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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future

Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai



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Abhi me sunul uncle ke office se nikal ke apne ghar ke aur nikal gaya aur jab me ghar pahucha toh waha par sabhi ne mujhe lakshmi ke baare me bataya ki kaise usne sabse maafu mangi jo sunke mere chehre pe bhi muskaan aa gayi ki jo mene lakshmi se kaha woh sab samajh gayi toh

Uske baad mene bhi sabko aaj ke baare me bata diya jo bhi baate sunil uncle ke saath hui woh bata di jise sunne ke baad dad bhi khush ho gaye uske baad dadaji ne wapas jane ke baare me kaha kyunki abhi C. Chacha ki shaadi ki tarikh bhi najdik aa rahi thi toh pahle toh koi mana nahi lekin dadaji ke manane ke baad sab maan gaye

Aur kal subah wapas jane ka faisla hua uske baad kuch khas nahi hua phir me waha se apne room me aa gaya aur phir pura din me aaj raat ke baare me soch kar nikal diya

Mene tri netra ke madad se un sabhi jagahon ki location pata kar li jaha jaha pe bombs ko lagaya gaya tha toh wahi C. Queen ki madad se us jagah ke baare me bhi pata laga liya jaha pe us terrorist ne apna adda banaya tha

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Is waqt lakshmi bhi apne ghar pahunch gayi thi jaha lakshmi ke subah bina bataye chale jane se uska pariwar chintit tha toh haise hi lakshmi ghar me enter hui uski maa aur dada ne milke us par sawalon ki jhadi laga di toh lakshmi ne sabko sach bata diya aur jab sabne sach suna toh sabhi khush ho gaye ki ab unke sare tension door hone ke chances dikh rahe the

Abhi koi aur kuch bolta ki tabhi sunil uncle bhi ghar aa gaye jinhone aakar sab ko khush khabri bhi sunayi jisse woh sabhi kgush ho gaye toh wahi lakshmi shocked ho gayi uske baad kal raat ko jo lakshmi ne mujh par humla kiya tha uske baare me bhi sunil uncle ne sabko bataya jiske baad lakshmi ne apne ghutno pe baith ke sabse maafi maangi jo dekhke waha sabhi shocked ho gaye kyunki aise is tarah lakshmi pahli baar apni galti maan ke uske liye sorry bol rahi thi

Jo dekh ke uska pariwaar bhi khush tha ki lakshmi ka ghamand ab kam ho gaya hai jiske baad lakshmi bhi apne kamre me chali gayi jaha par usne bhi apne andar ke C. Queen ke aadhe hisse se baat karke aaj raat ki planning kar li

Wahi raat ke samay me

Is waqt lakshmi apne kamre me baithi hui thi aur sirf apne kamre me lagi ghadi ko dekh rahi thi thik raat ke 11 baje woh apne room se nikali aur dheere se sabhi rooms ko bahar se lock kar diya usne pahle hi sabke khane me halki nind ki dawa mila di thi jisse uska pariwar subah se pahle na uthe phir lakshmi apne ghar ke chat pe aa gayi jaha se apne C. Queen wale roop me aake woh apne lakshya ki taraf nikal padi woh is waqt C. Queen ke senses kin madad se bas us aur ja rahi thi

Abhi lakshmi udte hue us jagah par pahuch gayi jaha suba usi ka intezaar kar raha tha jaise hi lakshmi ne us jagah par entry mari toh saamne se hi kuch aadmi ya phir bheed hi kahlo daudte hue us par humla karne aa gayi jinke hathon me bandooke aur talware pakadi hui thi

Wahi kuch der pahle

Is waqt suba usi jagah pe baitha hua tha jaha ke liye lakshmi nikal chuki thi aur is waqt suba ke saamne 2 aadmi khade the jin dono ki bhi height 9 feet ke aas pass hogi jo dono bhi suba ke bharose mand daitya the jinke pass bahut si mayavi vidya bhi thi

Daitya 1 (suba se) :- malik aaj aapne hum dono ko apne yodhAon ke saath yaha kyu bulaya hai

Suba :- aaj yaha pe woh C. Queen humla karne wali hai jisse ladhne ke liye mene tum dono ko aur tumhare yodhaon ko bulaya hai

Daitya 2 :- agar woh yaha humla kardgi toh aapne is jagah ke dwar pe aam manushyon ko kyu rakha hai uske liye inhe maarna aam baat hai

Suba :- jaanta hoon isiliye hum in manushyon ko chare ke roop me istemaal karenge aur jab woh in manushyon se ladne me vyast hogi tabhi huma apne asuron ko uspar humla karne ka aadesh denge

Daitya 1 :- thik hai malik

Present time

Is waqt apne saamne se aati bheed ko dekh kar lakshmi bhi sawdhan ho gayi aur jaise hi us bheed me se ek aadmi ne us par goli chala di lekin woh goli C. Queen ke suit se takrake niche gir gayi

C. Queen :- chinta mat karo lakshmi ye mamuli hathiyaar mere kawach ko nahi bhed payenge

Jiske baad lakshmi ne apne pass ke hi aadmi ka gala pakad ke ek jhatke me uski gardan tod di aur uske haath me pakdi hui talwar utha ke apne saamne aa rahe har insaan ko kaatte ja rahi thi jisse ab jaha pahle talwaar pakde hue log aage aa rahe the toh ab jinke haath me bandooke thi woh door se hi lakshmi pe goliya chala rahe the lrkin ek bhi goli lakshmi ko chu bhi nahi pa rahi thi

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Toh wahi ye sab nazara camera ke madad se dekh kar suba shocked tha

Suba (apne man me) :- mujhe lag raha tha ki wahi ladka aayega lekin is baar ye ladki kaha se aa gayi toh matlab woh C. Queen abhi bhi do hisson me bati hui hai ye toh achi baat hai ab use pakadne me jyada samay nahi lagega

Itna sochte hi usne apne bagal me hi khade daitya 1 ko aadesh de diya jisse usne kuch asuron ko lakshmi par humla karne bhej diya wahi lakshmi jaha abhi un gundon ko talwaar se kaatte ja rahi ki tabhi us jagah par ek jordaar dhamaka hua aur jitne bhi insaan is waqt waha pe lakshmi pe humla kar rahe the woh sabhi ek jhatke me mare gaye Jab sabhi aam insaan ek saath mare gaye toh ye dekh kar lakshmi shocked ho gayi thi ki tabhi uski nazar saamne se aa rahe 10 mahakay yodhaon pe padi jin sabke sharir pe lohe ke kawach aur hathon me kali lohe ki majboot sword pakdi hui thi

C. Queen :- lakshmi ye mahakay asur hai in par aam astron ka asar nahi hoga inke liye tumhe tumhari bhujabal ka istemaal karna hoga

Lakshmi :- is ke liye toh me kab se taiyar hu

Uske baad lakshmi ne apne haath me pakdi hui talwar ko side me phek ke ab un asuron ki aur daudte hue jane lagi wahi lakshmi ko apne taraf aate dekh sare asur bhi ab taiyar ho gaye aur un mese 1 asur bhi lakshmi ke taraf daudte hue jane laga aur jaise hi dono ek dusre ke saamne aaye toh lakshmi ne chalang lagake us asur ke sidhe jabde par apni puri taakat se kick ka waar kia jisse woh asur ka balance bigad gaya aur woh wahi gir gaya uske baad lakshmi dusre asur ki taraf badhne lagi toh turant hi uske man me C. Queen ki aawaj ayi

C. Queen :- Lakshmi inhe aise hi jinda chodna humare liye mushkile paida karegi iske mind ko control karke ise paralyzed kar do

Lakshmi :- ya hum inhe hi inke khilaaf ladhne pe majboor kar de

C. Queen :- yukti achi hai lekin tumhare pass utni urja nahi hai ki tum asuron ka mind control kar sako agar tum meri baat ko maan kar thodi training karti toh shayad aaj haalat kuch aur hote

