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Fantastic mind-blowing super update
Amazing mind blowing fantastic update bhai maza aa gaya.ab dekhte hai agle update m kya dhamaal hota hai.
Super duper update and this is a best story on xforum now. I am a long silent reader of you but this time you make me to break my silence. Thank you for such a nice story.
Zabardast update
Maza a gya prh kr specially wo atishbazi wala scene prh kr Pranjal ko maza sikha diya good
Nice
Ohh bhai pranjal ke sath kya kar diya padne wala scen Buhut funny tha or last m veer aur arohi ka kiss owsm
Extraordinary update sir g
Bhai isse shandaar update shayad hi koi ho mera to has Baskar pet hi dukhne laga bhi pranjal ki kya bajai veer ne maja aa gaya khud ke plan me khud hi fas gaya
Faadu jakas ek no update bhai
Pranjal ki to lag gayi haha
Nice update bhai
Waiting for next
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Shaandar update bhai. Maza AA gya. Phuuurrrrrr pranjal ki ga....d see awaz ayee. Aur wo bathroom mein alag alag dhun nana Raha that hahaha. Wash bhai waah
Really super duper update
Badhiya band bajayi Pranjal ki Veer ne....
वाव
तो पहली बार ऐसा हुआ प्रंजल मात खाया जो गड्ढा वीर के लिए खोदा था उसमें खुद गिर गया
और यह तो होना ही था
अब आरोही को जीवन में पहला चुंबन प्राप्त हुआ वह वीर से
अब यह कहानी में क्या रंग लाएगा
Shandar update bhai..
Jabrdast update bhava
बहुत ही बेहतरीन और हंसी से परिपूर्ण अपडेट भाई।।।।
मज़ा आ गया लेकिन प्रांजल को और भी सबक मिलना चाहिए था।।।
Bohot hi badiya update bhai jann
Ye pranjal ko bohot hi ghamnd tha sab nikl gaya piche se
Ham to nahi de rahe review itni badi party ho gayi Hume Bulaya nahi ham to nahin bataenge ki update badhiya tha
Mast update bhai
Maza agaya
Aise accident mere sath bhi hon jaayein toh maza aajaye par mera luck itna bhi acha nahi he bara mazedaar update tha bhai
भाई साहब.....
अब तक के सारे अपडेट मे जितना मज़ा आया उससे ज्यादा मज़ा इस वाले अपडेट मे आया प्रांजल के साथ।
वाकई आप का लेखन कमाल का हर अपडेट के अंत मे जो संशय आप छोड़ जाते है वो आप की कहानी का महत्पूर्ण भाग हैं।
आप के लेखन को मेरा दण्डवत प्रणाम
मेरी शुभ कामनाएँ आप के साथ हैं, ऐसे ही हमारा मनोरंजन करते रहिये
आप का एक प्रशंसक
Sahi me yeh bahut pasand ki mega update tha
Awesome updates
awesome and mind blowing update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
aaj to pranjal ka haal dekh kar maja aa gaya,
vahin arohi ne accidentally veer ko lip pe kiss de di,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Mil gaya sabak pranjal ko khud ki jaal me phas gaya.... bhumika ko apni maa k changul se Azad karo veer aur uski achi bonding honi chahiye... amazing one
Shaandaar lajawab mind blowing update Pranjal ke sath achha hua lekin ab aage uska kya action hoga ye dekhne wali baat hogi.
Too good, finally Pranjal ko apni harkato ka fal mil hi gaya. Veer ne dadaji ke birthday par hue apne insult ka badla le hi liya. Ek dum mast update.
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
Superb update
Ye update best tha bhai. Keep going. Bahat din se comment kiya nehi tha but padh raha tha. Time nehi mil raha tha sorry bhai
Very nice update
sach me bhai... Ye prinjal ki sehnaayi wala scene.. Mindblowing tha,
wo kahte hai na ki jaise ko taisa.
Yahann veer saari attention le gya aur waha washroom me peinjal apna gana gungunata rha .
Waise veer ke apne appearance me points add karne se profit bhi bahut huaa hai, tabhi to aarohi madam ne control nhi kar paya aur de dala ek chmmi.....
Ek aur point dekhne ko mila ki yaha veer ke baap ko bhi aaj veer pe proud ho rha tha, shayad future me veer ki family bhi ek ho jaye.
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At last, ye ek awesome mega update tha....
Nice update... Pranjal abb shayed kuch bada sochega.... But is party main kiera ko invite bhi karna tha.... Manorath ne kaha tha... App apne dosto ko bhi invite kar sakte ho!! https://media.tenor.com/images/63dbc4465fe981930bf1367ae472041d/tenor.gif
Amazing .... update brother
Right bro, par agr veer kaera ko bulata to use soniya aur suhana ko bhi bulana padta, aur uske baad veer ki kya halat hoti ye aap achhe se jante hai..
Ek to yaha pahle se hi kavya aur arohi use sandvich ki tarah kiye huye thi
Nice update bhai......
Lovely update
Kya hua System ne task nahi diya take aarohi on a date
Nice update
Super update dear .
Pranjal ka bura time start
Wow bhai bohat hi mazedar update hain. Has has ke maza aa Gaya waqai aapki writing style ki tareef karni padegi aisi awkward situation ko bade madhur ANDAZ me pruuuuuustut Kia hain. Ha ha ha.
Lajawab update bhai
Zabardast update
Superb update bhai
Nice update
Just mind-blowing update bro maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update bro
Superb update bhai
and for completing 1100+pages
Superb update
Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update
Superb update
Super bhai...
Akhir kar pranjal ok uske hi jal main fasa diya
Bhai sirf sex nahi chahta mai bhi
But main heroine ke saath sex ho kahani me s romance ke saath saath ye meri ichchha hai ,isse kahani aur interesting ho jayegi aisa mera manna hai
romance bhi ho aur sex bhi ho ,na ki sirf romance ho aur na hi sirf sex
Bahut he badbudaar update tha uske saath aisa hi hona chahiyetha maja ageya nd arohi ka kya hoga avi dakhte he
Ha ha ha pranjal ne sound toh gajab kari wo bi mic mai ha ha tikh h prankal matlab pichwada pakde bathroom mai he baitha rah gaya hoga ha ha ha so funny
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Jabardasttt Updateee
Pranjal ko achha sabak sikhaya veer nee. Uss harami ke saath toh isse bura hona chahiyee. Aur umeed hai Pranjal ka asli chehra sabke saamne jaldi aayega aur usse uske kiye hue karmo ki saza milegi.
Nice update bohut sunder lajawab update thee Pranjal kutay kaa t6uu isay bhi bura haal huna caheya thaa khar koi baat nahi keep rocking bro cool one
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next
Maza aaya......bahut maza aaya.
Party bhi khatam ho gaya...ab dekhana hai ki veer is property ka kaisa use kata hai....
Kya iske use karne se nidhi ki problem solve kar payaga?
Nice Update
Ese kahte hai jaiseka taisa
Lajawaab update
Keep writing...!
Bahot acche phatake phode
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𝙊𝙧 𝙨𝙖𝙗𝙨𝙚 𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙩 𝙤𝙧 𝙧𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙘 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙟𝙖𝙗 𝙖𝙘𝙘𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙮 𝙝𝙞 𝙎𝙖𝙝𝙞 𝙖𝙖𝙧𝙤𝙝𝙞 𝙫𝙚𝙚𝙧 𝙠𝙚 𝙜𝙖𝙡𝙤 𝙠𝙞 𝙟𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙝 𝙪𝙨𝙠𝙚 𝙝𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙝𝙤 𝙠𝙤 𝙘𝙝𝙪𝙢 𝙗𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙞. 𝙎𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙗𝙤𝙡𝙪 𝙩𝙤 𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙚𝙨𝙩 𝙞𝙨 𝙠𝙖𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙞 𝙈𝙖𝙞 𝙩𝙖𝙗𝙨𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙝𝙤𝙠𝙖𝙧 𝙝𝙖𝙡𝙠𝙖 𝙝𝙖𝙡𝙠𝙖 𝙙𝙞𝙠𝙝𝙣𝙚 𝙡𝙜𝙖 𝙩𝙝𝙖 𝙟𝙖𝙗 𝙫𝙚𝙚𝙧 𝙣𝙚 𝙪𝙨𝙠𝙞 𝘽𝙝𝙖𝙗𝙝𝙞 𝙠𝙤 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙮𝙖 𝙩𝙝𝙖 𝙤𝙧 𝙁𝙞𝙧 𝙪𝙨𝙠𝙚 𝙜𝙝𝙖𝙧 𝙢𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙝𝙣𝙖 𝙨𝙝𝙪𝙧𝙪 𝙠𝙧 𝙙𝙞𝙮𝙖 𝙪𝙨𝙣𝙚 𝙥𝙧 𝙖𝙗 𝙈𝙪𝙟𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙜𝙪𝙩 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙖 𝙧𝙝𝙞 𝙠𝙞 𝙖𝙨𝙡𝙞 𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙚𝙨𝙩 𝙠𝙞 𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙧𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙖𝙧𝙤𝙝𝙞 𝙠𝙞 𝙘𝙝𝙪𝙢𝙢𝙞 𝙨𝙚 𝙝𝙪𝙞 𝙝𝙖𝙞 𝙤𝙧 𝙖𝙗 𝙖𝙜𝙚 𝙟𝙖𝙠𝙖𝙧 𝙅𝙖𝙡𝙙𝙞 𝙤𝙧 𝙗𝙖𝙙𝙝𝙣𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙡𝙞 𝙗𝙝𝙞 𝙝𝙖𝙞. 𝘼𝙗 𝙋𝙚𝙝𝙡𝙚 𝙨𝙖𝙥𝙣𝙤 𝙈𝙖𝙞 𝙚𝙠 𝙙𝙪𝙨𝙧𝙖 𝙠𝙤 𝙙𝙚𝙠𝙝𝙣𝙖 𝙤𝙧 𝙬𝙤 𝙠𝙞𝙨𝙨 𝙨𝙘𝙚𝙣𝙚 𝙜𝙝𝙪𝙢𝙚𝙜𝙖 𝙤𝙧 𝙪𝙨𝙠𝙤 𝙘𝙝𝙪𝙥𝙖𝙣𝙚 𝙠𝙞 𝙠𝙤𝙨𝙝𝙞𝙨𝙝 𝙈𝙖𝙞 𝙙𝙝𝙚𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙙𝙝𝙚𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙤𝙧 𝙠𝙖𝙧𝙞𝙗 𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙟𝙖𝙮𝙚𝙜𝙚
𝙀𝙖𝙜𝙚𝙧𝙡𝙮 𝙬𝙖𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙣𝙚𝙭𝙩 𝙪𝙥𝙙𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙗𝙪𝙙𝙙𝙮
Waah Werewolf bhai kya update diya aapne majha aa gaya. Chahe veer ka aura ho ya pranjal ko sabak sikhana. Bahut badhiya likha he aapne.
