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[Sadhu baba]

Well no serious reason but, I thought when I will come back I will find complete stories of those am really liked but I hated I saw many stopped in middle without any ending and some are still so slow that I guess it will take few more years

 

[Werewolf]

Well no serious reason but, I thought when I will come back I will find complete stories of those am really liked but I hated I saw many stopped in middle without any ending and some are still so slow that I guess it will take few more years

There are many reasons why some stories are left incomplete.

 

[Ghanshyam markande]

Bahut jyada badhiya laga mujhe.
Manta hu ye incest story hai lekin sirf sexual scenes likhne se kahani badhiya nahi ho jati. thrill suspense romance comedy tragedy essential elements hote hai story ke.
Sirf sex padhna bilkul hi pasand nahi hai mujhe.

Mai bhi aata hu isi category me bhaya

 

[Ghanshyam markande]

Werewolf bro ye Ava kab dikhne ko milegi?

 

[A.B.KING]

Extraordinary update bro

 

[bantoo]

Extraordinary update

 

[Werewolf]

Both the updates marked the entry of the third criminal of “House Of Killers” – The Pitcher... Jab Nightwalker ka scene aaya tha tab uski details mein hi saamne aa gaya tha ki wo kisi vyakti ko wine supply kiya karta tha, and Pitcher was the one... Nightwalker ki hi tarah Pitcher ko bhi logon ko maarne ka shouk hai, jahaan NW ko rakt dekhne ka shouk tha wahin Pitcher khubsurat celebrities ko maarkar apni fetish poori karta hai... Parantu yahaan ek sawaal uthta hai ki Fred kyon mara? Obviously he wasn't a celebrity (don't know whether he was good looking or not )...

I have already explained this in the latest update.

Iska maatra ek hi reason ho sakta hai ki Pitcher jaan gaya tha ki Fred ko uski jasoosi karne ke liye bheja gaya hai, aur isi ki keemat Fred ko apni jaan dekar ganwani padi... Plus, kisi na kisi tareeke se Pitcher jaanta tha ki Fred ki maut ke baad Veer hi wahaan aayega, NW ki maut ka badla lene ka is se badhiya tareeka kya ho sakta tha... Isi se ek aur baat nikal kar aati hai...

Department ya fir Divya ki Agency se hi koyi shakhs hai jo “House Of Killers” se juda hua hai, ya shayad wahi is gang ka janmdata ho... Pehla shakh seedhe taur par Nik par hi jaata hai, kyonki uske alawa itni inside news kewal Nolan athva Divya ke hi paas ho sakti hai... And for now, Nolan & Divya aren't looking like criminals... Is assumption ka seedha sa reason hai ki Pitcher ko Fred ki identity bhi maaloom thi aur yahaan Veer ki bhi... Veer ki tasveer thi uske paas, ye bhi ek ishara hai ki koyi na koyi to vibhishan hai hi is sab maamle mein... Secondly, Nik ka ravaiyaa is poore case mein thanda hi raha hai, he never looked interested in finding about the conspirators at all... Veer ko aage karne ka reason to sanajh mein aata bhi hai, because of Divya's flirty nature, par ek detective agency chalate huye itne agents ki maut ke baad bhi Nik ka itna thanda response, clearly points towards some secret...

Other reason is that he's a private detective.

Veer ki tasveer jis tarah Pitcher tak pahunchi us se ye bhi samajh aa gaya hai ki akela Pitcher hi nahi hai wahaan Hotel mein jis se Veer ko bhidna hoga... I think there are many! Ye achhi baat hai ki Mike aur baaki logon ki team wahaan pahunchne waali hai, but I think ki unke pahunchne se poorv hi Veer ko kaafi hadh tak maamle ko niptana padega anyatha use Mystic Touch jaisi ek important cheez se haath dhona pad sakta hai... Par is poore prakran se kaafi suspense khada ho gaya hai joki agle update mein khul hi jaayega but still, let's do some guess work...

For now, he was the only one there. Others were those spectators with weird fetishes.

