Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[vj4u]

Bhai mast update hai maja aa gya...anjali shadow world mai qaid kaise ho gyi ..ye to aage pta chalega...intzaar rahega...

Nice

Superb update ke dam lanlantop Maza aa gaya

Lajawab update

Lajawab update

Wow

superb bro.... Anjali is in Shadow World means pahle se hi VJ ne kuch soch rakha tha .

thanks guyzz..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[Mathur]

just awesome buddy
waiting for next update

 

[Mahakaal]

Update Kab Tak

 

[vj4u]

Vj Bhai aapki story mast hai. Bhai
Ye mera first comment hai story pe avi Mai story suru kiya hu padhna isliye review nhi De pauga
Bahot Jaldi sath jur jauga

welcome to this thread bro..bilkul padhiye aur bataiye kaisa lga????

 

[vj4u]

Kya itna bada dhokha hum readers ke sath
Anjali zinda hai

Maza agaya Kya twist hai Bhai
Wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah

thanks brother aur haan,dhoka toh ho gaya..kyun???ye aaj pata chal jaayega

 

[vj4u]

Awesome

Mast aur faadu update bhai
Kya Anjali zinda hai aur
Wo asmodemous ki kaid mein hai

Waiting for the next update

Great work .ekdam jabardast twist.

Bahoot hi shaandaar update bhai maza a Gaya.

Amazing update Bhai

Amazing update Bhai maza aa gia likan ab wapasi buht mushkil hy

thanks brothers..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Fabulous Update bhaiii

Charo dosto ko Shii raste se sakti pana Shii tha

Ese sakti milna sach m katarnakk ho sakta tha sakti ki importance ko bhul jate

Aakir mehnat se mila huaa prize anmol hota h

Shadow world ki yatra suru ho gyii h

Aodomos ki jail m pahuch to gye h abhii Aodomos ka war aana Bakii h
Aodomos ki jail se saste m chutna namumkin h

Anjali jinda h
Wa mere jadugar khush kar diya sabko
Aaj ka Update highlight kar diya iss khabar se

Early waiting for next Update

thanks brother 4 the review...mujhe pta tha ki aapko ye twist pasand aayega..aapko ANJALI ka character pasand jo tha....par ye twist bhi achanak nahi hua hai,jaisa ki maine pehle bhi bataya tha ki har chiz pehle se tay hai...is twist ka reason aaj ke update me pata chal jaayega

 

[Mathur]

thanks brother aur haan,dhoka toh ho gaya..kyun???ye aaj pata chal jaayega

waiting for the update
bhai apki writing skill lajavab hai just awesome ho aap bhai
just awesome
waiting for next

 

[vj4u]

Story padh kar aisa lag raha hai jaise Netflix ka koi web series dekh raha hu
1st season-HIT
2nd season-SUPERHIT
3rd season-BLOCKBUSTER

hahaha....thanks brother 4 such luv & appreciation....saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

jehar bhai apki story yahan pr bhi phad ke rakhi hai

mai dusri site pr apki story padta hoon iss site ka pta lga toh yahan bhi aa gya

thanks for such a awesome story

thanks brother...har kisi ko update ka intazar rehta hai.wo update jisse likhne me 3 se 4 ghante lagte hain aur mega update likhne me toh 6,7 ghante nikal jaate hain...readers updates toh regularly padhte hain par bohot kam aise readers hain jo lagatar apna review dete hain...aise me aap ek aise reader hain jo ek saath do do sites par apna keemti review dete hain..thanks 4 bieng such a wonderful reader bro......