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Incest Apne Pyaare rishte

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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future

Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai



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Har baar woh aawaj mere andar dar ka nirmaan kar rahi thi lekin me bhi un aawajon ko ignore karke us dar ko himmat me badal ke me aage badhta ja raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte me us jagah se bhi nikal gaya tha aur ab mere saamne mera tri netra tha jo ki puri tarah se aag ki lapton me lipta hua tha

Abhi me us tri netra ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi us jagah par ek ke baad ek blast hone lage jinse waha ki jamin bhi ab hilne lagi thi aur tabhi waha kuch blasts mere pass hi me hue jinse bachne ke liye me yaha se waha kudne laga

Lekin turant hi woh blast aur bhi khatarnak aur tej ho gaye jinse me aur bhi tezi se bachne laga aise hi kuch der yaha se waha kudte hue mujhe jab thoda samay mila toh mene turant hi apne vijayi dhanush ka aavhan kar diya jisse woh dhanush turant mere haath me prakat ho gaya

Aur jaise hi woh mere hathon me aaya waise hi blasts hona bhi ruk gaye aur turant hi jaha jaha aag lagi thi woh bhi bujh gayi abhi me aas pass ke watawaran me aaye instance changes se confused tha ki tabhi

Waha jo tri netra tha woh ek bade blast ke saath fat gaya aur usse jo dhamaka hua usse me bhi door jake gir gaya aur jab me utha toh saamne ka haal dekh kar me aur bhi jyada shocked ho gaya kyunki saamne mere jaise hi dekhne wala ek aur ladka tha

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Jo ki shayad mera hi roop tha jab hum dono ki nazre ek dusre se takrayi toh woh ladka jaha khada tha waha se turant kud ke mere saamne aa gaya

Ladka :- toh tum ho is sharir ke malik kya naam hai tumhara

Me :- mera naam hai THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH waise tum kon ho jo mere sharir me hi rah kar mujhe nahi janta

ladka :- ohoo itna bada naam aur rahi baat mere naam ki toh mera naam bahut hi chota hai DEVIL

uske ye bolte hue uske chehre ki haiwaniyat aur aawaj me ahankar air aakhon me rakt sab spasht roop se dikh raha tha

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Me :- acha toh tum mere DEVIL wale roop ho yani tum mere andar ke burai se janme honge

Devil :- koi ek hi samay pe itne budhimaan aur murkh kaise ho sakta ha ye sach hai ki me tumara roop ho devil wala lekin me tumare burai se nahi balki tumhare burai pe kabu pane se janma hu tumne mujhe paya nahi hai aur na hi kisine mujhe tumko upahar me diya hai mene tumhe chuna hai mere shaktiyon ke dhaarak ke roop me tum mere pariksha me safal hue tabhi me tumhare saamne aaya

Me :- meri pariksha kab li tumne kaha aur kaise

Devil :- (muskurate hue) jab se tumne is gufa me pravesh kiya hai tab se hi me tumhari koi na koi pariksha le raha hoon

Sarva pratham ghamand ki pariksha jisme mene tumhe tumhare shaktiyon ke wajah se agar tum ghamandi bante hue dikaya aam logon ko maarte hue ya us murti ke sahare lekin tum apne ghamand ko ignore karke aage badhne me saksham rahe

Bhale hi kuch samay ke liye tumhare andar ahankar ne janam liya tha lekin ahankar ko tumne ghamand me badalne nahi diya toh

Wahi kaamvasna ki pariksha me bhi tum uttirna hue jaha kaam vasna ka woh ghinona khel dekh kar tum na toh utsahit hue aur na hi tumhare man me kuch galat vichar aaya

Phir baari aati hai tumhare krodh ki jise bhi tumne jit liya phir lalach, bhay aur aalasya in avgunon par bhi tumne maat de di aur

Phir bache 2 avgun ek aata hai petupan aur irshya (jalan) jinse toh tum bachpan se hi koso door ho isiliye

Jab tumne is sansaar ke 5 mukhya papon pe vijay pa li toh ue papon ka samrat tumhare roop me janma samjhe mere murkh THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH

Devil ki baate sunke mere peron ke niche se jamin hi khisak gayi jin drushyon ko me ab tak apne andar ki buraiyon ka pratoroop mana tha woh hi meri ab tak ki sabse badi pariksha thi

Me :- tum mujhe raj kah sakte ho aur ab kya me jaan sakta hu is pariksha me pass hone ke baad mujhe kya mila hai

Devil :- ha zaroor jaisa mene kaha papo ka samrat hoon me toh mujhse tumhe papon par niyantran karne ki taakat milegi

Me :- papon par niyantran karne ki taakat me kuch samajha nahi

Devil :- tum is pure sansaar me jise chaho uske andar papon ka sarvanash kar sakte ho ya uske andar pap ko faila sakte ho kisi ghamandi ka ghamand tod ke use vinamra bana sakte ho ya kisi yogi ke andar krodh ka pravah karke use ati krodhi bana sakte ho samjhe mere murkh raj

Me :- ye shakti toh galat hai me kaise kisi ke bhi andar avgunon ka pravah kar sakta hu

Devil :- ohoo mere bhole raj tumse ye kisne kaha ki koi bhi shakti galat ya sahi hai me tumhe ek udaharan se samjhata hoon jaise tumhara ye vijayi dhanush tumhe ye sawayam devi maa ne diya hai aur agar tum us dhanush se kisi nirdosh ke raksha ke liye tir chalao ya kisi nirdosh ke bali ke liye tir kabhi tumahara aadesh manega khali nahi jane dega tum jise chaho use jaha chaho waha jaise chaho waise maarne ke liye is dhanush ka istemaal karne ke liye saksham ho tumhe koi rok nahi sakta

Wahi jaha me devil ki is baat ko sunne ke baad gahari chinta me duba hua tha ki wahi dusri taraf dadaji apne ghar se yani sher garh se pure pariwar ke saath saath humare kuch family friends aur gav ke kuch vidvan panditon ke saath suraj garh ke liye nikal chuke the toh wahi nana ne subah hi billa se bol ke suraj garh ke bicho bich me mere rajyabhishek ki taitari karna aarambh kar diya tha jise dekh ke hi purane jamane ki yaad aa jaye bilkul waise hi adbhut tarike se

Wahi laxmi aur uske gharwale bhi suraj garh ke taraf chal pade the laxmi ke dad aur mere dad ek type se business partners hai kaise woh baad me pata chalega

Achi baate bahut sun li ab baari hai burai ki

Toh wahi Mr. Negative ke dono chamchon ne bali ki sari taiyariya kar di thi unhone apne jaduyi shaktiyon se ek suraksha ghera bhi us godawn ke charo taraf bana diya tha jisse koi bhi bin bulaye mehmaan na aaye lekin kahte hai na jab sali kismat hi ho gandu to kya kare pandu

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Bahut jabardast update bhai bahut awesome 😎 shaktiya mili hai hero ko Devil bhai se aur ab rajyaabhishek ke liye taiyari bhi hone lagi aur ab Ghamandi Laxmi ko bhi hero se milane ka waqt aa gaya hai lagta hai
 

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Abhi me Devil se baat karke uske sath bhi mere baki ke roopon saman shaktiyon ka sauda karke me us andheri gupha se nikal gaya aur jaise hi me us andheri gufa se nikla waise hi dono gufaon ka nash ho gaya aur phir mere sampoorn antarman ab mere saamne khul ke aa gaya tha

Pahle jo antarman tha woh kewal woh ujale wali gufa tak hi simit tha lekin ab jab ki dono gufaon ka nash hua toh mera antarman jo un do gufaon me bata hua tha woh bhi ab ekjut ho gaya tha jaha ab mere sabhi roop bhi devil se mil ke use humare team me shamil kar liya tha

Toh wahi ab meri bhi sari chinta mit gayi thi abhi mujhe ye pura yakin ho gaya tha ki me kal raat ko jo bali di jane wali thi use rokne me jaroor yashaswi rahunga phir mene apna dhyan toda toh pata chala ki abhi raat ke 1 baj gaya tha matlab dhyan me mujhe 3 ghante bit chuke the toh phir me bhi apne kamre me jake so gaya jiske baad meri nind sidha subah 6 baje khulti hai

