Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK PERCENT AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI, AUR ALFREEN,MABEL APNE SOUL AMPLIFICATION KO TRIGGER KAR LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ALFREEN KO EK BHAYANAK SAPNA AATA HAI JISME WO DEKHTI HAI KI RAAZ USKE MAATA PITAH KO MAAR DETA HAI


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-32




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE CHOSEN'S





1 WEEK LATER:-



ALFREEN,MABEL....U BOTH CAN DO IT....BAS HIMMAT MAT HAARO AUR APNE FOCUS AUR DETERMINATION KO AUR ZYADA STRONG BANAO.....

I KNOW KI YE PROCESS PAINFUL HAI BUT AS THEY SAY,NO PAIN,NO GAIN....

FOR THAT 1 PERCENT,U HAVE TO GIVE YOUR 200 PERCENT....SO COMMON ON,LETS TRY AGAIN.....


MABEL aur ALFREEN ka josh badhati hui boli VIOLET..

infact jab se in dono ne MAHI ke saath alag class join kar apne soul ko AMPLIFY karne ki shuruat ki hai,ussi waqt se VIOLET WHIZZ lagatar in dono ki housla afzayi karte hue aa rahi hai....

waqt se yaad aaya...subah ka waqt hai...apne apne soul ko trigger karne ke ek hafte baad bhi AMPLIFICATION process ko MABEL aur MAHI dono hi 10 second bhi cross nahi kar paa rahe the...

VIOLET WHIZZ ko pata tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL dono hi kaafi talented hain,par wo MAHI ki tarah exceptional case nahi hain aur isiliye wo bhi in dono ke liye extra efforts laga rahi thi...

lagatar dono ko moral boost dete hue protsahit karti aa rahi thi VIOLET WHIZZ.....

MABEL toh lagatar apne pure concentration ke saath koshish kar rahi thi par ALFREEN ka focus do hisso me bata hua tha....

ek hafte pehle jo sapna usne dekha tha,wo sapna,wo drishya uske dimag se hatne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...

apne mom dad ke saamne toh wo normal rehti aur dikhti thi,par baaki har jagah aur khaas kar institution me uske chehre par bechaini,ghussa dard ye saare bhaav aate jaate rehte the....

sapna dekhne ke agle hi din usne uske baare me MAHI ko bataya tha..

ALFREEN ki baat sun ek pal ke liye toh MAHI bhi tention me aa gayi thi par fir usne khudko shaantkar ALFREEN se isse mehez ek sapna kehkar bhulne ki salah di....

par is baat ka ALFREEN par kuch khasas asar hua nahi aur yahi wajah thi ki is PHASE ke sabse important class me jahan uska concentration level hadh se zyada strong hona chahiye,uske ulat wahi concentration aadha reh gaya tha....


VIOLET-MABEL,ALFREEN...common.... start again....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ek baar fir un dono ke kaano me gunji jisse sun MABEL ne apni aakhen band kar li wahin kuch seconds me khudke saare emotions ko dabane ke baad ALFREEN ne bhi apni aankhen band kar li....

aur in dono se alag hamari MAHI jiski aaankhen pehle se hi band thi,wo apne SOUL ko 2 percent AMPLIFY karne ki koshish me lagi hui thi..

par uski raah MABEL aur ALFREEN se kayi guna zyada mushkil thi...

reason....

SOUL AMPLIFICATION adding order me nahi balki multiplication order me trigger hone waala MODE tha....

kehne ka matlab hai ki 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka holder 1 percent holder se 2 guna nahi balki 10 guna strong hota hai...

aur isiliye hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha tha ki 30 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko use me laane waala shaksh pure CHOSENS ke har SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke holder se bhi zyada strong hai...

aur jab power itna fluctuate hota hai,toh usse use me laana bhi utna hi mushkil hota hai...

soul ke pehle percent ko use me laane ke liye jahan MAHI ko 1 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna pada tha,wahin ab 2 percent tak pahunchne ke liye usse 10 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko
hold me rakhna tha jo bohot zyada mushkil tha...

but ek advantage MAHI ko zaroor mila tha aur wo ye ki uske soul ke 1st percent amplification ke baad uski inner aur outer body,aur saath hi uska brain aur blood bhi pehle se 10 times zyada strong ho gaye the jiski wajah se uski sehen shakti bhi kaafi badh gayi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki wo 2 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakh paa rahi thi...waqt ka daayra toh badh gaya tha par jo uska target tha,uske liye filhal dilli door thi....


REST OF THE CLASS:-


FOCUS GUYZZZ.FOCUS.....aap sabhi capable hain,apne SOUL ko trigger karne ke liye....

bhale kitni hi baar aap fail kyun naa hon,bas apne himmat, confidence aur focus ko fail hone mat dijiyega....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ne sabhi SAVENTS ke housla badhate hue apni baat kahi jiske baad wo sabhi ek baar firse aakhen band kar apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me lag gaye....



BACK TO MAHI, ALFREEN &MABEL



AAHHH.....AHHHHH....


10 seconds hote hote MABEL aur ALFREEN dono ki hi cheekh nikli aur ussi chikh ke saath unka CEREBRATION process bhi start ho gaya....

wahin 2 minutes aur kuch seconds ke baad MAHI bhi apne process se baahar aa chuki thi....

teeno hi apne performance se khush nahi the but filhal wo kuch kar nahi sakte the kyunki...


VIOLET-koi baat nahi SAVENTS...ye ek time taking task hai...kal fir try karenge....aaj ki class khatm...


ye bol WHIZZ class se baahar nikal gayi aur unke piche piche ye teeno bhi aaj ke unke performance ko discuss karte hue apne ABODES ki taraf nikal pade...



1 MONTH LATER:-



well done MAHI....is baar tumne pure 5 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakha tha...thats really impressive.....


khush hote hue VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi jisse sun MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi apni friend ke achievements ke liye khush hue....


MAHI-but WHIZZ..thats not the deal...mai abhi bhi apne next target se pure paanch minute piche hun...

udaas si hote hue MAHI ne kaha jisse sun VIOLET WHIZZ muskura uthi aur...


VIOLET-roof tak ek jhatke me nahi pahuncha jaa sakta mahi...

lage hue stairs par apne apne ek ek kadam jama upar uthna padta hai aur abhi tum wahi kar rahi ho..

bas jab tak us chhat tak pahunch naa jaao,lagatar chadhti jaao aur agar aisa kiya toh manzil milni hi hai...

so theres nothing to be sad of.....


haan me apna sir hilate hue MAHI wapas paalthi maar kar baith gayi....

wahin uske aisa karne ke baad MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi same position me baith shuru ho gaye apne task ko pura karne ki koshish me jisme abtak wo zara bhi kaamiyab nahi ho paaye the....

aur apni is nayi koshish me bhi dono ka performance down hi raha jiske baad un dono ko hi thoda sa motivate kar VIOLET WHIZZ ne class off kar di....



REST OF THE CLASS:-


well done VALDIS.....we are really proud of you.... now you officially become only the fourth SAVENT among NEW BORNS of this year,jisne successfully apne SOUL ko trigger kiya hai...

aur isiliye kalse aapki class bhi aapse pehle jin teen SAVENTS ne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya hai,unke saath lagegi....

aaj ki class khatm hoti hai.....



2 MONTHS LATER:-



MAHI- kya naam tha unka...???haan, MORANA, ANWIR.....


INSTITUTION ki taraf nikalte waqt MAHI ne un dono SAVENTS ka naam dohraaya jisse uski 2 mahine pehle behes hui thi aur jisse sun ALFREEN jo apne hi khayalon me khoyi thi,usse bhi jhatka laga aur....


ALFREEN-ye tu achanak un dono loosers ka naam kyun le rahi hai...???

MAHI-wakayi???kya wakayi wo loosers hain yaa fir ye tag jaisa unhe lagta hai,tujh par hi suit karta hai....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ko shock bhi laga aur bura bhi...

uska khubsoorat sa chehra achanak utar sa gaya jisse dekh...


MAHI-yahan akele me maine tujhe ye baat boli toh tujhe bura laga...

par ek mahine baad jab wo dono sabke saamne tera mazak udayenge,tab kya karegi...???

yunhi sir jhukakar khadi rahegi...kyunki us waqt iske alawa tere paas aur koi option hoga nahi....

baatein,tark,behes bhi tabhi achi lahti hain jab humare actions un tarkon ko backup den...

par pichle 2 mahino me jaisa tera ATTITUDE raha hai naa,usse naa tu kahin pahunchne waali hai aur naahi khud ko proove karke dikhane waali hai...

i know ALFREEN ki us sapne ne tujhe andar tak jhanjhor diya hai but tu mujhe bata ki kya koi bhi sapna hum jis reality me reh rahe hain,usse zyada important ho sakta hai kya???

chal ek pal ke liye maan bhi len ki tujhe aaye sapne me 1 percent tak ki bhi sacchayi hai,toh usse tackle karne ka kya plan hai tera..???

yunhi apni sochon me gum apne focus ko unfocus kar tu bas apna present and most importantly apna future kharab kar rahi hai...

apne dar ko apni kamzori nahi,apni taakat ka zariya bana..proove your worth ALFREEN...

taaki future me bhale hi kitni bhi negetive situation kyun naa khadi ho,tu ready reh paaye unhe handle karne ke liye...

MAHI ki baaton ne ek aag si jala di thi ALFREEN ke andar.wo jhat se aage badhi aur MAHI ke gale lag gayi...


ALFREEN-i promise you MAHI...i will proove my worth....kya hoga,kya ho sakta hai,bohot hua ye sab sochna,ab chaahe jo ho future me,i will make myself ready for every battle.....


ALFREEN ki baaton me aur uski aankhon me is waqt uska purana confidence dikhne laga tha jisse dekh MAHI khush ho gayi...

ek dusre ka haath thaam ek naye josh ke saath dono friends INSTITUTION ki taraf chal pade....



SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



brain body aur blood ko SOUL ke saath jodne ke liye ye spell bola gaya jiske 1 second baad hi....

AAAHHHH......

ek tez chikh ke saath VALDIS ki aankhen khul gayi thi jisse dekh...


VIOLET-is pain ki aadat daal lo VALDIS....jitni jaldi isse dosti kar loge,tumhare isse sehne ki shamata bhi utni jaldi badh jaayegi...


muskurate hue VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi par apni baat kehne ke baad unhe thoda shock laga par saath hi wo khush bhi hui...

reason.....

MABEL aur ALFREEN,jinhone ab tak apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ke 15 seconds ko bhi cross nahi kiya tha,wo dono aaj 25 seconds guzarne ke baad bhi aone CEREBRATION process ko hault pe rakhe hue the...

wo is baare me soch hi rahi thi ki....


AHHHH....

AHHHHH.....


kuch seconds ke antaral me ek ek cheekh ke saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhen khul gayi jisse dekh...


VIOLET-ab ye hua naa focus aur determination ka asli combo... MABEL,aaj tumne 28 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION process ko paused rakha and ALFREEN,tumne toh aadhi jung hi jeet li....

pure 30 seconds...bas itne hi aur add karwa do apne process me aur tumhara soul amplification shuru ho jaayega....


WHIZZ ki baat sun wo dono hi khush ho gayi aur saath hi dono ne man hi man aur mehnet karne ki thaan bhi li thi..

wahin in sabke beech MAHI ki performance me 1 second ka hi sahi par fark har din aa raha tha jisse dekh VIOLET WHIZZ bohot hi zyada khush thi.....



REST OF THE CLASS:-



NOX-SAVENTS...aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai but class khatm karne ae pehle hum aap sabse bas yahi kahenge ki....

it's high time u pull up your socks... sirf ek month bacha hai SWEEP-STAKE competition me...

aur wahan aap kis tarah jaate hain,ye aapke is ek mahine ke performance par depend karta hai....

aap sab ke planets me unity ke baare me sikhaya jaata hai but yahan CHOSENS me sabse bada lesson hi POWER hai...

jo khudko jitna zyada powerful banayega,uski jagah,uski izzat baakiyon ke mukable utni hi zyada hogi...

and most importantly...next PHASE me aapki life kaisi hogi,wo aapke is bache ek month ke performance se aap sabko pata chal jaayega...

jisne bhi apne soul ke percentage ko AMPLIFY karna shuru kar diya,wo wahan us competition me ek STELLAR ki tarah jaayega,wahin jisne bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya,wo wahan ek MEDIAN ki tarah treat kiya jaayega but jo ye dono hi chizen nahi kar paayega,usse us competition ko dekhte waqt ek WEAKLING ki tarah treat kiya jaayega...

so as i said,pull up your socks....


WHIZZDER ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS me confidence bhi jagne laga aur saath hi future ke baare me soch kar sabhi thode nervous bhi dikhne lage....

class khatm ho chuki thi.apni baat keh teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye....



ONE DAY BEFORE SWEEP-STAKE



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



EK SAATH 29 SAVENTS ne is spell ko uccharit kiya tha....

jee haan doston, PHASE 1 me total 32 SAVENTS hain jinme se 29 SAVENTS ne apne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya hai....

sirf trigger.. amplify ab tak sirf MAHI hi kar paayi hai....

SPELL bolte hi jo hota hai,wo hua....brain,body,blood aur soul ke bind hote hi sabhi SAVENTS ke sharir ke har ang me ek khichaav aaya jiski wajah se unhe aisa laga maano unhe koi andar se beech me se kheenchte hue faadne ki koshish kar raha ho....

aur ye wajah kaafi thi 26 SAVENTS ke aankh kholne ke liye jo unhone khol di...

aur bache 3 SAVENTS, MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL jinhone ab tak dard ko sehen karte hue apne CEREBRATION process ko pause hi rakha tha....

ab tak MABEL aur ALFREEN 50 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakh paaye the...

sirf dus seconds door the wo dono us magical 1 minute se...

aur aaj toh jaise dono thaan ke hi aaye the ki bhale chaahe jo ho jaaye,wo apne soul ko 1 percent tak AMPLIFY kar ke hi rahenge aur khud se kiye us waade ko nibhate hue wo apne task ko pura karne me lage rahe....

jahan is waqt ALFREEN apne pain ko zabt karne ke liye lagatar apne mom dad ke haste hue chehre ko yaad kar rahi thi thi wahin MABEL lagatar ek energy source par apna dhyan kendrit kiye hue thi...

aur yunhi karte karte jaise hi 50 seconds cross hua, VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par khushi dikhne lagi....

dhadakte dil se pray karti hui wo MABEL aur ALFREEN ke kaamiyab hone ka wait karne lagi aur tabhi.....

1 minute pura ho chuka tha aur ab tak MABEL aur ALFREEN ka CEREBRATION process paused hi tha jiski wajah se ek tez urja jaisi MAHI ke waqt nikli thi,thik waisi hi us pure room me fail gayi aur sidhe jaakar VIOLET WHIZZ ke bichaye shield se takrayi ...

us urja ke prabhaav se sabhi ki aankhen band ho gayi par kuch hi der par jab wo saari urja wapas MABEL aur ALFREEN me samayi,toh sab kuch saamanya ho gaya aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ki aankhen khul gayi...


VIOLET-finally... MABEL, ALFREEN,you did it...u both have successfully amplified the first percent of ur soul....


jahan VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS khush hue wahin MABEL aur ALFREEN ki khushi ka toh thikana hi nahi raha....

dono ne turant ek dusre ko hug kiya aur fir ALFREEN jo beech me baithi thi, MAHI ko hug karne ke liye palti par....

MAHI ab bhi CEREBRATION process ke beech hi thi jisse dekh ALFREEN toh chup chaap uske taraf dekhne lagi par uske saath saath baaki sab aur VIOLET WHIZZ ka dhyan bhi MAHI ki taraf gaya...

MAHI ne baakiyon se bohot pehle apne process ko pause kar liya tha...

VIOLET WHIZZ ne gaur kiya ki MAHI ke CEREBRATION process ko paused hue ab tak 8 minute se upar ho chuke hain...

im teen mahino me MAHI ne 9 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna sikh liya tha jo sabhi jaante the aur isiliye filhal normal the par jaise hi wo waqt 9 minute se upar nikalne laga toh....

VIOLET WHIZZ ki ankhen hairat se badi hone lagi....unhe bhi nahi laga tha ki MAHI itni jaldi 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki holder banane ke kareeb pahunchegi kyunki isse pehle itni jaldi aisa kabhi nahi hua tha...

dhadakte dil se wo MAHI ki taraf dekhne lagi aur tabhi....

SNNNNN...SNNNNN.......

ek behad strong magnetic force rupi urja se pura room bhar gaya jiski wajah se wahan moujud sabko aisa lagne laga maano sabhi wahan ki floor se chipak se gaye hain....

itne strong force ko feel kar ek second ke liye toh VIOLET WHIZZ bhi hairan hui par fir unhe laga ki MAHI ke itni jaldi ye achievement karne ki wajah se aisa hua hai...

wahin kuch der tak wo magnetic force yunhi pure class me faili rahi par fir dheere dheere wo urja MAHI ke andar sama gayi aur aisa hote hi magnetic field jo us urja ki wajah se paida hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho gayi aur MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi...

aankh khulte hi uski nazar uske saamne khadi VIOLET WHIZZ par gayi jo aankhon me proudness liye ussi ki taraf dekh rahi thi....


VIOLET- CHOSEN'S ke 25 hazar saal ke itihaas me aisa kabhi nahi hua ki kisi bhi NEW BORN SAVENT ne season ke pehle 6 month ke andar apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya ho...

MAHI you are the very first to achieve this feat....and i am very proud and honoured to witness this moment...


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun aabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye the...

unke beech itna rare talent moujud hai,ye unme se kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha...


VIOLET-and ALFREEN, MABEL...aapne bhi aaj khud ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki journey ko start kar diya hai..

so congrats.....

MABEL/ALFREEN-thanks WHIZZ...


ALFREEN aur MABEL ke baare me jaankar MAHI bhi bohot khush ho gayi thi....

wo un dono ko congratulate karne hi waali thi ki...


VIOLET-so SAVENTS...aaj ki classes yahin khatm hoti hai.. jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki kal classes nahi lagengi...

kal aap sab SWEEP-STAKE competition dekhne jaayenge aur uske liye aap sab har din ki tarah regular waqt par hi yahan baahar ground me assemble honge..

yahan se jaisa formation bataya gaya tha,ussike hisaab se aap sab INSTITUTION ke third PHASE ke block ki taraf jaayenge...

ok then.. I'll see you tomorrow....


ye bol WHIZZ class se nikal gayi....


WHIZZ ke jaate hi MAHI ne turant ALFREEN aur MABEL ko hug kar unke achievement ki badhayi di...

un dono ne bhi MAHI ko aaj ke uske achievement ke liye usse congrats kaha...

in teeno ke ek dusre ko badhayi dene ke baad sabhi SAVENTS jo wahan par the, unhone bhi teeno ko congrats kaha...

aur is tarah in sabki aaj ki classes aur saath hi is INSTITUTION ke first 6 months pure hue....



WAHIN DUSRI CLASS ME:-



OMMIN-ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur BROWNY.... unfortunately bas aap teeno hi aise hain jinhone ab tak apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

aur isiliye aap sab apne baaki fellow SAVENTS se alag kal competition dekhenge....

ACCHUTA- WHIZZDER,kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki hum teeno ye competition dekhna skip kar den...

NOX-bilkil nahi...aur teen nahi chaar...SWEEP-STAKE CHOSEN'S ki pratha hai jisme yahan ke har SAVENT ko shaamil hona hi padta hai...

aur isiliye ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER...kal morning regular time me hi aap apne saath RAAZ ko bhi lekar aayiyega... uska kal competition ko dekhne aana compulsary hai....


dono WHIZZDERS ke bolne ya fir ye kahun ki faisla sunaane ke baad ACCHUTA ke paas bolne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi tha...

wahin apni baat bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye...

WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke jaane ke baad BROWNY naam ka wo SAVENT bhi chupchaap class se nikal gaya....


ACHHUTA-yaar SLUNDER...ek baat toh bata....wo kaun sa gadha hoga jiske lu**d se hamari kismat likhi gayi hai...

SLUNDER-sun,mera dimag waise hi bohot kharab hai,tu mujhe aur ghussa mat dila...

ACCHUTA-abbe apne ghusse ko apni ga**d me ghussa le...kuch toh sahi istemaal hoga uska...

SLUNDER-abbe yahan kal hume bhikariyon ki tarah alag khada hokar competition dekhna hoga aur tujhe abhi bhi mazak sujh raha hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai sujh toh mera gaa*d gaya hai itne dino se ye AMPLIFICATION ko ragadte ragadte....

amplification naam ka ghanta toh baja nahi, lekin hamari zaroor baj gayi...par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain.....

bajayenge kal ghanta......


ye bol ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi class se nikal gaye....




PLACE-HEAVEN



HUMAN FORM KO CHHODE SADIYA BEET CHUKI HAIN,PAR NAZARON SE JAZBAAT ZAAHIR KARNE KA HUNAR AAPKO AAJ BHI KHUB AATA HAI AV....


aankhen band thi VIKRAM ki..par dekhne ke liye aankhon ki zaroorat toh thi nahi LORD OF ANGELS ko...

aur jab baat AVANTIKA aur uske bhaavon ki ho toh usse toh VIKRAM insaani form me bhi bina dekhe mehsoos kar leta tha...

apni taraf ghurti hui AV ko mehsoos kar muskurate hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jisse sunane ke baad bhi jab AVANTIKA ne kuch kaha nahi toh VIKRAM ne aankhen khol uski khubsoorat chehre ki taraf rukh kiya...

narazagi,fikr,udaasi sab dikh raha tha is waqt AVANTIKA ke chehre par jisse dekh....


VIKRAM-har haalaat ka tod nikal sakta hun mai,par tere rukhsaar ko dekh apni bigadti haalat ko kaise sambhalu....!!!!


ek baar fir muskurate hue VIKRAM ne apni baat kahi jisse sun....


AVANTIKA-ye mazak ka waqt nahi hai VIKRAM...

VIKRAM-sach...ek aisi bhaavna jo kayi nayi bhavnaaon ko janm deti hai..

kabhi isse sun krodh janm leta hai,toh kabhi prem...aur filhal aapko satya mazak laga toh isme mai kya kar sakta hun....

AVANTIKA-aap sab kuch kar sakte hain par sawal ye hai ki kya aap kuch karna chahenge bhi...!!!!

MAI-mai toh apna kaam hamesha se hi karta chala aa raha hun..mai wo rasta hun jo har raahgir ko uski manzil tak le jaa sakta hai...

par us raaste par chalna,aur apni manzil tak pahunchna,ye faisla raahgir ka hai...


AVANTIKA ko pata tha ki behes aur tark vitark me wo VIKRAM se nahi jeet sakti aur isiliye usne sidhe mudde par aane ki sochi....


AVANTIKA-jo hua,jo dikhaya gaya,keh dijiye ki wo bas ek matibhram tha aur kuch nahi....

VIKRAM-matibhram aur vaastavikta soch rupi sikke ke do pehlu hain....

jo pehlu nazaron ke saamne hota hai,wo vaastavikta ka pramaan hota hai aur jo chuppa hua hai,wo us waqt ke liye ek matibhram hai....

AVANTIKA-kya ye tarika uchit hoga...!!!!

VIKRAM-uchit aur anuchit ki paribhasha bohot pechida hoti hai AV....

pida dene waale ko pida uchit lagti hai par pida sehne waale ko wahi pida anuchit pratit hoti hai...

par in dono shabd ke beech jo sabse mahatvapurn shabd chuppa hua hai,wo hai kaaran....

aur usse samajhna sabse zyada zaroori hota hai....


VIKRAM ki baaton ka koi jawab nahi tha AVANTIKA ke paas par phir bhi wo disturbed lag rahi thi...


MAI-AV...hum apne ANGEL aur DEVIL khud paida karte hain...

aur paida hote hi chaahen ya naa chaahen,un dono me dwandh aarambh ho hi jaata hai...

ab is dwandh me kaun jeetatha hai aur kaun haarta hai,ye koi aur tay nahi kar sakta...hum bhi nahi......

isiliye chinta chhodo aur apne soch ki drishti dusri taraf mod zara dekho....


WO WAQT JIS WAQT KA HAR WAQT KO INTAZAR THA,WO WAQT AA GAYA HAI...

WO WAQT JAB KARWAT LEGA YE ADHYAY.........

GHUMEGI PURI KAHANI AUR...........

EK BAAR FIR SE BADAL JAAYEGA PURA

.............ATTITUDE................






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V..J....

Very nice Update bhai

 

[drx prince]

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI NE APNE SOUL KO 2 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MABEL AUR ALFREEN NE BHI APNE SOUL KA FIRST PERCENT AMPLIFICATION KAR LIYA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-33



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE




NAHI..............


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN uth gayi thi....

reason.....aaj usse fir wahi sapna aaya tha jisme RAAZ ne uske mom dad ko maar diya tha....

kuch der tak apne chadhe hue saanson ko kaabu me laane ke baad wo turant apne bed se utri aur apne mom dad ke room ki taraf chal padi....

aaj bhi FLORIN aur MARIA araam se so rahe the jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-ye sab kya ho raha hai mere saath...wahi sapna dobara kyun aaya mujhe???

aur aaj toh pichle baar se zyada realistic lag raha tha sab.....kahi ye sab mere INSTINCTS dwara catch kiye gaye pre intuitions toh nahi hai...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun.. aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta..mai aisa hone hi nahi dungi....

kuch hone ka intazar karne se acha toh ye hai ki kuch hone hi naa diya jaaye....

& i am gonna make sure about it...i will turn each and every stone around...


aakhri baat bolte waqt ALFREEN ki aankhon me ghussa saaf dikhne laga tha....

jaise har road ka koi na koi dead end hota hai,har aaghas ka ek anjaam hota hai,waise hi har soch se ek faisla janm leta hai aur har faisle ka ek natija hota hai...

ab dekhna ye hai ki kya faisla liya hai ALFREEN ne aur us faisle ka kya niklega natija...!!!!?????



NEXT DAY AT CHOSEN'S....



SWEEP-STAKE:-



GATHER AROUND SAVENTS.....


apne apne groups banaye khade SAVENTS ke kaano me VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz padi jisse sun sabhi apne regualar line formation me khade ho gaye...

subah ka waqt hai...as decided,sabhi SAVENTS apne regular waqt par CHOSENS ke PHASE 1 block ke ground me jama ho chuke hain aur unke saamne unke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS moujud hain...

kal shaam ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe bataya tha ki aaj mujhe bhi INSTITUTION me aane ke liye kaha gaya hai aur isiliye aaj kaafi waqt ke baad mai bhi yahan sabhi SAVENTS ke saath khada hun...

sabko dekhne ke baad ek nazar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne meri taraf bhi ghumaya aur fir...


OPHILIA-so finally,its SWEEP-STAKE time SAVENTS.... excited..!!!!

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-hona bhi chahiye...aaj jis competition ko dekhne aap sab jaane waale hain,yakin maaniye,aap sab ke future performance ke liye ye competition kisi moral boost se kam nahi hoga...

kaafi inspired hone waale hai aaj aap sab....


OMMIN-abhi thodi hi der me hum PHASE 3 block ke liye niklenge par usse pehle 2 important baatein jo aaj ke din se hi related hain,uske baare me jaan lijiye....

pehli.....

jaisa ki aap sabko humne bataya tha,aap sabke apne abhi tak ke performance ke according hi aaj aap sab SWEEP-STAKE witness karenge aur isiliye....


MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL....aap teenon ek taraf ho jaaiye....aaj ka competition aap teeno PHASE 2 ke sabse respected group STELLARS ke saath baith kar dekhenge...


OMMIN ki baat sun khush hote hue MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ek taraf hokar khadi hi gayi....

iske baad jinhone bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha, OMMIN ne un sabka naam ek ek kar liya aur unhe bhi ek group banakar khada kar diya....


OMMIN-aap sabne bhi aaj ke competition ko witness karne liye ek respected jagah own kar li hai....

and now ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY and RAAZ....kyunki aap sab baaki SAVENTS se piche hain, isiliye aap sabko sabse door khade hokar ye competition dekhna hoga....

itna hi nahi,wahan ke saare spectators, competition ke dauran wahan moujud sabhi PHASE 1 aur 2 ke SAVENTS ke liye snacks & beverages ka arrangment bhi rahega,siwaay aap chaaron ke...

aaj pure din aap chaaron kuch khaa ya pee nahi sakenge....

ACCHUTA dheere se-din bhar bhuka rehna padega....
saala koi apne ghar ki baayi ke saath bhi aisa nahi karta yaar...


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun ACCHUTA dheere dheere sabhi ko gaali de raha tha, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka sir jhuka hua tha, mujhe koi fark nahi pad raha tha,aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS humare liye pity feel kar rahe the but in sabke beech ALFREEN bas mujhe ghusse se ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi...


NOX-ye toh hui pehli baat.. aur dusri baat hai khud SWEEP-STAKE....

is competition ko dekhne se pehle mai aapko iske baare me bata deta hun kyunki ek baar aap SWEEP-STAKE combat jahan hone waala hai,wahan pahunch gaye toh uske baad humara aapse intaraction nahi ho paayega...

aap hi ki tarah hum WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke liye bhi alag se baithne ke arrangements hote hain..

jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki SWEEP-STAKE ka matlab hota hai khudki saamne waale par superiority dikhana...

bas issi defination ko ek roop deta hai ye competition....

ye competition do teams ke beech hota hai..ye teams aur koi nahi balki wo do groups hain jinse third PHASE divide hota hai....

WICKEDS.....

MORALS.......

ye wo do groups ke naam jinme se koi ek GROUP final PHASE me aapka ghar hoga....aapka parivaar hoga....

ab baat karen is competition ki toh WICKEDS aur MORALS ke beech ka ye competition ZUNYATA aur SATYATATI ko aadhar banakar khela,lada aur jeeta jaata hai...

ZUNYATA matlab unreal
aur SATYATATI matlab real....

ek bade se stadium me jo ki maayavi hota hai,wahan hota hai ye competition jisme samay ke saath ascending order me alag alag real aur unreal metaphysical aur magical chunoutiyan milti hai jinhe as a group dono hi teams ko handle kar jeetna padta hai....

samajh gaye aap sab????

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZDER...


utsah aur khushi,dono hi bhaav jhalke the SAVENTS ki awaaz me.. competition kaisa hoga,iske baare me jaankar sabhi ka excitement level ek alag hi mukaam par pahunch gaya tha...

MAHI ne toh abhi se hi khudko ek din us competition me part leta hua dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

MABEL ka bhi same haal tha..waise ALFREEN bhi ye sab sun kaafi excited thi par uska aadha dhyan kahin aur tha....


OPHILIA-its time SAVENTS...lets go aur haan,aap sab ke parents pehle hi battle ground me pahunch chuke hain...

so let's move....


ye bol chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aage badhe aur jis tarah hume khada kiya gaya tha,ussi formation me hum bhi unke piche ho liye...



BATTLE GROUND.......


YES MAHI....any problem???


