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[Werewolf]

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Pichle update ke last me ek achha clifhanger diya tha tejal ko sidhe Nidhi ke ghar pe lake. Wahi se utsukta badh gayi thi iss update ko leke. Aur kahi se bhi ye update sadharan nahi he.
Tejal ne jo suna wo sunn ke usse yakin hi nahi ho raha ki veer inn sab baato se gujar chuka he. Juhi ka behaviour bhi ekdum sahi he. Bachhe aksar esa hi karte he. Wo ese hi anjaan logo ke samne nahi aa jate. Aur juhi ab bhavishya me sirf Nidhi ki hi beti nahi rahegi.

Mein samajh Raha hu ju kya kehna chaah rahe ho.

Masti me Veer ko papa bolne lagegi aur fir roj bolegi

Tejal sab confirm Karna chahti he isiliye ye kasam wali baat samne layi wo. Wahi Nidhi wahi soch rahi he jo aam vyakti sochega iss samay. Ab veer ki chinta bhi he usko ki uske ye sab batane se veer pe koi musibat na aaye.

Bilkul! Usne bata toh Diya hai par mann me Veer ko leke chintit hai woh abhi.

Ab tejal Nidhi ke ghar se pehle college ghum ke aayi he. Usne sab info le li he veer ki jo wo le sakti thi. Ab veer college me famous bhi ho raha he wo ye ladki aur tejal wale scene me dikhta he. Ab veer ki baate bhi hoti hongi class me aur ladkiyo ke bich. Par inn sab baato me abhi to tejal ko interest nahi he par baad me sab baate yaad aayegi aur jalan ke mare kahi ek do ke gaal hi na laal karde.

Saath hi Veer ke liye ab ladkiya approach maarti hai par Veer unhe bhaav nahi deta college me.

Nidhi aur veer ko leke baate to banegi hi jab roj sath me aate the. Inn sab baato se veer ke prati ek jalan bhi hui he tejal ko par wo jyada der nahi rahi jab Nidhi ki baato ne uski aankhe kholi. Sab sach bataya. Nidhi ne veer ke pariwar ke sabhi logo ka sach samne rakha. Aur ye achha kiya Nidhi ne ki jo sach he wahi kaha. Jab veer Nidhi ko mila tha tab uske pariwar wale kisi ne uski haal chaal nahi li thi. Tajal sab dhyaan se sunn rahi he aur kuch samay ke liye wo Nidhi ki baato ko base banake hi sab ko Judge karegi jab tak wo unse mil nahi leti.

Ek general idea lag gaya hai usse. Aur jankaari woh kahi aur se legi.

Aarohi, Ragini sab sudhar chuki he par tejal thodi na koi daya dikhayegi jab sab ne uske bhai ko dhutkar diya tha. Majha aayega jab tejal sabse milegi aur veer se kiye gaye vyavhaar ka badla legi. Ab tejal bhi plan bana ke bethi he par usse pehle wo iss meeting ho jana chahti he purvi aur veer ke bich.

Agar woh Aisa nahi karegi toh Purvi ko Shaq ho jayega ki woh peeth peeche kuch jhol kar rahi hai. Isliye Tejal ne Purvi aur Veer ki meet disrupt nahi kii.

Wahi aaj veer ne to sidhe suman aur niharika ko unki office me hi baja dala. Suman apne Malik ko chinta nahi dena chahti thi isiliye nahi kaha par Veer kese chup rahe jab uski dono slave ko koi aur gaali de jaye. Ab aage se suman sab report karegi jo bhi hoga. Aur sure koi he jo basti wale logo ko bhadka raha he. Abhi aage veer aur kuch kahe usse pehle hi uska schedule fix ho gaya.
Purvi se 6 baje aur 7 baje kaera ko.
Ab kaera ne to samne se kaha he ki Veer ko usse sab phone karke batana chahiye ki wo kaha he. Ab ese to wo haq hi jata rahi he Veer pe. Aur ye wo kyu kar rahi he wo usse khud nahi pata. Feelings to uske andar bhi aayegi uske andar dhire dhire. Par ab kaera ne samne se usko kaha he to wo bhi time spend Karna chahti he. Aur kaera jab bulaye to samjhdaari yahi he ki chup chap chale jaye veer.

Woh ek prakaar se request ke roop me nahi. Order ke roop me Veer ko bulaayi hai.
It's like when you order a waiter to bring tea to your table. Aur sabse mazedaar baat ye hai ki usse iss baat ka realisation bhi nahi hai.

Wahi kaera bhi bethi hogi wo teady bear leke, ya veer ke blazer ko latka ke rakhi hogi apne wardrobe me.
Waiting for next update.
And congratulations.

Dekhna hoga ye. Haha!
Kheer! Thanks a lot buddy!
Naya update already posted hai. Padh ke apni raay zaroor rakhna.
Keep supporting!

 

[Yashi]

Nice update

 

[Awan Badshah]

Update - 114 ~ Blunder (2)
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Ab tak...

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par do messages aa gaye.

Veer : huh!?

Veer ne check kiya toh paaya ki, ek purvi ka tha aur dusra... Miss Kaera ka!!!

Purvi : Hum shaam ko 6 baje milenge. Vikram!

Kaera : Tonight!! Come to my home @ 7 PM!!!

'Ahh! Shit!!! Firse nahi! The timing...!'

[Oops!]

Ab aage...

"Ye tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rahe ho?" Niharika ki ghabraati hui awaaz aayi.

Veer car drive kar raha tha aur woh sehmi sii bagal se baithi hui thi. Toh wahi peeche waali seat par Suman virajman thi. Hontho par ajeeb sii ek muskaan sajaye.

Veer : Ye samajh lo ki tumhare hi liye chal rahe hai. Wese!? Kya hua? Aur koi plan nahi bana rahi tum mere khilaaf? Hmm? Hacking didn't work after all. Right?

Niharika : M-Mein...!

Uske chehre se uska rang hi udd gaya. Veer ne kitni casually uss baat ko saamne rakh diya jis ke liye woh itna ghabra rahi thi.

Veer : Mein!? Mein kya? Kuch bolo bhi!

Niharika : N-No!

Veer : Dhyaan rahe! You...

Niharika : !!?

Veer (smiles) : ... are my slave!

Sunte hi Niharika ka badan kaanp utha. Veer usse yaad dila raha tha ki bhale hi woh kitni raees kyu na ho, bhale hi itne bade mahila mandal ki head kyu na ho, aur bhale hi kisi badi company ki HR Head kyu na ho. Antatah, woh thi toh sirf uski ek daasi hi. Ek slave!

Kitna hi mardo se kyu na nafrat rakh le. Uski jagah Veer ke lund ke neeche hi thi. Jo ki khud ek mard tha. Obviously, Veer ka ye nazariya nahi tha harr aurat ke prati. Par Niharika jesi aurat ke liye?

Yahi tareeqa sahi tha!

Bekaar sa muh banaaye Niharika window ke baahar dekhne lagi. Usse abhi ghabraahat ke saath saath itna gussa aa raha tha ki agar uska bas chalta toh yahi Veer ki zubaan kheech leti. Par...

Aisa karne ki himmat uske paas hargiz maujood nahi thi. Kyuki uske baad ke parinaam ke baare me woh sochna bhi nahi chaahti thi. Jo dhakke fir Veer baad me lagaata, uske unn chuttado pe jo zordaar thappade woh maarta, usse imagine kar ke hi achanak uske gaal laal pad gaye.

Niharika : G-Gaadi roko do minute!

Veer : Hmm?

Niharika : M-Mujhe peeche baithna hai.

Veer (smiles) : Aur kyu bhala?

Woh achanak hi uske kaan ki orr jhuka,

Veer : Darr lag raha hai?

Niharika : A-Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! G-Gaadi roko fauran!

Veer ek shaitaani muskaan liye gaadi ko side me roka toh Niharika fatafat uth ke peeche ki seat par jaa kar baith gayi jaha Suman akeli baithi hui thi.

Kuch derr tak gaadi me yu hi khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Aur Niharika khisak ke Suman ke qareeb aayi,

Niharika : T-Tum...!

Par Suman ko Niharika ki khuspusahat sunnayi na dii.

Niharika : H-Hey!! Tch Tch! Oye! Tum...

Suman : Hmm?

Niharika : Suno!

Suman : Mm?

Niharika (khuspusaate hue) : Tum...! Mere paas tumhare liye ek bohot accha sujhaav hai.

Suman : Sujhaav?

Niharika : Haan! Ek sujhaav! Tumhe ye ek naukrani ki zindagi pasand aa rahi hai? Mein janti hu andar hi andar tum yaha se bhaagna chaahti ho. Hai na?

Suman : Huh!!? T-Tumhe kese pata?

Niharika Suman ka reaction dekh mann hi mann khush hui,

Niharika : Of course! Tum jesi prabal aurat ek tucch mard ke neeche kese reh sakti hai bhala? Mein jaanti hu tum naatak kar rahi thi. Haha!

Suman : T-Toh ab?

Niharika : Mein tumhe iss daldal se baahar nikaal sakti hu.

Suman : K-Kaise?

Niharika : Mera saath do bas! Mein jesa jesa kehti hu bas wesa wesa karna. Fir dekhna, tum aur mein. Hum dono hi iss chutiye ke changul se baahar honge.

Suman : Sach me?

Niharika (smiles) : Haan!

Suman : T-Toh mujhe kya karna hoga?

Niharika : Iski saari khabar mujhe deti rehna bas. Aur tumhe ek kaam aur karna hai. Iska mobile khol tumhe usme ek video dhundhni hai.

Suman : K-Kaisi video?

Niharika : Iss haram khor ke paas ek video hai meri. Tumhe woh dhundhni hai. Aur usse dhundhne ke baad tumhe usse delete karna hai.

Suman : Uss se kya hoga?

Niharika : Uss se kya hoga? Hahaha~ Uss se hi toh sab kuch hoga. Agar tumne ye kar diya, toh fir dekhna. Mein tumhe iss harami ki pakad se azaad kar dungi. Bas! Bas ek baar woh video haath lag jaaye.

Suman (nods) : Theek hai! M-Mein koshish karungi.

Niharika : Koshish nahi! Tumhe ye karna hi hoga.

Suman : P-Par mein ye kese maan lu ki tum apni baat se paltogi nahi?

Niharika : Hmph! Niharika Bansal naam hai mera. Aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua ki mein apni kahi gayi baat se muqar jau. Ek baar jo zubaan de deti hu toh uss se peeche nahi hatt'ti kabhi. Aur wese bhi, tum jesi aurat toh mere under kaam karni chahiye. Uss chutiye ke neeche nahi. Tum dekhna, tumhari zindagi badal ke rakh dungi mein. Laakho kamaogi tum, laakho. Aas paas naukaar ghoomenge.

Suman : Agar aisa hai t-toh theek hai.

Niharika (smiles) : Samajhdar ho tum! Bas, lag jao apne kaam pe. Dhyaan rahe usse pata na lagne paaye.

Suman (nods) : Hmm!

Suman shaant rahi. Idhar Veer chup chaap peeche ho rahe drishya ko mirror me dekh raha tha.

Aur abhi mushqil se 3-4 minute hi huye the jab Suman ne shaanti ko bhang kiya,

Suman : Maalik! Woh dekhiye! Kulfi waale ka thela. Zara rokiye na gaadi.

Veer : Hmm? Tumhe kulfi khaani hai? Iss mausam me?

Suman : Jii! Kyuki jald hi thand aa jayegi aur fir kulfi waale dikhayi nahi denge. Kya aap bhi lenge?

Veer : Nahi!

Suman ne fir ishaare se Niharika ki orr dekha aur uss se puchna chaaha toh Niharika ne bhi sarr hila ke mana kar diya.

Kulfi? Aur woh? Baskin Robbins, Kwality walls jesi brands ki ice creams khaati thi woh. aur ye Suman kya puch rahi thi uss se? Thele me rakhi kulfi? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Soch bhi kese liya iss aurat ne ki Niharika Bansal aise roadside chhapri thele par khade hoke kulfi khayegi?

Gareeb logo ki choti pasand par paiso ki guroor waali muskaan liye woh Suman ko gaadi se utarte hue dekhti rahi,

Suman utar ke kulfi khareedi aur waapas se andar aake baith gayi. Uske dono haatho me ek ek kulfi thi.

Niharika : Hmm? Tum do do khaogi?

Suman (smiles) : Nahi toh!

Niharika : Toh ye dusri?

Suman (smiles) : Bataati hu! Maalik! Zara peeche aaiye na!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suman : Aaiye na! Please!

