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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 94 ~ Here it comes.
Ab tak...
Suhana (sighs) : Mein tumse do din me baat karti hu. I have to think. Mera mind kaam karna band ho gaya tumhaare kaaran...
Divya : Do din keval... I don't have much time Suhana... I can only wait for 4 days at max. Par do din ke andar mujhe tumhara answer chaahiye hi chahiye. No... Yadi tum nahi aayi toh mein tumhe lene aa jaungi.
Suhana : I... I'll think!!!
Divya : You have to come!!!!
*Call ends*
Aur call cut ho gaya. Suhana!!! Gehre chintan me doob gayi.
Iss nayi khabar ne... Usse poora duwidha me daal diya tha. Something... Must be done!
Ab aage...
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
Derr raat me, kamre me aati bas ek madhyam sii night bulb ki roshni me, Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha. Harr raat ki tarah Pari sleep mode me thi. Aur pratyek ratri ke jese hi uske kamre ka darwaaza aaj bhi khula hua tha.
Tabhi uske kamre me ek aahat hui.
*Chhhhammmmm* *Chhhhammmmm*
Aabhushno ki khanak hui.
Aur uss halke se ujaale me ek saaya umad ke aaya jiske agle shan hi...
*Click*
Veer ke room ka door andar se lock ho gaya. Veer apne aas paas ho rahi gatividhiyo se anjaan bas mast maula hoke so raha tha. Wo saaya dheere dheere ek aurat ke akaar me aakriti spasht hote hue aage badhi aur, Veer ke bistar par uske bagal se aa kar baith gayi.
Ek komal sa sparsh Veer ke gaal par hua, narm laal hontho ki chhuvan, uske baalo par ek haath thama aur usse sehlaane laga.
"Aaj nahi toh kal... Mein bhi tumhaare dil me ek sthir sthaan bana hi lungi. Tum dekhna! Tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dungi mein, mere bacche...!!!"
Jii haan, Ye Shweta hi thi. Jo aksar Veer ke kamre me raat ko usse dulaar karne ke liye aa jaaya karti thi. Veer ke jaagte hue toh woh uss se baat bhi nahi kar sakti thi, keval yahi upaay tha uske paas Veer ko qareeb se nihaarne ka.
Par ho na ho, uss din ke baad se Shweta ka mann bada hi vichlit rehta tha. Wahi din, jab Veer ki nazre anayaas hi uske stano par theher gayi thi. Shweta aaye din uss ghatna ko yaad karti aur khud se sawaal jawaab karti. Ki akhir kyu Veer ne uske thano par nazre gadaayi thi?
Badhti umr me aurto ke prati aakarshan toh ek swabhaavik sii baat thi. Lekin, jo sawaal usse sabse zyaada sataa raha tha wo ye tha ki...
Ghar me itni aurato me, Veer ki nigaahein keval uske hi urozo par kyu gayi?? Wo bhi ek nahi, do baar. Jab woh kitchen me thi tab bhi toh...!!! Veer ne usse ghoor ke dekha tha. Pehli baar ka toh ek durghatna maan sakte hai par dusri baar? Wo jaanti thi ki dusri baar woh keval ek sanyog nahi tha. Veer ne waqai marzi se usse dekha tha. Aur yahi soch soch ke Shweta ki raat ki neendein udti jaa rahi thi. Harr raat uski bechaini me guzar rahi thi.
Wo abhi bhi Veer ko nihaarte hue uske bagal se lait issi soch me doobi hui thi jab ek hila dene wala vichaar uske mann se hote hue guzra. Jiske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Aur uska muh achaanak hi khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo tezz awaaz me zorr se hairat bhari aah bharne hi waali thi ki usne apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhak liya. Kahi koi jaag jaata toh musibat ho jaati.
Thar tharaate haatho ke kampan ko thaam woh Veer ko dekhi aur uske naino se aasuo ki boonde chhalak uthi.
'Toh kya ye baat thi mere bacche? Haan?'
Aasuo ki ek dhaara uske gaal se hote hue Veer ke takiye par girne lagi. Jese Shweta ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Uss sawaal ka jawaab jo usse itne dino se bechain kar raha tha.
"Ohhhh Mera baccchaaa~~ !!!!"
Aur agle hi pal usne Veer ke sarr ko thaam apne urojo me dhassa liya. Nirantar woh uske chehre ko chumne lagi.
*Chu~* *Puch* *Puchhh~* *Muuaaahhh*
Apna poora pyaar barsaane lagi.
"Mein ye baat kese bhul gayi??? Kese?????"
Usne aur kass ke Veer ko apne aaghosh me bhar liya. Veer ka chehra uske blouse me qaid adhnange thano par tika hua tha. Shweta bhali bhaati uss twacha se twacha ke sparsh ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
"Mein kitni bewakoof hu. Hai na? Jo samajh hi na paayi thi ab tak. Anjaan banti rahi. Agyaani ekdum. Jabki ek Maa hone ke naate mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha. Fir bhi mein..."
Usne Veer ke chehre ko apne chehre ke paas kiya,
"Mein ye kese bhul gayi ki jab tum keval ek saal ke the tab hi tumhaari asli Maa tumhe chorr ke chali gayi thi. Nahi!!! Woh tumhari asli Maa ho hi nahi sakti. Yadi woh tumhari asli Maa hoti toh tumhe aise akela chorr ke nahi jaati. Hargiz nahi! Woh bhi aise parivaar me. Uss din bhi, Kavya ki party me tumhaare pita Brijesh mujhe mana rahe the. Par ab mein waapas nahi jaane waali. Woh aurat kese tumhe iss haalat me chorr ke jaa sakti hai? Mene apni Bhumi ke liye poori zindagi guzaar dii. Aur fir bhi mujhe uski itni chinta rehti hai. Toh fir woh aurat kese tumhe...!!?? Haan! Wo tumhari Maa nahi. MEIN!!! Mein tumhari Maa hu Veer. Shayad Bhagwaan bhi yahi chaahte the. Tabhi mujhe koi beta na mila. Aur fir mujhe ab tum mile ho. Aur tabhi shayad woh aurat tumse vanchit hai. Haan!! Yahi baat hai."
"Tum dekhna mere laal. Mein tumhe itna pyaar dungi, ki kabhi tumhe ek Maa ki kami ab se khalne hi nahi dungi. Dherr saara, Khoob saara pyaar dungi apne bacche ko."
"Mein nadaan ye samajh rahi thi ki tum aakarshan ke chalte mere stano ko dekh rahe the. Aur ho bhi sakta hai ki ye ek kaaran raha ho. Par... Par ek aur kaaran tha, hai na mere bacche? Hai na? Mein sahi hu na? Tumne maatr ek saal tak hi apni Maa ka doodh piya hai. Aur isliye tum mere stano ko dekh rahe the na? Hai na mere bete? Mein bewakoof ab tak ye samajh na paayi ki mera baccha isliye meri chhaathi ghoor raha tha. Of course! Tabhi toh tumne mujhe dekha. Na Ragini ko, na Suman ko, Na Aabha ko, na uss Sonali ko. Sirf mujhe!!! Kyuki khoon ke rishte se mein tumhari ek Maa na sahi, par ek stepmom toh hu hi na? Aur tumhare andar ka nanha baccha ek Maa ke dugdh ki maang kar raha tha. Jiske liye wo hamesha se tadapta aaya hai. Aur ussi ke chalte tumhari nazre apne aap hi meri upar chali gayi, hai na?"
"Yahi baat hai na Veer??? Haaayeee~ Mein ek abhaagan. Kaash mein uss samay maujood hoti. Tumhe apne doodh se stanpaan karwa paati. Mera bacchaaa~!!!"
*Muuuuaaaahhhh*
"Jee bhar ke mein apne bacche ko doodh ki tripti karwa paati. Iss se bada sukh mere liye aur kya ho sakta tha?"
Wo gham me soch soch kar Veer ko chumti rahi. Jab iss baar anayaas hi uske mastishq me ek bhuchaal fela dene waala vichaar aaya. Woh sannn sii hoke reh gayi, ekdum sthir.
Uska ek haath kaanpte hue apne aap hi Veer ke sarr ke peeche gaya. Aur dusra uske laal rang ke blouse pe. Ahista se uska blouse uske haath se neeche sarka aur ek safed bra ka cup ubhar ke saamne aaya jisme uske ek vishaal dugdh ki thaili qaid thi. Uska seena tezz saaso ke chalte zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Veer ke sarr par maujood haath se usne Veer ko dhakel ke apne stano ki orr kiya aur...
Jese hi Veer ke chehra uski bra me band uske doodh se takraaya, Shweta ke antar mann me se ek tezz awaaz aayi,
SHWETA!!!!! YE TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?????
"Ahhhhh!!???"
Aur usne jhatke se Veer ko apne stan se alag kar diya. Wo ghabraati hui ekdum se waha se uthi aur apni haalat ko sahi karne me lag gayi. Poori paseene se bheeg chuki thi woh.
'Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye mein kya karne jaa rahi thi??? Mera Veer ab koi baccha nahi hai. Woh bada ho chuka hai. Ye mein kya karne waali thi? Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaane ka samay beet chuka hai. Mein uss samay me maujood nahi thi. Ohhhh nooooooooooo~ Ye mein sach me... Kya karne jaa rahi thi? Jese Veer ke andar ka baccha dugdh ki talaash me tha, kahi mere andar ka baccha bhi... Usse stanpaan karwaane ki talaash me toh nahi? Nahi!! Ye ab mumkin nahi.'
Ek aah bharte hue woh uthi aur jaane se pehle ek baar fir Veer ko dekhi. Uska haath apne aap hi uske ek doodh par chala gaya. Aur usne haule se usse masal diya,
"Ab toh inme doodh bhi nahi. Mein bhi na... Kya kya sochne lagi thi."
Ek antim baar Veer ke sarr par haath ferr aur usse choomte hue woh waha se nikal gayi.
***
Subah hui. Roz ki tarah aalam aaj bhi wahi tha. Dining table par sabhi maujood the, Veer aur Sonali aapas me food truck ke vishay me baat cheet kar rahe the. Toh wahi Aabha aur Bhumika khaane me lagi hui thi, aur baaki teeno mahilaaye andar kitchen me vyast thi.
Sonali : Toh itni thi pichle do hafto ki kamaayi. Kul milaake sab accha hi chal raha hai.
Veer : Hmm! Tum abhi aise hi chalne do. Baaki jo trucks hai unke workers ko bhi inform karna ki abhi hume lagan ke saath keval quality aur fame par hi focus karna hai kuch hafte.
Sonali : Thik hai! Fir uske baad?
Veer : Uske baad mein tumhe nayi dish dunga. Aisi jo kahi bhi nahi milegi. Wo hamaari signature dish rahegi.
Sonali : Kyaaaa??? Tumhe aati hai? Kese seekhi tumne? Ek minute!! Iska kya matlab ki ye dish kahi bhi nahi milegi?
Veer : Hahahaha! Tum bas aam khao, guthliya mat gino.
Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Itni hi chinta hai truck ki toh khud kyu nahi chalaate?
Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaha tumne?
Sonali : K-Kuch nahi!!
Veer ne sharaarti dhang se usse dekha jese bataana chaah raha tha ki usne sab sunn liya hai. Aur Sonali ye jaante hi muh fula ke neeche sarr jhuka ke khaane me lag gayi.
Veer ki nigaahe fir apne daayi orr gayi jaha Aabha baithi hui thi. Par, woh kuch udaas sii lag rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua?
Aabha : ....
Veer : Aabha???
Aabha (hichakte hue): H-Huh????
Veer : Kya hua? Kuch baat hai kya?
Aabha : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi toh nahi!
Veer : Jhooth mat bolo, mein jaanta hu kuch baat hai. Kaho!!! Mujhse kaho!!
Aabha ek shan ke liye usse dekhi par fir apne aas paas Bhumika aur Sonali ko dekh woh chup reh gayi. Veer ne uski pareshaani samajhte hi khud ko uski orr jhukaaya aur apne kaan ko uske muh ki orr laate hue woh theher gaya. Ishaara samajhte hue wo Veer ke kaan ki orr jhuki aur boli,
Aabha : Baat aisi hi hai Veer jii! Kuch khaas nahi!
Veer : Wo mein decide karunga ki baat faaltu hai ya nahi. Tum mujhe sach sach batao sab. Kya baat hai?
Aur fir dono hi ekdum dheemi awaaz me ek dusre se baat karne lage,
Aabha : Darasal...
Veer : Kaho!
Aabha : Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Veer : Huh???
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya baatein ho rahi hai? Aapas me?
Sonali : !!!!???
Veer : Woh... Humaare beech ki baat hai, it's a bit personal.
Bhumika : Ohhh! O-Okay!!
Veer (Aabha se) : Kaho ab!!
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Maa ji NSS ki sadasya bann gayi hai. Bol chaal me kitni aage hai woh. Sonali aapka business acchi tarah sambhaal rahi hai. Aapki Tai jii aur Didi kitni badi hotel ko sambhaalti hai. Ragini jii, ghar ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai. Aur woh kitni qaabil hai ye hume bataane ki zaroorat nahi. Par mein... Keval mein hi... Mujhse accha khaana yaha sabhi bana leti hai... Wo jo karti hai, woh mein kar hi nahi sakti. Aur isliye, mein jaanti hu ki... M-Mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Aabha ki baat sunn Veer ko ek nayi jaankaari mili. Wo iss baat se kese anjaan reh gaya.
[Inferior Complex Masterrr~]
'T-That's...!!!'
[Maaasteerrrr~ Aabha sahi hai. Potentially dekha jaaye toh woh kuch nahi kar rahi hai. Aise me uske andar ye bhavnaaye aaengi hi.]
'Hmm~ Come to think of it. Mene jab Aabha ko pehli baar check kiya tha toh... Kya dekha tha? Usse ghoomne firrne ka shauk hai na?'
[Yes!! Master! System me stored information me yahi baat hai.]
'Hmm~'
Veer : Tum chinta mat karo! Tumhari ye pareshaani jald hi dur ho jaegi. Mera vaada hai ye. Aur ab iss tarah se sochna band kar do. Theek hai?
Aabha : H-Hmm!
Aabha Veer ki saantvna lete hue shaant ho gayi. Lekin, baat toh sach thi. Veer ko iss massle par bhi dhyaan dena hoga aage chal ke.
Woh sabhi bhi baithe hi thi ki itne me anadar se saari mahilaaye nikal ke baahar aa gayi. Suman muskuraati hui aayi aur usne Veer ki plate me ek aur bread roll rakh diya,
Veer : Arre mera ho gaya hai already.
Suman : *smiles*
Wo bas smile pass karte hue uske paani ke glass me paani bhari aur uske saamne Bhumika ke bagal se baith gayi.
Wahi Ragini bhi aayi aur table ki main chair par baith woh apni aur Suman aur Shweta ki plate lagaane lagi. Shweta Ragini ke saamne waali dusre chorr par maujood chair par baith gayi. Toh khamoshi ko todte hue Bhumika ne baat shuru kii,
Bhumika : Mom~ Kal bhi aap hotel se jaldi laut aayi. Kya baat hai?
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Mene kuch decide kiya hai beta.
Bhumika : Kya mom??
Veer ko chorr ke sabhi ki nazre Shweta ke upar thi, toh wahi bechaari Shweta Veer ko sabhi ki nazro se bach ke chori chori dekh rahi thi.
Shweta : Yahi ki mein hotel ki dekh rekh ab chorr rahi hu.
Bhumika : Whhhhaaaattttt????
Aur iss baar na keval woh sabhi, balki Veer ka muh bhi bread roll ko chabaate chabaate rukk gaya.
Bhumika : K-Kya matlab hai aapka?
Shweta : Wahi jo tumne suna beta.
Bhumika : Nahiiiiiii!!! Par ye achanak se aap..!!
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Meri kuch aur bhi zimmedaari hai, jisse mein hamesha se nazar-andaaz karti aayi hu. Aur isliye, ab mein poora ka poora dhyaan uss par dena chaahti hu.
Waha maujood sabhi hsohiyaar the. Shweta ne ye baat kisse dekh ke kiske liye kahi thi woh sabhi samajh chuke the. Aur wo khamosh hi rahe. Keval Veer hi tha jo sarr jhukaaye khaane me laga hua tha.
Bhumika : I... I understand Mom!!
Shweta : Hmm~
Aur kuch iss tarah unka aaj ka breakfast hua.
Jab Veer car nikaalte hue kahi jaane ke liye baahar porch me aaya toh Ragini tezz qadmo ke saath baahar aake darwaaze ki dehleez par khadi ho gayi.
Ragini : Aaj kidhar jaa rahe ho?
Veer : Wahi! Kaam se thoda.
Ragini : Aisa kya kaam rehta hai Veer tumhara...!!?
Wo tik kar khade hote hue puchi,
Veer : Zaroori kaam hai Bhabhi aaj. Business se related hi hai.
Ragini : Mujhse bhi zaroori...!?
Veer, jo car ka door kholne hi jaa raha tha woh acahanak Ragini ke iss tarah ke sawaal par peeche mud usse hairat me dekhne laga,
Veer : I...
Ragini (smiles) : Kab tak aaoge??
Veer : Jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Ragini muskaan bhare uske nazdeek aayi aur...
*Chu~*
Uske gaal par harr roz ki tarah wahi ek meethi pyaari sii kiss usse dedi. Aur uske baad usne apna gaal aage kar diya. Wo makhmali twacha, wo gora gora gaal aur wo halke paseene se bheege kitchen me kaam karne ki wajah se uski kalam ke aas paas chipke hue baal.
