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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 204 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
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Werewolf

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Great update Werewolf bhai.
Last update me bhi Nat aur Veer ki Baato se suhana thodi jealous hui thi. To wahi divya ne amount shabd sunte hi deal kar di. Intimidating presence skill party ya kisi social gathering me bahut kaam aa sakti he jaha veer ko apni chaap chhodni ho sabke mann me. Suhana ab Veer ko leke chinta kar rahi he. Wahi divya apna flirting jari rakhe hue he.
Exactly! Intimidating Presence ka sahi upyog ju pehchaan gaye. :smartm: But it can also be used on enemies.
Mystic touch khaas samay pe hi On hota he ye to pata hi tha. Par lagta he ki wo mahol bhi dekhta he. Jese Veer aur Divya akele the, uper se raat ka samay, divya ke mann me veer ki image ye sab dekh ke mystic touch On hoti he. Divya ki jagah veer ki koi aur close hoti to jyada gehra asar hota uss aurat/ladki pe. Nidhi aur Aarohi pe mystic touch dekhne layak hoga 😁😁.
Mystic touch kabhi bhi trigger ho jaata hai. :D It's spontaneous. Agar Arohi ya Nidhi pe trigger hua toh woh dekhne laayak hoga. Even Ragini pe bhi.
Divya agli subah wahi sab soch rahi he ki kya jo hua to thik tha. Ab suhana se baat karegi to bawal pakka machega. Veer ne hi baat apne hatho me li. Kamre me le jake divya ko aaj uski sari flirting ka jawab de diya Veer ne. Divya bhi chahti he veer ke sath ye sab Karna par kahe kese. Ab veer aage badha he to wo bhi sath degi pura. Ab baar baar veer wo chahegi ki veer uske sath rahe. Last me uske andar hi apna sperm gira diya par sex protection ON he jiska pata divya ko nahi isiliye sab sawal kar rahi he. Par wo shayad samne se na kahe ki veer aaj andar hi release Karna aur Veer bhi Sex protection Off karke bhar dega apna maal uske andar, aur 9 mahine baad divya suhana ko ek pic send karegi uske bachhe ki😂😂. Tab suhana ka chehra dekhne layak hoga.
Dusro ki biwiyo ko ju pregnant karwao bas Veer se. :laugh:
Nik chutiye ne bhi galat samay pe awaj laga di. Veer ko ese kamre me dusre ki biwi ko pelna achha lagne laga he😂 niharika aur ab divya aur dono ke pati chutiye jese bahar se baate kar rahe he. Nik to andar bhi aaya par kese pata lagta usse ki abhi kya chal raha tha kamre me.
Veer likes to bang women belonging to other men. :sex:
Suhana ne Divya ke badle behaviour pe dhyaan diya aur sawal sidha veer se. Ab veer ne ek tarah se aadha sach bola he. Kal raat kiss hui aur aaj subah sab kuch hua. suhana bhi veer ki taraf ab khichi chali aa rahi he. Veer ka usse support Karna, uska sath dena bina sawal kiye, sab suhana ko achha lag raha he. Wahi divya ko ek aur tabadtod round chahiye jisse uska dhyaan kaam me rahe na ki subah hui ghatna pe.
Suhana ab nikalna chahti he yaha se. Bahut kaam kar liya yaha. Sahi bhi he vesa wo. Idhar aake khud ka kuch fayda ho nahi raha uper se uski aur Veer ki life daav pe lagti he. Fir kyu ruke wo yaha. Veer ki bhi chinta he usko kyuki usko kuch ho gaya to kya jawab degi wo sabko. Sonia, Kaera, Ragini ke sawalo ka kya jawab degi wo ?? Aur ab to suhana ko veer ki maa ke bare me bhi pata he. To veer ko bachana chahti he wo. Par divya ne aake bomb fod diya. Aur kaam shuru.
Suhana is fed up now. Swabhaavik hai. Jab se aayi hai tab se chenn ki saans nahi le paa rahi. Kahi idhar bhaago kahi udhar aur harr taraf maut ki khabre. Business par bhi kitne dino se uska dhyaan nahi gaya hai. Aise me saaf hai ki woh Veer ko leke yaha se jaana chaahegi hi.
Ab kaam pe dhyaan de to. Fred ko agla bali ka bakra bana ke bhej diya. Aur kesa department he ye Bc har mission pe ek do casualties pakki hoti hi he. Har mission pe ek banda gaya fir chahe wo department is ho ya private detective😑. Chutiya department he.
Aur uper se ye chutiya Nik. Apni biwi ki baat pe bharosa nahi aur ab Fred ko kho chuke to ab Veer ko aage kar diya. Ye Nik jese chutiye bahut hote he. Kaam Karna nahi, risk lena nahi par credit full lena he. Koi na veer ne jarur kuch soch rakha hoga uske liye. Divya ke pet me apna bachha deke jayega aur Nik palega veer ke bachhe ko.
Actually! Itni deaths nahi hoti department me. But house of the killers is different. Department ne aaj se pehle iss tarah ki gang ka muqaabla kabhi nahi kiya tha. Zaahir hai ki inhe pakadte pakadte unke colleagues bhi maare jaenge hi.
Nik pe to suhana pehle se hi gussa thi aur ab jyada ho gayi aur ab to divya bhi kese sath we Nik ka jab Nik ne jaanbujh ke veer ka naam aage kar diya he. Par Veer ready he kyuki mission mila he. To usko to jana hi tha. Par nik ka ese veer ka naam aage Karna saaf dikhata he ki wo Veer ko fail hote dekhna chahta he.
Ho sakta he suhana kuch ateet bhi dekhne ko mile kyuki usne kisi ko pehle mara he. Ab kya circumstances honge uske ? Kise mara ? Wo dekhte he.
Mike se thodi baat karke nikal gaya veer apne mission pe. Mission bada he kyuki ek skill bhi chali jayegi agar wo fail hua to.
Veer ki tasvir ghoom rahi he aur agla target wahi he. Aur Fred ke jese hi veer ko bulaya gaya usko wine di, veer ne check bhi kiya. Udhar wine veer pi raha tha wahi tension divya suhana ko ho raha tha.
Veer ne wine pi aur uska asar bhi hua uspe?? Detoxification ?? Par abhi to veer pada hua he washroom me aur suhana yahi soch rahi he ki kya ho raha he sab ?
Detoxification ka isme koi role nahi hai bhaaya. Detoxification cannot save Veer if he consumes poison. Suhana shocked hai boht zyaada. Usse sadma sa laga hai Veer ko wese dekh. Darr ke maare woh wahi gir padi. Jabki Divya bhi shocked thi. Par khud ko sambhaalte hue woh fauran hi gaadi me baith ravaana ho gayi. Look at the difference here. Difference in both person's actions. That's one of the reasons why Divya is a detective and Suhana isn't.
Divya to jese uska pati gira ho waha ese bhagi udhar. Nik chutiya dekh raha hoga sab aur mann me khush ho raha hoga. Par divya ki halat kharab he abhi. Gadi me bethe soch rahi hogi ki aage kya hoga?
Veer ke liye khaas jagah bann gayi he uske andar.
Sala pitcher ne to hila diya. Esa kya use kiye he ki Pari ki pakad me bhi na aaya.
Uska ek kaaran hai subah ki thukaayi. :laugh: After all, she can never forget those moments. Toh beshaq ek jagah bani hai uske dil me Veer ke liye.
Ab next update me dekhenge sab ke haal.
Yaha veer pada hua he. Wahi pe Nidhi, Ragini, Aarohi, Suman aur baki sab ko thodi bechaini hogi veer ko leke. Ye scene bhi dikhana bhai agar ho sake to. Veer aahat ho aur uski chahne wali ko aabhas hoga hi. Aur bhavna Tej ka bhi mann nahi lagega. Unka veer se milna kahnai ka ek important part hone wala he kyuki tabhi veer ko apne nanihal ke bare me bhi pata chalega.
Waiting for next update.
Ye scene already likh chuka hu mein. Par thoda alag hai. You'll see only one person here. Ju bhi meri tarah kuch kuch sochte ho haan!? :hinthint:
Btw! Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! Aise hi bane rehne ka. And keep supporting! ✨
 

