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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI BEELZEBUB AGRASENA KO KAID KAR LETA HAI AUR USKE SWORD KA BHI EK DUPLICATE BANA DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF YE PATA CHALTA HAI KI ALISHA AUR UTKARSH AUR KOI NAHI BALKI ST CECILIA AUR ST ALFRICK HAIN.
AB AAGE:-
CHAPTER-2
( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )
UPDATE- 70
PLANET- GLUTO
PLACE- PALACE GARDEN
GHOOR KYUN RAHI HO????
praatah kaal ek shaksh apni aankhen band kiye dhyan ki awastha me baitha hua hai.....
dhyan me baithne se aksar tejaswi logon ke sharir chamakne lagte hain.par is waqt jo shaksh dhyan awashta me baitha tha,uske sharir se kaale dhuen nikal aas paas ke sabhi ujwalit jagahon par apna asar dikha rahe the.....
wo sabhi jagah andhere me doob se gaye the....
subah subah tahalte hue NISHKALIKA us jagah pahunchi jahan is waqt wo vyakti DHYAN me baitha hua tha....
NISHKALIKA ki nazar apne saamne baithe shaksh par padi aur saath hi un kaal dhuon par,jo aas paas ki jagahon ko bhi apne rang me samet kar kaale kar rahe the....
NISHKALIKA- ANDHERE KI JAY HO........
NISHKALIKA chalte hue us shaksh ke saamne pahunchi...
usne apne haath aage kar diye....NISHKALIKA ke haathon se kuch kaali roshniyan nikli aur us shaksh ki taraf chal din....
par jo kaale dhuen is waqt us shaksh ke sharir se nikal rahe the,unhone un kaale rays ko us shaksh tak pahunchne se pehle hi khatm kar diya....
ab NISHKALIKA us shaksh ko dhyan se dekhne lagi....
us shaksh ko bhi dhyan awashtha me ye gyat ho gaya ki koi usse ghoor raha hai.usne jhat se apni aankhen khol di...
apne saamne NISHKALIKA ko khud ko ghurta dekh usne ye sawaal kiya tha........
NISHKALIKA- dekh rahi hun ki kaabiliyat toh hai tumeme....warna itne sashakt KAAL RAKSHAK ( kaale dhuen ) tumhare sharir me nahi baste...
waise kya naam bataya tha tumne apna???
UNKNOWN- MADDOX..................
ji haan doston,ASMODEUS ne MADDOX ko NISHKALIKA ke paas hi bheja tha..........
NISHKALIKA- haan,MADDOX............par ek baat batao,tumhare grah par sabke naam itne ajeeb kyun hote hain.......
MADDOX........!!!DIGVIJAY.............ye bhi bhala koi naam hua???????
MADDOX- hahahahahahaha................
NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar MADDOX ko hasi aa gayi.........
par NISHKALIKA ko MADDOX ka yun hasna pasand nahi aaya.........
NISHKALIKA- maine kya koi mazak kiya hai jo tum has rahe ho........?????
MADDOX- mazak hi toh hai..hamare planet ke naamo par sawaal uthane se pehle tumne kabhi apne naam ke baare me socha hai.....
agar tum hamare planet me kisike saamne apna naam bologi toh unhe lagega ki tum koi naatak mandali ka kirdaar ho........
MADDOX ki baat ne NISHKALIKA ke ghusse par aag me ghee ka kaam kiya....
DIGVIJAY ke hisse ki power ko bhi paakar NIHKALIKA ka ghamand saatve aasman par pahunch chuka tha....
aise me kisika uske naam ka mazak udana usse bilkul pasand nahi aaya...
NISHKALIKA- apni zuban ko lagam do MADDOX..tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kiske naam ka mazak uda rahe ho??????
MADDOX- yahi baat tum par bhi lagu hoti NISHKALIKA.mere aur mere bhai ke naam ka mazak udane se pehle tumhe bhi yahi sochna chahiye tha............
NISHKALIKA- hum NISHKALIKA hain.......kaali shaktiyon ki MALIKA....hum jisse chaahen,jo chaahe,wo bol sakte hain.....
MADDOX- galatfehmi hai tumhari...tum jis taakat ka ghamand kar rahi ho,uska aadha hissa mere bhai ki di hui tumhe bheek hai....
MADDOX ki baat sunkar NISHKALIKA ke sabr ka baandh ko jhakjhor diya tha....
par NISHKALIKA jaanti thi ki MADDOX uske paas DEVIL LORD ke kehne se aaya hai isiliye wo usse maar nahi sakti thi......
NISHKALIKA- bohot ghamand hai naa tujhe apni taakat par.....aur hoga bhi kyun nahi,DEVIL LORD ka sahara jo mila hai tujhe........
MADDOX- ek aur galatfehmi.......chalo,kamsekam tumhare is galatfehmi ko toh mai door kar hi sakta hun...
chalo,ek chota sa yudh karte hain.agar tumne mujhe hara diya toh mera sir tumhare aage jhuk jaayega par agar tum haari toh tumhe mere aage jhukna hoga.......
NISHKALIKA- manzoor hai...........
NISHKALIKA ne apna right hand ek baar gol ghumaya,jis garden me is waqt NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX khade the,uske chaaro taraf ek strong SHIELD ban gaya.......
NISHKALIKA- toh shuru karen????
MADDOX ne kuch kaha nahi bas apni aankhen band kar kuch budbudaya.......
BHUMIYEM KHANANAM KAROTI.....
LAND DIGGING..........
MADDOX ke mantra uchharit karte hi NISHKALIKA ke neeche ki zameen dono taraf se halki khisak gayi.......
par ye kya!!!!!!!????????
NISHKALIKA ke pair zamin ke khisakne se bilkul bhi nahi dagmagaye.......
wo wahin muskurati hui khadi rahi...
MADDOX ne jab NISHKALIKA ke pairon ki taraf dekha toh usse pata chala ki NISHKALIKA halki hawa me uthi hui hai..
jab pair hi zamin par nahi hain,toh zamin ke khisakne ka NISHKALIKA par asar kaise hota...............
BHUMIYEM SHAKTI SHASHTRA ROPANAHA.....
LANDS POWER ARMS LOOSE.............
ye SPELL MADDOX ne nahi NISHKALIKA ne budbudaye the................
NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi wo zameen jo dono taraf khisak gayi thi,uske andar se solid mitti ke badi badi parthen nikal kar MADDOX ki taraf gayi.......
par wo mitti ki saari parthen apne andar lohe ke nukile auzaron ko dhake hue thi.....
MADDOX ko ye pata chal gaya....
aur agle hi pal MADDOX hawa me uchla.......
jitni bhi mitti ki parten uski taraf aa rahi thi,MADDOX un sab ke upar chalta hua aage badhne laga.....
par saath saath MADDOX ne apne dono haathon ko baari baari se aage ki taraf chalana shuru kiya maano kuch fek raha ho.........
MADDOX ke dono hatheliyon se ussi tarah ke nukile auzar nikle jaise un mitti ke parthon me chupe hue the aur wo sab auzar ek ke baad ek NISHKALIKA ki taraf badhe.......
NISHKALIKA SHOCKED HO GAYI........
uske shocked hone ka kaaran ye nahi tha ki MADDOX ne uske waar ko kaat diya balki ye tha ki MADDOX ko pata chal gaya tha ki un mitti ki parthon ke aad me NISHKALIKA ne uspar kis cheez se waar kiya hai.....
aur unhi auzaron ke waar wo ab uspe kar raha tha.........
AVRODHA........
BLOCK...........
NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi jitne bhi auzar uski taraf aa rahe the wo ek adrishya lohe ki stopper se takrane lage aur neeche gir gaye....
NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX ne ek pal ke liye ek dusre ki aankhon me dekha maano ek dusre ki taakat ko naap rahe hon.....
AAVAPAYATI AGKURA............
CUT PLATES.........
ye SPELL NISHKALIKA ne bola tha.....SPELL ke uchharit hoti hi MADDOX ko apne kaano me kuch tez tez ghumne ka abhas hua.....
usne har taraf dekha par usse kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya......
PRAKATI KAROTI..........
UNFOLD...........
jab MADDOX ko kuch bhi dikhayi nahi diya toh usne ye SPELL bola.......
SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko apne chaaro taraf blades dikhne lage.....
jo gol gol ghumte hue uski taraf aa rahe the....
ye toh acha hua ki MADDOX ne UNFOLD SPELL right time me bol diya kyunki wo blades MADDOX ke kaafi paas aa chuke the....
AGKURA VICCHEDAKA
BLADE CUTTER
MADDOX ne turant is SPELL ko uccharit kiya....
aur TANNNNNNNNNNNNN...................
NISHKALIKA ke chhode gaye adrishya BLADES MADDOX se bas 1 feet hi door the..
MADDOX ke SPELL uccharit karte hi wo saare blades beech se katathe chale gaye..........