Veer ne ek mauka nahi gawaaya aur usne Ragini ke gaal ko apne hontho se choom liya.
Uski shirt ki collor vyavasthit kar Ragini ne usse rawaana kiya, aur Veer car ko reverse lene laga. Tab reverse lete time hi uski nazre upar terrace par chali gayi jaha Suman khadi hui thi. Haatho me uske chhat par sukhaane ke liye kapde the, aur wo ajeeb sii muskaan hontho par sajaaye Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Ragini ke ghar ki terrace aisi thi ki waha se porch, parking area poora nazar aata tha.
'Fuuuucckkkk!!! Ohh Thank God!! Suman hai....'
Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki gaand hi fatt gayi thi. Yadi aur koi hota toh na jaane kya hota.
*Vrrrrooooooooooommmmm*
Aur woh waha se raahat ki ek saans lete hue rawaana ho gaya.
***
Vatsala Steel Industries
Evening ~ 4:38 PM
Veer maujood tha iss waqt iss badi company ki main branch ke baahar. Woh akela nahi tha, saath me Karan bhi tha uske.
Karan : Sab ho gaya. Par meri samajh me nahi aaya Veer. Mene tumhe baaki 2 companies ke bhi shares ke offers dilwaaye. Woh toh iss se bhi badi thi. Fir tumne ye kyu chuni? Look! Mere paas report bhi taiyaar hai Veer. Vatsala Steel Industries pichle kayi mahino se loss me chal rahi hai. Aise me apna paisa iske shares me lagaana... Umm... Aur ye ek choti company hai yadi hum baaki do companies se compare kare toh...
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jaega jald hi ki kyu mene Vatsala par invest kiya.
Karan : Huh???
Of course!! Karan nahi jaanta tha, ki Veer ke paas kya tha.
STOCK MASTER!!!
Woh skill jo usne pehli baar use kii thi. Bhale hi usme 100% success rate nahi tha. Par kam se kam 70% toh tha. Aur isliye Veer ne 3 badi companies me se sabse choti waali ko apna pehla target chuna. Yadi loss bhi hoye toh utna nahi.
Karan : Well! Anyways! Ahhh! Din bhar ki bhaag daud me thakaan ho gayi. How about some coffee?
Veer (smiles) : Mein chai waala banda hu...
Karan (smiles) : You know coffee is better than Chai...
Veer : Ab iss behes pe mein raat bhar bol sakta hu.
Karan : Hahahahaha~ Lets's go!!
Woh dono car me baithe hi the ki Veer ka phone baj utha.
*Ring* *Ring*
Caller Kavya thi,
Veer : Hello? Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~ Aap kaha ho???
Veer : Umm... Mein thoda abhi...
Kavya : Mein, Arohi dii aur Kritika City mall me hai apne. I know aap kahi baahar hi hoge, toh aap yaha aa rahe ho. Okay? Bye bye!!!! Muaaaahhhh~
Veer : Wh-Whaaaattttttt???
*Call ends*
Aur ek jhatke me Kavya ne apni baat bol phone cut kar diya.
Veer : Ye ladki bhi na...
Karan : Kya hua?
Veer : Coffee nahi peena? Chalo City mall laga lo gaadi.
Karan : Whaaatttttt? Veer maana ki mein rich family se belong karta hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki mein mall me coffee peeyunga. Tumhe itna sab karne ki zaroorat nahi...
Veer : You idiot!!
Karan : H-Huh???
Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh, Arohi dii, aur uski friend Kritika waha par hai toh usne mujhe bulaaya hai. Toh chalo ab, jo bhi peena hai ab bhi wahi piyenge.
Karan : Ohhh!!! I see!!! Right!! Mujhe yaad aaya, mein Kavya ki b'day party par nahi aa paaya tha. Uss se sorry kehna please. Mein baahar tha.
Veer : Chal toh rahe hai abhi, tum khud hi kehna ye uss se.
Karan : Arre yaar! Usse manaana boht mushqil hai.
Veer : Toh aise kaam hi kyu karte ho?
Karan : Ughhh!!! Fine! Fine! I'll try to convince her.
Veer : Wese... Miss Kaera kya laut aayi?
Karan : Huh?? Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jese tum se zyaada baat meri unse hoti hai.
Veer : No really, pichle past ke 3-4 dino se mujhe unka koi bhi message nahi aaya hai.
Karan : Ohhhh! Well! Yeah! Wo busy thi. Aaj raat ko aaengi woh waapas.
Veer : I see! And what about Miss Sonia?
Karan : Huh? What? How would I know about her? Tumhe unki badi behan se puchna chahiye.
Veer : Miss Suhana?
Suhana ke baare me sochte hi Veer ko Suhana ki teddy bear ko zorr zorr se maar kar haivaano waali woh hassi ki chhavi yaad aa gayi.
Veer : No! Ahem! I think directly puchna hi sahi rahega.
Karan : Hmm~ Wese... Tumne kya bataaya? Kritika bhi hai waha mall me?
Veer : Hmm? Yeah!!!
Karan : Ohhh! Ahem... Toh hume unhe zyaada derr wait nahi karwaana chahiye. Nikalna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm??
Veer ne apni nazar paini kar Karan ko dekha jo apna chehra chhupaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
'Ohhhhh I see~'
[Yesssss Maaasssttteerrr! Something fishy is going on. Ehehehe~ I can smell it. Something is cooking around here. Hehe~]
'Bilkul Pari! I agree Hahahaha~
'[Wahahahahahahahaha~
]Karan : Wh-What??? Man you look scary... What happened!!?
Veer : Nothing!!!
Aur Karan ne Veer ki ajeeb sii muskaan ko ignore kar gaadi aage badha dii.
***
City Mall
Evening ~ 5:12 PM
Veer aur Karan jab saath me pohuche toh mall me jidhar se bhi wo guzarte, ladkiyo ki nazre unn dono par jaati. Veer pehle se kayi guna handsome jo tha. 100 ka appearance tha uske paas. Wahi Karan, jo ameer khandaan me pal badh ke paida hua. Janm se hi royalty ka aura tha uske ird gird. Bilkul apni behan ki tarah. Halaki, Kaera me ye sab gunn kuch zyaada hi koot koot kar bhare the par looks aur ettiquetes me woh bhi boht aage tha.
Kavya ko firse phone kar pata chala ki saari ladkiya log upar food zone me baithi hui thi.
Aur jese hi Veer aur Karan ko unn teeno ne aate hue dekha toh apni chairs se woh teeno hi haath dikha ke unhe bulaane lagi.
Kavya toh seedhe uthi aur daudate hue wo Veer ki taraf aayi. Veer ne apne aap ko attack ke liye prepare kar liya tha.
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tezz raftaar me aayi aur zorr se koodate hue Veer ki chaathi me ghuss gayi.
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~~~
Ek baar fir, uske aam Veer ki chaathi par apna ubhra ubhra ehsaas chorr gaye.
Aas paas ke sabhi log unhe iss tarah ghoor ke dekh rahe the, par akhir Kavya ko apne bhaiya ke prati pyaar dikhaane me kaha sharm aane waali thi? Uss din park me bhi nahi aayi thi. Aur aaj bhi nahi.
Kavya : Aa gaye aap eehehe~
Veer : Hmm! Yaha dekho kaun aaya hai.
Karan : Ahahahaha~ Hey Kavya! Hello~ Kaisi ho?
Kavya : Hmph~ Bhaiya ye kaun hai?
Karan (mann me) : Fuckkkk!!
Veer : Ye wahi bhaiya hai jo tumhare b'day me nahi aaye the.
Kavya : Haan toh inse keh do ki yaha aane ki ab koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Karan : Arre behan!! Kyu taang kheech rahi hai? I'm sorry na!!!
Kavya : Hmph~ Let's go Bhaiya!
Karan samajh chuka tha ki Kavya ko manaane ke liye usse aur mehnat ki zaroorat thi.
Aur yaha se nikla, Woh teeno apni table par aake baithe.
Veer (smiles) : Hey diii~
Arohi (smiles) : Heyyyy~
Kritika : Ahh!! H-Hello~~
Veer : Hi there!
Karan : H-Hello Kritika!
Veer Arohi ke bagal se baith gaya toh wahi Kavya Veer ke bagal se. Kritika jo uske saamne baithi thi uske bagal se Karan viraajmaan ho gaya.
Karan : Hello dii~
Arohi : Hello~
Kavya : Dii! Aap gande logo se baat mat karo.
Karan : Ughhh!
Kavya ki baat par sabhi hassne lage. Kritika bhi. Fir jab usne bagal me Karan ka murjhaaya hua muh dekha toh woh uske kaan me jhukte hue boli,
Kritika : You will have to give her a gift!
Karan : Ahhhh!!!
Kritika : Yes!
Karan (khuspusaate hue) : Tumhe pata hai? Will you help me?
Kritika : Umm... Okay!!! Sure!!!
Karan waha se jab bahana bana ke utha toh wahi Kritika bhi washroom ke bahaane uth gayi aur dono hi wahi mall me Kavya ke liye gift dhundhne lage. Aur idhar Veer mann hi mann Karan ko shabaashi de raha tha.
'Launda toh tezz nikla. Kya baat hai!!'
Tabhi...
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaa~ Aapko pata hai? hehehe~
Veer : Hmm???
Kavya : Arohi dii... Look at her!!
Kehte hue usne Arohi ke peeche jaa kar achanak hi uske baalo ko peeche kar diya, jis kaaran se uske kaan jo pehle dhake hue the woh nazar aa gaye. Aur unn kaano me...
Veer ki dii hui baaliya thi.
Veer : !!!???
Kavya : Dii pe kitni jach rahi hai na? Look! Mene pendant bhi pehna hai aapka.
Veer : Ohhhhh~
Kavya : Aur aapko pata hai? Dii ne bachpan se apne kaan nahi chhidwaaye the. She hated piercings. Darr tha bachpan ka unko hahaha~ And you know... aap ki baali ke liye she even... Mmmppphhhhh~~???
Arohi ne peeche palat ke agle hi pal Kavya ka muh apne haatho se band kar diya. Uske gaal gulaabi the...
Arohi (blushes) : Y-You.... Kavya... Tumne kyu...!!??
Veer (smiles) : It really looks good on you.
Arohi : Ahhhh!~
Kavya : mmphhh~ Haahhh!! Dekha? Mene kaha tha na hahaha~
Bechari Arohi sharm ke maare apna muh ferr lii. Kuch hi derr me Karan aur Kritika bhi laut aaye aur jab Karan ne Kavya ko gift diya toh hona kya tha? Apna Harry potter ka poora set dekhte hi Kavya ne ek pal me Karan ko maaf kar diya.
Sab hassi mazaak hi chal raha tha jab achanak hi...
*Ring* *Ring*
Veer ke phone ki ghanti baji.
'Miss Suhana!!?'
Veer : Hello?
Suhana : Kaha ho tum?
Veer : Mein abhi mall me tha. Kyu kya...
Suhana : Come fast!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : Baithe mat raho waha, utho aur niklo waha se jaldi. Come asap!!! Meet me at my office. It's urgent!!!
Veer : O-Okay!!!
*Call ends*
Kavya : Kya hua bhaiya?
Veer : Mujhe nikalna hoga. Emergency hai!! Karan! Tum inhe drop kar dena. Please!!! I have to go!
Karan : O-Okay but hey...!??
Par Veer ne kuch nahi suna aur woh waha se nikal gaya.
Woh jese hi Suhana ke cabin me pohucha toh Suhana apna angutha daanto tale dabaaye kisi chinta me window ke nazdeek khadi hui thi.
Veer : What happened?
Suhana : Do you remember?
Veer : Remember what?
Suhana : Yahi ki mene tum pe 3 favours kiye the. You have to pay back right?
Veer : Yes! I remember!
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAATTTTT?????
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Ye update kaafi mehnat se samay deke likha hai. Around 4.5k words ka hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Also, iske agle update se beginning hoegi House of the Killers arc ki. Par uske pehle, mein yaha ab ek break lunga.
Story me updates around 1 week tak band rahenge.
Mene kam se kam break hi liya hai. Fir milte hai naye arc me naye dhamaake ke saath. Dhanyavaad!!! 
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तो यह अंक लगभग काव्या के नाम रही....
चूंकि सिस्टम के अनुसार वीर अब एक आलफा नर है तो जाहिर सी बात है अपनी प्राइड के हर मादा को सुरक्षा देना उसका फ़र्ज़ है
यह आकाश कोई नया चरित्र है आगे चलकर शायद कहानी में कोई प्रभाव छोड़े
वीर असमंजस में है उसकी प्राइड की आलफा मादा आखिर वह किसे बनाए क्यूंकि जिन तीन औरतों के नाम गिनाए तीनों के साथ उसके खास सम्बंध है
कायरा जिसकी कुआंरापन उसका प्रथम उपलब्धि थी
रागिनी जिसके घर, दिमाग और दिल में केवल वीर ही वीर समाया हुआ है
और निधि शायद वीर की असली दिल की रानी है
उधर दिव्या किसी बात को लेकर परेशान है सुहाना से मदत की चाह रही है
nice1
Lovely update,
Fantastic update.. bhai..
Agar Kavya ka birthday Veer organise kar raha hai naaki uske parents ya saga bhai to ye clear hai ki vo apni Pack (family) mein bhi Alpha Wolf Banta ja raha hai!!
I think with this update you have setup many dominos to tumble! Lekin shuruat kis se hogi ye next update mein pata chalega.
Veer aur Pari ka interaction accha lagta hai but ye thoda kam hota ja raha hai.
Aakash ke Roop mein ek aur Rakeeb!! Sahi bhi hai villains khatam se jo hote ja rahe hain ya pit kar zakahm Sehla rahe hain.
As for the best villlan- one and only Pranjal!! No contest.
Hero ki life heroine nahi balki villain decide karta hai!
Pranjal ne Veer ko metamorphose kiya uske current Avatar mein.. Pranjal ke us prank ka butterfly effect hi ye story aur Veer ki destiny bani.
Rahi baat Aatish aur Slogan ki to no doubt they were formidable foes but unki back story se unke liye hamdardi Paida ho jaati hai. Yar vo shuru se bure log nahi they...
They were wronged so they reciprocated by doing to others what was done to them!
But Pranjal is a different evil altogether...
Uski life to silver spoon wali thi phir bhi Janamejaat harami hai salsa. Aur waise bhi dimag wala dushman taakat wale dushman se zyada khatarnaak hota hai. Wo apki taakat ko hi apki kamzoori bana sakta hai...
So my vote goes to Pranjal.
Bhai waise Vivek agar doosri shadi Kare, aur doosri biwi bhi Veer pe lattu ho jaye to maza aa jayega!!
Veer ke harem mein agli kis ki entry hogi iska bhi wait hai..
Baki sahi ja rahe ho boss... enjoying the joyride. Hats off
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann
बिल्कुल ही सही रास्ते पर चल रहा है वीर । बाल बच्चे दार महिलाओं को पटाना है तो सबसे पहले उनके छोटे छोटे बच्चों से दोस्ती करो.... उन्हें अच्छे अच्छे गिफ्ट दो.... चाकलेट मिठाई खिलाओ.... उन्हें गोद में लेकर लाड़ प्यार करो । फिर देखो कैसे उसकी मम्मी आप को अपने सिर पर उठा लेती है । निधि मैम के साथ परफेक्ट प्लानिंग है उसकी ।
ब्लैक साड़ी भी निधि मैम को दे दिया । वैसे मुझे पता नहीं है ब्लैक साड़ी गिफ्ट्स करने से महिलाएं कितना प्रभावित होती हैं । इसके बारे में Xabhi भाई सही बता सकते हैं ।
लेकिन रागिनी भाभी की मंशा वो क्यों नहीं समझ पा रहा है । उसने तो अपने मन की बातें भी उससे कह दी । घर के सारे सदस्यों को रात में नींद की गोली देकर सुला दिया और सिर्फ ब्लाउज और पेटीकोट पहने हाथों में जाम लिए उसे इशारे पर इशारे किए जा रही है और वो फिर भी भोलूराम बने बैठा है ।
एक और गिफ्ट्स देने का मौका मिला उसे काव्या और आरोही को । महंगें महंगे गिफ्ट्स भला किसे अच्छे नहीं लगते है । महंगें गिफ्ट्स से ही तो कहानी आगे बढ़ती है और साथ में प्रेम भी ।
लेकिन बहुत जल्दी वीर अपने परिवार से घुल मिल गया । खासकर मर्दों से । सारे मेंबरान उसके एक इशारे पर उसके द्वारा दी गई बर्थडे पार्टी इंटरटेन करने पहुंच जाते हैं ।
इसके पहले सुमन और निहारिका का मर्द और औरत के महत्ता पर व्याख्यान सुना । एक्चुअली मर्द और औरत दोनों एक दूसरे के पूरक हैं । एक गाड़ी के दो पहिए हैं । दोनों की अपनी अपनी खुबियां भी हैं और कमजोरियां भी । इनमें किसी एक को आप सर्वोपरि नहीं मान सकते । कुछ काम ऐसी है जो औरत ही कर सकती हैं और कुछ काम ऐसे हैं जो सिर्फ मर्द ही कर सकता है । बिना शक्ति के शिव की हम कल्पना नहीं कर सकते । और शिव की शक्ति भवानी ही है ।
प्रांजल के बारे में भी पता चला कि उसके पिता ही उसके पीठ पीछे शुरुआत से खड़े थे । कलयुग के धृतराष्ट्र की भूमिका निभा रहे हैं वो । शुक्र है उनका प्रेम लड़कों पर ही केन्द्रित रहा । बेटियों पर नहीं ।
दोनों अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट ।
For completed 1600 pages on your story thread...
