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Thanks man!Just just! Holy mind blowing. Bhut hi mazy ki story hai maine almost 10 dino main fully read kr li hai jitni tareef kro utni kam hai Vro aapky likhny ka andaaz wonderful.... I have no words to express. Bas ab raha ni ja raha bas jald se jald update do ab tuu ,
Idhar ek ladki ka jikar bhi kiya tha isaro isaro me hi (ki kahi ye vo hi to nhi) karke or fir khud se hi us vichar ko jhatak diya tha, us samay slogan ke bhi rongte khade ho gye the (hame us unknown person ka aaj tk pta nhi chla)Yes! Thanks a lot!
Thanks man! Keep supporting!
Thanks bro!
Dhanyavaad bhai!
Bilkul! Gaand phaad arc aane waala hai.
Dukh dard peeda. Ya jealousy? Ye fir khushi bhi? Kaisa hoga uska reaction? Dekh ke pata lagega.
Preparations to Veer ko bhi karni hongi. Unknown attack ke liye usse khud ko ready karna hoga.
Sahi kaha. Unknown bande ne hi ye bheja hai. Dekhte hai ab kaha kya hota hai. Keep supporting!
Hein? Slogan ne kab aisa kaha tha ki mission mila hua hai kya? Mujhe to nahi lagta Slogan ne mission ke baare me kabhi bhi kuch bhi kaha tha. Update padh ke bataiye mujhe wo wala kya waqai usne mission ke baare me Veer se koi baat ki thi? Shayad update 57 hai wo waala. Check karke bataiyega.
Slogan ko ek call bhi aaya tha agar dhyaan ho toh. Jiske chalte usse bhaiyankar gussa aaya tha. Steve ne bhi uss se iss baare me charcha kii thi. Kuch yaad aaya?
Apun ko laga ju ab na aayoge. Ju ko bohut yaad kiya gaya yaha. Kaisa hai ab business?Bc kitne update aa gaye idhar. 114 ya 15 tak padha tha shayad?
Apun ko laga ju ab na aayoge. Ju ko bohut yaad kiya gaya yaha.
Dheeme dheeme sambhal raha hai. Hope jaldi stable ho jaayega. But workload normal ho gaya hai abhi.Kaisa hai ab business?
Noice!
Dheeme dheeme sambhal raha hai. Hope jaldi stable ho jaayega. But workload normal ho gaya hai abhi.
Village arc ka samaapan ho gaya hai. Crimson arc agle hafte me kisi bhi din shuru ho jayega.Bc kitne update aa gaye idhar. 114 ya 15 tak padha tha shayad?
Aisa laga jese ek suar ghur-ghuraya! Aur jab nazar saamne padi.
"Ohhhh! Ye toh waqai ek suar nikla Pari!"
Famiglia Arc [Ongoing] kya ye Arc Abhi complete nhi hua kya.....Click HERE to go to Index.
Check Full Characters Guide [contains spoilers]
• System Activation arc [Completed]
• Aatish' Arc [Completed]
• Slogan's Arc [Completed]
• Famiglia Arc [Ongoing]
• House of the Killers Arc [Completed]
• Village Arc [Completed]
• Crimson Arc [will begin soon]
• Chinatown Arc [Yet to come]
• Disembowler's Arc [Yet to come]
P.S ~ I'm on a break.
Ye toh kahani ke akhir tak chalta jayega. Parivaarik scenes jab bhi aate hai woh issi arc ke antargat aate hai. Abhi crimson arc shuru hoega to ekdum se nahi hoega. 2-3 update ke baad pace pakdega. Toh ye ghar parivaar ke updates famiglia arc ke antargat rakhe jaate hai.Famiglia Arc [Ongoing] kya ye Arc Abhi complete nhi hua kya.....
Exactly!parijaat ghar ki raaslela ki vajah se sabhi ladies naraz hai thoda bahut or thodi sharam bhi hai veer se .. Par kurnesh ki sachai jaan kar sab ka dhyan uss taraf hai
Shukr hai Sumitra bhi wesi nahi nikli.arohi or kavya dono ko baar baar sabke samne sharmida hona padta hai.. uska bhai to tha hi aisa ab baap bhi vaisa nikal.. veer or baki sab ne mil kar sambhal liya dono ko.
Abhi jalan toh nahi kahenge. Curiosity zaroor hai usse.tej ko to veer ki har ek shiz or baat..sab kuch janna hai. Lagta hai pyaar ya attraction ki wajah se kisi bhi ladki ya aurat ka veer se sambandh kyu hai? Kya hai? Ye janne ki koshish kar rahi hai hai or jall rahi hai..
Vivek bach gaya hai par abhi. Uski kartoote chhipi reh gayi hai.krunesh or pranjal dono ab ghar se bahar nikale gaye.. or dono hi dolat,sohharat ki lalash ki wajah se aaj iss mode par pahoch gaye.
Hmm!khair vaise bhi ab dono ki hi ab buddhi to aane se rahi to sudhrenge to nahi to dono baap-bete mil kar planing karenge ab.
inke karmo ki saza sumitra, arohi,kavya ko bhugat na pad raha hai.
Kiska message aaya hoga? There's only one person who can do this. Thanks for the revo man. Keep supporting as usual.past life ka chapter khatm hua ab present time me dekhte hai Kya kya hota hai.. veer ke paas kiska msg aaya hai? Kya ab khatra aane wala hai ?
Awesome superb update Bhai.