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Ab tak...

Bhavna ke qadam wahi sthir reh gaye. Uski saasein jese pal bhar ke liye tham gayi.

*Badump* *Badump*

Dhadkane tezz ho uthi.

Aur fir, kaano me wahi awaaz sunaayi dii. Jo usne kuch mahino pehle suni thi,

"Ohhh!!! Kaun aaya hai? Hmm! What should I call you? Maa? Ya fir...!? Miss Geeta????"

Aur ye sunte hi Bhavna ke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye.

Ab aage...

Kuch bandhan aise hote hai, jo kabhi nahi tootate. Unhi bandhano me se ek bandhan hota hai ek maa aur uski aulaad ke beech. Ek aisa rishta jiski koi tulna nahi ho sakti.

Atulneeya!

Wesa hi ek khoon ka rishta tha Veer aur Bhavna ke beech.

Aaj dono maa bete ek dusre ke saamne the. Sooraj dhal chuka tha aur chaand ki chaandini andhere me jagmaga rahi thi.

Bhavna Purvi ke saath Tejal ko dhundne aisi raat me hi nikal gayi thi. Din bhar se woh gaayab thi aur na toh phone utha rahi thi aur na hi koi jawaab de rahi thi. Ek maa thi Bhavna. Chinta toh hoegi hi na apni santaan ki?

Par thodi derr pehle aaye Tejal ke phone ne uski chinta dur kar dii. Pata chala ki woh toh ghar laut chuki thi.

Uski laparwaahi par Bhavna chillaate hue ghar me pravesh kar hi rahi thi jab saamne baithe shaks ko dekh uske perr wahi jamm gaye.

20 saal pehle uska khoon jo uss se bichhad gaya tha, uska apna lalla uss se dur tha, aaj woh uski aankho ke saamne baitha hua tha.

Aur tab uske bol Bhavna ke kaano me pade, "Ohhh!!! Kaun aaya hai? Hmm! What should I call you? Maa? Ya fir...!? Miss Geeta????"

Bhavna ka badan kaanp utha. Veer ke chehre par ek ajeeb sii muskaan thi, jo shayad farzi thi. Andar behad dard samaya hua tha jese.

"Ye ladki bhi bilkul ajeeb hai. Sach me bilkul tum pe gayi hai. Ab toh tum hi isse-!!??"

Apne purse me gaadi ki chaavi daalte hue Purvi jese hi ghar ke andar aayi, uska bhi haal kuch kuch Bhavna ki hi tarah ho gaya.

Qadam tham gaye aur saasein tezz ho gayi.

"Veer...!?" Uske muh se hairaani me nikla.

Baari baari sab par nazar firaate hue woh wahi darwaaze ki dehleez par hi theher gayi. Kayi saare sawaal the uske mann me par filhaal saamne ka ye drishya zyada zaroori tha.

Sirf Veer hi baitha hua tha, baaki woh teeno khadi usse hi dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne bataya nahi? How should I address you? Maa? Ya fir...!? Miss Geeta?

Tej : Veer!?

Purvi : Veer?? Veer ye tum-

Iske pehle ki Purvi kuch keh paati, Bhavna ne apna haath utha ke usse rok diya.

Ye sab kya ho raha tha? Bhavna ne kabhi nahi socha tha ki uska apna baccha uss se kabhi aisa sawaal karega. Woh itni nadaan kese ho sakti thi?

Ab usse samajh aa raha tha. Beshaq! Uske bete ka uss se naraaz hona toh banta hi tha. Akhir, woh usse chorr ke jo aa gayi thi. Toh fir kyu nahi naraaz hoega Veer uss se? Ek maa hone ke naate, kiya hi kya tha usne apne bete ke liye? Toh naraazgi toh banti hi thi na?

Jab Bhavna ne iss baare me ab socha toh usse khud ke upar hi hassi aa gayi. Usne soch bhi kese liya ki uska laadla usse pehchaante hi uski baaho me aa girega? Uss par pyaar luta dega? Shayad isse hi kehte the, khayali pulaav pakana! Aaj woh jaan gayi thi.

Woh bina kuch kahe, aage badhi. Uske harr qadam par uski paayal ki chham-chham ki awaaz kamre me goonjne lagi. Itni khamoshi thi waha.

Harr badhte qadam par Bhavna ko Egypt ke wo pal yaad aane lage. Jab Veer, Vikram ke roop me uss se mila tha. Woh haseen lamhe jaha Vikram ne ek gehri chhaap chorri thi uske mann me. Aur baad me usse jab ye pata chala ki wahi uska apna khoon tha toh Bhavna ke andar jo ek aas thi woh punaah jaag uthi.

Faasla sirf thodi duri ka tha dono ke beech. Fir bhi aisa laga jese Bhavna ko Veer tak pohuchne me kaafi derr lag gayi. Veer khud bhi shaant na reh saka. Uski saasein tezz thi. Heart rate badha hua tha. Aur Pari ye baat acche se jaanti thi ki aisa kyu tha. Par woh maun hi rahi.

Veer ke sawaal ka Bhavna ne koi uttar na diya. Woh bas Veer ke qareeb pohuchi, aur paas aate hi,

Usne Veer, jo kursi par baitha hua tha uske chehre ko apne haatho me thaam liya.

Woh sparsh! Woh pehla sparsh hote hi, dono ke dilo ne jese ek dhadkan phaand lii.

Kehte hai ateet me jo kho jaata hai, woh dobaara nahi milta. Par aaj Bhavna ko mil gaya tha.

Uska apna chiraag! Sach hi toh kaha tha Purvi ne. Kitna sona tha uska laadla.

Pal bhar me hi Bhavna ki aankho ne aasuo ka sailaab laa diya. Aur uske thar-tharaate hontho ne pukaarte hue usse bulaaya,

"V-Veeeerr??"

Veer ki nazre apni Maa par hi thi. Yahi woh Maa thi, jo usse 20 saal pehle uss nark samaan ghar me akela chorr ke chali gayi thi. Aaj woh uske saamne thi. Par aaj...! Aaj toh woh usse puchkaarne me lagi hui thi. Uske Alpha instincts iss hamdardi ko kese sweekaar kar sakte the?

Veer : Veer? Ya Vikram?

Bhavna : Mein jaanti nahi kya ki tu kya kar raha hai? *sniff* Naraaz hai mujhse. Hai na? *sniff* A-Aur kyu nahi hoga? Teri Maa ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Hmm...!? Mein toh woh apraadhi maa hu na jo apne lalla ko chorr ke bhaag gayi thi. Hai na? Teri nazro me toh mein wahi hu. Kyu?

Veer : Toh kya baakiyo ki nazro me aap kuch aur hai?

Veer ki woh muskaan Bhavna ko sab kuch baya kar rahi thi. Woh jese uske sach ko jhooth saabit karwana chaah rahi thi.

Bhavna : A-Aisa nahi hai mere bacche! Aisa nahiii haiii!!! *sniff* Ohhh!!! Mere laal!!!

Usne Veer ke chehre ko thaame hi apni orr kheecha aur apne pait se uske poore chehre ko kass ke laga liya.

Veer ne koi virodh nahi kiya. Woh apni Maa ke pait se lage shaant baitha raha. Bhavna lagataar uske baalo par haath firaaye jaa rahi thi. Pait se lage lage hi Veer ko dhyaan aaya. Yahi woh garbh tha, jisme 9 mahine woh panpa tha. Issi garbh se uska janm hua tha.

Peeche khadi Purvi aur Tej ki bhi aankhein namm ho gayi. Ye ek bohut bada milan tha. Ek maa aur bete ka.

"Mera baccha...!!!!" Bhavna roye jaa rahi thi.

"Purvi dekho mera laal!!! Ahhh!! Mujhe mil gaya...! *sniff* mera beta mil gaya Purvi!!! *sniff* T-Tej! Dekh tera bhai!!! Aa jaa idhar. Laga le isse apne seene se Tej!! A-Ab kahi nahi jayega ye!!! H-Haan! Yahi tera saga chota bhai hai Tej! Aaja meri bacchi!!!! Aajaa!!!"

Woh nahi jaanti thi ki Tej pehle hi Veer ke kuch raazo se waqif thi.

"Ab mein kahi nahi jaane dungi apne laadle ko. K-Kahi nahi! *sniff* Tumhari Maa!!! Tumhe apne paas rakhegi Veer!!! Apne paas...!"

Woh kehti toh jaa rahi thi par Veer ki aankhein jyo ki tyo ek jagah par adig thi. Bhavna uske bagal se baithi aur apne bete ke mukh ko nihaarne lagi,

Bhavna : Sahi kaha tha tumne Purvi! Ekdum sahi! Mere bacche ko dekhne ke baad, mann karta hai ki duniya bhar ka pyaar uss par luta du. Poore mukh ko choom lu... Sach me!

Bol kar woh aage badhi aur uske komal honth Veer ke gaal se lag gaye. Par iss baar...! Iss baar sparsh hote hi...!

Veer ki aankho se aasu umad aaye.

Aur uski ladkhadaati awaaz ne bas itna hi pucha, "Kaha thi aap?"

