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Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

Dark Devil

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM ALISHA NAAM KI EK LADKI KA VALENTINE'S CONTEST ME PARTNER KE LIYE HAAN KEH DETA HAI.
AB AAGE:-








CHAPTER-2








( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )







UPDATE-68







PLANET- MONSLICKEL






PLACE- ASMODEUS PALACE








HI HAIL FATHER..........



kaise ho BEELZEBUB???????...........



BEELZEBUB- thik hun ...........FATHER..............




chakra gaye na doston!!!!!ki ASMODEUS kab baap ban gaya................

aap me se bohoton ko lag raha hoga ki ye is kahani ki koi nayi entry hai par aisa hai nahi.......

BEELZEBUB ke baare me 7TH aur 14TH update me thoda bohot bataya gaya hai...

par BEELZEBUB ki puri asliyat aapko aaj pata chalegi jisse sunkar mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab ko jhatka lagne waala hai....

14TH update me maine bataya tha ki BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ka sabse khatarnaak DEVIL hai.

iske andar har tarah ke black magic ki taaqat moujud hai...iski speed light ki speed se bhi zyada tez hai aur iske zyadatar SPELLS jaan leva hote hain........

haalaki 14th update me BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ko HI HAIL DEVIL LORD kehkar bulata hai par wo isiliye kyunki mujhe is character ke asliat ko suspense me rakhna tha.....



toh kya hai BEELZEBUB ki asliyat.........



BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS aur ALESANDRA ka beta aur uska chupaya gaya dusra sabse bada RAAZ hai.........



KAISE????CHALIYE BATATA HUN........



A FLASHBACK NARRATION:-



ASMODEUS se pehli baar milkar jab ALESENDRA apne grah ISLA wapas louti toh unhone ASMODUEUS ke baare me jitna usse pata tha,utna bata diya.....

apni beti ki baaton ke piche chupe pyar ko uske pita KING SOLOMON bhaamp gaye...

wo kaafi khush hue ye jaankar ki unki beti ko pyar ho gaya hai...par unki khushi zyada der tak tik nahi paayi...

unhone apne beti ke dimag se ASMODEUS ki chavi nikali par jo chehra unke saamne aaya usse dekhkar unhe ek tez jhatka laga....

ALESENDRA ne toh duniya nahi dekhi thi par KING SOLOMON ko toh pure brahmaand ke sabhi badi cheezon ke baare me pata tha...

unki beti ne SHAITANO ke devta ko chuna hai ye jaankar unki aankhon ke aage andhera chaa gaya..

unhone jab apni beti ko iske baare me bataya toh ALESENDRA ko yakin nahi hua......

ALESENDRA sachhai jaanane ke liye ASMODEUS ki khoj me firse nikalne waali thi par tabhi ASMODEUS ALESENDRA,KING SOLOMON aur unki wife ke saamne prakat hua....

ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ko bataya ki jo kuch bhi uske pita ne uske baare me kaha hai,wo sach hai........

fir ASMODEUS ne KING SOLOMON ko kaha ki agar wo uski shaadi ALESENDRA se kara denge toh wo saare bure kaam chhod dega..



BURAYI keh rahi thi ki ab wo BURAYI nahi karegi.ye hona toh asambhav tha par putri prem me andhe KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ki baat maan gaye......



Par unke maanane ki ek wajah aur bhi thi... KING SOLOMON ko ye pata tha ki SHAITANO ka DEVTA hone se pehle ASMODEUS GOD ka beta bhi hai toh shayad unki beti ke prem ki wajah se ASMODEUS ke andar ki achayi firse jaag gayi ho yahi sochkar unhone shaadi ke liye haan keh diya......



par KING SOLOMON ye nahi jaante the ki ASMODEUS ka unki grah me aane ka asli kaaran kuch aur hai.....



WORLD OF WARRIORS ke baad ASMODEUS ka plan ISLA grah jaane ka hi tha...



ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah me ek aseem urja ka aabhas ho gaya tha....aur jab ALESENDRA ko ASMODEUS ne pehli baar dekha tab hi wo jaan gaya tha tha ki ALESENDRA kaun hai....

aisa nahi tha ki ASMODEUS ko ALESENDRA achi nahi lagi thi,par uski shakti ki bhook ke aage uski mohobbat ki aag feeki pad gayi....

tabhi usne decide kar liya tha ki ALESENDRA se shaadi kar wo ISLA ki us shakti ke shroth ka dhundega..



ASMODEUS aur ALESENDRA ki shaadi ho gayi.......



aur kuch hi mahino me ALESENDRA pregnent bhi ho gayi........



is beech ASMODEUS ko ISLA ke us shakti shroth FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me bhi pata chal gaya tha......

wahin ISLA grah jo ki white energy ke aadhin tha,ASMODEUS ke aane ki wajah se is grah ki neev dagmagane lagi...

ISLA ke log,jo hamesha tandarust rehte the,unke sharir me rogon ka vaas hone laga..

KING SOLOMON ko doubt ho gaya tha ki in sab ke peeche ASMODEUS ki upastithi hi wajah hai par wo directly kuch bol nahi sakte the..

unhe ye bhi lag gaya tha ASMODEUS ne unse jhooth bola hai...usne abhi tak kaali shaktiyon ka tyag nahi kiya hai.....

shak toh ALESENDRA ko bhi ho gaya tha par wo bhi chup hi rehti thi.......

ek din jab ASMODEUS KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ke saath FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke saamne gaya toh uske pahunchne se pehle hi FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT gayab ho gayi......

FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT WHITE ENERGY ka pratik thi,uske gayab hone se KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ko yakin ho gaya ki ye sab ASMODEUS ki wajah se hi hua hai....

wahin itne mahino se jisko paane ki khwahish liye wo is grah me rooka hua tha us FOUNTAIN ko gayab hua dekh ASMODEUS ko bhi ghussa aa gaya......

aur agle hi pal ASMODEUS apne asli roop me tha....sir se lekar pair tak andheri raat se bhi kaale kapde,chehra barf se bhi zyada safed.aakhon ki putliyan sweth ho chuki thi...

ASMODEUS ke asli roop ko dekh kar ALESENDRA aur KING SOLOMON ki haalat kharab ho gayi.......

ASMODEUS ki aankhon ki putilyon ka colour ek second ke liye badalkar laal ho gaya..aur agle hi pal pura ISLA GRAH aag se jal utha.....

KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ke pairon me gir gaye aur apne grah ko nuksaan na pahunchane ki ASMODEUS ke aage bheek maangne lage......

ASMODEUS ne ek lambi saans chhodi jaise ki apne ghusse ko pi gaya ho.ASMODEUS ke aisa karte hi aag bhujh gayi.......

ASMODEUS ne bohot koshish ki FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me pata lagane ki par nahi laga saka....

par ab ASMODEUS apne asli roop me aa chuka tha....uske sharir se paap ki tarange nikalkar pure ISLA grah me failne lagi...

ISLA ki bholi bhaali praja ke dil me bhi ab chal,kapat paap panapne laga.....

ye sab dekhkar KING SOLOMON kaafi dukhi rehne lage wahin ALESENDRA ke dil me bhi ASMODEUS ke liye nafrat palne lagi.......

ALESENDRA ko ek aur baat ka bhi dar tha ki kahin uska beta bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah na ho jaaye.....

kuch din baad ALESENDRA ne ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah ko chhod kar chale jaane ko kaha aur fir kabhi na lout kar aane ka vachan liya...



jisse sunkar ASMODEUS muskuraya.....



ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ki baat maan li par saath hi ek shart rakhi aur gayab ho gaya.......

tab jaakar kahin ALESENDRA aur pure ISLA grah ne chain ki saans thi....

ALESENDRA ne decide kiya ki wo apne bacche ko ache sanskar dekar ek acha insaan banayegi par wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki SAANP ka beta kabhi bhi HIRAN nahi hota....

aakhir wo din bhi aa gaya jis din ALESENDRA maa banane waali thi.....

is awasar par ISLA ke raaj guru aur DEFENDER bhi aaye hue the....

yahan mai ek baat bata dun ki WARRIORS WORLD ke DEFENDER ke saath jo kuch bhi hua uske baad GODS MESSENGER ne har grah ke DEFENDER ko ASMODEUS se naa ulajhne ke aadesh diye the.....

ASMODEUS ka bachha amavasya ki raat paida hua aur wo bhi us muhurt me jisse sab KAAL muhurt kehte the..

par baat yahin pe khatm nahi hui,ASMODEUS ka baccha bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah barf sa safed tha aur uski bhi aankhon ki putliyan gaayab thi.....

uske paida hote hi uske sharir ke upar ASMODUS ki hi tarah kaale kapde aa gaye the......

ALESENDRA aur uske maata pita ye sab dekhkar kaafi dar gaye the aur rahi sahi kasar RAJGURU ne puri kar di....

RAJGURU ne sabko bataya ki ye bacha aage jaakar ISLA ke liye khatarnaak saabit hoga...

iska is grah par rehna thik nahi hai......

RAJGURU ki baat sunkar ALESENDRA aur uske mata pita ka dimag ghum gaya...

kisiko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare.........

ki tabhi......mahal me tez hawayen chalne lagi..wo kaali andheri raat aur andheri ho gayi......aur ASMODEUS ka bachha hawa me uth gaya.....

abhi koi kuch samajhta usse pehle hi mahal me ASMODEUS ki awaaz gunj gayi....