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Oh my god 😍

Always improving keep it up ✌🏼✌🏼

Thank you so much for actress pics.
I didn't know about this actress.
Thanks a lot! ✨
Keep supporting! ✨
Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

Akhir Veer or Divya k bich intimation ho hi gaya or Divya bi ander se khush h usko iski bohot jarurat thi itne workloads or tension se thoda relax or light feel kiya hoga...
Pakad me aa gayi chidiya! :D
Fred ne party m enjoy to bohot kiya per usse ek mistake ho gaye wo free ki wine milne pe laparva ho gaya usne ye bhi nahi socha ki agar wine m ya glass m poison hua to or hua bhi Vesa h uski death poison k wajah se hui h or mere hisab se ye slow poison hoga jo matlab turant asar nahi karta per few hours k bad asar karta ho per main baat ye h ki pitcher poison kisme mila ke deta h ya kis tarah se deta h ye main point h or yaha isi baat ka pata laga ne ki liye phir se Veer ko department walo ne bejha h all thanks to Nik jiski wajah se phir moot k jaal m Veer ko jana pad raha h per Veer k check karne k bad bhi Veer ko blood uska mooh se nikal ne laga ye kese ho gaya ye janan m maza ayega...
Ye dekhte hai hum aage ki kya hota hai.
Dhanyavaad btw! Bane rahiyega! ✨
Kya haal hain janab
Kya story update hain navab
Kya taarif kare hum apki
Bus ye duaa ki apka poora ho khawab
Thanks man ! ✨
Werewolf Bro big fan of you and your story
Ab tak ke story bina id ke parhe the akhirkar id bana he le maine be and my 1st comment on your story coz love your writteng skill bro

Story read krte waqt esa lagta hai jese samne beth kar koi movie dekh raha hun evry update apky skills mai izafa hota jaa raha hai its that like a wrriting master s true skills joke aapko born se he mile hai

So jitne taref kro km he hogi coz story pe ek pore film ban sakte hai wo be hollywood mai

So likhte rhye hamara revo ab milta rhega aapko

Wairing for next update kill the pitcher
Thanks man! Thread me swaagat hai aapka! :welcome1: Saath bane rahiyega! ✨
Ummid krte hai Werewolf bhai ki aap aaj definitely Update de de.
Quki mere tarah hi aapki story ke die hard fans log apna apna intejam kiye baithe rahenge aaj ke Update ke liye. To Please hme nirash mat kariyega. Ek aap ki hi to story hai jiske update ke liye sare readers pani maar maar kr kud ko late night tak jagaye rakhte hai.
Bilkul bilkul! Aaj update aana hi chahiye. Naare lagao, mein tumhare saath hu :protest:
 
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Bilkul bilkul! Aaj update aana hi chahiye. Naare lagao, mein tumhare saath hu :protest:
Haa haaa hum sub to abhi se nara lagana :protest: suru kar diye hai bas ab ye nara lagana kaam aa jaye.
Kahi aisa na ho ki......... :boobyattack:
 
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Update 105 & 106...

Both the updates marked the entry of the third criminal of “House Of Killers” – The Pitcher... Jab Nightwalker ka scene aaya tha tab uski details mein hi saamne aa gaya tha ki wo kisi vyakti ko wine supply kiya karta tha, and Pitcher was the one... Nightwalker ki hi tarah Pitcher ko bhi logon ko maarne ka shouk hai, jahaan NW ko rakt dekhne ka shouk tha wahin Pitcher khubsurat celebrities ko maarkar apni fetish poori karta hai... Parantu yahaan ek sawaal uthta hai ki Fred kyon mara? Obviously he wasn't a celebrity (don't know whether he was good looking or not :D)... Iska maatra ek hi reason ho sakta hai ki Pitcher jaan gaya tha ki Fred ko uski jasoosi karne ke liye bheja gaya hai, aur isi ki keemat Fred ko apni jaan dekar ganwani padi... Plus, kisi na kisi tareeke se Pitcher jaanta tha ki Fred ki maut ke baad Veer hi wahaan aayega, NW ki maut ka badla lene ka is se badhiya tareeka kya ho sakta tha... Isi se ek aur baat nikal kar aati hai...