Wahi is bich me jab me nind ke aaghosh me tha toh tabhi mere room ka darwaja khulta hai aur mere room me koi enter karta hai jaise hi woh enter karta hai waise hi woh sakhs mere room ka door lock kar deta hai aur dheere dheere chalte hue mere paas aata hai ye shakhs koi aur nahi rina didi hi thi

Kuch der pahle abhi me dhyan lagakar apne room me enter hi karta hoon ki tabhi nanaji ke haweli ke bahar kuch gadiya aake rukti hai woh gadiyon ki speed itni slow thi ki unke aane par halki si aawaj bhi na ho jab woh gadiya ruki thik usi waqt haweli ka gate bhi khulta hai aur usme se C. Mama aur B. Mama bahar nikal aate hain unke aate hi gadiyon ke darwaje bhi khul jate hai aur un gadiyon me koi aur nahi balki dadaji aur mera baki pariwar hi tha

Jo aaj mere surprise rajyabhishek ke liye aur mami ke pregnancy ke celebration ke liye jama hue the uske baad dono mama sab ko leke haweli ke andar aate hain jaha mujhe aur mami ko chodkar baki sabhi maujood the

Phir sab logon ne kal ki sari planning ki aur phir sab aaram karne chale gaye wahi jab sab apne kamron me sone chale gaye toh didi bhi apne kamre me jake fresh ho gayi aur phir mauka dekh ke sidha mere kamre me ghus gayi

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Abhi didi mere pass aayi thi ki tabhi meri nind bhi khul gayi aur jab mene didi ko apne paas dekha toh pahle toh shocked ho gaya lekin phir jald hi khud ko sambhal ke mene didi ka hath pakad ke apne pass khich liya aur unhe apne baho me bhar liya mujhe jaga dekh didi bhi shocked ho gayi lekin jab mene unhe apne baho me bhar liya toh woh bhi sab kuch bhul ke mere bahon me aa gayi

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Didi :- tu abhi tak soya nahi

Me :- (didi ke gaal chumte hue) me toh so gaya tha lekin (didi ke gardan ko chumte hue) aapki is man mohak khushboo ne sari nind uda di

Mere aise harkaton se didi ke andar ki garmi jo itne dino se ruki hui thi woh badhne lagi thi jiska pata mujhe unki fulti hui sason se chal gaya tha aur tabhi mere man me halki masti karne ka khaya aaya toh me phir se didi ke gardan ko chumne laga aur gardan ko chumte hue unke kaan ki lon ko bhi chusne laga tha

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Didi :- kya kar rahe ho bhai na jane mene kab se is garmi ko kabu me karke rakha tha ab agar tum ne aag bhadkayi to bhujhani bhi padegi

Me :- mene kya kiya me to bas meri didi ko pyaar kar raha hoon

Itna bolke me phir se unke kaan ko chusne laga

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Didi :- ahhh me sab jaanti hoon tera pyar ahhh bhai aise hi bahut tadpi hoon tere is pyar ke liye

Itna bolke woh turant hi mere uper chadh gayi aur kapdon ke uper se hi apni choot ko mere lund ke uper ghisne lagi aur mere hothon pe apne honth rakh ke unhe chumne lagi

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Is waqt hum dono ne bhi lower aur t-shirt pahne hue the

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Wahi jab didi apni chut mere lund pe ghisne lagi toh ab mere se bhi kabu karna mushkil ho raha tha aur aise me na jane kab hum dono ke hath kiss karte hue kab ek dusre ke t-shirt ko nikalne lage jab didi ne mera t-shirt nikala toh meri body dekh ke woh ek dum shocked ho gayi

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Kyunki me jab apne ghar se nikala tha tab ki body aur ab ki body me bahut difference tha jaise jaise me apni shaktiya badha raha tha waiae waise hi meri body aur bhi majboot aur attractive ho rahi thi jise dekh kar didi mere hothon ko chod ke mere sine ko chumne lagi thi

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Wahi jab mene didi ko dekha toh didi ne bra nahi pahni thi jisse unki chuchiya ab mere saamne thi

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Jise dekh mere hath unke chuchiyo pe chale gaye aur unhe dabane lage

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Didi :- ahhh bhai aur jor se dabao inhe bahut taklif dete hai mujhe inhe ahhhhh masal masal ke saza do

Didi ki aise bate sunke ab mere se bhi control nahi hua aur is baar me unke uper chadhke unke chuche chusne laga jisse didi aur bhi pagal ho gayi thi wahi me ab chuchiyo ko chuste hue dheere dheere niche badhne laga

Phir didi ke pet se hote hue unki nabhi ko bhi chusne laga didi toh kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi woh toh bas siskiya le rahi thi wahi me nabhi ko chuste hue ab dheere se unke lower ko bhi niche kar diya

Jab mene didi ka lower nikala toh dekha ki didi me abhi panty bhi nahi pahni thi jisse unki kamsin si chut ab khul ke mere saamne aa gayi thi jise dekh kar me pagal ho raha tha didi chut par ek bhi baal nahi tha shayad woh aaj puri taiyari se hi aayi thi

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Wahi didi ki bina balon wali chut dekhke mere se bhi control nahi hua aur mene turant hi use chum liya jaise hi mene didi ki chut ko chumna start kar diya toh didi ki siskiya aur bhi tez ho gayi thi jinhe sun ke mere lund jhatke maarne laga

Jisse kab mere hoth didi ke chut pe ja lage mujhe bhi pata nahi chala aur phir me didi ke chut ko apne muh me bhar ke use kisi bhukhe ki tarah chusne laga
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Abhi mene didi ki chut chusna shuru kiya hi ta ki didi turant jhad gayi didi ke kaam ras ko bhi me pi gaya aur ab na mere se sabar ho raha tha na didi se

Didi :- ahhh bhai ab control nahi ho raha hai pleaseee ab mujhe apne musal se chod dalo pleasee raj

Phir mene bhi apna lower utar ke apne lund ko didi ke muh ke pass kar diya jiska ishara samajh kar didi ne use turant hi apne muh me bhar liya aur chusne lagi

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Aur jab mera lund didi ke thuk se pura gila ho gaya toh mene use didi ke muh se nikal ke didi ke chut me ghusa diya jisse didi ki halki chikh nikal gayi

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Lekin woh chikh bahar nikalti usse pahle hi mene apne hotho ko didi ke hotho pe rakh ke us chikh ko daba diya jiske baad me shuru me halke halke dhakon se didi ko chodne laga aur jab mera lund didi ke chut me fit ho gaya toh didi ne kiss todte hue boli

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Didi :- bhai ab aur intezaar nahi kar sakti tezi se dhake maaar ahhhhh aise hi ahhh haa bhai aur tez

Didi ki baat sunne ke baad me bhi aur tez dhakke maar ne laga jisse woh aur bhi jyada tezi se siskiya lene lagi

Lekin unki sari siskiyon ko mene apne muh me bhar liya aur phir aise 1 ghante tak dhakke lagane ke baad didi ab tak 5 baar jhad gayi thi aur ab mera bhj hone wala tha isiliye mene apne dhakon ko aur tez kar diya aur phir me didi ke chut me hi jhad gya or lund ko chut se nikaal ke wahi side me dher ho gya

Phir aise hi puri raat 2 baar aur didi ki chudai karne ke baad hum dono thak gaye the aur phir waise hi nange ek dusre se chipak kar soooo gaye

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Chalo sab aa bhi gaye aur didi ki chudai bhi ho gayi
 

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Agli subah jab meri aakh khuli toh didi waha nahi thi jise dekh ke mujhe ek baar to laga ki woh sab sapna tha lekin jab mujhe meri haalat ka andaja hua toh pata chala ki ye sab sapna nahi balki sach tha phir me uthke sabse pahle baathroom me jake fresh ho gaya