Superb update
Sandar update
Ragini... Kaafi samay se ye expected hi tha ke wo Veer se apni feelings ka izhar karne waali hai... Especially, Divorce ke baad se! Finally, usne apni bhavnao ko Veer ke saamne ujagar kar bhi Diya... Us din kitchen ki slab par haath mein beer aur aankhon mein paani liye wo un lamhon ko yaad kar rahi thi jinhe usne Vivek ke naam kar vyarth kar diya... Ragini ne to sache Mann se hi Vivek se pyaar Kiya tha but it was Vivek who broke her heart... Aur fir kis tarah Veer ke dwara ki gayi uski care, use di gayi respect ne Ragini ke jazbaat badal diye, ye shayad use swayam bhi pata na chala... Khair, un beete lamhon ke dukh ke saath hi Veer ke saath hone ki umeed bhi hai Ragini ko... Wo kahin na kahin shayad ye jaanti hai ke Veer kabhi use dard nahi dega aur naa hi kabhi uska dil dukhayega, yahi kaaran tha ke Ragini uske saamne apne dil ka haal keh paayi...
Veer, Ragini ki pichhle kuchh samay se chali aa rahi gatividhiyon se wo bhi kahin na kahin samajh hi gaya hoga ke Ragini ke liye wo ab maatra uska dewar nahi raha tha... Aur ab to Ragini ne spasht roop se apne jazbaton ka elaan bhi kar diya hai... Parantu, Veer ke liye ye shayad aasan nahi hai... Jaisa ke humne Veer aur Pari ki conversation mein padha hi Veer abhi kaafi confused hai, Nidhi, Kaera aur Ragini se apne rishte ko lekar... But I think ke jald hi Veer Ragini ko aur uski feelings ko accept kar lega... Kaise!? Yahi dekhne layak hoga... Kya Ragini ek baar fir Veer se baat karegi, I don't think so, kyonki mere khayal mein wo Veer ko poori space Dena chahegi yahaan... Btw. I think ke Suman wo shakhs hai jo Veer se is baare mein shayad baat kar sakti hai...
Idhar Niharika, uski soch itni jaldi nahi badalne waali... Funny part was that she was wearing the choker and wasn't wearing a panty... Superb acceptance of orders!Niharika, wo shuru se hi mard zaat se nafrat karti hai, all thanks to her father, aur uske baad Vikaas jaisa Pati... To ye obvious hi hai ke abhi itni jaldi wo apne thought process ko ek dum se badal nahi paayegi... On top of that, jo Veer uske saath kar raha hai... Pehli baar koyi use is prakaar se handle kar raha hai, In proper words, Veer is toying with her... Aur bina kisi shanka ke uske liye ye sab digest karna sambhav nahi hai... I think, wo abhi Veer se badla lene ka prayas avashya karegi... She'll try to get access to that video made by Veer aur uske baad to Niharika ke paas Shreya ka video hai hi (mere khayal se delete nahi karwaya tha Veer ne, Right!?) Beharhal, mujhe nahi lagta ke Veer 100 se oopar ki intelligence ko dhaaran kiye huye is prakaar ki chook karega... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Niharika kab aur kaise sudhregi, I guess,jab wo realise kar legi ke usne jo kuchh apne employees ke saath kiya wo kitna galat tha, tab wo badal jaayegi...
Idhar Suman ab NSS ki poorn roop se sadasyta lene jaa rahi hai... I think, jald hi Veer Niharika ki jagah Suman ko wo head ki padvi bhi dilwa hi dega... Btw. Niharika ko samjhao koyi ke wo Suman ke saamne Veer ke baare mein bakwas na kare anyatha anjaam khatarnak ho sakta hai...
Wahin, ek aur rahasya saamne prakat ho gaya... Pranjal ke saath Karunesh bhi mila hua hai, wo bhi shuru se... Par yahaan kuchh sawaal hain... Vivek, wo bhi to Karunesh ka hi beta hai, to jab Pranjal ne use bhi dhokha diya, tab Karunesh ne kuchh kaha ya nahi..? Ya fir, Ragini waale maamle ko lekar Karunesh Vivek se khafa tha..? Idhar, Manorath ke saath jo kiya Pranjal ne us plan mein Karunesh shaamil tha ya nahi..? Wahin Karunesh ne kaha Pranjal se ke usne jaldbaazi ki,kya wo Manorath waale incident ko lekar hi aisa keh raha tha? Most importantly, Pranjal to kisi ladki ke kaaran Veer ke prati aise bhaav rakhta hai par Karunesh? Uska is sabmein shaamil hone ka kaaran kewal property aur rokda hai ya kuchh aur bhi... Beharhal, it would be an amazing scene to read jab Pranjal Karunesh ki peeth mein bhi chhura ghonp dega, if it happens!
Rajat aur Pranjal bhi ab jald hi haath milaane waale hain... Pranjal ko Nidhi ke baare mein pehle se hi gyaat tha aur ab Rajat ke saath milkar wo Veer ko apna nishaana banayega... Parantu, ab tak wo samajh hi chuka hoga ke Veer ab purana Veer nahi raha... Manorath ki batware ke baad ki party, Pranjal ka parda fash aur Rajat – Nidhi ka incidence, Pranjal ke liye utna sab kaafi hai samajhne ke liye ke Veer ko fansans ke liye use kuchh bada plan karna hoga... Let's see wo kya hota hai...
Kavya ka birthday... Veer ne use lekar pehle hi poori planning kar li thi aur sabhi ko invite bhi kar liya tha... Sabhi family members & Kritika too were involved in the plan with him... Kavya ke scenes hamesha hi cute hote hain... Jab kisine use wish nahi Kiya, that scene with Arohi and the one with Kritika, everything was truly beautiful! And after that, jab Veer us garden mein pahuncha, her reaction, again was too cute... Aur fir to bas Kavya ki khushi ka shayad hi koyi ant tha... Veer ke pichhe bike par baithe huye uske vichaar aur fir jab use gyaat hua ke uski birthday ki planning Veer ne hi ki thi.. let's see ke Kavya hi Suman ke baad sabse pehle 100 ka aankda paar karegi ya koyi aur... Beharhal, ye Kritika kya – kya sikha rahi hai Kavya ko...
Arohi, as Pari mentioned “A Beauty will always have suitors", and here Arohi is Beauty with brain, to of course laundon ki line lagna laazmi ji hai... Akash is no different, yahaan ek cheez main zaroor kehna chahunga... Akash ka Arohi ko pasand karna aur use impress karne ki koshish karna, galat nahi thehraya ja sakta but he should respect her... Jab Arohi ne ek dafa mana kar diya tha wo earrings lene se, use tabhi pichhe hatt jaana chahiye tha,basic manners ig... But, he didn't do that, matlab saaf hai ke uska character bhi thoda tedha hi hoga... Let's see ke Akash ka aage chalkar koyi role hota hai ya nahi...
Veer ne jis tarah se us situation ko handle kiya, that must have impressed Arohi... Gift ko yadi ek taraf bhi rakh diya jaaye, to bhi the way Veer stood beside her and handled that fool Akash... Arohi par iska prabhav padta saaf nazar aa raha hai... Ab bas ye dekhna hai ke wo in sab cheezon (including that kiss and this earrings incident), ko kaise saath rakh kar samjhegi...
Vivek, itni aasani se nahi sudharne waala hai... Party mein bhi uski nazren Ragini par hi thi but obviously, she was only looking at Veer... Vivek ka plan doosri shaadi ka hai, I really hope ke wo aisa na kare, anyatha Veer ki confusion mein ek aur female ka izafa hone ke Chances panapne lagenge... Brijesh bhi Veer se kuchh kehna chahta tha! That Manorath's Party and now this one, Brijesh ki harkaten hairaan karne waali rahin hain... Is he proud on Veer or what..? Meanwhile, yahaan mujhe ye bhi prateet ho raha hai ke Bhavana ke ghar se jaane ka, aur sabhi ka us se nafrat karne ka reason Karunesh ho sakta hai...
Nidhi... Veer ne use black saree gift mrin di... And black saree gift dene ke pichhe laundon ka kya intention hota hai ye bhi saaf hai... So of course, Nidhi will be wondering about it... Veer ne to shayad bas Nidhi ko kaale rang ki paridhaan mein dekhne ki chaah mein aisa kiya hoga, he might not have thought about all this but still dekhna hoga ke kya Nidhi wo pehnegi, yadi haan to wo scene nischit hi atyant khubsurat hoga... Juhi ke prati Veer ka prem, uska seedha asar Nidhi par aur uski bhavnaon par padne waala hai, ismein koyi sanshay nahi ke Nidhi jald hi Veer ke prati apne bhaavon ko samajhne lagegi...
Veer ne apni love life ke baare mein sochna aarambh kar diya hai... But obviously abhi wo confused hai... Nidhi aur Kaera ke liye samaan bhaav aur fir ye Ragini ka confession... Abhi to wo Arohi/Kavya ke baare mein vichaar bhi nahi kar raha hoga, door door tak use in dono ke us category mein shaamil hone ki umeed tak na hogi... Sonia too, I think Veer uske liye bhi abhi love jaisi feelings nahi rakhta hai... Kaera was his first, that's why she's special to him, but let's see ke Veer is maamle mein aage kya sochta hai... Pari said ke wo samajh chuki hai, I think she knows that Veer loves multiple females, dekhne layak hoga jab Veer khud ye realise karega!!
At the end, Suhana aur Divya ka scene... Suhana ne Veer aur Slogan ke samay mein Divya ki shayata li thi... Is it about returning favours now? But, Suhana ki baaton se laga tha ke wo thoda confused thi Divya ka saath dene ke liye... Kya ye sab kisi nayi problem ko khada kar dega... Kya Veer ko Suhana ismein involve karegi... Dekhne laayak hoga!
Is beech, Scroll Hunt bhi unlock ho chuka hai... Aur ye bhi saaf ho chuka hai ke Fame Points bhi important hain... Veer Fame Points ko Scroll Hunt mein use kar sakta hai... And fun part is ke usmein Trash Card ki samasya bhi nahi hai... Dekhte hain pehle attempt mein Veer ko kya praapt hua hai...
As you mentioned ke ek naya arc ab bas 2 hi updates door hai, to yahaan par in dono updates mein kuchh important scenes cover ho sakte hain... Kaera aur Sonia waapis Mumbai aa rahin hain, so expecting them to be in the next update... Wahin problems ab shayad aur bhi badh chuki hain... Niharika ka agla step, Pranjal & Rajat's duo, Karunesh (Veer doesn't have any idea about him), and maybe Suhana too! Let's see what's going to come in Veer's way going ahead...
Dono hi updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai... As i said, Kavya ke scenes bohot hi behatreen tareeke se likhe aapne and that deserves appreciation for sure! Ragini ka scene bhi kaafi badhiya tha and how can one forget Juhi! She's the most wonderful part of this story... Keep Going!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Super awesome update bro
Awesome update hai Wonderful update bhai
Congratulations for completing 1.6k pages bhai
Congratulations brother for completing 1600 pages
Nice update
Hello sir. Ye mera pehla cmnt h yaha. Mein bohut saari baate yaha kehna chaahti hu.
Par time nahi h abhi itni saari baate likhne ka. Par main promise karti hu, kal yaad se saari mann ki baate likhungi yaha. And, yes I'm your female reader.
Apki lekhni me jaadu hai sir. Ek silent reader ke roop me mne dherr saari stories padhi h. Par apne majboor kar diya mujhe ID banane k liye. Ab zyaada nahi bolungiwarna main likhti hi jaungi...
Mere mann me dher sare points h story ko lekar... Jinhe main kal likhungi. Aap aise hi hm readers k liye likhte rahiye Sir. Be safe. And may god bless you!
Hmmm…. Nice plot build up going on!
Somehow, I can’t wrap my mind around how easily Nidhi’s problem has been solved. It’s nice to see her happy - but I hope Veer se kuch miss na ho jaye and Nidhi suffers. I’d hate that very much
Ashish was very good as a villain. He had reason and was a strong character in general. Pranjal is a brat who happens to have some brain but he is just not there yet. We don’t know much about Karunesh so far and will have to see how his character is developed by you!
Waiting for the next chapter! Great effort brother. Keep it up!
Literally awesome n amazing update
Koi baat nahi ! Aap ko incest pasand nahi, to hamare werewolf bhai ko bhi incest pasand nahi.
Aap ko supernatural nahi pasand , hamare werewolf bhai ko bhi nahi pasand.
Aap ki soch aur unki soch kitni adhik milti hai na ! Ab es kahani ko romantic way me likhenge wo.
Btw welcome in xforum' s world.
In my opinion next villian will be female this term or opinion that I given I don't know but it's may be this is getting true and you know that who I am notifying as a next villian( it's a guess per expected)
......and one thing you say that name the best villian or any villain's name so,in my opinion the best villian is Pranjal and karunesh,whereas, karunesh never reveal his real truth but they are going to be threat for veer in future,
And one thing also,
Pranjal abhi kuch krne wala to hai nhi kuch kyunki usse karunesh ne abhi mana kiya hua hai kuch problem create krne ko veer ke khilaf.......to next villian koi aur hoga.....
Thanks bro,
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Jesa ki mene pehle hi jata diya tha aap sabhi ko. Wese toh ye update 95 ke baad hone waala tha. But moderations hote rehte hai.
So, ab ho gaya.Mein ab around a week ke liye rest le raha hu. Story ke updates ek week tak toh mein bilkul nahi likhne wala. Samay samay par online zaroor aaunga yaha aap sabhi ke replies dene ke liye. Iska matlab ye nahi hai ki story ke baare me sochna hi chorr diya. Haha~ Brainstorming toh chalti hi rahegi harr rozz.
Ye zaroori tha. Kyuki naya arc shuru hone waala hai. House of the Killers arc. Usse freshly start karne ke liye mujhe ek break chaahiye hi tha. Tabhi toh naye dhamaake se waapsi hoegi fir. Thanks!! Bane rehne ke liye. Aise hi support karte rahiyega aap sab. Dhamaake ke saath shuruaat karenge apan naye arc ki.
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Jabardast update.. bhai..Update - 94 ~ Here it comes.Ab tak...
Suhana (sighs) : Mein tumse do din me baat karti hu. I have to think. Mera mind kaam karna band ho gaya tumhaare kaaran...
Divya : Do din keval... I don't have much time Suhana... I can only wait for 4 days at max. Par do din ke andar mujhe tumhara answer chaahiye hi chahiye. No... Yadi tum nahi aayi toh mein tumhe lene aa jaungi.
Suhana : I... I'll think!!!
Divya : You have to come!!!!
*Call ends*
Aur call cut ho gaya. Suhana!!! Gehre chintan me doob gayi.
Iss nayi khabar ne... Usse poora duwidha me daal diya tha. Something... Must be done!
Ab aage...
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
Derr raat me, kamre me aati bas ek madhyam sii night bulb ki roshni me, Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha. Harr raat ki tarah Pari sleep mode me thi. Aur pratyek ratri ke jese hi uske kamre ka darwaaza aaj bhi khula hua tha.
Tabhi uske kamre me ek aahat hui.
*Chhhhammmmm* *Chhhhammmmm*
Aabhushno ki khanak hui.
Aur uss halke se ujaale me ek saaya umad ke aaya jiske agle shan hi...
*Click*
Veer ke room ka door andar se lock ho gaya. Veer apne aas paas ho rahi gatividhiyo se anjaan bas mast maula hoke so raha tha. Wo saaya dheere dheere ek aurat ke akaar me aakriti spasht hote hue aage badhi aur, Veer ke bistar par uske bagal se aa kar baith gayi.
Ek komal sa sparsh Veer ke gaal par hua, narm laal hontho ki chhuvan, uske baalo par ek haath thama aur usse sehlaane laga.
"Aaj nahi toh kal... Mein bhi tumhaare dil me ek sthir sthaan bana hi lungi. Tum dekhna! Tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dungi mein, mere bacche...!!!"
Jii haan, Ye Shweta hi thi. Jo aksar Veer ke kamre me raat ko usse dulaar karne ke liye aa jaaya karti thi. Veer ke jaagte hue toh woh uss se baat bhi nahi kar sakti thi, keval yahi upaay tha uske paas Veer ko qareeb se nihaarne ka.
Par ho na ho, uss din ke baad se Shweta ka mann bada hi vichlit rehta tha. Wahi din, jab Veer ki nazre anayaas hi uske stano par theher gayi thi. Shweta aaye din uss ghatna ko yaad karti aur khud se sawaal jawaab karti. Ki akhir kyu Veer ne uske thano par nazre gadaayi thi?
Badhti umr me aurto ke prati aakarshan toh ek swabhaavik sii baat thi. Lekin, jo sawaal usse sabse zyaada sataa raha tha wo ye tha ki...
Ghar me itni aurato me, Veer ki nigaahein keval uske hi urozo par kyu gayi?? Wo bhi ek nahi, do baar. Jab woh kitchen me thi tab bhi toh...!!! Veer ne usse ghoor ke dekha tha. Pehli baar ka toh ek durghatna maan sakte hai par dusri baar? Wo jaanti thi ki dusri baar woh keval ek sanyog nahi tha. Veer ne waqai marzi se usse dekha tha. Aur yahi soch soch ke Shweta ki raat ki neendein udti jaa rahi thi. Harr raat uski bechaini me guzar rahi thi.
