho gayi thi,
I Love you bhai
(wo mere gaal par kiss karte hue boli)
Phir wo aage boli-


Meri itni care karne par mujhe raju par pyaar
aane laga, uski har ek baat, har ek ada mujhe
diwana banane lagi, par main izhaar nahin kar
pa rahi thi, apni feelings apne man me dabai
hui thin,
par barsat ki wo raat, jab raju kahin
par party karke aaya tha, or nashe me
tha, wo mere room me aya or lad-khadate
hue mere bed par gir gaya, nashe me bhi
usko meri fikar thi, wo baar - baar mera haal
chaal puchh raha tha, or next day mujhe shopping
par le jane ki baat kar raha tha, mujhe uspar
bada pyaar aa raha tha, phir wo neend ke agosh
me chala gaya, maine uske jute utare or uspar
chadar daal di, wo neend me kuchh badbada raha
tha, main paas jakar sunne ki koshish karne lagi,
To wo mere bare me hi baat kar raha tha,
mere to kaan khade ho gaye,
Wo mera naam lekar I love you bol raha tha,
or keh raha tha, ki wo meri zindagi sawaar dega.
Mujhe to jaise manchahi muraad mil gayi thi,
or main uske sine par sar rakh kar let gayi,
Uski bahon me mujhe bohot sukoon ki neend aayi.
Or agle hi din maine apne man ki baat raju ko
bata di, jise sunkar pehle to wo shock hua
phir , use bhi manna pada, shayad wo bhi
mujhse bohot pehle se pyaar karta tha.


Itna kehte hue wo shant pad gayi.


Main - jahan tak mujhe pata hai, raju ki ek GF bhi
thi, shivani naam tha uska, kya raju ne use chhod
diya,
(maine ashcharya se puchha)


Mariya - nahin bilkul bhi nahin, par usko abhi raju ne is
bare me nahin bataya hai.


Main - chalo theek hai, main khud raju ko samjha
dunga, ki usse kya bolna hai, agar wo maan gayi,
to tum teeno ek sath khush rahoge.


Meri baat se mariya khush ho gayi.
Or ek baar phir usne mera gaal gila kar diya.


Mariya - Ooo bhai, you are too sweet, aapne bol
diya matlab aap ye kaam kar hi doge.


Wo khush hote hue boli.


Phir maine usse thodi der or baat ki or usse jaldi
milne ka bolkar vahan se nikalne laga,
Par ek dam se shock reh gaya,
Kyonki raju harami na jane kab se door par
khada tha, maine pata nahin kaise dhiyan hi nahin
diya tha, par uske galon par sukhe hue aansuo
ke nishan the, jo ye bayan kar rahe the, ki usne
hamari sari baaten suni hain, par us wakht uske
Chehre par santushti ke bhaw the.


Mujhe dekhte hi usne daant nipor diye,
Sala ek baar ko to dil me aaya ki sale ke dant
tod dun, phir socha jane do,


Main - (raju se) - abe sale , kya - kya suna tune.


Raju ( daant dikhate hue)- sab kuchh.


Main - kab se kada tha yahan par?
(Maine dhadakte dil se puchha)


Raju - shuru se hi kahada tha, bahar jakar pani pikar
wapas aa gaya tha,


Maine ek ghusa jama diya us ke pet me.
Wo 'aahhhh' karne pet pakad ke bath gaya.
Or andar se mariya zor - zor se has rahi thi.


Main - sale hamari private baten kyon sun
raha tha tu.?
Ab tujhe sab pata chal hi gaya hai to use apne
tak hi rakhiyo... Samjha,


(Main usko ungli dikhaye hue bola)


Raju - sale ye baat aise hi bol deta marne ki kya
zarurat thi,


Maine usse thodi der baten ki
phir haste hue ghar ki taraf nikal gaya, mama
ki family bhi aayi hui thi, unse bhi achchhi tarhan milna tha.
is sab ke alava ek baat or thi jo mere man me
khatak rahi thi, or wo ye thi, ki preeti (mama ki beti)
ka chehra kahin had tak Anjalika se milta tha,
Bilkul waisi hi masumiyat or waisi hi banavat.
Usko dekhkar anju yaad aa jati thi.
Pata nahin kahan hogi? Kaisi hogi? Uske bare
me sochkar meri aakhen bhigne lagin thin.