With 75 points in appearance. Of course that was expected. Kavya, aarohi look amazed by his charm and looks.
Aarohi aur kavya dono blush kar rahi he veer ko dekh ke. Aaj to chaa gaya apna veer.
Party me jate hi kavya ne jese haq jatane shuru kar diya aur hath thaam liya. Ab ye kavya ke liye normal he given to her character. Par aarohi ese hi esa nahi kar sakti kyuki uska aur veer ka past itna smooth nahi raha jitna kavya aur veer ka tha. Yahi choti choti baate he jo bahut matter karti he. Aarohi jarur sochegi ki agar shuru se veer se close rehti to aaj vo bhi bina kisi hichak ke veer ka that thaam sakti thi ya haq jata sakti.
Ab veer ko sab ladkiya line de rahi he khul ke. Par mushkil he veer ke liye kyuki kavya aur aarohi he sath. Dono hi sab notice kar rahi he aur jese duty pe ho ki veer ke pass kisi ladki ko aane nahi dena he. I wonder what will happen if veer goes to party with kaera and Sonia . Kaera to hath na chhodegi aur na Sonia usko najro se door hone degi. Hope that scene will come .
Veer apne resources ka badhiya use kar raha he. Mr bhargav ke case me dekh liya. Ese hi aage bhi uske contact bante rahenge. Aur swabhav to veer ka achha he hi. Koi chalava nahi he pranjal ki tarah. Wahi pranjal mind games khel raha he jese ye wahi purana veer ho.
Kavya ki friend kritika bhi veer se insta ID le li. Wahi kavya bas yahi soch ke bethi he ki uski dost kyu sharma rahi he itna. Lagta he college me kritika achha sa lecture degi . Ki Kyu wo veer se ID mangi.
Bhabhiya bhi line de rahi he lagta he veer ko kuch se dosti kar leni chahiye kya pata kahi kaam aa jaye. Aur MILF ka apna majha he .
Pranjal ne yaha drink me drug mila ke veer ko embarrass Karna chahta tha par daav padd gaya ulta. Aur uss insaan ko award do jisne mike wahi rakha tha. Sahi hua Vese. Vivek bhi ye dekh ke hass raha he. Brijesh ka kuch samjh nahi aa raha. Yaha wo proud feel kar raha he to achhi baat he. Mujhe lagta he brijesh ka character aage chal ke positive banega. Dekhte he aage.
Aarohi akeli khadi he. Veer aur aarohi Dono ko dukh jarur he dada ji ke liye par pranjal deserve that. Yahi aarohi veer se attract hoke gaal pe kiss dene ja rahi thi ki honth judd gaye. Ab ye pal aage kya kya layega wo aap hi Jane. Achha laga Vese ye .
Vese aksar esi party me hota he ki ek business family dusre family se bond strong karne shadi ka prastaav rakhte he. Taki dono families mil ke aage badh sake. To kya koi esa he jiski najro me veer aa chuka hoga ??
Waiting for next update.
Damakedaar Update Bhai
Time For My Micro Mini Update
Survat Karte Hai Hotel Se, To Dada Ji Veer Ke Liye Hi Sabkuch Plan Kiya Tha Ki Veer Ko Aage Chal Kr Koyi Pareshani Na Ho Aur Uske Bade Logo Se Connection Ban Paye, Vasey Dekha Jaye Char Sabse Aamir Logo Se Uske Connection Pehle Hi Ban Chuke Hai Aur Vo Connection Kafi Strong Hai Kaera Aur Uska Bhai And Sonia Aur Uski Behan.
Veer Ka Sochna Bi Thik Hai Jab Usey Kuch Mila Hi Hai Apne Dada Ji Se To Uska Aache Se Use Karna Chahiye, Pocket Me Padey Rehne Se Paisa Kabi Badta Nahi Usey Invest Karna Padta, Profit Or Lose Ye To Baad Ki Baat Hai.
Veer Apne Dada Ji Ki Permission Ke Elava Kisi Ko Futi Kodi Nahi, Agar Dada Ji Ne Jayedaad Vapis Mang Hi To Vo Mana Bi Nahi Karne Vala, Ab To Dekhna Hai Ki Veer Kese Dada Ji Se Mili Jayedaad To Badata Hai.
Appearance Me Points Add Karne Ka Benefit Dikh Rahe Hai Baki Ladies To Chhodo Kavaya Aur Arohi Bi Veer Se Kuch Hadh Tak Attract Ho Chuki Hai, Ye Attraction Ke Roop Leti Hai Ye Bi Dekhne Me Maza Aye Ga.
Baki Ladies Ke Veer Ki Tarf Dekhne Se Dono Ko Jalan Ho Rahi Hai Kyon Ye Abi Uney Khud Nahi Pata Hoga, Kayi Baar Insaan Ko Khud Nahi Pata Chalta Vo Keya Kar Raha Hai Bs Ye Dono Bi Eysa Hi Kuch Kar Rahi Hai, Varna Unke Bhai Ko Koyi Ladki Pasand Kar To Uney Khush Hona Chahiye Tha Na Ki Unse Jalna Chahiye Tha, Chalo Khushi Na Ho Par Jalan Bi Nahi Honi Chahiye Thi.
Hotel Par Aacha Khasa Paisa Laga Lagta To Usey Inta Shaandar Banayea Hai Par Dekha Jaye To Agar Paise Na Lagaye Hotey To Hotel Ki Itni Reputation Nahi Hoti Aur Badey Badey Log Yaha Ana Pasand Na Karte.
Ragni Ko Chhod Sabi Party Me Majud Thay Jo Ki Aacha Nahi Tha Kyoki Family Ke Ek Member Kam Hone Se Uney Complete Family Nahi Kaha Ja Sakta, Par Ragni Bi Apni Jagha Sahi Hai Uske Husband Ne Uske Sath Eysa Kuch Kiya Hai Ki Vo Us Incident Ko Bhula Nahi Sakti.
Pranjal Apni Mithi Mithi Bato Se Apne Kam Me Laga Huya Tha Par Veer Ne Kuch Hi Palo Me Uske Samne Se Ek Badiya Partner Sabit Hone Vale Sakhas Ko Us Se Chin Liya, Jis Vaja Se Pranjal Ki G Jal Ke Koyela Ho Gayi Hogi.
Pranjal To Uski Insult Karna Chahta Tha Par Veer Ne Apne Dimag Ka Istemal Karte Huye Us Insult Ko Praise Me Badal Diya.
Keya Hi Khubsurti Se Kuch Hi Sabdo Se(Dragon Soar Into Skies, Not Insects) Veer Ne Pranjal Ko Muh Tod Javab Diya Uski To Bolti Hi Band Kardi, Dekha Jaye To Sahi Bi Pari Ki Vaja Se Akash Ek Dragon Ban Chuka Hai Jiske Samne Pranjal Jese Log Kisi Insects Se Kam Nahi.
Pranjal Ne Plan To Bohat Sahi Banayea Tha Par Usey Keya Pata Veer Ke Pass System Hai Vo Itni Asani Ke Uske Plan Me Nahi Fasne Vala.
Fireworks Karva Diye Veer Ne To Keya Hi Face Slap Mili Hai Pranjal Ko Bohat Udta Tha Na Apne Dimag Ki Vaja Se Ab Apni G Ki Vaja Se Toilet Me Ghusa Huya Hai, Itni Muskil Se Jo Apni Reputation Banayi Thi Ab Vo Definitely Kam Ho Gayi Hogi, Keya Keya Socha Hoga Usne Ki Veer Ke Sath Ye Kare Ga Vo Kare Ga Par Ab Apni G Saaf Karne Ne Elava Kuch Nahi Kar Pa Raha.
Veer Kavaya Se Pecha Chuda Terrace Par Poncha Kese, Par Kehte Hai Na Jo Kismat Me Likho Ho Vo Mil Hi Jata Hai Aur Veer Ki Kismat Me Arohi Ki Kiss Thi To Vo Usey Kese Na Milti, Arohi Ka Keya Reaction Hoga Ye Dekhne Vala Scene Hoga.
Jabardast update bhai
very nice bhai
Super update hai Bhai
Saandar
Awesome
Awesome update
superb awsm update.
To gud.
Luvd it.
plzzz do cont asap.
eagerly waiting for some romantic scenes with nidhi and veer plzz cont asap
Awesome update
Mast update bhai
ye mara veer ne nehle pe dehla
भाई, इसे कहते है सेंकई करना। पूरा तावा मे न चड़ाकर धीरे धीरे सेकना। बहुत अच्छा लगा। प्रांजल के साथ ऐसा ही होना चाहिए। धीरे धीरे ऐसा सेंक दीजिये जिसमे वो कुछ काही बोल भी न पाये और न ही झेल पाये। अच्छा ये जो प्रॉपर्टि प्रांजल को दिया गया है उसका उसके हाथ से छिना जरूरी है। पहले तो विवेक उसके साथ था लेकिन अभी तो उसके साथ वो नहीं देगा। सही समय है उसके हाथ से ये भी छिना जाए। आपके सब अनुच्छेद एक से बढ़कर एक। हर तीसरे दिन आपका अगला अनुछेद का इंतजार मे रहते है। मुझे आपके लेखनी के संग आप का दिया हुआ सभी के जवाब पड़ने मे बहुत अच्छा लगता है। आपको बहुत बहुत बधाई इतना सुंदर उपन्यास हमे देने के लिए।
Superb fantastic update waiting for next update
Too good, finally Pranjal ko apni harkato ka fal mil hi gaya. Veer ne dadaji ke birthday par hue apne insult ka badla le hi liya. Ek dum mast update
Awesome
Amazing update Brother ...
Pranjal got his ass ripped...
Waiting for next update ...
Lajawaab update...
Superb update
Lajwab update bhai
Mast swad tha bhai hotho ka bhi aur update ka bhi
Nice mega update bro
Awesome update
Fantastic story,and I am happy update bhi ek regular interval me ate he.Kush story jeise nahi ki to thory popular ho gai ki update dene me mahina laga dete he.Aise story me interest nahi rehta hei.