NISHKALIKA- bas,bohot hua.........
AVAPI DAYATI.........
SQUEEZE OUT.........
NISHKALIKA ne apne dono haathon ko aage kar taali bajate hue is SPELL ko bola tha,
SPELL ke bolte hi MADDOX ke dono taraf do kaale rays ki par solid lohe se bhi sakht diwal ban gayi aur NISHKALIKA ke taali bajate hi wo dono diwal tez gati se MADDOX ki taraf badhe maano usse beech me pichkana chahte hon......
KAAL CHAKRAM SVAVAHITA..........
BLACK SHADOWS ALERT..........
MADDOX ne apni aankhen band ki aur is SPELL ko uchharit kiya.......
SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko chaaron taraf se kaale dhuen ne gher liya maano koi chaadar khud ko kisipar odha rahi ho........
aur BOOM........................
wo kaali rays ki DIWAL MADDOX ke chaaron taraf faile kaali chadar se takrayi aur ek karn bhedi vishphot hua....
NISHKALIKA ke bichaye SHIELD ki wajah se is vishphot ki awaaz aur asar toh na hi kisi ko sunayi di,naa hi kisiko koi nuksaan pahuncha par SHIELD zaroor toot gayii......
MADDOX aur NISHKALIKA ek dusre ko aascharya chakit hokar dekh rahe the........
NISHKALIKA- adhbhoodh.........kaafi aulokik aur avismaraniya shaktiyon ke maalik ho tum....
MADDOX- maine bhi jitna socha tha,tum usse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali ho.......
NISHKALIKA- agar hum dono mil jaayen toh is bramhaand me raaj kar sakte hain.....
MADDOX- ye bramhaand toh LORD OF DEVILS ki milkiyat hai,mujhe toh bas apne bhai ke mout ka aur khud ka pratishodh lena hai......
NISHKALIKA- wo toh le hi lenge.....par tab tak tum mere mehman ho........
AUR MAI KYA HUN AAPKI????KABAHI HUME BHI TOH YAAD KAR LIYA KARO......
MADDOX ne awaaz ki disha me dekha.aur usse jo dikha,usse dekhkar uski nazar wahin theher gayi..........
NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX se kuch hi door ek beintehan khoobsurat ladki khadi thi....
jo apne gulab si pankhudiyon jaise honton par muskaan liye NISHKALIKA ki taraf aa rahi thi.....
NISHKALIKA ne bhi apni baahen khol di..dono ladkiyon ek dusre ke gale lagin.......
NISHKALIKA- MADDOX,isse milo.....
YE HAI ''BHUVIKA''........MERI BEHEN........
PLANET- EARTH
PLACE- COLLEGE HALL
OH...... MY......... GOD.........................
just look at him...............he is so so so handsome yaar..............
aaj VALENTINES day hai......actually abhi ke time ke hisab se ye VALENTINES evening hai....
jaisa ki maine bataya ki abhi shaam ka waqt hai jo apne swarup ko haule haule badlate hue raat ka roop le rahi hai.......
aur abhi abhi jo aapne taarifen suni.ye hamare college hall me moujud ladkiyon ke mooh se nikli hai...
WAJAH!!!!!!abhi abhi apke bhai ne hall me entry li hai.........jahan sabhi ladkon ne WESTERN OUTFIT pehna hua hai wahin unke complete opposite mai TRADITIONAL ETHNIC dress me hun.......
BLACK KURTE PAYJAAME ke upar GRAPHITE BLACK WAIST COAT......aur is dress me mai lag kaisa raha hun ye toh aapko abhi abhi girls ke reaction se pata chal hi gaya hoga....
waise mere saath ALISHA bhi thi jisne RED POLYESTER BODYCON dress pehni hui thi aur is dress me wo kisi ANGEL se kam nahi lag rahi thi.......
( WAISE THI TOH WO ANGEL HI )
saare ladke jinki nazar abhi tak apni gfs aur partner ke hote hue bhi 3 ladkiyon ko ghure jaa rahi thi,ab unka direction change hokar ALISHA pe aa gaya tha........
waise toh saare students jo is waqt is hall me moujud the,wo sab apne partner ke saath hi aaye hue the par filhaal ladke alag apne frnz ke saath khade hue the aur ladkiyan apne frnz ke saath....
par mera group intact tha.hum dono chalte hue unke paas chale gaye..........
MAI- hey guyzzzz,wuz up......??????
par mere greet ka jawab dena chhod sab saale mujhe aise ghure jaa rahe the maano pehli baar dekh rahe ho......
MAI- abbe ladkiyon ka toh thik hai,par tum teeno ladke hokar bhi mujhe ghur rahe ho....!!!
choices toh nahi badal gayi naa tumhari.....?????
VINCENT- kya bhai...tu bhi!!!!!waise kamal lag rahe ho..& ALISHA,u too are looking very beautiful......
ALISHA- thanks......
RONIT- saale,tu ETHNIC me aane waala tha toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya,mai bhi ETHNIC pehen leta.....
MAI- aur jo ANJALI ne tere liye dress kharida tha aaj ke liye,uska kya hota????
ANJALI- tujhe kaise!!!!!!!!
madam ka pata unke mooh me hi reh gaya kyunki unhe y aad aa gaya tha ki galat bande se galat sawal puch rahi thi wo.......
MAI- waise tum teeno ko bata dun,apne apne partners ko chupa kar rakho,saare ladko ki nazar inpar hi hai......
RONIT- kiski majaal hai jo inko kuch kar ke dikhaye?????
MAI- meri.....itni khoobsurti ek saath bulk me dekhkar mujhe toh chakkar aa rahe hain....
meri baat ka asar bas do ladkiyon par hi hua,kyunki teesri toh jab se mai aaya hun,bas bina palken jhapkaaye mujhe hi dekhe jaa rahi hai.....
ab aap toh samajh hi gaye honge ki mai kiski baat kar raha hun....
waise haal toh mera bhi AVANTIKA ko dekhkar bura ho raha tha..meri hi tarah usne bhi hamare DESH ke sabse khubsoorat paridhan ko pehna hua tha..SAARI......
AVANTIKA ne red colour ki saari pehni hui thi jisme wo us MENKA se kam nahi lag rahi thi jo mere jaise VISHVAMITRA ki tapasya ko bhang karne me lagi hui thi...
agar mere andaz me kahun toh.............
jab jab meri nigahen
tujhpe padti hai,
tab tab mera wajud
KHOTA hai.....
ek din tu meri hogi,
ye sochkar hi mujhe
apne kismat pe
RASK HOTA HAI......
meri nazar jaise hi AVANTIKA ki ghoorti hui nazar pe padi,usne apni nazarein ghuma li.....
tabhi uske paas khadi ANJALI ne uske kaan me kuch bola aur same messege AVANTIKA ne SHANAYA ko paas kiya.teeno ne hume excuse me bola aur kahin nikal gayi....
RONIT- ab ye sab kahan jaa rahi hain???
MAI- washroom..........
RONIT- bhai,susu toh mujhe bhi badi zor ki lag rahi hai...kabse control karke rakha hun..
MAI- chal fir...
maine ALISHA ko excuse me kaha aur RONIT ke saath chal pada...
girls lo aur boys loo aamne saamne hi tha..ladkyan toh girls loo me jaa chuki thi,RONIT bhi men's loo me ghus gaya aur mai bahar khada mobile kochakne laga.....
ki tabhi.............
TUM YAHAN.........
maine mobile se nazar hata kar saamne dekha jahan AVANTIKA khadi mujhe ghur rahi thi......
MAI- nahi,ye toh mera bhoot hai..mai toh abhi bhi hall me hi hun..........
AVANATIKA- tum naa,ekdum ajeeb ho..koi bhi sawaal ka sidha sa jawab nahi dete..
MAI- jab sawal hi tedha medha hoga toh jawab sidha kaise dun....dekh kar bhi puchti ki tum yahan????
AVANTIKA- tum naa,bohot badal gaye ho???
MAI- hmm.....
AVANTIKA ko laga ki mai usse kaise puchunga par maine hmm kaha toh usse shock laga....
AVANTIKA- kya hmm???matlab tumhe pata hai ki tum badal gaye ho!!!!!
MAI- nahi....
AVANTIKA- toh hmm kyun kaha????
MAI- kyunki tumhara sawaal hi galat hai.hum toh waise hi hai jaise the,shayad tumhare mujhe dekhne ka tarika badal gaya hai...
meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA hadbada gayi..
AVANTIKA- matlab????
MAI- khud se pucho...wahin se is sawaal ka better jawab milega.......
waise sawal puchne ke alawa tumhe aur kisi cheez me interest hai????
AVANTIKA dheere se- TUM ME......
MAI- maine sun liya......
AVANTIKA- kya,kya sun liya????
AVANTIKA meri baat sunkar dar gayi thi...