Phir main sab par viram laga kar ghar ki taraf nikla
Jahan ek khubsurat musibat mera intzaar kar rahi
thi, musibat kehna galat hoga, wo to meri biviyan,
meri behne, meri zindagi, sab kuchh thin.

Mere chehre par muskan tair gayi.


To Be Continue
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek behtareen update jisme mariya ki kahani pata chali.
Lajwaab update yaara laajwaab update.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 

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Raju ke ghar se Main apne ghar ki taraf nikla
Jahan ek khubsurat musibat mera intzaar kar rahi
thi, musibat kehna galat hoga, wo to meri biviyan,
meri behne, meri zindagi, sab kuchh thin.
Mere chehre oar muskan tair gayi.



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Ghar pohochte hue andhera ho chuka tha, maine
Door - bell bajai, to darvaza sheetal ne khola.
or mujhe dekhte hi ek baar usne pichhe dekha
or phir mujhse chipat kar apni bahon ka ghera
mere gale ke charon
or daal diya.



Main (haste hue)- are gudiya kya hua, aaj bada
pyaar aa raha hai?


Sheetal (apna chehra mere seene pe ragadte hue)-
Aap to jaise mujhe bool hi gaye ho, aapko pata
hai mere vahan kitni khujli hoti hai. par sabke samne
kuchh bol nahin pati hun.
(Usme masumiyat se kaha jispar mujhe hasi aa gayi)


Main - chal ab side hat! varna koi dekh lega.


Sheetal - dekhna hai to dekhne do, main darti thode hi
hun kisi se, ek lambi si chummi do tabh jane dungi.


Phir maine usko ek kiss kiya, jisse wo madhosh hone
lagi, wo behek na jaye is dar se main usse alag hokar
bola -


Main - chal baaki baad me, teri khujli kabhi fursat me mitaunga
pehle ye bata, baaki sab
kahan hain?


Sheetal (sharmate hue) -
sab aapka hi intzaar kar rahe hain dinner par,
Jaldi chaliye.


Phir ham dono sidha andar dining table par jakar baith
gaye.
Baaki sab bhi aa chuke the.
or main Mama - Mami se baat karte hue
khana khane
laga. Is douran Leeza jaise bilkul shaant baithi thi,
Uska chehra bilkul sapaat tha.
Main beech - beech me use hi dekh raha tha,
Uske chehre par chinta ki lakeer dikhai de rahi thin.
Maine jaldi - jaldi dinner kiya or leeza ko ishara karke
room me chala gaya.
Thodi hi der me leeza bhi aa gayi.
or maine use bahon me bhar liya.


Main (leeza ke gaal par kiss karte hue)- kya hua meri
jaan ko, aise udaas kyon hai?


Usne muskurate hue na me sar hila diya.


Main - jaan, tum janti ho na ki tum mujhse kuchh nahin
chhipa saktin, to behtar hai tum khud hi bata do.


Leeza ki aakhon me achanak se halke aansu aa gaye.


Leeza (udasi bhari awaaz me)- pata nahin aaj subha se
mera dil bohot bechain hai,
lagta hai jaise
Jinnlok vaasi kisi musibat me hain, or maine apni shaktiyon
se pata karne ki koshish ki, to sab kuchh dhundhla
dikhai de raha hai,
Yahan tak ki mujhe pita ji or
menka bhi dikhai nahin de rahe.
kuchh samajh nahin aa raha.