Wo abhi bhi Veer ko nihaarte hue uske bagal se lait issi soch me doobi hui thi jab ek hila dene wala vichaar uske mann se hote hue guzra. Jiske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Aur uska muh achaanak hi khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo tezz awaaz me zorr se hairat bhari aah bharne hi waali thi ki usne apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhak liya. Kahi koi jaag jaata toh musibat ho jaati.
Thar tharaate haatho ke kampan ko thaam woh Veer ko dekhi aur uske naino se aasuo ki boonde chhalak uthi.
'Toh kya ye baat thi mere bacche? Haan?'
Aasuo ki ek dhaara uske gaal se hote hue Veer ke takiye par girne lagi. Jese Shweta ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Uss sawaal ka jawaab jo usse itne dino se bechain kar raha tha.
"Ohhhh Mera baccchaaa~~ !!!!"
Aur agle hi pal usne Veer ke sarr ko thaam apne urojo me dhassa liya. Nirantar woh uske chehre ko chumne lagi.
*Chu~* *Puch* *Puchhh~* *Muuaaahhh*
Apna poora pyaar barsaane lagi.
"Mein ye baat kese bhul gayi??? Kese?????"
Usne aur kass ke Veer ko apne aaghosh me bhar liya. Veer ka chehra uske blouse me qaid adhnange thano par tika hua tha. Shweta bhali bhaati uss twacha se twacha ke sparsh ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
"Mein kitni bewakoof hu. Hai na? Jo samajh hi na paayi thi ab tak. Anjaan banti rahi. Agyaani ekdum. Jabki ek Maa hone ke naate mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha. Fir bhi mein..."
Usne Veer ke chehre ko apne chehre ke paas kiya,
"Mein ye kese bhul gayi ki jab tum keval ek saal ke the tab hi tumhaari asli Maa tumhe chorr ke chali gayi thi. Nahi!!! Woh tumhari asli Maa ho hi nahi sakti. Yadi woh tumhari asli Maa hoti toh tumhe aise akela chorr ke nahi jaati. Hargiz nahi! Woh bhi aise parivaar me. Uss din bhi, Kavya ki party me tumhaare pita Brijesh mujhe mana rahe the. Par ab mein waapas nahi jaane waali. Woh aurat kese tumhe iss haalat me chorr ke jaa sakti hai? Mene apni Bhumi ke liye poori zindagi guzaar dii. Aur fir bhi mujhe uski itni chinta rehti hai. Toh fir woh aurat kese tumhe...!!?? Haan! Wo tumhari Maa nahi. MEIN!!! Mein tumhari Maa hu Veer. Shayad Bhagwaan bhi yahi chaahte the. Tabhi mujhe koi beta na mila. Aur fir mujhe ab tum mile ho. Aur tabhi shayad woh aurat tumse vanchit hai. Haan!! Yahi baat hai."
"Tum dekhna mere laal. Mein tumhe itna pyaar dungi, ki kabhi tumhe ek Maa ki kami ab se khalne hi nahi dungi. Dherr saara, Khoob saara pyaar dungi apne bacche ko."
"Mein nadaan ye samajh rahi thi ki tum aakarshan ke chalte mere stano ko dekh rahe the. Aur ho bhi sakta hai ki ye ek kaaran raha ho. Par... Par ek aur kaaran tha, hai na mere bacche? Hai na? Mein sahi hu na? Tumne maatr ek saal tak hi apni Maa ka doodh piya hai. Aur isliye tum mere stano ko dekh rahe the na? Hai na mere bete? Mein bewakoof ab tak ye samajh na paayi ki mera baccha isliye meri chhaathi ghoor raha tha. Of course! Tabhi toh tumne mujhe dekha. Na Ragini ko, na Suman ko, Na Aabha ko, na uss Sonali ko. Sirf mujhe!!! Kyuki khoon ke rishte se mein tumhari ek Maa na sahi, par ek stepmom toh hu hi na? Aur tumhare andar ka nanha baccha ek Maa ke dugdh ki maang kar raha tha. Jiske liye wo hamesha se tadapta aaya hai. Aur ussi ke chalte tumhari nazre apne aap hi meri upar chali gayi, hai na?"
"Yahi baat hai na Veer??? Haaayeee~ Mein ek abhaagan. Kaash mein uss samay maujood hoti. Tumhe apne doodh se stanpaan karwa paati. Mera bacchaaa~!!!"
*Muuuuaaaahhhh*
"Jee bhar ke mein apne bacche ko doodh ki tripti karwa paati. Iss se bada sukh mere liye aur kya ho sakta tha?"
Wo gham me soch soch kar Veer ko chumti rahi. Jab iss baar anayaas hi uske mastishq me ek bhuchaal fela dene waala vichaar aaya. Woh sannn sii hoke reh gayi, ekdum sthir.
Uska ek haath kaanpte hue apne aap hi Veer ke sarr ke peeche gaya. Aur dusra uske laal rang ke blouse pe. Ahista se uska blouse uske haath se neeche sarka aur ek safed bra ka cup ubhar ke saamne aaya jisme uske ek vishaal dugdh ki thaili qaid thi. Uska seena tezz saaso ke chalte zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Veer ke sarr par maujood haath se usne Veer ko dhakel ke apne stano ki orr kiya aur...
Jese hi Veer ke chehra uski bra me band uske doodh se takraaya, Shweta ke antar mann me se ek tezz awaaz aayi,
SHWETA!!!!! YE TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?????
"Ahhhhh!!???"
Aur usne jhatke se Veer ko apne stan se alag kar diya. Wo ghabraati hui ekdum se waha se uthi aur apni haalat ko sahi karne me lag gayi. Poori paseene se bheeg chuki thi woh.
'Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye mein kya karne jaa rahi thi??? Mera Veer ab koi baccha nahi hai. Woh bada ho chuka hai. Ye mein kya karne waali thi? Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaane ka samay beet chuka hai. Mein uss samay me maujood nahi thi. Ohhhh nooooooooooo~ Ye mein sach me... Kya karne jaa rahi thi? Jese Veer ke andar ka baccha dugdh ki talaash me tha, kahi mere andar ka baccha bhi... Usse stanpaan karwaane ki talaash me toh nahi? Nahi!! Ye ab mumkin nahi.'
Ek aah bharte hue woh uthi aur jaane se pehle ek baar fir Veer ko dekhi. Uska haath apne aap hi uske ek doodh par chala gaya. Aur usne haule se usse masal diya,
"Ab toh inme doodh bhi nahi. Mein bhi na... Kya kya sochne lagi thi."
Ek antim baar Veer ke sarr par haath ferr aur usse choomte hue woh waha se nikal gayi.
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Subah hui. Roz ki tarah aalam aaj bhi wahi tha. Dining table par sabhi maujood the, Veer aur Sonali aapas me food truck ke vishay me baat cheet kar rahe the. Toh wahi Aabha aur Bhumika khaane me lagi hui thi, aur baaki teeno mahilaaye andar kitchen me vyast thi.
Sonali : Toh itni thi pichle do hafto ki kamaayi. Kul milaake sab accha hi chal raha hai.
Veer : Hmm! Tum abhi aise hi chalne do. Baaki jo trucks hai unke workers ko bhi inform karna ki abhi hume lagan ke saath keval quality aur fame par hi focus karna hai kuch hafte.
Sonali : Thik hai! Fir uske baad?
Veer : Uske baad mein tumhe nayi dish dunga. Aisi jo kahi bhi nahi milegi. Wo hamaari signature dish rahegi.
Sonali : Kyaaaa??? Tumhe aati hai? Kese seekhi tumne? Ek minute!! Iska kya matlab ki ye dish kahi bhi nahi milegi?
Veer : Hahahaha! Tum bas aam khao, guthliya mat gino.
Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Itni hi chinta hai truck ki toh khud kyu nahi chalaate?
Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaha tumne?
Sonali : K-Kuch nahi!!
Veer ne sharaarti dhang se usse dekha jese bataana chaah raha tha ki usne sab sunn liya hai. Aur Sonali ye jaante hi muh fula ke neeche sarr jhuka ke khaane me lag gayi.
Veer ki nigaahe fir apne daayi orr gayi jaha Aabha baithi hui thi. Par, woh kuch udaas sii lag rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua?
Aabha : ....
Veer : Aabha???
Aabha (hichakte hue): H-Huh????
Veer : Kya hua? Kuch baat hai kya?
Aabha : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi toh nahi!
Veer : Jhooth mat bolo, mein jaanta hu kuch baat hai. Kaho!!! Mujhse kaho!!
Aabha ek shan ke liye usse dekhi par fir apne aas paas Bhumika aur Sonali ko dekh woh chup reh gayi. Veer ne uski pareshaani samajhte hi khud ko uski orr jhukaaya aur apne kaan ko uske muh ki orr laate hue woh theher gaya. Ishaara samajhte hue wo Veer ke kaan ki orr jhuki aur boli,
Aabha : Baat aisi hi hai Veer jii! Kuch khaas nahi!
Veer : Wo mein decide karunga ki baat faaltu hai ya nahi. Tum mujhe sach sach batao sab. Kya baat hai?
Aur fir dono hi ekdum dheemi awaaz me ek dusre se baat karne lage,
Aabha : Darasal...
Veer : Kaho!
Aabha : Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Veer : Huh???
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya baatein ho rahi hai? Aapas me?
Sonali : !!!!???
Veer : Woh... Humaare beech ki baat hai, it's a bit personal.
Bhumika : Ohhh! O-Okay!!
Veer (Aabha se) : Kaho ab!!
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Maa ji NSS ki sadasya bann gayi hai. Bol chaal me kitni aage hai woh. Sonali aapka business acchi tarah sambhaal rahi hai. Aapki Tai jii aur Didi kitni badi hotel ko sambhaalti hai. Ragini jii, ghar ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai. Aur woh kitni qaabil hai ye hume bataane ki zaroorat nahi. Par mein... Keval mein hi... Mujhse accha khaana yaha sabhi bana leti hai... Wo jo karti hai, woh mein kar hi nahi sakti. Aur isliye, mein jaanti hu ki... M-Mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Aabha ki baat sunn Veer ko ek nayi jaankaari mili. Wo iss baat se kese anjaan reh gaya.
[Inferior Complex Masterrr~]
'T-That's...!!!'
[Maaasteerrrr~ Aabha sahi hai. Potentially dekha jaaye toh woh kuch nahi kar rahi hai. Aise me uske andar ye bhavnaaye aaengi hi.]
'Hmm~ Come to think of it. Mene jab Aabha ko pehli baar check kiya tha toh... Kya dekha tha? Usse ghoomne firrne ka shauk hai na?'
[Yes!! Master! System me stored information me yahi baat hai.]
'Hmm~'
Veer : Tum chinta mat karo! Tumhari ye pareshaani jald hi dur ho jaegi. Mera vaada hai ye. Aur ab iss tarah se sochna band kar do. Theek hai?
Aabha : H-Hmm!
Aabha Veer ki saantvna lete hue shaant ho gayi. Lekin, baat toh sach thi. Veer ko iss massle par bhi dhyaan dena hoga aage chal ke.
Woh sabhi bhi baithe hi thi ki itne me anadar se saari mahilaaye nikal ke baahar aa gayi. Suman muskuraati hui aayi aur usne Veer ki plate me ek aur bread roll rakh diya,
Veer : Arre mera ho gaya hai already.
Suman : *smiles*
Wo bas smile pass karte hue uske paani ke glass me paani bhari aur uske saamne Bhumika ke bagal se baith gayi.
Wahi Ragini bhi aayi aur table ki main chair par baith woh apni aur Suman aur Shweta ki plate lagaane lagi. Shweta Ragini ke saamne waali dusre chorr par maujood chair par baith gayi. Toh khamoshi ko todte hue Bhumika ne baat shuru kii,
Bhumika : Mom~ Kal bhi aap hotel se jaldi laut aayi. Kya baat hai?
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Mene kuch decide kiya hai beta.
Bhumika : Kya mom??
Veer ko chorr ke sabhi ki nazre Shweta ke upar thi, toh wahi bechaari Shweta Veer ko sabhi ki nazro se bach ke chori chori dekh rahi thi.
Shweta : Yahi ki mein hotel ki dekh rekh ab chorr rahi hu.
Bhumika : Whhhhaaaattttt????
Aur iss baar na keval woh sabhi, balki Veer ka muh bhi bread roll ko chabaate chabaate rukk gaya.
Bhumika : K-Kya matlab hai aapka?
Shweta : Wahi jo tumne suna beta.
Bhumika : Nahiiiiiii!!! Par ye achanak se aap..!!
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Meri kuch aur bhi zimmedaari hai, jisse mein hamesha se nazar-andaaz karti aayi hu. Aur isliye, ab mein poora ka poora dhyaan uss par dena chaahti hu.
Waha maujood sabhi hsohiyaar the. Shweta ne ye baat kisse dekh ke kiske liye kahi thi woh sabhi samajh chuke the. Aur wo khamosh hi rahe. Keval Veer hi tha jo sarr jhukaaye khaane me laga hua tha.
Bhumika : I... I understand Mom!!
Shweta : Hmm~
Aur kuch iss tarah unka aaj ka breakfast hua.
Jab Veer car nikaalte hue kahi jaane ke liye baahar porch me aaya toh Ragini tezz qadmo ke saath baahar aake darwaaze ki dehleez par khadi ho gayi.
Ragini : Aaj kidhar jaa rahe ho?
Veer : Wahi! Kaam se thoda.
Ragini : Aisa kya kaam rehta hai Veer tumhara...!!?
Wo tik kar khade hote hue puchi,
Veer : Zaroori kaam hai Bhabhi aaj. Business se related hi hai.
Ragini : Mujhse bhi zaroori...!?
Veer, jo car ka door kholne hi jaa raha tha woh acahanak Ragini ke iss tarah ke sawaal par peeche mud usse hairat me dekhne laga,
Veer : I...
Ragini (smiles) : Kab tak aaoge??
Veer : Jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Ragini muskaan bhare uske nazdeek aayi aur...
*Chu~*
Uske gaal par harr roz ki tarah wahi ek meethi pyaari sii kiss usse dedi. Aur uske baad usne apna gaal aage kar diya. Wo makhmali twacha, wo gora gora gaal aur wo halke paseene se bheege kitchen me kaam karne ki wajah se uski kalam ke aas paas chipke hue baal.
Veer ne ek mauka nahi gawaaya aur usne Ragini ke gaal ko apne hontho se choom liya.
Uski shirt ki collor vyavasthit kar Ragini ne usse rawaana kiya, aur Veer car ko reverse lene laga. Tab reverse lete time hi uski nazre upar terrace par chali gayi jaha Suman khadi hui thi. Haatho me uske chhat par sukhaane ke liye kapde the, aur wo ajeeb sii muskaan hontho par sajaaye Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Ragini ke ghar ki terrace aisi thi ki waha se porch, parking area poora nazar aata tha.
'Fuuuucckkkk!!! Ohh Thank God!! Suman hai....'
Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki gaand hi fatt gayi thi. Yadi aur koi hota toh na jaane kya hota.
*Vrrrrooooooooooommmmm*
Aur woh waha se raahat ki ek saans lete hue rawaana ho gaya.
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Vatsala Steel Industries
Evening ~ 4:38 PM
Veer maujood tha iss waqt iss badi company ki main branch ke baahar. Woh akela nahi tha, saath me Karan bhi tha uske.
Karan : Sab ho gaya. Par meri samajh me nahi aaya Veer. Mene tumhe baaki 2 companies ke bhi shares ke offers dilwaaye. Woh toh iss se bhi badi thi. Fir tumne ye kyu chuni? Look! Mere paas report bhi taiyaar hai Veer. Vatsala Steel Industries pichle kayi mahino se loss me chal rahi hai. Aise me apna paisa iske shares me lagaana... Umm... Aur ye ek choti company hai yadi hum baaki do companies se compare kare toh...
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jaega jald hi ki kyu mene Vatsala par invest kiya.
Karan : Huh???
Of course!! Karan nahi jaanta tha, ki Veer ke paas kya tha.
STOCK MASTER!!!
Woh skill jo usne pehli baar use kii thi. Bhale hi usme 100% success rate nahi tha. Par kam se kam 70% toh tha. Aur isliye Veer ne 3 badi companies me se sabse choti waali ko apna pehla target chuna. Yadi loss bhi hoye toh utna nahi.
Karan : Well! Anyways! Ahhh! Din bhar ki bhaag daud me thakaan ho gayi. How about some coffee?
Veer (smiles) : Mein chai waala banda hu...
Karan (smiles) : You know coffee is better than Chai...
Veer : Ab iss behes pe mein raat bhar bol sakta hu.
Karan : Hahahahaha~ Lets's go!!
Woh dono car me baithe hi the ki Veer ka phone baj utha.
*Ring* *Ring*
Caller Kavya thi,
Veer : Hello? Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~ Aap kaha ho???
Veer : Umm... Mein thoda abhi...
Kavya : Mein, Arohi dii aur Kritika City mall me hai apne. I know aap kahi baahar hi hoge, toh aap yaha aa rahe ho. Okay? Bye bye!!!! Muaaaahhhh~
Veer : Wh-Whaaaattttttt???