MAI- flush ki awaaz..lagta hai RONIT halka ho gaya hai.........
AVANTIKA- chiii...kuch bhi naa.......
par tabhi MENS loo aur GIRL'S loo.dono ka darwaaza ek saath khula aur mere saare frnz baahar aa gaye...
MAI- tum sabne decide kiya tha ki ek saath baahar aaoge........
RONIT- bakwaas band kar be......
ANJALI- apni partner ko akela chhodkar yahan kya kar raha hai tu..
ALISHA ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA firse sad ho gayi.....
MAI- tere b.f ki chowkidaari.......ab chalen...
hum sab hall ki taraf chal pade.par hamare hall me pahunchte hi hamare aaj ki shaam ki ANCHOR...MISS SHAIFALI bhi stage par aa chuki thi......
SHAIFALI- hello,everybodyyyyyyyyyy.....sabse pehle a very happy VALENTINES DAY to all of u.....
so aaj ka ye contest shuru karen?????
sab yes yes ki hooting karne lage.....
SHAIFALI- alright then....sabse pehle mai aapko bata dun ki aaj ke hamare contest ko judge COMMERCE ke final year ke kuch students karenge....
now coming back to the contest,aaj ke contest ko 3 ROUNDS me divide kiya gaya hai....
1st ROUND me aap sab ko apne partners ke saath stage par aakar ramp walk karna hoga..
aap sab me se best 4 couples ko chuna jaayega.....
aur uske baad..............
ab itni bhi kya jaldi hai..........pehle first round toh pura kar len....
COUPLES,what are u waiting 4........come up & set the stage on fire.........
hum sab apne apne partners ke saath ek ek karke ramp walk karne lage....
ANJALI aur RONIt ke ramp walk karte waqt kaafi hooting hui aur same shanaya aur VINCENT ke walk karne par bhi hua....
second last jodi AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH the.....AVANTIKA ne ek baar meri taraf dekha fir aage nikal gayi......
wo toh aage nikal gayi par mere dil aur dimag me us dard aur shikayat ko chhod gayi jo mujhe dekhte waqt uske aankhon me thi...
dard is baat ka ki mai uske saath nahi hun aur shikayat is baat ki ki mai kyun uske saath nahi hun......?????
tez HOOTINGS aur TAALIYAON se meri soch tooti...ye hooting AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH ke liye ho rahi thii.....ab tak ki sabse tez hooting.......
aur ab bas mai aur ALISHA bache the...
maine uska haath thaama aur hum stage par chadh gaye.hum jaise jaise aage jaa rahe the,hall students ke shor se gunje jaa raha tha...
shayad hi aisa koi us hall me moujud hoga jisne mere all ALISHA ke walk par shor nahi machaya hoga....
finally humari walk khatm hui aur hum sab apne frnz ke paas jakar khade ho gaye....
hum sabne ek dusre ko congrats kaha..AVANTIKA ab bhi reh reh kar mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi....
mai dheere se chalte hue uske paas gaya..
MAI- udas ho....
AVANTIKA- nahi toh...
MAI- mai puch nahi raha,bata raha hun..par fikr mat karo,is contest ke khatm hote tak tuumhare chehre ki muskan laut aayegi.....
mai AVANTIKA ko bol lautkar apni jagah par khada ho gaya.......
wahin AVANTIKA toh meri baat ka matlab samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi...
SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki aap me se best 4 ko chuna jaayega...toh mere paas best five ka naam aa chuka hai...aur wo naam hain.......
ANJALI & RONIT...........
SHANAYA & VINCENT........
AVANTIKA & UTKARSH.......
ALISHA & VIKRAM........
hum sab ke nam anounce hote samay hall ek baar fir se taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj utha............
SHAIFALI- toh doston..........ab hai time second round ka..............
par yahan ek twist hai.......humare paas ek bowl hai jisme humne pehle se hi in chaar jodiyon ka....oh sorry sorry in 8 students ka naam likh liya hai....
aap sab yahi soch rahe honge ki maine in sab ko 4 jodiyan na kehkar 8 students kyun kaha????
toh wo isiliye doston ki is ROUND me ek twist hai..waise toh ek twist aur bhi hai par uske baare me aa sab ko last me maalum padega...
filhal ke liye is round ke twist ke baare me baat karte hain.......
is round me ye sab yahan upar aayenge aur har couple me se ek bowl se ek chit nikalenge...jiske haath me jiske bhi naam ka chit hoga,usse ye dusra round uske saath hi pura karna hoga....
agar aapke chit me aapke partner ka hi naam hua toh fir toh aap lucky hai aur agar nahi toh jiska bhi naam hoga,wahi aapka is round ke liye partner hoga....
toh lets begin............
is round ek baare me sunkar jahan saare students khush ho gaye the wahin saare couples thode nervous.....
hum sab upar stage par aa gaye...hum sab ladkon ne girls ko chits utahne ke liye kaha
ANJALI ,SHANAYA, AVANTIKA aur ALISHA ne chit uthaye.....
ANJALI ke chit me VINCENT nikla...
SHANAYA ke chit me UTKARSH nikla....
ALISHA ke chit me me RONIT nikla.....
aur AVANTIKA ke chit me......ab bacha hi kaun mere alava......MAI hi nikla......
SHAIFALI- fantastic.....toh hamare paas hamre new fresh partners hain......toh game shuru karte hain.....
jahan mere baaki ke frnz ke mooh latak gaye the wahan ek chehra khil gaya tha....aap sab toh jaante hi ho ki kiski baat ho rahi hai....
SHAIFALI- toh task ke baare me bhi bata deti hun...........
kaafi simple hai...........aap sab me se ek apne baare me ek sawaal puchega aur uske partner ko jawab dena hoga....
sawaal kuch bhi ho sakta hai..apne fav.cheez ke baare me bhi ya fir apne hobbies ke ya fir apne nature,character ya fir ATTITUDE ke baare me bhi....
saamne waale ko uska jawab dena hai......total 5 sawaal puche jaayenge.jiske jawab sabse zyada right honge wo team jeet jaayegi.......
ye point jeetne waali team ki original jodiyon ko milegi.....
so guyz ready........
RONIT- ek minute...
RONIT uth kar mere paas aaya aur mere kaan me bola....
RONIT- saale tu,apne powers ka use nahi karega....sawal tu puchega ,jawab AVNI degi..thik hai......!!!!
MAI- tu wahin baithe baithe agar ye man me bhi soch leta na toh mujhe pata chal jaata.....
RONIT- arre haa yaar.chal chhod ....bas tu dhyan rakhiyo......
RONIT apni jagah par kaakar baith gaya aur fir hua hamara ye task.......
SHAIFALI sawal puchne waale se pehle se hi uske saare sawal aur uske answers likhwa kar apne paas rakh leti thi taaki baad me koi cheating naa ho......
par jaise ki sabko ummid thi,kisi ne bhi apne partner ke sawaalon ka sahi jawab nahi diya..
yahan mai aapko bata dun ki maine ST CECILA aur ST ALFRICK ko bhi apne power ko use karne ke liye mana kiya hua tha......
aur ab baari thi meri aur AVANTIKA ki...
SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki hum sabne dekha hai ki abhi tak kisi bhi jodi ne ek bhi sahi jawab nahi diya hai.....
par ab hai humare saamne hamari last jodi...& guyz ye dono mere personal favs. bhi hai.SECRILLA adventure me in dono ne ek game me itna behetareen performance diya tha ki kya bataun....
ummid hai ki aaj bhi aisa hi kuch hoga..
so,sawaal kaun puch raha hai????
MAI- mai puchunga.....
meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA nervous ho gayi.........
AVANTIKA dheere se - but V.J,mujhe tumhare baare me kuch bhi nahi pata.....
MAI- mere sawaalon ko sunana mat,mehsoos karna..apni aakhen band kar jo bhi tumhe mehsoos ho,wo bol dena......
AVANTIKA ko meri baat thik se samajh toh nahi aayi par usne haan me mundi hiladi....
maine bhi baakiyon hi ki tarah apne sawaal aur unke jawab likhkar SHAIFALI ko de diye..
SHAIFALI- ok guys,shoot....
maine AVANTIKA ko apni aankh band karne ka ishara kiya,AVANTIKA ne apni aankhen band kar li......
MAI- mera fav COLOUR????
AVANTIKA jiski aankhen band thi,uske aankhon ke saamne RED colour aa gaya....
AVANTIKA-RED...........
MAI- mere INSPIRATION......
AVANTIKA ke saamne ek tasvir ubhri.....
AVANTIKA- tumhare DAD.......
MAI- SUCCESS aur DOSTON me se agar mujhe kisi ek ko chunana pade toh mai kisse chununga????
AVANTIKA- DOSTON ko........
AVANTIKA ke jawab ko sunkar mere dono doston ka dil bhar aaya tha par unhone apne emotions ko control kar liya.....