Uski baat se main bhi chinta me doob gaya,
Kyonki maine bhi us hadse ke baad se jinnlok ya
Parilok kisi ki bhi khabar tak na li thi,
Jiska mujhe pachhtava ho raha tha.
Ab main karta bhi kya, ek taraf behen ko diya hua
Vachan tha to dusri taraf Dharm
Main sochne laga ki ek hi aadmi hai jo is vipatti se
mujhe nikaal sakta hai, or wo hain swam guruji.
Haan mujhe guruji se milne jana hoga, vahi sahi rasta
dikhenge. Kyonki ye main achchhe se janta tha ki agar
maine koi bhi shakti ka upyog kiya to shaitaan jaan
Jayenge ki main kahan par hun. Jisse mere pariwar
ko khatra bhi ho sakta hai.


Main ( leeza se) - jaan mujhe guruji ke paas jana hoga.
Tabhi kuchh baat ban sakti hai, or main kal ki raat vahan jaunga.
Or raat me hi vapas
bhi aa jaunga,
bas is baat ka kisi ko pata
na chale, ye tumhen dekhna hai.


Leeza - aap befikar rahiye, wo main dekh lungi,
Bas aap kisi bhi tarhan mujhe jinnlok ki salamti
ki khabar de dijiye.


Main - darling ka hukam sar aakhon pe.
(Main muskurate hue bola)

jisse leeza ko bhi sukoon mil gaya

Phir main vahan se nikal kar chal diya mama - mami
Se milne , kyonki jab se wo aaye the, tabh se main
unhen company nahin de paya tha.
To socha ke chalo unse bhi mil leta hun.
Maine jakar guest room ka door knock
kiya, to door preeti (mama ki beti) ne khola.


Preeti (muskuraye hue) - aaiyye bhai andar aaiyye.
Ye kehkar wo side hat gayi, maine bhi uska matha
chuma, jisse wo khush ho gayi, or main andar
chala gaya, Mama - Mami bhi bed par baithe hue the.
Mujhe dekhte hi wo sidhe hokar baith gaye,
or main paas rakhi chair par bath gaya.
Preeti bhi aakar bed par baith gayi.


Main - Sorry, Mama ji main thoda kaam nibtane gaya
tha, isliye aapse theek se mil nahin paya,


Mama ji - are beta ji, kaisi baat karte ho, mujhe pata hai,
Ab ghar me tum akele mard ho to sab zimmedariyan
tum par hi aa gayin hai. Mujhe is baat ka bilkul bhi bura
nahin laga,


Main - koi takleef to nahin hai aapko yahan par.


Mama ji - nahin beta, tum batao kab aa rahe ho hamare
ghar.


Main - bohot jald aaunga mama ji.


Mami ji - beta bura na mano to ek baat puchhu.


Main - kaisi baat karti hain mami ji, main bhala aapki baat
ka bura kyon manunga, aap bedhadak hokar boliye


Mami ji - beta ye leeza kon hai? uske bare me kisi ne
kuchh bataya hi nahin.


Maine socha inko bata hi deta hun, ab chhipane se kya
fayda.


Main - Mami ji, baat ye hai ki wo meri patni hai, or aapki
bahu.


Meri baat se sab khush ho gaye, or mami ji to uthte hue
bolin


Mami ji - lo ji kar lo baat, abhi dudh ke daant bhi nahin tute
or navaab sahab ne shadi bhi kar li,

unki baat se preeti to kehkaha laga kar hasne lagi.

Mami ji - main ja rahi hun bahu
se milne, use shagun to de dun
or phir in sab ladkiyon ki khabar leti hun, batao
Itni badi baat hamse chhipa kar rakhi thi.


Unki baat par sab hasne lage. or mami p
reeti ko sath lekar
chali gayin,
reh gaye mama or main.


Main - mama aapse ek baat or batani hai.


Mama ji - haan beta bolo.


Main - Mama Ji meri or priya ki engagement ho chuki hai,


Meri baat se mama ji chouke bina nahin reh sake.


Mama ji - beta ye kya bol rahe ho tum.