PHASE 1 block cross karke PHASE 2 block se nikalte hue hum PHASE 3 block ke beech bane ek bohot bade ground ke baahar khade the......

ye ground darasal ek bohot hi bada stadium tha,jisme alag alag entrace the aur unhi entrance me se ek ke baahar the hum sab is waqt...

yahan pahunch OPHILIA WHIZZ kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi MAHI ne apna haath upar kiya...

wahin WHIZZ ke kehte hi....


MAHI- WHIZZ, PHASE 1,PHASE 2 ke end me do bade bade gigantic bells lage hue the...wo kis liye hain...???


aate waqt MAHI ne un do bade bells ko dekh liya tha but kyunki aaj tak wo bell kisi bhi reason se baje nahi the, isiliye uske man me ye sawal aaya tha jo usne puch liya...


OPHILIA-wo bells is INSTITUTION ke danger alarms hain...ek invisible information force se jude hain wo bells..

waise do nahi kul teen bells hain..third PHASE ka bell is block ke aakhri chhor me hain...

agar kabhi kisi PHASE me kuch anhoni hui,toh us PHASE ka bell baj uththa hai...

par har PHASE ka bell sirf wahan ke incharges,matlab us PHASE ke liye appoint kiye gaye WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se hi juda hota hai,aur isiliye sirf unhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko un bells ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jis PHASE me kuch bohot galat hua hota hai....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bat sun ek baar fir sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue...kya kya chizen possible ho sakti hai magic se,ye ab dheere dheere un sabko samajh me aa raha tha...


wahin OPHILIA WHIZZ apni baat aage badhane hi waali thi ki....


WELL,LOOK WHO'S HERE...!!!!!THE WISE FOURGIES....


ek awaaz aayi stadium ke entrance ki taraf se jisse sun WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS palte aur saath hi hum sabki nazar bhi us taraf gayi toh humne dekha ki 3 log humari hi taraf aa rahe the...

jinme se 2 male the aur ek female aur jo baat abhi kahi gayi thi,wo us female ne kahi thi jo muskurate hue hamare paas aayi aur apne waist par apne dono haath rakh khadi ho gayi...

wahin uske saath jo do males aaye the,wo aage badhe aur baari baari hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se gale mil unhe greet kiya...

gale milne ke baad...


VIOLET-kaisi ho MABBA.....???


apne waist par haath rakh khadi lady se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye kaha jisse sun...???


MABBA-taklifen zameen ko hoti hain..aasman toh hamesha mast hi rehta hai....


MABBA ki baat sun uske saath aaye dono bando ne apne sir ko shake kiya aur VIOLET WHIZZ bas muskura di wahin hamare baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS normally hi khade rahe aur wo shayad isiliye kyunki wo jaante the ki MABBA aisi hi hai...

a troubling bitch.....


VIOLET-SAVENTS....apne next PHASE ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS se miliye...

SAPIUS,REGIS aur ye hain MABBA.....


VIOLET WHIZZ ne un teeno ki taraf ek ek kar point karte hue hume unke naam bataye...


SAVENTS-GOOD MORNING WHIZZ...GOOD MORNING WHIZZDERS......

SAPIUS/REGIS-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....toh aap hain hamare agle batch...its really nice to meet you all...


SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi hamare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki tarah kaafi milansaar the,aur ussi tarah unhone sabhi SAVENTS se baat ki.....


MABBA- aapme se MAHI kaun hain....???


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi MABBA ne ye sawal kiya jiske baad VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko aage aane ke liye kaha...

aur MAHI ke aage aate hi MABBA uske saamne khadi hui aur uske kandhe par apna ek haath rakh diya..


MABBA-khushi sirf deserving logon se milkar honi chahiye thik waise jaise mujhe tumse milkar ho rahi hai...

ummid karti hun ki jo galti dusron ne ki,wo tum nahi karogi...bas ek baat yaad rakhna, acchayi,burayi sirf shabd hain aur kuch nahi..

important hai TAAKAT...SHAKTI...jiske paas ye hai,wahi accha hai aur sirf wahi saccha hai...


aadhi baat VIOLET WHIZZ ki taraf aur aadhi baat MAHI ko dekhte hue unhone kahi thi...

wahin unki baat MAHI ko sahi toh nahi lagi par kyunki MABBA uski next PHASE ki WHIZZ thi,isiliye wo chup hi rahi...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad....


MABBA-chalo...tumhe aaj humare PHASE ke best SAVENTS ke saath baithna hai...

MAHI ko pakde pakde unhone ye kaha aur usse apne saath lejaane ke liye mudne hi waali thi ki....


VIOLET- ek second MABBA... MAHI ke saath saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi tumhare STELLARS group me baithne ke liye qualify kiya hai.. unhe bhi saath le jaao...


apni baat keh WHIZZ ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko jaane ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi MABBA ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye...


MABBA-impressive....jo baat maine MAHI se kahi,wahi tum dono ke liye bhi hai...baakiyon se aage ho tum teeno,par agar future me bhi aisa hi chahte ho toh sirf POWER par focus rakhna...

uske shroth par nahi.....


ye bol teeno ko lekar MABBA aage badh gayi wahin unke jaane ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS kuch der tak hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se baat kar ek taraf chal diye...

OPHILIA- mere piche aayiye SAVENTS...


ye bol OPHILIA WHIZZ ek taraf ko aage badhi aur unke piche sabhi SAVENTS ho liye...


OMMIN- ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY, RAAZ...aap chaaron mere piche aayiye...


OMMIN ke aisa kehte hi hum chaaron unke piche ho liye..

ye teeno toh behad sad dikh rahe the par mai hamesha ki tarah normal tha...

aage badhte hue hum ek jagah pahunche jahan pahunchte hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka face aur sukh gaya..

reason...

hum stadium ke ek entrance gate par khade the jiske baahar UNDERSERVING likha tha...

ab mooh sukhao ya bhale hi ro lo,jaana toh yahin par tha aur isiliye ek ek kar hum us entrance se hote hue andar chale gaye...

andar pahunch humne dekha ki pura stadium audience se bhara hua tha...ye audience aur koi nahi balki purane passed out SAVENTS aur unki families the...

sabhi audience zoron shoron se awaazein nikal rahe the,gaane ga rahe the jisse mahoul kaafi sahi lag raha tha...

kaafi saare blocks bane the stadium me aur har block ke side me wahan baithe logon ke liye food aur beverages ka intazam kiya gaya tha...

par jahan hum chaaron the,wo jagah pure stadium se alag thi....

baithne le liye seats toh the nahi par saath hi behad garmi aur humidity bhi thi yahan....

floor pura ganda tha...aur ek ajeeb si badbu bhi aa rahi thi,jo ki saalon se safayi naa karne par aati hai...

hume wahan chhod OMMIN WHIZZDER jaa chuke the...mai ek jagah chup chaap khada ho gaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ga**d maarne aur marwane ke liye badhiya jagah hai ye bhai....

SLUNDER- tu chup rahega..yaar kitni garmi hai yahan....pure din bina khaaye aur bina piye kaise rahenge hum yahan....???

ACCHUTA-mooth piyega...waise lag toh nahi raha hai,par teri dosti ki khaatir mai koshish karta hun nikaalne ki...

tu bas niche mooh khol kar baith jaa....


issi tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hamesha ki tarah apni bakwas karne me lag gaye wahin mai aur BROWNY chup chaap khade the...



PHASE 2 STAND:-


WOW.....AMAZING....BAAHAR SE PATA HI NAHI CHAL RAHA THA KI ANDAR KA NAZARA AISA HOGA....


MAHI ne excitement me ye baat kahi thi jisse stadium ke shor ki wajah se MABEL aur ALFREEN aadhi hi sun paayi thi.....

MABBA in teeno ko yahan second PHASE ke STELLARS group ke beech laayi thi aur fir group ke sabhi SAVENTS se unka intro karwaya tha...

sabhi in teeno ko dekhkar kaafi khush the siway do logon ke...

ANWIR aur MORANA...

dono hi ghusse se in teeno ko dekh rahe the,khaaskar MAHI ko....

khair,intro ke baad teeno apni apni seats par baith gayi...har taraf nazaren ghumate hue MAHI ki nazar ek jagah rooki aur...


MAHI-wo dekh AL,uncle aunty....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar stadium ke dusre bhaag me gayi jahan par stand ke upar PARENTS likha hua tha...

unke stand ke pure ulat side tha wo stand jahan is waqt baaki current aur ex SAVENTS ke parents baithe hue the....

wo stand kaafi door tha but MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN clearly wahan baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekh paa rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ki SOUL...

apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar lene ki wajah se ab unki drishti bhi pehle se 10 guna tak tez ho gayi thi...

apne mom dad ko baaki parents ke saath milkar hooting karta dekh ALFREEN ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

par ye smile kuch seconds ki hi thi kyunki apne mom dad ko dekhne ke baad uski nazar thodi aur aage gayi jahan stadium ka last stand bana hua tha aur wahan is waqt RAAZ ek jagah tik kar khada tha....

RAAZ ko apne mom dad ke stand ke paas dekh ALFREEN ke man me ek ajeeb se dar ne ghar kar liya tha....

par tabhi.....


MABEL-arre wahan side me kya dekh rahi hai...???saamne dekh....


ALFREEN ke kandhe se hilate hue MABEL ne ye kaha aur jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh...


SWINNNNNNN........


maidan ke ek taraf KAALE aur BHURE rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur ek point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade KAALE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....

....WICKEDS......


is naam ki dhwani se aadhe se zyada stadium goonj utha...yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dekhte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete black stretchable outfit pehne ye 10 PHASE 3 ke pehle group WICKEDS ke SAVENTS the jo hawa me uthe hue sabhi audience ko haath hilate hue abhivaadan de rahe the.....

sab unhe dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....

maidan ke dusre chhor me kuch same nazara banane laga...

maidan ke us dusri taraf WHITE aur PINK rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur WICKEDS ki point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade WHITE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....


MORALS......


ab is naam se aadha stadium goonj utha...


yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dehte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete white stretchable outfit pehne ye dus SAVENTS PHASE 3 ke MORALS the jo haath hawa me lehra sabhi ka abhivaadan kar rahe the....

wahin ye sab dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ka excitement level bhi kaafi badh gaya tha...

aakhon me attha utsah liye wo teeno is nazare ko dekh rahi thi...

kuch der tak WICKEDS aur MORALS ke naam ki gunj pure stadium me hoti rahi aur fir....


BOOM........

MORALS aur WICKEDS ke beech ek dhamaka sa hua aur us dhamake ke beech prakat hue MABBA aur VIOLET....

apne WHIZZ ko competition ke beech dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL khushi se ucchal padi....

MABBA aur VIOLET is competition ki ARBITER (REFEREE) thi...

WICKEDS ke dress colour ki hi tarah ek black robe me thi MABBA wahin VIOLET MORALS ke dress colour ko match karte hue white robe pehna hua tha VIOLET WHIZZ ne....


MABBA/VIOLET-MORALS,WICKEDS...GATHER AROUND....


dono WHIZZ ke aisa kehte hi hawa me tairte hue WICKEDS aur MORALS unke dono side me aakar rook gaye...

dono hi teams ek dusre ko ghhuse de dekh rahe the...


MABBA-ummid karti hun ki aap dono hi teams fair play khelenge....

ZUNYATA AUR SATYATATI ke challange me aap sirf apne performance ko better karne me dhyan denge naaki dusri team ke performance me dakhal dene ki koshish karenge....

aisa karna foul play hai jisse aap disqualify ho jaayenge....

understood.....


MORALS/WICKEDS-yes WHIZZ...

VIOLET/MABBA-so let the show begin.....


apne haath ko failate hue dono WHIZZES ne ye baat kahi jiske baad....


PRATYARTHTHAYATI SAMOGAMA

CHALLENGE APPEAR..


SPELL bolte hi dono WHIZZES hawa me upar uthi aur ek nirdharit uchayi par pahunch rook gayi...

wahin unke spell bolne ke agle hi second stadium ka pura nazara hi badal gaya....

kuch der pehle jahan WICKEDS khade the,ab wahan aag ki ek diwal ban gayi jiski gravitational force itni zyada thi ki wo 10 WICKEDS uski taraf kheechane lage....

wahin dusri taraf jahan kuch der pehle MORALS khade the,wahan is waqt ek paani ki diwal ban chuki thi...

us paani me ek tez chakrawat aaya hua tha jiske gravitational pull ki wajah se MORALS uski taraf kheenchte chale jaa rahe the....

behatarin drishya tha jisse mantramugdh se hue sabhi audience dekh rahe the...



PARENT'S STAND:-


WO RAAZ HAI NAA....!!!!


FLORIN ne apni gardan me halki akdan mehsoos ki jiski wajah se usne apne sir ko daayen baayen jhatka diya aur issi dauran usse apne stand se kuch door ek bada par ujda sa stand dikha jiske ek chhor par khada hua tha RAAZ...

usse dekh FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jiske baad MARIA ki nazar bhi udhar ghumi aur....


MARIA-arre haan..ye toh RAAZ hi hai...


RAAZ ko is tarah ek ujdi si jagah me khada dekh FLORIN ko acha toh nahi lag raha tha but MAHI ne kal unhe bataya tha ki kaun sa SAVENT kahan baithega aur kyun usse wo jagah di gayi thi....

is situation ke liye wo kuch kar toh nahi sakte the but unhe RAAZ se baat karne ka man hua aur....


FLORIN-mai aata hun uske paas se...


ye bol FLORIN uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade...



PHASE 2 STAND:-



YE MOM AUR POPS KAHAN JAA RAHE HAIN...???


apne stand me baithi ALFREEN jo competition dekh rahi thi,wo bhi beech beech me apne mom dad ke stand ki taraf dekh leti thi aur is baar jab usne aisa kiya toh dekha ki uske dad RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir wo uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade aur unke piche MARIA bhi chal padi jisse dekh ALFREEN ko ek jhatka laga...

usse shak hua ki kahin uske mon dad RAAZ ke paas toh nahi jaa rahe aur ye khayal aate hi ek ajeeb si bechaini paida hui ALFREEN ke man me..

usne ek baar MAHI aur MABEL ki taraf dekha jo is waqt competition dekhne me khoye hue the...

wo chupchaap uthi aur apne stand se baahar nikal gayi is baat se anjaan ki wahan do log the jinhone usse baahar jaata dekh liya tha....



PARENT'S STAND:-


STOP FLORIN.....


FLORIN jo apne stand ke gate se baahar nikalne hi waale the,unhe piche se MARIA ne rookne ke liye kaha jisse sun wo rook gaye...


MARIA-mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe RAAZ ke paas jaana chahiye....


MARIA ki baat par FLORIN kuch kehne hi waale the ki...


MARIA-i know ki tumhe uski chinta hai..aur itne din baad usse dekhne ki wajah se tum usse milna chahte ho, usse baat karna chahte ho but don't u think ki wo aisa nahi chahta hoga...

i mean,koi bhi usse kisi bhi matter par baat kare,ye RAAZ ko acha nahi lagta...

tum bhale hi usse kitni hi positive ya normal baat kyun naa karo,par wo usse negetive hi lega aur negetive hi bolega...

i think we should just leave him alone...jab tak usme logon ke lekar badlaaw nahi aata,hume bhi usse door hi rehna chahiye...

ye uske liye bhi acha hi hai kyunki usse akela rehna,kisise bhi baat naa karna acha lagta hai....


MARIA ki baat sahi thi..kuch der tak uski baaton par sochne ke baad...


FLORIN-i think u are right...usse space chahiye aur hume usse wo dena chahiye...


apni wife ko side se thaamte hue FLORIN wapas palte aur apne seat par jaakar baith gaye is baat se anjaan ke unke bas RAAZ ko milne ke khayal bhar se uth kar jaane ki wajah se ye...

PURI KAHANI BADALNE WAALI HAI.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J......

Very nice update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF APNE MOM DAD KO STAND SE JAATA DEKH ALFREEN BHI APNE STAND SE UNKI TARAF NIKAL JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-34



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S




SWEEP-STAKE:-



AGAR IS BAAT KO BHULA DIYA JAAYE KI HUM APNE GRAH PAR NAHI HAIN AUR YE EK MAGICAL COMPETITION NAHI HO RAHA TOH YAHAN KE MAHOUL SE FEELING PURI SOCCER WORLD CUP KE FINALE JAISI AA RAHI HAI NAA!!!

saamne ka adhbhudh nazara aur lagatar ho rahe hooting ko dekhte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun...


MARIA- absolutely..vibe bhi waisi hi hai...

SORRY FOR INTERRUPTING,BUT KYA AAP USSI EARTH KI BAAT KAR RAHI HAIN JO MILKY WAY GALAXY ME BANE SOLAR SYSTEM KA EK MAATR LIVING PLANET HAI....


FLORIN aur MARIA ke thik peeche baithe ek noujawan shaksh ne unki baat sun jigyasa purn tarike se ye baat kahi jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN piche palte aur...



FLORIN-jee haan,hum ussi planet se hain...

UNKNOWN-oh,wow..matlab finally....

us noujawan ka reaction un dono me se kisiko bhi samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye...


FLORIN-matlab!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

UNKNOWN-actually CHOSENS ke 25 thousand years ke history me ab se pehle universe ke lagbhag sabhi planets se yahan padhne SAVENTS aa chuke hain siway EARTH ke jahan se aap aaye hain..

isiliye jaan kar acha laga ki EARTH me bhi GOD GIFTED SAVENT paida hua hai...

MARIA-oh accha..

FLORIN-waise kya aapka bhi koi relative yahan CHOSENS me padhta hai...!!!

UNKNOWN-jee nahi...mai khud yahan ka X SAVENT hun aur har PEACE MAKER ki tarah aaj yahan invite kiya gaya hun...

FLORIN-PEACE MAKER!!!!wo kya hota hai...????

UNKNOWN-lagta hai aap kisi fresher SAVENT ke dad hain???

FLORIN-haan,par tumhe kaise pata chala???

UNKNOWN-kyunki agar aap second ya final PHASE me moujud SAVENT ke parent hote toh aapko PEACE MAKER ka matlab pata hota...

waise chahun toh mai aapko is term ka matlab bata aur samjha sakta hun but filhal ye inappropriate hoga...

sahi yahi hoga ki sabki tarah aapko bhi saari chizen,unka kaaran aur unka mahatv aapke ward ke through PHASE 2 me pata chale....

us noujawan ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA ne samajhne waale andaz se apna sir hilaya...


PEACE MAKER-par haan,aapke grah aur yahan se realated ek baat mai aapko bata sakta hun jo kaafi interesting bhi hai aur kyunki aap dono first time aisa kuch sunenge,isiliye aapke liye shocking bhi hoga...

FLORIN-itna kuch dekh liya hai yahan aakar ki ab shock lagna thoda mushkil hai but fir bhi batayiye kya interesting baat hai jo yahan aur hamare EARTH se judi hui hai...

PEACE MAKER-darasal har living planet ek natural way se bana hai...matlab saare living planets GOD MADE hain but CHOSENS jahan hum is waqt moujud hain,ye ek artificial PLANET hai..

kehne ka matlab hai ki isse sirf is INSTITUTION ko dhyan me rakhkar apni shakti se banaya gaya hai....

aur jaante hain,aisa kisne kiya hai...???


us noujawan ke sawal par naa me gardan hilayi dono ne jiske baad..


FLORIN- aap mil chuke honge unse...yahan ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bana hai ye PLANET....


us noujawan ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA shocked ho gaye the...


PEACE MAKER-arre ye wo baat nahi hai jisse mai interesting aur aap logon ke liye shocking bata raha tha....

interesting baat ye hai ki kyunki ye PLANET artificial hai,isiliye universe ke baaki natural planets se iski timing different way me work karti hai...

har planet aur is planet ke beech ek time loop hai...aur saath hi dino ke hisaab se bhi ye PLANETS universe ke baaki planets se nano aur micro seconds piche yaa aage chalti hai...

nano aur micro seconds ka gap toh maamuli hai jisse planets ke beech 1 saal me 1 se 2 din ka hi difference paida hota hai par jo time loop is planet me aate hi create hota hai,wo bohot bada hota hai...

aur kyunki aap dono earth se hain,toh aapke planet aur CHOSENS ka time loop kuch zyada hi bada hai...

MARIA-zyada???kitna zyada....!!!

PEACE MAKER-aap logon ko yahan aaye kita waqt hua hai...???

FLORIN-6 months...actually abhi dopahar ke 12 baj rahe hain,is hisaab se to be exact hume yahan aaye 6 month aur 12 ghante hi chuke hain.....

kal raat 12 baje exact 6 months hue the...

PEACE MAKER-iska matlab hai ki aapko apne planet ko chhode 2 saal guzar chuke hain...

MARIA/FLORIN-what!!!!


ye toh sach me jhatka tha MARIA aur FLORIN ke liye....


PEACE MAKER-jee..EARTH aur CHOSENS ke beech ka time loop 18 mahine matlab dedh saal ka hai..

jis waqt aapne world door ko cross karte hue yahan CHOSENS me kadam rakha aur wo world door band hua tab aapka planet 18 months aage jaa chuka tha...

aur haan,nano aur micro seconds ke fark un 6 months ke hisaab se hi aage yaa piche hote hain,jis waqt par yahan log pahunchte hain...

aur issi waja se EARTH aur CHOSENS ke beech ke timing ko agar seconds ke hisab se calculate kiya jaaye toh aap kal nahi aaj raat ki date ke hisaab se CHOSENS pahunche the..

kyunki CHOSENS ke calander year me EARTH se difference pure 2 din ka hota hai aur 6 months ke hisaab se ek din jo aaj raat ko 12 baje pura hoga...


us PEACE MAKER ki baat se wakayi FLORIN aur MARIA hairan ho gaye the...

apni apni hairani liye dono hi wapas saamne palat gaye...

par jahan MARIA sirf is time loop ke ganit ke baare me hi soch rahi thi wahin FLORIN ke dimag me ek aur baat aayi jiske aate hi...


FLORIN- MARIA...time loop aur seconds ke badlaaw ki wajah se aaj raat 12 baje hume yahan aaye 2 saal ho jaayenge.. iska matlab samajhti ho...


MARIA ne aakhon me sawal liye FLORIN ko dekha jispar....


FLORIN-HUM RAAZ KE 16TH BIRTHDAY KI NIGHT YAHAN AAYE THE AUR AB TIME LOOP KE HISAAB SE AAJ RAAT 12 BAJE SE RAAZ KA 18TH BITHDAY HAI...




OUTSIDE STADIUM.........



MERE MOM DAD KAHAN HAIN RAAZ....????



stand me rukne ka man nahi hua toh mai STADIUM se baahar nikal thodi door ek ped se tik kar khada tha ki tabhi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi aur jab mai palta toh dekha ki ALFREEN behad hi ghusse me mujhe ghur rahi hai....

kuch seconds usse dekhne ke baad mai wapas palat gaya....


ALFREEN-maine pucha mere mom dad kahan hain RAAZ....


MAI-mar gaye.......


DHAPPPPP......


mere aisa kehte hi mere peeth par kuch bohot bhaari saa laga jiski wajah se mai aage ki taraf udta hua gira....


ye ek urja ray thi jo ALFREEN ke haathon se nikalkar mujhse takrayi thi...

is urja ray ki shakti itni zyada thi ki iske mere body ko chhute hi isne mere pure sharir ko hi khudki urja se dhak liya aur mujhe tez jhatke lagne lage..

jaise ek mirgi ka patient mirgi padne par chatpatata hai,thik waisa hi kuch is waqt mere saath ho raha tha....


WRITER-RAAZ ne jo kaha tha,wo bas hamesha ki tarah ALFREEN ko provoke karne ke liye kaha tha but uski baat ne ALFREEN ka wo ghussa jo wo bohot mushkil se daba rahi thi, trigger kar diya.

ab ALFREEN ek SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT thi aur RAAZ ki kahi gayi baat ne uske ussi soul ko trigger kiya tha jiski wajah se anjaane me hi sahi but uske brain,body,blood aur soul ne khudko bind kiya aur jo ray ALFREEN ke haathon se nikli thi,ye inhi chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki taakat thi jiska asar behad gehra pada tha RAAZ par....

wahin anjaane me hi sahi but itni zyada power ek saath release karne ki wajah se ALFREEN ke upar bhi thakan haawi hi gayi thi....

par ghussa abhi bhi ALFREEN ke chehre par dikh raha tha....aur isiliye wo fir se RAAZ par attack karne waali hi thi ki....


OYE PAAGAL HO GAYI HAI KYA???CLASS ME SABSE AAGE HAI TOH KYA KUCH BHI KAREGI TU.....?????


uske baaju se RAAZ ki taraf tezi se badhte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi..uske saath SLUNDER bhi tha....

RAAZ jo ab bhi halka halka chatpata raha tha,uske paas pahunch ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne uske dono haathon ko rub karna shuru kar diya....


ALFREEN-chup chaap niklo yahan se warna tumhara haal bhi bura kar dungi mai...

ACCHUTA-haan tere baap ka raaj chal raha hai naa yahan....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch kehne hi waali thi ki....


SLUNDER-tumne bewajah RAAZ par waar kiya hai..humne tumhari baat suni thi..tumhare mom dad wahin apne stand par hi hain...

yahan aane se pehle humne unhe wahan dekha tha....

ALFREEN-ye jhuth hai..maine khud unhe apne stand se baahar jaate hue dekha tha..

ACCHUTA-oye hum tere hired personal watchman nahi hain ki minutes ke hisaab se kaun kab kahan kahan gaya,uska hisaab bhi den aur tujhe yakin bhi dilayen...

tere maa baap wahin stand me jaa..jaakar khud dekh le....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse, SLUNDER ko aur fir RAAZ ko ghurti hui palat kar nikal gayi ALFREEN....



WAHAN SE KUCH DOOR:-




AB AAYEGA MAZA...MAHI KI JAGAH USKI SAHELI HI SAHI....


ye kaha tha ANWIR ne MORANA se...yahi the wo do log jo ALFREEN ko apne stand ae baahar nikalte hue dekh rahe the aur uske piche ho liye the....

waise toh wo dono MAHI ko unke khilaaf bolne ke liye punish karna chahte the,but ab ALFREEN jo ki MAHI ki bestie thi,usse yun akela dekh unhe usse sabak sikha uske through MAHI ko message dene ki sochi...

par unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise ALFREEN ko punish karen par ab shayad ALFREEN ne khud unhe idea de diya tha....


MORANA-mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahe ho ANWIR and i like it...


MORANA ki baat par ANWIR muskuraya aur....


ANWIR-tumhe sirf samajhna hi nahi,karna bhi hai....


ANWIR ki baat sun MORANA bhi muskurayi aur uske agle hi pal....


KAPTAVESA.....

DISGUISE ACCORDING THE IMAGE


aankhon ke aage ALFREEN ke image ko rakh MORANA ke mooh se ye spell uccharit hua jiske agle hi pal....

MORANA ALFREEN me badal chuki thi.....

disguise change karna, roop badalna ek seven percent plus SOUL AMPLIFICATION holder hi kar sakta hai..

aur kyunki MORANA aur ANWIR abhi 10 percent par hain toh isiliye ye karna inke baayen haath ka khel jaisa hai...


ANWIR-now that's my girl...ab jaao,aur haan,josh me aakar un dono par zyada waar mat kar dena...

aakhir wahi dono toh eyewitness hain....


ANWIR ki baat par sir ko haan me hila MORANA aage badh gayi....

toh plan inka ye hai ki RAAZ jiski haalat abhi behad hi kharab hai,usse MORANA jo filhal ALFREEN hai,uspar aur waar karegi....

par sirf itna ki RAAZ mare nahi,par haan marne jaisi haalat me pahunch jaaye..

aisa nahi hai ki MORANA ya fir ANWIR ko hi RAAZ ya kisi aur ki jaan lena galat lagta hai,but isiliye kyunki wo dono jaante hain ki agar RAAZ pe shaktishaali prahaar hua aur wo mar gaya toh first PHASE ka alarm bell baj jaayega jo naa sirf us PHASE ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko iske baare me suchit karega balki apni Shakti se gunahgaar ko bhi beparda kar dega....

par agar RAAZ par ek do maamuli waar hue toh aisa kuch nahi hoga...

sirf uski haalat bigdegi aur ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke through jo ki eyewitness honge, ALFREEN ko behad kadi punishment milegi...

pura CHOSEN'S is waqt STADIUM ke andar tha jo ki ANWIR aur MORANA ke liye plus point tha...

aage badhte hue MORANA wahin jaakar khadi ho gayi jahan kuch der pehle ALFREEN khadi thi aur....


MORANA-nahi hai mere mom dad apne stand par...


ALFREEN ka roop dhar ussiki awaaz aur andaz me chilla kar boli MORANA...


wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jo RAAZ ko sahara dekar khada kar rahe the,wo ye awaaz sun palate aur ek baar phir ALFREEN ko dekh chownke par unke chownke ka main reason tha wo current ray jo is waqt ALFREEN ke haathon me chingari sa ban chamak raha tha...


ACCHUTA-tu fir aa gayi...arre agar tere mom dad stand par nahi hain toh hum kya karen...???

jaa aur unhe dhund...baar baar yahan kyun aa jaati hai...???

MORANA-mujhe pata hai ki is RAAZ ne mere mom dad ke saath kuch toh kiya hai..


RAAZ chupchaap bata de ki kahan hain mere mom dad,warna acha nai hoga....


SLUNDER-dekho ALFREEN....hum sach keh rahe hain,humne tumhare mom dad ko unke stand par hi dekha tha aur RAAZ ko toh unke baare me kuch pata hi nahi hai....

MORANA-jhooth....aur tum dono se toh mai baat hi nahi kar rahi hun, RAAZ,bata mere mom dad kaha hain...

RAAZ-bataya toh tha...mar gaye wo dono..


apne nature ke according RAAZ ne baat kahi jisse sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne apna maatha peet liya par teer toh kamaan se nikal hi gaya tha....


ALFREEN urf MORANA ke haath se ek current ball nikla aur sidhe RAAZ par pada aur.......


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-RAAAZZZZZ..........


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki cheekh ke saath saath kuch aisa hua jo ANWIR aur MORANA ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha.....

darasal jo current ball MORANA ne RAAZ ki taraf feki thi,uski energy kaafi kam thi par pata nahi kaise,us current ball ke lagte hi RAAZ ka body ekdum piche hawa me ud sa gaya....

RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER is waqt jis ped ke niche khade the,uske kuch piche ek pagdandi bani thi joki asal me ek sankara raasta tha CHOSENS se baahar jaane ka....

pedon ke ghane jhurmut the us pagdandi ke ird gird...

behad tezi se hawa me udta hua RAAZ ka body unhi pedon ke upar se hota hua piche ki taraf jaane laga jisse dekh MORANA aur ANWIR ke bhi hosh ur gaye...

kyunki jo hua,wo unke liye ek impossible chiz thi...

un dono ne hi dekha tha ki piche udta hua RAAZ ka sharir kisi bhi point par neeche aaya hi nahi tha..

wo toh bas udta hua piche ki taraf jaate hi jaa raha tha....