Suman ki zidd maan Veer peeche aaya toh Niharika thodi dur sarak gayi aur ekdum car ke door se chipak ke baith gayi.

Suman ne dono kulfi Veer ko thamaayi aur fir ahista se uthi,

Niharika : Huh!?

Aur agle hi pal,

"Ahhhhhh!"

Usne Niharika ko zorr se baal pakadte hue usse ghumaaya aur uska sarr backrest par daba ke uski saree upar chadha dii,

Niharika : Aahhhhhhh!! Kutti... Y-Ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Ch-Chorro mujhe... Aarrrghh!!! Nnnghhh~ C-Chorr!! Kameeni...!!!

Suman : Ab ek shabd bhi tere muh se nikla na toh abhi nanga kar ke tujhe gaadi se baahar fek dungi.

Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt? Y-You dare threaten m- Aaahhhhnnnnn!!!!!

Iske pehle ki woh kuch bol paati Suman ne uske jhutre pakad uska sarr aur zorr se kheecha aur dusre haath se uski saree ko poora upar chadha diya. Saamne ab keval Niharika ki saaf suthri choot dikh rahi thi.

Veer aashcharya me apne haatho me kulfi liye sab kuch dekh raha tha. Aur woh aur chakit tab hua jab Suman ne apna agla daav khela.

Veer ke haath se ek kulfi lete hue Suman ne Niharika ko dekha aur fir...

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh maaaaaaaaaa~"

Woh thandi thandi kulfi Suman ne,

Seedhe Niharika ki tapti garam choot ke hontho ko fela kar uske andar pel dii.

Niharika : Aaahahahahhhhh nnnnnnnaaa m-maaaaaa sssssssss~ N-Nikaaaloooo maaaa~ nnnnghhhhhhh~ Ayyyyyiiiiiiiiiiii... Uuuuuhuhuhuuuu

Uski choot fafkaar maarne lagi, woh macchli ki tarah chhatpatate hue apni kamar hilaane lagi. Uski garam bhatti me ek itna thanda padaarth aake ghus gaya tha. Kulfi bhi choot me jaate hi mombatti ki mom ki tarah pighalne lag gayi.

Suman : Bohot derr se dekh rahi thi iss kameeni ko. Mere maalik ko chutiya kehti hai? Kya keh rahi thi? Haram khor? Harami? Ek jhaapad dungi na randi kahi ki!!! Poori aqal thikaane aa jayegi teri.

Veer hakka bakka hoke saamne ke drishya ko dekh raha tha. Suman ka aisa vikraal roop aaj woh shayad pehli baar dekh raha tha. Upar se ye scene dekh uska neeche ka ustaad bhi josh me aa raha tha.

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

Fir ek zordaar thappad ki awaaz car me fel gayi,

"Aaaaahhhhhnnnnn~"

Suman ne zorr se ek chaata Niharika ke chuttad par raseed ke maara. Woh gadraayi gaand bhi do se teen baar leher khaate hue hil ke reh gayi.

Niharika ki aankho se halke halke aasu bhi girne lage. Parantu uska muh abhi bhi gusse se bhara hua tha. Chehra laal, nichla honth daato ke neeche, baal Suman dwara khiche hue aur aankho me aasu. Yahi kuch haal tha abhi ka uska.

Suman : Kya soch rahi thi kutiya? Gaali sirf tujhe dena aati hai? Randi ki bacchi! Tune suni hi kaha hai asli gaaliya abhi. Kabhi gaav taraf jaana. Samajh aa jayega tujhe do takke ki aurat ki gaali kya hoti hai!

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

"Nnnnnngggggghhhh~"

Suman : Mein soch rahi thi ki ab tere iss dimaag me kuch aqal aayi hogi par nahi. Ye toh ab bhi gobar se bhara hua hai. Teri himmat kese hui mere maalik ke khilaaf aisa bolne ki haan? Aur teri aukaat toh dekho. Mujhe apni baato me fusla ke maalik ke khilaaf dhoka dene ke liye mana rahi thi? Waah re raand!

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

"Aaahhhhnnnn! Y-You will regret it *sniff* You will regret it for s-sure!"

Suman : Chup kar! Angrezi ki chudaan! Chhipkali ki bheegi chut saali!! Ek toh mere maalik tujhe itne avsar de de ke tujhe apne neeche rakhne ka mauka de rahe upar se tu hai ki harr baar...! Kutiya! Hazaar lund dilwaungi teri gaand me mein...! Najayaz paidaish kahi ki!! Tujh jesi ameer baap ki bigdi aulaado ko theek karna acche se aata hai mujhe.

Veer bagal me baithe aankhein phaade Suman ko dekh raha tha. Ye bhala kaun sa roop le liya tha uski pyaari Suman ne?

'D-Damn!'

[It's weirdly erotic!]

'Huh!?'

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar fir Niharika ki choot par gayi jisme kulfi choot ke paani ke sang pighal ke phisalte hue uski jaangho se behna shuru ho chuki thi.

Suman ne uski muniya par haath rakha aur kulfi ki lakdi ki seek ko kheench liya. Jis se kulfi andar choot me hi reh gayi par lakdi baahar aa gayi.

Usne apne handbag me kuch tatola aur fir ek branded panty bahar nikaali,

*Slap*

"Ugghhh!"

Woh panty seedhe Suman ne Niharika ke muh par de maari,

Suman : Chal pehen isse. Dhyaan rahe. Kulfi tu nikaalegi nahi. Bhale hi pighal ke tere perro se fisal ke girne lage. CHAL PEHEN!!!

Uske chillaane par Niharika sehemte hue panty pehen'ne lagi. Par gussa abhi bhi uski naak par dhara tha.

Suman : Jab se dekh rahi thi mein maalik! Mujhse fir aur bardaasht na hua. Ye kameeni keh rahi thi ki mein aapke phone se iski koi video delete kar du. Hmph! Tune soch bhi kese liya ki mein apne maalik ke khilaaf jaungi?

Veer (smiles) : Suman! Shaant!

'Fuck! This Suman is insane!'

Suman : J-Jii maalik! Maaf kijiyega! Agar aapko kuch bhi bura laga ho toh. Mein bas-

Veer : Nahi! Koi baat nahi! Mujhe kuch bhi bura nahi laga.

Suman : J-Jii!

*Ding*

[Suman's favourability has reached 170]

'What the fuck??? Pari?? 170!? Ye aur kitna badhegi?'

[I really don't know! This woman! She's just- ... insane!]

Suman muskurayi aur seat par baith usne fir apni taange kholi,

Uski pyaari muniya nangi hoke hawa me azaad hui.

Suman : Iss randi ki saza abhi khatam kaha hui maalik.

Usne Veer ke haath se woh dusri kulfi lii jo pighal hi rahi thi.

Suman : Mmmmn~ *slurp*

Aur usse ek baar choosa. Uske baad,

"Ahhhnnn maaa~"

Uss kulfi ko apni choot me andar daal diya. Usse ye bhi samajh aa gaya ki choot me kulfi daalne par kesa mehsoos hota tha.

Suman : Ayyyiiii~ Sssssssss~ Thandi hai bohot... Meri choot sunnn pad rahi hai maalik! Ufffff ~ Ssssssss~ Haaye daiyaa~

Usne punaah roti hui Niharika ke baalo se usse pakda aur seedhe uska muh apni choot par de diya.

Suman (smiles) : Tum puch rahi thi na ki dusri kulfi kis ke liye? Ye rahi tumhari dusri kulfi!!

Niharika : Ahhhhhhnnnn~

Niharika ka muh Suman ki halke jhaat se bhari choot me ghus gaya. Jaha kulfi uske chhed se pighal ke beh rahi thi. Aur majbooran Niharika ko usse chaat ke peena hi pada.

Suman ka choot ras aur kulfi ka mishran, ek ajeeb sa flavour bana raha tha. Lekin Niharika chaah ke bhi kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rote rote woh apne nafrat ki aag ko liye bas zabaan uss choot par firati rahi.

Suman : Dekh rahe ho maalik iss haraam zaadi ko!

Veer : !!?

Suman : Iss kutiya ki choot paani chorr rahi thi jab mene iski choot me kulfi daali. Soch sakte ho aap? Kitni hi giri hui aurat hai ye? Khud ko shaleenta se bhari dikhati firti hai. Par dekhiye isse maalik. Kese iski choot sirf ek kulfi daalne se geeli ho rakhi hai. Ye aukaat hai iski maalik! Iss randi ki aukaat ye hai. Aur nakhre toh dekho iske!!! Choos!!! Zorr se choos chiraan!!!

*Slurp* *Slurp*

"Hhhnnnnnnggghhh~"

Veer stabdh hoke poori ghatna ko dekhta raha. Ant me woh bas muskuraaya. Ye Suman uski sach me kuch zyada hi loyal thi. Woh driver seat par jaane ke liye hua toh peeche se Suman ne uski shirt pakad lii,

Veer : Hmm?

Suman : M-Maalik!!! Mujhe... Mujhe choomiye na!!

Iss zidd ke aage Veer ki ek na chali. Woh agle hi pal jhuka aur Suman ke rass bhare hontho ka kuch derr tak jam ke sevan kiya. Tab tak, jab tak uska jee nahi bhar gaya.

Aur waapas aake apni seat par virajman ho gaya.

Suman : Maalik hum kaha chal rahe hai?

Veer (smiles) : Kaha chal rahe hai? Bataata hu!

*Ding*

[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]

*Ding*

[Enemy has been spotted.]

*Ding*

[Laying down the path.]

*Vrrrrroooooooommmmmm*

Aur Veer ne apni gaadi aage badha dii!

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"Aur ye, checkmate!!! Hahaha~" Ek ladke ki awaaz aayi.

Ek ghar ke living room me beecho beech ek table rakhi hui thi. Aur table par rakha hua tha shatranj ka khel.

Kaali gotiyo ne safed gotiyo par vijayi praapt kar lii thi.

Aur saamne baitha woh ladka muskura raha tha.

"Dekha aapne? Ye daav hamara kitna effective tha?" Usne peeche sofe par apni peeth tikaate hue kaha.

"Dekh raha hu! Fir bhi-"

"Advocate saahab! Yahi toh dikkat hai aapke saath. Aap harr paristhiti ko naap taul ke dekhte ho. Kabhi kabhi khud par confidence bhi hona chahiye. Jo chaal humne chali hai, uss par vishvaas toh rakhiye! Dekha nahi aapne? Kese poora mahila mandal hil chuka hai!?"

Bilkul! Ye awaaz thi ussi vyakti ki jo Veer ke khilaaf shadiyantra bachpan se hi rachte aa raha tha.

Pranjal!! Aur uske saamne tha~ Rajat!

Rajat : Meri samajh me ye nahi aa raha ki agar hamari ladaayi uss Veer naam ke gaandu se hai toh hum mahila mandal se kyu bhid rahe hai?

'Kis lode ne isse advocate banaaya hai?' Pranjal mann hi mann Rajat ko dekh socha.

Pranjal : Aap samjhe nahi Advocate saahab! Veer ke paas Suman naam ki ek aurat hai. Mujhe nahi pata woh usse kaha se utha ke leke aaya hai ya kese usne usko apne under me kaam karne ke liye manaaya hai. Par woh aurat...!

Rajat : ??

Pranjal (frowns) : Hamare liye ek bohot badi samasya hai!

Rajat : Hmm!

Pranjal : Woh aurat Mahila mandal ki sadasya hai aur upar se aapke khilaaf pehle bhi morcha nikal chuki hai. Aur usse aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha hoga? Ye aap bhi jaante hai aur mein bhi.

Rajat : Uss haram khor Veer ne!

Pranjal : Exactly! Toh hamari pehli chaal yahi hai. Mahila mandal ko musibato me khada karna. Unhe baaki chakkaro me uljhaana hoga taaki unka dhyaan hamare par se hatt sake. Aur uske baad...!

Rajat : ??

Pranjal (smiles) : Uske baad dusre plan ko anjaam dena hoga!

Rajat : Tumhara matlab -!?

Pranjal : Of course! Of course! Suna hai Veer aapki poorv patni jii se kaafi close-

Rajat (screams) : Naam mat lo uss madarchod ka!!!! Saala saamne dikh gaya na toh bhadve ki khaal udhed dunga mein!!!

Woh gusse me uth ke khada ho gaya. Usse woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer uske ghar me ghus ke usse collar se pakad ke dhoya tha. Aur Nidhi ko apne sang le gaya tha.

Rajat : Mere saamne agar woh aaya na toh-

Pranjal (smiles) : Woh yahi hai! Mumbai laut chuka hai. Aur hamara agla plan wahi hai.

