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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

drx prince

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE MURCHIT SHARIR KO WO AWAAZ MURCHIT HI REHNE DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNE BOARD EXAMS KE ANSWER SHEETS KO EK NAYI LANGUAGE SE BHAR DIYA HOTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-9



PLANET-UNKNOWN


PLACE-UNKNOWN




PRATISAMBHUDDA

RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS



SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




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KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.


waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....




sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

drx prince

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MARLIZA KISI KO USKI NIDRA SE UTHA ASLIYAT BATA USSE WAPAS USSI NIDRA ME BHEJ DETI HAI TOH WAHIN DUSRI TARAF FLORIN KO RAAZ DWARA LIKHE NAYI LANGUAGE KAA NAAM AUR USME LIKHE ALPHABETS KA MATLAB SAMAJH ME AA JAATA HAI

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1

(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-10



PLANET-EARTH


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WAQT AA GAYA MAHI.....TUMHARE HOSH ME AANE KA BHI AUR TUMHARE NAYE SAFAR KA BHI.....

MAHI se kuch door uske sidh me khade us jaane pehchaane AWAAZ ke maalik ke mooh se ye baatein nikli thi...

aur aisa hote hi ek urja numa roshni uske sharir se nikal MAHI ki taraf badh chali aur dekhte hi dekhte wo roshni MAHI ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hote hi MAHI ke sharir ko ek jhatka laga aur fir dheere dheere wo hosh me aane lagi...

kuch hi palon me uski consiousness wapas aa chuki thi...

par aankhen khulne ke baad bhi wo yunhi upar dekhte hue leti rahi...

darasal aankh khulte hi MAHI ke dimag me behosh hone se pehle hui saari ghatna ghumne lagi thi...

itna hi nahi,kis jagah pahunch,kis sthithi me wo behosh hui, kahan galti hui aur us galti ko dobara kaise naa dohraya jaaye,ye saari chizen uska dimag sochne aur plan karne me lag gaya tha...

aur yahi wo kaaran tha jiski wajah se uske saamne khade AWAAZ ne kuch din pehle uski chetna nahi loutayi thi...

usse pata tha ki MAHI ke hosh me aane ke baad aisa hi kuch hoga...

wahin saamne leti MAHI ne ab tak sab kuch plan kar liya tha aur apne plan ko exucute karne ke liye wo turant uthi aur wapas dhyan mudra me jaane ke liye baithi hi thi ki tabhi....

aankh band karne se purv MAHI ki nazar saamne ki taraf saamne ki taraf gayi aur.....



MAHI- HOLY.....FU*K.........




PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE




sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....



KYA HO SAKTA HAI IN SAB KA MATLAB!!!!


normally jheel ke saamne baithne ka kaam RAAZ ka rehta hai,but aaj maamla zara alag tha....

haathon me ek paper liye usse ghurte hue har 2 minute baad usme likhe alfaaz dohraate hue FLORIN lagatar apni sochon me goom the ya fir ye kahun ki us PAHELI ko jo RAAZ ke likhe DEMONOIC language ko decode karkar saamne aayi thi,usse suljhane me khoye hue the....

aaj 3 din guzar chuke the us PAHELI ke baare me jaankar par abhi tak FLORIN aur MARIA ko usse crack karne me kaamiyabi nahi mili thi....

in teen dino ke dauran school ke principal se request kar RAAZ ke examination hall ke invigilator se bhi baat kar chuke the FLORIN...

baaton ke dauran us invigilator ne bataya tha ki RAAZ ne apne saare papers apne sir ko neeche desk me tikakar diye the...

kayi baar round ke waqt unhone dekha tha ki RAAZ ki aankhen likhte waqt bhi band rehti thi..

unhe is baat se bohot hairangi hoti thi but kyunki board exams me invigilators ka student interaction bhi mana hai isiliye unhone kuch kaha nahi...

jab ye baat FLORIN ne MARIA ko batayi toh unke andar ka dar aur badh gaya..unhe aisa lagne laga maano RAAZ par kisi evil spirit ka saaya hai...

FLORIN ne badi mushkil se MARIA ko samjhaya ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur unhe vishwas hai ki bas wo kisi tarah is nayi paheli ko crack kar len toh
sab clear ho jaayega...

aur tabhi se aur zoron shoron se FLORIN lag gaye us PAHELI ko solve karne me par abhi tak kuch khaas success unhe mila nahi tha...

FLORIN-itna toh pakka hai ki ye jo kuch bhi likha hai,wo RAAZ se connected hai....

but kaise???

apne maathe ke bicho beech apne index finger ko rub karte hue aankhen band man hi man FLORIN ek baar firse us paheli ko repeat karne lage..

par kaafi der baad bhi jab unhe kuch nahi sujha toh pehle unhe nirasha hui par fir apne dimag ko jhatak unhone apni aankhen khol di...

shaam hone lagi thi...baad me try karne ka soch FLORIN wahan se jaane ke liye uthe hi the ki tabhi ek hawa ki thandi leher ne unhe chua...

FLORIN-chilling....

apne haathon ko ragad FLORIN waapsi ke liye mude hi the ki tabhi ek purana scene unke dimag me aaya..

aur us scene ke dimag me aate hi jaise unke andar ek jhanaka sa hua....

FLORIN-oh shit...mai itni important baat kaise bhul gaya....

apne aap se ye baat keh FLORIN turant orphanage ki taraf badhe aur wahan pahunch sidhe orphanage ek left block ke right side bane store room ki aur chal pade...

orphanage ke har room me fingerprint sensor laga tha jisme yahan ke har faculty members ka thumb impression moujud tha..

FLORIN store room ko open kar ek taraf badhe aur jaise hi wahan pahunche,toh jis hope ke saath wo yahan pahunche the,wo hope sahi nikla jisse dekh FLORIN ka chehra chamak utha...

is waqt FLORIN ki aankhon ke saamne wahi tokri thi jisme unhone pehli baar RAAZ ko dekha tha aur jisse unhone ussi raat yahin store room me rakh diya tha but unki nazar us tokre par nahi balki us tokre ke andar thehri hui thi....

FLORIN ne turant apna mobile nikala aur apni wife ko call kar diya....

FLORIN- MARIA...turant store room me aao....

MARIA- what happened...???

FLORIN-aao toh batata hun...

ye bol bina aur kuch sune FLORIN ne phone kaat diya...wahin call diaconnect hote hi MARIA turant store room ki taraf nikal padi...

MARIA- kya hua FLORIN???tumne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya??and firstly tum yahan kar kya rahe ho???

FLORIN-MARIA,wo paheli yaad hai jo RAAZ ne DEMONOIC LANGUAGE me likhi thi..wo half solve ho gayi hai....

MARIA-what???!!!really....kya hai uska matlab!!!aur half solve hui hai,iska kya matlab hua???

FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA apne pehle puche gaye sawal jaise bhul hi chuki thi...

wahin FLORIN ne MARIA ke sawalon ke jawab me kuch kehne ki jagah apna right hand aage kar diya jisme is waqt kuch tha...

ye chiz wahi thi jo kuch der pehle tak us tokre me thi,aur jiske liye FLORIN yahan aaye the...

KYA!!!! aayiye,jaan lete hain....

MARIA-mai tumse itna important sawal puch rahi hun aur tum mujhe ye PATTA dikha rahe ho...

FLORIN-paheli ka jawab ka sabse bada hint hai ye LEAF....

MARIA-matlab???

FLORIN-pehle tum batao ki ye kis tree ka leaf hai...

MARIA-HAZELNUT TREE ka...

FLORIN-aur yahan aas paas HAZELNUT TREE kahan hai????

MARIA- yahan ekdum paas toh hai nahi..wo toh sidhe HOIA FOREST me hi milega....

FLORIN-ab ek aur baat batao.. waise toh ye pura ilaka hi thanda hai,par hawa yahan kis taraf se chalti hai...

MARIA-ye kaisa sawal hai???jab thodi door hi itna ghana HOIA FOREST hai, mountains hai,toh hawa bhi udhar se hi aayegi naa...!!!

but in sab ka us puzzle se kya lena dena???

FLORIN-wahi jo ek pakshi ka udne se hota hai...

MARIA-mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha...!!!!

FLORIN- jaanti ho ye leaf mujhe kahan mila???

MARIA- kahan???

FLORIN-is tokre se....

MARIA- haan toh isme kaun si badi.........

MARIA ke aage ke words unke andar hi reh gaye the...kyunki tokre ko dekh unhe yaad aa chuka tha ki ye wahi tokra hai jisme RAAZ yahan aaya tha....

MARIA-is tokre se!!!!par ye toh....

FLORIN- RAAZ ki hai...aur RAAZ ko godh me uthane ke baad maine hi is tokre ko yahan store room me rakha tha...

aur jab mai isse yahan rakh raha tha,tabhi meri nazar is LEAF par chali gayi thi jo is tokre ke kapde me ulajh kar reh gaya tha...

but tab maine is baat par zyada dhyan nahi diya tha but aaj paheli ka RAAZ ke saath connection jodte waqt achanak mujhe iska khayal aaya...

FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA kaafi excited ho gayi thi kyunki FLORIN ki baat se ek baat clear ho gayi thi.

RAAZ ke zindagi ki shuruat kahi naa kahin HOIA FOREST ke aas paas hi hui hai kyunki jo leaf is waqt RAAZ ke tokre se mila tha,wo HAZELNUT TREE ka tha aur is region me aur aas paas ke saare regions me sirf HOIA FOREST hi ek aisi jagah thi jahan HAZELNUT TREE paayi jaati hai....

MARIA-you are amazing FLORIN...aur ab mai samjhi ki tum mujhse us hawa ke behne ke baare me kyun puch rahe the...

paheli me jis paschimi hawa ki baat kahi gayi hai,uska jawab bhi HOIA FOREST hi hai...kyunki is taraf hawa wahin se aati hai aur HOIA FOREST hamare

FLORIN- west me matlab pashchim me padhta hai....

FLORIN ne MARIA ki baat puri ki...wahin MARIA paheli ke main hisson ko pura samajhne ki khushi me FLORIN se lipat gayi thi...

FLORIN-arre waah..agar pata hota ki puzzle solve karne par itna tight hug milne waala hai toh maine pehle hi isse solve kar liya hota....

MARIA-very funny....puzzle toh solve ho gayi fir tumne ye kyun kaha tha ki puzzle half solve hui hai???

FLORIN- aadhi hi toh solve hui hai..hume bas paheli ka second phrase jisme kahan jaana hai,uske baare me pata chala hai...

first phrase ke first line ka matlab abhi bhi unsolved hai....

MARIA-usme kya likha tha????

FLORIN- sukoon chuppa hai tera...ye line..iska matlab abhi crack nahi hua hai...

MARIA- haan toh ye line shayad RAAZ ke liye hogi..afterall ye sab likha toh ussine hai...mujhe lagta hai hume bas RAAZ ko HOIA FOREST tak lekar jaana hai..

FLORIN-hume nahi sirf mujhe...wahan pata nahi kya ho???aise me tumhara wahan jaana thik nahi hoga...

MARIA-waah..khud hi keh rahe ho ki wahan khatra ho sakta hai aur mujhe saath aane se mana kar rahe ho...tumne socha bhi kaise ki mai tumhe wahan akele jaane dungi aur wo bhi khaas kar tab jab situation itni wierd chiz se connected hai...

jaayenge toh saath nahi toh tum bhi nahi jaaoge and that's final...

MARIA ne apni baat itni determination ke saath kahi thi jisse FLORIN samajh gaye the ki MARIA unki ek bhi nahi sunane waali aur isiliye...

FLORIN-ok fine...saath chalenge...

MARIA-now that's more like it...

FLORIN-toh fir abhi chalen???

MARIA-abhi!!!abhi toh dinner time hone waala hai..aur waise bhi yun achanak jaana bhi thik nahi..

kuch thik se planning karkar chalte hain.....

FLORIN-mujhe lagta hai ki hamara aaj hi jaana thik hoga..aur iska ek khaas reason bhi hai...

MARIA-khaas reason...wo kya???

FLORIN-tum bhul gayi...aaj hi wo din hai jis din RAAZ hume Mila tha....

MARIA-oh shit...ye mai kaise bhul gayi....

FLORIN-tumhari galti nahi hai... RAAZ ne kabhi chaha hi nahi ki koi uska birthday celebrate kare yaa fir usse wish bhi kare...

har saal ki tarah aaj bhi wo subah se hi gayab ho gaya tha taaki agar kisiko yaad bhi ho toh bhi koi usse wish naa kare...

aur pata hai,kyunki ye sab jo ho raha hai, RAAZ se connected hai isiliye subah se hi mujhe ye gut feeling thi ki aaj ye paheli solve ho hi jaayegi aur dekho,ho bhi gayi...

aur ab jab jo maine socha hai,wo sach nikla toh pata nahi kyun, par ab mujhe lagta hai ki ye jo bhi ho raha hai,aaj hi wo din hai jab in sabse parda hatega....

MARIA jo FLORIN ki baat bade dhyan se sun rahi thi,unhe bhi FLORIN ki baatein sahi lagi aur isiliye....

MARIA-thik hai fir..aaj hi is kisse ko khatm karte hain...ek kaam karte hain,bachon ke apne apne dormitories aur room me jaane ke baad hum nikalte hain...

waise bhi HOIA FOREST pahunchne me hi hume lagbhag 45 minutes lag jaayenge....

FLORIN-ye thik rahega....chalo fir,dinner time ho raha hai...

sab kuch tay kar dono store room se baahar nikal gaye is baat se anjaan ki wo jis kisse ko khatm karne ki baat kar rahe the,wo kissa ek naya rukh lene waala hai....



2 HOURS AFTER DINNER



WAQT AA CHUKA HAI RAAZ.....



mai apne room me aankhen band kiye leta hi hua tha ki tabhi ye awaaz mere kaano me gunji jisse sun mai uthkar baith gaya....

abhi mai is awaaz ke baare me soch hi raha tha ki tabhi....

GUARD-RAAZ tumhe FLORIN sir bula rahe hain...

ye hamara in-house guard tha jiski baat sun mai uske saath baahar ki taraf nikal pada....

wo guard mujhe FLORIN sir ke cabin me lejaane ke bajaye baahar lawn ki taraf le jaane laga par maine usse kuch pucha nahi..bas uske piche piche chalte gaya....

lawn se hote hue hum orphanage ke main gate ki taraf badhe jahan is waqt FLORIN sir aur MARIA ma'am apni car ke paas khade the...

dono aapas me kuch baat kar rahe the but mujhe dekh dono chup ho gaye...

wahin guard mujhe sir aur ma'am ke paas chhod kar wapas chala gaya.....


FLORIN-RAAZ,tumhari ma'am aur mai yunhi drive par jaa rahe hain toh socha tumhe bhi saath le chalen..

hum jaante hain ki tum apna birthday manana pasand nahi karte but yunhi drive par toh chal hi sakte ho naa...


undono ki baat khatm hote hi mai chupchaap aage badha aur car ki piche ke door ko khol andar baith gaya...


wahin FLORIN aur MARIA jo ye soch rahe the ki mujhe saath chalne ko kaise convince karen,mujhe yun araam se car me baiththe dekh pehle toh woh dono chownke but fir mere hamesha ke hi ajeeb behaviour ko dhyan me rakh un dono ne zyada nahi socha aur car me baith gaye aur agle hi pal car apne safar ki taraf chal padi...

ek aise safar par jahan se ek naye safar ki shuruat hone waali thi...



BACK TO MAHI:-



KAUN HO TUM....????


turant uth side me rakhe dhanush baan ko utha stance lete hue MAHI ne apna sawal pucha....


AWAAZ- janmdin ki hardik shubkaamnayen MAHI...

ua awaaz ke maalik ki baat sun MAHI ki aankhen hairat se faile gayi....wo is AWAAZ ko pehchanti thi...

kyunki ek yahi AWAAZ thi jisne usse bataya tha ki uska janmdin kab tha aur tab se aaj tak bas yahi ek AWAAZ thi jisne har saal usse birthday wish kiya tha....


MAHI- tum...!!!!!!par....

AWAAZ-ye bramhaand aascharyon aur chamatkaro ke khazane se bhara hua hai MAHI...aur unhi chamatkaron ke ek mukhya bindu ki taraf tumhe jaana hai..

aur wo bhi abhi....aur rahi meri baat toh uchit samay aane par hamari bhet phir hogi...


MAHI ke man me hamesha ki tarah kayi sawal the par pata nahi kyun usse bas is AWAAZ ke maalik ki baat maanane ka dil kiya aur isiliye...


MAHI-kahan jaana hai mujhe???


MAHI ke aisa kehte hi uske saamne hawa ke beech bindu ka roop lekar hawa ghumne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte us hawa ne gol ghumte ghumte ek chakra ka roop le liya jo ek bade se gol darwaze ki tarah tha...

par darwaze ke dusri taraf kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha..wahin MAHI aankhon me aascharya liye is chamatkar ko dekhe ja rahi thi...


AWAAZ-chakra ke andar chali jaao MAHI....


pata nahi us AWAAZ me koi baat thi ya MAHI ke jigyasu swabhaav me,jiski wajah se wo bina ek pal gawaye apna dhanush baan thaame us chakra ke andar chali gayi...

aur uske andar jaate hi wo chakra numa darwaza band ho gaya....


AWAAZ- apna khayal rakhna MAHI....bohot jald mulakat hogi....


apni baat keh wo apni raah nikal gaya...

wahin dusri taraf jaise hi MAHI ke kadam us magical gate se hote hue dusri taraf pade,jo andhera wahan faila tha,wo tez prakash me badal gaya jiski wajah se ek pal ke liye MAHI ki aakhen band ho gayi aur jab usne aakhen khol samne dekha toh wo chownk gayi...

reason....

is waqt MAHI ek bohot bade room me thi...us room me bohot se shelfs the jisme alag alag books aur other equipments rakhi hui thi...

ek badi si table jiski dusri taraf teen badi badi upholstery wing chairs rakhe hue the...

aur MAHI ke chownkne ki mukhya wajah us chairs me se ek thi...darasal un teen chairs ke beech waali chair par white robe me jiske beech me halka sa pink suit ka style mix tha,pehne ek bohot khubsoorat si ladki baithi hui thi jo is waqt MAHI ko dekh muskura rahi thi....

kuch der tak yunhi MAHI ko dekhte rehne ke baad wo apni chair se uth MAHI ke saamne aakar khadi ho gayi...


UNKNOWN-kaisi ho MAHI????


us ladki ki awaaz ko sun MAHI ko jhatka laga...reason...ye awaaz wahi thi jisne MAHI ke sapne me aakar usse baat ki thi....


MAHI-aap!!!!aap wahin hain naa jo us raat mere sapne me aayi thi...


abhi MAHI ko kuch jawab mile usse pehle hi....


KHATT........


jis room me wo ladki aur MAHI khade the,wo khula aur aisa hote hi do male room ke andar aaye..

un dono ne bhi white robes pehne hue the par unlike us ladki..un dono ke kapde sirf robes the...

aur dono hi kaafi handsome the aur unki smartness ko unki smile aur badha rahi thi jo is waqt un dono ke chehron ki shobha badha rahi thi...

wo dono chalte hue us ladki ke ek ek taraf hokar khade ho gaye...

wahin in sabke saamne khadi MAHI apne chehre par dheron sawal liye un teeno ko dekhe jaa rahi thi aur is baat se wo teeno anjaan nahi the...


LADKI- haan MAHI,mai hi hun wo jo us raat tumhare sapne me aayi thi...


us ladki ke jawab ko sun aankhon me jigyasa liye...


MAHI- aap hain kaun???infact aap teeno kaun hain???ye sab jo hua,wo sab kya hai aur kaise hota hai???aur ye jagah kaun si hai???kya hum kisi magical dimension me hai...???kya ye sab sach me supernatural hai yaa fir ek behatareen illusion???

agar ye illusion hai toh ye recipient ke dimag ko kaise block karta hai???

ek ke baad ek kayi sawal karti chali gayi MAHI jisse bade dhairya se aur muskurate hue sunte chale gaye uske saamne khade hue wo teen log aur jab kuch der baad MAHI ke sawalon ka pitara khatm hua toh...


LADKI-tumhe tumhare sabhi sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge..par sabse pehle,hum apna parichay de dete hain...


1ST-mera naam SHAILA hai...


2ND-mujhe MOKALSAR kehte hain...


3RD-aur mai AKSHAANT hun....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V...J....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE NAYE ZINDAGI KI SARHAD PAR PAHUNCH CHUKI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ, FLORIN AUR MARIA HOIA FOREST KI TARAF NIKAL CHUKE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-11




PLANET-EARTH


PLACE- HOIA FOREST




SO FINALLY WE ARE HERE....


car ko HOIA FOREST ki baahari sarhad ke paas rokte hue FLORIN ne kaha...


MAI-aapne toh kaha tha ki hum drive par chal rahe hain....drive ka matlab toh chalte hue car me baithe rehna hota hai naa..

fir humne halt kyun kiya???aur wo bhi yahan...!!!

FLORIN-humne toh raaste me tumse pucha tha ki kya tum kisi specific jagah jaana chahte ho but tumne nahi kaha...

ab humara dil kiya is taraf aane ka toh hum aa gaye...

MAI-dil kiya aane ka..raat ke is pahar me is viraan jungle jisse haunted bhi kaha jaata hai,aisi jagah me aane ka dil kiya aapka...!!!!

kamsekam jhuth valid lage,aisa koi bahana bana lijiye....


meri baat sun pehle toh FLORIN aur MARIA ne ek second ke liye ek dusre ko dekha maano man hi man puch rahe hon ki ab kya bolen par fir kuch soch MARIA mujhe kuch bolne ko hui hi thi ki....


MAI-dont try...aap jo bhi bolengi,wo sab kuch hoga bas sach nahi hoga...

bas itna clear kar dijiye ki kya aap dono mujhe yahan hamesha ke liye chhodne aaye hain???

agar aisa hai toh aap bejhijhak bata sakte hain???mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagega...


meri ye baat un dono ki shayad kaafi buri lagi!!! par jahan ek taraf FLORIN chup hi rahe,wahin MARIA apne emotions ko control nahi rakh paayin aur...


MARIA-how can you even say that RAAZ???kya hum tumhe itne bure lagte hain jo aisa kuch karenge...

aaj 16th birthday hai tumhara..kya in 16 saalon me humne tumhare saath ya kisi bhi bache ke saath zyadti ki hai...

kis angle se hum tumhe itne bure lage jo tumhare dil me ye khayal aaya....



baat karte karte MARIA ka gala bhar aaya tha......


MAI-certificate sports me milta hai....study me milta hai.... curricular activities me bhi milta hai...

but kaun acha hai,kaun bura, isse proove karne ka koi certificate nahi hai....

achayi aur burayi sirf dekhne ka nazariya hota hai aur kuch nahi....ab agar ho sake toh sach bataiye ki aap dono mujhe yahan kyun lekar aaye hain???


sach ugalwaane ka sabse kaargaar tarika ghussa dilana aur emotional karna hota hai...

meri kahi baaton se FLORIN aur MARIA dono ke andar ye dono hi feelings aa chuki thi aur isiliye....


FLORIN-fine..tumhe sach jaanana hai toh suno....par usse pehle ye batao ki tumne apne exam papers me kya likha tha???