MAI- har insaan ko ek cheez hai jo mai barabar deta hun,wo kya hai????
AVANTIKA- IZZAT...........
MAI- sab kuch hai mere paas,fir bhi ek chiz kim kami hai,wo kya hai????
AVANTIKA-MOHOBBAT.........
SHAIFALI- OH,MY,GOD............saare answers sahi hain...i mean,how????????unbelievable.........hats off AVANTIKA........
guys,give the winners a big hand.....ek baar fir har taraf hooting aur clapping shuru ho gayi..........
humare doston ne bhi hume gale lag kar congrats kiya....
SHAIFALI- ab baari hai hamare last & final round ki....toh iske baare me toh sabko pehle se bata diya gaya tha,par jo bhi bataya gaya tha,wo aadhi baat thi....
aur naaki ki aadhi baat ye hai ki aap sab apne partners ke saath ek ek karke dance nahi karenge...
aap sab ke selected songs ki c.d ko humne merge karke ek song me convert kar diya hai.....aur saath hi aakhri me ek chota sa music beat humne apni taraf se bhi add kiya hai...
aap sabhi apne partners ke saath ek saath stage par aayenge..jab jab jiske bhi selected song ka music bajega,usse dance karna hoga..
aur aakhri music beat par aapko turant improvise karke dance karna hoga.......
toh shuru karen.....
hum charon couples stage par aa gaye.....
SURAJ HUA MADDHAM
CHAAND JALNE LAGA.....
AASMAAN YEH HAAYE
KYUN PIGHALNE LAGA.....
issi song ke saath ANJALI aur RONIT ne slow romatic dance shuru kiya........
dono ek steps itne ache nahi the,par dono ke beech ki chemistry aur feel itna natural tha ki sabke sab mantramugdh se hokar dono ko dekhne lage...
abhi unhe dance karte hue 2 minute bhi nahi hua tha ki song change ho gaya aur ab SHANAYA aur VINCENT ne PEHLI NAZAR ME KAISA JAADU KAR DIYA song par dance karne lage............
wo dono bhi mushkil se 2 min hi dance kar paaye the ki itne me third song baj utha aur ab AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH stage ke centre me the....
TERA HONE LAGA HUN.KHONE LAGA HUN.,song ko puri tarag se justify karte hue dono dance karne lage..
par zyadatar steps karte hue AVANTIKA ki nazar mujhpe hi thi jisse UTKARSH ne bhi dekh liya tha aur uske chehre par bhi muskurahat thi....
aur agle 2 minuton ke baad stage par mai aur ALISHA aa gaye...........
EK DIN TERI RAAHON ME
BAAHON ME PANAHON ME
AAUNGA.......
KHO JAAUNGA.....
EK DIN TERA
HO JAAUNGA.....
is epic gaane ko hum dono ke dance ne aur epic bana diya......
kyunki mai aur ALISHA saalsa kar rahe the,isiliye hamara har movement,har step bohot zyada sexy aur sensuous lag raha tha....
itni der se khush ho rahi AVANTIKA ka chehra ek baar fir se murjhane laga par tabhi.......
gaana change ho gaya.............
aur ab jo music baj raha tha wo toh is sadi ke sabse romatic track ka music tha..........
HUM TERE BIN ABHI REH NAHI SAKTE,
TERE BINA KYA WAJUD MERA......
TUJHSE JUDA GAR HO JAAYENGE
TOH KHUD SE HI HO JAAYENGE JUDA.....
gaana jitna bhi ROMANTIC kyun naa ho,steps toh aane hi chahiye na uspe groove karen ke liye..
ab ye koi shadi ka funtion toh tha nahi ki kisi bhi music par sapera dance shuru kar den..
mere saare frnz nervous ho gaye kyunki ye sab unke liye unexpected tha......
neeche se saare students jo abhi tak hum sab ko cheer kar rahe the ab BOO BOO karke hamara mazaak udane lage.............
ki tabhi achanak kuch aisa hua ki sab chup ho gaye..........sirf 1 awaaz aa rahi thi.....
MUSIC KI...
aur stage ke beech ek couple ek dusre ko thaame hue har second ek aisa romantic moov kar raha tha ki dekhne waalon ke dil hi dil me aah nikal jaa rahi thi.....
ye couple aur koi nahi MAI aur AVANTIKA the.............
hua ye mere doston ke nervous chehron ek beech bas ek chehra aisa tha jiske chehre par nervousness nahi balki maayusi dikh rahi thi...
ye chehra AVANTIKA ka tha jo meri taraf ek tak dekhe jaa rahi thi maano keh rahi ho ki agar tumne mujhe chuna hota toh yun beech me rukna na padta.......
uski aankhon me ek iltejaa thi jo keh rahi thi ki ab bhi der nahi hui hai.....ek baar,bas ek baar mujhe pukaron,mai tumhare aadhe likhin shaayri ko pura kar dungi.....
ek baar apna haath badhao,fir dekho,ye gaana apne shabdon ke zariye hamari kahani batayega........
aur ,maine AVANTIKA ki dil ki awaaz sun li aur apna haath aage kar diya aur AVANTIKA ne bhi bina der kiye mera haath thaam liya......
saare students ke liye ye bas ek khubsoorat sa dance tha,mere doston ki nazar me hum unki izzat bacha rahe the,par hum dono ke liye toh ye pal apne SAPNE ko apne HAQIQAT se milane ki shuruat thi.......
song kab khatm hua hume maalum hi nahi chala...ye toh students ka shor aur taaliyon ki gadgadahat thi jisse hum dono hosh me aaye..
humne sabko thanks kaha aur apne doston ek paas aa gaye............
humare dost hamare dance ki taarif kar rahe the,unka popat hone se bachane ke liye thanks keh rahe the,par najane kyun,mere aur AVANTIKA ke kaanon me ab tak ek dusre ki tez saanson ki awaaz gunj rahi thi.......
SHAIFALI- wow,what a performance.yaar sach sach batao,kahin se hamare prograame ke secrets leak toh nahi ho gaye naa.i mean,such a smooth dance act..
lag hi nahi raha tha ki abhi abhi improvise kiya hai.....
anyways,jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki abhi ek twist aur hai toh wo twist ab disclose hone waala hai......
twist ye tha ki aaj ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka selection second round ke task aur last round ke last song ko dekhkar kiya jaane waala tha.....
so guyz,mere paas is saal ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka naam aa chuka hai,,,,
aur wo hain........................
any guess guyzzzzzzzzzzzzz....
har taraf do naam gunjane lage.........
SHAIFALI- u all are absolutely right guyssss..........this year's MR & MISS VALENTINE ARE
VIKRAM & AVANTIKA ........
hum dono ka naam aate hi mere dost mere aur AVANTIKA par kood gaye.....
Unse free hokar mai aur AVANTIKA stage par gaye aur apni VALENTINES TROPY lene ke liye haath badhaya hi tha ki SHAIFALI ne apna trophy waala haath peeche khinch liya...
SHAIFALI- aise nahi..........pehle kuch ho jaaye.....
MAI- trophy dono ki hai,toh bolna bhi dono ko padega......
maine AVANTIKA ki taraf dekhte hue bola...
SHAIFALI- ye ki naa pate ki baat.......
then what are we waiting for???
SHAIFALI ne meri taraf mike kar diya.......
MAI- mai jo bhi line bolunga,tumhe usse puri karni hogi....
AVANTIKA ne bas apni palkon ko neeche kar haami bhar di...
MAI- JAB DIMAG SHAANT HO,
PAR DIL ME BECHAINI HO,
JAB SACH LAG RAHI SAARI
GALATFEHMI HO,
AVANTIKA- "HAAN,WAHI PYAR HAI"....
MAI-JAB TANHA KHAMOSH RAATEIN HON,
PAR KAANO ME EK SHOR MACH JAAYE,
AVANTIKA- JAB SAARI DUNIYE ME DHOOP KHILE,
BAS KHUDKE UPAR HI BAADAL GARAJ JAAYE,
MAI- JAB SIDHE CHALNE WAALE KADAM,
ACHANAK SE BEHEK JAAYE,
AVANTIKA- DHUL SE BHARE RAASTE,
UNKE EHSAAS ME,
KHUSBOO SE MEHAK JAAYE....
MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,
AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI"....
MAI- JAB DOSTON KI MEHFIL ME,
UNKE NAAM SE BIKNE LAGE....
AVANTIKA- TEHZIB KE RANG ME DHAL,
"UNKE" TAUR TARIKE SIKHNE LAGE.
MAI- JAB WAHI PURANA CHAAND KUCH,
ZYADA KHUBSURAT DIKHNE LAGE...
AVANTIKA- JAB KALAM HAATH PAKAD,
KHUD B KHUD GAZAL LIKHNE LAGE...
MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,
AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI "....
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........
AAPKA APNA V.J.......