ASMODEUS apne waade ke anusar ISLA nahi gaya tha par wo us bache ko apne paas rakhna chahta tha.....

usne ALESENDRA se apne bete ko maanga....

ALESENDRA ye chahti toh nahi thi par uske paas koi option bhi toh nahi tha isiliye usne ASMODEUS ko haan kehdi aur agle hi pal wo bacha gayab hokar ASMODEUS ke paas pahunch gaya..............




FLASHBACK ENDS:-




ASMODEUS- kuch pata chala?????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER.....sab kuch waisa hi hai jaisa pehle tha........

ASMODEUS- par maine kuch mehsoos kiya tha????

BEELZEBUB- mehsoos toh maine bhi kiya tha par jab mai wahan pahuncha toh sab kuch pehle jaisa hi tha.......

ASMODEUS- koi baat nahi.tum bas nazar rakhe raho.kya tum tumhari maa se baat karte ho?????

BEELZEBUB- kya FATHER.....aap toh sab jaante hain,fir bhi...........

ASMODEUS- hmm...par kya tumhe kabhi icha nahi hoti usse batane ki ki tum use bete ho????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER....aur waise bhi,wo achai ki, GOD ki puja karti hain aur mai aapki......

hum dono ke soch ki neev hi itni alag hai ki mujhe unme apnepan wala ehsaas hi kabhi nahi hota....

par haan,jab unhone apke bhai ko sharan di thi tab mujhe unpe bohot krodh aaya tha.man toh kiya tha ki unhe aur aapke bhai ko ek saath khatm kar dun,par majboor tha..

apke aise karne ke aadesh naa the.....

ASMODEUS- tum usse haani toh pahuncha sakte ho par maar nahi sakte..hum dono ki mrityu ek dusre ke haathon hi ho sakti hai,aur kisike nahi....



BEELZEBUB- ek baat puchun FATHER?????



ASMODEUS-pucho............!!!!?????



BEELZEBUB- aapke bhai ne aap se itni saari baatein kahin,aapko galat theharaya par aapne palat kar jawab nahi diya........aisa kyun????

ASMODEUS- jawab tumhare sawaal me hi hai....BHAI.......issi shabd ki wajah se usse bolne diya.........

chota bhai hai,choti choti cheezon me jeetkar khush hone do......aur waise bhi, wo ROSHNI ke jaisa hai....aur ROSHNI ko ROSHAN nahi kiya jaata........



zindagi ki haqiqat har kisike liye alag alag hoti hai,par jo apni haqiqat ko khoj ussi raaste par ek dridh nishchaye ke saath chalne lagta hai,jeet ussiki hoti hai....

BEELZEBUB- aapka ansh,aapka khoon hone ki wajah se maine naajane kitni hi shaktiyan haasil ki,kitni siddhiyan prapt ki par aaj tak aapki baaton ke piche chupe raaz ka pata nahi laga paaya....



ASMODEUS- hahahaha......kuch baaton ko samjha nahi jaata,unpar aankh band karke amal kiya jaata hai....

jis din tum un baaton ko amal me le aaoge,us baat ka matlab apneaap hi samajh jaaoge....

BEELZEBUB- kya aapke bhai bhi aapki hi tarah baatein karte hain.....!!!!

ASMODEUS- hmm,kuch kuch.........tujhe ek kaam karna hai......

ASMODEUS ke mooh se achanak kaam sunkar BEELZEBUB jo ab tak casually baat kar raha tha,wo satark ho gaya.....



BEELZEBUB- aadesh de FATHER.........



ASMODEUS ne BEELZEBUB ko uska kaam bataya......

BEELZEBUB- jo aagnya......

BEELZEBUB ne apna sir jhukaya aur gayab ho gaya...



ASMODEUS- dekhte hain BHAI,jab tera waqt aayega toh tu kya karega??????





PLANET- EARTH





PLACE- COLLEGE CANTEEN........




HEY GUYZZZZZ...................



hey V.J.abhi mere frns shayad aur bhi kuch kehte par mere saath ALISHA ko dekhkar wo sab shocked ho gaye isiliye chup ho gaye....



subah ka waqt hai..kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi classes nahi lagi thi......ANJALI aur RONIT ek saath aaj college aaye the.....



aur mai aaj bhi kal hi ki tarah thoda late aaya tha......

kal hue incident ke baad ANJALI aur SHANAYA ne mera dimag khaa diya tha.....

dono ne ek ghante tak meri ALISHA ko HAAN kehne ki baat ko alag alag tarike se verify kiya tha.

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki mai kisiko itni aasani se HAAN keh sakta hun wo bhi uska VALENTINE partner banane ke liye...

is beech ek baar RONIT ke mooh se nikal gaya ki "toh kya hua yaar.ALISHA hai bhi toh kitni hot""......

RONIT ke mooh se ye baat nikalte hi ANJALI ne uski haalat kharab kar di thi.....

bohot mushkil se RONIT ne ANJALI ko manaya tha....

par uski class khatm hui nahi ki un dono ne ek baar firse meri class lene shuru kar di.......

is pure douran AVANTIKA chup hi rahi...uska chehra bilkul emotionless sa ho gaya tha...

idhar jab in dono ke mooh band nahi hui toh maine unse kaha ki kisike saath toh jaana hi tha toh ALISHA me kya burayi hai....

meri baat ka unke paas koi jawab nahi tha isiliye dono chup ho gaye..........



mai kabhi bhi kisi aur ke saath kabhi hang out karta nahi tha isiliye abhi mujhe ALISHA ke saath dekhkar sabhi firse shocked ho gaye the...

MAI-abbe,bhoot dekh liya kya tum teeno ne ??????

RONIT- bhoot hi dekh liya lag raha hai mujhe toh......aaj mera dost ek ladki ke saath aa raha hai.......

MAI- haan toh isme kya badi bat hai......mai ladki ke saath nahi aa sakta kya???sit ALISHA......

maine ALISHA ke liye ek chair piche ki.ALISHA baith gayi......

ALISHA- hi guys & sorry haan,meri wajah se hi aapka friend aaj late aaya hai.....



ANJALI- MATLAB!!!!!!!

ALISHA ki baat sunkar baaki sabko bhi ek jhatka laga....

MAI- tum sab ke manners kahan gaye....pehle uske HI ka toh jawab do.......!!!

SAB- hi...........



ALISHA- haan,ab batao....

ANJALI ki excitement dekhkar mai zor se has pada.....

ANJALI- daant dikhana band kar nahi toh tod dungi...haan,tumne bataya nahi,tumhari wajah se V.J kaise late hua????

ALISHA- haan wo actually aaj mai V.J ke saath hi aayi hun naa.toh isne pehle mujhe pick kiya fir hum aaye..is chakkar me thoda late ho gaye...

ALISHA ki baat sunkar sabke mooh khule ke khule reh gaye......

ANJALI- V.J ne tumhe pick kiya wo bhi tumhare ghar se.!!!!!!

ALISHA- haan toh!!!!isme itna surprise hone ki kya baat hai....!!!!!!

ronit- SURPRISE.......!!!!!!!!! ye toh CHAMATKAR waali baat hai........V.J ne hum dono ko chhodkar aajtak kisi ko bhi ghar jaakar pick nahi kiya.......

ALISHA- i guess i am lucky then.......

RONIT- lucky nahi bohot zyada lucky......bhai ek baat bata,ALISHA sirf VALENTINE PARTNER hai ya fir teri VALENTINE hai?????

ALISHA- abhi tak toh PARTNER hi hun..but..........future ka,who knows??????

RONIT- matlab ek taraf aag jal gayi hai....kyun????

ANJALI- chupkar...aur ALISHA,kuch apne baare me batao............????tumne kaafi late admission liya hai naa.infact,shayad 2 hi mahine hue hain tumhe college aate hue...

aur tum toh science me ho naa.usme mid term admission milna,quite tough haan!!!

ALISHA-haan,wo actually,dad GOVERNMENT job me hain....unka transfer yahan ho gaya..is college ke baare me maine bohot suna tha.......

mere marks ache the isiliye mujhe admission milne me koi dikkat nahi aayi.....

ANJALI- ohh........aur itne ladkon ke beech tumne V.J ko hi kyun chuna apne VALENTINE PARTNER?????tum toh ho bhi kaafi beautiful....tumhe toh koi bhi haan bol dega.

ALISHA- are you serious....tum puch rahi ho ki maine BEST ko kyun chuna????inke aage aur koi hai toh bata do,mai usse chun lungi........

AVANTIKA- ALISHA,pasand BEST dekhkar nahi kiya jaata..jisse pasand kiya jaata hai,wo hamare liye BEST ho jaata hai....

AVANTIKA ne ye baat mujhe dekhkar kahi...

ALISHA- jo har cheez me BEST ho,kya wo partner ke taur par bhi BEST nahi ho sakta!!!!!!!

RONIT- ye bhi sahi hai..waise SHANAYA,AVANTIKA...tum dono ko bhi ab apne apne partners dhoond lene chahiye.....

VALENTINES day ko bas do din hi bache hain......

SHANAYA- mera toh ho gaya........

RONIT- kya???kab??aur tune bataya bhi nahi?????

SHANAYA- ANJU ko toh bataya tha...mujhe laga wo tujhe bata degi.....

RONIT- ANJU....tune mujhe nahi bataya....