*Call ends*
Aur ek jhatke me Kavya ne apni baat bol phone cut kar diya.
Veer : Ye ladki bhi na...
Karan : Kya hua?
Veer : Coffee nahi peena? Chalo City mall laga lo gaadi.
Karan : Whaaatttttt? Veer maana ki mein rich family se belong karta hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki mein mall me coffee peeyunga. Tumhe itna sab karne ki zaroorat nahi...
Veer : You idiot!!
Karan : H-Huh???
Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh, Arohi dii, aur uski friend Kritika waha par hai toh usne mujhe bulaaya hai. Toh chalo ab, jo bhi peena hai ab bhi wahi piyenge.
Karan : Ohhh!!! I see!!! Right!! Mujhe yaad aaya, mein Kavya ki b'day party par nahi aa paaya tha. Uss se sorry kehna please. Mein baahar tha.
Veer : Chal toh rahe hai abhi, tum khud hi kehna ye uss se.
Karan : Arre yaar! Usse manaana boht mushqil hai.
Veer : Toh aise kaam hi kyu karte ho?
Karan : Ughhh!!! Fine! Fine! I'll try to convince her.
Veer : Wese... Miss Kaera kya laut aayi?
Karan : Huh?? Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jese tum se zyaada baat meri unse hoti hai.
Veer : No really, pichle past ke 3-4 dino se mujhe unka koi bhi message nahi aaya hai.
Karan : Ohhhh! Well! Yeah! Wo busy thi. Aaj raat ko aaengi woh waapas.
Veer : I see! And what about Miss Sonia?
Karan : Huh? What? How would I know about her? Tumhe unki badi behan se puchna chahiye.
Veer : Miss Suhana?
Suhana ke baare me sochte hi Veer ko Suhana ki teddy bear ko zorr zorr se maar kar haivaano waali woh hassi ki chhavi yaad aa gayi.
Veer : No! Ahem! I think directly puchna hi sahi rahega.
Karan : Hmm~ Wese... Tumne kya bataaya? Kritika bhi hai waha mall me?
Veer : Hmm? Yeah!!!
Karan : Ohhh! Ahem... Toh hume unhe zyaada derr wait nahi karwaana chahiye. Nikalna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm??
Veer ne apni nazar paini kar Karan ko dekha jo apna chehra chhupaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
'Ohhhhh I see~'
[Yesssss Maaasssttteerrr! Something fishy is going on. Ehehehe~ I can smell it. Something is cooking around here. Hehe~]
'Bilkul Pari! I agree Hahahaha~
[Wahahahahahahahaha~
Karan : Wh-What??? Man you look scary... What happened!!?
Veer : Nothing!!!
Aur Karan ne Veer ki ajeeb sii muskaan ko ignore kar gaadi aage badha dii.
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City Mall
Evening ~ 5:12 PM
Veer aur Karan jab saath me pohuche toh mall me jidhar se bhi wo guzarte, ladkiyo ki nazre unn dono par jaati. Veer pehle se kayi guna handsome jo tha. 100 ka appearance tha uske paas. Wahi Karan, jo ameer khandaan me pal badh ke paida hua. Janm se hi royalty ka aura tha uske ird gird. Bilkul apni behan ki tarah. Halaki, Kaera me ye sab gunn kuch zyaada hi koot koot kar bhare the par looks aur ettiquetes me woh bhi boht aage tha.
Kavya ko firse phone kar pata chala ki saari ladkiya log upar food zone me baithi hui thi.
Aur jese hi Veer aur Karan ko unn teeno ne aate hue dekha toh apni chairs se woh teeno hi haath dikaa ke unhe bulaane lagi.
Kavya toh seedhe uthi aur daudate hue wo Veer ki taraf aayi. Veer ne apne aap ko attack ke liye prepare kar liya tha.
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tezz raftaar me aayi aur zorr se koodate hue Veer ki chaathi me ghuss gayi.
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~~~
Ek baar fir, uske aam Veer ki chaathi par apna ubhra ubhra ehsaas chorr gaye.
Aas paas ke sabhi log unhe iss tarah ghoor ke dekh rahe the, par akhir Kavya ko apne bhaiya ke prati pyaar dikhaane me kaha sharm aane waali thi? Uss din park me bhi nahi aayi thi. Aur aaj bhi nahi.
Kavya : Aa gaye aap eehehe~
Veer : Hmm! Yaha dekho kaun aaya hai.
Karan : Ahahahaha~ Hey Kavya! Hello~ Kaisi ho?
Kavya : Hmph~ Bhaiya ye kaun hai?
Karan (mann me) : Fuckkkk!!
Veer : Ye wahi bhaiya hai jo tumhare b'day me nahi aaye the.
Kavya : Haan toh inse keh do ki yaha aane ki ab koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Karan : Arre behan!! Kyu taang kheech rahi hai? I'm sorry na!!!
Kavya : Hmph~ Let's go Bhaiya!
Karan samajh chuka tha ki Kavya ko manaane ke liye usse aur mehnat ki zaroorat thi.
Aur yaha se nikla, Woh teeno apni table par aake baithe.
Veer (smiles) : Hey diii~
Arohi (smiles) : Heyyyy~
Kritika : Ahh!! H-Hello~~
Veer : Hi there!
Karan : H-Hello Kritika!
Veer Arohi ke bagal se baith gaya toh wahi Kavya Veer ke bagal se. Kritika jo uske saamne baithi thi uske bagal se Karan viraajmaan ho gaya.
Karan : Hello dii~
Arohi : Hello~
Kavya : Dii! Aap gande logo se baat mat karo.
Karan : Ughhh!
Kavya ki baat par sabhi hassne lage. Kritika bhi. Fir jab usne bagal me Karan ka murjhaaya hua muh dekha toh woh uske kaan me jhukte hue boli,
Kritika : You will have to give her a gift!
Karan : Ahhhh!!!
Kritika : Yes!
Karan (khuspusaate hue) : Tumhe pata hai? Will you help me?
Kritika : Umm... Okay!!! Sure!!!
Karan waha se jab bahana bana ke utha toh wahi Kritika bhi washroom ke bahaane uth gayi aur dono hi wahi mall me Kavya ke liye gift dhudhne lage. Aur idhar Veer mann hi mann Karan ko shabaashi de raha tha.
'Launda toh tezz nikla. Kya baat hai!!'
Tabhi...
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaa~ Aapko pata hai? hehehe~
Veer : Hmm???
Kavya : Arohi dii... Look at her!!
Kehte hue usne Arohi ke peeche jaa kar achanak hi uske baalo ko peeche kar diya, jis kaaran se uske kaan jo pehle dhake hue the woh nazar aa gaye. Aur unn kaano me...
Veer ki dii hui baaliya thi.
Veer : !!!???
Kavya : Dii pe kitni jach rahi hai na? Look! Mene pendant bhi pehna hai aapka.
Veer : Ohhhhh~
Kavya : Aur aapko pata hai? Dii ne bachpan se apne kaan nahi chhidwaaye the. She hated piercings. Darr tha bachpan ka unko hahaha~ And you know... aap ki baali ke liye she even... Mmmppphhhhh~~???
Arohi ne peeche palat ke agle hi pal Kavya ka muh apne haatho se band kar diya. Uske gaal gulaabi the...
Arohi (blushes) : Y-You.... Kavya... Tumne kyu...!!??
Veer (smiles) : It really looks good on you.
Arohi : Ahhhh!~
Kavya : mmphhh~ Haahhh!! Dekha? Mene kaha tha na hahaha~
Bechari Arohi sharm ke maare apna muh ferr lii. Kuch hi derr me Karan aur Kritika bhi laut aaye aur jab Karan ne Kavya ko gift diya toh hona kya tha? Apna Harry potter ka poora set dekhte hi Kavya ne ek pal me Karan ko maaf kar diya.
Sab hassi mazaak hi chal raha tha jab achanak hi...
*Ring* *Ring*
Veer ke phone ki ghanti baji.
'Miss Suhana!!?'
Veer : Hello?
Suhana : Kaha ho tum?
Veer : Mein abhi mall me tha. Kyu kya...
Suhana : Come fast!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : Baithe mat raho waha, utho aur niklo waha se jaldi. Come asap!!! Meet me at my office. It's urgent!!!
Veer : O-Okay!!!
*Call ends*
Kavya : Kya hua bhaiya?
Veer : Mujhe nikalna hoga. Emergency hai!! Karan! Tum inhe drop kar dena. Please!!! I have to go!
Karan : O-Okay but hey...!??
Par Veer ne kuch nahi suna aur woh waha se nikal gaya.
Woh jese hi Suhana ke cabin me pohucha toh Suhana apna angutha daanto tale dabaaye kisi chinta me window ke nazdeek khadi hui thi.
Veer : What happened?
Suhana : Do you remember?
Veer : Remember what?
Suhana : Yahi ki mene tum pe 3 favours kiye the. You have to pay back right?
Veer : Yes! I remember!
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAATTTTT?????
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Ye update kaafi mehnat se samay deke likha hai. Around 4.5k words ka hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Also, iske agle update se beginning hoegi House of the Killers arc ki. Par uske pehle, mein yaha ab ek break lunga.
Story me updates around 1 week tak band rahenge.
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शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere updateUpdate - 94 ~ Here it comes.Ab tak...
Suhana (sighs) : Mein tumse do din me baat karti hu. I have to think. Mera mind kaam karna band ho gaya tumhaare kaaran...
Divya : Do din keval... I don't have much time Suhana... I can only wait for 4 days at max. Par do din ke andar mujhe tumhara answer chaahiye hi chahiye. No... Yadi tum nahi aayi toh mein tumhe lene aa jaungi.
Suhana : I... I'll think!!!
Divya : You have to come!!!!
*Call ends*
Aur call cut ho gaya. Suhana!!! Gehre chintan me doob gayi.
Iss nayi khabar ne... Usse poora duwidha me daal diya tha. Something... Must be done!
Ab aage...
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
Derr raat me, kamre me aati bas ek madhyam sii night bulb ki roshni me, Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha. Harr raat ki tarah Pari sleep mode me thi. Aur pratyek ratri ke jese hi uske kamre ka darwaaza aaj bhi khula hua tha.
Tabhi uske kamre me ek aahat hui.
*Chhhhammmmm* *Chhhhammmmm*
Aabhushno ki khanak hui.
Aur uss halke se ujaale me ek saaya umad ke aaya jiske agle shan hi...
*Click*
Veer ke room ka door andar se lock ho gaya. Veer apne aas paas ho rahi gatividhiyo se anjaan bas mast maula hoke so raha tha. Wo saaya dheere dheere ek aurat ke akaar me aakriti spasht hote hue aage badhi aur, Veer ke bistar par uske bagal se aa kar baith gayi.
Ek komal sa sparsh Veer ke gaal par hua, narm laal hontho ki chhuvan, uske baalo par ek haath thama aur usse sehlaane laga.
"Aaj nahi toh kal... Mein bhi tumhaare dil me ek sthir sthaan bana hi lungi. Tum dekhna! Tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dungi mein, mere bacche...!!!"
Jii haan, Ye Shweta hi thi. Jo aksar Veer ke kamre me raat ko usse dulaar karne ke liye aa jaaya karti thi. Veer ke jaagte hue toh woh uss se baat bhi nahi kar sakti thi, keval yahi upaay tha uske paas Veer ko qareeb se nihaarne ka.
Par ho na ho, uss din ke baad se Shweta ka mann bada hi vichlit rehta tha. Wahi din, jab Veer ki nazre anayaas hi uske stano par theher gayi thi. Shweta aaye din uss ghatna ko yaad karti aur khud se sawaal jawaab karti. Ki akhir kyu Veer ne uske thano par nazre gadaayi thi?
Badhti umr me aurto ke prati aakarshan toh ek swabhaavik sii baat thi. Lekin, jo sawaal usse sabse zyaada sataa raha tha wo ye tha ki...
Ghar me itni aurato me, Veer ki nigaahein keval uske hi urozo par kyu gayi?? Wo bhi ek nahi, do baar. Jab woh kitchen me thi tab bhi toh...!!! Veer ne usse ghoor ke dekha tha. Pehli baar ka toh ek durghatna maan sakte hai par dusri baar? Wo jaanti thi ki dusri baar woh keval ek sanyog nahi tha. Veer ne waqai marzi se usse dekha tha. Aur yahi soch soch ke Shweta ki raat ki neendein udti jaa rahi thi. Harr raat uski bechaini me guzar rahi thi.
Wo abhi bhi Veer ko nihaarte hue uske bagal se lait issi soch me doobi hui thi jab ek hila dene wala vichaar uske mann se hote hue guzra. Jiske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Aur uska muh achaanak hi khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo tezz awaaz me zorr se hairat bhari aah bharne hi waali thi ki usne apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhak liya. Kahi koi jaag jaata toh musibat ho jaati.
Thar tharaate haatho ke kampan ko thaam woh Veer ko dekhi aur uske naino se aasuo ki boonde chhalak uthi.
'Toh kya ye baat thi mere bacche? Haan?'
Aasuo ki ek dhaara uske gaal se hote hue Veer ke takiye par girne lagi. Jese Shweta ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Uss sawaal ka jawaab jo usse itne dino se bechain kar raha tha.
"Ohhhh Mera baccchaaa~~ !!!!"
Aur agle hi pal usne Veer ke sarr ko thaam apne urojo me dhassa liya. Nirantar woh uske chehre ko chumne lagi.
*Chu~* *Puch* *Puchhh~* *Muuaaahhh*
Apna poora pyaar barsaane lagi.
"Mein ye baat kese bhul gayi??? Kese?????"
Usne aur kass ke Veer ko apne aaghosh me bhar liya. Veer ka chehra uske blouse me qaid adhnange thano par tika hua tha. Shweta bhali bhaati uss twacha se twacha ke sparsh ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
"Mein kitni bewakoof hu. Hai na? Jo samajh hi na paayi thi ab tak. Anjaan banti rahi. Agyaani ekdum. Jabki ek Maa hone ke naate mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha. Fir bhi mein..."
Usne Veer ke chehre ko apne chehre ke paas kiya,
"Mein ye kese bhul gayi ki jab tum keval ek saal ke the tab hi tumhaari asli Maa tumhe chorr ke chali gayi thi. Nahi!!! Woh tumhari asli Maa ho hi nahi sakti. Yadi woh tumhari asli Maa hoti toh tumhe aise akela chorr ke nahi jaati. Hargiz nahi! Woh bhi aise parivaar me. Uss din bhi, Kavya ki party me tumhaare pita Brijesh mujhe mana rahe the. Par ab mein waapas nahi jaane waali. Woh aurat kese tumhe iss haalat me chorr ke jaa sakti hai? Mene apni Bhumi ke liye poori zindagi guzaar dii. Aur fir bhi mujhe uski itni chinta rehti hai. Toh fir woh aurat kese tumhe...!!?? Haan! Wo tumhari Maa nahi. MEIN!!! Mein tumhari Maa hu Veer. Shayad Bhagwaan bhi yahi chaahte the. Tabhi mujhe koi beta na mila. Aur fir mujhe ab tum mile ho. Aur tabhi shayad woh aurat tumse vanchit hai. Haan!! Yahi baat hai."
"Tum dekhna mere laal. Mein tumhe itna pyaar dungi, ki kabhi tumhe ek Maa ki kami ab se khalne hi nahi dungi. Dherr saara, Khoob saara pyaar dungi apne bacche ko."
"Mein nadaan ye samajh rahi thi ki tum aakarshan ke chalte mere stano ko dekh rahe the. Aur ho bhi sakta hai ki ye ek kaaran raha ho. Par... Par ek aur kaaran tha, hai na mere bacche? Hai na? Mein sahi hu na? Tumne maatr ek saal tak hi apni Maa ka doodh piya hai. Aur isliye tum mere stano ko dekh rahe the na? Hai na mere bete? Mein bewakoof ab tak ye samajh na paayi ki mera baccha isliye meri chhaathi ghoor raha tha. Of course! Tabhi toh tumne mujhe dekha. Na Ragini ko, na Suman ko, Na Aabha ko, na uss Sonali ko. Sirf mujhe!!! Kyuki khoon ke rishte se mein tumhari ek Maa na sahi, par ek stepmom toh hu hi na? Aur tumhare andar ka nanha baccha ek Maa ke dugdh ki maang kar raha tha. Jiske liye wo hamesha se tadapta aaya hai. Aur ussi ke chalte tumhari nazre apne aap hi meri upar chali gayi, hai na?"
"Yahi baat hai na Veer??? Haaayeee~ Mein ek abhaagan. Kaash mein uss samay maujood hoti. Tumhe apne doodh se stanpaan karwa paati. Mera bacchaaa~!!!"
*Muuuuaaaahhhh*
"Jee bhar ke mein apne bacche ko doodh ki tripti karwa paati. Iss se bada sukh mere liye aur kya ho sakta tha?"
Wo gham me soch soch kar Veer ko chumti rahi. Jab iss baar anayaas hi uske mastishq me ek bhuchaal fela dene waala vichaar aaya. Woh sannn sii hoke reh gayi, ekdum sthir.
Uska ek haath kaanpte hue apne aap hi Veer ke sarr ke peeche gaya. Aur dusra uske laal rang ke blouse pe. Ahista se uska blouse uske haath se neeche sarka aur ek safed bra ka cup ubhar ke saamne aaya jisme uske ek vishaal dugdh ki thaili qaid thi. Uska seena tezz saaso ke chalte zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Veer ke sarr par maujood haath se usne Veer ko dhakel ke apne stano ki orr kiya aur...
