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Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

Jitu kumar

Jitu kumar

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vj4u said:
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM NE APNE TRAINING KA DUSRA CHARAN START KAR DIYA HAI,WAHIN DIGVIJAY NE BHI APNA PEHLA TASK PURA KAR LIYA HAI.BABA VISHAKHT RAAT KO VIKRAM KE KAMRE ME AATE HAIN AUR USSE EK KITAAB DETE HAIN JISKA NAAM HAI SHASHTRA SUPRAGUPTA....
AB AAGE........






CHAPTER -1






( DEVIL'S ENCHANTMENT & THE HOLY SPIRIT )






UPDATE- 19




mai wapas starting line pe gira hua tha.mere saamne akshaantji aur shaila khade the.ek taraf jahan akshaantji ke chehre pe muskurahat thi wahin dusri taraf shaila ke chehre pe avishwas aur prashansha ke bhaav the aur hote bhi kyun naa aaj maine pure maidan ke do chakkar safaltapurvak paar jo kar liye the.abhi meri training ko start hue sirf ek ghanta hi hua tha aur maine ye kar dikhaya tha.yahi nahi aaj subah ki shuruat bhi meri achi rahi thi

AAJ SUBAH:-


GURUDEV- putra....kal raat jo maine tumhe drav diya tha, ab wo tumhe nahi milega.tum dekh hi rahe ho pehli baar kal tumhe itni thakan aur dard mehsoos hui.ye toh bas shuruat hai,aage aur bhi kathinayi aayegi.

mai toh ye sunkar hi thoda nervous ho gaya tha ki kal raat waala drink firse nahi milega,kyunki wo drink wakayi kamal ka tha.usse peene ke kuch hi minuton me mujhe acha lagne laga tha.maine socha tha ki ab koi tention nahi hogi,chaahe jitni bhi hard training ho,jam ke mehnat karunga aur raat ko wo drink pilunga jisse saari thakan,saara dard mit jaayega.par baba ne toh wo drink dene se hi mana kar diya isiliye mai nirash ho gaya tha.

BABA VISHAKHT- mayus na ho putra.aagar tum lagatar us drav ka sevan karoge toh uske aadi ho jaoge,jo achi baat nahi hai.waise bhi ye toh bas prashikshan hai,asli yudh me tumhe vishraam karne ka waqt hi nahi milega,fir kaise tum apni thakan mitaoge aur
dard sahoge!!!!

MAI- iska koi upay gurudev!!!

BABA VISHAKHT- yog putra yog....yog aur dhyan se na sirf hamare dimag ka vikas hota hai balki yog hamare har dukh ka nivaran bhi hai....aaj mai tumhe yahi sikhaunga......

aaj jab tum dhyan awastha me apne chit ko firse us roshni ke kareeb le jao,tab apne indriyon ko apne sharir se jodne ki koshish karna,isse tumhari koshikayon ko mazbooti milegi.jitna tum us roshni ke sameep rahoge,tumhari aantarik shakti ka vikas hoga.isse tum adhik se adhik parishram bina kisi thakawat ke kar paaoge aur dard ka ehsaas bhi kam ho jayega.

jaisa gurudev ne kaha tha maine waisa hi kiya.jab mera dhyan tuta toh mujhe kal ke mukable aaj apne andar kuch zyada hi taakat aur urja mehsoos ho rahi thi aur ye mere aaj subah ke running practice me dikh bhi gayi.aaj mai akshaantji ke barabar tez doud raha tha.ye dekhkar akshaantji bhi kaafi surprise ho gaye the.fir mai aur akshaantji nikal pade apne prashikshan waali jagah ki aur.raaste me hume shaila dikhi jo apna abhyas kar rahi thi.hume jata dekh wo bhi hamare saath chal padi........

wahan pahunchkar akshaantji ne kal waala mahoul ban diya aur mai lag gaya apni training me.kuch der tak toh mera kal jaisa hi haal raha,par aaj meri sochne samajhne aur faisle lene ki shakti me bhi tezi aayi thi.dekhte hi dekhte 1 ghante me hi maine 2 chakkar safalta purvak maar liye par issi khushi me apna concentration level kho diya aur DHAAAMMMMMMMM....cement me phas gaya aur back to start...