ANJALI- arre mere dimag se nikal gaya.aur waise bhi,usne VALENTINE contest me participate karne ke liye partner chuna hai,life partner banane ke liye nahi...

RONIT- waise hai kaun????

MAI- VINCENT PAUL........hamare hi class ka hai.....

abhi SHANAYA kuch kehti isse pehle maine bol diya....

SHANAYA- how do u know????maine toh kuch bhi nahi bataya....

RONIT- isse tu kuch bhi nahi chhupa sakti...isse sabke baare me sabkuch pata rehta hai.....



AVANTIKA dheere se- GHANTA pata rehta hai.........



MAI- kya kaha AVNI...............??????

AVANTIKA mere sawaal par hadabada gayi...

AVANTIKA- kuuchhh bhi toh nahi.........

MAI- tumhari awaaz kyun atak rahi hai????

AVANTIKA- wwwooo,kuch atak gaya tha.....

AVANTIKA paani peene lagi.....

MAI- wo tumhare gale ka GHANTA,i mean ghanti fas gayi hogi.......

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA ke mooh me bhara paani baahar aa gaya.........

aur AVANTIKA khaasne lagi.........

SHANAYA- aaram se babes.........

AVANTIKA ne meri taraf dekha,par mujhe dekhte hi usse sharm aayi,usse pata jo chal gaya tha ki usne jo dheere se bola tha wo maine sun liya tha....

SHANAYA- waise kal AVNI ko bhi kaafi logon ne VALENTINE ke liye approach kiya tha...

ANJALI- toh isme kaun si nayi baat hai...madam ko toh 1 mahine se commerce,science,maths aur arts department ke bande bhi puch rahe hain....

par madam kisiko haan kahe toh naa!!!!!!

RONIT- haan yaar AVNI,ab toh waise bhi sirf do hi din baaki hai.......tune abhi tak kisiko final nahi kiya.aise me toh hamara group VALENTINE'S party me adhura reh jaayega.....

ANJALI- exactly..........bilkul bhi maza nahi aayega....bhale koi bhi jeete ,par agar hum sab participate karte toh kitna maza aata!!!!

ALISHA- ya babes........u have to say yes to someone.....

SHANAYA- arre meri puri baat toh suno.....

kal bhi hamesha ki hi tarah AVNI ne kaafi ladko ko reject kiya par last me ek banda aaya.usne bhi AVNI ko approch kiya...

banda kaafi smart tha par mujhe laga ki madam isse bhi mana kar dengi par..........

ANJALI- AVANTIKA maan gayi kya??????

SHANAYA- thodi thodi........

RONIT- ab ye kua logic hua ????

SHANAYA- matlab AVNI ne usse soch kar bataungi,aisa kaha hai........

ANJALI- ye tune bilkul theek kiya babes.....in ladko ko naa thoda tadpaakar hi haan bolna chahiye,warna inhe hamari kadar hi nahi rehti.....

ye baat ANJALI ne RONIT ko dekhkar kahi thi....

RONIT- lai,ab maine kya kiya????

ANJALI- kya kiya!!!!!VALENTINES week ko start hue aaj 5 din ho gaye hain.in 5 dino me tumne mujhe sirf ek hi gift diya hai..baaki ke 4 kahan hai?????

RONIT- arre tune hi toh kaha tha ki tujhe ye 7 din ke 7 gifts ka funda samajh nahi aata....

tujhe ye sab bas showoff lagta hai...isiliye maine 1st day ke baad tujhe kuch nahi diya...

ANJALI- maine bola aur tune man liya.tere paas apna dimag nahi hai kya?????

ANJALI ki baat sunkar jahan teeno ladkiyan has rahi thi,wahin RONIT bechara waala mooh banakar meri taraf dekhne laga....



MAI- yahi ishq hai BACCHE........
THANK GOD

hum single hi ACCHE........



meri baat sunkar sabhi has diye.......

ANJALI- waise us ladke ka naam kya hai????aur kaun se branch se hai????

SHANAYA- maths branch se hai....aur naam hai UTKARSH.............


ALISHA- kya naam bataya tumne.........?????



HI GUYZZZ,HI AVANTIKA............



abhi ALSIHA ke sawaal ka SHANAYA jawab deti usse pehle hi ye awaaz humare kaano me padi.....

humare saamne ek handsome sa banda khada tha....



AVANTIKA- hi UTKARSH............



ye wahi ladka hai doston jisne AVANTIKA ko approch kiya tha.......

UTKARSH- AVANTIKA,tumne kuch socha,jo maine kaha tha uske baare me....we u come with me to the VALENTINE'S party as my VALENTINE....

AVANTIKA ne ek baar muskurakar meri taraf dekha aur fir saamne UTKARSH ki taraf dekhne lagi jo ALISHA ki hi tarah ek ummid liye AVANTIKA ki taraf dekh raha tha........




AVANTIKA- yes................



CONGRATTTTSSSS............



aur fir kuch aisa hua ki mere saare dost including AVANTIKA shocked ho gaye.....

ye jo congratts shabd abhi abhi uccharit hua tha naa ye ALISHA ne kaha tha aur ye usne AVANTIKA se nahi balki UTKARSH se kaha tha...

par shock hone ka kaaran ye tha ki ye bolkar ALISHA UTKARSH ke gale lag gayiii jisse dekhkar mere friends shocked ho gaye......



SHANAYA- ALISHA tu UTKARSH ko jaanti hai kya???



RONIT- ye kaisa sawaal hai!!ofcourse jaanti hogi tabhi toh usse hug kiya hai...ye puch ki kaise jaanti hai????

ALISHA- kisiko kuch bhi puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai......mai batati hun ki mai isse kaise jaanti hun........



so guys,naam toh aap sab iska jaante hi ho.....UTKARSH aur mujhse zyada isse aur koi nahi jaanta kyunki ye mera

BHAI HAI.........






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.......





AAPKA APNA V..J....

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM ALISHA NAAM KI EK LADKI KA VALENTINE'S CONTEST ME PARTNER KE LIYE HAAN KEH DETA HAI.
AB AAGE:-








CHAPTER-2








( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )







UPDATE-68







PLANET- MONSLICKEL






PLACE- ASMODEUS PALACE








HI HAIL FATHER..........



kaise ho BEELZEBUB???????...........



BEELZEBUB- thik hun ...........FATHER..............




chakra gaye na doston!!!!!ki ASMODEUS kab baap ban gaya................

aap me se bohoton ko lag raha hoga ki ye is kahani ki koi nayi entry hai par aisa hai nahi.......

BEELZEBUB ke baare me 7TH aur 14TH update me thoda bohot bataya gaya hai...

par BEELZEBUB ki puri asliyat aapko aaj pata chalegi jisse sunkar mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab ko jhatka lagne waala hai....

14TH update me maine bataya tha ki BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ka sabse khatarnaak DEVIL hai.

iske andar har tarah ke black magic ki taaqat moujud hai...iski speed light ki speed se bhi zyada tez hai aur iske zyadatar SPELLS jaan leva hote hain........

haalaki 14th update me BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS ko HI HAIL DEVIL LORD kehkar bulata hai par wo isiliye kyunki mujhe is character ke asliat ko suspense me rakhna tha.....



toh kya hai BEELZEBUB ki asliyat.........



BEELZEBUB ASMODEUS aur ALESANDRA ka beta aur uska chupaya gaya dusra sabse bada RAAZ hai.........



KAISE????CHALIYE BATATA HUN........



A FLASHBACK NARRATION:-



ASMODEUS se pehli baar milkar jab ALESENDRA apne grah ISLA wapas louti toh unhone ASMODUEUS ke baare me jitna usse pata tha,utna bata diya.....

apni beti ki baaton ke piche chupe pyar ko uske pita KING SOLOMON bhaamp gaye...

wo kaafi khush hue ye jaankar ki unki beti ko pyar ho gaya hai...par unki khushi zyada der tak tik nahi paayi...

unhone apne beti ke dimag se ASMODEUS ki chavi nikali par jo chehra unke saamne aaya usse dekhkar unhe ek tez jhatka laga....

ALESENDRA ne toh duniya nahi dekhi thi par KING SOLOMON ko toh pure brahmaand ke sabhi badi cheezon ke baare me pata tha...

unki beti ne SHAITANO ke devta ko chuna hai ye jaankar unki aankhon ke aage andhera chaa gaya..

unhone jab apni beti ko iske baare me bataya toh ALESENDRA ko yakin nahi hua......

ALESENDRA sachhai jaanane ke liye ASMODEUS ki khoj me firse nikalne waali thi par tabhi ASMODEUS ALESENDRA,KING SOLOMON aur unki wife ke saamne prakat hua....

ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ko bataya ki jo kuch bhi uske pita ne uske baare me kaha hai,wo sach hai........

fir ASMODEUS ne KING SOLOMON ko kaha ki agar wo uski shaadi ALESENDRA se kara denge toh wo saare bure kaam chhod dega..



BURAYI keh rahi thi ki ab wo BURAYI nahi karegi.ye hona toh asambhav tha par putri prem me andhe KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ki baat maan gaye......



Par unke maanane ki ek wajah aur bhi thi... KING SOLOMON ko ye pata tha ki SHAITANO ka DEVTA hone se pehle ASMODEUS GOD ka beta bhi hai toh shayad unki beti ke prem ki wajah se ASMODEUS ke andar ki achayi firse jaag gayi ho yahi sochkar unhone shaadi ke liye haan keh diya......



par KING SOLOMON ye nahi jaante the ki ASMODEUS ka unki grah me aane ka asli kaaran kuch aur hai.....