Awesome as always.
nice1
Superb Update
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
ekdam majedar tha update ..pranjal khudko smart samajh raha tha par veer ne usko usike jaal me fasaya aur sabke saamne sharminda bhi kar diya ..
bechara pranjal gift bhi theek se de nahi paya dadaji ko aur uske baad puri party washroom me hi gujar di ..
aur ek jhatka veer aur arohi ko bhi laga gaal pe kiss karne ki jagah hontho pe kiss ho gaya ..
Bhut zbrdast update ha bro waiting for the next
Jabardast update hain Bhai
बहुत ही ऊंदा लिखाई है । एक उच्चीय स्तर के लेखन से कहानी को शुरू किया गया है। रोमांच को उच्च मकाम तक पहुंचा कर कहानी का आगमन किया है। वीर किरदार का निर्देशन अच्छे से किया है, आगे देखते है क्या होता है।
Superb update
गजब की कहानी लिख रहे हैं आप भाई ! बहुत ही सुन्दर । एक ऐसी कहानी जिसमें अभी तक इन्सेस्ट का सही ढंग से आगमन नहीं हुआ है फिर भी रीडर्स उसे मिस नहीं कर रहे हैं । एक्शन तो कमाल का ही लिखा है आपने ।
खासकर जब वीर और काईरा मिरर हाउस में फंसे थे और स्लोगन के ट्रैंड फाइटरों के साथ वीर का फाइट चल रहा था । उसके बाद जब स्लोगन के खुफिया इलाके में वीर अपनी जीवन और मृत्यु के बीच फंसा हुआ था । बहुत जबरदस्त लिखा था आपने ।
इन्हीं घटनाओं के दौरान हमें यह भी पता चला कि काईरा के डैड कोई सज्जन व्यक्ति नहीं है । जिस शख्स ने उनकी होनहार और वारिस बेटी को बचाया , उसी को मौत के मुंह में जाने का बंदोबस्त कर दिया । मुझे तो डाउट है कि उसकी पत्नी भी कोई स्वाभाविक मौत नहीं मरी होगी । जरूर इस की कारिस्तानी होगी ।
मनोरथ दादा जी ने जिस तरह से अपने जायदाद का बंटवारा किया उससे मुझे निराशा हुई । कुछ दिन पहले तक तो सभी बच्चे उनके लिए एक समान थे । विवेक और भूमिका को इसलिए अपने जायदाद से बेदखल कर दिया कि उन्होंने वीर के नाम का जिक्र नहीं किया । यह तो कोई बात नहीं हुई । उन्हें वीर इतना ही प्यारा था तो इतने दिनों तक उसकी सुध क्यों नहीं ली ? महीनों तक उससे बातें तक नहीं की उन्होंने ।
उनके जायदाद पर सभी बच्चों का बराबर का हक था । यह बात अलग है कि उनमें कौन उस जायदाद का सदुपयोग कर रहा है और कौन दुरूपयोग कर रहा है ।
वैसे पार्टी में प्रांजल को अच्छा सबक सिखाया वीर ने । मस्त कामेडी से भरपूर अपडेट था वह ।
वीर को चाहने वाले की लिस्ट काफी लम्बी चौड़ी हो गई है । काईरा , सोनिया , सुहाना , निधि , श्रेया , रागिनी , सुमन , आभा , सोनाली , काव्या और आरोही.... बहुत सारे नाम है । और मुझे विश्वास है इस लिस्ट में भुमिका का भी नाम जरूर एड हो जायेगा । मैं यह भी समझता हूं कि रीडर्स बड़े बेसब्री से इंतजार कर रहे होंगे कि सुमन और आभा के बाद कौन वो हसीना होगी जो वीर के हरम की शोभा बढ़ायेगी ।
वैसे आरोही और वीर का एक्सिडेंटल चुम्बन काफी मजेदार रहा ।
वीर के पास इतने ज्यादा स्किल आ गए हैं कि कभी कभी हम कन्फ्यूज़ हो जाते हैं । यदि हो सके तो आसान शब्दों में उनका जिक्र जरूर कीजियेगा ।
सभी अपडेट्स वाकई में आउटस्टैंडिंग थे । बहुत बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है आपने ।
ब्रिलिएंट एंड सुपर ।
Waiting........
Achchi hawa nikali Veer n Pranjal ki or sahi jagah se maza aagaya padh
Badhiya shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Kya aaj update ayega
Update ke intejar mein.
Waiting......
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast veer ne apni strategy bnani suru kr di or us hisab se apni shopping bhi suru kr diya ek aisi skill Jiska prayog karne pr duniya ka koi Dr sahi nhi kar sakta hai Vahi veer ne ek intermediate Marcel art ki skill ko purchase kiya hai Jiska prayog hame jald hi dekhne vala hai sath hi ek enemy traker skill bhi purchase kiya hai Jiska ek trailer hme yha dekhne mila kya daraya hai soniya ji ke sath date pr Jane ka mission mila tha pr yha to soniya ji ne khud hi veer ko diner date ko puchh liya
Or kya khubsurat diner date gyi hai madam to khush ho gyi sath me next in future bhi aisa karne ka socha hai vhi veer ne apni dono sevikayo ko ek sath raat me santust kiya...
kon saa hero tera bhai
Superb and mazedaar update Bhai
Next update kab tak ayega ?
Zabardast update bhai
Bhai system arc kab aaega system ke bare me koi zada knowledge hi nhi mili hai ab tak
Next update kb tak aayega bhai
प्रांजल की तो बैंड बज गई l अब आगे...
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Waiting for update
Not bad at all for a boy evicted from his own house....
Wonderful journey till now.
But but but Veer mange more......
Waiting
Waiting for update brother
Awesome last update.
Amazing update..your writing skills are fantastic
Waiting for update...
Bht bhariya aur interesting story chal rahi hai...mjhy personally fantasy stories pasand nhi ... bs hero ko dekha aur larkion ki panty maim tsunami aa gyi ... lkn yh fantasy story bht alag aur bhariya hai aur sub gener ka idea bht hi unique hai ....
Ummid hai aap ki story mai kuch naya ho
Waiting
Behtreen update
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next update
Werewolf bhai kab tak update aayega
Wetting for next update bro
Waiting
Waiting for update
Waiting
Waiting
Shanadar....Jabardast....Zindabaad
Kitne baje update aayega?
Fantastic update
waiting for next update bro
Morning ho gya nhi aaya
Waiting for update bro
Update 71 has been posted.
Behtreen update .Update - 71 ~ Realization!Ab tak...
Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...
Arohi : Aaahhh!
Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.
Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...
'It... It was an accident!'
Ab aage...
Kal ki raat toh kya hi raat thi. Veer na keval kayi saare bade logo se apni pehchaan kar paaya tha balki usne Pranjal ko bhi ek muh tod jawaab diya tha.
Ragini ne toh pehle hi Pranjal ke saare raaz khol diye the Veer ke saamne. Ki kese Pranjal ne Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaaya tha. Aur kese woh uske khilaaf shadyantra rachta tha.
Aise kapti insaan ki kal Veer ne acche se waat lagaayi thi. Poore banquet me fir Pranjal nazar nahi aaya tha. Na jaane kitni derr tak washroom me wo dhun bana raha tha. Wo kehte hai na, jaisi karni, wesi bharni. Pranjal jis galat uddeshya se Veer ka mazaak banaane aaya tha, Veer ne uska hi mazaak bana ke rakh diya tha.
Ghar aake jab Veer ne saari baat Ragini ko bataayi toh Ragini bhi uske sang hassi ke thahaake lagaane lagi.
Veer ab pehle jesa Veer nahi tha. Dada jii ki 40% jaydaat milne ke baad ab uske under itna kuch tha ki wo iss jaydaat se boht kuch kar sakta tha. Karodo ka maalik tha ab woh.
Wo isliye, kyuki jaydaat me keval zameen hi nahi thi. Manorath ke paas jitne bhi makaan, flats, dukaane, transport ke saadhan, athwa jaha jaha Manorath ne invest kiya tha. Unn sab ka hissa hua tha. Aur wo hissa inhe sab me tha.
Veer ke paas iss waqt dherr saari zameen toh thi hi, saath hi saath uske paas 2 flats bhi the ab. 1 dukaan, 2 cars, aur kaafi saara cash bhi uske account me aa chuka tha.
Dukaan toh pehle se hi rent par dali hui thi toh filhaal Veer usse wese hi rehne dene waala tha. Rahi baat cars ki toh wo bhi koi na koi aake ghar par chorr ke jaane waala tha. Uski tension nahi thi.
Aur 2 flats jo the, inke baare me kuch kiya jaa sakta tha. Original plan Veer ka yahi tha ki wo Suman samet dusre flat me shift ho jaaye. Par Ragini bhala aisa kaha hone dene waali thi? Woh toh Veer aur baaki sab ko kahi bhi nahi jaane de sakti thi. Itna lagaav jo ho gaya tha inn sab se usko.
Abhi wo apne room me laita hi hua tha jab achanak hi...
*Ping*
Uska phone baj utha. Koi notification aaya tha.
'Huh?'
Phone check karte hi usne dekha ki Kavya ki college friend Kritika ka message tha insta par. Wahi, jo kal uski Insta ID maang kar le gayi thi.
Chat kholte hi Veer ko message dikhaayi diya.
Kritika : Hello bhaiya!
Toh Veer ne bhi forun type karte hi message bhej diya.
Veer : Hello!
Kritika : Kaise ho aap?
Veer : I'm good! Tum batao!? Need any help?
Kritika : No bhaiya! Mein toh bas aise hi...
Veer : Okay!
Kritika : Wese! Kya aapne padh liya?
Veer : Padh liya? Kya padh liya?
Kritika : Huh? Kal se seniors ke exams hai na!?
Veer : Ehh!?
Message padhte hi, Veer jo shaanti se araam farma raha tha wo ek jhatke me bistar se koodate hue uth ke baith gaya.
'Fuccckkkkkkk! Kal se exam!? Shit! Arohi dii ne toh bataaya tha kaafi din pehle. Mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya.'
Veer : Okay! Kal kis ka paper hai!?
Kritika : Eh!? Bhaiya!? Kya aapko apna time table nahi pata? Kal shayad Maths hai aapka.
'Ohhhh Fuckkkkkk!!!'