Veer ke case mein seedha reason ho sakta hai ki uski wine mein arsenic ki maatra zyada ho, isiliye use vomit huyi ho, jismein khoon bhi nikla... Parantu, is kaaran se Fred ki maut nahi ho sakti, haan usne multiple glasses piye the wine ke aur yadi usmein excess mein Arsenic tha bhi, to bhi mrityu shayad sambhav nahi... Par sawaal ye bhi hai ki Pitcher ne bhi same hi drink li thi, glass mein to at least kuchh nahi laga hua tha, because Veer checked it... Wine mein kuchh hota to, Pitcher par bhi effect padta... Only one scenario is there I can think about, aur wo ye ki Pitcher ne pehle hi kuchh consume kar liya ho, something like a precautionary antidote, DMSA jaisa..? I'm probably wrong here but one thing I'm sure about is that whole suspense is related to the term “secret practice” mentioned in Pitcher's description...

So, to sum up, Ya to Pitcher ne kisi na kisi tareeke se wine ke saath adulteration ki hai, is case mein usne khud pehle se hi precaution le liya hoga... Ya doosra pehlu ho sakta hai ki Veer ki chaal maatra ho ye sab kuchh, I mean Veer ne khaali glass ko check kiya aur wine se bhare glass ko nahi..? 100 se oopar ki Intelligence par yadi Veer ke liye aisi baat kehni pade to Pari ko naya master khoj hi lena chahiye ... I guess, ki Veer ne use bhi check kiya tha par hamare priya Werewolf bhai ne, jaan boojhkar hume suspense mein chhodne ke liye wo mention hi nahi kiya ... Maybe Veer is the one who is actually playing with Pitcher, yaani us bechaare nashedi ko lag raha hoga ki wo Veer ka moorkh bana raha hai jabki asal mein moorkhta wo khud hi kar raha hai, Veer ko underestimate kar...

Beharhal, ek aur baat yaad aayi, ki Pitcher dark web se connected hai... It's quite possible ki NW ke Mansion mein jo kuchh hua, live show ke roop mein Pitcher ne bhi dekha ho... -40 ki favourability bhi isi baat par mohar lagati hai... Iske paschat bhi yadi wo Veer ko halke mein le raha hai, then we can easily term him as a criminal, with the orthodox mindset, i.e., underestimating the protagonist and then getting banged... Khair, ab kuchh mukhya prashn hain, jinka zikr main kar hi chuka hoon, and I'm sure ki sabka jawaab agle update mein hi mil jaayega parantu ek aur baat ki guarantee hai ki agle update ke ant mein punah hamare saamne kuchh sawaal chhodna nahi bhoolenge lekhak mahodya...

The obvious reason they are seeming to be an orthodox villian us because they are unaware of the system Veer possesses.

Let's talk about Suhana... What a beautiful build-up it has been of this lady! No matter how much we like her, we cannot run away from the fact that she's a supporting character in the story, maybe her role is quite larger than other supporting characters, but we cannot put her in the same frame as girls like Kaera & Sonia are...

True! She's a supporting character. Not the lead heroine. Same goes for Divya. But I focused a lot on both of her. Especially, Suhana. Her role is important after all. And she deserves it.

Despite this thing, you've focussed on the development of Suhana's character that I've no words to praise you for this! I don't read many Incest stories, your first creation was actually the first Incest story I read, but when I look at some 8-10 “long Incest stories”, that I've read, I can bet on the fact that none of them has focussed this much on all the “female” characters, as we're getting to read in this one of yours...

Arre bhai itni tareef!? Thanks man! I appreciate it.

Seedha sa kaaran hai ki jab protagonist ki life mein multiple ladkiyan aur mahilayen ek saath hi aa jaati hain, then it's not easy for the writer to manage them all, and give all of them ample time in the story... But here, no such problem has occurred till now! Iska ek kaaran jo main samajh paaya hoon wo hai plot, I guess you've very well penned down the basic plot prior to starting the story, and hence you know when & wher to give limelight to a particular character... That's enough to summarise what kind of a writer you're! (Can't remember the last time I wrote two paragraphs to praise the writer about the build-up of a particular character )... Btw. Veer ki watan waapsi par Sonia >> in terms of story space, is must imo...