WORLD OF WARRIORS ke baad ASMODEUS ka plan ISLA grah jaane ka hi tha...



ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah me ek aseem urja ka aabhas ho gaya tha....aur jab ALESENDRA ko ASMODEUS ne pehli baar dekha tab hi wo jaan gaya tha tha ki ALESENDRA kaun hai....

aisa nahi tha ki ASMODEUS ko ALESENDRA achi nahi lagi thi,par uski shakti ki bhook ke aage uski mohobbat ki aag feeki pad gayi....

tabhi usne decide kar liya tha ki ALESENDRA se shaadi kar wo ISLA ki us shakti ke shroth ka dhundega..



ASMODEUS aur ALESENDRA ki shaadi ho gayi.......



aur kuch hi mahino me ALESENDRA pregnent bhi ho gayi........



is beech ASMODEUS ko ISLA ke us shakti shroth FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me bhi pata chal gaya tha......

wahin ISLA grah jo ki white energy ke aadhin tha,ASMODEUS ke aane ki wajah se is grah ki neev dagmagane lagi...

ISLA ke log,jo hamesha tandarust rehte the,unke sharir me rogon ka vaas hone laga..

KING SOLOMON ko doubt ho gaya tha ki in sab ke peeche ASMODEUS ki upastithi hi wajah hai par wo directly kuch bol nahi sakte the..

unhe ye bhi lag gaya tha ASMODEUS ne unse jhooth bola hai...usne abhi tak kaali shaktiyon ka tyag nahi kiya hai.....

shak toh ALESENDRA ko bhi ho gaya tha par wo bhi chup hi rehti thi.......

ek din jab ASMODEUS KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ke saath FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke saamne gaya toh uske pahunchne se pehle hi FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT gayab ho gayi......

FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT WHITE ENERGY ka pratik thi,uske gayab hone se KING SOLOMON aur ALESENDRA ko yakin ho gaya ki ye sab ASMODEUS ki wajah se hi hua hai....

wahin itne mahino se jisko paane ki khwahish liye wo is grah me rooka hua tha us FOUNTAIN ko gayab hua dekh ASMODEUS ko bhi ghussa aa gaya......

aur agle hi pal ASMODEUS apne asli roop me tha....sir se lekar pair tak andheri raat se bhi kaale kapde,chehra barf se bhi zyada safed.aakhon ki putliyan sweth ho chuki thi...

ASMODEUS ke asli roop ko dekh kar ALESENDRA aur KING SOLOMON ki haalat kharab ho gayi.......

ASMODEUS ki aankhon ki putilyon ka colour ek second ke liye badalkar laal ho gaya..aur agle hi pal pura ISLA GRAH aag se jal utha.....

KING SOLOMON ASMODEUS ke pairon me gir gaye aur apne grah ko nuksaan na pahunchane ki ASMODEUS ke aage bheek maangne lage......

ASMODEUS ne ek lambi saans chhodi jaise ki apne ghusse ko pi gaya ho.ASMODEUS ke aisa karte hi aag bhujh gayi.......

ASMODEUS ne bohot koshish ki FOUNTAIN OF LIGHT ke baare me pata lagane ki par nahi laga saka....

par ab ASMODEUS apne asli roop me aa chuka tha....uske sharir se paap ki tarange nikalkar pure ISLA grah me failne lagi...

ISLA ki bholi bhaali praja ke dil me bhi ab chal,kapat paap panapne laga.....

ye sab dekhkar KING SOLOMON kaafi dukhi rehne lage wahin ALESENDRA ke dil me bhi ASMODEUS ke liye nafrat palne lagi.......

ALESENDRA ko ek aur baat ka bhi dar tha ki kahin uska beta bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah na ho jaaye.....

kuch din baad ALESENDRA ne ASMODEUS ko ISLA grah ko chhod kar chale jaane ko kaha aur fir kabhi na lout kar aane ka vachan liya...



jisse sunkar ASMODEUS muskuraya.....



ASMODEUS ne ALESENDRA ki baat maan li par saath hi ek shart rakhi aur gayab ho gaya.......

tab jaakar kahin ALESENDRA aur pure ISLA grah ne chain ki saans thi....

ALESENDRA ne decide kiya ki wo apne bacche ko ache sanskar dekar ek acha insaan banayegi par wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki SAANP ka beta kabhi bhi HIRAN nahi hota....

aakhir wo din bhi aa gaya jis din ALESENDRA maa banane waali thi.....

is awasar par ISLA ke raaj guru aur DEFENDER bhi aaye hue the....

yahan mai ek baat bata dun ki WARRIORS WORLD ke DEFENDER ke saath jo kuch bhi hua uske baad GODS MESSENGER ne har grah ke DEFENDER ko ASMODEUS se naa ulajhne ke aadesh diye the.....

ASMODEUS ka bachha amavasya ki raat paida hua aur wo bhi us muhurt me jisse sab KAAL muhurt kehte the..

par baat yahin pe khatm nahi hui,ASMODEUS ka baccha bhi ASMODEUS ki hi tarah barf sa safed tha aur uski bhi aankhon ki putliyan gaayab thi.....

uske paida hote hi uske sharir ke upar ASMODUS ki hi tarah kaale kapde aa gaye the......

ALESENDRA aur uske maata pita ye sab dekhkar kaafi dar gaye the aur rahi sahi kasar RAJGURU ne puri kar di....

RAJGURU ne sabko bataya ki ye bacha aage jaakar ISLA ke liye khatarnaak saabit hoga...

iska is grah par rehna thik nahi hai......

RAJGURU ki baat sunkar ALESENDRA aur uske mata pita ka dimag ghum gaya...

kisiko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare.........

ki tabhi......mahal me tez hawayen chalne lagi..wo kaali andheri raat aur andheri ho gayi......aur ASMODEUS ka bachha hawa me uth gaya.....

abhi koi kuch samajhta usse pehle hi mahal me ASMODEUS ki awaaz gunj gayi....

ASMODEUS apne waade ke anusar ISLA nahi gaya tha par wo us bache ko apne paas rakhna chahta tha.....

usne ALESENDRA se apne bete ko maanga....

ALESENDRA ye chahti toh nahi thi par uske paas koi option bhi toh nahi tha isiliye usne ASMODEUS ko haan kehdi aur agle hi pal wo bacha gayab hokar ASMODEUS ke paas pahunch gaya..............




FLASHBACK ENDS:-




ASMODEUS- kuch pata chala?????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER.....sab kuch waisa hi hai jaisa pehle tha........

ASMODEUS- par maine kuch mehsoos kiya tha????

BEELZEBUB- mehsoos toh maine bhi kiya tha par jab mai wahan pahuncha toh sab kuch pehle jaisa hi tha.......

ASMODEUS- koi baat nahi.tum bas nazar rakhe raho.kya tum tumhari maa se baat karte ho?????

BEELZEBUB- kya FATHER.....aap toh sab jaante hain,fir bhi...........

ASMODEUS- hmm...par kya tumhe kabhi icha nahi hoti usse batane ki ki tum use bete ho????

BEELZEBUB- nahi FATHER....aur waise bhi,wo achai ki, GOD ki puja karti hain aur mai aapki......

hum dono ke soch ki neev hi itni alag hai ki mujhe unme apnepan wala ehsaas hi kabhi nahi hota....

par haan,jab unhone apke bhai ko sharan di thi tab mujhe unpe bohot krodh aaya tha.man toh kiya tha ki unhe aur aapke bhai ko ek saath khatm kar dun,par majboor tha..

apke aise karne ke aadesh naa the.....

ASMODEUS- tum usse haani toh pahuncha sakte ho par maar nahi sakte..hum dono ki mrityu ek dusre ke haathon hi ho sakti hai,aur kisike nahi....



BEELZEBUB- ek baat puchun FATHER?????



ASMODEUS-pucho............!!!!?????



BEELZEBUB- aapke bhai ne aap se itni saari baatein kahin,aapko galat theharaya par aapne palat kar jawab nahi diya........aisa kyun????

ASMODEUS- jawab tumhare sawaal me hi hai....BHAI.......issi shabd ki wajah se usse bolne diya.........

chota bhai hai,choti choti cheezon me jeetkar khush hone do......aur waise bhi, wo ROSHNI ke jaisa hai....aur ROSHNI ko ROSHAN nahi kiya jaata........



zindagi ki haqiqat har kisike liye alag alag hoti hai,par jo apni haqiqat ko khoj ussi raaste par ek dridh nishchaye ke saath chalne lagta hai,jeet ussiki hoti hai....

BEELZEBUB- aapka ansh,aapka khoon hone ki wajah se maine naajane kitni hi shaktiyan haasil ki,kitni siddhiyan prapt ki par aaj tak aapki baaton ke piche chupe raaz ka pata nahi laga paaya....



ASMODEUS- hahahaha......kuch baaton ko samjha nahi jaata,unpar aankh band karke amal kiya jaata hai....

jis din tum un baaton ko amal me le aaoge,us baat ka matlab apneaap hi samajh jaaoge....

BEELZEBUB- kya aapke bhai bhi aapki hi tarah baatein karte hain.....!!!!

ASMODEUS- hmm,kuch kuch.........tujhe ek kaam karna hai......