[Haha~]
Maths naam sunte hi Veer ke mann me do khayaal aaye. Pehla, ki usne inn beete dino ghanta kuch padha tha. Padha toh dur, woh toh apne college ki shaqal hi bhul gaya tha. Aur dusra...
Nidhi ma'am! Jo maths ki teacher thi. Aur iss saal uski class teacher bhi. Lag gayi waat.
Khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi jese uske mann me.
Veer : Okay thanks! Goodbye!
Aur Veer ne itna type kar ke bhejte hue insta band kar diya.
Apne ghar ke bistar par laiti Kritika ne jese hi ye dekha toh wo hairat me reh gayi. Kuch derr pehle hi wo itna khush thi ki Veer bhaiya ne usse forun hi reply de diya. Aur ab...!? Ye toh khade lund pe laat maarne jesa tha.
Kritika : Wha-!? Veer bhaiyaaaa!? Heinnnnnn!????
Par uska jawaab dekhe bagerr hi, Veer off line ho chuka tha. Usne decide kar liya tha. Ki aaj wo poora time padhega. Yadi uske marks kam aaye, toh Nidhi ma'am pakke se aur naraaz ho jaengi.
Apni book shelf se maths book nikaalte hue wo forun hi prashn lagaane laga. Intelligence uski already 95 par thi toh questions ke hal usse yu chutkiyo me samajh aa rahe the.
Par ye intelligence usse paper me bina padhe acche marks nahi dilwa sakti thi. Kam se kam questions ke way of solving aur formulaes ko toh dekhna hi hoga taaki exam me speed barkaraar rahe aur questions bhi asaani se solve ho jaaye.
Toh bas, Veer kitaab utha ke lag chuka tha padhaayi me.
Thanks to Suman, jo uska room harr rozz saaf karti thi. Uss wajah se uske book shelf me zara bhi dhool nahi thi. Warna uski book me ab tak makdi ke jaale lag jaane the, itne mahino se jo nahi khuli hui thi.
Ragini jo Veer ke room me usse dekhne aayi thi, usse padhta dekh thoda chaunk gayi, fir muskuraayi aur baahar nikal gayi.
Jab wo kuch derr baad lauti toh uske haath me ek doodh ka glaas tha.
Tray lete hue wo Veer ke bagal se baith gayi. Aur usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Wo sach kehte hai ki ek aadmi jab focused hota hai ya kisi kaam me leen hota hai toh uss waqt wo sabse zyada attractive lagta hai. Ragini ko bhi iss samay Veer boht zyaada attractive lag raha tha. Upar se uske 75 appearance ke points.
Ragini (smiles) : Veer! Ye lo! Doodh!
Veer : Hmm? Kya bhabhi!? Baccha thodi hu ab.
Ragini : Toh kya bacche hi bas doodh peete hai!?
Veer : Aur nahi toh kya... Huh????
Veer jo sarr jhukaaye jawaab deta jaa raha tha, achanak se usse jese Ragini ke bol ka matlab samajh aaya. Bacche hi doodh peete hai? Bade bhi toh peete hai. Par bade log wo doodh... Seedha jadd se peete hai. In other words... Ahem!
Ragini bechaari toh aise hi bol dii thi. Par agle hi pal jab Veer ne hairat me usse dekha toh jese usse bhi apni kahi gayi baat ka double meaning samajh me aaya. Aur agle hi pal uske gaal gulaabi ho gaye.
Ragini : M-Mera matlab tha. Tumhaare exams hai na Veer? Toh tum... *blushes* Roz doodh pee ke jaoge.
Veer (blushes) : O-Okay!
Fatafat doodh khatam karne ke baad, Veer ek baar fir lag chuka tha apni padhaayi me jab usse suddenly apne nichle honth par Ragini ka haath mehsoos hua.
'!???'
Uske nichle honth par doodh ki abhi bhi kuch boonde saji hui thi. Toh Ragini apne anguthe se usse saaf kar rahi thi. Aur dono ki hi nazre aapas me jese hi mili...
*Silence*
Maano pal bhar ke liye waqt sa tham gaya.
Veer : Bh-Bhabhi!?
Ragini : ....
Ragini ke haath abhi bhi uske honth par the. Sehla rahe the unhe. Aur na chaahte hue bhi apni Bhabhi ke haatho hi Veer ka hathiyaar tight hone laga tha.
Ragini ne jese hi Veer ke pant ke uthate ubhaar ko notice kiya wo thoda jhep gayi.
"Ahh!" Achanak se wo peeche hati aur tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal bhaag gayi.
'Damn itttt!!!!'
Veer bas khud ko kosta reh gaya. Ye lund bhi saala galat time pe khada hota tha. Ab na jaane Ragini uske baare me kya soch rahi hogi!?
Usse jaan'ne ka ek hi tareeqa tha.
'Pari!!!!'
[Hmm?]
'Bhabhi ki favourability show karo.'
*Ding*
[Ragini's favourability : 78]
'What the!?? Favourability badh gayi!?? How!????'
Abhi bhi aurto ko samajhne me Veer ka ek lamba raasta tha. Aaj ke iss din fir Veer ne aur kuch na kiya. Raat ko bas Suman ki gaand peli aur Aabha ki choot me wo do baar jhara. Kal exam me usse kisi bhi prakaar ka frustration nahi chaahiye tha.
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Next day...
Subah subah hi Ragini Veer ki dress me uski tie sahi karne me lagi hui thi. Aur Veer bas sharmaate hue side muh karke khada hua tha.
'Kya Vivek bhaiya ke saath bhi bhabhi pehle aise hi...!?'
[Of course!]
Aaj Veer ko samajh aa raha tha ki ek pyaar karne waali ka hona kitna accha hota tha jeevan me. Kal na keval Ragini usse doodh dene aayi thi balki aaj uski tie bhi sahi kar rahi thi. Bilkul wese hi jese ek patni pati ki tie adjust karti hai uske duty jaate time. Veer ko ek pati patni waali feeling aa rahi thi. Ek behad hi acchi feeling jisse wo apnaana chaahta tha.
Isme bas yadi kisi cheez ki kami thi toh woh thi...
Ek kiss ki...
Veer ne muskuraate hue unn thoughts ko apne mann se baahar nikaala aur wo mudne ke liye abhi hua hi tha jab...
Ragini ne achanak se uski chin pakdi aur...
*Chu~*
"Huhhhhh!!!!?"
Veer hakka bakka hoke Ragini ko ghur raha tha. Abhi abhi jis kiss ke baare me soch raha tha. Wo kiss usse mil chuki thi. Bhale hi ye kiss gaal par thi par...
Uski apni Bhabhi ne dii thi. Wo bhi sabke saamne.
Dur khadi Suman bhi apni aankho me chamak liye iss drishya ko dekh rahi thi.
Ragini (blushes) : G-Good luck!
Veer (blushes) : Thank... you!!!
Aur Veer waha se fatafat nikal liya. Aaj subah subah hi uske dil ki dhadkan badh chuki thi.
College aate hi usne apni Apache park kii aur chal diya college ke main entrance ki orr.
Kyuki list toh wahi lagi hogi. Kaun kaha baithega ye pata karna zaroori tha.
Apna roll no. dhundne ke baad Veer list me likhe gaye room no. me gaya.
Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par pohuchte hi jese hi usne kaha, "May I come in... Huh!??"
Andar ek jaana maana shaks maujood tha. Koi aur nahi...
Nidhi!!!
Nidhi khud Veer ko stabdh nigaaho se ghur rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye dono ek dusre ko dekhne ke baad jese jamm se gaye.
Nidhi toh aur zyaada shock me thi. Sabse pehla shock toh ye ki... Veer test dene aaya tha. Veer ne uski baat ka maan rakha. Aur dusra shock...
Wo tha uska appearance... Pehle se boht zyaada handsome tha ab woh.
'He... He came!!!!!' Apne mann me sochte hue Nidhi ne haa me gardan hila dii.
Aaj Nidhi ek navy blue colour ki saree me thi.
Aur usme wo itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki chaah kar bhi Veer apni aankhein hata nahi paa raha tha.
Apni seat par aane ke baad baithate hi Veer ne mann ko shaant kiya. Room me do invigilators hote the. Toh uske room me ek Nidhi ma'am thi. Aur dusri Nidhi ma'am ki hi ek junior professor thi jiska naam tha Ayushi. Ye dono hi class ki aaj ki invigilator thi.
*Tringggggg*
Ghanti baji aur paper start hua.
Veer fatafat questions ko solve kar solution likhta jaa raha tha.
Nidhi jo saamne khadi thi wo badi hi bechaini me usse dekh rahi thi.
'Kya isne padhayi kari!? Likh toh raha hai woh... Kahi sab galat salat toh nahi solve kar diya!? Yadi sab galat kar raha hoga toh...!? He will fail... Nahi!!'
Nidhi itna bechain thi ki wo apne mann ki baatein shaant hi na kar paayi. Aur akhir wo apni bechaini ke aage haar gayi.
Wo dheere se Veer ki row ki taraf aage badhi, ye dekhne ki Veer sahi kar bhi raha hai ya nahi?
Wo harr baar aage jaati toh fir peeche se nikalti, aur Veer ki answer sheet par nazar maarte hue solution dekhne ki koshish karti. Par chand second me wo kuch bhi theek se dekh nahi paa rahi thi.
'Oh no....!'
Fir jese uska dimaag chala aur wo answer sheet me sign karne lagi baari baari.
Iske zariye ab wo Veer ki answer sheet dekh sakti thi. Jese hi wo Veer ke paas aayi. Veer ne answer sheet seedhi kar front page khol ke de dii. Taaki Nidhi ko asaani jaaye aur fatafat wo sign kar de.
Par idhar usse kya pata tha ki uski ye harqat Nidhi ke dimaag ko aur bhi thanka degi.
'This... This stupid brat... This idiot... He... Arrghhh!! Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!' wo mann me hi chillaayi. Pehli baar wo itna irritate ho rahi thi Veer ko lekar.
Fir bhi himmat kar Nidhi ne uske saare panne check kiye.
Veer : M-Ma'am!??
Nidhi : Ahem... P-Paper easy hai na?
Veer : Well, easy toh nahi hai. Moderate hai. Na zyaada easy, na zyaada tough.
Nidhi : O-Okay!
Nidhi dekh paa rahi thi ki shuru ke kuch steps toh sahi kiye the Veer ne. Par wo poora nahi check kar paa rahi thi. Kyuki...
