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Har baar souchta Hun veer apni limit's ki peak par punch gaya hai par har baar mujhy ye surprise krta hai

 

[Avinashraj]

Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
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Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?

Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

***

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

***
Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.



Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.



Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dete hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr pehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

***

Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me bhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajood Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred jese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer pehle baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se sirf ek shabd nikla,

"MITHRIDATISM"​

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.



Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaano waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer aaj marrega hi uske haatho se.

Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a horrifying way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm telling you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar diya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaya tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse firse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...




Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono! Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baatein nahi.

Jab achanak hi,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.




'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!



Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.



Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of almost 5k words. Again, normal length se kahi zyaada bada update.
Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka yaara.
Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

Wow just wow fabulous update bro

 

[Death Kiñg]

Chandragupt ka jab vivah huva usai pahle ghananand ko maar diya gaya tha i think uske baad he vivah huva

Actually ye chronology thi...

चंद्रगुप्त – दुर्धरा का विवाह।
धनानंद की पराजय (चंद्रगुप्त मगध का राजा बना)।
दुर्धरा की मृत्यु।
धनानंद का वध।
हेलेना (सेल्युकस की बेटी) से चंद्रगुप्त का विवाह।

 

[Werewolf]

Ding no comments werewolf bhai completely outstanding update koi soch bhi nahi Sakta aisa suspense create Kiya aapne superb yahan par house of killers khatam ho gaya ya continue hai please reply kariye and keep posting such unbiliveble updates.

Dhanyavaad!
Veer ki waapsi update 110 me hoegi.

Ye ni hoskta itni jldi update.

Aa gaya hai bhai.

Ye kahani hai yaa box full of twists and turns. Bilkul us driver ki tarah jo left ka indicater de kar right turn kar leta hai aur right ka indicater de kar left turn aur jab parking indicators chalu karta hai aur lagta hai ki gaadi ruki hui hai tabhi pata chalta hai ki yaa khuudha ye gaadi to seedhe jayega.

Kisi ke sapne mein bhi ye nahi aaya hoga ki Pitcher chandrkanta kahani ke shivdutt ki tarah vish grahan karke apne ko immune kar raha tha magar use ye nahi pata tha ki ye Veer naam ka 20-21 saal ka ladka usko uske hi game mein Bina Shah ke maat dedega. Kya ki dimaag laga dala Werewolf bhai, khud hi jahar ki quantity badha kar store se skill khareed kar usko nullify kar diya aur bechara Pitcher suspense mein hi mar gaya.

Mere khyaal se apun se zyada koi bhi hints nahi deta kahani ko lekar.

Ab itni well researched, complex and interesting writing ki kya hi taarif kar de koi

Thanks man!

तुम शब्दों से अपने हरबार एक नई इमारत बना देते हो
तुम कागज पर स्याही से ताजमहल बना देते हो

Kya baat hai!

शुक्रिया Werewolf भाई इस मास्टरपीस के लिए

Dhanyavaad bhai! Keep supporting!

Wonderful update....now everything is clear how he survived....

Thanks!

 

[Werewolf]

क्या बात है..!!
क्या बेहतरीन अपडेट था ये,

लास्ट अपडेट में मैंने कहा था, ये वीर का ड्रामा हो सकता है,
ड्रामा तो था ये पर वो दुश्मनों के लिए नहीं, अपनों के लिए ही सही,

और हां, हम कैसे भूल सकते हैं वीर के पास परी है, जो हर समस्या के हल के वीर के साथ रहती है..!!

सिल्विया वेनोम क्युर इस स्किल के कारण आज वीर ने उस जहर को भी पचा लिया, और बड़े हुए जहर की मात्रा को पिचर सहन नहीं कर पाया और उसकी मौत हो गई..

Ussi ke khel me usko maat dii hai.

अब तो कोई नहीं बचा इधर मारने के लिए ?
अब इंडिया वापस च लो मां और बहन से मिलने के लिए,
मुझे उस पल का इंतजार है जब वीर अपनी बड़ी बहन से मिलेगा...!!!

Veer ki waapsi update 110 me

बहुत खूबसूरत अपडेट,
आपने समय के बाद अपडेट दिया फिर भी आपकी मेहनत के लिए ये छोटा सा रिव्यू लिख दिया जबकि लिखना नहीं चाहिए था

Apun likh hi nahi paaya utni derr me. Harr baar apun ko expected time sse zyada hi lag jaata hai.