Rajat : Sex scandal?

Pranjal (smiles) : Exactly! Javaan launda hai meri tarah. Choot dekh ke acche acche log phisal jaate hai toh Veer kis khet ki mooli hai? Hotel me prabandh kar diya gaya hai. Aaj raat woh apni akhiri raat mazze me guzaarega aur subah- hahahahaha!!

Rajat : Subah uska khel khatam! Muh dikhane laayak nahi bachega woh.

Pranjal : Bilkul! Bilkul! Hahahaha! Par aapko waha rehna hoga. Hum me se kisi ek ka rehna zaroori hai. Taaki dekh sake sab kuch sahi se ho raha hai ya nahi. Aur mein filhaal busy hu jesa ki aap dekh hi sakte hai. Iske baad uski kartoote jayengi aapki ex wife ke paas aur tab unhe uski asliyat pata chalegi. Fir aap apna daav lagaana. Behla fusla ka apni patni ko waapas apne kareeb laana aur beta milte hi...!

Rajat (smiles) : Mujhe pata hai kya karna hai!

Pranjal : Good! Toh fir kar dijiye shuru!

Rajat : Zaroor!

Woh muskuraate hue baahar nikal gaya aur idhar andar Pranjal baithe hue saamne shatranj ke khel ko dekhta raha jab,

*Ring* *Ring*

"Hmm? Dad ka call?"

Pranjal : Dad?

Udhar se Karunesh ki awaaz aayi,

Karunesh : Kya chal raha hai tumhara?

Pranjal (smiles) : Ek suar bohot dino se ghur-ghura raha tha. Bas ussi ki khatir-dari ka intezaam kiya hai.

Karunesh : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na? Ki abhi ye sab-

Pranjal : Don't worry dad! Iss baar intezaam tagda hai. Advocate bhi hai mere saath. Kuch gadbad hui toh ye churra lega mujhe. Par ab aur uss kameene ko chenn se jeene nahi de sakte mein.

Karunesh : Theek hai! Jo karna hai karo. Par dhyaan rahe-

Pranjal : Mujhe pata hai! Aapka naam kahi bhi nahi ucchlega. Aur ek baat aur-

Karunesh : ??

Pranjal : Mujhe ye ghar kuch khaas pasand nahi aa raha hai. Kuch aisa kariye ki mein wapas ghar laut saku. Mom ko toh miss kar hi raha hu mein. Maid ke haath ka khana mujhe suit nahi karta.

Karunesh : Jaante bhi ho tumne kya kaand kiya tha? Uske baad tumne ye soch bhi kese liya ki ghar me log tumhe aane denge? Wahi Amrit nivaas me ruko. Mein dekhta hu kya karna hai.

Pranjal : Tsk! Theek hai!

*Call ends*

Phone rakhte hi Karunesh wahi khade khade kuch socha aur fir kamre ke andar chala gaya. Par woh nahi jaanta tha ki,

Koi tha jo peeche chhup ke uski saari baato ko sunn chuka tha.

"Amrit Nivaas!!?"

***

*Screeeeecccccchhhhh!*

Gaadi aake ruki aur Veer aur baaki sabhi car se utar ke baahar aaye.

Niharika : Y-Ye...! Ye toh wahi basti hai.

Suman : Maalik?

Veer : Bas mere saath aati jao!

Veer basti me logo ki ghoorti hui nazro se hote hue aage badhta raha aur system ke bataaye gaye map ko follow karta gaya.

Location thi basti ka pichla ilaaka jaha 3-4 launde lapaadi neeche chaadar bicchaye juaa khelne me lage hue the.

Unme se kaun tha jisse Veer ko pakadna tha woh ye acchi tarah se jaan gaya. Ek pal me hi Veer ne uss ladke ki collar pakad usse uthaaya aur,

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*Crack*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhh!"

Ek dardnaak cheenkh waha fel gayi.

Veer (smiles) : Seedhi tarah bataoge ya kuch aur todu marodu?

Ladka : K-Kaun hai tu?? Aaarrghh!!!!? N-Niharika madam?? M-Mahila mandal...!?? S-Suman madam?

Veer : Ohh! Toh tu inhe jaanta hai. Ab bol! Kisne tujhe paise diye ye sab karwaane ke? Haan?

Ladka : M-Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Ch-Chorr mujhe!! Saaleee!!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!

*Crack*

Iss baar uska haath gaya.

"Aayyyiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaa!!!!!"

Ladka : B-Bataata hu uhuhhuhuu b-bataata hu!!! M-Mujhe advocate saahab ne paise diye the.

Veer : Kaun advocate?

Ladka : R-Rajat naam hai uska!

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Basti ke logo ko ikhatta karo aur unse kaho ki aaj ke baad se basti ka koi bhi aadmi mahila mandal ke khilaaf ek awaaz tak nahi uthayega. Agar ek bhi aadmi mujhe dobaara waha nazar aaya. Toh...!

Ladka : H-Huhh!?

Veer : Poori basti gaayab karwa dunga!

Ladka (gulps) : N-Nahi! Aisa nahi hoga. Basti ke log mere kehne par gaye the. Mere kehne par hi peeche hatt jayenge. M-Mujhe chorr do ab!! Mujhe jaane do!

Veer ne dhakka deke uss namoone ko chorra aur adab ke saath palat ke waapas chal diya. Saari janta waha ki Veer ke uss andaaz ko bhaybheet hote bas dekhti reh gayi. Suman ke hontho par garv ki muskaan thi toh wahi Niharika ajeeb nigaaho se Veer ki peeth ko ghoor rahi thi.

Ek mard ki taaqat kya hoti thi ye jese usne aaj dekha tha.

Aur inhi sab kaamo me shaam ke 5 baj chuke the.

Veer : Suman?

Suman (smiles) : Jii maalik?

Veer : Tum dono ko mein waapas chorr raha hu. Ahinda se pareshani nahi khadi honi chahiye. Mujhe thoda aaj kaam hai. Mein derr se aaunga. Ghar me bhabhi ko bata dena.

Suman : Jii maalik!

Aur Veer ne unn dono ko waapas mahila mandal ke office me utaar, woh uss hotel ki orr chal diya jaha Purvi ne milne bulaaya tha.

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Evening ~ 6:07 PM
Royal Orchid

Veer ko hotel pohuchne par hi ek ghante ke upar ka samay lag gaya. Traffic jo itna tha.

Woh apni wahi subah ki ek blue denim shirt aur black skin tight jeans me tha.

Car se utar woh hotel ki entrance me gaya. Aur waha se andar aaya.

Hotel aalishaan thi. Aur Veer ke phone me pehle se hi ek message pada hua tha.

'Our table is 4th one. I'll be joining you in 10 minutes. Please be there!'

Message Purvi ka hi tha. Veer jaanta tha ki ye aurat zaroor uski maa ke side se hi thi. Par akhir ye thi kaun?

Na hi woh Tejal ki awaaz thi aur na hi uski Maa ki. Fir thi kaun woh aurat?

Veer ek aah bharte hue table no. 4 pe jaake baith gaya. Toh waha ki ek sundar sii waitress uske paas aayi,

Waitress : What will you have Sir?

Veer : I'm waiting for someone! I'll then call you!

Waitress : Okay Sir! I'll be here only!

Aur woh waha se chali gayi. Uske jaate hi idhar hotel ki entrance se ek aurat pravesh kii toh Veer ki nazre akasmaat hi apne aap uss orr chali gayi. Aur yahi uss aurat ke saath bhi hua.

Dono ki hi nigaahein ek dusre se takraayi aur dono jese ek pal ke liye wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Bina kuch kahe hi woh jaan gaye the ki yahi woh shaks hai jiski unhe talaash thi.

Veer ne dekhte hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Name : Purvi
Age : 42
Bio : Purvi, ek bohot hi mehanteey mahila hai saath hi ek housewife bhi. Pati ke sang vivaah ke baad hi woh Mumbai sheher me bas gayi. Pati, Arun sarkari school me adhyaapak hai. Parishkrat log hai kaafi aur suljhe hai insaan hai. Ek hi beta hai inka jiska naam hai, Ayush! Apni medical ki padhaayi ke liye baahar Delhi gaya hua hai. Bhavna ko apni badi behan maanti hai Purvi. Host ko bachpan me apni goad me bhi khilaaya hai kuch samay ke liye. Purvi ka itihaas bhi raazo se bhara hua hai. Pyaar dulaar bohot lutaati hai agar inhe apni orr kar liya toh.

Favourability : 36
Relationship : Assumed Maternal Aunt]

Status dekhte hi Veer ke muh se mann me yahi nikla,

'Woah!!!'

Par ye sirf status ki vajah se nahi tha.

Purvi ko dekhte hi Veer hairat me tha.



'You are telling me she's 42? Fuck I don't believe it!!!'

Purvi Veer ko dekh khud mantramugdh sii reh gayi.

Ye itna sona ladka uska Veer tha?

Woh jhatpat tezz qadmo ke saath uske qareeb aayi,

Purvi : Vikram?

Veer : Huh? Ohh! Yes!

Purvi (smiles) : Ya Veer keh ke bulau?

'Ohh! Toh inhe pata hai!?'

[Koi badi baat nahi hai Master!]

Veer (smiles) : Aapko jo bulaana ho!

Woh muskuraate hue baithi aur apna haath aage kar boli,

Purvi : I'm so sorry for the wait! Mein Purvi!

Veer ne Purvi ke narm haatho ko thaama aur handshake kiya aur apna naam Veer hi bataaya.

Purvi : Veer! Kya tumhe andaaza hai ki mein kaun hu?

Veer ne pehle hi usse check kar liya tha. Woh toh uske bete aur pati ka naam bhi jaanta tha aur beta kaha kis kaam se baahar tha ye bhi. Unke beech kya rishta tha ye bhi. Par agar Veer abhi usse ye sab bataata toh zaahir hai Purvi behosh hoke gir padti. Isliye woh bas muskuraaya aur bola,

Veer : Jii nahi! Mujhe koi andaaza nahi hai. Par mein itna keh sakta hu ki aap... Meri asal maa ki taraf se ho!

Purvi ki aankho me ek chamak sii aayi aur woh sarr hilaate hue aage ko jhuki. Usne apne agal bagal dekha aur fir woh hotel ke baahar dekhne lagi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Purvi : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi nahi! Veer beta! Suno!

Veer : ??

Purvi : Mein tumhari muh boli maasi hu Veer. Muh boli maasi!!! Tumhari sagi maa ko mene bachpan se hi ek badi behan maana hai. Bachpan me tumne mera doodh bhi piya hai aur-

Veer : Ahem!

Veer ke tokne par Purvi ko jab ehsaas hua ki woh flow flow me kya kya bolti jaa rahi thi pehli mulaqaat me, toh uske khud ke gaal laal ho gaye.

Purvi : M-Maaf karna!

Veer : it's okay!

Purvi : Veer!!! Tumhari Maa! Aur behan!! Woh mere hi ghar pe thehre hue hai. Tejal toh... Paagal hai tumse milne ke liye. Zameen asmaan ek kar diya usne tumhe dhundhne ke liye. Ab jaake tumhari maa ne tumhara number bataya hai. Woh dono hi ab tumse milne ke liye bekaraar hai.

Veer : Ek sawaal tha.

Purvi : Pucho na!

Veer : Ye sab... Itne saal kaha the maasi? Meri Mom? Behan? Itne saalo se kya kar rahe the? Tab kyu nahi dhundhne ki koshish kii?

Iss sawaal se Purvi ke dil me jo ghaav pehle se tha udhar aur chot pohuch gayi,

Purvi : Kuch baate aisi hoti hai beta jo saamne hi kari jaati hai. Tumhare sawaal ekdum sahi hai. Par unke bhi jawaab hai. Jo tumhe apni Maa se hi milenge. Aur please...! Bhagwan ke liye Tejal ko mat dosh dena beta. Uss bechari ko toh kuch pata hi nahi tha. Pichle saal hi usse ye pata chala tha ki tum bhi ho iss duniya me. Uska ek bhai bhi hai. Uss bechaari se sab kuch chhipaaya gaya hai. Uss se nafrat mat karna beta. Uss nakaarna mat. Mene dekha hai usse din raat tumhe dhundhne jaane ke liye. P-Please...!

'So her condition was same as mine!?'

[It might be the case master!]

Veer (nods) : Jii!

Purvi (smiles) : Thank you!

Veer : Toh? Yaha kis liye bulaaya mujhe? Bas isliye?

Purvi : Kya tum apni Maa se milna nahi chaahte?

