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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )
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Ronit aur anjali aflreen ke samne kyu nahi aa rai h
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MAI-NAFRAT bhi meri....
MOHOBBAT bhi meri....
JAZBAAT bhi mere....
aur,MAA BAAP bhi mere....
mai unke jo chaahe woh feel kar sakta hun..hakh hai mera...
par tune kaise mere mom dad ko taklif pahunchane ki koshish ki woh bhi mere,unke bete saamne...
hai kaun re tu MADA****OD.....
Dear VJ bhai after read this update i wan't to say....... U R NOT A MAN
U R SUPERMAN
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timing dekhiye brother... ALFREEN behosh padi thi, RAAZ marne ki haalat me tha. RONIT aur ANJALI maa baap ke saath SERAPHIM ANGELS bhi hain aur ye kahani unke bete par focused hai...
ek aur baat, update me bataya gaya hai ki ALFREEN ka apni dono powers par control nahi hai,toh aise me unka saamne aana bilkul sahi nahi..
par ab jab woh behosh hai,toh uske brain ke taar rewiring process me hain..iska matlab hai ki uske dimag me RONIT aur ANJALI ka uske saamne aane ka waqt ho chuka hai..
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hahaha...taarif me mazak udaa rahe hain yaa mazak me taarif kar rahe hain..!!!
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but either ways,i appreciate it.. thanks brother..be along
Bhai bura na maniye us time dusra update nhi dekha tha aur apke har update ke mukable wo update to chota hi tha esliye. Ap samajh sakte hai ki jisme bahut intrest ho wo thoda sa mile to dukh hota hai but dusra update dekh kr dil khush ho gya. To uske liye thanku. And pahle comment ke liye sorrysmall..!!!!do updates diye hai aaj maine.pehle update me 3000 plus word ms use hue hain aur isme 4800 plus.. small kaise.!!!
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sorry kisliye brother...aapne apna paksh rakha aur maine apna.. always feel free to say what you feel..
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Viraaz's plan was amazing, we all could not understand anything, I can guess what the unbearable situation was Raaz, Ronit and Anjali's confidence in their son proved dangerous for Viraaz and due to both of them Raaz returned again and it was all due to each other's love. Everything is cleared up and I am also happy to see Raaz's parents happy because they endured so much because of him.
A mixture of anger and love feelings was seen, I am very happy today, this was the best update ever. The Attitude that was inside the Raaz today, I have wanted to see the same since. Till now I used to complain about Raaz's same thing in every update, but seeing him today, I do not understand what to say and for that reason Errapel was supporting him.
Viraaz survived today but will have to die tomorrow.The update is written in such a way that everything feels. beyond belief. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
NAFRAT bhi meri,
MOHOBBAT bhi meri,
JAZBAAT bhi mere,
aur, MAA BAAP bhi mere...
Every single word touches the heart... unmatched…
A mixture of anger and love feelings was seen, I am very happy today, this was the best update ever. The Attitude that was inside the Raaz today, I have wanted to see the same since. Till now I used to complain about Raaz's same thing in every update, but seeing him today, I do not understand what to say and for that reason Errapel was supporting him.
tera ghamand aur junoon abhi ka hai,par mera toh KHAANDANI HAI...
teri ye khatm hoti riyasat ussi junoone-takkar ki NISHAANI HAI...
aaj baksha tujhe sirf us waqt ke liye....
jab tujhe aur tere BAAP ko saath me maarunga mai,kyunki yahi ANJAAM-E-KAHANI HAI....
Viraaz survived today but will have to die tomorrow.The update is written in such a way that everything feels. beyond belief. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Jamesleon
“Failure is not a person, it’s an event.”
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