Main - mama ji baat kuchh aisi hai ke meri or leeza ki
shadi bhi mom - dad ki marzi se hi hui thi,
or meri or
priya ki engagement bhi mom and dad ne hi karvai thi,
Par meri or leeza ki shadi ke bare me mom & dad or
aapke parivar ko chhodkar kisi ko nahin pata.
To main chahta hun ke jab tak main na kahun tabh tak aap
kisi ko ye mat batana ki leeza meri patni hai.


Mama ji ne haan me sar hilaya, par unke dimag me bohot
se savaal chal rahe the.


Main - mama ji, abhi zyada mat sochiye, wakht aane par
main aapko sab bata dunga.


Mama ji bhi maan gaye. To main phir bola.


Mama ji - Mausi ji or mausa ji kahan hain? Kaise hain?


Mama ji - beta wo Haidrabad me hain. or sab theek hain.


Main - to mama ji unko bhi bula lijiye, phir kal sab gaw
chalenge,
dada ji apni galti ka aaj bhi pachhtawa karte hain.
Mom or dad ne unko maaf kar diya tha, ab aapko bhi wo
purani baat bhoolkar aage badhna chahiye.


Mama ji - theek hai beta, jaisa tum kaho, main jitendra or
Sulochna (mausa & mausi) ko phone karke kal hi bula
lunga, waise bhi usko abhi Archna or Bhaisahab
(mom & dad) ke bare me kuchh nahin pata.


Phir main dada ji ko lekar mama ji se baat - cheet karta
raha or phir mami or preeti vapas aa gayin, maine
mama ji se unko leeza ke bare me samjhane ka ishara
kar diya. Jisko unhone sar hilakar OK keh diya.


Main - theek hai, ab raat kafi ho chuki hai, main chalata
hun, subha breakfast par milte hain.
Or haan preeti kal tayyar rehna, kal ham sab bachche
milkar shopping par ja rahe hain,
or tum bhi hamare sath chalogi. This is final.


Usne bhi khush hokar haan keh diya or main chal diya
Mansi ke room me. Sakshi or sheetal bhi vahin thin.


Yahan se door
kahin anjani jagah-


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Ab Tumhen Kaise Bataun, Kya Meri Majburi Hai,
Hamara Tumhara Milna, Kya Abhi Zaruri Hai?



Thukra Kar Gayi Thi Yun Ki, Bewafai Ki Ho Maine,
Ab Naseeb Ne Kar Li, Kya Tumse Bohot Duri Hai?



Aakhon Me Aansu, Aur Labon Par Tumhara Naam,
Dil Hai Bechain, Or Hathon Me Bansuri Hai.



Sikha Diya Tha Maine Is Dil Ko,
Saleeka Tere Bagair Jeene Ka,
Kya Tere Bina Ye Kahani Meri Adhuri Hai?



Ab Tumhen Kaise Bataun, Kya Meri Majuri Hai.
Dil Me Hain Hasraten, Or Khuwahish Abhi Adhuri Hai.



Ye kavita padhte hue wo ladki phoot - phhot kar rone
lagi.


Tabhi pichhe se ek aurat aayi, or wo ladki
"badiii maaaa"
kehkar usse lipat kar hichkiyon se rone lagi.


Idhar Dharti - Lok par -


Maine door se andar jhaak ke dekha to sab gappe lada
rahi thin.
or main chupke se andar ghus gaya.


To Be Continue

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Kam Se Kam Kavita Ke Liye To
Like Banta Hai 😌
Like Se Ye To Pata Chal Jata
Hai Ki Kitne Log Ye story Padh Rahe Hain)
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamaal ka update raha bhai.
Mama ji ko convince kar liya.

Tukbandi ka achha prayas kiya aapne....
 

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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Ye kavita padhte hue wo kadki phoot - phhot kar rone

lagi.

Tabhi pichhe se ek aurat aayi, or wo "badiii maaaa"
kehkar usse lipat kar hichkiyon se rone lagi.