AB AAGE:-
CHAPTER-2
( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )
UPDATE- 70
PLANET- GLUTO
PLACE- PALACE GARDEN
GHOOR KYUN RAHI HO????
praatah kaal ek shaksh apni aankhen band kiye dhyan ki awastha me baitha hua hai.....
dhyan me baithne se aksar tejaswi logon ke sharir chamakne lagte hain.par is waqt jo shaksh dhyan awashta me baitha tha,uske sharir se kaale dhuen nikal aas paas ke sabhi ujwalit jagahon par apna asar dikha rahe the.....
wo sabhi jagah andhere me doob se gaye the....
subah subah tahalte hue NISHKALIKA us jagah pahunchi jahan is waqt wo vyakti DHYAN me baitha hua tha....
NISHKALIKA ki nazar apne saamne baithe shaksh par padi aur saath hi un kaal dhuon par,jo aas paas ki jagahon ko bhi apne rang me samet kar kaale kar rahe the....
NISHKALIKA- ANDHERE KI JAY HO........
NISHKALIKA chalte hue us shaksh ke saamne pahunchi...
usne apne haath aage kar diye....NISHKALIKA ke haathon se kuch kaali roshniyan nikli aur us shaksh ki taraf chal din....
par jo kaale dhuen is waqt us shaksh ke sharir se nikal rahe the,unhone un kaale rays ko us shaksh tak pahunchne se pehle hi khatm kar diya....
ab NISHKALIKA us shaksh ko dhyan se dekhne lagi....
us shaksh ko bhi dhyan awashtha me ye gyat ho gaya ki koi usse ghoor raha hai.usne jhat se apni aankhen khol di...
apne saamne NISHKALIKA ko khud ko ghurta dekh usne ye sawaal kiya tha........
NISHKALIKA- dekh rahi hun ki kaabiliyat toh hai tumeme....warna itne sashakt KAAL RAKSHAK ( kaale dhuen ) tumhare sharir me nahi baste...
waise kya naam bataya tha tumne apna???
UNKNOWN- MADDOX..................
ji haan doston,ASMODEUS ne MADDOX ko NISHKALIKA ke paas hi bheja tha..........
NISHKALIKA- haan,MADDOX............par ek baat batao,tumhare grah par sabke naam itne ajeeb kyun hote hain.......
MADDOX........!!!DIGVIJAY.............ye bhi bhala koi naam hua???????
MADDOX- hahahahahahaha................
NISHKALIKA ki baat sunkar MADDOX ko hasi aa gayi.........
par NISHKALIKA ko MADDOX ka yun hasna pasand nahi aaya.........
NISHKALIKA- maine kya koi mazak kiya hai jo tum has rahe ho........?????
MADDOX- mazak hi toh hai..hamare planet ke naamo par sawaal uthane se pehle tumne kabhi apne naam ke baare me socha hai.....
agar tum hamare planet me kisike saamne apna naam bologi toh unhe lagega ki tum koi naatak mandali ka kirdaar ho........
MADDOX ki baat ne NISHKALIKA ke ghusse par aag me ghee ka kaam kiya....
DIGVIJAY ke hisse ki power ko bhi paakar NIHKALIKA ka ghamand saatve aasman par pahunch chuka tha....
aise me kisika uske naam ka mazak udana usse bilkul pasand nahi aaya...
NISHKALIKA- apni zuban ko lagam do MADDOX..tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kiske naam ka mazak uda rahe ho??????
MADDOX- yahi baat tum par bhi lagu hoti NISHKALIKA.mere aur mere bhai ke naam ka mazak udane se pehle tumhe bhi yahi sochna chahiye tha............
NISHKALIKA- hum NISHKALIKA hain.......kaali shaktiyon ki MALIKA....hum jisse chaahen,jo chaahe,wo bol sakte hain.....
MADDOX- galatfehmi hai tumhari...tum jis taakat ka ghamand kar rahi ho,uska aadha hissa mere bhai ki di hui tumhe bheek hai....
MADDOX ki baat sunkar NISHKALIKA ke sabr ka baandh ko jhakjhor diya tha....
par NISHKALIKA jaanti thi ki MADDOX uske paas DEVIL LORD ke kehne se aaya hai isiliye wo usse maar nahi sakti thi......
NISHKALIKA- bohot ghamand hai naa tujhe apni taakat par.....aur hoga bhi kyun nahi,DEVIL LORD ka sahara jo mila hai tujhe........
MADDOX- ek aur galatfehmi.......chalo,kamsekam tumhare is galatfehmi ko toh mai door kar hi sakta hun...
chalo,ek chota sa yudh karte hain.agar tumne mujhe hara diya toh mera sir tumhare aage jhuk jaayega par agar tum haari toh tumhe mere aage jhukna hoga.......
NISHKALIKA- manzoor hai...........
NISHKALIKA ne apna right hand ek baar gol ghumaya,jis garden me is waqt NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX khade the,uske chaaro taraf ek strong SHIELD ban gaya.......
NISHKALIKA- toh shuru karen????
MADDOX ne kuch kaha nahi bas apni aankhen band kar kuch budbudaya.......
BHUMIYEM KHANANAM KAROTI.....
LAND DIGGING..........
MADDOX ke mantra uchharit karte hi NISHKALIKA ke neeche ki zameen dono taraf se halki khisak gayi.......
par ye kya!!!!!!!????????
NISHKALIKA ke pair zamin ke khisakne se bilkul bhi nahi dagmagaye.......
wo wahin muskurati hui khadi rahi...
MADDOX ne jab NISHKALIKA ke pairon ki taraf dekha toh usse pata chala ki NISHKALIKA halki hawa me uthi hui hai..
jab pair hi zamin par nahi hain,toh zamin ke khisakne ka NISHKALIKA par asar kaise hota...............
BHUMIYEM SHAKTI SHASHTRA ROPANAHA.....
LANDS POWER ARMS LOOSE.............
ye SPELL MADDOX ne nahi NISHKALIKA ne budbudaye the................
NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi wo zameen jo dono taraf khisak gayi thi,uske andar se solid mitti ke badi badi parthen nikal kar MADDOX ki taraf gayi.......
par wo mitti ki saari parthen apne andar lohe ke nukile auzaron ko dhake hue thi.....
MADDOX ko ye pata chal gaya....
aur agle hi pal MADDOX hawa me uchla.......
jitni bhi mitti ki parten uski taraf aa rahi thi,MADDOX un sab ke upar chalta hua aage badhne laga.....
par saath saath MADDOX ne apne dono haathon ko baari baari se aage ki taraf chalana shuru kiya maano kuch fek raha ho.........
MADDOX ke dono hatheliyon se ussi tarah ke nukile auzar nikle jaise un mitti ke parthon me chupe hue the aur wo sab auzar ek ke baad ek NISHKALIKA ki taraf badhe.......
NISHKALIKA SHOCKED HO GAYI........
uske shocked hone ka kaaran ye nahi tha ki MADDOX ne uske waar ko kaat diya balki ye tha ki MADDOX ko pata chal gaya tha ki un mitti ki parthon ke aad me NISHKALIKA ne uspar kis cheez se waar kiya hai.....
aur unhi auzaron ke waar wo ab uspe kar raha tha.........
AVRODHA........
BLOCK...........
NISHKALIKA ke SPELL bolte hi jitne bhi auzar uski taraf aa rahe the wo ek adrishya lohe ki stopper se takrane lage aur neeche gir gaye....
NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX ne ek pal ke liye ek dusre ki aankhon me dekha maano ek dusre ki taakat ko naap rahe hon.....
AAVAPAYATI AGKURA............
CUT PLATES.........
ye SPELL NISHKALIKA ne bola tha.....SPELL ke uchharit hoti hi MADDOX ko apne kaano me kuch tez tez ghumne ka abhas hua.....
usne har taraf dekha par usse kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya......
PRAKATI KAROTI..........
UNFOLD...........
jab MADDOX ko kuch bhi dikhayi nahi diya toh usne ye SPELL bola.......
SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko apne chaaro taraf blades dikhne lage.....
jo gol gol ghumte hue uski taraf aa rahe the....
ye toh acha hua ki MADDOX ne UNFOLD SPELL right time me bol diya kyunki wo blades MADDOX ke kaafi paas aa chuke the....
AGKURA VICCHEDAKA
BLADE CUTTER
MADDOX ne turant is SPELL ko uccharit kiya....
aur TANNNNNNNNNNNNN...................
NISHKALIKA ke chhode gaye adrishya BLADES MADDOX se bas 1 feet hi door the..
MADDOX ke SPELL uccharit karte hi wo saare blades beech se katathe chale gaye..........
NISHKALIKA- bas,bohot hua.........
AVAPI DAYATI.........
SQUEEZE OUT.........