Aur phir dhyan lagane laga jiske baad mene ek round mere antarman me bhi mara jisme ab pahle se bhaut changes hue the ab antarman pahle se bhi zyada bada aur shaktishali mahsoos ho raha tha jiske baad mene apne sabhi roopon se aaj raat ke plan ko leke kuch der discuss kiya jiske baad mene apna dhyan tod kar niche chala gaya

Jaha par sabhi log pahle se maujood the me bhi achanak sare pariwar ko dekh kar khush ho gaya tha khaaskar apne dono bahnon ko rina didi aur unki judwa bahan aur hum teeno me sabse badi mina didi unke aur rina didi me kewal kuch minutes ka hi antar tha mina didi jyadatar samay apne nana nani ke hu ghar rahti thi

Kyunki unke nana nani ke mom ke alawa koi aur santaan nahi thi jis wajah se woh hum tinon ko hi apne pota poti ke tarah maante the lekin jo bhi mere saath bachpan me hua tha uske baad me kabhi unke pass nahi gaya tha jis wajah se mina didi hi jyada samay unke saath bitane lagi thi aur phir jab unka bond strong ho gaya toh saal me 6 mahinon ke liye mina didi apne nana nani ke ghar hi rahti thi aur baki 6 mahine woh humare saath rahti thi

Phir mene sabse pahle dadaji aur baki sare badon ko pranam kiya dadaji ne sabhi panditon aur mehmano ke rahne ka bandobast gaon me hi kar diya tha jis wajah se unka surprise bana rahe phir jab mera sabse milke hua toh phir sab ne milke breakfast kiya j

Jaha mujhe nanaji ne bataya ki aaj dupehar mami ke pregnant hone ke khushi me party rakhi hai jis liye sabko bulaya hai phir sab party ke liye taiyar hone chale gaye jiske baad dupehar ko ghar me hi ek choti si party ka intezaam kar diya tha

Aur us party me sirf kuch special guests hi invited the uske baad jab party khatam hui toh sab kamron me chale gaye jaha me apne kamre me jake fresh ho jata hu aur thodi der ke liye dhyan lagane lagta hoon wahi niche sabhi log shaam ko rakhe gaye rajyabhishek ki planning kar rahe hote hai

Mina Didi :- dadaji aaj raj ke rajyabhishek ki sari taiyari ho gayi hai na

Dadaji :- ha mina sab taitariya ho gayi hai aur jo baki hai use bhima aur billa dono milke pure kar dinge

Rina :- aaj kitna maja aayega na jab bhai shergarh aur surajgarh dono hi rajyon ka king banega

Dadi :- raja toh woh pahle hi ban chuka hai rina abhi toh bas ek announcement jaise hoga

Swati :- (confused hoke) pahle hi ban chuka hai matlab kya hai aapka dadiji

Nani :- matlab ye hai ki jab raj ne sab gaav walon ke dil ne jagah banayi tabhi woh unka raja ban gaya hai abhi toh bas uske sar pe mukut rakh ke use raja ghoshit karna hai

Dadaji :- bilkul sahi (dad se) waise dharmveer aur arun tum dono ko toh kuch problem nahi hai na ki tumhare bachon ko chodke hum raj ko ye jimmedari somp rahe hai

Mama :- bilkul nahi uncle ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho raj ko hum koi jimmedari nahi somp rahe hai balki uske jo bhi paya hai apne kabiliyat se hi paya hai hum sab se pahle dono hi rajyon ki praja ne hi apna raja chuna hai aur raj iske kabil bhi hai

Dad :- aur pita ji aapne ye kaise soch liya ki mujhe kuch problem hogi me toh jab se raj ne janam liya hai tabhi se aapko bol raha hoon ki raj hi aapka uttaradhikari hoga

Jaha ye sab baate kar rahe the toh wahi me apne room me baithe hue un sabhi ki baate sun raha tha dhyan me baithne ki wajah se meri senses pure ghar me fail gayi thi jisse mujhe ghar ke kone kone me ho rahi sari baate sunayi dene lagi thi lekin jab mene sabka plan suna toh mere chehre pe ek muskan si cha gayi sabka apne prati pyaar dekh ke

Wahi jab shaaam ko sab mujhe surprise dene ke liye bula rahe the toh mene bhi unhe surprise dene ke liye jo king ka costume mene kharida tha woh mene pahan liya aur jab me woh pahan kar sabke samne gaya toh mera ye roop dekh kar sabhi shocked ho gaye the

Mene na sirf costume king ki tarah pahna tha balki mene king wale roop ko bhi apna sharir de diya tha jisse mere chehre ka glow mera aura aur meri aawaj sab kuch ek Chakravarty raja jaisa strong and powerful ho gaya tha

Jisse mere chal me bhi ek rubab tha wahi jab me sabke saamne gaya to sab shock ke mare apne ap khade ho gaye

Nana :- (shock se) raj ye tumhare kapde

Me :- (bich me hi) kyu surprise sirf aap hi de sakte ho kya ye mera surprise socha agar mera rajyabhishek tay aap logo ne kar hi diya hai toh kyu na me bhi isme aap sab ka saath du kyu kaisa lag raha hoon me

Mere aawaj me aaya wajan ko mahsus karke koi bhi kuch bol nahi pa raha tha khair phir mene sabko relax kiya phir hum sab us jagah pahuch gaye jaha pe dada aur nana ne milkar mere rajyabhishek ki taiyari ki thi

Waha pe bhima kaka aur unka sara pariwar bhi maujood tha aur dad ke kuch business partners bhi the jisme laxmi aur uska pariwar bhi tha phir pure riti riwajon se mera rajyabhishek kiya gaya aur jaha mujhe speech bhi deni thi

Jo kaam mere king wale roop ne sambhal liya tha

Wahi dusri taraf jab se laxmi ne mujhe dekha tha uske man me ek alag hi jung chal rahi thi hua yu ki jab me sabke samne aaya toh mene phir se apna sharir king ko sonp diya jisse king ka aura phir se release ho gaya jise mahsoos kar laxmi ke pratibimb chouk gayi

(laxmi aur uske pratibimb me hone wali sari baate unke man me hongi jisse koi aur unhe sun nahi payega)

Laxmi :- kya hua tum itne shocked me kyu ho

Pratibimb :- is ladke ka aura mujhe shock kar raha hai is jamane me bhi itna powerful aura woh bhi ek king ke jaisa jaroor ye koi khas ladka hai

Laxmi :- lagta hai tumhe ye pasand aa gaya hai lekin meri choice itni kamjor nahi hai sorry

Pratibimb :- kyaa pasand nahi apne ghamand ko chodo laxmi yaad rakhna ye ghamand hi tumhe ek din barbaad karga me abhi bhi kah rahi hu ye ladka

Abhi pratibimb kuch aur bolti ki tabhi use kuch mahsoos hone lagta hai

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Laxmi :- kya hua tum itne shocked me kyu ho

Pratibimb :- is ladke ka aura mujhe shock kar raha hai is jamane me bhi itna powerful aura woh bhi ek king ke jaisa jaroor ye koi khas ladka hai

Laxmi :- lagta hai tumhe ye pasand aa gaya hai lekin meri choice itni kamjor nahi hai sorry

Pratibimb :- kyaa pasand nahi apne ghamand ko chodo laxmi yaad rakhna ye ghamand hi tumhe ek din barbaad karga me abhi bhi kah rahi hu ye ladka

Abhi pratibimb kuch aur bolti ki tabhi use kuch mahsoos hone lagta hai

Pratibimb :- lakshmi jaldi chalo rakt chad wali rat aarambh ho gayi hai aur un logon ne mere mani ke dusre hisse ko bhi jagrit kar liya hai

Lakshmi :- kyaa chalo jaldi woh dusra hissa mera hai woh kaise uska use kar sakte hai chalo jaldi

Pratibimb :- hum waha ladkiyon ko bachane ke liye ja rahe hain na ki koi shaktiya lene

