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Revo me ek hi question tha. Uska reply diya apun ne.Reply half dia bro aapne
Bhai Raat Se Subha Hui par apka update nhi ayyaMein kisi ko nahi kahunga bhai jaago. Warna fir mere pe hi baat aati hai. Kaam chal raha hai. Agar complete ho jaata hai toh derr raat me post ho jayega. Aur agar nahi hota hai toh kal hi aayega. Wese koshish rahegi ki late night de du
Fir se padho message kya likha hai usme.Bhai Raat Se Subha Hui par apka update nhi ayya
Iska uttar agle update me hai.Werewolf मित्र ये ट्रेन का क्या चक्कर है..
फ्लाइट भी जाती है जयपुर.. लगता है कुछ गडबड घोटाला होने वाला है ट्रेन यात्रा मे वीर अपना प्यार बांटते हुये सफर का आनंद लेने वाला देने वाला है...इतनी सारी फूलझाड़ियों अनारो संतरो के बीच एक मात्र केला ओह अकेला जो है
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True that!अखिरकार रागिनी की बोहनी कर दिया है वीर ने मस्त तरीके से बजाया हैं...महीनों की तड़फ को बुझाने की जगह और भड़काने का काम किया है...
Aaj aa jayega bhai!Cचलिए अब शीघ्र ही नए घटनाक्रम के अध्याय को प्रकाशित कर हम सब की जिज्ञासा को शांत करे![]()
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इस बार अंक तुरंत ही दे अब तो इन्तेज़ार नहीं होपा रहा है
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Woh boht ghabrayi hui hai bhai. Kahi uska veer uss se chhin na jaaye.Shweta ki halat to bahot bhuri hai iss vakt.. kaha woh veer ko ek maa ka pyaar dene ke liye veer ko manane ke sapne dekh rahi thi or ab veer ki real maa aa gay hai to ab shweta par kya gujar rahi hogi..
Yahi toh update 121 show karega.kavya,aarohi,suman or shweta bhi veer ke sath chalne wale hai Jaipur.
shweta or bhavna ka amna-samna hoga to kya hoga ? Dekhte hai aage
S for Suman. S for sankatye suman to sach me hi khatarnak aurat hai bawa..veer ke sath hai to acha hai varna bhul se bhi dushman aisi milti to pakka lawda lag jate.
Thanks a lot bhai!Ragini ki narazgi durr kar ke usse thoda tript kar diya or Jaipur se aane ke baad uske proposal ka answer dene ka keh diya.. Ragini ko ab yakin ho gaya hai ki veer ka answer uske haq me hi hoga iss liye ab khush hai Ragini.
Superb Update Bhai.
Darasal, Arun uski madad kar deta. Par jesa ki Pari ne kaha. Veer ka ego aur self respect beech me aa gaye the. Toh usne fir Nidhi se baat kii.Morning ~ Veer ki shuruaat hoti hai Packing se, sab use puchhte hain uske busy rahne aur packing karne ka raz, veer sabko bta deta hai.
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Sonali gussa hoti hai aakhir veer sonali se kiye bayde ko bhul gaya tha, sonali use yad dilati hai to wo pahle purvi ke husband ke bare me sochta hai par koi bhi anzan vyakti uske liye bhla kya kardega yahi soch kar wo Nidhi ma'am se bat karta hai. Nidhi ma'am pahle to fee lene se inkar karti hain par baad me maan jati hain fee na lene se.
Uski haalat abhi aisi hi jese kisi jaanvar ki pooch par perr rakh diya ho.Shweta ko jab pata chalta hai veer apni maa aur bahen se mil kar aaya hai aur unhi ke sath apni maa ke ganw ja rha hai to shweta ko lagta hai ki jo bhi veer ke liye uske khwab the wo adhure rah jayenge, yahi to ek mauka tha shweta ke najro me jo wo veer ke liye khud ko achhi maa bankar sabit kar sakti thi par ab jab uski asli maa aa gyi hai to shweta ko dar hai ki wo kanhi usse dur na chla jaye.
Bechare Veer ko laga tha ki Arohi Kavya ko mana karegi.Kavya aur Arohi ki bhi ghar me entry hoti hai, veer unhe bhi sabhi jankari deta hai, aur kavya bhi veer se jid karti hai uske sath hi Jane ki aur to aur ek ke sath ek nahi balki 3 aur free sawari add ho jati hain
This was the best part for me in this update, bechara ek ko na jane ko kahta hai 3 aur taiyar ho jate hain
Par kya rishta itna asaan hai banana?Ragini bhabhi ko bhi veer mana hi leta hai aur ganw se bapas aane ke bad hi wo answer dega use kya rishta rakhna hai Ragini ke sath ye kahta hai, wese jo sab usne kiya is update me ragini ke sath us hisab se to veer Ragini ko accept kar lega as a bhabhi nahi balki as a .... Ab jo bhi kahoRagini bhi khush aur veer bhi abhi ke liye,
Isliye toh Shweta ghabraayi hui hai. Kyuki usne galti kar rakhi hai. Behad desperate hai woh.Jab sab log nikalne ko hote hain jaane ke liye to suhana ka luxury gift milta hai veer ko jo ki veer accept karleta hai abhi ke liye
Kher wo sabhi log nikal jate hain apni yatra aage badane ke liye railway station ki taraf.
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Bhavna aur Shweta ~ Ateet me sab kuch achha nahi raha hoga ye to sure hai par Bhavna ke najriye se wo jarur chakit hui hogi shweta ko veer ke sath dekh kar aur hona bhi chahiye aakhir uske sath jo bhi kiya gaya purv me usme Shweta bhi hissedar rahi hogi.