MORANA ko toh ye samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki itne mamuli current ball se jisse 5 feet bhi udte hue girna mushkil hai, jo hua wo kaise mumkin hai kyunki apne pure 10 percent ki SOUL shakti ko ek saath use karne ke baad hi shayad MORANA ye kar paati....

par jo hona tha wo ho chuka tha.. ANWIR aur MORANA dono ko hi lag gaya tha ki itne bade jhatke ke baad RAAZ nahi bach paayega aur isiliye...


ANWIR mind me- MORANA,turant niklo yahan se...


apne mind ko MORANA ke mind se jod ANWIR ne ye baat kahi jiske baad wo dono hi gayab ho gaye...

wahin jab ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ne ALFREEN urf MORANA ko gayab hote dekha toh wo dono hi RAAZ jis taraf udta hua gaya tha,us taraf bhaagte hue nikal gaye.....

wahin in sabse alag mai ulta hawa me tairta hua sa ek disha ko badhta chala jaa raha tha....

kya hua,kyun hua,kaise hua,in sab baaton ko darkinaar kar maine apne haath faila diye aur is naye safar ke shuruat ki taraf badhne laga...

kuch 2 minute mai yunhi hawa me udta hua aage badhta raha aur fir dheere dheere mera sharir neeche utarne laga aur tabhi....


DHAPP.......


zamin par girte hi is awaaz ke saath me thoda aage fisalta hua ragdata raha mai...

ALFREEN ke pehle waar se mere sharir me ek alag hi jakdan si aa gayi thi aur ab jab mai yun niche gira toh us jakdan ne mujhe ek aur jhatka diya jisse ek pal ke liye meri aankhen badi hui aur fir dheere dheere band hone lagi par aankhon ke band hone se pehle maine apne saamne kuch chamakta hua sa dekha tha jisse dekh behosh hote hote mere mooh se behad dheemi awaaz me nikla...




THE FORBIDDEN FOREST.....





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KAHAN GAYI THI TU....????


ALFREEN ke wapas aate hi MABEL ne ye sawal pucha jisse sun...


ALFREEN-washroom....

MABEL-oh... chal baith,dekh competition kaafi complex aur interesting hota jaa raha hai...


MABEL ki baat sun ALFREEN ne ek baar MAHI ki taraf dekha jo sabko bhul bina palke jhapkayen competition ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise wo spectator nahi balki khud participant ho....

MAHI ko dekh muskurate hue MAHI ne dusri taraf dekha jahan uske mom dad ka stand tha...

apne mom dad ko apni seat par baithe dekh ALFREEN ne chain ki saans li aur tabhi....


BOOMMM.....


ek tez dhamaka hua jo ki maidan ke beech hawa me hua tha...reason....


WICKEDS ki taraf jo aag ki diwal bani thi,usse nikalte gurutwakarshan force ki wajah se aa rahe khichaaw se bachne ke liye WICKEDS ki team ne khudko ek human chain ka roop de diya tha...

WICKEDS ke sabhi SAVENTS ek adrishya rope ke sahare ek dusre se bandhe khudko us gravitational pull me khinchane se rok rahe the aur issi beech jo is chain ke sabse aage khada tha,us SAVENT ne us aag ke diwal par dhamaka kiya taaki gravitational pull ka asar kuch kam ho jaaye aur issi wajah se ye awaaz nikla tha...

sabhi is drishya ko taktaki lagaye dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....


CSHHHHHCSHHHHHHHH......


ek ajeeb si awaaz ne sabka dhyan apni taraf kheencha...

ye awaaz aaya tha us paani ke diwal se...

reason....

jahan WICKEDS ki team human chain ka roop le problem ko tackle kar rahi thi wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki team ne alag yukti nikali thi...

wo 10 SAVENTS 5,5 ka group bana us paani ke diwal ke dono taraf khade ho gaye the...

har group ka ek SAVENT apne opposite khade SAVENT se ek adrishya rope ke sahare juda tha...

har SAVENT apni taraf se us paani ke bane chakrawat ke uphaan ke upar jisse gurutwakarshan force generate ho raha tha, uspar energy balls phenk raha tha taaki paani ke uphaan se nikalne waale force ki taakat kuch kam ho aur gravitational pull dheela pade...

sabhi spectators me saath MAHI, MABEL aur ab ALFREEN bhi pure focus aur interest ke saath ye sab dekh rahi thi is baat se bekhabar ki thodi der pehle uski lagayi chingari ne ab aag ka roop le liya hai aur kuch hi der baad wo aag us jwalamukhi me badal jaayegi jisse is kahani se jude har kirdar ki bhumika ko maayne mil jaayenge....




BACK TO RAAZ:-



RAAZZZZZ..........RAAZZZZZ........



ye do alag awaazen thi jo mujhe pukarte hue mere kareeb aa rahi thi....

jaise jaise ye awaaz aur iske maalik mere karib aa rahe the,waise waise mai apni behoshi se baahar aa raha tha....

aankh khulte hi maine gardan upar kar saamne dekha toh....


ABBE SAALE TU ITNI DOOR AAKAR GIRA HAI....


ye ACCHUTA tha jo mere sir par khada mujhse sawal kar raha tha...


SLUNDER-abbe sawal karna chhod aur usse utha...


SLUNDER ke aisa ACCHUTA mujhe uthane laga...uske saath mere dusre taraf se SLUNDER bhi mujhe sahara dekar uthane laga...

ALFREEN ke chhode pehle ray ki wajah se sir se lekar pair tak mujhe abhi bhi akdan mehsoos ho rahi thi aur jis wajah se mujhe halki kamzori bhi aa gayi thi..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ne mujhe mere dono kandho se pakde pakde sahara diya..

mai un dono ke sahare khada tha....

ek ek taraf se mujhe halka halka gale lagaye...


ACCHUTA-bhai tune toh dara hi diya tha....

SLUNDER-haan yaar..hume laga ki tu nahi bacha hoga....

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,agar tujhe kuch ho jaata naa,toh hum us ALFREEN ko jaan se maar dete...

SLUNDER-aur nahi toh kya....itne din hum isiliye toh saath nahi rahe ki ye sab hota dekhen...

tujhe sirf............


............HUM MAARENGE...........

KHACCHHHHH.....

KHACCHHHHHH.......

AAKKKKK.......

DHAAPPP.....


apni baat bolte bolte SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono ne mere pet me kuch ghussa diya jisse mere mooh se ek kism ki dakaar nikal gayi...

mere pet me kuch ghussa dono ne mujhe dhakka dete hue piche phek diya....

mere pet me kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha but fir bhi mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki koi nukili chhurre jaisi chiz mere pet ke pure andar tak dhansi hui hai.....

zamin par girte hi mujhe halke halke jhatke lagne lage aur mai ussi haalat me saamne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhne laga par ye kya......!!!!!

is waqt SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA, dono ke chaaron taraf ek black aura banane laga jisne un dono ko hi pura dhak diya par fir dekhte hi dekhte wo aura chhatne laga aur aisa hote hi mere saamne do log khade the...

par ye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER nahi the...jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER patle duble sadharan se dikhne waale ladke the,wahin ye dono jo is waqt mere saamne halke hawa me uthkar khade the,behad hi handsome aur lambe chowde the...

ek alag hi aakarshan tha un dono me..paini nazar,lamba aur perfect jaw line se nirmit chehra aur behad confident ATTITUDE....

kaala robe unke vyaktiv ko aur nikhar raha tha....


JAB SHAKTI HI MANZIL HAI,
TOH RAASTE SE KYUN ACHRAJ HAI...

PAAP PUNYA SAB JHUTE HAIN,
SHAKTI HI EK MAATRA SACH HAI....


un dono ne hi ek saath ye baat yaa fir ye kahun ki ye phrase bola tha....


muskurate hue apni gehri aankhon se wo dono mujhe dekh rahe the aur mujhe apni taraf ghurta dekh...


FIRST-jaanta hun bohot se sawal hai tere..waise bhi tu marne waala hai, isiliye tujhe sab bata kar hi rukhsat karenge...

pehle introduction ho jaaye...

bande ko GASTON kehte hain.....

SECOND-aur mai DORIAN hun.....


naam toh yaad hoga aapko in dono ka....GASTON aur DORIAN...

CHOSENS ke itihaas ke sabse kaamiyab SAVENTS.....

wo do log jinhe dhundne ke liye
AKSHAANT aur SHAILA nikle the par wo unhe mile nahi..

milte bhi kaise,jinhe wo baahar dhund rahe the,wo toh unke ghar ke andar baithe hue the..


GASTON-yaar,teri sabse gazab baat yahi hai...tere expressions kabhi nahi badalte....

DORIAN-abbe waqt nahi hai uske paas... jaldi baat khatm kar,hume jaana bhi hai.. humare aura se hume yahan sense kiya jaa sakta hai....

KRRRR.......

apna haath aage kiya GASTON ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske haath se ek strong ray nikal aage badhi aur sidhe jaakar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke entrance me lage shield se takrayi aur khatm ho gayi...


GASTON-ye dekh raha hai...ye ek shield hai jo pure FORBIDDEN FOREST ke chaaron taraf bichi hui hai..

hamare yahan hone ka kaaran bas yahi jagah hai...is FOREST me kuch hai jo hume chahiye aur us chiz ko paane ke liye humne kya kuch nahi kiya but sab bekaar ho gaya...

wo kahani yaad hi hogi jo humne tujhe sunayi thi...

arre wahi SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA waali jinka humne bhes liya hua tha..wo kahani mangadhan nahi thi,sacchi thi bas humne tujhe adhuri baat batayi thi....

SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke maa baap ko MIRTHJEEVEN ki haalat me pahunchane ke baad wahi chiz humne SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke saath bhi ki thi...

hume un dono ke grah se kuch chahiye tha jiske liye aisa karna zaroori tha par dono raaj gharano ke sabhi sadasyo ke jeeven kan nikalne ke baad bhi jab hume WO chiz nahi mili toh humne ek nahi yukti sochi...

humne socha ki jinki shakti se ye FORBIDDEN FOREST bana hai,zaroor unke bheeter kuch na kuch aisa upay chhupa hoga jisse hum is jagah ke shield ko hata sakenge...

hume ye bhi maalum tha ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ka hi chayan yahan CHOSENS ke liye ho gaya hai...

aur isse hamare plan ko execute karna aur aasan ho gaya...

humne un dono ka roop lene ki sochi par ye itna asaan nahi tha....

hume maalum tha ki is INSTITUTION ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak hamare chhal ko pehchaan lenge..

aur khaas karke wo teeno SOVEREIGN'S....unse bachna asambhav tha...

par jahan mushkile hoti hain,wahan unse nikalne ka marg bhi hota hai...

aur hamari mushkil se nikalne ka maarg tha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jeevan kan jo humne unse nikal liye the...

humne un dono ke jeeven kano ka khud me samavesh kiya..

aur fir humne apne jeeven kano ko bramhand ke ek durgam maarg me bhej diya..ek aise maarg me jo CHOSENS se juda hua hai taaki jab bhi hum chaahen,hamare jeeven kan hum tak pahunch paayen...

(ye wahi jeeven kan hain doston jinhe GASTON aur DORIAN samajh SHAILA aur AKSHAANT dhundne jaate the par unhe kuch milta nahi tha..)


GASTON-aur humne bas apni Shakti ka ek pratishat apne andar rakha par kyunki hamare andar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jeeven kan the,isiliye hamari us ek pratishat shakti ke baare me pata lagana lagbhag naamukin tha....

par koi tha,jiske liye humari shakti ko sense karna asambhav nahi tha..

VIOLET....


VIOLET bhale hi first PHASE me padhati thi par uski capabilities 2nd PHASE WHIZZ ke jitni hai. .

aur kyunki 1st PHASE me hone ki wajah se hum ussike under the isiliye AMPLIFICATION process ke waqt VIOLET ko humpar shak ho gaya tha...jahan sabko hum yahan ek weakling SAVENT nazar aa rahe the,wahin VIOLET ko humara AURA feel hone laga tha...

usne ye baat baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ko batayi par jab unhone is shak ko nakara toh usne shakti sense karne ka spell un teeno par kar diya jisse un teeno ke zariye bina saamne aaye bhi wo humari shaktiyon ko sense kar sake...


(SELF BRAWL AUR ACCHUTA,SLUNDER KO MOTIVATE KARTE WAQT VIOLET BAAKI TEENO SE YAHI BAAT KAR RAHI THI)


GASTON-par humne usse aisa mouka hi nahi diya..wo ya aur koi bhale hi humare saamne ho yaa naa ho, hum ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke character me bane rahe jisse dheere dheere uska shak bhi jaata raha...

in sabke beech hum lagatar SOVEREIGN'S par nazar banaye rakhe hue the par kuch waqt baad wo teeno hi gayab ho gaye...

humne kuch dino tak unki waapsi ki raah dekhi par jab wo nahi aaye toh humne yahan se jaane ki sochi par hum ye nahi kar sakte the kyunki SOVEREIGN'S ke jaane ke baad us MARILIZA ne CHOSENS ke SENSE SHIELD ke upar ek STOP SHIELD laga di jiske kaaran CHOSENS se naa toh koi baahar jaa sakta tha aur naahi koi andar aa sakta tha..

waise humare liye us STOP SHIELD ko todna koi badi baat nahi thi par aisa karne se humne jo bhi kiya tha,aur jis kaaran se kiya tha,wo ujagar ho jaata aur hum ye hone nahi de sakte the...

aur isiliye hum aaj ke din ki pratiksha karne lage... kyunki aaj SWEEP-STAKE hai, isiliye hume maalum tha ki pure bramhaand se is CHOSENS me padhe SAVENTS aur unke parents zaroor aayenge aur aisa hone dene ke liye MARILIZA us STOP SHIELD ko aaj ke liye hata degi jisse hum asaani se nikal jaayenge....

as simple as that...

ye toh hui hamari kahani par jaanta hai isme tu kahan se aaya???

kisi bhi SAVENT ko maarna toh door chhedne ka bhi hamara koi prayojan nahi tha...

agar aisa hota toh us raat jab MAHI ne humari Shakti ke bhaag ko dekh liya tha,hum usse ussi waqt maar dete...(UPDATE 29,KAALI CHAADAR)

par hume pata tha ki raat ke andhere me dikhi koi cheez ko adhar bana wo kuch saabit nahi kar paayegi,isiliye humne usse kuch nahi kiya...

khair,is bramhaand ke har kism ke maanav aur jeev se hum mil chuke hain,kisi me positive aura hota hai toh kisime negetive, par tere jaisa AURA humne kahin feel nahi kiya...

jab humne tujhe pehli baar karib se dekha tha,toh hume apne andar ek ghutan si mehsoos hui..

ek aisi ghutan jisse bardasht karna bohot mushkil tha kintu humare plan ki wajah se humare paas koi option nahi tha...

hum tujhe ussi waqt mout dena chahte the par hum wo bhi nahi kar sakte the...

kar sakte the toh bas intazar,yahan se nikalne ka aur jaate jaate tujhe maarne ka....

aur dekh kismat se ye dono hi kaam aaj hi ho gaya...

jab ALFREEN ne tujhe maara toh humne socha ki uske jaane ke baad tujhe behosh kar yahan le aayenge aur tujhe maar denge kyunki yahan bichi shield ki wajah se alarm bell kaafi der se teri mout sense karega aur tab tak hum yahan se jaa chuke honge...

par hum tujhe behosh karen,usse pehle hi ek dusri SAVENT aayi jisne ALFREEN ka roop dhar tujhpar attack kiya...

aur jab wo current ball tujhe lagne waala tha toh maine apni shakti se tujhe piche udda tujhe yahan pahuncha diya....


AKKKK.......


lagatar halka halka kampan kar taha tha mai....aur tabhi ek dakaar sa nikla mere mooh se jisse sun muskura diya GASTON....


GASTON- VADIN......


hamara banaya ek khaas astra hai ye jo is waqt tere andar ghussa hua hai...

iske pravesh se sharir par koi cut yaa ghaav nahi hota....par agar ye kisike sharir me ghus jaaye toh iski nok se ek urja nikalti hai jisse sharir ke andar ke har koshika me khichaav aana shuru ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere us manushya ka sharir andar se pura sadh bhi jaata hai aur khokla bhi ho jaata hai...

a very very painful way to die ...


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........


apni baat bol zoron se has pada GASTON wahin uske baaju me khada DORIAN is pure dauran bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha...

wahin dakaar lene ke baad bhi ab tak meri aankhen halki hi sahi par khuli hui thi jisse dekh

(update-1)


GASTON-hai toh tu ek mamuli mortal,par maanana padega,jaan fir bhi sakht hai...

arre...ye kya kar raha hai.......????


chingari dikhne lagi thi DORIAN ke hatheliyon me,jisse dekh haste hue GASTON ne pucha.....


GASTON-agar aur prahar karna hota toh kya mai ab tak yunhi baaton me waqt gawata....

iske jism se iske rooh ko alag karne ke liye jo waar hume karna tha,hum kar chuke hain...

agar ispe ek bhi waar aur hua toh iske tadapte shareer ko shanti mil jaayegi....

aur pata nahi kyun,ye mai nahi hone dena chahta....isse yun ek kide ki tarah bebas laachar tadapte hue dekhkar bada anand aa raha hai....

yunhi tadapte tadapte dheere dheere marne de isse....iske chehre par umadta ye dard,meri jalti hui kaali rooh par thande paani ka kaam kar rahi hai.......

DORIAN-tumhara bas chale toh tum isse har roz maaro....

GASTON-wajah toh maalum hi hai tumhe...hai toh ye nashwar...maamuli mortal...par pata nahi kyun,iski moujudgi ek ghutan paida karti hai mere andar....

ek chingari naachne lagi GASTON ki aankhon me...

mai unke saamne pada mar raha tha,mera sharir reh reh kar jhatke khaa raha tha,par ab bhi unki aankhon me mere liye wahi ghrina thi,wahi krodh jisse lagatar apne andar zabt karte aaye the wo dono...

wahin neeche zamin par kisi kide ki tarah pada mai unke chehre ko ektak dekh raha tha...

marnasthal par pahunchkar bhi mere aankhon ka sunapan jyon ke tyon tha....

mere chehre par dard saaf jhalak raha tha fir bhi mai bhaav shunya tha...

naa moh na maaya,naa koi khwahish...khush hone waali paristithi toh thi nahi par koi gum tak naa tha mere chehre par....

par haan,ek sawal zaroor uth raha tha mere zehen me..ye wahi sawal tha jo mere zehen me tab se uthta aa raha tha jabse SOCH shabd ka matlab samajh aaya tha mujhe...

aakhir kaun hun mai....????kyun alag hun mai sabse....?????waise toh sabki apni soch hoti hai par kuch baatein toh sabme common hi hoti hai....

par ye khubi bhi mujhme naa thi....khushi aur gum,in dono ehsaason se hi mai aaj tak mehroom tha....

aur ab toh zindagi hi apne aakhri mukam par hai.......apne saare sawaalon ko khudme sametkar ankhen band kar li maine aur tabhi.....


GASTON-tere paida hote waqt tujhe kisi ne tujhe company di ya nahi ye toh hum nahi jaante par haan,marte waqt tujhe saath zaroor milega...

ye bol DORIAN aur GASTON ke haath se do roshni nikal mere left side par padi aur dekhte hi dekhte us roshni ke andar se do log prakat hue...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER..par ye asli the aur mere baaju me behosh pade the....

mai jaanta tha ki DORIAN aur GASTON ne ye kyun kiya tha...bhale hi wo dono yahan se jaa rahe the par jo bankar wo yahan aaye the,unka toh yahan hona zaroori tha....

khair,khuli rehne ki ab aur shakti nahi bachi thi meri aankhon me,isiliye....


.................HICH ....................


AUR YE AAYI MERI AAKHRI HICHKI.....



DORIAN-AKHIRKAAR YE KIDA

..........MAR HI GAYA.............






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V...J.....

Very nice Update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI GASTON AUR DORIAN NE RAAZ KE PET ME VADIN NAAM KA ASTRA GHUSSA DIYA JISSE RAAZ KI HAALAT BIGATI CHALI GAYI AUR AAKHIR ME USNE APNI AANKHEN BAND KAR LI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-35



PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-FORBIDEEN FOREST




YE TUMHARA ANTH NAHI HAI RAAZ....

YE US SAMAY KA ANTH HAI JISNE TUMHE MAAMULI HONE KA DARJA DIYA THA...

YE US GHADI KA ANTH HAI JISKI BISAAT ME AB TAK TUM SIRF EK MOHRE THE...

YE US AAKHRI LAMHE KA ANTH HAI JAB TUM IS KAHANI KI MAHAZ EK KAMZOR KADI THE....


PAR AB WAQT, SAMAY,GHADI, LAMHA TUMHARE KHWAHISHON KE GULAAM HONGE....

KAAM SE HOTA HAI NAAM,

PAR AB TUM WO BANOGE,
JISKA NAAM SUNTE HI SAARE
KAAM HONGE.....


ek awaaz jo kisi bhavishyawaani ki tarah gunjte hue FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar se aa rahi thi aur in saari baaton ke beech ussi FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar se ek roshni nikal aage badhti chali jaa rahi thi....

aage badhte badhte wo roshni us FOREST ke shield ke paas aakar ek second ke liye ruki aur fir aage badh gayi...

par ye kya????wo roshni us SHIELD
ke beech me se aise baahar ki taraf nikal gayi maano wahan shield thi hi nahi....

FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar se chali wo roshni shield ko cross karte hue seedhe RAAZ ki disha me chal padi...

RAAZ....jisne kuch der pehle hi apni aakhri hichki li thi...

jo mari hui si haalat me pada hua tha FORBIDDEN FOREST se kuch door ek maidan jaisi jagah par aur uske left side me ussi haalat me pade hue the asli ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER....

aage badhti hui wo roshni sidhe jaakar ruki RAAZ ke thik upar....

par RAAZ ke upar pahunchne ke baad bhi us roshni ne RAAZ ko chhua nahi,bas wahin steady hokar rooki rahi maano kuch hone ka wait kar rahi ho....

aur tabhi........

pure ELYSIAN planet se ek adrishya ray khudko sameththe hue aane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo ray ek urja ka gola ban thik us roshni ke upar aakar ruki...

uske aisa karte hi wo roshni ek taraf ho gayi maano us ray ko raasta de rahi ho...

thik ussi waqt....

RAAZ ke sir ke upari bhaag me bhi us ray jaisi hi ek roshni ubhri aur aisa hote hi RAAZ ki body hawa me uthne lagi....

wahin RAAZ ki body ke upar uththe hi wo ray bhi neeche aane lagi aur kuch der baad.....

wo saari ray RAAZ ke brain me sama gayi....

aur aisa hote hi.....

RAAZ matlab mujhe meri aankhen band hone ke baad pure ELYSIAN me kya kya hua tha,wo pata chal gaya....

mujhe mara samajh GASTON aur DORIAN ka apne astra ko jo unhone mere pet me ghusaya tha,usse wapas kheench yahan se jaana, SWEEP-STAKE competition me ho rahi gati vidhi, ALFREEN ka jisne mujhe aaghat pahunchaya tha,uska MORALS ko cheer karna sab dikhne laga tha...

waise meri ankhen abhi bhi band thi....chetna meri abhi tak louti nahi thi par ek sapne ki tarah ye saari chizen,ya fir ye kahun ye saare tathya mere CONSCIOUS brain ke zariye mujhe dikhne lage....

khair,jaise hi wo ray mere andar samayi,us roshni ne jo ab tak rooki hui thi, apne daayre ko failaya aur dekhte hi dekhte mai aur mere saath saath ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi us roshni ke ghere me aa gaye aur aisa hote hi meri hi tarah un dono ke bodies bhi hawa me uth gaye aur fir hum teeno hi hawa me lehrate hue us roshni ke saath FORBIDDEN FOREST ki tarar badh chale...

meri body sabse aage thi... FORBIDDEN FOREST ke entrance me pahunch mera sharir rook gaya....

rookne ke baad hawa me lehrata mera sharir dheere dheere sidha hua aur aisa hote hi mere pure sharir se ek nayi urja baahar nikal us SHIELD par padi aur tab.....

FORBIDDEN FOREST ka wo impenetrable SHIELD ek tez gadgadahat ke saath gayab ho gaya....

us SHIELD ke gayab hone ke agle nano seconds ke andar mera, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir us roshni ne FOREST ke andar kheench liya aur aisa hone ke theek baad....

ek naya SHIELD us entrance me ban chuka tha...ye wo shield nahi tha jo ab tak FORBIDDEN FOREST ke charon taraf ghira hua tha par haan,strong ye us SHIELD jitna hi tha ya fir shayad usse bhi zyada....

khair, FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar kheenchate hue hamara sharir waise hi hawa me float hota hua aage badhne laga....

aur fir ek jagah pahunchkar......

hum teeno ka sharir neeche zamin me utar gaya....

jahan hum behosh pade the,wahan se kuch door ek choti si chattan thi aur ussi chattan ke upar ek choti par behad shaktishali urja se bhari roshni chamak rahi thi...

ye wahi urja thi jo kuch der pehle mere baare me baat kar rahi thi aur isne hi hum teeno ke sharir ko roshni ke maadhyam se yahan tak laaya tha...

sthir mudra me kuch der tak wo urja thehari rahi maano mujhe dekh rahi ho par fir....


RAAZ........

mera naam pukara us urja ne jo sidhe mere dimag me gunj si uthi aur aisa hote hi dheere dheere meri aankhen khul gayi.....





PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE





SAMVESTATE


SHRINK TOGETHER



WICKEDS ki human chain formation me jo SAVENT sabse aage tha,usne is spell ko uccharit kiya tha jiske baad uski puri team ka aakar ek chiti ki size ka ho gaya aur aisa hote hi WICKEDS ne apni human chain tod di....

human chain ke toothte hi wo sabhi tezi se us aag ke diwal ki taraf badhne lage par aisa hone ke baad bhi unme se kisi ne bhi khudko rokne ki koshish nahi ki....

wo 10 SAVENTS tezi se us aag ke diwal ki taraf kheenchane lage aur jaise hi wo aag unhe jalane ko hui toh.....

arre ye kya????

wo 10 ke 10 SAVENTS toh us aag ke diwal ke aar paar ho gaye aur wo bhi bina us aag ki chapet me aaye hue.....

par kaise???

wo aise ki kuch der pehle tak human chain ka formation liye WICKEDS ke aabse aage khade SAVENT ki nazar badi baariki si us aag ke diwal ka nirikshan kar rahi thi...

lagatar dhyan purvak dekhne par usne dekha ki jahan wo puri diwal aag ke peeli lapton se bani hai wahin us diwal ke right side par ek aisi jagah bhi hai jahan aag ka wo peelapan baaki jagahon se halka alag hai...

diwal ke baaki ka pura area jaisa aag dikhta hai,waisa hi dikh raha tha par wo area jahan us SAVENT ki nazar thami thi,halka diamond jaisa shine kar raha tha...

wo area behad chota tha par apni alag chamak ki wajah se dhyan dene par dikh raha tha aur usse dekhte hi is SAVENT ko samajh aa gaya ki yahi hai is task ka ZUNYATA bhaag matlab UNREAL part...

bas fir kya tha,sacchayi jaanane par apne mind ko apne sabhi sathiyon ke mind se jod usne sabko ye baat batayi aur fir un sabhi ne khudke chain ko us ZUNYATA waali jagah ke sidh me kiya ..

aisa hote hi saamne waale SAVENT ne sabke liye shrinking spell ko uccharit kiya aur fir jo hua,wo sabke saamne tha....

jaise hi WICKEDS ke SAVENTS us diwal ke dusri taraf pahunche,


TASK COMPLETED....

WINNER WICKEDS.....


ground ke upar se competition ko dekhti MABBA ne bohot proudly is baat ko kaha tha wahin unke baaju me khadi VIOLET WHIZZ MORALS ke haar se sad thi...

MABBA ke announcement karte hi ground ke dusri taraf apne task se jujhte MORALS ke saamne bani paani ki diwal gayab ho gayi.....

MORALS ki team ko bhi pata tha ki pehla task wo haar chuke hain jiski wajah se unke sir neeche ho gaye the....

jahan aadha stadium jo ki WICKEDS ke samarthakon se bhara tha,apne team ki jeet ko dekh Khushi se ucchal pade wahin baaki ka stadium jo MORALS ko support kar raha tha,wo bhi apni team ki tarah udaas ho gaye....


SHITTTT.......


ek saath nikla tha ye shabd OPHILIA,NOX aur OMMIN ke mooh se....

ye teeno bhi MORALS ke samarthak the aur apni team ko haarta dekh sad ho gaye the...


MABBA-NEXT TASK STARTS IN 30 MINUTES....


MABBA ki awaaz pure STADIUM me gunj uthi jiska matlab tha ki aaj ke first halt,first break ka waqt ho gaya hai....

sabhi darshak apne apne stand me bane food & beverages stalls ki taraf badh gaye...

OPHILIA, NOX aur OMMIN bhi apni seat se uthne hi waale the ki....


DHANNNNNN......DHANNNNNN..........


jhunjhuni si padi in teeno aur in teeno ke saath ground ke beech khadi VIOLET WHIZZ ke kaano me jisse sun in chaaron ki hi aakhen badi ho gayi aur chaaron ke mooh se ek saath nikla....


WARNING BELL......


VIOLET WHIZZ- MABBA, mujhe jaana hoga....meri jagah kisi aur ko ARBITER rakh lena....


VIOLET ki baat sun MABBA hairan hui par isse pehle wo VIOLET se kuch puchti, VIOLET gayab ho chuki thi....

gayab hokar VIOLET sidhe apne sah WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne prakat hui....

VIOLET ko yun achanak apne saamne dekhne ke baad bhi wo teeno bilkul hairan nahi hue...

ALARM BELL....ye reason kaafi tha un sabke ek saath aane ka....


OPHILIA-VIOLET...kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai... ALARM BELL baja par kyun baja,iski khabar hume nahi ho paa rahi hai....

NOX- alarm bell ke bajne ka kaaran hai kisi SAVENT par anhoni ka ghatna par kis SAVENT ke saath kya hua hai???iski jaankari alarm bell ne humtak nahi pahunchayi hai!!!

OMMIN-aur yahi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ye kaise possible hai???alarm bell ka kaam hi yahi hai ki jo bhi anhoni ghati ho,uske baare me puri jaankari us SAVENT ke PHASE WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko de...

fir is adhuri baat ka kya matlab ho sakta hai..???

VIOLET-yahi ki kisine ALARM BELL ke important interference ko rok diya hai....


VIOLET WHIZZ jo in teeno ki baat ko sunte hue ek disha me dekh rahi thi,usne ye baat kahi par unki baat kisi ke samajhme nahi aayi...


OMMIN-important interference ko rok diya hai,matlab????


OMMIN ke sawal par VIOLET ne kuch kaha nahi bas jahan wo dekh rahi thi,us taraf apni finger point kar di...

ye finger point hui thi RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke stand ki taraf jahan is waqt sirf BROWNY hi moujud tha,baaki teeno gayab the....


VIOLET WHIZZ ke finger pointing disha ki taraf dekhte hi...


OPHILIA-arre,ye RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER kahan chale gaye...???ek minute,kahin tum....