Veer : Kaun beta apni maa se milna nahi chaahega? Par... Unhe dekh ke lagta nahi ki woh mujhse milne ke liye itni betaab hai.

[What are you saying Master??? Apne alpha Instincts ko haawi hone mat do. Try to act like Sigma.]

Uske itna tanj kassne par hi Purvi ne apni hatheli uske haath par rakh dii,

Purvi : N-Nahi!! Nahi mere bacche! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahe ho. Woh dono hi tumse milne ke liye betaab hai. Tumhare intezaar me paagal hai beta. Mein bata nahi sakti ki aaj mujhe tumhe apni aankho ke saamne dekh ke kitni khushi ho rahi hai. Aur mein ye daave ke saath keh sakti hu ki Bhavna tumhe dekhte hi khushi ke maare khud ke maansik santulan ko kho baithegi. Meri baat ka yakeen karo Veer!

Veer ko tabhi Purvi ke status ki akhiri line yaad aayi. Ki Purvi ko agar apni orr kiya toh woh pyaar aur dulaar khub lutayegi.

Veer : Ye toh aap saantvna ke liye keh rahi ho maasi!

'Maasi' shabd sunte hi Purvi ka badan thitur utha. Ye wahi Veer tha jisse usne apni goad me rakh apna doodh pilaaya tha bachpan me. Aaj itna bada ho chuka tha woh. Par saamne baithe kitna akela maalum pad raha tha.

Purvi ka dil paseej utha aur uski haath ki pakad Veer ke haatho me aur mazboot ho gayi. Bechaari ki aankho me bhi nami panapne lagi,

Veer : Hu toh mein akela hi na? Warna agar Maa ko aana hota toh aa na gayi hoti kabka?

Purvi : N-Nahi! A-Aisa nahi hai mere bacche-

Veer : Aisa hi hai Maasi!

*Ding*

[Purvi's favourability has reached 39.]

Veer : Ab dekhiye na! Mein Egypt gaya tha. Mujhe unke baare me khabar lagi thi. Itne saalo tak mein unhe dhundhta raha. Tab jaake kuch pata chala unke baare me. Unse milne gaya. Unhone pehchaana tak nahi. Aur kese pehchaanti? Mujhse matlab hota toh na meri shaqal ke baare me-

Purvi : N-Nahiiiiii!!!!

Woh zorr se chillaayi aur uth ke Veer ke bagal se aake baith gayi. Veer ko usne ek pal me apni baaho me bhar liya aur zorr se chipka liya.

Purvi : Nahiiii mere bacche! Ye sab galat hai. Aisa nahi hai.

Veer : Hamdardi ki zaroorat nahi hai maa-

Purvi (cries) : Nahhhhiiiiiii! Hamdardi nahi hai mere bacche!!! Mein hu na!!! Mein hu na..! Mein kuch bhi nahi hone dungi. Meri baat ka yakeen kar mere bacche!

Veer : If you say so... Maasi!!

*Ding*

[Purvi's favourability has reached 45.]

Aur agle hi shan,

*Muaaaaahhhhhh*

Purvi ne Veer ke maathe ko pyaar se choom liya.

Veer ka mobile agle hi pal vibrate hua aur screen par message saaf saaf usse dikhayi de raha tha.

'10 Minutes are left for 7.'

Message tha...

Kaera ka!

'Shiiiittttttt!!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
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Lajawab update Werewolf bhai

 

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Update - 114 ~ Blunder (2)
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Ab tak...

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par do messages aa gaye.

Veer : huh!?

Veer ne check kiya toh paaya ki, ek purvi ka tha aur dusra... Miss Kaera ka!!!

Purvi : Hum shaam ko 6 baje milenge. Vikram!

Kaera : Tonight!! Come to my home @ 7 PM!!!

'Ahh! Shit!!! Firse nahi! The timing...!'

[Oops!]

Ab aage...

"Ye tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rahe ho?" Niharika ki ghabraati hui awaaz aayi.

Veer car drive kar raha tha aur woh sehmi sii bagal se baithi hui thi. Toh wahi peeche waali seat par Suman virajman thi. Hontho par ajeeb sii ek muskaan sajaye.

Veer : Ye samajh lo ki tumhare hi liye chal rahe hai. Wese!? Kya hua? Aur koi plan nahi bana rahi tum mere khilaaf? Hmm? Hacking didn't work after all. Right?

Niharika : M-Mein...!

Uske chehre se uska rang hi udd gaya. Veer ne kitni casually uss baat ko saamne rakh diya jis ke liye woh itna ghabra rahi thi.

Veer : Mein!? Mein kya? Kuch bolo bhi!

Niharika : N-No!

Veer : Dhyaan rahe! You...

Niharika : !!?

Veer (smiles) : ... are my slave!

Sunte hi Niharika ka badan kaanp utha. Veer usse yaad dila raha tha ki bhale hi woh kitni raees kyu na ho, bhale hi itne bade mahila mandal ki head kyu na ho, aur bhale hi kisi badi company ki HR Head kyu na ho. Antatah, woh thi toh sirf uski ek daasi hi. Ek slave!

Kitna hi mardo se kyu na nafrat rakh le. Uski jagah Veer ke lund ke neeche hi thi. Jo ki khud ek mard tha. Obviously, Veer ka ye nazariya nahi tha harr aurat ke prati. Par Niharika jesi aurat ke liye?

Yahi tareeqa sahi tha!

Bekaar sa muh banaaye Niharika window ke baahar dekhne lagi. Usse abhi ghabraahat ke saath saath itna gussa aa raha tha ki agar uska bas chalta toh yahi Veer ki zubaan kheech leti. Par...

Aisa karne ki himmat uske paas hargiz maujood nahi thi. Kyuki uske baad ke parinaam ke baare me woh sochna bhi nahi chaahti thi. Jo dhakke fir Veer baad me lagaata, uske unn chuttado pe jo zordaar thappade woh maarta, usse imagine kar ke hi achanak uske gaal laal pad gaye.

Niharika : G-Gaadi roko do minute!

Veer : Hmm?

Niharika : M-Mujhe peeche baithna hai.

Veer (smiles) : Aur kyu bhala?

Woh achanak hi uske kaan ki orr jhuka,

Veer : Darr lag raha hai?

Niharika : A-Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! G-Gaadi roko fauran!

Veer ek shaitaani muskaan liye gaadi ko side me roka toh Niharika fatafat uth ke peeche ki seat par jaa kar baith gayi jaha Suman akeli baithi hui thi.

Kuch derr tak gaadi me yu hi khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Aur Niharika khisak ke Suman ke qareeb aayi,

Niharika : T-Tum...!

Par Suman ko Niharika ki khuspusahat sunnayi na dii.

Niharika : H-Hey!! Tch Tch! Oye! Tum...

Suman : Hmm?

Niharika : Suno!

Suman : Mm?

Niharika (khuspusaate hue) : Tum...! Mere paas tumhare liye ek bohot accha sujhaav hai.

Suman : Sujhaav?

Niharika : Haan! Ek sujhaav! Tumhe ye ek naukrani ki zindagi pasand aa rahi hai? Mein janti hu andar hi andar tum yaha se bhaagna chaahti ho. Hai na?

Suman : Huh!!? T-Tumhe kese pata?

Niharika Suman ka reaction dekh mann hi mann khush hui,

Niharika : Of course! Tum jesi prabal aurat ek tucch mard ke neeche kese reh sakti hai bhala? Mein jaanti hu tum naatak kar rahi thi. Haha!

Suman : T-Toh ab?

Niharika : Mein tumhe iss daldal se baahar nikaal sakti hu.

Suman : K-Kaise?

Niharika : Mera saath do bas! Mein jesa jesa kehti hu bas wesa wesa karna. Fir dekhna, tum aur mein. Hum dono hi iss chutiye ke changul se baahar honge.

Suman : Sach me?

Niharika (smiles) : Haan!

Suman : T-Toh mujhe kya karna hoga?

Niharika : Iski saari khabar mujhe deti rehna bas. Aur tumhe ek kaam aur karna hai. Iska mobile khol tumhe usme ek video dhundhni hai.

Suman : K-Kaisi video?

Niharika : Iss haram khor ke paas ek video hai meri. Tumhe woh dhundhni hai. Aur usse dhundhne ke baad tumhe usse delete karna hai.

Suman : Uss se kya hoga?

Niharika : Uss se kya hoga? Hahaha~ Uss se hi toh sab kuch hoga. Agar tumne ye kar diya, toh fir dekhna. Mein tumhe iss harami ki pakad se azaad kar dungi. Bas! Bas ek baar woh video haath lag jaaye.

Suman (nods) : Theek hai! M-Mein koshish karungi.

Niharika : Koshish nahi! Tumhe ye karna hi hoga.

Suman : P-Par mein ye kese maan lu ki tum apni baat se paltogi nahi?

Niharika : Hmph! Niharika Bansal naam hai mera. Aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua ki mein apni kahi gayi baat se muqar jau. Ek baar jo zubaan de deti hu toh uss se peeche nahi hatt'ti kabhi. Aur wese bhi, tum jesi aurat toh mere under kaam karni chahiye. Uss chutiye ke neeche nahi. Tum dekhna, tumhari zindagi badal ke rakh dungi mein. Laakho kamaogi tum, laakho. Aas paas naukaar ghoomenge.

Suman : Agar aisa hai t-toh theek hai.

Niharika (smiles) : Samajhdar ho tum! Bas, lag jao apne kaam pe. Dhyaan rahe usse pata na lagne paaye.

Suman (nods) : Hmm!

Suman shaant rahi. Idhar Veer chup chaap peeche ho rahe drishya ko mirror me dekh raha tha.

Aur abhi mushqil se 3-4 minute hi huye the jab Suman ne shaanti ko bhang kiya,

Suman : Maalik! Woh dekhiye! Kulfi waale ka thela. Zara rokiye na gaadi.

Veer : Hmm? Tumhe kulfi khaani hai? Iss mausam me?

Suman : Jii! Kyuki jald hi thand aa jayegi aur fir kulfi waale dikhayi nahi denge. Kya aap bhi lenge?

Veer : Nahi!

Suman ne fir ishaare se Niharika ki orr dekha aur uss se puchna chaaha toh Niharika ne bhi sarr hila ke mana kar diya.

Kulfi? Aur woh? Baskin Robbins, Kwality walls jesi brands ki ice creams khaati thi woh. aur ye Suman kya puch rahi thi uss se? Thele me rakhi kulfi? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Soch bhi kese liya iss aurat ne ki Niharika Bansal aise roadside chhapri thele par khade hoke kulfi khayegi?

Gareeb logo ki choti pasand par paiso ki guroor waali muskaan liye woh Suman ko gaadi se utarte hue dekhti rahi,

Suman utar ke kulfi khareedi aur waapas se andar aake baith gayi. Uske dono haatho me ek ek kulfi thi.

Niharika : Hmm? Tum do do khaogi?

Suman (smiles) : Nahi toh!

Niharika : Toh ye dusri?

Suman (smiles) : Bataati hu! Maalik! Zara peeche aaiye na!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suman : Aaiye na! Please!

Suman ki zidd maan Veer peeche aaya toh Niharika thodi dur sarak gayi aur ekdum car ke door se chipak ke baith gayi.

Suman ne dono kulfi Veer ko thamaayi aur fir ahista se uthi,

Niharika : Huh!?

Aur agle hi pal,

"Ahhhhhh!"

Usne Niharika ko zorr se baal pakadte hue usse ghumaaya aur uska sarr backrest par daba ke uski saree upar chadha dii,

Niharika : Aahhhhhhh!! Kutti... Y-Ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Ch-Chorro mujhe... Aarrrghh!!! Nnnghhh~ C-Chorr!! Kameeni...!!!

Suman : Ab ek shabd bhi tere muh se nikla na toh abhi nanga kar ke tujhe gaadi se baahar fek dungi.

Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt? Y-You dare threaten m- Aaahhhhnnnnn!!!!!

Iske pehle ki woh kuch bol paati Suman ne uske jhutre pakad uska sarr aur zorr se kheecha aur dusre haath se uski saree ko poora upar chadha diya. Saamne ab keval Niharika ki saaf suthri choot dikh rahi thi.

Veer aashcharya me apne haatho me kulfi liye sab kuch dekh raha tha. Aur woh aur chakit tab hua jab Suman ne apna agla daav khela.

Veer ke haath se ek kulfi lete hue Suman ne Niharika ko dekha aur fir...

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh maaaaaaaaaa~"

Woh thandi thandi kulfi Suman ne,

Seedhe Niharika ki tapti garam choot ke hontho ko fela kar uske andar pel dii.