Lakshmi :- taane maarne ki jarurat nahi hai samjhi

Uske baad lakshmi ne C. Queen ke kahe anusaar us asur ke mind ko control karke use paralyzed kar diya lekin itni der me do asuron ne piche se aakar lakshmi pe prahar kar diya lekin C. Queen ke senses ne unhe pahle sense karke lakshmi ko bacha liya jiske baad lakshmi ne un dono par waar kar ke unhe jamin par gira diya aur phir unka bhi mind control karnd ka try kiya lekin aisa hone se pahle hi ek asur ne apni talwar se lakshmi par waar kiya lekin is baar lakshmi ne wahi behose pade 1 asur ko uthake us asur par pheck diya jisse wo dono asur ek dusre se takarake wahi gir gaye Ye nazara dekhke baki bache hue asuron ne lakshmi ko gher liya

Toh wahi dusri taraf Ab se kuch der pahle

Is waqt me apne kamre me tha aur mere sharir par JASIEN bhi kawach ke roop me aa gaya tha

JASIEN :- pahle kaha jayenge hum aaka

Me :- sabse pahle un sabhi jagahon par jaha pe bombs lagaye gaye hai mujhe shaq hai kahi asuron ne un bombs pe koi magic na kiya ho

JASIEN :- lekin aaka woh sabhi bheed bhad wali jagah hai agar waha aap aise gaye toh

Me :- mene iska hal bhi soch liya hai

Itna bol ke mene slow mode ko active kar diya jisse me 1 minute me hi pure sahar me chupe hue sabhi bombs ko apne kabje me le liya aur yaha pe mera shaq sach sabit hua jaise hi mene pahale bomb ko chua woh waise hi pbat gaya slow mode activated tha isiliye mene use turant telepory kar ke door kisi jwalamukhi ke andar phek diya aur baki sabhi bombs ko mene apne magic se bina chuye deactivate kar diya

JASIEN :- ab kya karna hai aaka

Me :- ab asuron ki dhulayi karni hai chalo

Wahi lakshmi ke taraf

Is waqt sabhi asuron ne milke lakshmi ko gher liya tha 10 asuron me se 2 toh nipat gaye the ab baki bache 8 asur the Jaise hi unhone lakshmi ko ghera waise hi lakshmi ne unke uper waar karna chaha lekin uske piche khade asuron ne use pakad liya aur sabse aage khade asur ne apne right hand ko aage kar diya jisse uske hathon me aag ka gola aa gaya

Lakshmi :- (C. Queen se) ye kya hai iske paas magical powers hai me kaise ladu inse

C. Queen :- ye sab tumhe kewal pida de sakte hai lekin mere kawach ko bhed pane kj taakat inke andar nahi hai

Asur 1 :- abhi bhi waqt hai shakti dhaarak is C. Queen ke ardhansh ko humare hawale kar de nahi toh itni bhayanak pida hogi ki tumhari aatma bhi kaap jaye

Lakshmi :- meri shaktiya chahiye bhul jao tum kamine

Asur 1 :- toh bhugto

Itna bolke usne apne hathon me pakade aag ke gole ko lakshmi ke taraf pheck diya lekin woh aag ka gola lakshmi tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi kahi se dusra aag ka gola bhi aa gaya jisss woh dono gole ek dusre se takrake wahi khatam ho gaye

Asur 1 :- kon hai jisne mere waar ko kaatne ki himmat ki

Kuch der pahle

Abhi me us jagah pahucha hi tha ki tabhi mere saamne ka nazara dekhke me shocked ho gaya ki ek ladki apne talwaar se waha ke saare aadmiyon ke tukde karti ja rahi thi abhi me use dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mere man me C. Queen ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

C. Queen :- malik ye mera hi ardhansh hai jisne shayad is ladki ko chuna hoga apne dhaarak ke roop me hume uski madad karni chahiye

Me :- ruk jao thoda show hum bhi dekh le ki tumhare us ardhansh ne chuna kise hai

Uske baad me wahi chup kar sara tmasha dekh raha tha aur jab mene us ladki ko asuron se fight kafte dekha toh sach me main impressed ho gaya

Me :- waah C. Queen tumhara ardhansh hai wakai kamal ka

C. Queen :- ha aaka lekin ek samasya hai mere ardhansh ke pass jadui shaktiyon ki kami hai agar asuron ne apni shaktiyon ka istemaal kia toh woh khatre me pad sakti hai

Abhi c. Queen ne ye bola hi tha ki tabhi un asuron ne lakshmi pe magical powers se attack karna chaha toh ye dekhkar me bhi maidaan me aa gaya aur asuron ke waar ko rokne ke liye apne agni tatva ko jagrit kar ke un par humla kar diya

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Abhi c. Queen ne ye bola hi tha ki tabhi un asuron ne lakshmi pe magical powers se attack karna chaha toh ye dekhkar me bhi maidaan me aa gaya aur asuron ke waar ko rokne ke liye apne agni tatva ko jagrit kar ke un par humla kar diya

Asur 1 dwara choda hua woh aag ka gola lakshmi tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene agni tatwa ko jagrit karke speed se dusra aag ka gola us taraf pheck diya jisse woh dono gole ek dusre se takrake wahi khatam ho gaye

Asur 1 :- kon hai jisne mere waar ko kaatne ki himmat ki

Me (us jagah entru maarte hue) :- ye toh badi na insafi hai tum 8 asur milke ek akeli ladki ko maar rahe ho kitni sharm ki baat hai

Asur 1 :- kon ho tum

Me :- lo karo baat jiske liye tum asuron ko bulaya gaya hai tum use hi nahi pahchaan pa rahe ho you hurt me asur bro

Wahi mujhe enter karte hue suba ne bhi cameras ke dwara dekh liya tha

Suba :- tera hi intezaar tha mujhe ab dekhna kaise tum dono se C. Queen ki shaktiya me chinn lunga

Wahi mene us jagah enter karte hi mene sabse pahle lakshmi ko pakde hue dono asuron par aag ke gole pheck diye jisse woh dono door jake gir gaye aur behose ho gaye jiske baad me chalte hue lakshmi ke paas aa gaya

Me (lakshmi se) :- ye mahakay asur hai in par aam hathiyaar ya phir hand to hand fight karna puri tarike se murkhta hai

Lakshmi :- mujhe kya karna hai mat batao mere pass bhale hi tumhare tarah magic powers nahi hai lekin phir bhi me inke liye kafi hoon

Me :- inko maarne ke liye tumhe iski jaroorat padegi

Itna bolke mene yodha ki sword uske taraf badha di jis par mene agni tatva se aag lagayi thi jise dekh kar lakshmi kafi shocked ho gayi thi aur shayad use pakadne me dar bhi rahi thi

Me :- daro mat ye jadui aag hai kewal apne shikaar ko jalati hai apne dhaarak ko nahi

Mere ye bolne ke baad lakshmi ne us talwar ko pakad liya aur mene bhi apne andar ke weaponide dragon ke hathiyaaron se 2 swords nikal li

Wahi is sab ke bich me baki sare asuron ne milke apne dono sathiyon ko theek kar diya aur jise lakshmi ne paralyzed kar diya tha use bhi unhone magic se theek kar diya tha ab hum dono ke saamne 9 mahakay asur the

Un sabhi ko apne saamne dekh kar me daudte hue unki taraf badhne laga wahi mujhe aise daudte hue dekh kar lakshmi bhi apne full speed me daudne lagi aur jald hi hum dono un asuron ke najdeek pahuch gaye jiske baad mene apne dono talwaron se ek asur ke dono hath kaat diye aur phir uski gardan bhi kaat di ye nazara dekhke sare asur shocked ho gaye

Wahj itni der me lakshmi ne bhi meri di hui sword se ek asur ko maar diya tha aise hi kuch der me mene aur lakshmi ne sare asuron ke sar kaat kar unhe khatam kar diya tha