NISHKALIKA ne apne dono haathon ko aage kar taali bajate hue is SPELL ko bola tha,
SPELL ke bolte hi MADDOX ke dono taraf do kaale rays ki par solid lohe se bhi sakht diwal ban gayi aur NISHKALIKA ke taali bajate hi wo dono diwal tez gati se MADDOX ki taraf badhe maano usse beech me pichkana chahte hon......
KAAL CHAKRAM SVAVAHITA..........
BLACK SHADOWS ALERT..........
MADDOX ne apni aankhen band ki aur is SPELL ko uchharit kiya.......
SPELL ke uccharit hote hi MADDOX ko chaaron taraf se kaale dhuen ne gher liya maano koi chaadar khud ko kisipar odha rahi ho........
aur BOOM........................
wo kaali rays ki DIWAL MADDOX ke chaaron taraf faile kaali chadar se takrayi aur ek karn bhedi vishphot hua....
NISHKALIKA ke bichaye SHIELD ki wajah se is vishphot ki awaaz aur asar toh na hi kisi ko sunayi di,naa hi kisiko koi nuksaan pahuncha par SHIELD zaroor toot gayii......
MADDOX aur NISHKALIKA ek dusre ko aascharya chakit hokar dekh rahe the........
NISHKALIKA- adhbhoodh.........kaafi aulokik aur avismaraniya shaktiyon ke maalik ho tum....
MADDOX- maine bhi jitna socha tha,tum usse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali ho.......
NISHKALIKA- agar hum dono mil jaayen toh is bramhaand me raaj kar sakte hain.....
MADDOX- ye bramhaand toh LORD OF DEVILS ki milkiyat hai,mujhe toh bas apne bhai ke mout ka aur khud ka pratishodh lena hai......
NISHKALIKA- wo toh le hi lenge.....par tab tak tum mere mehman ho........
AUR MAI KYA HUN AAPKI????KABAHI HUME BHI TOH YAAD KAR LIYA KARO......
MADDOX ne awaaz ki disha me dekha.aur usse jo dikha,usse dekhkar uski nazar wahin theher gayi..........
NISHKALIKA aur MADDOX se kuch hi door ek beintehan khoobsurat ladki khadi thi....
jo apne gulab si pankhudiyon jaise honton par muskaan liye NISHKALIKA ki taraf aa rahi thi.....
NISHKALIKA ne bhi apni baahen khol di..dono ladkiyon ek dusre ke gale lagin.......
NISHKALIKA- MADDOX,isse milo.....
YE HAI ''BHUVIKA''........MERI BEHEN........
PLANET- EARTH
PLACE- COLLEGE HALL
OH...... MY......... GOD.........................
just look at him...............he is so so so handsome yaar..............
aaj VALENTINES day hai......actually abhi ke time ke hisab se ye VALENTINES evening hai....
jaisa ki maine bataya ki abhi shaam ka waqt hai jo apne swarup ko haule haule badlate hue raat ka roop le rahi hai.......
aur abhi abhi jo aapne taarifen suni.ye hamare college hall me moujud ladkiyon ke mooh se nikli hai...
WAJAH!!!!!!abhi abhi apke bhai ne hall me entry li hai.........jahan sabhi ladkon ne WESTERN OUTFIT pehna hua hai wahin unke complete opposite mai TRADITIONAL ETHNIC dress me hun.......
BLACK KURTE PAYJAAME ke upar GRAPHITE BLACK WAIST COAT......aur is dress me mai lag kaisa raha hun ye toh aapko abhi abhi girls ke reaction se pata chal hi gaya hoga....
waise mere saath ALISHA bhi thi jisne RED POLYESTER BODYCON dress pehni hui thi aur is dress me wo kisi ANGEL se kam nahi lag rahi thi.......
( WAISE THI TOH WO ANGEL HI )
saare ladke jinki nazar abhi tak apni gfs aur partner ke hote hue bhi 3 ladkiyon ko ghure jaa rahi thi,ab unka direction change hokar ALISHA pe aa gaya tha........
waise toh saare students jo is waqt is hall me moujud the,wo sab apne partner ke saath hi aaye hue the par filhaal ladke alag apne frnz ke saath khade hue the aur ladkiyan apne frnz ke saath....
par mera group intact tha.hum dono chalte hue unke paas chale gaye..........
MAI- hey guyzzzz,wuz up......??????
par mere greet ka jawab dena chhod sab saale mujhe aise ghure jaa rahe the maano pehli baar dekh rahe ho......
MAI- abbe ladkiyon ka toh thik hai,par tum teeno ladke hokar bhi mujhe ghur rahe ho....!!!
choices toh nahi badal gayi naa tumhari.....?????
VINCENT- kya bhai...tu bhi!!!!!waise kamal lag rahe ho..& ALISHA,u too are looking very beautiful......
ALISHA- thanks......
RONIT- saale,tu ETHNIC me aane waala tha toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya,mai bhi ETHNIC pehen leta.....
MAI- aur jo ANJALI ne tere liye dress kharida tha aaj ke liye,uska kya hota????
ANJALI- tujhe kaise!!!!!!!!
madam ka pata unke mooh me hi reh gaya kyunki unhe y aad aa gaya tha ki galat bande se galat sawal puch rahi thi wo.......
MAI- waise tum teeno ko bata dun,apne apne partners ko chupa kar rakho,saare ladko ki nazar inpar hi hai......
RONIT- kiski majaal hai jo inko kuch kar ke dikhaye?????
MAI- meri.....itni khoobsurti ek saath bulk me dekhkar mujhe toh chakkar aa rahe hain....
meri baat ka asar bas do ladkiyon par hi hua,kyunki teesri toh jab se mai aaya hun,bas bina palken jhapkaaye mujhe hi dekhe jaa rahi hai.....
ab aap toh samajh hi gaye honge ki mai kiski baat kar raha hun....
waise haal toh mera bhi AVANTIKA ko dekhkar bura ho raha tha..meri hi tarah usne bhi hamare DESH ke sabse khubsoorat paridhan ko pehna hua tha..SAARI......
AVANTIKA ne red colour ki saari pehni hui thi jisme wo us MENKA se kam nahi lag rahi thi jo mere jaise VISHVAMITRA ki tapasya ko bhang karne me lagi hui thi...
agar mere andaz me kahun toh.............
jab jab meri nigahen
tujhpe padti hai,
tab tab mera wajud
KHOTA hai.....
ek din tu meri hogi,
ye sochkar hi mujhe
apne kismat pe
RASK HOTA HAI......
meri nazar jaise hi AVANTIKA ki ghoorti hui nazar pe padi,usne apni nazarein ghuma li.....
tabhi uske paas khadi ANJALI ne uske kaan me kuch bola aur same messege AVANTIKA ne SHANAYA ko paas kiya.teeno ne hume excuse me bola aur kahin nikal gayi....
RONIT- ab ye sab kahan jaa rahi hain???
MAI- washroom..........
RONIT- bhai,susu toh mujhe bhi badi zor ki lag rahi hai...kabse control karke rakha hun..
MAI- chal fir...
maine ALISHA ko excuse me kaha aur RONIT ke saath chal pada...
girls lo aur boys loo aamne saamne hi tha..ladkyan toh girls loo me jaa chuki thi,RONIT bhi men's loo me ghus gaya aur mai bahar khada mobile kochakne laga.....
ki tabhi.............
TUM YAHAN.........
maine mobile se nazar hata kar saamne dekha jahan AVANTIKA khadi mujhe ghur rahi thi......
MAI- nahi,ye toh mera bhoot hai..mai toh abhi bhi hall me hi hun..........
AVANATIKA- tum naa,ekdum ajeeb ho..koi bhi sawaal ka sidha sa jawab nahi dete..
MAI- jab sawal hi tedha medha hoga toh jawab sidha kaise dun....dekh kar bhi puchti ki tum yahan????
AVANTIKA- tum naa,bohot badal gaye ho???
MAI- hmm.....
AVANTIKA ko laga ki mai usse kaise puchunga par maine hmm kaha toh usse shock laga....
AVANTIKA- kya hmm???matlab tumhe pata hai ki tum badal gaye ho!!!!!
MAI- nahi....
AVANTIKA- toh hmm kyun kaha????
MAI- kyunki tumhara sawaal hi galat hai.hum toh waise hi hai jaise the,shayad tumhare mujhe dekhne ka tarika badal gaya hai...
meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA hadbada gayi..
AVANTIKA- matlab????
MAI- khud se pucho...wahin se is sawaal ka better jawab milega.......
waise sawal puchne ke alawa tumhe aur kisi cheez me interest hai????
AVANTIKA dheere se- TUM ME......
MAI- maine sun liya......
AVANTIKA- kya,kya sun liya????
AVANTIKA meri baat sunkar dar gayi thi...
MAI- flush ki awaaz..lagta hai RONIT halka ho gaya hai.........
AVANTIKA- chiii...kuch bhi naa.......
par tabhi MENS loo aur GIRL'S loo.dono ka darwaaza ek saath khula aur mere saare frnz baahar aa gaye...