Sawaal teen shabd ka tha. Par uski ahemiyat ka bhaar naapa bhi nahi jaa sakta tha. Woh jaanti thi Veer ke iss sawaal ka kaaran. Woh kya jaan'na chaah raha tha. Woh jaanti thi.

Kaha thi woh itne saal? Sawaal itna sa tha. Par uska jawaab dene ki himmat tak nahi utha paa rahi thi Bhavna.

Bhavna : M-Mein majboor thi mere bacche! Mein majboor thi...! *sniff*l

Veer (smiles) : Itni majboor ki apne bete ko 20 saal tak apne se juda rakhi rahi? Agar mein khud se pehel na karta toh shayad-

Uske bol wahi tham gaye jab Bhavna ne apna haath uske muh par rakh usse chup karva diya,

Bhavna : Nahhhiiiiiii!!! Nahiii!! Aisa nahi hai mere laal!!! Aisa nahiii haiiii~

Veer : Kya mene sach nahi kaha? Agar mein nahi aata toh shayad-

Bhavna (screams) : Nahiiiiiiii!!!!! Maa hu teri mere bacche!! Tujhe janm diya hai mene!!! Tujhe 9 mahine apni iss kokh me rakha hai. Mein kese tujh se juda ho sakti hu???

Veer : Toh?

Bhavna : M-Mein majboor thi! Mein majboor thi... *sniff*

Bhavna phoot phoot kar rone lagi.

Purvi : Bhavna!!!

Woh pukaarte hue aage aayi aur Bhavna ki peeth par haath ferr uske bagal se baith gayi.

Veer kuch derr shant raha. Aur jab usse laga ki shayad usse uske sawaal ka jawaab nahi milega. Woh utha aur darwaaze ki orr jaane laga. Toh ye dekh Bhavna ghabra uthi,

Bhavna : Veeeeerrrr!!!

Veer : I guess aap uttar dene se rahi. Raat kaafi ho rahi hai. Aur wese bhi...! Ghar par mere kuch "apne" mera intezaar kar rahe honge.

Usne "apne" shabd par halka sa zorr dete hue kaha.

Bhavna : Aur mein??? *sniff* Kya mein tumhari apni nahi??? Kya tumhari ye asli maa apni nahi? Haan? Bol!!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye sawaal...! Aap khud se kyu nahi puchti?

*Badump*

Bhavna ka dil itni zorr se dhadka maano jese abhi hi baahar aa jayega. Veer ka prashn uske dil ko khanjar ki tarah cheer ke rakh diya.

Uska mamta-mayi aur karuna-mayi dil kuch hadd tak toh Veer ke katu aur kadve shabdo ke liye taiyaar tha. Par itne teekhe shabd? Shayad nahi! Aise waaro ka prahaar uske bulbule jese kamzor dil ke kavach ko ek jhatke me nasht kar usse andar se ghaayal karte jaa raha tha.

Usse andaaza ho raha tha ki uska beta uss se kis hadd tak naraaz tha. Ye berukhi kahi ab uski jaan na lele.

"Nahhhhiiiiiiii!!!!!"

Woh cheekhte hue apne bete ke perro par gir gayi,

Bhavna : N-Nahhhiiiiii!!!! Mat jaa mujhe chorr kar...!! Mat jaa Veeeerrr!!! Mat jaa mere laal!! *sniff* Mat jaa!!! Warna mein marr jaungi tere bina...! Mein tere perr padti hu...! Mat jaa apni iss Maa ko chorr ke ...! Mein nahi jee paungi Veer. *sniff* Mein nahi jee paungi! Aise rooth ke mat jaa!!!

Uski iss harqat par Veer khil-khila ke hassa,

Veer : Hahaha~ Didn't you survive 20 years without me? I'm sure you can go for another 20.

Uske harr bol Bhavna ke aasu aur zorr se bahaane par usse majboor kar dete. Par Bhavna ne apni pakad dheeli nahi kii.

Abhi Tej kuch kehne hi waali thi ki itne me hall ka darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi bade hi prasann mann se sabzi ka ek thaila haatho me pakde andar aaya,

"Arre dekhti ho? Hahaha~ Aaj mandi me kya mil gaya? Haha! Inke parathe banenge aaj toh aur-!?"

kehte hue woh wahi rukk gaya.

Ye koi aur nahi, Arun tha. Purvi ka pati. Yaani Veer ke muh bole Mausa jii!

Arun ki vaani ko virhaam lag gaya. Usne jese hi saamne dekha, toh paaya ki mahaul behad gamgeen tha. Bhavna ek ladke ke perr pakde ro rahi thi toh wahi uski patni aur Tejal ki aankho me bhi aasu the.

Woh school me adhyaapak tha. Sthitiyo ko bareeki se parakhna uske liye asaan tha. Usse pata tha ki Bhavna aur Purvi kiski talaash me itne dino se lagi hui thi. Akhir Purvi apne pati se kabhi kuch nahi chhipaati thi. Toh Arun ko ek jhalak me dekh ke hi pata lag gaya tha ki maajra kya tha. Sthiti bigde na isliye usne fauran hi samajhdaari dikhaayi,

"Ohhh! M-Mein kuch bhool gaya! Usse lekar aata hu."

aur itna bol woh waha se turant nikal gaya.

Purvi ko mann hi mann apne pati ki soojh boojh par naaz hua lekin uske baad uske chehre par gussa jhalak utha aur woh Bhavna par jamkar barsi,

Purvi : Dekh kya rahi ho Bhavna? Tum ab bhi itni ziddi kese ho sakti ho? Bata kyu nahi deti sach? Bolo!!! Bol do warna tum apne jigar ke tukde ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kho dogi Bhavnaaa!!!! Aur mein bhi... Mein bhi apne bete ko kho dungi. Hum sab ke rishte jude hue hai. Bolo Bhavna!!! Bolooo!!!!

Purvi ki baat sunn, bechaari Bhavna ka dil dahal gaya. Kho degi? Kya matlab woh apne bacche ko kho degi? N-Nahi!!! Woh aisa kese hone de sakti thi? Abhi abhi toh uska pyaara munna waapas uske paas lauta tha. Toh apne se kese juda hone de sakti thi woh ab.

Mann hi mann besudh sii Bhavna Veer ke perro par hi padi thi, jab Veer ke aage badhne ki halchal usse waapas se hosh me laayi,

Bhavna : Nahhhiiiii!!! *sniff* Veeeeerrr!! Mat jaa!!! Mat jaa mere bacche!!! *sniff* Mein marr jaungi!!! Mein tere haath jodti hu, perr padti hu mere lalla...! *sniff* Tujhe jo saza deni hai iss maa ko de le...! Par mujhse dur mat jaa! Mujhse dur mat jaa re!!!

Tejal : Veeeerrr!!!

Behan ke thar-tharaate hontho ne usse jab pukaara toh Veer wahi rukk gaya.

Neeche apni maa ko aise dekh uska gussa aur badh gaya. Sumitra ka woh Pranjal ko bachana. Woh pal baar baar yaad aate hi use aur kasht pohucha rahe the.

Apne bete ki aankho me aasu dekh Bhavna uthi aur Veer ko chehre ko pakad apne angutho se uske aasu bade hi pyaar se pochi, aur dobaara apne seene se laga lii.

Bhavna : Mera baccha!!!! *puch* Mera beta...! *puch* Mat jaa!! Mat jaa mujhe chorr ke! Tere liye kitna tadpi hu ye sirf mein hi jaanti hu. Sirf mein!

Veer : ...

Purvi : Bhavna bata do usse sach!!! Bata do mein keh rahi hu. Iss se pehle ki ab aur derr ho jaaye.

Purvi ki baatein uske dimaag me goonjne lagi. Aur usne ek gehri saas lete hue nirnay le liya. Apne bete ko dekh, woh ab taiyaar thi. Purvi sahi thi. Agar usne ab derri ki, toh woh apne laal ko hamesha ke liye kho degi.

Poore mukh ko pyaar se choomne ke baad Bhavna Veer se peeche hati. Aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue dekhi,

Bhavna : Tum sab jaan'na chaahte ho na? Tej tumhare bhi sawaal the na?

Tej ne apni maa ke prashn par haami bhari.

Bhavna : T-Toh theek hai. Tum dono bhai behan ko woh sab bataya jayega jo ab tak tumse chhupaya gaya hai.

Veer : Huh!?

Tej : Aapka matlab!?

Bhavna : Mera ateet!! Tum dono ka ateet! Sab kuch...!

Tej : T-Toh??

Bhavna : Par uske liye...! Hume ek lamba safar tay karna hoga. Kyuki wahi pe tumhe tumhare prashno ke uttar milenge.

Usne Purvi ko dekhte hue kaha. Aur Purvi Bhavna ki baat sunte hi ghabra gayi,

Purvi : Bh-Bhavna?? Y-Ye kya keh rahi ho? Mene sirf sach bataane kaha tha? W-Waha le jaane nahi. Tum aisa kese-!?

