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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update 72-73...
Finally, The most anticipated one - Divorce has taken place! Aakhirkaar,Ragini ne wo faisla le hi liya jo uski aage ki zindagi ka faisla karne waala hai... Achha laga dekh kar ke at last Ragini ne khud ke liye, khud ke bhavishya ke liye ek mazboot kadam uthaya aur Vivek se alag ho gayi... Shayad ye abhi zaroori bhi tha kyonki jo ilzaam Vivek ke dwara uspar lagaye jaa rahe the, uske Veer ko apne ghar mein rakhne par, uske baad Divorce hi ek maatra upaya tha... Saath hi ye dekh kar bhi khushi huyi ke Ragini ke parents ne uske is faisle mein use support kiya,same goes for Veer too...
Of course, ab Vivek ka agla kadam kya hoga ye dekhna bahut rochak rehne waala hai because use Pranjal ki taraf se bhi dhokha mil chuka hai means Vivek ab Pranjal ke saath to nahi hoga & after what Ragini did to make him jealous at the cafe, Pranjal ke khilaaf wo Veer ke saath bhi nahi hone waala... It seems like Vivek will plan something, something big this time, as after what Pranjal did... Vivek kaafi zyada careful rahega aur nischit hi Veer aur Pranjal dono ke hi khilaaf kuchh na kuchh plan karega!
Idhar Update - 72 nearly 50% Ragini ke pov se chala... Jaisa ki mujhe umeed thi hi ke Divorce ke baad specially Ragini par focused ek do updates zaroor aayenge, aur waisa hi hua... Kaafi baareeki se Ragini ke thoughts ko darshaya gaya... Kaafi saare sacrifices kiye the usne, Vivek ke liye, apne pyaar ke liye but jab Aatish ke hideout par wo ghatna huyi uske baad uska dil tootna pakka tha aur wahi hua bhi... But us period mein Veer ka use yun support karna, most importantly uske saath uske ghar par rehna, as he said She fell for Veer and ab lagta hai ke jald hi Veer ke saamne bhi wo apne mann ki baat rakh degi... It would be interesting to see how he'll react on realising what Ragini feels about him!
Alpha Trait function, kaafi pehle ye activate ho chuka hai Veer ke bheetar par Ragini ke saath is poore scene mein Veer halka sa reserved ya kahun ke sharmata sa dikha joki hona bhi tha... Afterall, he would've never thought that one day Ragini would behave like a girlfriend with him... To aise mein uska ispar yahi reaction hona tha but jald hi he'll start getting more free with Ragini...
Idhar Balhaar bhi Veer ke kahe mutaabik apna kaam kar hi raha hai par saath hi Slogan ko uspar shakh bhi ho gaya hai... Abhi ki situation mein Slogan, Steve ke alawa kisi par bharosa nahi karne waala hai... Ab Balhaar par nazar rakhne waala hai Steve, dekhte hain ke Veer ka plan kaamyab hota hai ya fir Slogan, Balhaar ki sachayi pata laga lega...
Update - 73 showed up with the fact that - Once A Chutiya is always a Chutiya! Amit aur uska Baap kaafi waqt se Suman aur Aabha ko khoj rahe the aur aakhirkar unki buri kismat ke chalte dono ko Suman - Aabha mil hi gayi par jaisa ke in chutiyon ke saath hona chahiye, Veer ko bhi inki location mil gayi...
Suman ki favourability has crossed 100, 126 to be precise! Iska exact matlab aur effect to Pari Madam hi batayengi shayad agle update mein but jab Pari activate huyi thi Veer ke andar... If I remember correctly, she said that favourability of 100 means ke saamne waala aapse dil - o - jaan se pyaar karta hai and can do anything for you! I'm wondering what 126 means...Meanwhile waiting for double century
... Ye bhi confirm hai ke Aabha ki favourability bhi increase huyi hogi,I think it should be around 70-75 at least... Btw. Dono baap - bete ki zaroor -50 ya -60 hogi, turu luvv of different dimension 
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So, ye bhi pata chala ke Veer Suman ko training kyon dilwa raha tha Ragini se... Is update ke baad, I also realised ke jaise Suman ne Vivek aur uske Maa - Baap ko handle kiya tha that was seriously something else... Ab dekhna hai ke inka Mahila Mandal ka ye plan aage kaise execute hota hai aur is Mahila Mandal ka long term mein kya effect hoga Veer par...
Idhar, I think jab Sonali ko pata chalega is ghatna ka, waise shayad use naa bhi batayen ye log... But agar pata chalta hai to definitely uski favourability bhi rise karegi! Next Update mein I think Aarohi ke darshan bhi honge, how she's doing after that ‘Accidental' kiss!
Kaafi saari cheezein filhaal parallel mein chal rahi hain, aur jald hi unmein se kuchh khatam hone waali hain... Slogan's Arc is ending soon, I think, sirf ek hi face-off hona chahiye Veer aur Slogan ka ab mere khayal se and as Balhaar said he's planning a full fledged attack, par sawaal hai ke uska nishana Kaera hogi, ya Veer, ya fir ek saath dono hi! Secondly, Pranjal bhi ab kuchh serious planning karega, because uski satya mein ghanghor beizzati huyi hai party mein! So Veer may have to deal with Vivek (If he plans something too) & Pranjal at the same time...
Ragini ka aage kya step hoga, kya wo Veer se seedhe hi apne dil ki baat keh degi ya aise hi Veer ko kuchh waqt tease karti rahegi... Nidhi ki problem ka hal soch liya hai Veer ne par ab jo kuchh in dono ke beech hua hai, kya uske baad Nidhi Veer ki help legi? Wahin I'm a bit surprised ke abhi tak Nidhi ke Pati ne kuchh kyon nahi kiya? I mean Veer ne theek thaak sutayi ki thi uski aur jitna bada kameena wo tha ya kahun ke hai... Us hisaab se ab tak zaroor kuchh kaand wo kar hi deta! I think aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke kuchh usne kiya ho but Nidhi ne Veer ko naa bataya ho...
Outstanding Stuff Werewolf bro! Ragini ke pov se chala scene sachmuch bahut badhiya tareeke se likha tha aapne... Female perspective se likhna (as a male) of course ek tough kaam hota hai, because portraying what she's feeling in the best way, can't be an easy thing to do! So congratulations to you for presenting that scene with perfection... Secondly, taking all the things in a parallel way, Balhaar, Slogan, Pranjal, Vivek, Ragini, Suman & Family... Pichhle do updates mein kaafi badhiya tareeke se sabhi scenes ko cover kiya gaya hai and that's worth praising without a doubt!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next Update...
Finally, The most anticipated one - Divorce has taken place! Aakhirkaar,Ragini ne wo faisla le hi liya jo uski aage ki zindagi ka faisla karne waala hai... Achha laga dekh kar ke at last Ragini ne khud ke liye, khud ke bhavishya ke liye ek mazboot kadam uthaya aur Vivek se alag ho gayi... Shayad ye abhi zaroori bhi tha kyonki jo ilzaam Vivek ke dwara uspar lagaye jaa rahe the, uske Veer ko apne ghar mein rakhne par, uske baad Divorce hi ek maatra upaya tha... Saath hi ye dekh kar bhi khushi huyi ke Ragini ke parents ne uske is faisle mein use support kiya,same goes for Veer too...
Of course, ab Vivek ka agla kadam kya hoga ye dekhna bahut rochak rehne waala hai because use Pranjal ki taraf se bhi dhokha mil chuka hai means Vivek ab Pranjal ke saath to nahi hoga & after what Ragini did to make him jealous at the cafe, Pranjal ke khilaaf wo Veer ke saath bhi nahi hone waala... It seems like Vivek will plan something, something big this time, as after what Pranjal did... Vivek kaafi zyada careful rahega aur nischit hi Veer aur Pranjal dono ke hi khilaaf kuchh na kuchh plan karega!
Idhar Update - 72 nearly 50% Ragini ke pov se chala... Jaisa ki mujhe umeed thi hi ke Divorce ke baad specially Ragini par focused ek do updates zaroor aayenge, aur waisa hi hua... Kaafi baareeki se Ragini ke thoughts ko darshaya gaya... Kaafi saare sacrifices kiye the usne, Vivek ke liye, apne pyaar ke liye but jab Aatish ke hideout par wo ghatna huyi uske baad uska dil tootna pakka tha aur wahi hua bhi... But us period mein Veer ka use yun support karna, most importantly uske saath uske ghar par rehna, as he said She fell for Veer and ab lagta hai ke jald hi Veer ke saamne bhi wo apne mann ki baat rakh degi... It would be interesting to see how he'll react on realising what Ragini feels about him!
Alpha Trait function, kaafi pehle ye activate ho chuka hai Veer ke bheetar par Ragini ke saath is poore scene mein Veer halka sa reserved ya kahun ke sharmata sa dikha joki hona bhi tha... Afterall, he would've never thought that one day Ragini would behave like a girlfriend with him... To aise mein uska ispar yahi reaction hona tha but jald hi he'll start getting more free with Ragini...
Idhar Balhaar bhi Veer ke kahe mutaabik apna kaam kar hi raha hai par saath hi Slogan ko uspar shakh bhi ho gaya hai... Abhi ki situation mein Slogan, Steve ke alawa kisi par bharosa nahi karne waala hai... Ab Balhaar par nazar rakhne waala hai Steve, dekhte hain ke Veer ka plan kaamyab hota hai ya fir Slogan, Balhaar ki sachayi pata laga lega...
Update - 73 showed up with the fact that - Once A Chutiya is always a Chutiya! Amit aur uska Baap kaafi waqt se Suman aur Aabha ko khoj rahe the aur aakhirkar unki buri kismat ke chalte dono ko Suman - Aabha mil hi gayi par jaisa ke in chutiyon ke saath hona chahiye, Veer ko bhi inki location mil gayi...
Suman ki favourability has crossed 100, 126 to be precise! Iska exact matlab aur effect to Pari Madam hi batayengi shayad agle update mein but jab Pari activate huyi thi Veer ke andar... If I remember correctly, she said that favourability of 100 means ke saamne waala aapse dil - o - jaan se pyaar karta hai and can do anything for you! I'm wondering what 126 means...Meanwhile waiting for double century
... Ye bhi confirm hai ke Aabha ki favourability bhi increase huyi hogi,I think it should be around 70-75 at least... Btw. Dono baap - bete ki zaroor -50 ya -60 hogi, turu luvv of different dimension ...So, ye bhi pata chala ke Veer Suman ko training kyon dilwa raha tha Ragini se... Is update ke baad, I also realised ke jaise Suman ne Vivek aur uske Maa - Baap ko handle kiya tha that was seriously something else... Ab dekhna hai ke inka Mahila Mandal ka ye plan aage kaise execute hota hai aur is Mahila Mandal ka long term mein kya effect hoga Veer par...
Idhar, I think jab Sonali ko pata chalega is ghatna ka, waise shayad use naa bhi batayen ye log... But agar pata chalta hai to definitely uski favourability bhi rise karegi! Next Update mein I think Aarohi ke darshan bhi honge, how she's doing after that ‘Accidental' kiss!
Kaafi saari cheezein filhaal parallel mein chal rahi hain, aur jald hi unmein se kuchh khatam hone waali hain... Slogan's Arc is ending soon, I think, sirf ek hi face-off hona chahiye Veer aur Slogan ka ab mere khayal se and as Balhaar said he's planning a full fledged attack, par sawaal hai ke uska nishana Kaera hogi, ya Veer, ya fir ek saath dono hi! Secondly, Pranjal bhi ab kuchh serious planning karega, because uski satya mein ghanghor beizzati huyi hai party mein! So Veer may have to deal with Vivek (If he plans something too) & Pranjal at the same time...
Ragini ka aage kya step hoga, kya wo Veer se seedhe hi apne dil ki baat keh degi ya aise hi Veer ko kuchh waqt tease karti rahegi... Nidhi ki problem ka hal soch liya hai Veer ne par ab jo kuchh in dono ke beech hua hai, kya uske baad Nidhi Veer ki help legi? Wahin I'm a bit surprised ke abhi tak Nidhi ke Pati ne kuchh kyon nahi kiya? I mean Veer ne theek thaak sutayi ki thi uski aur jitna bada kameena wo tha ya kahun ke hai... Us hisaab se ab tak zaroor kuchh kaand wo kar hi deta! I think aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke kuchh usne kiya ho but Nidhi ne Veer ko naa bataya ho...
Outstanding Stuff Werewolf bro! Ragini ke pov se chala scene sachmuch bahut badhiya tareeke se likha tha aapne... Female perspective se likhna (as a male) of course ek tough kaam hota hai, because portraying what she's feeling in the best way, can't be an easy thing to do! So congratulations to you for presenting that scene with perfection... Secondly, taking all the things in a parallel way, Balhaar, Slogan, Pranjal, Vivek, Ragini, Suman & Family... Pichhle do updates mein kaafi badhiya tareeke se sabhi scenes ko cover kiya gaya hai and that's worth praising without a doubt!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next Update...
Veer ki status kafi high ho gaya hai to ab story ko next level par pe Jana chahiye.. story ko smoothly sage bash na chahiye.. Kamal ki story hai or usmai concept bhi thoda alag hai baki story se toh hum readers ko thoda lalach hona lagmi hai na...
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Update - 72 ~ Divorce!Ab tak...
'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'
Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.
Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,
*Ding*
[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]
Ab aage...
Kal Nidhi ma'am se mulaqaat ke baad, Veer ke liye kuch bhi faldaayak nahi tha. Na keval Veer Nidhi ma'am ke sang apna rishta sudhaarne me nakaam tha. Balki, Nidhi ma'am ki favourability uske prati aur bhi gir chuki thi. 58 se seedha 40 par aa chuki thi favourability. Wo aur udaas thi uss se.
Nidhi ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Veer se ab zyaada matlab nahi rakhegi, na hi zyaada milegi aur na hi zyaada baat karegi. Ek professional rishta hi bana ke rakhegi wo khud ke aur uske beech.
Veer jaanta tha sab kuch. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi ma'am ke mann me uske liye kuch toh hai. Par wo unn feelings ko accept nahi karna chaahti. Wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki ab Nidhi ma'am uss se dur bhaagengi. Uss se kam baat karengi. Ye bahaana dengi ki wo ek student teacher hai aur unhe itna friendly nahi hona chahiye. Usne toh pehle hi aane waale incidents ke baare me imagine kar liya tha.
Par ye sab jaante hue bhi Veer abhi pissed tha.
Wo pissed tha isliye kyuki Nidhi apne emotions ko accept nahi kar rahi thi. Ek taraf Kaera thi jo apne emotions ko feel karne ke liye athak prayaas kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Nidhi thi jiske paas emotions hote hue bhi, wo unhe dhaak kar apni feelings ko chhupa rahi thi. Aur yahi baat Veer ko disappoint kar rahi thi.
Still, wo shaant tha. He was calm. Thanks to his 95 intelligence. Usne saari baatein parakh lii thi. Aur unhe kese deal karna tha ye bhi soch liya tha. Nidhi ma'am bhale hi uss se dur bhaage. Veer ne decide kar liya tha ki ek din wo unhe unke emotions ke aage harwa ke rahega. Aur wo din dur nahi jis din Nidhi khud aake uss se apne dil ki baat kahegi.
Par filhaal, uska attention iss waqt kahi aur zaroori tha. Naha dhone ke baad wo apne room se nikla aur main hall me aaya jaha Suman, Ragini, Aabha aur Sonali sabhi uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.
Ragini : Baitho Veer!
Ragini ne usse ishaare karte hue baithne ko kaha.
Veer baitha. Wo toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Ragini ne yaha sabhi ko subah subah kyu bulaaya tha. Bas wo intezaar kar raha tha.
