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Yahi to maza hai. Kaha par the hum aur aaj kaha hai. Aage safar abhi baaki hai bohut. Bas maze lena hai iske hume. Thanks and keep supporting!Circle of life. Veer ki story kaha start hui aur kaha aa gayi aaj. It’s like we are on a journey along with him. Great writing and nice control of story and lust. Just amazing
Yes! I summed up everything in these 4 mega updates.Excellent update. Short and sweet, the Bhavna chapter has been compressed and closed, tying up all the loose ends, with last two to three megha updates which otherwise would have taken 8 to 10 updates.
Of course! They don't exist for only pleasure. You know how capable they are right?I feel Parijaat Ghar could have been avoided unless these ladies have a role to play later in the story.
It's a nice turn in the story. Little by little they have started to talk about sex openly. There's still embarrassment but they are at least confronting it. This breaks that barrier. And creates an opportunity for some scenes. It will have a positive impact.At the same time all ladies/ girls now know about sexual side of Veer, which may help them to break their inhibitions. Tejal ki baton se, uski jalan se, ye saaf pata chalta hai. kyon ki ye story incest se bhi related hai, shayad ye jaruri tha.
That's not the only case. Neel mani is hiding something more.Haan, jahan Neel Mani ke utarne se pahen'ne wale ki mrityu ho sakti hai. wahin uske pehne rehne se uski mrityu nahin ho sakti. Lagta hai uski ye acchayi Bavna jaan gayi thi, aur isi liye usne Veer ko ye Neel Mani pehnayi hogi.
It will take some time. Thanks a lot for your revo. Keep supporting as usual mate!Ab to Crimson Arc ka intezar hai jahan per asli heroins, aur asli villian, wo dusre system wale se mulakat hogi.
Dhanyavaad!Kya Kamal ka or jordaar update raha yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
Dhanyavaad bhai! Kisi ko bhi utha lo. Unki ek alag se story ban sakti hai. Aatish, Slogan, Bhavna, Divya, Suhana, Kaera. You name it. Foundation thos ban chuka hai na bhai isliye. Aur issi ko establish karne me sabse zyada mehnat lagti hai.Auraybe mene abhi tak kaha nhi he but ye is forum ki best story he mere according mene jitni bhi stories parhi he yaha pe un me ye best he jis me har cheez he 1 complete story he ye so best of luck aap aise hi likhte raho
Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting!Aise story aaj tak nhi padha bhai ... Aap ki kahani ekdum joordar h ...
INTEZAAR H Update ka ...
Dhanyavaad bhaaya!First of all fantastic update as usual.
Toh baat kare starting ki ko werewolf bhai aapne bhot saare question ke answer de diya jese harikiran ke beta ki biwi zimmedaari aur gaon ki zimmedaari bhavna ne shyaam toh de di aur uss ke pote ko hamare veer ka kuch udhad hi nhi sakta.
Aur uss ke bhavana aur brijesh ke bich baat bhot samay baad aur brijesh ko bhot saare sach ka pata lagna aur bhavna ka brijesh ko maaf na jo ki ekdam sahi decision tha.
Ekdum sahi samjhe ho. See! Wo aurte sirf pleasure ke liye nahi hai. Veer ne pehle hi soch liya hai ki kya karna hai unke saath.Aur uss ke baad suman ka aapne malik ko parijaat ghar le jaana aur jab bhi veer puchta kitna time lagge ka pochne mien toh bolna bas 2 minute.
Aur uss ke baad tej aur veer ke bich ka argument aur veer ka parijaat ki aurto toh apnna jo ki ekdam sahi kadam udya veer ne kyuki paarijaat hi aurte veer ke future mien acha asset baan sakti hai jese sudha veer ke kapdo ke business mien help kar sakti agar veer ne in future koi kapdo ka kaam suru kiya toh aur mukta veer ke food truck ke business mien help kar sakti hai aur varsha ko ayurveda ka gyaan vo bhi veer ke kaam aa sakti hai.
So basically parijaat ki aurte veer ke lund ki jarurat bhi puri kar sakti hai business ki bhi ko veer ne bhot badiya faisla liya inko aapna ke.
Thanks a lot bro! Keep supporting!Aur uss ke baad veer ka erotic sex tino Aurto ke sath. Aur sexy diwali maanaa.
Aur uss ke tej ka veer ko samajjana aur veer ka na samajna ki uss ke dimaag mien in aurto ke use ke liye phele hi plan's baan chuke hai.
Aur uss ke end mien maa beta ki mitti baat chit.
And yes one more thing update was fantastic.
And ignore negative comments.
Daasiyo ko shadi karne ki chhoot hai. Warna aage waali peedhi ki seva karne ke liye aurte kaha se aayengi. Suman ki maa ne shadi kari aur Suman hui. Suman ne bhi shadi kari aur sonali hui.Ap kehty hain to maan liye ke veer ko pata ke wh kya kr raha... Baqi mai reverse harem ni like krta aur na hi fantasy sex .stories.. is story ko mai start se follow kr raha ... Ya yh keh lo is story kliye account bnaya tha .... Baqi mjhy acha nhi lga tha awain hi sex krna aur agr dassi ya slaves hain bhi to wh shaadi q krti thiaur malikon se unky bachy q nhi hoty thy... baqi mjhy jitna samjh lag ra puraany badshaho ki tarha ka concept hai jin ke palace mai bht si slaves hoti jo wh wars se le kr aaty thy as a reward aur un mai se jo king ko achi lgti thi usky saath sex krta aur ussy apni khaas bnata tha... Bs yh mera point of view tha ... Forum pe bs 2 hi stories parh raha hoon mai filhaal ik apki aur dusri nirwana ki aur dono hi sex se barh kr hain
No! Negative comment tumhara nahi hai. So chill!Kuch log keh re negative comment... Yh koi negative comment nhi tha bs mera opinion tha jo hr kisi ka alag ho sakta... Baqi mai warewolf bhai ka fan hoon aur story ka bhi ....
Mein soch raha tha isse kaise samjhau par ju ne samjha diya. Yes! Aisa hi hai ye.weekly 2 updates means within 7 days (1 week) 2 updates. It is not equal to 4 updates in 2weeks. Ajeeb calculation hey, but true bhi hey ki weekly 2 updates ata hey!
Yes! Uska plan yahi hai. Ki unn aurto ka istemaal sahi dhang se kiya jaaye.Dekho bhai simple si baat hai pehle to veer ko sex bhi mil jayega aur veer unka use bussiness me aur money gain karne ke liye karega aakhir wo sab itni maahir hai veer to paisa kama hi rha hai par wo speed slow hai agar ye bhi plus kardo to thodi aur tej badhegi aur abhi to kaera ka chapter open karna padega nahi to veer use khodega
Black sir ji kaha se aa gaye Kashyap bhai ?Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Black bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
Bilkul sahi bt he bhai har 1 character itna important aur itna bariya he ke sb pe alag se story ban sakti he also har character ka kahi na kahi puri story se jura hua he you are a brilliant writer man superbDhanyavaad bhai! Kisi ko bhi utha lo. Unki ek alag se story ban sakti hai. Aatish, Slogan, Bhavna, Divya, Suhana, Kaera. You name it. Foundation thos ban chuka hai na bhai isliye. Aur issi ko establish karne me sabse zyada mehnat lagti hai.