Lakshmi :- kon ho tum aur yaha kaise

Me :- abhi is sab ka samay nahi hai ye log mamuli sainik hai inka koi na koi leader bhi yaha hoga

Abhi mene itna bola hi tha ki tabhi humare saamne se bahut se asur daudte hue aa rahe the unko apne taraf aata dekh mene turant lakshmi ko apne piche khich liya aur aakash tatva ko jagrit karke un sabhi pe bhayankar vidyut prahar kar diya jisse sabhi wahi jal ke rakh ho gaye wahi itna dumdaar aur bhayanak humla dekhke lakshmi ke saath saath suba bhi shocked ho gaya

Suba :- (dono daityon se) jao aur apna pura jor laga dena ise rokne ke liye (man me) kya C. Queen ka aadha ansh itna shaktishali hai (kuch sochke man me hi) nahi jaroor isne koi aur bhi shakti dhaaran ki hai lekin konsi

Wahi humare taraf

Lakshmi :- ye tumne kaise kiya tumhare pass meri shaktikunj ka aadha hissa hai woh mujhe wapas chahiye

Me :- ye shaktiya hai koi khilauna nahi jaise tumhare ansh ne tumhe chuna hai waise hi isne mujhe chuna hai

Abhi me ye bol raha tha ki tabhi humare uper bahut se aag ke gole girne lage lekin mene unhe pahle hi sense kar liya tha jisse mene ek magical shield bana di jisse hum dono surakshit ho gaye wahi jub mene humlawar ki disha me dekha toh waha 2 daitya khade the jo hume hi ghure ja rahe the

Me :- ye rahe un asuron ke leader humare taraf hi aa rahe hai kahi dar toh nahi lag raha hai

Lakshmi :- dar my foot

Itna bolke woh daudte hue daitya 1 ki taraf daudte hue jane lagi toh wahi daitya 2 mere taraf badhne laga jise dekh ke me aaram se pane jagah pe hi khada hoke lakshmi ko ladhte hue dekhne laga

Wahi dusri taraf

Lakshmi ko apni aur aate dekh daitya 1 ne apni taraf se pehla attack kia jiska nishana lakshmi ki gardan thi lekin shayad lakshmi bhi iske liye taiyar thi jaise hi us daitya ne hamla kiya waise hi lakshmi ne apne bachav ke liye meri di hui talwaar aage ki aur gardan ka waar apni talwar par le liya

Aur ab shuru hua lakshmi aur daitya1 ke bich yudh kabhi daitya hamla karta kabhi lakshmi kabhi woh bhari padta toh kabhi lakshmi bhari pad rahi thi

Aise hi kuch der un dono ke beech me yudh hota raha ki tabhi lakshmi ne mauka dekh kar us daitya ki gardan uske dhad se alag kar di Wahi me abhi bhi apne jagah pe khada ho ke lakshmi ko ladte hue dekh raha tha aur woh daitya jo mere taraf badha tha usko toh mene apne dharati tatva ne madad se puri tarf jamin ke andar ke roots se jakad liya tha aur jaise hi lakshmi ne meri taraf dekha waise hi mene us asur ke uper agni tatva se waar kia jisse woh wahi jal ke rakh ho gaya

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Hero ki shaktiyo ke samne Carnage Queen ki shakti kuch bhi nahi hai chalo ye dono toh khatam huye ab agle padav par chalte hai
 

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Abhi hum dono ne milke waha pe sabhi asur aur daityon ko khatam kar diya tha jiske baad lakshmi mere pass aake phir se sawal puchne lagi

Lakshmi :- ab batao kon ho tum aur ye sari magic tricks tumhe kaise pata hai kahi ye sab tum C. Queen ke shakti ke ardhansh se toh nahi kar rahe ho

Me :- C. Queen ke dono hi ans bahut shakti shali hai aur waise bhi shakti chahe koi bhi ho agar tum use janoge use apnaoge tabhi uska purn labh utha paoge

Lakshmi :- mujhe shakti ke use ke baare me mat batao woh me ache se janti hoon

Me :- han dekha mene kaise tum apni sirf kuch pratishat shakti hi istemaal kar pa rahi thi

Abhi hum bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi uper se achanak kuch lohe ke rods ke tarah rods aake hume ek Circular design me jamin ke andar ghus gayi aur woh apne andar hum dono ko kaid karne lage aur abhi hum unhe dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi waha ek shaks aa gaya jo koi aur nahi balki suba hi tha

Lakshmi :- ab tum kon ho aur ho kya raha hai yaha

Suba :- me woh hoon jiske pass ye dono ans hone chahiye the tum dono ne dhoke se ye dono ans churaye hai

Lakshmi :- Mene kisi se bhi ye churayi nahi balki isne mujhe chuna hai

Jaha woh doni bate kar rahe the toh us waqt me sirf apne dimag ko shant karne me laga hua tha aur me is suba ke plan ko samajhne ka try kar raha tha lekin mujhe aise shant khada dekh kar suba se raha nahi gaya

Suba :- kya hua ladke dar gaye kya jo juban bhi nahi chala sakte

Me :- nahi re me toh soch raha tha ki pichli baar us godawn me se 2 kutte bhage the ek mere saamne hai aur dusra kya woh abhi tak dar ke kahi chupa hua hai

Suba :- bas kar bache agar phir se tumne kuch bhi kaha toh abhi tum dono ko maar dunga

Me ;- lo pahale chup tha toh mujhe bolne pe majboor kiya aur ab jab me bol raha hoon toh chup kara rahe ho pahle tum soch lo tumhe kya bolna hai ohh sorry sochne ke liye dimag ki jarurat hai jo tumhare pass nahi hai

Suba :- tum bahut bol rahe ho bache tum dono ka ant ab nishchit hai

Itna bolke woh koi mantra bolne laga aur jaise jaise woh mantra bol raha tha waise waise hi woh rods dheere dheere vibrate ho rahi thi abhi me un rods ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mere man me JASIEN ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

JASIEN :- aaka ab kya karna hai aap kaho toh is papi ko me ek kshan me hi khatam kar sakta hoon

Me :- shant ho jao ise maarna mere liye bhi mushkil baat nahi hai lekin abhi hume isse kuch sawalon ke jawab janne hai isiliye bas dekho ki ye bandar kya khel dikhata hai thik hai

Abhi me JASIEN se baat hi kar raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me ek saath 2 chikhe gunjne lagi pahli chikh toh mere pass khadi Lakshmi ki thi aur dusri chikh thi mere antarman me maujood C. Queen ki

C. Queen :- ahhh malik ye aawaj mujhe kamjor kar rahi hai kuch kijiye

Wahi bahar

Lakshmi :- ye aawaj mujhe maar degi kuch karo ahhh

In dono ki dard bhari chikhon ki aawaj sunke me itna toh samajh gaya tha ki kuch toh aisa hai jo mere se chipa hua hai isiliye mene apne senses ko full potential pe activate kar diya jisse mujhe bhi ab woh aawaj sunayi dene lagi thi lekin ab der ho gayi thi kyunki na mujhe mere antarman me C. Queen ki aawaj sunayi de rahi thi aur na pass khadi lakshmi ki

Jab mene apne pass khadi C. Queen ke ardhaansh ko dekha toh meri aakhe khuli ki khuli rah gayi kyunki jis ladki ke pass us C. Queen ka ardhaansh tha woh koi aur nahi balki wahi ghamandi ladki lakshmi thi

Jise dekh kar me shocked ho gaya tha wahi tensed bhi kyunki abhi woh behose thi aur woh is waqt sabse aasan nishana tha suba ka uper se uska chehra bhi suba ne dekh liya tha

Me :- (JASIEN se) JASIEN is lakshmi ko apne adde pe leke jao me is namoone ko sambhalta hoon

JASIEN :- is kaam ke liye mujhe jane ki jarurat nahi hai ise me apne jadu se bhi kar sakta hoon