ASMODEUS ke mooh se achanak kaam sunkar BEELZEBUB jo ab tak casually baat kar raha tha,wo satark ho gaya.....



BEELZEBUB- aadesh de FATHER.........



ASMODEUS ne BEELZEBUB ko uska kaam bataya......

BEELZEBUB- jo aagnya......

BEELZEBUB ne apna sir jhukaya aur gayab ho gaya...



ASMODEUS- dekhte hain BHAI,jab tera waqt aayega toh tu kya karega??????





PLANET- EARTH





PLACE- COLLEGE CANTEEN........




HEY GUYZZZZZ...................



hey V.J.abhi mere frns shayad aur bhi kuch kehte par mere saath ALISHA ko dekhkar wo sab shocked ho gaye isiliye chup ho gaye....



subah ka waqt hai..kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi classes nahi lagi thi......ANJALI aur RONIT ek saath aaj college aaye the.....



aur mai aaj bhi kal hi ki tarah thoda late aaya tha......

kal hue incident ke baad ANJALI aur SHANAYA ne mera dimag khaa diya tha.....

dono ne ek ghante tak meri ALISHA ko HAAN kehne ki baat ko alag alag tarike se verify kiya tha.

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki mai kisiko itni aasani se HAAN keh sakta hun wo bhi uska VALENTINE partner banane ke liye...

is beech ek baar RONIT ke mooh se nikal gaya ki "toh kya hua yaar.ALISHA hai bhi toh kitni hot""......

RONIT ke mooh se ye baat nikalte hi ANJALI ne uski haalat kharab kar di thi.....

bohot mushkil se RONIT ne ANJALI ko manaya tha....

par uski class khatm hui nahi ki un dono ne ek baar firse meri class lene shuru kar di.......

is pure douran AVANTIKA chup hi rahi...uska chehra bilkul emotionless sa ho gaya tha...

idhar jab in dono ke mooh band nahi hui toh maine unse kaha ki kisike saath toh jaana hi tha toh ALISHA me kya burayi hai....

meri baat ka unke paas koi jawab nahi tha isiliye dono chup ho gaye..........



mai kabhi bhi kisi aur ke saath kabhi hang out karta nahi tha isiliye abhi mujhe ALISHA ke saath dekhkar sabhi firse shocked ho gaye the...

MAI-abbe,bhoot dekh liya kya tum teeno ne ??????

RONIT- bhoot hi dekh liya lag raha hai mujhe toh......aaj mera dost ek ladki ke saath aa raha hai.......

MAI- haan toh isme kya badi bat hai......mai ladki ke saath nahi aa sakta kya???sit ALISHA......

maine ALISHA ke liye ek chair piche ki.ALISHA baith gayi......

ALISHA- hi guys & sorry haan,meri wajah se hi aapka friend aaj late aaya hai.....



ANJALI- MATLAB!!!!!!!

ALISHA ki baat sunkar baaki sabko bhi ek jhatka laga....

MAI- tum sab ke manners kahan gaye....pehle uske HI ka toh jawab do.......!!!

SAB- hi...........



ALISHA- haan,ab batao....

ANJALI ki excitement dekhkar mai zor se has pada.....

ANJALI- daant dikhana band kar nahi toh tod dungi...haan,tumne bataya nahi,tumhari wajah se V.J kaise late hua????

ALISHA- haan wo actually aaj mai V.J ke saath hi aayi hun naa.toh isne pehle mujhe pick kiya fir hum aaye..is chakkar me thoda late ho gaye...

ALISHA ki baat sunkar sabke mooh khule ke khule reh gaye......

ANJALI- V.J ne tumhe pick kiya wo bhi tumhare ghar se.!!!!!!

ALISHA- haan toh!!!!isme itna surprise hone ki kya baat hai....!!!!!!

ronit- SURPRISE.......!!!!!!!!! ye toh CHAMATKAR waali baat hai........V.J ne hum dono ko chhodkar aajtak kisi ko bhi ghar jaakar pick nahi kiya.......

ALISHA- i guess i am lucky then.......

RONIT- lucky nahi bohot zyada lucky......bhai ek baat bata,ALISHA sirf VALENTINE PARTNER hai ya fir teri VALENTINE hai?????

ALISHA- abhi tak toh PARTNER hi hun..but..........future ka,who knows??????

RONIT- matlab ek taraf aag jal gayi hai....kyun????

ANJALI- chupkar...aur ALISHA,kuch apne baare me batao............????tumne kaafi late admission liya hai naa.infact,shayad 2 hi mahine hue hain tumhe college aate hue...

aur tum toh science me ho naa.usme mid term admission milna,quite tough haan!!!

ALISHA-haan,wo actually,dad GOVERNMENT job me hain....unka transfer yahan ho gaya..is college ke baare me maine bohot suna tha.......

mere marks ache the isiliye mujhe admission milne me koi dikkat nahi aayi.....

ANJALI- ohh........aur itne ladkon ke beech tumne V.J ko hi kyun chuna apne VALENTINE PARTNER?????tum toh ho bhi kaafi beautiful....tumhe toh koi bhi haan bol dega.

ALISHA- are you serious....tum puch rahi ho ki maine BEST ko kyun chuna????inke aage aur koi hai toh bata do,mai usse chun lungi........

AVANTIKA- ALISHA,pasand BEST dekhkar nahi kiya jaata..jisse pasand kiya jaata hai,wo hamare liye BEST ho jaata hai....

AVANTIKA ne ye baat mujhe dekhkar kahi...

ALISHA- jo har cheez me BEST ho,kya wo partner ke taur par bhi BEST nahi ho sakta!!!!!!!

RONIT- ye bhi sahi hai..waise SHANAYA,AVANTIKA...tum dono ko bhi ab apne apne partners dhoond lene chahiye.....

VALENTINES day ko bas do din hi bache hain......

SHANAYA- mera toh ho gaya........

RONIT- kya???kab??aur tune bataya bhi nahi?????

SHANAYA- ANJU ko toh bataya tha...mujhe laga wo tujhe bata degi.....

RONIT- ANJU....tune mujhe nahi bataya....

ANJALI- arre mere dimag se nikal gaya.aur waise bhi,usne VALENTINE contest me participate karne ke liye partner chuna hai,life partner banane ke liye nahi...

RONIT- waise hai kaun????

MAI- VINCENT PAUL........hamare hi class ka hai.....

abhi SHANAYA kuch kehti isse pehle maine bol diya....

SHANAYA- how do u know????maine toh kuch bhi nahi bataya....

RONIT- isse tu kuch bhi nahi chhupa sakti...isse sabke baare me sabkuch pata rehta hai.....



AVANTIKA dheere se- GHANTA pata rehta hai.........



MAI- kya kaha AVNI...............??????

AVANTIKA mere sawaal par hadabada gayi...

AVANTIKA- kuuchhh bhi toh nahi.........

MAI- tumhari awaaz kyun atak rahi hai????

AVANTIKA- wwwooo,kuch atak gaya tha.....

AVANTIKA paani peene lagi.....

MAI- wo tumhare gale ka GHANTA,i mean ghanti fas gayi hogi.......

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA ke mooh me bhara paani baahar aa gaya.........

aur AVANTIKA khaasne lagi.........

SHANAYA- aaram se babes.........

AVANTIKA ne meri taraf dekha,par mujhe dekhte hi usse sharm aayi,usse pata jo chal gaya tha ki usne jo dheere se bola tha wo maine sun liya tha....

SHANAYA- waise kal AVNI ko bhi kaafi logon ne VALENTINE ke liye approach kiya tha...

ANJALI- toh isme kaun si nayi baat hai...madam ko toh 1 mahine se commerce,science,maths aur arts department ke bande bhi puch rahe hain....

par madam kisiko haan kahe toh naa!!!!!!

RONIT- haan yaar AVNI,ab toh waise bhi sirf do hi din baaki hai.......tune abhi tak kisiko final nahi kiya.aise me toh hamara group VALENTINE'S party me adhura reh jaayega.....

ANJALI- exactly..........bilkul bhi maza nahi aayega....bhale koi bhi jeete ,par agar hum sab participate karte toh kitna maza aata!!!!

ALISHA- ya babes........u have to say yes to someone.....

SHANAYA- arre meri puri baat toh suno.....

kal bhi hamesha ki hi tarah AVNI ne kaafi ladko ko reject kiya par last me ek banda aaya.usne bhi AVNI ko approch kiya...

banda kaafi smart tha par mujhe laga ki madam isse bhi mana kar dengi par..........

ANJALI- AVANTIKA maan gayi kya??????

SHANAYA- thodi thodi........

RONIT- ab ye kua logic hua ????

SHANAYA- matlab AVNI ne usse soch kar bataungi,aisa kaha hai........

ANJALI- ye tune bilkul theek kiya babes.....in ladko ko naa thoda tadpaakar hi haan bolna chahiye,warna inhe hamari kadar hi nahi rehti.....

ye baat ANJALI ne RONIT ko dekhkar kahi thi....

RONIT- lai,ab maine kya kiya????

ANJALI- kya kiya!!!!!VALENTINES week ko start hue aaj 5 din ho gaye hain.in 5 dino me tumne mujhe sirf ek hi gift diya hai..baaki ke 4 kahan hai?????

RONIT- arre tune hi toh kaha tha ki tujhe ye 7 din ke 7 gifts ka funda samajh nahi aata....

tujhe ye sab bas showoff lagta hai...isiliye maine 1st day ke baad tujhe kuch nahi diya...