BACK TO PRESENT:-

SHAILA- kya baat hai VIKRAM!!! kal jab akshaant ne bataya tha ki tumne ek chakkar pura kar liya hai toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua tha.par aaj toh tumne ek nahi do do chakkar pure kar liye...

AKSHAANT- haan, par apni ekagrata kho di.VIKRAM,utsah achi baat hai,par uska bhi ek sahi waqt hota hai.tumhara lakshya 2,3,4 chakkar nahi pure 5 chakkar pura karna hai.tabhi tumhari jeet hogi.usse pehle utsah se bharkar apni ekagrata khona sahi nahi hai.

mujhe bhi apni bhool ka ehsaas ho gaya tha.

MAI- maaf karen guruji.ab mai dhyan dunga.

AKSHAANT- koi baat nahi.jao punah koshish karo.

issi ke saath mai lag gaya firse.wahin SHAILA bohot utsahit hokar mujhe dekh rahi thi.meri speed dekhkar wo baar baar shock ho jaati thi.

SHAILA- iski gati samay ke saath badhti hi jaa rahi hai.

AKSHAANT- haan,mujhe andar se abhaas ho raha hai ki ye ek din bramhaand me sabse gatisheel hoga.

SHAILA- sirf,utna hi nahi.muhje lagta hai ki ye har vidhya sikhne ke kaabil hai.

AKSHAANT- hmm.,dekhte hain.

idhar mai pure josh ke saath doude jaa raha tha is baar bhi maine 2 rounds aaram se paar kar liye.3rd bhi complete hone hi waala tha ki last reth ke me fas gaya.


maine apni aankhen band ki.pura maidan mujhe dikhne laga.ye bhi ek gift tha jo mujhe dhyan me baithne se mila tha.mai har jagah ko jo pehle se dekh chuka hun,usse dhyaan ki awastha me na sirf dekh sakta tha balki us sthaan me kab kya hota hai wo bhi samjh sakta tha.abhi mai wahi kar raha tha.

ye sab mai starting point par hi kar raha tha,jahan akshaant aur shaila dono khade the.abhi dono kuch kehte usse pehle hi maine aakhen khol di aur laga di daud.maine kahan galti ki hai,wo sab mujhe pata chal chuka tha...

meri gati aur bhi tez ho chuki thi.....meri raftaar dekh shaila aur akshaant stabdh reh gaye.abhi dono aur kuch samajh paate,usse pehle hi maine 4 rounds paar kar liye the............ ye mera aakhri round tha.akshaant aur shaila dono ki hi aankhon me vismay aur prasannata ke bhaav the.mai apne target ko pura karne ke bohot hi kareeb tha.bas ek cement trap aur ek reth trap uske baad mera target pura.

is khushi me mai,yahan tak ki akshaant aur shaila bhi asli problem bhool chuke the.

''ROOPANTARAN YANTRA''


ye mera aakhri hurdle tha. maine badi aasani se cement trap paar kar liya aur reth trap ki aur badha. reth ke upar apna wazan kam rakh ke paar hone hi waala tha ki BOOOOOMMMMMM...ek zor ka dhamaka hua.
dhamaka itna bada tha ki upar jo kalpanik akash bana tha wo tak hil gaya.....

mai udta hua ek cement trap ke upar me gira.us trap ne mujhe apne andar kheech liya aur mai wapas starting point me.akshaant aur shaila toh dhamake ke baad jo saamne aaya usse hi fati aankhon se dekh rahe the.

idhar mujhe kaafi chot aayi thi.mai girte hi behosh ho gaya tha par kyunki mere cells kafi active ho chuke the,mujhe kuch hi palon me hosh aa gaya.....maine apne aap ko starting point me dekha toh mai firse nirash ho gaya.maine aaju baaju dekha toh akshaant aur shaila khade the.maine unhe aawaz di par wo toh ek tak saamne dekh rahe the.maine unki nazar ka peecha kiya aur saamne dekha toh meri haalat un dono se bhi kharaab ho gayi......