Me :- me bhi ye baat maanta hoon lekin ab thoda devil ko bhi khel lene do

Mere itna bolte hi JASIEN mere sharir se utar gaya aur turant lakshmi ko leke gayab ho gaya Aur wahi JASIEN ke mere sharir se jate hi turnt mere sharir pe DEVIL ne kabu kar liya ab me aur suba dono ek dusre ke aamne saamne the

Suba :- toh mujhe laga hi tha ki tumhare shaktiyan us C. Queen tak seemit nahi hai

Me :- mere shaktiyon ko chod ab tere pranon ki chinta kar asur us din tere sathi ki bali di thi aaj teri baari hai

Suba :- acha pahle inse toh nipat lo bache phir mujhe maarne ke khwaab dekhna

Itna bolke usne apne dono hathon ko jod kar tezi se alag kiya jisse waha mare hue sare asur aur daityon ke saath waha aur bhi matra me asur aane lage jinhe dekh kar me pahle toh tention me aa gaya lekin jald hi mere face pe smile aa gayi jise dekh suba shocked ho gaya aur phir mene bhi usi ke tarah apne dono hathon ko jod kar tezi se alag kiye jisse ab waha jitne asur aur daitya the unse do guna matra me DEVIL ke gulam the aur sabse aage tha devil ka bharosemand aur un gulamon ka leader THE REAPER

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Is waqt meri devil army aur suba ki asur army dono ek dusre ke aamne samne the jaha suba ki asur sena dekhke mere chehre pe shaitaani smile aa gayi thi toh wahi meri devil army aur khaas kar THE REAPER ko dekhke suba ke sath uski asuri sena ki bhi phat ke haath me aa gayi thi ki tabhi mene humla karne ka ishara kiya jisse meri sari army ek saath suba ki aarmy pe tut padi aur dekhte hi dekhte suba ki layi hui sari asuri sena chutkiyon me khatam ho gayi thi aur abhi meri devil army mare hue asur aur daityon ke taje ghosh ka luft uthane lagi thi

Ye sab dekhke jaha suba ke haalat patli ho gayi thi toh ab me chalte hue uske pass aane laga wahi mujhe apne pass aata dekh kar suba piche hatne laga

Suba :- dekho mere pass mat aana mene bahut sare bombs ko pure shahar me fit kiye hai agar tum mere pass aaye toh me abhi unhe fod dunga jisse pure shahar bhar me lashon ka dher lag jayega yaad rakhna

Uski ye dhamki sunke me bas halka sa muskura diya kyunki jin bombs ki woh mujhe dhamki de raha tha unka intezaam kar diya tha jis wajah se me sirf muskurate hue uske pass jane laga jisse woh aur bhi jyada dar raha tha

Suba :- dekho mere ek ishare me tumhare is sahar pe kaala saya cha jayega sare bombs ek saath blast ho jayenge soch lo

Me :- tera boss kaha hai

Suba :- me agar mar bhi jau toh bhi tumhe nahi bataunga

Me :- thik hai toh marne ke liye taiyar ho jao

Mere itna bolte hi mere pure sharir se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jise dekh kar suba ki aur jyada fatne lagi

Suba :- delho jaha ho wahi ruk jao nahi toh me sach me sare bombs ko ek saath fod dunga

Me :- fod de

Suba :- me majak nahi kar raha hoon

Me :- me bhi majak nahi such me bol raha hoon fod de bomb himmat hai toh

Mere itne bolne ke baad usne chutki bajayi lekin kuch nahi hua ye dekhke woh shocked ho gaya

Me :- sare bombs ko me pahle hi apne kabje me le chuka hoon ab kaise bachoge tum chalo ab batao ki tumhara boss kaha hai aaj dono ko bhi ek saath khatam kar dunga

Suba :- bhale hi tumhare pass kuch shaktiya hai lekin phir bhi malik ke saamne tum kamjor ho tum mujhe bhi maar nahi sakte bhale hi aaj tum mujhe maar do lekin aaj se leke agle 1 mahine tak har din diwali manayi jayegi aur tum kuch nahi kar paoge

Me :- jyada sapne dekhna achi baat nahi hai kon bachayega tumhe mujhse aur shayad tumhe nahi pata ki diwali burai pe achai ki jeet ke pratik ke taur pe manayi jati hai aur sach hai ki agle 1 mahine tak har din diwali hogi is 1 mahine me mein tumhare itne salon se banaye burai ke samrajya ka khatma kar dunga

Mene abhi itna bola hi tha ki tabhi mere piche se kisine mujhe khich liya jisse me piche jake gir gaya mujhe khichne wala koi aur nahi balki koi mahakay daitya hi tha jisko shayad suba ne hi bulaya tha mujh par aise humla hota dekh kar THE REAPER aage badhne laga lekin mene use haath dikha kar rok diya aur me khud us daitya ki taraf badhne laga aur jaise hi me uske thoda najdik pahucha waise hi woh phir se mujh par humla karne ke liye mere taraf badhne laga lekin woh mujh tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene apni aakhe band karke apne dharti tatva ko jagrit karne laga jaise hi mene dharti tatv ka istemaal kiya waise hi uske niche kj dharti tutne lagi aur jaldi hi dharti se choti chattane goliyon ki tarah nikalne lagi jisse woh wahi khatam ho gaya tha aur jab mene aakhe kholi toh mere saamne se suba gayab ho gaya tha aur ab waha kuch bhi nahi bacha tha kyunki meri devil sena ne pahle hi sare asuron aur daityon ko khakar khatam kar diya tha toh ab mera bhi waha rukna bekaar tha toh me waha se nikal gaya aur pahuch gaya usi jagah jaha par JASIEN lakshmi ko leke gaya tha

Jab me waha pahucha toh dekha ki waha pe lakshmi abhi tak behose padi hui thi jaise hi ne waha pahucha toh turant JASIEN mere saamne aa gaya

JASIEN :- aaka lakshmi ko ab tak hosh nahi aaya hai mene sabhi healing magics ka istemaal kar liya hai

Me :- thik hai jaroor C. Queen ko iska ilaaj pata hoga

Itna bolke me wahj baith kar dhyaan lagane laga aur jald hi me apne antarman me pahuch gaya lekin waha bhi mere andar jo C. Queen maujood thi woh bhi behose thi toh mene bhi jyada der na karte hue tri netra ko jagrit kar diya aur usse nikalti hui urja ko ab mene C. Queen me pass karna start kar diya jisse woh dheere dheere udne lagi aur jald hi tri netra ne use scan kar ke hosh me lane ka tarika mujhe bata diya jo ki jan kar mujhe shocked laga kyunki use thik karne ke liye dono hisson ko ek karna tha

Angel :- ab kya karoge raj ya toh ye dono hisson ko hume humesha ke liye khona hoga jiske saath us ladki lakshmi ki jaan chali jayegi ya fir doni hisson ko ek karna hoga

Devil :- isme konsi badi baat hai mere shaktiyon ke madad se raj aaram se us ladki ke andar ki sari shaktiya sokh sakta hai

Jaha sab log isi tarah apne apne sujhav de rahe the toh me alag hi soch me tha

Me :- nahi in shaktiyon ki jarurat lakshmi ko jyada hai suba ne uska chehra dekh liya hai matlab ab woh lakshmi aur uske pariwar par sidha waar kar sakta hai jisse bachne ke liye lakshmi ko shaktiyon ki jaroorat hai mere pass tum sab ki tarah mahan shaktiya maha shaktishali roop jinn dragon bahut kuch hai jisse mujhe kisi se bhi darne ki jarurat nahi hai lekin lakshmi nahi

Angel :- toh tumhara kya faisla hai

Me :- me apne C. Queen ke ardhansh ko lakshmi ke ardhansh se jod dunga aur uski ekatrit shakti ki malkin lakshmi hogi