MAI- mujhe yaad nahi....


meri do took jawab se pehle toh FLORIN aur MARIA thode chownke but fir FLORIN kuch seconds tak meri aakhon me dekhte rahe maano unhe padhne ki koshish kar rahe hon...

FLORIN army ke ek decorated soldier reh chuke hain aur unki kayi khaasiyaton me se ek yeh bhi hai ki wo saamne waale ki aankhon me dekhkar ye pata laga lete hain ki wo jhooth bol raha jai ya sach...

aur kuch der tak meri aankhon me jhaankne ke baad unhe pata chal gaya tha ki mai sach keh raha hun...

but is baat se jitna shocked unhe hona chahiye tha,wo hue nahi...aur aisa hona bhi natural hi tha..

in kuch dino me unhone itna kuch weird dekh liya tha ki unhe ab kuch bhi chownkata nahi tha...

kamsekam ab tak toh nahi.....


FLORIN-exams me tumne ye likha tha...


apni baat keh FLORIN ne mere aage apna mobile kar diya jisme is waqt mere answer sheet ki pic open thi...


FLORIN-itna hi nahi us raat jab hum sab tumhare room me aaye the aur tumhare body ko jhatke lag rahe the tab tumhari nails se tumhare bed ke kinare kuch alphabets ban gaye the aur wo ye rahe....

ek ke baad ek do pics mere aankhon ke saamne aayin jisse dekh pehle toh meri aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti hui par fir...


MAI-iska aapke mujhe yahan laane se kya link hai???


pics dikhate waqt FLORIN aur MARIA ko laga tha ki iske baare me mai zaroor kuch kahunga par mere aise reaction ka unhe zara bhi andaza nahi tha but mere weird behaviour ki wajah se unhone zyada dhyan nahi diya....


FLORIN- ye jo tumne exam sheet me likha tha,uska connection yahan is jagah se hai aur hum yahan aaye hain...isiliye

MAI-toh ab???

FLORIN- ab hume jungle ke andar jaana hai...agar aisa karne ke liye tumhara dil nahi karta toh tum yahin car me rook sakte ho...


maine bina kuch kahe bas car ka door khola aur baahar nikal gaya jisse MARIA aur FLORIN samajh gaye ki mai bhi unke saath jaaunga..

wo dono bhi car se utre... FLORIN ne piche dikki khol usme se wahi tokri nikali jiske andar wo white kapda aur leaf abhi bhi the....

reason.....paheli me kaha gaya tha ki pareshani ki har jad ko lekar aana hai...is jad me ye tokri,kapda aur wo patta bhi aata hai aur isiliye hi ye teeno hi chizen mere saath yahan aayi thi...

khair, FLORIN ne us tokri ko pakda,unhone apne saath ek badi torch light laayi thi jisse unhone us tokri me kuch aise rakha jisse wo light sidhe aage ki taraf focus rakhe...

FLORIN ke waist par ek revolver bhi tha for safety reasons...aakhir hum ek ghane jungle me jo ghusne waale the....


FLORIN- chalen....


ye bol FLORIN ne ek haath se MARIA ka haath pakad liya aur same cheez MARIA ne bhi karni chahi..

unhone mera haath pakadne ke liye apna haath badhaya but jab maine unke haath ko nahi thaama toh woh dono aage badhe...

mai bhi MARIA ke ek side hote hue unje saath hi aage badh chala...

FLORIN ke kaan me Bluetooth laga tha aur unke phone me khaas is HOIA jungle ka gps on tha jisme FLORIN ne pehle hi HAZELNUT TREES ke jhund ke location ko search me daal rakha tha...

voice command ne FLORIN ko bata diya tha ki HAZELNUT TREE ka jhund jahan hum is waqt hain,wahan se 2 km andar west ki taraf hai aur isiliye hi hum ussi disha me badh rahe the....

jahan FLORIN ek dum satark aur mai aaram se chalte hue aage badh rahe the,wahin MARIA thodi dari hui thi aur unka darna laazmi bhi tha...

waise toh chaaron taraf barf hone ke kaaran halka halka dikh hi raha tha but thi toh ye ek andheri raat hi...

aur is andhere me raat ke waqt hum jungle ke andar ghuse hi chale aa rahe the..par khud ko sayyamit kar man hi man pray karte hui hamare saath wo aage badhe jaa rahi thi...

aur unki prayer rang laayi....15 minute lagatar chalne ke baad bina koi rok rukawat ke finally hum us jagah par pahunch chuke the jahan se HAZELNUT trees ke jhund ki shuruat hoti thi...


MARIA-ye toh hum pahunch gaye,ab....????

FLORIN-thoda aur aage chalte hain...


ye bol hum teeno sidhe aage ki taraf chalne lage..kuch 200 metres chalne ke baad....


MARIA-ye HAZELNUT ki tree's toh kaafi zyada hain...hum kahan tak chalte rahenge....????

FLORIN-mai bhi yahi soch raha hun???aur is tokri ko pakde pakde mere bhi haath dukh gaye hain...

MARIA-isse yahin neeche rakh do..kuch der yahin khade rehkar sochte hain...


MARIA ki baat FLORIN ko sahi lagi aur isiliye unhone us tokri ko neeche rakh diya par tabhi.....


ZOOMMMM......


tokri ke us barfili zamin ko chute hi is awaaz ke saath wo tokri aur usme rakhe kapde ne veg pakadte hue gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya..

par us tokre ke andar rakha wo bada sa torch light neeche gir chuka tha...

wahin is adhbhudh scene ko ek dusre ke haath ko kas ke pakad aakhen faade dekh rahe the FLORIN aur MARIA...

surprised toh mai bhi tha but aadat se majbur, mera chehra normal hi tha...

kuch hi der me wo tokri aur wo kapda jaise hawa ke veg me ghul sa gaya....ab sirf ek tez gol chakra dikh raha tha jo bohot tezi se gol ghum raha tha....

is beech kisika bhi dhyan us Hazelwood tree ke patte ki taraf nahi gaya tha jo us bhawar rupi chakra ke neech zameen se thoda upar aaram se tair raha tha...

aur jaise hi us bhawar rupi chakra ne apni top speed pakdi,thik tabhi wo patta dheere dheere upar uthne laga...

us bhawar rupi chakra ka asar aas paas ke vatarvaran tak me ho raha tha..wo pura area halka halka kaampe laga tha but wahin us patte par toh jaise koi asar hi nahi pada tha....

wo araam se upar uththa chala gaya aur kuch hi der me wo paata us tez veg ke thik beech pahuncha aur aisa hote hi.....

us patte ke beech bhi kampan hona shuru hua...par is kampan ka asar alag tha...

har kampan ke saath patte ke beech se hote hue uska aakar badhte hue gayab hone laga tha...

aise lag raha tha maano wo patta us veg ke andar koi kaala chitr bana raha ho...

ye ek naya chamatkar tha jisse dekh FLORIN aur MARIA ki fati hui aankhen aur fat gayi...

wahin ab tak wo patta andhakar ka roop lete hue us veg ke charon siron me chipak sa gaya tha..

aur aisa hote hi ek naya chamatkar hua....us veg ke beech ke hisse se ek naya raasta ban gaya tha....

ek raasta jiska dusra sira kahin aur se nikalta tha....

FLORIN aur MARIA toh abhi bhi ye sab dekh kar shock me the par pata nahi kyun mera man hua us naye bane raaste me jaane ka isiliye maine apne kadam us taraf badha diye jisse FLORIN aur MARIA ka dhyan yahan aane ke baad pehli baar mujh par gaya aur...


FLORIN-RAAZZZ....kahan jaa rahe ho???yahan aao....


chillate hue FLORIN ne apni baat kahi wahin mere kadam bhi unki awaaz se ruk gaye..

mai unki taraf palat kuch kehne hi waala tha ki.....


USSE ROKIYE MAT FLORIN..BALKI AAP DONO BHI USSIKE SAATH SAAMNE DIKH RAHE PATH PAR AGARASAR HO JAAIYE...

ye ek nayi awaaz thi jo mere left aur FLORIN, MARIA ke right se aayi thi aur jaise is hamari gardan us awaaz ke taraf ghumi....


AAAAAAAAA...........


ek zordar chikh nikli MARIA ke mooh se..waise jo dikha,usse dekh dar toh FLORIN bhi bohot gaye the,but MARIA se ulat,unki zuban seal ho gayi thi.


wahin in dono se ulat jo mere saamne tha,usse dekh zindagi me pehli baar mere dil ko ek thandak mehsoos hui thi...

upar se toh mai normal hi dikh raha tha but andar se mai bohot khush tha....


reason....


hamare saamne ek bohot hi vishalkaay jaanwar tha jiska pura sharir ek alag hi urja se damak raha tha...

us daiytyakar jeev ke bade bade pair zameen se kuch inch uoar hawa me thehre hue the...

chehre par garv aur Khushi,aakhon me chamak liye wo mujhe hi dekhe jaa raha tha...

ab ek jaanwar jo kisi haathi se bhi zyada bada dikh raha ho, uspar uski banawat bhi behad alag ho,aur sabse alag aur anokhi baat,wo jaanwar insaano ki bhasha bol raha ho,toh dar toh lagega hi naa....

kuch der tak kisi ke bhi mooh se awaaz nahi nikli thi...aur shayad aage bhi nahi nikalti par jab FLORIN ne dekha ki wo daityakaar ajeeb jaanwar mujhe ghure jaa raha hai toh unhe dar laga ki kahin wo mujhe nuksaan naa pahuncha de isiliye....


FLORIN-R..RR...RRR....RRRRAAAZ mere paas aao....


haklate hue FLORIN ki awaaz nikli jisse mera aur us jaanwar,dono ka dhyan ek dusre se hata...

FLORIN ko dara hua dekh mai kuch kehne hi waala tha ki....


JAANWAR-dariye mat FLORIN...aap logon ko mujhse koi khatra nahi hai....


pata nahi kya jaadoo tha us jaanwar ki awaz me ki ek hi baar me uski baaton par bharosa sa ho gaya FLORIN aur MARIA ko....

MARIA-kaun ho tum???aur tum hamari language kaise bol paa rahe ho????

MAI-ye WOGER HAI.....

(HALF WOLF HALF TIGER)


us jaanwar ki jagah maine jawab diya jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN shocked hi gaye....


MARIA-tum jaante ho isse????

MAI-pehli baar mil raha hun but haan,jaanta hun isse...

MARIA-ye kaisa jawab hua???jab mil pehli baar rahe ho toh fir jaante kaise ho????

MAI-mai bachpan se hi apne sapne me kayi baar iski jhalak dekhta aaya hun....

aur har shaam jheel ke paas maine isse mehsoos kiya hai....


meri baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA firse shocked ho gaye...


MARIA-kya isiliye tum har shaam us jheel ke kinare jaakar baiththe the???


MARIA ke sawal par maine haan me apna sir hilaya...


MAI-ek baat batao,wo tum hi the naa jisne MR GLOE ke bete ka haath toda tha....aur aaj bhi hostel me tumne hi mujhe baat ki thi naa!!!!


meri GLOE waali baat sun jahan ek taraf us jaanwar ne haan me apni mundi hilayi wahin FLORIN aur MARIA ko ab tak ka sabse bada jhatka laga...


MARIA/FLORIN-whattttt???isne usse maara tha..but tumne toh us din kaha tha ki....

MAI- maine shayad kaha tha..aur shayad haan bhi hota hai aur naa bhi....

mai us din neeche aaya toh pata chala ki Mr and Mrs GLOE baahar gayen hain bus unka beta RAVEN ghar par hai...

mai wahan rehna nahi chahta tha..but bina bataye nikal jaata toh mr and mrs GLOE phir public drama karte isiliye maine socha ki RAVEN ko batate hue chala jaaunga...

maine uske room ko knock kiya..but room kholte hi mujhe dekh wo bhadak gaya aur mujhe maarne ke liye apna haath uthaya...

but tabhi ek adrishya shakti jo ab pata chala hai ki ye tha,usne uske haath ko hawa me hi rok mod diya jisse uska haath toot gaya...

fir isne uske dusre haath ko bhi toda..ussi waqt uska haath mere saamne aaya jisse maine pakad liya..

ye wahi time tha jab us ghar ki maid ne mujhe RAVEN ka haath pakde dekha tha..usse laga ki maine hi RAVEN ki wo haalat ki hai isiliye usne sabke saamne mujhe hi doshi thehraya....


puri baat sunane ke baad...


FLORIN-par isne us bache ko mara kyun???

WOGER-usne RAAZ par haath uthaya tha..saza toh usse milni hi thi...

RAAZ, aaj aapko khud ke saamne dekh mai kitna khush hun,ye mai shabdon me bayan nahi kar sakta....

RAAZ-tum kya ho,ye toh mujhe pata ho but tum kaun ho,ye mujhe janana hai...

WOGER-jaanta hun...par mai majboor hun...khud kuch nahi bata sakta...

aapke saare sawalon ka jawab RAAZ hai...jisse aapko hi dhundna hai....jis din aap dhund lenge,mujhe bhi jaan lenge....

MAI-hmm..ab kya???kya tum bhi mere saath chal rahe ho???

WOGER-aapke bhi is dharti ko chhodne ka waqt aa gaya hai aur mere bhi..par filhal hum dono ke raaste juda hain..par hum bohot jald milenge....

MAI-kab???

WOGER-ye aapke upar hai???filhal jo darwaza aapke saamne hai,wahi aapke safar ki pehli sidhi hai... FLORIN aur MARIA ko lekar is darwaze ke dusre taraf chale jaayiye...

MAI-ye dono kyun???safar toh mera hai naa!!!!

WOGER-jis kashti par aap sawar hain,ye dono bhi ussi kashti ke sawari hai...

inka bhi us taraf jaana inki niyati hai...ab samay barbaad mat lijiye,jaldi prasthan kijiye...


ab tak FLORIN aur MARIA ka dar bhi kaafi kam ho chuka tha aur wo dono bhi us maayavi door ke dusri taraf jaana chahte the....

wahin mai kuch door der tak WOGER ko dekhta raha but fir....


MAI-chaliye....


FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekh maine apni baat kahi aur us darwaze ki taraf chal pada..wahin FLORIN aur MARIA bhi WOGER ko dekhte dekhte mere piche ho liye aur kuch hi palon me hum teeno us world gate ke dusri taraf pahunch chuke the aur aisa hote hi wo world gate band ho gaya...


WOGER-sambhal kar rehna RAAZ..tumhari taklifon ka daur ab shuru hone waala hai....


ye bol wo WOGER bhi ek urja roopi roshni ban gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-UNKNOWN


PLACE- SOVEREIGN'S OFFICE



TUMHARE PUCHE GAYE SAWALON ME JO MUKHYA SAWAL HAIN,UNKE JAWAB HUM TUMHE DE DETE HAIN..BAAKI KE JAWAB TUMHE KAL SABKE SAATH MIL JAAYENGE....


MAHI ko apne apne naam batane ke baad SHAILA ne baat ko aage badhaya jisse MAHI bade gour se sun rahi thi....


SHAILA-sabse pehle ye jaan lo ki is waqt tum apne planet EARTH par nahi ho balki EARTH se hazaron lights door ELYSIAN naam ke planet me ho....


aur ye laga MAHI ko jhatka...usne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki aisa kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

aur isiliye MAHI ka jigyasu dimag active ho gaya...


MAHI-ELYSIAN!!!!matlab BLESSED......


MAHI ki baat par muskurate hue SHAILA ne haan me apna sir hilaya...


MAHI-but how is this possible...???ye sab kaise hua???i mean mere aage achanak ek door khulta hai jisse hote hue mai yahan pahunchti hun jo mere planet se hazaron light years door hai...

itna bada jump kaise possible hua...???? kya ye sab SUB-LIGHT SPEED SYSTEM KO VOYAGE DESTINATION KE CODES ke saath mix karkar kiya jaata hai yaa fir is planet me Supernova EXPLOSION IN A BINARY SYSTEM jaisi koi theory practically prove ki jaa chuki hai...


SHAILA-MAHI,gyan toh bohot hai tumme,par dhairya nahi hai...aur bina dhairya ke gyan waisa hi hai jaisa kisi gravitational field ke bina planet...

maine kaha naa,jo zaroori hai wo tumhe abhi pata chal jaayega aur baaki kal...


toh agar ab ijazat ho toh mai aage bolun???

MAHI ab tak samajh chuki thi ki uske saamne khade wo teeno shaksh filhal har cheez me usse bohot aage hain aur usse yun beech me baar baar interfere nahi karna chahiye isiliye...


MAHI-sorry,maine aisa kuch pehle kabhi nahi dekha hai aur naahi suna hai isiliye kuch zyada hi excited ho gayi...but ab aisa nahi hoga??? you please continue....


MAHI ki baat sun uske saame khade teeno ek baar fir muskura diye...


SHAILA-toh jaisa ki maine bataya ki tum abhi ELYSIAN planet me ho aur jis jagah tum is waqt khadi ho,wo ek META PHYSICAL INSTITUTION hai...ek tarah ka school/college aur iska naam THE CHOSENS hai....

aur hum teeno yahan ke SOVEREIGN hain.... (HEAD)


SHAILA ki baat sun pehle toh MAHI chownki aur kuch bolne ko hui par usne khud ko control kiya aur chup hi rahi....

par SHAILA MAHI ke man me uth rahe sawal ko jaise bhaamp si gayi
aur....


SHAILA-yahi soch rahi ho naa ki maine meta physical kyun bola???

MAHI-haan....

SHAILA-kya jaanti ho is shabd ke baare me???

MAHI-meta physical work wo kaam hote hain jinme pysical hone ki zaroorat nahi padhti...har kaam ko dimag aur man ki shakti se anjaam diya jaata hai....

MOKALSAR-one word me kahen toh....!!!!

MAHI-?MAGIC.....!!!!!


MAHI ki baat sun ek baar firse teeno muskura diye....


SHAILA-ek simple statement me magic ko describe karo....???

MAHI-SUPERNATURAL FORM OF SCIENCE....

AKSHAANT-keh sakte hain...but exact words hai the the ADVANCED FORM OF SCIENCE....

human brain ki rachna universe ki rachna ki hi tarah pechida hai...

jaise universe me anginat galaxies,star systems hote hain waise hi human brain me bhi anginat nerves hote hain...

aur ye jo nerves hote hain,ye nerves apni saari surroundings, saare elements se jude hote hain aur wo bhi kuch aise ki agar in nerves ko expose kar sahi train kiya jaaye toh wo in saari surroundings ko control bhi kar sakte hain...

itna hi nahi,kyunki har wo planet jisme life hota hai,usme gravitational aur magnetic field hote hain aur inhi fields ki wajah se universe ka har planet ek adrishya energy se linked hokar ek dusre se jud jaata hai,isiliye indirectly humara dimag bhi unme chhipi nerves ki wajah se un saare planets se jud jaata hai...

aur isiliye hi THE CHOSENS ek meta pysical institution hai kyunki yahan jo bhi student aata hai,wo CHOSEN hota hai aur wo isiliye kyunki uske wo nerves jinse wo meta pysical activity ko ya fir in your words magic ko anjaam se sakta hai,wo already exposed ho chuka hota hai,usse train kiya jaata hai taaki wo apni super natural capabilities ko haasil kar sake..

yahan par padhne waala har baccha yahan aane se pehle tak apne apne planets ka genius hota hai but yahan pahunchkar wo genius common ho jaata hai jisse wapas khaas banane ke liye tarasha jaata hai....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun jahan ek taraf MAHI ka ek side hairan tha wahi uska dusra side super excited tha...

aur ho bhi kyun naa??? MAHI ko hamesha se hi challenges pasand the but ab tak uske liye kuch bhi challenging nahi raha...

champion banane ka asli maza tabhi aata jai jab haarne waala bhi champion hi ho but MAHI ko ab tak aisa koi mila hi nahi but ab is nayi jagah me wo khaas nahi common thi...

jisse apni mehnat se khaas banana tha..usse yahan takkar dene waale kayi the aur yahi baat usse andar hi andar behad khush kiye jaa rahi thi....


SHAILA-MAHI.....


SHAILA ki awaaz sun MAHI apni soch se baahar aayi....


MAHI-yes ma'am.....

SHAILA-maam nahi SOVEREIGN...but agar ye naam bolna awkward lage toh short me SOVES keh sakti ho....

MAHI-ok ma'am i mean SOVES....

SHAILA-baaki baatein kal hongi MAHI..filhal tum rest karo... waise toh jinke mom dad nahi hote,unke liye ABODE (HOSTEL) me allotment kiye jaate hain but tumhare liye ghar le liya gaya hai... so you go and check it out.....

MAHI-but ma'am,mai ABODE me comfortably reh lungi....

SHAILA-MAHI.... arguments apni education,apni classes ke liye bacha kar rakho...

otherwise just do as told....


strict si awaaz padi MAHI ke kaano me jisse sun....


MAHI-sorry SOVES...

SHAILA-u should be....ab jaao,is door ke dusri taraf tumhara ghar hai...


apni baat kehte kehte hi SHAILA ne apne saamne ek magical door bana diya jisse chalte hui MAHI dusri taraf nikal gayi..

but is beech jab MAHI ne apna ek pair us magical gate ke andar rakha tha,tab uske man me ek anjaani but strong feeling ne janm liya but usse kuch samajh aaye usse pehle hi wo feeling gayab bhi ho chuki thi...

khair, ab jo nazara uske aankhon ke saamne tha,usse dekh MAHI ki aankhen badi ho gayi....

reason....

SHAILA ne MAHI se jis ghar ke baare me baat ki thi,wo ghar kisi palace se kam nahi tha....

palace ko dekh MAHI wapas palti par ye kya????

MAHI ke palatne se pehle hi wo magical gate band ho chuka tha.....

ek lambi saans le MAHI us palace numa ghar ke gate ke saamne pahunchi aur aisa hote hi wo gate automatically khul gaya...

aur agle hi pal MAHI ke saamne hawa me hi ek chota sa board udta hua aaya jisse dekh MAHI ke chehre par ek smile aa gayi...

board par likha tha WELCOME HOME MAHI jisse padh MAHI apne naye ghar ke andar chal gayi...


WAHIN MAHI KE JAANE KE BAAD......




SOVEREIGN'S OFFICE



KHATTT.....

MAY WE COME IN.....!!!!!

AKSHAANT-MR & MRS FLORIN,RAAZ....PLEASE COME IN...WE WERE JUST EXPECTING YOU....


jahan MAHI EARTH se sidhe SOVEREIGN ke office ke andar pahunchi thi RAAZ, FLORIN aur MARIA unki office ke just bahar pahunche the...

AKSHAANT ke bolte hi hum teeno us bade se office me enter hue...

ye wahi waqt tha jab MAHI magic gate ke zariye ussi office se hokar bahar nikli thi.....


office me ghuste hi hum teeno ne bhi us magical door ko band hote dekha tha aur uske band hone se pehle maine kisi ki peeche se halki jhalak bhi dekhi thi but fir wo door band ho chuka tha...

wahin FLORIN aur MARIA toh mere saath abhi abhi ek world door se hote hue hi yahan pahunche the isiliye ye sab dekh unhe zyada shock nahi laga..

unhe toh ye lagne laga tha ki unhone itna kuch dekh liya hai ki shayad ab unhe kuch bhi surprising nahi lagega but yahi unki bhool thi...

unke life ka sabse bada surprise,shock but a very pleasant happy moment unke saamne aane waala tha...

khair, FLORIN aur MARIA bade jigyasa se unke saamne khade AKSHAANT, MOKALSAR aur SHAILA ko dekhe jaa rahe the wahin wo teeno ek tak mujhe dekhe jaa rahe the...

mujhe dekh unhe meri utpatti ka din yaad aa raha tha..

teeno ke hi man me ek hi sawal gunj raha tha aur wo ye ki...