ANJALI- maine bola aur tune man liya.tere paas apna dimag nahi hai kya?????

ANJALI ki baat sunkar jahan teeno ladkiyan has rahi thi,wahin RONIT bechara waala mooh banakar meri taraf dekhne laga....



MAI- yahi ishq hai BACCHE........
THANK GOD

hum single hi ACCHE........



meri baat sunkar sabhi has diye.......

ANJALI- waise us ladke ka naam kya hai????aur kaun se branch se hai????

SHANAYA- maths branch se hai....aur naam hai UTKARSH.............


ALISHA- kya naam bataya tumne.........?????



HI GUYZZZ,HI AVANTIKA............



abhi ALSIHA ke sawaal ka SHANAYA jawab deti usse pehle hi ye awaaz humare kaano me padi.....

humare saamne ek handsome sa banda khada tha....



AVANTIKA- hi UTKARSH............



ye wahi ladka hai doston jisne AVANTIKA ko approch kiya tha.......

UTKARSH- AVANTIKA,tumne kuch socha,jo maine kaha tha uske baare me....we u come with me to the VALENTINE'S party as my VALENTINE....

AVANTIKA ne ek baar muskurakar meri taraf dekha aur fir saamne UTKARSH ki taraf dekhne lagi jo ALISHA ki hi tarah ek ummid liye AVANTIKA ki taraf dekh raha tha........




AVANTIKA- yes................



CONGRATTTTSSSS............



aur fir kuch aisa hua ki mere saare dost including AVANTIKA shocked ho gaye.....

ye jo congratts shabd abhi abhi uccharit hua tha naa ye ALISHA ne kaha tha aur ye usne AVANTIKA se nahi balki UTKARSH se kaha tha...

par shock hone ka kaaran ye tha ki ye bolkar ALISHA UTKARSH ke gale lag gayiii jisse dekhkar mere friends shocked ho gaye......



SHANAYA- ALISHA tu UTKARSH ko jaanti hai kya???



RONIT- ye kaisa sawaal hai!!ofcourse jaanti hogi tabhi toh usse hug kiya hai...ye puch ki kaise jaanti hai????

ALISHA- kisiko kuch bhi puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai......mai batati hun ki mai isse kaise jaanti hun........



so guys,naam toh aap sab iska jaante hi ho.....UTKARSH aur mujhse zyada isse aur koi nahi jaanta kyunki ye mera

BHAI HAI.........






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.......





AAPKA APNA V..J....

Bhai ab Kya apne hero k saath Valentine's day pe kaand karwaoge kya
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI ASMODEUS APNE BETE BEELZEBUB KO KUCH KAAM DETA HAI WAHIN AVANTIKA KA VALANTINE PARTNER UTKARSH VIKRAM KI VALENTINE PARTNER ALISHA KA BHAI NIKALTA HAI....
AB AAGE:-





CHAPTER-2:-





( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )





UPDATE- 69





PLANET- MIRROR WORLD




PLACE- INFRONT OF THE THREE MIRRORS





MIRROR WORLD......!!!!!!!!!!!ye grah bhi ek anbhujhi peheli jaisi hi hai.....

FATHER se najane kitni baar puch chuka hun is grah ke baare me,par unke jawab toh sawal se bhi zyada uljhe hue hote hain....

ASMODEUS ne apne bete BEELZEBUB ko MIRROR WORLD hi bheja tha.....kyun!!!!kuch hi der me aapko pata chal jaayega....

BEELZEBUB-khair,kabhi na kabhi toh iske baare me jaan kar hi rahunga......

filhal FATHER ne jis kaam ke liye bheja hai,wo toh kar lun....par aaj kayi dino baad maza bohot aayega....

MIRRORS ke saamne ek mark tha jahan har aane waale ko khada hona padta tha.....



( MIRROR WORLD KE BAARE ME APKO KAHANI KE 3RD AUR LAST CHAPTER ME PATA CHALEGA ).....



par BEELZEBUB kisi bhi mark ke saamne khada nahi hua balki usne apne haath aage kar diye....

BEELZEBUB ke haathon se ek saath 3 bijliyon ki rays nikli aur teen MIRRORS par padi......



KRRRRRRRRRRRRR............



MIRRORS par rays takraate hi ek ajeeb si awaaz hui par ye kya!!!!!!!!!

teeno MIRRORS waise hi the.bijliyon ke takraane se unme koi fark nahi aaya par usse bhi ajeeb ye tha ki ye sab dekhkar bhi BEELZEBUB ke chehre par shock nahi,balki ek muskurahat thi...

jaise ki usse pata tha ki yahi hone waala hai.....



ki tabhi............



teeno mirrors ke beech ek tez prakash hua aur us prakash se ek electical rassi nikli aur BEELZEBUB ki taraf badhi....

us electical rassi ki speed kaafi tez thi par BEELZEBUB usse apni taraf aata hua aaram se dekh raha tha...

par uske chehre par ab bhi koi tention nahi dikh raha tha....wo apni jagah par apne kamar par haath tikaye khada tha....

us electrical rassi ne BEELZEBUB ko chaaron taraf se jakad liya aur agle hi pal MIRRORS ne BEELZEBUB ko apne andar kheench liya....

BEELZEBUB beech waale MIRROR ke andar se hota hua MIRROR WORLD ke andar daakhil ho gaya....

ab BEELZEBUB MIRROR WORLD ki duniya ke andar khada tha aur idhar udhar dekh raha tha maano kisi ka intazar kar raha ho....



ki tabhi..........



BEELZEBUB se thodi door ek tez bijli kadki aur zamin par giri....

zameen pe bijli ke girte hi wahan dhuan sa uth gaya aur jab wo dhua chatta toh wahan koi khada tha jisse dekhkar BEELZEBUB ki muskaan aur gehri ho gayi......

BEELZEBUB- aao AGRASENA aao......mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha hun......

wahin BEELZEBUB ke saamne khade AGRASENA ke chehre par krodh ke bhaav the........

BEELZEBUB- arre arre..........ye kya!!!!chehre par itna ghussa...!!!!!lagta hai tumhe mera yahan aana acha nahi laga......

par fir bhi ye galat baat hai,mehmaan pasand ho ya naa ho,par uska uchit swagat karna tumhara kartawya hai....

AGRASENA- kartavya ki baat tum na hi karo toh acha hoga BEELZEBUB............ASMODEUS ke gande khoon ka kabhi bhi kisi pavitra jagah par swagat nahi ho sakta....

apne pita ke baare me aisi baat sunkar ek pal ke liye BEELZEBUB ko ghussa aa gaya par agle hi pal usne khud ko shaant kar liya....

AGRASENA- maanana padega........abhi tak tumhe meri batayi hui baatein yaad hain.....

BEELZEBUB- kisi zamane me tum mere guru the......aur BEELZEBUB apne faayde me aane waali cheezon ko kabhi nahi bhulta......



JI HAAN DOSTON,KISI ZAMANE ME AGRASENA BEELZEBUB KA GURU THA..ISSI MIRROR WORLD ME BEELZUB KO EK NAHI BALKI 2 MIRRORS NE CHUNA THA....



AGRASENA- theek apne pitah ki tarah.......bas ek fark hai.....ASMODEUS jis cheez se faayda hota hai,wo naa sirf usse yaad rakhta hai,balki us cheez ke shroth ko paane ki bhi koshish karta hai........

BEELZEBUB- toh isme galat kya hai????SHAKTI HI JEEVAN HAI..............

AGRASENA- dusron ki khushi cheenkar jo zindagi milti hai usse JEEVAN nahi SHAAPIT JEEVAN kehte hain........

par tum ye nahi samjhoge............khair,tum apne aane ka kaaran batao........

BEELZEBUB- YUDH....mai aapse yudh karna chahta hun.......

BEELZEBUB ki baat sunkar ek pal ke liye AGRASENA chownk gaya par agle hi pal muskurate hue usne kaha.......

AGRASENA- kya mai iska kaaran jaan sakta hun??????

BEELZEBUB- bas man kar raha hai aapko chunouti dene ka...........

AGRSENA- tum bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho BEELZEBUB....kuch bhi bina kaaran ke nahi karte..

par mai ye bhi jaanta hun ki tum mujhe wo kaaran nahi bataoge.......

thik hai,mujhe tumhari chunouti manzoor hai.....par meri ek shart hai......!!!!!

BEELZEBUB- manzoor hai.......

AGRASENA- bina shart sune????

BEELZUBUB- aapki yahi shart hai naa ki agar aap jeete toh mai is grah par kabhi bhi dobara kadam na rakhun!!!!!

AGRASENA BEELZEBUB ki baat sunkar chownk gaya.....kyunki AGRASENA wahi kehne waala tha jo abhi abhi BEELZEBUB ne kaha tha.....

AGRASENA- tumhe kaise pata ki mai kya kehne waala tha????

BEELZEBUB- humari baaton me hi hamare sabhi sawaalon ke jawab chupe hote hain...

kya guruji,aap toh apni hi di hui shiksha bhul gaye.....

aap hi ne toh thodi der pehle kaha tha naa ki mai bilkul apne FATHER ki tarah hun...

jab unse kisi ke dil ki baat nahi chupti toh mujhse kaise chupegi.......

khair.mujhe aapki shart manzoor hai par.....

AGRASENA- tumhari bhi ek shart hai....KYUN????? yahi naa!!!!!!!!