Department ya fir Divya ki Agency se hi koyi shakhs hai jo “House Of Killers” se juda hua hai, ya shayad wahi is gang ka janmdata ho... Pehla shakh seedhe taur par Nik par hi jaata hai, kyonki uske alawa itni inside news kewal Nolan athva Divya ke hi paas ho sakti hai... And for now, Nolan & Divya aren't looking like criminals... Is assumption ka seedha sa reason hai ki Pitcher ko Fred ki identity bhi maaloom thi aur yahaan Veer ki bhi... Veer ki tasveer thi uske paas, ye bhi ek ishara hai ki koyi na koyi to vibhishan hai hi is sab maamle mein... Secondly, Nik ka ravaiyaa is poore case mein thanda hi raha hai, he never looked interested in finding about the conspirators at all... Veer ko aage karne ka reason to sanajh mein aata bhi hai, because of Divya's flirty nature, par ek detective agency chalate huye itne agents ki maut ke baad bhi Nik ka itna thanda response, clearly points towards some secret... :declare:

Veer ki tasveer jis tarah Pitcher tak pahunchi us se ye bhi samajh aa gaya hai ki akela Pitcher hi nahi hai wahaan Hotel mein jis se Veer ko bhidna hoga... I think there are many! Ye achhi baat hai ki Mike aur baaki logon ki team wahaan pahunchne waali hai, but I think ki unke pahunchne se poorv hi Veer ko kaafi hadh tak maamle ko niptana padega anyatha use Mystic Touch jaisi ek important cheez se haath dhona pad sakta hai... Par is poore prakran se kaafi suspense khada ho gaya hai joki agle update mein khul hi jaayega but still, let's do some guess work... :shy:

Veer ke case mein seedha reason ho sakta hai ki uski wine mein arsenic ki maatra zyada ho, isiliye use vomit huyi ho, jismein khoon bhi nikla... Parantu, is kaaran se Fred ki maut nahi ho sakti, haan usne multiple glasses piye the wine ke aur yadi usmein excess mein Arsenic tha bhi, to bhi mrityu shayad sambhav nahi... Par sawaal ye bhi hai ki Pitcher ne bhi same hi drink li thi, glass mein to at least kuchh nahi laga hua tha, because Veer checked it... Wine mein kuchh hota to, Pitcher par bhi effect padta... Only one scenario is there I can think about, aur wo ye ki Pitcher ne pehle hi kuchh consume kar liya ho, something like a precautionary antidote, DMSA jaisa..? :?: I'm probably wrong here but one thing I'm sure about is that whole suspense is related to the term “secret practice” mentioned in Pitcher's description... :approve:

So, to sum up, Ya to Pitcher ne kisi na kisi tareeke se wine ke saath adulteration ki hai, is case mein usne khud pehle se hi precaution le liya hoga... Ya doosra pehlu ho sakta hai ki Veer ki chaal maatra ho ye sab kuchh, I mean Veer ne khaali glass ko check kiya aur wine se bhare glass ko nahi..? 100 se oopar ki Intelligence par yadi Veer ke liye aisi baat kehni pade to Pari ko naya master khoj hi lena chahiye :noo:... I guess, ki Veer ne use bhi check kiya tha par hamare priya Werewolf bhai ne, jaan boojhkar hume suspense mein chhodne ke liye wo mention hi nahi kiya :redface:... Maybe Veer is the one who is actually playing with Pitcher, yaani us bechaare nashedi ko lag raha hoga ki wo Veer ka moorkh bana raha hai jabki asal mein moorkhta wo khud hi kar raha hai, Veer ko underestimate kar... :declare:

Beharhal, ek aur baat yaad aayi, ki Pitcher dark web se connected hai... It's quite possible ki NW ke Mansion mein jo kuchh hua, live show ke roop mein Pitcher ne bhi dekha ho... -40 ki favourability bhi isi baat par mohar lagati hai... Iske paschat bhi yadi wo Veer ko halke mein le raha hai, then we can easily term him as a criminal, with the orthodox mindset, i.e., underestimating the protagonist and then getting banged... Khair, ab kuchh mukhya prashn hain, jinka zikr main kar hi chuka hoon, and I'm sure ki sabka jawaab agle update mein hi mil jaayega parantu ek aur baat ki guarantee hai ki agle update ke ant mein punah hamare saamne kuchh sawaal chhodna nahi bhoolenge lekhak mahodya... :sigh:

Let's talk about Suhana... What a beautiful build-up it has been of this lady!:bow: No matter how much we like her, we cannot run away from the fact that she's a supporting character in the story, maybe her role is quite larger than other supporting characters, but we cannot put her in the same frame as girls like Kaera & Sonia are... Despite this thing, you've focussed on the development of Suhana's character that I've no words to praise you for this! :applause:I don't read many Incest stories, your first creation was actually the first Incest story I read, but when I look at some 8-10 “long Incest stories”, that I've read, I can bet on the fact that none of them has focussed this much on all the “female” characters, as we're getting to read in this one of yours...

