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HmmmAbhi kaha Bhai. Abhi toh Renshu nahi aaya theek se kahani me. Chinatown arc nahi aaya abhi. Woh jail se Chhootha madman nahi aaya. Disembowler's arc nahi aaya. Mister X ka kaha pata laga hai kuch abhi, aur toh aur baaki bache hue system owners ke baare me kaha pata laga hai abhi. Fir pari yaani ki samast systems ka secret bhi toh hai.toh ab soch lo ju ki kahani kitni bachi hai
Time ka toh nahi pata, lekin kahani abhi kaafi bachi hai.Hmmm
Kahani ko 2 saal ho chuke hai, aur itna kuch kahani me bacha hai aur jo speed filhal kuch update ki rahi hai. Lagta hai 2-3 saal aur lagenge story complete hone me.
Aaj likhna start karunga Bhai.Next update kab Tak ayega Bhai ye update to bhut acha tha diet plan bhi sahi hai but isse mann nhi bhara Bhai next update thoda jldi ka try kijiye please bhai
Shukriya manBilkul sir.. aapki iss near perfect story mein hum kamiyo ki koi gunjaish nahi rehne denge.. aap aise hi likhte rahiyega, hum aapko chodd ke kahin jaa nahi payenge
Ye update mere liye kathin rehne waala hai. Ek hi jagah pe bohut kuch dikhana hai itne characters ko leke. Abhi mujhe khud nahi pata mein kaise ise likhunga. Haan, lekin update hoga zabardast, iski guarantee zaroor leta hu.Bhai maza aa gaeya laken hr baat ki trha is baar bhee suspense pr khattam keeya aap ney let’s see Ab Veer Sonia or Keara dono ko 1 sath kaos ey handle krey ga especially jb waha Tej bhee hai to or about sey barh k Adesh. I know you are best to solve all the matters very easily but currious to knows what will happen in between Veer and Kear when then met after a long period. Btw thanks for wonderful episode and waiting for the next one. I wish you good luck bro![]()
Kya kare. Pehle jaisa khaali samay bhi toh nahi mil raha ab. Pehle jaisa stress free bhi toh nahi hu. Pehle ki tarah kam responsibility bhi toh nahi hai. Still, mein apni poori koshish kar raha hu kahani ko zyada se zyada samay dene ki.Sb kuch bdia chal ra h except update timing ke...u r not following the schedule as u promised in previous update.. Anyways, hoping is update ke bad se purane schedule se update ane lagenge![]()
Bohut bohut shukriya bhai. Ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki meri wajah se kayi accounts bane hai. Aur traffic badhaya hai apun ne. Mod logis!!! Mera rokda kaha hai?Bhai is story ka koi jawab hi nhi hai....yha ki best story hai....pta nhi kaise pr is story ko itne like tk pahochane ke Liye Kitne logo ne na chahte huye bhi register kr Liya Apne aapko ...silent reader se registered reader BN gye....hats off bro....there is no word to describe your story and writing skills...![]()
Shukriyazabarjast comeback bro
great update.....
keeep going...
Which minute detail are you referring to? There are many details left behind in the previous updates. Are you talking about Suhana and Veer's collaboration in the business?I hope you remember this update with minute details... Even the earlier ones. I am reading all again to make sure I do not miss anything interesting
Schedule fix nahi hai bhai. Woh toh jaise jaise samay mujhe milta jayega mein story ko deta jaunga.Achi update bhai. Keep up the Good work magar jldi updates ya at least koi schedule bta do. Thank you
Abhi unka reply dunga na mein.Kahani kahan se kahan tak pahuch gayi.
System ki ladai ab sehat, aayurved aur diet plan tak pahuch gayi hai.
Jahan tak baat hai kritika aur uski family ko bulane ki to aisa to kahi nahi likha ki kritika aur uski family gareeb hai, haa kritika aadesh yaa karan ke level ki kahi se nahi hai.
Aur kritika ke papa ka car travel aur security provider ka business hai to pehchan to unki bhi bade logo tak hogi sath hi paisa bhi thik thak hoga.
Jahan tak rahi invitation ki baat to jaisa ki update me likha hai ki aadesh pehle se hi kritika ke papa se services leta rha hai aur isbar bhi party me unki cars aur security mangi hai. Ab jisko aap kafi vakt se jante hai aur apne business me uski help lete hai to aise moke par to invitation dena ek formality banti hi hai. Jaisa ki aadesh ne kiya.
Aur update me dekhne ko bhi milta hai ki party ke liye kritika hi excited hai na ki uske father. Unke liye ye sirf ek tarah ka business contract hi hai. Kritika ek young ladki hai to aisi party ke liye vo excited hogi hi.
Ab isme koi alag se khass connection ki jarurat nahi, halaki connection to yahi hai ki kritika indirectly veer se judi hui hai. Jiska abhi aadesh ko pta nahi.
Mere simple observation me to iss baat me isse jyada kuch aur najar nahi aata.
Baki agar Werewolf bhai koi connection nikal de to keh nahi sakte.