"Ye lijiye ma'am!" Veer ke bagal waala jo dusri branch ka tha, usne apni sheet sign karwaane aage kar dii thi.
Aur iss baar Nidhi ne pyaari sii muskaan dete hue uss ladke ki sheet ko sign kiya. Jo shayad muskaan toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi witch ko ek aam insaan ne gaali bak dii ho aur witch bas muskura rahi hai.
'Ek minute ruk jaata toh kya ukhad jaata iss ladke ka? I couldn't even...'
Majbooran Nidhi ko waha se aage badhna pada.
Veer : Uhmm... Ma'am!?
Nidhi : H-Huh!?? K-Kyaa?
Nidhi ne dekha ki Veer apni mutthi kasse uski orr kiya hua tha.
'Huh!?'
Fir jese uski samajh aaya ki Veer kya kehna chaah raha tha. Wo fist bump karna chaah raha tha.
'This... This idiot!!!! Isse... Isse fist bump ki padi hai...!??? Exam time me!?'
Nidhi ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha. Fir bhi, dusro ki nazro se chhupke usne Veer ki fist par apni fist halke se maari...
Aur uske aisa karte hi Veer ne apni mutthi khol dii.
Uske haath me ek candy thi.
Nidhi : ????
Veer (smiles) : For you!!!
*Badump*
Nidhi jo mann hi mann Veer ko kos rahi thi. Ek baar me hi jese uska saara gussa chhumantar ho gaya.
Dil zorr se dhadka. Veer ke chehre ki muskaan dekh wo jese kho gayi usme.
Upar se wo jab se Veer ko daant laga rahi thi mann me par Veer ke ek gesture ne usse shaant kar diya.
Aur agle hi pal, uske gaal surkh laal padne lage.
Bade hi haule se usne Veer ki hatheli se wo chocolate lii aur firse banaavti gussa karte hue mann hi mann Veer ko koste hue aage badh gayi.
'This... Stupid! He's and Idiot! Waqt ki koi parvaah hi nahi hai. Bhari class me... He dared to... Ma'am ko chocolate deni hai. Mujhe chocolate dene se exam me solutions ban jaenge kya!? Haan? Kya soch ke dii usne mujhe ye? Ki ma'am uski fir madad kar dengi exam me? I won't help him. Pata chalne do zara usse bhi. He'll come to know ki bina padhe kuch bhi haasil nahi hota... Idiot!!! Chocolate deni hai...'
Banaavti gussa kar toh rahi thi Nidhi. Par...
Par uska dil andar se boht khush tha. Wo isliye kyuki,
*Ding*
[Nidhi's favourability : 59]
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Samay jab boht hi kam bacha hua tha toh Veer ne raftaar badhaayi. Nidhi waapas se bechain hone lagi thi. Bhale hi ye final nahi the. Par ye koi assignment test bhi nahi tha. Inke marks count hone the. Ek prakaar se ye term 1 the.
*Triiiiingggggggg*
Ghanti baji aur Nidhi aur Ayushi sabhi se unke papers lene lagi.
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne ek nazar uss par daali toh dekha Veer apni battissi dikhaate hue usse hi dekh raha tha.
'Idiot!!!!'
Uska irritation aur badh gaya.
'Yadi Veer ke marks kam aaye... Then... I'll...'
Paper lete hue usne Veer ko dekhte hue bola, "Meet me in my cabin after this."
Aur wo aage badh gayi.
'Huh!? Ab ye ma'am ko kya ho gaya?'
[She will lecture you! Be prepared!]
'Hmm'
Paper ke baad, Veer jab class se baahar nikal raha tha toh uske bag me rakha phone baj utha.
Phone uthaate hi,
"Mein taiyaar hu! Tumhari madad karne ke liye."
Ye awaaz thi Balhaar ki. Aur uska response sunte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan aa chuki thi. Of course! Veer toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Balhaar ghum firke ant me ussi ke paas aaega. Aur wahi hua.
Veer : Hmm! Theek hai! Toh fir lag jao kaam par. Dhyaan rahe! Kisi ko bhi pata na chale. Aur mujhse shaanipanti karne ki zaroorat nahi. Kyuki mujhe forun hi pata lag jaega. Kaam sahi hoga toh tumhaara haath bgi sahi hoga.
Balhaar : M-Mein samajh gaya. Tum uski tension mat lo. Mujhe Slogan ki jo bhi information pata lagegi, mein wo bhej dunga.
Veer : Hmm! Good! Phone tracking ka dhyaan rakhna. Slogan tezz hai. Kahi tumhaare peeche aadmi na laga ke rakha ho.
Balhaar : Nahi nahi! Tension mat lo. Mein phone ka boht dhyaan rakhunga. Aur rahi baat aadmi ki toh... Slogan humse directly baat nahi karta. Wo bas Steve ko kehta hai. Aur Steve hum sabko order deta hai. Aur fir hum apne aadmiyo ko lekar kaam karte hai uske liye.
Veer : Ohhhh! I see! Anyways! Tum jese hi khabar mile mujhe bhej dena.
Balhaar : Th-Theek hai. Wo... Mera haath!?
Veer (smiles) : Kaam hote hi tumhara haath bhi sahi kar dunga. Aur yadi Slogan ko mene hunt kiya... Toh fir uska poora area tumhara. Uski satta tumhari. Par dhyaan rahe... Tum mere andar me hi kaam karoge tab bhi...
Balhaar : Yadi... Yadi tumne jo kaha wo sach hota hai toh... Toh mujhe koi aapatti nahi.
Veer (smiles) : Good then! Khabar ka intezaar rahega mujhe....
*Call ends*
Veer ne call cut kiya aur saamne ki orr chal diya. Jaha Nidhi ma'am ka cabin tha.
***
*Bang*
Nidhi ne apni table par dono haath patakte hue Veer ko dekha.
"Veer kya hai ye sab!? How can you be so carefree? Bhari class me mujhe chocolate de rahe ho? Tum uss waqt mujhse koi hint bhi maang sakte the. I could have told you. Thodi boht hint sabhi teachers de dete hai. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tumne solutions sahi kiye hai ya nahi? Yadi tum fail hue toh kya jawaab dungi mein tumhari Bhabhi ko? Arre mein khud ko kya jawaab dungi? Why don't you listen...!?"
Wo bolti jaa rahi thi lekin...
Lekin Veer sharmaate hue apna chehra side kiye hue tha.
Nidhi : Huh??
Nidhi ne jese hi fir neeche dekha toh uske khud ke gaal gulaabi ho gaye. Table par jhukne se uski saree ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha. Aur uska aadhe se zyaada cleavage uss neele blouse ke baahar nazar aa raha tha.
Chuudiyo ki khan-khan hui toh Veer samajh gaya ki Nidhi ma'am apna palli sahi kar rahi hai. Aur khan-khan ke khatam ho jaane ke baad waapas se Veer ne apna chehra saamne kar liya.
Veer : Mene paper acche se hi diya hai ma'am. Don't worry!
Nidhi kuch na boli wo bas mud ke khadi ho gayi. Shayad apna chehra chhupaana chaah rahi thi. Aur shayad ye bhi kehna chaah rahi thi ki Veer ab yaha se jaa sakta hai. Usse aur koi baat nahi karni.
Par agle hi pal...
"Aaahhhhhh!!!!!" Nidhi poori tarah bhauchakki reh gayi jab Veer ne usse peeche se apne aalingan me le liya. Uske mazboot haath zorr se uske nagn pait par kasse the.
Chatpataate hue usne Veer ki pakad churraane ki koshish kii par uska virodh tab ruk gaya jab Veer ne uske kaan me kehna shuru kiya,
"I know everything. Aap jaan bujh ke mere bagal se aa rahi thi aur jaa rahi thi. Ye dekhne ke liye ki how I was doing. Right? Fir Ayushi ma'am ko aapne rok diya, aur khud hi sign karne lagi. In a hope ki aap mera paper dekh paogi. Ki kahi mein kuch galat toh nahi kar raha, right? Ma'am..."
Nidhi ki saasein tezz chal rahi thi. Veer ki giraft me uska seena tezzi se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur iss baar, Veer ko peeche se Nidhi ka poora cleavage nazar aa raha tha. Par iss baar usne apni nazre nahi hataayi. Ulta apni pakad aur mazboot kar dii.
Veer : Why do you care so much? Tell me!!! Mere liye itni parvaah kyu??? ANSWER ME!!!!
Veer ne uchi awaaz me pucha toh Nidhi hil ke reh gayi. Aur uske mann me jese sannaata sa chha gaya. Sab kuch shunya ho gaya.
Kyu? Veer ki itni parvaah kyu karti hai woh? Haan sahi hi toh pucha Veer ne. Akhir itni parvaah kyu karti hai wo ek student ke liye?
Veer : You know this right? Ki ye bilkul bhi normal nahi hai. Aisa koi teacher nahi karta. Especially a female teacher... Ki kisi male student ki itni parvaah kare. Tell me! Itni care kyu karti ho aap meri? Haan!? Ghar pe rukwaana, college me saath me ek hi gaadi me aana bina apni image ki parvaah kiye, mere harr baar zakhmi hone par mujhse milne aana, kayi baar toh college se hi leave lena, baar baar mujhe padhaayi ko lekar aagah karaana, sukh dukh sabme shaamil hona... Kyuuuuuu??? Answer me!!!!!
Nidhi ka shareer thar-thara ke kaanp raha tha ab.
Veer : You don't wanna answer? Toh mujhe bataane dijiye... Because I know the answer.
*Badump* *Badump*
Harr guzarte pal, Nidhi ka seena aise upar neeche ho raha tha jese maano abhi seene me se uska dil baahar aa jaega. Na jaane Veer ke shabd kya honge? Kya matlab usse uttar pata hi ki kyu wo Veer ki itni parvaah karti hai!? Jab usse khud nahi pata iska jawaab toh bhala Veer ko kese pata hoga?
Veer : It's because... YOU!!!!!! YOU LIKE ME!!!!
*Booooooommmmm*
Aur ye vaakya ek bam ki tarah phata Nidhi ke kaano me.
Veer : And let me tell you one more thing... Wo ye ki... I LIKE YOU AS WELL!!!
Pehle ka shock kam tha kya jo Veer ne apni agli baat rakh usse aur ek bada jhatka de diya.
Veer iss se pehle ki aage kuch keh paata, Nidhi ne usse zorr se dhakka de diya...