Lekin lakshmi uski baton ko ignore karke waha se nikal gayi

Wahi abhi mera rajyabhishek sampoorn ho gaya tha aur kewal daan punya ki hi rasam bachi thi jo kuch der baad thi

Abhi me apne seat par baitha tha ki tabhi mere man me mujhe JASIEN ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

JASIEN :- aaka rakt chand wali raat aarambh ho gayi hai hume jald se jald nikalna hoga

Me :- ok me samajh gaya

Phir me waha se washroom ka bahana bana kar nikal gaya aur wahi maujood ek ghar me chala gaya jaha is waqt mere alawa koi nahi tha toh mene turant mera duplicate taiyaar kar liya is magic ka pata mujhe kaal ki di hui kitab se chala tha

Jiske baad mene us duplicate ko bahar bhej diya aur khud JASIEN ke wale costume me aa gaya aur uske baad JASIEN ke madad se ek teliport karne ke liye portal ka nirmaan kiya aur pahuch gaya jaha bali di jane wali thi

Jaise hi me waha pahucha mere dimaag me ladkiyon ke chikhne ki aawaj gunjane lagi jisse mera gussa badhta hi ja raha tha

Me jaise hi us factory me enter karna chaha waise hi un mr. Negative ke chamchon dwara banaye kawach ne mera rasta rok diya

Me :- (gusse me) is kawach ki toh me abhi

Itna bolke mene apne tri netra ko jagrit kiya aur phir me apne tri netra se us kawach par blast karne hj wala tha ki tabhi mere man me DEVIL ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

Devil :- ye kya kar rahe ho raj is tuchhe se jadu par tri netra ka istemaal aise toh tum is kawach ke sath pure emaarat ko tabah kar doge saath me hi imaarat ke andar ke logon ko bhi

Me :- toh me kya karu

Devil :- tumhe kya karna hai ye me tumhe baad me batata hu pahle ye kaam jaroori hai toh ab aage mujhe samhalne do

Itna bolke Devil ne mere sharir ko apne control me le liya jaiae hi devil ne mere sharir ko apne control me liya waise hi JASIEN ka costume bhi mere sharir se hat gaya aur ab me devil ke costume me tha
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Devil :- (khud ko dekhte hue) mera costume change karna hoga kitna purana style ho gaya hai

Uske itne bolte hi uske sarir ke kapde badal gaye ab kuch aise kapde the

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Devil :- ab hui na 21vi sadi wali baat ab bahut salon baad me shikar karne me maja aayega

Uske baad devil ne ek jordaar punch us kawach pe maar diya jisse wo kawach turant tut gaya

Wahi dusri taraf kuch der pahle

Jaise hi lakshmi us celebration se nikli woh bhi mere tarah ek khali ghar me chali jaha jate hi uske sharir ke uper achanak se lal rang ki parat si chipakne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte uske sharir pura us parat me chup gaya abhi woh kuch aise dikh rahi thi

Lakshmi :- ye kya hai jo mere sharir pe chipak gaya hai

Pratibimb :- ye mera CARNAGE QUEEN ka costume hai ise kaatne ki taakat kisi bhi dharti ke hathiyaar me nahi hai

Lakshmi :- acha tum carnage queen ho aur tumhare pass kewal 3 hi shaktiya hai ye kaise kya tum itni kamjor ho

Carnage queen :- apni zuban samhalke lakshmi abhi meri aadhi hi urja hai isiliye me apni sari shaktiyon ka istemaal nahi kar sakti nahi toh agar meri carnage army jagrut ho gayi toh is pure dharti ke logon ko me apna gulam bana sakti hoon

Carnage queen ke itna bolte hi lakshmi gahari soch me pad gayi aur lakshmi ko aise sochte dekhkar turant hi carnage queen ko realise ho gaya ki abhi abhi usne kya bol diya hai

C. Queen :- dekho lakshmi sab bhul jao mene jo kuch bhi bola

Lakshmi :- (bich me hi rokte hue) mere pass puri carnage ki army hai aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi use jagrit karne ke liye kya krna hoga ruko me samajh gayi woh mani ka aadha bhag chalo jaldi ab ye duniya humari mutthi me hogi

Itna bolke woh piche ke raste se us ghar ke bahar nikal gayi aur phir ek jordaar jump lagake udne lagi (bilkul jaise supergirl udne ke liye jump maarti hai)

Wahi dusri taraf kuch jyada der pahle

Is waqt usi factory me Mr. Negative aur uske 2no chamche maujood the

Mr. Negative :- sari taiyari ho gayi hai na koi galti nahi honi chahiye samjhe

Chamcha 1 :- aap chinta mat kijiye mene apne asuri sainikon ko bahar tainat kiya hai wohi kisi ko bhi andar aane nahi denge

Chamcha 2 :- woh apna kaam tabhi kar payenge na jab koi mere lagaye hue kawach ko tod paye jo ki na mumkin hai

Mr. Negative :- good ab tum dono jao aur us mani ko leke aao

Phir chamcha 1 waha se nikal gaya aur phir jab aaya toh uske haath me ek box tha jisme woh mani tha jaise hi Mr. Negative ne woh box khola toh uske andar rakhe mani se ek adrushya urja nikalne lagi (isi urja se carnage queen ko rakt chand ki raat ke shuru hone ka pata chala tha abhi bhi isi urja se woh is jagah ka rasta dhoondh pa rahi thi)

Uske baad Mr. Negative woh mani le gaya aur dono chamche bhi uske piche chale gaye

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Abhi me yani devil us godawn ke bahar hi khade the jaise hi devil ne kawach ko toda tha waise hi pure watawaran me us kawach ke tutne ki aawaj gunj uthi thi jise sun kar godawn ke andar se 5 aadmi daudte hue bahar nikale sabhi ke hath talwar thi jisme se black rays nikal rahi thi jinhe dekh ke devil ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan si aa gayi

Devil :- ohh dekho toh raj humare swagat ke liye khud asuri sainik aa rahe hai chalo ab khek ko aarambh kar dete hai

Itna bolke devil bhi style me chalte hue unke taraf jane laga jaise hi woh unke pass pahucha waise hi un pachon me se jo sab se aage tha usne apni talwar se devil par humla kiya lekin devil ne uske hath ko pakad ke use marod diya phir usike hath se uske pet me talwaar ghusadi ye scene dekh kar baki charon ki speed kam hui lekin woh ruke nahi balki ab 2 logon ne ek saath humla kiya lekin devil ne is baar bhi un dono ke hath ko pakad kar itni tej maroda ki un donon ka hath unke kandhe se alag ho gaya wahi jab unka hath unke kandhe se alag hua toh unki jordaar chikh watawaran me fail gayi toh devil in dono ke sar ko aapas me itni jorse bhida diya ki un dono ka sar andon jaisa fut gaya abhi ye dekh kar baki dono ki himmat toh nahi ho rahi thi aage badhne ki lekin woh the toh asur hi bina maar khaye kaha sunenge wahi hua baki dono ne bhi devil par humla karne ki sochi lekin isse pahle woh humla karte usse pahle hi devil ne unhe gardan se utha liya aur gardan ko itni jor se pakda tha ki unki gardan hi tut gayi aur dono bhi mare gaye wahi jab devil ne godawn ke andar enter kiya toh waha pahle se hi 20 30 asuri sainik maujood the jinhe dekh ke devil ne apna right hand aage kiya toh uske haath me rk black sword aa gayi jis me se aag nikal rahi thi jise dekh kar sare asuri sainion ki hawa hi tight ho gayi uske baad devil ne wahi khade khade apni talwar ko spin kane laga jisse uske talwaar se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jiski chapet me aakar sare sainik aise hi mare gaye

Wahi kuch der pahle jab devil ne apne punch se kawach ko toda tha toh us kawch ke tutne ki aawaj andar bhi sunayi di thi jise sunkar waha ke sare sainik toh satark ho gaye the lekin ye aawaj Mr. Negative ke kano tak bhi pahuchi thi

