Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[vj4u]

SHADOW WORLD..........THE LAST ADVENTURE.........MEGA UPDATE............PART-1............FRIDAY RAAT KO...........

 

[Mahiirathore]

SHADOW WORLD..........THE LAST ADVENTURE.........MEGA UPDATE............PART-1............FRIDAY RAAT KO...........

Wating bhaiii

 

[Rahat200]

SHADOW WORLD..........THE LAST ADVENTURE.........MEGA UPDATE............PART-1............FRIDAY RAAT KO...........

OK waiting Bhai

 

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[vj4u]

Hame Hero jitne huee dekhne ki adat padd gyii h
Chahe story m kitni hi problem ko jele
Chahe balayi story devil ki or se likhi huii ho ya hero ki taraf se

Jesa ki apne kha last m devil k jitne or Hero k harne
Chahe vo mansik ho ya fight se ho
Kher dekhte h story kitne modd aage leti h

Thanks 4 the wonderful review brother...maine bas ek andesha bataya tha brother ki kahani ka end kuch bhi ho sakta hai aur ye bhi isiliye bataya taaki readers bas updates par reaction den naaki story building par...kahani me aage jo bhi hona hai uspar koi suggestion naa de,kyunki har chiz maine pehle se soch kar rakhi hui hai..

end me jo bhi hoga, usse achanak se soch kar implant nahi kiya jaayega,kahani ke start hote hi uske end ke baare me bhi soch liya gaya tha...

Ab wo soch kya hai,ye toh aap sab ko end me hi pata chalega par ek baat 100 % tay hogi ki koi jeete naa jeete par aakhir me kahani zaroor jeetegi....saath bane rahiye....

 

[vj4u]

Awesome update bhai
Vikram k dost ab apni powers ko
Kabu karna seekhenge yeluptus mein

Asmodemous ki baato ne beezelbub
K har sawaal ka jawaab Diya hai
But ab shadow world mein Kya hoga
Wo dekhna hoga

Waiting for the next update

Nice

Behtareen

Very nice and fantastic update

Super update hai bhai

Nice update

Thanks brothers.. be along

 

[vj4u]

Awesome update

Nice one waiting for next

Nice

Thanks brothers.. saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

vj bhai Kya shandaar update hai
ASMODEUS ne apne bete ko jo gyanvardhark ghutti pilyee hai ekdum zabardast hai bhai
dharm ki paribhasha aur use samjhane ke liye diya gaya udaharan wo bhi DEVIL LORD ki jabani kabile tarif hai

Thanks brother ki aapko pasand aaya..aaj ke mega update ka wait kijiye aur ek zabardast jhatke ke liye taiyar rahiye...

 

[vj4u]

Nice

Bahut hi behtareen lekhakiye h biradar aapki...
Lajabab update biradar...

cool & awesome update.

Super update bro

Bachpan ki yadi taja kr rha hero apne dad k sath

Charon ki training suru kr di

Y bilkul sahi kaha karm bada dharm h


Waiting for next

Excellent update bhai..... waiting for another one mind blowing adventure..... keep writing

Thanks brothers.. be along