Ohhh! Well yes! Actually, I used to read stories back then and there were several things which used to annoy me in those times. Not developing the side characters was one of them. Side characters in stories used to exist just for the dialogues or for
That's one of the reasons why I started developing the side characters. If someone asks, "hey! how will you describe this character from werewolf's story?" Then my audience should be able to explain them about that character without the need for thinking.

Khair, Gaurav ke saath Suhana ke “strained relationship” ke madhya Veer ke saath uska relation lagatar behtar hota jaa raha hai... She has started caring for Veer more than many others... To be particular, there's a difference of a Mt. Everest in Suhana's behaviour towards Veer, from the first meeting in Hotel to this Vegas trip! I think ki Suhana ka perspective badla hai Veer ko dekhne ka aur ye ek major reason hai is badlaav ka... Shuruaat mein Veer looked like a normal guy, maybe even worse than that, par baad mein jo kuchh Veer ne achieve kiya hai... That Ring chase, Aatish, Slogan, Veer's impact on Sonia, Veer's closeness with Kaera, and most importantly, Veer is the only man who knows about Suhana's split personality secret (Ig, Divya knows too)... Is sabke mel se Suhana ka nazariya Veer ki taraf badla hai aur hum dekh hi sakte hain ki Veer ko apne rutbe se dabane ki koshish karne waali mahila ab uske liye behosh hone ki kagaar par aa gayi hai, that's what you call a huge leap in terms of favourability, not in the number but in actual liking...

You know what excites me the most about Suhana? The fact that she used to flaunt her money but now she uses same money to impress Veer. Look at the drastic change here. This part of her is what I find very adorable and cute. I would have Suhana anytime. Heck, ignore the others. Give me Suhana anytime. She's a savage in both business, and in conversations as well.

Divya... I personally did not get the construction of the “sexual” angle between Veer & Divya... Doosre shabdon mein main ise poori tarah samajh nahi paaya... Firstly, Divya ki liking samajh mein atai hai Veer ke liye, but something like sex! I don't think ki dono mein utni closeness aa chuki thi already... Maybe Divya's western though process built this angle, par isi se ek naya prashn bhi khada ho jaata hai... Divya Nik se pyaar nahi karti, ye confirm ho chuka hai, Nik bhi Divya se prem nahi karta, I'm sure about it (bas kuchh hi updates mein ispar mohar bhi lag sakti hai)... Fir bhi US jaise desh mein dono is rishte ko ghaseet rahe hain..?

I will explain why the intercourse happened between them. There are many reasons ~
First one is that Divya despite being an Indian doesn't have that only Indian ideology. She have heen living in such a city (Las Vegas) that she has grown accustomed to their culture and that kind of lifestyle. She's a bold, flirty and a hot diva. So, doing sex other than your partner isn't a very taboo kind of thing there you know. So, although she did showed some hesitation but a stud like Veer was enough to bed her down.
Second reason is that she was frustrated. This whole house of the killers thing had put a lot of stress on her. She was in desperate need pf some relaxation. However, Nik was also busy with the same thing and he didn't had that much energy unlike Veer to paint the inner walls of Divya. Hence, Veer the saviour.
Third reason was the Mystic Touch and the Intimidating Presence. If Mystic Touch alone would have been there then Veer would have required more than 1 try to pin her down. But since, Intimidating Presence was also there. It helped Veer to claim her much faster.
Fourth reason is Divya's favourability, interest and curiosity towards Veer.
And the last reason is nothing but Veer being hot and sexy for her. XD
I hope that answers your doubts.