TEENO-LORDS ne iske janm se purv hame bataya tha ki ek bohot hi khaas shakti ka janm hone waala hai jisse aage chalkar unki galtiyon ko sudharna hai....

bas itna hi maalum tha un teeno ko RAAZ ke baare me...

aur ab shayad wo waqt aa gaya hai jab unke saamne khade RAAZ ke RAAZ UNFOLD honge, aisi unhe ummid hai....

unki jigyasa ka ek bada kaaran ye bhi tha ki in beetein saalon me unhone RAAZ ki kaafi saari activities dekhi thi..uski soch ko bhi kaafi hadh tak samjha tha aur wo ye dekhna chahte the ki yahan RAAZ kaise survive karta hai...????

par saath hi wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki aisi soch waale bache se deal karna kitna mushkil ho sakta hai.....

sabhi apni apni sochon me goom the sivaay mere isiliye...


MAI-hum yahan kyun hain???


mere sawal se sabki jaise tandra tooti....


AKSHAANT-ab jab aap teeno yahan hain toh sab pata chal hi jaayega...

par jaisa addicate kehta hai,pehle introduction ho jaaye...

waise aap sabke baare me toh hum sab kuch jaante hain..isiliye hum apne aur is jagah ke baare me aapko batate hain...


ye bol AKSHAANT, MOKALSAR aur SHAILA ne apna apna intro diya aur saath hi is naye planet ELYSIAN aur is jagah jahan abhi hum the THE CHOSENS ke baare me wo sab jaankari di jo unhone kuch der pehle di thi jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN bohot bure chownke but unke chownke ka reason ek nahi do tha...

pehla toh common tha..unhone apne wildest dream me bhi ye imagine nahi kiya tha ki aisi bhi koi jagah ho sakti hai....

par wo dusra reason jisne unhe behad shock kiya tha, wo tha is jagah par aane ke liye jis qualification ki zaroorat thi,super talanted yaa fir ye kahun ki one in a hundred million hona,is quality se toh mera door door tak koi naata hi nahi tha...

fir yahan aane ka nyota mujhe kyun mila hai,issi baat se MARIA aur FLORIN behad hairan the....

aur shayad unki is hairangi ko humare saamne khade SOVEREIGN ne bhaamp liya aur isiliye....


SHAILA-yahi soch rahe hain naa ki THE CHOSENS me jin qualities ko dhyan me rakh admissions hote hain,waisi koi quality toh RAAZ me hai hi nahi fir isse yahan kyun bulaya gaya hai???

FLORIN-jee....

SHAILA-qualities naa hona aur unhe show naa karne me kaafi antar hota hai...

RAAZ ka sirf mind hi tez nahi hai,balki iski mind ki setting bhi kaafi alag hai...

isne aaj tak kisi bhi competition me,activity me,exam me dilchaspi sirf isiliye nahi dikhayi kyunki isse wo saare competitions, exams bachkaane lagte the....

jin cheezon me expert banane ke liye logon ko saalon mehnet karni padhti hai,wo saari cheezen RAAZ bas ek baar me hi samajhkar kar sakta hai...

aise me usse EARTH ke logon ke saamne khud ko open karna insulting lagta tha...

sach keh rahi hun naa RAAZ????


jahan SHAILA ki baar sun chehre se toh mai normal hi raha but man hi man mai samajh gaya tha ki jis jagah par mai hun,ye jagah yahan ke log extra ordinary hai...

wahin mere saath khade FLORIN aur MARIA SHAILA ki baat sun ek baar firse hairan reh gaye the...


SHAILA-but RAAZ..ye EARTH nahi hai aur naahi yahan par padhne aur sikhne waale bache sadharan hain...

tumhari mental strength toh kaafi achi hai,but pysically tum kaafi kamzor ho....

aur jaisa ki maine bataya ki yahan meta physical strength ko explore kiya jaata hai..

waise toh isme dimag aur man ki strength ki zaroorat padhti hai but iska ek sira hamare appearence,humare pysical strength se bhi juda hai..

dil,dimag aur sharir,jab ye teeno saath mil kar kaam karen tabhi apni meta pysical channel ko tum activate kar paaoge warna yahan ke har task me earth hi ki tarah fail ho jaaoge...

bas fark itna rahega ki wahan tum isiliye fail hote the kyunki tumhe tumhara competition deserving nahi lagta tha but yahan isiliye fail hoge kyunki tum deserving nahi ho paaoge...


jaise hi SHAILA ne apni baat puri ki....


MOKALSAR-MR FLORIN & MRS FLORIN....har wo parent jinke bacche yahan pahunchte hain, wo parents bhi issi grah me reh sakte hain...

aur yahan aapki life style kaafi luxurious hoti hai jahan aapke saare sukh suvidhaon ka dhyaan rakha jaata hai...

aur sabse important baat,kyunki yahan padhne waala har baccha aage chalkar is universe ke aloukik kaamo ka hissa banta hai,isiliye unke parents ka bhi is pure bramhaand me ek alag samman hota hai..

isiliye hum chahte hain ki aap yahin rahen....aapke liye ek MANOR (bungalow) ready kiya jaa chuka hai...

FLORIN-is izzat afzayi ke liye bohot bohot shukriya...hum sach me is adbhudh duniya ka hissa banana chahte hain but ye possible nahi ho paayega...

aapse kuch chhupa toh hai nahi...aap ko bhi pata hai ki EARTH me hum ek orphanage chalate hain..agar hum yahan rahe toh wahan humare bacchon ka kya hoga????

AKSHAANT-wahi hoga jo ab tak hota aaya hai..


AKSHAANT ke aisa bolte hi humare saamne ek chalchitra dikhne lagi jisse dekh hum firse shocked hue..

reason....

us chalchitra me hamare earth se yahan aane ki video chal rahi thi...par shock hume tab laga jab humne dekha ki humare world door se andar aate hi hamari jagah HOIA FOREST me hamare clones ban gaye the jo hamare jaate hi wahan se nikal gaye the...

ye scene toh tha hi ajeeb but in sabke beech ek aur baat bohot ajeeb thi jispar kisine dhyan nahi diya tha aur wo ye ki us chalchitra me WOGER nahi dikh raha tha...

itna hi nahi, MOKALSAR, SHAILA aur AKSHAANT jinhe mere baare me kaafi kuch pata tha,unhe bhi WOGER ke baare me koi jaankari nahi thi....

khair,scene khatm hote hi wo chalchitra band ho gaya...


AKSHAANT-EARTH ke hisaab se aap teeno abhi bhi wahin hain..aap teeno ke clones jaisa aap teeno kaam karte the,waisa hi karte rahenge....

isiliye apne orphanage ke bacchon ki chinta aap naa karen...
yahan rehne me aur koi pareshani hai toh woh bataiye...


AKSHAANT ki baat sun kuch der tak ek dusre ko dekhte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-itna bada faisla hum yunhi itni jaldi kaise kar sakte hain????

SHAILA-faisla aap itminaan se kariye...waise aap yahan rahe,iska ek bohot bada kaaran hai hamare paas....

FLORIN/MARIA-hum samjhe nahi...???

SHAILA-abhi pata chal jaayega...par usse pehle RAAZ,kyunki tum orphan ho isiliye tumhe yahan hostel me rehna padega..waise yahan ke hostel bhi saari sukh suvidhaon se lais hain...


SHAILA ki is baat ko sun FLORIN aur MARIA ek baar firse shocked ho gaye...

MARIA-par abhi toh aapne kaha ki hamare liye yahan MANOR banaya gaya hai...

SHAILA-bilkul bana hai..par wo aapke liye hai, RAAZ ke liye nahi... RAAZ MANOR me tab reh paata jab aap uske mom dad hote....

MARIA-but hum yahan pahunche hi RAAZ ki wajah se hain.. bhale hi hum iske parents nahi hai but issike parents ki haisiyat se hi toh hume MANOR mil raha hak naa???

SHAILA-ye toh humne nahi kaha...


SHAILA ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA confused ho gaye the...


SHAILA-maine aapse kaha tha naa,ki aap yahin rahen,uska ek kaaran hai hamare paas...

aayiye...


ye bol bina kuch sune SHAILA, aur uske SAATH MOKALSAR tatha AKSHAANT office ke door ki taraf chal pade..

aur unhike piche mai aur mere piche chehre par confusion liye MARIA aur FLORIN aane lage...

wo teeno SOVEREIGN chalte chalte kuch gallaries ko cross karte hue ek room ke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye...

unke piche piche hum bhi wahan tak pahunch chuke the...

humare door par pahunchte hi us door ko kisine andar se open kiya maano usse pata ho ki hum yahan pahunch chuke hain...

darwaza open hote hi ek khubsoorat chehra hamare saamne tha....


LADKI-hello SOVEREIGN....

SOVEREIGN-hello MARILIZA....


wish karte hi MARILIZA ek taraf hat gayi aur aisa hote hi teeno SOVEREIGN aur unke piche piche hum sab us room me enter ho gaye...

room kaafi bada tha jiske right taraf ek bada sa master bed tha jispar dusri taraf mooh kar koi soya hua tha...


SHAILA-uthao usse....


SHAILA ki baat sun MARILIZA ne sir jhuka kar haami bhari aur agle hi pal haathon ko aage kar.....


PRATISAMBHUDDA

RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS


ek baar firse MARILIZA ne wahi spell bola jo last time bola tha aur uske aisa bolte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikal us behosh pade shaksh ki taraf badh gayi aur jaise hi us ray ne us shaksh ke mastishk ko chua,uski chetna loutne lagi aur kuch hi pal me uski aakhen puri tarah khul gayi....

kuch pal sunya ko ghurne ke baad us shaksh ne khud ko uthaya aur agle hi pal uska chehra humari taraf ghuma aur jaise hi ye hua,kamre me khamoshi toh thi but ab wo khamoshi sannate me badal gayi...

par ye sannata sirf kuch palon ka hi mehmaan tha..kuch palon ke sannate ke baad wo room jisme hum sab moujud the,ek zordaar cheekh se gunj utha....

ye cheekh jo ki asal me ek naam tha jo MARIA aur FLORIN dono ke mooh se ek saath nikla tha...

ek aisi cheekh jo ab bhi pure room me gunj rahi thi aur lagatar us naam ko dohraaye jaa rahi thi....



wo naam jo saamne bed par lete shaksh ka tha...

wo naam jiski wajah se FLORIN aur MARIA yahan the...

wo naam jo FLORIN aur MARIA ko pura karta hai....

wo naam jo in dono ki aatma tak ko thandak pahunchta hai...

wo naam,wo chehra,unki rooh ka wo tukda jo kho chuka tha,aaj,abhi unke saamne tha...


WO NAAM-.............ALFREEN............







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......




AAPKA APNA V....J.....



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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ KO SLUNDER KI EK BOOK MILTI HAI JISKA NAAM THE FORBIDDEN FOREST HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ISSI NAAM KI KOI JAGAH KE BAARE ME DO LOG JO KHUDKO VOTARIES BATA RAHE HAIN,BAAT KAR RAHE HOTE HAIN..


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-15



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS




AGAR TUNE APNI BAKWAS BAND NAHI KI NAA,TOH TERE SAAMNE KE DO AADHE DAANTH KA BAAKI BACHA HISSA BHI TOD DUNGA MAI.....


subah ka waqt hai...hum sabhi NEWBORNS apne institution ke ek bade se claas me khade the...aaj bhi hostlers ek group me khade the aur dusra group banaye hamare left side discholars khade the..

but aaj mai apne group ke last me naa khada ho thoda aage aakar khada hua tha jiska reason ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the...

dono ki nok jhonk se bachne ke liye hi aaj mai un dono se alag khada tha...

aur hua bhi wahi.....jo bhadkila awaaz abhi abhi nikla tha wo SLUNDER ka tha jo ACHHUTA ki bakwas sun sun kar jab pura pak gaya,toh usne ghusse me aakar uspar bhadakte hue apni baat kahi..


ACHHUTA-look who's talking...???saale daanth ki baat tu naa hi kar toh acha hai...mooh se bada daath lekar ghum raha hai aur mere daanth ko kam karne ki baat kar raha hai...

isse acha toh khud ko hi ek mukka maar le...shayad tere daanth tere mooh se chote ho jaayen....

ACHHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ko aur ghussa aa gaya...wo aur zyada bhadakte hue ACCHUTA ko kuch kehne hi waala tha ki tabhi usse main door se OPHILIA WHIZZ aati dikhi jiski wajah se wo chup ho gaya....


OPHILIA-good morning SAVENTS......

HUM-good morning WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-so u all are ready for today's class....!!!

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ.......


sabhi SAVENTS ne badi excitement me jawab diya...(excluding RAAZ)


OPHILIA-par sabse pehle,abhi yahan jo practical hoga,uski theory aap sab se kal maine pata karne ke liye kaha tha...

aur mai dekh rahi hun ki aap sabke haathon me wahi books hain jiski theory aap sab ko janani thi...

iska matlab aap sabhi ko REQUEST,COMMAND aur ATTACH MODE ka matlab pata chal chuka hai...

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ....


apni nazaren hum sabki taraf ghumate hue OPHILIA WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi thi but fir unki nazaren ek jagah ya fir ye kahun ki ek SAVENT par aakar rook gayi....

ye SAVENT aur koi nahi balki mai hi tha...par kyun????aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye....


OPHILIA-you,kya naam hai aapka????

MAI-RAAZ....


meri awaaz sun sabhi ki nazar mujhpar gayi aur issi dauran in teen dino me pehli baar MAHI ki aankhon ne bhi pehli baar mujhe dekha tha......

patla sa ek ladka,jiski aankhen bhi hamesha sunsaan aur thaki hui si lagti hai,kandhe halke neeche maano race shuru hone se pehle hi unhone haar maan li ho...chehre par halka sa bhi aakarshan nahi aur naahi koi tej jo har SAVENT ke chehre par dikhta tha...

aise me mujhe dekh uspar kaisa impression pada hoga,ye aap sab khud hi samajh lijiye....

waise mere catagory ka mai akela namuna nahi tha...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi meri hi tarah dabbu dikhte the but un dono ke chehre par bhi SAVENT waali chamak thi...

par phir bhi,mere, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko agar chhod den,toh baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS kaafi attractive hain....

khair mere naam batane ke baad...


OPHILIA-RAAZ.....tumhari book kahan hai???

MAI-hostel me....

OPHILIA-hostel me???saath kyun nahi laaye...????

MAI-man nahi kiya...


mere jawab ko sun OPHILIA WHIZZ ke saath saath sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye the...

but OPHILIA WHIZZ shocked hone ke saath hi thodi naraz bhi ho gayi aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-do you even realize ki tum kya aur kisse bol rahe ho...???

MAI-ek passed out student jo ab yahin ka teacher ban gaya ha,usse keh raha hun..aur jo kaha hai,wo aap sun chuki hain...

and i dont like to repeat myself....


mere is jawab ko sun SAVENTS aur shocked par OPHILIA aur ghussa ho gayi thi...


OPHILIA-who the hell do you think you are....???aisa behaviour CHOSENS me tolerate nahi kiya jaayega...

u will have to do each and every thing as u are ordered to....

understand.....

MAI-nope....i dont understand and i never will...aur jahan tak baat apke is so called CHOSENS ki hai,toh yahan mujhe bulaya gaya hai..yahan aane ke liye maine apply nahi kiya tha.....

so the bottom line is this...i am not bound to anything... and as for you,aap puch sakte hain,bata bhi sakte hai par order nahi de sakte....


ab toh OPHILIA WHIZZ ka dimag hi ghum gaya tha...unka bas chalta toh wo abhi issi waqt kisi jaanleva spell se meri haalat bigad deti but as a WHIZZ,wo ye nahi kar sakti thi...

par wo yun is matter ko jaane bhi nahi de sakti thi..aaj tak ke CHOSENS ke history me kabhi kisi student ne kisi WHIZZ se aisi baat toh nahi ki thi...

ye unke liye naakabile bardasht tha aur isiliye bina kuch kahe,wo SOVEREIGN ke office ki taraf badh chali....

wahin unke jaane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER turant mere paas aaye aur...


ACCCHUTA-abbe pagal ho gaya hai kya????aag ke upar pichwada nahi seka karte...gaa**d jal jaati hai...

saale,hume yahan teen PHASES nikalne hain..aur tu hai ki shuru me hi khud ki lene par tul gaya hai...

SLUNDER-RAAZ,i didn't expect this from you....mai toh tumhe ek sencere aur serious ladka samajhta tha par tum toh is ACCHUTA se bhi zyada galat ho...

ACHHUTA-abbe,tu shawl me lapetke mujhe hi joota kyun maar raha hai...???

saale,matlab koi bhi kuch galat karega toh tu mujhse compare karkar usse rank dega kya???

SLUNDER-tu chup kar.. tere se kisika koi comparison hi nahi hai..licchadpan ki aakhri hadh hai tu....

MAI-tum dono ki bakwaas nahi sunane ke liye hi mai aaj alag khada hua tha...phir bhi mere paas aakar hi bhownk rahe ho dono....

aur SLUNDER,ek baat bata,tu hai kaun mujhse expectations rakhne waala...

maine kaha tha mere liye raay banane ko....apne kaam se kaam rakhna sikho tum dono aur sabse pehle mere aas paas bhinbhinana band karo....


meri baat sun dono ne ek baar mujhe fir ek baar ek dusre ghura aur apni apni jagah jaakar khade ho gaye...

yahan hamari hostlers ki line me toh meri hi baat chal rahi thi, par same chiz discholars ke line me bhi ho rahi thi...

aakhon me awishwas liye wo sab bhi meri hi taraf dekh rahe the...

aur in aankhon me MAHI ki aankhen bhi thi jo mujhe dekh....


MAHI-who is this guy man????itna ATTITUDE!!!!!

ALFREEN-he's a bloody basterd.....


MAHI ke baaju me hi khadi ALFREEN,jo mujhe ghusse se hi dekh rahi thi,uske mooh se mere liye ye pyar bhare shabd nikle....

wahi ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MAHI ne uski taraf dekha,toh uske chehre ke haaw bhaaw dekh wo samajh gayi ki ALFREEN mujhe pehle se jaanti hai aur isiliye...


MAHI-u know this guy???

ALFREEN-haan..ye bhi EARTH se hai....aur ek number ka ehsaan faramosh ladka hai.... jaisa behaviour isne abhi dikhaya hai,yahi iska character hai...isse kisiki bhi feelings se koi matlab nahi hai...

itna hi nahi,ye wahi hai jiski wajah se mujhe jite ji maar diya gaya tha...

mere mom dad itne saalon tak mujhe mara hua samajh tadpe...

ye unhike orphanage me bada hua hai....par fir bhi mere mom dad ki bilkul bhi respect nahi karta...

jinhone iski zindagi bachayi,isse ek achi khaasi life di,jab ye unka nahi ho paaya toh fir yahan ka kaise hoga????


ALFREEN ne MAHI ko abse pehle bas itna bataya tha ki kisi aur GOD GIFTED bacche ki wajah se usse 22 saal pehle yahan laaya gaya tha aur kuch dino pehle hi wo wapas hosh me aayi hai...

isse zyada usne kuch nahi kaha tha..but ab baaki ki baat sun MAHI ko behad hairani hui....par usse ALFREEN ki RAAZ ke uske mom dad ko disrespect karne waali baat hazam nahi hui...

kyunki RAAZ bhi ek SAVENT tha..aur ek SAVENT ki soch normal insaano se kayi guna zyada aage ki hoti hai...

fir aise me RAAZ ka itna negetive hona,usse jach nahi raha tha aur isiliye...


MAHI-yaar baaki sab toh thik hai..but agar RAAZ ko tere mom dad ne bade hone me help ki hai toh wo unse kaise disrespectful ho sakta hai...????

ALFREEN-chal,demo dikhati hun....


ye bol ALFREEN meri taraf badh gayi aur uske piche piche MAHI....




WAHIN SOVEREIGN OFFICE ME:-




YES COME IN WHIZZ OPHILIA....


SOVEREIGN ki office ke darwaze par knock hua jisse sun andar baithe SOVES AKSHAANT ne wahan moujud magical sensors se ye jaan liya ki bahar WHIZZ OPHILIA aayi hui hain...

wahin permission milte hi WHIZZ OPHILIA andar ghussi aur...


OPHILIA-SOVES....mujhe aapse ek SAVENT ke baare me baat karni hai...


OPHILIA ki awaaz me seriousness aur ghussa saaf jhalak raha tha jisse AKSHAANT bhaamp gaye the...


AKSHAANT-okay...kis SAVENT ke baare me???

OPHILIA-RAAZ....


RAAZ ka naam sunte hi AKSHAANT ke kaan khade ho gaye the....


AKSHAANT-bolo,mai sun raha hun???

OPHILIA-sir, CHOSENS ke puri history me itna battamiz SAVENT aaj tak nahi aaya hai...he has no manners..no addicates....

usse baat tak karne ka lihaz nahi hai...he is a complete douchebag....


RAAZ ke baare me aisi baatein sun AKSHAANT man hi man kaafi hairan hue but unhone apne face par bina koi reaction laaye...


AKSHAANT-hua kya hai OPHILIA????


AKSHAANT ke sawal par jawab dene ke bajaye OPHILIA ne....


OPHILIA-DRISHTI VARGHAMAN

SHOW THE SEEN


OPHILIA ne ye spell bola jiske uccharit hote hi uske aankhon se ek roshni nikal uske aur AKSHAANT ke beech rook gayi..

aur agle hi pal wo roshni ek chalchitra me badal gayi jisme wahi scene chal raha tha jo OPHILIA aur RAAZ ke beech ghata tha...

jaise jaise scene aage badhta gaya, AKSHAANT ke chehre par hairani ke bhaav aate gaye..

unhe yakin nahi hua ki jiske baare me janane ke liye wo khud itne utsuk hain,wo RAAZ aisa niklega...

AKSHAANT ko ye toh nahi pata tha ki RAAZ special kyun hai,par RAAZ ki OPHILIA ke saath hui baatein sunkar ab wo sochne lag gaye the ki RAAZ bhala special ho kaise sakta hai????

but saath hi wo ye bhi jaante the ki bhale kuch bhi ho, RAAZ jinki rachna hai,unke faislon par sawal nahi uthaya jaa sakta aur isiliye...


AKSHAANT-OPHILIA....mai chahta hun ki tum RAAZ ko avoid karo aur baaki ki class par dhyan do....

agar RAAZ khud kuch puche ya kisi activity me part lena chahe,toh hi usse involve karo varna let him be.....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun OPHILIA ka toh sir hi ghum gaya tha...

kahan wo ye soch kar aayi thi ki jo hua usse dekh AKSHAANT RAAZ ko punish karenge but yahan toh sab pura ulta hi ho gaya tha...

usse toh jaise AKSHAANT ki baat samajh me hi nahi aayi thi aur isiliye wo kuch kehne ko hui par....