Ragini : Jaise Dada jii ne apna nirnay liya aur wo apni zimmedari se muqt ho gaye...
Kehte hue usne ek nazar sab par daali fir ek lambi saas lete hue continue kii,
Ragini : Wese hi mene bhi apne jeevan ka faisla le liya hai. Aap sab ko mein apna maanti hu. Apna parivaar maanti hu. Iss ghar ke sadasya hai aap sab. Aur isliye, mein aaj aap sab ke saath apna nirnay saajha karna chaahti hu.
Suman ne ek nod dete hue Ragini ko ishaara kiya ki hum sab sunn rahe hai. Aap kehte jaaiye.
Ragini (nods) : Kaafi kuch soch vichaar karne ke baad, khud se lakh baar sawaal karne ke baad, mein finally iss nirnay par pohuch chuki hu ki...
Sabki nazre uske upar hi tiki hui thi iss waqt. Ragini bhi baari baari sabhi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad bina koi sankoch kiye wo boli,
Ragini : Ki... Mein Vivek ko DIVORCE de rahi hu!!!
*Silence*
Aur kuch derr tak bas khaamoshi chhaayi rahi. Koi kuch nahi bola. Veer bas muskuraaya jaise usse pata tha ki Ragini yahi faisla legi.
Na jaane kitni raato ko wo jab jab apne kamre ki orr jaata tha tab tab Ragini ke kamre ke andar se uski rone ki awaaz usse aksar sunaayi de jaaya karti thi. Kamre me sikud kar na jaane kitni raatein roke guzaari thi Ragini ne. Par ab aur nahi. Zindagi me aage bhi badhna tha usse.
Aur Veer jaanta tha ki Ragini issi qadam ko chunegi. Still, yadi wo iska ulta faisla bhi leti toh bhi Veer uska saath deta. Kyuki ab tak Ragini uske sang uske harr kadam par saath de rahi thi. Badle me itna toh karna banta hi tha.
Suman aankho me chamak liye forun hi uth ke aayi aur Ragini ke kandhe par haath rakh uske bagal se baith gayi,
"Aapne ekdum sahi nirnay liya hai Ragini jii! Mein boht khush hu aapke iss faisle se. Ab aap khul ke apna jeevan vyateet kar sakti hai. Aapko ab koi bandish nahi. Yadi aap waapas jaati toh zaahir hai ki aap uss niraasha se kabhi baahar nahi nikal paati. Par ab... Ab sab kuch behtar ho sakta hai."
Suman ki baat sunn Ragini muskuraayi par uske chehre pe waapas se maayusi chha gayi thi. Uski udaasi ko mehsoos karte hue Suman fir boli,
"Aur... Aur mujhe vishvaas hai ki koi aapse behad pyaar karne waala aapke jeevan me jald hi khushiyo ke rang bhar dega. Dekhna..."
Suman ne Veer ko dekhte hue ye baat boli.
'Hmm?'
Suman : Kyu hai na? Veer ji!?
Veer : !?? Haan! O-Of course!
Ragini stabdh nigaaho se Veer ko dekhi aur fir halki muskaan liye neeche dekhne lagi. Uske gaal halke gulaabi the, na jaane kya soch rahi thi.
Par itna zaroor tha ki wo pehle se kaafi behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Aabha aur Sonali toh bas chup chaap baithi rahi shuru se ant tak. Unke kehne ya na kehne se wese bhi kuch nahi hone waala tha. Aur na hi wo itni experienced thi inn maamlo me.
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Veer's old home...
Veer ke puraane ghar me iss waqt apne kamre me Pranjal baithe hue tha. Diary me na jaane kya likh raha tha.
Par uske chehre ke bhaav bade hi khaufnaak the iss waqt.
'Veeeeerrr!!!! How dare you...!!!!? Hmm~ Nice... Nice... I see!! Toh aisa hai sab kuch haan? Veer!!!! Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Na keval tumne mera mazaak banaaya balki, meri poori planning par tumne paani fer ke rakh diya... DAMN YOUUUU VEEERRRR!!! MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHIIII!!!'
Pranjal jo apne gusse ko qaabu me karne ki koshish kar raha tha, uska gussa harr guzarte pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Jese hi wo aankhein band karta, uske saamne wahi banquet me hua sharmindagi waala nazaara saamne aa jaata. Kitna embarassed hona pada tha usse waha. Aaj tak apni poori zindagi me Pranjal ne kabhi itni sharmindagi mehsoos nahi kii thi.
Aur ye sab kiski wajah se hua tha? Khaali ek Veer ki wajah se. Wo Veer, jisse Pranjal bachpan se ullu banaata aaya tha, aaj usme itni himmat aa gayi thi ki wo palat ke uska mazaak bana sake? Wo bhi sab ke saamne?
Pranjal ka khoon khaul raha tha uss manzar ko yaad kar kar ke.
Par Pranjal bhi koi kaccha khilaadi nahi tha. Wo aisa saanp tha jo apne ande ek hi bil me kabhi nahi rakhta tha. Dusre shabdo me, uske paas kayi paitre the. Yadi Veer ne uske plan ka pardafaash bhi kar diya tha toh bhi uske paas kayi upaay the.
In fact, Pranjal ab aur chaukanna ho gaya tha. Usse pata lag chuka tha ki Veer active hai inn maamlo me aur ab boht hi bareeki se jaal bichhaana padega.
'Hmm~ Badla toh mein lunga Veer! Tumne ye wese accha kiya jo mujhe aagah kar diya. Harr ek beizzati ka badla lunga mein. Ab tak mein choti macchliyo ko pakadne me laga hua tha. Par ab mujhe sabse pehle badi macchli pakad ke usse paani me se nikaalna padega. Uske baad... I'll deal with you!!! Kyuki, pehle paisa zaroori hai. Once I'll have that... Tumse nipatna fir chutkiyo ka khel hoga mere liye.'
Sochte hue usne diary me zorr se apna pen panno me khos diya.
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Aatish' Hideout 5...
Time : 8:13 PM
"Kya sab aa gaye?"
Ye awaaz thi Slogan ki jo kursi par baithe hue tha. Chehre ki chinta saaf bata rahi thi ki wo yaha kuch serious discuss karne hi aaya tha.
Warehouse tha ye Aatish ka ek prakaar se. Uska adda number 5. Aksar wo badi deals yahi kiya karta tha. Kyuki, ye jagah kaafi safe thi.
Slogan ke samaksh baithe Steve ne haa me gardan hilaayi aur apni baat rakhi,
"Aa gaye hai sab Dada. Aap bataiye. Jo bhi orders honge mein wo sab aadmiyo ko samjha dunga."
Slogan : Hmm! Uske pehle... Ye glass bharwao pehle.
Steve : Jii! Balhaar, idhar aao!!!!!
Steve ne Balhaar ko zorr se chillaaya toh wo peeche se aaya aur uske haath me ek jug tha.
Steve aur Slogan dono hi baatein kar rahe the. Aur Balhaar nazre neeche kiye glass me beer bhar raha tha.
Par tabhi jese jis baat ka usse darr tha wahi hua,
Steve : Hmm? Tum toh right handed the na? Ye baaye haath se kyu serve kar rahe ho?
Ye sunte hi Balhaar ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Waqai! Steve boht sharp tha. Aise hi nahi usko apna right hand bana ke rakha hua tha Slogan ne. Steve ki baat sunn iss baar Slogan ne bhi usse dekha. Aur dono ki nazro ko apne upar mehsoos kar, Balhaar ke paseene chhootne lage the.
But thanks to Veer, ki usne pehle hi usse iss baare me aagah kar diya tha. So he came prepared. Usse pata tha ki usse kya bolna tha.
Balhaar : Steve bhai! Jis din hum sabhi uss Veer ko pakad ke laaye the. Aur, fir baad me unki gang aa gayi thi. Tab adde se bhaagte time mein aur mere aadmi unke aadmiyo se bhid gaye the. Aur... Ussi ladaayi me... Ye sab ho gaya. Mera haath mud gaya.
Steve : Ohhh! Toh ab tak treatment kyu nahi liya?
Balhaar : Jab tak uss Veer ki khatiya na khadi kar du tab tak mujhe chenn nahi aayega Steve bhai. Ussi ke kaaran ye sab hua hai.
Slogan : Theek hai! Tum jaa sakte ho.
Balhaar : Jii!
Aur Balhaar peeche jaa ke khada ho gaya. Slogan ko pata nahi kyu, par kuch theek nahi laga.
Slogan : Steve! Hume kuch karna hoga. Jald hi.
Steve : Kahiye Dada!
Slogan : Wo jagah...
Slogan ne seedha Steve ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha. Steve bas do shabd sunte hi maun reh chuka tha.
Steve : Kya wahi par...!?
Slogan : Haa wahi par...
Steve : Samajh gaya Dada! Par aap waha par saara intezaam karoge kese? Uss ladki ko...!?
Slogan : Plan aisa hai ki...
Slogan apni saari baatein rakhta jaa raha tha par usse nahi pata tha ki Balhaar wahi peeche khada hua kya kuch nahi kar raha tha.
Slogan apne jeevan kaal me itni deaths ko escape kiya hua tha ki usse khatre ka abhaas ho jaata tha. Aise hi nahi wo itne saal tak zinda tha. Itne bade khatro se ladne ke bawajood wo harr baar zinda bach jaata tha. Kyuki usse experience tha. Wo khatre ko bhaanp leta tha.
Aaj bhi Steve se baatein karte hue, usse kuch ajeeb laga. Toh usne forun hi kaha,
Slogan : STEVE!!
Steve : Jii Dada!
Slogan : Iss Balhaar ko baahar jaane ko kaho.
Steve : Balhaaaarrr!!! Baahar jao!
Balhaar : Jii Steve bhai!
Wo bina kuch kahe baahar nikal gaya. Jese usse jo chaahiye tha, wo usse mil chuka tha. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan thi.
Steve : Kya hua Dada? Kuch baat hai kya?
Slogan : Nahi! Ye Balhaar...
Steve : Balhaar apna hi aadmi hai Dada. Aatish bhau ke andar hi wo saalo se kaam karta aaya hai. Wo gaddaari nahi karega, jaha tak mujhe lagta hai. Par kya aapko kuch doubt hai?
Slogan : Hmm! Iss Balhaar ki poori jankaari lo. Mobile phone se leke sab kuch. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.
Steve : Jesa aap kahe!
Aur issi ke saath Slogan ne wo meeting wahi samaapt kar dii. Aaj usse kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi thi. Aur isliye usne Steve ko bhi uss Balhaar ki info nikaalne ka kaam saup diya.
Par kis jagah ki baat kar rahe the ye Steve aur Slogan? Ho na ho, Slogan kuch bada hi soch ke aage badh raha tha. Kuch aisa jo iss baar usse uske maqsad tak pohucha sakta tha.
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Ragini's PoV...
Aaj! Aaj mene apne jeevan ka ek boht hi aham faisla liya tha. Vivek se Talaak!
Mein harr raat jaagti aur mere khayaalo me wo mazar mandraata rehta tha.
"M-Mujhe chorr do... Mujhe mat maaro!"
Vivek ke wo shabd jo usne uss gunde se kahe the jab uss gunde ne ye pucha tha ki kiski jaan lu? Toh Vivek mera apna pati apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha. Bina meri koi parvaah kiye.
Kya kuch nahi kiya tha mene uske liye? Uss se pyaar kiya. Uske kehne hi pe mein do saal tak ruki rahi hamaari shaadi ke liye. Mere Dad T.V.S ke showrooms ke maalik the toh mene uski automobiles ki company me kitni madad karwayi thi unn se.
Of course mein ye sab baato ko ginti thodi thi. Kyuki mein sab kuch hamaare liye hi toh kar rahi thi. Shaadi hue abhi hume kuch hi mahine toh hue the. Uske kehne par mein abhi Maa bhi nahi bani thi.
Kyuki wo chaahta tha ki abhi hum life ko aur enjoy kare thoda. Aur mein bhi maan gayi thi.
Usse chaahiye thi property. Toh devar Pranjal ke saath milkar wo dono kuch khichdi pakaate rehte the aur mujhe bina bataaye hi harr baar plan me shaamil kar lete the. Mein bhi yahi samajhti thi ki ye jo bhi matter hai jald hi nipat jaega aur mein apna pyaara jeevan uske sang vyateet karungi.
Veer! Mera devar! Uske khilaaf hi hum sab shadiyantra rachte the. Mein toh bas naam ke liye unke plan me hua karti thi. Mujhe toh sab kuch aksar baad me pata chalta tha ki ye sab akhir karte kya the. Shuru me mujhe aisa lagta tha ki shayad Veer waqai ek bhondu insaan hai. Par mein galat thi.
Uss raat jab mene saari umeed chorr dii thi. Uss raat wahi Veer kisi farishte ki tarah mujhe bachaane aaya tha. Mein... Jo uske khilaaf rehti thi. Mujhe bachaane aaya tha woh. Uss raat mujhe pata lag chuka tha ki ek saccha asli insaan kesa hota hai. Wo tha Veer! Vivek nahi! Vivek ne toh mere dil ko choor choor kar ke rakh diya tha. Saare armaan mere, mere sapne, sab kuch ek hi jhatke me usne bikher ke rakh diye the.
Aur mein kathputli ki tarah uske haatho me naachti rahi. Kaash mujhe ye baatein pehle samajh aa jaati. Kherr! Galti toh insaan se hi hoti hai na? Mujhse bhi hui. Aur ab mein usse sudhaarungi.
Aaj hi na keval mene vakeel ko bula liya tha balki mein Veer aur baaki sabhi ke sang seedha apne mata pita ko leke Vivek ke ghar bhi gayi thi.
Itni kaha suni hui, kaafi derr tak mujhe uske gharwaale manaate rahe. Mere Mom Dad boht supporting the. Unhone poora decision mere pe chorr diya tha. Aaj wo Vivek gusse me mujhe chillaata raha, toh kabhi rote hue gidgidaata raha. Par mein tass se mass na hui. Saala aise insaan pe kese bharosa kar sakti thi mein.
Pata nahi kyu, par meri nazre Vivek ko chorr aaj Veer pe zyaada jaa rahi thi. Wo khaamosh sa bas mere harr faisle me mera saath de raha tha. Ye hoti hai maturity. Sach kahu toh Veer ek gentleman tha.
Haan thoda natkhat tha, aksar wo baatein bhi keh deta tha jo aurto ke liye appropriate nahi hoti thi. Par... Dheere dheere usme change aa raha tha. Aur boht hi behtar change aa raha tha. All in all, he knew how to treat a woman.
Vivek ke parivaar ke lakh manaane par bhi mein na maani aur mene divorce ke paper par sign kar diye the. Shayad Vivek ko bhi pata tha ki ab wo mujhe kabhi nahi mana sakta, toh usne bhi bemann papers par sign kar diye.
Ab toh bas formalities hi bachi thi. Jo kuch din me hi ho jaane waali thi. Main cheez toh sign hi the aur dono taraf ki razamandi.
Uss ghar me toh jese maatam sa chha gaya tha. Ghar ke do sadasya ghar jo chorr chuke the. Mein aur Veer. Do bhi nahi, teen. Veer ki asli maa bhi toh nahi thi. Mujhe unke baare me koi jaankaari nahi thi. Kitni hi ajeeb baat thi. Unse related koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me. Na koi photo, na koi zikr unka. Na jaane bechaare Veer ko kitni tadpan hoti hogi apni Maa ko lekar. Bechaare ko kabhi Maa ka pyaar nahi mil paaya tha. Maa ka kya kabhi theek se usse parivaar ka pyaar nahi mila.
Isliye mene usse apne sang rakhne ki sochi thi. I'll give him a familial love.
Aaj mein behad khush thi. Thoda maayus bhi thi par uss se bhi zyada khushi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne dil se kaafi wajni bhaar ko utha liya ho.