MAI- tum sabne decide kiya tha ki ek saath baahar aaoge........
RONIT- bakwaas band kar be......
ANJALI- apni partner ko akela chhodkar yahan kya kar raha hai tu..
ALISHA ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA firse sad ho gayi.....
MAI- tere b.f ki chowkidaari.......ab chalen...
hum sab hall ki taraf chal pade.par hamare hall me pahunchte hi hamare aaj ki shaam ki ANCHOR...MISS SHAIFALI bhi stage par aa chuki thi......
SHAIFALI- hello,everybodyyyyyyyyyy.....sabse pehle a very happy VALENTINES DAY to all of u.....
so aaj ka ye contest shuru karen?????
sab yes yes ki hooting karne lage.....
SHAIFALI- alright then....sabse pehle mai aapko bata dun ki aaj ke hamare contest ko judge COMMERCE ke final year ke kuch students karenge....
now coming back to the contest,aaj ke contest ko 3 ROUNDS me divide kiya gaya hai....
1st ROUND me aap sab ko apne partners ke saath stage par aakar ramp walk karna hoga..
aap sab me se best 4 couples ko chuna jaayega.....
aur uske baad..............
ab itni bhi kya jaldi hai..........pehle first round toh pura kar len....
COUPLES,what are u waiting 4........come up & set the stage on fire.........
hum sab apne apne partners ke saath ek ek karke ramp walk karne lage....
ANJALI aur RONIt ke ramp walk karte waqt kaafi hooting hui aur same shanaya aur VINCENT ke walk karne par bhi hua....
second last jodi AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH the.....AVANTIKA ne ek baar meri taraf dekha fir aage nikal gayi......
wo toh aage nikal gayi par mere dil aur dimag me us dard aur shikayat ko chhod gayi jo mujhe dekhte waqt uske aankhon me thi...
dard is baat ka ki mai uske saath nahi hun aur shikayat is baat ki ki mai kyun uske saath nahi hun......?????
tez HOOTINGS aur TAALIYAON se meri soch tooti...ye hooting AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH ke liye ho rahi thii.....ab tak ki sabse tez hooting.......
aur ab bas mai aur ALISHA bache the...
maine uska haath thaama aur hum stage par chadh gaye.hum jaise jaise aage jaa rahe the,hall students ke shor se gunje jaa raha tha...
shayad hi aisa koi us hall me moujud hoga jisne mere all ALISHA ke walk par shor nahi machaya hoga....
finally humari walk khatm hui aur hum sab apne frnz ke paas jakar khade ho gaye....
hum sabne ek dusre ko congrats kaha..AVANTIKA ab bhi reh reh kar mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi....
mai dheere se chalte hue uske paas gaya..
MAI- udas ho....
AVANTIKA- nahi toh...
MAI- mai puch nahi raha,bata raha hun..par fikr mat karo,is contest ke khatm hote tak tuumhare chehre ki muskan laut aayegi.....
mai AVANTIKA ko bol lautkar apni jagah par khada ho gaya.......
wahin AVANTIKA toh meri baat ka matlab samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi...
SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki aap me se best 4 ko chuna jaayega...toh mere paas best five ka naam aa chuka hai...aur wo naam hain.......
ANJALI & RONIT...........
SHANAYA & VINCENT........
AVANTIKA & UTKARSH.......
ALISHA & VIKRAM........
hum sab ke nam anounce hote samay hall ek baar fir se taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj utha............
SHAIFALI- toh doston..........ab hai time second round ka..............
par yahan ek twist hai.......humare paas ek bowl hai jisme humne pehle se hi in chaar jodiyon ka....oh sorry sorry in 8 students ka naam likh liya hai....
aap sab yahi soch rahe honge ki maine in sab ko 4 jodiyan na kehkar 8 students kyun kaha????
toh wo isiliye doston ki is ROUND me ek twist hai..waise toh ek twist aur bhi hai par uske baare me aa sab ko last me maalum padega...
filhal ke liye is round ke twist ke baare me baat karte hain.......
is round me ye sab yahan upar aayenge aur har couple me se ek bowl se ek chit nikalenge...jiske haath me jiske bhi naam ka chit hoga,usse ye dusra round uske saath hi pura karna hoga....
agar aapke chit me aapke partner ka hi naam hua toh fir toh aap lucky hai aur agar nahi toh jiska bhi naam hoga,wahi aapka is round ke liye partner hoga....
toh lets begin............
is round ek baare me sunkar jahan saare students khush ho gaye the wahin saare couples thode nervous.....
hum sab upar stage par aa gaye...hum sab ladkon ne girls ko chits utahne ke liye kaha
ANJALI ,SHANAYA, AVANTIKA aur ALISHA ne chit uthaye.....
ANJALI ke chit me VINCENT nikla...
SHANAYA ke chit me UTKARSH nikla....
ALISHA ke chit me me RONIT nikla.....
aur AVANTIKA ke chit me......ab bacha hi kaun mere alava......MAI hi nikla......
SHAIFALI- fantastic.....toh hamare paas hamre new fresh partners hain......toh game shuru karte hain.....
jahan mere baaki ke frnz ke mooh latak gaye the wahan ek chehra khil gaya tha....aap sab toh jaante hi ho ki kiski baat ho rahi hai....
SHAIFALI- toh task ke baare me bhi bata deti hun...........
kaafi simple hai...........aap sab me se ek apne baare me ek sawaal puchega aur uske partner ko jawab dena hoga....
sawaal kuch bhi ho sakta hai..apne fav.cheez ke baare me bhi ya fir apne hobbies ke ya fir apne nature,character ya fir ATTITUDE ke baare me bhi....
saamne waale ko uska jawab dena hai......total 5 sawaal puche jaayenge.jiske jawab sabse zyada right honge wo team jeet jaayegi.......
ye point jeetne waali team ki original jodiyon ko milegi.....
so guyz ready........
RONIT- ek minute...
RONIT uth kar mere paas aaya aur mere kaan me bola....
RONIT- saale tu,apne powers ka use nahi karega....sawal tu puchega ,jawab AVNI degi..thik hai......!!!!
MAI- tu wahin baithe baithe agar ye man me bhi soch leta na toh mujhe pata chal jaata.....
RONIT- arre haa yaar.chal chhod ....bas tu dhyan rakhiyo......
RONIT apni jagah par kaakar baith gaya aur fir hua hamara ye task.......
SHAIFALI sawal puchne waale se pehle se hi uske saare sawal aur uske answers likhwa kar apne paas rakh leti thi taaki baad me koi cheating naa ho......
par jaise ki sabko ummid thi,kisi ne bhi apne partner ke sawaalon ka sahi jawab nahi diya..
yahan mai aapko bata dun ki maine ST CECILA aur ST ALFRICK ko bhi apne power ko use karne ke liye mana kiya hua tha......
aur ab baari thi meri aur AVANTIKA ki...
SHAIFALI- toh jaisa ki hum sabne dekha hai ki abhi tak kisi bhi jodi ne ek bhi sahi jawab nahi diya hai.....
par ab hai humare saamne hamari last jodi...& guyz ye dono mere personal favs. bhi hai.SECRILLA adventure me in dono ne ek game me itna behetareen performance diya tha ki kya bataun....
ummid hai ki aaj bhi aisa hi kuch hoga..
so,sawaal kaun puch raha hai????
MAI- mai puchunga.....
meri baat sunkar AVANTIKA nervous ho gayi.........
AVANTIKA dheere se - but V.J,mujhe tumhare baare me kuch bhi nahi pata.....
MAI- mere sawaalon ko sunana mat,mehsoos karna..apni aakhen band kar jo bhi tumhe mehsoos ho,wo bol dena......
AVANTIKA ko meri baat thik se samajh toh nahi aayi par usne haan me mundi hiladi....
maine bhi baakiyon hi ki tarah apne sawaal aur unke jawab likhkar SHAIFALI ko de diye..
SHAIFALI- ok guys,shoot....
maine AVANTIKA ko apni aankh band karne ka ishara kiya,AVANTIKA ne apni aankhen band kar li......
MAI- mera fav COLOUR????
AVANTIKA jiski aankhen band thi,uske aankhon ke saamne RED colour aa gaya....
AVANTIKA-RED...........
MAI- mere INSPIRATION......
AVANTIKA ke saamne ek tasvir ubhri.....
AVANTIKA- tumhare DAD.......
MAI- SUCCESS aur DOSTON me se agar mujhe kisi ek ko chunana pade toh mai kisse chununga????
AVANTIKA- DOSTON ko........
AVANTIKA ke jawab ko sunkar mere dono doston ka dil bhar aaya tha par unhone apne emotions ko control kar liya.....
MAI- har insaan ko ek cheez hai jo mai barabar deta hun,wo kya hai????
AVANTIKA- IZZAT...........