"LEAVE ME ALOOONNNNEEE!!!!" Wo chillaayi.
"Ma'am!????"
"I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!! GET OOOUUUTTT!!! GET OOUUUTTT!!!"
Veer bhauchakka sa wahi jamm gaya tha.
'No... no way!!'
Veer toh bas ek test kar raha tha. Wo ye baat jaanta tha ki usse Nidhi ma'am pasand hai. Aur shayad Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti thi. Par Veer sure nahi tha. Isliye, aaj usne apne dil ki baat toh kahi hi, par saath hi...
Usne ye bhi keh diya ki Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti hai. Aur jese hi Nidhi ne usse dhakela, Nidhi ka wo outburst, uska virodh karna, usse bhagaana aur rona...
Veer samajh chuka tha.
Ki wo sahi tha.
'No wayyyyy!!! Iska matlab... Ma'am mujhse!??'
Wo aankhein phaade Nidhi ko ghurta raha.
"I SAID GET OUUUTTTT! RIGHT NOWWWW!!!"
Aur iss baar majbooran usse baahar jaana hi pada.
Nidhi, Veer ke jaane ke turant baad washroom me gayi aur door band kar... Phoot phoot kar rone lagi.
'He's lying!!! Sab jhooth hai. There's nothing between us!!!!! I don't love him... Never!! I don't like him! I don't love him at all! He's lying!!!! Kuch bhi keh raha hai woh... Kabhi nahi ho sakta aisa... I'm already married... There's nothing...!!!!'
Wo khud ko saantvna dene ki koshish karne lagi.
Par, harr baar wo mann hi mann khud se hi haar rahi thi. Kyuki baar baar Veer ke sang guzaare pal uske dimaag me aa rahe the.
'NOOOOOOO!!!! I DON'T LOVE HIM!!!!!!'
Wo fir mann me cheenkhi...
Par koi fayda nahi.
Veer se milna, uske sang rehna, baatein karna, college jaana, shopping karna, uski parvah karna, uske liye kapde lena, dusri ladkiyo ko uske sang dekh dil me peeda hona...
Ye sab jese jese Nidhi ko yaad aata jaa raha tha. Uske aasu aur bhi tezz behte jaa rahe the.
Because she knew...
Veer was right!!!
She loves him!!!!
'Noooooooooo!!!!!!!'
Apne haath ko door par maarte hue wo sarr jhukaaye khadi rahi.
Aasu behte hue zameen par gir rahe the.
Wo ek shadishuda mahila thi. Do baccho ki maa thi. 30 saal ki umr thi uski. Aur Veer maatr 21 ka. 9 saal ka gap. Wo uski teacher thi. Veer bas uska student. Unn dono ke beech aisa kahi se bhi kuch nahi hona chaahiye tha.
Uske bawajood...
It happened!
Chaah ke bhi Nidhi usse apne dimaag se nahi nikaal paati thi. Uska hassta muskuraata chehra harr baar uske dimaag me aa jaata tha.
'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'
Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.
Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,
*Ding*
[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Now the reason kyu night me nahi aaya update. Wo isliye because raat me type karte waqt, my eyes were hurting, so I decided to take my sleep first. And then to post the update in the morning. Bas, yahi reason tha.
Anyways, apna apna kaam karke jaane ka. Aur comments rakhne ka.
Palang Tod update bhaiUpdate - 71 ~ Realization!Ab tak...
Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...
Arohi : Aaahhh!
Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.
Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...
'It... It was an accident!'
Ab aage...
Kal ki raat toh kya hi raat thi. Veer na keval kayi saare bade logo se apni pehchaan kar paaya tha balki usne Pranjal ko bhi ek muh tod jawaab diya tha.
Ragini ne toh pehle hi Pranjal ke saare raaz khol diye the Veer ke saamne. Ki kese Pranjal ne Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaaya tha. Aur kese woh uske khilaaf shadyantra rachta tha.
Aise kapti insaan ki kal Veer ne acche se waat lagaayi thi. Poore banquet me fir Pranjal nazar nahi aaya tha. Na jaane kitni derr tak washroom me wo dhun bana raha tha. Wo kehte hai na, jaisi karni, wesi bharni. Pranjal jis galat uddeshya se Veer ka mazaak banaane aaya tha, Veer ne uska hi mazaak bana ke rakh diya tha.
Ghar aake jab Veer ne saari baat Ragini ko bataayi toh Ragini bhi uske sang hassi ke thahaake lagaane lagi.
Veer ab pehle jesa Veer nahi tha. Dada jii ki 40% jaydaat milne ke baad ab uske under itna kuch tha ki wo iss jaydaat se boht kuch kar sakta tha. Karodo ka maalik tha ab woh.
Wo isliye, kyuki jaydaat me keval zameen hi nahi thi. Manorath ke paas jitne bhi makaan, flats, dukaane, transport ke saadhan, athwa jaha jaha Manorath ne invest kiya tha. Unn sab ka hissa hua tha. Aur wo hissa inhe sab me tha.
Veer ke paas iss waqt dherr saari zameen toh thi hi, saath hi saath uske paas 2 flats bhi the ab. 1 dukaan, 2 cars, aur kaafi saara cash bhi uske account me aa chuka tha.
Dukaan toh pehle se hi rent par dali hui thi toh filhaal Veer usse wese hi rehne dene waala tha. Rahi baat cars ki toh wo bhi koi na koi aake ghar par chorr ke jaane waala tha. Uski tension nahi thi.
Aur 2 flats jo the, inke baare me kuch kiya jaa sakta tha. Original plan Veer ka yahi tha ki wo Suman samet dusre flat me shift ho jaaye. Par Ragini bhala aisa kaha hone dene waali thi? Woh toh Veer aur baaki sab ko kahi bhi nahi jaane de sakti thi. Itna lagaav jo ho gaya tha inn sab se usko.
Abhi wo apne room me laita hi hua tha jab achanak hi...
*Ping*
Uska phone baj utha. Koi notification aaya tha.
'Huh?'
Phone check karte hi usne dekha ki Kavya ki college friend Kritika ka message tha insta par. Wahi, jo kal uski Insta ID maang kar le gayi thi.
Chat kholte hi Veer ko message dikhaayi diya.
Kritika : Hello bhaiya!
Toh Veer ne bhi forun type karte hi message bhej diya.
Veer : Hello!
Kritika : Kaise ho aap?
Veer : I'm good! Tum batao!? Need any help?
Kritika : No bhaiya! Mein toh bas aise hi...
Veer : Okay!
Kritika : Wese! Kya aapne padh liya?
Veer : Padh liya? Kya padh liya?
Kritika : Huh? Kal se seniors ke exams hai na!?
Veer : Ehh!?
Message padhte hi, Veer jo shaanti se araam farma raha tha wo ek jhatke me bistar se koodate hue uth ke baith gaya.
'Fuccckkkkkkk! Kal se exam!? Shit! Arohi dii ne toh bataaya tha kaafi din pehle. Mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya.'
Veer : Okay! Kal kis ka paper hai!?
Kritika : Eh!? Bhaiya!? Kya aapko apna time table nahi pata? Kal shayad Maths hai aapka.
'Ohhhh Fuckkkkkk!!!'
[Haha~]
Maths naam sunte hi Veer ke mann me do khayaal aaye. Pehla, ki usne inn beete dino ghanta kuch padha tha. Padha toh dur, woh toh apne college ki shaqal hi bhul gaya tha. Aur dusra...
Nidhi ma'am! Jo maths ki teacher thi. Aur iss saal uski class teacher bhi. Lag gayi waat.
Khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi jese uske mann me.
Veer : Okay thanks! Goodbye!
Aur Veer ne itna type kar ke bhejte hue insta band kar diya.
Apne ghar ke bistar par laiti Kritika ne jese hi ye dekha toh wo hairat me reh gayi. Kuch derr pehle hi wo itna khush thi ki Veer bhaiya ne usse forun hi reply de diya. Aur ab...!? Ye toh khade lund pe laat maarne jesa tha.
Kritika : Wha-!? Veer bhaiyaaaa!? Heinnnnnn!????
Par uska jawaab dekhe bagerr hi, Veer off line ho chuka tha. Usne decide kar liya tha. Ki aaj wo poora time padhega. Yadi uske marks kam aaye, toh Nidhi ma'am pakke se aur naraaz ho jaengi.
Apni book shelf se maths book nikaalte hue wo forun hi prashn lagaane laga. Intelligence uski already 95 par thi toh questions ke hal usse yu chutkiyo me samajh aa rahe the.
Par ye intelligence usse paper me bina padhe acche marks nahi dilwa sakti thi. Kam se kam questions ke way of solving aur formulaes ko toh dekhna hi hoga taaki exam me speed barkaraar rahe aur questions bhi asaani se solve ho jaaye.
Toh bas, Veer kitaab utha ke lag chuka tha padhaayi me.
Thanks to Suman, jo uska room harr rozz saaf karti thi. Uss wajah se uske book shelf me zara bhi dhool nahi thi. Warna uski book me ab tak makdi ke jaale lag jaane the, itne mahino se jo nahi khuli hui thi.
Ragini jo Veer ke room me usse dekhne aayi thi, usse padhta dekh thoda chaunk gayi, fir muskuraayi aur baahar nikal gayi.
Jab wo kuch derr baad lauti toh uske haath me ek doodh ka glaas tha.
Tray lete hue wo Veer ke bagal se baith gayi. Aur usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Wo sach kehte hai ki ek aadmi jab focused hota hai ya kisi kaam me leen hota hai toh uss waqt wo sabse zyada attractive lagta hai. Ragini ko bhi iss samay Veer boht zyaada attractive lag raha tha. Upar se uske 75 appearance ke points.
Ragini (smiles) : Veer! Ye lo! Doodh!
Veer : Hmm? Kya bhabhi!? Baccha thodi hu ab.
Ragini : Toh kya bacche hi bas doodh peete hai!?
Veer : Aur nahi toh kya... Huh????
Veer jo sarr jhukaaye jawaab deta jaa raha tha, achanak se usse jese Ragini ke bol ka matlab samajh aaya. Bacche hi doodh peete hai? Bade bhi toh peete hai. Par bade log wo doodh... Seedha jadd se peete hai. In other words... Ahem!
Ragini bechaari toh aise hi bol dii thi. Par agle hi pal jab Veer ne hairat me usse dekha toh jese usse bhi apni kahi gayi baat ka double meaning samajh me aaya. Aur agle hi pal uske gaal gulaabi ho gaye.