Mr. Negative :- suba (chamcha 2) ye bahar kaisi aawaj hai kua ho raha hai bahar

Suba :- aur kya hoga boss jaroor is umir (chamcha 1) ke asuri sainikon me aapas me ladayi shuru ho gayi hogi woh bhi toh iske jaise hi hai bilkul bail buddhi

Abhi umir (chamcha 1) kuch bolta ki tabhi Mr. Negative ne bolna start kiya

Mr. Negative :- suba jao check karo yaad rakhna abhi bus bali prakriya bachi hai aur usme mujhe koi dikkat nahi chahiye aur umir tum bali ke liye ek ek karke ladkiyon ko lao

Suba :- ji boss

Itna bolke woh bahar chala gaya jaise hi woh bahar aaya toh usne devil ki taakat dekh uske kadam wahi ruk gaye aur jab devil ne sare asur sainikon ko maarne ke baad jab apni sword ko swing karna band kiya toh uski nazar waha khade suba pe padi aur jab usne suba ko dekha toh devil ke face par shaitaani muskaan aa gayi jise dekh suba turant hi andar ki aur bhag gaya aur usko aise bhaagte dekh devil bhi uske pche jane laga

Suba andar aake sidha mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- boss humare uper humla hua hai jaroor ye wahi hoga jiske pass us carnage queen ke shaktiyon ka aadha hissa hai jisse uske pass ye taakate aa gayi hai

Abhi suba bol hi raha tha ki tabhi me bhi waha pahuch jata hoon aur jab meri nazar Mr. Negative ke chehre par padi toh mujhe phir se wahi sapne yaad aa gaye jaha ye ladkiyon ki bali chadha raha tha use dekhte hi me debil se bolta hu

Me :- devil ab meri baari hai in teenon ko toh me hi marunga

Devil :- lekin abhi toh mujhe maja aane laga tha

Lekin me bina kuch sune turant apne sharir ko kabu kar leta hu aur jaise mere sharir pe phir se mera kabu ho jata hai toh JASIEN ka costume bhi turant hi mere sarir pe aa jata hai mujhe aise roop badalte dekh woh teeno bhi shock rah jate hai

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka ab baari hai aap mere wepons ko use karo

Me :- tumhare konse wepons

JASIEN :- jis dragon ko aapne pakada hai woh ek tarike ka wepons ka pura stock hai jo ki dragon ke roop me hai

Phir JASIEN mujhe un hathiyaaron ke baare me badata hai ye sab hone ke liye kewal kuch seconds ka hi samay laga tha

Me :- Aaj inhe me kisi hathiyaar se nahi balki apne haathon se maarna chahunga

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Uske baad me dheere dheere chalte hue un teenon ke pass jane lagta hoon jise dekh kar Mr. Negative ne apne dono chamchon ko aage kar diya

Sabse pehla humla mujh par suba ne kiya uski talwar se usne meri gardan kaatne ki koshis ki lekin mene uska hath pakad ke uske waar ko wahi rok diya aur uske pet me laat maar di jisse woh dur jake gir gaya

Wahi suba ke girte hi umir ne bhi mere par apne talwar se humla kiya lekin uska waar mere tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene apne kick se uske hath par attack kiya jisse uski talwaar jamin par gir gayi aur phir mene uske sine par ek puch maar diya jisse wo bhi thodi door jake gir gaya

Wahi mere se maar khane ke baad suba sidha Mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- aaka lagta hai iske pass hi shakti mani ka aadha tukda hai isiliye ye itna shaktishali hai hume yaha se jana hoga kyunki agar isne aadhe tukde ko bhi pa liya toh ise rokna humare liye na mumkin ho jayega abhi hume bhaagna hoga baad me apni puri shakti se humla karenge hum

Itna bolke suba ne ek portal ko create kar diya jise dekh suba aur Mr. Negative dono uske andar chale gaye aur phir umir bhi uske andar jane laga lekin woh ja pata usse pahle hi mene use pakad kar usi pathar pe lita diya aur mere andar ka sara gussa me use maar ke nikalne laga

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Itna bolke suba ne ek portal ko create kar diya jise dekh suba aur Mr. Negative dono uske andar chale gaye aur phir umir bhi uske andar jane laga lekin woh ja pata usse pahle hi mene use pakad kar usi pathar pe lita diya aur mere andar ka sara gussa me use maar ke nikalne laga

Me use tab tak maarta raha jab tak woh tadap tadap kar mar na gaya ho uske baad me ladkiyon ko chudane ke liye ja hi raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me kisi ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi woh mujhe kisi ladki ki aawaj lag rahi thi lekin waha koi bhi nahi dikh raha tha aur jab me us aawaj ka picha karne laga toh me kisi dusre kamre me pahuch gaya jaha par ek badi murti rakhi hui thi jo ki kisi rakshs ki hi lag rahi thi jab me us murti ke pass pahucha toh waha ek lakdi ka box rakha hua tha jisme se light nikal rahi thi jab me us box ke pass gaya to phir se mujhe waise hi aawaj sunayi dene lagi jo ki usi box se aa rahi thi jis wajah se me satark ho gaya aur vijay dhanush ko yaad kiya mere yaad karte hi vijayi dhanush turant hi mere hath me aa gaya aur jab mene woh box khola toh turant hi us box se kuch nikal ke mere sharir me chala gaya lekin mujhe kuch mahsoos nahi hua toh me waha se jane ka socha jaise hi me waha se nikalta utne me hi devul phir se bolne laga

Devil :- mera ek kaam karoge raj

Raj :- tumhara kya kaam hai ab

Devil :- jyada kuch nahi bas mere kuch sewak hai jinhe khana khilana hai

Me :- toh isme me kya kar sakta hoon

Devil :- bas kuch samay ke liye apna sharir dedo baki me sambhal lunga

Raj :- theek hai

Mere bolte hi devil phir se bahar aa gaya aur me antarman me chala gaya jaha mere sare roop maujood the

Wahi bahar

Jaise devil ne mere sharir pe kabu paya turant hi woh sabse pahle usi rakshas wali murti ke pass gaya aur uske ek hi jhatke me woh murti tod di au4 uske baad bahar aake apna right hath uper kiya toh turant hi woh jagah hilne lag gayi aur jald hi waha ki jamin do hisson me bat gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte jamin ke andar se kuch ajib se log aa gaye jinko dekh devil ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi aur jaise hi un logon ne devil ko dekha toh sab ek saath apne ghutno pe baith gaye

Devil :- lo mere gulamon tumhare liye naye sathi aur bhojan dono taiyar hai

Itna bolke woh koi mantra padhne laga jiske baad waha jitne bhi asur sainik aur woh suba sabke andar se kala dhua nikalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte woh sab bhi dharti ke andar se nikale hue logon jaise dikhne lage jiske baad devil ne unhe kuch ishara kiya toh woh sabhi turan un dead bodies pe tut pade aur use khane lage phir devil waha se nikal ke bahar aa gaya

Me :- (devil se) woh sab kya tha kya kiya hai tumne

Devil is sab ka abhi samay nahi hai raj hume aphle yaha se nikalne ke baare me sochna hoga

Me :- thik hai chalo waise bhi kal tumse bahut sari baate janni hai

Mere bolte hi devil ne turant apne dono kandhon ko halka jhatka diya toh uske pith se do pankh nikal aaye

Phir me waha se nikal gaya aur jate jate mene police station ko call karke yaha ki location batadi phir me waha se portal taoyar kar ke usse sidha apne room me pahuch gaya aur piche rahe gaye woh devil ki sena jo piche apna khana kha rahi thi jaise hi unhone apna khana khatam kiya toh woh wapas jamin ke andar chale gaye

Wahi dusri taraf

Abhi lakshmi apne carnage queen wale roop me udte hue ja rahi thi abhi uski speed ek airplane ke barabar thi

Lakshmi :- hum aur tez nahi ud sakte

C. Queen :- apne aukat me raho tumhara sharir jitni speed jhel sakta hai usse bhi jyada speed hai ye is speed ko tumhara sharir is speed ko isiliye jhel pa raha hai kyunki abhi tumhare sharir par mere urja ka kawach hai

