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Well, jab Karan ko pata lagega ki Veer ne already kaam daal diya hai. Wo dekhne laayak hoga. Plus, uska ye dekhna ki uski behan usse bhaav kam de aur Veer ko zyaada? It will be interesting. His reactions will be worth reading.
Mein hi late ho jaata hu replies dene me.
Well, jab Karan ko pata lagega ki Veer ne already kaam daal diya hai. Wo dekhne laayak hoga. Plus, uska ye dekhna ki uski behan usse bhaav kam de aur Veer ko zyaada? It will be interesting. His reactions will be worth reading.
Toh Sonia aur Kaera luddi soot dengi Veer ki.
Agreed!
Ye aage bataaya jaaega.
Ohhh! Nice speculation!
Ohhh~ Noice! Par keep guessing.
No spoilers!
Naam special hai. Boht jald surprise milne waala hai ju logo ko, as I said.
Hmm! I love when people guess and put their theories. It's the most exciting part for me when reading reviews.
His intelligence has increased. It's not mentioned in the story. But, Veer ka intelligence iss waqt, Slogan se zyaada tha.
Bilkul!!!
Kya kahe? Ki mein tumhara asli baap hu Veer? Nice thinking by the way. You thought of so many possibilities which others usually don't. You are a very keen reader.
The best thing about you is, you can grasp the emotional scenes and the subtle activities of characters easily. Props to you. And thanks for being such a supportive reader. Ju toh Akhir kyu se saath ho. Aasha hai aage bhi bane rahoge.
Also, Death Kiñg bhi boht hi keen reader hai. Ju ke revos alag level ke hote hai.
Keep supporting guys!
Mera bhi toh dhyaan rakho bhai!Thanks!
Mera bhi toh dhyaan rakho bhai!
Yadi aise hi mega updates dete raha toh mein na bachunga. Kabhi aisa bhi bol diya karo ju log ki bhai, aaj hum readers ki taraf se aapko chutti. Jao, jee lo apni Zindagi. Kitna accha lagega mujhe. Nahi?
Thanks guys!
Ye spoiler hai. Ye kahani padh ke hi pata lagega. So, keep reading.
Thanks guys!
Bhai! Because wo zaroori tha. Try reading next update if you haven't. You will get your answer.
Dhanyavaad bhailog!
Great knowledgeSome views or theories on Criminals
1. Born Criminals or Criminal Atavism: Cesare Lombroso's theory of anthropological criminology essentially stated that criminality was inherited, and that someone "born criminal" could be identified by physical (congenital) defects, which confirmed a criminal as savage or atavistic. For Slogan it is not true.
2. Situational Criminals: Another theory tells that no one is born criminal. But the situations or environments which a person faces during his childhood or early adulthood makes or forces one to initiate criminal activities and makes him or her a criminal in due course. Slogan may be classified into this category.
3. Samaritan Criminals: Some people may do crime or take law into their hand to help others (e.g. who loot the reach to help poor people). I think Veer is becoming one......
Finally i am saying myself
I know right!?Too Emotional To Read.
True that. Jab insaan tootata hai toh wo kuch na kuch kho deta hai.Slogan : -
Kya Galti thi uski.. jo uski beti ko usse chheen liya gaya, Kitna Khush tha wo apne jeewan me.. Ek din sab kuch khatm ho gaya..
Biwi na rahi , bachhi na rahi.. kya bcha uski jindgi me.. kiski liye wo ye sb kr rha tha.. toot gaya ek dm se Sanjeev.. aur fir jab insaan toot jata hai na sab kuch khone par tab use sirf wahi dikhta hai jo iska kashurbar ho.
Yes!!!Khud ke liye insan itna sab kuch karta hai.. aakhir kare bhi kyu na par
Agreed! Kishor uss mod pe tha jaha usse do critical choices dii gayi thi. Bhala apni beti ka haath kese chorr sakta tha woh? Aur wo bhi jab Kaera behosh thi. Kishor ne wahi kiya tha jo uss waqt wo kar paaya tha. Yadi Swati ko maarna hi hota toh usse pakadta hi kyu?Kishor ne sahi kiya ?? Agar Kishor ke najriye se dekhenge to, Ha bilkul usne sahi kiya qki wo sirf ek ko hi bacha sakta tha.. usne apni beti ko bachana thik samjha.. wahi agar Sanjeev ke najriye se dekho to uski to duniya hi swati thi.. aur bhala jab samne duniya ujde to fir jism me jaan kanha bachti hai.