AKSHAANT-mai jaanta hua OPHILIA ki meri baat sunkar tumhe shock bhi laga hai aur bura bhi..

but trust me,maine jo bhi kaha hai,sirf yahi ek option hai...

AKSHAANT ki baat toh ab bhi OPHILIA samajh nahi paayi par AKSHAANT ke chehre ke bhaav ko dekh wo samajh gayi thi ki unhone jo bhi bola hai,bhale hi kadwa hai but sach hai...

par phir bhi OPHILIA ke andar chal rahe uthal puthal ne usse chain naa aane diya aur isiliye uske mooh se chota but important sawal nikal hi gaya...


OPHILIA-why SOVS???kyun????

AKSHAANT-filhal iska jawab mere paas bhi nahi hai OPHILIA...aur naahi mai is layak hun jo khud is jawab ka kaaran dhundu...

tumhe bas wahi keh sakta hun jo khud se kaha hai...

intazar karo sahi waqt ka....is naye RAAZ ke UNFOLD hone ka....


ab koi topic bacha nahi tha conversation ka,isiliye OPHILIA chupchaap SOVEREIGN office se baahar nikal gayi....



BACK TO HERO:-


RAAZ,APNE TEACHER SE AISE BAAT KARTE HAIN KYA????


mujhe ye gyan diya tha ALFREEN ne jo MAHI ke saath mere paas apne point ko proove karne ke liye aayi thi...

ab jab wo yahi chahti hai toh yahi sahi.......isiliye......


MAI-us raat jab tumhe first time dekha tha toh laga tha ki tum bhi mere aur baaki orphanage ke bacchon ki hi tarah adopted ho...

but ab tumne proove kar diya ki tum FLORIN sir ki real genetically produced beti ho...

ALFREEN-matlab???

MAI-tumhare andar bhi tumhare baap ki khubiyan jo hain...dusro ke kaam me ungli karne ki....


meri baat sun ALFREEN ka dimag kharab ho chuka tha but usse zyada bura MAHI ko laga tha....uski eklouti dost aur saath hi uske pitaji ki beizatti jo ki thi maine...aur isiliye.....


MAHI-mind your tounge...

MAI-and you guyzzz,mind ur own business.....ye ek behatrin tarika hai khud ki insult naa karwane kaa....

itna kuch sikhoge yahan,lage haathon ye hunar bhi sikh lena....

ALFREEN-beta,3 phases nikalne hain tujhe yahan....tu soch bhi nahi sakta ki kya haal karungi mai tera itne waqt me...

MAI-BETA!!!haan,tum aisa keh sakti ho...16 saal ki dikhne me aur 16 saal ke hone me fark toh hota hi hai...

22 saal se mari padi thi tu yahan,toh is lihaz se toh tu meri maa ki umr ki hi hui....

ALFREEN-MAA....is shabd ka matlab bhi pata hai tujhe....kaise pata hoga,hoti toh jaanta naa....

MAI-teri toh MAA hai naa...tune kya ukhad liya...22 saalon se ek anath ki hi zindagi toh jee rahi thi tu...oops,correction..so rahi thi tu....

umr ke lihaz se dekhen,toh tu mujhse bhi high ranked anath hai...

MAHI-bas.. bohot hua..sirf isiliye kyunki tu is prestigious institution ka anchaha hi sahi but ek part hai,teri ye saari bakwaas sun rahi hun mai...

warna sirf 2 minute lagenge,mujhe tere is shakal aur AKAD ko todne me....

MAI-AKAD???jisse tu akad keh rahi hai,wo mera sach hai..aur itihas gawah hai,sach taklif hi deta hai...

aur rahi baat teri,toh khol apna magaj aur bas itna samajh,ki teri soch se baahar hai meri AKAD,

aur teri aukaad se baahar hai mera ......ATTITUDE......





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....





AAPKA APNA V..J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI PEHLE RAAZ KI OPHILIA WHIZZ KE SAATH AUR FIR MAHI & ALFREEN KE SAATH BAHAS HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-16




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-THE CHOSENS




ABBE OYE DUSRON KE GHAR KO APNA THIKANA BATANE WAALE LICCHADON,TUMHARI TO NAHI LI HAI NAA RAAZ NE....

FIR KAAHE KO APNE APNE GAA**D KA DARD DIKHA RAHE HO EK DUSRE KO....

APNI APNI JAGAH PAR CHUPCHAAP KHADE HO JAAO..

WARNA KAHIN OPHILIA WHIZZ AA GAYI TOH TUMHARI BINA TEL KI NAA LE LEN...



OPHILIA ma'am ke jaane ke baad apna apna group banakar sabhi SAVENTS RAAZ aur OPHILIA WHIZZ ke beech hui bahas ke baare me hi baat kar rahe the jisse sun ACHHUTA ne apni baat kahi...

bhale hi ACHHUTA ki tone aur language galat thi,but uski baat bilkul sahi thi aur isiliye uski baat sunte hi hostlers aur discholars dono hi group apni apni jagah par jaakar khade ho gaye....

wahin RAAZ ke saamne khadi ALFREEN aur MAHI jo meri baat sun yahin kaat ke phenk dene waali nazar se mujhe dekh rahi thi,meri baat ka koi jawab deti ki tabhi OPHILIA ma'am class me dobara enter hui jisse dekh wo dono chubhti hui nigahon se mujhe dekhte hue apni apni jagah jaakar khadi ho gayi...

OPHILIA WHIZZ SOVEREIGN office se apni soch me goom class me louti thi jiski wajah se unka dhyan turant kisi SAVENT par nahi gaya tha...

hum sabke saamne khade hone ke baad bhi kuch der tak wo apni sochon me hi rahin par phir...

unki nazar hum sab par padi ya fir ye kahun ki mujhpar padi.par is baar unki nazar me naa toh ghussa tha,aur naahi chidh bas confusion tha but wahin isse ulat mera chehra sapat tha maano kuch der pehle kuch hua hi nahi tha....

kuch der tak mujhe dekhne rehne ke baad apna dimag jhatak...


OPHILIA-so guys...kaafi time waste ho gaya hai isiliye aaj ki class shuru karte hain...

sabse pehle aap mujhe ye batayen ki jin teen modes ke baare me maine aap sabko bataya tha,wo kya hain???


OPHILIA WHIZZ ne aate hi class shuru ki par unki baatein sun sabhi man hi man shocked ho gaye the..

sabko ye laga tha ki OPHILIA WHIZZ ke aane ke baad RAAZ ko tagda punishment milega but aisa toh kuch hua hi nahi....

sab abhi issi soch me goom the ki.....


OPHILIA-kya hua SAVENTS???kya kisine bhi mere kal puche gaye sawal ka jawab nahi dhunda...???


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki awaaz sun sabhi apne apne khayalon se baahar aaye aur....


mujhe chhod sabhi ne apne apne haath upar kiye jiska matlab tha ki sabhi ko answer pata chal chuka hai...

but kal hi ki tarah MAHI aur ALFREEN ka haath sabse pehle utha tha jisse OPHILIA ma'am ne dekh liya tha....

wahin unhe ye jaankar bhi khushi hui thi ki sabhi ne unke puche question ka answer dhunda hai..

par saath hi unhone ye bhi note kiya ki maine haath nahi uthaya hai jiska matlab hai ki yaa toh mujhe answer nahi pata yaa fir mujhe interest nahi hai aur ab toh unhe bhi mujhme interest nahi bacha tha isiliye jaisa AKSHAANT ne unhe kaha tha,unhone mujhe avoid kiya aur...


OPHILIA-MAHI....aap bataiye ki REQUEST MODE kya hota hai???

MAHI- REQUEST MODE MAGIC ka wo tarika hai jisme magic karne waala magic ke zariye jo bhi karna chahta hai,us kaam ko khud ke dimag se jod us MAGIC se jude mantron ko uccharit kar man hi man REQUEST ya ANURODHAM kehta hai...

is mode me MAGIC ka asar magic karne waala tay nahi karta balki ye mode khud tay karta hai...

jitna acha judaw spell bolne waale ka apne dimag se aur us kaam se hoga,jisse wo anjaam dena chahta hai,utna hi asardaar uska spell aur usse hone waala MAGIC hoga....

OPHILIA- absolutely right..bohot ache se explain kiya hai tumne MAHI...

MAHI-thanks WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-jaisa ki MAHI ne bataya ki REQUEST MODE me aap apne focus ke hisab se hi apne chune hue kaam ko anjaam de sakte hain...

bhale hi MAGIC aap khud karte hain but ANURODHAM,is shabd ki wajah se aap apne spell ko control nahi karte balki aapki iccha shakti ke hisab se MAGIC hota hai...

ab ALFREEN,aap bataiye ki COMMAND MODE kya hota hai???

ALFREEN- COMMAND MODE magic ka second best aur hard tarika hai..ye wo tarika hai jisme MAGIC karne waala jo bhi karna chahta hai,usse karne se pehle us kaam se jude spell ko uccharit kar man me COMMAND ya AADESHAM kehta hai....

isme dimag ko jodne ki zaroorat isiliye nahi padti kyunki iska safalta purvak use karne waale ka dimag pehle hi har spell se juda hota hai....

par ye bohot kathin bhi hai kyunki isse use me laane ke liye saare spells aur usse Jude kaamo ko pehle hi apne dimag se jodna padhta hai....

OPHILIA-bohot ache ALFREEN..toh ye hota hai COMMAND MODE...

par differences ke saath REQUEST MODE aur COMMAND MODE me ek similarity bhi hai...

aur wo ye hai ki in dono hi modes me use hue magic ki ek seema nirdharit hoti hai...

ek daayre ko chu ye dono hi modes me kiye MAGIC ka asar tham jaata hai...

par inse bohot alag aur khatarnaak hota hai teesra mode matlab ATTACH MODE...

toh kaun batayega is mode ke baare me...aap,aap bataiye...


WHIZZ ne jisse bolne ke liye bola tha,wo aur koi nahi hamare SLUNDER bhai sahab the jo WHIZZ ke ijazat dete hi...


SLUNDER- ATTACH MODE magic use karne waale ke sharir ke har part ki shakti ka ek tarah ka mixture hai...

isme MAGIC karne waale ko naahi request karna padta hai aur naahi command....

usse bas bole jaane waale spell ko apne sharir se connect yaa fir ATTACH karna hota hai...

aisa hone par spell sharir ka ek hissa ban jaata hai...aur issi wajah se us spell ke natije ka prabhaav gayi guna tak badh jaata hai....

OPHILIA-bilkul sahi....aur SAVENTS,aap sabke jaankari ke liye batadun ki CHOSENS ke itihas me aaj tak sirf do hi aise SAVENTS hue hain,jinhone is ATTACH MODE me kaafi had tak perfection haasil kiya hai....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ko shock laga tha..

OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baaton se saaf ho chuka tha ki wo khud aur saath hi baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS bhi is anokhe mode ko perfectly use karne ke kaabil nahi hain...


aur issiki wajah se un sabko ATTACH MODE ke importance aur difficulty level ka bhi andaza ho gaya tha....


OPHILIA- aap sab ne gour kiya hoga ki aapke is first PHASE ke liye hum kul chaar WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS appointed hai...

iska reason ye hai ki jin teen MODES ko aap sikhenge,unhe sikhne ke liye chaar chizon ka sahi tarah se work karna zaroori hai...

aur yahi chaar chizen aapke is PHASE ke chaar classes hain...

aapki pehli class jo ki mai hi lungi wo hai...


1ST-BRAIN AMPLIFICATION....


brain ke wo saare nerves jo magic karne ke liye istemal me laaye jaate hain,is class me un saare nerves ko khola aur use me laana sikhaya jaayega....

aapki dusri class hogi


2ND-BODY AMPLIFICATION....


is class me aapki body ko is laayak banaya jaayega jisse wo aise kaam kar sake jo aap filhal nai kar sakte....

is class ka ek kaaran ye bhi hai ki jitna strong aapka body hoga,utna hi powerful aapke MAGIC SPELLS bhi honge....


BODY AMPLIFICATION ki class OMMIN WHIZZDER lenge....

aap sab ka teesra class hoga


3RD-BLOOD AMPLIFICATION....


hamare sharir me behte khoon ki bhi ek alag divine taakat hoti hai...is universe ka sabse honest creation blood hai aur issi wajah se isme bohot zyada urja hoti hai...

BLOOD AMPLIFICATION class me aapko aapke sharir me behte khoon ko ek software ki tarah use me laana sikhaya jaayega...

iske sahi istamal se aapke sharir ke kone kone me ek aisi urja ka sanchar hoga jo aapke sharir ke charon taraf ek aura create karegi jisse aap bade se bade ghaatak spell se khudko chot lagne se bacha paayenge...

NOX aapki ye class lenge....

aur aapki final class hogi


4TH-SOUL AMPLIFICATION


ye sabse hard aur sabse important class hai...waise toh aapke chaaro hi classes aur usme jo bhi aap sikhenge,sabhi important hai but soul ampification ki class ki baat hi alag hai...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ATTACH MODE issi class ke andar sikhaya jaata hai...

soul...invisible yet the most powerful form of any living being...

soul ki shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta...brain,body aur blood milkar bhi itni energy ya power generate nahi kar sakte jo soul aaram se kar sakti hai...

agar aapne apne soul ki shakti ka sahi istemal Sikh liya toh baaki saare ampifications ki zaroorat hi nahi padegi....

SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class VIOLET WHIZZ lengi kyunki hum chaaron me attach mode ka sabse zyada use karna unhe hi aata hai...

but us class me unke saath hum baaki ke teeno bhi aapko guide karenge....

but filhall baaki saari classes tab tak shuru nahi ki jaa sakti jab tak aap sab apne pehle class yaani BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ko thik se use me naa le aayen kyunki magic karne ka yahi class ground zero hai...

toh isiliye aaj se kuch dino tak aapki bas yahi BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class hi chalegi..

jaise hi aap sab apne apne brain ke saare unconscious nerves jo magic ko trigger karte hain,unpar kaabu paa lenge,us din se aapke baaki ki classes bhi start ho jaayengi....

so all clear....

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZ...


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki saari baatein saare SAVENTS badi dilchaspi se sun rahe the aur saari baatein jaanane ke baad toh jaise sabka excitement level alag hi level par chala gaya tha...

jin jin classes ki baat OPHILIA WHIZZ ne ki thi,unke baare me soch soch kar hi sabhi andar hi andar khush ho rahe the...

wahin apni baat keh OPHILIA WHIZZ ne man hi man baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS se contact kiya jiske agle hi pal OMMIN, VOILET aur NOX bhi hum sabke saamne prakat hue...

waise toh aisa hote humne pehle bhi dekha tha,but ye sab abhi bhi itna naya aur anokha tha ki teeno WHIZZ ke prakat hote hi hum sab shocked, surprised aur khush, teeno ho gaye the...

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke prakat hone ke baad...


OPHILIA-kyunki kuch dino tak aapki yahi class chalegi, isiliye is class me mere saath ye teeno bhi aapki help karenge taaki aap sab jaldi hi BRAIN AMPLIFICATION me maahir ho jaayen....

toh shuru karen!!!!

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ...


pure excitement me saare SAVENTS jaise chilla uthe par inse ulat mujhe ubasi aane lagi thi jisse OPHILIA WHIZZ ne dekh liya tha but jaisa AKSHAANT ne kaha tha,unhone avoid kiya....

VOILET-toh ab aap sab ko aapke is PHASE me sikhne waale saare chizon ke baare me pata chal gaya hai aur hum sab ko ummid hai ki aapka pura batch apne first PHASE me excell karega..

aur issi ummid aur vishwas ke saath hum aaj ki aapke first class jo ki aapke is naye safar ki neev hai,shuru karte hain...

sabse pehle,aap sab neeche baith jaayiye..

VOILET WHIZZ ki baat sun hum sab jahan khade the,wahin paalthi maarkar baith gaye....

VOILET-BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ko trigger karne ka pehla aur sabse important step hota hai PAUSE CEREBRATION...(stop the thinking of mind)

universe ke normal human biengs meditation karte hai...but meditation ka next level hota hai PAUSE CEREBRATION....

jo ki kisi bhi normal living being ke liye impossible hai...

but kyunki aap sab SAVENTS hain,isiliye ye adbhudh hunar aap sabme god gifted hota hai...

PAUSE CEREBRATION meditation ka wo phase hai jisme aap apne dimag ke un nerves ko excess kar sakte hain,jinme meta physical activity ya magic create karne ki shakti hoti hai....


VIOLET WHIZZ aage kuch kehti usse pehle hi MAHI ne apne haath upar kiye jisse dekh


VOILET-yes SAVENT MAHI....!!!!

MAHI-WHIZZ,ye capability toh humare andar shuru se hai..but hum toh kabhi koi metaphysical kaam ya magic nahi kar paayen hain...

VOILET-wo isiliye kyunki ab tak aap sab ke brain ke un nerves ke upar jahan se aap metaphysical activities ko anjaam de paayenge,ek BARRIER laga hua tha but ab hum us barrier ko kholne waale hain...

VOILET WHIZZ ke ye bolte hi chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne apne apne haath aage kiye aur...


SETUBHEDIN....

BREAKING DOWN BARRIERS....


un chaaron ke ek saath spell uccharit karte hi unke haathon se ek roshni numa urja nikli aur hum sabke mastishk me padi....

aur aisa hote hi hamare dimag ke wo nerve jo ab tak band the ya fir ye kahun ki jinka connection hamare baaki active nerves se toot gaya tha, wapas jud gaya...

but kamal ki baat ye thi ki kisi bhi SAVENT ko kuch feel hi nahi hua...


VOILET-ab aap sabke dimag ka barrier toot chuka hai...iska matlab hai ki ab aap sab bhi magic kar paayenge..


but us magic ki hadh aap sab khud tay karenge...jitna adhik aapka focus hoga,utni hi jaldi aur ache se aap apne BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ke process par kaabu paa sakenge...

VOILET WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ka excitement level aur badh gaya tha aur sabhi aage ki technique ke baare me jaanane ke liye utsuk ho uthe the...


NOX-ab aap sab dhyan se suniye ki aage kya karna hai....

aap sab ko apni apni aankhen band kar apne dimag ke CEREBRATION process ko pause karna hai..

kyunki aapke subconscious mind ke saare nerves ab active hain,isiliye aapke aisa karte hi aap sabko apne brain ke beech ek roshni ka chota sa ray dikhayi dega....

ye ray asal me aapke METAPHYSICAL powers ki key hai...

aapko us ray se khud ke chitt ko jodne ki koshish karni hai...

jaise jaise aap apni koshish me kaamiyab honge,wo ray apne aakar ko bada kar aapke magical nerves me ghusti chali jaayegi...

par ye itna asaan nahi hai... jaise hi aap sab ke chitt us ray ke paas jaayenge,toh aapke dimag ko jhatka lagna shuru ho jaayega jisse aap ka CEREBRATION process wapas shuru ho jaayega aur aap sab back to zero par aa jayenge..

itna hi nahi,agar kisi tarah us ray ke paas jaane ke baad bhi aap apne chitt ko control me rakh paaye,tab wo ray apne aakar ko badhayega aur aisa hote hi aapke pure dimag aur saath hi pure sharir me jhatke lagne shuru ho jayenge jiske baad apne CEREBRATION process ko pause me rakhna aap sab ke liye bohot mushkil hoga....


NOX WHIZZDER ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ab excited ke saath nervous bhi ho chale the....

unhe samajh me aane laga tha ki ye safar unki ummidon se bhi zyada mushkil hone waala hai..

khair,ab toh piche mud kar dekha nahi jaa sakta tha isiliye sabhi khudko is naye adventure ke liye man hi man ready karne me lag gaye the...


OPHILIA-toh aap sab ready hain???

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ...

OPHILIA-good..chaliye,ab apni aakhen band kijiye aur apne apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kijiye....


OPHILIA ke aisa bolte hi sabhi SAVENTS including me,ki aankhen band hoti chali gayi thi..

but ek difference tha..jahan baaki sab khud ke CEREBRATION process ko pause karne me lage the,wahin mai bas aankhen band kiye baitha tha...

par naahi ye koi normal class thi aur naahi hamare saamne khade teachers aam log the...unhe dhoka dena aasan nahi tha aur hua bhi kuch aisa hi....

saare SAVENTS turant aankhen band kar baith chuke the...aur jaise ki bataya gaya hai, SAVENT ke liye CEREBRATION process ko pause karna bohot asaan hota hai isiliye jaise hi saare SAVENTS ne khudke dimag ko sthir karna shuru kiya,brain shaant hota chala gaya...

aksar meditation me jab mastishk shaant hota hai ,toh har taraf ek roshni hoti hai..but kyunki CEREBRATION PAUSE process meditation se ek level upar hai, isiliye isme roshni ke ulat dimag ke har taraf andhera hota hai...

aur ussi andhere ke beech kuch der baad ek halki si roshni ki kiran dikhti hai....

aur abhi bhi waisa hi hua...chitt ke shaant hote hi sabhi SAVENTS ke dimag me ek ghanghor andhera chhaya jiske kuch der baad unhe us andhere ke beech ek roshni dikhayi di...

ye ray bhale hi un sabke mastishk ke andar thi,par is ray ki shakti itni zyada thi ki uske ubharti hi saare SAVENTS ke forehead ke beecho beech ek tej utpann hua jisse dekh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS samajh gaye ki saare SAVENTS kahan par hain...

par asli kaam toh ab hona tha jiske parinaam ko soch wo chaaron muskuraye jaa rahe the...

wo chaaron sabhi SAVENTS ki taraf nazar doudaye jaa rahe the ki tabhi un sabki nazar ek jagah par aakar rook gayi...

ye jagah aur koi nahi meri hi thi..aur wo sab mujhe hi dekhe jaa rahe the..

reason....

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke chitt par tej dikh raha tha,wahin mera forehead normal hi tha...

dhyan se dekhne par un sabko ye bhi dikha ki band aankhon ke andar beech beech me meri aankhon ki putliyan hil rahi hain jiska matlab tha ki maine CEREBRATION process ko pause hi nahi kiya hai...

aur ye pata lagte hi NOX meri taraf badhne hi waale the ki tabhi OPHILIA ma'am ne unhe aisa karne se rok diya aur saath hi kuch der pehle jo mere aur unke beech bahas hui thi,wo batayi....

WHIZZ ki baat sun baaki teeno ko bhi mujhpar behad ghussa aaya par fir jab OPHILIA WHIZZ ne AKSHAANT se hui unki baatein batayi toh un teeno ke bhi hairani ka thikana naa raha...

unhe bhi samajh me nahi aaya ki ye sab ho kya raha hai???kyunki isse pehle aisa kabhi nahi hua tha but AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ki baat unme se koi bhi nahi kaat sakta tha isiliye un sabne bhi khudko OPHILIA WHIZZ ki hi tarah shaant kar liya...

par phir bhi,un sabka dimag mere baare me hi soch raha tha aur shayad aage bhi yahi hota par tabhi....