Jese hi Veer ke chehra uski bra me band uske doodh se takraaya, Shweta ke antar mann me se ek tezz awaaz aayi,
SHWETA!!!!! YE TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?????
"Ahhhhh!!???"
Aur usne jhatke se Veer ko apne stan se alag kar diya. Wo ghabraati hui ekdum se waha se uthi aur apni haalat ko sahi karne me lag gayi. Poori paseene se bheeg chuki thi woh.
'Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye mein kya karne jaa rahi thi??? Mera Veer ab koi baccha nahi hai. Woh bada ho chuka hai. Ye mein kya karne waali thi? Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaane ka samay beet chuka hai. Mein uss samay me maujood nahi thi. Ohhhh nooooooooooo~ Ye mein sach me... Kya karne jaa rahi thi? Jese Veer ke andar ka baccha dugdh ki talaash me tha, kahi mere andar ka baccha bhi... Usse stanpaan karwaane ki talaash me toh nahi? Nahi!! Ye ab mumkin nahi.'
Ek aah bharte hue woh uthi aur jaane se pehle ek baar fir Veer ko dekhi. Uska haath apne aap hi uske ek doodh par chala gaya. Aur usne haule se usse masal diya,
"Ab toh inme doodh bhi nahi. Mein bhi na... Kya kya sochne lagi thi."
Ek antim baar Veer ke sarr par haath ferr aur usse choomte hue woh waha se nikal gayi.
***
Subah hui. Roz ki tarah aalam aaj bhi wahi tha. Dining table par sabhi maujood the, Veer aur Sonali aapas me food truck ke vishay me baat cheet kar rahe the. Toh wahi Aabha aur Bhumika khaane me lagi hui thi, aur baaki teeno mahilaaye andar kitchen me vyast thi.
Sonali : Toh itni thi pichle do hafto ki kamaayi. Kul milaake sab accha hi chal raha hai.
Veer : Hmm! Tum abhi aise hi chalne do. Baaki jo trucks hai unke workers ko bhi inform karna ki abhi hume lagan ke saath keval quality aur fame par hi focus karna hai kuch hafte.
Sonali : Thik hai! Fir uske baad?
Veer : Uske baad mein tumhe nayi dish dunga. Aisi jo kahi bhi nahi milegi. Wo hamaari signature dish rahegi.
Sonali : Kyaaaa??? Tumhe aati hai? Kese seekhi tumne? Ek minute!! Iska kya matlab ki ye dish kahi bhi nahi milegi?
Veer : Hahahaha! Tum bas aam khao, guthliya mat gino.
Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Itni hi chinta hai truck ki toh khud kyu nahi chalaate?
Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaha tumne?
Sonali : K-Kuch nahi!!
Veer ne sharaarti dhang se usse dekha jese bataana chaah raha tha ki usne sab sunn liya hai. Aur Sonali ye jaante hi muh fula ke neeche sarr jhuka ke khaane me lag gayi.
Veer ki nigaahe fir apne daayi orr gayi jaha Aabha baithi hui thi. Par, woh kuch udaas sii lag rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua?
Aabha : ....
Veer : Aabha???
Aabha (hichakte hue): H-Huh????
Veer : Kya hua? Kuch baat hai kya?
Aabha : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi toh nahi!
Veer : Jhooth mat bolo, mein jaanta hu kuch baat hai. Kaho!!! Mujhse kaho!!
Aabha ek shan ke liye usse dekhi par fir apne aas paas Bhumika aur Sonali ko dekh woh chup reh gayi. Veer ne uski pareshaani samajhte hi khud ko uski orr jhukaaya aur apne kaan ko uske muh ki orr laate hue woh theher gaya. Ishaara samajhte hue wo Veer ke kaan ki orr jhuki aur boli,
Aabha : Baat aisi hi hai Veer jii! Kuch khaas nahi!
Veer : Wo mein decide karunga ki baat faaltu hai ya nahi. Tum mujhe sach sach batao sab. Kya baat hai?
Aur fir dono hi ekdum dheemi awaaz me ek dusre se baat karne lage,
Aabha : Darasal...
Veer : Kaho!
Aabha : Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Veer : Huh???
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya baatein ho rahi hai? Aapas me?
Sonali : !!!!???
Veer : Woh... Humaare beech ki baat hai, it's a bit personal.
Bhumika : Ohhh! O-Okay!!
Veer (Aabha se) : Kaho ab!!
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Maa ji NSS ki sadasya bann gayi hai. Bol chaal me kitni aage hai woh. Sonali aapka business acchi tarah sambhaal rahi hai. Aapki Tai jii aur Didi kitni badi hotel ko sambhaalti hai. Ragini jii, ghar ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai. Aur woh kitni qaabil hai ye hume bataane ki zaroorat nahi. Par mein... Keval mein hi... Mujhse accha khaana yaha sabhi bana leti hai... Wo jo karti hai, woh mein kar hi nahi sakti. Aur isliye, mein jaanti hu ki... M-Mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Aabha ki baat sunn Veer ko ek nayi jaankaari mili. Wo iss baat se kese anjaan reh gaya.
[Inferior Complex Masterrr~]
'T-That's...!!!'
[Maaasteerrrr~ Aabha sahi hai. Potentially dekha jaaye toh woh kuch nahi kar rahi hai. Aise me uske andar ye bhavnaaye aaengi hi.]
'Hmm~ Come to think of it. Mene jab Aabha ko pehli baar check kiya tha toh... Kya dekha tha? Usse ghoomne firrne ka shauk hai na?'
[Yes!! Master! System me stored information me yahi baat hai.]
'Hmm~'
Veer : Tum chinta mat karo! Tumhari ye pareshaani jald hi dur ho jaegi. Mera vaada hai ye. Aur ab iss tarah se sochna band kar do. Theek hai?
Aabha : H-Hmm!
Aabha Veer ki saantvna lete hue shaant ho gayi. Lekin, baat toh sach thi. Veer ko iss massle par bhi dhyaan dena hoga aage chal ke.
Woh sabhi bhi baithe hi thi ki itne me anadar se saari mahilaaye nikal ke baahar aa gayi. Suman muskuraati hui aayi aur usne Veer ki plate me ek aur bread roll rakh diya,
Veer : Arre mera ho gaya hai already.
Suman : *smiles*
Wo bas smile pass karte hue uske paani ke glass me paani bhari aur uske saamne Bhumika ke bagal se baith gayi.
Wahi Ragini bhi aayi aur table ki main chair par baith woh apni aur Suman aur Shweta ki plate lagaane lagi. Shweta Ragini ke saamne waali dusre chorr par maujood chair par baith gayi. Toh khamoshi ko todte hue Bhumika ne baat shuru kii,
Bhumika : Mom~ Kal bhi aap hotel se jaldi laut aayi. Kya baat hai?
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Mene kuch decide kiya hai beta.
Bhumika : Kya mom??
Veer ko chorr ke sabhi ki nazre Shweta ke upar thi, toh wahi bechaari Shweta Veer ko sabhi ki nazro se bach ke chori chori dekh rahi thi.
Shweta : Yahi ki mein hotel ki dekh rekh ab chorr rahi hu.
Bhumika : Whhhhaaaattttt????
Aur iss baar na keval woh sabhi, balki Veer ka muh bhi bread roll ko chabaate chabaate rukk gaya.
Bhumika : K-Kya matlab hai aapka?
Shweta : Wahi jo tumne suna beta.
Bhumika : Nahiiiiiii!!! Par ye achanak se aap..!!
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Meri kuch aur bhi zimmedaari hai, jisse mein hamesha se nazar-andaaz karti aayi hu. Aur isliye, ab mein poora ka poora dhyaan uss par dena chaahti hu.
Waha maujood sabhi hsohiyaar the. Shweta ne ye baat kisse dekh ke kiske liye kahi thi woh sabhi samajh chuke the. Aur wo khamosh hi rahe. Keval Veer hi tha jo sarr jhukaaye khaane me laga hua tha.
Bhumika : I... I understand Mom!!
Shweta : Hmm~
Aur kuch iss tarah unka aaj ka breakfast hua.
Jab Veer car nikaalte hue kahi jaane ke liye baahar porch me aaya toh Ragini tezz qadmo ke saath baahar aake darwaaze ki dehleez par khadi ho gayi.
Ragini : Aaj kidhar jaa rahe ho?
Veer : Wahi! Kaam se thoda.
Ragini : Aisa kya kaam rehta hai Veer tumhara...!!?
Wo tik kar khade hote hue puchi,
Veer : Zaroori kaam hai Bhabhi aaj. Business se related hi hai.
Ragini : Mujhse bhi zaroori...!?
Veer, jo car ka door kholne hi jaa raha tha woh acahanak Ragini ke iss tarah ke sawaal par peeche mud usse hairat me dekhne laga,
Veer : I...
Ragini (smiles) : Kab tak aaoge??
Veer : Jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Ragini muskaan bhare uske nazdeek aayi aur...
*Chu~*
Uske gaal par harr roz ki tarah wahi ek meethi pyaari sii kiss usse dedi. Aur uske baad usne apna gaal aage kar diya. Wo makhmali twacha, wo gora gora gaal aur wo halke paseene se bheege kitchen me kaam karne ki wajah se uski kalam ke aas paas chipke hue baal.
Veer ne ek mauka nahi gawaaya aur usne Ragini ke gaal ko apne hontho se choom liya.
Uski shirt ki collor vyavasthit kar Ragini ne usse rawaana kiya, aur Veer car ko reverse lene laga. Tab reverse lete time hi uski nazre upar terrace par chali gayi jaha Suman khadi hui thi. Haatho me uske chhat par sukhaane ke liye kapde the, aur wo ajeeb sii muskaan hontho par sajaaye Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Ragini ke ghar ki terrace aisi thi ki waha se porch, parking area poora nazar aata tha.
'Fuuuucckkkk!!! Ohh Thank God!! Suman hai....'
Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki gaand hi fatt gayi thi. Yadi aur koi hota toh na jaane kya hota.
*Vrrrrooooooooooommmmm*
Aur woh waha se raahat ki ek saans lete hue rawaana ho gaya.
***
Vatsala Steel Industries
Evening ~ 4:38 PM
Veer maujood tha iss waqt iss badi company ki main branch ke baahar. Woh akela nahi tha, saath me Karan bhi tha uske.
Karan : Sab ho gaya. Par meri samajh me nahi aaya Veer. Mene tumhe baaki 2 companies ke bhi shares ke offers dilwaaye. Woh toh iss se bhi badi thi. Fir tumne ye kyu chuni? Look! Mere paas report bhi taiyaar hai Veer. Vatsala Steel Industries pichle kayi mahino se loss me chal rahi hai. Aise me apna paisa iske shares me lagaana... Umm... Aur ye ek choti company hai yadi hum baaki do companies se compare kare toh...
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jaega jald hi ki kyu mene Vatsala par invest kiya.
Karan : Huh???
Of course!! Karan nahi jaanta tha, ki Veer ke paas kya tha.
STOCK MASTER!!!
Woh skill jo usne pehli baar use kii thi. Bhale hi usme 100% success rate nahi tha. Par kam se kam 70% toh tha. Aur isliye Veer ne 3 badi companies me se sabse choti waali ko apna pehla target chuna. Yadi loss bhi hoye toh utna nahi.
Karan : Well! Anyways! Ahhh! Din bhar ki bhaag daud me thakaan ho gayi. How about some coffee?
Veer (smiles) : Mein chai waala banda hu...
Karan (smiles) : You know coffee is better than Chai...
Veer : Ab iss behes pe mein raat bhar bol sakta hu.
Karan : Hahahahaha~ Lets's go!!
Woh dono car me baithe hi the ki Veer ka phone baj utha.
*Ring* *Ring*
Caller Kavya thi,
Veer : Hello? Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~ Aap kaha ho???
Veer : Umm... Mein thoda abhi...
Kavya : Mein, Arohi dii aur Kritika City mall me hai apne. I know aap kahi baahar hi hoge, toh aap yaha aa rahe ho. Okay? Bye bye!!!! Muaaaahhhh~
Veer : Wh-Whaaaattttttt???
*Call ends*
Aur ek jhatke me Kavya ne apni baat bol phone cut kar diya.
Veer : Ye ladki bhi na...
Karan : Kya hua?
Veer : Coffee nahi peena? Chalo City mall laga lo gaadi.
Karan : Whaaatttttt? Veer maana ki mein rich family se belong karta hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki mein mall me coffee peeyunga. Tumhe itna sab karne ki zaroorat nahi...
Veer : You idiot!!
Karan : H-Huh???
Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh, Arohi dii, aur uski friend Kritika waha par hai toh usne mujhe bulaaya hai. Toh chalo ab, jo bhi peena hai ab bhi wahi piyenge.
Karan : Ohhh!!! I see!!! Right!! Mujhe yaad aaya, mein Kavya ki b'day party par nahi aa paaya tha. Uss se sorry kehna please. Mein baahar tha.
Veer : Chal toh rahe hai abhi, tum khud hi kehna ye uss se.
Karan : Arre yaar! Usse manaana boht mushqil hai.
Veer : Toh aise kaam hi kyu karte ho?
Karan : Ughhh!!! Fine! Fine! I'll try to convince her.
Veer : Wese... Miss Kaera kya laut aayi?
Karan : Huh?? Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jese tum se zyaada baat meri unse hoti hai.
Veer : No really, pichle past ke 3-4 dino se mujhe unka koi bhi message nahi aaya hai.
Karan : Ohhhh! Well! Yeah! Wo busy thi. Aaj raat ko aaengi woh waapas.
Veer : I see! And what about Miss Sonia?
Karan : Huh? What? How would I know about her? Tumhe unki badi behan se puchna chahiye.
Veer : Miss Suhana?
Suhana ke baare me sochte hi Veer ko Suhana ki teddy bear ko zorr zorr se maar kar haivaano waali woh hassi ki chhavi yaad aa gayi.
Veer : No! Ahem! I think directly puchna hi sahi rahega.
Karan : Hmm~ Wese... Tumne kya bataaya? Kritika bhi hai waha mall me?
Veer : Hmm? Yeah!!!
Karan : Ohhh! Ahem... Toh hume unhe zyaada derr wait nahi karwaana chahiye. Nikalna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm??
Veer ne apni nazar paini kar Karan ko dekha jo apna chehra chhupaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
'Ohhhhh I see~'
[Yesssss Maaasssttteerrr! Something fishy is going on. Ehehehe~ I can smell it. Something is cooking around here. Hehe~]
'Bilkul Pari! I agree Hahahaha~
[Wahahahahahahahaha~
Karan : Wh-What??? Man you look scary... What happened!!?
Veer : Nothing!!!
Aur Karan ne Veer ki ajeeb sii muskaan ko ignore kar gaadi aage badha dii.
***
City Mall
Evening ~ 5:12 PM
Veer aur Karan jab saath me pohuche toh mall me jidhar se bhi wo guzarte, ladkiyo ki nazre unn dono par jaati. Veer pehle se kayi guna handsome jo tha. 100 ka appearance tha uske paas. Wahi Karan, jo ameer khandaan me pal badh ke paida hua. Janm se hi royalty ka aura tha uske ird gird. Bilkul apni behan ki tarah. Halaki, Kaera me ye sab gunn kuch zyaada hi koot koot kar bhare the par looks aur ettiquetes me woh bhi boht aage tha.
Kavya ko firse phone kar pata chala ki saari ladkiya log upar food zone me baithi hui thi.
Aur jese hi Veer aur Karan ko unn teeno ne aate hue dekha toh apni chairs se woh teeno hi haath dikaa ke unhe bulaane lagi.
Kavya toh seedhe uthi aur daudate hue wo Veer ki taraf aayi. Veer ne apne aap ko attack ke liye prepare kar liya tha.
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tezz raftaar me aayi aur zorr se koodate hue Veer ki chaathi me ghuss gayi.
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~~~
Ek baar fir, uske aam Veer ki chaathi par apna ubhra ubhra ehsaas chorr gaye.
Aas paas ke sabhi log unhe iss tarah ghoor ke dekh rahe the, par akhir Kavya ko apne bhaiya ke prati pyaar dikhaane me kaha sharm aane waali thi? Uss din park me bhi nahi aayi thi. Aur aaj bhi nahi.
Kavya : Aa gaye aap eehehe~
Veer : Hmm! Yaha dekho kaun aaya hai.
Karan : Ahahahaha~ Hey Kavya! Hello~ Kaisi ho?
Kavya : Hmph~ Bhaiya ye kaun hai?
Karan (mann me) : Fuckkkk!!
Veer : Ye wahi bhaiya hai jo tumhare b'day me nahi aaye the.
Kavya : Haan toh inse keh do ki yaha aane ki ab koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Karan : Arre behan!! Kyu taang kheech rahi hai? I'm sorry na!!!
Kavya : Hmph~ Let's go Bhaiya!
Karan samajh chuka tha ki Kavya ko manaane ke liye usse aur mehnat ki zaroorat thi.
Aur yaha se nikla, Woh teeno apni table par aake baithe.
Veer (smiles) : Hey diii~
Arohi (smiles) : Heyyyy~
Kritika : Ahh!! H-Hello~~
Veer : Hi there!
Karan : H-Hello Kritika!
Veer Arohi ke bagal se baith gaya toh wahi Kavya Veer ke bagal se. Kritika jo uske saamne baithi thi uske bagal se Karan viraajmaan ho gaya.