Ab mein azaad thi. Ab mein unn raato ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulna chaahti thi.
Aur isliye, aaj mene sab kuch hata diya. Saree utaar dii, mangal sutra hata diya, maang me se sindoor hata diya, apne haatho se choodiya nikaal dii. Aaj mein bas ek shining black top aur blue jeans me thi.
Mein bilkul college ki ladki lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki mein Arohi aur Kavya ki college ki saheli hu. Jese hi mein iss roop me baahar aayi, meri nazre Veer ke chehre par hi thi. Kesa reaction hoga uska?
Aur jese hi usne mujhe dekha...
'Hahahahahaha~' Meri mann hi mann hassi chooth gayi. He was so cute. Fufu~
Uska muh khula hua tha. Wo aankhein phaade mujhe dekh raha tha. Mein bhi jese nayj naveli girlfriend ki tarah poora ghumte hue usse apna look dikha rahi thi.
'Just stop it! What was I even doing!?'
"K-Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Mere sawaal par wo maun reh gaya tha. Fir thkda hadbadaate hue jawaab diya tha usne.
"B-Bhabhi!?? You look wonderful!!!"
"Is that so?? Fufu~"
Usne meri tareef kii thi. Pata nahi kyu, par uske muh se tareef sunte hi mera mann prafullit ho utha tha. Vivek ko jab bhi mein aise dikhaaya karti thi apna look toh woh bas ek look deta tha aur bas yahi kehta tha, 'You look good!'
Harr baar uska same dialogue rehta tha. Par Veer!? I could feel ki usne dil se kaha tha.
"Veer!!! Aaj mein xxxxxxx cafe jaana chaahti hu. Will you take me?"
Mene uss se pucha. Mera waha jaane ka ek hi maqsad tha.
"O-Okay! Chaliye!"
Wo raazi bhi ho gaya. Kitna sweet tha Veer. Kabhi mujhe mana nahi karta tha. Hehe~
Wo car ki orr jaa hi raha tha toh mene usse mana kar diya.
"Nahi Veer! Hum bike pe chalenge!"
"Ehhh!?"
"Bike pe! Tum jaldi bike nikalo."
"Umm... Well! Okay!"
Usne firse mujhe mana nahi kiya. I really wanted to give him a hug. How can he be so sweet?
Wahi Vivek... To be honest usse bike chalaana hi nahi aata tha. Aaj tak mein uske saath bike par kabhi nahi baithi thi. Hamesha car me hi rehta tha woh.
Aaj mein Veer ke theek peeche baithi hui thi uski bike me. Aah! Bike se yaad aaya, ye bike mene hi toh usse gift kii thi. He loves this bike so much. Bhale hi utni mehngi nahi thi par Veer boht care karta tha bike kii.
Mein uske peeche baithi, aur pata nahi kyu par mene apne dono haath aaj uske seene me daal diye. Aur uss se bhi badi baat ki mujhe aisa karte waqt kuch bhi galat nahi laga.
Veer shayad meri iss harqat se thoda hadbada gaya tha par bola kuch nahi.
Kuch hi derr me hum uss cafe ke saamne the. Mere yaha aane ke do hi kaaran the. Pehla ye ki yaha cocktails aur mocktails dono hi boht acchi milti thi. Dusra... Well! Dusra kaaran bhi jald hi aane waala tha.
Andar aane se pehle hi Veer ne mere liye door khola.
'Oh Veer!!! How considerate of you!'
Usne mere liye door khola. Vivek toh inn baato par kabhi dhyaan hi nahi deta tha.
Andar aate hi humne dekha. Cafe me harr jagah couples hi couples the. Haatho me haath liye wo ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the. Mand mand music baj raha rha. Cafe ka ambiance ekdum romantic tha.
Aur apni table par aate hi...
'Huh!?? Did he just...!?'
Veer ne mere liye kursi kheechi. Taaki pehle mein baith saku.
'Don't do this Veer. Aur kitna sweet banoge!??' mein mann me chillaayi.
Veer mere just saamne baitha hua tha aur wo thoda uncomfortable lag raha tha. Par meri khaatir wo ye sab kar raha tha. Really! He was too sweet.
Uske baad wo utha aur order dene gaya. Wo meri pasand jaanta tha. Usse puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Wahi Vivek, mujh se hi order dene ko keh deta tha. Usse farq nahi padta tha ki mein kya pee rahi hu, meri choices kya hai. Sach me, dono me kitna difference tha. Veer was like a husband figure. Really, kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jisse Veer jaisa ladka milega.
*Sigh*
Mene ek aah bhari. Young hona kitna accha tha. Sadly, mein apne college ke dino se kayi saal aage aa chuki thi. If only I could go back in time...
Then!?
Then what?
Who would I have chosen?
Iss sawaal ko sochte hi meri nazar Veer pe chali gayi jo waha khade hoke order de raha tha.
Aur usse dekh uske baare me sochte hi mere gaal surkh laal pad gaye.
'Ragini!?? What are you even thinking?'
Unn baato ko mene dimaag se nikaal diya. Veer order deke aaya aur saamne baith gaya. Mein usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Aur wo meri nazro se bach kar idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Hehehe~ Shayad sharma raha tha.
It was so fun to tease him.
Jald hi hamaara order bhi aa gaya. Usne watermelon flavour ki ek mocktail mangwaai thi. No alcohol!
Aur mene cocktail! My favourite... Sex on the Beach!
Nahi nahi! Ye cocktail ka naam tha. Kuch aur nahi! Iska flavour mujhe personally pasand tha.
Veer jaanta tha. Mene usse bataaya tha pehle, mujhe yaad hai. Aur usse ab tak yaad tha.
Sip sip karte hue hum apni apni drinks pee rahe the. Par bechaara Veer mujhse nazre hi nahi mila paa raha tha. Hehe~
Uska ek aur kaaran tha. Kyuki, aaj mene black crop top pehna hua tha. Mera poora nanga pait khule aam nazar aa raha tha. Veer ne mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekhta tha. Of course, he was dumbfounded.
Pata nahi kyu, mujhe usse aur sataane ka mann karne laga.
"Veeer~ Idhar aao na! Mere bagal se baitho na!"
I called him. Aur wo mujhe dekhne ke baad firse mujhe inkaar kiye bina hi aake baith gaya. Oh god! Why was he so cute?
"A-Aaj aap khush ho Bhabhi?" Usne pucha.
"Hmm~ Behad! Aaj mere dil se ek bojh jese kam ho gaya." Mene jawaab diya.
Par ab samay aa gaya tha. Mere dusre maqsad ka...
Jis maqsad se mein yaha aayi thi.
Mene cafe ke baahar dekha. Road ke uss side hi boht badi sharaab ki dukaan thi. Mujhe pata tha koi waha aane wala tha. Uska hi intezaar tha mujhe...
Aur jese mein sahi thi.
Uski car aake waha ruki aur wo baahar nikla.
Kaun? Koi aur nahi, meri wahi pati... Pati nahi, ex-pati... Vivek!!!
Aur dukaan me jaake usne ek badi bottle sharaab ki lii aur car ke paas aake bonnet pe tik ke wo poori bottle gatakne laga.
I knew it!!! Mujhe pata tha wo aaega.
Aur tabhi...
"Veer!" I called him.
"Huh!?"
"Apna haath do." Mene uss se demand kiya.
"Ehh!? Mera haath!?"
"Hmm~"
Usne apna haath table ke upar rakha aur uske aisa karte hi...
Mene uska haath thaama aur apne peeche se le jaate hue seedhe apni nangi kamar par uska haath rakh diya.
"Bh-Bhabhiiiiiiii!!????" Wo hadbadaaya. Par mene uska haath ek pal ke liye bhi apne se juda nahi hone diya.
'Yesssssss!!! This was the touch I missed.. I was right!!!!'
Aur tabhi, jis cheez ke ghatit hone ka mujhe intezaar tha. Wo ho gayi.
Vivek ki nazar hamaare cafe ki window par padi. Aur hume dekhte hi...
*Craaaaasssssshhhhhhh*
Uski aankhein aag babula ho chuki thi. Hehehe~
Yessssss!!! I wanted to see him like that.
Mene Veer ka haath aur zorr se kass ke apni kamar me laga liya aur Vivek ko dekhne lagi.
Veer toh sabse anjaan tha. Wo sharma raha tha. Toh wahi Vivek... Uska seena gusse me upar neeche ho raha tha.
Aur wo agle hi pal waha se bhaag ke nikal gaya.
'Yesssssss!!! Ohhh god! This feeling!!! His face.... I feel so good!!!!!'
I achieved what I wanted to achieve.
Aur yaha ye buddhu Veer... Hehe~ Kitna sharma raha tha.
Ye buddhu sochta tha ki mein apne kamre me uss Vivek ke liye roti thi. Arre shuru me zaroor roti thi. Par keval Vivek hi ek kaaran nahi tha. Mein toh iss pagle ke liye roti thi.
Because I knew...
I FELL FOR HIM!!
Isliye roti thi. Ki ye galat hai, wagarah wagarah. Vivek ke wo gande laanchan mujhe yaad aa jaate. Par uske bawajood... I fell for this guy.
Aur yadi Vivek itna claim maarta hi tha. That I was having some illicit relationship with Veer.
So why not!??
I'll show him... This time!
Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.
Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.
Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...
After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.
"Right Veer?"
"Hmm? Kya?"
"Fufu~ Nothing!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Kuch 3 se 4 updates kahani me mellow scenes chalenge. Romantic scenes, somewhere erotica and some different PoVs. But boht hi jald action aane waala hai. I'm doing some work. Some hard work on those. Prepare rehne ka action ke liye. Isliye abhi inn mellow scenes ko enjoy kariye. Kyuki palak jhapakte hi thrill start ho jaega.
Anyways! Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
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I'll show him... This time!
Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.
Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.
Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...
After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.
"Right Veer?"
"Hmm? Kya?"
"Fufu~ Nothing!"
Ab aage...
Veer jo adhiktar anjaane me Ragini ko aksar sharmaane par majboor kar deta tha, kal Ragini ne hi uske hosh uda diye the.
Wo badla hua rang roop, uska bold style, chote kapde, aur baatein karte waqt aankho hi aankho me dekhna aur beech beech me uska flirt karna.
Wo toh jese koi aur hi ladki bann gayi thi. Ekdum se aisa badlaav aa gaya tha usme.
Veer, khud alpha male tha. Pehel wo karta tha inn maamlo me. Wo sharmaane waalo me se nahi tha. Par kal halaat hi kuch aise the. Jis bhabhi ko wo hamesha saree me dekhte hue aaya tha, wo kal achanak se chote kapdo me uske itna qareeb aa gayi thi ki uske antarmann me halchal sii mach gayi thi.
Kal raat ke unn moments ke baad se Veer ko Ragini ki favourability me bhi significant rise dekhne ko mila tha. 70 se seedha 80 par aa chuki thi Ragini ki favourability.
Aur yahi baat Veer ko chinta me daal rahi thi. Kal Ragini ke haav bhaav, bilkul alag hi the. Aise the jese wo maano Veer ki ardhaangini ho.
Mann me bhala kaun khush nahi hoga ki aapki bhabhi aapke qareeb rahe. Par asal me? Kya aap sabki nazro ka saamna kar paenge jab aapki bhabhi aise aapke qareeb aa jaaye? Shayad nahi!
Veer ka bhi yahi haal tha. Ragini was getting too close. Ye abnormal lagne laga tha ab usse.
Agle din bhi wahi hua, Veer next paper ke liye jab ready hoke jaa raha tha toh, Ragini uski tie baandhti, ekdum paas me uske khade hoke. Usse rumaal deti rakhne ko jo neatly folded hota tha. Uske socks nikaal ke rakhti thi. Watch se leke water bottle tak. Sab cheez wo prepare karke rakhti Veer ke liye.
Anjaane me Ragini jo kaam Vivek ke liye karti thi wahi kaam wo ab apne hi devar, Veer ke liye karne lagi thi. Aur inn saari harqato ko Suman bade hi dhyaan se gaur karti thi. Uske chehre par bas ek halki muskaan saji hoti thi ye dekhte waqt.
Aaj bhi Veer gaya hua tha apne last paper ke liye college. Ragini aaj uske liye special khaana banaane me lagi hui thi. Divorce ki formalities bhi kaafi kuch complete ho chuki thi. Aur wo ab poori tarah se azaad pankshi ki tarah thi.
Suman aur Aabha mandir gayi hui thi aaj. Rahi baat Sonali ki, toh wo Veer ka food truck run karti thi. Karan ki madad se Veer ne ek driver aur ek Sonali ke saath kaam karne ke liye female employee hire kar lii thi.
Wo driver food truck ko drive karta tha aur Sonali, apni new employee ke saath milkar cook karti thi. Veer ne usse apni saari dishes samjha dii thi. Dhandha waapas se sahi chalne laga tha.
Veer sahi tha. System ne usse Sonali ko business me include karne ka mission shayad isliye diya tha. System keval usse hi nahi, uske aas paas ke logo ko bhi aage badha raha tha indirectly. Kyuki, future me yahi sab toh uski madad karenge.
Veer jaanta tha ki Sonali business sambhal toh legi par abhi iss chef on wheels ko aur hit banaane ki zaroorat thi. Aur uski planning bhi Veer kar chuka tha.
Normal food truck se, wo pehle number of food trucks badhaega. Taaki isse ek chain ke roop me establish kiya jaa sake. Fir System ki shop se wo kuch secret dishes buy karega, taaki uski dishes koi bhi copy na kar sake. Wo endorsements karwaega, advertisements bhi. Sponsors dhundega taaki ye aur bada ban sake. Uske baad cricketers ki t shirts me apne business ka advertisment. Dheere dheere wo apne iss business ko ek franchise ke roop me establish kar dega. Aur finally, uski other branches dusre shehro me khulne lagengi. Aur business bas badhta hi jaega. Yahi tha Veer ka plan yadi roughly put kiya jaaye toh.
Nidhi ki problem ke baare me bhi usne soch liya tha ki kya karna hai. Ab toh bas jald hi Nidhi ko wo ek bada surprise dene waala tha.
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Iss dauraan, Suman aur Aabha mandir aayi hui thi bhagwaan jii ke darshan ke liye. Ghar me wahi dono hi sabse zyaada pooja paath waali aurate thi.
Ragini bhi karti thi, par Suman aur Aabha jitni nahi.
Jab dono darshan kar rahi thi, tab unhe nahi pata tha ki koi tha, jo unhe dekh ke unke hi baare me baat kar raha tha.
Aadmi 1 : Wo rahi dono!
Aadmi : 2 : Mein chorrunga nahi isse.
Aadmi 1 : Mein bhi... Hamaari kya haalat ho gayi thi inke kaaran. Sabak toh milega inhe. Kode se maarunga isse mein.
Aadmi 2 : Ab tak mene itni chooth dii thi, ab toh qaid karke rakhunga.
Jii haan, ye aapas me baat kar rahe dono log koi aur nahi balki, Pushpendra aur Amit the.
Bole toh, Suman aur Aabha ke pati.
Dono baap bete, jab se Suman aur Sonali ke kaaran hawalaat me jail me sadd ke aaye the. Tab se hi dono ko apni apni patniyo ki talaash thi. Suman toh bina koi suraag chorre nikal gayi thi. Par Suman se bas ek galti ho gayi thi.
Usne jaate samay ghar ki chaavi pados me de dii thi. Aur ye khabar chorr dii thi ki wo kis sheher me palaayan kar rahi hai. Aur uss kaaran, Pushpendra ne saari baatein waha se pata laga lii thi. Apne hi padosiyo ko darra dhamka ke Pushpendra ne ye pata laga liya tha ki iss waqt Suman Mumbai me thi.