Niharika : Aaahahahahhhhh nnnnnnnaaa m-maaaaaa sssssssss~ N-Nikaaaloooo maaaa~ nnnnghhhhhhh~ Ayyyyyiiiiiiiiiiii... Uuuuuhuhuhuuuu

Uski choot fafkaar maarne lagi, woh macchli ki tarah chhatpatate hue apni kamar hilaane lagi. Uski garam bhatti me ek itna thanda padaarth aake ghus gaya tha. Kulfi bhi choot me jaate hi mombatti ki mom ki tarah pighalne lag gayi.

Suman : Bohot derr se dekh rahi thi iss kameeni ko. Mere maalik ko chutiya kehti hai? Kya keh rahi thi? Haram khor? Harami? Ek jhaapad dungi na randi kahi ki!!! Poori aqal thikaane aa jayegi teri.

Veer hakka bakka hoke saamne ke drishya ko dekh raha tha. Suman ka aisa vikraal roop aaj woh shayad pehli baar dekh raha tha. Upar se ye scene dekh uska neeche ka ustaad bhi josh me aa raha tha.

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

Fir ek zordaar thappad ki awaaz car me fel gayi,

"Aaaaahhhhhnnnnn~"

Suman ne zorr se ek chaata Niharika ke chuttad par raseed ke maara. Woh gadraayi gaand bhi do se teen baar leher khaate hue hil ke reh gayi.

Niharika ki aankho se halke halke aasu bhi girne lage. Parantu uska muh abhi bhi gusse se bhara hua tha. Chehra laal, nichla honth daato ke neeche, baal Suman dwara khiche hue aur aankho me aasu. Yahi kuch haal tha abhi ka uska.

Suman : Kya soch rahi thi kutiya? Gaali sirf tujhe dena aati hai? Randi ki bacchi! Tune suni hi kaha hai asli gaaliya abhi. Kabhi gaav taraf jaana. Samajh aa jayega tujhe do takke ki aurat ki gaali kya hoti hai!

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

"Nnnnnngggggghhhh~"

Suman : Mein soch rahi thi ki ab tere iss dimaag me kuch aqal aayi hogi par nahi. Ye toh ab bhi gobar se bhara hua hai. Teri himmat kese hui mere maalik ke khilaaf aisa bolne ki haan? Aur teri aukaat toh dekho. Mujhe apni baato me fusla ke maalik ke khilaaf dhoka dene ke liye mana rahi thi? Waah re raand!

*Chataaakkkkkkk*

"Aaahhhhnnnn! Y-You will regret it *sniff* You will regret it for s-sure!"

Suman : Chup kar! Angrezi ki chudaan! Chhipkali ki bheegi chut saali!! Ek toh mere maalik tujhe itne avsar de de ke tujhe apne neeche rakhne ka mauka de rahe upar se tu hai ki harr baar...! Kutiya! Hazaar lund dilwaungi teri gaand me mein...! Najayaz paidaish kahi ki!! Tujh jesi ameer baap ki bigdi aulaado ko theek karna acche se aata hai mujhe.

Veer bagal me baithe aankhein phaade Suman ko dekh raha tha. Ye bhala kaun sa roop le liya tha uski pyaari Suman ne?

'D-Damn!'

[It's weirdly erotic!]

'Huh!?'

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar fir Niharika ki choot par gayi jisme kulfi choot ke paani ke sang pighal ke phisalte hue uski jaangho se behna shuru ho chuki thi.

Suman ne uski muniya par haath rakha aur kulfi ki lakdi ki seek ko kheench liya. Jis se kulfi andar choot me hi reh gayi par lakdi baahar aa gayi.

Usne apne handbag me kuch tatola aur fir ek branded panty bahar nikaali,

*Slap*

"Ugghhh!"

Woh panty seedhe Suman ne Niharika ke muh par de maari,

Suman : Chal pehen isse. Dhyaan rahe. Kulfi tu nikaalegi nahi. Bhale hi pighal ke tere perro se fisal ke girne lage. CHAL PEHEN!!!

Uske chillaane par Niharika sehemte hue panty pehen'ne lagi. Par gussa abhi bhi uski naak par dhara tha.

Suman : Jab se dekh rahi thi mein maalik! Mujhse fir aur bardaasht na hua. Ye kameeni keh rahi thi ki mein aapke phone se iski koi video delete kar du. Hmph! Tune soch bhi kese liya ki mein apne maalik ke khilaaf jaungi?

Veer (smiles) : Suman! Shaant!

'Fuck! This Suman is insane!'

Suman : J-Jii maalik! Maaf kijiyega! Agar aapko kuch bhi bura laga ho toh. Mein bas-

Veer : Nahi! Koi baat nahi! Mujhe kuch bhi bura nahi laga.

Suman : J-Jii!

*Ding*

[Suman's favourability has reached 170]

'What the fuck??? Pari?? 170!? Ye aur kitna badhegi?'

[I really don't know! This woman! She's just- ... insane!]

Suman muskurayi aur seat par baith usne fir apni taange kholi,

Uski pyaari muniya nangi hoke hawa me azaad hui.

Suman : Iss randi ki saza abhi khatam kaha hui maalik.

Usne Veer ke haath se woh dusri kulfi lii jo pighal hi rahi thi.

Suman : Mmmmn~ *slurp*

Aur usse ek baar choosa. Uske baad,

"Ahhhnnn maaa~"

Uss kulfi ko apni choot me andar daal diya. Usse ye bhi samajh aa gaya ki choot me kulfi daalne par kesa mehsoos hota tha.

Suman : Ayyyiiii~ Sssssssss~ Thandi hai bohot... Meri choot sunnn pad rahi hai maalik! Ufffff ~ Ssssssss~ Haaye daiyaa~

Usne punaah roti hui Niharika ke baalo se usse pakda aur seedhe uska muh apni choot par de diya.

Suman (smiles) : Tum puch rahi thi na ki dusri kulfi kis ke liye? Ye rahi tumhari dusri kulfi!!

Niharika : Ahhhhhhnnnn~

Niharika ka muh Suman ki halke jhaat se bhari choot me ghus gaya. Jaha kulfi uske chhed se pighal ke beh rahi thi. Aur majbooran Niharika ko usse chaat ke peena hi pada.

Suman ka choot ras aur kulfi ka mishran, ek ajeeb sa flavour bana raha tha. Lekin Niharika chaah ke bhi kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rote rote woh apne nafrat ki aag ko liye bas zabaan uss choot par firati rahi.

Suman : Dekh rahe ho maalik iss haraam zaadi ko!

Veer : !!?

Suman : Iss kutiya ki choot paani chorr rahi thi jab mene iski choot me kulfi daali. Soch sakte ho aap? Kitni hi giri hui aurat hai ye? Khud ko shaleenta se bhari dikhati firti hai. Par dekhiye isse maalik. Kese iski choot sirf ek kulfi daalne se geeli ho rakhi hai. Ye aukaat hai iski maalik! Iss randi ki aukaat ye hai. Aur nakhre toh dekho iske!!! Choos!!! Zorr se choos chiraan!!!

*Slurp* *Slurp*

"Hhhnnnnnnggghhh~"

Veer stabdh hoke poori ghatna ko dekhta raha. Ant me woh bas muskuraaya. Ye Suman uski sach me kuch zyada hi loyal thi. Woh driver seat par jaane ke liye hua toh peeche se Suman ne uski shirt pakad lii,

Veer : Hmm?

Suman : M-Maalik!!! Mujhe... Mujhe choomiye na!!

Iss zidd ke aage Veer ki ek na chali. Woh agle hi pal jhuka aur Suman ke rass bhare hontho ka kuch derr tak jam ke sevan kiya. Tab tak, jab tak uska jee nahi bhar gaya.

Aur waapas aake apni seat par virajman ho gaya.

Suman : Maalik hum kaha chal rahe hai?

Veer (smiles) : Kaha chal rahe hai? Bataata hu!

*Ding*

[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]

*Ding*

[Enemy has been spotted.]

*Ding*

[Laying down the path.]

*Vrrrrroooooooommmmmm*

Aur Veer ne apni gaadi aage badha dii!

***

"Aur ye, checkmate!!! Hahaha~" Ek ladke ki awaaz aayi.

Ek ghar ke living room me beecho beech ek table rakhi hui thi. Aur table par rakha hua tha shatranj ka khel.

Kaali gotiyo ne safed gotiyo par vijayi praapt kar lii thi.

Aur saamne baitha woh ladka muskura raha tha.

"Dekha aapne? Ye daav hamara kitna effective tha?" Usne peeche sofe par apni peeth tikaate hue kaha.

"Dekh raha hu! Fir bhi-"

"Advocate saahab! Yahi toh dikkat hai aapke saath. Aap harr paristhiti ko naap taul ke dekhte ho. Kabhi kabhi khud par confidence bhi hona chahiye. Jo chaal humne chali hai, uss par vishvaas toh rakhiye! Dekha nahi aapne? Kese poora mahila mandal hil chuka hai!?"

Bilkul! Ye awaaz thi ussi vyakti ki jo Veer ke khilaaf shadiyantra bachpan se hi rachte aa raha tha.

Pranjal!! Aur uske saamne tha~ Rajat!

Rajat : Meri samajh me ye nahi aa raha ki agar hamari ladaayi uss Veer naam ke gaandu se hai toh hum mahila mandal se kyu bhid rahe hai?

'Kis lode ne isse advocate banaaya hai?' Pranjal mann hi mann Rajat ko dekh socha.

Pranjal : Aap samjhe nahi Advocate saahab! Veer ke paas Suman naam ki ek aurat hai. Mujhe nahi pata woh usse kaha se utha ke leke aaya hai ya kese usne usko apne under me kaam karne ke liye manaaya hai. Par woh aurat...!

Rajat : ??

Pranjal (frowns) : Hamare liye ek bohot badi samasya hai!

Rajat : Hmm!

Pranjal : Woh aurat Mahila mandal ki sadasya hai aur upar se aapke khilaaf pehle bhi morcha nikal chuki hai. Aur usse aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha hoga? Ye aap bhi jaante hai aur mein bhi.

Rajat : Uss haram khor Veer ne!

Pranjal : Exactly! Toh hamari pehli chaal yahi hai. Mahila mandal ko musibato me khada karna. Unhe baaki chakkaro me uljhaana hoga taaki unka dhyaan hamare par se hatt sake. Aur uske baad...!

Rajat : ??

Pranjal (smiles) : Uske baad dusre plan ko anjaam dena hoga!

Rajat : Tumhara matlab -!?

Pranjal : Of course! Of course! Suna hai Veer aapki poorv patni jii se kaafi close-

Rajat (screams) : Naam mat lo uss madarchod ka!!!! Saala saamne dikh gaya na toh bhadve ki khaal udhed dunga mein!!!

Woh gusse me uth ke khada ho gaya. Usse woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer uske ghar me ghus ke usse collar se pakad ke dhoya tha. Aur Nidhi ko apne sang le gaya tha.

Rajat : Mere saamne agar woh aaya na toh-

Pranjal (smiles) : Woh yahi hai! Mumbai laut chuka hai. Aur hamara agla plan wahi hai.

Rajat : Sex scandal?

Pranjal (smiles) : Exactly! Javaan launda hai meri tarah. Choot dekh ke acche acche log phisal jaate hai toh Veer kis khet ki mooli hai? Hotel me prabandh kar diya gaya hai. Aaj raat woh apni akhiri raat mazze me guzaarega aur subah- hahahahaha!!

Rajat : Subah uska khel khatam! Muh dikhane laayak nahi bachega woh.

Pranjal : Bilkul! Bilkul! Hahahaha! Par aapko waha rehna hoga. Hum me se kisi ek ka rehna zaroori hai. Taaki dekh sake sab kuch sahi se ho raha hai ya nahi. Aur mein filhaal busy hu jesa ki aap dekh hi sakte hai. Iske baad uski kartoote jayengi aapki ex wife ke paas aur tab unhe uski asliyat pata chalegi. Fir aap apna daav lagaana. Behla fusla ka apni patni ko waapas apne kareeb laana aur beta milte hi...!

Rajat (smiles) : Mujhe pata hai kya karna hai!

Pranjal : Good! Toh fir kar dijiye shuru!

Rajat : Zaroor!

Woh muskuraate hue baahar nikal gaya aur idhar andar Pranjal baithe hue saamne shatranj ke khel ko dekhta raha jab,

*Ring* *Ring*

"Hmm? Dad ka call?"

Pranjal : Dad?

Udhar se Karunesh ki awaaz aayi,

Karunesh : Kya chal raha hai tumhara?

