Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Rajesh]

Kya Shaandar update thi bhai waah maza aa gaya superb

Ab doggy bhaisahab kya karega chup baithega ya kuch ut patang harkat karega

VJ aur avni ki love story ki starting to Bahut romantic tarike se ho rahi hai

Dekhte hai aage kya kya hota hai

 

[Mahiirathore]

Damaal action, shoking turns ,

Char din se vapas aaya hu tab itna kuch badal diya

Nishkalika or MODOXX kam tamaam kar diya

Aodomos n Bhuvika ko apne taraf kar liya
Bhuvika ki Beelzebub se marriage or Bhuvika ka change hona

Bhuvika sach m iss ladaii k last takk le jayegi
Aodomos n patta jabardast khela h

Avantika ka ulajh kar rah jana

Sab gumne ja the h avantika k bhai log bhii aa rhe h


Sorry for short review free hote hii first kam yhii kiya h

 

[vj4u]

Kya Shaandar update thi bhai waah maza aa gaya superb

Ab doggy bhaisahab kya karega chup baithega ya kuch ut patang harkat karega

VJ aur avni ki love story ki starting to Bahut romantic tarike se ho rahi hai

Dekhte hai aage kya kya hota hai

DOGGY!!!!!!USKS GAME TOH KAB KA KHATM HO CHUKA H...

 

[vj4u]

Damaal action, shoking turns ,

Char din se vapas aaya hu tab itna kuch badal diya

Nishkalika or MODOXX kam tamaam kar diya

Aodomos n Bhuvika ko apne taraf kar liya
Bhuvika ki Beelzebub se marriage or Bhuvika ka change hona

Bhuvika sach m iss ladaii k last takk le jayegi
Aodomos n patta jabardast khela h

Avantika ka ulajh kar rah jana

Sab gumne ja the h avantika k bhai log bhii aa rhe h


Sorry for short review free hote hii first kam yhii kiya h

Arre brother, aap story ke saath bane hue hain,yahi bohot hain..issi tarah apna pyar aur support banaye rakhiyega...

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Very nice update..

Bhuvika to ab Beelzeebub ki tarah aur shayad uske barabar ki shaktishali hogai h ar ho b kyu na , ek to Beelzeebub ki Shakti phir maddox nishkalika ki Shakti then Beelzeebub s shadi hone k baad aur b benefit mile h bhuvika ko. Ye abtk ki sabse khatarnak creation hogi Asmodeus ki Jo bad m sheetan bani h.
Wo sheetan jisse kabi sheetan ni banna chahiye tha aur isliye ye aur b juada khatarnak ban jati h..
Beelzeebub b Kafi impress hua h bhuvika s but Kya wo is shadi k rishte ko nibhane ki koshish karega , Kya wo bhuvika s pyar Kar paaega?
Waise to ye hone ki sambhvana 0 h but just imagine ki agar ek sheetan ko mohabbat hojae too ???
Waise mohabbat to Asmodeus ko b Hui thi alesendra s but Kya Beelzeebub ko ho sakti h jabki wo to isi mohabbat ka natija h jiske falswaroop usse hamesa maa k pyar s durrr ehna pada h. Aab galti Asmodeus ki b thi but wo apne baap Asmodeus ko to pujata h but maa s nafrat b karta h..


Kher , ye lines mujhe bht achi lagi..
"" par kabhi kabhi EHSAAS ko kamsekam ek choti si hi sahi par sahi ALFAAZ ki zaroorat padti hai taaki wo khudko ek naye RISHTE ka roop de sake....

aksar logon ko kehte suna hai ki DOSTI ya fir kisi bhi special RELATIONSHIP me SORRY aur THANKS ki jagah nahi hoti par mai is baat ko nahi maanta....

jahan galti ho aur us galti ka ehsaas ho,wahan maafi ka friend request bhejna zaroori hota hai..""

I totally agree with this aur main ye expect b karta hu ki chahe dost ho ya pyar agar galti ki h to sorry aur help m thanks bolne m koi galat baat ni h. Ye bht jaruri h Taki hum apna gratitude dikha sake samne wale ko .

Aap Sach m real life s jud k likhte ho . That's what I really like abt u and this story..