Seedha sa kaaran hai ki jab protagonist ki life mein multiple ladkiyan aur mahilayen ek saath hi aa jaati hain, then it's not easy for the writer to manage them all, and give all of them ample time in the story... But here, no such problem has occurred till now! Iska ek kaaran jo main samajh paaya hoon wo hai plot, I guess you've very well penned down the basic plot prior to starting the story, and hence you know when & wher to give limelight to a particular character... :declare:That's enough to summarise what kind of a writer you're! (Can't remember the last time I wrote two paragraphs to praise the writer about the build-up of a particular character :shy:)... Btw. Veer ki watan waapsi par Sonia >> in terms of story space, is must imo... :think:

Khair, Gaurav ke saath Suhana ke “strained relationship” ke madhya Veer ke saath uska relation lagatar behtar hota jaa raha hai... She has started caring for Veer more than many others... To be particular, there's a difference of a Mt. Everest in Suhana's behaviour towards Veer, from the first meeting in Hotel to this Vegas trip! I think ki Suhana ka perspective badla hai Veer ko dekhne ka aur ye ek major reason hai is badlaav ka... Shuruaat mein Veer looked like a normal guy, maybe even worse than that, par baad mein jo kuchh Veer ne achieve kiya hai... That Ring chase, Aatish, Slogan, Veer's impact on Sonia, Veer's closeness with Kaera, and most importantly, Veer is the only man who knows about Suhana's split personality secret (Ig, Divya knows too)... Is sabke mel se Suhana ka nazariya Veer ki taraf badla hai aur hum dekh hi sakte hain ki Veer ko apne rutbe se dabane ki koshish karne waali mahila ab uske liye behosh hone ki kagaar par aa gayi hai, that's what you call a huge leap in terms of favourability, not in the number but in actual liking... :approve:

Divya... I personally did not get the construction of the “sexual” angle between Veer & Divya... Doosre shabdon mein main ise poori tarah samajh nahi paaya... Firstly, Divya ki liking samajh mein atai hai Veer ke liye, but something like sex! I don't think ki dono mein utni closeness aa chuki thi already... Maybe Divya's western though process built this angle, par isi se ek naya prashn bhi khada ho jaata hai... Divya Nik se pyaar nahi karti, ye confirm ho chuka hai, Nik bhi Divya se prem nahi karta, I'm sure about it (bas kuchh hi updates mein ispar mohar bhi lag sakti hai)... Fir bhi US jaise desh mein dono is rishte ko ghaseet rahe hain..? :?:

Pehli baat, Divya ka Veer se sex karna ek alag cheez thi, I mean, she physically needed it, uske gestures se ye saaf hi tha ki Nik wasn't able to satisfy her physically... Parantu Divya ko halka sa bhi guilty feel nahi hua, baad mein Nik ko darwaze par dekhkar... Iske alawa do baar Suhana ne Nik ke liye sundar shabdon ka prayog kiya, but Divya didn't even give a fuck! Clearly, Divya pyaar to nahi hi karti hai Nik se... Secondly, US jaise desh mein chat mangni pat byaah, jaisa kuchh to hota nahi, means dono ne achhe – khaase samay ke liye ek – doosre ko date bhi kiya hoga, iske baad shaadi ko bhi kuchh samay to ho hi chuka hoga, Nik ka samajh aata hai ki usko financially faayeda ho raha hai Divya ka pati hone ke kaaran... But why is Divya extending this dead relationship? Divorce koyi badi baat nahi uske liye, wo Nik se zyada talented hai, financially stable hai, family pressure nahi hai, to aise mein ek aisa rishta jismein affection nahi hai, use ghaseetne ka taatparya mujhe samajh nahi aaya... :redface:

So, I think there might be something cooking in Divya's head which resulted in her being laid down by Veer, parantu meri nazar mein shayad dono ki closeness utni abhi tak nahi badhi thi ki ye sex ka roop le leti... Mystic Touch could ne a reason, but Mystic Touch wasn't able to result in sex between Ragini & Veer, despite Ragini being more close to him as compared to Divya... I'm sure that there's something that is still unexplored about Divya, and maybe we'll come to know about that in future...

Coming to Nat... Firstly Hande is fckin:hot:... Nat, just like Kaera & Sonia is a really beautiful lady who has faced some sort of depressing things in her life... Her father is dead, mother is in hospital, suffering from a head injury... And on top of that, there's definitely something we don't know currently! Usne Ava naam se pukare jaane par virodh dikhaya tha, kya uske Pita ne uska naam Ava rakha tha? Is situation mein possible hai ki ye naam sunkar apne Pita ki yaadon se dukh hota ho use? Ya shayad kuchh aur kaaran ho sakta hai iske pichhe... Khair, Natalia is smart, she's confident, knows how to respond in a particular situation & on top of that she's damn talented when it comes to her profession... We can say that after Kaera, Natalia is the most perfect girl we've seen in the story till now (Sonia is unexplored currently :sigh:)...

Natalia was smart in calling Divya for help after she got the invitation, I think she was lucky too, that she knew about Divya & Suhana's relation... Natalia ke character ka chitran hona abhi shuru nahi hua hai, definitely future mein uske character ke baare mein gehrayi se jaanenge hum, but one thing is clear that she's going to create a new vibe in the story... In other words, she'll make her presence felt!

In paanch kirdaron ke ird – gird hi ghoome ye dono updates,as usual, the description, the words you chose & the images were absolutely stunning! The efforts you put in bringing this story in front of us readers is absolutely commendable and that's why I really appreciate you and your story... This level of suspense, thrill and adventure in a story based on Incest genre, forces me to remind you again & again, that you're writing the finest story available in Incest category on the forum... :bow:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 

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Update 105 & 106...

Both the updates marked the entry of the third criminal of “House Of Killers” – The Pitcher... Jab Nightwalker ka scene aaya tha tab uski details mein hi saamne aa gaya tha ki wo kisi vyakti ko wine supply kiya karta tha, and Pitcher was the one... Nightwalker ki hi tarah Pitcher ko bhi logon ko maarne ka shouk hai, jahaan NW ko rakt dekhne ka shouk tha wahin Pitcher khubsurat celebrities ko maarkar apni fetish poori karta hai... Parantu yahaan ek sawaal uthta hai ki Fred kyon mara? Obviously he wasn't a celebrity (don't know whether he was good looking or not :D)... Iska maatra ek hi reason ho sakta hai ki Pitcher jaan gaya tha ki Fred ko uski jasoosi karne ke liye bheja gaya hai, aur isi ki keemat Fred ko apni jaan dekar ganwani padi... Plus, kisi na kisi tareeke se Pitcher jaanta tha ki Fred ki maut ke baad Veer hi wahaan aayega, NW ki maut ka badla lene ka is se badhiya tareeka kya ho sakta tha... Isi se ek aur baat nikal kar aati hai...