Pranjal (smiles) : Ek suar bohot dino se ghur-ghura raha tha. Bas ussi ki khatir-dari ka intezaam kiya hai.

Karunesh : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na? Ki abhi ye sab-

Pranjal : Don't worry dad! Iss baar intezaam tagda hai. Advocate bhi hai mere saath. Kuch gadbad hui toh ye churra lega mujhe. Par ab aur uss kameene ko chenn se jeene nahi de sakte mein.

Karunesh : Theek hai! Jo karna hai karo. Par dhyaan rahe-

Pranjal : Mujhe pata hai! Aapka naam kahi bhi nahi ucchlega. Aur ek baat aur-

Karunesh : ??

Pranjal : Mujhe ye ghar kuch khaas pasand nahi aa raha hai. Kuch aisa kariye ki mein wapas ghar laut saku. Mom ko toh miss kar hi raha hu mein. Maid ke haath ka khana mujhe suit nahi karta.

Karunesh : Jaante bhi ho tumne kya kaand kiya tha? Uske baad tumne ye soch bhi kese liya ki ghar me log tumhe aane denge? Wahi Amrit nivaas me ruko. Mein dekhta hu kya karna hai.

Pranjal : Tsk! Theek hai!

*Call ends*

Phone rakhte hi Karunesh wahi khade khade kuch socha aur fir kamre ke andar chala gaya. Par woh nahi jaanta tha ki,

Koi tha jo peeche chhup ke uski saari baato ko sunn chuka tha.

"Amrit Nivaas!!?"

***

*Screeeeecccccchhhhh!*

Gaadi aake ruki aur Veer aur baaki sabhi car se utar ke baahar aaye.

Niharika : Y-Ye...! Ye toh wahi basti hai.

Suman : Maalik?

Veer : Bas mere saath aati jao!

Veer basti me logo ki ghoorti hui nazro se hote hue aage badhta raha aur system ke bataaye gaye map ko follow karta gaya.

Location thi basti ka pichla ilaaka jaha 3-4 launde lapaadi neeche chaadar bicchaye juaa khelne me lage hue the.

Unme se kaun tha jisse Veer ko pakadna tha woh ye acchi tarah se jaan gaya. Ek pal me hi Veer ne uss ladke ki collar pakad usse uthaaya aur,

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*Crack*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhh!"

Ek dardnaak cheenkh waha fel gayi.

Veer (smiles) : Seedhi tarah bataoge ya kuch aur todu marodu?

Ladka : K-Kaun hai tu?? Aaarrghh!!!!? N-Niharika madam?? M-Mahila mandal...!?? S-Suman madam?

Veer : Ohh! Toh tu inhe jaanta hai. Ab bol! Kisne tujhe paise diye ye sab karwaane ke? Haan?

Ladka : M-Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Ch-Chorr mujhe!! Saaleee!!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!

*Crack*

Iss baar uska haath gaya.

"Aayyyiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaa!!!!!"

Ladka : B-Bataata hu uhuhhuhuu b-bataata hu!!! M-Mujhe advocate saahab ne paise diye the.

Veer : Kaun advocate?

Ladka : R-Rajat naam hai uska!

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Basti ke logo ko ikhatta karo aur unse kaho ki aaj ke baad se basti ka koi bhi aadmi mahila mandal ke khilaaf ek awaaz tak nahi uthayega. Agar ek bhi aadmi mujhe dobaara waha nazar aaya. Toh...!

Ladka : H-Huhh!?

Veer : Poori basti gaayab karwa dunga!

Ladka (gulps) : N-Nahi! Aisa nahi hoga. Basti ke log mere kehne par gaye the. Mere kehne par hi peeche hatt jayenge. M-Mujhe chorr do ab!! Mujhe jaane do!

Veer ne dhakka deke uss namoone ko chorra aur adab ke saath palat ke waapas chal diya. Saari janta waha ki Veer ke uss andaaz ko bhaybheet hote bas dekhti reh gayi. Suman ke hontho par garv ki muskaan thi toh wahi Niharika ajeeb nigaaho se Veer ki peeth ko ghoor rahi thi.

Ek mard ki taaqat kya hoti thi ye jese usne aaj dekha tha.

Aur inhi sab kaamo me shaam ke 5 baj chuke the.

Veer : Suman?

Suman (smiles) : Jii maalik?

Veer : Tum dono ko mein waapas chorr raha hu. Ahinda se pareshani nahi khadi honi chahiye. Mujhe thoda aaj kaam hai. Mein derr se aaunga. Ghar me bhabhi ko bata dena.

Suman : Jii maalik!

Aur Veer ne unn dono ko waapas mahila mandal ke office me utaar, woh uss hotel ki orr chal diya jaha Purvi ne milne bulaaya tha.

***

Evening ~ 6:07 PM
Royal Orchid

Veer ko hotel pohuchne par hi ek ghante ke upar ka samay lag gaya. Traffic jo itna tha.

Woh apni wahi subah ki ek blue denim shirt aur black skin tight jeans me tha.

Car se utar woh hotel ki entrance me gaya. Aur waha se andar aaya.

Hotel aalishaan thi. Aur Veer ke phone me pehle se hi ek message pada hua tha.

'Our table is 4th one. I'll be joining you in 10 minutes. Please be there!'

Message Purvi ka hi tha. Veer jaanta tha ki ye aurat zaroor uski maa ke side se hi thi. Par akhir ye thi kaun?

Na hi woh Tejal ki awaaz thi aur na hi uski Maa ki. Fir thi kaun woh aurat?

Veer ek aah bharte hue table no. 4 pe jaake baith gaya. Toh waha ki ek sundar sii waitress uske paas aayi,

Waitress : What will you have Sir?

Veer : I'm waiting for someone! I'll then call you!

Waitress : Okay Sir! I'll be here only!

Aur woh waha se chali gayi. Uske jaate hi idhar hotel ki entrance se ek aurat pravesh kii toh Veer ki nazre akasmaat hi apne aap uss orr chali gayi. Aur yahi uss aurat ke saath bhi hua.

Dono ki hi nigaahein ek dusre se takraayi aur dono jese ek pal ke liye wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Bina kuch kahe hi woh jaan gaye the ki yahi woh shaks hai jiski unhe talaash thi.

Veer ne dekhte hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Name : Purvi
Age : 42
Bio : Purvi, ek bohot hi mehanteey mahila hai saath hi ek housewife bhi. Pati ke sang vivaah ke baad hi woh Mumbai sheher me bas gayi. Pati, Arun sarkari school me adhyaapak hai. Parishkrat log hai kaafi aur suljhe hai insaan hai. Ek hi beta hai inka jiska naam hai, Ayush! Apni medical ki padhaayi ke liye baahar Delhi gaya hua hai. Bhavna ko apni badi behan maanti hai Purvi. Host ko bachpan me apni goad me bhi khilaaya hai kuch samay ke liye. Purvi ka itihaas bhi raazo se bhara hua hai. Pyaar dulaar bohot lutaati hai agar inhe apni orr kar liya toh.

Favourability : 36
Relationship : Assumed Maternal Aunt]

Status dekhte hi Veer ke muh se mann me yahi nikla,

'Woah!!!'

Par ye sirf status ki vajah se nahi tha.

Purvi ko dekhte hi Veer hairat me tha.



'You are telling me she's 42? Fuck I don't believe it!!!'

Purvi Veer ko dekh khud mantramugdh sii reh gayi.

Ye itna sona ladka uska Veer tha?

Woh jhatpat tezz qadmo ke saath uske qareeb aayi,

Purvi : Vikram?

Veer : Huh? Ohh! Yes!

Purvi (smiles) : Ya Veer keh ke bulau?

'Ohh! Toh inhe pata hai!?'

[Koi badi baat nahi hai Master!]

Veer (smiles) : Aapko jo bulaana ho!

Woh muskuraate hue baithi aur apna haath aage kar boli,

Purvi : I'm so sorry for the wait! Mein Purvi!

Veer ne Purvi ke narm haatho ko thaama aur handshake kiya aur apna naam Veer hi bataaya.

Purvi : Veer! Kya tumhe andaaza hai ki mein kaun hu?

Veer ne pehle hi usse check kar liya tha. Woh toh uske bete aur pati ka naam bhi jaanta tha aur beta kaha kis kaam se baahar tha ye bhi. Unke beech kya rishta tha ye bhi. Par agar Veer abhi usse ye sab bataata toh zaahir hai Purvi behosh hoke gir padti. Isliye woh bas muskuraaya aur bola,

Veer : Jii nahi! Mujhe koi andaaza nahi hai. Par mein itna keh sakta hu ki aap... Meri asal maa ki taraf se ho!

Purvi ki aankho me ek chamak sii aayi aur woh sarr hilaate hue aage ko jhuki. Usne apne agal bagal dekha aur fir woh hotel ke baahar dekhne lagi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Purvi : N-Nahi!! Kuch bhi nahi! Veer beta! Suno!

Veer : ??

Purvi : Mein tumhari muh boli maasi hu Veer. Muh boli maasi!!! Tumhari sagi maa ko mene bachpan se hi ek badi behan maana hai. Bachpan me tumne mera doodh bhi piya hai aur-

Veer : Ahem!

Veer ke tokne par Purvi ko jab ehsaas hua ki woh flow flow me kya kya bolti jaa rahi thi pehli mulaqaat me, toh uske khud ke gaal laal ho gaye.

Purvi : M-Maaf karna!

Veer : it's okay!

Purvi : Veer!!! Tumhari Maa! Aur behan!! Woh mere hi ghar pe thehre hue hai. Tejal toh... Paagal hai tumse milne ke liye. Zameen asmaan ek kar diya usne tumhe dhundhne ke liye. Ab jaake tumhari maa ne tumhara number bataya hai. Woh dono hi ab tumse milne ke liye bekaraar hai.

Veer : Ek sawaal tha.

Purvi : Pucho na!

Veer : Ye sab... Itne saal kaha the maasi? Meri Mom? Behan? Itne saalo se kya kar rahe the? Tab kyu nahi dhundhne ki koshish kii?

Iss sawaal se Purvi ke dil me jo ghaav pehle se tha udhar aur chot pohuch gayi,

Purvi : Kuch baate aisi hoti hai beta jo saamne hi kari jaati hai. Tumhare sawaal ekdum sahi hai. Par unke bhi jawaab hai. Jo tumhe apni Maa se hi milenge. Aur please...! Bhagwan ke liye Tejal ko mat dosh dena beta. Uss bechari ko toh kuch pata hi nahi tha. Pichle saal hi usse ye pata chala tha ki tum bhi ho iss duniya me. Uska ek bhai bhi hai. Uss bechaari se sab kuch chhipaaya gaya hai. Uss se nafrat mat karna beta. Uss nakaarna mat. Mene dekha hai usse din raat tumhe dhundhne jaane ke liye. P-Please...!

'So her condition was same as mine!?'

[It might be the case master!]

Veer (nods) : Jii!

Purvi (smiles) : Thank you!

Veer : Toh? Yaha kis liye bulaaya mujhe? Bas isliye?

Purvi : Kya tum apni Maa se milna nahi chaahte?

Veer : Kaun beta apni maa se milna nahi chaahega? Par... Unhe dekh ke lagta nahi ki woh mujhse milne ke liye itni betaab hai.

[What are you saying Master??? Apne alpha Instincts ko haawi hone mat do. Try to act like Sigma.]

Uske itna tanj kassne par hi Purvi ne apni hatheli uske haath par rakh dii,

Purvi : N-Nahi!! Nahi mere bacche! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahe ho. Woh dono hi tumse milne ke liye betaab hai. Tumhare intezaar me paagal hai beta. Mein bata nahi sakti ki aaj mujhe tumhe apni aankho ke saamne dekh ke kitni khushi ho rahi hai. Aur mein ye daave ke saath keh sakti hu ki Bhavna tumhe dekhte hi khushi ke maare khud ke maansik santulan ko kho baithegi. Meri baat ka yakeen karo Veer!

Veer ko tabhi Purvi ke status ki akhiri line yaad aayi. Ki Purvi ko agar apni orr kiya toh woh pyaar aur dulaar khub lutayegi.

Veer : Ye toh aap saantvna ke liye keh rahi ho maasi!

'Maasi' shabd sunte hi Purvi ka badan thitur utha. Ye wahi Veer tha jisse usne apni goad me rakh apna doodh pilaaya tha bachpan me. Aaj itna bada ho chuka tha woh. Par saamne baithe kitna akela maalum pad raha tha.