MAI- OHHHH TERIKI.......ye kahan se aaya!!!

tab mujhe ROOPANTARAN YANTRA yaad aaya.


MAI- ye kya roop le liya isne.isse ladna padega mujhe..........maine akshaant ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki dono hi mujhe dekh rahe hain...wo bhi taras bhari nazaron se.....

MAI- kya mujhe isse ladna padega?

akshaant ne bas haan me mundi hiladi....

MAI- ye kya mazak hai.nahi ladna mujhe isse.

AKSHAANT- tum piche nahi hat sakte VIKRAM.jab tak tum isse nahi ladte,hum is mayavi duniya se bahar nahi jaa sakte.

ab ye kya bakar hai yaar.isse ladne ke baad bachunga hi kahan jo bahar niklunga!!!!ajeeb pareshani thi.par tention me sirf mai hi nahi tha.ye dono bhi the.

akshaant ne bhi ye chakravyun toda tha.RUPANTARAN yantra ka saamna kiya tha.par YANTRA ne aaj tak jab bhi roop badla tha toh kisi saand ka ya kisi gende ka,kabhi kisi chote danav ka toh kabhi zyada se zyada devils ka.par abhi jo hamare saamne tha aisa kabhi kisi matibhram maidan me nahi hua tha.

is waqt hamare saamne ek 100 feet se zyada lamba SAANP tha.


jiske fun se laar jaisa kuch nikal kar gir raha tha.jahan jahan wo laar gir raha tha us jagah se dhuaan nikal raha tha.........

WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-

2 pahar aur beet chuke the. pehle pahar me DIGVIJAY ne DHARTIYEM NIRAVDHAYATI mantra ka awahan kiya tha aur dusre pahar me GAGANAM NIRAVDHAYATI ka....DIGVIJAY ko apne andar DHARTI aur AKASH dono ki hi shaktiyon ka abhaas ho raha tha.jab usse laga ki ab wo taiyar hai toh usne apni aankhen khol di....

DIGVIJAY- ab mujhe apni shakti parakhni chahiye.dekhun toh ye dono mantra kitne taakatwar hain......



YUDH VISPRADHA.....DIGVIJAY ke ye bolte hi wahan 10 ranshoor ( warriors ) prakat hue.....hathe kathe 6.5 feet ke ranshoor.sabhi ke ek haath me talwar aur dusre me alag alag hathiyar the.wo sabhi DIGVIJAY ki taraf badhne lage.DIGVIJAY bhi TAIYAR THA.

DIGVIJAY ne apne haath aage kiye.uske haath me ek talwar chamakne lagi.DIGVIJAY ne dharti ka awahan kiya aur kaha PRATIGHAATH.........MITTI ke rang ki roshni nikli aur sabhi WARRIORS pe padi.ek zor ka blast hua aur wo roshni sabhi ke sharir ke aar paar ho gayi.sabhi warriors gir gaye.

DIGVIJAY ki khushi ka thikana nahi tha.par ye khushi zyada der tak nahi tiki kyunki warriors firse khade ho gaye aur is baar unki lambai aur zyada ho gayi.wo sab ek saath milkar DIGVIJAY par aakraman karne lage.DIGVIJAY bhi kam nahi tha.uski talwar akele hi sabhi warriors ke prahar ko rok rahi thi.par DIGVIJAY khud attack nahi kar pa raha tha.

warriors ki speed itni zyada thi ki DIGVIJAY ko waqt hi nahi mil raha tha attack karne ka... achanak warriors ki speed aur badh gayi.ab DIGVIJAY ke liye ye attack rokna mushkil ho gaya tha.achanak ek warrior jiske ek haath me gadaa tha DIGVIJAY ke peeth par laga.DIGVIJAY udte hue door jaa gira.