Karan : Hello dii~
Arohi : Hello~
Kavya : Dii! Aap gande logo se baat mat karo.
Karan : Ughhh!
Kavya ki baat par sabhi hassne lage. Kritika bhi. Fir jab usne bagal me Karan ka murjhaaya hua muh dekha toh woh uske kaan me jhukte hue boli,
Kritika : You will have to give her a gift!
Karan : Ahhhh!!!
Kritika : Yes!
Karan (khuspusaate hue) : Tumhe pata hai? Will you help me?
Kritika : Umm... Okay!!! Sure!!!
Karan waha se jab bahana bana ke utha toh wahi Kritika bhi washroom ke bahaane uth gayi aur dono hi wahi mall me Kavya ke liye gift dhudhne lage. Aur idhar Veer mann hi mann Karan ko shabaashi de raha tha.
'Launda toh tezz nikla. Kya baat hai!!'
Tabhi...
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaa~ Aapko pata hai? hehehe~
Veer : Hmm???
Kavya : Arohi dii... Look at her!!
Kehte hue usne Arohi ke peeche jaa kar achanak hi uske baalo ko peeche kar diya, jis kaaran se uske kaan jo pehle dhake hue the woh nazar aa gaye. Aur unn kaano me...
Veer ki dii hui baaliya thi.
Veer : !!!???
Kavya : Dii pe kitni jach rahi hai na? Look! Mene pendant bhi pehna hai aapka.
Veer : Ohhhhh~
Kavya : Aur aapko pata hai? Dii ne bachpan se apne kaan nahi chhidwaaye the. She hated piercings. Darr tha bachpan ka unko hahaha~ And you know... aap ki baali ke liye she even... Mmmppphhhhh~~???
Arohi ne peeche palat ke agle hi pal Kavya ka muh apne haatho se band kar diya. Uske gaal gulaabi the...
Arohi (blushes) : Y-You.... Kavya... Tumne kyu...!!??
Veer (smiles) : It really looks good on you.
Arohi : Ahhhh!~
Kavya : mmphhh~ Haahhh!! Dekha? Mene kaha tha na hahaha~
Bechari Arohi sharm ke maare apna muh ferr lii. Kuch hi derr me Karan aur Kritika bhi laut aaye aur jab Karan ne Kavya ko gift diya toh hona kya tha? Apna Harry potter ka poora set dekhte hi Kavya ne ek pal me Karan ko maaf kar diya.
Sab hassi mazaak hi chal raha tha jab achanak hi...
*Ring* *Ring*
Veer ke phone ki ghanti baji.
'Miss Suhana!!?'
Veer : Hello?
Suhana : Kaha ho tum?
Veer : Mein abhi mall me tha. Kyu kya...
Suhana : Come fast!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : Baithe mat raho waha, utho aur niklo waha se jaldi. Come asap!!! Meet me at my office. It's urgent!!!
Veer : O-Okay!!!
*Call ends*
Kavya : Kya hua bhaiya?
Veer : Mujhe nikalna hoga. Emergency hai!! Karan! Tum inhe drop kar dena. Please!!! I have to go!
Karan : O-Okay but hey...!??
Par Veer ne kuch nahi suna aur woh waha se nikal gaya.
Woh jese hi Suhana ke cabin me pohucha toh Suhana apna angutha daanto tale dabaaye kisi chinta me window ke nazdeek khadi hui thi.
Veer : What happened?
Suhana : Do you remember?
Veer : Remember what?
Suhana : Yahi ki mene tum pe 3 favours kiye the. You have to pay back right?
Veer : Yes! I remember!
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAATTTTT?????
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Ye update kaafi mehnat se samay deke likha hai. Around 4.5k words ka hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Also, iske agle update se beginning hoegi House of the Killers arc ki. Par uske pehle, mein yaha ab ek break lunga.
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Suhana (sighs) : Mein tumse do din me baat karti hu. I have to think. Mera mind kaam karna band ho gaya tumhaare kaaran...
Divya : Do din keval... I don't have much time Suhana... I can only wait for 4 days at max. Par do din ke andar mujhe tumhara answer chaahiye hi chahiye. No... Yadi tum nahi aayi toh mein tumhe lene aa jaungi.
Suhana : I... I'll think!!!
Divya : You have to come!!!!
*Call ends*
Aur call cut ho gaya. Suhana!!! Gehre chintan me doob gayi.
Iss nayi khabar ne... Usse poora duwidha me daal diya tha. Something... Must be done!
Ab aage...
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*
Derr raat me, kamre me aati bas ek madhyam sii night bulb ki roshni me, Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha. Harr raat ki tarah Pari sleep mode me thi. Aur pratyek ratri ke jese hi uske kamre ka darwaaza aaj bhi khula hua tha.
Tabhi uske kamre me ek aahat hui.
*Chhhhammmmm* *Chhhhammmmm*
Aabhushno ki khanak hui.
Aur uss halke se ujaale me ek saaya umad ke aaya jiske agle shan hi...
*Click*
Veer ke room ka door andar se lock ho gaya. Veer apne aas paas ho rahi gatividhiyo se anjaan bas mast maula hoke so raha tha. Wo saaya dheere dheere ek aurat ke akaar me aakriti spasht hote hue aage badhi aur, Veer ke bistar par uske bagal se aa kar baith gayi.
Ek komal sa sparsh Veer ke gaal par hua, narm laal hontho ki chhuvan, uske baalo par ek haath thama aur usse sehlaane laga.
"Aaj nahi toh kal... Mein bhi tumhaare dil me ek sthir sthaan bana hi lungi. Tum dekhna! Tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dungi mein, mere bacche...!!!"
Jii haan, Ye Shweta hi thi. Jo aksar Veer ke kamre me raat ko usse dulaar karne ke liye aa jaaya karti thi. Veer ke jaagte hue toh woh uss se baat bhi nahi kar sakti thi, keval yahi upaay tha uske paas Veer ko qareeb se nihaarne ka.
Par ho na ho, uss din ke baad se Shweta ka mann bada hi vichlit rehta tha. Wahi din, jab Veer ki nazre anayaas hi uske stano par theher gayi thi. Shweta aaye din uss ghatna ko yaad karti aur khud se sawaal jawaab karti. Ki akhir kyu Veer ne uske thano par nazre gadaayi thi?
Badhti umr me aurto ke prati aakarshan toh ek swabhaavik sii baat thi. Lekin, jo sawaal usse sabse zyaada sataa raha tha wo ye tha ki...
Ghar me itni aurato me, Veer ki nigaahein keval uske hi urozo par kyu gayi?? Wo bhi ek nahi, do baar. Jab woh kitchen me thi tab bhi toh...!!! Veer ne usse ghoor ke dekha tha. Pehli baar ka toh ek durghatna maan sakte hai par dusri baar? Wo jaanti thi ki dusri baar woh keval ek sanyog nahi tha. Veer ne waqai marzi se usse dekha tha. Aur yahi soch soch ke Shweta ki raat ki neendein udti jaa rahi thi. Harr raat uski bechaini me guzar rahi thi.
Wo abhi bhi Veer ko nihaarte hue uske bagal se lait issi soch me doobi hui thi jab ek hila dene wala vichaar uske mann se hote hue guzra. Jiske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Aur uska muh achaanak hi khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo tezz awaaz me zorr se hairat bhari aah bharne hi waali thi ki usne apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhak liya. Kahi koi jaag jaata toh musibat ho jaati.
Thar tharaate haatho ke kampan ko thaam woh Veer ko dekhi aur uske naino se aasuo ki boonde chhalak uthi.
'Toh kya ye baat thi mere bacche? Haan?'
Aasuo ki ek dhaara uske gaal se hote hue Veer ke takiye par girne lagi. Jese Shweta ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Uss sawaal ka jawaab jo usse itne dino se bechain kar raha tha.
"Ohhhh Mera baccchaaa~~ !!!!"
Aur agle hi pal usne Veer ke sarr ko thaam apne urojo me dhassa liya. Nirantar woh uske chehre ko chumne lagi.
*Chu~* *Puch* *Puchhh~* *Muuaaahhh*
Apna poora pyaar barsaane lagi.
"Mein ye baat kese bhul gayi??? Kese?????"
Usne aur kass ke Veer ko apne aaghosh me bhar liya. Veer ka chehra uske blouse me qaid adhnange thano par tika hua tha. Shweta bhali bhaati uss twacha se twacha ke sparsh ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
"Mein kitni bewakoof hu. Hai na? Jo samajh hi na paayi thi ab tak. Anjaan banti rahi. Agyaani ekdum. Jabki ek Maa hone ke naate mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha. Fir bhi mein..."
Usne Veer ke chehre ko apne chehre ke paas kiya,
"Mein ye kese bhul gayi ki jab tum keval ek saal ke the tab hi tumhaari asli Maa tumhe chorr ke chali gayi thi. Nahi!!! Woh tumhari asli Maa ho hi nahi sakti. Yadi woh tumhari asli Maa hoti toh tumhe aise akela chorr ke nahi jaati. Hargiz nahi! Woh bhi aise parivaar me. Uss din bhi, Kavya ki party me tumhaare pita Brijesh mujhe mana rahe the. Par ab mein waapas nahi jaane waali. Woh aurat kese tumhe iss haalat me chorr ke jaa sakti hai? Mene apni Bhumi ke liye poori zindagi guzaar dii. Aur fir bhi mujhe uski itni chinta rehti hai. Toh fir woh aurat kese tumhe...!!?? Haan! Wo tumhari Maa nahi. MEIN!!! Mein tumhari Maa hu Veer. Shayad Bhagwaan bhi yahi chaahte the. Tabhi mujhe koi beta na mila. Aur fir mujhe ab tum mile ho. Aur tabhi shayad woh aurat tumse vanchit hai. Haan!! Yahi baat hai."
"Tum dekhna mere laal. Mein tumhe itna pyaar dungi, ki kabhi tumhe ek Maa ki kami ab se khalne hi nahi dungi. Dherr saara, Khoob saara pyaar dungi apne bacche ko."
"Mein nadaan ye samajh rahi thi ki tum aakarshan ke chalte mere stano ko dekh rahe the. Aur ho bhi sakta hai ki ye ek kaaran raha ho. Par... Par ek aur kaaran tha, hai na mere bacche? Hai na? Mein sahi hu na? Tumne maatr ek saal tak hi apni Maa ka doodh piya hai. Aur isliye tum mere stano ko dekh rahe the na? Hai na mere bete? Mein bewakoof ab tak ye samajh na paayi ki mera baccha isliye meri chhaathi ghoor raha tha. Of course! Tabhi toh tumne mujhe dekha. Na Ragini ko, na Suman ko, Na Aabha ko, na uss Sonali ko. Sirf mujhe!!! Kyuki khoon ke rishte se mein tumhari ek Maa na sahi, par ek stepmom toh hu hi na? Aur tumhare andar ka nanha baccha ek Maa ke dugdh ki maang kar raha tha. Jiske liye wo hamesha se tadapta aaya hai. Aur ussi ke chalte tumhari nazre apne aap hi meri upar chali gayi, hai na?"
"Yahi baat hai na Veer??? Haaayeee~ Mein ek abhaagan. Kaash mein uss samay maujood hoti. Tumhe apne doodh se stanpaan karwa paati. Mera bacchaaa~!!!"
*Muuuuaaaahhhh*
"Jee bhar ke mein apne bacche ko doodh ki tripti karwa paati. Iss se bada sukh mere liye aur kya ho sakta tha?"
Wo gham me soch soch kar Veer ko chumti rahi. Jab iss baar anayaas hi uske mastishq me ek bhuchaal fela dene waala vichaar aaya. Woh sannn sii hoke reh gayi, ekdum sthir.
Uska ek haath kaanpte hue apne aap hi Veer ke sarr ke peeche gaya. Aur dusra uske laal rang ke blouse pe. Ahista se uska blouse uske haath se neeche sarka aur ek safed bra ka cup ubhar ke saamne aaya jisme uske ek vishaal dugdh ki thaili qaid thi. Uska seena tezz saaso ke chalte zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Veer ke sarr par maujood haath se usne Veer ko dhakel ke apne stano ki orr kiya aur...
Jese hi Veer ke chehra uski bra me band uske doodh se takraaya, Shweta ke antar mann me se ek tezz awaaz aayi,
SHWETA!!!!! YE TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?????
"Ahhhhh!!???"
Aur usne jhatke se Veer ko apne stan se alag kar diya. Wo ghabraati hui ekdum se waha se uthi aur apni haalat ko sahi karne me lag gayi. Poori paseene se bheeg chuki thi woh.
'Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye mein kya karne jaa rahi thi??? Mera Veer ab koi baccha nahi hai. Woh bada ho chuka hai. Ye mein kya karne waali thi? Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaane ka samay beet chuka hai. Mein uss samay me maujood nahi thi. Ohhhh nooooooooooo~ Ye mein sach me... Kya karne jaa rahi thi? Jese Veer ke andar ka baccha dugdh ki talaash me tha, kahi mere andar ka baccha bhi... Usse stanpaan karwaane ki talaash me toh nahi? Nahi!! Ye ab mumkin nahi.'
Ek aah bharte hue woh uthi aur jaane se pehle ek baar fir Veer ko dekhi. Uska haath apne aap hi uske ek doodh par chala gaya. Aur usne haule se usse masal diya,
"Ab toh inme doodh bhi nahi. Mein bhi na... Kya kya sochne lagi thi."
Ek antim baar Veer ke sarr par haath ferr aur usse choomte hue woh waha se nikal gayi.
***
Subah hui. Roz ki tarah aalam aaj bhi wahi tha. Dining table par sabhi maujood the, Veer aur Sonali aapas me food truck ke vishay me baat cheet kar rahe the. Toh wahi Aabha aur Bhumika khaane me lagi hui thi, aur baaki teeno mahilaaye andar kitchen me vyast thi.
Sonali : Toh itni thi pichle do hafto ki kamaayi. Kul milaake sab accha hi chal raha hai.
Veer : Hmm! Tum abhi aise hi chalne do. Baaki jo trucks hai unke workers ko bhi inform karna ki abhi hume lagan ke saath keval quality aur fame par hi focus karna hai kuch hafte.
Sonali : Thik hai! Fir uske baad?
Veer : Uske baad mein tumhe nayi dish dunga. Aisi jo kahi bhi nahi milegi. Wo hamaari signature dish rahegi.
Sonali : Kyaaaa??? Tumhe aati hai? Kese seekhi tumne? Ek minute!! Iska kya matlab ki ye dish kahi bhi nahi milegi?
Veer : Hahahaha! Tum bas aam khao, guthliya mat gino.
Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Itni hi chinta hai truck ki toh khud kyu nahi chalaate?
Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaha tumne?
Sonali : K-Kuch nahi!!
Veer ne sharaarti dhang se usse dekha jese bataana chaah raha tha ki usne sab sunn liya hai. Aur Sonali ye jaante hi muh fula ke neeche sarr jhuka ke khaane me lag gayi.
Veer ki nigaahe fir apne daayi orr gayi jaha Aabha baithi hui thi. Par, woh kuch udaas sii lag rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua?
Aabha : ....
Veer : Aabha???
Aabha (hichakte hue): H-Huh????
Veer : Kya hua? Kuch baat hai kya?
Aabha : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi toh nahi!
Veer : Jhooth mat bolo, mein jaanta hu kuch baat hai. Kaho!!! Mujhse kaho!!
Aabha ek shan ke liye usse dekhi par fir apne aas paas Bhumika aur Sonali ko dekh woh chup reh gayi. Veer ne uski pareshaani samajhte hi khud ko uski orr jhukaaya aur apne kaan ko uske muh ki orr laate hue woh theher gaya. Ishaara samajhte hue wo Veer ke kaan ki orr jhuki aur boli,
Aabha : Baat aisi hi hai Veer jii! Kuch khaas nahi!
Veer : Wo mein decide karunga ki baat faaltu hai ya nahi. Tum mujhe sach sach batao sab. Kya baat hai?
Aur fir dono hi ekdum dheemi awaaz me ek dusre se baat karne lage,
Aabha : Darasal...
Veer : Kaho!
Aabha : Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Veer : Huh???
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya baatein ho rahi hai? Aapas me?
Sonali : !!!!???
Veer : Woh... Humaare beech ki baat hai, it's a bit personal.
Bhumika : Ohhh! O-Okay!!
Veer (Aabha se) : Kaho ab!!
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Maa ji NSS ki sadasya bann gayi hai. Bol chaal me kitni aage hai woh. Sonali aapka business acchi tarah sambhaal rahi hai. Aapki Tai jii aur Didi kitni badi hotel ko sambhaalti hai. Ragini jii, ghar ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai. Aur woh kitni qaabil hai ye hume bataane ki zaroorat nahi. Par mein... Keval mein hi... Mujhse accha khaana yaha sabhi bana leti hai... Wo jo karti hai, woh mein kar hi nahi sakti. Aur isliye, mein jaanti hu ki... M-Mein... Mein kisi kaam ki nahi.
Aabha ki baat sunn Veer ko ek nayi jaankaari mili. Wo iss baat se kese anjaan reh gaya.
[Inferior Complex Masterrr~]
'T-That's...!!!'
[Maaasteerrrr~ Aabha sahi hai. Potentially dekha jaaye toh woh kuch nahi kar rahi hai. Aise me uske andar ye bhavnaaye aaengi hi.]
'Hmm~ Come to think of it. Mene jab Aabha ko pehli baar check kiya tha toh... Kya dekha tha? Usse ghoomne firrne ka shauk hai na?'