MAI- sab kuch hai mere paas,fir bhi ek chiz kim kami hai,wo kya hai????
AVANTIKA-MOHOBBAT.........
SHAIFALI- OH,MY,GOD............saare answers sahi hain...i mean,how????????unbelievable.........hats off AVANTIKA........
guys,give the winners a big hand.....ek baar fir har taraf hooting aur clapping shuru ho gayi..........
humare doston ne bhi hume gale lag kar congrats kiya....
SHAIFALI- ab baari hai hamare last & final round ki....toh iske baare me toh sabko pehle se bata diya gaya tha,par jo bhi bataya gaya tha,wo aadhi baat thi....
aur naaki ki aadhi baat ye hai ki aap sab apne partners ke saath ek ek karke dance nahi karenge...
aap sab ke selected songs ki c.d ko humne merge karke ek song me convert kar diya hai.....aur saath hi aakhri me ek chota sa music beat humne apni taraf se bhi add kiya hai...
aap sabhi apne partners ke saath ek saath stage par aayenge..jab jab jiske bhi selected song ka music bajega,usse dance karna hoga..
aur aakhri music beat par aapko turant improvise karke dance karna hoga.......
toh shuru karen.....
hum charon couples stage par aa gaye.....
SURAJ HUA MADDHAM
CHAAND JALNE LAGA.....
AASMAAN YEH HAAYE
KYUN PIGHALNE LAGA.....
issi song ke saath ANJALI aur RONIT ne slow romatic dance shuru kiya........
dono ek steps itne ache nahi the,par dono ke beech ki chemistry aur feel itna natural tha ki sabke sab mantramugdh se hokar dono ko dekhne lage...
abhi unhe dance karte hue 2 minute bhi nahi hua tha ki song change ho gaya aur ab SHANAYA aur VINCENT ne PEHLI NAZAR ME KAISA JAADU KAR DIYA song par dance karne lage............
wo dono bhi mushkil se 2 min hi dance kar paaye the ki itne me third song baj utha aur ab AVANTIKA aur UTKARSH stage ke centre me the....
TERA HONE LAGA HUN.KHONE LAGA HUN.,song ko puri tarag se justify karte hue dono dance karne lage..
par zyadatar steps karte hue AVANTIKA ki nazar mujhpe hi thi jisse UTKARSH ne bhi dekh liya tha aur uske chehre par bhi muskurahat thi....
aur agle 2 minuton ke baad stage par mai aur ALISHA aa gaye...........
EK DIN TERI RAAHON ME
BAAHON ME PANAHON ME
AAUNGA.......
KHO JAAUNGA.....
EK DIN TERA
HO JAAUNGA.....
is epic gaane ko hum dono ke dance ne aur epic bana diya......
kyunki mai aur ALISHA saalsa kar rahe the,isiliye hamara har movement,har step bohot zyada sexy aur sensuous lag raha tha....
itni der se khush ho rahi AVANTIKA ka chehra ek baar fir se murjhane laga par tabhi.......
gaana change ho gaya.............
aur ab jo music baj raha tha wo toh is sadi ke sabse romatic track ka music tha..........
HUM TERE BIN ABHI REH NAHI SAKTE,
TERE BINA KYA WAJUD MERA......
TUJHSE JUDA GAR HO JAAYENGE
TOH KHUD SE HI HO JAAYENGE JUDA.....
gaana jitna bhi ROMANTIC kyun naa ho,steps toh aane hi chahiye na uspe groove karen ke liye..
ab ye koi shadi ka funtion toh tha nahi ki kisi bhi music par sapera dance shuru kar den..
mere saare frnz nervous ho gaye kyunki ye sab unke liye unexpected tha......
neeche se saare students jo abhi tak hum sab ko cheer kar rahe the ab BOO BOO karke hamara mazaak udane lage.............
ki tabhi achanak kuch aisa hua ki sab chup ho gaye..........sirf 1 awaaz aa rahi thi.....
MUSIC KI...
aur stage ke beech ek couple ek dusre ko thaame hue har second ek aisa romantic moov kar raha tha ki dekhne waalon ke dil hi dil me aah nikal jaa rahi thi.....
ye couple aur koi nahi MAI aur AVANTIKA the.............
hua ye mere doston ke nervous chehron ek beech bas ek chehra aisa tha jiske chehre par nervousness nahi balki maayusi dikh rahi thi...
ye chehra AVANTIKA ka tha jo meri taraf ek tak dekhe jaa rahi thi maano keh rahi ho ki agar tumne mujhe chuna hota toh yun beech me rukna na padta.......
uski aankhon me ek iltejaa thi jo keh rahi thi ki ab bhi der nahi hui hai.....ek baar,bas ek baar mujhe pukaron,mai tumhare aadhe likhin shaayri ko pura kar dungi.....
ek baar apna haath badhao,fir dekho,ye gaana apne shabdon ke zariye hamari kahani batayega........
aur ,maine AVANTIKA ki dil ki awaaz sun li aur apna haath aage kar diya aur AVANTIKA ne bhi bina der kiye mera haath thaam liya......
saare students ke liye ye bas ek khubsoorat sa dance tha,mere doston ki nazar me hum unki izzat bacha rahe the,par hum dono ke liye toh ye pal apne SAPNE ko apne HAQIQAT se milane ki shuruat thi.......
song kab khatm hua hume maalum hi nahi chala...ye toh students ka shor aur taaliyon ki gadgadahat thi jisse hum dono hosh me aaye..
humne sabko thanks kaha aur apne doston ek paas aa gaye............
humare dost hamare dance ki taarif kar rahe the,unka popat hone se bachane ke liye thanks keh rahe the,par najane kyun,mere aur AVANTIKA ke kaanon me ab tak ek dusre ki tez saanson ki awaaz gunj rahi thi.......
SHAIFALI- wow,what a performance.yaar sach sach batao,kahin se hamare prograame ke secrets leak toh nahi ho gaye naa.i mean,such a smooth dance act..
lag hi nahi raha tha ki abhi abhi improvise kiya hai.....
anyways,jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki abhi ek twist aur hai toh wo twist ab disclose hone waala hai......
twist ye tha ki aaj ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka selection second round ke task aur last round ke last song ko dekhkar kiya jaane waala tha.....
so guyz,mere paas is saal ke MR VALENTINE aur MISS VALENTINE ka naam aa chuka hai,,,,
aur wo hain........................
any guess guyzzzzzzzzzzzzz....
har taraf do naam gunjane lage.........
SHAIFALI- u all are absolutely right guyssss..........this year's MR & MISS VALENTINE ARE
VIKRAM & AVANTIKA ........
hum dono ka naam aate hi mere dost mere aur AVANTIKA par kood gaye.....
Unse free hokar mai aur AVANTIKA stage par gaye aur apni VALENTINES TROPY lene ke liye haath badhaya hi tha ki SHAIFALI ne apna trophy waala haath peeche khinch liya...
SHAIFALI- aise nahi..........pehle kuch ho jaaye.....
MAI- trophy dono ki hai,toh bolna bhi dono ko padega......
maine AVANTIKA ki taraf dekhte hue bola...
SHAIFALI- ye ki naa pate ki baat.......
then what are we waiting for???
SHAIFALI ne meri taraf mike kar diya.......
MAI- mai jo bhi line bolunga,tumhe usse puri karni hogi....
AVANTIKA ne bas apni palkon ko neeche kar haami bhar di...
MAI- JAB DIMAG SHAANT HO,
PAR DIL ME BECHAINI HO,
JAB SACH LAG RAHI SAARI
GALATFEHMI HO,
AVANTIKA- "HAAN,WAHI PYAR HAI"....
MAI-JAB TANHA KHAMOSH RAATEIN HON,
PAR KAANO ME EK SHOR MACH JAAYE,
AVANTIKA- JAB SAARI DUNIYE ME DHOOP KHILE,
BAS KHUDKE UPAR HI BAADAL GARAJ JAAYE,
MAI- JAB SIDHE CHALNE WAALE KADAM,
ACHANAK SE BEHEK JAAYE,
AVANTIKA- DHUL SE BHARE RAASTE,
UNKE EHSAAS ME,
KHUSBOO SE MEHAK JAAYE....
MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,
AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI"....
MAI- JAB DOSTON KI MEHFIL ME,
UNKE NAAM SE BIKNE LAGE....
AVANTIKA- TEHZIB KE RANG ME DHAL,
"UNKE" TAUR TARIKE SIKHNE LAGE.
MAI- JAB WAHI PURANA CHAAND KUCH,
ZYADA KHUBSURAT DIKHNE LAGE...
AVANTIKA- JAB KALAM HAATH PAKAD,
KHUD B KHUD GAZAL LIKHNE LAGE...
MAI- WO EHSAAS JO HOTA SIRF EK BAAR HAI,
AVANTIKA- " HAAN WAHI PYAR HAI "....
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........
AAPKA APNA V.J.......
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