Purvi ka dil paseej utha aur uski haath ki pakad Veer ke haatho me aur mazboot ho gayi. Bechaari ki aankho me bhi nami panapne lagi,

Veer : Hu toh mein akela hi na? Warna agar Maa ko aana hota toh aa na gayi hoti kabka?

Purvi : N-Nahi! A-Aisa nahi hai mere bacche-

Veer : Aisa hi hai Maasi!

*Ding*

[Purvi's favourability has reached 39.]

Veer : Ab dekhiye na! Mein Egypt gaya tha. Mujhe unke baare me khabar lagi thi. Itne saalo tak mein unhe dhundhta raha. Tab jaake kuch pata chala unke baare me. Unse milne gaya. Unhone pehchaana tak nahi. Aur kese pehchaanti? Mujhse matlab hota toh na meri shaqal ke baare me-

Purvi : N-Nahiiiiii!!!!

Woh zorr se chillaayi aur uth ke Veer ke bagal se aake baith gayi. Veer ko usne ek pal me apni baaho me bhar liya aur zorr se chipka liya.

Purvi : Nahiiii mere bacche! Ye sab galat hai. Aisa nahi hai.

Veer : Hamdardi ki zaroorat nahi hai maa-

Purvi (cries) : Nahhhhiiiiiii! Hamdardi nahi hai mere bacche!!! Mein hu na!!! Mein hu na..! Mein kuch bhi nahi hone dungi. Meri baat ka yakeen kar mere bacche!

Veer : If you say so... Maasi!!

*Ding*

[Purvi's favourability has reached 45.]

Aur agle hi shan,

*Muaaaaahhhhhh*

Purvi ne Veer ke maathe ko pyaar se choom liya.

Veer ka mobile agle hi pal vibrate hua aur screen par message saaf saaf usse dikhayi de raha tha.

'10 Minutes are left for 7.'

Message tha...

Kaera ka!

'Shiiiittttttt!!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
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Dhanyavaad!

Ek aur Blunder update
Niharika Ko pata nai kitna time lagega samjhne me ke Suman Veer ki sirf slave nahi hai usne apna tann mann dhann sab khuch Veer ko saup diya hai. Lekin iss baar Suman ne Niharika ko andar tak hila diya hai waise Iss Suman-Niharika ke backseat encounter pe maine 4 line banaya hai... Gaur kijiyega.
From Suman's POV
"Chikni chut teri jaise chappal ka chamda.
Chut pe rkhungi kulfi toh kregi bhagda.
Veer ka lund tagda, aaja isko choos ke iska juice pi.
Ek kaam kr aake mera chut pi.
Bus nake pe rail faate pe aur Niharika tu mere jhante pe."
Khair Veer ne apne jalve toh Niharika ko pehle bhi dikhaye hai but abhi usne dekha Veer koi aam ladka nahi jisko paiso aur takat se haraya ja sake. Dekhte hai kab tak Niharika ka akad bacha rehta hai.

Ab baat krte hai Pranjal-Rajat Ke jugal bandi ki. Ye dono pe ye kahawat sahi baithti hai ke Kutte ki dum ko 13 baras nali me daal kr rkho toh nali tedhi ho jayegi but inki dum sidhi nahi hogi. Waise Veer toh inke chutiya chaalo ko asani se tod sakta hai lekin jaisa abhi samay hai aur Veer ka dhyan jis tarah abhi faila hai toh fuck up hone ke chance bane huve hai. Waise jo bhi hoga exciting hi hoga. Aur ye mc Karunesh bahut bada khuladi malum padta hai. Aur mujhe shaq hai Veer ke halat ka bahut had tak jimmedar yehi hai.

Ab aate hai Veer aur Purvi ke Meeting cum date pe. Jaha Veer eda banke peda khane ke koshish me hai. Aur alpha-sigma stats ko jaisa werewolf bhai ne story me blend krna start kiya hai wo kabile tarif hai. Veer jaise pehle hi mulakat me Purvi ko apne our jaise kheecha hai lagta bahut jaldi hi apne baaho me bhi le lega.

Now for the final words...
"10 minutes are left for 7" toh Veer ka bulava aa chuka hai. Ye Veer aur Kaera ki mulaqat bahut dino baad hone wali hai dekhna hoga is mulaqat ka anjaam kya hone wala hai.
Aur ye bhi dekhna hoga ke Pranjal-Rajat ki jo Veer ko badnaam krne ki planning hai uska kya hoga.

Waiting for next update..

 

[Werewolf]

Update 112 & 113...

Aakhirkar, Tejal ko Veer aur Veer ke ateet ke baare mein kaafi kuchh pata chal chuka hai, shayad sab kuchh! Obviously, Veer ke saath past mein exactly kya – kya hua, kis prakar ke shadyantra uske khilaaf rache gaye, aur kis – kis prakar se use hurt kiya gaya, iski poori jaankari kewal Veer ke hi paas hai...

Veer ke ateet me hi hume Jaan'ne ko milega ki kya kuch Saha hai usne. Kya kuch hua tha uske saath. Kesa jeevan jeeta tha woh. Uske alaawa, ye baat acchi tarah koi aur nahi jaanta. (Except Pari.) Pari knows each and everything about Veer.

Parantu, mere khyal se Nidhi se behtar koyi nahi ho sakta tha, Veer ka past explain karne ke liye... That's because, I think Nidhi is the one,who knows the most about Veer, mujhe nahi lagta ki Veer ne itna sab kisi aur ko bataya hoga, jitna ki Nidhi ko bataya tha..

Yes! Nidhi ko andhruni jankaari bhi kaafi hai kyuki Veer rehta tha toh zaahir hai baate hoti hi rehti thi iss vishay par. Aur Veer ne Nidhi par bharosa kar kaafi baate saajha kii hai.

But haan, mere khyal se Tejal ko abhi aur bhi bohot kuchh pata chalna baaki hai, sabhi family members ke baare mein, shayad Veer khud hi batayega use aage chalkar...

Kya Veer batayega?

Tejal, as expected, had a bit of negativity in her heart, all because of the comparisons she made in between herself & Veer... But obviously, thise comparisons were just a result of half – knowledge, she possessed regarding Veer... Par ab Nidhi ki kripa se sab clear ho hi chuka hai, to jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha tha, we might see a different version of Tejal... Purvi ko dekhte huye usne khudse kaha ki wo apne plan ko postponed kar rahi hai, yaani abhi ek – do din baad hi milegi wo Veer se, but that meeting & conversation would be one of the highlights of this story! Waise intezar to us pal ka hai jab Veer apne ateet ki poori dastan use sunayega, I'm sure, she has something really good in store, for those who were responsible for Veer being hurt, doesn't matter whether they did it knowingly or unknowingly!

She's moving smartly. Woh Veer ko aur Purvi ko jaan bujh ke milne de rahi hai. Aisa karne se Purvi aur Bhavna ko koi Shaq nahi hoega uss par ki woh secretly kya kya kar rahi hai. Dekhna hoga kya tehelka machaati hai woh.

Btw. Tejal's past, just like all other characters of the story, seems to be painful... That's quite understood too, living without a father in our society, that's not an easy thing... No matter, whether we accept it or not, but the truth is, this modern or progressed society is still really, really bad! Ye to kewal un taano aur vyangya ki bata huyi jo baahri logon ne uspar athva Bhavana par kase honge, we cannot ignore the fact that Tejal must have developed certain feelings and thoughts on her own, regarding her unknown family and relatives... Jab dekhti hogi wo anya bachon ko apne pita athva bhai – behan ke saath, tab uski manodasha kaisi rehti hogi? Bachpan se hi usne ye sab kuchh jhela aur jab use pata chala hoga ki uski Maa us se, uske bhai ki existence hi chhupati aayi hai saalon se.. Truly, she has gone through a lot too!

Exactly! Veer ka past zyada kharab raha hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki Tej ne kuch nahi saha. Uska khud ka ateet kaafi dardnaak raha hai. Aur ye hume baad me hi dekhne ko milega. Kin parishthitiyo se woh guzri hai. Hume sab darshaaya jayega.

But for now, there is definitely a ray of hope! Naa kewal wo apne bhai se milan ke nazdeek hai, balki umeed yahi hai ki dono mein yahaan se kewal nazdeekiyan hi aayengi, kisi bhi soorat mein Tejal ki takleef athva peeda, badhne ke aasar kam hi hain... The reason is, dono hamesha se ek – doosre se door rahe, kayi varshon tak ek – doosre ki shakal ki pehchan tak na thi dono ko, ab is se zyada aur kya ho sakta hai!?

Mutual pain toh theek hai but awkwardness toh rahegi hi fir bhi. Kahi na kahi moments aise banenge hi jaha dono chup reh jayenge aur aage kya kehna hai unhe soojhega bhi nahi. Aur yahi chuppi, glaani ko anjaam degi. Aur fir hamdardi aur uss se jaagega pyaar. Bilkul wesa jesa Arohi ke case me hai. Par yaha thoda aur desperation hai.

Btw. I think ki wo shayad jald hi Aarohi aur Kavya se bhi milegi, Veer se milne ke baad ya us se pehle, ye dekhne laayak hoga... But it can prove to be a good step, I don't think she'll need it though, but still Kavya – Aarohi could prove to be the bridge between her and Veer! Baharhal, Ragini ke baare mein bhi bataya Nidhi ne use, par mujhe nahi lagta ki Ragini se abhi Milne pahunch sakti hai wo...

Filhaal toh yahi jaan'na hoga ki Tejal ka plan kya hai. Woh agla kadam kya uthaane waali hai? Kya woh Ragini ke ghar jaane waali hai?

Idhar Ragini ne ek baar fir apni feelings Veer ke saamne keh di hain, waise Veer ki taraf se kiya gaya ye chumban hi kaafi hai, but still I think Veer ab jald hi apni taraf se bhi haami bhar sakta hai us rishte ke liye jiska sapna Ragini kaafi samay se dekh rahi hai... There were a good number of little things, that went on between Ragini & Veer, but all of them were presented in a beautiful way, a really beautiful way! Ragini asking him not to call her ‘Bhabhi’, her reaction when Veer called her by her name, that complete scene on the beach, how she gathered herself up to tell Veer everything, and of course, how kiss broke out! The narration was top notch and the words you chose,were on point, as per the requirement of the situation!

Thanks a lot man!
Veer ko ab ek jawaab sabhi aurto ke liye prepare kar lena chahiye. Kis se woh intimate relationship rakhna chaahta hai aur kis se nahi. Kyuki ladkiyo ke peeche laundo ki line lagi rehti hai. Aur woh jald hi out of sampark jaa sakti hai.

But there are tough times ahead, for Ragini! Sarvpratham, Veer ne abhi tak seedhe shabdon mein uske proposal ka uttar diya nahi hai, haan hi kahega wo, ye lagbhag tay hai, but still ‘keh chuka hai’ aur ‘keh dega’ mein fark to hota hi hai... Wahin Shweta naamak speed – breaker ghar par hi maujood hai... Zyada aage ki na sochen to bhi, Shweta ko doubt to hoga hi jab use Aabha dwara pata chalega ki uski aur Suman ki gair – haaziri mein Ragini, Veer ke saath baahar nikal gayi thi... Aage to jo hona hai, wo abhi sochne ka faayeda hi nahi, depend karega is baat par ki Ragini – Veer ka rishta kis Shweta ko pata chalega!? Use jo Veer se maafi ki talabgar hai, ya use jo Veer ki maafi haasil kar chuki hai... Ragini ke Mata – Pita, wo maanege is rishte ke liye, accept kar paayenge, a lot of questions and challenges are there for Ragini, but that's what love is about!

Exactly! Ragini ki pehli problem~
Veer uska pyaar accept karega ya nahi?
Dusri problem~
Veer agar uska pyaar accept kar bhi leta hai toh ghar me Shweta aur anya logo ke rehte Ragini iss samasya se kese deal karegi? Kese batayegi unhe? Ya sach chhupa ke rakhegi?
Teesri problem~
Apne maa baap ko kese batayegi? Zaahir hai pyaar hone ke baad harr aurat ko lagta hai ki woh iska izhaar kare. Toh duniya me Veer ke sang jeene ke liye kese manayegi apne maa baap ko?
Chauthi problem ~
Mata pita maan bhi gaye toh Veer ke ghar ka kya? Veer ki sagi maa bhi picture me aa rahi hai. Kese manayegi Ragini Bhavna ko? Kese kahegi ki mein ek divorcee aapke bete se shadi karna chahti hu jo ki mujhse 8 saal chota hai aur upar se mera devar bhi reh chuka hai.
Bohot kathin raasta hai Ragini ka.