AHHHHHHHHHHH..........


ek tez dard bhari aah nikli....ye aahh sabhi SAVENTS ke.mooh se nikli thi jisse sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS apni apni sochon se bahar aaye aur un sabke hothon par smile aa gayi...

issi parinaam ke baare me sochkar wo chaaron kuch der pehle bhi muskura rahe the...

darasal mastisk me chaaye andhere ke beech jab sabhi SAVENTS ko apne apne dimag ke andar wo roshni ki ray dikhi toh sabhi ne khudko ko us ray ki taraf dhakela aur un sab ke aisa karte hi unke dimag me ek tez jhatka laga jiski wajah se saare SAVENTS ek dard bhari karah ke saath wapas hosh me aa gaye....

itna hi nahi,us jhatke ki wajah se un sab ke dimag ki nasen bhi hili thi jiski wajah se is waqt sabhi SAVENTS ke chehron par thakan saaf dikh rahi thi....


OPHILIA-hahahaha..maza aaya???


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi chup hi rahe...


OPHILIA-aapko kya laga tha ki jaise aaj tak apne apne grahon par har kaam aapke liye ek piece of cake ki tarah raha hai,yahan bhi aisa hi hoga????

bohot papad belne padhenge aapko yahan excell karne ke liye...khair,filhal ab aap sab is haalat me nahi hain ki fir koshish kar saken isiliye aap sab jaa sakte hain...

jaakar rest kijiye..yahi tarika hai back to normal hone ka...kal dobara try karenge....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ek ke baad ek kar class se baahar nikalte chale gaye...

aj toh MAHI ne bhi extra koshish nahi ko thi..usse bhi aaj aaram ki zaroorat mehsoos hui thi...

khair,meri aadat ke anusar mai sabse last me bahar nikalne laga par tabhi...


OMMIN-RAAZ....ek minute....


OMMIN jinki nazar ab bhi mujhpar hi thi, unhone mujhe awaaz diya jisse mai rook gaya...

wahin mujhe pukarne par baaki ke teeno bhi meri aur OMMIN ki taraf dekhne lage...

mere rookne ke baad OMMIN mere saamne aakar khade hue,kuch der tak mujhe dekha aur...


OMMIN-agar tum yahan rehna nahi chahte,toh tum ye institution chhod bhi sakte ho..yahan rehna koi compulsory nahi hai...

waise bhi aaj ki class me tumne bas apni aakhen band ki thi,aur kuch nahi..jab tumhe interest hi nahi hai toh yahan rehkar faayda kya????

MAI-first class me bataya gaya tha ki yahan total teen PHASES hain...

OMMIN-haan toh????

MAI-aap sab first PHASE me hi padhate hain yaa fir second aur third PHASE me bhi aapki classes hoti hai....

OMMIN-nahi hum chaar sirf issi PHASE ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS hain...

MAI-aur aisa kyun???

OMMIN-hume issi PHASE ki responsibility mili hai...

MAI-jhooth...aap is PHASE me isiliye hain kyunki aap chaaron ki haisiyat itni hi hai....


meri baad sun OMMIN ke saath saath baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko bhi ghussa aa gaya tha isiliye....


VIOLET-tameez se baat karo RAAZ.....tumhe andaza bhi nahi hai ki tumhare saath kya kya ho sakta hai....

MAI-maine galat kya kaha...agar aap sab capable hote toh kisiprimary school ke teachers ki tarah thodi hi yahan first PHASE me padha rahe hote...

aur WHIZZ,mujhe dhamkana band kijiye...iska koi faayda hai nahi..

you know what,hamare earth me kehte hain,



ki sawal ke saath jawab bhi
CHAND RAKH....

agar sun nahi sakta,
toh khud bhi mooh BAND RAKH...




mere khayal se aap sabko bhi is muhavare ki class leni chahiye....

bolo utna jitna baad me jhel sako...mujhe manners ka gyan dene se pehle aap sab apne kaam se kaam rakhna sikh jaaye toh behtar hai....


ye bol mai wapas palta aur baahar ki taraf jaane laga par door ke paas rook mai wapas palta aur...


MAI-aap sab hamare WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hain,hamare teacher hain..but kehte hain ki jo hamesha sikhna chahe,wahi acha teacher ban sakta hai...

issi tark par ek chota sa gyan hai..ho sake toh positively lijiyega...




ki behas agar jitni hai, toh
baatein SEHNA SIKHO....

aur jo naa seh sako
TOH AUKAAD ME REHNA SIKHO...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....




AAPKA APNA V.J....




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Very Nice Update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SABHI SAVENTS CLASS ME ATTENTIVELY DHYAN DE RAHE HAIN WAHIN RAAZ KA FOCUS NIL HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-17




PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S HOSTEL




TUJHE JAANA HAI TOH JAA,PAR MUJHE APNI BEIZATTI KARANE KA KOI SHOUK NAHI HAI...


ye bol nikle the SLUNDER ke mooh se....


shaam ka waqt hai... subah class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS wapas jaa rahe the aur RAAZ ko OMMIN WHIZZDER ne awaaz dekar roka tha,toh aisa hote hue ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ne dekha tha...

unka man tha RAAZ aur OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sunne ka,but wo dono hi ye jaante the ki ye koi normal aur mamuli istitution toh hai nahi....

jisme wo taaka jhaanki karenge aur pata nahi chalega...wahin RAAZ ke ATTITUDE ko dekh wo ye samajh gaye the ki OMMIN sir ne agar usse kuch kaha toh RAAZ unhe bhi suna dega...

aur isiliye unhe dar tha ki kahin OMMIN WHIZZDER aur baaki instructors ke ghusse ke radar me RAAZ ke saath saath wo bhi naa aajayen isiliye wo dono wahan se nikal liye the...

par jahan ek taraf SLUNDER kuch hi der me is baat ko bhul gaya tha wahin ACCHUTA ki khujli ka kida jaaga hua tha aur isiliye shaam ko thakan kam hote hi usne SLUNDER ko RAAZ ke paas chalne ko kaha jisse sun SLUNDER ne mana karte hue apni baat kahi thi..


ACHHUTA-haan beta..tu toh apne planet ka king hai naa jiski kabhi beizatti hui hi nahi hai...

abbe chal naa, RAAZ se puchte hain ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne usse kyun roka tha...


ye bol usse ACCHUTA khinchte hue RAAZ ke room ki taraf le jaane laga...


SLUNDER-abbe saale, pehle apna haath mujhse door tak... pata nahi kahan kahan khujlate rehta hai....

kisi jaanwar se bhi zyada bacteria honge tere andar...


ACCHUTA-jaanwar kyun bol raha hai???sidhe sidhe apna naam nahi le sakta kya????

tu kisi jaanwar se kam thodi naa hai...aur saale,jitna bacteria mere pure body me nahi hoga naa,usse zyada toh tu apne daanth me liye ghumta hoga....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ka dimag kharab ho gaya...


SLUNDER-saale teri tarah nahi hun mai jo saal me ek baar brush karta hai..mai daily 2 baar brush karta hun...

mere mooh me aur daanton me bacteria ho hi nahi sakta...

ACCHUTA-ab bhai hamare daanth normal size ke hain...saal me ek baar bhi karen toh pure saaf ho jaate hain...

but bhai,tere daanton ke size ke hisaab se toh tujhe din me kamsekam 50 baar brush karna chahiye...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun garam ho SLUNDER usse dhakka de wapas apne room ki taraf mood gaya but....


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,tu toh naraz ho gaya....mai toh mazak kar raha tha..ab doston ke beech toh mazak chalta rehta hai naa...


SLUNDER ko rokte hue ACHHUTA ne apni baat kahi....


SLUNDER-tu kab mera dost ban gaya...tujhse dosti karne se acha mai zindagi bhar akela hi rahun...

ACCHUTA-abbe dosti bola maine,propose nahi kiya hai tujhe jo zindagi bhar nibhane ke liye bol raha hai....

aur ab tu bata,tune bhi toh mujhse ulti baat kahi,par mai toh naaraaz nahi hua..

phir RAAZ ki baat ko tu kyun itna dil par le raha hai...lena hi hai toh muh me le le....


SLUNDER-tu toh hai hi besharam..ek minute,kya bola tu...

saale,tera mooh hai ya chaddi...jab bhi khulta hai,lou***a hi nikalta hai....

ACHHUTA- kya baat hai!!!!baatein karna sikh gaya lounda....

lekin bhai, tu mere mooh ko chaddi bol raha hai jabki tu apne naam ke saath LU***D chipkaye ghum raha hai ....

SLUNDER-Tujhse baat hi karna bekar hai...mai chala...


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


ACHHUTA-yaar tu fir serious ho gaya...chal thik hai bhai,tu jeeta mai haara,khush...

chal ab RAAZ ke room chalte hain..nahi toh yahin khade khade raat ho jaani hai...


ye bol halka push karte karte ACHHUTA SLUNDER ko liye RAAZ ke room ki taraf chal pada....



PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE



GOOD EVENING UNCLE....GOOD EVENING AUNTY.....


ye awaaz thi MAHI ki jo just ALFREEN ke ghar pahunchi thi....


FLORIN-good evening angel....kya baat hai!!!aaj toh hamari super energetic MAHI bhi thaki thaki lag rahi hai....

MAHI-aaj institution me humne apna first mode active karne ki koshish ki thi...ussiki wajah se thodi weakness lag rahi hai...

ALFREEN ne toh bataya hoga aapko....!!!!

HAAN,BATAYA THA...AUR USKI HAALAT BHI SAME HI HAI..JAB SE INSTITUTION SE WAPAS AAYI HAI,APNE ROOM ME HI HAI....


ye awaaz thi MARIA ki jo piche room se MAHI aur FLORIN ki tataf aayi thi...


MAHI-wo abhi tak so rahi hai???

MARIA-may be!!!2 ghante pehle jab mai uske room me gayi thi,tab toh wo soyi hui hi thi....

FLORIN-uth jaayegi.... MAHI,coffee piyogi....

MAHI-no uncle,thanks..abhi apne ABODE se kuch snacks khakar hi aa rahi ho...

MARIA-haan,toh coffee se kaun sa pet bhar jaayega...aur upar se yahan coffee chhodo,kuch bhi banane ke liye mehenat hi nahi lagti...

jo bhi chahiye,bas bol do,wo chiz turant saamne aajaati hai....

3 COFFEES.....


MARIA ke aisa kehte hi unke saamne teen coffee se bhare mug prakat hue jisse haste hue teeno ne utha liya...


MAHI-VRADAHAN KAROTI.....

ye wish grant ki spell hai jisse is planet ke har ghar me uccharit kiya gaya hai...

issiki wajah se jo bhi regular stuffs mango,haazir ho jaata hai....

FLORIN-arre waah..tumne toh spells yaad rakhne bhi shuru kar diye hain....

MAHI-par kya faayda uncle..maza toh tab aaye jab bole gaye spells kaam bhi karen....

warna toh wo sab sirf shabd hi hain.....

FLORIN-arre beta,din hi kitne hue hain tum logon ko yahan aaye...????

aur upar se aaj hi toh tumhare practical koshishen shuru hui hain...

time toh lagega hi naa....

MAHI-wo toh hai uncle...aur aap dekhna,sabse jaldi spells ko kaam me laana mai aur ALFREEN hi shuru karenge...

FLORIN-now that's my girl.....


FLORIN aur MARIA MAHI ki baat sun bohot khush hue the...kyunki MAHI ne sirf khudki nahi balki unki beti ki bhi baat ki thi...

isse unhe pata chal gaya tha ki MAHI dil se ALFREEN ko apna friend maanti hai....

jahan ye dono is baat ko lekar man hi man khush ho rahe the,wahin MAHI ke dimag me bhi kuch chal raha tha aur isiliye.....


MAHI-uncle,aunty,can i ask you guyz something???

MARIA-tumhe permission ki zaroorat kab se padh gayi..tum humse kuch bhi puch sakti ho....

MAHI-its about RAAZ.....


RAAZ ka naam sun FLORIN aur MARIA chownke but fir....


FLORIN-what about him????

MAHI-anything...i mean usse aap dono ne hi paala hai...toh uske baare me sabse zyada toh aap dono hi jaante honge...

MARIA- RAAZ bilkul apne naam ki hi tarah hai....ek RAAZ...usse samjha nahi jaa sakta....

agar quote me kahen toh he is a writing without a language....


MARIA ki baat sun FLORIN aur MAHI muskura diye....


MAHI-fir bhi..i mean,wahan aapke orphanage me,uske school me uska ravaiyya, behaviour, ATTITUDE kaisa tha????


KAISA HOGA???WAISA HI HOGA JAISA ABHI HAI...GHATIYA....JHAGDAALU.... THANKLESS UNGRATEFUL MORON....


ye awaaz thi ALFREEN ki jo abhi abhi apne room se nikal stairs se hote hue niche aayi thi aur aate hi usse MAHI ke puche gaye sawal sunayi diye jisse sun uske aankhon ke saamne RAAZ ka chehra aa gaya aur uske mooh se RAAZ ki taarif ke shabd nikle....

wahin RAAZ ke liye ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN chownke....


MARIA-ye sab kya keh rahi hai AL...????

ALFREEN-us MORON ki identify bata rahi hun....ek coffee....


ALFREEN ke coffee kehte hi uske saamne bhi ek coffee ka mug aa chuka tha...

par ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN samajh gaye the ki zaroor unki beti aur RAAZ ke beech kuch hua hai aur isiliye....


FLORIN-kuch hua hai kya tere aur RAAZ ke beech!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch bolne hi waali thi ki....


MAHI-kuch khaas nahi uncle..bas thodi behas ho gayi thi usse....

ALFREEN-thodi behes....!!!!usne hume kitna kuch suna diya aur tu thodi si behes bol rahi hai....

hume toh chhod,usne toh OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bhi respect nahi ki...


jahan MAHI baat ko dabana chahti thi,wahin ALFREEN ki RAAZ ke liye chidh ne usse kaafi kuch ugalwa diya tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN dono hi firse chownke the...


FLORIN- OPHILIA WHIZZ toh tumhare is PHASE ki teacher hain naa...unse bhi RAAZ ki behas ho gayi....

ALFREEN-Behes nahi pops,usne WHIZZ ki insult ki...


fir ALFREEN ne MARIA aur FLORIN ko bataya ki institution me aaj kya kya hua tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN aur zyada shocked ho gaye...

par RAAZ ne jo ALFREEN se kaha tha,usse sun MARIA ko RAAZ par ghussa aa gaya tha...


MARIA-how can he say such words to our daughter???i think we should complaint this matter to the authority....


MARIA ne FLORIN se ye baat kahi jo apne hi soch me goom the....


FLORIN-MAHI,ek baat batao....kya RAAZ khud chalkar tum dono ke paas aaya aur ye saari baatein kahin????

MAHI-nahi uncle,hum dono gaye the uske paas....

FLORIN-aur WHIZZ se uski jo behes hui,uski shuruat kisne ki thi....???

MAHI-shuruat jaisi koi baat thi hi nahi uncle... RAAZ books lekar nahi aaya tha,aur WHIZZ ne bas ussike baare me usse pucha tha but usne ulta jawab diya...

FLORIN-kya tha uska jawab????

MAHI-man nahi kiya...ye tha uska answer....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN muskura uthe aur....


FLORIN-jahan tak mujhe lagta hai,in sab me RAAZ ki puri galti nahi hai...


FLORIN ki baat sun chehre par hairani aur sawal liye teeno unki taraf dekhne lage jisse FLORIN ne bhi bhaamp liya aur.....


FLORIN-aag se agar haath jal jaaye toh isme aag ka kya kusoor....???


wo toh hota hi garam hai..bana hi jalane ke liye hai....ehtiyat haath ko baratni chahiye...usse aag ko chhuna hi nahi chahiye....


FLORIN ki baat ka matlab teeno ladies samajh chuke the...


ALFREEN-but pops,hum toh bas usse samjhane gaye the ki WHIZZ se aise baat nahi karni chahiye..


FLORIN-haath ne bhi toh aag ko bas chhua tha,usse maara nahi tha...but chhune bhar se hi jal gaya naa....

beta aag ki hi tarah har kisi ki apni fitrat hoti hai..aur wo fitrat uski haqiqat hoti hai..uski pehchaan hoti hai..

kyunki hum aise hain,ek certain tarike,trend ko follow kar chalte hain,toh iska ye matlab nahi ki har koi wahi kare...

aur RAAZ toh ek unique case hai...wo khudse kabhi kisi ko chhedta nahi, par agar koi usse chedde,toh wo chhodta nahi....

MAHI-ye baat toh thik hai uncle but humne usse chheda nahi tha bas normal baatein hi ki thi...

FLORIN-aisa tumhe lagta hai....but tumhari soch tumpar laagu hoti hai, RAAZ par nahi...jo tumhare liye sirf baatein hain,uske liye taunt hai..uski zindagi me koi kisi bhi tarah dakhal de, ye usse pasand nahi...

tumne usse wo bola jisse usse bura laga isiliye usne tumhe wo bola jisse tum dono ko bura laga....

wo shuru se hi aisa hai...wo kabhi kisi se khud nahi bhidta..apne kaam se kaam rakhta hai...jo dil aaye wo karta hai,but kisi dusre ka nuksaan nahi karta...

bas apne me rehta hai..but agar koi uske ravaiye par sawal kare,usse gyan de toh usse pasand nahi...

ALFREEN-but jo usne WHIZZ se kaha,kya wo bhi sahi tha???

FLORIN-bilkul nahi..but uski baat me ek point tha...

ALFREEN-point..kaisa point???

FLORIN-yahi ki usse yahan bulaya gaya hai,wo khud yahan nahi aaya hai....ab uska dil karega toh wo yahan padhega warna usse bound nahi kiya jaa sakta...

haan,agar class ke dauran usne kisi aur ko disturb kiya hota,toh wo completely galat hota but i am damn sure,ki usne aisa kuch nahi kiya hoga....

kyunki usse matlab hi nahi hai ki kaun kya kar raha hai???

aur rahi baat uski tumhare WHIZZ ke saath behaviour ki,to usse tum logon ka kya lena dena???

us matter ko apne WHIZZ par chhod do..ab ye unhe decide karna hai ki RAAZ ko kaise handle kiya jaaye...

it's none of your business,right!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sahi thi jispar naa toh MAHI aur naahi ALFREEN behes kar sakte the but unke andar ka haal alag tha...

jo insult RAAZ ne un dono ki thi,usse itni asaani se wo dono bhul nahi sakti thi aur isiliye...


MAHI'S/ALFREEN'S MIND-hum OPHILIA WHIZZ nahi hain jo usse itni asaani se jaane denge....

JANNAT hai ye jagah,but RAAZ,tere liye hum isse NARK bana denge.....



BACK TO HERO:-




ABBE ITNI DER SE HUM BHONKE JAA RAHE HAIN,KUCH TOH JAWAB DE DE BHAI....


ye shabd nikle the ACHHUTA ke mooh se...

reason....


shaam ka waqt hai..mai apne room me baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER padhare...

mere subah bole baaton ki wajah se SLUNDER toh chup hi raha but ACCHUTA bhai sahab ko chain kahan....

wo mujhse puch raha tha ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne mujhe kyun roka tha..????

but jab 2,3 baar puchne par bhi maine koi jawab nahi diya toh wo thoda jhunjla utha....

is baar bhi maine kuch nahi kaha par jawab ACCHUTA ko mila, SLUNDER se....


SLUNDER-hum nahi tu bhonk raha hai...aur agar usse jawab dena hota toh pehli baar me hi de deta....

jab wo interested nahi hai toh fir fizul me apna time waste kyun kar raha hai....???

chal,chalte hain yahan se.....


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


MAI-ek minute....tune aaj sirf apni ek hi book yahan se li thi..ye teri dusri book yahi reh gayi thi....


ye bol maine FORBIDDEN FOREST naam ki uski book apne pillow ke neeche se nikal usse de di....


SLUNDER-thanks...waise RAAZ,kya tu yahan comfortable nahi hai...agar koi problem hai toh tu humse share kar sakta hai,shayad hum teri koi help kar den....

MAI-CARAPACE se hai naa tu....

SLUNDER-haan,kyun???

MAI-ye book toh first PHASE ki hai nahi,fir tujhe ye kahan se mili..???

meri baat sun SLUNDER halka bechain ho gaya tha but khud ko control kar...


SLUNDER-ye toh mai apne ghar se lekar aaya tha..mujhe adventurous books padhna bohot pasand hai....

par tu ye sab kyun puch raha hai...????

MAI-tune share shabd bola,toh ye khayal aa gaya....


maine uski aankhon me dekh ye baat boli jisse sun wo ek baar firse bechain ho gaya tha....


ACHHUTA-arre ye kya baat lekar baith gaye dono..yaar RAAZ,tu batana,tujhe OMMIN WHIZZDER kya keh rahe the???

kya OPHILIA WHIZZ se hui teri behas ke liye tujhe koi punishment mili hai...

ya koi aur secret hai..yaar,ab hum PHASEMATES hain...tu apne secrets humse share kar sakta hai....

MAI-pehle tu ek baat bata
..ye SLUNDER kabhi tujhse thik se baat nahi karta,aur naahi tu sidhe mooh isse kuch kehta hai...

but fir bhi tum dono hamesha saath hi rehte ho...kyun???

ACCHUTA-arre,mai toh bas iske saath mazak karta hun,aur kuch nahi...

MAI- kya baat hai....aag aur paani bhi mix ho sakte hain, pehli baar dekh raha hun....


is baar bechain hone ki baari ACCHUTA ki thi...

but same feeling SLUNDER me bhi thi...


ACCHUTA-bhai,hum puch kya rahe hain,tu bol kya raha hai???

MAI-wo tune bhi share shabd bola naa,toh ye khayal aa gaya....

ACHHUTA-teri baatein bhi tere naam ki hi tarah hain,RAAZ....


haste hue ACCHUTA ne apni baat kahi but aaj pehli baar ACCHUTA ki hasi me nervousness ki milawat thi.....


MAI-RAAZ....is shabd ke maayne se ek aur baat zehen me uth rahi hai,but wo bhi ek parable jaisi hi hai,kaho toh bolun...????


meri baat sun dono ki aakhon me sawal aur chehron me bechaini dikhne lagi thi...


MAI-jo log apni TANHAIYON se nikal dusron ki KHAMOSHI me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V.J......
Very nice Update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI AUR ALFREEN MAN HI MAN RAAZ KO SABAK SIKHANE KI BAAT SOCH RAHE THE WAHIN RAAZ KE PAHELI NUMA SAWALON SE ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER THODE BECHAIN HO GAYE THE.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-18



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE - SOVEREIGN OFFICE




COME IN MR & MRS FLORIN.....


ye SHAILA ki awaaz thi jisse sun SOVEREIGN OFFICE ke darwaze ke baahar khade FLORIN aur MARIA andar aaye...


subah ka waqt hai...kal shaam MAHI aur ALFREEN se jo baatein hui thi,usse sun FLORIN aur MARIA dono ka dil kiya ek baar institution jaane ka aur isiliye hi dono yahan hain....


SHAILA-baithiye....

FLORIN/MARIA-thank you.....


SHAILA-toh mr and Mrs FLORIN...kya lenge aap dono....???

FLORIN-nothing ma'am..hum breakfast karke aaye hain....

