Naik
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waiting for next update bhai
Update ka intizar h bhai
abhi likhne baith raha hun frnzzz...hopefully aaj hi complete kar deliver kar dunga.waiting for the new episode dear friend
Besabri se Intzarr rahegaabhi likhne baith raha hun frnzzz...hopefully aaj hi complete kar deliver kar dunga.
Bhai aisa na karna bhai plzz kyuki jis din apaka update nahi aata us din hi lagne lagta hai ki kuch kami hai aajwaise toh usme waqt hai bro par kitna bada!!!mere ek update kayi kahaniyon ke 2 update se bhi bade hote hain...aur bada nahi likh sakta mai...aur ab toh waise bhi update ke size chote hone waale hain...
guyz, RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ke aamne saamne waala update mega update tha aur isiliye bada tha, last update kyunki phase 2 ki duniya ko explain karne waala tha, isiliye woh bhi 4000 words waala tha par ab har update ki length 2000 se 3000 words ke beech hi rahegi kyunki isse zyada likhne me itna frustration feel hota hai ki sir dukhne lag jaata hai...
haan,mega updates bade hi aayenge...
Matty suprebbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb?????????????????????????? las line combination is great
Fabulous update brother..jha stellars ki moz hai unhe puri aazadi hai ..Wahi grommets ko bhi aazadi but some restrictions but weaklings unhe na ho aazadi bus ek pyade ki tarah hi h wo ...jha raaz aur vidious ki fhir mulakat hui but is baar unhone ek dusre ki takat ko parkha..ab dekhna hoga exertion ke test me kon or kaise baazi marta hai..tarif ke liye koi shabd nhi brother ...jaandar update..
bro awesome update
keep posting
That line is dope, gazab line hai bro
Nice update.....dialogues is story ka romance badha rahe hai.
SUPER UPDATE BHAI
Ye CHOSENS to sachmuch bahut hi biased hai Bhai jaha stellars ko injoy Karne ke liye pubs club pools or pata nhi Kya Kya . Or ek taraf weaklings ko baithne ke liye chairs Tak nhi , aur inki to whizz bi bechari stellars ki satayi Hui underconfident hai . Yaha to har cheez me VIDEUS ki jhalak milti hai aur ant me Jo Raaz ne game khela hai whizz MABBA or VIDEUS Tak chakkra gye or Bhai Kya dialogue tha Bhai ek dum superb ATTITUDE
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Superb update bro
To first round
T0 first round ho hi gya
Jisme videous ko hi neeche gira diya
Amaaaaaaazizzzzziiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnngggggg
Awesome fabulous update
Pura update padne ke baad last ke 9 line ke barabar nahi wo super ???
Ab tournament main jab viodus aur raaz ka aamna samna hoga to ye to romanch rahega lakin mahi ka Kya role hota h ye bhi dekhna h
Keep posting
Super update hai bhai
Behtareen update,
Kasam se kya Dialogue mara hai.
Bahut hi mazedar hone wali hai ye yatra dusare phase ki.
Abhi se hi khinch taan chalu ho gaya hai... Or videous ne mabba ho bhadka ke apna kaam nikal liya aage kya hoga.... Bechari hida... Itna apman sahte sahte... Bahut jyada hi nirash ho chuki hai... Thodi himmat ki jarurat hai usko... Ab to lagta hai har kadam pe ye khinch tan hoga.... Agar w
Ek tarah se walking gulam hi hain stealers ke to yaar bahut hi bura hoga... Kuchh bhi karege wo or ye sab kuchh nhi kar payege... But ek minute.... Agar walking ka banda kamzor ho tabhi n tum usko daba paoge... Agar stealers ke barabar takat ho to wo bhi maza chakha hi dega... Or teacher kuchh kahenge nhi... Bas wo bechare kahi aa ja nhi sakte.... Waiting
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Bhai last ki line ne to ghayal hi kr diya wahhhh?? superbbb update.....
thanks brothers..yunhi saath bane rahiyeJabardasttt update bhai
thanks for the review brother..be alongAwesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update ?????????
Sabhi ko section wise unhe syllabus class aur unhe card coin aur uske use ka tarika bata diya . Staller wali ki hi mauz hai baki sab unki meharbani ho to hi .
Videous Wizz Mabba ke kandhe se bandook chalana chata tha aur kiya bhi Par Raaz ne et ka jwab pathar se diya aur Mabba aur Videous ka mazak bana diya .
Aakhiri Dailog sabse shandar tha
thanks for appreciating brother....yunhi saath bane rahiyepar in a spirit of sportsmanship,ek raaye deta hun tujhe...
Kota jitna ho,
utna hi BAK...
nazar bhale saamne ho,
dhyan har taraf RAKH....
waise maalum hai mujhe ki...
dekhne ke maamle me
tu ek BAAZ hai...
par jiska waar dikhayi hi naa de,
wahi toh.........RAAZ...... hai.....
Or ye to hamare raaz bhai ne vidous ko sidha bountry ke bahar fenkte huwe game apni taraf kar li he
Dekh te he age kya parinam niklega raaz jite ga ya vidous update
Ka intejar rahega