Avni aur Vikram dono ko jis pal ka intzar tha wo pal aa hi gaya. Aankhon aankho m Bina kuch kahe bss ek sabd n dono k beech ki duriya ko chutkio m khatahm krdia. Thats the power of LOVE ..


LETS SEE Kya hotah..

 

[vj4u]

Very nice update..

Bhuvika to ab Beelzeebub ki tarah aur shayad uske barabar ki shaktishali hogai h ar ho b kyu na , ek to Beelzeebub ki Shakti phir maddox nishkalika ki Shakti then Beelzeebub s shadi hone k baad aur b benefit mile h bhuvika ko. Ye abtk ki sabse khatarnak creation hogi Asmodeus ki Jo bad m sheetan bani h.
Wo sheetan jisse kabi sheetan ni banna chahiye tha aur isliye ye aur b juada khatarnak ban jati h..
Beelzeebub b Kafi impress hua h bhuvika s but Kya wo is shadi k rishte ko nibhane ki koshish karega , Kya wo bhuvika s pyar Kar paaega?
Waise to ye hone ki sambhvana 0 h but just imagine ki agar ek sheetan ko mohabbat hojae too ???
Waise mohabbat to Asmodeus ko b Hui thi alesendra s but Kya Beelzeebub ko ho sakti h jabki wo to isi mohabbat ka natija h jiske falswaroop usse hamesa maa k pyar s durrr ehna pada h. Aab galti Asmodeus ki b thi but wo apne baap Asmodeus ko to pujata h but maa s nafrat b karta h..


Kher , ye lines mujhe bht achi lagi..
"" par kabhi kabhi EHSAAS ko kamsekam ek choti si hi sahi par sahi ALFAAZ ki zaroorat padti hai taaki wo khudko ek naye RISHTE ka roop de sake....

aksar logon ko kehte suna hai ki DOSTI ya fir kisi bhi special RELATIONSHIP me SORRY aur THANKS ki jagah nahi hoti par mai is baat ko nahi maanta....

jahan galti ho aur us galti ka ehsaas ho,wahan maafi ka friend request bhejna zaroori hota hai..""

I totally agree with this aur main ye expect b karta hu ki chahe dost ho ya pyar agar galti ki h to sorry aur help m thanks bolne m koi galat baat ni h. Ye bht jaruri h Taki hum apna gratitude dikha sake samne wale ko .

Aap Sach m real life s jud k likhte ho . That's what I really like abt u and this story..

Avni aur Vikram dono ko jis pal ka intzar tha wo pal aa hi gaya. Aankhon aankho m Bina kuch kahe bss ek sabd n dono k beech ki duriya ko chutkio m khatahm krdia. Thats the power of LOVE ..


LETS SEE Kya hotah..

Thanks 4 this lovely review brother...aap updates me likhi gayi baaton ke andar chupe gaye bhavnao ko samajh rahe hain,ye meri writing ke liye sabse bada award hai...koshish karunga ki aage jo bhi MAGIC dikahun,usme LOGIC bhi dikha sakun.... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Frnz,mai update laptop me likhta hun aur aaj yahan power cut yai,isilye aaj update nahi de paunga...agla update kal....

 

[Raguhalkal]

Frnz,mai update laptop me likhta hun aur aaj yahan power cut yai,isilye aaj update nahi de paunga...agla update kal....

Aap tention mat lo bhai apka bharpayi pehle se ho chuka hai matlub kuch story likhte 3 4 page sirf update rehte hai uske age bas sirf comment per aap pehle din se aise nahi hai muje khushi hai ki aap aisa nahi hai thank you bhai

 

[luv4sale696969]

Not as powerful update as the previous one, yet certain parts have been much stronger and deeper, especially the last few lines...
You are simply amazing...
Don't know why but I feel Alessandra is going to play an extremely important role towards the end... And of course the most vital moments will be when Avantika faces Bhuvika....
Incidentally, most of the supernatural character names have been taken from ancient European mythology, whether it's Asmodeus, Beelzebub, the Saints or some other villains, yet Maddox is not found there, can you please let us know the background???

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

OK bhai waiting for next