Pehli baat, Divya ka Veer se sex karna ek alag cheez thi, I mean, she physically needed it, uske gestures se ye saaf hi tha ki Nik wasn't able to satisfy her physically... Parantu Divya ko halka sa bhi guilty feel nahi hua, baad mein Nik ko darwaze par dekhkar... Iske alawa do baar Suhana ne Nik ke liye sundar shabdon ka prayog kiya, but Divya didn't even give a fuck! Clearly, Divya pyaar to nahi hi karti hai Nik se... Secondly, US jaise desh mein chat mangni pat byaah, jaisa kuchh to hota nahi, means dono ne achhe – khaase samay ke liye ek – doosre ko date bhi kiya hoga, iske baad shaadi ko bhi kuchh samay to ho hi chuka hoga, Nik ka samajh aata hai ki usko financially faayeda ho raha hai Divya ka pati hone ke kaaran... But why is Divya extending this dead relationship? Divorce koyi badi baat nahi uske liye, wo Nik se zyada talented hai, financially stable hai, family pressure nahi hai, to aise mein ek aisa rishta jismein affection nahi hai, use ghaseetne ka taatparya mujhe samajh nahi aaya...

Just like Suhana, there's a reason why Divya is with Nik. We'll see this very soon.

So, I think there might be something cooking in Divya's head which resulted in her being laid down by Veer, parantu meri nazar mein shayad dono ki closeness utni abhi tak nahi badhi thi ki ye sex ka roop le leti... Mystic Touch could ne a reason, but Mystic Touch wasn't able to result in sex between Ragini & Veer, despite Ragini being more close to him as compared to Divya... I'm sure that there's something that is still unexplored about Divya, and maybe we'll come to know about that in future...

Yes! That's what I explained above. Mystic Touch alone would have taken at least two tries for Veer to subdue her. But there was Intimidating prescen too. Divya at that time felt like a slave of Veer who was commanding her and was there to subdue her. She felt like she should worship him. Hence, also the reason why she blushed in the morning while looking at Veer. She couldn't stare at him for long. Also, she's a submissive one

Coming to Nat... Firstly Hande is fckin... Nat, just like Kaera & Sonia is a really beautiful lady who has faced some sort of depressing things in her life... Her father is dead, mother is in hospital, suffering from a head injury... And on top of that, there's definitely something we don't know currently! Usne Ava naam se pukare jaane par virodh dikhaya tha, kya uske Pita ne uska naam Ava rakha tha? Is situation mein possible hai ki ye naam sunkar apne Pita ki yaadon se dukh hota ho use? Ya shayad kuchh aur kaaran ho sakta hai iske pichhe... Khair, Natalia is smart, she's confident, knows how to respond in a particular situation & on top of that she's damn talented when it comes to her profession... We can say that after Kaera, Natalia is the most perfect girl we've seen in the story till now (Sonia is unexplored currently )...

As story will progress we'll come to know more about her personality. Same goes for Sonia too.

Natalia was smart in calling Divya for help after she got the invitation, I think she was lucky too, that she knew about Divya & Suhana's relation... Natalia ke character ka chitran hona abhi shuru nahi hua hai, definitely future mein uske character ke baare mein gehrayi se jaanenge hum, but one thing is clear that she's going to create a new vibe in the story... In other words, she'll make her presence felt!

Her persona, aura is as strong as Kaera's. She's the only one who can compete with Nat. Now don't think Sonia is inferior in all aspects. You'll come to realise how lovely sonia is.

In paanch kirdaron ke ird – gird hi ghoome ye dono updates,as usual, the description, the words you chose & the images were absolutely stunning! The efforts you put in bringing this story in front of us readers is absolutely commendable and that's why I really appreciate you and your story... This level of suspense, thrill and adventure in a story based on Incest genre, forces me to remind you again & again, that you're writing the finest story available in Incest category on the forum...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Arre bhai bas bas... Itti tareef...
Thanks a lot for such a lovely and Massive revo man. You are one of those readers who know what to point out and what not. No one actually pointed out about Suhana's character change except you and Rihanna
So, going into the character's characteristics and behaviours along with their purposes. You are very good at that.
Toh Aise hi bane rehne ka man!
Keep supporting!

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[Shakir Meman]

Awesome update

 

[Story readers]

Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
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Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?

Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

***

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

***
Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.



Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.



Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dete hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr pehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

***

Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me bhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajood Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred jese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer pehle baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se sirf ek shabd nikla,

"MITHRIDATISM"​

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.



Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaano waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer aaj marrega hi uske haatho se.

Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a horrifying way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm telling you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar diya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaya tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse firse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...




Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono! Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baatein nahi.

Jab achanak hi,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.




'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!



Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.



Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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