Bhavna : Kyu!? Tumne hi toh kaha tha na Purvi. Ki sab kuch theek hai. Tumhe koi bhi galat ehsaas nahi hua. Sab kuch shaant lag raha tha. Kya tumne ye nahi kaha tha?

Purvi ye sunte hi kal raat apni Veer se mulaqaat ko yaad karne lagi. Jab woh baar baar hotel ke aas paas dekh rahi thi.

Purvi : H-Haan mene kaha tha par waha jaana-

Bhavna : Toh bas fir! Aur wese bhi, mein inn dono ko apne sthaan le jaa rahi hu. Na ki waha!

Purvi : P-Par agar waha-

Bhavna : Nahi Purvi! Ab aur nahi! Mein apne dono baccho ko ab nahi khona chaahti. Bhale hi mein apne aap ko kho du...!

Tej : M-Mom??

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Purvi! Kya tum chal rahi ho?

Purvi : Bhavna tum thande dimaag se kaam lo. Waha jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Veer ko toh sacchayi tum wese bhi-

Bhavna : Haa ya na Purvi!? Tum chal rahi ho ya nahi?

Purvi apni bauhe sikode Bhavna ko niraasha me dekhti rahi par fir ek gehri aah chorr woh boli,

Purvi : Theek hai! Inn dono ke ateet me, meri bhi bhumika hai. Chalungi mein...! Tum sab ke saath.

Ek muskaan ke saath Bhavna andar gayi aur Tej ka laptop laate hue woh usme kuch karne lagi.

Tej : Mom aap!?

Bhavna : Tickets!

Tej : Tickets? Kaha ki?

Bhavna ne sarr upar kar apni beti ki aankho me dekha aur kuch shan baad boli,

Bhavna : Meri janmbhoomi par jaane ki...!

"Huhhh???" Veer aur Tej dono ke hi muh se nikla. Dono bhai behan totally clueless the.

Veer ke mann me khoob saare sawaal the par ek ek karke unke uttar milne hi the. Isliye usne zyaada iss baare me sochna theek na samjha.

Bhavna jab tak laptop me lagi rahi tab tak Tej samet Veer aur Purvi aapas me ek dusre ko dekh wahi khade rahe. Aur ek anchaaha maun unke beech janm le utha.

Par tabhi,

Tej : O-Ohhh!! No!!! Coffee!!!!

Woh toh bhul hi gayi thi. Gas pe chadha ke aayi thi.

Accha hua jo gas low flame par thi. Coffee baahar toh nahi aayi par haan, do cup ki coffee, ek cup ki zaroor ho gayi thi.

Veer ne jese hi coffee ka rang dekha toh woh samajh gaya ki coffee ke saath kya ghaatak ghatna hui thi.

Veer : *smiles*

Usne ek ghoot pii,

Tej : Acchi nahi hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Hamari pehli mulaqaat se toh...! Ye kayi guna behtar hai!

Uske itna kehte hi Tej ke gaal laal ho gaye. Usse woh manzar yaad aa gaya jab woh pehli baar Veer se Egypt me milne par kis tarah se pesh aayi thi.

Purvi apni jagah se uth ke Veer ke paas aake baithi, toh usne Tej ki chot par ab gaur kiya.

Purvi : Y-Ye haath ko kyu hua tumhare?

Tej : Lambi kahani hai!

Woh abhi apni maa par zyada dhyaan de rahi thi. Kayi sawaal the uske mann me. Par na chaahte hue bhi, tej ko apne mann me uth rahe prashno ko virhaam dena hi pada.

Purvi ne idhar pyaar se Veer ko apne seene se lagaaya aur uske gaalo ko choom liya,

Purvi : Thoda waqt do beta Bhavna ko. Hmm? Mein sab jaanti hu. Par behtar yahi hoga ki tum uske hi muh se sab suno. Woh boht tadpi hai tumhare liye Veer. Sach me! Mene dekha hai. Usne kya kuch nahi jhela hai Veer. Kya kuch nahi...! Usse thoda samay do.

Veer (smiles) : Mene toh abhi kuch kaha hi nahi!?

Purvi : Mein jaanti hu tumhaare mann me kya chal raha hai. Sab samajhti hu. Ye bhi jaanti hu tum kya kya puchna chaahte ho. Ek ek karke tumhare saare sawaalo ke jawaab milte jayenge tumhe beta.

Sach me! Purvi thi toh boht caring.

Purvi : Aur agar tumhe jaha bhi pareshani ho, bas mujhse baat kar lena.

Veer : Hmm!

Purvi : Tum ek maa ke liye tarse ho...!

Veer : ….....

Purvi (smiles) : Par aaj dekho! Tumhe ek nahi. Do do maa mil gayi. Bachpan me, mene bhi tumhe apna doodh pilaaya hai. Tumhe apni goad me khilaaya hai.

Veer khamosh raha. Aur Purvi jaanti thi ki iss sab me samay lagega.

Bhavna : Tickets ho chuki hai. Kal!!! Hum sab...! Chal rahe hai. Kal idhar aa jaana beta! Yahi se hum ravaana hoyenge. Mein sab tumhe text kar dungi.

Veer : Alright then!

Veer waha se agle hi pal uth gaya,

Veer : I guess, mera ab yaha aur koi kaam nahi!

Uski baat abhi bhi kadvi thi. Bura toh sabko laga, par sabse zyada purvi ko laga tha. Ye uska ghar tha. Aur Veer ka ye kehna jese uske upar ek vaar tha. Ki uske ghar me Veer ki jese koi jagah nahi thi.

Purvi : Ye ghar tumhara hi mere bacche!

Veer : I'll keep that in mind. Chalta hu!

Veer baahar aaya toh Bhavna ke qadam apne aap badh hi gaye the par usne khud ko rok liya. Daato tale apne nichle honth ko dabaaye woh khud ko control kii. Abhi nahi! Dheere dheere sab kuch toh pata chal hi jaana tha. Woh intezaar karegi. Aur dheere dheere apne rishte ko sudhaaregi. Ye soch ke Bhavna apne kamre me chali gayi.

Par Tej ne jese hi Veer ko baahar jaate dekha woh fauran daud ke uske peeche peeche chali gayi.

Tej : Veeeeeerrr!!!

Veer : Hmm?

Tej : ...

Veer : ....

Tej ne awaaz toh de dii thi. Par ab kya kahe? Kya bole apne bhai se? Uske muh me toh jese dahi jamm gaya tha.

Veer : Kahiye!?

Tej : I...

Veer : ???

Tej : ...

Veer : Kal milte hai then...!

Tej : O-Ohhh! O-Okay!

Veer halki muskaan liye waha se nikal gaya. Aur uske jaate hi Tej apne hi upar bhadak uthi. Kya ho gaya tha usse? Maun kyu reh gayi thi woh? Woh toh aisi thi hi nahi. Fir uski bolti kyu band ho gayi thi apne bhai ke saamne. Shayad, isme aur samay lagne wala tha.

Veer jab raaste me hi tha, tabhi uske mann me system ke notifications pop up hue,

*Ding*

[Mission : Secure Tej has been completed]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded 1000 points.]

Yahi woh mission tha, jiski badaulat Veer samay par Tej ke paas pohuch paaya tha. Par uska dhyaan abhi inn sab par nahi tha. Aur Pari ne bhi uss se baat kar uska dhyaan nahi kheecha.

Gaadi chalaate me hi uska phone baja. Caller tha Balhaar!

Veer : Hello!?

Balhaar : Kaam ho gaya hai boss!

Veer : I see!

Balhaar : Uss aadmi ki woh haalat kari hai ki puchiye mat. Ab toh sadko bhi bheek maang raha hoga apni maa ke saath. Ghar aapke naam kar diya hai. Aur jesa ki aapne kaha tha. Baaki ki property aapki bhabhi ke naam par karwa dii hai. Isme thoda aur samay lagega poori tarah se claim karne me. Aapko ek baar aana hoga.

Veer : Hmm!

Balhaar : Uski gaadi, ghar, baaki sab humne hadap liya hai. Cash bhi aur gold bhi.

Veer : Good!

Balhaar : Umm! Grehesti ka samaan bhi hai.

Veer : Gareebo me baant do!

Balhaar : Theek hai!

Veer : Hmm!

Aur Veer ne call cut kar diya.

Ateet me jo usne khud se kaha tha.
'Na sirf mein apne 50 lakh uss se waapas lunga balki uska sab kuch chheen lunga.'

Woh aaj Veer ne kar dikhaaya tha. Rajat...! Kahi ka nahi bacha tha.

Itne saare ghatnakram ko anjaam dene ke baad Veer bed par jaate hi so chuka tha.

Ragini aur Shweta ke haatho ka khana khaane ke baad jo neend usse aayi, toh usne apne kapde bhi change nahi kiye aur woh seedha lait ke neend ki waadiyo me chala gaya.

Aur aaj bhi...! Mauka dekhte hi Shweta uske kamre me ghusi. Woh toh jaanti tak nahi thi ki Veer apni asli Maa aur behan se mil chuka tha. Kya hoga jab usse ye pata chalega?