Ragini : M-Mera matlab tha. Tumhaare exams hai na Veer? Toh tum... *blushes* Roz doodh pee ke jaoge.
Veer (blushes) : O-Okay!
Fatafat doodh khatam karne ke baad, Veer ek baar fir lag chuka tha apni padhaayi me jab usse suddenly apne nichle honth par Ragini ka haath mehsoos hua.
'!???'
Uske nichle honth par doodh ki abhi bhi kuch boonde saji hui thi. Toh Ragini apne anguthe se usse saaf kar rahi thi. Aur dono ki hi nazre aapas me jese hi mili...
*Silence*
Maano pal bhar ke liye waqt sa tham gaya.
Veer : Bh-Bhabhi!?
Ragini : ....
Ragini ke haath abhi bhi uske honth par the. Sehla rahe the unhe. Aur na chaahte hue bhi apni Bhabhi ke haatho hi Veer ka hathiyaar tight hone laga tha.
Ragini ne jese hi Veer ke pant ke uthate ubhaar ko notice kiya wo thoda jhep gayi.
"Ahh!" Achanak se wo peeche hati aur tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal bhaag gayi.
'Damn itttt!!!!'
Veer bas khud ko kosta reh gaya. Ye lund bhi saala galat time pe khada hota tha. Ab na jaane Ragini uske baare me kya soch rahi hogi!?
Usse jaan'ne ka ek hi tareeqa tha.
'Pari!!!!'
[Hmm?]
'Bhabhi ki favourability show karo.'
*Ding*
[Ragini's favourability : 78]
'What the!?? Favourability badh gayi!?? How!????'
Abhi bhi aurto ko samajhne me Veer ka ek lamba raasta tha. Aaj ke iss din fir Veer ne aur kuch na kiya. Raat ko bas Suman ki gaand peli aur Aabha ki choot me wo do baar jhara. Kal exam me usse kisi bhi prakaar ka frustration nahi chaahiye tha.
***
Next day...
Subah subah hi Ragini Veer ki dress me uski tie sahi karne me lagi hui thi. Aur Veer bas sharmaate hue side muh karke khada hua tha.
'Kya Vivek bhaiya ke saath bhi bhabhi pehle aise hi...!?'
[Of course!]
Aaj Veer ko samajh aa raha tha ki ek pyaar karne waali ka hona kitna accha hota tha jeevan me. Kal na keval Ragini usse doodh dene aayi thi balki aaj uski tie bhi sahi kar rahi thi. Bilkul wese hi jese ek patni pati ki tie adjust karti hai uske duty jaate time. Veer ko ek pati patni waali feeling aa rahi thi. Ek behad hi acchi feeling jisse wo apnaana chaahta tha.
Isme bas yadi kisi cheez ki kami thi toh woh thi...
Ek kiss ki...
Veer ne muskuraate hue unn thoughts ko apne mann se baahar nikaala aur wo mudne ke liye abhi hua hi tha jab...
Ragini ne achanak se uski chin pakdi aur...
*Chu~*
"Huhhhhh!!!!?"
Veer hakka bakka hoke Ragini ko ghur raha tha. Abhi abhi jis kiss ke baare me soch raha tha. Wo kiss usse mil chuki thi. Bhale hi ye kiss gaal par thi par...
Uski apni Bhabhi ne dii thi. Wo bhi sabke saamne.
Dur khadi Suman bhi apni aankho me chamak liye iss drishya ko dekh rahi thi.
Ragini (blushes) : G-Good luck!
Veer (blushes) : Thank... you!!!
Aur Veer waha se fatafat nikal liya. Aaj subah subah hi uske dil ki dhadkan badh chuki thi.
College aate hi usne apni Apache park kii aur chal diya college ke main entrance ki orr.
Kyuki list toh wahi lagi hogi. Kaun kaha baithega ye pata karna zaroori tha.
Apna roll no. dhundne ke baad Veer list me likhe gaye room no. me gaya.
Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par pohuchte hi jese hi usne kaha, "May I come in... Huh!??"
Andar ek jaana maana shaks maujood tha. Koi aur nahi...
Nidhi!!!
Nidhi khud Veer ko stabdh nigaaho se ghur rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye dono ek dusre ko dekhne ke baad jese jamm se gaye.
Nidhi toh aur zyaada shock me thi. Sabse pehla shock toh ye ki... Veer test dene aaya tha. Veer ne uski baat ka maan rakha. Aur dusra shock...
Wo tha uska appearance... Pehle se boht zyaada handsome tha ab woh.
'He... He came!!!!!' Apne mann me sochte hue Nidhi ne haa me gardan hila dii.
Aaj Nidhi ek navy blue colour ki saree me thi.
Aur usme wo itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki chaah kar bhi Veer apni aankhein hata nahi paa raha tha.
Apni seat par aane ke baad baithate hi Veer ne mann ko shaant kiya. Room me do invigilators hote the. Toh uske room me ek Nidhi ma'am thi. Aur dusri Nidhi ma'am ki hi ek junior professor thi jiska naam tha Ayushi. Ye dono hi class ki aaj ki invigilator thi.
*Tringggggg*
Ghanti baji aur paper start hua.
Veer fatafat questions ko solve kar solution likhta jaa raha tha.
Nidhi jo saamne khadi thi wo badi hi bechaini me usse dekh rahi thi.
'Kya isne padhayi kari!? Likh toh raha hai woh... Kahi sab galat salat toh nahi solve kar diya!? Yadi sab galat kar raha hoga toh...!? He will fail... Nahi!!'
Nidhi itna bechain thi ki wo apne mann ki baatein shaant hi na kar paayi. Aur akhir wo apni bechaini ke aage haar gayi.
Wo dheere se Veer ki row ki taraf aage badhi, ye dekhne ki Veer sahi kar bhi raha hai ya nahi?
Wo harr baar aage jaati toh fir peeche se nikalti, aur Veer ki answer sheet par nazar maarte hue solution dekhne ki koshish karti. Par chand second me wo kuch bhi theek se dekh nahi paa rahi thi.
'Oh no....!'
Fir jese uska dimaag chala aur wo answer sheet me sign karne lagi baari baari.
Iske zariye ab wo Veer ki answer sheet dekh sakti thi. Jese hi wo Veer ke paas aayi. Veer ne answer sheet seedhi kar front page khol ke de dii. Taaki Nidhi ko asaani jaaye aur fatafat wo sign kar de.
Par idhar usse kya pata tha ki uski ye harqat Nidhi ke dimaag ko aur bhi thanka degi.
'This... This stupid brat... This idiot... He... Arrghhh!! Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!' wo mann me hi chillaayi. Pehli baar wo itna irritate ho rahi thi Veer ko lekar.
Fir bhi himmat kar Nidhi ne uske saare panne check kiye.
Veer : M-Ma'am!??
Nidhi : Ahem... P-Paper easy hai na?
Veer : Well, easy toh nahi hai. Moderate hai. Na zyaada easy, na zyaada tough.
Nidhi : O-Okay!
Nidhi dekh paa rahi thi ki shuru ke kuch steps toh sahi kiye the Veer ne. Par wo poora nahi check kar paa rahi thi. Kyuki...
"Ye lijiye ma'am!" Veer ke bagal waala jo dusri branch ka tha, usne apni sheet sign karwaane aage kar dii thi.
Aur iss baar Nidhi ne pyaari sii muskaan dete hue uss ladke ki sheet ko sign kiya. Jo shayad muskaan toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi witch ko ek aam insaan ne gaali bak dii ho aur witch bas muskura rahi hai.
'Ek minute ruk jaata toh kya ukhad jaata iss ladke ka? I couldn't even...'
Majbooran Nidhi ko waha se aage badhna pada.
Veer : Uhmm... Ma'am!?
Nidhi : H-Huh!?? K-Kyaa?
Nidhi ne dekha ki Veer apni mutthi kasse uski orr kiya hua tha.
'Huh!?'
Fir jese uski samajh aaya ki Veer kya kehna chaah raha tha. Wo fist bump karna chaah raha tha.
'This... This idiot!!!! Isse... Isse fist bump ki padi hai...!??? Exam time me!?'
Nidhi ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha. Fir bhi, dusro ki nazro se chhupke usne Veer ki fist par apni fist halke se maari...
Aur uske aisa karte hi Veer ne apni mutthi khol dii.
Uske haath me ek candy thi.
Nidhi : ????
Veer (smiles) : For you!!!
*Badump*
Nidhi jo mann hi mann Veer ko kos rahi thi. Ek baar me hi jese uska saara gussa chhumantar ho gaya.
Dil zorr se dhadka. Veer ke chehre ki muskaan dekh wo jese kho gayi usme.
Upar se wo jab se Veer ko daant laga rahi thi mann me par Veer ke ek gesture ne usse shaant kar diya.
Aur agle hi pal, uske gaal surkh laal padne lage.
Bade hi haule se usne Veer ki hatheli se wo chocolate lii aur firse banaavti gussa karte hue mann hi mann Veer ko koste hue aage badh gayi.
'This... Stupid! He's and Idiot! Waqt ki koi parvaah hi nahi hai. Bhari class me... He dared to... Ma'am ko chocolate deni hai. Mujhe chocolate dene se exam me solutions ban jaenge kya!? Haan? Kya soch ke dii usne mujhe ye? Ki ma'am uski fir madad kar dengi exam me? I won't help him. Pata chalne do zara usse bhi. He'll come to know ki bina padhe kuch bhi haasil nahi hota... Idiot!!! Chocolate deni hai...'
Banaavti gussa kar toh rahi thi Nidhi. Par...
Par uska dil andar se boht khush tha. Wo isliye kyuki,
*Ding*
[Nidhi's favourability : 59]
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Samay jab boht hi kam bacha hua tha toh Veer ne raftaar badhaayi. Nidhi waapas se bechain hone lagi thi. Bhale hi ye final nahi the. Par ye koi assignment test bhi nahi tha. Inke marks count hone the. Ek prakaar se ye term 1 the.
*Triiiiingggggggg*
Ghanti baji aur Nidhi aur Ayushi sabhi se unke papers lene lagi.
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne ek nazar uss par daali toh dekha Veer apni battissi dikhaate hue usse hi dekh raha tha.
'Idiot!!!!'
Uska irritation aur badh gaya.
'Yadi Veer ke marks kam aaye... Then... I'll...'