Apne bete ke saath Mumbai aate hi usne Suman ki talaash shuru kar dii thi. Bina Suman ke guzaara kese hota warna uska? Wahi toh thi jo ghar sambhaalti thi. Ek prakaar se kaam waali bai thi wo uski. Pushpendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.
Jis gaay jesi aurat ko wo darra dhamka ke rakhta tha, wo usse waha jail me band karwa ke ghar se bhaagkar, yaha aisho araam ki zindagi jee rahi thi. Gussa toh aana hi tha.
Mumbai me aane ke baad bas, fir dono baap bete ne talaash shuru kar dii. Halaaki itne din guzar jaane par bhi unhe koi khabar na mili. Mumbai sheher koi hallua thodi tha. Itna bada sheher tha. Suman ko dhundna ghaas ke dherr me sui dhundne jaisa tha.
Par aaj jese kismat unka saath de gayi. Jab dono hi mandir ke baahar dukaan me chai pee rahe the tab hi unki nazar Suman aur Aabha par gayi jo mandir ke andar jaa rahi thi. Kismat ho toh aisi.
Ye dono baap bete bas intezaar kar rahe the Suman aur Aabha ke baahar aane ka.
Wahi yaha mandir ke andar, Suman aur Aabha darshan ke baad lautne ki taiyaari kar rahi thi. Iss baat se bekhabar, ki do darinde baahar hi unka intezaar kar rahe the.
Suman : Chale beta?
Aabha : Haan Maa jii!
Suman : Hmm!
Dono hi mandir se baahar nikli aur paidal hi ghar ki orr jaane lagi.
Par wo sab baato se pare ki unke peeche kaun do log aa rahe the, Suman aur Aabha apni baato me magan aage badh rahi thi.
Ek mod aisa aaya jo main road ke liye nikalta tha. Bas, ye mod society ka ek mod tha. Koi main road nahi. Yaani koi chahal pahal nahi. Suman aur Aabha
dono hi issi raaste se aayi thi kyuki ye seedha mandir ko nikalta tha. Aur waapas se issi raaste se jaati thi toh seedha main road me unhe auto rickshaw mil jaata tha. Ye raasta unke liye ekdum convenient tha.
Lekin abhi dono hi mudne ke baad kuch hi kadam chali hongi jab unke peeche se ek awaaz aayi.
"Bohut mauj ho rahi hai tum dono ki haan?"
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Suman ke shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Wo aur Aabha agle hi pal peeche mudi aur mudte hi dono ko ek zordaar jhatka laga. Jinse itne saalo ke baad badi mushqil se peecha churra ke wo apne gaav se bhaag ke aayi thi. Wahi do kameene unke saamne the. Unn par atyachaar karne waale ek baar fir, unhe dhundh chuke the.
Apne seene me haath rakh, Suman gehri saas lete hue ghabra ke peeche ho gayi.
Suman : Tummmm???
Pushpendra : Haan mein! Apne pati ko dekh kar tujhe toh khush hona chahiye na? Toh tu ghabra kyu rahi hai?
Aabha ki bhi haalat patli ho chuki thi. Apne pati Amit ko dekh uske chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha. Amit usse gusse me khaa jaane waali nazro se ghur raha tha. Uske haatho me jese khujli ho rahi thi kisi par haath saaf karne kii. Wo ghabraate hue Suman ke peeche jaa kar uska haath thaam lii.
Amit : Kyu bey saali? Apne pati ko chorr yaha bade sheher me mauj kar rahi hai haan? Tujhe rakh kisne liya? KISKE BISTAR GARAM KAR RAHI HAI TUUUU???
Uski uchi awaaz sunn jaha Aabha ghabra gayi toh wahi Suman bauhe sikodte hue virodh kii,
Suman : AMITTTT!!!
Pushpendra : Theek hi toh keh raha hai woh. Tum dono, akhir itne bade sheher me guzaara kaise kar lii? Khaali haath aayi thi tum dono toh. Uss ladke ke saath hi na? Toh uske saath reh rahi ho tum? RANDIYOOOOO!!!!
Wo achaanak hi zorr se chillaaya aur aage badh Suman ke haath ko zorr se pakad liya.
Suman : Aahhh!
Aabha jaldbaazi me apna phone nikaali aur usne seedha Veer ko phone dial kar diya.
Par jab tak wo kaan me phone laga paati, Amit aage badha,
Amit : Teri toh... HARAAMZAADI!!!!
Aur uske baal kheech uske haath se phone chhinaane laga.
Aabha : Aahhh! Chorro... Chorro... Maa~
Chheena jhapti me Aabha phone me koi jawaab na de paayi. Udhar Veer ne phone uthaaya hi tha aur usne bas itna hi suna tha,
"Chorro... Maa~"
Ki Amit ne Aabha ke haath se phone chhina kar seedha call cut kar diya.
Amit : Veer haan? Isse lagaayi thi phone? Bol kaun hai ye? BOLLLL!!!
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaahhhh!"
Aur usne ek zorr ka chaata seedha Aabha ke gulaabi gaal par de maara.
Aabha dard se cheenkhi aur tabhi dono baap bete ne milke unke muh par haath rakh unki awaaz dabaayi. Tabhi ek auto unke paas aake rukk gaya aur dono hi Suman aur Aabha ko usme daal wo sabhi waha se rafu chakkar ho gaye.
Samay 12 bajke 10 minute ho raha tha aur Veer uss waqt bas nikla hi tha exam deke jab usse Aabha ka call aaya tha.
Pushpendra aur Amit dono hi kayi mahino se Mumbai me guzaara kar rahe the. Toh zaahir sii baat thi ki unki kuch na kuch pehchaan toh bann hi gayi hogi aur unhone apna thikaana bhi dhoond hi liya hoga. Wo auto unki hi pehchaan ka tha.
Aur iss samay, wo aake ek chote se ghar ke baahar ruke hue the.
Suman aur Aabha raaste bhar virodh karti rahi, par kitna hi virodh kyu na kar le, mard ka shareerik bal unke aurato waale shareerik bal par bhaari pad raha tha. Ye toh qudrat ka nirmaan tha. Isme wo dono kya hi kar sakti thi. Majbooran, wo kuch na kar paayi siwae chhatpataane ke.
Unn dono ko andar laate hi zameen par patakte hue Pushpendra ne andar se kivaad band kar diye.
Pushpendra : Saali chinaar!!! Teri himmat kese hui haan? Mujhe dhoka dene kii? Mann toh kar raha hai tere tukde tukde kar du. Itna maaru ki tu kabhi mujhe dhoka dene ki soche bhi na. Par abhi nahi. Tujhe toh ghar le jaa kar acche se khabar lunga teri. Sonali kidhar hai? BOL!!!!
Par Suman kuch na boli. Uski aankh ekdum gusse se laal thi aur wo Pushpendra ko ghur rahi thi.
Ki tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaaahhhhh!"
Ek tezz tarraar jhaapad seedha aake Suman ke narm gaal par pada. Aur uska chehra ulti taraf ghum gaya.
Aabha : Maaaaa jiii!!!!
Aabha rote hue qareeb aayi aur Suman ko thaami.
Par abhi ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha, jis baat ka Suman ko darr tha, wahi ho gaya.
Pushpendra achanak hi apni shirt utaarne laga. Button pe button khulne lage aur Suman ke shareer ke ruye khade ho gaye ye dekh. Wo kaapne lagi. Aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Pushpendra : Boht dharm patni bann'ne ke shauk hai na tujhe. Abhi nikaalta hu teri saari garmi. Aaj aisa chodunga saali ko....
Pushpendra kya kar raha tha usse iss baat ki koi sharm nahi thi ab. Wo apne hi bete ke saamne apni patni ko chodne ki baat keh raha tha.
Suman idhar poori tarah se ghabraayi hui thi. Usse apni chinta nahi thi. Darr aur afsos tha. Darr iska ki yadi iss mard ne usse aaj chhua, toh woh apne maalik ko kya muh dikhaegi? Kya uske maalik usse firse sweekaar karenge? Yadi kar bhi liye toh kya unke dil me firse wahi sthaan rahega uske liye? Aur yadi sweekaar nahi kiye toh? Kya hoga uska? Kaha jaegi woh? Iss se accha toh marrna hi behtar tha.
Iss darinde ne yadi usse aaj loota, toh sabse saral upaay apni jaan dena hi tha. Maalik ke saamne apna loota hua jism dikhaane se accha toh ye hai ki wo marr hi jaaye. Haan, yahi sahi upaay tha. Iss se usse maalik dwaara dhutkaar jaane ka bhi darr nahi rahega. Yahi sahi nirnay tha. Khud ki jaan de dena.
Kuch aise hi sawaal aur vichaar uske mann me aa rahe the.
Suman ne tay kar liya tha. Yadi ye aadmi aaj uske jism ko bhogta hai, toh Suman apni jaan de degi.
Apni kameez utaar ke jese hi Pushpendra aage badha tabhi Amit ne usse roka,
Amit : Aise nahi Baba... Abhi nahi! Jis Veer ke ghar ye dono ruki hui thi. Mere khayaal se wo ameer hai. Uss se paisa aithate hai, fir yaha se rafu chakkar hoke ghar me inn dono ko dekhenge.
Pushpendra : Hmm? Baat toh sahi hai. Paisa aithna boht zaroori hai. Tangi ho gayi hai paiso kii. Par paise kaise hadapna hai?
Amit : Wahi toh dikkat hai. Sochna padega. Par pehle inhe baandh ke rakho. Ye bhaagne na paaye.
Aur forun hi dono Suman Aabha ko unn logo ne raassi se baandh diya.
Amit : Hmm! Ab theek hai.
Pushpendra : Ab batao! Kuch socha?
Amit : Hmm! Ek kaam kar sakte hai.
Pushpendra : Kya?
Amit : Inn dono se puchiye toh zara ki kya inn logo ne hamaare alaawa kisi aur ke saath raatein rangeen kii hai kya? BOL Aabha!!! BOL!!!
Pushpendra : Jawaab de Suman!!!
Toh Suman zorr se chillaayi,
Suman : HAAAAANN!! HAAN!! HARAAMI!! MENE APNE MAALIK KA BISTAR GARAM KIYA HAI, AUR HAMESHA KARTI RAHUNGI. TU KAUN HOTA HAI MUJHSE PUCHNE WAALA?!??
Suman ke baat maan'ne par Pushpendra ka khoon khaul utha. Uski biwi kisi aur se chudwa rahi thi? Upar se maalik keh rahi thi usse? Aaj toh pushpendra jaise kuch karne hi waala tha.
Amit : Toh bas fir... Hum ussi Veer ko bulaenge aur uss se ye kahenge ki yadi inhe sahi salaamat chaahte ho toh paise leke aao. Uske aane ke baad hum paise bhi hadpenge, uspe haath bhi saaf karenge aur fir yaha se bhaagenge bhi.
Idea sunn ke Pushpendra bhi haami bhara par uske alawa Suman ki aankho me bhi chamak thi. Usse jese apna upaay mil chuka tha. Wo tabhi zorr se hassne lagi,
Suman : Hahahahahaahaha~
Pushpendra : Hass kyu rahi hai tu???
Suman : Haha~ Hassu nahi toh kya karu? Accha hua jo tune mujhe nahi chhiya. Warna...
Pushpendra : Warna kya?
Suman : Warna tujhe ek phooti kodi na milti. Hahahaha~ Tujhe kya lagta hai? Mere maalik iss aurat ke shareer ke liye paagal baithe hai kya? Unke paas ek se ek haseenaaye hai. Mein kya hi hu unki? Yadi tune mujhe chhii liya hota, toh wo mujhe dhutkaar kar hata dete. Aur tujhe ghanta kuch milta. Unke paas ladkiyo ki kami nahi. Mujh jaisi daasi ki kya parvaah unhe?
Suman ki baat sunn, dono hi chhup reh gaye. Aur apne nirnay par garv karne lage. Accha hua jo unhone abhi tak Suman ke saath kuch nahi kiya tha. Kam se kam abhi unka plan qamyaab hone me koi toh umeed thi.
Suman idhar apna nichla honth dabaaye sarr jhukaaye baithi thi. Usne sab kuch jhooth bola tha.
Keval samay bachaane ke liye. Isse aur taalne ke liye. Iss aas me ki shayad, uske maalik jald hi aa jaenge.
Par... Par sawaal tha ki...
Kya Veer aaega? Kya uske maalik aaenge? Jaha usse thodi khushi thi ki kuch palo ke liye usne apne jism ko bacha liya tha toh wahi ek maayusi bhi thi. Wo nahi jaanti thi ki uske maalik ke dil me uski kya jagah hai. Kya wo apni iss tucch sii daasi ke liye yaha tak usse bachaane aaenge? Kahi inka plan qamyaab ho gaya toh? Fir kya ho gaya?
Yahi sab soch wo chinta me doob gayi.
Ki tabhi...
*THUUUUDDDDDDD*
Ek zorrdaar awaaz aayi aur jo kivaad band tha. Wo dhadalle se khula aur uska ek kivaad toh toot ke itni dur jaa ke gira ki saamne ki deewaar se hi bhidh gaya.
Darwaaze ke baahar...
Wo khada tha.
Veer!!!
Uske haath jeb me the. Chehre par koi expression nahi. Kyuki wo itna pissed off tha ki gussa bhi ab uske chehre se jaa chuka tha.
Aabha ke call me uski pukaar sunn ke hi Veer ko abhaas ho gaya tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur usne ek hi cheez kari,
ENEMY TRACKER!!!!
Basic enemy tracking skill ka use karte hi usse inn do namuno kii location mil chuki thi. Ye dono koi boss enemy nahi the, isliye araam se skill ne kaam kar diya.
Inn do chutiyo ki himmat kese hui uski aurato par haath lagaane kii. They were his belongings.
Veer bas yahi baat mann me chilla raha tha.
'Who dares to touch my property?'
Suman aur Aabha uski property thi. Uska poora haq tha unn dono par. Aur uske siwa koi aur unhe haath lagaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Thok ke na rakh dega unhe wo?
Veer ne bas ek nazar Suman aur Aabha par maari. Aur fir wo dheere dheere jeb me haath daale hi aage badha.
Kivaad ka tukda udte dekh, Amit thoda darr gaya. Par fir bhi wo khud ko sambhaalte hue aage badha,
"Teri toh...."
Par tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaaaakkkkkk*
*Sunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn*
Ek ulta kantaap Amit ki kanpati pe pada aur kaan hi sannaa gaya.
Kaan me awaaz goonjne lagi uske. Muh se ek do khoon se sane daant nikal kar toh gire hi, saath me wo khud bhi neeche dhadaam se gir pada. Aankhein bhi chaundhiya gayi thi uski. Taare dikhne lage the usse ek kantaap me.
Pushpendra, ye dekh gusse me aage badha aur hamla kiya.
Par... Par kya wo Veer ko hara paata? Uski yadi saat pushte bhi Veer par ek saath hamla karti toh bhi na hara paati usse. Toh khud akela Pushpendra toh jese mazaak tha Veer ke liye.
Veer ne uske tucch hamlo se araam se bachte hue ek ghusa uske pait me maara aur fir do jhaapad usse lagaate hue usse bhi gira diya.
Uske baad bhi Veer shaant nahi baitha. Muh se toh shaant hi tha par uske actions bol rahe the.
It was like... I won't speak. My actions will.
Aage badhte hue Veer ne Pushpendra ko pakda aur...
*Ding*
LIMBOOOOO!!!
*CRAAAAAAAACCKKKKKK*
"Eaaaarrrggghhhhhhhhhh"
Veer ne ek jhatke me Pushpendra ka ek haath marod diya. Aur kamre me uski dard bhari cheenkh goonj uthi. Haath kyu maroda? Kyuki usne apni Suman aur Aabha ke gaalo par unn thappad ke nishaan dekh liye the.
