Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

[RED Ashoka]

STATUS : Update 5 Posted --- 'I will show you what is the real Thriller Suspense'

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Update 3 – Devghar Ki Subah



Scene : Subah ka waqt, Devghar. Suraj ki pehli kirne gaon ke purane khandar jaise makano par gir rahi hai. Hawa thodi thandi hai, lekin ek ajeeb si sannata bhi chhaya hua hai.



Arjun ki aankh khuli toh usne dekha, ghar ke andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi . Kal raat jo bhi dekha, uska ek ajeeb asar uske dil par chhoda gaya tha.



Usne apne kamre se bahar kadam rakha. Aangan me uski maa, Rajeshwari Devi, Tulsi ke paudhe ke saamne deepak jala rahi thi. Hawa me kapoor aur ghee ki sugandh thi, lekin uske chehre par ek ajeeb si chinta bhi dikh rahi thi.





Rajeswari ne aankhen band karke kuch mantras padhe, lekin jaise hi Arjun paas gaya, uski awaaz thodi dagmagane lagi.


Arjun (halki hasi ke saath): "Maa, aaj itni subah subah itna dhyan kyun?"


Rajeswari Devi ne ek pal ke liye Arjun ki taraf dekha, phir dheere se boli, "Tulsi maa sab dukhon ko shanti deti hain, beta. Aur kuch dukh hamesha insaan ke peeche pade rehte hain..."


Arjun ko yeh jawab samajh nahi aaya, lekin usne zyada socha nahi.


Ghar Me Chhoti (sia) Aur Shyamlal (Bade papa / tauji) Ka Vyavhaar..
Jaise hi Arjun ne aangan se bahar kadam rakha, uski behan Chhoti haste hue aayi.

Chhoti (muskurate hue): "Bhai, tujhe Devghar ki subah kaisi lagi? Ya ab bhi tujhe sirf shahar ka glamour pasand hai?"

Arjun (halki hasi ke saath): "Pehli subah hai, aur mahol kaafi shaant lag raha hai…"


Tabhi Bade Papa Shyamlal waha aaye. Unke chehre par ek ajeeb si gambheerta thi.

Shyamlal (thande lekin gehre shabdon me): "Shaanti dikh rahi hai, par yeh asli shaanti nahi hai, Arjun. Yahaan har cheez ke peeche ek kahani chhupi hai."



Arjun ne unke shabdon me ek ajeeb si taqat mehsoos ki.

Gaon Ke Naye Log Aur Ajeeb Baatein.


Aangan me thodi der baad gaon ke kuch purane log aaye – Pandit Deenanath, Bhola Kaka aur Chagan.


Pandit Deenanath ne Arjun ko dekhkar ek pal ke liye ruk gaye.

Pandit Deenanath (gambhir awaaz me): "Tu laut aaya, Arjun... Par tu jaanta hai na, Devghar kisi ko bina wajah nahi bulata?"

Arjun ne unki aankhon me dekha – ek ajeeb sa rahasya tha jo wo kehna chah rahe the.

Bhola Kaka (halki si muskurahat ke saath): "Arre pandit ji, yeh abhi shahar ka ladka hai, isko kya pata yahaan ki purani baatein!"
Par Arjun ko ehsaas ho raha tha ki sab kuch itna asaan nahi hai.

Tabhi ek aur ajeeb cheez hui – mandir ki

ghantiyan ekdum zor se bajne lagi, bina kisi hawa ke. Shanti Devi ne palat kar dekha, unki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chinta dikh rahi thi.

Arjun ne mehsoos kiya, Devghar ke har kone me ek rahasya chhupa hai… aur wo in sabme ghus chuka hai.



To Be Continued...

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Update 2 : Home



Arjun ne tez kadam badhaye. Wo ab bhi uss ajeeb cheez ke baare mein soch raha tha jo usne jungle ke pass dekha tha.


Jaise hi wo apne ghar ke darwaje tak pahucha, uska dil tez dhadak raha tha. Darwaza halke dhakke se khula—andar andhera tha, sirf ek purani diya bati ka halka sa ujala poore aangan mein fail raha tha.





Beta, tu aa gaya?"

Uski maa ka pyaar bhara lekin halki thaki hua aawaz sunai di. Wo rasoi mein thi

lakdi ke chulhe par roti sek rahi thi.



Arjun ne haan mein sir hilaya aur andar chala gaya. Uski chhoti behan, Sia, ek kone mein baithi hui thi, lakdi ke takhte par soojh-bhoojh se ek purani kitaab padhti hui.



"Aaj der ho gayi?" Bhadranath dadaji, jo ek moode se uthkar Arjun ki taraf dekha, unki aankhon mein ek gehri soojh thi.



"Haan dadaji… raat thodi ajeeb thi." Arjun ne dheere se kaha, phir ek pal rukkar bola, "Jungle ke paas ek ajeeb sa mahsoos hua. Jaise koi mujhe dekh raha ho."



Ek dam se maa ka haath ruk gaya, unhone ek pal ke liye Arjun ko dekha, phir chup chaap roti palatne lagi.

Dadaji ne geheri saans bhari. "Devghar ki raat kabhi mamooli nahi hoti, beta."



Sia ne apni kitaab se nazar uthai. "Bhaiya, kya wahan koi bhoot tha?"



Arjun hansa, lekin uski hansi mein ek bechaini thi. "Pata nahi, lekin jo bhi tha, wo normal nahi tha."



Uski maa ne aage badhkar uske haath par haath rakha. "Beta, raat ke waqt jungle ke paas mat jaana." Unki aawaz mein ek ajeeb si fikr thi.



Arjun ne sir hilaaya, lekin andar se uska mann ab aur zyada jaan'ne ko bechain ho gaya tha.