[Yes!! Master! System me stored information me yahi baat hai.]
'Hmm~'
Veer : Tum chinta mat karo! Tumhari ye pareshaani jald hi dur ho jaegi. Mera vaada hai ye. Aur ab iss tarah se sochna band kar do. Theek hai?
Aabha : H-Hmm!
Aabha Veer ki saantvna lete hue shaant ho gayi. Lekin, baat toh sach thi. Veer ko iss massle par bhi dhyaan dena hoga aage chal ke.
Woh sabhi bhi baithe hi thi ki itne me anadar se saari mahilaaye nikal ke baahar aa gayi. Suman muskuraati hui aayi aur usne Veer ki plate me ek aur bread roll rakh diya,
Veer : Arre mera ho gaya hai already.
Suman : *smiles*
Wo bas smile pass karte hue uske paani ke glass me paani bhari aur uske saamne Bhumika ke bagal se baith gayi.
Wahi Ragini bhi aayi aur table ki main chair par baith woh apni aur Suman aur Shweta ki plate lagaane lagi. Shweta Ragini ke saamne waali dusre chorr par maujood chair par baith gayi. Toh khamoshi ko todte hue Bhumika ne baat shuru kii,
Bhumika : Mom~ Kal bhi aap hotel se jaldi laut aayi. Kya baat hai?
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Mene kuch decide kiya hai beta.
Bhumika : Kya mom??
Veer ko chorr ke sabhi ki nazre Shweta ke upar thi, toh wahi bechaari Shweta Veer ko sabhi ki nazro se bach ke chori chori dekh rahi thi.
Shweta : Yahi ki mein hotel ki dekh rekh ab chorr rahi hu.
Bhumika : Whhhhaaaattttt????
Aur iss baar na keval woh sabhi, balki Veer ka muh bhi bread roll ko chabaate chabaate rukk gaya.
Bhumika : K-Kya matlab hai aapka?
Shweta : Wahi jo tumne suna beta.
Bhumika : Nahiiiiiii!!! Par ye achanak se aap..!!
Shweta (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Meri kuch aur bhi zimmedaari hai, jisse mein hamesha se nazar-andaaz karti aayi hu. Aur isliye, ab mein poora ka poora dhyaan uss par dena chaahti hu.
Waha maujood sabhi hsohiyaar the. Shweta ne ye baat kisse dekh ke kiske liye kahi thi woh sabhi samajh chuke the. Aur wo khamosh hi rahe. Keval Veer hi tha jo sarr jhukaaye khaane me laga hua tha.
Bhumika : I... I understand Mom!!
Shweta : Hmm~
Aur kuch iss tarah unka aaj ka breakfast hua.
Jab Veer car nikaalte hue kahi jaane ke liye baahar porch me aaya toh Ragini tezz qadmo ke saath baahar aake darwaaze ki dehleez par khadi ho gayi.
Ragini : Aaj kidhar jaa rahe ho?
Veer : Wahi! Kaam se thoda.
Ragini : Aisa kya kaam rehta hai Veer tumhara...!!?
Wo tik kar khade hote hue puchi,
Veer : Zaroori kaam hai Bhabhi aaj. Business se related hi hai.
Ragini : Mujhse bhi zaroori...!?
Veer, jo car ka door kholne hi jaa raha tha woh acahanak Ragini ke iss tarah ke sawaal par peeche mud usse hairat me dekhne laga,
Veer : I...
Ragini (smiles) : Kab tak aaoge??
Veer : Jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Ragini muskaan bhare uske nazdeek aayi aur...
*Chu~*
Uske gaal par harr roz ki tarah wahi ek meethi pyaari sii kiss usse dedi. Aur uske baad usne apna gaal aage kar diya. Wo makhmali twacha, wo gora gora gaal aur wo halke paseene se bheege kitchen me kaam karne ki wajah se uski kalam ke aas paas chipke hue baal.
Veer ne ek mauka nahi gawaaya aur usne Ragini ke gaal ko apne hontho se choom liya.
Uski shirt ki collor vyavasthit kar Ragini ne usse rawaana kiya, aur Veer car ko reverse lene laga. Tab reverse lete time hi uski nazre upar terrace par chali gayi jaha Suman khadi hui thi. Haatho me uske chhat par sukhaane ke liye kapde the, aur wo ajeeb sii muskaan hontho par sajaaye Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Ragini ke ghar ki terrace aisi thi ki waha se porch, parking area poora nazar aata tha.
'Fuuuucckkkk!!! Ohh Thank God!! Suman hai....'
Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki gaand hi fatt gayi thi. Yadi aur koi hota toh na jaane kya hota.
*Vrrrrooooooooooommmmm*
Aur woh waha se raahat ki ek saans lete hue rawaana ho gaya.
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Vatsala Steel Industries
Evening ~ 4:38 PM
Veer maujood tha iss waqt iss badi company ki main branch ke baahar. Woh akela nahi tha, saath me Karan bhi tha uske.
Karan : Sab ho gaya. Par meri samajh me nahi aaya Veer. Mene tumhe baaki 2 companies ke bhi shares ke offers dilwaaye. Woh toh iss se bhi badi thi. Fir tumne ye kyu chuni? Look! Mere paas report bhi taiyaar hai Veer. Vatsala Steel Industries pichle kayi mahino se loss me chal rahi hai. Aise me apna paisa iske shares me lagaana... Umm... Aur ye ek choti company hai yadi hum baaki do companies se compare kare toh...
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jaega jald hi ki kyu mene Vatsala par invest kiya.
Karan : Huh???
Of course!! Karan nahi jaanta tha, ki Veer ke paas kya tha.
STOCK MASTER!!!
Woh skill jo usne pehli baar use kii thi. Bhale hi usme 100% success rate nahi tha. Par kam se kam 70% toh tha. Aur isliye Veer ne 3 badi companies me se sabse choti waali ko apna pehla target chuna. Yadi loss bhi hoye toh utna nahi.
Karan : Well! Anyways! Ahhh! Din bhar ki bhaag daud me thakaan ho gayi. How about some coffee?
Veer (smiles) : Mein chai waala banda hu...
Karan (smiles) : You know coffee is better than Chai...
Veer : Ab iss behes pe mein raat bhar bol sakta hu.
Karan : Hahahahaha~ Lets's go!!
Woh dono car me baithe hi the ki Veer ka phone baj utha.
*Ring* *Ring*
Caller Kavya thi,
Veer : Hello? Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~ Aap kaha ho???
Veer : Umm... Mein thoda abhi...
Kavya : Mein, Arohi dii aur Kritika City mall me hai apne. I know aap kahi baahar hi hoge, toh aap yaha aa rahe ho. Okay? Bye bye!!!! Muaaaahhhh~
Veer : Wh-Whaaaattttttt???
*Call ends*
Aur ek jhatke me Kavya ne apni baat bol phone cut kar diya.
Veer : Ye ladki bhi na...
Karan : Kya hua?
Veer : Coffee nahi peena? Chalo City mall laga lo gaadi.
Karan : Whaaatttttt? Veer maana ki mein rich family se belong karta hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki mein mall me coffee peeyunga. Tumhe itna sab karne ki zaroorat nahi...
Veer : You idiot!!
Karan : H-Huh???
Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh, Arohi dii, aur uski friend Kritika waha par hai toh usne mujhe bulaaya hai. Toh chalo ab, jo bhi peena hai ab bhi wahi piyenge.
Karan : Ohhh!!! I see!!! Right!! Mujhe yaad aaya, mein Kavya ki b'day party par nahi aa paaya tha. Uss se sorry kehna please. Mein baahar tha.
Veer : Chal toh rahe hai abhi, tum khud hi kehna ye uss se.
Karan : Arre yaar! Usse manaana boht mushqil hai.
Veer : Toh aise kaam hi kyu karte ho?
Karan : Ughhh!!! Fine! Fine! I'll try to convince her.
Veer : Wese... Miss Kaera kya laut aayi?
Karan : Huh?? Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jese tum se zyaada baat meri unse hoti hai.
Veer : No really, pichle past ke 3-4 dino se mujhe unka koi bhi message nahi aaya hai.
Karan : Ohhhh! Well! Yeah! Wo busy thi. Aaj raat ko aaengi woh waapas.
Veer : I see! And what about Miss Sonia?
Karan : Huh? What? How would I know about her? Tumhe unki badi behan se puchna chahiye.
Veer : Miss Suhana?
Suhana ke baare me sochte hi Veer ko Suhana ki teddy bear ko zorr zorr se maar kar haivaano waali woh hassi ki chhavi yaad aa gayi.
Veer : No! Ahem! I think directly puchna hi sahi rahega.
Karan : Hmm~ Wese... Tumne kya bataaya? Kritika bhi hai waha mall me?
Veer : Hmm? Yeah!!!
Karan : Ohhh! Ahem... Toh hume unhe zyaada derr wait nahi karwaana chahiye. Nikalna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm??
Veer ne apni nazar paini kar Karan ko dekha jo apna chehra chhupaane ki koshish kar raha tha.
'Ohhhhh I see~'
[Yesssss Maaasssttteerrr! Something fishy is going on. Ehehehe~ I can smell it. Something is cooking around here. Hehe~]
'Bilkul Pari! I agree Hahahaha~
[Wahahahahahahahaha~
Karan : Wh-What??? Man you look scary... What happened!!?
Veer : Nothing!!!
Aur Karan ne Veer ki ajeeb sii muskaan ko ignore kar gaadi aage badha dii.
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City Mall
Evening ~ 5:12 PM
Veer aur Karan jab saath me pohuche toh mall me jidhar se bhi wo guzarte, ladkiyo ki nazre unn dono par jaati. Veer pehle se kayi guna handsome jo tha. 100 ka appearance tha uske paas. Wahi Karan, jo ameer khandaan me pal badh ke paida hua. Janm se hi royalty ka aura tha uske ird gird. Bilkul apni behan ki tarah. Halaki, Kaera me ye sab gunn kuch zyaada hi koot koot kar bhare the par looks aur ettiquetes me woh bhi boht aage tha.
Kavya ko firse phone kar pata chala ki saari ladkiya log upar food zone me baithi hui thi.
Aur jese hi Veer aur Karan ko unn teeno ne aate hue dekha toh apni chairs se woh teeno hi haath dikaa ke unhe bulaane lagi.
Kavya toh seedhe uthi aur daudate hue wo Veer ki taraf aayi. Veer ne apne aap ko attack ke liye prepare kar liya tha.
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tezz raftaar me aayi aur zorr se koodate hue Veer ki chaathi me ghuss gayi.
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaa~~~
Ek baar fir, uske aam Veer ki chaathi par apna ubhra ubhra ehsaas chorr gaye.
Aas paas ke sabhi log unhe iss tarah ghoor ke dekh rahe the, par akhir Kavya ko apne bhaiya ke prati pyaar dikhaane me kaha sharm aane waali thi? Uss din park me bhi nahi aayi thi. Aur aaj bhi nahi.
Kavya : Aa gaye aap eehehe~
Veer : Hmm! Yaha dekho kaun aaya hai.
Karan : Ahahahaha~ Hey Kavya! Hello~ Kaisi ho?
Kavya : Hmph~ Bhaiya ye kaun hai?
Karan (mann me) : Fuckkkk!!
Veer : Ye wahi bhaiya hai jo tumhare b'day me nahi aaye the.
Kavya : Haan toh inse keh do ki yaha aane ki ab koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Karan : Arre behan!! Kyu taang kheech rahi hai? I'm sorry na!!!
Kavya : Hmph~ Let's go Bhaiya!
Karan samajh chuka tha ki Kavya ko manaane ke liye usse aur mehnat ki zaroorat thi.
Aur yaha se nikla, Woh teeno apni table par aake baithe.
Veer (smiles) : Hey diii~
Arohi (smiles) : Heyyyy~
Kritika : Ahh!! H-Hello~~
Veer : Hi there!
Karan : H-Hello Kritika!
Veer Arohi ke bagal se baith gaya toh wahi Kavya Veer ke bagal se. Kritika jo uske saamne baithi thi uske bagal se Karan viraajmaan ho gaya.
Karan : Hello dii~
Arohi : Hello~
Kavya : Dii! Aap gande logo se baat mat karo.
Karan : Ughhh!
Kavya ki baat par sabhi hassne lage. Kritika bhi. Fir jab usne bagal me Karan ka murjhaaya hua muh dekha toh woh uske kaan me jhukte hue boli,
Kritika : You will have to give her a gift!
Karan : Ahhhh!!!
Kritika : Yes!
Karan (khuspusaate hue) : Tumhe pata hai? Will you help me?
Kritika : Umm... Okay!!! Sure!!!
Karan waha se jab bahana bana ke utha toh wahi Kritika bhi washroom ke bahaane uth gayi aur dono hi wahi mall me Kavya ke liye gift dhudhne lage. Aur idhar Veer mann hi mann Karan ko shabaashi de raha tha.
'Launda toh tezz nikla. Kya baat hai!!'
Tabhi...
Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaa~ Aapko pata hai? hehehe~
Veer : Hmm???
Kavya : Arohi dii... Look at her!!
Kehte hue usne Arohi ke peeche jaa kar achanak hi uske baalo ko peeche kar diya, jis kaaran se uske kaan jo pehle dhake hue the woh nazar aa gaye. Aur unn kaano me...
Veer ki dii hui baaliya thi.
Veer : !!!???
Kavya : Dii pe kitni jach rahi hai na? Look! Mene pendant bhi pehna hai aapka.
Veer : Ohhhhh~
Kavya : Aur aapko pata hai? Dii ne bachpan se apne kaan nahi chhidwaaye the. She hated piercings. Darr tha bachpan ka unko hahaha~ And you know... aap ki baali ke liye she even... Mmmppphhhhh~~???
Arohi ne peeche palat ke agle hi pal Kavya ka muh apne haatho se band kar diya. Uske gaal gulaabi the...
Arohi (blushes) : Y-You.... Kavya... Tumne kyu...!!??
Veer (smiles) : It really looks good on you.
Arohi : Ahhhh!~
Kavya : mmphhh~ Haahhh!! Dekha? Mene kaha tha na hahaha~
Bechari Arohi sharm ke maare apna muh ferr lii. Kuch hi derr me Karan aur Kritika bhi laut aaye aur jab Karan ne Kavya ko gift diya toh hona kya tha? Apna Harry potter ka poora set dekhte hi Kavya ne ek pal me Karan ko maaf kar diya.
Sab hassi mazaak hi chal raha tha jab achanak hi...
*Ring* *Ring*
Veer ke phone ki ghanti baji.
'Miss Suhana!!?'
Veer : Hello?
Suhana : Kaha ho tum?
Veer : Mein abhi mall me tha. Kyu kya...
Suhana : Come fast!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : Baithe mat raho waha, utho aur niklo waha se jaldi. Come asap!!! Meet me at my office. It's urgent!!!
Veer : O-Okay!!!
*Call ends*
Kavya : Kya hua bhaiya?
Veer : Mujhe nikalna hoga. Emergency hai!! Karan! Tum inhe drop kar dena. Please!!! I have to go!
Karan : O-Okay but hey...!??
Par Veer ne kuch nahi suna aur woh waha se nikal gaya.
Woh jese hi Suhana ke cabin me pohucha toh Suhana apna angutha daanto tale dabaaye kisi chinta me window ke nazdeek khadi hui thi.
Veer : What happened?
Suhana : Do you remember?
Veer : Remember what?
Suhana : Yahi ki mene tum pe 3 favours kiye the. You have to pay back right?
Veer : Yes! I remember!
Suhana : Then get ready...
[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...
Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????
Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!
Veer : WHAAAAAAAATTTTT?????
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!
Ye update kaafi mehnat se samay deke likha hai. Around 4.5k words ka hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Also, iske agle update se beginning hoegi House of the Killers arc ki. Par uske pehle, mein yaha ab ek break lunga.
Story me updates around 1 week tak band rahenge.
Aakhir is chapter ko itne bade dhamake ke sath jo khtam kiya hai.
Nd bs las vegas ka name sun kr hi smjh me aa gaya hai. Ab kya kya start hone wala hai. Ye to such me ab bhut hi jyada khatarnak ho jayega. India ke kam the jo ab pure world ke piche lag jayenge. Sath me aapka main female character ka hint bhi mai sayad kuch kuch smjha gaya. Jo aapne ek comment ke reply me diya tha.
Next chapter such me hi dhamakedar hone wala hai. Ab to mujhe pakka yakin hai. Aapki story 1page pr aa krhi rahegi xforam ke.
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Enjoy your holiday broNotice regarding Story!!!!
Jesa ki mene pehle hi jata diya tha aap sabhi ko. Wese toh ye update 95 ke baad hone waala tha. But moderations hote rehte hai.
Mein ab around a week ke liye rest le raha hu. Story ke updates ek week tak toh mein bilkul nahi likhne wala. Samay samay par online zaroor aaunga yaha aap sabhi ke replies dene ke liye. Iska matlab ye nahi hai ki story ke baare me sochna hi chorr diya. Haha~ Brainstorming toh chalti hi rahegi harr rozz.
Ye zaroori tha. Kyuki naya arc shuru hone waala hai. House of the Killers arc. Usse freshly start karne ke liye mujhe ek break chaahiye hi tha. Tabhi toh naye dhamaake se waapsi hoegi fir. Thanks!! Bane rehne ke kiye. Aise hi support karte rahiyega aap sab. Dhamaake ke saath shuruaat karenge apan naye arc ki.
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