AGRASENA ne BEELZEBUB ki aage ki baat puri ki par uski baat ko sunkar BEELZEBUB ke honthon par ek muskaan naach gayi.........

BEELZEBUB- mai kaun hota hun aapke saamne koi shart rakhne waala gurudev!!!!!

meri toh bas ek chota sa nivedan hai..agar aap maan le toh aapka upkaar hoga...

AGRASENA- pehle tum apni baat rakho phir mai bataunga ki tumhari baat maanani chahiye ya nahi....

BEELZEBUB- aap toh itne shaktishali hain.mai bas yahi chahta hun ki aap mujhse apni shaktiyon ke bal par laden.........!!!!!

AGRASENA- mai samjha nahi......

BEELZEBUB- aapke paas ye jo SWORD hai,mai chahata hun ki aap iski shakti ka prayog mere saath yudh me naa karen.....

warna aap jeet kar bhi vijeta nahi kehlaayenge kyunki wo jeet is SWORD ki aapko di gayi bheek hogi....

AGRASENA BEELZEBUB ki baat sun kar bhadak gaya.......

AGRASENA- tumhe lagta hai ki mujhe tumhe harane ke liye is SWORD ki zaroorat hai...

thik hai,mai tumhe vachan deta hun ki hamare beech jo yudh hoga,usme mai is SWORD ka upyog nahi karunga.....

ye bolkar AGRASENA ne apni miyaan apni peeth se nikali aur fek di......

par miyan niche zamin par nahi giri,balki hawa me hi jhul gayi............



AGRASENA- taiyar ho....

BEELZEBUB- hamesha.......

AGRASENA ne apni aakhen band ki.....



aur agle hi pal............



AGRASENA ke sharir ke andar se ek ke baad ek saikdon shastra nikle par ye kya......!!!!

wo shastra bas ek pal ke liye hi dikhe,agle pal wo sab gayab ho gaye.....

ye ek anokha jaadu tha.............



isme ek pal ke liye pratidwandi ko saare shastra apni taraf aate hue dikhte hain par agle hi pal saare shastra gayab hokar alag alag disha me bant gaye.....

saamne waale ko lagta hai ki saare shashtra aage se aa rahe hain aur uska saara dhyan saamne ki taraf hi rehta hai.......

par saare shashtra charon taraf se ek saath wapas ghum kar ussi pratidwandi ki taraf adrishya haalat me hi waapas aate hain....

AGRASENA ke pehle waar se BEELZEBUB ke chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi maano usse pata ho ki AGRASENA ne kya chaal chali hai.......

BEELZEBUB ne apni aankhen band kar lin aur AGRASENA dwaara chhode gaye saare shashtron ko mehsoos karne laga....

saare shashtron ko apne chaaron taraf mehsoos kar BEELZEBUB ne apne right hand ki INDEX finger ko gol gol ghumaya....



MAAYA KHANDAMMMM.....

MAGIC BREAK.............



par ye ek maatr SPELL nahi tha jo BEELZEBUB ne bola tha....right hand ke fingure ko gol ghumane ke saath saath BEELZEBUB ne kuch aur bhi kuch kiya tha.....

BEELZUBUB ne apne dusre haath ko neeche rakhe hue left hand ke INDEX finger ko bhi gol gol ghumaya aur.............



KAAL PAASHAM........

DEVIL'S BONDAGE.........



pehle SPELL ke ucharit hote hi AGRASENA ke chhode gaye shashtra apni jagah par hi jal gaye........

AGRASENA ka saara dhyan BEELZEBUB ke right hand ki taraf tha.......

apne shashtron ko jalte dekh AGRASENA zyada shock nahi hua kyunki wo jaanta tha ki sirf ek hi waar se BEELZEBUB ko haraya nahi jaa sakta...

isiliye apne waar ko khali jaate dekh AGRASENA ne turant apni aakhen band kar dusra SPELL bolne ki koshish ki.......

koshish isiliye kyunki wo SPELL bolne me kamiyab nahi ho paaya......

kyunki BEELZEBUB ke bole hue dusre SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya tha.........



MMMMMMM...MMMMMMMMM.............



AGRASENA- tum apni harkaton se baaz nahi aaye,haina BEELZEBUB.........ladna tha toh bal se ladte,yun chhal karne ka kya matlab hai....??????

hua ye ki BEELZEBUB ke bole gaye dusre SPELL ke prabhav me aakar AGRASENA ek kaale ray ke bandhan me bandh gaye the...

jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki AGRASENA ka pura dhyan saamne ki taraf tha aur BEELZEBUB ne jaise hi apna dusra SPELL bola,ek kaala duan jo ki KAAL PAASH tha.....

AGRASENA ke piche prakat hua aur kisi AJGAR ki tarah AGRASENA ko apne ghere me lapetatha chala gaya........

BEELZEBUB- yudh me BAL se zyada ghaatak CHAL hota hai,isse hamesha satark rehna chahiye,ye shiksha bhi aap hi ki di gayi thi gurudev...

aur aaj aap khud hi ye sab bhul gaye aur uske upar mujhe DOSH de rahe hain....

is bramhaand ki sabsi kathin aur sarvoch shiksha mujhe mere FATHER ne di hai....

aur unke mutabik bhale kisi bhi tarah se kyun na mili ho,JEET,JEET hoti hai.......

AGRASENA- toh ab.......intazar kiska hai???maar do mujhe.....

BEELZEBUB- thik kaha aapne,mujhe aur vilamb nahi karna chahiye.....

BEELZEBUB ne haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal uske haath me ek SWROD aa gayi...

BEELZEBUB us SWORD ko haath me pakde chalte hue AGRASENA ke saamne khada ho gaya.....



aur SOOBH.............



BEELZEBUB ki talwar tezi se chali aur.........



arre ye kya!!!!!!!!



BEELZEBUB ne SWORD chalayi toh zaroor par usse AGRASENA ke gale ke paas laakar rok di......

BEELZEBUB- hahahahahahahaha.....

mujhe murkh samjha hai aapne gurudev....mujhe gyat hai ki mere talwar aapke garden ke aar paar karte hi kya hoga?????

apki ye jo SWORD is waqt hawa me latki hui hai,wo aapke haath me aa jaayegi aur aap punah jeevit ho uthenge....

aur kyunki maine aap par jaan lewa vaar kiya hoga isiliye aap mujhpe is SWORD se humla kar sakenge aur mujhe maar denge......

par aisa hoga nahi AGRASENA..........

mujhe pitaji ne yahan sabkuch bata kar bheja hai.unhone mujhe aapko is KAAL PAASH me baandhne ka aadesh diya tha,maarne ka nahi.........

maine apna aadha kaam toh kar diya hai.aadha baaki hai...

BEELZEBUB ka ab bhi koi kaam baaki hai ye sunkar AGRASENA shocked ho gaya....

BEELZEBUB- mai jaanta hun ki aap kya soch rahe hain par chinta mat kijiye,sab pata chal jaayega.....

ye jo talwar mere haathon me hai naa,isse maine aapko darane ke liye nahi rakha hai,balki mere dusre kaam ko anjaam dene ke liye rakha hai..........

BEELZEBUB ne jo talwar pakdi thi,usse hawa me latakti hui AGRASENA ki SWORD ki taraf fenk diya....

BEELZEBUB ki SWORD AGRASENA ki SWORD ke thik saamne hawa me rook gayi....

BEELZEBUB ki SWORD se ek roshni nikli aur AGRASENA ke sword ke upar jaakar ruki...

aur fir wo roshni AGRASENA ke SWORD ke upar se niche tak ghumne lagi maano usko scan kar rahi hai.....

aur pura scan karne ke baad wo roshni BEELZEBUB ke SWORD ke upar gayi aur ek chaadar ki taraf BEELZEBUB ke SWORD ko odhti chali gayi.............



aur agle pal..........



AGRASENA ki aankhen me shock aur chinta,dono bhaav naachne lage....

SHOCK isiliye kyunki ab BEELZEBUB ki SWORD hubahu AGRASENA ki SWORD jaisi dikh rahi thi..........

TENTION isiliye kyunki AGRASENA jaan gaye the ki aisa karne ke piche BEELZEBUB aur ASMODEUS ka zaroor koi khaas maksad hoga!!!

wahin BEELZEBUB ne fir kuch kiya......

BEELZEBUB ne ek mayavi DIWAL banayi aur dono SWORDS ussi DIWAL par tanga diya..

uske baad usne aur ek SPELL bola....

dono SWORDS ke saamne ek ek darwaza ban gaya par agle hi pal gayab bhi ho gaya.....

BEELZEBUB- ab mai chalta hun gurudev...par usse pehle ek aakhri kaam reh gaya hai,wo kar leta hun...

BEELZEBUB ne apne haath AGRASENA ki taraf apni ek ungli uthayi aur usse ek taraf point kar diya...........

jis KAAL PAASH se AGRASENA bandhe hue the,BEELZEBUB ke ishara karte hi wo PAASH AGRASENA ko liye ek jagah paahunche aur fir AGRASENA gayab ho agye.........

BEELZEBUB- chalo,FATHER dwara diya gaya kaam toh pura hua...ab chala jaaye....

BEELZUBAB adrishya ho gaya aur..............



BEELZEBUB- ARRE,MAI YAHAN KAISE PAHUNCH GAYA????????