Woh aake Veer ke bagal se laiti aur uss se chipak ke usse pyaar karne lagi.

Kuch hi pal me uske blouse ke hooks khule aur bra bhi neeche ko ho gayi. Woh apne bade bade thano ko hawa me nanga kiye Veer ke chehre ko pakdi aur usse apne dono doodh ke beech me dedi.

"Ahhh!!! Mera munna!!! *puch* Thak gaya hai aaj tu. Hai na? Mein jaanti hu. Maa hu na ab. Sab samajh gayi thi jab tune khaana kam khaaya. Mera beta thak gaya tha. Koi baat nahi. Mamma aa gayi hai. *puch* Mere betu!!! Ye lo! Tumhare mann pasand doodh mere bacche!"

Usne apni ek chuchhi pakad ke jese hi ek doodh ka nipple Veer ke muh ke andar kiya. Harr baar ki tarah iss baar bhi, kuch derr ke andar hi Veer ka muh apne aap chalne laga. Woh nipple ko katarne laga aur shweta ki dabi siskiya uss kamre me fel gayi. Woh nipple ko kaat kaat ke choos raha tha. Aur uske aisa karte hi Shweta ke chehre par khushi ki leher daud gayi.

"Aaaaahhhh!!! Mera baccha!!! Mein jaanti thi. Mein jaanti thi mere betu ko doodh chahiye tha. Chinta nahi mere bacche...! Ummmm!!!! Ssss!! Mamma yahi rahegi raat bhar. Jitne choosna hai choos. Mamma raat bhar tujhe apne seene se chipkaaye rahegi. Nnnaaahhhh!!!"

Par Veer ki shirt Shweta ko pareshaan kar rahi thi. Usne dheere dheere uski shirt ke buttons khole aur uske badan se hata dii. Apne bete ke gatheele badan aur ripped seene ko dekh uski nazre wahi jamm ke reh gayi. Fir uske hontho par ek garv bhari muskaan aayi. Aur upar se do nange jism ek dusre se chipak gaye.

Shweta ki nagn thailiya Veer ke chest me dhass gayi aur woh lagataar uske baalo me haath ferrti rahi, "Nggghhh!!! Mera betu~"

Aur Veer ke liye ye raat kuch iss tarah guzri.

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Las Vegas
Hospital
Morning ~ 9:10 AM

Ek khubsoorat aurat ek bistar par baithi hui thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.



"Ohh! Uth gayi tum!?"

Ek awaaz peeche se aayi toh usne mud ke dekha. Saamne uski sabse puraani aur ekmaatr sakha khadi hui thi.

Divya!!

Suhana ne usse dekh ek haami bhari.

Divya : Coffee?

Suhana : Brush bhi nahi hua hai abhi.

Divya : Nurse aayegi na. Toh karwa degi.

Suhana : Mere haath perr chalte hai. Apaahij nahi hui hu mein. Aur kitne din mujhe yaha rehna hoga?

Divya : Bullet lagi thi tumhe you duffer. Kisi ne tapli nahi maari thi peeth pe. Samjhi? Abhi yahi rakha jayega tumhe. Recovery par boht dhyaan diya jayega. Kyuki after recovery sab kuch sahi se function hona chahiye.

Suhana : Hmph!

Divya : Ziddi as usual...!

Suhana : S-Sonu kaha hai?

Divya : So rahi hai. Raat me derr tak jaagi thi.

Suhana : Woh ye sab kyu kar rahi hai? Kaho na uss se mere liye ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Yaha lagi rahegi toh kese apne dream ko achieve karegi? Yaha doctors toh hai hi aur tum bhi ho toh-

Divya : Mene kaha tha kal raat hi. Aur pata hai uska kya jawaab tha?

Suhana : ???

Divya (smiles) : Usne kaha ki bhaad me gaya aisa dream. Kya fayda aise dream ko achieve karne ka jisme meri dii mere saath na ho?

Suhana (blushes) : Huhh!!!? P-Pagal hai woh!

Divya : Hahahahaha~ Ohhhhh! How lucky you are! Behan ka pyaar!!! Mmm!!

Suhana (blushes) : Stop it!

Divya : Hahahaha! Fine fine! Wese..!

Suhana : ??

Divya : Abhi zyada din nahi guzre..! And I'm already kinda... missing him!

Divya ke hontho par halki sii muskaan aayi ek shaks ko yaad karke. Aur Suhana ki palke ye sunte hi neeche jhuk gayi.

Veer!!!

Saare akhiri pal uske saamne firse aane lage. Khaas kar woh...!

Uska haath apne aap apne hontho par gaya aur uske gaal agle hi shan laal ho gaye.

Usse laga tha woh ab bachegi nahi. Isliye jaane se pehle usne apne dil ki khwaaish ko hi chuna. Jo cheekh cheekh ke usse Veer ko choomne ko keh rahi thi.

Par ab? Ab toh woh zinda bhi thi. Sahi salaamat bhi aur upar se woh apni chummi bhi de chuki thi.

'Ohhh God!!! What did I do?' sharm ke maare uske gaalo ka taapmaan badh utha.

Usse aisa lag raha tha ki jese kahi gehraayi me jaake apne muh ko chhipa le. Ye kya kar diya tha usne. Kam se kam woh chali gayi hoti toh ye sharmindagi nahi hoti. Par ab? Ab toh iss se bhaagne ka koi chaara nahi tha.

Divya : Wese...! I guess usse mera gift toh mil hi gaya hoga.

Suhana ke kaan turant hi khade ho gaye,

Suhana : G-Gift?



Divya : Yeah! Gift! Arre wahi paise! I guess usse account me mil gaye honge.

Suhana : O-Ohhh!

Divya : Usne itna kiya yaha pe mere liye. I mean hum sab ke liye. Aur badle me mein usse kuch du bhi na? Ye toh zyaada ho gaya yaar. Itni bhi khadoos nahi hu mein.

Toh Divya ne paise bheje the. Par usne? Suhana ko jab dhyaan aaya ki usne Veer ko kuch nahi diya tha badle me toh woh kisi soch me pad gayi.

Suhana : Gift huh!!?

Woh apne khayalaato me doob gayi.

Divya : Kya hua? Kya sochne lagi?

Suhana (smiles) : Nothing!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Pareshaniyo ke chalte updates me vilambh ho jaata hai. Saath banaaye rakhiyega.
Like thokna na bhule aur revos dena bhi.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai tum jo bhi ho..... yaha to bas ek reader ho... Koi writer specially aapke liye ya apke convenience ke hisaab be apni story nahi likhta.. aap padne ke ichuk hai to apna time aur apna tarika updates dhundne ka khud banaye... Koi write aapko notify karane ke liye badhya nahi hai

Sorry warewolf agar meri bat buri lagi ho... Aise to mai silent reader hu.. par apne ohde ka hawala dekar ek writer, ek kalakar ko kam aakne wale ki aalochna karta hu... Aur isi baat me mujhe comment karne pe majbur Kiya...


Readers are here to read only because we have writers here like you... Who is providing free Stories...

Bhai ohda rakhte ho to kam se kam usi ki ijjat kar lo....bolne se pehle...


I am really sorry Warewolf...

Of course! Mein kisi ko personally inform nahi karta hu. Agar notification chahiye toh uska simple rule hai. Yaha par aapka comment hona chahiye. Tabhi woh quote hoega aur next update ke posting ke waqt uska notification aa jayega. As simple as that.

 

[Werewolf]

Jab update nahi dena hai to faltu ki dilasa bhi mat diya karo reader chutiya mat banaya kar 2 din yahi kar raha

Toh theka nahi liya mene tera samjha? Do din se sirf 3 ghante ki neend le raha hu. Keyboard par haggne se pehle 10 baar soch liya kar kaun kis parishtiti me ho sakta hai. Agli baar bakchodi kari toh yaha comment bhi nahi kar payega.

 

[BIZMAN]

Click HERE to go to Index.
Check Full Characters Guide(contains spoilers)

Arcs and their details :

1) System Activation Arc (Finished)
2) Aatish' Arc (Finished)
3) Slogan's Arc (Finished)
4) Famiglia Arc (Running)
5) House of the Killers Arc (Finished)
6) Village Arc (Running)
7) Crimson Arc (Yet to come)
8) Chinatown Arc (Yet to come)
9) ???
10) ???

Thanks bro...

 

[BIZMAN]

Update has come I don't know why the readers have no patience

 

[AB17]

Fantastic

 

[Werewolf]

Great update

Jabardast update bhai..