Aur yadi yanha shweta ke najriye se dekha jaye to wo khud ko sharminda feel kar rahi hogi use wo sab yaad aa gya hoga Bhavna ko dekh kar jo usne kiya hoga.
Fight begin!Ab dekhna ye hoga dono kaise ek dusre ko accept karte hain, kya shweta khud ko is family me adjust karwa payegi ya fir Bhavna veer ko shweta se dur kar legi
In the next update!Ek aur baat dekhne wali hogi, Bhavna aur Suman ye dono kaise react karte hain ek dusre ko dekh kar ya fir sab kuch chhupaaya jayega for now
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Wahhh mast update tha Werewolf bhai maja hi aa gaya.
Safar romaanch se bharpoor hoga.To Village arc ab apne main starting point par aa chuka hai. Ab bas safar suru hi hone wala hai. Dekhte hai is safar me hme kya kuch dekhne ko milega.
Sonali actually main character nahi hai.Phle to bahut hi accha laga sonali ko dekh kr wo bhi is story ki ek main character hi hai. Aur veer ka nidhi ko u fees ke liye bolna wo bhi mujhe bilkul sahi laga. Aur wo padosi ke bacche ka example to epic hi laga. Khir nidhi ko to manana tha hi aakhir wo kaise veer ke kisi kaam ko mana kar skti hai. Na cahte hue bhi use fees leni hi padi
Iss baar toh poori baraat bator ke le jaa raha hai woh.Uske baad kya boom poda veer ne mast. Sweta ka aisa react karna bilkul banta tha. Aur fir jo mai bhi ! Mai bi ! Wala kaand start hua wo to read krke maja hi aa gaya. Na na karte hue 4 log aur ho hi gaye. Aur mujhe ye sbse jyada acha laga ki chlo kisi to jagah veer apne sath apne family ke logo ko le kar chal raha hai. Aur mission dekhne me aur maja aayega. Sath me veer ka aarohi aur kavya aur suman ke sath raas leela bhi dekhne ko mil sakti hai.
Itna asaan na hai ye.Aur suhana ne kya mast gift diya hai. Ekdam wahi jo veer ko cahiye tha. Wo such me ek kafi tej hai her ek choti baat ka dhyan rakhti hai. Tabhi to usne ye gift diya veer ko. Aur veer ka massage padh kar wo jarur sarma gayi hogi. Khair ragini ka scene bhi kafi acha laga. Usko ab almost uska ans mil hi gaya hai. Bas us par final muhar lagani baki hai. Jo sayad sex ho kr hi hoga.
Bhavna shweta ko kese jaan sakti hai? I mean khud hi socho. Shweta toh boht baad me Veer ke parivaar ka hissa bani hai. Na ki Bhavna ki maujoodgi me. Toh kese bhala woh jaan sakti hai? Rahi baat Suman ki toh hum dekhte hai agle update me.Ab baat meri ye hai ki kya Bhawna, sweta ko janti hai ?
Quoi station par suman aur Bhawna ko dekh kr aisa react karna tha quoi suman ko sayad Bhawna janti hi hogi jaha tak mujhe lagta hai.
Arohi aur Kavya Tej ke liye koi khatra nahi hai. In fact usko koi khatra nahi hai. Khatra toh Shweta aur Bhavna ke liye hai. Dono ek dusre ke liye boht bada danger hai.Aur kya haal hoga Tejal ka jab wo veer ko apni baki do sister ke sath aise dekhegi ? Wo bhi sayad aur usase aur baki sb se ghulne milne ki kosis karegi.
Wahi toh main hissa hai poore arc ka.Is safar me sbse jyada maja aayega Bhawna aur sweta ke hone par mai to abhi se soch soch kar na jane kya kya possibly bana raha hu.
Dhanyavaad boht boht!Khair dekhte hai aage aur kya kya hota hai ?
We have yet to see the actual fireworks.At last Fireworks in store, it seems. A Terrific Update.All aspects covered. All Nidhi Mam,Raginiji, Kavya, Arohi,Sonali,and mainly these two Bhavna and Shweta. A terrific Entry of Village Arc in actual sense.
Let's see! Let's see!Let's see what is in store in the Birth place. In the initial starting Phase(Aatish Arc), there was some connection of Aatish with some Top Boss family. Are these families related in any way?Not sure because in your story in some stage or other all the incidents described in the story gets entwined with each other.
Tejal? Ain't she Veer's blood related sister?Really excited to see what unfolds in the Birth Place. A lot of puzzles are to be solved like 1)What was the real identity of Tejal
We'll witness this.,2) Real reason behind leaving of Veer by Bhavna,
We'll see this too.3)Being a Single woman how Bhavna survived along with Tejal on her own in this mad world and that too in the field dominated mostly by MEN?,
Yes! Purvi's story will also will be covered here.,4) Why Purvi didn't meet Veer for last so many years and
We'll come to know soon!5) Why hasn't Suman opened up about herself becoming a slave to his Master?
Only Bhavna's past can tell us what really happened.I guess we will get answers to these and other questions in this Arc. One more thing, Reaction of the Family of Bajesh is not known regarding this Bhavna and her Re-Entry in the Story. For some reason or the other Brajesh seemed to be quite Upset with Bhavna(As per the Story). From the story it appears that Bhavna is quite Independent,Intelligent,Strong and Bold Woman who doesn't pay heed much to the person who tries to act smart with her.
Thanks a lot for such a lovely review!Just don't know how I could write this but wrote what I Believed. An Interesting Update. A Grand and Lovely way to enter this Village Arc alongwith Familiglia Arc in tandem. You are writing a Novel which is unique in its own way. We all love this and expect this to continue to its logical end after may be 300 Episodes. Thank you for giving us such a lovely novel in this forum. Please keep it up. We all will be looking forward for the next Episodes.