VIOLET-haan,jo ho raha hai,usme kahin naa kahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka haath zaroor hai....


OPHILIA ki adhuri baat ko VIOLET WHIZZ ne pura kiya....


OMMIN-aisa zaroori toh nahi..ho sakta hai wo teeno kahin paas me hi ho...

VIOLET-dekhte hain....


apni baat bol VIOLET WHIZZ apne saath baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ko lekar gayab ho gayi...


BROWNY chupchaap apne stand par khada tha ki tabhi uske saamne ek roshni si prakat hui aur fir us roshni se baahar nikle uske PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS jinhe yun achanak apne saamne dekh BROWNY behad shocked ho gaya....


VIOLET-baaki teeno SAVENT kahan hain BROWNY...????


VIOLET WHIZZ ke sawal ko sun pehle toh BROWNY hadbadaya par fir....


BROWNY-WHIZZ,wo teeno toh kaafi der se yahan nahi hain...

VIOLET-kitni der se gayab hai teeno???

BROWNY-kaafi der ho chuka hai WHIZZ...infact competition ke shuru hote hi RAAZ yahan se nikal gaya tha aur uske kuch hi der baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi chale gaye the..

jaane ke baad abhi tak un teeno me se koi ek baar bhi nahi louta hai....

VIOLET-thik hai...


apni baat bol chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS stand se baahar aa gaye....


OMMIN-competition ke start se hi gayab hain ye teeno.. par competition ko shuru hue toh kaafi ghante beet chuke hain....

itni der se kahan hain ye teeno..???kahin hostel...

VIOLET-nahi.. hostel toh kya,wo teeno pure CHOSENS me kahin nahi hain...

pura CHOSENS SENSE SHIELD se ghira hua hai.. yahan har SAVENT ko track kiya jaa sakta hai....

par teeno us shield ke daayre me nahi hain...

NOX-toh ab kya karen???kahan dhunde un teeno ko and most importantly,kaise pata karen ki alarm bell kyun baja tha...????

VIOLET-do nahi,hamare saamne sirf ek hi problem hai...in teen missing SAVENTS ko dhundna..mujhe pura yakin hai ki ALARM BELL ke bajna in teeno se hi juda hua hai...


ab tak baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ko bhi VIOLET WHIZZ ke itne dino tak ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par kiya shak ab sahi lagne laga tha...

aur uske upar RAAZ..jo apne aap me hi ek anokha piece tha,uska yun gayab hona aur wo bhi un do suspects ke saath,unke dilon me kisi anhoni ke hone ki ashanka de raha tha..


OPHILIA-ye matter bohot bada hai VIOLET..aur hume jald se jald isse solve karma hoga....

VIOLET-iska ek hi tarika hai..hume in teen SAVENTS ki khoj CHOSENS se baahar pure ELYSIAN me karni hogi aur wo bhi turant....

OMMIN-par VIOLET... ELYSIAN ka skheshtra phal 20000 thousand kilometers ka hai...

kya tumhari search ray ki urja itni badi jagah ko cover kar paayegi..!!!!

VIOLET-nahi...mai hi kya, CHOSENS me is waqt kisi bhi PHASE ke kisi bhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ka soul itna AMPLIFIED nahi hai jo ye kar sake siway ek ke....

SAB-MARILIZA.......


chaaron ke mooh se ye naam ek aaath nikla aur aisa hote hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni aankhen band ki aur....


VIOLET-hume aapki zaroorat hai WHIZZ MARILIZA....hamari madad kijiye.....


apne dimag ke tarango se ye message bheja VIOLET ne...


wahin kuch purane respected X SAVENTS jo ki MORALS the,unke saath baithi MARILIZA ke kaano me ye awaaz gunji jiske baad wahan se uth stand se baahar aate aate hi wo gayab ho gayi aur unke gayab hote hi wo chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS bhi gayab ho sidhe pahunche MARILIZA WHIZZ ke office me jahan unse kuch seconds pehle hi MARILIZA WHIZZ bhi pahunch chuki thi..

MARILIZA WHIZZ ko greet karne ke baad VIOLET ne unhe problem ke baare me bataya aur saath hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke baare me jo unka shak tha,usse bhi diaclose kiya jisse sun...


MARILIZA-ye toh sach me ek gambhir samasya hai...waise jab aapko un do SAVENTS ke upar shak tha,toh aapne mujhe yaa fir jab SOVEREIGN'S yahan moujud the,unhe pehle hi kyun nahi bata diya...????

VIOLET-kyunki jo negetive but strong vibes mujhe un dono se aaye the,wo bohot kam samay ke liye the...

isse pehle ki mai us vibe ko capture karkar aapse ya SOVEREIGN'S se uski jaanch karwaun,wo vibe aur uski energy gayab ho chuki thi....

isiliye batane ka koi faayda nahi tha par maine un dono par har tarah se nazar banaye rakhi thi taaki agar wo vibe mujhe dobara sense ho,toh koi action le sakun par aisa kabhi hua hi nahi....

MARILIZA-hmm...RAAZ..... ACHHUTA,SLUNDER.....


baari baari se MARILIZA WHIZZ ne in teen SAVENTS ka naam liya aur unke aisa karte hi dusre kone me bane shelf jiske upar PHASE 1 likha hua tha,usme se teen files jo halki chamak rahi thi,udte hue MARILIZA ke saamne aakar rook gayi jisse MARILIZA ne pakad liya...

jaisa ki piche update me GASTON ne RAAZ ko bataya tha ki brambhaand ke har jeev me ek aura hota hai,ye file jo is waqt MARILIZA ke haath me thi,wo aur kuch nahi balki RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka aura thi jo aise hi kisi situation me use karne ke liye unke yahan admission hote hi apne aap unke PHASE ke liye bane shelf me ek file ka roop banakar rakh di gayi thi.

un teeno files ko pakad MARILIZA ne unhe apne saamne table par rakh diya...


OMMIN-WHIZZ,kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki pehle jo kuch bhi in kuch ghanto me ghata hai,uske baare me pata kiya jaaye jisse asal baat jaanane me madad mile...

MARILIZA-aap bhul rahe hain OMMIN ki is waqt aap PHASE 3 me khade hain...

jo rules PHASE 1 par laagu hote hain,wo PHASE 2 aur 3 me nahi hote....


PHASE 1 me SAVENTS ke beech hui choti se choti ghatna ki suchna us PHASE ke chaaron taraf lage SUCHNA KAWACH se mil sakti hai par wo KAWACH aage ke dono PHASES me nahi lagti ya fir ye kahun nahi lagayi jaa sakti aur iski wajah toh aapko maalum hi hai...

OMMIN-jee....

VIOLET-is situation ko sirf MARILIZA WHIZZ ki search ray se hi handle kiya jaa sakta hai...

MARILIZA-uski bhi zaroorat nahi hai....


apni baat bol MARILIZA ne un teen files se thoda upar hawa me haath rakha aur....


PARYESANA AVAMATI

SEARCH YOUR ORIGIN


SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MARILIZA ke haath se ek ray nikal un teen files par padi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal...

wo teen files aankhon ke liye gayab ho gayi....

kehne ka matlab hai ki wo teeno hi files invisible mode me jaisa ki ek normal aura hota hai,aakar us office se baahar nikal ek disha me badh gayi...

wahin MARILIZA ki aankhen band thi...

reason....

jo ray unke haath se nikli thi,wo unki divya drishti ka ek chota sa ansh tha jo un teen AURA se jud unke saath saath aage badh raha tha aur wahin MARILIZA apni aakhen band kiye un teeno AURA ko dekh rahi thi...

wo teeno AURA tezi se ek disha me aage badhti hui jaa rahi thi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo teeno AURA ek jagah par aakar rook gayi....

aur jab aisa hua...

MARILIZA ki aankhen jhat se khul gayi...is waqt unki aankhon me hairani saaf dikh rahi thi jo unke saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se naa chhup paayi aur...


VIOLET-kya hua WHIZZ MARILIZA....???kuch bohot galat hua hai kya????

MARILIZA-galat ka toh pata nahi kintu alag aur ajeeb zaroor hai...


MARILIZA ki baat ka matlab chaaron me se koi bhi samajh nahi paaya par isse pehle ki koi unse is baare me puchta...

MARILIZA WHIZZ ke sharir se ek roshni nikli jisne un chaaron ko bhi gher liya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal wo paanchon gayab ho chuke the....

gayab ho wo paanchon ek nayi jagah pahunchen ya fir ye kahun ki wahan pahunchne jahan is waqt RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke AURA pahunchkar rook gaye the...

gayab hokar nayi jagah pahunchna chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke liye aam baat thi par is nayi jagah par pahunchte hi wo chaaron behad hairan ho gaye aur un chaaron ke mooh se ek saath nikla


FORBIDDEN FOREST.....






PLACE-INSIDE FORBIDDEN FOREST



WOOGER.........


WOOGER-aapne mujhe pehchaan liya!!!!jabki mai toh abhi us roop me bhi nahi hun....


aankh khulte par mai khada hua... ALFREEN ke ray se ho rahi jakdan ab mujhe bilkul bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi...

khade ho jab maine saamne dekha
toh khud se thodi door par rakhe ek chattan ke upar behad tez chamakti urja dekhi...

is urja se mujhe wahi feeling aa rahi thi jo WOOGER se milkar hui thi aur isiliye maine uska naam pukara tha.....


MAI-mai mehsoos kar sakta hun tumhe...aur ab jab hum dobara mil hi gaye hain toh tumse mera pehla sawal bhi yahi hai,kyun???kyun itni achi tarah mehsoos kar paata hin mai tumhe...

tum jab baat karte ho,toh aisa kyun lagta hai jaise tum.nahi balki mai hi baat kar raha hun...

tumse mujhe tum waali nahi,mai waali feeling aati hai.. kyun???


mer sawalon par kuch der wo urja yunhi chamakti rahi aur fir...


WOOGER-kyunki mai aapka hi ek atirikt hissa hun...an extra piece from the whole of you that was created because of your HARD WORK.....

MAI-WHOLE OF ME????HARD WORK????

mai samjha nahi...

WOOGER-shuruat se shuru karen...jab aapki yahan CHOSENS me ek nayi zindagi ki shuruat hone waali thi...

MAI-us nayi zindagi ka toh tumne shuru hone se pehle hi anth kar diya tha....

yahan kuch bhi karne se,kisi bhi class me actively part lene se,yahan tak ki kisi se positively baat tak karne se mana kiya tha tumne...

ek hi kaam ki chiz thi mere paas,mera conscious brain,uska bhi 90 pratishat bhaag tumne mujhse alag kar diya tha...


ji haan doston,ye WOOGER hi tha jiski wajah se RAAZ ne kabhi koi class seriously attend nahi ki....


wo scene toh yaad hi hoga aap sab ko jab RAAZ aur WOOGER pehli baar aamne saamne hue the...

(update 14)


us waqt jab WOOGER RAAZ ko ghoor ghoor kar dekh raha tha aur jab FLORIN ne ye dekha toh unhe laga ki shayad WOOGER RAAZ ko nuksaan pahuchane waala hai aur unhone mujhe awaaz di thi...

us waqt WOOGER sirf RAAZ ko ghoor nahi raha tha balki uski aankhon ke through RAAZ mind se connect hokar usse baat kar raha tha....


us raat WOOGER ke hi kehne ya fir ye kahun ki plan ki wajah se CHOSENS me RAAZ ne naa kabhi class ko seriously liya aur naahi kisi se kabhi bhi positively baat nahi ki...

waise baat waali baat itni important hai nahi kyunki RAAZ ko waise bhi kisise baat karna pasand nahi hai...

khair,

RAAZ ke paas bhale hi subconsious brain nahi hai par uska conscious brain itna zyada strong hai ki first PHASE ke sabhi SAVENTS,apni wo khubiyan jo wo apne subconscious brain ko trigger karkar kar sakte hain,usse kahin zyada chizen RAAZ bas apne conscious brain ko use me laa kar kar sakta hai...

par HOEA FORST me WOOGER ne RAAZ ke brain me ek extract ray chhoda tha jiski wajah se RAAZ jaise hi CHOSENS me kadam rakhne ko hua,uske conscious brain ka 90 pratishat bhaag uske brain se nikal gaya....

kya kuch kar sakta hai RAAZ ka conscious brain, aur kyun WOOGER ne usse extract kiya,aayiye khud WOOGER se hi jaan lete hain...


WOOGER-maine aapse kuch bhi karne ke liye KAHA nahi tha,bas request kiya tha...

aur mujhe is baat ki behad khushi hai ki aapne mere request ka maan rakha....

MAI-par sawal toh ab bhi wahin hai...itna sab aakhir kyun???

WOOGER-kuch ke jawab toh aapko ab tak mil hi chuke honge...

aapke brain extraction ki wajah se aapke consious brain ka bada bhaag pure CHOSENS me faile gaya jiski wajah se pure CHOSENS me kaun kab kya kar raha tha,wo sab aapke bache hue 10 percent brain ko dikh jaata tha...


aapko yaad hoga doston ki jab bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER RAAZ ke room me aate the toh RAAZ ki aankhen hamesha band hi paate the,us waqt RAAZ wahi saare scenes ko dekh sab kuch samajhta rehta tha...

aur abhi bhi kuch der pehle jab RAAZ FORBIDDEN FOREST ke baahar behosh pada tha aur pure CHOSENS se ek ray nikal uske dimag me samayi thi,wo ray aur kuch nahi balki RAAZ ka 90 percent conscious brain hi tha...


WOOGER-aapke conscious brain ke paas ho rahe situation ko tackle karne aur hone waale situations ko samajh usse apne man mutabik anjaam tak pahunchane ki capability hai aur isiliye jab aap kisi ke bhi saamne jaate the,toh aapko kaise react karna hai,wo CHOSENS me faila aapka consious brain aapko bata deta tha...


(ALFREEN,MAHI WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS sabhi apni marzi se nahi balki RAAZ ke consious brain ke mutabik react karte aa rahe the)


WOOGER-apke conscious brain ki future prediction capability ka is baat se hi andaza lagaya jaa sakta hai ki sahi samay par aap yahan pahunch gaye hain...


WOOGER ke is baat ko sun itne der me pehli baar maine har taraf nazar ghumayi aur tab mujhe pata chala ki mai kisi alag hi jagah par hun...

bahar shaam dhalne laga tha par yahan jahan mai tha,wahan toh already andhera ho chuka tha..

ye toh WOOGER ki urja thi jiski wajah se aas paas ujala faila hua tha...

har taraf dekh jaise hi meri nazar mere theek piche gayi toh mujhe ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER neeche pade hue dikhayi diye...

unhe dekh mujhe wo scene yaad aa gaya jab GASTON aur DORIAN ne in dono ko mere baaju me fekh diya tha...

aur saath hi uske baad kya kya hua tha,wo sab mujhe dikhne laga par saare drishyon ko dekhne ke liye mujhe concentrate nahi karna padh raha tha jiska ek hi matlab tha ki mere brain ka wo 90 percent bhaag jo CHOSENS me faila hua tha,wo wapas mujhme sama chuka hai....


MAI-in dono ko yahan laane ki koi khaas wajah....???

WOOGER-nahi..bas kyunki ye aapke saath hi behosh pade the, isiliye inhe bhi mai yahan le aaya..

agar aap kahen toh mai inhe wapas wahin fekh deta hun jahan se inhe laaya tha...

MAI-wo sab baad me...pehle mere sawalon ke jawab do....mere conscious brain ko mujhse alag kiya hi kyun tumne...???

jo tum chaah rahe the,wo toh mere brain mere paas hone ke baad bhi kiya jaa sakta tha...

WOOGER- nahi kiya jaa sakta tha....agar yahan CHOSENS me aapka brain aapke paas rehta,toh aap jeevit nahi bachte...

MAI-aur aisa kyun????

WOOGER-iska jawab aapko apne aap pata chal jaayega...

MAI-hmm...WHOLE OF ME????HARD WORK????aisa kyun kaha tha tumne...???

kyunki jahan tak hard work ka sawal hai toh wo toh maine earth me kiya nahi aur CHOSENS me tumne hi karne nahi diya aur rahi baat tumhare extra piece hone ki FROM THE WHOLE OF ME toh jitne piece kisi ke existence ke liye zaroori hote hain,mere paas toh uski bhi shortage hai fir tum mere extra piece kahan se ho gaye....????

(ji haan doston, RAAZ ko apne missing organs ke baate me pata hai...)


WOOGER-BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD aur SOUL....

khudme inhi ki shortage ki baat kar rahe hain aap???

MAI-haan....

WOOGER-ye pura nahi aadha sach hai....

MAI-toh baaki ka aadha sach kya hai...???

WOOGER-ek aisa sach jisse aapka ye adhura sach jhooth me badal jaayega....

MAI-mai samjha nahi....

WOOGER-sab samajh jaayenge...samajhne ka waqt bhi aa chuka hai..waqt aa chuka hai RAAZ ke unfold hone ka....waqt aa chuka hai aapko RAAZ ka matlab jaanane ka....

aur us matlab ko maayne dene ka....

MAI-RAAZ ka matlab jaanana!!! RAAZ toh bas naam hai mera....

WOOGER-nahi......RAAZ ko naam maan liya gaya hai....asal me RAAZ koi naam hai hi nahi....

MAI- RAAZ naam nahi hai...???toh kya hai RAAZ....?????

WOOGER- RAAZ ek shabd nahi balki chaar alag alag akshar ka ek samuh hai..

aapki bhasha me kahen toh RAAZ ek ACRONYM hai..... ek PARIVARNI hai...

R....A......A.....Z......

jisse manushyon (FLORIN, MARIA)ne jod kar ek word aur ek naam bana diya hai.....RAAZ.....

MAI-acronym!!!!kya banta hai is acronym se...aur mera kya rishta hai is naam se.....???


WOOGER- R...A...A...Z....


R ka matlab RENAISS.....

A stands for ANGIS......

A se banta hai ANNJAYA.....

Z se bana hai ZEAL......


RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA,ZEAL...

TOGETHER they become U, RAAZ.....


RAAZ ke pure initials bata akhir me chillate hue naam liya WOOGER ne mera jiske baad....

KADKADKADKAD.............


pure FORBIDDEN FOREST me bijli si kadak gayi.....par sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki ye bijli aasman se nahi balki yahi FOREST ke andar se
janmi thi....

par mera saara dhyan is waqt WOOGER ki kahi gayi baaton par tha....

mere dimag me WOOGER ke kahe gaye chaaron naam gunj rahe the.....

kyunki ab mera pura conscious brain mere paas tha, isiliye meri sochne ki shakti bhi behad tez ho gayi thi...

koi normal insaan toh kya koi talanted SAVENT bhi mere conscious brain ke sochne ki speed ko match nahi kar sakta tha...

ye chaaron shabd mere dimag me gunj rahe aur tabhi.....


MAI-RENAISS...ye shabd RENAISSANCE MAN se liya gaya hai....

Renaissance man....jiska matlab hota hai man with a brilliant and rare BRAIN.......


BRAIN.......RENAISS matlab BRAIN......



WOOGER ko dekhte hue maine ye baat kahi jo ab halka tez chamakne laga tha maano aisa kar mere sahi hone ka sanket de raha tha..


MAI-ANGIS toh ek indian ancient language ka word hai jiska matlab hota hai ANG matlab BODY......


ANNJAYA bhi ek ancient language ka word hai jiska matlab hota hai ocean of.................BLOOD...................


ZEAL....zeal ke toh kayi matlab hain par according to bible ZEAL is a property of spiritual SOUL.......


yaani RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA,ZEAL ka matlab hai BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD and SOUL.....

mera naam asal mere missing organs hain....!!!!!


KADDDKADDDDDD.......


ek paheli si thi ye jisse maine crack kar liya tha aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse pura FORBIDDEN FOREST ek tez gadgadahat se naha utha...

(doston,ye saare naam maine apne man se nahi diye hain..ye sab words wakayi kis naa kisi tarah se brain,body blood aur soul ke synonyms hain....)


ek baar us ho rahi gadgadahat ke taraf dekh mai wapas WOOGER ki taraf palta aur....


MAI-in chaaron ka matlab toh BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD,SOUL hai....

jo cheezen jo parts,mere paas nahi hain,unhi se bana hai mera naam......!!!!!


WOOGER-RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA,ZEAL..ye chaaron sirf shabd nahi hain....

MAI-toh fir kya hain ye...????aur mera inse kya lena dena....!!!!

WOOGER-lena dena hai RAAZ..bohot gehra lena dena hai.....

aapke astitv ka shroth hain ye chaaron naam....

aapke sampuranta naamak taale ki chaabi hai ye chaaron naam...

in chaar aksharon me hi bate ho aap...aapke jeeven aur uske uddeshya ko purn karte hai ye chaaron naam...


KYUNKI AAPKI YE ZINDAGI PEHLI NAHI BALKI PAANCHWI HAI....

aur ye chaar naam un PLANETS ke hain jinme aapke pehle chaar jeeven beete hain...

ya fir ye kahun ki wo chaar jeeven hi aapke is paanchve jeeven ke aadhar bhi hain,aur kaaran bhi...

chaar PLANETS....chaar naam jinke initials se banta hai....RAAZ.....

yahi hai aapki sacchayi...yahi hai aapki sampuranta ka saar aur yahi hai wo manzil jisse nirdharit hogi aapki niyati.....

yahi hai kahani ka wo adhyaya jo sabse chhupa hua tha aur ab jab ye sach sabke saamne hai toh ab....


waqt aa gaya hai is sach ko grahan karne ka...

waqt aa gaya hai khudse ladkar khudse jeetne ka...

waqt aa gaya apne naam ko uski jagah par jaakar UNFOLD karne ka...


toh kya taiyar hain aap khudko pura karne ke liye....???un chaar PLANETS me jaakar jo apna hai,usse haasil karne ke liye...


pata nahi kyun,par WOOGER ki baat sun ek ajeeb si tapish uthi mere andar maano mera rom rom apne astive ko pura karne ke liye mujhse guhaar laga raha ho....

aur isiliye....


MAI-isse zyada taiyar mai kabhi nahi hua....


SSSSASSS......OOOBBBBB......


mere bolne bhar ki der thi...mere saamne khade urja roopi WOOGER ke beech se ek ray nikal mujhpar padi jiske agle hi pal mai kheenchata hua sa us urja ki taraf badh chala aur jaise hi maine us urja ko chua.....

hum dono hi gayab ho chuke the....
aur finally wo waqt aa chuka tha...

khudke baare me kaafi kuch toh jaan chuka tha mai par ab waqt tha khudse khudko milane ka...

waqt....time......


TO UNFOLD THE RAAZ......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V.....J......

Very Nice Update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE KE PEHLE TASK KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN WOOGER KI URJA RAAZ KO USKI ASLIYAT SE WAQIF KARWATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-36



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE




UNBELIEVABLE........


MAHI ke mooh se nikla tha ue shabd....

reason....


saamne ka drishya hi aisa tha...jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ki puri teams ne khudko ek bade se DHAAL ke roop me badal liya tha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki puri team ne khud ke form ko transparent kar diya tha...

reason....

SWEEP-STAKE competition ka dusra charan,second task shuru ho chuka tha jisme ek nayi chunouti dono teams ke saamne thi....

aur ye chunouti thi wo anginat baan jo lagatar hazaron ki sankhya me unke upar baras rahe the aur wo bhi non stop....

un teeron ko sankhya aur speed itni zyada thi ki unhe dodge nahi diya jaa sakta tha aur isiliye hi WICKEDS aur MORALS ki team ne in baano se bachne ke liye alag alag yukti nikali...

jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ne khudko ek bade se dhaal me badal liya tha wahin MORALS ne khudke form ko transparent kar liya tha...

par jahan aisa karna in do teams ke liye faaydemand tha wahin iska ek bohot bada nuksaan bhi tha aur wo ye ki bhale hi in yuktiyon se dono hi teams un baano se bach paa rahe the,par bachna is samasya ka sirf ek temporary hal tha, permanent nahi...

un dono hi teams ka task tha,un baano ki varsha ko rokna...aur ye wo dhaal bankar aur khudko transparent banakar nahi kar sakte the....

par filhal wo kuch aur bhi nahi kar sakte the kyunki agar dono teams me se kisi ne bhi apne form ko change kiya,toh uske agle hi pal wo teer unke aar paar ho jaane the aur aisa hone se wo khudko bacha bhi nahi paate.......

dhadakte dil se MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN baaki ke darshakon ke saath jigyasa purv ye sab dekh rahe the aur soch rahe the ki ab kaise ghumega ye khel,par anjaan the wo sab is baat se ki asli khel toh kabka ghum chuka hai aur saath hi ghum chuki hai ye puri KAHANI.....





PLACE-INFRONT OF FORBIDDEN FOREST SHIELD



ASAMBHAV.......YE KAISE HO SAKTA HAI......????


aakhne chowdi ho gayi thi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki....behad hairani se wo apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhte hue uspar yakin karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

wahin unki baat sun apni apni aakhon me naasamjhi ke bhaav liye chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS unke peeche khade the....

unhe toh ab tak ye bhi samajh me nahi aaya tha ki wo yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne aakhir kar kya rahen hain...???

uske upar WHIZZ MARILIZA ki abhi kahi baaton ko sun unke dimag me naye sawalon ne janm le liya tha aur isiliye....


VIOLET-kya hua WHIZZ MARILIZA...????kya asambhav ghatith hua hai...???aur hum yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST kyun aaye hain....????


WHIZZ MARILIZA jo khud bohot zyada confused thi,unhone VIOLET WHIZZ ke sawalon par kuch kaha nahi,bas apne left hand ko ek taraf kar diya jiske baad unke haath se ek ray nikal aage badhi aur neech zamin par jaa lagi...

ye zamin wahi jagah thi jahan kaafi der pehle RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER teeno gire pade the....

jaise hi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki ray us zamin par padi toh....

us ray ne bhi RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gire hue bodies ka aakar dhar ek digital ray se sketch bana diya...

har sketch par usse jiske liye banaya gaya tha,uska naam ujagar ho gaya tha jisse dekh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS samajh toh gaye ki ye sketches RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke hain par ye jaankar unki hairani aur badh gayi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo teeno aakhir yahan kar kya rahe the..???


OPHILIA- RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan????par kyun....????wo teeno yahan kyun aaye the???

OMMIN-usse bhi bada prashn ye hai ki wo warning bell aakhir baja kiske liye tha....????

MARILIZA-kiske liye wo warning bell baja,ye baat bhale hi chhuppi hui ho kintu kyun nahi baja,iska jawab toh saamne hai....

NOX-saamne hai matlab!!!

MARILIZA-FORBIDDEN FOREST....

iske chaaron taraf lage abhedya SHIELD apne andar ke saath saath aas paas ghati saari ghatna ke asar ko chupaane me saksham hain...

inhi ki wajah se aas paas ghati badi se badi ghatna ki khabar bhi CHOSENS tak nahi pahunch sakti..

VIOLET-iska matlab un teen SAVENTS ke saath kya hua tha,wo is waqt kahan hain,kis haal me hain, kya iske baare me kabhi pata nahi chal paayega...????

MARILIZA- jo dikh raha hai, samajh me aa raha hai,baat sirf utni hi nahi hai...kuch bohot hi bada hua hai yahan...!!!!aur jo bhi hua hai,wo koi akasmat ghatne waali ghatna nahi hai....

itna sab hona wo bhi ek saath koi ittefak nahi ho sakta....

aur jaise ye ghatna sadharan nahi hai, waise hi isse rachne waala bhi maamuli nahi hai....

kyunki baat agar sirf un teen SAVENTS ki hoti toh fir bhi is gutthi ko kisi naa kisi tarah suljhaya jaa sakta tha,par 25 hazar saalon baad aaj achanak FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ka badalna,ye toh hamare soch ki hadh se baahar ki ghatna hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chownke...jo MARILIZA ne abhi kaha tha,wo toh wakayi kisi maha chamatkar se kam nahi tha...


VIOLET-SHIELD ka badalna!!! FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield badal gayi....!!!par ye kaise sambhav hai...????aur aap ye kis aadhar par keh rahi hain...

MARILIZA-har WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke sikhane ka apna ek tarika hota hai...

jab mai yahan SAVENT thi,toh apne sharir ko ek shaktishali hathiyar aur kawach,dono me badalne ki practice ke liye hamare WHIZZDER hume yahin laaya karte the...

issi FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield par hum abhyas kiya karte the...yahan biche SHIELD aur uski urja se bhali bhaali parichit hun mai....

aur is waqt jo shakti aur urja mai mehsoos kar rahi hun,wo us shield ki nahi hai jo pichle 25 thousand saal se is FOREST ko guard kar rahi thi....

ye ek nahi shield hai par sabse zyada aascharya ki baat ye hai ki is SHIELD ki urja pehle waali shield se bhi zyada hai....

wo SHIELD SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bani thi,aur ye nayi shield usse bhi zyada taakatwar hai,toh zara socho ki isse lagane waala kitna shaktishaali hoga!!!

aur ho naa ho,jisne ye shield lagayi hai,ussine un teeno SAVENTS ko bhi gayab kiya hai....

VIOLET-par sawal hai kyun??? SAVENTS ko gayab karna, FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ko hatana nahi apitu usse badal dena,itna sab aakhir kyun????

MARILIZA-jo hona tha,wo ho chuka hai...usse badla nahi jaa sakta...ab dekhna ye hai,ki aage kya hoga...???

kyunki jaise jo ho chuka hai,usse socha ya predict nahi kiya jaa sakta tha,waise hi jo hoga,usse bhi predict karna kaafi mushkil hone waala hai....

ye puri gutthi un teen gumshuda SAVENTS me se ek SAVENT ke naam ki tarah hi hai...RAAZ.......





BACK TO RAAZ:-




WO CHAAR DHABBE DIKH RAHE HAIN....WAHI HAIN WO CHAAR PLANETS AUR AAPKI MANZIL....


FORBIDDEN FOREST se gayab hokar mai aur WOOGER ki wo urja roopi ray antariksh ke kisi andheri jagah par pahunchte the...

yahan pahunchte hi khud ki roshni ke daayre ko badhate hue WOOGER ki urja ne ek patli par behad strong ray aage ki taraf chhodi...

wo ray aage badhti hui sidhe jaakar ek bade se dhabbe se jo ki planet tha, usse takrayi aur aisa hote hi us dhabbe numa planet se bhi ek ray nikli jo ek disha me badh chali aur kuch hi seconds me hume us ray se nikalte tez ujale ki chamak me kul chaar dhabbe dikhayi diye...

ye dhabbe hi the wo chaar PLANETS......RENAISS,ANGIS, ANNJAYA,ZEAL....wo chaar planets jinse mera adhura wajood pura hone waala tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre se kayi light years door the par fir bhi in chaaron ke beech ek alignment thi,ek connection tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre ke bilkul seedh me the...hum in chaaron planets se hi kaafi door the par bade bade dhabbe ke roop me inke hone ka abhaas mujhe ho raha tha....

un chaaron planets ke position ko dekh....


MAI-ye left side jo first planet hai,yahi RENAISS hai naa matlab BRAIN....