Mast update tha bhai sbse bdiya to nyi bkchodi pta chli.. pranjal alg hi duniya m hai ashiq type scene bna diya uska apne chlo Madhuri ko dudha jaye next update me lkin Madhuri ki lega kaun veer ya pranjal

nice1

Mazza aa gaya matlab thoda emotional or thoda thriller se bhara tha yeh update ..... Pranjal saala kitna kameena insaan tha bachpan se hi .... Yahan thoda gussa arohi pe bhi aata hai ki woh sab dekhti rahi lekin usne roka nahi .... Lagta hai ki jitna gussa veer shweta se hai usse kabhi zyada gussa woh apni sagi maa se hai ... Or jaise pranjal ki maa ne usse bachaya usne to aag mai ghee ka kaam kar diya ..... Veer asani se apni maa ko maaf nahi karege usne jo kuch bhi bachpan se abtak saha hai uska kahin na kahin woh apni maa ko doshi manta hai or jo sach bhi hai ... Abb bhawna ki kya majburi thi woh to wahi jaane lekin woh kissi bhi tarhan se iss baat ko nahi jhutla sakti ki usne apne chote se bete ko chood diya tha .... Veer se maafi milna itna aasan nahi hone wala hai bhawna ke liye ....bohot besabri se intezar karenge agle update ka bhai .... Once again bohot badhiyan update tha ...

Bahi Maja a gia update ka...............Super nahi nahi nahi ...is say bi operrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Gr8 update

Aaj Pranjal ko apne kiye karmo par thoda interest mil gaya, baaki ka interest aur principal Veer installments mein wapas kar hi raha hai.

Wo kahte hai naa ki chu***o ke seeng nahi hote wo Pranjal jaise hote hai, tabhi to wo ladki Pranjal ki harkato ki wajah se usko chod kar gayi aur is Chu**e ne Veer ko doshi maan liya but ye Madhuri hai koun? Waise maza aa jata agar Pranjal ke ek haat aur ek pair par limbo use kar deta Veer. Ek apahij mansikta ka vyakti apahij sharir ke saath.

Sach mein bacpan se system aane tak ek narak ki zindgi jee thi Veer ne. Aur koi hota to system aane ke baad sabse pahle in haramkhoro ko hi khatam karta magar Veer fir bhi sayam se kaam le raha hai magar ye saare kameene uski limit cross karane par tule hue hai.

As a brother, pahli mulakaat mein hi Veer ne jabardast impression daala hai Tez par. Usko girne se bacha kar, uski dressing kara kar aur usko Ghar drop karke. Ab saayad Tez yahi poochegi ki How Veer survived intjar toxic environment?

Last mein mummy ji bhi aa gayi aur Veer ne alpha instincts mein sawaal bhi pooch dala
What should I call you? Maa? Ya fir...!? Miss Geeta????

Ek dum khatranak update Werewolf bro and thanks for giving this update with so much hardship.

Very nice update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro

Superb mindblowing update sir g,
Kal chota se majak kiya tha per ye dekh ker dukh howa ki log jo mehnat karte haa unki izat nahi karte. Moka milte hi burari karne lagta haa...

super update bro

Jabardast update bhai

Bhai Story Aisi Hai Ki Aap Kitna Bhi Bada Update Dedo Chota Lagta Hai
Itna Achha Story Likhte Ho

Superb update to maar peet aur sabak sikhane ke baad fek diya Pranjal ko uske ghar
Ab dono bhai bahan ghar pe
Aage dekhte hain kya baate hoti hai

That's call as a perfect update

Nyc update bro

Nice update bro aag laga di

Super update tha ye
Ab dekhna hai ki aage kya hota hai
Mujhe lagta hai ki pranjal ko Madhu se milane se hi pranjal nam ka kata veer ki life se jayegaa
Ab aate hai update par to pranjal ki to veer bahot jyada mat diya uski
Or is chutiye manorath or brijesh ko bhi pata nai ki veer ki sagi bahan bhi hai kya lodu hai na or is sawal ka jawab hame aane wale update me mil sakte hai or
Ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki maa bete veer or bhawan ka kya tuphan ayega I think Wolfie agle update me kuchh par skip kar sakta hai pahle ki tarh to pura vartalap to tisre update me hi dekhne ko milega
Or bechare veer k sath kya kya nai hua hai ye dekh k Rona bhi aa jaye abhi to hamne uska 5 percent hi dekha hai aage agr or dekhne milega ? Aisa ?
Mere hatho ne jawab de diya ki mujhe review louda likhna nahi aata to dekh Lena jo bhi bakchodi uper likhi ho sahan kar lena

Ding werewolf bhai thoda aur dramatic ho sakta tha but nice entry of veer ab ye Madhuri Delhi wali tho nahi hmm let's see what is in bag waiting for next update with full of quorosity

Tejal ko bachane sahi time pe veer aa gaya..
Or pranjal ko bhi sahi se dhoya.. or ye kisi ladki ko chahta tha or vo ladki chaher chhod ke chali gay uska jimmedar veer ko man rha hai.. veer ki usme koi galti nahi hai.. voh pranjal se pareshan tha iss liye bina dekhe hi darvaje par gusse me bol gaya use thodi na pata tha ki darvaje par woh ladki hai..
Khair tej or veer dono purvi ke ghar pahoch gaye or bhavna bhi aa gay ab dono amne samne hai.. maa or bete ka milan hoga par abhi to veer ki narazgi, bahot sare sawal-jawab.. hoge voh sab clear hoga tab hi maa bete ka puri tarah se milan hoga or veer jiss pyaar ke liye bachpan se tadap or taras raha hai..maaa ka pyaar or lad.. voh milega.

Nice update bhai.

Ab aaya na is Arc me kuch maja. Ye aapka is arc ka ab tak ka sbse best Update tha. Bahut se moment the jo ki highlight karne ke layak hai.
Veer ka bachpan such me ye mujhe pure Update me sbse epic part laga. Kya hi khubsurati se darshaya hai aapne bhai manana padega. Bhale hi wo sub bate bahut choti choti hai. Lakin ek chote bache ke liye ye bate hi sbse badi hoti hai. Uska bachpan such me bahut hi jyada muskilo se bhara raha hai. Aur uska us ladki ko naa karna ka bhi mai smjha skta hu. Aakhir wo kaise ye sub smjhta jise din bhar na jane kitne chijo se planing se gujarna padta hai. Jiske paas me ek maa bhi nahi hoti hai. I m Damm sure agar sweta ne us time veer ka sath diya hota use kud ke bete jaisa maan kar uska support kiya hota to aaj ka veer bilkul alag hota uski jindagi bhi.
Aur ab jabki veer ne apne bachpan ki un yado ko taja kar liya hai to jahir si baat hai bahvna ki to samat aayegi hi. Dekhte hai wo kya reasons batati hai. Sayad apne raj ka khulasa itna jldi to wo karne se rahi.
Dekhte hai iske baad veer ka ye gussa ghar wapas ja kar sweta par bhi nikalta hai ya nahi.
Nd ye madhuri kon haai ? Jaisa aapne kaha uske hisab se to wo story me dikhayi ja cuki hai. Lakin wo hai kon ?
Overall bahut hi sandaar Update tha. Nd specially wo bachpan ka part bahut jyada emotional tha.

Yaad aa gaya madhuri wahi girl hai na jo delhi me veer se rode par mili thi. Jab veer, soniya aur suhana ke sath delhi trip par gaya tha. To veer ne use apna jacket offer kiya tha. Lakin baad me Kayra ne usase wo jacket le kar use apane jacket de diya tha. I think maduri wahi hogi hai na Werewolf bhai

Interesting....

Veer ne pranjal ko achha sabaq sikhaya,
Tejal bhi apne bhai ko dekh kar kafi khush aur achambhit si najar aa rhi.
aur bhala usne ummid bhi kya ki thi aur kya nikla Veer.

Maa ke sath mulakat ko dekhne ke liye utsuk hu
agla bhag jald post karna..

Pranjal ka gussa madhuri ki wajah se aur bad gaya Veer ke liye,
aakhir aj wo wajah pata chal gayi, par Veer ke najariye se uski koi galti nahi aur Pranjal ke najriye se dekha jaye to sab Veer ki hi galti hai.

Werewolf khoobsurat update as usual..

Reply post kardiya hai
Aur nahi likha jayega..

Nice updatd janab

Fantastic update Biradar.
But he should have use the limbo

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Superb update bhai

F

Awesome Fabolous update

Superb update bhai.
Veer ka abhi maa se milana use gussa hi dila dega. Q ki pranjal ki mom se milane ke bad usko apni maa pe gussa aa raha tha. Or uska sigma instinct havi ho jayega aur ye wali pari sigma ko support karne wali dikh rahi hai.
Madhuri aur ek character add ho gaya hai. Dekhate hai uske bare main kab janene ko milega.

Super awesome update Werewolf bhai...
Aakhir veer finally apni maa se apni real identity ke saath mil raha hai..

Awesome update

Veer ki delhi trip m jis ladki Madhuri se mulakat hui thi ye vahi Madhuri honi chahiye

Superb update

Nice update bro

Nice update

Mast bhai maza aa gaya

ऐन वक़्त पर वीर का पहुँचना
तेज को प्रंजल से बचाना
फिर प्रंजल को सबक सिखाना अच्छा रहा पर यह क्या प्रंजल किसी माधुरी नाम की लड़की के लिए वीर पर खीज खाए हुए है
पर कहानी में इतना तो प्रतीत हो रहा है कि माधुरी की प्रंजल को छोड़ कर जाने से पहले भी वीर प्रंजल के द्वारा सताया जा रहा है l खैर अंत में अपनी माँ के सामने आ गया है और प्रश्न भी अत्यंत मर्म भेदी अंतर भेदी किया है
अब देखना है कि अतीत के गर्भ से वीर के प्रश्नों का समाधान निकलता है या कुछ और
Werewolf भाई यह अपडेट भी बढ़िया रहा

Jabardast update

Superb update

No words on update

Just Mind blowing specially last line

Ohhh!!! Kaun aaya hai? Hmm! What should I call you? Maa? Ya fir...!? Miss Geeta????"