Dhongi toh ye jaanta hi tha. Koi bhi kaam khushi se kiya jaaye toh usme antar aata hi hai. Usne wahi baatein ghuma ke Sanjeev ko samjhaayi aur Sanjeev samjha ki ye sab uss dhongi ke kaaran hua hai. Jabki uska vyavsaay toh upar badhna hi tha. Par credit dhongi le gaya.andhvishwasi hona is jeewan ki sabse bdi durghatna hai. par kya ye kahna sahi h ??
baba ne kaha use khud ko khush rakhkar deal karna hoga grahako ko wo bhi bina chinta ke. ye to jeewan ki sachhai hai. to is hisab se baba ki koi galti nahi.. beshaq wo dhongi hi kyu na ho usne sanjeev ko sahi raah dikhai... par par agar us din wo busy nahi hota to sb kuch esa nahi hota jo hua... jis kaaran se sanjeev ki najro me wo villain ban gaya.. aur uska anjam uski maut.
Agreed!!Insan Bura ya Bhala janm se nahi hota, uske haalat uski majburi use achha ya bura bnati hain.
Usse karna hi hoga. Kyuki Slogan completely nirdosh nahi tha. He was after Kaera. Usne Veer ko kitna pitwaaya. That knife stab and all those beatings. Veer did what he had to do.slogan ka past dekh kar veer ko satya ka pata to lag chuka hai. par ab aage kya veer is satya ke bad khud ko bekasur ki hatya ke arop se mukt kr payega. Jaise last time aatish ka sch samne aaya wese hi aaj Slogan ka bhi satya samne aaya. dono ki hi majburiya thi is raah ko chunne ki..
Kishor ki baatein dheere dheere saamne aaengi.Wo kahte hain na har bada aadmi mehnat ke sath bada bna ho ye jaruri nahi. unhi me se ek hai Kishor. ab tak ki kahani ke hisab se.. uske sochne ka tariqa ek selfish insan ke jaisa hai.. jo ki normal hai . har koi sirf apna bhala chahta hai.. apno ka bhala chahta hai chahe uske badle use parayo ki jaan bhi leni pade.. jo kishor ne lee hain.. abhi sirf kuch batein hi samne aayi hain. is sb se to yahi lagta hai..
Thanks a lot!About writer : -
Well.. You have a great mind, emotion, feel.. ek dam realistik feel aa jati hai jab kahani ko padti hu me.. Har ek line ke sath puri kahani aankho ke samne ek video ki tarah play ho jati hai.. esa kar pana hi ek writer ke liye kafi kathin hota hai.. par apke dwara likhi gayi is kahani me mujhe bilkul bhi dekh kar nhi lgta ap ko jyada kathinai hoti hogi is tarah ki kahani likhne me.. qki apke lekhni bahut hi saral samjhne yogya aur real life se judi hui hai.. Har ek bat ko bade dhyan se likha gaya hai taaki agar uska knhi aage connection mile to esa na lage wo bat pahle jo likhi gyi wo alag thi aur aaj alag.. jaise aaj ke update me hua.. Maali ki hatya wala scene... pahle hm use kishor ke najriye se dekh chuke hain aur aaj hmne slogan ke najriye se use dekha... kishor ke najriye wala schene turant dimag me ban gya ise padkar.. yahi kabiliyat mujhe apke lekhni ki prasansa krne ke liye majbur kar di aaj..
Arre bas bas. Ab rulaogi kya?From My Side : -
Aap isi tarah apni lekhni ke dwara sabhi ka manoranjan karte rahe is bat ki kaamna karti hu.
you are a gem. ap jaise writer bahut hi rare hote hain.. we are glad ki aap is forum par apna keemti samay dekar kahani likh rahe hain. sabhi readers aur forum staff apka abhari rahega.