THEY DARED TO SLAP HIS WOMEN? THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY HANDS!!!
Aur agle hi pal,
*CRAAAAAAAAACKKKKKK*
"Aaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhhhhhhhh"
Pushpendra ka agla haath bhi gaya. Both of his limbs were twisted beyond recognition.
You think this was the end? NO!!!
*CRAAAAAAACKKKKKKKK*
*CRAAAAAAAACKKKKKKKKKKKK*
"AAAAARRRRRRGHHHHH"
Dono perr bhi mud chuke the Pushpendra ke.
Veer ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Bas yahi baat thi mann me...
THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY LEGS TOO!
Pushpendra ko poora apaahij chorr Veer Amit ki taraf badha, jo ghabraate hue reng ke peeche jaa raha tha aur fir...
Uss kamre me uski bhi dil dehla dene waali cheenkhe goonj uthi. Dono baap bete kisi kachre ke maafiq pade hue the zameen me. Kuch derr pehle ka unka josh, unka bal, unka guroor jese unki gaand me ghuss chuka tha ab.
Veer ne dono hi Aabha aur Suman ki rassiya kholi aur unhe azaad kiya.
Suman aur Aabha dono ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hui thi. Toh wahi thoda bhay bhi tha. Kya haalat kari thi Veer ne unke patiyo kii?
Cruel! Too cruel!!
Par yahi toh khaasiyat thi Veer kii. Suman ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hoke chamak rahi thi.
This was her master!!!
Na keval wo usse yaha bachaane aaya, balki itni jaldi aaya ki Suman ne khud iss baat ki umeed nahi kii thi. Upar se uska kroor vyavhaar. Saaf bata raha tha ki wo kitna gusse me tha. Kiske liye? Keval uske aur Aabha ke liye.
Veer ne dheere se dono ke gaalo par apna haath ferra toh Suman ne idhar apne maalik ka haath zorr se thaam liya.
Suman : Yadi aap na aate toh... Toh mein apni...
Kehte hue wo rukk gayi. Usse dhyaan aaya ki wo kya kehne jaa rahi thi. Apne mann ki baat kehne jaa rahi thi woh. Veer ko jese pata chal gaya. Iska abhaas hote hi uske raungte khade ho gaye.
Aap na aate toh mein apni? Apni kya? Veer ne forun hi puch liya,
Veer : Apni kya?
Suman : ....
Veer : Apni jaan de deti???
Suman ye sunn apni nazre neeche jhuka lii. Wo kese bhala apne maalik se nazre mila sakti thi? Par Veer ke hosh udd chuke the. Itne ke liye Suman apni jaan dene waali thi?
Usne forun hi Suman ki chin pakad uska chehra upar kiya aur usse dekha,
Veer : Ahinda se kabhi aisi baat na kehna aur na hi sochna samjhi? Ye mera order hai!
*Badump*
Suman ka dil jese ek dhadkan phaand gaya.
Aur agle hi pal,
Suman : Aaaahhhhh~
Suman Veer ki goad me thi. Uske gaal laal pad chuke the. Iss baar thappad se nahi, sharm se.
Aur abki baar Veer ke chehre par ek narm expression tha.
Veer : Tum toh meri hi ho. Hai na? Fir tum dono hi aisa kyu sochti ho? Kuch bhi ho jaaye, mein tum dono ko kahi jaane nahi dunga. Aur na hi kuch hone dunga.
Jab Veer ne Suman ko utaara toh Suman ne Aabha ko peeche se dhakel ke Veer ki orr kar diya.
Veer : Hmm?? Ohhh~
Aur agle hi pal ek baar fir...
Aabha : Aaaahhhhh~
Iss baar Aabha Veer ki goad me thi. Sharm ke maare uske gaal surkh laal ho rahe the. Apne dono haatho se usne apna chehra chhupa liya aur mann hi mann apni Maa jii ko kosne lagi.
Aabha ko utaar ke Veer ne Suman ko dekha
Veer : Tum jaan'na chaahti thi na? Ki kyu mein tumhe wo sab cheeze seekhne ko keh raha tha? Toh suno???
Suman : Huhhh?
Veer : You'll be the leader. Tum leader bann'ne ke liye hi bani ho Suman!!!!
Suman : H-Huhhh?
Veer (smiles) : Mahila mandal!!!!
*Badump*
Ek baar fir Suman ke dil ko dhadkan tezz ho gayi aur wo bas phati aankho se apne maalik ko nihaarti hi reh gayi. Toh isliye...
Isliye wo sab cheezein uske maalik usse seekhne ko keh rahe the? Na keval wo usse ek daasi ke roop me dekhte the balki usse itna aage badhne ka mauka bhi de rahe the? Kaun deta hai apni daasiyo ko itni chooth?
Suman ko jese iss baat ki haami milte hi rona aa gaya. Aaj pehli baar apne poore jeevan kaal me wo itna emotional hui thi. Matlab uske maalik shuru se hi usse aage badhaane ke baare me soch rahe the? Iss se zyaada uske liye Khushi ki baat kya ho sakti thi?
Sach baat toh ye thi ki, jis din Veer ne Suman ko Vivek ke maata pita ko lataadte hue dekha tha. Ki kese usne harr tarq ke jawaab kitni asaani se de diye the. Uss din hi Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki...
SUMAN WAS BORN TO LEAD!!!
Dusre shabdo me, wo uska ek aisa hathiyaar ban sakti thi jo samaaj me acche se acche logo ki vaat lagaane me saksham ho.
Aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[You have broken Suman's affection meter.]
[Suman's favourability has exceeded 100]
*Ding*
[Suman's favourability : 126]
'Huhhhhh? Ye???'
Veer ko jhatka toh laga tha. Par abhi ek aur zaroori kaam baaki tha.
Usne seedha Balhaar ko phone lagaaya,
Veer : Hello!
Balhaar : Haan!
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Revos rakhne ka aur like ki button pe kantaap maar ke jaane ka.
Wo badla hua rang roop, uska bold style, chote kapde, aur baatein karte waqt aankho hi aankho me dekhna aur beech beech me uska flirt karna.
Wo toh jese koi aur hi ladki bann gayi thi. Ekdum se aisa badlaav aa gaya tha usme.
Veer, khud alpha male tha. Pehel wo karta tha inn maamlo me. Wo sharmaane waalo me se nahi tha. Par kal halaat hi kuch aise the. Jis bhabhi ko wo hamesha saree me dekhte hue aaya tha, wo kal achanak se chote kapdo me uske itna qareeb aa gayi thi ki uske antarmann me halchal sii mach gayi thi.
Kal raat ke unn moments ke baad se Veer ko Ragini ki favourability me bhi significant rise dekhne ko mila tha. 70 se seedha 80 par aa chuki thi Ragini ki favourability.
Aur yahi baat Veer ko chinta me daal rahi thi. Kal Ragini ke haav bhaav, bilkul alag hi the. Aise the jese wo maano Veer ki ardhaangini ho.
Mann me bhala kaun khush nahi hoga ki aapki bhabhi aapke qareeb rahe. Par asal me? Kya aap sabki nazro ka saamna kar paenge jab aapki bhabhi aise aapke qareeb aa jaaye? Shayad nahi!
Veer ka bhi yahi haal tha. Ragini was getting too close. Ye abnormal lagne laga tha ab usse.
Agle din bhi wahi hua, Veer next paper ke liye jab ready hoke jaa raha tha toh, Ragini uski tie baandhti, ekdum paas me uske khade hoke. Usse rumaal deti rakhne ko jo neatly folded hota tha. Uske socks nikaal ke rakhti thi. Watch se leke water bottle tak. Sab cheez wo prepare karke rakhti Veer ke liye.
Anjaane me Ragini jo kaam Vivek ke liye karti thi wahi kaam wo ab apne hi devar, Veer ke liye karne lagi thi. Aur inn saari harqato ko Suman bade hi dhyaan se gaur karti thi. Uske chehre par bas ek halki muskaan saji hoti thi ye dekhte waqt.
Aaj bhi Veer gaya hua tha apne last paper ke liye college. Ragini aaj uske liye special khaana banaane me lagi hui thi. Divorce ki formalities bhi kaafi kuch complete ho chuki thi. Aur wo ab poori tarah se azaad pankshi ki tarah thi.
Suman aur Aabha mandir gayi hui thi aaj. Rahi baat Sonali ki, toh wo Veer ka food truck run karti thi. Karan ki madad se Veer ne ek driver aur ek Sonali ke saath kaam karne ke liye female employee hire kar lii thi.
Wo driver food truck ko drive karta tha aur Sonali, apni new employee ke saath milkar cook karti thi. Veer ne usse apni saari dishes samjha dii thi. Dhandha waapas se sahi chalne laga tha.
Veer sahi tha. System ne usse Sonali ko business me include karne ka mission shayad isliye diya tha. System keval usse hi nahi, uske aas paas ke logo ko bhi aage badha raha tha indirectly. Kyuki, future me yahi sab toh uski madad karenge.
Veer jaanta tha ki Sonali business sambhal toh legi par abhi iss chef on wheels ko aur hit banaane ki zaroorat thi. Aur uski planning bhi Veer kar chuka tha.
Normal food truck se, wo pehle number of food trucks badhaega. Taaki isse ek chain ke roop me establish kiya jaa sake. Fir System ki shop se wo kuch secret dishes buy karega, taaki uski dishes koi bhi copy na kar sake. Wo endorsements karwaega, advertisements bhi. Sponsors dhundega taaki ye aur bada ban sake. Uske baad cricketers ki t shirts me apne business ka advertisment. Dheere dheere wo apne iss business ko ek franchise ke roop me establish kar dega. Aur finally, uski other branches dusre shehro me khulne lagengi. Aur business bas badhta hi jaega. Yahi tha Veer ka plan yadi roughly put kiya jaaye toh.
Nidhi ki problem ke baare me bhi usne soch liya tha ki kya karna hai. Ab toh bas jald hi Nidhi ko wo ek bada surprise dene waala tha.
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Iss dauraan, Suman aur Aabha mandir aayi hui thi bhagwaan jii ke darshan ke liye. Ghar me wahi dono hi sabse zyaada pooja paath waali aurate thi.
Ragini bhi karti thi, par Suman aur Aabha jitni nahi.
Jab dono darshan kar rahi thi, tab unhe nahi pata tha ki koi tha, jo unhe dekh ke unke hi baare me baat kar raha tha.
Aadmi 1 : Wo rahi dono!
Aadmi : 2 : Mein chorrunga nahi isse.
Aadmi 1 : Mein bhi... Hamaari kya haalat ho gayi thi inke kaaran. Sabak toh milega inhe. Kode se maarunga isse mein.
Aadmi 2 : Ab tak mene itni chooth dii thi, ab toh qaid karke rakhunga.
Jii haan, ye aapas me baat kar rahe dono log koi aur nahi balki, Pushpendra aur Amit the.
Bole toh, Suman aur Aabha ke pati.
Dono baap bete, jab se Suman aur Sonali ke kaaran hawalaat me jail me sadd ke aaye the. Tab se hi dono ko apni apni patniyo ki talaash thi. Suman toh bina koi suraag chorre nikal gayi thi. Par Suman se bas ek galti ho gayi thi.
Usne jaate samay ghar ki chaavi pados me de dii thi. Aur ye khabar chorr dii thi ki wo kis sheher me palaayan kar rahi hai. Aur uss kaaran, Pushpendra ne saari baatein waha se pata laga lii thi. Apne hi padosiyo ko darra dhamka ke Pushpendra ne ye pata laga liya tha ki iss waqt Suman Mumbai me thi.
Apne bete ke saath Mumbai aate hi usne Suman ki talaash shuru kar dii thi. Bina Suman ke guzaara kese hota warna uska? Wahi toh thi jo ghar sambhaalti thi. Ek prakaar se kaam waali bai thi wo uski. Pushpendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.
Jis gaay jesi aurat ko wo darra dhamka ke rakhta tha, wo usse waha jail me band karwa ke ghar se bhaagkar, yaha aisho araam ki zindagi jee rahi thi. Gussa toh aana hi tha.
Mumbai me aane ke baad bas, fir dono baap bete ne talaash shuru kar dii. Halaaki itne din guzar jaane par bhi unhe koi khabar na mili. Mumbai sheher koi hallua thodi tha. Itna bada sheher tha. Suman ko dhundna ghaas ke dherr me sui dhundne jaisa tha.
Par aaj jese kismat unka saath de gayi. Jab dono hi mandir ke baahar dukaan me chai pee rahe the tab hi unki nazar Suman aur Aabha par gayi jo mandir ke andar jaa rahi thi. Kismat ho toh aisi.
Ye dono baap bete bas intezaar kar rahe the Suman aur Aabha ke baahar aane ka.
Wahi yaha mandir ke andar, Suman aur Aabha darshan ke baad lautne ki taiyaari kar rahi thi. Iss baat se bekhabar, ki do darinde baahar hi unka intezaar kar rahe the.
Suman : Chale beta?
Aabha : Haan Maa jii!
Suman : Hmm!
Dono hi mandir se baahar nikli aur paidal hi ghar ki orr jaane lagi.
Par wo sab baato se pare ki unke peeche kaun do log aa rahe the, Suman aur Aabha apni baato me magan aage badh rahi thi.
Ek mod aisa aaya jo main road ke liye nikalta tha. Bas, ye mod society ka ek mod tha. Koi main road nahi. Yaani koi chahal pahal nahi. Suman aur Aabha
dono hi issi raaste se aayi thi kyuki ye seedha mandir ko nikalta tha. Aur waapas se issi raaste se jaati thi toh seedha main road me unhe auto rickshaw mil jaata tha. Ye raasta unke liye ekdum convenient tha.
Lekin abhi dono hi mudne ke baad kuch hi kadam chali hongi jab unke peeche se ek awaaz aayi.
"Bohut mauj ho rahi hai tum dono ki haan?"
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Suman ke shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Wo aur Aabha agle hi pal peeche mudi aur mudte hi dono ko ek zordaar jhatka laga. Jinse itne saalo ke baad badi mushqil se peecha churra ke wo apne gaav se bhaag ke aayi thi. Wahi do kameene unke saamne the. Unn par atyachaar karne waale ek baar fir, unhe dhundh chuke the.
Apne seene me haath rakh, Suman gehri saas lete hue ghabra ke peeche ho gayi.
Suman : Tummmm???
Pushpendra : Haan mein! Apne pati ko dekh kar tujhe toh khush hona chahiye na? Toh tu ghabra kyu rahi hai?
Aabha ki bhi haalat patli ho chuki thi. Apne pati Amit ko dekh uske chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha. Amit usse gusse me khaa jaane waali nazro se ghur raha tha. Uske haatho me jese khujli ho rahi thi kisi par haath saaf karne kii. Wo ghabraate hue Suman ke peeche jaa kar uska haath thaam lii.
Amit : Kyu bey saali? Apne pati ko chorr yaha bade sheher me mauj kar rahi hai haan? Tujhe rakh kisne liya? KISKE BISTAR GARAM KAR RAHI HAI TUUUU???
Uski uchi awaaz sunn jaha Aabha ghabra gayi toh wahi Suman bauhe sikodte hue virodh kii,
Suman : AMITTTT!!!
Pushpendra : Theek hi toh keh raha hai woh. Tum dono, akhir itne bade sheher me guzaara kaise kar lii? Khaali haath aayi thi tum dono toh. Uss ladke ke saath hi na? Toh uske saath reh rahi ho tum? RANDIYOOOOO!!!!
Wo achaanak hi zorr se chillaaya aur aage badh Suman ke haath ko zorr se pakad liya.
Suman : Aahhh!