Just Awesome
keep it up
waiting for next

Marvelous awesome fabulous update bro

Werewolf "what should I call you Maa or Miss Gita"..
प्रांजल की वीर के लिए अति वादी घ्रणा वो भी माधुरी के जाने के बाद, जो कि उसे आज भी वीर से लड़ने के लिए उकसाती है.. परंतु वो तो वीर को वैसे भी परेशान कर रहा था..
अच्छी खासी धुलाई हो गयी है प्रांजल की..
वीर तेज़ के मध्य एक अनचाहा मौन है.. तेज को बचा कर व प्रांजल को घर छोड़ कर उसने एक अनचाहे खतरे को ओर मजबूत कर दिया है..
माँ से मुलाकात, एक बादिया घटनाक्रम को जन्म देने जा रही है ..
अगले घटनाक्रम के इंतजार में

THE LAST LINE WAS AMAZING.

Ab ye Madhuri kaha se aa gayi.

I think this arc is on completion so naye arc ki bhumika bana rahe ho aap.

Pranjal pe LIMBO istemal karna chahiye tha.

Mast update

nice update ..to pranjal kyu jalan rakhta hai veer se ye pata chal gaya ,kisi ek ladki ki wajah se pranjal ne target par rakha tha veer ko ,par usse pehle bhi wo veer ko nicha dikhana nahi bhulta tha .
aise kamine logo ka ye kehna ki veer ki wajah se koi ladki usse dur ho gayi ye ek majak hi lagta hai .
pranjal ke upar limbo use kyu nahi kiya veer ne . kamina hai hi isi layak ki dobara theek na ho paaye .
tejal bhi shock ho gayi jab usne veer ka raudra roop dekha .
pranjal ke saath aur bura hona chahiye tha par veer ne usko chhod diya .
par ab ye madhuri kaun hai jo veer se dosti karna chahti thi par galatfehmi ki wajah se sab bigad gaya ..
veer ab frustrate ho gaya hai kyunki pranjal jaise kamine ko bachane uski maa sabse pehle aage aayi ,aur veer ke bure waqt me uski maa uske saath nahi thi too bura lagna swabhavik hai .

bhawna aa hi gayi ghar me par shock ho gayi jab veer ne usko geeta kehke pukara ,ab kya safai degi bhawna yahi dekhna hai .

Amazing update

Bahut badia Lajawab

Awesome update

Nice update

Excellent update...
Reuniting the females of family is also the expansion of king's harem...

Are bhaya mujhe bhi laga tha ye madhu suna suna nam thank you bro yad dilane k liye

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and lovely update.....

Great update love it

Nice update

Bhai tumne aaj dil khush kar diya finally ,the most emotional update is starting coming soon, I am still waiting bro, please jaldi likh ke update de diyo ab raha nahi jaata....!
Keep Writing....!

Nice super update bhai lajawab bahut hi badhiya

भाई भाई क्या मस्त पेला है बे प्रांजु को...
तेजल सामने नहीं होती तो पक्का गाँड में वोहि कैंची डाल देता...

पूरी लाइफ़ जैसा वीर के साथ करता आया था प्रांजल वैसे ही थोड़ा उसकी family के सामने भी humiliate करना चाहिये था...

जैसे रागिनी को विवेक के सामने date कर के जलाया था, शायद वैसा ही प्रांजल के सामने माधुरी को ले कर आएगा वीर!!

और ये नई परी का character अभी reveal नहीं हुआ है...
वीर की सबसे क्लोज़ गर्ल्फ़्रेंड..

भावना से मुलाक़ात का टाइम काफ़ी ग़लत हो गया यार..
अभी तो सुमित्रा का घटिया प्रांजल के ऊपर प्यार देख कर वैसे ही सुलगी पड़ी है वीरे की!!

प्यार या compassion तो दिखाने से रहा वीर भावना को अभी!!

Wish की अगले update में भावना के वीर को छोड़ने का reason पता चले.

उससे भी बड़ी बात तेजल का क्या सीन है भई!!!
उसके बारे में कोई भी नहीं जानता??

तो क्या ब्रिजेश तेजल का बाप नहीं है?

और पूर्वी क्या भावना से घर छोड़ने के बाद मिली थी?
पर उसने वीर को गोदी में कैसे खिलाया फिर?
क्यूँकि वो तेजल को और वीर दोनो को जानती है तो वो तेजल की असलियत भी जानती होगी!!

और क्यूँकि तेजल वीर से बड़ी है तो its not possible for bhawna to pregnant when she left Brijesh’s house!!!

बहुत खिचड़ी पक गयी

यार कईरा, सुहाना, उसकी बहन, रागिनी इनसे भी बड़ी कोई तोप लेके आने वाले हो ?
अब कोई चिराग़ की जिन्नी या एलीयन वग़ैरा मत ले आना

यार फ़ीमेल लीड का छोटा सा teaser ही दे दो!!

वेट करेंगे...
Hats off... as always!!

OP update

Update ka no. PTA h kya amitji

Hmm to aakhir kaar veer ne tejal ko protect kiya or pranjal se bhid gaya or bhai kya sahi wala dhoya hai veer ne pranjal ko or pranjal isse bhi jyada sutai deserve karta hai

Or aakhir kaar Hume wo baat bhi pata chali ki pranjal veer se itni nafrat kyu karta hai well wo veer ko pareshan to karta hi tha or ye baat darshati hai ki pranjal bachapan main bhi veer ko napasand karta tha

Well veer bechara us wqat kese raha hoga ek maa ke bina aaj veer ke dard ki ek jhalak bhi is update main dikhi ki uska bachpan kitna kharab guzra tha

Par bhai ye pranjal bhi mentally pagal lagta hai rajat ki tarah sale ko itni maar padi fir bhi hekdi nahi gayi

Or wo ladki pranjal ko chorr gaayi usme veer ki kya galti pranjal ko to bhai sahi main ek acchi sutai ki jarurat hai

Jo veer ne is baar bhi kari hai but wo only 30 % hai baki ka 70 % apan ko dekhna mangta hai

Or aarohi sahi main usne humesha bhale hi sabke samne na sahi par veer ki help ki hai

Khair aakhir kaar veer ne use sahi jagah pahucha diya or fir use marne hi wala tha ki sumitra beech main aagyi or is baar veer ki jalan sahi bhi thi aakhir usne aisi kya galti ki thi jo uski maa use chor ke chali gayi

Khair ab to raaz khulte hi rahenge or fir veer or tejal pahuche purvi ke ghar jaha par tala tha or tej ki misscall dekh kar hawa hi tights hogyi

Or fir wo huva jiska hum sabhi readers ko be sabri se intezar tha bhavna waha aayi or aate hi veer use bata diya ki wo puri tarah usse bhidne ke mood main hai

Ab dekhte hai kiya veer apne alphabet insticts ko kabu main rakh payega ya nahi kya veer itni jaldi apni maa ko maaf karpayega mujhe to nahi lg raha

Bali fantastic update broo

Veer or bhavna ka Amna samna ho gaya.veer ke chubte hue swaalon ka bhavna kaise samna karegi dekhne wala hoga agla update
Awesome update

Update No 43 The Teaching

Update 43

Mast update h bhai...

Extraordinary update sir g.

Veer ko bahut tadpya hai pranjal ne .....us sale ko esi choti saza bahut km lagta hai....

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Jabardast dhamaaka aakhir maa beta aamne saamne aa hi gaye ab kya hoga

Mast jabardast update bhai aapne veer ko uski behan aur maa se milva diya wo bhi ek dhamakedar entry se! Kya sach main tejal veer ki sagi behan nahi hai? Padh kar shock laga! Baki update thiller se kam nahi tha! Waiting for next update bhai!

Superb update

Super update bro

Extraordinary update bhi g

Kya yaar veer ne chor kyu diya sapole ko
Ab kya hoga veer kya kya bolega maja aayega lage raho bhai ji

Shandaar

wah sandar lajawab ab ayega maja

Excellent update bhai

Wah...bhai...mast update...aapke update ke liye bas yahi kahoonga ki...der se aayi but durust aayi...lovely update....ab aage dekhte hn conversation ki mood mein aagi badhegi....

Fantastic update. Keep it up bhai. Waiting for the next update

Awesome update bro shabad hi nhi hai describe krne ke liye bahut hi shandar update hai bhai

Wow it's amazing
Ek aur character samne aai Madhuri ab ya dekhne ko kab miligy iska intzar rhega

Ghar walo ko abhe be pata nhi chala tej unky poti aur beti hai

Amazing Hoga dekhna veer aur Bhavna ka Milan outstanding marvelos

Keep writing

nice update bro

For Pranjal to carry such a deep hatred for Veer over a childhood friend seems far fetched and artificial ... and if he actually does then he is the chaman chutiya of chaman chutiyas.