जोक्स अपार्ट,
ऐसे ही आप जल्द जल्द अपडेट देते रहिए
आपको हमारा हमेशा सपोर्ट रहेगा..

Dhanyavaad!
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Wow such a nice update Werewolf bhai.
Phle to jb maine veer ke muh se container, fake blood ye sub suna to mujhe halka gussa aaya aap par ki ye sub kya bakwas hai Quki 1st to mujhe yakin nahi ho raha tha is baat par and 2nd aapke story ke Update ka level ab isase kafi upar ja chuka hai. Jisase agar ye sub such hota to mai to aaj ke review me aap par gussa bhi karne wala tha aur us Update ko bhi positive review na deta mai. Lakin thank god ki ye sub aapne bas divya ko lolipop dene ke liye kaha. Ia update ki asli suruaat mid se hoti hai. Aur jaise jaise sare raj open hote hai wo sub kar mujhe kafi relaxed feel hota hai ki chlo story apne same pace nd level par hai.

Mene already expect kar liya tha ki yaha par log gussa nikaal rahe honge
Woh sab ek facade tha. Par mene ye bhi expect kiya tha ki boht se readers isse hi sach maan rahe honge. Aur fir unki dimaag ki taare me neeche update me kholta jaunga.

To mere mostly sawalo ka jawab mil hi gaya and bahut acha jawab mila.
Divya ab veer ke liye such me ek strong feelings rakhne lagi hai dekhte hai ye aage abhi aur kitni jyada increase hoti hai ?

Ek connection toh bann hi gaya hai ab unke beech.

Aur Tej aisa kya karne wali hai jisase use sare secrets pata chl jayenge ?

Tej kuch na kuch toh karegi hi. Bhai hai uska Veer.

Aur mai sath me ye bhi aapse puchna cahta hu bhai ki itne dino se veer ki maa aur tej waha kar kya rahi hai.

Pata chalega na iske baare me aage.

Matlb khali hath aise hi to baithi nahi hongi to unhone ne itne dino me kya kiya ?

Bhavna ka toh nahi pata par Tej zaroor kuch kar rahi hai.

Aur kya kayra aur soniya ko nahi pata hai ki veer kaha gaya hai ? Wo apne kaam me itni busy hai ki uske bare me bhool hi gayi hai kya ?

Unhe pata hai. But still, Kaera aur Sonia ke sang Veer ka relation abhi aisa nahi hai ki woh aahe din uski khabar lete rahe. Yes! They are super busy. In fact, Veer ka relation abhi Suhana se zyada strong ho gaya hai bajaaye Kaera aur Sonia ke.

Nd agar veer ke shop me poison ka cure ke liye kuch na hota tab Quki veer ko bas ek andaja tha ki aisa kuch ho skta hai lakin wo sure to nahi tha na bhai ?

No! Usse pata tha aisi koi skill hai. Aise socho ki Veer aur Pari beech beech me baate karte rehte hai. System ko explore karte rehte hai. Shops se leke sab kuch. Ab mein Veer ki harr second ki details thodi daalunga bhai. It's understandable ki agar Veer ke paas koi vastu hai toh usne itne dino me uske baare me kaafi kuch jaana hoga.

Nd kya divya veer ke jawab se santusht hai ?

Woh confused hai par woh ye kabhi nahi maanegi ki Veer ne wine pee hai. Kyuki jab Pitcher jesa insaan marr gaya toh bhala Veer kese zinda reh sakta hai? Aam logo ke liye system bhoot samaan hai bhai. Divya iss possibility pe believe hi nahi kar sakti. At the end usse Veer ke answer ke saath hi jaana padega.

Nd Nataliya ki jaan ko ab khtara hai ki nahi ?

Agar Pitcher maara gaya hai so Nat is out of danger now!

Agar nahi to mujhe ye bhi dekhna hai ki wo divya ko THANK YOU kahti hai is baat ke liye ya apne veer ko.
Nd ab Suhana bhi veer ko strongly like karne lagi hai but wo kud ki baat ko hi abhi accept nahi kar pa rahi hai isi liye ye sub ho raha hai. Lakin mujhe yakin hai ki bhut jldi wo bhi veer ke bed par hogi.
So overall excellent Update bhai. Aise hi hum sub ka entartainment karte rahiye.

Thanks a lot bhai!
Next update kahani ka sabse bada jhatka hoga tum logo ke liye. Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Super update
Mst likhte ho bhai par kya ye 3 din vala gap 2 din ni ho sakta?