WOOGER-haan....uske baad ANGIS planet hai,fir ANNJAYA hai aur aakhir me ZEAL....

MAI-ye planets kaale dhabbon ki tarah kyun dikh rahe hain...aur ye PLANETS jis system ka hissa hain,uska star matlab suraj kahan hai..???

yahan se dekhne par toh in chaaron hi PLANETS ke kisi bhi bhaag par surya ki roshni nahi dikh rahi hai...????

WOOGER-wo isiliye kyunki in planets ka koi star ya suraj hai hi nahi....aur yeh chaaron planets DEAD PLANETS hain....

yahan jeeven ka waas nahi hai....

MAI-jeeven ka waas nahi hai!!!par tumne toh kaha tha naa ki ye mera paanchwa janm hai...

aur in planets par hi toh mere pichle chaar janm beete hain....toh fir ye dead planets kaise ho gaye????

WOOGER-ye aapka paanchwa janm hi hai par human form me aapne pehli baar saans li hai...

isse pehle ke aapke chaaron janm unhi cheezon ko roop me the jo is waqt aapke andar nahi hain...

BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD aur SOUL.....


ab ye ek nayi aur ajeebo garib baat thi....janm toh hua par bas mere alag alag body parts ka....gazab....

is naye khulase se sawal toh bohot ubhre mere andar par maine kuch pucha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki abhi jo jawab mujhe milenge,unhe sirf mai sun paaunga,par puri tarah se samajhne ka waqt abhi aaya nahi tha...

ye sirf tabhi ho sakta tha jab mai apne missing parts ko in chaaron planets se haasil karun....

aur isiliye.....


MAI-toh hume pehle RENAISS jaana hoga naa...!!!!

WOOGER-nahi..pehle hume ZEAL jaana hoga....

MAI-ZEAL....!!!matlab soul...mujhe pehle apna SOUL haasil karna hoga...???

WOOGER-nahi...haasil toh aapko pehle apna subconscious brain hi karna hai par....

usse bhi pehle kuch hai,jo dekhna aapko zaroori hai.....


apni baat puri kar WOOGER ki urja ne mujhe apni chapet me liya jiske baad mai aur wo gayab ho gaye....





ZEAL....THE SOUL:-



YE DHUAN KAISA....????


gayab ho hum sidhe ZEAL ke atmosphere ke andar prakat hue...

prakat hote hi jab maine niche dekha toh mujhe kahin bhi zamin nahi dikhi...dikha toh sirf gaadha dhuan.....

jo pure planet me faila hua tha...bhale hi dhuan gas ke form me hota hai par ye jo dhuan hamare niche dikh raha tha,usse ek behad strong solid force mujhe feel ho rahi thi...

ek aisa force jisse dekh lag raha tha ki agar isse chhu bhar lo toh sharir ko nichodte hue ye dhuan usse raakh me badal dega....

maine us dhuen ko dekh apna sawal pucha tha jiske baad....


WOOGER-ye aapke SOUL ka AURA hai jo pure planet me faila hua hai...

MAI-tumne kaha tha ki pehle mujhe kuch dekhna hai...par yahan hum kya dekh paayenge...yahan toh pura Planet hi is dhuen numa AURA ki chapet me hain....

WOOGER-zyada der tak nahi....


WOOGER ki urja ke aisa kehte hi us urja ke andar se ek badi si transparent sheeshi nikli jiske andar ek neela drav dikh raha tha...

ye sab dekh maine kuch kaha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki jab aagaz hua hai toh anjaam bhi hona hi hai....

WOOGER ki urja se wo neele drav se bhari sheeshi nikli aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us sheeshi ke upar jo knob laga tha,wo khul gaya...

knob ke khulte hi wo sheeshi apne aap ulti ho gayi aur aisa hone par us sheeshi me jo neela drav tha,wo neeche gir gaya....

neeche girta hua wo neela drav is planet ke upar tairte dhuen me samata chala gaya...

ye sab kya hai,mai ye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki....


MAI-AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG....


mere mooh se taarif ka ye shabd nikla...

reason....

dhuen me vilin hone waala wo neela drav us dhuen ke beech se hokar neeche zamin par chala gaya tha aur jaise hi us drav ne zamin ki satah ko chhua......

uske agle hi pal pura drishya hi badal gaya...jahan abhi tak wo jagah, wo planet jahan hum the,wo dead thi,har taraf bas dhuan hi dhuan tha,us jagah ka pura nazara change ho chuka tha...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi seconds me wo dead planet ek living planet me badal gaya....

pura dhuan chhat chuka tha aur ab humare neeche hare bhare pedon se dhaka ek jungle dikha raha tha....

maine apni nazar har taraf ghumayi toh maine dekha ki ye jagah kisi vintage riyasat ki tarah thi...

humare neeche ek jungle tha wahin humse kuch hi kms door right side par wo jungle khatm ho raha tha aur shuru ho raha tha koi kingdom....

us kingdom ki banawat ko dekh maine andaza lagaya tha ki ye ek vintage jagah hai..

mai ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mera sharir neeche zamin ki taraf jaane laga...

mere saath saath WOOGER ki urja bhi neeche aa rahi thi.

kuch hi palon me hum neeche hari hari ghaas se bhari zamin par the....

kuch der yahan wahan dekhne ke baad is naye chamatkar ke baare me WOOGER se mai puchne hi waala tha ki tabhi.....



TUGDUG...TUGDUG....TUGDUG...TUGDUG....


kisi ke behad tezi se hamari taraf badhne ki aahat mere kaano me pahunchi jisse sun maine aa rahi awaaz ki disha me dekha toh....

sweth rang ke bohot hi khubsoorat ghode par ek usse bhi aakarshak vyaktitv ka yuvak baitha humari taraf aa raha tha...

khule hue lambe baal aur baalisht sharir se dhani us yuvak ke netra hamari taraf hi tike hue the...

par hairani mujhe tab hui jab ek haath me baan aur dusre haath se ussi baan par pratyancha chadha usne hamari taraf nishana saadha....

aur meri hairani tab aur badh gayi jab hamare behad kareeb aane ke baad bhi uske ghode ne apni disha nahi badli...

aisa lag raha tha maano yaa toh wo yuvak hume apne baano se maar girayega yaa fir uska ghoda hume kuchal dega....

ye sab dekh mai ek taraf hone ko hua par tabhi.....


WOOGER-aapko hatne ya chhupne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai....bas khade rahiye,kuch nahi hoga...


WOOGER ke urja ki baat sun jab maine uski taraf dekha toh...


WOOGER-vishwas rakhiye....


WOOGER ki baat ke baad maine bhi sochna chhodna aur saamne dekhne laga....

ab tak wo ghode par baitha yuvak hamare behad kareeb aa gaya tha..ghode se halka upar uth hamari hi taraf apni pratyancha ko taan usne teer chhod diya...

wo teer tezi se hamari taraf badha..us teer ka nishana theek mere sir ka madhya bhaag tha....

sansanate hue aage badhta hua wo teer mere karib aata gaya aur fir...


SOOBH.....

ye awaaz nikalta hua wo teer mere sir ko bina chhue,uske beech me se hote hue paar nikal gaya aur fir....


QNNNNQNNNNNQNNNN.....


ek tadapti hui si awaaz aayi mere piche se... jab maine palat kar dekha toh paaya ki mujhse thodi door par ek cheetah gira pada hai aur us teer ne usse hi bheda hai....

ye scene dekh jab maine wapas saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak wo ghoda thik mere kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur agle hi pal....

us teer ki hi tarah wo ghoda bhi mujhe bina chhue mere beech mese hote hue nikal gaya...

mujhe paar kar wo yuvak us ghode par baitha aage badhta chala gaya aur us cheeteh ke paas pahunch usme dhase teer ko usne ghode par baithe baithe hi kheencha jisse wo teer us cheeteh ke saath uske ghode par aa gaya....

apne ghode me us mrit cheeteh ko liye wo yuvak aage badh chuka tha.....

ye sab dekhne ke baad jab maine WOOGER roopi urja ki taraf dekha toh....


WOOGER-ye sab ek DRISHYAM hai....aaj se 50 hazar saal pehle ghati ghatna ka DRISHYAM....

MAI-par mera isse kya lena dena...???

WOOGER-pehle aap mujhe ek baat bataiye..???ab tak jitna bhi aapko khudke baare me pata chala hai,usse aap apne nirman ka kya nishkarsh nikalte hain...???

MAI-maksad...kisi khaas maksad ko pura karne ke liye hi mera wajud hai...

WOOGER-bilkul sahi...kintu jis maksad ke liye aapko chuna gaya hai,uske liye aapse pehle us yuvak ko chuna gaya tha jisse abhi abhi humne yahan ghode par sawar dekha tha...

kintu wo prayas asafal raha tha...aur isiliye aapka nirman hua...???aur wo bhi bohot hi alag tarah se....

taaki jo galti pehle ki gayi thi,
us galti ko dobara dohrana naa pade....

MAI-matlab mai bhi bas ek prayas hun..jo pehle ki hi tarah galat bhi ho sakta hai...

WOOGER-bilkul..aur isiliye hi is grah ke vinash ke baad bhi yahan ke DRISHYAM ko sambhal kar rakha gaya tha....

taaki aap isse dekh sako...aur samajh sako ki chuk kahan hui....????

aap abhi yahan ek ke baad ek us yuvak ki kayi jhalkiyan dekhenge jisme uska vyaktiv,aur uska hunar nazar aayega aur aakhir me wo drishya dikhega jab is grah aur yahan rehne waale laakhon bekasoor logon ka samuh vinash ho gaya tha....

yahan se jaane ke baad jab aap apne pehle padhav RENAISS ke saamne pahunchenge,tab aapko apne hi subconscious brain ko jisse lene aap wahan jaane waale hain,usse ek line me batana hoga ki kyun asafal raha tha ye yuvak...

agar aapka jawab sahi hua,sirf tabhi aap RENAISS planet me enter kar paayenge warna is yuvak ki hi tarah aapka bhi anth ho jaayega.....

MAI-jo yuvak abhi yahan se gaya,jisse mujhse pehle chuna gaya tha,uska naam kya tha....???


WOOGER-..........VIKRAM..........








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V...J.....

Very nice update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KA DUSRA TASK SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ PLANET ZEAL PAR PAHUNCH CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-37



PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-NEAR ZEAL'S CAVERN




ye CAVERN (a big cave) toh earth ke sabse bade CAVERN HANG SON DOONG se bhi bada dikh raha hai...(fact...earth ka ye cave veitnam me hai..)

par ye ladka VIKRAM yahan kya kar raha hai???and more importantly mai yahan kya kar raha hun...???


is waqt hum ZEAL grah ke is kingdom ke border par bane ek bohot hi bade CAVERN,ek gufa se kuch door khade the...

wahin VIKRAM apne ghode me baitha us CAVERN ko dekh raha tha....


WOOGER-is gufa me ek vastu hai,aur ussi vastu se is pure adhyay ki rachna ka aarambh hua hai.....

jaisa ki aapko pata hai ki ZEAL ka arth SOUL hota hai...

par ye naam is grah ko ussi vastu ki wajah se mila hai jo is gufa ke andar hai...

us vastu ki shakti se is planet ko iski aatma mili jisse yahan jeeven shuru hua...

jo nazare aap dekh rahe hain,unki rachna hui....

par ussi vastu ki wajah se is planet ka sarvnaash bhi hua....

filhal hum ek drishyam me hain...ek bhuli hui kahani jo sirf aapko dikhane ke liye sambhal kar rakhi gayi thi kintu is bhuli hui kahani me agar ab bhi kuch bacha hai toh wo hai ye gufa aur iske andar rakhi wo vastu....

aur us vastu me hai aapki SOUL jisse aapko haasil karna hai....

MAI-wo VIKRAM us gufa ki taraf kyun dekh raha hai..??kya usse maalum hai ki us gufa me kya hai...???

WOOGER-ye har din jungle ke madhya bane vishal jharne ke paas shashtr vidya ke adhyan ke liye jaata tha...

jaate aur aate dono hi waqt,ye yahan is CAVERN ke baahar rook usse thodi der tak dekhte rehta hai aur fir chala jaata hai....

aur rahi baat uske is gufa ke secret ko jaanane ki toh usse aadhi hi baat pata hai...

usse ye pata hai ki is gufa se hi uske Planet ka astitv bana hai...usse bas itna gyat hai is planet par jeeven ka rahasya us gufa ke andar se hai....

MAI-kisne batayi usse ye baat..???

WOOGER- is sawal ka jawab hi hai aapka pehla drishyam.....


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi hamare samne ka scene change ho gaya....



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is waqt hum kisi aur jagah par the aur abhi raat ka samay tha...ye ek basti jaisi jagah thi jahan mashale jal rahi thi aur humse thik aage ek reth ka bada sa akhada tha jisme is waqt 6 logon ke beech malyudh ho raha tha jisse hamare dekhte hi dekhte unme se ek ne jeet liya...


WOOGER-is waqt hum is planet ke shuruati dour ke DRISHYAM ko dekh rahe hain...

sadiyon pehle jab is planet ka nirman hua,aur yahan logon ka vaas hua toh is jagah ko chalane ke liye kisi ek vyakti ka chunaav hona tha aur jo mal yudh hum dekh rahe hain,yahi tha wo tarika jisse us vakt ke sabse shaktishali manushya ko yahan ka sardar banaya gaya...

jo abhi is malyudh me jeeta hai,wahi tha ZEAL ka sabse pehla shashak....


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi drishya phir badal gaya....



SCENE-2


is drishya me wahi manushya jo ki ZEAL ka pehla shashak tha,wo ek safar par nikla hua tha....


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WOOGER-ye jaanane ke liye ki ye planet kitna bada hai, is shashak ne apne kuch vishwas paatr logon ke saath is planet ka bhraman karna shuru kiya aur pahuncha is jagah par....


ek baar firse hamare saamne wo CAVERN tha par ek alag dour me...


WOOGER- jab isne is gufa ko dekha aur iske andar se aarahi beintihan urja ko mehsoos kiya toh usse andar jaane ka man kiya...


WOOGER ki baat sunte hue maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki us shashak ne apne ek daas ko andar jaane ke liye kaha aur uski baat maan jaise hi us daas ne gufa ke muhane me pahunch andar kadam rakhne ki koshish ki toh wo bhasm ho gaya....


MAI-arre,ye kya hua????

WOOGER-dekhte jaaiye....


WOOGER ke kehne par jab maine saamne dekha toh....


us aadmi ke bhasm hote hi us gufa ke baahar hawa me hi bade bade aksharon me kuch likhana shuru ho gaya...

ye lekhni thi ZEAL planet ke baare me...jab wahan ye likhaya ki is gufa aur iske andar rakhe vastu ki wajah se hi ZEAL planet me jeevan ka vaas shuru hua hai tab sabhi chakit rah gaye.....

is sacchayi ko sun abhi sabhi chakit ho hi rahe the ki tabhi wo akshar mit gaye aur unki jagah naye aksharon ne le li jisse padh wo sabhi log aur chakit ho gaye....

kyunki ab wahan jo likha tha wo ek tarah ki bhavishyawaani thi jo keh rahi thi ki....


rogiyon ke beech wo
akela AAROGYA HOGA....

jo mere RAAZ ko

jaanane aur sambhalne
ke YOGYA HOGA.....


ye shabd likhaye the us gufa me muhane par jiske padhne ke baad wo shashak ye samajh gaya ki har koi us gufa ke andar nahi jaa sakta...

infact sirf koi ek deserving banda hi us gufa ke andar jaa paayega...

in adhbhudh sachayiyon ko dekh aur samajh wo shashak apne daason ke saath wahan se chala gaya....

par usne tay kiya ki itni aloukik aur adhbhudh jagah se wo door nahi jaayega aur isiliye usne is gufa se kuch door ek nagri basayi aur wahin rehkar is pure Planet ka sanchalan karne laga....

jo gufa ne bhavishyawaani ki thi,ussi ko adhaar bana saal mese kisi ek din us shashak ne apne planet ke sabse kaabil aur honhaar logon ko us gufa ke andar jaane ki baat kahi aur saath hi ye ghosna bhi kiya ki jo koi aisa karne me kaamiyab hoga,us din se wahi vyakti aur uske baad uske vanshaj hi is planet par raaj karenge....

SCENE ENDS....



ye saare drishya dekhne ke baad hamara drishyam gayab ho gaya aur hum ab wapas apne original waqt me aa chuke the aur ussi gufa ke saamne khade the,par is baar wo VIKRAM wahan nahi tha,wo jaa chuka tha.....


WOOGER-us ghoshna ke baad har saal kisi ek din is planet ke sabse hunarmand log us gufa me ghusne ki koshish karte the...

par koi bhi kaamiyab nahi hua....aur isiliye tab se lekar is planet ke tabah hone tak ussi pehle shashak ke vanshajon ne hi is planet par raaj kiya...

MAI-hmm..matlab ye VIKRAM bhi ussi vansh ka vanshaj tha....!!!

WOOGER-haan wo vanshaj toh tha par uttaradhikari nahi....

MAI-matlab....!!!!


mere aisa kehte hi drishya change ho gaya jiska matlab tha ki ab hum ek naye DRISHYAM me the.....



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TUMHARA ITNA DUSSAHAS KI HUMSE PRATIKSHA KARWAO...

ITNA ADHIK WAQT LAG GAYA TUMHE JAL KA EK PYALA HAMARE PAAS LAANE ME....


ye bolte hue ek bade se mahal ke beecho beech bane garden me baithe ek chote se Rajkumar ne apne saamne khade sewak ke haathon se jal ka wo pyala liya aur ussi jal ko us sewak ke mooh me fek diya jisse wo dara hua sewak aur dar gaya....


SEWAK-skshama Rajkumar..... kintu mujhse vilamb nahi hua hai...is udyan se rasoi grah kaafi door hai...wahan jaakar jal yahan tak laane me thoda waqt lag jaata hai rajkumar....

RAJKUMAR-jab humne keh diya tha ki tumhe vilamb hua hai toh iska arth hai ki tumse vilamb hua hai..

tumhara itna dushaas ki tum humse zuban ladao.... humari baat ko kaato....

sipahiyon,le jaao is batamizz ko aur iski nangi peeth par 100 kode barsao.... iski dardnaakh cheekh pure mehel me gunj hamare kaano tak pahunchni chahiye....


Rajkumar ki baat sun us sewak ki rooh kaamp gayi...wo kuch kehta usse pehle hi wahan khade 2 sipahiyon ne usse pakad liya aur lejaane lage par tabhi....


RUK JAAO.....CHHOD DO US USSE.....


ye awaaz un sipahiyon ke piche se aayi thi jisse sun jab un sipahiyon ne turant us sewak ko chhod diya...

wahin is awaaz ko sun us sewak ke dand ko nirdharit karne waale rajkumar ke chehre par naagwaari ke bhaav utpann ho gaye....

wahin wo jisne sipahiyon ko rukne ke liye kaha tha,wo chalta hua aage aaya aur rajkumar ke saamne khada ho gaya....


RAJKUMAR-bhrata VIKRAM....aap har baar hamare faislon ke beech kyun aa jaate hain....???

VIKRAM-kyunki tum hamesha galat faisle hi lete ho....


VIKRAM jiske drishyam ko dekhne ke liye RAAZ yahan pahuncha tha,ye wahi tha aur ye DRISHYAM tha uske baal kaal ka...

VIKRAM us rajkumar ka bada bhai tha par umar me usse bas ek saal hi bada tha....

dono hi bhai sikke ke do alag pehluon ki tarah the...jahan Vikram ek shaant aur sacha baccha tha wahin uska chota bhai choti si umar me hi behad hi negetive, egoistic aur bigda hua tha....

aur iska kaaran tha uska raajshri pariwaar..sadiyon se ZEAL planet ke shahshak hone ki wajah se ye parivaar apne aap ko is planet ka bhagwaan maanane laga tha...

unka bas yahi maanana tha ki jo bhi wo karenge,woh sahi hoga...aur sabke liye anniwarya bhi...

unhe kisi aur ki feelings se koi matlab nahi rehta tha.par inke negetive parivaar me VIKRAM inke ulat positive paida hua tha...

uska vyavahar udaar tha..wo har kisi ki kadar karta tha....par uski ye aadat uske pure pariwaar me kisiko bhi pasand nahi thi....aur isiliye...


RAJKUMAR-agar faisla humne kiya hai toh wo sahi hi hoga....aur waise bhi maamla humara hai..

aur isse hum jaisa chaahenge,waise niptayenge....isiliye dobara humare maarg me aane ki aap koshish naa karen toh behtar hoga...


apne chote bhai ki baat sun VIKRAM ko ghussa toh bohot aaya par usne apne ghusse ko dabaya aur....


VIKRAM-kisi par anyay karna kabhi sahi nahi ho sakta mere bhai...mujhe apne raaste se door raho,ye kehne sa acha hai ki tum apna rasta badal lo...

RAJKUMAR-hum rajkumar hain aur is Planet ke bhaavi maharaj bhi..aur ek raaja apna raasta kabhi nahi badalta....

par aap ye nahi samajhenge....kyunki naa aapki soch raajsi hai aur naahi apke khoon me ubal hamare pitah sa hai...


CHATAAKKH......


Rajkumar ki baat sun VIKRAM ne usse ek zor ka tamacha maar diya jiske baad wo ghusse se rote hue mahal ki taraf bhaag gaya aur aisa hone je kuch der baad....


KYA TUMNE APNE CHOTE BHAI PAR HAATH UTHAYA....???

VIKRAM-haan par.....


CHATAAKHHH..CHATAKHHH.....CHATAKKHHHH.....


aage kuch bol nahi paaya VIKRAM...

wo kuch kehta usse pehle hi uske gaal par lagatar teen thappad pade jisse uske honth tak phat gaye...

VIKRAM ko ye thappad maare the khud uske pitah ne...

reason....

vikram ne jaise hi apne chote bhai par haath uthaya toh uska bhai sidhe apne pitah ke paas gaya aur badha chada kar VIKRAM ki burayi karne laga jiske baad VIKRAM se unhone sawal pucha aur aadha jawab milte hi usko lagatar teen thappad pada....


KING-mujhe vishwas nahi hota ki tu sach me hamara hi khun hai...????

kyunki hamara khun itna thanda nahi ho sakta.....


thappad padne se VIKRAM ka dimag kuch seconds ke liye sunya ho gaya tha par jab wo sambhla toh...


VIKRAM-par pitashri hamara apraadh kya hai..???humne toh bas us nirdosh vyakti ko bachaya tha....

aur chote rajkumar ki abhadra baat ki wajah se humne unpar haath utahaya tha...


KING-us aadmi ko pesh kiya jaaye....


VIKRAM ki baat sunane ke baad uske pitah ne zor se chillate hue ye aadesh diya jiske agle hi pal....


dhamm.......


is awaaz ke saath ek vyakti us king ke kadmo me gira..

ye wahi aadmi tha jisse thodi der pehle VIKRAM ne bachaya tha....

neeche gir us aadmi ne apna sir upar kiya aur kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi...


SWSSSSS........


behad zor se chali KING ki talwar jiske agle pal us aadmi ka sir uske dhadh se alag hokar VIKRAM jo thoda piche hi khada tha,uske pairon ke paas giri....

is drishya ko dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen jaise pathra si gayi thi..wo jadwath hokar ekdum sthir khada ho gaya tha....

wo waise hi rehta par tabhi King ki awaaz uske kaano me gunj uthi....


KING-isse humne nahi,tumne maara hai VIKRAM......bhale hi iska sir hamari talwar dwara kata hai kintu iska kaaran sirf aur sirf tum ho....

agar tumne rajkumar ki baaton ke beech hastakshep kar isse us dand se nahi bachaya hota jo rajkumar ne iske liye nirdharit kiya hai,toh abhi ye zinda rehta....

ab meri baat kaan kholkar suno....is planet me sirf hum aur hamara parivaar jo chahenge,wahi hoga..hamara har faisla yahan ke basne waale har vyakti ka mukkadar hai....

hamara diya har dand yahan rehne waale har manushya ki niyati hai....

jitni jaldi ho sake,is satya ko maano aur jaisa har raajshi khoon karta aaya hai,waisa aacharan dhaaran kar lo warna hum tumhe is mahal aur apni zindagi se nikal fekenge...

aadhi baat hi sun paaya VIKRAM...uska aadha dhyan toh ab bhi us kate hue sir ki taraf tha...aasuon se bhar gaya VIKRAM ka chehra....

kuch der tak yunhi thaga sa khade rehne ke baad wo apne pitah ke saamne se aur saath hi us mahal se hamesha hamesha ke liye nikal gaya....




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ye sab dikhane ke baad DRISHYAM gayab ho gaya.....

drishyam dekhte waqt jahan meri aankhen us chal rahe chalchitra ki taraf thi wahin WOOGER ki urja ka dhyan meri taraf tha..

par pure scene me mere expressions kahin bhi nahi badle..maine yunhi pura scene dekhta raha tha...

aur ab jab drishyam khatm ho chuka tha toh meri nazar saamne dikh rahe gufa ke taraf thi...


WOOGER-koi sawal!!!!

MAI-ye sab bas ek drishyam hai,right???matlab live kuch nahi hai,bas jo ho chuka hai,ussi ghatna ke alag alag clips hain...

toh kya abhi mai is gufa me nahi jas sakta..matlab andar se dekhne bhar ke liye...?!!!

WOOGER-is pure planet ko shakti ussi gufa ke andar rakhe vastu se hi milti thi....wo vastu yahan rehne waale har jeev ko jaanta tha..

yahi nahi,agar koi baahar se bhi aaye tab bhi us vyakti ke is planet par pair rakhte hi uske baare me wo vastu sab kuch jaan leti thi...

bhale hi ab ye planet dead planet hain,par ye gufa aaj bhi yahan moujud hai...aur iski shakti aaj bhi utni hi prabal hai...

MAI-wo sab toh thik hai par ye jo gufa dikh rahi hai,ye bhi toh bas ek drishyam hi hai naa...original thodi naa hai...

WOOGER-suraj dharti se carodon meel door hota hai par phir bhi uski tapish har dharti mehsoos karti hai....agar aapko bhi karni hai toh koshish karkar dekh lijiye....


WOOGER ki baat sun mai aage badha aur sidhe us gufa ke baahar
jaakar khada hi gaya...

saamne andhera tha..kuch seconds rook jaise hi maine apna ek pair aage badhaya toh....


DHOOB......

ek tez jhatka laga mujhe aur mai wapas jahan se chala tha,wahin aakar gira....

MAI-ye kya tha????ek yaad me itni taakat...!!!!

WOOGER-maine jis tapish ki baat ki thi,ye wahi tha...

agar ye asliyat hota toh aap bhi raakh ho chuke hote.....




PLANET-ELYSIAN




PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE





YE RAAZ KAHAAN CHALA GAYA HAI...???KAAFI DER SE DIKH NAHI RAHA.....!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ne bhi RAAZ ke stand ki taraf dekha jahan se RAAZ nadarad tha....


MARIA-aap jaante toh ho usse..wahi karta hai jo uska dil kehta hai....competition dekhne ka man nahi hoga isiliye bahar chala gaya hoga...



STELLAR'S STAND


YE RAAZ ABHI TAK KAISE NAHI LOUTA...AUR WO DONO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER,WO BHI NAHI DIKH RAHE HAIN....

KAHIN MAINE JO RAY US RAAZ PAR PHEKI THI,USKA ASAR ZYADA SERIOUS TOH NAHI HO GAYA....!!!!


RAAZ ke stand ki taraf nazar ghumaye hue ALFREEN ye baatein badbada rahi thi....


MABEL-arre tu wahan kahan dekh rahi hai....???saamne dekh, competition kaafi interesting hota hua lag raha hai.....


MABEL ki baat sun apni sochon ko jhatak jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh....


SWWWWW...SWWWWWW.......


WICKEDS ki team jo ki dhaal ka roop dhar aa rahe baano se khudko bacha rahi thi,us dhaal ke beecho beech ek ubhar aana shuru hua aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us ubhar ke beech behad teevr gati se ek baan nikla aur aage ki taraf badh gaya.....


par kyun???aayiye pehle ye jaan lete hain...

darasal dhaal ka roop liye WICKEDS behad dhyan aur baariki se un anginat baano ko dekh rahe the...

lagatar kaafi waqt tak dekhte rehne ke baad unhe kuch alag dikhayi diya...

alag ye tha ki un anginat baano ki varsha ke beech rah rah kar kuch seconds ke antaral me ek baan unki taraf aa raha tha jisse halka prakash nikal raha tha....

aur jab bhi wo baan unki taraf aata toh us waqt us baan ke aage peeche koi aur baan nahi hota tha....

ye dekh WICKEDS ko laga ki ho naa ho par in asankhya baano ke beech ye halka chamakdaar baan ZUNYATA matlab UNREAL hai...

aur ye abbhas hote hi is dhaal ke madhya ki jagah par jo SAVENT tha,usne apna roop ek baar firse badla aur second ke 10we hisse se bhi kam samay me ek baan ka roop dhar wo us dhaal ke madhya se hota hua aage nikla aur jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki us chamkile baan ke aage aur piche koi baan nahi hota tha,isiliye wo SAVENT numa baan bina kisi avrodh ke aage badhta hua gaya aur sidhe us chamkile baan se takra gaya aur jaise hi ye hua toh.....


BOOM..........


is awaaz ke saath pura STADIUM ek tez roshni se jagmaga utha aur tabhi WHIZZ ki awaaz gunj uthi...


MABBA-SECOND TASK COMPLETED....

WINNERS,WICKEDS.....


par kyunki ye competition best of three tha aur pehle do task ke winners WICKEDS rahe hain, isiliye is second task ke saath ye competition bhi yahin khatm hota hai aur isiliye with a clean sweep, is saal ke SWEEP-STAKE competition ke winner hain WICKEDS......


jahan MABBA ki anouncement ke baad WICKEDS ke samarthakon se bhara aadha STADIUM unki awaaz numa hooting se gunj utha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ke supporters se bhara baaki ka aadha STADIUM ek dum khamosh ho chuka tha...

is khamoshi me MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi shaamil the...yunhi udaas ho wo teen apni apni seats se uthe aur baahar nikalne ko hue hi the ki....


MAINE KAHA THA, CHAMPION HONA AUR CHAMPION KI TARAH HONA,IN DONO BAATON ME FARK HOTA HAI....


is awaaz ko sun MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN palte toh unhone dekha ki unke saamne MORANA, ANWIR aur unke kuch saathi khade hain....


ANWIR- CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand years ke itihaas me aisa bohot kam baar hua hai jab MORALS se WICKEDS ko haraya ho warna is baar ki hi tarah har baar in MORALS ki izzat hi utarti aayi hai....

isiliye yahan se jaane ke baad dobara sochna... ek WICKED ka ATTITUDE hi success ki chabi hai...

apna lo isse,faayde me rahogi....


MAHI ko dekhte hue ANWIR ne ye baat kahi jisse sun...


