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Dhanyavaad!Bhai kahna chahta Hu
1. aap ki family main Jo ghatna gati . uske liye ham Reader apki satvana prada n karte hai. Our eshwar se prathana karte hai. App ki family Our App thik ho
Kis baat ka?2. muze lagta hai apko farak nahi padna chahiye.
Pages par dhyaan nahi deta bhai mein. Mera dhyaan sirf aap logo ke like responses aur comments ki pratikriya par rehta hai. Ussi se mujhe andaaza lagta hai ki story log pasand kar rahe hai aur mujhe naya update kis tarah se prepare karna hai.3. Karan apka Subject fresh hai. kuch naya hai. jaha log Starring main hi story Closer karte hai. lekin .aap ne 2318 Tak ahaye. Ye badi baat hai.
Kaun karta hai baat uski hai hi nahi. Par jo response chala aa raha hai utne ki mein aage bhi umeed karta hu. Bas wahi baat hai.3. frak nahi padta Kon like karte hai. Kon dislike ya Wrong comment karte hai.
kyuki padna or likne main farak rahta hai.
Dikkatein toh usme bhi khoob gayi bhai. Warna woh kahani thodi sii aur lambi hoti.4.main apki story akhir kyu ko follow kiya woh Bhi Asan nahi thi .phir bhi complete hai. Karan tha apki possitive aproch..
Dhanyavaad bhai!5. or App ke UPDATE late aaye ya jaldi farak nahi. padhata .Reader bhi samje te ki Subject fresh hai.
Wahi kar raha hu. Dekhte hai kya hota hai.6. Ye story bahot hi achi Base pe hai. aur Age or damal machayegi. To posesive appoch. rakhe.
Thanks for the support mate!7. App Ye story complete kare ya close hum apka sath hai.
8. bus kuch faltu logo pe Than na De
Ye toh chal hi raha hai.veer ke Challenges
1. Nidhi ko achi Life Dena
You mean emotion jagaana! Don't worry ab mission mil gaya hai toh sab ho jayega.2. keara ki Motion Hagana.
Superiority nahi! Woh inferiority complex hai. jaha woh khud ko Kaera se bekaar samajhti hai.3. Sonia ki superaliy complex ka End.
Ava ko screen me aane me abhi samay hai.4.Ava ki khoi dosti
Suhana injured hai. Village arc ke baad hi entry hogi. Ek jhalak btw abhi dekhne ko mil sakti hai.5. suhana ki maltiple personality
Kaarya pragati par hai.7.niharika ka mardo pe ghussa
Julia ka filhaal koi important role nahi hai.8.Julia ka care proponality.
Issi arc me khulega.9. bhavana ka rajgharane ka rahahsya
Again! Issi arc me dekhne ko milega.10. tei ka akela bachapan
Sapna? Kaun sa?11. shweta our bhumika ka sapna
Baarvah bhul gaye ju? ragini lagi hai prayas me.13. Ragini ki dil ki khawash ki ek sarvagun Husband.
Jo na jaane aur kitna badhega.14. suman ka pagal Pan
Thanks bhai! Itna kuch likhne ke liye.our bahot hi diffrent Women shedes hai. Jo hame dekhne ko mi lege. our ek akela veer ka Systems
To public writer ko support Karo yar
Ye sab ek story main hai To support Karo bhai
our
Nahi! Kadaapi nahi!Kya aaj update aane ki sambhavana h
Dhanyavaad bhai!!मित्र, आज साउथ अफ्रीका से भारत हार गया लेकिन उस का भरपाई हो गया। अभी आपका अनुच्छेद देखे है। बहुत सुंदर उपस्थापना। चलिये पहला विकेट गिरा लेकिन उस हारामी प्रांजल का क्या होगा वो देखने लायक होगा। वो प्रांजल तो इसिको मोहरा बना कर खेल रहा था, अब क्या होगा? उस प्रांजल को पूरी तरह बर्बाद होना देखने चाहते है। अच्छा अंत का ये servicing वाली बात क्या है? बहुत सुंदर लाजवाब अनुच्छेद के लिए आपका आभारी हूँ। आगे देखते है की क्या होता है। धन्यबाद।
Beshaq!Toh ab Pari fir naye roop me aa gayi wolfji.
Harr update 4k words ke around hota hai. Bhai itna bada update harr writer nahi deta hai. Ye baat sab jaante hai.Update mast ha lekin chota ha
Aisi kaun sii bhaari english likh dii bhai mene? System ke notifications ki baat kar rahe ho? Woh toh English me ho rahenge yaar. Koi aisi Oxford level ki thodi hai. Boht basic hai. Aur uska matlab bhi sab next update me samjha diya jayega.bhai aap update bahut hee aacha dete ho... but but ek request h ki aap English na likha kro hindi m likha karo sala mje nhi aate English m phad kar...
Bhai ye soch lo ki ju ki saari khwaishein poori hone waali hai. Mene pehle se hi sab kuch soch ke rakha hai. Agla update ju ko khush kar dega.Patta nahi kyun but I as a reader want ki yahan jo kuch bhi rajat ke sath hua woh nidhi ko bhi dekhna chahiye ... From cctv or any other source..... But its all on our writter .... As a reader i want ki tej pehle apne bhai se mille .... Abb uska master plan kya hai yeh dekhna hai .... Bhai apni story bohot acchi hai .... I am a silent reader but apki story majbur kar deti hai ki mai rply karun
Dekhte hai. Thanks btw!Zabaradast lajawab update Lagta hy ab ek nayi pari dekhne ko milegi or us dushman ki b shayad ab koi information mile isse
Like aur comment karna harr adhyaay par na bhule. Dhanyavaad!Osm story bro....kya gajab ka likhte ho aap maja aa ta hai bhai jab apki story padhne mai
Kal aayega bhai!Update???