Tumko lagta hai aisa update 2 din me taiyaar ho sakta hai? Woh bhi jab subah se shaam aadmi job par rahe. Hmm!??
Nahi bhai! Kahani ka level badhta jaa raha hai, updates likhne me ab samay zyada lagta hai kyuki kahani aise phase me hai jaha galti nahi kar sakta mein.

Excellent Update Bhai bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab bole to ekdum jhakaas dhamakedar mind-blowing & fantastic bahut badiya likh rahe ho Bhai aise hi continue karo app Next Update Ka Be-sabri se intezar rahega..,

Dhanyavaad bhai!

romanchak update.pitcher ka khatma ho hi gaya .bahut danger insan tha pitcher jisne jeher se khudko bachane ki kala sikh li thi par is baar saamna veer se tha isliye wo apne hi poison se maara gaya .

Iska alag starr tha darr ka.

nightwalker aur pitcher dono hi khooni khel ka maja lete the aur dusro ko bhi dilate the .
veer ne bada bhari risk liya pitcher ko maarne ke liye .divya ko to sab jhooth bata diya ,divya bhi pareshan ho gayi thi veer ke liye .
aur suhana ne bhi aaj veer ko gale lagakar bata diya ki usko kitni chinta hai veer ki.
par veer ko aisa kyu laga ki suhana kuch chupa rahi hai ..
sejal ne bura sapna dekha aur shayad wo veer ke baare me ho.apne maa se kaise saare raaz jaanegi .

Suhana kuch chhupa toh rahi hi hai. Suhana ki body language ne Veer ko jata diya ki uske saath kuch baatein hai jinhe woh chhipayi hui hai. Split personality ke alawa bhi.

Jabardast update bhai maza aa gaya to veer ne kar dikhaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai koi naya target ya go back to India.

Ab bas waapsi hai. Lekin uss se pehle ek update me boht bada jhatka lagega aur agke important me boht bada raaz khulega ek. Fir Veer ki waapsi hoegi.

bhai sahab ye divya to badi chant hai. Aisi ladki ko sudhaarne ka ek alg hi maza hai. Khairr suhana divya ke ek call pr veer ke sath Las Vegas chali gai. Qki divya past me suhana ko koi favour ki thi. Shayad murder se related jese ki humen pta hai suhana ke hathon koi murder hua tha shayad sonia ka frnd pushkar ka jesa ki dekhne ko mila rha hai divya ek detective hai woh bhi powerful smart intelligent to uss murder ko suicide ka naam dene me jyada problem nhi aai hogi. Ab divya ka suhana ko veer ke sath me bulane ke piche Kya Intention hai ye to agey pta chalega. Shayad suhana se veer ki tarifen Sun kr curiosity jaag gai hogi ke veer Kya blaaa hai. Nicholas veer se kyo chidha hua hai? Kya Nicholas veer ke liye khatra sabit hoga? Insaan ke khaal me bhediya hai. Denial ka murder hua hai kisi hotel me jahan shayad usko nahi jana chahiye tha. Usne kuch aisa wesa dekha or suna ki usko jaan tak gawaani padi. Shayad divya ne paheli bhi suljha liya hai. OR uska darr ye btata hai ke koi bhot badi khtre ahat usne Sun liya hai. Nicholas divya or suhana shayad bhot purane dost hai. Veer ki chaal kamyab rhi bhawna ji ko uske doubt ne Mumbai khinch laya. Ye purvi kon hai? Tej ko ye jagah familiar lag rhi hai. Bhawna ji ko kahin veer ko Dada ji ke pariwar wale na mil jaye.

Divya ki hekdi mast tareeqe se aage nikaali gayi hai. Padhte rahiye.

toh purvi muh boli massi hai veer ki, jisne bhawna ji ke gairmauzudgi me veer ko maa ka pyar diya. Tej ne maa ke piche jakr ye jana ki vikram uska Bhai hai jiske sath Egypt me thi. Tej NE soch liya hai woh bhi veer ko dhundhegi. Jesa ki lga hi tha suhana ki past bhot Dark rhi hogi uss wqt divya ne help kiya. Veer ne divya ko hadkaa diya or sath me jim ND gang se bachaa kr uski thinking veer ke liye badal bhi diya ab uski favourability 50 ho chuki hai. Mission successful hone se 3000 point ke sath 200 fame point bhi mile. Beowulf's blessing to pehle 24hr me ek baar hi activate hota tha ek baar deactivate hone ke baad lekin iss baar..... Khairrrr very nice