MAHI-har addhyaya,har chapter kahin naa kahin se shuru hota hi hai...

zaroori toh nahi ki pichle 25 hazar saal se jo hota aa raha hai,wahi aage bhi hoga...

isiliye tum hamari nahi apni fikr karo.. kyunki jis din hum PHASE 2 me aaye,tumhare aur tumhare jaise ka CHAPTER khatm ho jaayega,aur shuru hoga CHAPTER 2.....

apni baat bol apne dono friends ke saath nikal gayi MAHI is baat se anjaan ki flow flow me usne bata diya hai ki ye chapter ab khatm hone ke kagar par hai and now its time to announce the next chapter......


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTAL)

second chapters name.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V..J....

Very Nice Update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER RAAZ KO VIKRAM KE BAALYA KAAL KI JHALKIYAN DIKHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-38



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




HUM ALREADY LATE HO CHUKE HAIN AUR TU ABHI TAK BREAKFAST HI KAR RAHI HAI....


hall me kadam rakhte hi MAHI ne ALFREEN ko jo ki abhi breakfast kar rahi thi,dekhte hue ye baat kahi jispar....


ALFREEN-tu toh INSTITUTION jaane ke liye aise excited ho rahi hai jaise aaj yahan par hamara pehla din ho....!!!

MAHI-first day me bhi itni excitement nahi hui thi jitni mujhe aaj feel ho rahi hai...

ALFREEN-aur aisa kyun???

MAHI-jaise tujhe pata nahi hai...???ye excitement SWEEP-STAKE ki wajah se hai...

kal SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ko dekh mujhe feel hua ki maine toh abhi kuch seekha hi nahi hai....

kal MORALS aur WICKEDS ki team jis tarah metaphisycal activities ko anjaam de rahe the,usse dekh mujhe toh Goosebumps aa gaye the...

infact ab bhi jab mai kal ke baare me sochti hun toh mere andar ek adrenaline rush doud uththa hai....


MAHI baat karte waqt bhi kaafi energetic dikh rahi thi jisse dekh....


ALFREEN-wo toh dikh hi raha hai.aisa lag raha hai jaise next SWEEP-STAKE kal hi hone wala hai aur tu dono teams se kisi ek ki captain hai....

MAHI-kal nahi,par dekhna,ek din ye hoga zaroor.....aur haan,teams me koi choice nahi hai,mai sirf MORALS ki team me rahungi,lead karungi aur jeetaungi bhi....


AUR US DIN SABSE ZYADA KHUSHI HUME HOGI....


FLORIN apni wife MARIA ke saath ye bolte hue apne room se hall ki taraf aa rahe the...

MAHI ke paas aakar dono ne hi usse side se hug kiya aur uske sir par apne blessings dete hue haath rakhe....


MAHI-aur jab mujhe trophy milegi toh mai usse aap dono ko dedicate karungi....


kal ANWIR aur MORANA se bahas ke baad jab MAHI baaki MORALS supporters ke saath STADIUM se baahar jaane ko hui toh jaate jaate uski nazar ek baar ground par padi thi jahan MARILIZA WHIZZ SWEEP-STAKE ke winners WICKEDS ko trophy de rahi thi,ussi trophy ko yaad kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA bhi behad khush aur bhaawuk ho gaye..

itne kam waqt me hi unhe MAHI apni beti si lagne lagi thi aur aaj MAHI ki baat sun unhe ye ehsaas hua tha ki MAHI ke dil me bhi unke liye same feelings hai....


FLORIN-hum intazar karenge us din ka beti....


ek baar firse MAHI ke sir me pyar bhara haath ferte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi...

wahin ALFREEN apne mom dad aur MAHI ki bonding,unka pyar dekhkar behad khush ho rahi thi...


MAHI-tu kya daanth dikha rahi hai....ab chalegi bhi ki lunch bhi abhi hi karna hai tujhe....

ALFREEN-ek minute chain nahi rehta tujhe...chal....


paani peekar ALFREEN khadi hui aur apne mom dad ko side hug karkar bye kehte hue MAHI ke saath aage badhne ko hui par tabhi....


FLORIN-ek second baccho.... INSTITUTION se pehle hostel jaakar RAAZ ko birthday wish kar dena.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI chownke....


MAHI-aaj uska birthday hai!!!!

FLORIN-haan..yahan aakar itna kuch dekha hai ki ab lagta hai ki ab koi bhi baat par surprise nahi lagega...

ab issi baat ko dekhlo,6 mahine pehle jis din hum yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha aur time loop ko wajah sirf 6 mahino me RAAZ do saal bada ho gaya hai...

aur aaj uska 18th birthday hai.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko fir se shock laga...unhe FLORIN ki baat samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye....


ALFREEN-ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...???6 mahine me 2 saal ka time loop....!!!!


ALFREEN ki baat sun FLORIN ne kal SWEEP-STAKE ke douran hui us PEACE MAKER ki baatein batayi jisse sun MAHI aur ALFREEN shocked ho gaye....


ALFREEN-man,this place is insane.....pata nahi kya kya RAAZ chuppe hain yahan....


jahan ALFREEN bas is karishmayi duniya ke baare me soch rahi thi wahin...


MAHI-6 mahine pehle jis raat aap dono yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha....

thats strange.. kyunki us din toh mera bhi birthday tha....

ALFREEN-what.....!!!matlab aaj tera bhi birthday hai....


MAHI ki baat sun khushi se uchalte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi aur turant MAHI ke gale lag gayi....

ALFREEN ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA ne bhi MAHI ke gale lag usse blessings di...

aaj pehli baar tha jab jeete jaagte log MAHI ko uske birthday par wish bhi kar rahe the aur behad khush bhi dikh rahe the aur ye sab dekh MAHI bhi behad khush dikhne lagi thi....


FLORIN-aaj hamari beti ka birthday hai aur hume hi pata nahi tha...

MARIA-par ab toh pata hai naa.... toh kyun naa,ek party rakhi jaaye aur sabse achi baat ye hai ki arrangements ki bhi koi tention nahi hai...

yahan toh bas jo chahiye,usse bolna hota hai aur har chiz aa jaati hai....

tum sab ek kaam karo, INSTITUTION me apne PHASE ke sabhi hostlers aur discholars SAVENTS ko aaj shaam yahan hamare ghar par invite karo....

ALFREEN-fantastic idea....

FLORIN-ek kaam karte hain, RAAZ ka birthday bhi MAHI ke saath hi celebrate kar lete hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun jahan baaki dono normal hi the wahin ALFREEN ka mood bigadne laga tha...


ALFREEN-iski kya zaroorat hai dad....let him be naa....i don't like him...

FLORIN-beta kitni baar kaha hai ki aisa bolna aur sochna is not good....

MARIA-yes AL...tumhe is tarah kisike bhi baare me negetive bilkul bhi sochna nahi chahiye...

par FLORIN...ek baat toh hai,ki RAAZ kabhi bhi party me nahi aayega aur agar hum kisi tarah usse kuch aur bahana bana kar bhi yahan le aaye tab bhi koi faayda toh nahi hoga ulta nuksaan ho jaayega....

tumhe toh pata hai ki usse apna birthday celebrate karna pasand nahi aur isiliye wo kuch aisa bol ya kar dega jisse puri party ka maza hi kharab ho jaayega....

ALFREEN-exactly..aur isiliye mai mana kar rahi thi..uske liye MAHI ka birthday spoil ho,ye mai bardasht nahi karungi....


ghusse me ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun....


MAHI-shaant maate shaant..thik hai nahi bulaayenge usse....

FLORIN-haan par usse milkar usse wish zaroor kar dena...

ALFREEN-par pops wo ispar bhi ulta jawab hi dega.....

FLORIN-nahi dega..hostel me bhi jab uske birthday me hum usse wish karte the toh wo thanks toh nahi kehta tha par kuch galat bhi nahi bolta tha..

usse bas celebrations wagarah me interest nahi hota....

MAHI-cool uncle..par abhi toh hum already late ho chuke hain isiliye INSTITUTION se aate waqt usse wish kar denge....

FLORIN/MARIA-thik hai...


baaton baaton me wakayi late ho chuka tha aur isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye bol MAHI aur ALFREEN turant INSTITUTION ke liye nikal gaye...




PLACE-CHOSEN'S




GUYZZZ.WAHAN CLASS ME NAHI,SABHI SAVENTS GROUND ME HAIN....TUM BHI WAHIN AA JAAO....


VALDIS ki baat sun MAHI aur ALFREEN jo apni class ki taraf jaa rahi thi,wapas palat gayi aur ground ki taraf jaane lagi....


ALFREEN-ye sab SAVENTS aaj ground me kya kar rahe hain???koi naya task milne hai kya aaj!!!

MAHI-agar aisa hua toh maza aa jaayega....


excitement se bhar MAHI aur ALFREEN ground ki taraf badh chali...

ground pahunchte hue dono ne dekha ki unke pure PHASEMATES wahan maujud hain par saamne apne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath MARILIZA WHIZZ ko dekh dono zara sa chownk bhi gayi thi...

turant aage badh wo dono MABEL ke baaju me jaakar khadi ho gayi....


MAHI-kya ho raha hai yahan...????

MABEL-no idea babes...class me udta hua ek bolne waala circular aaya jisme bataya gaya ki sabhi SAVENTS ko yahan ground pahunchna hai...


MABEL ki baat sunane ke baad puchne ke liye MAHI aur MABEL ke paas kuch bhi nahi bacha tha aur isiliye wo dono bhi baakiyon ki tarah saamne apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki taraf dekhne lagi...

wahin jab MARILIZA ne jab dekha ki first PHASE ke saare SAVENTS aa gaye hain toh....


MARILIZA- aap sab soch rahe honge ki aap sabko yahan kyun gather kiya gaya hai...???

baat darasal ye hai ki CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand ke itihas me pehli baar kuch anhoni hui hai...

kyunki wo anhoni aap ke PHASE se related hai toh isiliye aap sabka hakh banta hai ki aap sab us baat ko jaane....


MARILIZA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS chownke..kuch anhoni hui hai wo bhi unke PHASE me ye jaankar sabhi ke man me ek anjaane dar ne ghar kar liya tha....


MARILIZA-darasal aapke PHASE ke teen SAVENTS, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ kal se missing hain....

un teeno ko is planet ke har jagah par talash kiya jaa chuka hai par unfortunately unka koi pata nahi chala....

pure CHOSENS me har SAVENT ke AURA ka ansh hamare paas stored rehta tha jisse us SAVENT ki location trace ki jaa sakti hai but unfortunately in teen SAVENTS ka AURA bhi inhe trace nahi kar paaya hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun pure ground me khamoshi chhaa gayi...kisi ko bhi samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki kaise react kiya jaaye....

MAHI jisse RAAZ ki har baar behes hi hui thi,wo bhi uske yun laapata hone par bohot bura feel kar rahi thi...

aur khaas kar aaj kyunki abhi kuch der pehle hi toh usse pata chala tha ki aaj uske saath saath RAAZ ka bhi birthday hai...

itne khushi ke din yun manhoos khabar sunanane se wo kaafi dukhi ho gayi thi...

MAHI hi kya sabhi SAVENTS hi dukhi the aur dukhi ke saath saath thode dare hue bhi the...

sab ye sochne lag gaye the ki jab teen SAVENTS ke saath ye ho sakta hai toh kal ko unke saah bhi ye ho sakta hai...


WHIZZ MARILIZA se SAVENTS ke man ka ye bhaav chuppa nahi reh saka aur isiliye....


MARILIZA-fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...aisa koi haadsa dobara naa ho iska intazam hum har chuke hain....

CHOSENS ki har PHASE ke entrace aur exit par ek NIYANTRAK ek CENSOR laga diya gaya hai jo kisi bhi sangin gatividhi me naa sirf active ho jaayega balki agar us activity me kisi SAVENT par koi khatra raha toh usse handle bhi kar lega...

itna hi nahi,is pure planet ke chaaron taraf ek REVEAL SHIELD laga diya gaya hai jisse bahar se yahan aane waale har shaksh ko naa sirf identify kar liya jaayega balki usse us shield me lage magical door ki madad se sidhe CHOSENS ke testing facility me bhej diya jaayega jahan se us shaksh ke yahan aane ki mansha ki puri jaanch hogi....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sunane ke baad sabhi SAVENTS thode nishchit dikhne lage the par in sabme ek SAVENT aisi bhi thi jo ab bhi halki dari hui thi...

ye aur koi nahi ALFREEN thi jo kal uske aur RAAZ ke beech jo hua,uske baare me soch kar halki dari hui thi par fir usne khud par kaabu paa apne face ko normal kar liya is baat se anjaan ki MAHI ne uske chehre ke lagatar badalte hue expressions dekh liye the...




PLANET-ZEAL



PLACE-DRISYAM



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ARRE DEKHO YAHAN KAUN HAI....????GARIBON KE RAJA, ZAROORAT MANDON KE BHAGWAAN HAMARE PUJNIYA BHRATA,VIKRAM......

apne ghode par sawar ek kutiya ke saamne haath ko jodte hue VIKRAM ke chote bhai ne ye baat kahi thi....

ye DRISHYAM tha VIKRAM ke jawani ka...bachpan me hi mahal se nikalne ke baad VIKRAM wahan ke praja ke beech rehne laga tha...

raajshi logon me ek bas VIKRAM hi tha jo garibon se pyar karta tha aur issi wajah se ZEAL ka wo nagar jahan is waqt VIKRAM tha,uska bada samman karte the...

choti si umar se hi VIKRAM bohot tejaswi tha...har kaam,har chunouti ko wo bohot asaani se pura kar deta tha...mahal ke aisho aaram ko chhodne ke baad VIKRAM ne khudhi apne liye ek kutiya banayi aur wahan nagar ke logon ke beech rehne laga...

wahan ke logon ki hi tarah har din jungle me jaa lakdi,phal aur vibhin upyogi vanaspatiyon ko wahan se laakar VIKRAM bech apna guzara karta tha..

usse ye sangharsh purn zindagi apne mahal ki zindagi se zyadi achi lagti thi..

apne hunar ki wajah se baaki logon ke mukabke jungle jaakar wahan se zaroorat ki chizen sangrah karne me VIKRAM ko bohot kam waqt lagta tha...

aur isiliye baaki ka waqt wo wahin jungle ke madhya bane jharne ke kareeb reh alag alag vidyaaon ke adhyan me lagata tha...

kabhi kabhi jab jungle me koi jaanwar aadamkhor ho jaaya karta tha,tab VIKRAM hi usse maara karta tha...

iski ek jhalak RAAZ ke yahan aate hi dikhayi gayi thi....

jungle se lout shaam ke waqt roz VIKRAM wahan ke bacchon aur yuvaon ko alag alag vishay me gyan diya karta tha...

aaj bhi wo wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi uska BHAI apne kuch logon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se guzra aur apne BHAI ko logon ke beech baitha dekh usne ye taunt kiya tha....

jahan VIKRAM ke chote bhai ko dekh wahan baithe log dar gaye the aur sabne apna sir neeche jhuka liya tha wahin uski baat sun VIKRAM bas muskura diya aur....


VIKRAM-taarif ke shukriya mere bhai....

RAJKUMAR-mai tumhara koi bhai nahi hun.....aur ab tum bhi in logon ki hi tarah hamare aadhin ho..hum hi tumhare bhagwaan hain...

isiliye khudko bhagwan banana chhodo aur agli baar jahan bhi tumhe hum dikhe,toh sabki tarah apna sir hamare saamne jhuka liya karo....

VIKRAM-is puri shrishti ka sirf ek hi bhagwaan hai aur mera sir sirf ussi ke aage jhukta hai...aur rahi baat tumhari toh maine tumhe bhai isiliye nahi kaha kyunki hum dono ek hi maa ke kokh se janme hain...

jis din maine tumhare mahal ko chhoda tha,ussi din maine bhi tum sabse naata tod liya tha...

ab tum mere liye begaane ho aur bhai bhi maine isiliye bola kyunki har begaane se bhale ho amir ho,gareeb ho ya koi bhikshuk,mai sabko bhai hi kehkar sambhodhit karta hun....


Rajkumar jaanta tha ki indirectly VIKRAM ne usse ek bhikari ke saath compare kiya hai aur isiliye


RAJKUMAR-tumhari itni himmat ki humse zuban ladao....

sipahi.... jao,aur ghasithe hue isse hamare kadmo me laakar feko....

Rajkumar ke aadesh ko sun ek sipahi apni talwar ke saath aage badha aur us talwar ko VIKRAM ke gardan par laga diya par tabhi....


Dhabb......

ye kya...????


ek second bhi nahi tik paayi wo talwar VIKRAM ke gardan par..kisiko dikha tak nahi ki kab VIKRAM halka sa right ki taraf tilt hua,us sipahi ke haath ko jisme talwar thi, halka jhatka diya jisse talwar uske haath se jhitki aur aisa hote hi ab wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....

aisa kar VIKRAM ne ussi haath se jisme talwar thi,ek low jaw punch us sipahi ko maara jiske pressure se wo sipahi udta hua rajkumar ke upar se hota hua dusri taraf gira...

wahan moujud sabhi bhouchakke se ye sab hota dekh rahe the...

Rajkumar ki bhi ye haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

uski aankhon me bhi halka halka dar dikhne laga tha...


VIKRAM-arre ye kya??ye kaise bhagwaan hai jiski aankhon me dar dikhne laga????

abhi toh sirf dar dikha hai,chupchaap yahan se nahi gaya toh bhagwaan ke sharir se khoon bhi nikalne lagega...


Rajkumar ke behad kareeb jaa uski aankhon me jhaankte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad rajkumar apne saathiyon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se nikal gaya....


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WOOGER-kuch alag dikha is drishyam me aapko???

MAI-haan...us sipahi se bhidte waqt aur aakhri baat bolte waqt VIKRAM ke sharir se ek AURA nikal raha tha...

waise ye same chiz jab usne us cheeteh ko maara tha,tab bhi hua tha....jab wo us jharne ke paas abhyas kar raha hota tha,tab bhi ye AURA uske chaaron taraf tha...

but baaki waqt ye AURA gayab ho jaata hai...

WOOGER-bohot ache....


ab baari hai aakhri DRISHYAM ki....dhyan se dekhiyega isse...


WOOGER ki baat khatm hote hi scene change hi chuka tha....



FINAL SCENE:-



beta,hamari bacchi ko bachalo.... tumhara bhai usse utha kar mahal ki taraf le gaya hai...


shaam ka waqt hai... VIKRAM abhi jungle se lout hi raha tha ki tabhi usse uske kutiya ke paas rehne waala ek buddha mila jisne rote hue apni baat batayi...

darasal us buddhe ki ek beti thi jo behad khubsoorat thi aur rajkumar ko bohot pasand thi par us ladki ke dil me VIKRAM tha....

Rajkumar ne kayi baar us ladki ko apne rutbe aur apni fake taakat se rijhaane ki koshish ki par wo ladki kabhi rajkumar ko bhaaw nahi deti thi.....

par aaj subah ek guptchar ne jisse rajkumar ne ussi ladki par jaasusi karne ke liye rakha tha,aakar usse bataya ki wo ladki uske bade bhai VIKRAM se pyar karti hai toh rajkumar is sach ko bardaasht nahi kar paaya...

ek second nahi laga rajkumar ke man me us ladki ke prati prachand krodh jaagne me...

jo soft corner uske man me us ladki ke liye tha,wo khatm ho chuka tha aur ab uski jagah badle ne le ki thi...

Rajkumar ek teer se do shikar karna chahta tha..us ladki ko sabak sikhate hue apne bhai se apne kuch samay pehle hue apmaan ka badla lekar...

aur isiliye apni sena ki ek tukdi lekar rajkumar nagar me gaya aur us ladki ko beech bazar se uthakar mahal le gaya....

in saari ghatna ke baare me sun VIKRAM ki aankhen laal ho gayi..us ladki ke prati aakarshan VIKRAM ke andar bhi the aur isiliye jab usne ye sab suna toh apne ghode ko tezi se mahal ki taraf douda diya...

Rajkumar bhali bhaati jaanta tha ki us ladki ke liye VIKRAM mahal zaroor aayega aur isiliye usne mahal ki suraksha kadi kar di thi....

karib 1000 se zyada sainik mahal ko guard kar rahe the....

wahin VIKRAM behad tezi se apne ghode ko daudate hue mahal ke mukhya dwar ke paas pahuncha jahan 30 se zyada sainik tainat the par unhe kaatne me VIKRAM ko 1 minute se zyada ka samay nahi laga....

sainikon ko kaat VIKRAM aage badhta chala jaa raha tha..is waqt bhi uske sharir se wo adhbhudh AURA baahar nikal rahi thi....

mahal ke andar pravesh kar VIKRAM apne ghode se utra aur doudte hue aage badha...

age badhte hue VIKRAM har sainik ko kaaththa chala jaa raha tha....dekhte hi dekhte wahan khade har sainik ki laash bichti chali gayi....

kuch hi minutes me mahal ke lagbhag sabhi sainikon ke haath, pair ya gardan kat chuke the...

VIKRAM tezi se badhta hua mahal ke andar ghus gaya aur sidhe rajkumar ke shayan kaksh ki taraf doud pada...

shayan kaksh ka darwaza band tha jisse VIKRAM ne ek zor ki laat maari aur aisa hote hi wo bada sa darwaza ek jhatke me toot gaya...

darwaza tootne ke baad jaise hi VIKRAM ne andar ka nazara dekha toh.....

uski aankhen pathra gayi...wo jad sa hokar khada ho gaya...

reason...


jis ladki ko bachane VIKRAM yahan laashon ke dher bichata hua pahuncha tha,wo ladki neeche zamin par padi hui thi aur uski aankhe palat chuki thi jiska arth tha ki uske gale ko ghot diya gaya tha...

us ladki ke sharir me lesh maatra ka kapda bhi nahi tha jiska arth tha ki usse maarne se pehle uski izzat,uski azmat ko loot liya gaya tha....

wahin darwaze ke yun tootne se rajkumar jo abhi nanga hi tha,wo hadbada gaya tha aur jab usne apne saamne khoon se lathpath jo ki wahan ke sainikon ka tha,apne bhai ko dekha toh uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi...

wo soch hi raha tha ki kaise yahan se bachke nikla jaaye ki tabhi....


KHACHHHH.....

AAHHHH.......

ye dard bhari aah VIKRAM ki thi....

reason...

us ladki ki haalat ko dekh VIKRAM sab kuch bhul sa gaya tha jiska faayda uthathe hue ek sainik ne piche se uske peeth me talwar ghussa di jo sidhe uske pet se hote hue baahar nikal gayi....

wahin is scene ko dekh....


RAJKUMAR-shaabash sainik......ab iski gardan udda do....

khushi se khil utha tha rajkumar ka chehra jisse dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse ghusse se laal ho gayi....

is beech us sainik ne apni talwar wapas kheenchi aur VIKRAM ke gardan par chala di par tabhi....

VIKRAM tezi se jhuka aur turant palat gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

us sainik ki gardan piche ghum chuki thi....

gardan todne ke baad VIKRAM ne uski talwar uske haathon se li aur ek ke baad ek uske sharir ke ang kaaththa chala gaya....

peeche se ye sab rajkumar dekh raha tha aur uski buri tarah se fath gayi thi...

VIKRAM ki peeth uske taraf thi par usse pata tha ki uske paas itna samay nahi tha aur isiliye usne ek badi si chaadar ko apne body me lapeta aur bhaagta hua room se nikalne laga..

VIKRAM ke paas pahunch usne usse zor ka dhakka diya aur bhaagte hue apne pitah ke shayan kaksh ki taraf lapka....

par dhakka khaane ke baad jab VIKRAM aage girne laga toh ussi talwar ko aage rakh usne khud ko sambhala aur sidhe khade ho tezi se talwar Rajkumar ki taraf feka jo sidhe uske right hand ko faadta hua nikal gaya...

ek dardnaakh cheekh ke saath Rajkumar wahin gir gaya....

ab tak KING aur unki patni bhi baahar aa chuke the..apne bete ki ye haalat dekh unhe behad shock laga....

wo aage badhte usse pehle hi VIKRAM rajkumar tak pahunch chuka tha aur....

ek jhatke me usne wo talwar rajkumar ke haath se khinchi,usse ghumaya aur pehle,gardan, fir left aur right haath,fir pet aur fir rajkumar ke dono pair baari baari kaat diye.....

rajkumar ke khoon se naha gaya VIKRAM.....

is scene ko dekh jahan KING stabdh se rah gaye wahi queen toh behosh hi ho gayi.....

aur in sab se alag apne chote bhai ko maarne ke baad VIKRAM bhi apne ghutno par baith apne bhai ke kate hue ango ko ektak dekhne laga...

najane aisa kab tak hota rehta par tabhi....

khaachhhh..khachhh.....


do baar chali KING ki talwar VIKRAM ke peeth par jisse cheekhte hue wo hosh me aaya....

aur jaise hi KING ne firse talwar chalayi jiska isbaar nishana VIKRAM ka sir tha, VIKRAM neech jhuk gaya....

neech jhukte hue VIKRAM ne haath aage kar KING ke haathon se talwar ko jhatka diya aur agle hi pal wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....


VIKRAM-jaise bachpan me us nirdosh vyakti ki mout ka zimmedar mai tha ussi prakar aaj aapke putra ki hatya ke zimmedar aap hain....

jee toh karta hai ki mai aapko yahi maar dun par kya karun!!!bhulane par bhi mai ye baat nahi bhul sakta ki badkismati se aap mere pitah hain...


apni baat bol VIKRAM tezi se mahal ke bahar ki taraf lapka..

usse pata tha ki bhale hi usne apni pitah ko kuch nahi kiya par uske pitah ussse nahi chhodne waale...

waise toh kitne bhi sainik kyun naa aa jaayen, VIKRAM ko pata tha ki koi uska saamna nahi kar paayega kintu abhi wo bohot ghayal tha....

uski aankhen reh reh kar band ho rahi thi aur is haalat me wo zyada logon se ladh kar nahi jeet sakta tha...

isiliye VIKRAM apne ghode me baith mahal se nikal gaya aur jaisa usne socha tha,waisa hi hua...

uske mahal se nikalte nikalte KING ne apne kayi sipahiyon ko VIKRAM ko maar dene ka hukm diya jiske baad wo sabhi sainik VIKRAM ke peeche ho liye....

wahin VIKRAM jo ki atyadhik khoon nikal jaane ki wajah se kaafi kamzor ho gaya tha,ghode par baithe baithe hi uski chetna jaane lagi aur wo ghode par lete lete hi behosh ho gaya....

wo ghoda tezi se aage badhta chala gaya aur ek jagah par jaakar rook gaya.....

kuch der baad VIKRAM ki aankhen khuli..usse behad dard ho raha tha...ussi haalat me usne un sainikon ki awaaz suni jo uske baare me hi baat karte hue usse dhund rahe the...

bojhil aankhon se VIKRAM ne dekha ki is waqt wo ek bade ae ghane ped ke piche hai aur jab uski nazar aage ki taraf gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan wahi chamatkari GUFA hai jisse ye PLANET bana...

us GUFA ko dekh VIKRAM ko aisa feel hua jaise wo GUFA usse pukar raha hai....

badhhawasi me ladhkhadate hue VIKRAM aage badha aur us GUFA ki taraf chal pada aur kuch hi palon me wo us gufa ke saamne tha...

usse us GUFA ke muhaane se behad tez urja feel ho rahi thi...par filhal VIKRAM ki haalat zyada sochne samajhne waali nahi thi aur isiliye...

VIKRAM ne GUFA ke andar jaane ke liye apne pair badhaye aur.....

uske sharir ko jhatka laga par wo baahar nahi fekaya balki gufa ke andar kheenchata hua chala gaya...

GUFA baahar se jitni badi dikh rahi thi,andar se usse bhi badi thi...par sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki VIKRAM ke sharir ka saara khoon is GUFA ke andar aane se gayab ho chuka tha....

uske sharir me lage ghaaw toh ab bhi the par uska dimag ab kaam kar raha tha....

gufa ke andar pahunch VIKRAM ko kisi ek disha se behad strong energy feel hui aur uske kadam ussi taraf badh gaye...

us disha me aage badhta VIKRAM ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan behad tez roshni chamak rahi thi...

dhadakte dil se VIKRAM aage badha..par jaise jaise VIKRAM aage badh raha tha,usse uski zindagi me ghati ab tak ki saari ghatnaayen yaad aa rahi thi..

un saari ghatnaon ko ek film ki tarah dobara jeeta hua VIKRAM us roshni ke behad paas aa gaya....

aisa hone par usne apna haath aage badhaya aur tabhi....

uske man ke bheetar ek saath do films chalne lagi..ek toh ussiki zindagi ki thi aur dusri ek dusri kahani thi.....

par un do films ke chalne ke baad aakhir me uska dimag blank ho gaya aur aisa hone ke kuch der baad VIKRAM ki mooh se kuch nikla aur......

ek ray nikal VIKRAM par pada jiske agle hi second wo jal kar raakh ho gaya....

VIKRAM ke marte hi wo GUFA kaampne lagi..sirf wo GUFA hi nahi,balki pura ZEAL PLANET hi kaampne laga tha...

planet ke saare baashinde is kampan ko feel kar apne bachav me alag alag jagah chuppne lage par mout se hide and seek khelna kisike bas me nahi hota aur wahi yahan hua....

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi minutes me pura ZEAL PLANET zamin ke andar dafan ho gaya....khatm ho gayi saari riyasaten,ujad gayi saari bastiyan aur naamoshinan mit gaya pure Planet se zindagi ka....

kuch minutes me hi ek living planet ek dead planet me badal chuka tha.....

bachi thi sirf wo CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke AURA se nikalta dhuan...



SCENE ENDS:-



WOOGER-ummid karta hun ki aapne saare drishyon ko dhyan se dekha hoga...agar koi sawal hai toh aap puch sakte hain...

MAI-ye aakhri me VIKRAM ke dimag me jo dusra scene chal raha tha,wo clear kyun nahi dikh raha tha...

WOOGER-question paper exams ke waqt hi milte hain,usse pehle nahi....

agar aapka waqt aaya,toh wo drishya aapko dikh jaayega....

aur koi sawal....???

MAI-RENAISS chalen...???


meri baat sun WOOGER se ek urja nikal mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai gayab ho chuka tha...

gayab ho mai ek baar firse antariksh me tha par is baar mere saamne ek planet tha...meri manzil ki pehli sidhi


....RENAISS......

jiska shape normal planet ki tarah naa hokar ek BRAIN ki tarah tha....

mai thik RENAISS ke atmosphere ke baahar chupchaap khada tha ki tabhi....


RENAISS-agar jawab galat hua toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah tum bhi raakh hi jaaoge....isiliye agar chaaho toh lout sakte ho.....

MAI-sawal puch.....


meri baat sun kuch der tak khamoshi rahi par fir pucha kiya mujhse mera sawal......


RENAISS-VIKRAM ki mout kyun hui....???


MAI-hunar se,hunar se mili taakat se,manzilen haasil nahi hoti.... FAISLE......CHUNAW.....DECISION....

inhi ke sahi chayan se hi ek raahgir ko raasta,aur us raaste ko uski manzil milti hai....

VIKRAM ne sab kuch sahi kiya,bas FAISLA galat le liya......


mere jawab ke baad ek baar firse khaamoshi chhaa gayi par ye sirf ek second ke liye hi tha kyunki agle hi pal....