Devil :- par raj

Me :- ye mera chunaav hai aur ise koi badal nahi sakta

Itna bolke mene apna dhyan tod diya aur phir apne andar se us aadhe mani ko nikal ke use lakshmi ke sharir me daal diya jisse ab lakshmi hawa me udne lagi aur jald hi woh tezi se jamin par gir gayi

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Bahut jabardast update bhai hero ki Devil Sena ne acha sabak sikhaya daitya ko but Reaper ke hote huye Suba bhag gaya kam se kam pakad toh sakta tha jab hero us firse Wale se lad raha tha but pehle bhi usne Mr.Nagetive aur Suba ko Jane Diya aur ab fir se Jane Diya story ko badhane ke liye but aise acha nahi lagta hai jab aapke paas itni Shakti ho aur aap laparwah ho jao
 

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Me :- ye mera chunaav hai aur ise koi badal nahi sakta

Itna bolke mene apna dhyan tod diya aur phir apne andar se us aadhe mani ko nikal ke use lakshmi ke sharir me daal diya jisse ab lakshmi hawa me udne lagi aur jald hi woh tezi se jamin par gir gayi

Wahi dusri taraf

Is waqt suba ek kamre me baitha dar ke maare thar thar kaap raha tha uske aakhon ke saamne wahi scene aa raha tha jab meri realer sena uske asur aur daityon ko maar maar kar kha rahe the wahi jaanta tha ki itne darne ke baad bhi use khudko teleport karne ke liye kitne papad belne pade the

Abhi woh kuch bhi sochne ke kagar par nahi tha ki tabhi uske saamne ek gola aa gaya jo ki screen ke tarah kaam kar rahi thi jisse Mr. Negative uski ye haalat saaf dekh pa raha tha

Mr. Negative :- suba (jor se chillake) SUBA

Jab suba ne Mr. Negative ke chillane ki aawaj suni toh use hosh aaya aur jab usne apne saamne Mr. Negative ko dekha toh uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi

Suba :- malik aap

Mr. Negative :- mene aaj ka yudh dikha aur us ladke ki shaktiyon ne mujhe bhi soch me daal diya hai isiliye philhaal us ladke se door raho aur apna nishana us ladki ko banao uska asli chehra hume pata hai aur use dekh kar lag bhi nahi raha tha ki woh un shaktiyon ke layak bhi hai jo use mili hai woh humara aasan nishana hai

Suba :- aur woh ladka

Mr. Negative :- uski chinta mat karo uske liye me jald hi aa raha hoon mahamahim khood humare saath hai use rokne ka koi na koi tarika jaroor milega aur baad us ladke ki sari shaktiya humari hongi bas jab tak me na aau tab tak ati aavashyak hone par hi apni shaktiyon ka istemaal karna nahi toh tumhari shaktiyon se nikalne wali urja se tumhe koi bhi aasani se dhoondh sakta hai

Itna bolke woh joro se hasne laga aur uske baad suba bhi kuch sochne laga abhi usne soch hi liya tha ki woh abhi kewal lakshmi pe hi focused rahega lekin iske liye woh apni shaktiya use nahi karega

Wahi dusri taraf

Jaise hi lakshmi jamin pe giri toh us girne ke jhatke se use hosh aa gaya aur woh jaise hi hosh me aane lagi mene turant JASIEN ka roop le liya

Lakshmi :- me kaha hoon

Me :- tum surakshit ho

Lakshmi :- kon ho tum aur hum dono toh us godawn me the yaha kaise aur woh asur aur daityon ka kya hua

Me :- me JASIEN hoon aur is waqt tum apne dimag par jyada tanav mat dalo sab under control hai tum bhi surakshit ho us alaukik dhwani se tumhari shaktiya yani C. Queen apne ant tak pahuch gayi thi jise bachane ka ek hi upaay tha

Lakshmi :- kya

Me :- dono hisson ko ek karna wahi eklauta upaay tha tumhe aur C. Queen ko bachane ka

Lakshmi :- matlab tumne mere andar se shakti nikal li tumhari itni himmat ye galat hai tumne..

Lakshmi bina ruke kuch bhi bole ja rahi thi jisse ab me irritate ho gaya tha isiliye mene wahi pe moujood ek ped ko jamin se ukhaad kar use lakshami par pheck diya jisse lakshmi ko kuch nahi hua par woh ped lakshmi se takrakar 2 hisson me bat gaya

Me :- agar mene tumse shaktiya chini hoti toh is ped ke badle tumhare 2 tukade hote

Lakshmi jo is action ko dekhke pahle hi dar gayi thi woh is waqt kabhi mujhe toh kabhi apne aap ko ghur ke dekh rahi thi

Lakshmi :- yahi baat shanti se bhi bol sakte the

Me :- tum bolne kaha deti ho ab meri baat dhyan se suno tumhare pass C. Queen ki puri shakti hai iska matlab ye nahi ki tum sarva shaktishali ban gayi ho ab tumhari shaktiyon ke sath jimmedariya bhi badh gayi ho apne ghamand ko tyag do asuron ne tumhara chehra dekh liya hai jis wajah se woh tum par sidha waar kar sakte hai isiliye abhi bhi agar tumne apna ghamand nahi choda toh iska parinaam tumhare sath sath tumhare pariwar ko bhi bhugatna hoga apni shaktiyon ko kabu karo nahi tumhe harana har kisi ke liye aasan hoga samjhi

Mere is pravachan ke baad toh jaise lakshmi kisi gahri soch me chali gayi jaise ki meri kahi baat ko imagine kar rahi ho jise dekh kar mene apna right hand uske sar pe rakh ke use sula diya aur use uske kamre me teleport kar diya

Abhi lakshmi ko teleport karke me wahi usi jagah dhyan lagane laga kyunki ab mujhe aur kuch jaroori chijon pe bhi dhyan dena tha isliye me dhyan laga kar apne antarman me pahuch gaya me jaise hi apne antarman me pahucha toh waha mere sare roop mere pass aa gaye

Me :- mene ek faisla kiya hai

Devil :- ab kya faisla kiya hai tumne

Me :- ab haalat pahle se alag hai ab meri asli pariksha shuru ho gayi hai pahle mera mukabla kewal kuch bure kaam karne wale mamooli insanon se hota tha lekin ab isme asur aur daityon ne bhi bhag lena shuru kar diya hai ab baare hai me apni seemaon ko janu apni shaktiyon ko pahchanu aur apni jimmedariyon ko nibhau

Angel :- me tumse sahmat hoon raj ab se mukabla aur bhi kathin hoga lekin tum kahna kya chahte ho

Me :- me apni sari shaktiyon ko khud se jodna chahta hoon me un par purn niyantran chahta hu me ab apni sarva shakti ko apnana chahta hoon

Meri baat sun kar jaha sab shocked the toh wahi angel aur devil ek dusre ko dekh kar muskura rahe the jaise ki mere is faisle ke baare me unhe pata ho

Devil :- me tumse sahmat hoon raj ab woh samay aa gaya hai jab tum apni takato ko apnao

Angel :- me ANGEL apne dhaarak RAJVEER ko aagya deta hoon ki woh mere sabhi shaktiyon ko apna sakte hai woh ab ek ANGEL ke tarah ji sakte hai

Angel ke itne bolte hi woh ek urja gole me badal gaya aur aake sidha mere aas paas ghumne laga

Angel ke baad sadhu, tantrik, king, warrior, aur devil sab bhi angel ki tarah hi urja gole me badal gaye aur angel wale gole me jakar sama gaye jiske baad woh gola antarman se gayab ho gaya ab meri baari thi

Me :- ME THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH APNI SABHI SHAKTIYON KO AADESH DETA HOON KI WOH AB PURI TARIKE SE MUJHME SAMA JAYE AUR MUJHE KHUD PAR PURA NIYAN TRAN PRADAN KARE