So Madhuri gets weaved in again ... naam to zehen me rakh liya Veer ne ... par aage kya ... mujhe iss Mdhuri me abhi itni dilchaspi nahi hai jitni Slogan ki death sceme me woh mystery ladki ki ...

but ab mujhe ek chinta sata rahi hai ... jaise debauchery ka klpd kiya hai ... kahin incest ka bhi klpd na ho jaye yahan ... kahani incest category ki hai ... par incest ke liye candidates hi kahan bache hain ... Ab Tej ya to adopted hai ya bhavna ki Bastard hai jo Brijesh or Bhavna ki shaadi se pehale hi paida ho gayi thi ... kyunki Manorath ki family me se koi bhi usse nahi janta ... waise its interesting that such a tej ladki ka matha nahi khatka jab uske (assumed) ghar walon ne usse pehchanne se hi inkaar nahi kiya ... uski existance ke baare me bhi anjaan thae ... hmmmm ... Ms. Bhavna has a lot of explaining to do to both Tej and Veer ... dono ko uski mil kar class leni chahiye ... she's been fucking around with the healthy development of her children ... anyway, back to my problem ... to ya to Tej half-sister hai ya in name only ... aur Aarohi aur Kavya to cousins hain ... to asli incest ke candidates bache - Bhavna-Veer aur Karunesh ki family ke jode - Vivek/Pranjal with either Soumitra/Aarohi/kavya aor Karunesh/Manorath with Aarohi/Kavya ... ... but I think nobody will enjoy that ... so we are left with only Bahvna & Veer as a potenial incestous couple ...

... hmmm ... looks unlikely at the moment ... unlessssss ... unless she does it to keep Shweta at bay ... competetiveness combined with jealousy can make a person do anything ... anything ...

chalo dekhte hain ... kya pata ... system debauchery ki tarah incest ki bhi nayi paribhasha nikal de ... but abhi to fireworks ka mausam aa raha hai ... Bhavna ke aansu ... Tejal ka tej ... aur Veer ka krodh ...

Nice update bro

Good going dear…

Another Super Update.

Pranjal ki toh sahi se kutai kr di gai hai lekin jitna hum pranjal ko jante hai wo itne jaldi nahi sudharne wala.
Ab aate hai is update ke main segment pe jo tha memory..... Jo lag toh Raha tha jaise pranjal ka bhi koi dukh bhara ateet hoga lekin ye mc pranjal toh ek no ka narcissist nikla bachpan se. Ek jhant bhar ke baat ko aaj tak pakad ke baitha hai. Aur jaisa usne Veer ke sath shulook kiya hai bachpan se ab jab Veer ko sab yaad aa gya hai toh uska alpha instict Pranjal ki aur dhajjiya uda diya. Ab toh mai chahta hu ke Veer madhuri ko dhundh kr usko pranjal ke samne chode take uska wo sidha pagal hoke road me ghume. Yahi us kutte ki sahi saja hogi.
Waise memory me Kavya aur Arohi ke characters par bhi thoda roshni dala hai jisse hume pata lagta hai ke dono behne shuru se apne bhai ko pyar krti thi.

Now ab aate hai present me... Veer ka alpha instict lagta hai uspe bahut jyada haavi hone laga hai. Apne maa pe gussa hone ka haq Veer ke hai magar gusse me bola gaya baat aur kiye gaye kam pe kabhi kabhi bahut pachtava hota hai. Veer ko apne aap ko thoda sambhalna hoga. Lekin filhal emotional moment hai yaha thode bahut dil pe jakhma hona lajmi hai. Dekhna hoga ke ye jakhma kahi jyada gehre toh nahi honge..

Waiting for next update.

Werewolf dear, no words to describe these emotions, you have written not only about Veer but somehow this update resembles my past also when I had lost my father, when we struggled for all the means of life, when I lost my childhood, when the days started with suffering and struggles, I admire your writing skills. Thanks for this update, which gives me opportunity to remembers about my past, and about the fuel, my suffering and pain which burned day by day in past and that gives me energy to fight back and help me in my life's voyage.​

Nice update...

Jabardasttt Updateee

Nice mast awesome update bro

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Zabardast update

Flashback bachkana tha qki koi bacha kissi baat ko itne din mann me nahin rakhega aur uski ladki ki aawaz usne pahli baar suni thi aur pranjal bacha tha to wo ladki ke karan itna nahin karega

Chaliye ab next week ka intejaar hajn

What an update BHAU

Next update kb tk aayega ?

Boss you give such live description, ki maza aa jata hai. keep it going.

Nice update werewolf bhai

wow what a update, waiting for next.

Awesome updates

Wow awesome and mind blowing update bro!!!

चील कैसे करेंगे भाई
उनकी होली की सारी कहानियां बेहतरीन स्किल्ड हैं वेयर वोल्फ भाई

ये किसी का कोपी नहीं करते हैं भाई
जों लिजेंड्री होता हैं दुनिया उसको फोलों करतीं हैं भाई
यह कहानी xforum की सबसे बेस्ट स्टोरी है अब जू खुद समझ जाओं कोन किसको कोपी कर सकता हैं भाई

ये किसी को कोपी क्यूं करेंगे भाई
इनकी कहानी टोप टेन में नंबर वन हैं भाई
अब जु खुद सोचलो

Fantastic update

Woww amazing update Bhai maza hi aa gaya or ab jakar pranjal ke paagalpan ka asli naam pta chala par wo sirf ye dekhta or smjta rha ki veer ne uske life ke Pehle love crush ko us se door krke use takleef di but ye na dekh paya na samaj paya or na hi dekhne or samjne ki koshish kri ki wo khud use kab se or kya kya Yatnayee dete aa rha tha or abhi bhi peeche nhi hat rha bas ek MADHURI ke liye. Sahi kha hai bajurgo ne ki jis tan lage so tan Jane par ab dekhna ye hoga ki veer MADHURI ko dhoondh payega or kya use poora Sach or khaash krke us din ka Sach bhi bta payega use dhoodhne ke baad or ab veer Apni maa se Kaise mukhatib hoga kya or kaise baate clear hogi or kya tejal Sachi Mai veer ki badi or sagi behan hai ya adopt ki hui ha ya koi karan hai uske paida hone ka Kyunki brijesh bhi use nhi pehchan payeya us e last update Mai man Mai socha tha na ki bhawna se to use bas veer hi paida hua to ye kaha se ayi hai dekhte hai is raaj se kab pad da uthta hai

Matlab madhuri bhi dekhne ko milegi hai na wolfie ,?

Excellent update

Awesome, beauty❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Fabolous n mind billowing

Super update hai Bhai

Superb update

Mast story h bhai apki 1 question h kya veer baadsha banega

Nice update werewolf bhai

Superb update Bhai

awesome ....

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
मजा आ गया भाई
प्रांजल की अच्छे से बजाई भाई ओर ये चुतिया कह रहा हैं वो उसे छोड़कर चलीं गईं वीर की वजह से
चुतिया वीर को भाई समझता ओर भाई जैसा प्यार देता तो वीर उसकी एक आवाज पर चला आता
हरामी का बच्चा वीर की जिंदगी नरक बना दीं अब उसके बुलाने वीर भला क्यूं आनें लगा नरक भोगने
तब भोसड़ी वाला बच्चा था समझ नहीं आया होगा लेकिन अभी तो ताड़ का पेड़ बन गया फिर इतनी सी बात उसे समझ नहीं आ रही हैं भाई

क्या गजब करैक्टर हैं भाई

ये परी पहले वाली सभी से बेहतर है भाई
जब भी जरूरत होती हैं परी वीर को गाइड करतीं हैं
नहीं तो प्रांजल अभी तक चल बसा होता भाई

वीर पहूंच गया तेज के साथ उसके घर

बहुत ही इमोशनल अपडेट था भाई

Werewolf मित्र अब तो माँ बेटे के मिलन को कई भिन्न भिन्न आयामों में महसूस कर लिया है अपनी सोच के अनुरूप, परंतु आप के द्वारा ही सही स्तिथि का पता चलेगा.. अब ओर इन्तेज़ार नहीं हो पा रहा है.. जल्दी से आप हमारी मनस्थिति को शांत करने के लिए अगले घटनाक्रम को प्रकाशित करे...

Behtreen update bro!!Amazing!!
Bs pranjal ko uski glti k liye zyada suffer nhi karaya veer ne.
Eagerly waiting for the new one!!