DIGVIJAY ne jab saamne dekha toh sabhi warriors uski taraf aa rahe the..

DIGVIJAY- saala ye toh rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe hain.aisa hi chalta raha toh ye sab toh meri chatni hi bana denge.kya karun!!!!!!! haan.......DIGVIJAY ne aakash ka awahan kiya aur kaha PRATIGHATH....DIGVIJAY ke haathon se bijli nikli aur sabhi warriors pe padi.bijli sabhike seene ke aar paar ho gayi.sabhi warriors gir gaye.


DIGVIJAY- HAAASHHHH...bach gaya.par ye shanti bas kuch pal ke liye hi thi.sabhi warriors firse khade ho gaye.is baar wo sab aur lambe choude ho gaye the.ab DIGVIJAY ki fati.warrior ne DIGVIJAY par humla karna shuru kar diya tha.is baar wo sab aur tez ho gaye the.DIGVIJAY unke hamle sambhal nahi paa raha tha......

AHHHHHHH.ek warrior ne talwar chalai jo sidhe DIGVIJAY ke daayen kandhen par lagi aur DIGIJAY ki cheekh nikal gayi....par warriors yahin par nahi ruke aur lagatar DIGVIJAY par hamla karte rahe.

kuch hi der me DIGVIJAY ki haalat patli ho gayi.sharir ka aisa koi hissa nahi bacha tha jahan uspe waar nahi hua tha.har jagah se khoon nikal raha tha.DIGVIJAY ko apna anth saamne dikh raha tha.itne me ek warrior ne apni talwar chalai jiska nishana DIGVIJAY ki gardan thi.DIGVIJAY ke paas itni shakti nahi bachi thi ki us waar ko rok paaye.wo chupchaap pada raha.



KADKADKADKADDDDDD......ek zordar aawaz ek saath bijli kadki aur sabhi warriors pe padi.sabhi warriors raakh ban gaye.

ek aur baar bijli kadki aur uske beech se DHANUR nikale aur DIGVIJAY ke saamne khade ho gaye.isse aage DIGVIJAY nahi dekh paaya aur behosh ho gaya.........

WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-





''DHAWALGARH''................. yaad hai ki nahi.........arre apne hero ki mom MINAKSHI jji ka maika..........

subah ke 4 baj rahe hain........
ek aalishan mahal jaise ghar ke ek bedroom me ek ladki soyi hui hai.uske chehre pe ek halki si muskurahat hai jo KAAMDEV tak ka dil chura le....itni khoobsurat ladki jiski taarif ke liye shayad koi shayri,koi kavita ya koi geet hi nahi bani......

par ye muskura kyun rahi hai.chaliye iske sapne ko bhi dekh lete hain.wo ladki ek khoobsurat garden me hai aur bas chali jaa rahi hai.....achanak usse koi peeche se awaaz deta hai.par ye kya wo ladki palat hi nahi paa rahi hai.wo bohot koshish karti hai par palat nahi paati.usse lag raha tha jaise usse koi rok raha hai palatne se.itne me ek awaaz uske kaano me padti hai.


PUTRI, ABHI SAHI SAMAY NAHI AAYA HAI TERA USSE MILNE KA.......

iss awaaz ke saath us ladki ki aankhen khul jaati hai.......wo uth ke baith jaati hai.


us ladki ka naam hai





''AVANTIKA''









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI


AAPKA APNA V.J.............
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Awesome story bhai,
maine abhi 19 updates tak hi padha hai,
aapne shakti prapti ke charano ka varnan bahot hi shandaar tarike se kiya hai,
Vikram apni lagan aur dridh ikshasakti ke bal par har kathinai ko paar karta ja raha hai,
vahi dusri taraf digvijay bhi apni training ko safalta purvak poorn kar raha hai,
ab heroine ka entry bhi ho gaya hai,
uski khoobsurati ka varnan shandaar hai bhai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
 
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