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Is waqt me apne kamre me tha aur abhi lakshmi ke baare me hi soch raha tha ki kaise mujhe apni shaktiya pane ke liye mehanat karni padi thi aur lakshmi jaisi ghamand me chur ho gayi ladki ko C. Queen jaisi mahan shakti mili woh bhi bina koi saadhna kiye bina kisi mehanat ke abhi me ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere room ke darwaje pe knock hua jab maine door khol ke dekha toh door pe nanaji khade the

Me :- aaiye nanaji andar aaiye

Nanaji :- raj so gaye the kya tum

Me :- nahi nanaji me bas kuch soch raha tha aap bataiye ki is waqt achanak kaise aana hua

Nanaji :- me toh bas tumse milne aaya tha abhi kal tum chale jaoge toh ye ghar phir se suna ho jayega

Me :- kya nanaji aap toh emotional dialogue maarne lage

Nanaji :- muskurate hue) haan jab tak tum yaha nahi aa rahe the tab tak is sunepan ko me apne karmon ki saja maan ke bhugatta tha lekin jab se tumne is sunepan ko bhara hai tab se jaise mere andar ki sahan shakti khatam ho gayi hai

Me :- are aap toh aise bol rahe ho ki me wapas aaunga hi nahi duniya ka koi bhi bacha permenant toh apne nana nani ke pass nahi rahta use apne pariwar ke prati jimmedariyon ko bhi toh nibhana hota hai aur waise bhi ab C. Chacha ki shaadi ka samay najdik aa gaya hai toh meri zaroorat waha jyada hai aur waiae bhi ab toh me aata rahunga aapne mujhe yaha ke uttaradhikari ke jimmedariyon ke liye chuna hai use me ache se pura karunga

Nana ji :- thik hai ab tum aaram karo is jeevan me tumhe aur bahut se jimmedariyon ka paalan karna hai

Me :- theek hai

Mere itna bolne ke baad me nanaji apne kamre me xhale gaye phir me bhi apne kamre ka darwaja band kar ke dhyan lagana shuru kiya aur apni sabhi shaktiyon ko apne sharir me mehsoos karne laga unhe pahchanne laga aise hi kab subah ho gayi pata bhi nahi chala phir uske baad me fresh hoke taiyar ho gaya aur niche aa gaya jaha par baki sabhi bhi taiyar khade the aaj hum wapis ja rahe the is baat se nana aur unka pariwar thoda sad tha lekin dada ji ne sab sambhal liya

Phir hum waha se nikal gaye aur pahuch gaye apne ghar shergarh jaha jakar sabse pahle dadaji ne mere yuvraj pad ki official announcement kar di thi isiliye ab jaha sab mujhe chote malik karke pukaar rahe the wahi ab woh mujhe yuvraj ke naam se bulane lage jiske baad hum apne haweli aa gaye jaha aane ke baad sabhi apne kamron me jake aaram karne lage aur me chal pada gaon ghumne

Me sabse pahle sakshi se milna chahta tha lekin baad me mujhe pata chala ki uski saas ki aakhri saase chal rahi thi aur unki antim ichha thi isiliye shadi jaldbaji me kar di gayi thi jise sunke me sad ho gaya lekin ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha ye soch kar me apne kheton ke taraf chal pada jaha mujhe shiva (bhima kaka ka rishtedaar) bhi dikha jo humare gair hazri me kheton ka kaam dekh raha tha

Phir me thodi der khet ghumne ke baad me waha se mira ma ke khet ki or nikal gaya aur jab me waha pahucha toh waha pe tala laga hua tha jiske baad mene shiva se is baare me baat ki toh pata chala unke bache unhe leke shahar shift ho gaye hai

Phir kya me wahi mira ma ke khet me baith kar dhyan lagane laga kyunki ab in sabse jaroori tha woh plan jo suba ne banaya tha har din diwali ka me sabse pahle suba ko tri netra ke madad se dhoondhne laga jisse mujhe uske location ke baare me pata chal gaya

Lekin phir mene socha ki iske pap ke ghade ko pahle bharne dete hai ye soch kar me pure sahar ko scan karne laga aur sare shahr me jaha bhi mujhe RDX ke traces dikhte me un sabhi locations ki list banane laga

Ab sare tasks ki list taiyar thi mera plan taiyar tha ab bas use execute karna tha aur plan ye tha ki ab bas ek hi plan hai ATTACK

Wahi dusri taraf

Is waqt lakshmi apne kamre ke bed par aaram se soi hui thi toh uski nind haram karne uski maa gayi aur jab lakshmi uthi toh achana kal raat ka sare scenes uske dimag me kisi movie ki tarah chalne lage jinhe dekh kar woh achanak hosh me aa gayi aur sabse pahli nazar uski uske saamne lage mirror me gayi jaha C. Queen use hi dekh rahi thi

Lakshmi :- (C. Queen se) kya hua aise kya ghur rahi ho

C. Queen :- kuch nahi dekh rahibthi ki aapme aisa kya hai jo us aadhe hisse ne aapko chuna tha

Lakshmi :- kya bol rahi ho tum aaj se pahle toh tumne aise baat nahi ki thi tumne

C. Queen :- me C. Queen hoon mahan carnage prajati ki queen mere aadhe hisse ke tarah ab me bhi aapke sath jud gayi hu lekin puri tarike se nahi

C. Queen ke itna bolne ke baad lakshmi ke dimag ki light jali aur woh shocked ho gayi

Lakshmi :- matlab woh JASIEN such bol raha tha ki usne dono hisson ko jod kar mere andar daal diye hai lekin tum aise kyun bol rahi ho ki abhi puri tarike se nahi judi ho

C. Queen :- jab tak mere dhaarak ka aadesh na ho tab tak main usse puri tarah se nahi jud sakti

Lakshmi :- thik hai toh me tumhe order deti hoon apne aadhe se jud kar mere sharir me sama jao

C. Queen :- haa bachon ka khel hai jud jao aur sama jao sabse pahle tumhe dhyaan lagana hoga jisse tum apni shaktiyon ko mahsus karke apni puri ekagrata se mujhe apne andar samane ki aagya de sakogi aur agar tum ye sab karne baad meri shaktiyon ka taapmaan sah gayi toh tum mujhe aur mere aadhe hisse ko jodne me safal hogi

Lakshmi :- lekin mujhe dhyan lagana nahi aata mene ab tak kabhi dhyan nahi lagaya

C. Queen :- theek hai me tumhe sikha dungi tumne kabhi yoga ya meditation kia hai

Lakshmi :- haan boxing training ke waqt khud ke Physical aur mental health ko balance karne ke liye hume yoga aur meditation sikhaya tha

C. Queen :- chalo achha hai ab me jaise bolu waise karna

Lakshmi thik hai

Itna bolne ke baad shuru ho gayi lakshmi ki training

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Chalo acha hai hero apne gaon wapas aa gaya aur Laxmi bhi apni dono shaktiyo ko ek karne ke liye mehnat kar Rahi hai aur hero ne bhi Suba aur RDX ko dhoondh liya hai
 

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Ab lakshmi ki training ke sath sath use C. Queen ki sari shaktiyon ko kabu karna unka upayog karna iski bhi training karai ja rahi thi saath me hi C. Queen ka ek hissa mere andar samaya hua tha jisse meri kuch urja bhi usne sokh li thi jisse ki ab lakshmi ke sath hi me c. Queen ki urja bhi badh gayi thi

Toh wahi dusri taraf suba ne apne sare sathiyon se (terrorists and dons) kah kar purw sahar me hadkamp machane ka faisla kar liya tha jaise ki terrorist attack bomb blast etc.