Aabha jaldbaazi me apna phone nikaali aur usne seedha Veer ko phone dial kar diya.
Par jab tak wo kaan me phone laga paati, Amit aage badha,
Amit : Teri toh... HARAAMZAADI!!!!
Aur uske baal kheech uske haath se phone chhinaane laga.
Aabha : Aahhh! Chorro... Chorro... Maa~
Chheena jhapti me Aabha phone me koi jawaab na de paayi. Udhar Veer ne phone uthaaya hi tha aur usne bas itna hi suna tha,
"Chorro... Maa~"
Ki Amit ne Aabha ke haath se phone chhina kar seedha call cut kar diya.
Amit : Veer haan? Isse lagaayi thi phone? Bol kaun hai ye? BOLLLL!!!
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaahhhh!"
Aur usne ek zorr ka chaata seedha Aabha ke gulaabi gaal par de maara.
Aabha dard se cheenkhi aur tabhi dono baap bete ne milke unke muh par haath rakh unki awaaz dabaayi. Tabhi ek auto unke paas aake rukk gaya aur dono hi Suman aur Aabha ko usme daal wo sabhi waha se rafu chakkar ho gaye.
Samay 12 bajke 10 minute ho raha tha aur Veer uss waqt bas nikla hi tha exam deke jab usse Aabha ka call aaya tha.
Pushpendra aur Amit dono hi kayi mahino se Mumbai me guzaara kar rahe the. Toh zaahir sii baat thi ki unki kuch na kuch pehchaan toh bann hi gayi hogi aur unhone apna thikaana bhi dhoond hi liya hoga. Wo auto unki hi pehchaan ka tha.
Aur iss samay, wo aake ek chote se ghar ke baahar ruke hue the.
Suman aur Aabha raaste bhar virodh karti rahi, par kitna hi virodh kyu na kar le, mard ka shareerik bal unke aurato waale shareerik bal par bhaari pad raha tha. Ye toh qudrat ka nirmaan tha. Isme wo dono kya hi kar sakti thi. Majbooran, wo kuch na kar paayi siwae chhatpataane ke.
Unn dono ko andar laate hi zameen par patakte hue Pushpendra ne andar se kivaad band kar diye.
Pushpendra : Saali chinaar!!! Teri himmat kese hui haan? Mujhe dhoka dene kii? Mann toh kar raha hai tere tukde tukde kar du. Itna maaru ki tu kabhi mujhe dhoka dene ki soche bhi na. Par abhi nahi. Tujhe toh ghar le jaa kar acche se khabar lunga teri. Sonali kidhar hai? BOL!!!!
Par Suman kuch na boli. Uski aankh ekdum gusse se laal thi aur wo Pushpendra ko ghur rahi thi.
Ki tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaaahhhhh!"
Ek tezz tarraar jhaapad seedha aake Suman ke narm gaal par pada. Aur uska chehra ulti taraf ghum gaya.
Aabha : Maaaaa jiii!!!!
Aabha rote hue qareeb aayi aur Suman ko thaami.
Par abhi ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha, jis baat ka Suman ko darr tha, wahi ho gaya.
Pushpendra achanak hi apni shirt utaarne laga. Button pe button khulne lage aur Suman ke shareer ke ruye khade ho gaye ye dekh. Wo kaapne lagi. Aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Pushpendra : Boht dharm patni bann'ne ke shauk hai na tujhe. Abhi nikaalta hu teri saari garmi. Aaj aisa chodunga saali ko....
Pushpendra kya kar raha tha usse iss baat ki koi sharm nahi thi ab. Wo apne hi bete ke saamne apni patni ko chodne ki baat keh raha tha.
Suman idhar poori tarah se ghabraayi hui thi. Usse apni chinta nahi thi. Darr aur afsos tha. Darr iska ki yadi iss mard ne usse aaj chhua, toh woh apne maalik ko kya muh dikhaegi? Kya uske maalik usse firse sweekaar karenge? Yadi kar bhi liye toh kya unke dil me firse wahi sthaan rahega uske liye? Aur yadi sweekaar nahi kiye toh? Kya hoga uska? Kaha jaegi woh? Iss se accha toh marrna hi behtar tha.
Iss darinde ne yadi usse aaj loota, toh sabse saral upaay apni jaan dena hi tha. Maalik ke saamne apna loota hua jism dikhaane se accha toh ye hai ki wo marr hi jaaye. Haan, yahi sahi upaay tha. Iss se usse maalik dwaara dhutkaar jaane ka bhi darr nahi rahega. Yahi sahi nirnay tha. Khud ki jaan de dena.
Kuch aise hi sawaal aur vichaar uske mann me aa rahe the.
Suman ne tay kar liya tha. Yadi ye aadmi aaj uske jism ko bhogta hai, toh Suman apni jaan de degi.
Apni kameez utaar ke jese hi Pushpendra aage badha tabhi Amit ne usse roka,
Amit : Aise nahi Baba... Abhi nahi! Jis Veer ke ghar ye dono ruki hui thi. Mere khayaal se wo ameer hai. Uss se paisa aithate hai, fir yaha se rafu chakkar hoke ghar me inn dono ko dekhenge.
Pushpendra : Hmm? Baat toh sahi hai. Paisa aithna boht zaroori hai. Tangi ho gayi hai paiso kii. Par paise kaise hadapna hai?
Amit : Wahi toh dikkat hai. Sochna padega. Par pehle inhe baandh ke rakho. Ye bhaagne na paaye.
Aur forun hi dono Suman Aabha ko unn logo ne raassi se baandh diya.
Amit : Hmm! Ab theek hai.
Pushpendra : Ab batao! Kuch socha?
Amit : Hmm! Ek kaam kar sakte hai.
Pushpendra : Kya?
Amit : Inn dono se puchiye toh zara ki kya inn logo ne hamaare alaawa kisi aur ke saath raatein rangeen kii hai kya? BOL Aabha!!! BOL!!!
Pushpendra : Jawaab de Suman!!!
Toh Suman zorr se chillaayi,
Suman : HAAAAANN!! HAAN!! HARAAMI!! MENE APNE MAALIK KA BISTAR GARAM KIYA HAI, AUR HAMESHA KARTI RAHUNGI. TU KAUN HOTA HAI MUJHSE PUCHNE WAALA?!??
Suman ke baat maan'ne par Pushpendra ka khoon khaul utha. Uski biwi kisi aur se chudwa rahi thi? Upar se maalik keh rahi thi usse? Aaj toh pushpendra jaise kuch karne hi waala tha.
Amit : Toh bas fir... Hum ussi Veer ko bulaenge aur uss se ye kahenge ki yadi inhe sahi salaamat chaahte ho toh paise leke aao. Uske aane ke baad hum paise bhi hadpenge, uspe haath bhi saaf karenge aur fir yaha se bhaagenge bhi.
Idea sunn ke Pushpendra bhi haami bhara par uske alawa Suman ki aankho me bhi chamak thi. Usse jese apna upaay mil chuka tha. Wo tabhi zorr se hassne lagi,
Suman : Hahahahahaahaha~
Pushpendra : Hass kyu rahi hai tu???
Suman : Haha~ Hassu nahi toh kya karu? Accha hua jo tune mujhe nahi chhiya. Warna...
Pushpendra : Warna kya?
Suman : Warna tujhe ek phooti kodi na milti. Hahahaha~ Tujhe kya lagta hai? Mere maalik iss aurat ke shareer ke liye paagal baithe hai kya? Unke paas ek se ek haseenaaye hai. Mein kya hi hu unki? Yadi tune mujhe chhii liya hota, toh wo mujhe dhutkaar kar hata dete. Aur tujhe ghanta kuch milta. Unke paas ladkiyo ki kami nahi. Mujh jaisi daasi ki kya parvaah unhe?
Suman ki baat sunn, dono hi chhup reh gaye. Aur apne nirnay par garv karne lage. Accha hua jo unhone abhi tak Suman ke saath kuch nahi kiya tha. Kam se kam abhi unka plan qamyaab hone me koi toh umeed thi.
Suman idhar apna nichla honth dabaaye sarr jhukaaye baithi thi. Usne sab kuch jhooth bola tha.
Keval samay bachaane ke liye. Isse aur taalne ke liye. Iss aas me ki shayad, uske maalik jald hi aa jaenge.
Par... Par sawaal tha ki...
Kya Veer aaega? Kya uske maalik aaenge? Jaha usse thodi khushi thi ki kuch palo ke liye usne apne jism ko bacha liya tha toh wahi ek maayusi bhi thi. Wo nahi jaanti thi ki uske maalik ke dil me uski kya jagah hai. Kya wo apni iss tucch sii daasi ke liye yaha tak usse bachaane aaenge? Kahi inka plan qamyaab ho gaya toh? Fir kya ho gaya?
Yahi sab soch wo chinta me doob gayi.
Ki tabhi...
*THUUUUDDDDDDD*
Ek zorrdaar awaaz aayi aur jo kivaad band tha. Wo dhadalle se khula aur uska ek kivaad toh toot ke itni dur jaa ke gira ki saamne ki deewaar se hi bhidh gaya.
Darwaaze ke baahar...
Wo khada tha.
Veer!!!
Uske haath jeb me the. Chehre par koi expression nahi. Kyuki wo itna pissed off tha ki gussa bhi ab uske chehre se jaa chuka tha.
Aabha ke call me uski pukaar sunn ke hi Veer ko abhaas ho gaya tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur usne ek hi cheez kari,
ENEMY TRACKER!!!!
Basic enemy tracking skill ka use karte hi usse inn do namuno kii location mil chuki thi. Ye dono koi boss enemy nahi the, isliye araam se skill ne kaam kar diya.
Inn do chutiyo ki himmat kese hui uski aurato par haath lagaane kii. They were his belongings.
Veer bas yahi baat mann me chilla raha tha.
'Who dares to touch my property?'
Suman aur Aabha uski property thi. Uska poora haq tha unn dono par. Aur uske siwa koi aur unhe haath lagaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Thok ke na rakh dega unhe wo?
Veer ne bas ek nazar Suman aur Aabha par maari. Aur fir wo dheere dheere jeb me haath daale hi aage badha.
Kivaad ka tukda udte dekh, Amit thoda darr gaya. Par fir bhi wo khud ko sambhaalte hue aage badha,
"Teri toh...."
Par tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaaaakkkkkk*
*Sunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn*
Ek ulta kantaap Amit ki kanpati pe pada aur kaan hi sannaa gaya.
Kaan me awaaz goonjne lagi uske. Muh se ek do khoon se sane daant nikal kar toh gire hi, saath me wo khud bhi neeche dhadaam se gir pada. Aankhein bhi chaundhiya gayi thi uski. Taare dikhne lage the usse ek kantaap me.
Pushpendra, ye dekh gusse me aage badha aur hamla kiya.
Par... Par kya wo Veer ko hara paata? Uski yadi saat pushte bhi Veer par ek saath hamla karti toh bhi na hara paati usse. Toh khud akela Pushpendra toh jese mazaak tha Veer ke liye.
Veer ne uske tucch hamlo se araam se bachte hue ek ghusa uske pait me maara aur fir do jhaapad usse lagaate hue usse bhi gira diya.
Uske baad bhi Veer shaant nahi baitha. Muh se toh shaant hi tha par uske actions bol rahe the.
It was like... I won't speak. My actions will.
Aage badhte hue Veer ne Pushpendra ko pakda aur...
*Ding*
LIMBOOOOO!!!
*CRAAAAAAAACCKKKKKK*
"Eaaaarrrggghhhhhhhhhh"
Veer ne ek jhatke me Pushpendra ka ek haath marod diya. Aur kamre me uski dard bhari cheenkh goonj uthi. Haath kyu maroda? Kyuki usne apni Suman aur Aabha ke gaalo par unn thappad ke nishaan dekh liye the.
THEY DARED TO SLAP HIS WOMEN? THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY HANDS!!!
Aur agle hi pal,
*CRAAAAAAAAACKKKKKK*
"Aaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhhhhhhhh"
Pushpendra ka agla haath bhi gaya. Both of his limbs were twisted beyond recognition.
You think this was the end? NO!!!
*CRAAAAAAACKKKKKKKK*
*CRAAAAAAAACKKKKKKKKKKKK*
"AAAAARRRRRRGHHHHH"
Dono perr bhi mud chuke the Pushpendra ke.
Veer ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Bas yahi baat thi mann me...
THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY LEGS TOO!
Pushpendra ko poora apaahij chorr Veer Amit ki taraf badha, jo ghabraate hue reng ke peeche jaa raha tha aur fir...
Uss kamre me uski bhi dil dehla dene waali cheenkhe goonj uthi. Dono baap bete kisi kachre ke maafiq pade hue the zameen me. Kuch derr pehle ka unka josh, unka bal, unka guroor jese unki gaand me ghuss chuka tha ab.
Veer ne dono hi Aabha aur Suman ki rassiya kholi aur unhe azaad kiya.
Suman aur Aabha dono ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hui thi. Toh wahi thoda bhay bhi tha. Kya haalat kari thi Veer ne unke patiyo kii?
Cruel! Too cruel!!
Par yahi toh khaasiyat thi Veer kii. Suman ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hoke chamak rahi thi.
This was her master!!!
Na keval wo usse yaha bachaane aaya, balki itni jaldi aaya ki Suman ne khud iss baat ki umeed nahi kii thi. Upar se uska kroor vyavhaar. Saaf bata raha tha ki wo kitna gusse me tha. Kiske liye? Keval uske aur Aabha ke liye.
Veer ne dheere se dono ke gaalo par apna haath ferra toh Suman ne idhar apne maalik ka haath zorr se thaam liya.
Suman : Yadi aap na aate toh... Toh mein apni...
Kehte hue wo rukk gayi. Usse dhyaan aaya ki wo kya kehne jaa rahi thi. Apne mann ki baat kehne jaa rahi thi woh. Veer ko jese pata chal gaya. Iska abhaas hote hi uske raungte khade ho gaye.
Aap na aate toh mein apni? Apni kya? Veer ne forun hi puch liya,
Veer : Apni kya?
Suman : ....
Veer : Apni jaan de deti???
Suman ye sunn apni nazre neeche jhuka lii. Wo kese bhala apne maalik se nazre mila sakti thi? Par Veer ke hosh udd chuke the. Itne ke liye Suman apni jaan dene waali thi?
Usne forun hi Suman ki chin pakad uska chehra upar kiya aur usse dekha,
Veer : Ahinda se kabhi aisi baat na kehna aur na hi sochna samjhi? Ye mera order hai!
*Badump*
Suman ka dil jese ek dhadkan phaand gaya.
Aur agle hi pal,
Suman : Aaaahhhhh~
Suman Veer ki goad me thi. Uske gaal laal pad chuke the. Iss baar thappad se nahi, sharm se.
Aur abki baar Veer kechehre par ek narm expression tha.
Veer : Tum toh meri hi ho. Hai na? Fir tum dono hi aisa kyu sochti ho? Kuch bhi ho jaaye, mein tum dono ko kahi jaane nahi dunga. Aur na hi kuch hone dunga.
Jab Veer ne Suman ko utaara toh Suman ne Aabha ko peeche se dhakel ke Veer ki orr kar diya.
Veer : Hmm?? Ohhh~
Aur agle hi pal ek baar fir...
Aabha : Aaaahhhhh~
Iss baar Aabha Veer ki goad me thi. Sharm ke maare uske gaal surkh laal ho rahe the. Apne dono haatho se usne apna chehra chhupa liya aur mann hi mann apni Maa jii ko kosne lagi.
Aabha ko utaar ke Veer ne Suman ko dekha
Veer : Tum jaan'na chaahti thi na? Ki kyu mein tumhe wo sab cheeze seekhne ko keh raha tha? Toh suno???
Suman : Huhhh?