Ghar ke andar sab so chuke the, par Arjun ki aankhein neend se door thi. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si sararahat thi, jaise koi deewar ke us paar se use dekh raha ho.

Tabhi ek halki si awaz aayi—darwaze ki chaarpai ke paas se. Dheere dheere, kadam uthate hue, Arjun ne darwaza khola...



Bahar ek vishal bargad ka ped tha, jismein hawa ke jhoke se patte sarsara rahe the. Lekin ek patta bhi zameen par nahi gir raha tha! Arjun ne dhyan diya, to dekha ki ped ke neeche mitti gili ho rahi thi—jaise abhi-abhi

koi wahan aaya ho.





Tabhi, ek tez cheekh hawa mein gunj uthi! Arjun ka shareer ek pal ke liye jam gaya.

Usne jhat se peechhe mudkar dekha—aur saamne ek patli si parchayi khadi thi.
Uski aankhein surkh thi, aur haath mein ek purani, jali hui diary.

“Arjun…” ek halki, kampakti hui awaz aayi, jaise koi uske kaan ke bilkul kareeb ho.

Arjun ne saans andar kheench li aur ek kadam peeche hata. Lekin jaise hi usne aankhein jhapkayi, wo parchayi wahin se gayab ho gayi. Sirf ek cheez wahan chhod gayi thi—ek laal dhaaga, jo dheere dheere hawa mein hil raha tha.



Lekin, kya sirf jungle hi asar dal raha tha? Ya phir Devghar ke andheron mein kuch aur bhi tha jo sirf raat ko
jagta tha?

Badhiya shaandar update
Arjun ke batane per chunke sab lekin kaha Kuch khaas ker dada Dadi ne
Baherhal ab yeh sab kia iski gutthi Arjun ko suljhana padega

 

[Naik]

Update 3 – Devghar Ki Subah



Scene : Subah ka waqt, Devghar. Suraj ki pehli kirne gaon ke purane khandar jaise makano par gir rahi hai. Hawa thodi thandi hai, lekin ek ajeeb si sannata bhi chhaya hua hai.



Arjun ki aankh khuli toh usne dekha, ghar ke andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi . Kal raat jo bhi dekha, uska ek ajeeb asar uske dil par chhoda gaya tha.



Usne apne kamre se bahar kadam rakha. Aangan me uski maa, Rajeshwari Devi, Tulsi ke paudhe ke saamne deepak jala rahi thi. Hawa me kapoor aur ghee ki sugandh thi, lekin uske chehre par ek ajeeb si chinta bhi dikh rahi thi.





Rajeswari ne aankhen band karke kuch mantras padhe, lekin jaise hi Arjun paas gaya, uski awaaz thodi dagmagane lagi.


Arjun (halki hasi ke saath): "Maa, aaj itni subah subah itna dhyan kyun?"


Rajeswari Devi ne ek pal ke liye Arjun ki taraf dekha, phir dheere se boli, "Tulsi maa sab dukhon ko shanti deti hain, beta. Aur kuch dukh hamesha insaan ke peeche pade rehte hain..."


Arjun ko yeh jawab samajh nahi aaya, lekin usne zyada socha nahi.


Ghar Me Chhoti (sia) Aur Shyamlal (Bade papa / tauji) Ka Vyavhaar..
Jaise hi Arjun ne aangan se bahar kadam rakha, uski behan Chhoti haste hue aayi.

Chhoti (muskurate hue): "Bhai, tujhe Devghar ki subah kaisi lagi? Ya ab bhi tujhe sirf shahar ka glamour pasand hai?"

Arjun (halki hasi ke saath): "Pehli subah hai, aur mahol kaafi shaant lag raha hai…"


Tabhi Bade Papa Shyamlal waha aaye. Unke chehre par ek ajeeb si gambheerta thi.

Shyamlal (thande lekin gehre shabdon me): "Shaanti dikh rahi hai, par yeh asli shaanti nahi hai, Arjun. Yahaan har cheez ke peeche ek kahani chhupi hai."



Arjun ne unke shabdon me ek ajeeb si taqat mehsoos ki.

Gaon Ke Naye Log Aur Ajeeb Baatein.


Aangan me thodi der baad gaon ke kuch purane log aaye – Pandit Deenanath, Bhola Kaka aur Chagan.


Pandit Deenanath ne Arjun ko dekhkar ek pal ke liye ruk gaye.

Pandit Deenanath (gambhir awaaz me): "Tu laut aaya, Arjun... Par tu jaanta hai na, Devghar kisi ko bina wajah nahi bulata?"

Arjun ne unki aankhon me dekha – ek ajeeb sa rahasya tha jo wo kehna chah rahe the.

Bhola Kaka (halki si muskurahat ke saath): "Arre pandit ji, yeh abhi shahar ka ladka hai, isko kya pata yahaan ki purani baatein!"
Par Arjun ko ehsaas ho raha tha ki sab kuch itna asaan nahi hai.

Tabhi ek aur ajeeb cheez hui – mandir ki

ghantiyan ekdum zor se bajne lagi, bina kisi hawa ke. Shanti Devi ne palat kar dekha, unki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chinta dikh rahi thi.

Arjun ne mehsoos kiya, Devghar ke har kone me ek rahasya chhupa hai… aur wo in sabme ghus chuka hai.



To Be Continued...

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Har update suspense se bharpoor hota h
Ab mandir ki ghantia achanak kyon bajne lagi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

 

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Har update suspense se bharpoor hota h
Ab mandir ki ghantia achanak kyon bajne lagi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

Har update suspense se bharpoor hota h
Ab mandir ki ghantia achanak kyon bajne lagi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

Yes bro puri koshish rahegi ki har upadte pe bharpur suspense aur thrill mile