Aaj he start kiya hai bhai yah......
Starting mast tha bro....
Aage ja ke pata nahi but padhunga jarrur........
Or humko lagta hai jaise or sab story ko mai padhta hu or unke update ke aane ka intezar karta hu waisa he ho...... ☺☺☺☺☺

Nice

Nice update

Superb awesome update brother to gud Luvd it pls do cont asap take care

Nice update waiting for next

Bhai AB Ye nai Entry kyu baval karne Wali hai.
1. veer bohot chota tha. Our US Age Bob Cut Kon ladka Kon Ladki gajab bezati hai.
pahle laga laga ki pranjal Guy hai. sala devdas nikla.
2. kyu welfbhai Ye paro Milne se rahi . kuy ki Use To veer. Achaia lagta tha. shayad Abhi veer hi uska rajkumar ho.
To saaf hai. pranjal ki or jaala ne ke mood ho. Lage rano wulf bhai.
3. AB maa bețe ka Amna samna koi nai bakheda khada karega. brijesh ke Life main . or Kon si asi baat hai. jise tej ko duniya ki najro se chupaya Gaya.
4. bhai mission mile 2 hafte MATLAB 15 din nikal Gaye Kani veer krara khona de.
bhaya Last Day Hall tiket mil jata hai.
per Abhi 17 bache hai. mission kese complete karoge.

Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update Werewolf bhai...

Rajat ko Balhaar ne police k hawale kar diya per uske saath kiya kya ye abhi tak pata nahi chala per Rajat ka chapter yaha se over ho gaya h or yahi news padhne k baad sab ke reactions alag tha jaha kuch log khush the or kuch log shock me the or kuch to confuse bhi the or Nidhi mam bhi news padh k shoch pe pad gaye thi k Rajat ye sab bhi kar sakta h jaha tak mujhe lagta h Nidhi ma'am ko khali yahi pata hoga ki wo unko hi torture karta h baki kisi or k sath ye sab nahi karta per news padhne k baad unke bhi clear ho gaya ki Rajat kiss level tak ja sakta h or kya kya kar sakta h...

Veer ne aake sabka mind uss news se divert kar diya kyu ki vo aya bhi bohot din baad tha per kuch bhi kahiye app ki writting next level jaha Shreya veer ko dekh k over excited ho gaye wahi ab nidhi ma'am bhi veer ko dekh k khush thi or jab juhi uth k aye to wo bhi bhaag kar veer ki godh m beth gaye kya seen likha h appne maza aa gaya..

Tej to next level h sidha veer k old house pohuch gayi or sabki class lene lagi ussi bich usse Pranjal k bare m pata chala or ye baat mujhe samaj me nahi ayi ki arohi ko pranjal k address k bare m kese pata h or agar usse pranjal k bare m sab pata h to usko uske dad k bare m bhi pata hoga per kese pata h ye baat janna h mujhe or uske bad jo tej ne pranjal ko dhoya h next level uski halat kharab kaar di per end m usko chance mila or ussne tej ko laat mar di vo to sahi h veer aa gaya nahi to tej ko serious problem ho jati wese bhi haat me cut lag chuka tha per ab veer kya halat karta h pranjal ki ye dekhne layak hoga kyuki abhi tak to wo veer pe attack kar raha tha per ab to veer ki sagi sis pe ussne attack kiya h ab to veer jo haal karega Pranjal ka ki Karunesh bhi dekh k shock m or gusse m aa jayega or lagbhag ussi bich jo dadaji ko Karunesh pe shack hua h wo usski ek or galti k wajah se pakdi jayegi or dadaji la shack reality m badal jayega...

Ekdam laajwaab or jordaar update yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gya bhai waah....

Welcome bro

Chlo acha hua VEER or TEJAL dono Bhai bhen mil gy or sath he PRANJAL ki khatiya kdi hue alag
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Lekin ye PRANJAL to bachpan se bda kamina rha hai sath he VEER ko bi pareshaan krne me sbse aagee bi rha hai
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Werewolf story me leadies ki kmi thi ky ek or name aad kr dia MADHURI ka
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Kher TEJAL ghr me leke aagy VEER ko or aate he BHAVNA ko entry hue jo gussa me TEJAL ki class lgane aay thi lekin VEER ko samne dekh ke chup hogy ya bole to surprise hogy hai
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AB AAGE DEKHNA HOGA REACTION VEER KA BHAVNA KE PRATII KY HOTA HAI

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting

Zabardast update

Aaj update aayega kya??

Superb update
Waiting for next

Waiting for next update bhaiya ji

Wolfy bro we are waiting your next update...please inform us whenever your update will be ready....Thanks....

NEXT UPDATE KB???? Werewolf

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting bro

Werewolf bro, why are you building up the suspence,are you giving up the update today

O na kr yar aik din or wait karna parega...
Love we are already waiting too much

You mean... Monday's late afternoon

Update to mne pehle hi padh lia tha bina login kiye... Main comment karti uss din...
par main na... Main na so gayi thi

Hmmm...aap ka order wolfy bhai ke Sar aankho par.......please don't mind it's a normal comment....

Nice and jabardast story hai mja aa gya

Bhai Aaj update aayega na?

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Intazaar rahega update bhai

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Aaj dhamake ke liye taiyar hain bhai .... Bass ajj bomb phod hi do ....

Awesome update

Wolfie bhai intezaar hai update ka

Waiting for next update

Waiting

Waiting bro

Ye madhuri itna garib kaise ho gai bhai

Is story ko mahine me ek episode ka kr do bhai, mere ko v padne ka time mil jayega

Nehi. Madhuri banegi Veer ki bhabi, yaani Pranjal bhaya ki wife............... Veer sab thik kar dega Madhuri and dear Pranjal bhaiya ke bich mein...........

Waiting bro

Update?

Waiting for update

Waiting

1.15

still waiting for the update

Waiting

Update Kaha Hai Bhai Wait Kar Rahe Hain Hum Log

Update ???

take ur time.... buddy

Taras gaye hai unke didar ke liye aayena na vo ...
Inkar na kiya unhone but bolkar na aana unka acha na laga jo dil me tha vo dil ka dard ho gaya kaha hai vo koi to Bataye bol ke apne wade ko koi kyu jhutlaye koi to Bataye koi to bataye.....

I think writer is preparing for something big...
Lots of love and respect for writer

Update??

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting

Apse likha sikna hoga.....

Bhai kho gaye kya veer ko blana padega update dhoodne ke lite

Waiting for update bro

Kuch problem jarur hoga isiliye Abhi tak update nhi diye hai werewolf Bhai

Dost, maine to isilye bola tha kyuki main free nhi ho pata hu, baaki aapki story hai, aapki ichchha h jaise updates do, main jb free hounga tb padh lunga, ha ek request h, abusive comments se mujhe alag rakhna, main central government CA hu to mujhe logo ko unki hi bhasha me jawab dena achchha nhi lagta, isiliye aapse ye request h ki is story k sabhi updates pe mujhe tag kr dein, main time k hisab se padh lunga

Bhai update jabardast hain
Waiting for next update

Bhai tum jo bhi ho..... yaha to bas ek reader ho... Koi writer specially aapke liye ya apke convenience ke hisaab be apni story nahi likhta.. aap padne ke ichuk hai to apna time aur apna tarika updates dhundne ka khud banaye... Koi write aapko notify karane ke liye badhya nahi hai

Sorry warewolf agar meri bat buri lagi ho... Aise to mai silent reader hu.. par apne ohde ka hawala dekar ek writer, ek kalakar ko kam aakne wale ki aalochna karta hu... Aur isi baat me mujhe comment karne pe majbur Kiya...


Readers are here to read only because we have writers here like you... Who is providing free Stories...

Bhai ohda rakhte ho to kam se kam usi ki ijjat kar lo....bolne se pehle...


I am really sorry Warewolf...

Bhai mere yha subah k 6 bje ko rat ni mrng khte h

Waiting for next update eagerly

Subah hi dedo bhai agar complete ho gya ho to...raat me hi aaye ye koi rule to ni h

Waiting Bhai

तारीख पर तारीख, तारीख पर तारीख,
तारीख पर तारीख, तारीख पर तारीख मिलती रही है।
लेकिन अपडेट नहीं मिला माय लॉड,
अपडेट नहीं मिला,
मिली है तो सिर्फ ये तारीख

Update 119 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!

 

[Moon Light]

अपडेट ~ 119
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जैसा की उम्मीद थी मुझे, वैसा ही हुआ ।
इतनी आसानी से सब कुछ मिल जाए तो फिर कहानी ही किस काम की ।
असल जिंदगी में भी कुछ आसानी से नहीं मिलता , ये तो फिर भी हमारी दिमागी उपज है ।
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हमे भी बेसब्री से इंतजार है वो सच जानने का जिसे वीर को इंतजार है,
एक रिक्वेस्ट है राइटर साहेब से, वीर की मां का पलड़ा हल्का मत होने देना,
पर्सनली मुझे काफी बुरा लग रहा वीर की मां के लिए, पर असल बात क्या है ये तो वक्त बताएगा..!!!
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रजत के दिन खत्म अब, चलो ये अच्छा ही हुआ,
बुरे लोगों के साथ बुरा हो तो बुरा भी नहीं लगता पढ़ने में.
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सुहाना अब काफी हद तक ठीक हो चुकी है,
कब वापस इंडिया आएगी उसका इंतजार है..
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बहुत खूबसूरत अपडेट एस usual..
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