Toh wahi ab me bhi taiyar tha action ke liye agar me chahta toh sare terrorist ko ek second me hi khatam kar deta lekin usme maja kaha aata isiliye mene ab puri taiyari kar li thi attack ki aur aaj raat se mera mission bhi start hone wala tha

Aise hi har jagah se sare terrorists and dons ke aadon ko khatam karte hue ek mahina kaise beet gaya pata bhi nahi chala is 1 mahine me bahut kuch ho gaya tha me khud ke hi shaktiyon ke aise aise raj jaan gaya tha jinse me ab tak anjaan tha me jise ab tak shaktiyin ka samundar samajh raha tha woh asal me pure bramhand ke barabar tha ye jaan kar ab mamooli insanon se n8patne ke liye shaktiyon ka use karna mujhe insult sa lagne laga tha isliye ab me kisi bhi terrorist ya gunde ke liye apni shaktiya use nahi karta tha

Toh wahi is ek mahine me jaise mera timetable fix ho gaya tha subah uthkar dhyan lagakar apni hi shaktiyon ko alag alag tarike se research karna phir kuch der kheton bagichon ka kaam dekhna phir ab didi ke sath sex ka khel toh jaise aam baat ho gayi thi har din jitna newly married couple bhi sex nahi karte honge utna hum dono saath me rahkar karte

Is beech mene ek baat jaroor noticed ki thi ki didi humesha mujh se kuch kahna chahti thi lekin kuch soch ke woh shant rah jati aur mene bhi is par jyada jor nahi diya

Toh wahi ab meri aur lakshmi ki baate bhi mobile pe massage ke dwara har roj hi ho jaya karti lekin abhi tak mene mere JASIEN wale roop ke baare me use kuch nahi bataya tha toh wahi raat me main JASIEN wale roop me aakar chal padta sahar me safai karne jaha par me sirf apni talwaron ka hi use karta aur sabko khatam kar ke wapas aa jata

Toh wahi suba ne bhi in dino bahut baar lakshmi aur uske pariwar ko maarne ka try kiya tha lekin har baar lakshmi C. Queen ban kar uske plan ko choupat kar deti aur agae woh kabhi phas jati toh me turant JASIEN ke roop me uski madad karne pahuch jata

Jisse ab me mere insani roop me lakshmi ka dost ban kar usse chating karta toh wahi JASIEN wale roop me uska sathi ban kar uski madad karta aur woh bhi kabhi kabhi raat me mere saath mission saaf safai me hath batane aa jati

Isi wajah se ab hum dono ki bonding bhi achi banane lagi thi chahe woh raj-lakshmi ki ho ya JASIEN-C. QUEEN ki lakshmi ka ghamnad bhi ab khatam ho gaya tha lekin apni shaktiyon ka ahankar abhi bhi usko tha jo ki achi baat bhi thi kyoki woh ahankar hi use aur taakatwar bana raha tha

Toh wahi suba bhi ab tak bahut se mayavi asur aur daityon ki sena ka aavhan kar chuka tha jinki madad se woh mujhe aur lakshmi ko harane ke sapne dekh raha tha lekin ye uske bas ki baat nahi thi isiliye toh itni sena ikattha karne ke baad bhi woh sidha humla karne ki himmat nahi juta pa raha tha

Wahi ab tak mene aur lakshmi ne milkar ab tak bahut se bure logon ko maut ke ghat utar diya tha jaha ke sabhi sabuton ka safaya JASIEN aaram se kar deta toh lashon ka intezaam THE REAPER aur uski sena kar dete

Aise hi sab bilkul sahi chal raha tha ki aaya woh samay jidhar se ab sahi maynon me meri pariksha chalu hone wali thi aur uske liye bache the kewal 24 ghante

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Aise hi sab bilkul sahi chal raha tha ki aaya woh samay jidhar se ab sahi maynon me meri pariksha chalu hone wali thi aur uske liye bache the kewal 24 ghante

At night (start the timer for 24 hours)

At lakshmi's house

Is waqt sabhi dining hall me baith kar deenar kar rahe the woh sab log lakshmi ke andar aaye badlavin se bahut khush the uske ghamand aur gusse ke kam hone se sabhi shocked aur khush dono the jisse sab lakshmi ki taarif kar rahe the toh aise hi kuch der tak unki baate hoti rahi phir sab sone chale gaye aur lakshmi bhi apne kamre me chali gayi uske kamre me jate hi uske body C. Queen ka armour aa gaya

C. Queen :- mujhe asuron ki gandh aa rahi hai aur saath me hi RDX ki bhi

Lakshmi :- ye asur 1 din bhi shanti se jine nahi denge chalo inse bhi nipat lenge

Itne bolke usne apni khidki se niche jump laga di aur jaise hi woh land hui toh turant hi uske pairon ke niche ek portal open ho gaya jisse woh sidha kisi alag hi jagah pe teleport ho gayi abhi woh apne aas pass ki jagah ko explore kar hi rahi thi ki tabhi uske saamne 3 daitya aur unke saath 30 asur aa gaye

Daitya 1 :- aao C. Queen hum tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the ab kaha bach ke jaogi

Lakshmi :- intezaar toh me tum sabka kar rahi thi aaj tum mese koi nahi bachega

Daitya 2 :- ye baat toh hume pata hai ki aaj tumhare hathon hum mare jayenge lekin hum akele nahi honge

Daitya 3 :- humne tumhare ghar ke aas pass me itna RDX feet kiya hai ki agle 2 mint me tumhara pura ka pura ilake ka namonishan gayab ko jayega

Lakshmi :- Don't you dare

Lakshmi ne itna bolte hi apne magic se ek talwar create kar di aur usse sabhi asuron ko maarne lagi

Dairtya 1 :- 30 seconds khatam ho gaye hain jaldi karo lakshmi

Unki baate lakshmi ko aur gussa dilane ka kaam kar rahe thi jisse uske attacks aur bhi tez aur powerful ho gaye

Daitya 2 :- 1 mint khatam ho gaya lakshmi abhi bhi tumne sirf 25 asuron ko mara hai abhi 5 asur aur hum teen baki hai

Daitya 2 ki baat sun kar achanak se lakshmi ne apne talwaar jaise hi ek talwaar aur create kar di aur ab uske dono hathon me talware thi jisse usne ek hi jhatke me baki 5chon ki bhi gardan kaat di thi

Daitya 1 :- are me bhool hi gaya kuch aur mehmaan is samaroh me shaamil hona chahte hai

Itna bol ke usne apna right hand ko uper utha diya jisse uske hath se turant hi kali rays nikali aur jaha pahle 30 asuron ki lashe thi wahi ab waha 90 jinda asur the

Daitya 1 :- kya hua lakshmi ab tumhare pass kewal 50 seconds baki hai apne pariwar ko bachane ke liye

Jab lakshmi ne saamne khadi asuri sena ko dekha aur daitya 1 ki baat suni toh jaise uske pairo ke niche se jamin hi khisak gayi woh usi jagah ashay manushya ki tarah wahi baith gayi aur apni aakhe band karke bhagwan se prathna karne lagi ho wahi lakshmi ko aise ashay dekhke woh sare asur aur daitya has rahe the

Wahi dusri taraf kuch der pahle

Me abhi apne room me baithe hue aage ki planning kar raha tha ki tabhi mere senses ne kuch gadbad mahsoos ki jiske turant baad mene apne tri netra ko jagrit karke us gadbad ke strot ko dhoondhna shuru kar diya toh mujhe lakshmi ke ghar ki tasver dikhne lagi aur jab mene apne dimag par aur jor lagaya toh mujhe uske ghar ke pass me hi fit kiye hue RDX ka bhi pata gaya

Jisse mene turant hi JASIEN ka roop dharan karke lakshmi ke ghar ki taraf chal pada jaha jate hi mene sabse pahle mene us sabhi RDX ko apne kabje me le liya aur phir dhyan lagakar mene lakshami ki location ko bhi pata kar liya aur waha teleport ho gaya jaise hi me us jagah pahucha toh waha ka nazara dekhke toh dimag hi sann rah gaya waha par lakshmi 3 daityon se ladh rahi thi toh wahi C. Queen ki tarah hi dekhne wale kuch 300 ke aas pass log waha asuron ki sena se ladh rahe the