Thanks to google mamaGreat knowledge
Thanks man!Enough is enough man....ek hi to dil h bro kitni baar jeetoge...
Amazing update man.. Hats off
Thanks!Super fantastic update
tareef ke liye aur sabd nahin hai mere pass
Nice update sir g.
Awesome
What a wonderful update bro agle update ka intezar rahenga
Thanks guys!Super duper dhamakedar gaand phaad update bhai
Who knows? Thanks btw!It was an emotional update....
I thik is story ka agla villain Kishore hoga
Thanks yaara! Bane rahiyega!Bhai jannnn bohot hi badiya update
शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब
Aag laga di apne to
Par slogan ka past padke bohot dukh huva par ohh ladki kon thi bhai sab
Age dekhte हे
Fir se एक bar apne halla Macha diyaaaa
Hein!? Veer ko kaun sii awaaz aati thi? Usse toh bas Pari ki hi awaaz aati hai. Are you talking about Pari?Bingo
Matlab veer ko jo awaj ati thi usne human form le liya h ya aur kuch tha matlb veer ko ye realise huva ki har criminal ke piche ek wajah hoti h criminal banne ki ab kabhi aise toh ni hoga ki veer ab jinhone bure kaam kiya h unko unke kiye ki saja de.......
Taki phir koyi acha insaan criminal na bane badle ke liye......
Mission pura huva par sanjeev ki story soon dhuk bi huva....
Indeed!yar sach kaho to slogan ka past jaan kr kafi dukh hoa boht hi sad or emotional story thi kher kr bhi kia sakte hain
Hmm!wese slogan or atish bhao ki kahani same to same thi farq sirf itna tha k atish k maa k 7
Read that part again.is liye slogan kaira k peche para HOA tha ,
lakin ek baat abhi bhi khtak rahi H k swati k marne ki khabar kishore ne sudha ko q btayi, kahi kishore to nahi tha qatel sudha ka
wese to sab kuch clear kr dia tum ne lakin jo dil mai aya wo bol dia
Ladki kaun thi ye spoiler hai. You'll come to know soon. Thanks btw!anyway veer ka system upgrade ho gia or us ko point bhi mil gay
lakin ye larki kon thi kahi ye pari to nahi thi?
let's see what happened
Phir bhi kam hee log knowledge par focus karte hai . Most bas entertainment ya time pass karte haiThanks to google mama
एक चीज अच्छा लग की वीर में अभी भी भावनायें शेष हैं, वो पूरा भावना बिहीन नहीं हुआ।स्लोगन का दर्दनाक अतीत दर्दनाक मौत के साथ कहानी समाप्त लेकिन बहुत सवाल छोडके गया की वो पहाड़ पर घूमने वाली लड़की कौन है ? उसका स्लोगन के संग कोई ताल्लुकत है की नहीं ? बात एक दम सही है जी जब कोई सीधा आदमी दूसरा किसी आदमी के चलते पत्नी और पुत्री बियोग जैसा वार झेलता है तब ऐसा खूंखार आदमी होता ही है। लेकिन किशोर के ऊपर बदला लेने के चक्कर मे बिश्व का एक खूंखार डॉन बन गया था। मुझे पहले लगा था की शायद कोई संबंध रहा होगा वीर के नौनिहाल के तरफ भी लेकिन शायद मैं गलत था। आगे देखते है। एक चीज अच्छा लग की वीर में अभी भी भावनायें शेष हैं, वो पूरा भावना बिहीन नहीं हुआ। कारण शायद है की कांसे कम परिवार के सदस्य कुछ उसके साथ जुड़ा हुआ है। बढ़िया अनुच्छेद है साहब मै अगला अनुच्छेद ७७ के प्रतीक्षा करेंगे क्योंकि लेखक एक स्थान पर उल्लेख किए थे की अनुछेद ७७ बहुत कमाल का होगा। मै बाहर थे, आते ही पहले यह अनुछेद पड़े। आपका बहुत आभार हुमे ऐसा एक भाबुक अनुच्छेद हुमे उफर देने के लिए। धन्यबाद। यह अनुच्छेद हुमे दिखाता है की जो बाहर से दिखता है वही सब कुछ नहीं है। Sub Plot is always there in every Plot.