SHAILA-waise yahan aapko acha toh lag raha hai naa!!!!

facilities to the mark hain yaa fir koi kami hain..agar aapko kuch bhi upgrade chahiye toh jaise aap normally wish kar rahe hain,waise hi jaisa aap change chahen waise hone ke liye bol dijiyega...

aapke man mutabik upgrade ho jaayega.....

FLORIN-nahi ma'am..sab kuch already bohot zyada upgraded hai....and we are completely fine here.....

itbi adbhudh duniya aur rachna ke part banane ka hume mouka mila hai,ye toh humari khushkismati hai....

MARIA-bas ek hi chiz ki kami hai...logon ki....earth me toh hum apne hi orphanage ne rehte the jo baccho se bhara hua rehta tha....

but yahan hum bas teen hi hain..haan, MAHI ke roop me ek aur beti zaroor mil gayi hai par wo aur ALFREEN aadhe se zyada waqt ya toh yahan institution me ya fir room me baith spells sikhne me laga dete hain...

hum dono akele reh jaate hain..aas paas log bhi nahi hai jinse mila jaaye....


MARIA ki baat sun AKSHAANT muskuraye...


AKSHAANT-actually first PHASE me jisme abhi aapki daughter hai,is saal usme total 32 savents hi hain...

jisme se 15 SAVENTS hostlers hain....

ELYSIAN me har PHASE ke students aur unke parents ka thikana alag alag hota hai...

first PHASE ke students ke liye jo ABODE allot hue hain, wo ek dusre se kaafi door hain jiski wajah se PHASE 1 ke parents normally ek dusre se interact nahi kar paate hain....


AKSHAANT ke hostlers waali baat sun FLORIN ko kuch yaad aaya aur....


FLORIN-sir, RAAZ ke orphan hai isiliye usse hostel bheja gaya hai..but MAHI,uske bhi toh parents nahi hain,fir usse ABODE kyun allot hua???

AKSHAANT-is saal MAGIC ke jo base modes hain,jinse MAGIC use me laaya jaata hai,uske baare me ALFREEN ne aapko bataya hai...???

FLORIN-ji,usne kuch teen modes ke baare me bataya tha jisse MAGIC kiya jaa sakta hai...

AKSHAANT-un teen MODES me sabse hard aur efficient mode hota hai ATTACH MODE....

CHOSENS ke pichle 25 years ke itihaas me sirf do aise students hue hain jinhone is mode ko sabse zyada use me laaya hai...

MARIA-par iska MAHI se kya connection....????

AKSHAANT-connection hai...aap sab ko yaad hoga,humari first meeting me aapko bataya gaya tha ki har SAVENT ke paida hone se pehle hi uske jeeven kan paida ho jaate hain aur jab ek SAVENT ka janm hota hai,toh wo kan uski urja shakti se mil jaate hain....

jin do students ki mai baat kar raha hun,un dono ke brain se nikli urja shakti baaki SAVENTS se thodi zyada thi aur same cheez MAHI ke janm ke waqt bhi hui thi....

uske brain ki urja shakti bhi un do students ki hi tarah thodi zyada thi....

issi ka kaaran hai ki MAHI ki jigyasa baakiyon se zyada hai.

aur isiliye hi MAHI ek special case hai jiski wajah se usse ABODE allot hua hai...

FLORIN-matlab MAHI baaki SAVENTS se bohot aage niklegi...

AKSHAANT-zaroori nahi hai...GOD GIFTS kahiye ya fir born talent,bina hard work ke in shabdon ka koi mol nahi...

aur sabse important hai ek positive ATTITUDE.....

for example RAAZ ko hi dekh lijiye....wo bhi toh ek SAVENT hi hai,but kyunki uska ATTITUDE itna questionable hai,ya ye kahun,negetive hai isiliye uska wo god gift,wo talent jisse wo excel kar sakta tha,waste jaa raha hai...


AKSHAANT ki baat sun samajhne waale andaz se MARIA aur FLORIN ne apna sir hilaya....


FLORIN-sir,kya hum ek baar bacchon ke classes,unki training dekh sakte hain???

normal classes toh humne as a student khud bhi attend ki hai,and as parants dekhi bhi hai,but aisi adhbhudh duniya ki padhyai, classes me hone waali practicals,hum ek baar dekhna chahte hain....

AKSHAANT-dekhiye,aap dono institution ke premises me toh nahi jaa sakte kyunki classes ke waqt aisa karna kisi hi parent ko allowed nahi hai,but haan,wo jo room dikh raha hai,wo ek tarah ka lounge hai....

wahan chale jaayiye....sofa ke saamne jo screen hai,usse dekh 1st PHASE,bus itna kahiyega,us screen par aapki beti ki current live class dikhne lagegi....

waise bhi first phase ki class shuru hone hi waali hogi..aap jaaiye,kuch der me mai bhi aata hun...


AKSHAANT ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN dono us lounge numa room ki taraf badh gaye...

jaisa ki AKSHAANT ne bataya tha,wahan ek bada sa sofa rakha hua tha jiske saamne ek badi si screen thi...

dono ne sofa ne baith jaise hi 1st PHASE bola,saamne rakhi screen par live 1st PHASE ki class dikhne lagi jo abhi shuru hone hi waali thi....

wahin un dono ke jaane ke baad AKSHAANT ne man hi man SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal wo teeno hi ek dusre se dimag ke zariye jud chuke the...


AKSHAANT-kuch pata chala????

MOKALSAR-nahi....

AKSHAANT-SHAILA!!!!

SHAILA-nahi...URJA ARTHAGATI(energy sensors) ke kuch kan mujhe mujhe mile the...par unka koi saar nahi hai...

saare raaste,unki urja ko mita diya gaya hai.....

aur filhal hamara daayra bhi simit hai....hum us dhake urja ko saamne bhi nahi laa sakte...agar pehle waali baat hoti toh....

AKSHAANT-tum dono wapas aa jaao...

MOKALSAR-par hum yun haar nahi maan sakte....hume us raaste ko dhundna hi hoga...

AKSHAANT-toh maine kab mana kiya hai...par filhal ke liye wapas aa jaao...ek nayi neeti ke saath kuch din baad fir apni khoj me nikalna....

MOKALSAR/SHAILA-thik hai....hum aa rahe hain....

issike saath teeno ka sampark ek dusre se toot gaya..kuch der tak kuch sochte rehne ke baad AKSHAANT bhi uthkar us lounge ki taraf chal diye jahan MARIA aur FLORIN baithe PHASE 1 ki class dekh rahe the....

wahin jaise hi FLORIN aur MARIA ke saamne screen par PHASE 1 ki class dikhne lagi toh unhone dekha ki.....




PLACE-CHOSEN'S LAWN




SO,HOW IS EVERY SAVENT FEELING TODAY....????FRESH YA FIR THAKAN AB BHI HAI...!!!!


OPHILIA WHIZZ ke is sawal par sabhi SAVENTS ke chehron par smile aa gayi...

par is smile me ek nervousness thi jo hamare saamne khade WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se chuupi na thi....


OMMIN-arre bataiye,abhi bhi thakan toh nahi hai naa....???

SAVENTS-no WHIZZDER...we are fine...


SAVENTS ke jawab ko sun ek baar phirse un chaaron me chehron par smile aa gayi...

reason....

SAVENTS ka jawab pura sach nahi tha...kal unke dimag ko mile jhatke aur usse aaye thakan ka dar sabhi SAVENTS ke chehron par abhi bhi tha par koi bhi ye nervousness show nahi karna chahta tha isiliye kisine bhi apne dar ka zikr nahi kiya tha...


OPHILIA-toh chahiye fir....kal ki chhodi prakriya fir se shuru karte hain....

baith jaaiye aur kal ki hi tarah fir se koshish kijiye....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun ek dusre ko dekhte hue sabhi SAVENTS apni apni jagah baith gaye....

neeche baith sabhi SAVENTS ne apni apni aakhne band ki aur kal hi ki tarah apna apna PAUSE CEREBRATION process shuru kiya.....

but......


aaj wahi process jo ki saare SAVENTS ke liye ek god gift thi,jo wo sabhi bachpan se hi badi asaani se karte aa rahe the,nahi ho paa raha tha....

sabhi ki bas aankhen band thi,but dimag ab bhi shaant nahi hua tha jiski wajah se CEREBRATION process shuru hi tha.

aur rahi RAAZ ki baat toh woh toh waise bhi kal hi ki tarah bas aakhen band kiye baitha tha....

wahin saare SAVENTS se alag ALFREEN aur MAHI ka CEREBRATION process thoda thoda pause mode ki taraf badh chala tha...

jahan ek taraf MAHI kuch 50 percent tak apne dimag ko pause kar paa rahi thi wahin uske baaju me baithi ALFREEN lagbhag 25 percent tak pahunchi thi....

nervousness in dono ko bhi tha,par determination nervousness se zyada tha jis wajah se ye dono kuch hadh tak safal ho rahi thi...

wahin saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS jo sabhi SAVENTS ko dekh rahe the,jab unki nazar MAHI aur ALFREEN par padi toh unhe behad khushi hui...

unhe ye bhi andaza ho gaya ki ye dono is PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain....

par saath hi ek sach ye bhi tha ki PAUSE CEREBRATION process brain ke completely 100 percent shaant hone par hi aage ka kaam karta hai aur isiliye hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ki koshish filhal kaam nahi aane waali aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-STOP.....


OPHILIA ka ye stop shabd SAVENTS ke kaano me hi nahi balki un sab ke dimag me bhi gunja tha jiski wajah se sabhi ki aankhen ek baar me hi khul gayi....


OPHILIA- MAHI, ALFREEN...very good...dar ke samandar me himmat ki kashti utarna asaan nahi hai par aap dono ne ye kar dikhaya.....

kuch hadh tak aap dono hi PAUSE CEREBRATION process me kamiyab hue the but unfortunately filhal itna kaafi nahi tha...

and SAVENTS,aap sabko udaas ya maayus hone ki zaroorat nahi hai....

jo aaj aapke saath ho raha hai,wo hum sabke saath hua hai...dimag me lagne waala mamuli se mamuli jhatka achi khaasi chhap chhod jaata hai....

but aap sab fikr na karen,humare paas aap sab ke dar ko kam karne ka tarika hai....

aur ab aap sab wahi tarika aazmaane waale hain....


ye bol chaarom WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ne apne apne haath failaye aur...


PRAVAHAM GUNAKARA

CURRENT MULTIPLIER


chaaron ke mooh se is spell ke uccharit hote hi un sabhi ke dono haathon me ek ek urja roopi ball dikhne lagi....


OMMIN-ye jo urja se bani ball aap sab hamare haathon me dekh rahe hain,ye CURRENT MULTIPLIERS ball hain....

inki khaasitat ye hai ki ye jisse bhi chhute hain,uske feelings ke hisaab se khud ki energy levels ko change karte hain....

agar ye kisike haathon me hain aur uske man me jhatke ka dar hai toh inki energy level itni badhegi ki us shaksh ko aur tagde jhatke lagenge...

par agar wo skaksh inhe haathon me lene ke baad bhi confident hain,toh fir ye energy balls jaisa wo shaksh chaahega,waise react karenge....

aayi baat samajh....

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZDER....


sabne yes toh bol diya tha par koi ab tak ye nahi samajh paaya tha ki in current balls ka filhal use kya hai???


VIOLET-ab aap sab ek zig zig line banakar (tedha medha jaise ki saanp) apne baaju waale ke opposite face khade honge....


ek dusre ke beech 6,6 metres ka distance hona chahiye...

hum chaaron ke haathon me jo ye 8 current balls hain,ye hum aap me se 8 SAVENTS ki taraf fekenge jisse wo 8 catch karenge....

par jaise hi wo 8 SAVENTS in balls ko catch karenge,unke andar ki feelings ke hisaab se ye balls react karenge...

jo bhi darega ta nervous hoga,ye ball usse aur jhatke denge...

ek baat aur,ye balls sticky hain
.matlab jhatka lagne par aap inhe yunhi fek nahi paayenge..

apne mind ko control kar jab tak aap khud ko kamsekam 1 percent hi sahi,sayyamit nahi kar lete,ye balls aapke haathon me chipke rahenge....

sayyamit hote hi jiske haathon ke ball hai,wo apne paas khade SAVENT ki taraf ball ko fekega....

ball fekte waqt agar aapka man pura 100 percent tak shaant raha,toh aap in balls ke volts ko kam ya fir badha bhi sakte hain...

so are you guyzzz ready.....????

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZ...


chehre par halka dar, confidence aur excitement liye sabne haan bola tha..

wahin in sab se door lounge me baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ye sab dekhkar kaafi excited ho gaye the aur unke piche khade AKSHAANT ke chehre par smile thi...

reason...wo jaante the ki WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ye sab kyun kar rahe the...

darasal jo dar har SAVENT ke man me chhaya hua tha,usse mitane ka yahi tarika tha...

har SAVENT ke sharir par ab jo jhatke lagne waale the,un jhatkon se un sabko current consume karne ki naa sirf aadat padhegi but saath hi un jhatkon ko control karne ki wajah se unka confidence level jo filhal kam ho gaya hai,wo wapas aayega...

par FLORIN, MARIA ki excitement aur AKSHAANT ke chehre ki muskaan tab hairani me badli jab unhone dekha ki jahan ek taraf saare SAVENTS WHIZZ ke kahe anusar ek zigzag line formation me lag gaye the wahin in sabse alag RAAZ akela un sab se thodi door jaakar khada ho gaya tha jiska matlab tha ki wo is naye activity me part nahi lene waala tha....

is baat ko chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi dekha aur saath hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur unke saath saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER ne bhi....

But WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur unke saath baakiyon ne bhi is baat ko avoid kar diya tha....

yahan tak ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne bhi....dono hi jaante the ki agar unhone RAAZ se kuch kaha toh jo jawab milega,wo unhe abhi lagne waale jhatkon se bhi zyada jhatka dega...

khair,zigzag formation ho chuki thi aur aisa hote hi...


CATCH.....


sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne ye kaha aur agle hi pal unke haathon ke aathon balls SAVENTS ki taraf lapke aur....


AHHHH......


un aanth balls me se 2 balls MAHI aur ALFREEN ne catch kiye the aur baaki ke 6,dusre SAVENTS ne aur un current balls ko pakadte hi sabhi ke mooh se ek dard bhari aah nikal gayi....

aur jab un aathon SAVENTS ne us ball ko jhatakne ki koshish ki toh jaisa WHIZZ ne kaha tha, wo balls unke haathon me chipak se gaye jisse un aathon ko aur taklif hone lagi....


NOX- SAVENTS...haath ko jhatakna chhodo..iska koi faayda hoga nahi...jab tak aap sab apne apne dimag ko sayyamit nahi kar lete,balls aapke haathon se chipki rahengi....


NOX ki baat par sabse pehle amal MAHI ne hi kiya...jahan baaki sab NOX ki baat sunkar bhi apne apne haathon ko jhatakne me hi lage the,wahi MAHI ne sidhe khade ho khudko sayyamit karna shuru kiya...

jhatke toh usse lag hi rahe the,par wo un jhatkon se hone waale dard ko zabt karte hue apne chitt se apne body ko shant karne me lagi hui thi..

wahin kuch der baad jab ALFREEN ki nazar apne opposite line me khadi MAHI par padi toh usne bhi same pattern apnaya...

sidhi khadi ho usne bhi jhatko ko sehen karna shuru kar diya aur ALFREEN ki dekha dekhi baaki ke 6 SAVENTS bhi same karne me lag gaye...

in aathon ko baaki ke 23 SAVENTS bhi dekh rahe the aur sikh bhi rahe the...

kuch waqt laga but sabse pehle MAHI ne hi khud par kuch hadh tak kaabu paaya aur aisa hote hi uske haath ki wo current ball jo ki ab tak chipki hui thi,wo loose honi shuru ho gayi aur aisa hote hi...


AHHHH....


MAHI ne wo ball khudse 6 metre door khade SAVENT ki taraf fenki aur jaise hi us SAVENT ne ball pakdi,uske mooh se bhi ek dard bhari karah nikal gayi.....

wahin MAHI ke baad ALFREEN aur ALFREEN ke kuch waqt baad baaki ke 6 SAVENTS jinke haathon me balls thi,unke dimag ke sayyamit hoti hi unke haathon me chipki balls loose hui aur aisa hote hi un sabne bhi balls fekte hue paas kar di....


VOILET-very good MAHI...sabse pehle tumne hi khudko sayyamit kiya hai..baaki sab bhi same pattern follow karenge....

aur ek baar jab aap sab sayammit rehne lage, fir aap sabko apne confidence level ko badhakar in current balls par kaabu paana hai..

jitna zyada aapka confidence level hoga,utni energy aap sab balls se create kar sakte hai...


wahin MAHI aur baaki ke 7 SAVENTS ki hi tarah abhi ke wo 8 SAVENTS jinke haath me wo current ball thi,un sabne khudko kuch hadh tak sayyamit kar liya tha aur aisa hote hi unke haathon me chipki ball jo loose ho chuki thi,usse un sabne next 8 ki taraf pass kar diya....

aur fir ye silsila zigzag wise yuhi chalne laga...sabhi SAVENTS dheere dheere khud ke sayyam ko badha ball pass karte chale jaa rahe the.....

par in sabke beech sabse poor performance ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka tha...jahan SLUNDER chup chaap khudko behtar karne ki naakamiyab koshish kiye jaa raha tha wahin ACCHUTA toh har lagne waale jhatke ke baad andar hi andar WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko gaali bake ja raha tha....

aur in sabse alag mai us zigzag formation ke aakhri SAVENT se kuch door khada ye sab dekh raha tha....

wahin ab tak MAHI aur ALFREEN ne khudko lagbhag puri tarah se sayyamit kar liya tha aur apne confidence level ko badhate hue ball ki energy level bhi apne mutabik thodi thodi badhate jaa rahe the...

dono ke hi chehron par smile.thi aur yunhi ball pass karte hue dono ki nazar SAVENTS ki line se thodi door khade mujhpar gayi....

mujhe dekh dono ki smile gayab ho gayi aur uski jagah ghusse ne le liya....

ek aur baar mujhe dekh ya fir ye kahun mujhe ghoor dono ne ek dusre ko dekha maano aankhon hi aankhon me ek dusre ko kuch bata rahi ho....

aur fir,jaise aankhon hi aankhon me kuch faisla kiya un dono ne jisse karte hi dono ke chehre par ek smile aa gayi aur....


ek aisa waqt aaya jab ALFREEN aur MAHI jo ki ek dusre ke thik opposite khade the,un dono ke hi paas ek hi waqt me balls aaye aur aisa hote hi...

apni puri concentration aur confidence level ko ek kar dono ne hi ball ki energy level ko 10,10 guna badhaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....


SUBBHHHH...


dono ne bohot zor se wo energy balls ek disha me feki...

ye disha aur koi nahi meri hi thi...energy balls ke level itne zyada badhne ki wajah se unki raftar bhi bohot badh chuki thi aur isse pehle ki mai kuch dekh bhi paaun....


DHAMMM.......


wo dono balls kaafi zor se aakar mujhse takraye jisse mai udte hue piche ki taraf gira....

asahaniya dard jo mujhe ho raha tha aur jiski wajah se mera pura sharir kisi mirgi ke mariz ki tarah chhatpata raha tha,ussi haalat me mai sunya ko ghurta hua neeche zamin par tadap raha tha....

wahin jo hua usse aur meri haalat dekh saare SAVENTS meri taraf badhe..

par jahan sabhi SAVENTS ko meri haalat dekh tention ho rahi thi,wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN muskurate hue meri taraf badh rahe the...

chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS bhi araam se chalte hue meri taraf badhne lage the...

wo meri haalat dekh khush toh nahi the but unhe bura bhi nahi laga tha...

jis tarah se maine unse baat ki thi,unhe lag raha tha ki mai abhi jis haalat me hun,usse deserve karta hun...

ye scene lounge me baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the..un dono ko hi MAHI aut unki beti se aisi kisi harkat ki ummid nahi thi....

aur isiliye hi wo uthe aur chupchaap wahan se chale gaye....wahin AKSHAANT ko bhi thoda ghussa aaya tha...

MAHI aur ALFREEN par nahi balki chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par...kyunki wo jaante the ki agar wo chaaron chahte toh jo hua,usse hone se rok sakte the.

khair,mera sharir halka halka jhatka ab bhi khaa raha tha par mai chup chaap is dard ko zabt karne me laga hua tha..


ALFREEN-sorry RAAZ.wo actually excitement me maine aur MAHI ne kuch zyada zor se balls fek diye the....

tumhe zyada zor se lagi toh nahi....


chehre par maasumiyat laate hue ALFREEN ne kaha....


ACCHUTA-chutiya samjha hai kya????koi galti se nahi,jaanbujh kar kiya hai ye sab tum dono ne....

RAAZ ne sunaya jo tha kal tum dono ko...ussi ka badla liya hai naa tum dono ne???


ye bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne sahara dekar uthaya mujhe....


MAHI-arre hum aisa jaanbujh kar kyun karenge... galti se ho gaya yaar...sorry....

OPHILIA-RAAZ ,are you ok...???MAHI,ALFREEN...you should be careful of what you do...


OPHILIA WHIZZ ne aate hi apni baat kahi....


MAHI/ALFREEN-sorry WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-ye tumhe RAAZ se kehna chahiye....

MAHI/ALFREEN-we already did..ok ek baar firse bol dete hain....

sorry RAAZ.....


ab tak mujhe kaafi hadh tak thik lag chuka tha....sidha khada ho ek lambi saans chhod...


MAI-sorry kisliye...???jo mere saath hua,wo mai deserve karta hun....


meri baat dun pehle toh chaaron WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur MAHI, ALFREEN chownke but fir unhe laga mujhe lage jhatke se mera dimag bhi thikane par aa gaya hai jisse mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai aur isiliye hi maine jo kaha wo kaha but....


MAI-sahi aur galat....is duniya me yaa fir kisi bhi duniya me sabse jhoote maayno ke shabd yahi dono hain...

taakatwar aur kamzor.....ye hain wo do shabd jo sahi aur galat ko unke asli maayne dete hain...

jo taakatwar hai,wo hamesha sahi hota hai aur jo kamzor hota hai,wo hamesha galat hota hai...

naa koi uski sunta hai aur naa koi usse kuch puchta hai...


tum dono hi filhal taakatwar ho,aur mai kamzor... aur is lihaz se tumne mere saath abhi jo kiya aur agar aage kuch bhi karne ka dil kare,wo sab sahi hai aur aage bhi hoga....

agar mere saath kuch bhi galat ho,kuch bhi,toh kisiko bhi iska zimmedar nahi maana jaayega...


ye baat maine chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko dekh kahi thi jo mujhe aascharya se dekh rahe the aur abhi jo maine kaha,usse sun toh unki aankhen aur badi ho gayi thi...


wahin mai SAVENTS ke side se hota hua dheere dheere aage badh gaya....

par kuch door jaakar mai dobara palta aur....


MAI-band ghadi bhi din me do baar sahi waqt batati hai...

kehne ka matlab hai ki har waqt ka ek waqt aata hai....isiliye agar dobara aisa kuch karne ka dil kare,toh bada karna..

itna bada ki meri aankhen kuch aisi band hon ki dobara naa kabhi naa khulen kyunki agar aisa nahi hua toh....



aankhen band hon,
yaa khuli

sirf mai DIKHUNGA...


ek taqdir tumhari
KHUDA ne likhi hai,


dusri.......mai LIKHUNGA........