Veer : You'll be the leader. Tum leader bann'ne ke liye hi bani ho Suman!!!!
Suman : H-Huhhh?
Veer (smiles) : Mahila mandal!!!!
*Badump*
Ek baar fir Suman ke dil ko dhadkan tezz ho gayi aur wo bas phati aankho se apne maalik ko nihaarti hi reh gayi. Toh isliye...
Isliye wo sab cheezein uske maalik usse seekhne ko keh rahe the? Na keval wo usse ek daasi ke roop me dekhte the balki usse itna aage badhne ka mauka bhi de rahe the? Kaun deta hai apni daasiyo ko itni chooth?
Suman ko jese iss baat ki haami milte hi rona aa gaya. Aaj pehli baar apne poore jeevan kaal me wo itna emotional hui thi. Matlab uske maalik shuru se hi usse aage badhaane ke baare me soch rahe the? Iss se zyaada uske liye Khushi ki baat kya ho sakti thi?
Sach baat toh ye thi ki, jis din Veer ne Suman ko Vivek ke maata pita ko lataadte hue dekha tha. Ki kese usne harr tarq ke jawaab kitni asaani se de diye the. Uss din hi Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki...
SUMAN WAS BORN TO LEAD!!!
Dusre shabdo me, wo uska ek aisa hathiyaar ban sakti thi jo samaaj me acche se acche logo ki vaat lagaane me saksham ho.
Aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[You have broken Suman's affection meter.]
[Suman's favourability has exceeded 100]
*Ding*
[Suman's favourability : 126]
'Huhhhhh? Ye???'
Veer ko jhatka toh laga tha. Par abhi ek aur zaroori kaam baaki tha.
Usne seedha Balhaar ko phone lagaaya,
Veer : Hello!
Balhaar : Haan!
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
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Amazing superb updateUpdate - 73 ~ Who dares to touch my property?Ab tak...
I'll show him... This time!
Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.
Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.
Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...
After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.
"Right Veer?"
"Hmm? Kya?"
"Fufu~ Nothing!"
Ab aage...
Veer jo adhiktar anjaane me Ragini ko aksar sharmaane par majboor kar deta tha, kal Ragini ne hi uske hosh uda diye the.
Wo badla hua rang roop, uska bold style, chote kapde, aur baatein karte waqt aankho hi aankho me dekhna aur beech beech me uska flirt karna.
Wo toh jese koi aur hi ladki bann gayi thi. Ekdum se aisa badlaav aa gaya tha usme.
Veer, khud alpha male tha. Pehel wo karta tha inn maamlo me. Wo sharmaane waalo me se nahi tha. Par kal halaat hi kuch aise the. Jis bhabhi ko wo hamesha saree me dekhte hue aaya tha, wo kal achanak se chote kapdo me uske itna qareeb aa gayi thi ki uske antarmann me halchal sii mach gayi thi.
Kal raat ke unn moments ke baad se Veer ko Ragini ki favourability me bhi significant rise dekhne ko mila tha. 70 se seedha 80 par aa chuki thi Ragini ki favourability.
Aur yahi baat Veer ko chinta me daal rahi thi. Kal Ragini ke haav bhaav, bilkul alag hi the. Aise the jese wo maano Veer ki ardhaangini ho.
Mann me bhala kaun khush nahi hoga ki aapki bhabhi aapke qareeb rahe. Par asal me? Kya aap sabki nazro ka saamna kar paenge jab aapki bhabhi aise aapke qareeb aa jaaye? Shayad nahi!
Veer ka bhi yahi haal tha. Ragini was getting too close. Ye abnormal lagne laga tha ab usse.
Agle din bhi wahi hua, Veer next paper ke liye jab ready hoke jaa raha tha toh, Ragini uski tie baandhti, ekdum paas me uske khade hoke. Usse rumaal deti rakhne ko jo neatly folded hota tha. Uske socks nikaal ke rakhti thi. Watch se leke water bottle tak. Sab cheez wo prepare karke rakhti Veer ke liye.
Anjaane me Ragini jo kaam Vivek ke liye karti thi wahi kaam wo ab apne hi devar, Veer ke liye karne lagi thi. Aur inn saari harqato ko Suman bade hi dhyaan se gaur karti thi. Uske chehre par bas ek halki muskaan saji hoti thi ye dekhte waqt.
Aaj bhi Veer gaya hua tha apne last paper ke liye college. Ragini aaj uske liye special khaana banaane me lagi hui thi. Divorce ki formalities bhi kaafi kuch complete ho chuki thi. Aur wo ab poori tarah se azaad pankshi ki tarah thi.
Suman aur Aabha mandir gayi hui thi aaj. Rahi baat Sonali ki, toh wo Veer ka food truck run karti thi. Karan ki madad se Veer ne ek driver aur ek Sonali ke saath kaam karne ke liye female employee hire kar lii thi.
Wo driver food truck ko drive karta tha aur Sonali, apni new employee ke saath milkar cook karti thi. Veer ne usse apni saari dishes samjha dii thi. Dhandha waapas se sahi chalne laga tha.
Veer sahi tha. System ne usse Sonali ko business me include karne ka mission shayad isliye diya tha. System keval usse hi nahi, uske aas paas ke logo ko bhi aage badha raha tha indirectly. Kyuki, future me yahi sab toh uski madad karenge.
Veer jaanta tha ki Sonali business sambhal toh legi par abhi iss chef on wheels ko aur hit banaane ki zaroorat thi. Aur uski planning bhi Veer kar chuka tha.
Normal food truck se, wo pehle number of food trucks badhaega. Taaki isse ek chain ke roop me establish kiya jaa sake. Fir System ki shop se wo kuch secret dishes buy karega, taaki uski dishes koi bhi copy na kar sake. Wo endorsements karwaega, advertisements bhi. Sponsors dhundega taaki ye aur bada ban sake. Uske baad cricketers ki t shirts me apne business ka advertisment. Dheere dheere wo apne iss business ko ek franchise ke roop me establish kar dega. Aur finally, uski other branches dusre shehro me khulne lagengi. Aur business bas badhta hi jaega. Yahi tha Veer ka plan yadi roughly put kiya jaaye toh.
Nidhi ki problem ke baare me bhi usne soch liya tha ki kya karna hai. Ab toh bas jald hi Nidhi ko wo ek bada surprise dene waala tha.
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Iss dauraan, Suman aur Aabha mandir aayi hui thi bhagwaan jii ke darshan ke liye. Ghar me wahi dono hi sabse zyaada pooja paath waali aurate thi.
Ragini bhi karti thi, par Suman aur Aabha jitni nahi.
Jab dono darshan kar rahi thi, tab unhe nahi pata tha ki koi tha, jo unhe dekh ke unke hi baare me baat kar raha tha.
Aadmi 1 : Wo rahi dono!
Aadmi : 2 : Mein chorrunga nahi isse.
Aadmi 1 : Mein bhi... Hamaari kya haalat ho gayi thi inke kaaran. Sabak toh milega inhe. Kode se maarunga isse mein.
Aadmi 2 : Ab tak mene itni chooth dii thi, ab toh qaid karke rakhunga.
Jii haan, ye aapas me baat kar rahe dono log koi aur nahi balki, Pushpendra aur Amit the.
Bole toh, Suman aur Aabha ke pati.
Dono baap bete, jab se Suman aur Sonali ke kaaran hawalaat me jail me sadd ke aaye the. Tab se hi dono ko apni apni patniyo ki talaash thi. Suman toh bina koi suraag chorre nikal gayi thi. Par Suman se bas ek galti ho gayi thi.
Usne jaate samay ghar ki chaavi pados me de dii thi. Aur ye khabar chorr dii thi ki wo kis sheher me palaayan kar rahi hai. Aur uss kaaran, Pushpendra ne saari baatein waha se pata laga lii thi. Apne hi padosiyo ko darra dhamka ke Pushpendra ne ye pata laga liya tha ki iss waqt Suman Mumbai me thi.
Apne bete ke saath Mumbai aate hi usne Suman ki talaash shuru kar dii thi. Bina Suman ke guzaara kese hota warna uska? Wahi toh thi jo ghar sambhaalti thi. Ek prakaar se kaam waali bai thi wo uski. Pushpendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.
Jis gaay jesi aurat ko wo darra dhamka ke rakhta tha, wo usse waha jail me band karwa ke ghar se bhaagkar, yaha aisho araam ki zindagi jee rahi thi. Gussa toh aana hi tha.
Mumbai me aane ke baad bas, fir dono baap bete ne talaash shuru kar dii. Halaaki itne din guzar jaane par bhi unhe koi khabar na mili. Mumbai sheher koi hallua thodi tha. Itna bada sheher tha. Suman ko dhundna ghaas ke dherr me sui dhundne jaisa tha.
Par aaj jese kismat unka saath de gayi. Jab dono hi mandir ke baahar dukaan me chai pee rahe the tab hi unki nazar Suman aur Aabha par gayi jo mandir ke andar jaa rahi thi. Kismat ho toh aisi.
Ye dono baap bete bas intezaar kar rahe the Suman aur Aabha ke baahar aane ka.
Wahi yaha mandir ke andar, Suman aur Aabha darshan ke baad lautne ki taiyaari kar rahi thi. Iss baat se bekhabar, ki do darinde baahar hi unka intezaar kar rahe the.
Suman : Chale beta?
Aabha : Haan Maa jii!
Suman : Hmm!
Dono hi mandir se baahar nikli aur paidal hi ghar ki orr jaane lagi.
Par wo sab baato se pare ki unke peeche kaun do log aa rahe the, Suman aur Aabha apni baato me magan aage badh rahi thi.
Ek mod aisa aaya jo main road ke liye nikalta tha. Bas, ye mod society ka ek mod tha. Koi main road nahi. Yaani koi chahal pahal nahi. Suman aur Aabha
dono hi issi raaste se aayi thi kyuki ye seedha mandir ko nikalta tha. Aur waapas se issi raaste se jaati thi toh seedha main road me unhe auto rickshaw mil jaata tha. Ye raasta unke liye ekdum convenient tha.
Lekin abhi dono hi mudne ke baad kuch hi kadam chali hongi jab unke peeche se ek awaaz aayi.
"Bohut mauj ho rahi hai tum dono ki haan?"
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Suman ke shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Wo aur Aabha agle hi pal peeche mudi aur mudte hi dono ko ek zordaar jhatka laga. Jinse itne saalo ke baad badi mushqil se peecha churra ke wo apne gaav se bhaag ke aayi thi. Wahi do kameene unke saamne the. Unn par atyachaar karne waale ek baar fir, unhe dhundh chuke the.
Apne seene me haath rakh, Suman gehri saas lete hue ghabra ke peeche ho gayi.
Suman : Tummmm???
Pushpendra : Haan mein! Apne pati ko dekh kar tujhe toh khush hona chahiye na? Toh tu ghabra kyu rahi hai?
Aabha ki bhi haalat patli ho chuki thi. Apne pati Amit ko dekh uske chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha. Amit usse gusse me khaa jaane waali nazro se ghur raha tha. Uske haatho me jese khujli ho rahi thi kisi par haath saaf karne kii. Wo ghabraate hue Suman ke peeche jaa kar uska haath thaam lii.
Amit : Kyu bey saali? Apne pati ko chorr yaha bade sheher me mauj kar rahi hai haan? Tujhe rakh kisne liya? KISKE BISTAR GARAM KAR RAHI HAI TUUUU???
Uski uchi awaaz sunn jaha Aabha ghabra gayi toh wahi Suman bauhe sikodte hue virodh kii,
Suman : AMITTTT!!!
Pushpendra : Theek hi toh keh raha hai woh. Tum dono, akhir itne bade sheher me guzaara kaise kar lii? Khaali haath aayi thi tum dono toh. Uss ladke ke saath hi na? Toh uske saath reh rahi ho tum? RANDIYOOOOO!!!!
Wo achaanak hi zorr se chillaaya aur aage badh Suman ke haath ko zorr se pakad liya.
Suman : Aahhh!
Aabha jaldbaazi me apna phone nikaali aur usne seedha Veer ko phone dial kar diya.
Par jab tak wo kaan me phone laga paati, Amit aage badha,
Amit : Teri toh... HARAAMZAADI!!!!
Aur uske baal kheech uske haath se phone chhinaane laga.
Aabha : Aahhh! Chorro... Chorro... Maa~
Chheena jhapti me Aabha phone me koi jawaab na de paayi. Udhar Veer ne phone uthaaya hi tha aur usne bas itna hi suna tha,
"Chorro... Maa~"
Ki Amit ne Aabha ke haath se phone chhina kar seedha call cut kar diya.
Amit : Veer haan? Isse lagaayi thi phone? Bol kaun hai ye? BOLLLL!!!
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaahhhh!"
Aur usne ek zorr ka chaata seedha Aabha ke gulaabi gaal par de maara.
Aabha dard se cheenkhi aur tabhi dono baap bete ne milke unke muh par haath rakh unki awaaz dabaayi. Tabhi ek auto unke paas aake rukk gaya aur dono hi Suman aur Aabha ko usme daal wo sabhi waha se rafu chakkar ho gaye.
Samay 12 bajke 10 minute ho raha tha aur Veer uss waqt bas nikla hi tha exam deke jab usse Aabha ka call aaya tha.
Pushpendra aur Amit dono hi kayi mahino se Mumbai me guzaara kar rahe the. Toh zaahir sii baat thi ki unki kuch na kuch pehchaan toh bann hi gayi hogi aur unhone apna thikaana bhi dhoond hi liya hoga. Wo auto unki hi pehchaan ka tha.
Aur iss samay, wo aake ek chote se ghar ke baahar ruke hue the.
Suman aur Aabha raaste bhar virodh karti rahi, par kitna hi virodh kyu na kar le, mard ka shareerik bal unke aurato waale shareerik bal par bhaari pad raha tha. Ye toh qudrat ka nirmaan tha. Isme wo dono kya hi kar sakti thi. Majbooran, wo kuch na kar paayi siwae chhatpataane ke.
Unn dono ko andar laate hi zameen par patakte hue Pushpendra ne andar se kivaad band kar diye.
Pushpendra : Saali chinaar!!! Teri himmat kese hui haan? Mujhe dhoka dene kii? Mann toh kar raha hai tere tukde tukde kar du. Itna maaru ki tu kabhi mujhe dhoka dene ki soche bhi na. Par abhi nahi. Tujhe toh ghar le jaa kar acche se khabar lunga teri. Sonali kidhar hai? BOL!!!!
Par Suman kuch na boli. Uski aankh ekdum gusse se laal thi aur wo Pushpendra ko ghur rahi thi.
Ki tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaaahhhhh!"
Ek tezz tarraar jhaapad seedha aake Suman ke narm gaal par pada. Aur uska chehra ulti taraf ghum gaya.
Aabha : Maaaaa jiii!!!!
Aabha rote hue qareeb aayi aur Suman ko thaami.
Par abhi ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha, jis baat ka Suman ko darr tha, wahi ho gaya.
Pushpendra achanak hi apni shirt utaarne laga. Button pe button khulne lage aur Suman ke shareer ke ruye khade ho gaye ye dekh. Wo kaapne lagi. Aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Pushpendra : Boht dharm patni bann'ne ke shauk hai na tujhe. Abhi nikaalta hu teri saari garmi. Aaj aisa chodunga saali ko....
Pushpendra kya kar raha tha usse iss baat ki koi sharm nahi thi ab. Wo apne hi bete ke saamne apni patni ko chodne ki baat keh raha tha.
Suman idhar poori tarah se ghabraayi hui thi. Usse apni chinta nahi thi. Darr aur afsos tha. Darr iska ki yadi iss mard ne usse aaj chhua, toh woh apne maalik ko kya muh dikhaegi? Kya uske maalik usse firse sweekaar karenge? Yadi kar bhi liye toh kya unke dil me firse wahi sthaan rahega uske liye? Aur yadi sweekaar nahi kiye toh? Kya hoga uska? Kaha jaegi woh? Iss se accha toh marrna hi behtar tha.