Department ya fir Divya ki Agency se hi koyi shakhs hai jo “House Of Killers” se juda hua hai, ya shayad wahi is gang ka janmdata ho... Pehla shakh seedhe taur par Nik par hi jaata hai, kyonki uske alawa itni inside news kewal Nolan athva Divya ke hi paas ho sakti hai... And for now, Nolan & Divya aren't looking like criminals... Is assumption ka seedha sa reason hai ki Pitcher ko Fred ki identity bhi maaloom thi aur yahaan Veer ki bhi... Veer ki tasveer thi uske paas, ye bhi ek ishara hai ki koyi na koyi to vibhishan hai hi is sab maamle mein... Secondly, Nik ka ravaiyaa is poore case mein thanda hi raha hai, he never looked interested in finding about the conspirators at all... Veer ko aage karne ka reason to sanajh mein aata bhi hai, because of Divya's flirty nature, par ek detective agency chalate huye itne agents ki maut ke baad bhi Nik ka itna thanda response, clearly points towards some secret... :declare:

Veer ki tasveer jis tarah Pitcher tak pahunchi us se ye bhi samajh aa gaya hai ki akela Pitcher hi nahi hai wahaan Hotel mein jis se Veer ko bhidna hoga... I think there are many! Ye achhi baat hai ki Mike aur baaki logon ki team wahaan pahunchne waali hai, but I think ki unke pahunchne se poorv hi Veer ko kaafi hadh tak maamle ko niptana padega anyatha use Mystic Touch jaisi ek important cheez se haath dhona pad sakta hai... Par is poore prakran se kaafi suspense khada ho gaya hai joki agle update mein khul hi jaayega but still, let's do some guess work... :shy:

Veer ke case mein seedha reason ho sakta hai ki uski wine mein arsenic ki maatra zyada ho, isiliye use vomit huyi ho, jismein khoon bhi nikla... Parantu, is kaaran se Fred ki maut nahi ho sakti, haan usne multiple glasses piye the wine ke aur yadi usmein excess mein Arsenic tha bhi, to bhi mrityu shayad sambhav nahi... Par sawaal ye bhi hai ki Pitcher ne bhi same hi drink li thi, glass mein to at least kuchh nahi laga hua tha, because Veer checked it... Wine mein kuchh hota to, Pitcher par bhi effect padta... Only one scenario is there I can think about, aur wo ye ki Pitcher ne pehle hi kuchh consume kar liya ho, something like a precautionary antidote, DMSA jaisa..? :?: I'm probably wrong here but one thing I'm sure about is that whole suspense is related to the term “secret practice” mentioned in Pitcher's description... :approve:

So, to sum up, Ya to Pitcher ne kisi na kisi tareeke se wine ke saath adulteration ki hai, is case mein usne khud pehle se hi precaution le liya hoga... Ya doosra pehlu ho sakta hai ki Veer ki chaal maatra ho ye sab kuchh, I mean Veer ne khaali glass ko check kiya aur wine se bhare glass ko nahi..? 100 se oopar ki Intelligence par yadi Veer ke liye aisi baat kehni pade to Pari ko naya master khoj hi lena chahiye :noo:... I guess, ki Veer ne use bhi check kiya tha par hamare priya Werewolf bhai ne, jaan boojhkar hume suspense mein chhodne ke liye wo mention hi nahi kiya :redface:... Maybe Veer is the one who is actually playing with Pitcher, yaani us bechaare nashedi ko lag raha hoga ki wo Veer ka moorkh bana raha hai jabki asal mein moorkhta wo khud hi kar raha hai, Veer ko underestimate kar... :declare:

Beharhal, ek aur baat yaad aayi, ki Pitcher dark web se connected hai... It's quite possible ki NW ke Mansion mein jo kuchh hua, live show ke roop mein Pitcher ne bhi dekha ho... -40 ki favourability bhi isi baat par mohar lagati hai... Iske paschat bhi yadi wo Veer ko halke mein le raha hai, then we can easily term him as a criminal, with the orthodox mindset, i.e., underestimating the protagonist and then getting banged... Khair, ab kuchh mukhya prashn hain, jinka zikr main kar hi chuka hoon, and I'm sure ki sabka jawaab agle update mein hi mil jaayega parantu ek aur baat ki guarantee hai ki agle update ke ant mein punah hamare saamne kuchh sawaal chhodna nahi bhoolenge lekhak mahodya... :sigh:

Let's talk about Suhana... What a beautiful build-up it has been of this lady!:bow: No matter how much we like her, we cannot run away from the fact that she's a supporting character in the story, maybe her role is quite larger than other supporting characters, but we cannot put her in the same frame as girls like Kaera & Sonia are... Despite this thing, you've focussed on the development of Suhana's character that I've no words to praise you for this! :applause:I don't read many Incest stories, your first creation was actually the first Incest story I read, but when I look at some 8-10 “long Incest stories”, that I've read, I can bet on the fact that none of them has focussed this much on all the “female” characters, as we're getting to read in this one of yours...