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI MAHI AUR ALFREEN MILKAR RAAZ KE UPAR CURRENT BALLS SE HUMLA KARTE HAIN JISSE RAAZ KO BOHOT TAKLIF PAHUNCHTI HAI


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-19



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE- SOVEREIGN OFFICE




LAGTA HAI AAP CHAARON KE WAQT DECIDER SE GALTI HO GAYI THI....

GALAT GROUP KA HISSA BAN GAYE AAP CHAARON....

PAR DER ABHI BHI NAHI HUI HAI....AS SOVEREIGN'S,HUME YE CHHUT HAI KI HUM DECIDER KI GALTI KO SUDHAR SAKEN....


class khatm hone ke baad AKSHAANT ne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko apne office me bulaya tha...

issi beech SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi wapas CHOSENS pahunch chuke the aur pichle kuch dino me RAAZ se related jo bhi kuch hua tha,aur khaas kar aaj ki ghatna,wo sab jaan chuke the...

AKSHAANT ke bulawe par jab chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS unke office pahunche,toh AKSHAANT ke saath saath SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko bhi wahan moujud paaya...

kuch der tak un chaaron ko dekhne ke baad AKSHAANT ne apni baat kahi jisse sunane ke baad un chaaron ke sir neeche ho gaye...


SHAILA- RAAZ ne battamizi ki,toh chalo usse sabak mil gaya,yahi soch rakhi thi naa aap chaaron ne jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ne uspar current balls chhode the....

aap jaise MORALS se hume aisi soch ki ummid nahi thi....

kaun yaha kis tarah rahega,iska faisla karne ka hak aap sabka nahi hai....

yahan aaya har baccha god gifted hota hai...is jagah par rehna uska hak hai...SAVENTS naa hote toh ye jagah bhi naa banti....

MOKALSAR- MAHI,ALFREEN,RAAZ ya fir koi bhi SAVENT,kuch bhi kare,aapka kaam bas har negetive moov ko hone se rokna hai....

aacharan,chatacter, ATTITUDE,in sab ko anylize karne ka kaam kiska hai,ye hume aapko batane ki zaroorat nahi..

kabhi aap chaaron bhi ussi analyzation se guzre the....

AKSHAANT-jo hua,wo dobara nahi hona chahiye....is that understood!!!!

CHAARON-yes SOVEREIGN'S.....

SHAILA-good....aap jaa sakte hain.....


apne sir ko neeche hi rakh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS SOVEREIGN OFFICE se nikal gaye....


SHAILA-kitni ajeeb baat hai naa... CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand years ke itihaas me ek hi planet se ek hi time par teen SAVENTS pehle kabhi bhi nahi aaye....

ye karishma bhi hua toh kaisa???ek hi planet ke hone ke baawjud pehla dispute ek dusre se hi hua...

MOKALSAR-haan par MAHI aur ALFREEN toh acche friends ban chuke hain..infact friends se zyada dono sisters ki tarah rehti hain,bus RAAZ hi hai jisse un dono ko hi chidh hai....

AKSHAANT-kitni ajeeb baat hai naa....!!!! MAHI,jiske mastishk ki urja shakti baakiyon se zyada hai,wo yun choti si baat par RAAZ se ladne lagi hai...

aur ALFREEN jisse AVARASA (INSTINT POWER)ka ek aisa gift mila hai jo kisi SAVENT ke liye bhi rare hai,wo itna galat judgement kaise kar rahi hai???

SHAILA-sahi kaha...kuch toh hai jo normal nahi hai... OMMIN, NOX, VIOLET aur OPHILIA....

ye chaaron hi neetibudh SAVENTS rah chuke hain aur ab itne saalon se ussi neeti ke marg par chalte hue WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS bane hue hain....

aur sabse mahatvpurn baat..ye charon hi MORALS hain...fir kaise achanak itni nakaratmakta inme samayi????

SHAILA-par in sabse zyada ajeeb hai RAAZ...kya kya nahi socha tha humne..laga tha ki VIKRAM ke baalya kaal ko ek baar firse dekhne ka durlabh mouka milega hume...

ussi ki tarah apne kaaryon se mantramugdh karega ye hume....

par ho iska pura ulat raha hai...jahan VIKRAM neetivaan the,wahin RAAZ neetihin hai...

jahan VIKRAM jigyasu the,wahi RAAZ jigyasuhin hai...

jahan VIKRAM dharm, karm aur satya ke marg par chalte the wahin is RAAZ ke acharan ko dekh lagta hai maano dharm,karm aur satya se iska door door tak koi naata nahi hai...

sach me,sirf ek hi aisi chiz hai jisne isse apnaya aur ab ye usse apnaye hue hai...

aur wo hai iska naam....RAAZ.....




PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE



HEY MOM...HEY POPS....

HELLO UNCLE,HELLO AUNTY...


institution se ALFREEN aur MAHI ek saath ALFREEN ke ghar louti jahan saamne hall me hi dono ko FLORIN aur MARIA sofe par baithe dikhayi diye jisse dekh dono ne hi unhe greet kiya par wapas greet karne ki jagah FLORIN aur MARIA dono bas unki taraf dekhne lage....

par is baat par bina dhyan diye ALFREEN apne dad ke paas baith....


ALFREEN-pata hai pops,kal CEREBRATION process ko pause karne par dimag me lage jhatke ki wajah se hum saare SAVENTS ke man me halka dar baith gaya tha...

aur aaj institution me wapas wahi process karne ke liye hum sabhi ghabra rahe the....

aur isiliye humare dar ko bhagane ke liye WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne ek naya tarika nikala tha...

hum sabhi ko unhone current balls di jisme bhi same jhatke lagte the..aur hume khud ko sayyamit kar un balls ko paas karna tha...

aur pata hai pops,sabse pehle MAHI ne hi khud ko control kiya aur fir maine bhi jald hi khud ko control me laaya...

khud ko control me laakar hum un energy balls ke volts kam ya zyada kar sakte the,aur ye bas mai aur MAHI hi kar paaye...

FLORIN-bas itna hi...


ALFREEN ki baat khatm hote hi FLORIN ne sawal kiya jisse sun...


ALFREEN-haan.bas itna hi...is naye challenge ke khatm hote hote hi kaafi time nikal gaya tha aur current ball se lagne waale jhatkon se hum sab kaafi thak bhi gaye the isiliye class khatm ho gayi....

FLORIN- current balls ke volt badhakar tumne dono ne kya kiya???


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko jhatka laga..dono ek dusre ko dekh hi rahe the ki...


FLORIN-shock hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..tumhare class ke waqt hum bhi tumhare institution me hi the aur lounge me baith tumhari activity dekh rahe the...

jo bhi wahan hua,wo sab humne dekha hai....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise react karen!!!


FLORIN-ALFREEN,har baar tumhari wajah se hum dono ka sir uncha hi hua hai...

but aaj life me pehli baar tumhari wajah se hamara sir neeche jhuka.....

RAAZ se tumhari behas,uska tumhe sunana,ye saari chizen aaj ke tumhare harkat ko justify nahi karti....

aur MAHI,tum bhi hamare liye hamari beti hi ho....tumhari class me tum sabse talented ho ye jaan aur dekhkar hume bohot khushi hui thi par aaj toh tumne kiya,wo acceptable nahi tha...

talent ke saath agar samajhdaari naa ho,toh wahi talent galat raaste par le jaata hai...

first aana,prize jeetna mushkil hai but usse bhi zyada mushkil hai sahi faisle lena jo tumne aaj nahi liya...

kya kaha tha tumne ALFREEN...tum dono ne sabse pehle aur sabse zyada khud ko sayyamit kiya tha..

galat...aaj tum dono ne hi apna asli patience loose kiya...aaj ki activity bhale hi tum dono jeeti ho,par as a person,aaj tum dono haar gayi....

aur saath hi haare hain hum...kyunki tum wo ped ho jiski jaden hum hain jisse tumne khud hi aaj hila diya.....


ye bol FLORIN aur unke saath MARIA uthi aur dono apne bedroom ki taraf chal diye....

wahin apne dad ki baat sun aur unke yun uthkar chale jaane se ALFREEN ki aankhne halki bheeg gayi thi...

bura toh MAHI ko bhi bohot lag raha tha..wo bhi jaanti thi ki jo kuch bhi FLORIN ne kaha tha,wo sach hai...

par ALFREEN ke aansu dekh usne khud ko shaant kiya aur apna ek haath ALFREEN ke kandhe par rakh diya..

ALFREEN bhi jhat se MAHI ke gale lag subkiya lene lagi...


MAHI- jo hua usse badla toh nahi jaa sakta ALFREEN....bas apni galtiyon se sikha jaa sakta hai...

jo hua so hua,bas aage se hum bas khudke growth par concentrate karenge...aur kuch nahi...

aur rahi aunty aur uncle ki baat,toh dil se unhe sorry keh dena,wo maan jayenge...


ab tak ALFREEN bhi kuch had tak shaant ho gayi thi aur isiliye...


ALFREEN- MAHI..tu bhi jaanti hai ki us RAAZ ke saath maine jo bhi karna chaha aur kiya bhi,jisme tune mera saath bhi diya,wo sirf uski insulting baaton ki wajah se nahi kiya...

MAHI-jaanti hun...aur shayad mai teri baat kabhi maanti bhi nahi agar tune mere baare me batakar apni baat proove naa ki hoti....


MAHI ne ALFREEN ki usse first meeting ki kuch baaton ko yaad karte hue kaha...

baatein,but kaunsi??? aayiye,jaan lete hain...

jaisa ki bataya gaya hai ki ALFREEN ki INSTINCTS kaafi sharp hain..

uski is ability ki wajah se wo saamne waale ke nature,talent aur most importantly,khudse uske egibility ko kaafi sahi predict kar leti hai...

aur isiliye hi jab MAHI aur ALFREEN pehli baar mile,toh us mulakat me ALFREEN ne MAHI ke ab tak ke safar ka kaafi bhaag usse bataya jisse sun MAHI hairan hui aur ye jaankar ki sharp instincts ALFREEN ki ek god gift quality hai,khush bhi...

fir hui ALFREEN, MAHI aur RAAZ ke beech behas jiske baad ALFREEN ne MAHI ko bataya ki uske instinct RAAZ ke baare me negetive hai...

future me kisi naa kisi tarah RAAZ se usse aur uski family ko nuksaan pahunchega jisse sun aur ALFREEN ke instinct ke gift ko dhyan me rakh MAHI ne bhi RAAZ ko negetive hi maana tha....


MAHI-par ALFREEN,future ke liye present ko kyun kharab karna..tu apne mom dad se kitne arson ke baad mili hai,isse in negetive baaton me waste mat kar...

hum god gifted bacche hain...humari responsibility universe ke baaki logon se bohot zyada hai...

isiliye ab is RAAZ ke chapter ko filhal ke liye band kar aut khudpar focus kar...

agar in future hume usse koi khatra laga toh tab tak hum itne kaabil ho chuke honge ki usse aaram se nipat lenge....

ab sab baaton ko side kar aur uncle aunty ke paas jaakar sorry bol de....

ALFREEN-tu nahi chalegi kya??wo toh tujhse bhi naaraz hain...

MAHI-abhi nahi....mai shaam ko maafi mang lungi..abhi sirf tu jaa..mai filhal apne ABODE jaati hun....

shaam ko aaungi...


ye bol ALFREEN ko side hug kar MAHI apne ABODE ke liye nikal gayi aur ALFREEN apne mom dad ke room ki taraf.....



NEXT DAY



PLACE-THE CHOSENS




SOVEREIGN'S KI KAHI BAATON KE BAARE ME SOCH RAHE HO KYA TUM DONO???


VOILET aur OPHILIA ko chupchaap kuch sochta hua dekh OMMIN aur NOX ne ye sawal kiya tha....


OPHILIA-hmm....

VOILET-waise jo bhi SOVEREIGN'S ne kaha,wo sach hi tha...kuch dino se hum chaaron ka behaviour MORALS nahi balki WICKEDS ki tarah raha hai...

apne SAVENT life me najaane kitne hi triggering comments jhele hain humne,par kabhi provoke nahi hue...

par pata nahi is RAAZ ki baaton me aisa kya hai,ki bhulaye nahi bhulta..

ek ajeeb si ghutan feel hone lagti hai jo waqt ke saath badhti hi chali jaati hai....

jabki wo toh bas puche gaye sawal ka jawab deta hai..haan tarika,tone,language zaroor harsh hota hai but wo toh uski choice hai....

itni simple si baat hai,but pata nahi kyun,us waqt aisa nahi lagta....


VOILET bol toh apne liye rahi thi par uski kahi baat baaki teeno par bhi applicable thi kyunki same ehsaas unhe bhi feel hota tha but chaaron ye bhi jaante the ki unki feelings unke behaviour par galat asar daal rahi hai...

jisse wo aise bante jaa rahe hain jinse wo completely ulat hai,alag hain....

apne apne sochon me goom unki nazar saamne ki taraf padi jahan is waqt mai har din ki tarah aaj bhi bas aankhen band kar baitha hua tha....

waise aankhen toh sabhi SAVENTS ki band thi kyunki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class start jo shuru ho chuki thi....

kal institution se jaane ke baad bhi mujhe lage current balls ke jhatke ki wajah se meri body kaafi weak ho gayi thi...

waise bhi mai single haddi hun...weakness kuch is kadar mujhpar haawi hui thi ki apne room me jaate hi mai kab leta,kab mujhe neend aayi,mujhe pata hi nahi chala....

aur toh aur mai sidhe aaj subah hi utha hun.....weakness toh subah bhi lag rahi thi par itni nahi ki mai institution bhi naa aa paun isiliye mai bhi yahan hun..

wahin in sab me do achi chizen bhi hui..

pehli toh ye ki kal din bhar sone ki wajah se mere kaano me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki awaaz nahi padi aur aaj bhi wo dono khudhi mujhse thodi door baithe the....

aur dusri sahi chiz ye hui ki MAHI aur ALFREEN jo har din mujhe ghusse se ghurte hi rehte hain,aaj wo dono hi mujhe completely ignore kar rahe the...

khair,kal ke activity ki wajah se aaj sabhi SAVENTS ko jhatke se lagne waala dar kaafi kam ho gaya tha aur isiliye sabhi pure josh ke saath apna apna CEREBRATION process pause kar apne brain ko amplify karne me lage hue the....

sabke maathe ke beech ek urja ki jyoti saaf dikhne lagi thi jo har beetate pal ke saath badhti chali jaa rahi thi jiska matlab tha ki sabhi apne dimag ke beech paida hui urja ke nazdeek jaa rahe hain...

aur fir wahi hua jo pehle din hua tha....jaise hi saare SAVENTS us urja ke aur paas gaye,sabke dimag me ek jhatka laga jisse SAVENTS ki aankhen khul gayi...

jhatka toh is baar bhi zor ka hi laga tha par kal ke activity ki wajah se koi bhi is jhatke se ghabraya nahi tha..

wahin hamare saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS SAVENTS ki aankhen khulte dekh has diye par tabhi.....

unki nazar teen SAVENTS par padi jinhe dekh chaaron khush ho gaye..

ye teeo SAVENTS the, MAHI, ALFREEN aur unse do line alag baithi ek aur SAVENT..

reason....

ALFREEN, MAHI aur wo teesri SAVENT hi aise teen the jinka CEREBRATION process jhatka lagne ke baad bhi paused tha aur unki aankhen band....

itni jaldi ye kaarnama bhi bohot hi kam SAVENTS kar paaye hain aur isiliye hi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS kaafi khush dikh rahe the...

but ye sab bas kuch hi palon ki baat thi...kyunki jaise hi ye teeno SAVENTS apne dimag me upji urja ke aur kareeb gaye,toh unke dimag ko ek aur jhatka laga jo pehle jhatke se zyada powerful tha aur aisa hote hi in teeno ki bhi aankhen khul gayi.....

aur saath hi back to back do do jhatkon ki wajah se teeno hi kaafi thaki hui lagne lagi thi...


OPHILIA- ALFREEN, MAHI...very well done...tumne apne dimag ke pehle jhatke ko bohot ache se handle kiya aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause hi rakha...

aur ye koi choti baat nahi hai..bohot kam SAVENTS ye aaj tak kar paaye hain...

aur aap...kya naam hai aapka???


OPHILIA ne us teesri SAVENT ke taraf dekh ye baat kahi jo MAHI aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah apne first jhatke ko successfully jhel paayi thi....


SAVENT-MABEL, WHIZZ.....


OPHILIA-well done MABEL.... MAHI aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah aapne bhi apne dimag me lagne waale first jhatke ko kaafi achi tarah se handle kiya tha....

MABEL-thank you WHIZZ...

OPHILIA- SAVENTS... aap sabko udaas hone ki zaroorat nahi hai....

infact hum chaaron bohot khush hain..kyunki aaj jhatka lagne ke baawjud aap sab dare nahi hain...

VOILET-bilkul... waise bhi ye class aapke is naye safar ki neev hai...isme time lagta hi hai...isiliye apna apna confidence level aur focus strong rakhiye...

bohot jald aap sab is hurdle ko paar kar lenge....

aaj ke liye class dismiss....


MOOH FAADE KYA DEKH RAHA HAI???CHAL,CLASS KHATM HO CHUKI HAI....


ye bola tha SLUNDER ne ACCHUTA se...


reason...

jahan ek taraf saare students class dismiss hone ke baad yaa toh ek dusre se baat kar rahe the ya wapas apne apne ABODE aur hostel ki taraf nikalne lage the,wahin hamara ACCHUTA aankh faade kisi ko dekh raha tha...

aur uska focus filhal itna zyada tha ki usse SLUNDER ki baat bhi sunayi nahi di thi....

wahin SLUNDER ne jab dekha ki ACCHUTA abhi bhi ek tak kahin dekhe jaa raha hai toh usne ACCHUTA ki aankhon ka piche kiya aur agle hi pal usse sab samajh aa gaya tha....


SLUNDER-abbe aankhon se hi usse maar dega kya???

ACCHUTA-arre mare uske dushman...ye toh apne nazaron se hi murde me bhi jaan daal de...

waise kitna naam hai naa..MABEL....

MABEL aur ACCHUTA...kitna janchte hain ye dono naam ek saath.....

SLUNDER-haan,aisa lag raha hai jaise MABEL naam par chhut padh gaya hai....

ACCHUTA-saale,jab shakl achi naa hona toh kamsekam baatein achi karni chahiye...

SLUNDER-haan,teri Surat toh khubsurti ki moorat hai naa!!!

ACHHUTA-arre pagle,upari khubsurti ka kya faayda...!!!asli sundarta toh dil ki hoti hai aur tere bhai se khubsoorat dil bhala hai kisika...!!!!

SLUNDER-matlab tujhe us MABEL ki andar ki khubsoorti dikh rahi hai???

ACCHUTA-bhai,jab hardware itna gazab hai,toh software bhi kaatilaana hi hoga naa...

SLUNDER-waah re mere computer engineer....kya imagination hai...ab chalen,jahan tu dekh raha hai,wo jagah ab khaali ho chuki hai..

teri MABEL ab jaa chuki hai...

ACCHUTA-par uski mehek ab bhi wahin hai...usse hi mehsoos kar raha hun mai...

SLUNDER-tu kutte ki tarah uski mehek sunghta reh,mai chala....


ye bol SLUNDER wahan se nikalne laga...


ACHHUTA-arre rook yaar....tu bhi naa,apne bhai ke dil ki haalat nahi samajhta...

SLUNDER-bakwaas chizon ko samajhne ka shouk nahi hai mujhe....

ACCHUTA-isiliye shayad tu khudko nahi samajh paata...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ghoor kar dekha aur apne kadam tez kar liye jisse dekh ACCHUTA ne bhi same kiya..

aise hi nok jhonk karte hue dono hostel ki taraf nikal pade..

wahin jab ye dono baatein kar rahe the tab....


KYA SOCH RAHE HO OMMIN???


OPHILIA WHIZZ ke sawal par...


OMMIN-RAAZ....ek minute..


mai jo abhi hostel jaane ke liye palta hi tha, OMMIN WHIZZDER ki awaaz sun rook gaya...

wahin OMMIN WHIZZDER ke mujhe awaaz dete hi....


OPHILIA-OMMIN,ye kya kar rahe ho???..dobara usse kuch mat kaho...

OMMIN-relax..mujhe bas kuch jaanana hai....


ye bol OMMIN mere taraf badh gaye wahin baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS humari taraf dekhne lage...


OMMIN-RAAZ,can i touch your head..????kya mai tumhare sir ko chhu sakta hun...


maine bas haan me apne sir ko jumbish di jisse dekh OMMIN WHIZZDER ne apne dono haath mere sir ke dono taraf mere kaan se thoda upar rakhe aur....


OMMIN-PRAKRATI KAROTI....

REVEAL...


OMMIN sir ke aisa karte hi unki ungliyon me se ek urja roopi ray nikal mere dimag me ghusi aur...

mere brain ke starting nerves se hoti hui wo ray mere brain ke central nerves ke paas pahunchi aur fir wahan se wo ray meri unconscious brain jahan se magic access hota hai,us taraf badh chali par tabhi.....


mmmmmmmm...............


mere unconscious brain ke paas pahunch OMMIN sir ko aisa laga maano koi unhe khinch raha hai,unki urja ko sokh raha hai...ek tarah se unhe nigal raha hai jiski wajah se unke mooh se ye grunting ki awaaz nikli maano wo bhi khudko khinchne ki koshish kar rahe hon but jab wo kaamiyab nahi ho paaye toh...


OMMIN-OPHILIA,NOX, VIOLET.....jaldi aao....


OMMIN ki awaaz sun teeno turant humare paas pahunche aur jaise hi unki nazar OMMIN par padi,unke aascharya kaa thikana naa raha...

reason.....


apni puri taakat lagane ki wajah se OMMIN sir ke jabde aapas me bhide hue the...unke kaan garam hokar laal hone lage the aur unki saansen bohot tez chal rahi thi...

par isse pehle ki wo teen OMMIN sir se kuch puchte....


OMMIN-help me.....


OMMIN sir ki baat aur uska matlab samajh baaki teeno ne bhi apna apna haath OMMIN sir ke hatheli ke upar rakh apne apne spell ki shakti OMMIN sir ke through mere brain me transfer karni shuru ki...

par kuch hi der me in teeno ki hi haalat OMMIN sir ke jaise hi ho gayi....

apni puri concentration apne spell ko dene ke baad bhi wo chaaron milkar bhi mere unconscious brain ka kuch nahi kar paaye...