Lakshmi :- jyada tane mat maro aaj tumhara bacha hua aadha hissa bhi mujhe mil gaya toh me is earth ki sabse taakatwar ladki ban jaungi dekhna

C. Queen :- dekhna tumhara ye ghamand hi tumhe haar ka muh dikhayega

Abhi woh kuch aur bolti ki tabhi C. Queen ne achanak break laga diya

Lakshmi :- kya hua ruk kyu gayi

C. Queen :- mujhe mere aadhe hisse ki urja mahsoos nahi ho rahi hai

Lakshmi :- mahsoos nahi ho rahi hai matlab kya hai tumhara kya woh ladkiya thik hai na

C. Queen :- ha ye bali prakriya itni jaldi sampoorn nahi ho sakti jaroor mere tarah hi mere aadhe hisse ko bhi uska dhaarak mil gaya hoga

Lakshmi :- aise kaose mere se jyada kabil koi nahi hai is dharti par jisne bhi ye kiya hai woh mere hatho bachega nahi dekh lena waise ab hume kya karna hai

C. Queen :- chalo jaha se aaye the wahi chalte hai

Lakshmi :- aadha ghanta west kara diya tumhare slow speed ne

Lakshmi ki baat shayad C. Queen ne dil pe le li isiliye ab woh aur bhi jyada speed par udne lagi

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Wahi jab me apne kamre me pahucha toh waha mera duplicate usi raja ke poshakh me bed par laita hua tha jaise hi use mere hone ka ehsaas hua woh turant uth gaya aur phir mere sharir me chala gaya jaise hi woh mere sharir me gaya waise hi mere jane ke baad jo kuch bhi hua woh sab mujhe pata chal gaya phir me apne room me jake fresh ho gaya aur

Phir se niche chala gaya jaha sab baithe hue the aur aaj ke din ke baare me hi charcha kar rahe the waha par mera pura pariwar maujood tha mene sabka aashirwaad liya aur abhi hum sab khane ke liye baithe hi the ki tabhi kuch mehamaan aa jate hai jinko dekh kar dad unko gale se laga lete hai

Dad :- (hum sab se) ye hai humare business partner aur mere dost sunil singh aur unki family

Phir hum sabne unka swagat kiya phir sunil uncle hume sabka intro dene lage

Sunil :- dad ke business partner aur friend

Rekha :- sunil ki wife

Kamal singh ;- sunil ke dad

Hema :- sunil ki mom

Lakshmi :- sunil ki beti aur kahani ki main heroine

Unke intro dene ke baad mene jake sabke pair chukar unka aashirwaad liya aur phir mere dekha dekhi karte hue sari bahnon ne bhi unko pranam kiya jab hum sabne unhe pranam kiya toh uncle aunty ne bhi jo unse bade the unke pair chuke pranam kiya uske baad mene dekha ki sunil uncle aur unki patni baar baar unke beti ko kuch ishara karne lage jaisa kah rahe ho ki tum bhi unke pair chuke sabko pranaam karo

Lekin wahi lakshmi jiska mood pahle se hi off lag raha tha woh unke har ishare ko undekha kar rahi thi jo mere saath saath dadaji ne bhi dekh liya tha jiske baad dadaji ne topic change karte hue sabko khane ke liye bulaya

Uske baad sab khana khane lage jaha par bhi lakshmi apne hi ghamand me chur ho gayi thi jab usne maa aur baki leadies ko khana serve karte dekha toh usne majak udaate hue kaha

Lakshmi :- ye kya aapke ghar ki sari aurte khana serve kar rahi hai koi naukar nahi rakh sakte kya ya sara aaj ke function par uda diya

Jaha uski baat sunne ke baad mere ghar ke sare shocked se dekh rahe the toh uske pariwar wale use gusse aur nirasha se dekh rahe the

Lakshmi :- kya baat hai aise kya ghur rahe ho acha ab samjhi aap log toh gaav me rahte honge aapko aisho aaram ke baare me kaise pata hoga

Uski baate sunkar ab mere pariwaar walon ko bhi gussa aa raha tha lekin woh sab use bachi aur mehmaan hone ke naate ignore kar rahe the

Wahi me sirf uski baate sun raha tha ki tabhi usne hadh paar kar di

Lakshmi :- aapko pata nahi hoga lekin humare ghar me bhi naukar hai jinhe hum family members ke tarah rakhte hai lekin yaha toh family members ko hi naukar banake rakha hai

Uski ye baat sunke laga ki abhi ise iski aukaat dikha du lekin tabhi meri nazar uske family pe pagi jo bhi use gusse se ghur rahi thi aur unke chehre par dukh bhi saaf dikh raha tha jise dekh kar mene apne gusse pe kabu kiya aur use muskurane laga

Me :- (muskurate hue) woh kya hai na lakshmi tum nahi samjhogi bachpan se dusre paraye lagon ke haath ka khana kha rahi ho na tumhe pata nahi jo maza maa ke haath ke khane me hai woh duniya me kahi nahi bhale hi trained chefs usme special masale daal ke khane ko special bana sakte hai lekin maa ka pyar har ek daane ko special bana deta hai lekin tumhe kaise pata hoga tumne thodi na kabhi maa ke hath ke khane ka swad liya hoga

Meri baat sunkar jaha lakshmi gusse se mujhe dikh rahi thi toh wahi uski aur meri family dono hi mujhe muskurate hue dekh rahe the

Uske baad me na lakshmi kuch boli aur na mene is mamle ko aage badhaya phir uske baad kuch nahi hua uske baad sab khana khatam karke apne apne room me sone chale gaye

Jab ki raat bahut ho gayi thi isiliye lakshmi aur uske gharwalo ke rahne ka intezaam bhi guest room me kar diya tha woh lakshmi ke behaviour ke wajah se rukna nahi chabte the lekin dad ne unhe mana liya

Wahi sab apne kamre me sone chale gaye aur me bhi apne kamre me aake darwaja lock karke dhyaan lagane laga toh wahi lakshmi ke kamre me woh alag hi planning kar rahi thi

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Ek ghanghor andhere jungle me bicbo bich ek gupha me kisi aadmi ke jor jor se chikhne ki aawaj aane lagi woh aawaj kisi aur ki nahi balki Mr. Negative ki hi thi jo apne haar ko pacha nahi pa raha tha

Mr. Negative :- nahi mere 100 salon ki tapasya ko koi aise nahi tod sakta mene aaj ke liye apni sari shaktiyon ko bandh ke rakha tha lekin us ladke ne

Suba :- maaf karna boss lekin mujhe pura yakin hai ki us ladke ke pass jaroor wahi carnage queen ke shakti mani ke aadhe hisse ke madad se hi us jagah pahuch gaya hoga aur ab tak toh usne us dusre hisse ko bhi pa liya hoga ab hum kya kar sakte hai

Mr. Negative :- ab itne salon se apni shaktiyon ko humne bandh ke rakha tha ab unhi shaktiyon ko aajad karne ki jarurat hai umir ke maut ka badla hum jaroor lenge tum yahi ruk kar pure desh me utpaad macha do use rokne ke liye toh use aana hi hoga tabhi tum uspar mayavi dhvani se prahar karna jise woh carnage sahan nahi kar sakti tab tum maha mani ka aavhan karna jisse us carnage ko hum phir se kaid kar paye tab tak me patal lok jake malik se apne shaktiyon ko jagrit karne ka marg puchta hoon yaad rahe mere aane tak use tadpana lekin maarna mat uski maut mere hi hathon se likhi hai

Suba :- ji boss pichle 10 salon se mene is desh ke sabhi mujrimon ko apne paksh me kar liya hai aap chintit na ho jald hi woh ladka mere giraft me hoga

Mr. Negative :- chahe jitno ka khoon bahana pade baha dena lekin woh ladka mujhe jinda chahiye

Itna bolke woh us gufa se dhua ban ud gaya

Wahi is waqt me apne kamre me dhyan laga raha tha jab me dhyan lagate hue antarman me pahucha toh waha pe mere sare roooon ke saath kaal aur guide bhi maujood the jinhe dekh ke mene sabse pahle un dono ko pranam kiya

