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Fantasy Aryamani:- A Pure Alfa Between Two World's

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Apasyu ki meeting mast rahi …. Us story mein ye part ka koi scene hai kya ya link wala ya ye uske baad ka ghatnakram hai ??

Arya agar Acharya ban gaya to bechare ka danda kya kaam ka rah jaayega abhi to mouka banaa leta hai kisi na kisi k saath …
Nahi us story me ye jikr nahi hai ye pahle ka ghatna kram hai... Bhanvar shuru hone se pahle Apayu ki taiyari ka waqt ka mamla tha... Wahan jikr na karne ka bhi reason hai... Pata chal jayega
 

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Vempire ki nagri arthat USA me to hai hi... Let's see writer ke kurafati dimag me kya chal raha hai
ये खुराफात तो लेखक के दिमाग में काफी समय से चल रही हैं
बस मुझे यह देखना की वेंपायर का आगमन कब होगा और इन अपेक्स सुपरनेचूरल का क्या संबंध है वेंपायर से 🤔
 

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ये खुराफात तो लेखक के दिमाग में काफी समय से चल रही हैं
बस मुझे यह देखना की वेंपायर का आगमन कब होगा और इन अपेक्स सुपरनेचूरल का क्या संबंध है वेंपायर से 🤔
Hahahaha... S K bhai abhi kuch kah nahi sakta hai lekhak raat bahut ho gayi hai aur agla update chhapna hai ...
 

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Log to kisi aur ke dukh sun kar bhi dukhi ho jata hai aur ek do din uske dimaag me yahi chalta hai aur inhone to na sirf yaadein dekhi hai unhe mehsus bhi kiya hai aur wo bhi apni apni maa ki kitna aashaaye mehsus kar rahe honge..... jab ki sardar khan ki yaadon me jhaakte time aarya tak vichlit ho gaya tha ye to fir bhi teenager hai ..... khair lekin aksar jo hota hai apna gum to kese kar ke seh bhi le lekin dusre ko jab usi awastha me dekhte hai to kisi to andar se ek awaj aati hai ki chalo apna to nhi sahi uske hi dard ko baat liya jaaye aur fir inke pass to healing power thi .....aarya ne ab ye soch kar kiya ya nhi jo bhi ho lekin usne ek hint de diya ki apne dard se ubharne ke liye dusro ke dard door karo aur jab wo khush ho kar abhivadan karenge us abhivadan se apna dard kum hoga :applause::applause::applause:bhot behtreen drishya tha nainu bhaiya ...


Albeli ka character naam ki tarha hai ek dum jese naam sun kar log mushkura de wese hi wo bhi jahan rahe mahol bana deti hai aur aarya ka apne pack ke liye care dekh kar acha laga
Waise nainu bhaiya ek baat bataiye ye jo aap apni stories me places daalte hai to pata hai/padhe ho/video dekhe ho/ghume ho/ya fir story ke liye research kar ke daalte ho ? khair isi bahane ghumne mil jata hai aur wo


Kahin is book ko padhne ke wajah se hi to nhi aarya ko wo dusre planet par le jaaenge jahan usko nischal milta hai ? kyu ki wo bhi to wahan apne praja ke liye aarya mani ko leke gaya tha underwater rehne wale creature ko heal karna aur ye book ka bhi naam se to esa hi lag rha hai .....


aarya ka ye bolna acha nhi laga kyu ki usko bhi pata hai evan pr to kabhi bhoomi didi ne sukesh ka saaya tak nhi padne diya ....aur bhoomi didi ki parvarish me pala hai wo fir ese sawal karna mtlb bhoomi didi ki parvarish par sawal uthana .....


:lotpot: L lag gaye wala song yaad aa gya aarya ki esi situation dekh ke .... aur dekh kar acha bhi laga ki aarya bhi unke saath samil ho raha hai aur ek asli leader esa hi hota hai situation ko samjhe apne logo ko samjhe ye aur wese bhi ab unke pass parivar ke roop me unka pack hi hai aur fir unme sabse bada aarya aur ek relation to banana hi padega aage kitna lambe samay tak saath rehna hai pata nhi aur wo beej ko paudha banana aur fir usko pedh bhot kuch seekh rahe hai aarya se acha hai ye uske blood oath ke karan ho raha hoga jisme inlogo ke haath me aarya ka blood gaya tha .... wese hi to character ke naam itna unique hote hai ...aur aap country bhi esi esi ghuma rahe ho ....
lagta hai unki economy ko aap hi boost kar rahe ho ....
To finally wo 9 bakse khole gaye lekin agar rakhna hi tha to wo kimti hatyaar dikhane ke liye rakh sakta tha 1000 kilo sona chori karwane ki kya jarurt thi aur common sense wali baat hai ki itne bade box me koi itna sona dekhega to wo to pura box le jaane ki sochega na ki transfer kar kee kuch aur me le jaane ki aur aarya ka last me ye sochna ki kahi isse location to nhi pohch jayegi to middle of the sea me bhot mushkil mtlb tower wgeraha chahiye fir uske liye ya fir is pr thodi roshni daale nainu bhaiya i know aap research kar ke likhte ho isiliye me bhi thoda jaan na chahata hu aap acha samjha bhi dete ho
Arya ne bol diya lekin gusse me nahi balki apne shagird ka temperament check karne ke liye .. shayad aapne miss kiya... Baki tech ka jawab de diya aur jo chatecter vishleshan aapne vistar purvak likha hai usko padh kar man prashnn ho gaya.... Khair har kisi me bhavnayen hoti hai ... Aur aap bhi jab bhavnatmak update dekhte hain tab aapki bhi bhavna chhati faadkar bahar aa jati hai...

Thankoo so much anubhav bhai ... Kahan rah gaye the bich me
 
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