Abhi me ye sab dekh raha tha ki tabhi mera dhyan lakshmi ki taraf gaya jo ki 2 daityon se ek saath ladhne me busy thi toh wahi isi baat ka fayda uthake ek daitya ne lakshmi par piche se waar karne wala tha ki tabhi me bich me kud gaya

Me :- ek toh 3 daitya milke 1 se ladh rahe ho aur uske baad piche se waar bhi kar rahe ho kitne kayar ho tum log

Jab un daityon ne mujhe dekha toh unki aakhon me dar dikh raha tha lekin phir bhi unhone waar karna roka nahi toh wahi jab lakshmi ne mujhe dekha toh uske chehre pe muskaan si cha gayi

Lakshmi (taunt ke style me) :- aaj late ho gaya tumhe

Me :- ha kay kare tum toh yaha party karne me busy ho waha uper tumhare pariwar ko bachane me thoda let ho gaya

Jab lakshmi ne apne pariwar ke thik hone ke baare me suna toh aise laga jaise uske sar se bada tention nikal gaya ho

Inhi sab baton ke bich me hum dono ne milke un teeno daityon ko khatam kar diya tha

Me :- waise ye naye mehmaan kon hai

Lakshmi :- ye meri sena hai Carnage army hai jab me himmat haar ke bhagwan se prathana kar rahi thi tab ye jamin ke andar se bahar nikale

Me :- acha matlab ab tum is duniya pe raj karne me jyada samay nahi lagaogi correct

Lakshmi :- no agar purani lakshmi hoti toh jaroor yahi karti lekin is ek mahine me tumhare sath in asur daityon se aur saath me bure logon se ladte hue me itna toh samajh gayi ki jitni jyada shakti shaali hum hai usse kai jyada badi jimmedari hai hum par

Me :- good chalo ab tum apni sena se baate karo me chalta hoon

Itna bolke me waha teleport ho gaya aur apne room me pahuch gaya jaise hi me apne room me pahucha toh turant hi mere phone ki ringtone baji jise dekh kar mere hotho per muskaan si cha gayi

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Chalo hero ne Laxmi ki family ko bhi bacha liya aur Laxmi apni jimmedari bhi samajh gayi
 

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Update 194 (HAPPY ENDING)

Ab tak aapne dekha ki kaise raj ne us shetaan ko maarne ke liye apne urja ka aakhiri katra tak khatam kar diya aur us shetaan ke marne ke baad me jo uske aatma ek bhag usne apne pass rakha tha woh bhi khatam ho gaya aur raj ke marne ke baad SHESHNAG uske dead body ko leke patal lok le aaye jaha sabhi uske apne uska Intezaar kar rahe the

Ab aage

Is waqt sabhi patal lok me khade ho kar mera intezaar kar rahe the sabhi asuron aur rakshason ko toh mene pahle hi maar diya tha jab sako aasman me ek maha bhayanak naag aate dekha toh sab dar ke mare uspe aakraman karne ke liye taiyar ho gaye lekin tabhi naag raj bhadrak ne us naag ko pahchaan liya aur sabko rok diya

Nagraj :- aisa mat karna unpe waar karna matlab mrutyu ko aamantran dena woh swayam SHESHNAG hai

Jab sabne nagraj ki baat suni toh sabhi apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur jitne bhi naag apne manushya roop me the woh punha naag roop dharan kar chuke the toh wahi jaise hi SHESHNAG niche utre toh woh apne insani roop me aa gaye aur me unke godh me tha mujhe behose dekh kar sabhi shocked ho gaye the jiske baad unhone mujhe jamin pe lita diya jaise hi unhone mujhe jamin pe litaya toh waise hi lakshmi aur baki sare senapati mere pass aa gaye

Lakshmi :- (SHESHNAG se) kya hua hau raj ko woh behose kyu hai aur woh shaitaan kaha hai

SHESHNAG :- us shetaan ko raj ne maut ke ghat utar diya woh yudh itna ghamasan tha ki pure bramhand ka vinash ho gaya tha raj ko ye baat pata thi isiliye usne aise bramhand ka chunav kia tha jisme koi bhi jeev na ho

Lakshmi :- woh sab thik hai lekin raj ko hua kya hai

SHESHNAG :- pure sansar ko shetaan ke prakop se mukt karne ke liye RAJ EK VEER YODHA KE TARAH VEERGATI KO PRAPT HO GAYA

SHESHNAG ke muh se itna sun kar sabhi shocked ho gaye the ye sunne ke baad toh lakshmi ke aasu jinhe woh kab se roke rakhi thi woh bhi uske aakhon se nikal ke bahne lage aur kewal lakshmi hi nahi toh waha maujood sabke aakhon se aasu fut rahe the

Waha par jab sabhi ro rahe the toh wahi dusri taraf

Jab meri aakhe khuli toh is waqt me usi andhere kamre me tha jaha pichle Update me tha aur us kamre ko dekh kar mere chehre pe muskaan si aa gayi thi kyunki ab mujhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga aur hua bhi waise jab us kamre ki diwar Hati toh saamne mera pariwaar maujood tha lekin abhi bhi unke chehre par khushi mujhe dikh nahi rahi thi

Dadaji :- raj mene kaha tha ki ye sahi samay nahi hai phir bhi tumne chahkar bhi apne pranon ko bachne ka prayas nahi kia

Me :- jeevit rahkar kya karta aap sabke bina kya hoon me

Mom :- tum kya ho ye toh humne tumhe pichli baar hi bata diya tha aur jeevit rahkar kya karte matlab kya tumhare nana nani woh tumhara pariwar nahi hai unke prati tumhari jimmedari nahi hai aur lakshmi ka kya usne tumhare saath jeevan bitane ke liye is yudh me bhag liya tha aur tum use hi chod kar aagaye

Me :- lekin me thak gaya hoon aur ab me aaram karna chata hoon

Dadiji :- swarthi mat bano raj apne pariwar aur pyar karne walon ko yu tadpana sahi nahi hota aur rahi baat thakne ki toh jeevam me utar chadhav aate rahenge lekin agar tum unse dar ke aise hi piche hatte rahe toh is jeevan ka kya upayog

Me (mayusi se) :- thik hai me taiyar hu

Meri baat sunkar dadi mere pass aayi aur phir se mere sar ko god me rakh kar sahlane lagi

To wahi dusri taraf patal lok me

Abhi waha par sabhi mere jane ka dukh mana rahe the ki tabhi mera sharir chamakne laga jisse waha par tez prakash fail gaya aur koi kuch samajh pata usse pahle hi mere sharir me maujood sapt chakra aur kundalini shakti jagrit ho gayi thi jisse mere sharir me atyadhik tapman ka anubhav hone laga tha aur tabhi mere sharir se nikalta prakash kam ho gaya aur jaise hi sabne mujhe dekha toh mere sharir ke sare ghav bhar gaye the abhi koi kuch samajh pata ki tabhi me karahte hue uth kar baith gaya

Me :- ahhh sir fat raha hai mera

Mujhe uthta dekh kar lakshmi aake turant mere gale lag gayi aur subakne lagi toh mene bhi use bahon me bhar liya uske baad me sabse mila phir bari thi mere AAKHRI CHUNAAV ki

Kaal :- toh raj tumne apni sabhi shaktiyon ko toh khi diya ab kya karoge

Me :- kaha kaal abhi mere 5 shaktiya shesh hai aur baat rahi aage ki toh aayenge hum phir se jab jarurat hogi prabhu ka aashirwaad aur aagya hogi

Kaal :- konsi panch shaktiya raj

1 JASIEN / REAPER

2 aacharya ka gyan

3 aapke uttaradhikari ki taakate yani sapt chakr aur panch tatva

4 VIJAYI DHANUSH aur astron ka gyan

5 aur sabse important aap sabka pyaar aur mere APNE PYAARE RISHTE

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