OMMIN WHIZZDER ki hi tarah wo teeno bhi ab apni urja ke through mere brain ke kissi hisse me fas gaye the...

abhi tak wo chaaron REQUEST MODE par the par jab unhone dekha ki isse koi faayda nahi ho raha hai toh sabne apna apna COMMAND MODE activate kar diya...

jisse un sab ki urja 10 guna tak zyada badh gayi...par hairani un chaaron ko tab hui jab unhe COMMAND MODE activate karne ke baad bhi safalta nahi mili....

un sabki urja ab bhi ek jagah fasi hui thi aur ab toh wo chaaron ki sansen had se zyada foolne lagi thi...

wahin itne zyada urja ke andar jaane ki wajah se mere brain cells bhi expand hone lage the jiski wajah se meri aankhen band hone lagi thi...

par kyunki khud un chaaron ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi,isiliye unhe meri condition ka andaza nahi tha...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ne jab ye dekha ki COMMAND MODE ka bhi asar nahi hua hai toh unhone ATTACH MODE ko try karne ka socha bina ye soche ki agar unhone aisa kiya toh is pure area me kitne khatarnaak shock waves niklenge...

unhone apni aankhen band ki... khud ko sayammit kar wo ATTACH MODE ko active karne hi waali thi ki....


BINDUYEM MOKSAYATI....

PARTICLES DETACHMENT....


BOOM........


mere piche se ye spell uccharit hua tha jo aur kisi ne nahi balki AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ne kaha tha...

aur unke aisa karte hi chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki urja jo mere dimag ke andar phasi hui thi,wo ek jhatke me baahar nikal gayi...

itni urja ke ikattha hone ki wajah se hawa me bhi kaafi dabaav aa gaya tha ki jiski wajah se hawa ke beech halka dhamaka sa hua...

wahin AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ke spell aur ek jhatke me saari urja baahar aane ki wajah se chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aur unke saath mai bhi behosh ho chuka tha......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI KAISE BRAIN AMPLIFICATION KI CLASS KE BAAD CHAARON WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS RAAZ KE BRAIN ME GHUSNE KI KOSHISH KARTE HAIN JISKI WAJAH SE WO CHAARON AUR UNKE SAATH RAAZ BEHOSH HO JAATA HAI.



AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-20



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KYA BAAT HAI???AAJ BOHOT KHUSH LAG RAHI HAI!!!!


ye baat MAHI ne ALFREEN se kahi thi....


subah ka waqt hai....aaj ALFREEN aur MAHI sabse pehle hi institution aa gaye the...

ghar se institution tak ALFREEN baat karte waqt kaafi khush lag rahe thi jisse mehsoos kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....


ALFREEN-haan yaar,khush toh mai hun aur reason bhi obvious hai.. mom and pops....

humne jo us din kiya tha,uske liye unhone hume puri tarah maaf jo kar diya...

MAHI-maaf toh uncle aunty ne ussi din kar diya tha...tune toj ussi din unse maafi maangi thi aur tere baad shaam ko maine bhi unse sorry kaha tha jispar unhone haste hue hum dono ko hi gale lagakar maaf kar diya tha...

ALFREEN-sirf upar se....dil se nahi...us din hamare sorry bolne par mom aur pops ne hum sad naa rahen,isiliye hume maaf karne ki baat kahi thi but dil se wo humse tab bhi upset hi the....

bhale hi mai itne saal behosh rahi,unse door rahi but hain toh wonmere mom aur pops...unki har feeling se mai achi tarah waakif hun...

aur isiliye hi kal shaam maine dobara undono ke saamne baith ek baar firse sorry kaha...

maine unse kaha ki jisse unhe taklif ho,aisi koi harkat mai dobara nahi karungi...kuch der tak wo dono mujhe dekhte rahe but fir unke faces par ek smile aa gayi,jiska matlab tha ki ab unka dil bhi halka aur saaf ho chuka tha....


ALFREEN ne haste hue apni baat kahi par jab usne MAHI ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki wo kisi gehri soch me goom hai....


ALFREEN-ab tujhe kya hua???


MAHI ko kandhe par chhute hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi jisse MAHI apni soch se baahar aayi....

MAHI-mujhe kya hoga???bas teri baaton ko sun rahi thi....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ne uska haath pakad rok liya aur usse face kar khadi hokar usse dekhne lagi...


MAHI-WHAT???aise kya dekh rahi hai???

ALFREEN-dekh rahi hun ki meri friend ne aaj first time mujhse jhooth bola hai...kya baat itni gehri hai ki mujhe bhi nahi pata honi chahiye....???


ALFREEN ki baat sun kuch der tak usse dekhte rehne ke baad...


MAHI-rishte toh gehre hi hote hain...abhi abhi tune jo bhi kaha,usse ye baat saabit bhi hoti hai...

ALFREEN-matlab!!!mai samjhi nahi.....

MAHI-dekh naa...baat agar competition ki ho, kuch naya sikhne ki ho toh mai turant saari chizon ko catch kar leti hun,but rishton ke maamle me mai ek amateur hun...

uncle aunty ne its ok bola toh maine bhi maan liya ki unhone hume maaf kar diya hai....

jo bola gaya hai,feelings unse ulat bhi ho sakti hai,iska toh idea hi nahi hai mujhe....

aur hoga bhi kahan se, jinse ye saari chizen sikhi jaati hai, unhe toh maine kabhi dekha hi nahi....MAA,PAPA.....

mere liye toh ye dono bas shabd hi hain.. jinse in shabdon ko maayne milte hain,unhe toh kabhi maine jaana hi nahi....

zindagi ka sach jab samajh aane laga toh sabse pehli haquqat yahi jaani ki mai ek anath hun....

jo sikha,khud sikha....jab thodi badi hui,jis duniya me mai rehti thi,uske baare me,usme rehne waale logon ke baare me jab jaana toh pata chala ki ek bache ke mooh me jo pehla aahar jaata hai wo doodh hota hai....

wo doodh jo ek maa apni chhaati se lagakar apne bacche ko pilati hai....

par mujhe toh kabhi bhi naa toh wo doodh nasib hua aur naahi us chhati ki garmi jisse lag bacche khudko surakshit mehsoos karte hain...

par mujhe kabhi afsos nahi hua tha..ye tez dimag ka jo vardaan hume mila hai,usne meri bhaavnaao ko ek naya mod diya,ek uddeshya diya jiski wajah se mujhe rishte aur unme hone waale jasbaaton ko jaanane ka man hi nahi hua...

but ek khaalipan hamesha raha mere andar jisse maine dosti bhi kar li hai but kabhi kabhi jab tujhe uncle aur aunty ke saath dekhti hun toh wo khaalipan ka ehsaas wapas mere andar ghar kar leta hai....


MAHI ki baat sun aur uski feelings ki gehrayi ko samajh ALFREEN ne kuch kaha nahi,bas usse gale laga liya...

normal human beings aisa situation me saamne waale se kehte hain ki kya uske mom dad saamne waale ke mom dad nahi hain....

but ALFREEN ko maalum tha ki mom dad ki tarah hona aur mom dad hona,inme fark hota hai....

waise toh RAAZ aur baaki saare orphanage ke bacche bhi MARIA aur FLORIN ke liye unke hi bacchon ki tarah the but wo sab milkar bhi ALFREEN ki jagah toh nahi le sakte the...

jahan mom dad ki zaroorat hoti hai,wahan mom dad ki kaam aate hain, unke replacements nahi....

khair,kuch der tak yunhi gale lage rehne ke baad,


ALFREEN-aaj sabse pehle aaye the hum..but lagta hai class sabse last me pahunchenge...chal,jaldi,kahin class start naa ho jaaye...


muskurate hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI bhi muskura uthi aur fir dono class ki taraf chal pade....




IN CLASS:-



THANK GOD.....WHIZZES AUR WHIZZDERS ABHI TAK AAYE NAHI....


class me ghuste hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ne dekha ki saare SAVENTS aa chuke the but WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS abhi nahi pahunche the...

but aaj un dono ko discholars ki line ke third row me khada hona tha kyunki shuru ki lines equipped the.....

khair,dono hi jaldi se aage badhe aur apni line me jaakar khade ho gaye...

tabhi MAHI ki nazar apne baaju me khadi ladki ki taraf gayi jisse dekh....


MAHI-MABEL, RIGHT!!!!tumne hi kal apne CEREBRATION process ko jhatka lagne ke baad bhi pause rakha tha.... that was really impressive....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar bhi MABEL par padi....


MABEL-ji...par sirf maine hi nahi,balki aap dono ne bhi ye kaam successfully kiya tha...infact,aap dono ki hi wajah se mai kal wo kar paayi thi,so thank you....

ALFREEN-hamari hi wajah se!!! how's that???

MABEL-actually yahan aane se pehle toh mai ek super confident girl hua karti thi...

har chiz me first wo bhi bohot asaani se...but jab mujhe is adbhudh duniya ke baare me pata chala,aur saath hi ye pata chala ki yahan padhne waala har student jisse yahan SAVENT kehte hain,wo yahan aane se pehle apni apni duniya me genius hi hota hai but yahan uski wo guniusness kaam nahi aati toh mai thodi nervous ho gayi aur jab maine yahan ki activities ke baare me jaana tab toh meri nervousness aur badh gayi...

infact me hi kya,saare SAVENTS ki same condition thi siway aap dono ke...aap dono baakiyon ke ulat kaafi confident aur excitement se bhare dikh rahe the aur ussise mujhe bhi apna khoya hua confidence wapas mila aur isiliye hi kal mera focus thoda strong raha...


MABEL ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI muskura diye...


ALFREEN-wo sab toh thik hai but ye tum hume aap kehkar kyun bula rahi ho...????

hum sab same PHASE me hi hain.. PHASEMATES hain....fir itni formalities kyun????


ALFREEN ki baat sun MABEL aur saath hi MAHI bhi muskura uthe...


MAHI-so friends...!!!!


MABEL ke saamne haath aage badhate hue MAHI ne ye kaha jiske agle hi pal muskurate hue MABEL ne uske haath ko thaama...

MAHI ke baad ALFREEN ne bhi same kiya aur fir haste hue teeno ek dusre se baat karne lag gaye...

wahin in sab se thodi door khada ACCHUTA hasrat bhari nigahon se ye sab dekh raha tha....


SLUNDER-tu ek naa ek din pakka pitega...saale, jab dekho us ladki ko ghurta hi rehta hai....

ACHHUTA-ladki!!!apne hone waali bhabhi ko tu ladki bolta hai!!!!itna khubsoorat naam hai uska.MABEL....

aur uske aage uski pehchaan..teri bhabhi....teri MABEL bhabhi...haaye,bolne bhar se hi kitna sukoon milta hai is dil ko....

SLUNDER-usne agar teri ye bakwas sun li naa toh dil chhod,tere pichwade ka sukoon bhi haraam kar degi...

kal MAHI aur ALFREEN ke saath saath usne bhi CEREBRATION process ko jhatka lagne ke baad bhi pause rakha tha....

isse uski capability pata chalti hai...wo a+ SAVENT hai aur tu d-...

upar se kitni beautiful bhi hai wo..aur tu teri shakl dekh... tujhe toh dekhna bhi pasand nahi karegi wo.....

ACCHUTA-saale,tu yahan difference between khelne aata hai kya...???

aur teri opinion maangi maine...fokat ka Gyan singh banana band kar...

khud ki shakl assembled waali hai aur mere hardware par comment karta hai...

SLUNDER-haan toh mujhe apni hadh pata hai,mai teri tarah galatfehmi me nahi jeeta...

ACHHUTA-usse hadh nahi aukaad kehte hain...aur tu apni aukaad ke saath meri value compare mat hi kar toh acha hai....

dekhna,ek din ye mujhpar maregi......

SLUNDER-uske saamne chala jaa...wo ek din aaj hi aa jaayega...tujhe saamne se dekhkar wo waise bhi mar jaayegi...

ACHHUTA-abbe apne mooh ka gatar band kar....kal bhi bola tha maine,jab shakl achi naa ho toh kamsekam baatein achi karni chahiye....

tu hi bata RAAZ bhai,kya kami hai tere bhai me...


aaj ye dono mere paas hi khade the...aur inki ab tak ki saari bakwaas maine apne ek kaan se sun dusre se nikali thi....

but ab is ACCHUTA ne mujhse hi sawal puch liya tha isiliye....


MAI-kami kuch nahi hai.tu kuch zyada hi bhara hua hai...aur ab aage mujhse kuch bhi bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

apne ishq ki daastaan apne tak hi rakh...mujhe isme koi interest nahi hai....

ACCHUTA-bhai,tujhe interest hai kisme...???naa toh tu kisi activity me part leta hai,naa kisi se baat karta hai aur agar koi saamne se baat kare,toh usse suna deta hai...

MAI-sach agar taana lagne lage,toh samajh jaana ki tumhari soch ki nadi galat samandar me mil rahi hai....

apne focus ko thoda aur focus kar..sahi sawal mooh se nikalne lagenge....


meri baat sun ACCHUTA phir apna mooh kholne waala hi tha ki tabhi


GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....


ye nayi awaaz hum sab ke kaano me padi jisse sun aur us awaaz ke maalik ko dekh saare SAVENTS thode shocked hue...

reason.....


humare saamne hamare regular WHIZZ ya WHIZZDER nahi the balki ek naya chehra,ek nayi WHIZZ thi...

wahin shayad hamare surprised hone ka reason wo WHIZZ bhi samajh gayi thi isiliye....


mera naam EDWINA hai...aapke chaaron whizzes aur whizzders kuch kaam se baahar gaye hain aur isiliye aaj mai aap sabki substitute whizz hun...


WHIZZ ne apna intro diya jisse sun SAVENTS ki hairaani khatm hui....


EDWINA-waise mai aap sab ke next PHASE yaani GROMMERS ki WHIZZ hun....


EDWINA ki baat sun ek baar firse sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue but usse zyada sab khush the ye jaankar ki unke saamne unke next PHASE ki WHIZZ khadi hai....


EDWINA-first PHASE me ab tak ka ye mera first visit hai...mai koshish karungi ki mere experience se aap sabko is PHASE ke sabse initial activity jo aap sab filhal kar rahe hain,usme successful hone me aapki madad karun...

but sabse pehle ye bataiye ki aap sab me RAAZ kaun hai????


WHIZZ ki baat sun mai aage aakar khada ho gaya...


EDWINA-aapko SOVEREIGN'S ne bulaya hai...aap jaa sakte hain....


EDWINA ki baat sun mai bina kuch kahe class se baahar nikal gaya....

mai toh chala gaya but mujhe SOVEREIGN dwara bulaye jaane ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ek dusre se is baare me baat karne lage..

but sirf MAHI aur ALFREEN hi aise the jinhone mera naam sunte hi khud ke hi dimag ko block kar liya tha....

khair,mere class se baahar jaate hi....


EDWINA-so SAVENTS,sabse pehle ye bataiye ki CEREBRATION process pause karne ke baad aap kya karte hain????aap,aap batayiye....


EDWINA ne saamne ki line me khade ek SAVENT se ye pucha jiske baad...


SAVENT- CEREBRATION process pause ke baad dimag ke andar ek choti si ray dikhayi deti hai jiske paas hume jaana hota hai...

EDWINA-aur jaise hi aap us ray ke paas jaate hain,aap sabme dimag me ek jhatka lagta hai jiski wajah se aap sabka CEREBRATION process wapas shuri ho jaata hai aur aap sab apne apne dhyan se baahar aa jaate hain...right!!!

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZ....

EDWINA-jab mai aap sabki hi tarah ek SAVENT thi,tab jab mujhe ye jhatke lagte the toh usse tackle karne ke liye maine ek tarika nikala tha jisse mai aap sab se share karti hun...shayad aap sabko bhi isse faayda ho jaaye...

bhale hi BRAIN AMPLIFICATION karte waqt hume apna CEREBRATION process pause karna padta hai but fir bhi us waqt hume ye pata rehta ki humare saath kya ho raha hai....

isiliye jab bhi aap apne dimag me paida hue ray ki taraf badhe toh ray ke kareeb pahunchte waqt apne chitt ki gati ko tez ya dheere karne ki kosish karen...

aisa karne par brain ke pause hone ke baawjud aapke dimag ke ek hisse ka focus us ray ki jagah apni speed par hoga jiski wajah se jab bhi aapke dimag me jhatka lagega toh wo nerves jo aapki speed par dhyan de rahe honge,unhe depending on your focus,jhatka kam yaa fir nahi lagega...

aise me jitna asar abtak aap ko us jhatke ke lagne se hota aaya hai,wo asar kam ho jaayega...isse aapke concentration level bane rahenge jisse aapka CEREBRATION process paused hi rahega...


EDWINA ki baat aur unka idea sun sabhi SAVENTS bohot khush ho gaye aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki EDWINA kyun PHASE 1 ki nahi balki PHASE 2 ki WHIZZ hain..

unki soch, capability unke current WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se zyada jo thi...

khair, WHIZZ ki idea ko sun sabhi SAVENTS apni apni jagah par baith gaye aur agle hi pal un sabka CEREBRATION process pause ho chuka tha....



WAHIN CLASS SE NIKALNE KE BAAD:-



mai SOVEREIGN OFFICE ki taraf badha ki hi tha ki tabhi....

mere saamne ek MAGIC door khul gaya jiski dusri taraf ek room dikh raha tha...

mai us door ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


DOOR KE ANDAR AA JAAO RAAZ...


us door ke andar se awaaz aayi jo ki jaani pehchaani thi jisse sun mai us MAGIC door ke andar chala gaya..

mere andar ghuste hi wo door band ho chuka tha....

maine sahi socha tha..mai jahan khada tha,ye kisi bungalow ka ek bada sa hall numa room tha....

maine apni nazar ghumayi toh mujhe ussi jaani pehchani awaaz ke maalik dikhayi diye...

AKSHAANT...jo mujhe hi dekh rahe the.. unke saath SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi the jinhe dekh mai us taraf badh chala....


AKSHAANT-kal hua kya tha RAAZ!!!!????

MAI-ye aapko apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se puchna chahiye...

AKSHAANT-agar wo jawab dene laayak hote toh zaroor puch leta....


ye bol AKSHAANT, MOKALSAR aur SHAILA jo ek dusre se lag kar khade the,side hue aur tab mujhe unke piche ka scene dikhayi diya...

mere saamne chaar lambe par sidecut beds par chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS, OMMIN, NOX, VIOLET aur OPHILIA aankh band kiye pade hue the....


SHAILA-behosh hone ke kuch der baad hi kal tumhe toh hosh aa gaya tha but ye chaaron ab tak behosh hain....

humne bohot koshish ki but ye hosh me nahi aa rahe....

isiliye hum jaanana chahte hain ki kal aakhir hua kya tha???

MAI- OMMIN WHIZZDER ne ek spell bola jiske baad mujhe apne dimag me kuch chalta hua sa mehsoos hua but kuch der baad wo huchul rook gayi..

aur just tabhi OMMIN sir ki saans
phulne lagi...wo apna haath mere sir se hata alag hone ki koshish kar rahe the but nahi ho paaye....

unhone baaki teeno ko bhi apne paas bulaya...

un teeno ne apne apne haath OMMIN WHIZZDER ke hatheli ke upar rakh spells bole jiske baad ek baar firse mujhe mere dimag me hulchul mehsoos hui aur saath hi mera sir bhaari bhi hone laga...

iske baad ka mujhe pata nahi kyunki fir mai behosh ho gaya tha.....

MOKALSAR- OMMIN ne kaun sa spell bola tha,yaad hai tumhe....

MAI-PRAKRATI KAROTI....


MOKALSAR-REVEAL SPELL....


MOKALSAR ki baat sun teeno kuch sochne lage par fir....

teeno ke dimag ki batti ek saath jali....


MOKALSAR-in chaaron ke senses RAAZ ke brain me atak gaye hain....


MOKALSAR ki baat sun baaki dono ne haan me sir hilaya...

ye sab toh samajh gaye..ab aap bhi samajh lijiye...darasal OMMIN WHIZZDER ne jo spell bola tha,usse pehle toh unki halki si energy hi zaya hui thi jaisa har spell bolne par hota hai...

but fir jaise hi unki spell se nikli urja RAAZ ke dimag ke unconscious ya fir ye kahun ki subconscious brain ke part me pahunchi,toh uske dimag ke us bhaag ne us urja ko jakad liya aur saath hi OMMIN sir ki energy stream ko bhi khinchna shuru kar diya..

ye hamari energy hi hai jiski wajah se hum hosh me rehte hain but RAAZ ke dimag ke khinchaav ki wajah se OMMIN sir ki energy kam hoti chali gayi aur jab baaki teeno ne bhi apni apni urja OMMIN ko di,toh unke saath bhi same chiz hui...

kuch hi der me un sab ki energy rays RAAZ ke dimag ne jakad liye jiski wajah se wo chaaron behosh ho gaye...

but RAAZ ki energy toh uske paas hi thi isiliye wo kuch hi der me hosh me aa chuka tha....


MOKALSAR- mere saamne khade ho jaao RAAZ...


unke kehte hi mai unke saamne khada ho gaya aur mere aisa karte hi unhone apne dono haathon ki index aur middle finger mere sir ke dono taraf rakhi aur....


MULL KAROTI

EXTRACT


MOKALSAR ke spell uccharit karte hi unke fingers se ray nikal ekbaar firse mere dimag me ghusi aur agle hi pal us ray ne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki sense ray,unhe hosh me laane waali unki energy ke kirano ko mere dimag se alag kiya jisse wo energy rays mere dimag se baahar nikal un chaaron ke dimag me sama gayi...

apna kaam khatm kar MOKALSAR ki rays mere dimag se wapas nikalne hi waali thi ki tabhi un rays ke through MOKALSAR ko kuch dikha jisse dekh unhe ek zordaar shock laga jisse SHAILA aur AKSHAANT ne bhi dekh liya tha....

par khud ko sayyamit kar MOKALSAR ne apna haath mere sir se hata liya aur...


MOKALSAR-tum jaa sakte ho RAAZ....


unke aisa kehte hi ek baar firse mere piche ek MAGIC door khul gaya jisse hote hue mai wapas school pahunch gaya...

school pahunch mujhe pata chala ki aaj ki class khatm ho chuki hai isiliye mai hostel ki taraf nikal gaya....

wahin mere jaane ke baad MOKALSAR ne ek baar palat kar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko dekha jo abhi tak behosh hi the..

MOKALSAR ko pata tha ki un chaaron ko hosh ne aane me kuch waqt lagega...unhone ek gehri saans lekar jab apne dono doston ko dekha toh unhe khud ko ghurta paaya....

MOKALSAR ko iska reason maalum tha aur isiliye....


MOKALSAR-in chaaron ke senses extract karne ke baad maine RAAZ ke dimag ko dekha tha....

SHAILA-AUR!!!!

MOKALSAR-sabhi manushya ke dimag ke do hisse hote hain..ek jisse regular chizen process hoti hai aur dusri wo subconscious mind jisse saare metaphysical activities aur MAGIC hote hain..

isiliye hum us subconscious mind ko 2nd brain kehte hain....

AKSHAANT-ye sab hume pata hai.....tum itne shocked kyun hue the???ye batao...!!!!

MOKALSAR-ussi second brain ki wajah se...

SHAILA/AKSHAANT-MATLAB!!!!

MOKALSAR- RAAZ ka subconscious brain yaa fir ye kahun ki uska second aur sabse important brain....

ye kehkar MOKALSAR ne ek pause liya jisse dekh...


SHAILA-kya hua brain ko???kuch problem hai uske brain me...

MOKALSAR-problem tab hoti jab problem ka jad hota....


RAAZ KE PAAS 2ND BRAIN HAI HI NAHI.....WO BRAINLESS HAI.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Very Nice Update bhai
 
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