PLANET- EARTH




PLACE- COLLEGE AUDITORIUM




yaar,sabhi ne saare dance forms choose kar liye hain.....ab hum kya karen??????

subah ka waqt hai.......mai aur mere saare frnz is waqt college ke auditoruim me hain...

kal ALISHA ne jab kaha ki UTKARSH uska bhai hai toh mere frnz shock ho gaye....

ye bhi un sabke liye ek ajeeb co incidence tha ki mere aur AVANTIKA ke VALENTINE PARTNER siblings nikle.........

khair,kuch der me hi UTKARSH humse ghul mil gaya....

AVANTIKA kaafi openly UTKARSH se baatein kar rahi thi....RONIT aur ANJALI ne is baat par zyada dhyan nahi diya par SHANAYA AVANTIKA ke aise bartaav se kaafi shocked thi....

kyunki AVANTIKA kaafi reserved type ki ladki hai aur suddenly kisi bande ke saath jisse wo bas kal hi mili hai,itna open ho jaana wakayi SHANAYA ke liye ye shocking baat thi....

par usne socha ki kyunki VALENTINE'S DAY ko sirf 2 din hi bache hai isiliye shayad AVANTIKA khudko UTKARSH ke saath comfortable feel karwane ke liye ye sab kar rahi hai....

khair aaj milne ka promise karke hum sab apne apne ghar nikal gaye..

aur aaj hum sabhi thoda jaldi hi college aa gaye.....

actually baat ye thi contest ko do levels pe divide kiya gaya tha......

jiska ek level toh humare liye surprise rakha gaya tha par final level pe humko apne partner ke saath ek dance performance dena hoga,ye bata diya gaya tha......

baad me pura AUDITORUIM students se occupy ho jaata hai isiliye hum sab aaj kuch jaldi aa gaye.........

aaj humara group ek saath hokar bhi alag alag tha..kyunki har koi apne partner ke saath tha isiliye hum sab ek saath hote hue bhi sirf apne partner se baat kar rahe the...

MAI- contemporary try karen........!!!!!VALENTINES DAY mesuit bhi karega.......

AVANTIKA- nahi nahi.....CONTEMPORARY hum kar rahe hain...tum log kuch aur try karo.....

isse pehle ki mere suggestion pe ALISHA kuch bolti AVANTIKA madam jo ki hamare side me hi khadi thi,unhone apni pratikriya de di......

UTKARSH- ye humne kab decide kiya?????

UTKARSH ki baat sunkar mujhe hasi aa gayi...



MAI- yaar AVNI,agar hum dono hi CONTEMPORARY kar len,toh isme problem hai kya?????

AVANTIKA- hum dono??????

MAI- hum matlab mai aur ALISHA abhi ke liye ek hi hue naa.....waise hi tum aur UTKARSH abhi as a couple dance kar rahe ho toh tum dono bhi ek hue.......

isiliye hum dono........

AVANTIKA dheere se- mujhe koi shouk nahi hai kisiko bhi khud se milakar EK bolne me...

MAI- kuch kaha?????

AVANTIKA- haa,kya???nahi toh........mai toh ye bol rahi hun ki hum contemporary kar rahe hain,tum kuch aur kar lo?????

ALISHA- par aur bacha kya???

MAI- ek kaam karte hain......hum SAALSA kar lete hain.........

meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA ka dimag ghum gaya.....kahan wo hume contemprory dance karne se rok rahi thi taaki mujhe aur ALISHA ko kuch bhi ROMANTIC steps karne ka mouka na mile.........

aur ab maine SAALSA keh diya tha jo ki ROMANCE ke saath saath SENSIOUSNESS aur SEDUCTION ke liye best maana jaata hai...

AVANTIKA- kya!!!!!SAALSA!!!!tumhe SAALSA ka S bhi aata hai kya????

mai AVANTIKA ki baat sunkar muskura diya....

MAI- koshish karen me kya harz hai????

RONIT- kya bola???koshish!!!!!AVNI,tum kya beech beech me bhul jaati ho ki kisse baat kar rahi ho.........

V.J is a gem in DANCING....aur uske upar HIPHOP,BREAK DANCE,CONTEMPRORY aur SALSA toh iske main FORTE hain..........

ALISHA- par mujhe toh sachmuch SAALSA ka S bhi nahi aata....

AVANTIKA- mai bhi ALISHA ke liye hi bol rahi thi.....V....J ke liye nahi...

MAI dheere se- paltu...........

AVANTIKA- kya kaha?????

MAI- mai keh toh raha tha par tumse nahi ALISHA se...yaar,tum tention mat karo,i'll help u out.......

aur waise bhi,hum easy steps hi karenge....

ANJALI- yaar ALISHA,tum sach me lucky ho........V.J ke sirf saath nahi,ab tum V.J ki baahon me rehkar ye VALENTINE manaogi.....

sahi maayno me kal tum dono hi couple lagoge........

idhar sab ANJALI ki baaton par has diye,bas do log aise the jinke chehre par alag expressions the...

1st ALISHA ke jo ANJALI ki baat sunkar sharma gayi thi.......

2ND AVANTIKA ke jo kaafi sad ho gayi thi par upar se muskura rahi thi..........

maine ek baar AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha jo mujhe hi dekh rahi thi par mere uske taraf dekhte hi usne nazaren ghuma li......

maine bhi ek lambi saans chhodi aur lag gaya apne kaam pe..matlab ALISHA ko steps samjhane me..........

par mujhe RONIT, ANJALI aur SHANAYA aur VINCENT ki jodi ko bhi beech beech me steps batane pad rahe the..

nahi batata toh saale mujhe bhi practice nahi karne dete..

wahin AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH khud hi apni practice kar rahe the..UTKARSH ko kaafi ache moves aate the,wo AVANTIKA ko steps batata jaa raha tha...

hum sab ne personal HEAD PHONES lagaye hue the taaki kisi bhi jodi ko dusre ke songs se disturbance naa ho.......

is pure practice time me AVANTIKA has has kar UTKARSH se baat karti rahi aur beech beech me mujhe dekhti rahi..

par jab bhi wo meri taraf dekhti toh sad ho jaati kyunki maine uski taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha tha..

aisa usse lagta tha..par pagli ko kaun samjhaye ki.............



JISKI TASVIR DIL ME BASI HO USSE DEKHNE KE LIYE AANKHON KI ZAROORAT NAHI PADTI.............



khair,is logic ko AVANTIKA ke samajh me aane me abhi kaafi time hai..........

hum sabne practice khatm ki..ab AUDITORIUM me kaafi students aa chuke the.....

aur jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki aajkal classes nahi lag rahe the isiliye hum sab ne apne apne ghar jaane ka decide kiya.....

RONIT aur ANJALI aaj bike se aa gaye the toh wo apna nikla gaye....SHANAYA aur AVANTIKA apni car se ab bach gaya mai...

maine bhi car unlock ki aur andar baith gaya..



ki tabhi................



do logon ne meri car ke glass ko knock kiya...maine door unlock kar diya...

ek ne meri side open ki aur mere side waali seat par baith gayi aur dusre ne peeche waali door open ki aur peeche baith gaya....

ye dono aur koi nahi balki ALISHA aur UTKARSH the......



ALISHA- ek baat puchun????

MAI- hmm.......

ALISHA- koi bhi ladki V.J ki partner banane ke liye ready ho jaati fir mai hi kyun???

MAI- aur agar wo ladki mujhe pasand karne lagti toh???

mai apne faayde ke liye kisike dil se toh nahi khel sakta naa.

mere liye ALISHA hi thik hai aur yahi baat AVANTIKA pe bhi laagu hoti hai isiliye AVANTIKA ke liye UTKARSH hi thik hai.......

UTKARSH- kya wo hamari asliyat kabhi jaan paayegi......

MAI- bilkul jaanegi aur thanks meri help karne ke liye,




ST ALFRICK,



ST CECILIA..............





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......





AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Superb Bhai

Apne hero ND heroine ka romance kab dekhne ko milega
What about Maddox
Will avni or vj propose each other

Waiting for the next update
 

Mahiirathore

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Jabardast Update bhaii
Aodomos k kahne Beelzebub n Agrasena
Ko chaal fsa kar apna kam nikal hi diya sword ki copy kar fi par kya puri power ko copy kar paya

Beelzebub ab kha pahucha
VJ avantika ko pyaar ki Shii parakh karva rha h
Alisha or utkarsh kya ST. H
Wa kya bat h
Dekhte h kya damaal hone wala h
Vese ek bat samaj m nhii aayi
Jo talvar Agrasena k pass h uska asli malik kon h kyoki pichli barr apne bataya tha ki Agrasena talvar ki asli power ka istemaal nhii kar pa rha sirf janleva hamle hii kam karti h
 
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luv4sale696969

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All the updates after my previous review were simply fantastic... The prelude from future update was expected yet thrilling... As usual, appearance of St Frederick and St Cecilia at the end of last update was quite a strong punch...
Regarding plot, story line and updates, I can't say anything as these are getting more and more mesmerizing update by update...
The story is flowing like a river in plains, flowing in a quiet and calm smoothness...
Keep writing and keep rocking....
 
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King Aryan

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Nice Update
BEELZEBUB Ka jatka jo ap ne diya bohat ache
bade bhai ki to ap ne shadi aur beta bi bana diya ab chote bhai ki gf hi set kar do
wase kam-z-kam 2 to honi chayie
 
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