Seedha sa kaaran hai ki jab protagonist ki life mein multiple ladkiyan aur mahilayen ek saath hi aa jaati hain, then it's not easy for the writer to manage them all, and give all of them ample time in the story... But here, no such problem has occurred till now! Iska ek kaaran jo main samajh paaya hoon wo hai plot, I guess you've very well penned down the basic plot prior to starting the story, and hence you know when & wher to give limelight to a particular character... :declare:That's enough to summarise what kind of a writer you're! (Can't remember the last time I wrote two paragraphs to praise the writer about the build-up of a particular character :shy:)... Btw. Veer ki watan waapsi par Sonia >> in terms of story space, is must imo... :think:

Khair, Gaurav ke saath Suhana ke “strained relationship” ke madhya Veer ke saath uska relation lagatar behtar hota jaa raha hai... She has started caring for Veer more than many others... To be particular, there's a difference of a Mt. Everest in Suhana's behaviour towards Veer, from the first meeting in Hotel to this Vegas trip! I think ki Suhana ka perspective badla hai Veer ko dekhne ka aur ye ek major reason hai is badlaav ka... Shuruaat mein Veer looked like a normal guy, maybe even worse than that, par baad mein jo kuchh Veer ne achieve kiya hai... That Ring chase, Aatish, Slogan, Veer's impact on Sonia, Veer's closeness with Kaera, and most importantly, Veer is the only man who knows about Suhana's split personality secret (Ig, Divya knows too)... Is sabke mel se Suhana ka nazariya Veer ki taraf badla hai aur hum dekh hi sakte hain ki Veer ko apne rutbe se dabane ki koshish karne waali mahila ab uske liye behosh hone ki kagaar par aa gayi hai, that's what you call a huge leap in terms of favourability, not in the number but in actual liking... :approve:

Divya... I personally did not get the construction of the “sexual” angle between Veer & Divya... Doosre shabdon mein main ise poori tarah samajh nahi paaya... Firstly, Divya ki liking samajh mein atai hai Veer ke liye, but something like sex! I don't think ki dono mein utni closeness aa chuki thi already... Maybe Divya's western though process built this angle, par isi se ek naya prashn bhi khada ho jaata hai... Divya Nik se pyaar nahi karti, ye confirm ho chuka hai, Nik bhi Divya se prem nahi karta, I'm sure about it (bas kuchh hi updates mein ispar mohar bhi lag sakti hai)... Fir bhi US jaise desh mein dono is rishte ko ghaseet rahe hain..? :?:

Pehli baat, Divya ka Veer se sex karna ek alag cheez thi, I mean, she physically needed it, uske gestures se ye saaf hi tha ki Nik wasn't able to satisfy her physically... Parantu Divya ko halka sa bhi guilty feel nahi hua, baad mein Nik ko darwaze par dekhkar... Iske alawa do baar Suhana ne Nik ke liye sundar shabdon ka prayog kiya, but Divya didn't even give a fuck! Clearly, Divya pyaar to nahi hi karti hai Nik se... Secondly, US jaise desh mein chat mangni pat byaah, jaisa kuchh to hota nahi, means dono ne achhe – khaase samay ke liye ek – doosre ko date bhi kiya hoga, iske baad shaadi ko bhi kuchh samay to ho hi chuka hoga, Nik ka samajh aata hai ki usko financially faayeda ho raha hai Divya ka pati hone ke kaaran... But why is Divya extending this dead relationship? Divorce koyi badi baat nahi uske liye, wo Nik se zyada talented hai, financially stable hai, family pressure nahi hai, to aise mein ek aisa rishta jismein affection nahi hai, use ghaseetne ka taatparya mujhe samajh nahi aaya... :redface:

So, I think there might be something cooking in Divya's head which resulted in her being laid down by Veer, parantu meri nazar mein shayad dono ki closeness utni abhi tak nahi badhi thi ki ye sex ka roop le leti... Mystic Touch could ne a reason, but Mystic Touch wasn't able to result in sex between Ragini & Veer, despite Ragini being more close to him as compared to Divya... I'm sure that there's something that is still unexplored about Divya, and maybe we'll come to know about that in future...

Coming to Nat... Firstly Hande is fckin:hot:... Nat, just like Kaera & Sonia is a really beautiful lady who has faced some sort of depressing things in her life... Her father is dead, mother is in hospital, suffering from a head injury... And on top of that, there's definitely something we don't know currently! Usne Ava naam se pukare jaane par virodh dikhaya tha, kya uske Pita ne uska naam Ava rakha tha? Is situation mein possible hai ki ye naam sunkar apne Pita ki yaadon se dukh hota ho use? Ya shayad kuchh aur kaaran ho sakta hai iske pichhe... Khair, Natalia is smart, she's confident, knows how to respond in a particular situation & on top of that she's damn talented when it comes to her profession... We can say that after Kaera, Natalia is the most perfect girl we've seen in the story till now (Sonia is unexplored currently :sigh:)...

Natalia was smart in calling Divya for help after she got the invitation, I think she was lucky too, that she knew about Divya & Suhana's relation... Natalia ke character ka chitran hona abhi shuru nahi hua hai, definitely future mein uske character ke baare mein gehrayi se jaanenge hum, but one thing is clear that she's going to create a new vibe in the story... In other words, she'll make her presence felt!

In paanch kirdaron ke ird – gird hi ghoome ye dono updates,as usual, the description, the words you chose & the images were absolutely stunning! The efforts you put in bringing this story in front of us readers is absolutely commendable and that's why I really appreciate you and your story... This level of suspense, thrill and adventure in a story based on Incest genre, forces me to remind you again & again, that you're writing the finest story available in Incest category on the forum... :bow:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Ab bahut se to itne long page ko dekh kar ye hi smjhenge ki kahi Update to nahi aa gaya.:laughclap:
Aur isi khusi me wo jldi jldi page scroll down karenge lakin jaha Death Kiñg bhai aapka COMMENT dekhenge sub phle to sad honge ki Update nahi aaya. Fir shock honge ki it long comment aakhir likha kya hai. Aur jab read krne lagenge to mostly ek ya 2 paragraph ke baad hi read Krna band kr denge.:gaylaugh:
Lakin mai itna kahna cahunga ki aapka review such me bahut amazing hai. Aap aur aapne tarah hi kuch aur log hai jinke review mai kosis karta hu jarur read kru quki jo points mujhse miss ho gaye hote hai wo mujhe aaplogo ke review me dikh jate hai. :applause::applause:
 

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Update 105 & 106...