Nahi aisa nahi hai. Beowulf's Blessings ek din me aap kitni bhi baar use kar sakte ho. Lekin uski ek time limit rehti hai. Agar uski time limit sirf 30 minutes hai. Toh Veer ek din me usse ab ya toh 10-10 minute use kar ke 3 baar me khatam kar de. Ya jab chaahe jitni derr rakhna chaahe uss hisaab se use kar le. Par time ghatata jaega. Aur jese hi 30 minutes complete hue, Veer fir dobaara ussi din usse activate nahi kar payega. Dhanyavaad btw!

mike is something fishy

Why do you think so?

 

[Werewolf]

Just marvelous and out of the world update Werewolf bhai.....

Thanks man!

Lagta hai suhana aur veer shadi kare waspas ayyege

tusi great ho

Kya fadu update diya hey भाऊ
Fabulous excellent out standing

Ye suhana kuch to feel Kar rahi hey veer kelye something something

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!

Bura mat manna tumne apni story ka standard hi aisa rakha hai ki yeh episode thoda phika laga phir bhi accha tha

Hein? Aisa? SANJU ( V. R. ) bhaaya, ye update pheeka tha kya?

Werewolf bhai is update ki taarif ke liye shabd bi Kam pad jaye.
Behtreen Lazwaab

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!
Keep supporting!

Tezal ne apni Maa se uska or veer Raj jankr bahut aim role nibane Bali hai....

Veer Bach gya sirf system ki baja se nahi to wo Mar hi gaya tha ...veer ko ache se Jan Gaye the sab is isliye trap kr Mar ne ki kosis kr rahe the Lakin bichra pitcher wo hi pis gaya ....

Dimaag laga ke bach gaya apna hero.

Sala jhantu admi tha pitcher kya shok Pala tha ache ache logo ko Marne ka sale log v is isme samil ho jate the or paisa v lagate the kya log hai yar ....

Duniya iss se bhi kroor hai bhaaya.

Divya jab veer ko sahi Sala mat dakhi to wo Rahat ki sans li ...suhana bahut hi ajb ladki he yar veer ko dkh ke khusi ho gayi bahut b royi thi uske liye jab pas aaya to chod jaldi se

Split personality ka nateeja. Uske mood swings hote hai bhai boht jaldi.

Btw fabulous update brother

Thanks! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

एक बार फिर आप ने अपने दिमाग का लोहा मनवा लिया हमसे वेयरवोल्भ भाई । नाईट वाकर के बाद पीचर वाला एपिसोड भी सस्पेंस से भरा हुआ था ।
पिछले रिव्यू में लिखा था मैंने कि वीर का जहर पीना और उसके तबियत का बिगड़ना उसका ट्रीक हो सकता है ।
उसने वाकई में जहर पिया था और वो भी बड़े अनुपात में । उसकी तबीयत भी वाकई बिगड़ी थी और ऐसी परिस्थितियां भी उसने जानबूझ कर ही पैदा की थी ।

जहर पीचर के पेट में जाने के बाद भी क्यों असर नहीं करता था , यह भी समझ में आया ।

Mithridates.... Secret practice.
Is the practice of protecting oneself against a poison by gradually non lethal amounts.
थोड़ी थोड़ी मात्रा में जहर को रेगुलर बेसिस पर इस्तेमाल करना ताकि उसका शरीर जहर को डायजेस्ट कर सके।
चूंकि पीचर के शरीर पर कम मात्रा में जहर असरदार नहीं होता था इसलिए वो बच जाता था और उसके साथ का शख्स मारा जाता था ।

वीर के पास चमत्कारिक शक्तियां थी अतः उसे जरा भी यह किस्सा समझने में तकलीफ नहीं हुई । उसने पीचर को उसी के स्कीम और उसी के हथियार से चित कर दिया । पीचर का शरीर जहर के कम मात्रा का आदी था । अधिक मात्रा में लिया हुआ जहर उसे भी मृत्यु के आगोश में सुला सकता था ।

Yep! Woh khud ko bhi le doobta tha par chuki woh kaafi hadd tak immune tha toh woh bach jaata tha. Ek kaaran ye bhi hai ki woh ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Wine woh bhi peeta tha toh agar tehqiqaat hoti bhi thi toh aadmi uske khilaaf kuch nikaal hi nahi paata tha.

