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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Are bhaya Ye sui nhi suja hai Jisse anaj ki bori sili jati hai, sui chubho tb bhi chalega pr Yadi Ye chubhoya to sach me logo ki fat hi jani hai...Pata hai101 updates read kar chuka hu to aap ki bhasa aanya or anya ka mtlb nhi samjh sakta kya
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Apan science ka student hai boleto chemistry student, to ye to update hai story ka to ye to n bhul sakta mai aur rahi baat jyada deeply notice krne ki to wo apan bhi kabhi kabhi bhul jata hai !!Ya toh update yaad ho jaata hai ya fir type karte waqt update khula rehta hai taaki points saare pick up kar sake.
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Veer ne jis Tarah se investigation department ko thoda thoda suspense ke sath btaya hai use dekh kr Lagta hai vo sabhi ko taiyar kr rha tha bade jhatke ke liye or hua bhi aisa vha maujud koi bhi sach sunne ke liye prepare nhi tha yaha tk ki divya bhi nhi...Update - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
***
Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
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Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Ye divya ne jo card feka hai suhana pr kahi suhana ke pati ka to nhi hai ya fir divya ka pati bhi to nhi fsa hua lalach ke chalte Jisne yah card kharida Ho or divya ne dekh liya ho, kyoki suhana ko bulaya hi Isiliye hai Taki vo divya ko imotional support de sake... Kya nik ke ju ki nas kharab ho gyi hai isliye Use imotional support chahiye...
Bomb to aise aise fode hai aapne bhaya ki unko samajhne me hi time lag rha hai mujhe, sahi kah rhe the Aap yha Mai to Bilkul bhi taiyar nhi hu main villain ke Milne se is arc ke, btao ek vell settled banda pahle Apne parivar ko mar deta hai or fir apne Ghar har mahine guest bulata hai or unka sikar karta hai janvaro se bhi badtar halat kr deta hai, dimag to itna ki agency bhi clue nhi nikal pa rhi, banda periodic table se element ke hisab se kaam kr rha hai... Ye Emma personal secretary banna chahti thi veer ki pr veer ko kahi or dekhta dekh patli gali se nikal li, kisi amir admi ka boat chura kr gyi thi island isliye vha nhi bta rhi thi pr kya yah sahi Bol rhi hai Ya nhi... Aage veer pta lga hi lega...
Superb amazing update bhai awesome
Aaj itna hi likha paunga mood hi change ho gya bahar ldai dekh kr...
BADSHAH®™
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Just Started reading your story. 10 Updates read kar chuka hu. Your narration for the story is Just fantastic . Love the story.
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Dhanyavaad bhai!Awesome update Werewolf bhai.
Totally unexpected tha ye sab. Veer yaha sabke samne khada sabke mooh dekh raha he. Aur sab veer ke explanation ki raah dekh rahe he wahi ek chutiya Nik mann me khush ho raha he ki Veer se kya hi hoga ??? Ab uski biwi hi batayegi usko ki veer se kya kya Hua ??
Ab ese paheliyo me veer baate karega to Tommy jese gussa honge hi. Par divya suhana ke mann me inn sabse jyada sawal he veer ke liye. Suhana to kafi samay se dekhti aa rahi he aur mauka dekhke le jayegi experiment lab me.
Aur jese aapne kaha tha ki koi guess nahi kar sakega wo sahi sabit hua. Ye guess Karna next to impossible tha. Periodic table ke sahare sara khel tha. Room numbers se atomic numbers ka pata chal gaya veer ko. Zoey ke room me jake confirm ho gaya uska shaq. Tin se leke gold tak sabke atomic numbers use kiye he Nightwalker ne.
Nightwalker pehle welder tha to ye sab uske liye koi nayi baat nahi. Aur veer ko bhi ye pata lag hi gaya thanks to his intelligence. Gold mil gaya par kuch logo ko jaan se hath dhona pada.
Nolan khush he veer ke case solve karne par aur reward bhi milega aur usme Mike ko bhi haq banta he. Nik ki jali hui he aur divya, suhana apne vicharo me.
Wahi Mumbai me niharika bematlab sab mehnat kar rahi he kyuki veer sab pehle se janta he uske plan ke bare me. Ab niharika buri fasi he ye sab karke. Ab wapis niharika ko uske room me saja milegi. Wapis Mumbai jake niharika se milega tab majha aayega.
Emma ne jo milne ka bola tha usse to saaf he ki wo Veer ke sath kaam Karna chahti he. Veer ne professional secretary ka bola aur Emma wo sunn ke nikal li. Ab aage aayegi to achha he aur ye zoey bhi dikhegi shayad aage. Wahi Veer wapis gaya to suhana aur Divya aapas me apni baato me lagi hui he. Aur ab divya batayegi kyu bulaya he usne suhana ko yaha. Konsa card ho sakta he ?? Ek aur killer
Wahi tej, bhavna aur purvi ka bhi scene de do taki bhavna apne bete ke bare me janne ke liye kahi se to shuruwat kare.
Aarohi aur kavya bhi miss kar rahi hogi veer ko. Aur aarohi baar baar hath lagayegi uss baaliyan ko jo veer ne di thi usko.
Waiting for next update.
Card invitation tha. Natalia ka.
Tej aur Bhavna ka scene bhi de hi diya.
Arohi aur Kavya ka bhi. Bane rehna bhai! Thanks man! Keep supporting!
Thanks bhai!I'm back wolf janii update 35 par gaya tha jab lota TU story ak dam BAWAAL bani padi hai or yaqeen Mano 6 dino main 35 Sy agy story completely read kr lii maza agaya par ak sad point bhi dekha Jahan pehly update 2 din baad ata tha ab 3 din baad ata haipar koii na manage kr Liya Maine bas story likhty jao aap .par ak swaal hai ye HOUSE OF KILLER arc last arc hai ya isky baad bhi koi bawaal machy ga story Mai?
peace.
House of killers last? Nahi bhai!
Iske baad kayi arcs hai. Keep supporting!
Thanks man!
Story me thodi raksha bandhan aaya hai bhai.
Waha abhi 2 August hai date. 
GMKNG00
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Dude Third person naration??