Idhar Dharti - Lok par -

Maine door se andar jhaak ke dekha to sab gappe lada
rahi thin.

or main chupke se andar ghus gaya.

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Ab Aage -
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or unki baaten suune laga, wo pallavi ke bare me
baaten kar rahi thin, mujhe yaad aya ki yarr maine
to pallavi se baat tak nahin ki hai, ab raat bhi zyada
ho gayi hai, kal yaad se usse phone par baat kar
lunga.

Main (bed par baithte hue)- Hi Girls.

Mujhe achanak dekhkar wo charon chouk gayin.

Sheetal - kya baat hai bhai, aaj hamri yaad kaise
aa gayi.

Main (bed par jagah banakar let'te hue) - chal zyada
baat mat kar, mujhe neend aa rahi hai, or aaj main
yahin sona chahta hun.

(Baat ye thi ki kal guruji ke paas jakar kya hota hai,
ye mujhe pata nahin tha, isi liye jane se pehle
sab se milna chahta tha, kya pata guruji kya rasta
nikalen, or mujhe vapas aane me time lag jaye,
Yahi sochkar maine sabke sath sone ki yojna
banai thi)

Main - Priya, jaan yahan aao na mere paas.

(Main priya ka hath kheechkar apne oopar litate
hue bola)

Wo bhi sharmate hue mere oopar hi adhleti gayi.
Uske baad fir kisi ne koi savaal nahin puchha
or baaki sab bhi mere aas - paas pasar gayin.
yahan tak ki leeza bhi mujhe dhundhte hue vahin
aa gayi, or ham ek dusre ko bahon me bharkar
so gaye.

Roz ki tarhan meri neend sabse pehle 4 baje hi
khul gayi, or maine sab ko bari - bari se kiss karke
uthaya.
itne pyar se sab khush ho gayin,

Sakshi - Bhai, kitne dino baad itni pyari subha hui
hai, i love you bhai.

(Usne phir se mujhe kiss karte hue kaha)

Main - bas kuchh din or phir har subha pyari hogi.

Baaki sab bhi kahan pichhe rehne vali thin,
sab ka kisses ka kota poora karke ham sab
fresh hue or gym karne ke baad mama - mami
ke sath Hasi mazaak karte hue breakfast kiya.

Phir maine sabse pehle pallavi ko phone laga
diya -

Pallavi phone par -

"Shukar hai apko main yaad to hun, varna mujhe
to laga tha ki aap bhool gaye mujhe".

Main - agar tumhen aisa laga tha, to tum phone
kar letin, mujhe laga tum mujhe bhool gayi ho.

Pallavi (meethi si awaaz me) -

Yadon Ke Dhage Sina Chahte Hain,
Ham Un Lamhon Ko Phir Jeena Chahte Hain.
Barbad Kar Gayin Wo Ishq Ki Bunden,
Ham Wo Jaam Phir Se Peena Chahte Hain.
Aapke Bina Zindagi Hame Sooni Lagti Hai,
Sari Zindagi Aapke Sath Jeena Chahte Hain.

Main - Wah! kya baat hai yarr, tum to kavitri
banne ke layak ho,
Achchha ye batao tabiyat kaisi hai ab?

Pallavi - ab theek hun, bas kabhi - kabhi kamzori
si feel hoti hai.

Main - Apna dhiyan rakha karo, or apni mom ka
bhi.

Pallavi (dheere se)- tum ho na dhiyan rakhne ke
liye.

Main - kya kaha?

Pallavi - kuchh nahin, achchha baad me baat karti
hun, lunch ki tayyari kari hai. Bbye. Love you..

Main - Bye.. oyr kya kaha... {Phone Cut}

Udhar wo bhi sharmate hue muskura rahi thi,
Or idhar mere chehre par bhi muskan aa gayi.