Both the updates marked the entry of the third criminal of “House Of Killers” – The Pitcher... Jab Nightwalker ka scene aaya tha tab uski details mein hi saamne aa gaya tha ki wo kisi vyakti ko wine supply kiya karta tha, and Pitcher was the one... Nightwalker ki hi tarah Pitcher ko bhi logon ko maarne ka shouk hai, jahaan NW ko rakt dekhne ka shouk tha wahin Pitcher khubsurat celebrities ko maarkar apni fetish poori karta hai... Parantu yahaan ek sawaal uthta hai ki Fred kyon mara? Obviously he wasn't a celebrity (don't know whether he was good looking or not :D)... Iska maatra ek hi reason ho sakta hai ki Pitcher jaan gaya tha ki Fred ko uski jasoosi karne ke liye bheja gaya hai, aur isi ki keemat Fred ko apni jaan dekar ganwani padi... Plus, kisi na kisi tareeke se Pitcher jaanta tha ki Fred ki maut ke baad Veer hi wahaan aayega, NW ki maut ka badla lene ka is se badhiya tareeka kya ho sakta tha... Isi se ek aur baat nikal kar aati hai...

Department ya fir Divya ki Agency se hi koyi shakhs hai jo “House Of Killers” se juda hua hai, ya shayad wahi is gang ka janmdata ho... Pehla shakh seedhe taur par Nik par hi jaata hai, kyonki uske alawa itni inside news kewal Nolan athva Divya ke hi paas ho sakti hai... And for now, Nolan & Divya aren't looking like criminals... Is assumption ka seedha sa reason hai ki Pitcher ko Fred ki identity bhi maaloom thi aur yahaan Veer ki bhi... Veer ki tasveer thi uske paas, ye bhi ek ishara hai ki koyi na koyi to vibhishan hai hi is sab maamle mein... Secondly, Nik ka ravaiyaa is poore case mein thanda hi raha hai, he never looked interested in finding about the conspirators at all... Veer ko aage karne ka reason to sanajh mein aata bhi hai, because of Divya's flirty nature, par ek detective agency chalate huye itne agents ki maut ke baad bhi Nik ka itna thanda response, clearly points towards some secret... :declare:

Veer ki tasveer jis tarah Pitcher tak pahunchi us se ye bhi samajh aa gaya hai ki akela Pitcher hi nahi hai wahaan Hotel mein jis se Veer ko bhidna hoga... I think there are many! Ye achhi baat hai ki Mike aur baaki logon ki team wahaan pahunchne waali hai, but I think ki unke pahunchne se poorv hi Veer ko kaafi hadh tak maamle ko niptana padega anyatha use Mystic Touch jaisi ek important cheez se haath dhona pad sakta hai... Par is poore prakran se kaafi suspense khada ho gaya hai joki agle update mein khul hi jaayega but still, let's do some guess work... :shy:

Veer ke case mein seedha reason ho sakta hai ki uski wine mein arsenic ki maatra zyada ho, isiliye use vomit huyi ho, jismein khoon bhi nikla... Parantu, is kaaran se Fred ki maut nahi ho sakti, haan usne multiple glasses piye the wine ke aur yadi usmein excess mein Arsenic tha bhi, to bhi mrityu shayad sambhav nahi... Par sawaal ye bhi hai ki Pitcher ne bhi same hi drink li thi, glass mein to at least kuchh nahi laga hua tha, because Veer checked it... Wine mein kuchh hota to, Pitcher par bhi effect padta... Only one scenario is there I can think about, aur wo ye ki Pitcher ne pehle hi kuchh consume kar liya ho, something like a precautionary antidote, DMSA jaisa..? :?: I'm probably wrong here but one thing I'm sure about is that whole suspense is related to the term “secret practice” mentioned in Pitcher's description... :approve:

So, to sum up, Ya to Pitcher ne kisi na kisi tareeke se wine ke saath adulteration ki hai, is case mein usne khud pehle se hi precaution le liya hoga... Ya doosra pehlu ho sakta hai ki Veer ki chaal maatra ho ye sab kuchh, I mean Veer ne khaali glass ko check kiya aur wine se bhare glass ko nahi..? 100 se oopar ki Intelligence par yadi Veer ke liye aisi baat kehni pade to Pari ko naya master khoj hi lena chahiye :noo:... I guess, ki Veer ne use bhi check kiya tha par hamare priya Werewolf bhai ne, jaan boojhkar hume suspense mein chhodne ke liye wo mention hi nahi kiya :redface:... Maybe Veer is the one who is actually playing with Pitcher, yaani us bechaare nashedi ko lag raha hoga ki wo Veer ka moorkh bana raha hai jabki asal mein moorkhta wo khud hi kar raha hai, Veer ko underestimate kar... :declare:

Beharhal, ek aur baat yaad aayi, ki Pitcher dark web se connected hai... It's quite possible ki NW ke Mansion mein jo kuchh hua, live show ke roop mein Pitcher ne bhi dekha ho... -40 ki favourability bhi isi baat par mohar lagati hai... Iske paschat bhi yadi wo Veer ko halke mein le raha hai, then we can easily term him as a criminal, with the orthodox mindset, i.e., underestimating the protagonist and then getting banged... Khair, ab kuchh mukhya prashn hain, jinka zikr main kar hi chuka hoon, and I'm sure ki sabka jawaab agle update mein hi mil jaayega parantu ek aur baat ki guarantee hai ki agle update ke ant mein punah hamare saamne kuchh sawaal chhodna nahi bhoolenge lekhak mahodya... :sigh:

Let's talk about Suhana... What a beautiful build-up it has been of this lady!:bow: No matter how much we like her, we cannot run away from the fact that she's a supporting character in the story, maybe her role is quite larger than other supporting characters, but we cannot put her in the same frame as girls like Kaera & Sonia are... Despite this thing, you've focussed on the development of Suhana's character that I've no words to praise you for this! :applause:I don't read many Incest stories, your first creation was actually the first Incest story I read, but when I look at some 8-10 “long Incest stories”, that I've read, I can bet on the fact that none of them has focussed this much on all the “female” characters, as we're getting to read in this one of yours...

