Dhaneshwar Singh
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Update Bro
Waiting for next........
Nice
Mja aa gya padh ke aadhe update tak to esa lag rha tha ki bhuvika ka koi jikar hi nhi hoga lekin ese to setan ne khud bula liya waiting tomorrow
Bohot hi sandaar update bhai
Nice update
Superb yar mera guess sahi nikla ab bhuvika bhi badla lena ka liye lare gi
badiya update bhai
Super update hai bhai waiting for next
Excellent update V.J bhai
Hahaha...wo angle bhi sahi hai par fir kahani ghumegi kaise...normal luv story bankar reh jaayegi..waise bhi aapko uaad hoga ki BHUVIKA ke intro update me likha gaya tha ki BHUVIKA is kahani ki ek bohot ehem kirdar hai.toh uska role thoda hatke hi hoga naa.kya,ye aapko aage chalkar pata chal jaayega...saath bane rahiyeAwesom & Nice Update
Ek Baat Kaho ga Bhuvika ko Asmodes ka pas nahi jana chaiye tha vikam k ek dost abi kawara hai to us k sath mil jani chaiye thi kiu k wo bori nahi thi Par ap ne kuch soch kar hi likah ho Umeed hai age aur maZa aye ga
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Dekhte hain ki aage lya hota hai par jo bhi hova,uska outcome aapko chownka dega....Mera andaza sahi tha bhuvika aur beelzubub sayad ek rishte me bandh jayen aur bhuvika ko to badla chahiye to sayad vo bhi villen ki list Mai samal ho gayi wah Kya Kamal ka update Diya hai bhai
Thanks brother.. abhi ALESANDRA aur AVANTIKA ka proper intro hona baaki h brother..us mega update me toh saara focus apne hero par hi tha...aur tention naa.lijiye,exams ka part kaldi hi skip ho jaayega... saath bane rahiyefantastic fabulous superb update bhai, ye sala exam her jagah gush jata hey. writer ki, riders ki ab to kahani ki hero ki life mey gushk boring banadiya, or uski bina life mey kuch achcha bhi nahi milta, dekhtey hey Avni ko kysey normal karta hey VJ ney or kya hota hey Bhuvika ki sath agey, muje lagatha Avni or Alessandra jab amney samney hogi to Avni ki taraf sey kuch mazedar hoga, lekin aap ney narmal hi dekhaya sayed iski bhi kuch bajah hoga, dekhtey hey agey kya hota hey
keep it up and as always waiting for
fantastic fabulous superb update bhai, ye sala exam her jagah gush jata hey. writer ki, riders ki ab to kahani ki hero ki life mey gushk boring banadiya, or uski bina life mey kuch achcha bhi nahi milta, dekhtey hey Avni ko kysey normal karta hey VJ ney or kya hota hey Bhuvika ki sath agey, muje lagatha Avni or Alessandra jab amney samney hogi to Avni ki taraf sey kuch mazedar hoga, lekin aap ney narmal hi dekhaya sayed iski bhi kuch bajah hoga, dekhtey hey agey kya hota hey
keep it up and as always waiting for
Bahut Shandar update bhai
Superb update biradar
super update
Thanks 4 appreciating brother... pehle part ki hi tarah second part bhi apni manzil ki taraf badh chuka hai...Bahut hi lajawab update hai bhai read kar ke Bahut maza aaya Thanx Aise hi kamal ki update likhte rehna aur shukriya First part complete karne ke liye