Me :- pranam guide pranam kaal

Kaal :- toh aaj tumne apne jivan ki 2 jimmedari apna hi li

Me :- 2 jimmedari kaise

Guide :- 1li ek raja ki aur dusri buri shaktiyon se is duniya ki raksha karne wale rakshak ki jimmedari

Kaal :- yaad rakhna raj jiske pass jitni jyada shaktiya aati hai uske dushman bhi utne hi shaktishali hote hai

Me :- ji me samajh gaya waise aap dono yaha mujhe sirf itni si baat batane toh aaye nhi honge

Guide :- sahi kaha tumne hum yaha tumhe kaal ke shakti aur astra shastron ka sampoorn niyantran dene aaye hai

Kaal :- ha raj tumne apne kadi mehanat aur tapasya se aaj tumne inhe bhi apne shakti ke asimit samudra ki kuch bundon me parawartit kar diya hai

Guide :- raj apna dhyan todo

Itna bolke woh aur kaal gayab ho gaye aur unke gayab hone ke baad mene bhi apna dhyan tod diya aur jab mene aakhe kholi toh me apne kamre me na hoke kisi alag jagah par tha jo ki dekhne se hi kisi bade maharaaj ka koi bhavya mahal tha jisme chat nahi thi abhi me us mehal ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi waha guide aur kaal bhi aa gaye

Kaal :- kaal lok me tumhara swagat hai raj aaj tumhe kaal ke sari shaktiyon ke saath kaal ke kaal lok ka bhi sampoorn niyantran milega

Guide :- aao baitho yaha raj

Unke itna bolte hi us jagah ek sinhasan aa gaya me sirf jaise kaal aur guide bol rahe the waisa hi kar raha tha kyunki ab tak me ye toh samajh gaya tha ki me apni kisi bhi jimmedari se bhag nahi sakta tha isiliye ab mene soch liya tha ki khudko itna kabil banana hai ki me har jimmedaari ko sambhal pau uske baad guide aur kaal ne mujhe bahut se astra sashtron ka gyan diya lekin un sabhi ka gyan pahli hai mujhe prabhu ke aashirwaad se pahle hi mil gaya tha lekin un sab me 3 astra sabse khas the

Guide :- raj ab jo astra me tumhe dene wala hu unhe grahan karne se pahle tumhe apne sharir ki sampoorn urja ko jagrit karna hoga

Guide ke bolte hi mene apni kundini ko puri tarah se jagrit kar liya

Guide :- sabse pahle hai BRAMHASTRA jiske baare me tumne jyadatar granthon me padha hoga lekin ye un sab me dikhye roop se bhi jyada khatarnaak hai isiliye iska istemaal samhalke karna

Me :- ji

Mere bolte hi waha aasman me ek tir jaisa astra aane laga aur woh aate hi sidha mere andar ghus gaya usse mujhe dard toh nahi hua kyunki mere pass swayam parambramha ke astra ka tap sahan kiya tha uske samne ye toh kuch nahi tha

Guide :- ab jo dusra astra hai woh BRAMHASTRA se bhi 4 guna jyada shaktishali hai jise kahte hai BRAMHASHIRASTRA

Me :- me uske liye bhi taiyar hu

Uske baad me bilkul pahle ki tarah hi hua lekin is baar mere sharir ko ek halka sa jhatka laga lekin me usse sambhal gaya

Guide :- ab sabse aakhir me sabse shaktishali aur sabse jyada vidhwansak BRAMHANDASTRA apne naam ki hi tarah iske ek waar se hi pure bramhand ka vinash ho sakta hai

Uske baad bhi wahi hua bas is baar mujhe thodi pareshaani hui thi lekin mene use samhal liya tha uske baad guide aur kaal ne mujhe badhayi si jiske baad me JASIEN ke madad se teleport karke apne room me aa gaya aur air bed pe lette hi me so gaya

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Is waqt lakshmi apne kamre me baithi hui thi uske chehre se hi pata chal raha tha ki woh kitne gusse me hai uski aakhe puri lal rang ki ho gayi thi

C. Queen :- kya hua aaj irne gusse me kyu ho dekho jis shakti ke na milne ki wajah se tum itne gusse me aa gayi ho toh socho agar woh tumko mil bhi jati toh tum uska use sirf apni bhalai ke liye karti jisme nuksaan tumhara hi hota

Lakshmi :- mujhe us shakti ke na milne ka gussa toh hai lekin usse bhi jyada gussa mujhe us raj par aa raha hai ek mamooli ladke ne meri bezati ki national level fighting Compitation me mai first aayi hu itna hi nahi Carnage Queen ki mahan shaktiya bhi mere pass hai aur woh ek mamuli sa banda sabke samne mere pariwar ke saamne meri bezati karke aaram se so raha hai me use nahi chodungi kal subah uski aur uske pariwar ki sabki aise bezati karungi ki woh bhi yad rakhenge

C. Queen :- dekho Lakshmi tum aisa kuch nahi karogi yaad hai na celebration me uska aura kitna powerful tha aur waise bhi bejjati ki shurwat tumne hi ki thi usne nahi agar tum uske pariwar ki bejjti nahi karti toh woh bhi kuch nahi karta aur waise bhi usne tumhari bejjti nahi ki thi usne bas apne pariwar ke bejjti ka jawab diya tha

Lakshmi :- chup raho tum pata nahi kya hua hai tumhe kahi tum uske pyaar me toh nahi pad gayi

C. Queen :- pyar nahi lekin use dekh kar aakarshan jaroor ho raha tha jaise ki woh aur me ek hi ho

Lakshmi :- chup karo tumhari baate kar me uski aisi haalat karungi ki sab log yaad rakhenge ki lakshmi se ulajhne ka anjaam kya hai

C. Queen agar aisi baat hai toh kal meri koi bhi power tumhari madad nahi karegi jab mene tumhe chuna tha toh aisa laga ki tum ek achi ladki ho un anjaan ladkiyon ko bachane ke liye apni jaan khatre me daalne ka faisla karna tumhari ye himmat dekh kar hi mene tumhe apne dhaarak ke roop me chuna tha lekin ab tumhara ghamand mujhe mere us faisle par dubara vichar karnr ke liye majboor kar raha hai

Lakshmi :- mujhe tumhari shaktiya chahiye bhi nahi jo khud aadhe hisse me bati hui hai uski powers mere kis kaam ki

C. Queen :- thik hai phir

C. Queen ke itna bolte hi lakshmi ka sharir lal rang me chamakne laga aur phir shant ho gaya uske baad achanak lakshmi ko thakan si mahsoos hone lagi jisse woh wahi jamin pe girke behose ho gayi

Agli subah me humesha ki tarah subah jaldi uth kar dhyan lagane laga tha aaj jab me dhyan laga raha tha toh mujhe mere antar man me alag si hulchal hone ka anubhav hone laga jiske baad me jab apne antarman me pahucha toh waha kuch bhi alag nahi laga tha jo mujhe aur bhi shock kar raha tha lekin jab mene apne trinetra ko jagrit kiya toh uske urja ke madad se me us hulchal ke strot rak pahuch gaya jo ki ek lal mani tha

Me :- ye lal mani mere antarman me kaise aaya aur kab

Ye sochte hue mene jaise hi us mani ko chua toh mujhe drushya dikhne laga jo ki kal factiry me hi tha jo wooden box mene khola tha usi me ye lal mani kaid tha aur jab ye mere sharir me sama gaya toh mujhe isiliye pata nahi pada kyunki mere sabhi shaktiyon ke saamne ye mani ek tucch urja sabit ho rahi thi

Abhi me ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me ek ladki ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi jab mene apni aakhe kholi toh mere saamne ek ladki khadi thi jismese lal rang ki urja nikal rahi thi