Phir majn sab ko lekar shopping ke liye nikal
gaya, or sab ko khush karne ke liye sabke
liye shopping kar dali, Dada -Dadi, Chacha
- Chachi, Bua - Phupa, Or Mausa - Mausi
sab ke liye poori shopping kar li.
Or sara samaan transport se ghar bhijva diya.
In sab me adha din nikal gaya tha.
phir ham ghar aaye or sab gaw jane ki tayyari
me lag gaye,

Tabhi door bell, maine jakar door khola.
Samne Mausa - Mausi or unka beta - beti khade
the, maine unko namaste karke pair chhue,
Mausi ne mujhe gale laga liya, unki akhon me
Aansu saaf dikh rahe the, wo bas control kar
rahi thin.
Main unse alag hua or sab ko andar le aaya.

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Mausa - Jitendra Thakur 50 years

Masi - Sulochna Devi 48 years

Vikas - beta 22 years
( Bank me job karta hai)
Simple and dashing ladka hai.

Nisha - beti (B.Tech 3rd Year CS)
Age - 20 years
Hight - 5.5
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Thodi nakchadhi hai

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Sab ne unka welcome kiya,
Or phir vahi rona dhona - aadha ghanta chalta
raha, uske baad ham sab ne sath me lunch kiya,
Vikas bhai to mujhse khul gaye the, par nisha
zyada baat nahin kar rahi thi, maine bhi zyada
dhiyan nahin diya, phir ek lambi baat - cheet ke
baad hamne unhen hamare sath gaw jane ke
liye mana liya, or unko unke liye ki hui shopping
bhi gift kar di. Jo unhen bohot pasand aayi.

Phir hamne ek luxury mini bus book ki or sab
gaw ke liye nikal gaye.
Maine raste me hi Dada Ji ko phone kar diya
tha, jisse wo hamare welcome karne ke liye
intzam me lag gaye, poori bus me sabhi ladkiyan
bus masti karti hui ja rahi thin, or main sabse
aage akele baitha hua un dino ko yaad kar raha
tha jab ham family trip par gaye the

Tabhi mere paas vikas bhai aakar baith gaye,
Wo bhi shayad akele bore ho gaye the.

Vikas bhai - or chhote, kaisi chal rahi hai life.

Main - bas bhai, aapke ashirvad se sab badhiya
chal raha hai.

Ham itne dheere se baat kar rahe the, ki kisi
ko sunai na de.

Vikas bhai - koi GF hai, ya sakht londe ho?
(Wo haste hue bole)

Main (muskurate hue)- Bhai apki kirpa se shadi
kar li hai, (Leeza ki or ishara karte hue) wo rahi
meri wife.

Vikas bhai to mere baat se chounk hi gaye the,
Wo baar - baar leeza ki or dekh rahe the, jo girls
gossip me busy thi.

Vikas bhai (haste hue)- sale tune to sabke record
break kar diye, padhne ki umar me hi shadi kar dali,
or itni haseen bhabhi tujhe mili kahan se?
Sach me aisi khubsurat hasina kahin nahin dekhi.

Main (haste hue)- bhai, aisi hasina kahin milegi bhi
nahin, kyonki ye single peace hai. Pata nahin kaise
meri jholi me aa giri.

Vikas bhai - yarr main bhi kab se jholi phelaye
baitha hun, kambakht koi girti hi nahin.

Wo apni baat kehkar hasne lage, or main bhi unke
sath zor - zor se hasne laga,
Sari ladkiyon ka dhiyan hamari taraf ho gaya.

Sheetal (pichhe se)- kya hua, bhai badi hasi aa rahi
hai?

Main - ye ham bhaiyyon ki apas ki baat hai, tum apna
kaam karo. (Main haste hue bola)

Usne ek baar muh bana kar "huh" kiya or sab vapas
apni gossip me lag gayin.

Vikas bhai -
Khamosh Baithen, To Log Kehte Hain,
Udasi Achchhi Nahin;

Zara Sa Has Len, To
Muskurane Ki Vajha Puchhte Hain

Main (taali bajate hue)- wah! Kya baat hai bhai, well said.