Nidhi ka maamla abhi ke liye aage badhna thoda mushkil hi hai... Firstly, abhi Purvi se milne ke baad, Veer ka adhik dhyan shayad Bhavana aur Tejal ki hi taraf hoga, wahin Nidhi ka sharmeela swabhav itni aasani se jaane se raha... But I think, after Veer eliminates the potential threat as in Rajat, the ice might break! Nidhi bhi jaanti hai ki Rajat ek khatra hai, naa kewal uske liye, balki uski behen aur bachon ke liye bhi, aise mein Veer jab Rajat ka hisaab karega, tab Nidhi par iska seedha asar padna tay hai... Btw. Nidhi ne jaane – anjaane,ek baar fir Veer ke bhale ka kaam kar diya hai, Tejal ko sab kuchh batakar, she's such an angel in Veer's life! Btw. Juhi's scene was cute too! It was real, and I was able to connect to it... Aksar chhite bache yunhi, parde athva darwaze ke pichhe chhip jaate hain, anjaan vyakti ko dekhkar, uske baad Juhi ka deewar se lagkar Nidhi ke paas aana, just too realistic man! Btw. Masi hi bulayegi na wo aage chalkar Tejal ko!?

Juhi Maasi kyu bulayegi?
Bua bulayegi na!
Nidhi actually me sirf village arc ke initial phase ka hissa hai. Toh hume beshaq abhi kuch aur jhalakiya uski dekhne ko milengi. Saath hi Shreya ki. Aur uske baad main sequence me sirf Veer, Suman, Bhavna, Tejal, Purvi, Aabha, jese characters par focus rahega. Kyuki inhi ka role aham hai. Saath hi kayi naye characters aane waale hai. Toh taiyaar rahiyega. Kaafi Raaz khulenge.

Shreya abhi gaayab hai, aur ye samjha bhi jaa sakta hai, office ke kaam se fursat hi kahaan milti hogi use! But definitely, jab wo picture mein lautegi, I mean, her next meeting with Veer, would be interesting to read... Idhar, Kavya aur Aarohi se mulakat ho gayi hai Veer ki, kaafi din baad huyi, aise mein Kavya ka desperation samjha jaa sakta hai, wahin Aarohi pooro tarah apni personality aur shy nature ko darsha rahi hai! Kavya cute to hai, par saath hi she's one of those characters jo aate hi kahani mein roshni bhar dete hain... Juhi is the only one except Kavya, who is capable of doing it again & again... But yes, grown up characters mein se Kavya ke alawa koyi Aisa atmosphere nahi bana sakta, kahani mein... Yahaan bhi wahi hua, zyada der tak to nahi chali inki baatein, but is arc mein kayi mauke aane waale hain... Btw. wo table ke neeche kya ho raha tha!?

She was teasing Veer.
Aur Kavya se ye hum expect kar hi sakte hai. Chulbuli hai woh. Kab kya kar de koi bharosa nahi hai.

Aarohi... As I said, she's comfortable in her own shell! And she looks adorable & cute in that personality only! Wahin Karan aur Kritika ka alag hi nain – matakka chal raha hai... Kritika's attraction towards Veer has been overshadowed by Karan's behaviour, that he has been showing towards Kritika! Jab Veer, Vegas mein tha, obviously, tab bhi kuchh ek baar mulakat huyi hogi dono ki, clearly Karan se impressed hai wo, aur aage chalkar dono ke beech aur bhi nazdeeki aane waali hai... Btw. Kritika ko realise bhi ho gaya tha ki Veer shayad uski pahunch se baahar hai joki sahi bhi hai, Kaera – Sonia jaisi jiske aas – paas ho, wo kahaan sabhi par dhyan kendrit karega... But at the same time, Kishor ka dialogue bhi taiyar ho chuka hai, “What is this , you fool! Apne status ki ladki nahi mili thi tumhe koyi”!!

Hahaha!
The thing is...
Karan ek raees family se hai. Ab raees bhi kya hi kahe. Uska baap Kishor hai aur behan Kaera. Paiso ki gaddi ke bed pe so jaaye woh. Itna paisa hai ki Paisa na ho gaya haath ka Mel ho gaya. Zaahir hai ki usne foreign me rehte hue apni padhayi ke dauraan kayi firangiyo ko thoka hoga. Aur woh bhi ek se ek Goriyo ko. Models se leke kuch actresses bhi. Aur iss vajah se usse kabhi ek proper Indian desi ladki nahi mili.
Kritika me wahi baat hai aur isliye harr baar uske dil me kuch ajeeb feeling aati hai. Because he has never experienced that before. Kritika me thoda bholapann hai, thodi masti, thodi shararat. Wo thoda sharmati bhi hai, thoda bold bhi rehti hai. Aur sabse khaas baat woh unn models ki tarah paiso aur materialistic cheezo ke peeche nahi bhaagti. A proper desi girlfriend.
Aur yahi Karan ke dil ko chahiye hai. Jisse Karan dheere dheere samajh raha hai.

Idhar Sonali ke liye bhi Veer ne achha decision liya hai, uski yahi ichha thi ki wo padhayi kare, aur Veer ne isi ka ek mauka diya hai use... Par dekhna ye hai ki Sonali kya faisla legi! Clearly, wo confused thi ki kis raah ko chune, Food Truck ka kaam bhi use bhaa gaya hai, wahin doosri taraf uski ek puraani ichha hai... Let's see kis aur jaayegi wo! Sonali ka behaviour chulbula hai, munhfat bhi hai wo parantu uske yahi characteristics use khaas banate hain... Jis kahani mein itni maatra mein female characters hon, wahaan apni khaas pehchan banane ke liye, koyi na koyi uniqueness to honi hi chahiye! Aur jab Veer ko uska ye bartav aur nature pasand aa raha hai to obviously,kya hi dikkat hai! But you mentioned in one of your replies that Suman being a bit hard on Sonali, when she says something to Veer has a different reason! Would be waiting for that suspense to open up... Btw. I think Bhavana aur Suman ka itihaas hi iski wajah hai shayad...

Yes! Suman jaan boojh ke Sonali ko daant ke Veer ki seva karne kehti hai. Uske peeche kaaran hai. Aur jald hi uska Raaz khulega. Warna woh aisi nahi hai jo apni bacchi ko uski iccha ke viruddh kuch karvaye.

Baharhal, Veer ne apne Food Trucks ki ek chain banane ka nirnay liya hai, jismein 8 trucks hone waali hain... Aur apna ek alag brand banane ke liye unique equipments ki manufacturing ka order bhi wo de aaya hai! Wahin future business ke liye Karan ne investment ka offer diya hai use, par saath hi Kaera se baat karne ko bhi kaha hai, dekhte hain Veer kab apne business ko ek step oopar lekar jaayega, aur investment ke liye kis ki sahayta lega, lega bhi ya nahi!? Sonali yadi padhayi ko chunti hai, tab Veer ko na kewal ek Food Trucks ko handle karne waale/waali ki zaroorat padegi, balki use shayad ek assistant ki bhi zarurat hai! Madhuri ka hi naam yaad aata hai sabse pehle, uske alawa shayad Pragya!? Baaki koyi aur ho to kaha nahi jaa sakta...

Let's see kaun hota hai assistant!? 8 trucks ke baare me bhi usne kuch socha hai. Of course food business ke liye usse koi aisa chahiye jo na keval food ka knowledge rakhta ho balki food se pyaar bhi karta ho. Ek foodie! Aur kaam me nipud ho. Kyuki Bhavna aur Shweta hotel sambhaal sakti hai. Food truck nahi! Pragya is a student like Veer. She's in her last year. Aur uski field ye nahi hai. Karne ko toh kar sakti hai but Veer hiring Pragya? Naah! Dono ke beech baat tak nahi hui hai.

Idhar Rajat ne apni moorkhta ka parichay de diya hai! Usne attack kiya hai Mahila – Mandal ki reputation par, ya kahun ki seedha Suman par hi... Uske aur Nidhi ke maamle mein direct involvement thi Mahila – Mandal, especially Suman ki, aise mein expected hi tha ki wo khaar khaya baitha hoga... Shayad Balhaar ke zariye yahi pata chala tha Veer ko, Suman ne nahi bataya use par Suman ka bhi apna kaaran tha... Khair, abhi ke liye Veer aur Pari ki charcha se spasht ho chuka hai ki unka pehla target Rajat hi hai, Veer ko naa kewal Suman aur Mahila – Mandal ka hisaab lena hai, balki apne 40 Lakh bhi wasoolne hain... Wahin Nidhi ke saath jo kuchh kiya tha usne, uska hisaab hona bhi abhi baaki hai... Pranjal ka maamla iske baad hi shuru hoga shayad, kyonki dono mile huye hain to Rajat ke safaye ke baad Pranjal ki dum apne aap hi pakad mein aa jaayegi... Wahin Pari ko shakh ho gaya hai “back-up” ke baare mein, let's see Veer Karunesh ka pata kaise lagayega!

Rajat ne plan Kiya hi hai kuch. Matlab Rajat aur Pranjal dono ne. Sex scandal Veer ke liye. Dekhte hai Veer isme se kese baahar nikalta hai. Kyuki agar phansa toh Nidhi ki favourability minus me na sahi par 0 toh Jaa hi sakti hai.

Suman ko bhi ‘punishment’ mil gayi hai Veer se wo baatein chhupane ki, khair punishment kam, maza zyada tha wo... Wahin Niharika jo Veer ko dekhkar hi almost marr gayi thi, uski bhi thukayi kar di hai Veer ne! Abhi ke liye Niharika ko lekar kahin jaa raha hai Veer, maybe yahi Mahila – Mandla waala maamla sultane, ya ho sakta hai ki jo hacking waala kaand karne ki usne koshish ki thi, uska prasad dene! Sarika ka bhi naam saamne aaya is beech, shayad ek member hai Mahila – Mandal ki, dekhte hain iska kya role hoga aage! Abhi ke liye Veer ko pehle Niharika ke saath jaana hai aur uske baad Purvi aur Kaera se! Dono ke diye samay mein kewal ek hi ghante ka antar hai, dekhte hain Veer is situation ko kaise manage karega...

Double date ki tarah kahi Veer yaha bhi kuch toh nahi karega?

Kaera is going to enter the story after a considerable amount of time! Looking forward to her scene, what she said to Karan, about Veer not informing her about his Vegas trip, points towards a bit of improvement on her ‘emotional side’! Waise abhi Kaera ke completely normal hone ke aasar to nahi hai, koyi badi situation chahiye use normal karne ke liye, like danger on Veer, or maybe Sonia.. or maybe Ava herself! Wahin Purvi se mulakat ka kya nishkarsh niklega ye bhi dekhne laayak hoga, dekhte hain Bhavana ne kya idea nikaala hoga un dono ki baatein sun ne ka... What Tejal wants to do is a question too!

Yes! But then again, Kaera is also like Nidhi who will be here in this arc for the initial period only. Aur ye arc khatam hote hi Crimson arc me uska, Sonia aur Ava teeno ka aham role hai. Trinity will be back.

Both the updates were really beautiful, as I mentioned above, that Juhi's scene was too realistic! The one of Kavya was cute! And obviously, all that between Veer & Ragini was the most adorable scene... Tejal aur Nidhi ki poori proceeding bhi kaafi badhiya likhi aapne, cheers for that!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thanks a lot man!!!
Ju dekh rahe ho na. Kitna samay laga hai mujhe ye reply karne me. Sabse khaas baat jo ju ke revos ki rehti hai woh ye ki ju summary nahi likhte update ki. Jiski vajah se mujhe reply Dene ke liye content milta hai.
Ab summary hoti toh mein confuse ho jaata ki ab ispe kya hi reply du mein. Kyuki update toh mein hi likhta hu. Toh ab uss vishay me aur kya hi kaha jaaye?
Log questions puchte hai toh usme mujhe content mil jaata hai. Sab kuch asaani se bataata hu fir mein.

Isliye ju ke revos baakiyo se alag hote hai.
Aise hi saath bane rehne ka bhai.

 

[Werewolf]

nice update bro apka har update awesome hai but 1week me 1 hi update aata hai

Parivaar me kisi ki death ho gayi hai.
Chhatvi baar bata raha hu.

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice update

 

[Mana6262]

Suman ne to niharika ki keh ke le liuse acha Maja chakhaya .....

Pranjal Sala harmajada bahut uchla raha hai usko to av bahut pachtana padega ...karunes ko kon follow kar raha hai .....

Veer basti ke basi ko b acha sabk sikhya ...

Purvi bahut hi achi malum padti hai or to wo bahut soft hatred hai ...veer ka alfa male bahut hi khtrank Nak lag raha hai.....​