Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[vj4u]

Bhai aapki story or updates k liye awesome nice fantastic mind blowing ye sab word bohot chota hey. bass aapki sukriya karta hu ki aap ney itni achchi story hum sab k liye likhrehe ho, last k jatka to bhai bohot jorka diya aap ney. dekhtey hey is muskil ko VJ keysey par karta hey or mitra mandali k sath kya hota hey
keep it up and as always waiting for

Thanks 4 appreciating brother... aap bas yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Amazing & Awesome update.bahut hi jabardast adventure ki suruwat ho gayi.

Gajab

Dhansu update biradar

Great job bhai

Sabse badia update ab tak jitna pada hain. Best is liye is me Guru ko mehtatwa dekhayi hain chahe aryan ho ya apna v.j but dono ko unke guru ne marg darahan kia hai aur unke hunar ko nikhara hai.

Super update bro

Yaado ko alg se chhipana or ab mirror world ki suruaat esi h to aage to or mast hogi

Waiting for next

Very Nice update aur is me bhi pichli 2 updates ki tarah guru ke upar zor dia to kuch yaad a gaya guru bani ka wordings. Ek baar suni thee delhi me
Har guru roothey to guru milaye.
Guru jo roothey thor milaye farida.

Update 80 Tak padha hai....

Very nice piece of work.... Fabulous !!!!
A very nice love chemistry.... Between VJ and Avni.....
Even the Character of Bhuvika with.... Revenge motive.... Is very interesting....

Next comments.... Aage padhke....

Thanks brothers.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Apki story ka suru se fann rha hu
Muje bahut dukk h ki itne time sath nhii rah paya
Story ko ek shandar mukam le gye h

Kis tarah se VJ vapas Tikk huaa uska tarika muje bahut jayda majedar or interesting lga

VJ k Tikk hone k badd dono garho ko free karvana

Buvika ko uski behan Analia se milana
Rochak bindu rha
Aodomos ka nayii chaal chal dena

Mirror world ko ek ajuba bna diya jisa pahle tha

Dekhte talab se kon kon power pane m kamyab hota h or kon apni power kho dega

Mirrors world k Agrasena ki rihaii or talvar ko pane k liye jo sart h dekhte h kese puri hoti h kyoki Agrasena ki rakhsa talvar kudh karti h

Aodomos ki teeno rays ko kese bhul sakta hu uski power kis hadd ki h vo badd m pta chalega

Sorry yrr. Aate ki itne lambi story ka short review de rha hu
Lekin ab regular hu sath sath chalenge apse kadam se kadam milakar

Welcome back brother.. aap story ke sirf ek reader hi nahi balki iski respect bhi karte hain aur iske liye mai aapka tahe dil se shukraguzar hun.. hum kahani ke cilamx ki aur jaane waale hain,aapka is safar ke aakhir ke palon me bhi yunhi saath chahunga...

 

[vj4u]

UPDATE RAAT TAK

 

[ʜeisenberg]

Waiting

 

[Prince]

Story ka maza tab hi hai jab uska villain dumdaar ho...aur aapki story ka villain to Gabbar Singh, mugambo aur Voldemort jaisa legendary villain hai

 

[Rahat200]

UPDATE RAAT TAK

Thanks Bhai

 

[Rahat200]

Welcome back brother.. aap story ke sirf ek reader hi nahi balki iski respect bhi karte hain aur iske liye mai aapka tahe dil se shukraguzar hun.. hum kahani ke cilamx ki aur jaane waale hain,aapka is safar ke aakhir ke palon me bhi yunhi saath chahunga...

Bhai ham sab ap k sath hin

 

[Rahat200]

Bhai ap ki story ab tak ki merisab sab se fevrit hy

 

[vj4u]

Bhai ap ki story ab tak ki merisab sab se fevrit hy

Thank u brother.. dil se shukriya...update kuch hi der me.. padhiyega aur bataiyega kaisa laga...