(Maine wah-wahi ki jhad lagate hue kaha)

Pichhe baithi ladkiya waise to apni baten kar rahi
thin, par sath - sath hamari baten bhi sun rahi thin.
Baaki sab bade sabse pichhe baithe the.

Vikas bhai (dheere se) - bhai apni bivi se to mila.

Main - haan kyon nahin.
Main (leeza ko awaaz dekar)- Leeza zara yahan aana.

Leeza bhi turant khadi ho gayi, or hamari taraf aane lagi,

Maine beech me leeza ke liye thodi jagha bana di,
Vikas bhai bhi thoda dusri taraf khisak gaye.
or leeza mere ishara karne par beech me aakar baith
gayi.

Main (dheere se vikas bhai se) - bhai abhi hamari shadi
ke bare me kam hi log jante hain, aap bhi kisi se mat
bolna,

Unhone haan me gardan hila di,
(Waise main kuchh khas logon ko is liye bata raha tha
ki aage wo log apne - apne pariwar ko samjha den,
or koi problem na ho)

Ham tino apas me baten karne lage, vikas bhai
leeza se kafi impress the.

Vikas bhai (leeza se)- waise bhabhi apki koi behen hai
kya?

Leeza (muskurate hue) - kis liye?

Main (haste hue)- shadi ke liye. Or kis liye.

Meri baat se ham tino hi hasne lage.

Main - vikas bhai, main apko bata dun, ki leeza ki behen
iske bilkul opposite hai, aap usko 1 din bhi bardasht
nahin kar paoge.

Vikas bhai - are tum ek baar milvao to,
Phir jo hoga dekha jayega.
(Wo sina tante hue bole)

Mujhe badi hasi aayi, ye sochkar ki agar inko menka
mil gayi, to bina lund ke inki ga*nd mar legi.

Aise hi khatti - meethi baten karte hue, ek lamba safar
tay karne ke baad ham gaw pohoch gaye,

Andhera hone laga tha, ham sab bus se utre or andar
chal diye.
Haveli ko dada ji ne lighting se sajaya hua tha.
or hamara zor - shor se swagat kiya gaya.

Ham sab bachon ne sab badin ke pair chhukar pranam
kiya, or sab ka ashirvad lene ke baad sofon par baith
gaye.

Main to bas ghadi ki chhouthai me vahan se nikalne ki
soch raha tha, khair hamne dinner kiya. Or aaraam
karne ka bol kar rooms ki taraf chal diye.
Maine dadaji se kal baat karne ka keh diya tha.
Ham apne - apne rooms me pohche par maine
sab ladkiyon se kehkar apne or leeza ke liye aaj raat
ke liye, 1 room alag le liya tha.

Main leeza ko lekar room me band ho gaya.

Main - leeza main guruji ke paas ja raha hun,
tum yahan sabko sambhal lena.

Leeza mere gale lag gayi.

Main - are aise udaas mat hua karo, guruji ka chahe
kuchh bhi faisla ho, ya mujhe chahe kitna bhi time lage
Par subha hone se pehle main tumse milne aa jaunga,

(Main leeza ke sar ko sehlate hue bola)

or phir maine dheere se apne lips leeza ke hothon se
jod diye, or dhire - dhire uska mitha ras chusne laga.
Or uske lips chuste hue vahan se teleport ho gaya.

Mere lums leeza ko abhi bhi feel ho rahe the,
Wo mere bare me sochte hue bed par ket gayi.

Or main pohoch gaya guruji ki kutiya ke bahar

Guruji apni sadhna me leen the.

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Maine jakar guruji ke pair chhukar pranam kiya,
or unke sameep khada ho gaya.

Thodi der me guruji me aakhen kholi, or mujhe dekhkar
muskura diye.

To Be Continue
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Mausa - mausi or unke beta - beti ki entry achhi rahi.
Vikas ki baten mazedaar.
Guruji ke muskurane ke pichhe badi wajah lag rahi mujhko....
 
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