Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

[RED Ashoka]

STATUS : Update 5 Posted --- 'I will show you what is the real Thriller Suspense'

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Update 5	Update 6	Update 7	Update 8
Update 9	Update 10	Update 11	Update 12
Update 13	Update 14	Update 15	Update 16

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More updates will be added as the story progresses


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[RED Ashoka]

Badhiya shaandar update
Arjun ke batane per chunke sab lekin kaha Kuch khaas ker dada Dadi ne
Baherhal ab yeh sab kia iski gutthi Arjun ko suljhana padega

Haa bilkul bro, Arjun ko abhi janna aur is Gutthi ko sulajna hai lekin abhi wo khatre se anjan hai abhi aage jake use aur bade shock milege
Next upadte mein arjun ko bada shock lagega
Agla upadte behad thriller aur horror hone wala hai
Aur aapke support ke liye Very thank you bro

 

[Smith_15]

One more thing please try to clear some suspense

 

[RED Ashoka]

One more thing please try to clear some suspens

Bilkul bro aane wale updates me suspense badhenge aur clear bhi honge
Bus support banaye rakho

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 4: Raat Ki Aahat

(Recap:
ghantiyan ekdum zor se bajne lagi, bina kisi hawa ke. Rajeswari Devi ne palat kar dekha, unki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chinta dikh rahi thi.

Arjun ne mehsoos kiya, Devghar ke har kone me ek rahasya chhupa hai… aur wo in sabme ghus chuka hai.)

Present time

(Scene: Devghar ka hawa bhari mahal, shaam dhal chuki hai, aur ghar ke andar thodi chandni aur diye ki halke roshni phail rahi hai.)

Arjun din bhar ke baatein soch raha tha. Uski maa, RajeswariDevi, ne Tulsi puja ke baad sabko nashta karwaya tha. Ghar ka mahaul shant tha, lekin ek ajeeb si ghabrahat bhi mehsoos ho rahi Thi.



Bade Papa, Shyamlal, aur Arjun ne aangan mein baith kar khana khaya. Maa, dadi, aur Chhoti bhi saath thi. Khane ke dauraan kisi ne koi ajeeb baat nahi ki, lekin sabke chehre pe ek asar tha—jaise koi chhupi hui baat sabke zehan me chal rahi ho.


Arjun (andar hi andar): Yeh sab mujhe kuch bata kyun nahi rahe? Yeh Devghar waqai ajeeb hai…

Khana khane baki sab apne kam pe nikal gaye aur Arjun in sab cheezo ke bare me soch rha tha

Raat ho chuki thi. Sab apne-apne kamron me chale gaye. Arjun bhi apne kamre me aakar lete gaya. Usne aankhein band ki hi thi ki…



Dhaddd… Dhaddd… (Ek tez awaz se darwaza hil gaya!)


Arjun ne jhat se aankhein kholi. Raat ka samay, aur yeh awaaz? Uska dil tez dhadakne laga.


Tabhi ek aur awaaz aayi… "Mat kholna darwaza, beta!!"


Rajeswari Devi ki cheekhti hui awaaz! Arjun sitti-pitti gum ho gayi. Maa itni ghabrahat me kyun hai?

Kya darwaza kholna ek badi galti hogi?

To Be Continued…
Please like aur comment jarur kijiye agar aapko pasand aaye ,isse muje kahani likhne me aur support milega


Aage ane wala update 5 will be mega update
Ek bharpur horror aur suspense ke sath, update 5 will bhi dhamaka

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 4 posted guys
Aane wala update mega update hoga
Usme ek dhamaka update milega
Just wait and support for next update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Congratulations for new thread...and all good h...bus apne profile mai jaakar signature mai sirf first page yani index ka link address copy karo aur jis tarah update post kiya h waise he pahle story ka link add karo aur niche text wale option mai story ka naam likh insert kardo aur acha lagega jo badi si line dikh rahi h wo short ho jayegi...

 

[RED Ashoka]

Congratulations for new thread...and all good h...bus apne profile mai jaakar signature mai sirf first page yani index ka link address copy karo aur jis tarah update post kiya h waise he pahle story ka link add karo aur niche text wale option mai story ka naam likh insert kardo aur acha lagega jo badi si line dikh rahi h wo short ho jayegi

Hmm bro ab kar Diya jaisa aapne kaha Signature wala
Mujhe bhi wo itna acha nahi laga rha tha bdi line
Ab short ho gyi, Very thank you bro Guide krne ke liye

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Hmm bro ab kar Diya jaisa aapne kaha Signature wala
Mujhe bhi wo itna acha nahi laga rha tha bdi line
Ab short ho gyi, Very thank you bro Guide krne ke liye

Perfect ....bro

 

[RED Ashoka]

Hello dosto likes aur apne apne review dijiye
Update 5 Dhamaka hone vala hai

 

[Achin_Saha18]

Update 4: Raat Ki Aahat

(Recap:
ghantiyan ekdum zor se bajne lagi, bina kisi hawa ke. Rajeswari Devi ne palat kar dekha, unki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chinta dikh rahi thi.

Arjun ne mehsoos kiya, Devghar ke har kone me ek rahasya chhupa hai… aur wo in sabme ghus chuka hai.)

Present time

(Scene: Devghar ka hawa bhari mahal, shaam dhal chuki hai, aur ghar ke andar thodi chandni aur diye ki halke roshni phail rahi hai.)

Arjun din bhar ke baatein soch raha tha. Uski maa, RajeswariDevi, ne Tulsi puja ke baad sabko nashta karwaya tha. Ghar ka mahaul shant tha, lekin ek ajeeb si ghabrahat bhi mehsoos ho rahi Thi.



Bade Papa, Shyamlal, aur Arjun ne aangan mein baith kar khana khaya. Maa, dadi, aur Chhoti bhi saath thi. Khane ke dauraan kisi ne koi ajeeb baat nahi ki, lekin sabke chehre pe ek asar tha—jaise koi chhupi hui baat sabke zehan me chal rahi ho.


Arjun (andar hi andar): Yeh sab mujhe kuch bata kyun nahi rahe? Yeh Devghar waqai ajeeb hai…

Khana khane baki sab apne kam pe nikal gaye aur Arjun in sab cheezo ke bare me soch rha tha

Raat ho chuki thi. Sab apne-apne kamron me chale gaye. Arjun bhi apne kamre me aakar lete gaya. Usne aankhein band ki hi thi ki…



Dhaddd… Dhaddd… (Ek tez awaz se darwaza hil gaya!)


Arjun ne jhat se aankhein kholi. Raat ka samay, aur yeh awaaz? Uska dil tez dhadakne laga.


Tabhi ek aur awaaz aayi… "Mat kholna darwaza, beta!!"


Rajeswari Devi ki cheekhti hui awaaz! Arjun sitti-pitti gum ho gayi. Maa itni ghabrahat me kyun hai?

Kya darwaza kholna ek badi galti hogi?

To Be Continued…
Please like aur comment jarur kijiye agar aapko pasand aaye ,isse muje kahani likhne me aur support milega


Aage ane wala update 5 will be mega update
Ek bharpur horror aur suspense ke sath, update 5 will bhi dhamaka

Nice update
Keep going