और यही वीर ने किया । चुपके से बोतल में शराब के अंदर अत्यधिक मात्रा में जहर मिलाया । दोनों ने साथ बैठकर पिया । पीचर मारा गया और वीर एक बार फिर से अपने दिमाग और " परी " की मदद से सकुशल बाहर निकल आया ।
White blood cells , Red blood cells and plasma मुझे लगता है सभी इनके कार्यविधि और इम्पोर्टेंस से परिचित होंगे ।
वीर ने परी की मदद से white blood cells की मात्रा अपने शरीर में ज्यादा कर ली थी जिसके वजह से जहर उसके उपर ज्यादा कारगर नहीं हुआ ।

For immunity, WBCs are important.

इस पुरे वाक्या को आप ने बहुत ही अच्छी तरह से सोचा... समझा... और शब्दों के रूप में हमारे सामने प्रस्तुत किया ।
ऐसे ऐसे आईडियाज लाना हर किसी के वश में नहीं होता । विषयों पर अच्छी खासी पकड़ और प्रजेस आफ माइंड काफी अच्छी होनी चाहिए ।
इससे पहले मैंने सुरेंद्र मोहन पाठक और वेद प्रकाश शर्मा के अन्दर ही ऐसी काबिलियत देखा है । सस्पेंस क्रिएट करने में माहिर थे वो ।

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!

बहुत बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने ।
शायद इस अपडेट के बाद " हाऊस आफ किलर " अध्याय पूर्ण हुआ । इस धरती पर अजीब अजीब तरह के लोग हैं । लोगों की हत्याएं देख मानसिक सुख प्राप्त करने वाले लोग , हत्या करने वाले लोगों से कोई कम अभिशाप नहीं है ! ऐसी फेटिश पालने वाले लोगों का आशियाना घर नहीं बल्कि जेल होनी चाहिए ।

Do behad important updates aane baaki hai. Haan aap ye keh sakte ho ki filhaal ye yahi samaapt ho gaya hai. Aur koi killers nahi hai filhaal. Veer return aaega 110 update me. Par uske pehle 2 updates hai. Jo behad important hai.

मुझे न जाने क्यों ऐसा लगता है " हाऊस आफ किलर " का दूसरा पार्ट इंडिया में भी देखने को मिलेगा । शायद इंडिया से भी कोई व्यक्ति इस मामले में कहीं न कहीं से जुड़ा हो ।

Doosra part toh nahi par uss se jude hue arcs milenge.

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई । और जगमग जगमग भी ।

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Ye kya hi Khatarnak practice thi bhai itihash ke us vyakti ka tarika apnaya Jo marne se darta tha or khud ko bchane ke liye jahar Leta tha pr yha to situation hi dusri kr di gyi, bchane ki jagah Marne ke liye use karne lage,
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Veer ne bina najro me aaye kand kiya bottle me jahar bharna and all, sala पिचर to khud ki maut mara...

Jis cheez se log darr rahe the. Ussi cheez ko apna weapon bana liya Pitcher ne.

Silviya venom cure I knew it, skill to kharidi pr kya sach me jaruri tha veer ka vo jahar pina, veer ne 5000 points aise hi barbad kr diye or dard saha vo alag, pari ko bhi naraj kiya...

buddhu.
Ver ko 4000 points bhi toh mile. Upar se naya scroll aur fame points bhi. Pitcher bhi tapak gaya. Toh nuksaan toh sirf 1000 points ka hi hua na!? 1000 me usse naya scroll aur fame points mil gaye. Ab aur kya chahiye? Upar se Nat ka khatra bhi khatam toh zaahir hai Nat ki favourability badhegi hi Veer ki taraf.

Vo aapne divya ke ansu se naina joda or naina se nain, ek hi paragraph me kya khubsurati se joda hai, is pr to ek gana yaad aa rha hai

"नैन मिल जइहैं तो मन मा कसक हुइहै करी।"

Waahhh!

Divya ka veer ko sahi slamat dekh jo chain mila hai or is puri situation me jo manobhav dikhaye hai aapne mind blowing the Bhai Uspr vo photo ka jadu, sach me mere man me kasak ho rhi thi padhte waqt...

Ye suhana ji ke liye aapne Jo laal ankho vali photo or vo gale lagne vali dali hai park ki oye hoye hoye suhana ji ki feeling ne jo ubaal mara hai what a beautiful presentation you wrote it love you bro...

Maja aaya na!?
Laa rokda laa.

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