Seedha sa kaaran hai ki jab protagonist ki life mein multiple ladkiyan aur mahilayen ek saath hi aa jaati hain, then it's not easy for the writer to manage them all, and give all of them ample time in the story... But here, no such problem has occurred till now! Iska ek kaaran jo main samajh paaya hoon wo hai plot, I guess you've very well penned down the basic plot prior to starting the story, and hence you know when & wher to give limelight to a particular character... :declare:That's enough to summarise what kind of a writer you're! (Can't remember the last time I wrote two paragraphs to praise the writer about the build-up of a particular character :shy:)... Btw. Veer ki watan waapsi par Sonia >> in terms of story space, is must imo... :think:

Khair, Gaurav ke saath Suhana ke “strained relationship” ke madhya Veer ke saath uska relation lagatar behtar hota jaa raha hai... She has started caring for Veer more than many others... To be particular, there's a difference of a Mt. Everest in Suhana's behaviour towards Veer, from the first meeting in Hotel to this Vegas trip! I think ki Suhana ka perspective badla hai Veer ko dekhne ka aur ye ek major reason hai is badlaav ka... Shuruaat mein Veer looked like a normal guy, maybe even worse than that, par baad mein jo kuchh Veer ne achieve kiya hai... That Ring chase, Aatish, Slogan, Veer's impact on Sonia, Veer's closeness with Kaera, and most importantly, Veer is the only man who knows about Suhana's split personality secret (Ig, Divya knows too)... Is sabke mel se Suhana ka nazariya Veer ki taraf badla hai aur hum dekh hi sakte hain ki Veer ko apne rutbe se dabane ki koshish karne waali mahila ab uske liye behosh hone ki kagaar par aa gayi hai, that's what you call a huge leap in terms of favourability, not in the number but in actual liking... :approve:

Divya... I personally did not get the construction of the “sexual” angle between Veer & Divya... Doosre shabdon mein main ise poori tarah samajh nahi paaya... Firstly, Divya ki liking samajh mein atai hai Veer ke liye, but something like sex! I don't think ki dono mein utni closeness aa chuki thi already... Maybe Divya's western though process built this angle, par isi se ek naya prashn bhi khada ho jaata hai... Divya Nik se pyaar nahi karti, ye confirm ho chuka hai, Nik bhi Divya se prem nahi karta, I'm sure about it (bas kuchh hi updates mein ispar mohar bhi lag sakti hai)... Fir bhi US jaise desh mein dono is rishte ko ghaseet rahe hain..? :?:

Pehli baat, Divya ka Veer se sex karna ek alag cheez thi, I mean, she physically needed it, uske gestures se ye saaf hi tha ki Nik wasn't able to satisfy her physically... Parantu Divya ko halka sa bhi guilty feel nahi hua, baad mein Nik ko darwaze par dekhkar... Iske alawa do baar Suhana ne Nik ke liye sundar shabdon ka prayog kiya, but Divya didn't even give a fuck! Clearly, Divya pyaar to nahi hi karti hai Nik se... Secondly, US jaise desh mein chat mangni pat byaah, jaisa kuchh to hota nahi, means dono ne achhe – khaase samay ke liye ek – doosre ko date bhi kiya hoga, iske baad shaadi ko bhi kuchh samay to ho hi chuka hoga, Nik ka samajh aata hai ki usko financially faayeda ho raha hai Divya ka pati hone ke kaaran... But why is Divya extending this dead relationship? Divorce koyi badi baat nahi uske liye, wo Nik se zyada talented hai, financially stable hai, family pressure nahi hai, to aise mein ek aisa rishta jismein affection nahi hai, use ghaseetne ka taatparya mujhe samajh nahi aaya... :redface:

So, I think there might be something cooking in Divya's head which resulted in her being laid down by Veer, parantu meri nazar mein shayad dono ki closeness utni abhi tak nahi badhi thi ki ye sex ka roop le leti... Mystic Touch could ne a reason, but Mystic Touch wasn't able to result in sex between Ragini & Veer, despite Ragini being more close to him as compared to Divya... I'm sure that there's something that is still unexplored about Divya, and maybe we'll come to know about that in future...

Coming to Nat... Firstly Hande is fckin:hot:... Nat, just like Kaera & Sonia is a really beautiful lady who has faced some sort of depressing things in her life... Her father is dead, mother is in hospital, suffering from a head injury... And on top of that, there's definitely something we don't know currently! Usne Ava naam se pukare jaane par virodh dikhaya tha, kya uske Pita ne uska naam Ava rakha tha? Is situation mein possible hai ki ye naam sunkar apne Pita ki yaadon se dukh hota ho use? Ya shayad kuchh aur kaaran ho sakta hai iske pichhe... Khair, Natalia is smart, she's confident, knows how to respond in a particular situation & on top of that she's damn talented when it comes to her profession... We can say that after Kaera, Natalia is the most perfect girl we've seen in the story till now (Sonia is unexplored currently :sigh:)...

Natalia was smart in calling Divya for help after she got the invitation, I think she was lucky too, that she knew about Divya & Suhana's relation... Natalia ke character ka chitran hona abhi shuru nahi hua hai, definitely future mein uske character ke baare mein gehrayi se jaanenge hum, but one thing is clear that she's going to create a new vibe in the story... In other words, she'll make her presence felt!

In paanch kirdaron ke ird – gird hi ghoome ye dono updates,as usual, the description, the words you chose & the images were absolutely stunning! The efforts you put in bringing this story in front of us readers is absolutely commendable and that's why I really appreciate you and your story... This level of suspense, thrill and adventure in a story based on Incest genre, forces me to remind you again & again, that you're writing the finest story available in Incest category on the forum... :bow:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Bhai apka itna bara revo dekh kar meko laga update aagya hai 😅😅😅😅
 
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