Boring isliye shayad Hourglass Method samajh nahi aaya hoga. Agar wo samajh nahi aaya toh ye update boring hi lagega. Ya fir ju ki food ko lekar Ruchi kam hogi.Thora boaring update hain ye sayad aage maza aaye last ke kuch der acha laga
Yup! Aur Veer ko jo popularity chahiye thi woh Tamanna ke aane se badh gayi.Tamanna aayi to bohat tamna lekar magar usne veer ke samjhane ka kaam asan kar diya to ek tarah se woh uski help hi kar gayi anjane me. Kisi cheez ko samjhana easy hota hai jab koi aapse sawal jawab me poochey aur aadhi cheez to usne khud hi samjha Diya
Dekhte hai kya bawal machta hai Casa Belle me.Ab dekhna yah hai ki adesh sb ab kaun sa adesh detay hain I mean kis tarah ki setting kar rakhi hai unhoney koi na koi gadbad to zaroor karega Banda magar dekhna hoga ki woh gadbad hai kiya. Aur veer kaisay usse bahar nikalta hai waisay bhi veer waha per control karne ke liye jaa raha thaa aur adesh veer ke sath gadbad karna chahta hai sab celebrities ke aage usko zaleel yah neecha dikhana chahta hai taki uska jo celebrity jaisa craze hai woh khatam ho jaye.
Intezar toh karna padega.Ab dekhna hai ki kaun apne maqsad me kamyab hota hain. Iske liye agli update ka intezar rahega.
Wo bhale maar peet na karna chahta ho par chef on wheels ko taraf se toh ho sakti hai na. Bouncers usne apne aur apne guests ki hifazat ke liye bulwaye hai.Agar Adesh ko maar peet na karni hai to itne bouncers kyu magaye hain update ho sake to jaldi dena
ShukriyaSuper duper update bro
Cant wait for the next one
Please be hurry
Shukriya BhaiBahut badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and awesome update.....
Shukriya. Sirf itne hi nahi hai. You'll be surprised to see that there are so many characters in that one place. Keep supporting.Superb update....
Tamanna was completely controlled by Aadesh ..
Uski upar Veer konsa step leta hai woh dekhne layak rahega....
Aadesh Veer trap beecha raha hai...
It will be thrilling....
Party par sab hai, Kavya , Arohi, Bhoomika , Sonia aur Kaera ....
Veer buri tarah se fasne wala hai...
for such a beautiful update
Dhanyavaad bohut bohut bhai.Super se bhi upper update brother to gud finally kaira and sonia both on the same place with veer eagerly waiting veer kaise sb kuch handle krta h aur Sonia aur kaera ka kya reaction hoga usko wha dekh ke plz plz plzz do cont asap take care
Arre man, ye abhi incomplete hai. Asli hourglass method mere paas hai personal meri.Aj se yahi diet follow Krna hai Bhai log Maine start kr diya hai bhai update mat tha bhut late aya bhai bs next update main dekhna hoga Sonia kaera kaise milti hai Bhai maja a jaega Bhai thoda jldi try kijiye next update ka
Shukriya.Bhai story itni achi hai ki mujhe jo update pasand tha mai usko phir se read kar raha hu
Thanks manShaandaar update tha Bhai. Expecting your upcoming exciting update dear bro
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Of course dhamaka hone waala hai. Ek jagah par itne log honge toh bawal toh machna hi hai.Nice update bhai...
Next update lagta hai dhamakedar hone wala hai.. sab ek jagah par ekthe hue hai.
veer ke khilaf kuch bada plan banaya hai.
Waiting for next update.
Shukriya bhaaya.बहुत ही बेहतरीन तरीके से प्रस्तुत किया गया अपडेट Werewolf भाई और आपने वीर के जरिए जो खाना खाने का नियम बताए हैं वो भी काबिले तारीफ़ है।
Hourglass samajh aa gayi hogi toh dilchasp laga hoga. Warna food me agar Ruchi kam hai aur hourglass samajh nahi theek se toh bekaar hi laga hoga.Der Aaye Durust Aaye
Lakeen Isme Itna Maza Nhi Aaya Bhai.
Hope NXT Update Much Thrilling For Us![]()
ShukriyaBAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Hmm! Logo ko maar dhaad zyada pasand aati hai. Par ye arc wesa hai hi nahi. Poora schemes par based hai. Toh abhi fir average hi lagne waale hai updates.Average update samjh sakte hai har baar superb nahi ho sakta but awaiting next anxiously…![]()
Dhanyavaad. Agla update toh aaj hi likhna prarambh karunga. Keep supporting.Kya hi kahne mere yaar ke
Aaj to aesa update diya hai...
Kahani ke is update ke sath aapne dil ki dhadkan bada si di hai
Ab becheni rahegi aage ke liye
Bahut prefect
Sonali? Woh toh gayi hi nahi hai bhai. Kahi Sonia toh nahi kehna chaah rahe?What a perfect End bro....
i can't wait for kaera-veer-sonali meeting.....
And the interesting thing is the rivalry between Sonali and Kaera
Yup!It's Amazing update bro......
And Now it remains to know how Veer gets out of this situation... and it will also make something instresting stuff.
Ye kisi bhi manga ya novel se inspired nahi hai bhai.Werewolf bhai iss forum pr ye mera pehla comment hai and sach batao to mujhe apke story bahut pasand aai hai,
Kya ap bta skte hai ki ye story kis manga se inspired hai ?
धन्यवाद Samar_SinghJiska bhi naam mention karna hai uska naam likhne se pehle @ lagakar uske baad naam likho. Aur spelling vahi ho jo username me hai. Capital yaa small letter ka bhi difference naa ho. Jaise patelayush@123
छोटा विलेन तो है हीYe tumse kisne keh diya ki Aadesh villian hai.Agla bada villian Chinatown arc me milega. Uske baad disembowler's me.