RENAISS planet se ek ray nikal jo ki ek rope thi,mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai RENAISS ke atmosphere ke andar kheenchata chala gaya....

aur in sabka samooh arth tha ki finally, its time to.....


........UNFOLD THE RAAZ..........







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V....J......

Very nice update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WHIZZ MARILIZA SAVENTS KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE MISSING HONE KI NEWS DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF SAHI JAWAB DEKAR RAAZ RENAISS PLANET ME ENTER KAR JAATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-39



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




WHAT!!!!!YE KYA BOL RAHE HO TUM DONO....???


MAHI aur ALFREEN ne jab FLORIN ko school me hue anouncement ki baat batayi toh wo behad shock ho gaye...

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ ke missing hone ki wajah se aaj first PHASE ke sabhi classes off kar diye gaye the....

aur isiliye INSTITUTION se MAHI aur ALFREEN ke ghar aa gaye aur hall me baithe FLORIN ko ye news di....

wahin FLORIN ki pratikriya zara loud thi jisse sun MARIA bhi unke paas aa gayi aur...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???itne pareshan kyun lag rahe ho...???aur ALFREEN, MAHI,tum dono INSTITUTION se itni jaldi kaise aa gaye???


MARIA ke sawal par jab MAHI ne unhe unke jaldi wapas aane ka kaaran bataya toh FLORIN ki hi tarah MARIA bhi hairan aur pareshan ho gayi....


MARIA-oh god...!!!ye achanak kya ho gaya????

FLORIN-kya nahi MARIA,sochne ki baat toh ye hai ki ye sab kaise ho gaya....???

naa ye PLANET aam hai aur naahi wo INSTITUTION jahan bacche padhte hain...fir ye sab kaise ho sakta hai...???

MARIA-haan...jis jagah par sirf bolne bhar se zaroorat ki har chiz apne aap aa jaati hai waisi jagah se koi missing kaise ho sakta hai..???

FLORIN-aur wo bhi students...jinki wajah se hi ye PLANET aur ye INSTITUTION bana hai...

aisi jagah par aisa kuch bhi ho sakta hai, believe nahi hota...

ALFREEN-par yahi hua hai pops....and no body has any clue ki ye sab hua kaise...???bas aage se aisa naa ho,iske kade intezam kiye gaye hain....


ALFREEN ki baat sunane ke baad bhi FLORIN aur MARIA ne kuch nahi kaha....unke aankhon me RAAZ ka chehra ghumne laga tha jiski wajah se unki aankhen halki nam ho gayi thi jisse dekh ALFREEN aur MAHI dono ko hi bura laga...

ALFREEN kuch kehne ko hui par MAHI ne uske kandhe par haath rakh usse bolne se rok diya kyunki usse dar tha ki kahin ALFREEN kuch aisa naa kehde jisse uske mom dad ko aur zyada bura lagne lage...


MAHI-uncle,aunty....please, zyada mat sochiye kyunki isse koi faayda nahi hoga....

jo hua,wo kisike control me nahi tha but i am sure,saare WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS is baare me kisi na kisi tarah pata lagakar RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dhund hi lenge...

MAHI ne jo kaha,us baat ka usse khud bharosa nahi tha par filhal FLORIN aur MARIA ke man ko shant karne ke kiye usne ye keh diya...

wahin MARIA aur FLORIN ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi bura laga tha par unki aankhen sirf RAAZ ke liye hi bheegi thi aur isiliye....


FLORIN-kaise nahi sochen...haan ye sach hai ki RAAZ hamara apna baccha nahi tha,ye bhi sach hai ki wo hume yaa kisi aur ko apna nahi samajhta tha par ek sach ye bhi hai ki wo hum dono hi hain,jisne usse pehli baar godh me liya tha...

uski pehli diapar MARIA ne change ki thi....wo apne pairon par chal sake,iske liye humne usse sahara diya tha...


diaper waali baat sun MARIA muskurayi aur....

MARIA-pata hai,wo life me kabhi nahi muskuraya aur naahi kabhi roya...tab bhi nahi jab wo ek nanha sa baby tha aur usme koi samajh nahi thi....

yahan tak ki jab usse vaccinations lagte the,tab bhi wo chup hi rehta tha....

hum dono ghanto usse dekhte rehte the sirf isiliye taaki uska hasna,muskurana ya fir rona hi dekh sake...

par aisa kabhi hua hi nahi...par in sabme hamara uske prati lagaav kaafi badh gaya tha..

usne sidhe mooh humse kabhi bhi baat nahi ki,par hume tab bhi wo bohot pasand tha...

shayad isiliye kyunki wo sabse alag tha...ajeeb tha par phir bhi hamare liye khaas tha...


ek trance me khoye hue se FLORIN aur MARIA ne ye saari baatein kahi thi jisse sun MAHI ko bhi bohot bura lagne laga...

par saath hi unki baatein sun MAHI ke dil me un dono ke prati izzat aur badh gayi aur isiliye....


MAHI-uncle,aunty...i must say,aap dono ek ache mom dad toh ho hi par usse bhi ache aap dono human beings ho....


MAHI ki baat sun uske sir par pyar bhara haath fer MARIA aur FLORIN bina kuch kahe apne room ki taraf chal diye...

MAHI aur ALFREEN,dono ko hi maalum tha ki is waqt dono kaafi upset hain aur isiliye hi wo dono bhi chupchaap unhe jaata dekhti rahi..

aur jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN apne room me ghusse....


MAHI-ab bata AL.....!!!!baat kya hai....???


MAHI ne ALFREEN ke taraf palaththe hue ye baat kahi jisse sun ALFREEN hadbada gayi....


ALFREEN-baat!!!kaisi baat???


khudko sambhalte hue ALFREEN ne ye kaha jisse sun...


MAHI-RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gayab hone ki news sun jahan hum sabhi SAVENTS ke chehre par hairani thi,wahin tere chehre par dar tha....

aur mai yahi puch rahi hun...???kyun dari hui thi tu...kahin in sabse tera koi connection toh nahi hai...???

ALFREEN-tu bhi naa,kuch bhi sochti hai...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai,aur bhala mai kyun kisi baat se darne lagi....????


sidhe aur sapaat tarah se ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi par ye sab kehte waqt usne MAHI se nazre nahi milayi jisse MAHI samajh gayi ki ALFREEN jhooth bol rahi hai...


MAHI-mujhe laga tha ki hum best friends hain,infact sisiters hain...par shayad mai galat thi kyunki best friends me,sisters me secrets nahi hote....


jahan ye bol MAHI apne ABODE jaane ke kiye palat gayi wahin uski baatein ALFREEN ke sidhe dil me lagi aur isiliye usne turant MAHI ka haath pakad liya...

MAHI ne jab wapas palat kar dekha toh paaya ki ALFREEN ki aankhen bheegi hui thi....

MAHI turant aage badhi aur ALFREEN ke gale lag gayi...

kuch der tak yunhi gale lagne ke baad jab ALFREEN normal hui toh MAHI se alag ho...


ALFREEN-tu sahi keh rahi hai...thoda sa hi sahi,par RAAZ ke saath jo hua,usse mera connection hai....

darasal jis din mera soul 1 percent AMPLIFY hua tha,ussi raat mujhe fir se wahi sapna aaya tha ki RAAZ ne mere mom dad ko mere aankhon ke saamne maar diya tha....

jiski wajah se mai ek baar firse kaafi bechain ho gayi thi....

aur fir kal SWEEP-STAKE ke waqt.......


uske baad ALFREEN ne kal usne kya dekha aur fir kya kya kiya,wo saari baat MAHI ko batayi jisse sun MAHI hairan ho gayi....


MAHI-tu bhi naa,ek number ki idiot hai...agar uncle, aunty apne stand me nahi the aur ussi waqt wo RAAZ bhi gayab tha toh iska matlab ye thodi naa hai ki usne uncle,aunty ke saath kuch kiya hoga....

ALFREEN-ye jaanti hun mai..par maine bataya naa us sapne ke baare me isiliye mera dimag ussi taraf jaa raha tha...

uske upar jab maine us RAAZ se apne mom dad ke baare me pucha toh usne bhi ulta hi jawab diya jiski wajah se mera ghussa aur badh gaya aur maine uspar ray chhod di..

par us waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER uske paas aa gaye the...aur jab unhone kaha ki mere mom dad apne stand me hain,uske baad mai wapas lout aayi...

uske baad un teeno ke saath kya hua,ye mai bilkul nahi jaanti....aur aaj jab un teeno ke missing hone ki baat batayi gayi,toh kal mere us RAAZ par kiye waar ko yaad kar mai halki dar gayi thi...

but teri kasam MAHI,us hamle me wo niche zaroor gira tha,usse taklif bhi bohot hui thi par fir bhi wo thik hi tha....

aur un teeno ke missing hone me bhi mera koi haath nahi hai....


aakhri baat bolte hue ALFREEN ki aankhen ek baar firse bheeg gayi thi jisse dekh MAHI ne uske aankhe saaf ki aur....


MAHI-tujhe kasam khaane ki zaroorat nahi hai... i know ki tu thodi ziddi hai,thodi bewakuf bhi hai par aisa kuch tu kabhi nahi kar sakti...

ALFREEN-haan MAHI......ek minute.... kya kaha tune,mai ziddi hun,bewakuf hun....

MAHI-dekh,tune bhi maan liya naa....

ALFREEN-teri aisi ki taisi....rook,batati hu tujhe...


MAHI ki baat se ALFREEN ka bigda mood thik ho jaaye isiliye hi MAHI ne ye sab kaha tha...

apni baat bol hasti hui MAHI bhaag gayi aur uske piche apne chehre par muskaan liye bhaagi ALFREEN.....

yahan ye dono apno duniya me mast ho gayi thi wahin RENAISS naam ki ek dusri duniya me.....




PLANET-RENAISS


PLACE-A FLEXIBLE SURFACE




YE ZAMIN HAI YAA KOI MATTRESS...!!!!


RENAISS ka surface behad flexible tha jispar kadam rakhte hi mere pair halke neeche ghus gaye jiski wajah se maine ye baat kahi par tabhi....


YE ZAMIN ZAMIN HOKAR BHI NAHI HAI..DHYAN SE DEKHIYE,SAMAJH ME AA JAAYEGA.....


ek tez awaaz mere kaano me gunj uthi jo ki WOOGER ke ussi urja ki hi thi....

wo mere saamne toh nahi tha par mera CONSCIOUS brain usse is planet ke har jagah par feel kar paa raha tha....

usne jo kaha usse sun maine chaaron taraf apni nazaren ghumayi....

ek viran sa planet jahan kisi suraj ki roshni nahi thi par iske baawjud jahan tak meri nazar jaa rahi thi,wahan tak behad tez roshni se pura area chamak raha tha....

har thodi door par beech beech me halki laal rang ki lambi lambi anthin rekhayen beechi thi is pure jagah par...

lachila surface hone ki wajah se behad dheere aage ki taraf kadam badhaya maine aur chalte hue mujhse thode aage beechi ek rekha ke paas pahunch usse dhyan se dekhne ke liye jhuk gaya....

dhyan se dekhne par mujhe un rekhaon ke beech halki halki movements nazar aayi jinhe dekh maine unhe chhune ke liye haath aage badhaya aur jaise hi maine uss rekha ko chhua toh....


AAHHH......


mere dimag me ek tez jhatka laga wahin mere dwara chhue jaane se wo halki laal rekha aur uske saath dikh rahi saari rekhayon me halke vibrations hone lage...

aisa laga maano wo saari rekhayen soyi hui thi par mere haath lagane se ab jaag gayi thi....

sabhi rekhon se mujhe behad tez urja ki anubhuti ho rahi thi...

mere dimag me jo jhatka laga tha,usse mujhe sirf taklif hi nahi hui thi. balki mere CONSCIOUS brain ne bhi jaise kaam karna shuru kar diya tha aur ye mai isiliye keh sakta hun kyunki WOOGER ki urja ka wo kathan ki ye zamin hokar bhi zamin nahi hai,is baat ka matlab mai samajh gaya tha aur isiliye....


MAI-ye zamin nahi,ye toh ek BRAIN hai......

WOOGER-bilkul sahi...par ye ek brain nahi,balki aadha brain hai... SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN....aapke adhure dimag ka missing part....

MAI-waah..logon ke dimag chalte hain,aur ek mai hun jo apne hi dimag par chal raha hai...gazab.....

WOOGER-jisse rekha samajh aapne chhua tha,wo aapke CONSCIOUS brain ka nerve hai jo aapke chhune se satark ho gaya hai...

ye jagah,ye brain aapko pehchaan toh gaya hai par aur apnana abhi baaki hai.....

ye jagah bhale hi ek dead Planet hai,par kyunki ye jeeta jaagta BRAIN hai, isiliye iske paas apni soch hai jiski wajah se ye apne astitva ko bachaye rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karega...

isiliye satark rahiye....aapka brain aaapko apnaye,iske liye aapko apna worth,apna saamartya saabit karna hoga....

MAI-tum saamne kyun nahi aa rahe...???

WOOGER-mai aapke chaaron missing organs ka hi hissa hun...urja hun...is pure Planet me aur iske saath baaki ke teeno planet me mai faila hua hun...

jab aap apne chaaron parts ko paa sampuranta haasil kar lenge,tabhi mai aapke saamne aaunga...


ab baat karne ke liye kuch tha nahi aur isiliye mai aage badha...un rekhaon me ho rahi vibrations abtak kaafi badh gayi thi aur jaise hi maine apne kadam aage badhaye.....

un rekhaon me se urja roopi rays nikli jinhone tezi se aage badhte hue mujhe jakad liya aur aisa hote hi.....

mujhe behad tez jhatke lagne shuru ho gaye..par ajeebo garib aur kamal ki baat ye thi ki un rays ne mere sharir ko jakda tha par jhatke mujhe mere CONSCIOUS brain me lag rahe the...

aur wo bhi behad tez...mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mere sir ke andar mera brain baar baar jal ke raakh ho raha ho.....

kehte hain ki jab aapka sharir,yaa aapka dimag kisi taklif ko naa seh paaye toh aap behosh ho jaate hain...

aur yahi mere saath hua....10 se 12 jhatkon tak hi mera dimag un jhatkon ko seh paaya par uske baad meri aankhen band ho gayi aur mai khada khada hi behosh ho gaya.....

mere behosh hote hi
wo rays jinhone mujhe jakda tha,mujhe release kar diya aur wapas un rekhaon me jo ki mere hi SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke nerves the,unme sama gaye....

wahin release hote hi mera unconscious sharir lehrata hua neeche zamin numa brain ke surface par gir gaya.....



DREAM:-



AB YE KAUN SI JAGAH HAI???


mai behosh ho chuka tha..par mere behosh hote hi mera CONSCIOUS brain ek alag hi jagah pahunch gaya tha...

ek andheri jagah....har taraf ghanghor andhera tha..kuch bhi dikh nahi raha tha..mai yahan wahan nazaren ghuma kuch bhi dekh sakun,ye koshish kar raha tha aur aisa karte hue meri nazar niche gayi aur....


MAI-ye kya jagmaga raha hai....???


maine jab neeche dekha toh paaya ki ek behad hi halki urja rook rook kar jagmaga rahi hai....

us urja ko dhyan se dekhne ke liye mai neeche jhuka...

us urja ke jagmagane aur bujhne ke beech ek aisa time aata tha,jab wo chiz jisse wo urja nikal rahi thi,wo dikhti thi...

par ye sab behad kam samay ke liye hota tha...aur isiliye mai pure focus ke saath us chiz ko dekhne laga....jal, bujh,jal, bujh ki kuch prakriya ke baad aakhir mujhe wo chiz dikh hi gayi jisse dekh....


MAI-ye toh,,,oh shit....ye toh ek BRAIN hai....


yahan maine ye kaha,wahan wo urja se lipti behad choti si brain jo ki RENAISS PLANET ka hi ek chota sa roop thi,usme ek visphot hua aur aisa hote hi....

mujhe hosh aa gaya.......

ek jhatke me meri aankh khuli...aankh khulte hi maine paaya ki un urja roopi rays ne mujhe chhod diya hai....

behoshi me dikhe sapne ke baare me sochte hue mai khada hua aur jaise hi maine apne kadam aage badhaye toh.....

ek baar firse un rekhayen roopi nerves se rays nikli aur agle hi pal mai fir unme jakda hua tha....

is baar mera dimag bas 3 ya 4 jhatke hi jhel paaya aur mai firse behosh ho gaya...

jaisa pehle hua tha,mere behosh hote hi un rays ne mujhe chhod diya jisse mai wapas neeche gir gaya aur....



DREAM:-


YE KAISA EXPANSION HAI...????


jahan se mujhe hosh aaya tha,is baar mera sapna wahi se shuru hua jab mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki wo jalti bujhti chiz asal me brain hai....

ek pathrili zamin par jagmati wo tiny brain mere kehte hi badi hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo brain expand hoti chali gayi....

expand hote waqt wo brain sirf jal rahi thi,bujh nahi rahi thi...aur ussi ujale me har taraf ka scene clear ho gaya...

maine dekha ki mai ek red pathrili zamin ke upar khada hun jo ki ek dead planet ka surface hai aur wo brain expand hoti hui us pure planet ko cover karti chali jaa rahi hai...

kuch hi minutes me us brain ne us pure planet ke khudme lapet liya tha aur aisa hote hi....

ek baar firse wo brain jo dekha jaaye toh ab pura planet tha,jal bujh jal bujh hone laga...

par ye kriya bas kuch seconds ke liye hi chali aur fir ek baar zor se jalne ke baad har taraf andhera chaa gaya....

kuch palon tak complete andhera chhaane ke baad mujhe apne se thodi door ek halki si roshni ki urja dikhayi di jisse dekh mai uski taraf badhne ko hua par tabhi...

mere brain ko tez jhatka laga jiske baad mujhe ek baar firse hosh aa gaya....

hosh me aate hi maine dekha ki ek baar firse un rays ne mujhe chhod diya tha..

ab mujhe lagne laga tha ki un rays ka kaam mujhe aage badhne se rokna hai....

toh ab sawal tha ki kiya kya jaaye...????


JISKI NAZAR JITNI DOOR TAK JAATI HAI,USKA LAKSHYA UTNA HI CLEAR HO JAATA HAI...


SELF BRAWL competition ke baad class me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi ye baat mere dimag me gunj uthi...

bhale hi mai us class me yaa fir kisi bhi class me nahi tha,par mere CONSCIOUS brain ke CHOSENS me faile hone ki wajah se maine indirectly hi sahi par har class attend ki thi....

har buddhiman vyakti me ek common but khaas baat hoti hai aur wo ye ki wo har kisise sikhta hai...

kyunki usse maalum hota hai ki ek band ghadi bhi din me do baar sahi waqt dikhati hai....

VIOLET WHIZZ ki us baat ne mere dimag me ghar kiya hua tha aur aaj jab wo words mere andar gunje toh...


MAI-ho naa ho,par jo mujhe karna hai,uska RAAZ mere behosh hone ke baad aa rahe sapne me hi hain...

badhiya,matlab jhatke khaane hi padenge.....


ek lambi saans chhod maine apne kadam aage badhaye jiske baad jo hota aa raha hai,wahi hua...

un nerves se rays nikli aur mujhe jakad liya...mere dimag ko jhatke lage aur mai out.....



DEEAM:-


IS BAAR TOH KUCH ALAG NAHI HUA....???


har taraf andhera tha bas mujhse thodi door ek choti aur halki si urja ki roshni jagmaga rahi thi aur jaise hi mai aage badhne ko hua,mujhe laga jhatka aur mai back to pavilion.....


MAI-saala ajeeb hai..jhatke lagne se behosh ho raha hun aur jhatke lagne se hi wapas hosh me aa raha hun...


kuch der tak chup chaap khade rehne ke baad mai ek baar firse aage badha aur mere aisa karne se jaisa ab tak hota aaya hai,wahi hua...

lagne waale jhatkon se mai behosh hua aur fir sapne me lagne waale jhatke se mujhe hosh aaya....

kaafi baar mai same process repeat karta raha jiska result bhi same hi aata raha....


MAI-kuch toh miss kar raha hun mai...par kya???


maine apni aakhen band ki aur jo kuch bhi mere saath ho raha hai,yaa fir ab tak ho chuka hai,usse reverse me sochne laga....

RENAISS me aana,usse pehle ZEAL me drishyam dekhna, usse pehle FORBIDDEN FOREST,GASTON aur DORIAN,ALFREEN, SWEEP-STAKE,HOSTEL, CHOSEN'S,CLASSES......


CLASSES..........


yahan aate hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maara maine apne sir par haath....


MAI-itne common equation ko kitna khaas bana diya tha maine....mai kaise bhul gaya ki mai BRAIN me hun....

aur wo bhi ek SUBCONSCIOUS brain me aur jab tak ek SUBCONSCIOUS brain stimulate nahi hota, CONSCIOUS brain ke saath wo jud nahi jaata,tab tak CONSCIOUS brain ko jhatka hi lagega...

ab samajh me aaya ki mujhe 1st PHASE ki classes attend kyun nahi karne ko kaha tha us WOOGER ne,meri wo classes toh yahan lagne waali hain...

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko haasil karne ke liye mujhe brain AMPLIFICATION ki class ke process ko access karna hoga...


bina class jaaye bhi class me ho rahi gatividhiyon par nazar rakhne ka kaaran mujhe pata chal gaya tha...

par saath hi mai ye bhi jaan gaya tha ki meri ye class,ye imtihaan thodi alag aur kaafi mushkil hone waali hai kyunki jahan sabhi SAVENTS apne apne cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad apne brain ko AMPLIFY karne ki koshish karte hain aur issi beech unhe jhatke lagte hain wahin mujhe pehle jhatke lagne waale the aur wo bhi baakiyon se 100 times zyada powerful jhatke aur unhi jhakton ko jhelte hue mujhe apne CEREBRATION process ko pause karna tha....


par itna fark toh zaroori tha kyunki naa mai koi normal SAVENT tha aur naahi mera BRAIN kisi aur SAVENT ki tarah tha...

level toh upar hona hi tha....


mai......RAAZ.......wo secret jiske ab tak ke khule panne me sirf MAAMULI aur SADHARAN likha tha par ab......



har KHAAS mere aage MAAMULI HONE waala tha...

is ADHYAY ko khatm kar mai ek naya ADHYAY LAANE waala tha...

bijliyan toh bohot kadki hain,
par mai toh woh VAJR GIRANE waala tha,

ki kahani jo ab tak apne hisaab
se chali hai,
usse ab mai apne hisaab se CHALAANE waala tha......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V....J......

Very nice update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN MAHI KO RAAZ KE SAATH HUI JHADAP KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO RENAISS PLANET ME APNE MISSING SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN KO HAASIL KARNE KA TARIKA SAMAJH ME AA JAATA HAI.



AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-40



PLANET-RENAISS


PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE




SETU BEDHIN....

BREAKING DOWN BARRIERS.....


BOOM...............


un rays ki jakdan ke beech behad tez dard ko sehte hue maine apni aankhen band ki aur jaise taise khudke CONSCIOUS brain me jhaankte hue apni life ka pehla spell uccharit kiya jiske baad pura PLANET ek dhamake ki awaaz se gunj utha.....

waise yaad toh hoga hi aap sabko ye spell..ye wahi spell tha jisse chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne sabhi SAVENTS ke conscious brain aur subconsious brain ke beech ki barrier ko todne ke liye bola tha par tab mere paas sirf mera conscious brain hi tha jiski wajah se is spell ka mujhpar koi asar nahi pada tha...

waise toh aaj bhi mere dimag ke andar sirf mera CONSCIOUS brain hi active tha par fir bhi,mere andar naa sahi par mere aas paas toh mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain tha hi aur jin rays ne mujhe jakda tha,un rays se wo brain connected tha jiska matlab tha ki indirectly hi sahi par mere brain ka wo hissa is waqt mujhse bhi connected tha....

par ek aur sabse important baat ye bhi thi ki bhale hi mai apne SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke paas tha,abhi usse bhi connected tha par uske aur mere CONSCIOUS brain ke beech ab bhi ek BARRIER tha jisse mujhe todna tha aur isiliye hi maine is spell ko uccharit kiya aur jaise hi maine ye kiya toh pure planet me ek tez dhamaka hua.....

darasal mere spell ko uccharit karte hi mere CONSCIOUS brain se ek urja nikli aur sidhe un rays ke andar ghus gayi jinhone mujhe jakda hua tha....

un rays ke andar hoti hui wo urja un rekhayen numa nerves me chali gayi aur aisa hote hi is planet me jo ki mera brain hi tha,usme bichhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke asankhya nerves me ek kampan hone lagi aur fir kuch der baad jab mere CONSCIOUS brain ki urja mere brain ke saare nerves me puri tarah se samayi toh hua ek tez dhamaka....

jiska matlab tha ki mere CONSCIOUS brain aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke beech ka barrier toot chuka tha....

is dhamake se do chizen hui...

pehli toh jin rays ne mujhe jakda hua tha,unhone mujhe chhod diya aur wo isiliye kyunki ab tak mera connection is planet se sirf un rays ke through juda tha jaise koi usb chord do devices ko jodta hai par ab kyunki mera conscious brain mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha, isiliye ab meri compatibility is planet ke saath kisi Bluetooth ki tarah ho gayi thi...

WIRELESS.....

aur dusri baat jo hui thi wo ye thi ki pehle mai un rays ke jakdan ki wajah se behosh hota tha par ab mere dono brains ke judne aur uski wajah se jo energy realise hui,uski wajah se behosh ho gaya tha....

aur ye koi maamuli behoshi nahi thi....is achahank hue connection ki wajah se mera pura dimag asthir ho gaya tha jisse sthir hone me waqt lagne waala tha aur isiliye tab tak....




PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S




SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBHAVANITA

HOLD......


pure NEW BORNS ki class ne ek saath is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha jiske baad jo hota hai,wahi hua....

sabhi SAVENTS ne apni apni aankhen khol di par is uccharit kiye gaye spell ki wajah se sabhi ke brain,body aur blood connected hi rahe....


PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS


aankhen band kar dobara apne cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad jab sabko apne andar ek behad tivr gurutwakarshan waali ray dikhi toh sabne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad utha sabke andar wo aseem dard jisse sabhi zabt karne me lag gaye.....


aaj SWEEP-STAKE competition ko beete 1 hafta guzar chuka tha... competition se pehle ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya tha...

RAAZ ki baat yahan isiliye nahi hui kyunki usne toh class hi attend nahi ki thi jiski wajah se filhal usse NEWBORNS ka hissa nahi kaha jaa sakta tha...

khair,is ek hafte me sabhi SAVENTS ne apne soul ke first percent ko AMPLIFY karne ki bohot koshish ki par har baar aisa karne ke waqt uththa dard unki koshish se jeet jaaya karta tha aur abhi bhi wahi hua...

spell uccharit karne ke baad jo hamesha se hota chala jaa raha tha,wahi ab bhi hua....

sabhi SAVENTS ko apna sharir andar se kheenchata hua sa mehsoos hua jisse paida hui asahaniya peeda jiski wajah se teen SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ki aankhen khul gayi....

MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI jinke cerebration process ab bhi paused the,wo apne andar ho rahe asahaniya pida ko sehte hue apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me lage rahe...

ye dagar ALFREEN aur MABEL ke liye kathin thi par MAHI ka case toh aur mushkil tha...

kyunki jahan MABEL aur ALFREEN ko 1 se 2 percent AMPLIFICATION me pahunchne ke liye 10 minute ke pause cerebration process se guzarna tha wahin 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad isse 3 percent tak trigger karne ke liye MAHI ko un dono se double,20 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna tha..

par MAHI ko ek advantage bhi tha aur wo ye ki kyunki usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha isiliye uska sharir,dimag aur khoon, teeno ki shakti bhi kaafi badh gayi thi jisse MAHI ki sehensheelta par bhi asar aaya tha...

ab MAHI zyada se zyada dard sehne ke kaabil ho gayi thi aur isiliye jahan ek taraf MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhen 6 se 7 minute tak hi apne cerebration process ko pause rakhne ke baad khul gayi wahin MAHI 15 minute se zyada der tak aisa karti rahi par fir usne bhi apni aankhen khol di....

SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ka ye daur kaafi mushkil aur lamba chalne waala tha jisme halki si bhi improvement ya vriddhi aaj ya near future me hone waali thi nahi aur isiliye.....



I MONTH LATER:-



WELL DONE MAHI........ek baar fir tum apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hui......


ye baat bolte waqt VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par behad khushi dikh rahi thi.. sirf unki hi nahi balki unke saath khade OMMIN aur NOX bhi bohot khush dikh rahe the....

OPHILIA WHIZZ ka naam isiliye nahi aaya kyunki wo is class me thi hi nahi...

reason...

ek SAVENT jiska naam BROWNY tha,usne abhi tak apne SOUL ko trigger nahi kiya tha aur issi wajah se uski class OPHILIA WHIZZ ke dekh rekh me alag lagti thi...

OPHILIA WHIZZ har mumkin koshish kar rahi thi taaki BROWNY ka SOUL trigger ho jaaye par abhi tak wo kaamiyab nahi ho paayi thi...

khair, MAHI ne aaj apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha jiski wajah se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS kaafi khush the aur unse bhi zyada khush the ALFREEN aur MABEL jo MAHI ke baaju me khade hokar usse badhayi de rahe the....

un dono ne baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi MAHI ko badhayi di...aaj ki class ka waqt khatm hone waala tha jisse VIOLET WHIZZ batane hi waali thi ki tabhi...


MAHI- WHIZZ,i have a question..???

VIOLET-pucho....

MAHI-kya SOUL ke har percent AMPLIFICATION ke baad agle AMPLIFICATION ke liye double time lagta hai....!!!


MAHI ne ye isiliye picha kyunki 2nd percent AMPLIFICATION ke liye usse 10 minute ka waqt laga tha aur 3rd ke liye 20 minute....


VIOLET-nahi MAHI...sirf 5 percent AMPLIFICATION tak time me addition hota hai,uske baad nahi...

tumhare agle AMPLIFICATION matlab 4th percent ke liye tumhe 40 minutes tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padega aur 5th percent ke liye pure 60 minutes matlab 1 ghante tak tumhe ye karna hoga...

par ek baar tum 5 percent of AMPLIFICATION ko touch kar gayi toh uske baad har AMPLIFICATION ke liye utna hi waqt lagta hai,usse zyada nahi....

par haan, bhale hi 5 percent ke baad time addition band ho jaata hai par iska ye matlab nahi ki chunouti ya taklif ka daayra bhi rook gaya hai....

6th percent se tumhe pain ke saath ek nayi chunouti ka saamna karna padega jo har percent ke saath AMPLIFY hoti chali jaayengi...

MAHI-kaisi chunouti WHIZZ...????

VIOLET-whats the hurry MAHI...??? pehle 5 percent tak toh pahunch jaao..uske baad kya hota hai,ye uske baad hi pata chalega..

filhal enjoy your success....class dismiss....


yahan in sabki class khatm hui aur wahan.....




PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE



YE MERA SIR iTNA BHAARI KYUN LAG RAHA HAI...????


uththe hi apne sir ko pakadte hue kaha maine....

maine dhyan diya ki ye bhaaripan bhale hi mera pura sir feel kar raha hai par is dard ki neev mere sir ke peeche ke part se hai....

sir bhaari lagna bohot hi normal baat hai khaas kar tab jab aap kisi behoshi se uthe hon par mere case me ye baat bhi normal nahi thi kyunki aaj se pehle maine aisa kuch kabhi feel kiya nahi tha...

ek baat aur thi jo mai mehsoos kar raha tha aur wo ye ki mai is baar kaafi der tak behosh ho gaya tha...

mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi.....

mere dimag ke piche ki side me ek jhatka sa laga jisse mere aage ke brain me jo ki mera CONSCIOUS brain tha,usme ek bijli si koundhi aur....


MAI-ek mahine se behosh tha mai......

ye shabd nikle mere mooh se....

reason....

jo jhatka mujhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me laga tha,wo jhatka yahi information thi jo usne mere CONSCIOUS brain ko di thi....

is ganit ko samajhne ke baad mai ek aur baat samajh gaya tha aur wo ye ki meri behoshi ka kaaran mere brains ke beech create hui instability thi jo ab kaafi hadh tak stable ho chuki thi aur issi wajah se mujhe hosh bhi aa chuka tha....

aur jo ye bhaaripan mai mehsoos kar raha tha,ye isiliye tha kyunki abhi mere SUBCONSCIOUS aur CONSCIOUS brain ke beech bas ek connection hua tha,dono ek nahi hue the...yahi mera task tha aur isiliye....


mai apni jagah par baith gaya...aaj pehli baar mai imaandari se apne BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class me shirkat lene waala tha....

aakhhen band kar maine apne brain me jhaankte hue apni CEREBRATION process ko pause karna shuru kiya aur mere aisa karte hi....

planet ka surface jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain ka outer layer tha,usne ek tagda jhatka maara jiski wajah se mai kaafi feet hawa me ucchal gaya....

udta hua sa mai upar gaya aur ulta hota hua sir ke bal mai neeche gira....

SURFACE ke flexible hone ji wajah se mere sir ko chot toh nahi lagi par haan,mera bhaari ho rahe sir ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se meri aankhen khul gayi.....

aankh khulte hi maine dekha pure planet ke nerves behad tezi se chamak rahe the aur unse hi vibrations create ho rahi thi par kyunki ab meri aankhen khul gayi thi isiliye dheere dheere wo chamak aur vibrations kam hone lagi aur fir khatm gayi....


MAI- cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad SAVENTS ko jhatke lagte the,aur wo bhi sirf dimag ke andar par mere toh andar bhi dimag hai aur baahar bhi...

toh jhatke bhi do alag alag types ke lagne hain....waah,challenge at it's best....

mera hi dimag,mujhse hi khel raha hai....chalo fir,khelte hain....


ek baar firse mai neeche baitha aur apni aankhen band kar li...

aakhen band karte hi maine apne brain me jhaankna shuru kiya jiske baad jo pichli baar hua tha,wo is baar bhi hua....

mai jahan baitha tha,us surface ne mujhe jhatka dete hue upar ucchal diya aur fir kuch der baad jab mai apne sir ke bal neeche gira toh mere sir ko ek jhatka laga par is baar maine apni aakhen nahi kholi...

mere jabde aapas me bhide hue the aur mai lagatar apne brain me jhaankte hue us ray ki talash me tha jo mere CONSCIOUS aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ko ek karne waala tha.....

wahin jab maine apni aakhen nahi kholi toh un rekhayen numa nerves se kuch saanp ki shape ki rays nikal
meri taraf badh gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte un rays ne mujhe lapetna shuru kar diya aur aisa hote hi mere brain me jaise blast hone lage....

meri band aankhon ki putiyan tak vibrate hone lagi thi in jhatkon se par fir bhi maine kaafi koshish ki in jhatkon ko sehne ki....

jab un rays ne dekha ki maine apni aakhen ab tak nahi kholi hai toh wo aage badhi aur mere brain se lipat gayi aur aisa hote hi 1000 times zyada impact ke saath mujhe jhatke lagne lage jiski wajah se finally meri ankhen khul hi gayi....

meri ankhen khulte hi un rays ne jinhone mujhe lapeta hua tha, khudko unwind karna shuru kar diya taaki wapas un nerves me sama sake....

par jaise hi un rays numa urja ne khudko unwind kiya aur wapas jaane ko hui....


MAI-maine jaane ko nahi kaha tumhe....khel aamne saamne rehkar khela jaata hai,chhup chhup kar nahi....


apni baat bol maine us ray ko jo ki solid form me thi,apne ek haath se pakad liya....

aur mere aisa karte hi ek baar firse mere brain ke peeche ki taraf jhatke lagne lage..itna hi nahi,planet par biche saare nerves bhi tez chamakne lage the jiski wajah se mere haathon me lipti ray me behte current ka volt bhi kaafi badh gaya tha par fir bhi maine usse chhoda nahi....

sthir aankhen aur jhatke lagne ki wajah se apne asthir body aur brain ke saath mai us ray ko pakde hi raha....

mere brain ke pichle hisse me behad tez jhatke lag rahe the jisse mujhe dard toh bohot ho hi raha tha par saath hi mera CONSCIOUS brain bhi tezi se doud raha tha aur tabhi.....

kuch click hua mujhe aur us ray ko pakde pakde hi maine apni aakhen band kar li aur saath hi pause karne laga apna CEREBRATION.....

par is baar maine kuch alag kiya...isse pehle mai apne CONSCIOUS brain me jhaakte hue aage badhta gaya tha par is baar maine apne brain ke pichle hisse jahan mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain hona chahiye tha,wahan se shuruat ki.....

aakhen band kar dard aur jhatkon ko zabt karte hue maine dekha ki mere brain ka wo hissa kisi andhere universe ki tarah dikh raha tha par mai bina dare is andhakar me utarta chala gaya aur yunhi aage badhte badhte achanak....

mujhe dikhi ek halki si jyoti...ye jyoti wahi judaaw tha,normal terms me kahun toh wo frequency thi jisse ye grah jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain se covered tha,mere CONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha....

us jyoti ko dekhte hi mai aage badha aur uski taraf jaane laga aur mere aisa karte hi......


KADKADKADKAD......


pure planet is zor ki awaaz se kaamp gaya...aisa lag raha tha maano kisi ghar me chori hone waali thi jiska pata uske maalik ko chal gaya tha aur wo is gustaakhi se behad naaraz ho gaya tha...

zor ki awaaz ke baad pure planets me jitne bhi rekhaysn numa nerves thi,unse behad shaktishali nerves nikli aur tezi se meri taraf badhi aur dekhte hi dekhte mai sir se paaon tak un rays me jakda jaa chuka tha.....

mujhe behad shaktishali jhatke dene ke saath saath un rays ne mere gale ko bhi lapet liya tha taaki mera dum ghut jaaye.....

aisi wickat aur dardnaak paristithi me jisme kisika saans lena tak dubhar ho jaata,mai apne brain ko shaant rakhe hue kisi tarah us jyoti ke kareeb jaane laga.....

jaise jaise mai us jyoti ke paas jaa raha tha,waise waise wo jyoti badi hoti jaa rahi thi aur fir.....

mujhe aur aage badhna nahi pada...mere brain aur pure body me lag rahe jhatkon ka andaza us jyoti ko bhi tha aur mere uske kareeb aate hi usse mere nishchayta ki dridhta ka andaza hua aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal wo jyoti ek jhatke se aage badhi aur.....

wo jyoti aage badh sidhe mere CONSCIOUS brain se takrayi aur aisa hote hi...

wo andheri universe achanak roshni se naha gayi.....

mere CONSCIOUS brain se takra wo jyoti wapas piche hati aur fir us jyoti me vibrations hone lagi jiske baad......

un roshni us jyoti ke beech se ek tez kampan ke beech kisi chiz ka maano janm hua...ye chiz aur kuch nahi balki meri SUBCONSCIOUS brain thi...

dheere dheere wo beej roopi SUBCONSCIOUS brain apne aakar ko badhati hui mere CONSCIOUS brain ke piche apna ghar banane lagi...

aur wahin apni aakhen band kiye mai sayad is bramhaand ka pehla aisa shaksh tha jo apne brain ko ugte dekh raha tha...

meri is soch ke beech kuch hi der me mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ne khud ko badhate hue pura kar liya aur aisa karne ke baad usse ek roshni nikal mere CONSCIOUS brain me pahunchi.ye roshni ek bridge ki tarah thi jisse mere dono brains jud gaye...

aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse laga mere brain ko ek tez jhatka jisse finally meri aankhen khul gayi aur....


MAI-GAZAB....


saamne ke drishya ko dekhkar kaha tha maine ye....

reason....

ab mai apne brain ke upar nahi khada tha..ab mai ussi red and dead planet ke upar khada tha jo ki is Planet ki sacchayi thi....

wo flexible suface ab gayab ho chuka tha ya fir ye kahun ki apne sahi sthaan par pahunch chuka tha....

mere dimag me......

par in sabke beech ek chiz jisse mere andar hona chahiye tha,wo mere saamne hawa me tair rahi thi aur wo thi wo rekhayen jo ki mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ki nerves thi..

wo nerves jinse saare METAPHYSICAL powers aur magic pure brain me access hota hai....

mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain toh mere andar feed ho chuka tha par uske nerves ab bhi mere saamne hawa me ek badi si jyoti ka roop liye khade the...

aur jab meri nazar us jyoti par padi toh.....


NERVES-mai aapko kyun apnaaun?????

MAI-sawal galat hai tumhara....tumhe mujhe nahi,mujhe tumhe apnana hai...mai tumhara bhaag nahi hun,tum mere bhaag ho....

mai tumse aur tumhare liye nahi bana hun,tum mujhse aur mere liye bane ho....itne saal maine tumhara intezar nahi kiya hai,tumne mera intazar kiya hai...

aur sabse mahatvpurn baat,tumse mera astitva nahi hai,mujhse tumhara astiva hai....

isiliye sahi sawal yeh hai ki mai tumhe kyun apnaaun....????

aur tumhare mujhse puche is betuke sawal ko sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki nahi....tumhare jaise hin buddhi ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai...


apni baat bol mai palat gaya aur mere aisa karte hi....


SSSSSSSS.....

wo roshni numa nerves turant aage badhi aur mere aage aakar theher gayi....

theherte hi us roshni ne ek human aakruti li aur aisa hone par wo aakruti mere aage jhuk gayi...


NERVES-aapne sahi kaha...mera sawal galat tha...mera astitva aapse hai,aapka mujhse nahi...mujhe prapt karne ki aapne sabhi parikshayen uttirn ki hain aur aapke abhi diye jawab se aapne ye bhi saabit kar diya ki agar mujhe koi sambhal sakta hai, toh wo sirf aap hain...

kripya mujhe grahan kar apna hissa banne ka vardaan den....

MAI-ek baad yaad rakhna... mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhari ehmiyat kya hai...???

bhale hi tum mere sir ke mere dimag ke bhaag ho par haisiyat tumhari wahi hai jo filhal tumhari position hai..

mere pairon ke paas,neeche jhuke hue....

isiliye dobara apni marzi se chalne ki koshish mat karna....


meri baat khatm hone ke baad bhi jab wo roshni se bani aakruti chup chaap mere aage jhuki hi rahi toh....


MAI-mai tumhe apnata hun.....


mere aisa bolte hi wo aakruti turant ek roshni ke gole me tabdil hui aur uske agle hi pal.....


meri aankhen band hi chuki thi....band aankhon se mai dekh raha tha ki wo roshni mere sir ke andar ghus mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke chaaron taraf ek ghera banane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me us roshni ne nerves ka roop ke liya...

aur aisa hote hi mere saath saath ye pura dead planet roshni se naha gaya....

mera sharir halka sa hawa me uth gaya tha....hawa me uth dheere dheere mera sharir kuch der tak ghumta raha aur fir mai neeche aa gaya...

neeche aate hi meri aankhen khul gayi...ab mera yahan kaam khatm ho chuka tha......

aaj mai 25 % tak pura ho chuka tha.....bache the baaki ke 75% jinhe mujhe teen alag alag Planets me jaakar haasil karna tha jinme agla naam tha....


MAI-ANGIS........








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V....J.......

Very nice update bhai

 

[drx prince]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO 3 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNA SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN HAASIL KAR LIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-41



PLANET-PAGAN


PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL




PAR YE KAISE SAMBHAV HUA HOGA...????


itni shaktishali sheild ko hatakar usse bhi sashakth shield ko ussi jagah par laga dena....

is ghatna ko samajhna mere mastishk ke baahar hai....


CONCEAL ke baahar khade un dono PRIME VOTARIES me se ek ne dusre se ye baat kahi thi....


2ND PRIME- FORBIDDEN FOREST ke purane SHIELD ke hatne aur naye shield ke lagne ke baare me bhale hi hum kuch pata naa kar paayen par hum kamsekam ye toh pata laga hi sakte hain ki kya in kuch dino me CHOSENS ya pure ELYSIAN me kuch alag aur anokhi ghatna ghati hai!!!

sambhavata isse hume FORBIDDEN FOREST me hui is anhoni ke baare me koi sutr mil jaaye....


EK GHATNA HUI HAI....AUR US GHATNA KO HUMNE ANJAAM DIYA HAI PAR USKA FORBIDDEN FOREST KE SHIELD KE BADLAW SE KOI LENA DENA HO SAKTA HAI,YE KEHNA AUR JANANA KATHIN HAI....


second PRIME ki baat par first PRIME kuch kehta,usse pehle hi unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo dono piche palte toh hairan reh gaye....

kyunki itni sadiyon me pehli baar is planet PAGAN par unke siwa kisi aur ne apne kadam rakhe the...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ye PLANET ek invisible planet tha jisse sirf wo dono hi dekh sakte the aur is Planet ke chaaron taraf bane CONCEAL se nikalte behisab energy ke kano ko wo dono khudme sokh pure bramhand me faile negetive energy me barabar maatra me failate the...

bina kuch kahe jab wo dono PRIMES chup chaap apne saamne kaale labaden me dhak khade 2 lambe chowde khubsoorat naujawano ko dekhte hi rahe toh..


1ST-aise kya dekh rahe ho TRISTEN,UBEL urf PRIMES....


un do naujawano ke mooh se apna naam sun dono PRIMES jinke naam TRISTEN aur UBEL the,unhe ek naya jhatka laga....

wo dono kabhi kisi manushya ke saamne nahi aaye the, isiliye kisi manushya ke liye bhi unka naam aur unki asliyat jaanana namumkin tha par aise me unke saamne khade noujawan unka naam le rahe the,ye unke liye hadh se zyada surprising baat thi....aur isiliye.....


TRISTEN-kaun ho tum dono....???yahan tak pahunche kaise???aur humara naam kaise jaante ho tum dono....


1ST-bande ko DORIAN kehte hain...

2ND-aur mera naam GASTON hai....

UBEL-aadhe adhure jawab ka kya matlab hai???ye ek invisible Planet hai fir tum dono yahan tak pahunche kaise.??aur tum dono hume kaise jaante ho...???

TRISTEN-bina rooke,bina chhupaye ek baar me sab batao..warna fir kuch bhi chupaane ke liye bachoge nahi.

GASTON-yaar,hum toh waise bhi tumhe sab kuch batane hi waale the fir ye dhamki dene ka kya matlab hua....???

DORIAN-arre GASTON tu bhi naa..dhamki toh ye denge hi..aakhir ye VOTARIES hain aur wo bhi PRIMES...

uske upar jinhe ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil karne jaisa mahatvpurn kaam mila ho,aise me ghamand toh hoga hi,kyun????


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL dono ki hairani aur badh gayi...

aaj se laakhon saal pehle ek kaali urja ke zariye unki utpatti hui thi....

utpatti hone ke saath hi dono ke mastishk me unke kartavyon ki suchi ban chuki thi...

pure BRAMHAAND me negetive energy ki vibes ka niyantran jiske liye unhe ye grah pradan kiya gaya....

THE PAGAN....ek grah jiska arth hi GODLESS tha...kaali urja se bhare CONCEAL se bana ya grah jo sab ke liye invisible tha par TRISTEN aur UBEL ko isse dekhne aur isme moujud CONCEAL se kaali urja bator pure universe me faili negetive energy ko taakat dene ka order mila tha....

aur kyunki ye ek bohot hi mahatvpurn kaam tha jisse in dono ke supudr kiya gaya tha, isiliye in dono ko kaali duniya ke baasindon me jinhe VOTARIES kaha jaata tha,sabse uccha ohda jisse PRIMES kaha jaata tha,wo diya gaya...

inhone kabhi apne janm daata ko nahi dekha tha...bas unki moujudgi,unki taakat ko ye mehsoos karte aa rahe the...

aur fir jab ELYSIAN bana aur usme CHOSENS bana,tab inke mastishk me ek naya daayitv mehsoos kiya tha...in dono ko hi ek naya kartavya mila tha...

aur kartavya tha tha kisi tarah FORBIDDEN FOREST me ghuss ESPRIT CRYSTAL naam ke ek POUDHE ko haasil karna.....

par ye baat sirf in dono tak hi seemit thi par aaj woh baat,woh RAAZ kisi aur ke mooh se sun unki hairangi ka thikana naa tha....

aur isiliye......

dono ke haathon me kaali urja se bani do behad hi shaktishali rays dikhne lagi jisse dekhne ke baad bhi DORIAN aur GASTON yunhi khade rahe aur toh aur dono ab muskurane lage the jisse dekh...

TRISTEN aur UBEL ne wo shaktishali rays un dono par chhod di...

tezi se aage badhti hui wo rays sidhe DORIAN aur GASTON ke paas pahunchi aur agle hi pal....

TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen hairat se phaile gayi...

reason....

wo rays DORIAN aur GASTON ko chunne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi...

wo dono ye sab dekh hairan ho hi rahe the ki...


DORIAN-ego shaant nahi hua hai toh ek do baar aur try kar lo....


DORIAN ki baat sun krodh se bhar TRISTEN aur UBEL ne pehle se zyada shaktishali rays se unpar hamla kiya par is baar bhi wahi hua jo pichli baar hua tha aur saath hi TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chehron par bhi same expressions ne dobara janm liya...

hairani waali...


TRISTEN-ye ho kya raha hai...????hum PRIME VOTARIES hain..sabse shaktishali devils....fir bhi hum in dono par ek waar tak nahi kar paa rahe hain...

UBEL-inse bhi wahi nakaratmak urja mehsoos ho rahi hai jo ek negetive energy ke dhaarak se feel hoti hai...

toh kya ye dono hum dono se bhi zyada taakatwar hain....!!!!


dheere dheere ek dusre se ye baat kahi thi TRISTEN aur UBEL ne par DORIAN aur GASTON ke kaano ne in baaton ko sun liya tha aur isiliye....


GASTON-jab tumhe hum dono se hi negetive energy ke dhaarak hone ka ehsaas ho gaya tha fir tumne humpar waar kiya hi kyun???

bhale hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante,par hue toh hum ek hi biradari ke naa...!!!

sirf isiliye kyunki hum tumhare baare me jaante hain,iska ye arth toh nahi ki hum tumhare dushman hain....

khair, tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab ye hai ki nahi,hum tum dono se zyada taakatwar nahi hain...

humne yahan aate hi tum dono ki urja ko mehsoos kiya tha jisse hum jaan gaye the ki tum humare jitne hi taakatwar ho.....


GASTON ko baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chitt kuch shaant hue aur....


UBEL-fir humare waar tumhe chhu kaise nahi paaye..???aur sabse mahatvpurn prashn...tum dono ho kaun aur is jagah aur humare baare me kaise jaante ho....???

DORIAN-tumhare waar hume isiliye nahi chhu paaye kyunki jisne tumhe shakti di hai,wo aisa nahi chahte the....


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi....


TRISTEN-kya tum unhe jaante ho jinhone hume hamara astitv diya hai....???kya tum mile ho unse...???

DORIAN-nahi..tumhari hi tarah hum bhi apne maalik ko,apne LORD ko nahi jaante....

jis din humne WICKEDS ko chuna tha,us din ke baad se humari shaktiyon me zaroorat se zyada izafa hone laga tha.....

aur tab hume hamare maansik tarango dwara ye ehsaas hua tha ki koi hai jisse hume shakti milti hai..

CHOSENS se nikalne ke baad unhi mansik tarango ke sahare hume kya karna hai,iska aadesh milta raha hai....

TRISTEN-fir tumne aisa kyun kaha ki jisne hume shakti di hai,wo nahi chahte ki humara waar tumpar asar kare....!!!!

GASTON-kal,jab hum apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar baithe hue the tab achanak humare antarman me ek chalchtra chalne laga...

wo chalchitra tum dono ki utpatti aur saath hi is jagah ke baare me tha...

tumse judi saari chizen dikhane ke baad ek baar firse hamari maansik tarango ke zariye hume bataya gaya ki hume kya karna hai aur isiliye hi hum yahan aaye hain...


GASTON ki baat sunane ke baad TRISTEN aur UBEL ka mind clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


TRISTEN-yahan aane ke baad kya karne ka aadesh mila tum dono ko...???

DORIAN-kuch der pehle UBEL ne jo baat kahi thi, aadesh ussise juda hua hai...???

UBEL-maine ashanka jatayi thi..!!!kaun si aashanka...???

DORIAN-yahi ki agar beete kuch dino ke dauran CHOSENS aur ELYSIAN me hui kuch alag aur ajeeb ghatna ke baare me pata lagaya jaaye toh sambhavatah FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ke saath hue is naye ferbadal ke baare me kuch pata chal sake...!!!

TRISTEN-kya tum jaante ho aisi koi baat jo hamare kaam aa sake...!!!


TRISTEN ke sawal par GASTON ne un dono se unke dwara CHOSENS me ki gayi saari chizon ke baare me vistaar se bataya jisse sun....

UBEL-tum dono bilkul sahi waqt par CHOSENS se nikal aaye kyunki agar ab bhi tum wahan hote toh chup chaap nikal nahi paate...

wahan kiye gaye naye intezam ke tahat ab kisi bhi roop me wahan chhupna asaan nahi hoga...

DORIAN-mushkil bhi nahi hai aur yahi hume mila hua aadesh bhi hai..

TRISTEN-hum samjhe nahi....

GASTON-chalchitra me tum dono ke baare me humne sab kuch jaana..wo sabkuch suna jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi baat ki ho...

apne vaartalaap ke dauran ek baar tumne kaha tha ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko todne ke liye tumhe apne hi jaise 2 primes ki zaroorat hai....(update 14)

aur ab tumhare saamne wo do moujud hain.. bhale hi hum tum dono ki tarah designeted nahi hain,par taakat hamari bhi tum dono jitni hi hai....

TRISTEN-baat toh tumhari sahi hai kintu tum bhul rahe ho ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi SHIELD dusri hai aur adhik shaktishaali bhi....

aur saath hi tum kuch der pehle kahi gayi baat ko bhi nazarandaaz kar gaye ki ab CHOSENS suraksha ko behad kada kar diya gaya hai....

FORBIDDEN FOREST toh door ki baat hai, ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me enter karte hi wahan lage REVEAL SHIELD ki wajah se enter karne waala wahin phas jaayega...

DORIAN-pata hai hume...aur is rukawat ko bhedne ka ek upay bhi hai aur hume mila aadesh bhi wahi hai...

aur wo yeh hai ki hum chaaron hummese kisi ek ko apni puri urja de denge...

aisa karne se jisme chaaron ki shaktiyan sammilit hongi,uska AURA aur power kayi guna badh jaayega...

aur aisa hone par wo ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me bina REVEAL SHIELD ko chhue aar paar ho jaayega aur pahunchega FORBIDDEN FOREST...

wahan pahunch wo hum charon ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag se wahan lage shield par waar karega...

agar isse koi asar hua toh thik hai,warna kisi wastu ka roop dhar wo wahin reh jaayega aur intazar karega...

kyunki is baat ke chances bohot zyada hain ki jis bhi wajah se wo nayi SHIELD wahan lagi hai,wo wajah,wo kaaran bohot jald saamne aayega aur aisa hone par kisina kisika us jagah par moujud hona zaroori hai taaki aage ki yojna banayi jaa sake...

TRISTEN-appratim.. bohot acche....par ab sawal ye hai ki humme se kaun jayega wahan???

DORIAN-mere hisaab se mere aur GASTON me se hi ek ko wahan jaana chahiye...kyunki hum dono CHOSEN'S ke X SAVENT bhi reh chuke hain aur kuch samay pehle kaafi dino tak roop badal wahan reh bhi chuke hain...

UBEL-DORIAN sahi keh raha hai...???


TRISTEN ko dekh UBEL ne ye baat kahi jispar usne bhi sehmati se apne sir ko hilaya....


GASTON-DORIAN,tum jaao.....


GASTON ki baat sun DORIAN ne haan me apna sir hilaya jiske baad GASTON, TRISTEN aur UBEL ne ek apna apna haath DORIAN ke sir par rakha aur....


APABHAJATI SHAKTIYEM

SHARE THE POWERS....


teeno ke haathon se tez kaali urja ke kan nikal DORIAN ke sir se hote hue uske andar chale gaye aur kuch der baad jab teeno ki powers uske andar puri tarah sama gayi toh apni aakhen khol ek baar teeno ko dekh DORIAN gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-ANGIS


PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE



THIS FEELS LIKE A HEXAGONAL DIAMOND..... ACTUALLY, LONSDALEITE SE BHI HARD LAG RAHA HAI YE....


ANGIS ki dharti ko chhute hue uski sakhti ko bhaampte hui maine ye baat kahi.....

LONSDALEITE ..THE HEXAGONAL DIAMOND...carbon atom se bana ek aisa padarth jo kisi normal diamond se 58 percent tak zyada sakht hota hai...

earth me mere school ke waqt ek exibition me us padarth ki stiffness ke baare me bataya gaya tha...

maine usse chhu kar bhi dekha tha aur aaj,abhi jab mai ANGIS ke bright hard surface jo ki asal me meri body thi,usse chhu raha tha toh mujhe waisi hi stiffness feel ho rahi thi....

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko apnaane ke baad mai RENAISS se gayab hokar sidhe yahan ANGIS ke surface me pahuncha tha....

kisi suraj aur uski roshni ka naamonisham toh yahan bhi nahi tha par ab mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke mere paas hone ki wajah se andhere me bhi mai is jagah ko halka halka dekh bhi paa raha tha aur feel toh mai is jagah ko puri tarah se kar paa raha tha...

jahan iske surface ko chhu mai yahan ke mahoul ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha....

wahin mai ye feel kar paa raha tha ki naa sirf yahan ka surface behad sakht hai balki issi surface se ek invisible bhaamp sa uth raha hai jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua hai....

ye sab dekh aur feel kar mai kuch der tak sochta raha aur fir jahan khada tha ,wahin paalti maar kar baith gaya...

reason....

ab waqt aa gaya tha OMMIN WHIZZDER ki wo BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS jo maine directly kabhi attend hi nahi ki thi,usme batayi gayi baaton ke practicals ka...

par ye AMPLIFICATION bhi mere liye NEW BORN SAVENTS ke mukable behad mushkil hone waala tha...

reason....

NEW BORN SAVENTS ki BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS se pehle jo un sab ki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class lagti thi,usme maamuli spells bol ANURODHAM uccharit kar unke asar shuru hote hi ARAMATI spell ke zariye apne BODY aur BLOOD ko strong banaya jaata tha taaki BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION CLASS ke waqt BODY aur BLOOD ko bardasht ke kaabil banaya jaa sake par mere paas ye suvidha uplabdh nahi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki mera BRAIN last level commodity jaisa tha jo ANURODHAM matlab request jaise modes par kaam hi nahi karta tha...

kehne ka matlab tha ki mera brain us bijli ke khambe ki tarah tha jisme 24/7 440 volt ki current ghumti thi,usse kam nahi....

batao,itne lambe hone ka bhi kya faayda ki apne hi pair ko jhuk kar chhu naa paao par ab aisa hai toh hai...

aur waise bhi,jinhe samandar naapna ho,unhe jheel aur nadiyon ki lambayi se fark nahi padta....


neeche surface par baith pehle maine apne aap ko aane waali taklif ke liye taiyar kiya...

kuch der tak sunya me ghurte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya....

ek second bhi nahi laga tha mere CEREBRATION process ko pause hone me......

apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne dimag ke through maine apne aantarik sharir me jhaanka aur..


STHVIRA PHALAKA...

STURDY LAYERS....


RRRRRRRRRR......


jaise hi maine spell uccharit kiya,jis surface par mai baitha tha,us surface se hota hua pure PLANET ka surface vibrate karne laga...

ye vibrations us bhaamp,us AURA ki wajah se ho rahi thi jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua tha....

itna hi nahi, spell ke uccharit hone ke agle hi pal mere sharir ke beech ek roshni utpaan hui aur aisa hote hi mai bhi behad tez vibrate hone laga....

par in sabke baawjud mera CEREBRATION process paused hi raha....

kuch der tak toh yunhi normal vibrations hote rahe par uske baad is planet ke surface se nikalte bhaamp, AURA ne mujhe neeche se jakadte hue upar uthana shuru kar diya.....

aur dekhte hi dekhte mera sharir tezi se 1000 feet tak upar hawa me uth chuka tha....

wahin in sab baaton se bekhabar mai apni aakhen band kiye hue paused CEREBRATION me baitha hua tha....

hawa me hazaron feet tak uthne ke baad mera sharir ek point par rook gaya....

mere rookte hi mere sharir aur pure Planet par ho rahe vibrations bhi rook gaye....

sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya tha...par ye shaanti,ye khamoshi aane waale tufaan se pehle jaisi thi.......

kyunki kuch seconds tak hawa me rooke rehne ke baad mera sharir jitni tezi se upar aaya tha,usse double tezi se neech aane laga...

saath hi ab mera sharir aur pura PLANET aur zor se vibrate karne lage...

par jis tufaan ki baat maine kahi thi,wo ye sab ho rahi ghatna nahi thi balki wo tufaan toh theek us jagah par jahan kuch der pehle mai paalthi maar kar baitha tha,wahan ban rahi thi...

jis AURA ne mujhe upar hawa me uthaya tha,ussi AURA ke bohot se bhaag ne milkar jahan mai baitha tha,us jagah par khudko samet liya tha par is baar wo AURA naa toh invisible thi aur naahi wo sirf dhuan thi...

us AURA ne khudko bhi yahan ke surface ka roop de diya tha par wo roop sapat zamin ki tarah nahi tha,balki 4 se 5 tez dhaar aariyon ki tarah tha...

wahin in sab se bekhabar mera sharir double tezi se niche ussi dhaar dhaar aariyon waali zamin ki taraf girta chala jaa raha tha aur finally.....


KHAACHHH........KHACHHHHH.......


SIR ALAG aur DHADH ALAG......


MERE SHARIR KE DO TUKDE HO CHUKE THE.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V...J......

Very nice update bhai