Iss darinde ne yadi usse aaj loota, toh sabse saral upaay apni jaan dena hi tha. Maalik ke saamne apna loota hua jism dikhaane se accha toh ye hai ki wo marr hi jaaye. Haan, yahi sahi upaay tha. Iss se usse maalik dwaara dhutkaar jaane ka bhi darr nahi rahega. Yahi sahi nirnay tha. Khud ki jaan de dena.
Kuch aise hi sawaal aur vichaar uske mann me aa rahe the.
Suman ne tay kar liya tha. Yadi ye aadmi aaj uske jism ko bhogta hai, toh Suman apni jaan de degi.
Apni kameez utaar ke jese hi Pushpendra aage badha tabhi Amit ne usse roka,
Amit : Aise nahi Baba... Abhi nahi! Jis Veer ke ghar ye dono ruki hui thi. Mere khayaal se wo ameer hai. Uss se paisa aithate hai, fir yaha se rafu chakkar hoke ghar me inn dono ko dekhenge.
Pushpendra : Hmm? Baat toh sahi hai. Paisa aithna boht zaroori hai. Tangi ho gayi hai paiso kii. Par paise kaise hadapna hai?
Amit : Wahi toh dikkat hai. Sochna padega. Par pehle inhe baandh ke rakho. Ye bhaagne na paaye.
Aur forun hi dono Suman Aabha ko unn logo ne raassi se baandh diya.
Amit : Hmm! Ab theek hai.
Pushpendra : Ab batao! Kuch socha?
Amit : Hmm! Ek kaam kar sakte hai.
Pushpendra : Kya?
Amit : Inn dono se puchiye toh zara ki kya inn logo ne hamaare alaawa kisi aur ke saath raatein rangeen kii hai kya? BOL Aabha!!! BOL!!!
Pushpendra : Jawaab de Suman!!!
Toh Suman zorr se chillaayi,
Suman : HAAAAANN!! HAAN!! HARAAMI!! MENE APNE MAALIK KA BISTAR GARAM KIYA HAI, AUR HAMESHA KARTI RAHUNGI. TU KAUN HOTA HAI MUJHSE PUCHNE WAALA?!??
Suman ke baat maan'ne par Pushpendra ka khoon khaul utha. Uski biwi kisi aur se chudwa rahi thi? Upar se maalik keh rahi thi usse? Aaj toh pushpendra jaise kuch karne hi waala tha.
Amit : Toh bas fir... Hum ussi Veer ko bulaenge aur uss se ye kahenge ki yadi inhe sahi salaamat chaahte ho toh paise leke aao. Uske aane ke baad hum paise bhi hadpenge, uspe haath bhi saaf karenge aur fir yaha se bhaagenge bhi.
Idea sunn ke Pushpendra bhi haami bhara par uske alawa Suman ki aankho me bhi chamak thi. Usse jese apna upaay mil chuka tha. Wo tabhi zorr se hassne lagi,
Suman : Hahahahahaahaha~
Pushpendra : Hass kyu rahi hai tu???
Suman : Haha~ Hassu nahi toh kya karu? Accha hua jo tune mujhe nahi chhiya. Warna...
Pushpendra : Warna kya?
Suman : Warna tujhe ek phooti kodi na milti. Hahahaha~ Tujhe kya lagta hai? Mere maalik iss aurat ke shareer ke liye paagal baithe hai kya? Unke paas ek se ek haseenaaye hai. Mein kya hi hu unki? Yadi tune mujhe chhii liya hota, toh wo mujhe dhutkaar kar hata dete. Aur tujhe ghanta kuch milta. Unke paas ladkiyo ki kami nahi. Mujh jaisi daasi ki kya parvaah unhe?
Suman ki baat sunn, dono hi chhup reh gaye. Aur apne nirnay par garv karne lage. Accha hua jo unhone abhi tak Suman ke saath kuch nahi kiya tha. Kam se kam abhi unka plan qamyaab hone me koi toh umeed thi.
Suman idhar apna nichla honth dabaaye sarr jhukaaye baithi thi. Usne sab kuch jhooth bola tha.
Keval samay bachaane ke liye. Isse aur taalne ke liye. Iss aas me ki shayad, uske maalik jald hi aa jaenge.
Par... Par sawaal tha ki...
Kya Veer aaega? Kya uske maalik aaenge? Jaha usse thodi khushi thi ki kuch palo ke liye usne apne jism ko bacha liya tha toh wahi ek maayusi bhi thi. Wo nahi jaanti thi ki uske maalik ke dil me uski kya jagah hai. Kya wo apni iss tucch sii daasi ke liye yaha tak usse bachaane aaenge? Kahi inka plan qamyaab ho gaya toh? Fir kya ho gaya?
Yahi sab soch wo chinta me doob gayi.
Ki tabhi...
*THUUUUDDDDDDD*
Ek zorrdaar awaaz aayi aur jo kivaad band tha. Wo dhadalle se khula aur uska ek kivaad toh toot ke itni dur jaa ke gira ki saamne ki deewaar se hi bhidh gaya.
Darwaaze ke baahar...
Wo khada tha.
Veer!!!
Uske haath jeb me the. Chehre par koi expression nahi. Kyuki wo itna pissed off tha ki gussa bhi ab uske chehre se jaa chuka tha.
Aabha ke call me uski pukaar sunn ke hi Veer ko abhaas ho gaya tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur usne ek hi cheez kari,
ENEMY TRACKER!!!!
Basic enemy tracking skill ka use karte hi usse inn do namuno kii location mil chuki thi. Ye dono koi boss enemy nahi the, isliye araam se skill ne kaam kar diya.
Inn do chutiyo ki himmat kese hui uski aurato par haath lagaane kii. They were his belongings.
Veer bas yahi baat mann me chilla raha tha.
'Who dares to touch my property?'
Suman aur Aabha uski property thi. Uska poora haq tha unn dono par. Aur uske siwa koi aur unhe haath lagaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Thok ke na rakh dega unhe wo?
Veer ne bas ek nazar Suman aur Aabha par maari. Aur fir wo dheere dheere jeb me haath daale hi aage badha.
Kivaad ka tukda udte dekh, Amit thoda darr gaya. Par fir bhi wo khud ko sambhaalte hue aage badha,
"Teri toh...."
Par tabhi...
*Chataaaaaaaaaakkkkkk*
*Sunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn*
Ek ulta kantaap Amit ki kanpati pe pada aur kaan hi sannaa gaya.
Kaan me awaaz goonjne lagi uske. Muh se ek do khoon se sane daant nikal kar toh gire hi, saath me wo khud bhi neeche dhadaam se gir pada. Aankhein bhi chaundhiya gayi thi uski. Taare dikhne lage the usse ek kantaap me.
Pushpendra, ye dekh gusse me aage badha aur hamla kiya.
Par... Par kya wo Veer ko hara paata? Uski yadi saat pushte bhi Veer par ek saath hamla karti toh bhi na hara paati usse. Toh khud akela Pushpendra toh jese mazaak tha Veer ke liye.
Veer ne uske tucch hamlo se araam se bachte hue ek ghusa uske pait me maara aur fir do jhaapad usse lagaate hue usse bhi gira diya.
Uske baad bhi Veer shaant nahi baitha. Muh se toh shaant hi tha par uske actions bol rahe the.
It was like... I won't speak. My actions will.
Aage badhte hue Veer ne Pushpendra ko pakda aur...
*Ding*
LIMBOOOOO!!!
*CRAAAAAAAACCKKKKKK*
"Eaaaarrrggghhhhhhhhhh"
Veer ne ek jhatke me Pushpendra ka ek haath marod diya. Aur kamre me uski dard bhari cheenkh goonj uthi. Haath kyu maroda? Kyuki usne apni Suman aur Aabha ke gaalo par unn thappad ke nishaan dekh liye the.
THEY DARED TO SLAP HIS WOMEN? THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY HANDS!!!
Aur agle hi pal,
*CRAAAAAAAAACKKKKKK*
"Aaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhhhhhhhh"
Pushpendra ka agla haath bhi gaya. Both of his limbs were twisted beyond recognition.
You think this was the end? NO!!!
*CRAAAAAAACKKKKKKKK*
*CRAAAAAAAACKKKKKKKKKKKK*
"AAAAARRRRRRGHHHHH"
Dono perr bhi mud chuke the Pushpendra ke.
Veer ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Bas yahi baat thi mann me...
THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY LEGS TOO!
Pushpendra ko poora apaahij chorr Veer Amit ki taraf badha, jo ghabraate hue reng ke peeche jaa raha tha aur fir...
Uss kamre me uski bhi dil dehla dene waali cheenkhe goonj uthi. Dono baap bete kisi kachre ke maafiq pade hue the zameen me. Kuch derr pehle ka unka josh, unka bal, unka guroor jese unki gaand me ghuss chuka tha ab.
Veer ne dono hi Aabha aur Suman ki rassiya kholi aur unhe azaad kiya.
Suman aur Aabha dono ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hui thi. Toh wahi thoda bhay bhi tha. Kya haalat kari thi Veer ne unke patiyo kii?
Cruel! Too cruel!!
Par yahi toh khaasiyat thi Veer kii. Suman ki aankhein aasuo se bhari hoke chamak rahi thi.
This was her master!!!
Na keval wo usse yaha bachaane aaya, balki itni jaldi aaya ki Suman ne khud iss baat ki umeed nahi kii thi. Upar se uska kroor vyavhaar. Saaf bata raha tha ki wo kitna gusse me tha. Kiske liye? Keval uske aur Aabha ke liye.
Veer ne dheere se dono ke gaalo par apna haath ferra toh Suman ne idhar apne maalik ka haath zorr se thaam liya.
Suman : Yadi aap na aate toh... Toh mein apni...
Kehte hue wo rukk gayi. Usse dhyaan aaya ki wo kya kehne jaa rahi thi. Apne mann ki baat kehne jaa rahi thi woh. Veer ko jese pata chal gaya. Iska abhaas hote hi uske raungte khade ho gaye.
Aap na aate toh mein apni? Apni kya? Veer ne forun hi puch liya,
Veer : Apni kya?
Suman : ....
Veer : Apni jaan de deti???
Suman ye sunn apni nazre neeche jhuka lii. Wo kese bhala apne maalik se nazre mila sakti thi? Par Veer ke hosh udd chuke the. Itne ke liye Suman apni jaan dene waali thi?
Usne forun hi Suman ki chin pakad uska chehra upar kiya aur usse dekha,
Veer : Ahinda se kabhi aisi baat na kehna aur na hi sochna samjhi? Ye mera order hai!
*Badump*
Suman ka dil jese ek dhadkan phaand gaya.
Aur agle hi pal,
Suman : Aaaahhhhh~
Suman Veer ki goad me thi. Uske gaal laal pad chuke the. Iss baar thappad se nahi, sharm se.
Aur abki baar Veer ke chehre par ek narm expression tha.
Veer : Tum toh meri hi ho. Hai na? Fir tum dono hi aisa kyu sochti ho? Kuch bhi ho jaaye, mein tum dono ko kahi jaane nahi dunga. Aur na hi kuch hone dunga.
Jab Veer ne Suman ko utaara toh Suman ne Aabha ko peeche se dhakel ke Veer ki orr kar diya.
Veer : Hmm?? Ohhh~
Aur agle hi pal ek baar fir...
Aabha : Aaaahhhhh~
Iss baar Aabha Veer ki goad me thi. Sharm ke maare uske gaal surkh laal ho rahe the. Apne dono haatho se usne apna chehra chhupa liya aur mann hi mann apni Maa jii ko kosne lagi.
Aabha ko utaar ke Veer ne Suman ko dekha
Veer : Tum jaan'na chaahti thi na? Ki kyu mein tumhe wo sab cheeze seekhne ko keh raha tha? Toh suno???
Suman : Huhhh?
Veer : You'll be the leader. Tum leader bann'ne ke liye hi bani ho Suman!!!!
Suman : H-Huhhh?
Veer (smiles) : Mahila mandal!!!!
*Badump*
Ek baar fir Suman ke dil ko dhadkan tezz ho gayi aur wo bas phati aankho se apne maalik ko nihaarti hi reh gayi. Toh isliye...
Isliye wo sab cheezein uske maalik usse seekhne ko keh rahe the? Na keval wo usse ek daasi ke roop me dekhte the balki usse itna aage badhne ka mauka bhi de rahe the? Kaun deta hai apni daasiyo ko itni chooth?
Suman ko jese iss baat ki haami milte hi rona aa gaya. Aaj pehli baar apne poore jeevan kaal me wo itna emotional hui thi. Matlab uske maalik shuru se hi usse aage badhaane ke baare me soch rahe the? Iss se zyaada uske liye Khushi ki baat kya ho sakti thi?
Sach baat toh ye thi ki, jis din Veer ne Suman ko Vivek ke maata pita ko lataadte hue dekha tha. Ki kese usne harr tarq ke jawaab kitni asaani se de diye the. Uss din hi Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki...
SUMAN WAS BORN TO LEAD!!!
Dusre shabdo me, wo uska ek aisa hathiyaar ban sakti thi jo samaaj me acche se acche logo ki vaat lagaane me saksham ho.
Aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[You have broken Suman's affection meter.]
[Suman's favourability has exceeded 100]
*Ding*
[Suman's favourability : 126]
'Huhhhhh? Ye???'
Veer ko jhatka toh laga tha. Par abhi ek aur zaroori kaam baaki tha.
Usne seedha Balhaar ko phone lagaaya,
Veer : Hello!
Balhaar : Haan!
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
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Muh ki khaani padi usse.
Yeah!!!bechara pranjal gift bhi theek se de nahi paya dadaji ko aur uske baad puri party washroom me hi gujar di..
aur ek jhatka veer aur arohi ko bhi laga gaal pe kiss karne ki jagah hontho pe kiss ho gaya
thanks btw!Thanks!
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Boht boht Dhanyavaad!
Thread me aapka swaagat hai!
Bane rahiyega!
Boht boht Dhanyavaad Sanju bhai!
Bas ye samajh lijiye ki fights ki quality kahani ke jese badhti jaegi.
Ye toh aage hi pata lag paega.
Vivek already settled hai. Usne na keval Ragini ko dukh pohuchaaya balki jaydaad ke samay apne bichre bhai ka zikr bhi nahi kiya. Manorath, ne isliye usse kuch na diya. Not to mention ki Karunesh ne pehle hi Vivek par itna paisa kharch kiya hua hai. Jisme se kaafi Paisa Manorath dwaara diya gaya hua tha. So, he got nothing. Ragini jab ghar ki sadasya hi nahi hona chaahti, toh aise maamle me uska naam aage rakhna bhi theek nahi. Yahi kaaran tha ki dono hi out the.
Dhanyavaad!
Koi bhi teesra jud sakta hai iss waqt. Ragini bhi, ya even Sonali...
Bilkul, Intermediate Martial Arts skill toh ladne ke liye hai.
Absolute chef, uski food dishes banaane me madad karti hai.
Limbo, skill se wo kisi ke bhi haath perr, tod marod sakta hai aur fir Veer ke alaawa unn ango ko koi aur theek nahi kar sakta.
Basic enemy tracker - jesa ki naam hai. Sadhaaran Dushmano ko track karne ke liye upyog hoti hai.
Hawkeye - Pehli aur ekmaatr Diamond tier skill. Veer ka nishaana kabhi nahi chookega iske hone se.
Basic driving skills - Jesa naam wesa kaam. Driving ke liye use hoti hai.
Hope ab sab clear ho gaya hoga.
Boht boht Dhanyavaad...
Bane rahiyega!