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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,347 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 212 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,621

Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Bhai aapne es kahani ka pura plot soch rakha h ya fir update dete time sochte ho ki ab aage kya hona chahiye mera matlab aapne complete story end tk soch Rakhi h kya
Dimaag me kisi bhi writer ke ek rough plot hi hota hai. Ekdum poora perfect nahi hota ki exactly yaha pe ye scene dikhana hai, ye dialogues rakhne hai. Itni tagdi memory nahi hoti kisi ki. Wo saari cheeze likhte time hi brainstorm karni padti hai. Aur isliye ek update likhne me itna zyaada samay lagta hai. Harr ek dialogue aur scene boht soch samajh kar likhna padta hai. Kya dialogues jo bole jaa rahe hai wo character ki personality ke according sahi hai? Wo characters situations me kesa behave karenge? Ye saari baatein sochni padti hai.

Aur ye sab mein likhte time hi sochta hu. Bhale hi mere mann me wo rough plot rehta hai but jab likhne baithata hu toh kayi saare changes hote hai. Ab ye last update jo tha wo thoda baad me hone waala tha. But I changed it. Kyuki ye mujhe sahi laga. Ek rough ending soch rakhi hai but... Uspe abhi boht kaam karna hai.
 
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निधि की मजबूरी समझी जा सकती है । उसके पति का उसके परिवार पर बहुत बड़ा फायनेन्शियल अहसान है ।
लेकिन सबसे बड़ी समस्या पचास लाख रुपए जुगाड़ करना है ताकि वो अपने बच्चे को अपने पास ला सके । एक मामूली स्कूल टीचर के लिए एक साल के भीतर ही इतनी बड़ी राशि जुगाड़ करना असम्भव सा है । अपनी बची खुची शेविंग तो पहले से ही कर्ज चुकाने में खतम हो गई । इतनी बड़ी रकम वो कहां से लायेगी !

मुझे अभी भी लगता है उसे पुलिस के पास जाना चाहिए और अपने पति के खिलाफ कम्पलेन लिखवाना चाहिए । उसका पति उसके भोलेपन का नाजायज फायदा उठा रहा है । दुनिया की कोई भी अदालत एक नवजात शिशु को उसके मां से दूर नहीं कर सकती ।
और वैसे भी पचास लाख का होना किसी अदालत का फैसला नहीं है।

जब सब कुछ वीर को पता चल ही गया था तो ऐसे दुखद मौके पर निधि को अकेले नहीं छोड़ना चाहिए था । उसे वहीं रहकर इस समस्या का समाधान ढूंढना चाहिए था ।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।
 

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Nice update bro...but I was feeling like the update is small, I was not satisfied with your small updates but my mind saying it's too hard to write the update becàuse you also have your life right.....

Nice story bro...waiting for u r next update....keep going on...try to give day by day updates, not every day
Update ka size sahi hai bro. These are normal updates not the mega ones. It was almost around 4.5k words. And size itna hi chalega Normal updates me. 4k se 4.5k ke beech.
 

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Nidhi n wakai bahot zulm sahe h apne husband se or sehti aa rahi h
Veer sahab nikal pade apni nayi manzil dhoondhne
Chalye dekhte h aage kia hota h
Emotional se bharpoor shaandaar update bhai

Bohat emotional update tha veer ko nidhi ki problem pata chal chuki hy ab veer apne mission ko aghy barhane k liye nikal chuka hy dekhte hy kese nidhi ko problem se nikalta hy or rajat ki band bajata eagerly waiting for next
Thank you guys!
 

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I am a passive reader but bhai first time I am writing a comment just for you
Your thinking unique and plot is different from others please continue the same until the end .I got very excited because of the plot and hero changing from a weak personality to strong personality .your level of thinking is very difficult to achieve for any writer .keep going .I think you have a great IQ
Arre bhai! Thanks a lot!
And welcome to my thread.
Plot toh abhi shuru hua hai. Aage aage dekhte jaaiye kya hota hai.
Villains will blow your mind. :hint:
 
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