Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[vj4u]

Super, mindblowing, Jhakas update.
Is update ka sabse best part tha Asmusdas ka uske bete ko samjhana kaise "Karm" sabese bada dharm hai.


Nice nerrating.
Waiting for next big update...

Thanks brother aur saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Apka jitni tareef karu kam hi lagta hai muje per kya karu dil hai ki manta nahi pls bhai kabhi hamara sath nahi chorna

Break lag sakta hai brother par saath chhhutega nahi...aap bas yunhi saath bane rahiye aur aaj ek zabardast jhatke ke liye taiyar rahiye

 

[vj4u]

MEGA UPDATE PART-1 RAAT TAK

 

[Mahiirathore]

Thanks 4 the wonderful review brother...maine bas ek andesha bataya tha brother ki kahani ka end kuch bhi ho sakta hai aur ye bhi isiliye bataya taaki readers bas updates par reaction den naaki story building par...kahani me aage jo bhi hona hai uspar koi suggestion naa de,kyunki har chiz maine pehle se soch kar rakhi hui hai..

end me jo bhi hoga, usse achanak se soch kar implant nahi kiya jaayega,kahani ke start hote hi uske end ke baare me bhi soch liya gaya tha...

Ab wo soch kya hai,ye toh aap sab ko end me hi pata chalega par ek baat 100 % tay hogi ki koi jeete naa jeete par aakhir me kahani zaroor jeetegi....saath bane rahiye....

Shii kha bhaiii story apke hisab se hii chalni chahiye Tabhii Best tach milega

Kisi k kahne se change ki jarurat bhii nhii h

Bass Dil ki bat rakh dii Bass last m ham sabke Dil ko mst sukun dena

Story k Best turns ka hamesha intjar rahta h

Story k turns hamesha Dil ki Dhadkan badhte rahte h to Dil koi na koi Voice jarur aati h

Story k hamesha

 

[KOHINOOR]

very nice

 

[Loveyou143]

MEGA UPDATE PART-1 RAAT TAK

Bohat hi besabri se intezar hai

 

[Ashu 0000]

Waiting for night

 

[vj4u]

Shii kha bhaiii story apke hisab se hii chalni chahiye Tabhii Best tach milega

Kisi k kahne se change ki jarurat bhii nhii h

Bass Dil ki bat rakh dii Bass last m ham sabke Dil ko mst sukun dena

Story k Best turns ka hamesha intjar rahta h

Story k turns hamesha Dil ki Dhadkan badhte rahte h to Dil koi na koi Voice jarur aati h

Story k hamesha

Dhadkan toh aapki aaj bhi badhegi brother...V.J ki guarantee hai..aur aapko toh pata hai ki jo bhi V.J bolta hai,wo ho jaata hai...hahahaha..just kidding bro...bas jo jo baat aapke comment me hai,wo sab aaj aap feel karenge...and at last,aap is kahani ke sabse behatareen readers me se ek hain..aapke comments mujhe hamesha se hi motivate karte aayen hain..ummid hai ki bache hue kuch updates me bhi aapka saath bana rahega...update raat 8 baje tak

 

[vj4u]

AAJ KE UPDATE ME LAGBHAGH 5300 WORDS USE HUE HAIN AUR SAATH HI AAJ KA UPDATE MERE LIYE BOHOT KHAAS HAI KYUNKI MERI KALPANA SHAKTI KO MAINE AAJ KE UPDATE ME PURA NICHODA HAI...PADH KAR BATAIYEGA KI MAI KAHAN TAK SAFAL RAHA...UPDATE RAAT 8 BAJE TAK....

 

[CG]

AAJ KE UPDATE ME LAGBHAGH 5300 WORDS USE HUE HAIN AUR SAATH HI AAJ KA UPDATE MERE LIYE BOHOT KHAAS HAI KYUNKI MERI KALPANA SHAKTI KO MAINE AAJ KE UPDATE ME PURA NICHODA HAI...PADH KAR BATAIYEGA KI MAI KAHAN TAK SAFAL RAHA...UPDATE RAAT 8 BAJE TAK....

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