Ladki :- pranam malik

Me :- kon ho tum aur yaha kya kar rahi ho

Ladki :- me mahan carnage prajati ki queen hu barson pahle kuch swarthi logon ne meri shaktiya pane ke liye mujhe mani me kaid kar diya tha lekin woh mani meri urja sahan nahi kar payi jisse us mani ke sath mere urja shakti ke bhi 2 tukde ho gaye aur ek hissa kuch dinon pahle hi na jane kaha kho gaya

Me :- acha toh aisi baat hai

Ladki :- aapko khush hona chahiye ki mere jaise mahaan urja strot ne aap jaise mamuli insaan ka chayan kia

Me (muskurate hue) :- mamuli insaan ha ab kya khayal hai

Itna bolke mene apne sabhi roopon ka smaran kia jisse sabhi turant hi mere piche aa khade ho gaye wahi mere sare roopon ke saath JASIEN aur dragon ko dekhkar us ladki ki hawa hi tight ho gayi

Ladki :- is kalyug me tum kon ho jisne apne andar ke angel aur devil dono ko bhi jagrit kar diya hai aur tumhara pura kabu bhi hai unpar asambhav

Me :- toh ab ye batao maha carnage prajati ki rani mere jaise mamooli insaan ko apna dharak chunna kahi tumhare shan ke khilaf toh nahi

Ladki :- mujhe maaf kar dijiye malik me apne ahankar me thi ab se me ye galti nahi karungi

Me :- good

Uske baad me kuch der antarman me hi dhyan lagata raha phir dhyan todkar me fresh hoke niche kicthe me chala gaya jaha sabhi leadies khana bana rahe the

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Lagta hai jise bhi Carnage Queen ki shakti khudko sabse uper samajhti hai isliye bhi shayad Laxmi itni ghamandi ban gayi waise Carnage Queen ka ek hissa bahut ghamandi hai toh dusra bahut acha par hero ne use uski aukat bata di hai
 
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Uske baad me kuch der antarman me hi dhyan lagata raha phir dhyan todkar me fresh hoke niche kicthe me chala gaya jaha sabhi leadies khana bana rahe the

Jab me kicthen me gaya to usike kuch der baad lakshmi bhi kicthen me aa gayi

Lakshmi :- (chillake) ye kya abhi tak nashta nahi bna mujhe bhukh lagi hai

Me :- logon ka dimag itna khati ho phir bhi bhukh lagi hai strange itna kha kaise leti ho

Lakshmi :- how dare you

Me :- wahi how dare you merw gharwalon par aise chillne ki himmat kaise ki

Lakshmi :- agar itna hi bura lagta hai toh naukar kyu nahi rakhte afford nahi kar sakte kya tum log

Me :- tum kal se itna naukar naukar kar rahi ho mujhe ye batao naukar kahte kise hai

Lakshmi :- laga hi tha mujhe tumhe pata hi nahi hoga ki naukar kise kahte ho naukar use kahte hai jo tumhara har hukum mane tum jo kaam bole woh chup chap woh kaam pura kare

Me :- acha toh tumhare ghar bhi naukar jaroor honge barabar ya tum hi ghar ka sara kaam karti ho

Lakshmi :- oh hello me national level boxing champion hoon ye naukar wale kaam me nahi karti

Me :- me nahi maanta tum national level winner ho prove karo

Abhi me lakshmi se baat karte hue devil ke powers ke madad se uske andar ka ahankar me lagatar badha raha tha jisse woh ab aur bhi irritate ho rahi thi

Lakshmi :- me kyu prove karu

Me :- matlab tum jhut bol rahi ho

Lakshmi (irritate hote hue) bolo kya karu me

Me :- woh 5chon kaddu uthake mom ko do uske baad chat se sukhe hue kapde nikal ke lao phir washing machine me jo kapdon ka dher hai use chat pe sukhane ko dalo

Lakshmi :- me ye sab nahi karungi

Me :- agr tum itne chote kaam nahi kar sakti toh me kaise yakeen karu ki tum jhut nahi bol rahi ho

Itna bolke mene uske andar ke ahankaar ko aur jyada badha diya

Lakshmi :- ye itne chote kaam me chutkiyon me kar lungi

Me :- tih bajao chutki karo kaam aur ha me time laga raha hoon kitna samay lagega

Lakshmi ;- 5 min

Me :- ok

Mere itna bolte hi woh daudte hue kicthen ke dusre kone me gayi aur waha se kaddu uthake phir se daudte hue mere pass aayi aur kaddu uthake waise hi daudte hue lakar mom ke pass rakhti gayi isime uske do minute nikal gaye aur uske baad woh waise hi daudte hue chat par bhi gayi uske jate hi mom ne mujhse sawal karna shuru kar diya

Mom :- ye sab kya tha

Me :- mere pariwar ki tulna koi naukron se kare aur me shanti se sunta rahu

Abhi me kuch aur bolta ki tabhi kitchen me baki gents bhi aa gaye jab lakshmi daudte hue ja rahi thi toh sabne use daudte hue dekh liya tha isi baat ka pata lagane woh sabhi aaye the

Dad :- raj woh humare mehman hai aur uske saath

Me :- (bich me hi rokte hue) atithi tab tak hi bhagwan saman hote hai jab tak apne sima me rahe agar is Lakshmi ki jagah koi ladka hota toh ab tak use laat ghuson ki machine me daal ke uska ghamand puri tarike se dho deta

Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki tabhi bahar se lakshmi ki chikh sunayi dene lagi hua yu ki baar baar bhaag daud karke woh thak gayi thi uper se bhige hue kapdon ki wajah se uski speed aur kam ho gayi thi lekin ghamand ke maare woh khud par jyada jor dal rahi thi uper se abhi C. Queen ki bhi koi shakti uske saath nahi thi toh woh sidhiyon se gir padi lekin use jyada chot nahi aayi kyunki mere aadesh ke wajah se JASIEN uspe dhyan rakhe hue tha

Wahi jaise hi woh giri hum sabhi bhi uske pass pahuch gaye

Me :- kya baat hai tum itne jaldi thak gayi aaj kal ke naukron me dam hi nahi raha

Lakshmi :- kahna kya chahte ho tum

Rina didi :- tumhi ne kaha tha na ki jo tumhare kahe anusaar kaam kare woh naukar hote hai toh us hisaab se kaddu uthana sukhe hue kapde nikalna gile kapde sukahana ye saare kaam bhai ne diye the aur tum kar rahi thi matlab tum bhi bhai ki naukar ho

Lakshmi (full gusse me) tumhari ye himmat tum mujhe naukar bolo

Itna bolke woh didi pe haath uthane aage badhi lekin tabhi me bich me aa gaya aur uska hath pakad liya is waqt me full gusse me tha jis wajah se mere andar se king ka aura release hone laga jisse sab saham gaye

Me :- (gusse me) ab bas bahut hua raat se tumhe jhel rahe hai atithi hai bolke maaf kar rahe hai lekin ab nahi

Itna bolke mene karara chanta lakshmi ke gaal pe maar diya jisse wo wahi behose ho gayi

Me :- (dad se) dad kya me aapke har business ka warish hu

Dad (darte hue) ye sawal abhi kyu

Me :- (chillake) ha ya na

Dad :- ha tumhara mere har daulat par mujhse bhi jyada haq hai

Me :- toh thik hai usi haq se me lakshmi cooperation limited (lakshmi ke dad ke companies ka naam) ke saath apne saare Business relation tod ta hu aur unhe ye notice bhi deta hoon ki agle 3 din yani 72 ghanton me humara jitna bhi udhaar unke uper hai woh sab chuka de nahi toh apne lkye walik dhoondh le

Mera ye faisla sunkar sabhi shocked ho gaye the toh wahi lakshmi ke dad ki toh jaise duniya hi lut gayi thi kyunki unhe maloom tha ki humare unke uper kitne hi crore rupees udhaar the

Lekin me in sabko ignore karke me apne room me chala gaya aur jate jate lakshmi ke andar ke ghamand ko phir se kam kar diya

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Bahut alag aur jabardast tareeke se sabak sikhaya aur thappad bhi jor ka hi laga ab dekhte hai Sunita aur Laxmi kya karti hai
 
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