Paper lete hue usne Veer ko dekhte hue bola, "Meet me in my cabin after this."
Aur wo aage badh gayi.
'Huh!? Ab ye ma'am ko kya ho gaya?'
[She will lecture you! Be prepared!]
'Hmm'
Paper ke baad, Veer jab class se baahar nikal raha tha toh uske bag me rakha phone baj utha.
Phone uthaate hi,
"Mein taiyaar hu! Tumhari madad karne ke liye."
Ye awaaz thi Balhaar ki. Aur uska response sunte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan aa chuki thi. Of course! Veer toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Balhaar ghum firke ant me ussi ke paas aaega. Aur wahi hua.
Veer : Hmm! Theek hai! Toh fir lag jao kaam par. Dhyaan rahe! Kisi ko bhi pata na chale. Aur mujhse shaanipanti karne ki zaroorat nahi. Kyuki mujhe forun hi pata lag jaega. Kaam sahi hoga toh tumhaara haath bgi sahi hoga.
Balhaar : M-Mein samajh gaya. Tum uski tension mat lo. Mujhe Slogan ki jo bhi information pata lagegi, mein wo bhej dunga.
Veer : Hmm! Good! Phone tracking ka dhyaan rakhna. Slogan tezz hai. Kahi tumhaare peeche aadmi na laga ke rakha ho.
Balhaar : Nahi nahi! Tension mat lo. Mein phone ka boht dhyaan rakhunga. Aur rahi baat aadmi ki toh... Slogan humse directly baat nahi karta. Wo bas Steve ko kehta hai. Aur Steve hum sabko order deta hai. Aur fir hum apne aadmiyo ko lekar kaam karte hai uske liye.
Veer : Ohhhh! I see! Anyways! Tum jese hi khabar mile mujhe bhej dena.
Balhaar : Th-Theek hai. Wo... Mera haath!?
Veer (smiles) : Kaam hote hi tumhara haath bhi sahi kar dunga. Aur yadi Slogan ko mene hunt kiya... Toh fir uska poora area tumhara. Uski satta tumhari. Par dhyaan rahe... Tum mere andar me hi kaam karoge tab bhi...
Balhaar : Yadi... Yadi tumne jo kaha wo sach hota hai toh... Toh mujhe koi aapatti nahi.
Veer (smiles) : Good then! Khabar ka intezaar rahega mujhe....
*Call ends*
Veer ne call cut kiya aur saamne ki orr chal diya. Jaha Nidhi ma'am ka cabin tha.
***
*Bang*
Nidhi ne apni table par dono haath patakte hue Veer ko dekha.
"Veer kya hai ye sab!? How can you be so carefree? Bhari class me mujhe chocolate de rahe ho? Tum uss waqt mujhse koi hint bhi maang sakte the. I could have told you. Thodi boht hint sabhi teachers de dete hai. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tumne solutions sahi kiye hai ya nahi? Yadi tum fail hue toh kya jawaab dungi mein tumhari Bhabhi ko? Arre mein khud ko kya jawaab dungi? Why don't you listen...!?"
Wo bolti jaa rahi thi lekin...
Lekin Veer sharmaate hue apna chehra side kiye hue tha.
Nidhi : Huh??
Nidhi ne jese hi fir neeche dekha toh uske khud ke gaal gulaabi ho gaye. Table par jhukne se uski saree ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha. Aur uska aadhe se zyaada cleavage uss neele blouse ke baahar nazar aa raha tha.
Chuudiyo ki khan-khan hui toh Veer samajh gaya ki Nidhi ma'am apna palli sahi kar rahi hai. Aur khan-khan ke khatam ho jaane ke baad waapas se Veer ne apna chehra saamne kar liya.
Veer : Mene paper acche se hi diya hai ma'am. Don't worry!
Nidhi kuch na boli wo bas mud ke khadi ho gayi. Shayad apna chehra chhupaana chaah rahi thi. Aur shayad ye bhi kehna chaah rahi thi ki Veer ab yaha se jaa sakta hai. Usse aur koi baat nahi karni.
Par agle hi pal...
"Aaahhhhhh!!!!!" Nidhi poori tarah bhauchakki reh gayi jab Veer ne usse peeche se apne aalingan me le liya. Uske mazboot haath zorr se uske nagn pait par kasse the.
Chatpataate hue usne Veer ki pakad churraane ki koshish kii par uska virodh tab ruk gaya jab Veer ne uske kaan me kehna shuru kiya,
"I know everything. Aap jaan bujh ke mere bagal se aa rahi thi aur jaa rahi thi. Ye dekhne ke liye ki how I was doing. Right? Fir Ayushi ma'am ko aapne rok diya, aur khud hi sign karne lagi. In a hope ki aap mera paper dekh paogi. Ki kahi mein kuch galat toh nahi kar raha, right? Ma'am..."
Nidhi ki saasein tezz chal rahi thi. Veer ki giraft me uska seena tezzi se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur iss baar, Veer ko peeche se Nidhi ka poora cleavage nazar aa raha tha. Par iss baar usne apni nazre nahi hataayi. Ulta apni pakad aur mazboot kar dii.
Veer : Why do you care so much? Tell me!!! Mere liye itni parvaah kyu??? ANSWER ME!!!!
Veer ne uchi awaaz me pucha toh Nidhi hil ke reh gayi. Aur uske mann me jese sannaata sa chha gaya. Sab kuch shunya ho gaya.
Kyu? Veer ki itni parvaah kyu karti hai woh? Haan sahi hi toh pucha Veer ne. Akhir itni parvaah kyu karti hai wo ek student ke liye?
Veer : You know this right? Ki ye bilkul bhi normal nahi hai. Aisa koi teacher nahi karta. Especially a female teacher... Ki kisi male student ki itni parvaah kare. Tell me! Itni care kyu karti ho aap meri? Haan!? Ghar pe rukwaana, college me saath me ek hi gaadi me aana bina apni image ki parvaah kiye, mere harr baar zakhmi hone par mujhse milne aana, kayi baar toh college se hi leave lena, baar baar mujhe padhaayi ko lekar aagah karaana, sukh dukh sabme shaamil hona... Kyuuuuuu??? Answer me!!!!!
Nidhi ka shareer thar-thara ke kaanp raha tha ab.
Veer : You don't wanna answer? Toh mujhe bataane dijiye... Because I know the answer.
*Badump* *Badump*
Harr guzarte pal, Nidhi ka seena aise upar neeche ho raha tha jese maano abhi seene me se uska dil baahar aa jaega. Na jaane Veer ke shabd kya honge? Kya matlab usse uttar pata hi ki kyu wo Veer ki itni parvaah karti hai!? Jab usse khud nahi pata iska jawaab toh bhala Veer ko kese pata hoga?
Veer : It's because... YOU!!!!!! YOU LIKE ME!!!!
*Booooooommmmm*
Aur ye vaakya ek bam ki tarah phata Nidhi ke kaano me.
Veer : And let me tell you one more thing... Wo ye ki... I LIKE YOU AS WELL!!!
Pehle ka shock kam tha kya jo Veer ne apni agli baat rakh usse aur ek bada jhatka de diya.
Veer iss se pehle ki aage kuch keh paata, Nidhi ne usse zorr se dhakka de diya...
"LEAVE ME ALOOONNNNEEE!!!!" Wo chillaayi.
"Ma'am!????"
"I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!! GET OOOUUUTTT!!! GET OOUUUTTT!!!"
Veer bhauchakka sa wahi jamm gaya tha.
'No... no way!!'
Veer toh bas ek test kar raha tha. Wo ye baat jaanta tha ki usse Nidhi ma'am pasand hai. Aur shayad Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti thi. Par Veer sure nahi tha. Isliye, aaj usne apne dil ki baat toh kahi hi, par saath hi...
Usne ye bhi keh diya ki Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti hai. Aur jese hi Nidhi ne usse dhakela, Nidhi ka wo outburst, uska virodh karna, usse bhagaana aur rona...
Veer samajh chuka tha.
Ki wo sahi tha.
'No wayyyyy!!! Iska matlab... Ma'am mujhse!??'
Wo aankhein phaade Nidhi ko ghurta raha.
"I SAID GET OUUUTTTT! RIGHT NOWWWW!!!"
Aur iss baar majbooran usse baahar jaana hi pada.
Nidhi, Veer ke jaane ke turant baad washroom me gayi aur door band kar... Phoot phoot kar rone lagi.
'He's lying!!! Sab jhooth hai. There's nothing between us!!!!! I don't love him... Never!! I don't like him! I don't love him at all! He's lying!!!! Kuch bhi keh raha hai woh... Kabhi nahi ho sakta aisa... I'm already married... There's nothing...!!!!'
Wo khud ko saantvna dene ki koshish karne lagi.
Par, harr baar wo mann hi mann khud se hi haar rahi thi. Kyuki baar baar Veer ke sang guzaare pal uske dimaag me aa rahe the.
'NOOOOOOO!!!! I DON'T LOVE HIM!!!!!!'
Wo fir mann me cheenkhi...
Par koi fayda nahi.
Veer se milna, uske sang rehna, baatein karna, college jaana, shopping karna, uski parvah karna, uske liye kapde lena, dusri ladkiyo ko uske sang dekh dil me peeda hona...
Ye sab jese jese Nidhi ko yaad aata jaa raha tha. Uske aasu aur bhi tezz behte jaa rahe the.
Because she knew...
Veer was right!!!
She loves him!!!!
'Noooooooooo!!!!!!!'
Apne haath ko door par maarte hue wo sarr jhukaaye khadi rahi.
Aasu behte hue zameen par gir rahe the.
Wo ek shadishuda mahila thi. Do baccho ki maa thi. 30 saal ki umr thi uski. Aur Veer maatr 21 ka. 9 saal ka gap. Wo uski teacher thi. Veer bas uska student. Unn dono ke beech aisa kahi se bhi kuch nahi hona chaahiye tha.
Uske bawajood...
It happened!
Chaah ke bhi Nidhi usse apne dimaag se nahi nikaal paati thi. Uska hassta muskuraata chehra harr baar uske dimaag me aa jaata tha.
'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'
Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.
Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,
*Ding*
[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Now the reason kyu night me nahi aaya update. Wo isliye because raat me type karte waqt, my eyes were hurting, so I decided to take my sleep first. And then to post the update in the morning. Bas, yahi reason tha.
Anyways, apna apna kaam karke jaane ka. Aur comments rakhne ka.